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BHAI typical romance story jo abhi tak likhi jaati aa rahi hain ussi type kee lag rahi hain, bhai matlab hero pyar karta hain aur heroine bhi pyar karta hain aur koi gandu si galatfehmi hoti hain, aur na hero explanation mangta hain aur na hi larki kuchh izhar karti hain.Update 53
Bachpan ki Yaadain
Aisa kya hua tha ki Nisha chintu ko apne hath se khana khila rahi thi …or uske gale lagi hui thi ….kya manu ne jo dekha who sahi tha kya Nisha use such much tanha kar chuki thi ….kya chintu jeet gaya tha …kya manu humesha humesha ke liye tanha ho gya tha …kya manu ki aakhone ne sahi dekha tha ya yeh koi plan tha chintu ka ..ya Nisha ne chintu ko chun liya tha …….iska jawab kismat ke ya time ke hath hai….
Ab aage......
Nisha ne aisa kyu kiya ?? yeh who sawal tha jiske chalte aaj manu ka dil or dimaag dunia ke har dard ko ek sath mehsoos kar raha tha…use abhi bhi yakin nahi ho raha tha ki Nisha ko usne chintu ke karib itna karib dekha hai ..
Jis chintu ko Nisha “behuda insaan “ kaha karti thi aaj usi insaan ko apne hath se khlana manu ke dil ka kya haal kar raha tha yeh toh school ki who chat hi janti thi jahan uske garam farz per manu ke ansoo jama the ya who diwaar jab manu rote rote kamzor hua toh us diwar ka sahara lekar manu sirf apne dil ke dard ko bahane me laga hua tha …dard jo use mila tha Nisha se jo uska shayad pehla pyaar tha(hosh or dhyaan me) who pyaar jiska karib hona insaan ko kitna sukun deta hai …iska jawab toh kisi pyaar karnewale se hi aap jaan sakte hain.. ya who jo pyaar ko ache se samjhte hain..
Kisi ke liye sath hona pyaar hai ,,kisi ke liye dosti pyaar hai kisi ke liye ,,apne pyaar ko dur se bas chand ghadi dekhlena pyaar hai , ya kisi ko apne pyaar ko uske khushnuma chahre per uski mukurahat hi pyaar hai..
(jada bore nahi karunga varna comment me phir class lag jayegi…ki aap kuch bhi ulta likh dete ho ..are bhai writer apni dunia apni aankhon ya apni kalpana se hi toh aap tak pahunchata hai …waise bhi main aap tak apni baat rakhta hun..usme sahi ya galat dundna aapka kaam hai.)
Wahi pyaar jiske liye manu ne na jane kitne sapne saja liye the jo insaan is pyaar ko jaan ne ke baad bhi aage jaakar kuch banker apne pyaar ko hasil karna chahta tha aaj uska who sapna bhi tut chuka tha …
“kisi gair ki bahoon me hain who,kuch is tarah jaise kabhi hum the hi na unke ..
Mil toh jati hai subah or raat bhi ek jagah agar chahat suchi dilo ki “
“janta hun nahi the hum tumahre pehle bhi ,
Per is dil ko kaise samjhun jisme aaj bhi tum ho “
Saaare dard manu ke seene me jaise aaj simat aaye the ….pata nahi kab tak rota raha akela or jaise Nisha ko sab dunte hue fir rahe the kal per aaj kisi ne jaise manu ko dundne ki koshish nahi ki …jaise sabko uske hone na hone se koi fark padta hi na ho…jab khud ro ro kar uska dil thoda halka hua toh utha khud ko lagbag ghasit te hue apni class me gaya jahan mam ne pucha “kahan se aa rahe ho ??”
Manu kya jawab deta …uske jawab kahin na kahin kho se gaye the chupchap apni seat per chala gaya mam ne bhi koi sawal nahi kiya kyoki ab manu se koi jada baat nahi kiya karta tha..chalte hue manu aage se guzra uske thik samne chintu betha hua tha jo aaj kuch alag hi muskurahat ke sath betha hua tha …aaj kahin na kahin manu ko chintu se koi gussa nahi tha ,,,hota bhi kahan se is samay use khud ka hosh tak nahi tha ….uske jehan me sirf Nisha hi ghum rahi thi usne dekha Nisha ki seat ki taraf jisper Nisha mujood nahi thi…jisper manu ko thoda hairat bhi hua per us hairat ko shanti mili do ladkiyon ki baat sunkar “ek yeh pagal sa bana hua gum raha hai kabhkhat marta bhi kyu nahi …pata nahi kab tak jehlna hoga ise …acha sun tujhe pata hai Nisha kahan gayi…??”
