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Dr. Zeus

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Baat aapki sahi hai bro ki kisiki har ghalati ko mu'af karna is not the way but yahan baat un sanskaron ki bhi hai jo in dono bhaiyon ko unke walidain se mile hain jinke according kisiko bhi sabaq hi kyon na sikhaana ho par tareeqa zulm ka na ho toh zyada behtar hai......
Aapne kaha ki Chintu Manu ka sirf schoolmate hi nahin balki collegemate and (maybe batchmate too) hoga toh kahin aisa toh nahin na ki yahan Nisha ya Kanika mein se kisi ki entry ab jakar ho maybe it's just an assumption
Awesome updates
Fantastic update bhai
Update kab tak de rahe ho sir h
Ji................:what2:
Waiting for next update
Dr. Sahab maza aa gya update padhkar ab naye ghatnakram ka intezar hai
Waiting for the next update.
bhai next update kab tak aayga


thanks bhai ...

akil bhai aapne sankaro ki baat ki sahi hai per uske sath agar main lead ka fighter hona or sabhi ko easy to taken lena kya sahi hoga ...aapne zulm ki baat ki per kya aapko nahi lagta agar manu yahan rajini ko kaabo nahi karta toh zulm ulta usi ki family per hota ...bhai zulm karna or sehna dono gunaah hai ..so yahan agar jawab nahi dega manu toh us zulm ka shikar uski family hogi ..jo shaayad main lead ya koi bhi normal insaan bardast nahi kar sakta ...
jahan manu ki se uski maa ne wada liya tha " ki musbat me agar kisi ko dekho toh uski help karna ..or sath me uske master ya guru ki gurudakshina me unhone usse wada liya tha " ki bina dushman ki asal power jaane kudna mat so yahan manu wahi kar raha hai ..."
aapne jo kaha shayad sahi ho ...per zindagi pariyon ki dastan nahi hai ...yahan har kadam insaan ko kade or mazboot faisle lene padte hain ..jinki bunyaad uski or zindagi per tiki hoti hai ...

aapne bahut story dekhi hongi jahan hero asani se sabhi ko maaf kar deta hai ..per asal zindagi me koi insaan aisa kar pata hai ????
agar aisa hai toh kyun insaan bhale hi bachpan ke classmate ko ek baar shaayad yaad na kare per khud ko thapad ya bezzat karne wale ko umar bhar nahi bhulta ...kyun use maaf nahi karta ...

bhai yahan hero bhi real life ka character hai ..uski apni soch hai ..kab kahan use kisi ko maaf karna hai ..kahan nahi yeh meri nahi ..uski apni marzi hai ...har insaan family ko lekar thoda ya kam per protective hota hai ..or yahan hero bhi waisa hi hai ...so let's see what comes next !

agla update raat tak aa jayega .... abhi lunch karke bethunga kyuki medical leave per hun toh raat tak update post kar hi dunga ...

thanks for reading & staying with us ...
 

Hellohoney

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Nice bhai lekin rajni ki chudai nahi karni thi yar ye to use jo chahti thi vo milgaya or ek baat bhai kanu ko ab story me vapis lana chahiye use story se nikal mat dena bhai or nisha se apna hiro pyar karta he lekin uski life ki pehli ladki kanu thi to ye aapse elteja he vese story me bhot si ladkiyan he hina bhi he lekin mere khayal se hiroen ka best option kanu he fhir jese aap chahe kyuki kahani aapki he
 

Akil

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thanks bhai ...

akil bhai aapne sankaro ki baat ki sahi hai per uske sath agar main lead ka fighter hona or sabhi ko easy to taken lena kya sahi hoga ...aapne zulm ki baat ki per kya aapko nahi lagta agar manu yahan rajini ko kaabo nahi karta toh zulm ulta usi ki family per hota ...bhai zulm karna or sehna dono gunaah hai ..so yahan agar jawab nahi dega manu toh us zulm ka shikar uski family hogi ..jo shaayad main lead ya koi bhi normal insaan bardast nahi kar sakta ...
jahan manu ki se uski maa ne wada liya tha " ki musbat me agar kisi ko dekho toh uski help karna ..or sath me uske master ya guru ki gurudakshina me unhone usse wada liya tha " ki bina dushman ki asal power jaane kudna mat so yahan manu wahi kar raha hai ..."
aapne jo kaha shayad sahi ho ...per zindagi pariyon ki dastan nahi hai ...yahan har kadam insaan ko kade or mazboot faisle lene padte hain ..jinki bunyaad uski or zindagi per tiki hoti hai ...

aapne bahut story dekhi hongi jahan hero asani se sabhi ko maaf kar deta hai ..per asal zindagi me koi insaan aisa kar pata hai ????
agar aisa hai toh kyun insaan bhale hi bachpan ke classmate ko ek baar shaayad yaad na kare per khud ko thapad ya bezzat karne wale ko umar bhar nahi bhulta ...kyun use maaf nahi karta ...

