Incest Pyaar Ki Raah Me

[Naina]

UPDATE - 1​

Ek science school ke khali class me Ek Ladki or Ek ladka akele under the or class ke bahar ladke or ladki ke friends khade the darvaja band kar ke... koi teacher ya koi or student aa na jay uska dhyan rakh rahe the...

Class ke under ladka ek per niche rakh kar beth jata hai or gulab ka fool apne hath me leke bolta hai...

Ladka :- I love you Kajal.....

( dosto ye ladki koi or nahi kajal hi hai)

kajal ladke ke hath se gulab ka fool le leti hai or bolti hai..

Kajal :- I love you too minesh...

minesh itna khush ho jata hai kajal ko haa karne se to khushi ke mare khada ho kar kajal ko hug kar leta hai...

kajal ko minesh ka hug karna achha nahi lagta use kuch ajeeb si feeling aati hai to vo minesh ko apne aap se alag karti hai...

Kajal :- minesh tum mere puche pichle 3 saal se pade ho or uske 2 saal bad hamari dosti hue thi or aaj tumne purpose kiya to mene accept bhi kar liya kyuki shayad me bhi tumhe pasand karne lagi hu...par mere best friend ko puch kar hi final javab de paungi..

Minesh :- okay me wait karunga tumhare final javab ka...par agar tumhare best friend ne mana karne ko kah diya to tum mujhe reject kar dogi?

kajal :- haan.. hum ne ek dusre ko promise kiya hai ki meri life ke koi bhi faisla use me share karungi or vo mujhe suggest karega ...mera bhai hai par hum dono me jo dos

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Kajal... Ju always try something unique to write, and that's your specialty, hats off to that. Really glad to read something interesting after a long time. Everything was superb. Flow, Narration, Plot, Presentation. Everything was superb. You have a good grasp over the storyline right from the word go. marvellous & remarkable..

Keep writing like this and keep entertaining us....
Brilliant storyline with awesome writing skills (for in future )

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 1​

Ek science school ke khali class me Ek Ladki or Ek ladka akele under the or class ke bahar ladke or ladki ke friends khade the darvaja band kar ke... koi teacher ya koi or student aa na jay uska dhyan rakh rahe the...

Class ke under ladka ek per niche rakh kar beth jata hai or gulab ka fool apne hath me leke bolta hai...

Ladka :- I love you Kajal.....

( dosto ye ladki koi or nahi kajal hi hai)

kajal ladke ke hath se gulab ka fool le leti hai or bolti hai..

Kajal :- I love you too minesh...

minesh itna khush ho jata hai kajal ko haa karne se to khushi ke mare khada ho kar kajal ko hug kar leta hai...

kajal ko minesh ka hug karna achha nahi lagta use kuch ajeeb si feeling aati hai to vo minesh ko apne aap se alag karti hai...

Kajal :- minesh tum mere puche pichle 3 saal se pade ho or uske 2 saal bad hamari dosti hue thi or aaj tumne purpose kiya to mene accept bhi kar liya kyuki shayad me bhi tumhe pasand karne lagi hu...par mere best friend ko puch kar hi final javab de paungi..

Minesh :- okay me wait karunga tumhare final javab ka...par agar tumhare best friend ne mana karne ko kah diya to tum mujhe reject kar dogi?

kajal :- haan.. hum ne ek dusre ko promise kiya hai ki meri life ke koi bhi faisla use me share karungi or vo mujhe suggest karega ...mera bhai hai par hum dono me jo dos

Ye update to suru hote hi dum tod diya

 

[Aakash.]

Kuch samjh me nahi aaya update itna hi tha ki incomplete post hua khair shuruwaat me hi proposal scene aa gaya lekin Kajal... ko dekhkar aisa lagta hai jaise wo khush nahi khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai or uska bhai kaisa hai jise wo apna best friend maanti hai
Thank You...​

 

[parkas]

UPDATE - 1​

Ek science school ke khali class me Ek Ladki or Ek ladka akele under the or class ke bahar ladke or ladki ke friends khade the darvaja band kar ke... koi teacher ya koi or student aa na jay uska dhyan rakh rahe the...

Class ke under ladka ek per niche rakh kar beth jata hai or gulab ka fool apne hath me leke bolta hai...

Ladka :- I love you Kajal.....

( dosto ye ladki koi or nahi kajal hi hai)

kajal ladke ke hath se gulab ka fool le leti hai or bolti hai..

Kajal :- I love you too minesh...

minesh itna khush ho jata hai kajal ko haa karne se to khushi ke mare khada ho kar kajal ko hug kar leta hai...

kajal ko minesh ka hug karna achha nahi lagta use kuch ajeeb si feeling aati hai to vo minesh ko apne aap se alag karti hai...

Kajal :- minesh tum mere puche pichle 3 saal se pade ho or uske 2 saal bad hamari dosti hue thi or aaj tumne purpose kiya to mene accept bhi kar liya kyuki shayad me bhi tumhe pasand karne lagi hu...par mere best friend ko puch kar hi final javab de paungi..

Minesh :- okay me wait karunga tumhare final javab ka...par agar tumhare best friend ne mana karne ko kah diya to tum mujhe reject kar dogi?

kajal :- haan.. hum ne ek dusre ko promise kiya hai ki meri life ke koi bhi faisla use me share karungi or vo mujhe suggest karega ...mera bhai hai par hum dono me jo dos

Nice and awesome update...

 

[Kajal...]

Par maine toh read karliyaa aur revo bhi de diya

Par koi naa phir se ekbaar read karlungaa.

Pura update posted

 

[Kajal...]

Awesome update

Pura update posted ab padh lo

 

[Kajal...]

Kahani ka update shuru karne me hi 10 page nikal gaye. Pratiksha agle update ki

Update posted

 

[Kajal...]

Ye update to suru hote hi dum tod diya

Pura update posted ab read kariye

 

[Kajal...]

Kuch samjh me nahi aaya update itna hi tha ki incomplete post hua khair shuruwaat me hi proposal scene aa gaya lekin Kajal... ko dekhkar aisa lagta hai jaise wo khush nahi khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai or uska bhai kaisa hai jise wo apna best friend maanti hai
Thank You...​

Update aadha hi galti se post ho gaya tha ab pura update post kar diya hai idit kar ke to dubara padh lo..

 

[Naina]

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Kajal... Ju always try something unique to write, and that's your specialty, hats off to that. Really glad to read something interesting after a long time. Everything was superb. Flow, Narration, Plot, Presentation. Everything was superb. You have a good grasp over the storyline right from the word go. marvellous & remarkable..

Keep writing like this and keep entertaining us....
Brilliant storyline with awesome writing skills (for in future )

Counter reply kaha hai Kajal...