Dusri ladki “haa uske ghar se koi aaya tha ki uske chote mama jo videsh me hain unke yahan se uska call aya tha ki uske nana ki tabiyat bahut kharab hai..so koi aya or Nisha ko le gaya ”
Manu koi badi fikara hui ki Nisha aise chali gayi fir turant hi uske samne Nisha chintu ke gale lage hue gumne lagi who tasver uske mann or dimaag me jaise chap si gayi thi aaj who itne dard me tha jiske chalte shayad pehli baar who nita mam (apni muhboli maa ) ke pass bhi nahi gaya tha ..nita mam ko aaj aise achanak se manu ke na aane se uski chinta ho chali thi so unhone manu ka intzar kiya per manu ko khud apna hosh hota toh kuch karta na . toh nita mam ne peon ko kehkar manu ko bulaya …peon ne class me aakar manu ko nita mam ne bulaya hai bolkar use sath le gaya ..nita mam ne jab manu ko pass bulaya jahan unko manu me kuch bahut alag sa laga per peon samne tha toh unhone peon ko wapas behj diya ..manu unke samne shant chup or alag si dunia me khoya hua tha …uski sozzi hui aakhen is baat ki gawahi cheekh cheekh kar de rahi thi ki manu bahut roya hai …
Nita mam ko kisi anjane problem ki ashanka hui kehte hain ma sirf ma hoti hai jiske paas shayad six senses hoti hai ki beta dukh me hai waise hi nita mam ko bhi pata lag gya …”manu mere bache kya ab main itni parai ho gayi hun kit u akele ro sakta hai per apna dard apni is badnaseeb maa se share nahi kar sakta kya such me itna hi ahemiyat rakhti hun teri nazar me main , yahi izzat hai teri is maa ke liye …ki main tera dard tak sath na baant paun??
Manu ne jab yeh suna toh uski rahi sahi himmat phir se tut gayi or uski aanhon se aanson ne phir baghawat kardi …per is baar who rote hue nita mam yani apni maa ke god me apna sar rakhkar rone laga nita mam ne bhi pehle use rone diya taki shayad uska dil halka ho jaye …manu rota raha kuch der baad jab uska dil thoda sa halka hua toh usne apni nazarer utha kar upper nita mam ki tarf dekha or dono apne dono hath joadkar”maa mere dil main aapke liye kitna pyaar or kitna samman hai yeh toh sirf mera dil de sakta hai ya who jo yeh janta hai ki main kitna such keh raha hun ??per maa such mano toh mere liye maa ka matlab mera wajood hai or koi apne wajood ko jaise nakar nahi sakta waise hi main aapko apne se alag nahi manta “
Nita mam” who toh main janti hun mere bache per..”
Manu “ maa plz aage aap kuch na puchna main aapko nahi bata sakta aapko kya kisi ko nahi ..or kasam khake kehta hun such me maa agar kehne layak hoga toh sabse pehle aapko bata deta …plz maa aap mujhe galat na samjhna bas abhi ke liye itna samjh lo kuch hai jo mujh me tut gya hai khud se kuch chuuta (lost) sa mehsoos kar raha hun…aap aage kuch na puchna aapko meri kasam ..”
Nita mam pyaar se uske sar per hath firate hue“ mere pyaare bache, mere ladle ,,acha thik hai jab tune kasam de di hai toh nahi puchungi per tune socha hai ki tere rone ka is maa per kya asar hoga …kya teri yeh maa apne bache ko rote hue dek sakegi kya bardast kar sakegi tere yeh aanson jo ek maa ka kaleza chalni kar dete hai …tune kaha ki tujhse kuch chuut raha hai kuch hai jo tujme tut gaya hai toh mere bache jo tut gya use joad le …jo chuut gya ya toh use choadkar jo tere pass jo tere sath hai usper dhyaan de …zindagi me aage badna rone se kahin zada zarori hai …??”