bhai yahan hero bhi real life ka character hai ..uski apni soch hai ..kab kahan use kisi ko maaf karna hai ..kahan nahi yeh meri nahi ..uski apni marzi hai ...har insaan family ko lekar thoda ya kam per protective hota hai ..or yahan hero bhi waisa hi hai ...so let's see what comes next !

agla update raat tak aa jayega .... abhi lunch karke bethunga kyuki medical leave per hun toh raat tak update post kar hi dunga ...


thanks for reading & staying with us ...
Aapki baat shaa'ad sahi hai kabhi kabhi na chahte hue bhi zulm ko mitaane ke liye zaalim banna padta hai paap ke khatme ke liye khud bhi kabhi paapi banna padta hai par Rajni ki asli saza toh tab hogi jab woh khud ke pure parivaar ki nazaron se bhi gir jaye aur jahaan tak main Rajni ke qirdaar ko samajh paaya hoon woh jaldi hi kuch aisa karegi jisse woh khud ke saath apanon ki nazaron se bhi giregi
 
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nilu12

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dr. bhai update kab tak doge...
aur sath main ye bhi bata dena ye 1st chapter kab khatam hoga...
besbari se intjar hai bro ek aur dhamakedar update ka
 

Sky07

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thanks bhai ...

akil bhai aapne sankaro ki baat ki sahi hai per uske sath agar main lead ka fighter hona or sabhi ko easy to taken lena kya sahi hoga ...aapne zulm ki baat ki per kya aapko nahi lagta agar manu yahan rajini ko kaabo nahi karta toh zulm ulta usi ki family per hota ...bhai zulm karna or sehna dono gunaah hai ..so yahan agar jawab nahi dega manu toh us zulm ka shikar uski family hogi ..jo shaayad main lead ya koi bhi normal insaan bardast nahi kar sakta ...
jahan manu ki se uski maa ne wada liya tha " ki musbat me agar kisi ko dekho toh uski help karna ..or sath me uske master ya guru ki gurudakshina me unhone usse wada liya tha " ki bina dushman ki asal power jaane kudna mat so yahan manu wahi kar raha hai ..."
aapne jo kaha shayad sahi ho ...per zindagi pariyon ki dastan nahi hai ...yahan har kadam insaan ko kade or mazboot faisle lene padte hain ..jinki bunyaad uski or zindagi per tiki hoti hai ...

aapne bahut story dekhi hongi jahan hero asani se sabhi ko maaf kar deta hai ..per asal zindagi me koi insaan aisa kar pata hai ????
agar aisa hai toh kyun insaan bhale hi bachpan ke classmate ko ek baar shaayad yaad na kare per khud ko thapad ya bezzat karne wale ko umar bhar nahi bhulta ...kyun use maaf nahi karta ...

bhai yahan hero bhi real life ka character hai ..uski apni soch hai ..kab kahan use kisi ko maaf karna hai ..kahan nahi yeh meri nahi ..uski apni marzi hai ...har insaan family ko lekar thoda ya kam per protective hota hai ..or yahan hero bhi waisa hi hai ...so let's see what comes next !

agla update raat tak aa jayega .... abhi lunch karke bethunga kyuki medical leave per hun toh raat tak update post kar hi dunga ...


thanks for reading & staying with us ...
Welcome back Dr. Zeus bro.
Good to see your post again
 

Dr. Zeus

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Nice bhai lekin rajni ki chudai nahi karni thi yar ye to use jo chahti thi vo milgaya or ek baat bhai kanu ko ab story me vapis lana chahiye use story se nikal mat dena bhai or nisha se apna hiro pyar karta he lekin uski life ki pehli ladki kanu thi to ye aapse elteja he vese story me bhot si ladkiyan he hina bhi he lekin mere khayal se hiroen ka best option kanu he fhir jese aap chahe kyuki kahani aapki he
good start with index
Aapki baat shaa'ad sahi hai kabhi kabhi na chahte hue bhi zulm ko mitaane ke liye zaalim banna padta hai paap ke khatme ke liye khud bhi kabhi paapi banna padta hai par Rajni ki asli saza toh tab hogi jab woh khud ke pure parivaar ki nazaron se bhi gir jaye aur jahaan tak main Rajni ke qirdaar ko samajh paaya hoon woh jaldi hi kuch aisa karegi jisse woh khud ke saath apanon ki nazaron se bhi giregi
bro such m aapki story lajawab h
dr. bhai update kab tak doge...
aur sath main ye bhi bata dena ye 1st chapter kab khatam hoga...
besbari se intjar hai bro ek aur dhamakedar update ka
Welcome back Dr. Zeus bro.
Good to see your post again


thanks bhai ...

kahani me bahut kuch hai ...kahani me kanu hi nahi kai kirdar abhi tak aane baaki hain jinka intro maine diya tha ...sabka apna role hai sab apne time per entry lenge ..or baat rahi kanu ki so ...kanu ka ab tak na hona sab ki apni wajah hai ..so jab woh aayegi tab khud aapko pata chal jayega ...or aaj ka update post kar raha hun acha lage ya bura batana zaror bhai ...

thanks for reading & staying with us...
 
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