Is baat se manu ke aanso achnak se ruk gaye nita mam ne use dunia ka who paath pada diya tha ki jo chuut gya usper ro rahe ho jabki who toh apna tha bhi nahi jo apana hai uski socho aane wale kal ki socho aage bado ..or zindagi me apne sapne pure karo ..rote rehna har cheez ka hal nahi hai ,,
Manu ki yeh baat ache se samjh aa gyi thi usne foran apne aansoon puche or jis zamen per beth kar nita mam ki god me sar rakhkar roraha tha wahan se utha khada hua ..or nita mam ke gale lagkar unke hathon ko chumkar bola “sorry maa maine aapka dil dukahya uske liye mujhe maaf kardo aapne sahi kaha ki jo mera than ahi usper ansoo bahana bekar hai …jo mera hai uski kadra karna jada zarori hai …kyu hai na..??”
Nita mam Khushi se ki manu phir se uth khada hua hai normal insaan ki tarah “ haan mere bache,beta tum samjhdar ho jo yeh baat itni jaldi samjh gaye …uski kadra karo abhi jo tumhare pass hai …or aage ka socho…”
Manu “toh thik hai maa ab pehle aapki kadra karunga sabse pehle..”
Nita mam “matlab “
Manu nita mam ke mote mote gol gol gallon per kiss karta hai jisper nita mam bhi hasne lag jati hain or uske sar per tapli marke “aise kaise matlab kuch bhi..”
Manu “lagta hai abhi kam kadra ki hai “or phir se papi le leta hai jisper mam bhi use marne ko doudti hainyeh bolkar ki “maa ki papi leta hai besharam “
Dono office me khub bhag doud maja dalte hai ..or apne apne me dono enjoy karte hai ..manu ander se dard me jaror tha per kahin na kahin nita mam ne use ache se samjha diya tha ki jo humare pass hain us sabhi ki kadra bhi jarori hai ,,,
Khair dono kuch der me normal ho gye the ..uske baad dono ne chain se khana sath me khaya …or apne apne kaam per lag gaye .
Nita mam jahan aaj ek tarf khush thi ki manu ne rote hue kaise unko thamkar apnapan jataya tha, ,,wahin kahin na kahin who soch bhi rahi thi ki aisa kya hua ki manu jaisa insaan achanak se tuta hua mehsoos karne laga hai..or kyuki manu beshaq unhe maa jaise pyaar karta tha per unko kabhi bhi apna dard nahi bataya karta tha ..verna jis class me who itna jalil ho raha tha ..jahan usko roz naya torture milta tha ..kya who ek baar bhi nita mam se kehta toh nita mam ki sirf ek awaz per unsabhi ki akal sahi jagah per aa jati ..per manu nahi chahta tha ki use kisi bhi tarah se nita mam se yeh sab kehna pade ..or unka kisi bhi tarah se us class ke samne koi involvement ho..so who nita mam se yeh sab nahi bataya karta tha..
Ek taraf unhe is baat ki Khushi bhi thi ki kaise unhone kaise apne bete ko itni jaldi na keval chup karya balki kahin na kahin jahan who khud ko fasa hua mehsoos kar raha tha wahan nikal bhi liya use…
Khair udhar aaj jab manu ka school over hua toh chintu manu ke pass se nikal “kyu be chutiye bada uchalta hai na ab dekhna kya karta hun aage dekhta ja ..”
Manu ek baar toh gusse se bhar gaya per phir use laga ki jab Nisha ne hi use chun liya toh main bhala hota kon hun bina wajah ulajhnewala.
Who chup chap apne raste chal diya ghar aaya or apne homework ko finish kiya uske baad ajay ka kaam matlab uska homework me help kiya ..or uske baad pushpi ke sath tution or phir baba ke yahan training uske baat jab who aaj Bhatnagar ke paas gaya toh aadat ke mutabik Bhatnagar ke pair chue jisper ab Bhatnagar ne bhi use pyaar se aashirwad diya or kyuki ki ab dono me achi kahasi achi banne lagi thi jisper dono apne kaam me lag gaye …abhi dono kuch karte usi bich ashok wahan aaya thoda pareshaan tha ..jisper Bhatnagar ne pucha bhi …jisper usne manu ki taraf dekhkar kaha”yaar ek problem hai …Nisha ke nana ki tabiyat thik nahi hai or kyuki ab manju or Nisha se milna chahte hain.toh dono ko behjna hoga per Nisha zid per adi hui hai ki bas milkar aajayegi …yaar unki condition critical hai ..kuch kehna mushkil hai kya karun main kuch samjh nahi aa raha ..hai ??”
Bhatnagar “toh sir kya soch rakha hai aapne ..”
Ashok “yaar socha toh kuch khass hai nahi per unki condition abhi kya hai or aage kya hogi kehna mushkil hai or aise main Nisha ka is tarah gussa meri samjh se pare hai …haan itna toh pakka lagta hai ..ki kai mahine lag sakte hain..tab Nisha ki education ka kya hoga isko lekar bhi tension hai…samjh nahi aa raha kya karun..”
Bhatnagar”phir problem kya hai Nisha ko wahin ke school me admission karwa do uska aage ka future bhi acha ho jayega …”
Ashok manu ki taraf dekhte hue jaise manu ke under jhankana chahta ho.”yaar behjun toh tab jab who baat mane meri..sunti hi kahan hai uska future bhi dekhna hai per sunti kahan hai ..meri..??”
Bhatnagar “toh usme problem kahan hai manu uska friend hai who baat kar lega Nisha se ..kyu manu karoge na itna sa kaam ..?”manu kya jawab deta chup chap usne haan main sir hila diya..
Ashok “such beta agar aisa hai toh tumne such me mere sar se bahut bada bojh uthaar diya ..tum ek kaam karo abhi driver ke sath chle jao or use samjhao mujhe lagta hai ki tumhari baat uski samjh me aa jayegi or agar who maani toh raat ko hi nikalna hoga sabhi ko..”
Manu ne jab suna ki aaj raat ko hi Nisha ko jaana hoga ek baar ko uske paav kaamp gaye ki pyaar ke abhi jaane ka gum bhi thik se nahi mana paya tha sath me judai bhi mil gayi …chalo shyad yahi kismat hai …kamse kam chintu jaise ghatiya insaan se toh safe rahegi ..or us chintu ko bhi Nisha ke naam per nicha dikhane ko nahi milega ..”insab sochon me manu Nisha keg har puch gaya ashok ki gadi me ..
Under gaya toh har who cheez waise hi thi jaise pehle hua karti thi ..per aaj manu ko yahan rakhi har cheez se eka lag si bechaini ho rahi thi…kahin na kahin who Nisha ki bewafai abhi tak pacha nahi pa raha tha..
Khair under gaya jahan manju ready ho rahi thi …per Nisha wahin gusse me bethi thi…
Nisha ne manu ko dekha toh uthi or manu ke pass mukurate hue chali aayi..
Manu hairat se dekh raha tha ki kaise abhi thodi der pehle jo chintu ki bahoon me thi phir se muskura kar usse mil rahi thi ..kahin na kahin use ander se gussa sa aane laga tha …uski bewafai per …
Nisha “are tum achanak se kaise yahaan per is time toh tum office me hote ho na …??”
Manu chup tha aaj wahi nisha jiski awaz sunkar kabhi manu ka dil machal jaya karta tha aaj uski bewafai per sulag raha tha …kahin na kahin use khud per gussa sa aane laga ki usne haan kaha hi kyu ..or who kyu Nisha se baat karne aaya …
Manju “aao beta ab tum hi ise samjhao ki iske nana ki tabiyat thik nahi hai or yah jaane se mana kar rahi hai ..meri toh sunti nahi tum hi kehdo shyaad tumhari baat maanle …”or side se nazar bachakar Nisha ko aankh maar di …jisko manu na dekh paya per Nisha is per muskura padi..manu kahin na kahin khud ko aaj gusse ki kaid me mehsoos kar raha tha…pata nahi use gussa kyu aaraha tha ...per jab bhi Nisha ko dekhta use who scene yaad aa jata ki chintu or Nisha ….”bas bahut hua jo kaam karna hai karunga or jaldi nikal jaunga yahan se varna aaj pata nahi kya ho jaye”
Manju “ tum dono baat karo main apne bete ke liye chai lati hun beta im so sorry abhi main thodi jada pareshaan hun tum Nisha ke sath betho main aati hun”manju ne jate hue phir se Nisha ko ankh maar deti or thums up ka sign diya use taki or time spend kar sake Nisha manu ke sath …jahan aaj manju apne pita ki tabiyat ko sunkar pareshaan thi per who ache se janti thi itna dur hone ki wajah se chahe kitna bhi pareshan ho le per badalna toh tha nahi per yahan ek taraf apne baap ki tabiyat ko uskne apne ander dafan sa kar liya tha or Nisha ko approach karne me lagi hui thi..
Ab Nisha or manu akele the manu koshish me laga hua tha ki nisha ka chahra kam se kam dekh sake …per Nisha ek tak use dekhne me lagi thi …dono me se koi kuch nahi bol raha tha …jahan Nisha sirf muskurakar manu ko dekh rahi thi wahin manu jab bhi uski muskurahat dekhta toh uska gussa or bad jata …jab yeh muskurahat uske bardast ke bahar ho gayi toh who utha or bahar ki tarf jahaan unka bada sa lawn tha jane laga Nisha bhi uske piche jaane lagi…
Manu “Nisha main tumse kuch puchun sach kahogi plz..”manu ne lagbag zaldi se himmat karke pucha..
Nisha “tumko mujhse aise puchne ke liye izazat ki kabse zarorat padne lagi..jo puchna hai puch sakte ho ??”
Manu “Nisha tumhare nana ki tabiyat thik nahi hai or tum jaane ko mana kar rahi ho janti ho tumhari wajah se tumahri mummy bhi nahi ja payengi …kya tum apni mummy ko apne nana ko dekhne me help nahi kar sakti ho “
Nisha”per agar main wahan gayi toh pata nahi kitne din lagenge or kya pata kitna time rukna padega wahaan ab main kar hi kya sakti hun…”
Manu “kar sakti ho tum sab kar sakti ho apne nana ko dekh bhi sakti ho or apni mummy ko bhi apne nana se milwane me help kar sakti ho ..”
Kaise “?? Nisha
Manu “wahin jakar wahan ruk kar or wahin padkar ..”
Nisha “nahi main nahi reh sakti wahan or padai toh wahan bilkul nahi …mere bas me nahi hai …”
Manu “ kya main dost ke naate tumse itna bhi nahi maang sakta agar tum mujhe apna manti ho toh tum ab aage koi behas nahi karogi tum na sirf wahan jaogi balki wahin padogi bhi …tumahra future ban ajeyga wahan…”
Nisha”tumne yeh kaise keh diya ki mera future sirf wahin ho sakta hai kya pata mera future mujhe yahan dikhta ho toh ???”manu ko dekhte hue …
Manu mann me “haan ab toh future yahin dikehga na tumhe us chintu ke pass …nisha kya hai usme aise jo tum jaisi achi ladki uske jaal me fas gayi hai…nahi main yeh nahi hone dunga….”
Manu “nisha dekhko tumko meri kasam tum ab koi faltu baat mat socho or wahan jao or wahin ache se padna or apna khayal rakhna ab or baat nahi or agar meri kasam ke kuch mayene ho toh maan lena or wahin rehna …main ab chalta hun..” manu ne jabse yeh suna tha ki Nisha apna future yahan dekh rahi hai use laga chintu me dekh rahi hai uske liye Nisha ke pass khada hona bhi mushkil ho gaya ..woh apni kasam dekar wahan bina aage kuch bole nikal aaya …
Jahan manju apne hath me chai ka cup liye aayi thi ..usne lawn me dekha jahan Nisha akeli khadi thi usne pucha “manu kahan hai “Nisha ke kandhe per usne apna hath rakha toh uske hath se chai ka cup zamin per chutkar gir gya.uska dil kaamp sa gya samne Nisha ki Aankhen aasoonon se tar thi …
Manju”kya hua meri bachi or manu kahan hai ..”
Nisha “mummy who chale gaye or jaate jaate kasam dekar gaye hain ki main aapke sath nana ke pass New Zealand chali jaun ..or wahin padai bhi karun …or kehte hain ki agar unki kasam ka koi mayena ho toh maan lun …are unka sirf keh dena mere liye us order saman hai jise pura karne ke liye main kuch bhi kar jaun..per ek baar toh mujhse thik se milkar jate who…?”
Manju “na beti tu khud soch tut oh use pyaar karti hai ..per uske liye chahe tu sirf dost ho per usne jab kaha hoga toh kya usne tujhe ek baar bhi dekha ???”
Nisha rote hue” nahi maa aaj ek baar bhi nahi dekha thik se mujhe”
Manju” na meri bachi ro mat tu soch kahin na kahin use bhi toh apni dost se bichadne ka gum hoga na toh tu ek baar uske dil ka bhi toh soch ..usne kitni himmat ki hogi ki tujhe usne yeh kaha hoga ..ek baar uska tyaag bhi dekh khud ki dosti usne laga di hai daav per ..or jab laga hoga ki shyaad tu asani se na mane toh apni kasam dedi hogi..sochkar dekhna is baare me bhi kya uski kasam nahi manegi babu”
Nisha “maa unki kasam kaise nahi manugi per ek baar mujhse meri marzi bhi puch lete na khair koi baat nahi jab unhone kaha hai toh unki baat Nisha puri na kare aisa ho nahi sakta ..per maa unse duri kaise sahungi me ..”Nisha ne ek nischay ke sath apne aanso puchte hue kaha ..
Manju “beta who sab tu mujhper choad de who sab baad me dekhenge ..abhi tyaari kar chal acha aaj chintu kyu nahi aaya..”
Nisha”maa aaj pata hai usne school me kya kaha ..??”
Manju “ dekh beta manu ki baat alag hai ,,per main sach kehdeti hun aaj mujhe us chintu ke bache ke laachan thik nahi lagte ,,kuch azib sa gadbad insaan lagta hai who mujhe..??”
Nisha “are mummy mujhe bhi pehle who azeeb lagta tha …or pata hai main khud use behuda insaan kehti thi..”
Manju “toh phir”
Nisha “mummy aaj subah jab main school gayi toh usne mujhe bulaya or pucha kya main manu se pyaar karti hunt oh mere pairon ke niche se zamin khisk gayi …maine socha ki isko kya jawab dun toh usne mujhe achnak se Bhabhi kehna shuru kar diya or bola ki ab manu uske bhai saman hai toh main bhi uski bhabhi lagi na kasam se saram se gad gayi thi main …us pal “
Manju “phir “
Nisha “phir lunch ke time usne kaha ek Bhabhi ke haq se kya main apne laxman saman dever ko apne hath se khila nahi sakti kya?? Mujhe ek bhai saman insaan yeh kahe or me na kar dun main use apna bhai samjhkar use apne hath se khilaya or usne kaha ki ek baar apne devar ko apna bhai maankar ek baar who hug chahta tha …so main bhi bhai maankar use gale laga liya..mummy who itna bura nahi hai. Jitna hum use sajhte hain…”
Manju “dekh ek baat kahungi abhi bhi tu us se dur rehna uski Aankhen thik nahi lagti mujhe …ab dur kya rehna ab toh waise bhi permanent dur ho gayi ab tu ….”
Nisha ki jaise dukhti rag per hath rakh diya tha manju ne ..uski dur wali baat per phir aanso chalak aaye uske ..
Manju “beta kab tak royegi ek baar uske baare me or aapni maa ke baare me bhi soch jiska baap bimaar hai per nawasi ko nana se jada apne future husband ki fikar hai ..(is baat per rote hue bhi Nisha muskura padi)”
Khair dono maa beti tyaar hui or tyaari me lag gayi apni apni..nisha ke nana uske chote mama ke sath raha karte the …uski nani ab dunia me nahi thi ..or unka bada beta gaav me apni family ke sath raha karta tha jiski wahin per govt job thi..per chota beta New Zealand me tha jisne wahi ki local girl se shadi ki thi or jab Nisha ke nana ko ek baar apne pote ko dekhne ka dil kiya toh who chal diye New Zealand jahan unka dil apne pote or nayi bahu ke sath aisa laga ki wahin ke hokar reh gaye or ab unki tabiyat ke chalte Nisha or manju se milne ki unki icha thi kyuki pata nahi kab unka time aaj jaye aisa unka manna tha ..so jane se pehle who ek baar Nisha ko or apni beti ko dekhna chahte the..
Khair Nisha or manju ke chalne ka time hua toh Nisha airport per baar bar dekh rahi thi uski aankhen apne pyaar manu ko dekh rahi thi ..per manu hota toh aata jisper uski Aankhen manu ke na aane per chalak aayi…
Jisper manju ne use mante hue kaha “beta kitna royegi tu …khud soch usper kya bit rahi hogi who bhi toh khud se tujhe dur kar raha hai ….maine uski aakhone me tere liye parvah dekhi hai …or main itne din me use agar sahi samjhi hun toh who bhi teri tarah aansoon baha raha hoga..ab toh maan ja jab time aaye toh saara badla le lena usse main kuch nahi khaungi..”
Jisper Nisha ko thodi himmat mili ki manu ko uski parvah hai ..phir usne apne aanso puche or jamin se hath lagakar use sar per laga kar kaha” aap jahan bhi hain khush rahiyega aapki baat meri liye sab kuch hai duri hume alag nahi kar sakti jab bhi wapas aaungi aapse apni mohbbat ka saara bayaaz vasool kar lungi is zamin ko chukar aapke pyaar ko sakhshi maan kar kasam khati hun jab bhi Nisha wapas loutegi humesha humesha ke liye aapki hogi yeh kasam hai mujhe..is dharti ki Maanav hi Nisha ka pati hoga uske siva koi nahi kasam hai mujhse is mitti ki ”
Manju”mitti ki kasam kuch jada filmi nahi ho gya meri amma hum airport per hain toh tujhe kahan se isme mitti nazar aa rahi hai jiski kasam kha rahi or who itni badi kuch toh sharam kar maa sath me hai nana ko dekhne ja rahi hai or baat kar rahi hai apne hone wale husband ki pata nahi sharam saari bech di hai is ladki ne ..”manju ne Mazak me Nisha ko chedte hue kaha
Nisha “mummy plz don’t tease me …varna phir se himmat tut jayegi meri or ro padungi main …ap janti ho kya bit rahi hai mujhper phir bhi..”
Manju “acha chal tere papa bhi anewale honge …” itna kaha hi tha ki samne se ashok aata nazar aaya or uske baad tino ne flight pakdi or chal diye new Zealand ki ooor.
Manu apne ghar ki chat per usi samay akela andhere me hath me koi pic thi uske …
Manu”pagalo ki tarah pyaar kiya tumse per mila kya bewafai pata nahi kya tumse gussa hona bhi chaun toh gussa nahi ho sakta per tumhari is baat ko us bewafai ko kaise bhul sakta hun main..per aaj tumko khud se dur jaate dekhna bhi bardast nahi ho raha kya karun kuch samjh nahi ata …or us chintu ke sath ..nahi Nisha yeh mujhe bardast nahi hai ki mera pyaar kisi or ki baahon me ho or who mere liye Nafrat rakhnewala chintu thu hai manu tujhpe jo pyaar me aansu bahye tu laanat hai tujhper manu jo kisi bewafa ke liye teri ankhon se ek bund bhi aansoo nikal toh ..Nisha aajke baad manu ke muh per naam bhi nahi hoga tumhara….aaj abhi isi waqt se bhul jaunga tumhe Nisha humesha humesha ke liye. kasam hai mujhe .or iske sath hi usne bhi ek kasam le li or Nisha ki who pic apne hathon se faadkar chat per chalne wali hawa me sirf apne hath khole jisme Nisha ki tasveer or uski har yaad ko manu ne hawa or samay ke hawale kar diya tha..
Hawa ka tez jhonka Nisha ki har yaad or un tasveer ke tukado ko manu ke haathon se or dil se laker ud chala tha …kasam dono ne hi khayi thi ek ne aapna banana ki kasam toh ek ne humesha ke liye bhul jane ki kasam…ab kiski kasam puri honi thi yeh toh waqt hi janta hai ya dono ki kismat …
Wahin kisi bade se aalishaan bangle me ek anjaan shaks chair per betha tha…kisi or hi dunia me gum tha uske kamre ki saari light band thi…us room me ek alag si shanti thi jaise us insaan ko bhi us shanti ke sath apna talluq ho per. Achnak se ek or insaan ne us room ki light on ki or apni awaz se us shanti os tanhai ko rok diya “malik woh madam aa gayi hai aapka wait kar rahi hain..”
Who insaan khada hua uska pura sharir kisi ache pehlwano se bhi acha or ek ache athlete ke jaise tha uski age koi 36 ke aas pass hogi …uske chahre se koi bhi bata sakta tha ki yeh kisi unche khandaan ka raeesi me pala bada insaan hoga uske chahre ki chamak ke sath uski kad kaathi bhi achi khaasi thi uski height 6’ puri thi uski chest koi 52 ke aas pass hogi uske biceps 25 ke aas pass or waist line uski koi 36 hogi toh aap ache se imagine kar sakte hain kaise lagta hoga …
Khair who utha or chalta hua us dusre insaan ke paas aaya .chup chap wahan gaya jahan who lady uska intzaar kar rahi thi…
Us lady ne us aadmi ke aate hi bade adab se jukkar use apna shistachar dikhya jise us admi ne sir jhukakar kubul kiya ..
Uske baad us aadmi ne phiche dekha jahan uska who naukar hath me ek trolley ko dhakelta hua laaraha tha jisper 2 scotch or 1 whiskey ki bottle rakhi thi…jise us lady ne turant apne hath me le liya or us naukar or bahar jane ka ishara kiya …or us trolly ko dhakelte hue room me le aayi jisme ek chair per betha who admi apne me khoya hua tha …usne trolly uske paas laga di jiski awaz se use achanak se dhyaan aaya or who us trolly per rakhi scotch ki bottal uthakar siddha muh se laga leta hai or siddha apne halak me uttarne laga tha …
jaise use kadwi sharaab me apne dard ko khatam kar dena chahta ho who aurat sirf pass khadi chupchap usko yeh karte hue dekh rahi thi …jiski aankhon se bhi kuch bunde nikal chuki thi uske is traha se kud ko dard dete hue …per uski chupi nahi tuti…usne chupchap apni un bundoon ko apne rummal se chori se puch liya ..us admi ka dard shyaad itna zada hoga ki jisme usse sharab ki kadwahat kam lag rahi hogi ya use iski aadat hogi…
uske halak se lagi botal ab khatam ho chuki thi usne bottal ko apne hotoon se alag kiya or us aurat ko dekha us aurat ko dekhkar usne apni aakhonse ishara kiya jiske baad who aurat ek or room jo shayad bedroom hoga kisi ka usme chaldi who aadmi bhi ladkhadata hua chal diya …jahan who aurat bed ke ek side me khadi thi shyad us aadmi ke itnzaar me …
Us aadmi ne ek baar uske hasin jism ko ek nzar dekha us aurat ka jism kisi kayamat se kam nahi tha …uski umar koi 28 ke aas paas hogi or uska who Katila jism dekhkar koi murda bhi apna land pakad kar kahe “ek baar bas land ko chut ka yeh hasin jam mil jaye toh maut bhi mazoor ho..”
Uski height koi 5’ 9’’ ke ass pass hogi …iska matlab achi khashi lambi hogi …or uska figure koi 36d , 28, 38 ke ass pass hoga matlab uski kamar kisi hasin bal khati mod ke jaise thi …
Us admi ne us aurat ke pass aakar uske jism ko chua or us aurat ko us chuan se ek alag hi mardana maza mila jissse uske muh se halki sssiki nikal gayi…issssssshaaa !!!
Jiske baad who aadmi or wild ho gaya or usne us aurat ki dono chuchiyon ko apne dono hathon se thaam kar jor se bhinch dala jisme us aurat ko beinteha dard hua …per uske muh se koi awaz abhi na nikali …per uski annkhon ka dard dekhkar us aadmi ko shayad thoda reham aa gaya hoga jo usne thoda aaram se chuchiyaan dabano shuru kardin uske baad toh jaise us aurat ka haal badal gaya …
us ka maza uske muh se nikalne wali har siski issssssshaaaaa!!!! Immmmmaahaaaaa!!!!!.............hayyyyy!!!!!!!!!! issssssssshhhh!
Jaisi awazon se samjh sakte hain…uske nipple sakht ho chale the ….uski chut me aab who mithi hulchul mach gayi thi ….jiska matlab tha ….ki uski chudai ki ichaa or jada bad chuki thi sharir ka temperature itna bad gaya tha ki shayad koi chukar dekhe toh kahe bukhaar hai …per yeh bukhaar us chudai ka tha jiske chalte uski saanse aab bhari ho chali thi …usne ab khud pehl ki or beth gayi niche us aadmi ki paint ki zip kholi usne……
zzziizizzzzzzp …zip kholkar usne aapna hath badakar uska land hath me liya jo abhi aaadha khada tha ….usne jab use dekha toh us aurat ke hath se bada tha us aadmi ka land usne jab uska land dekha toh …ussse apni khud ki garmi ke chalte rukna muskil ho chala tha ….usne siddha us land jiska size koi 8’ ke ass pass hoga muh me liya or chusne lagi or chusti rahi dhire dhire land apne pure zor per aane laga tha or uske muh me aana muskil hochala tha …kyuki land ki golai ya motai bhi bad chali the kisi baseball bat ke jaisa sakht ho chala tha uska land ek sharab ki garmi usper gori chiti Hasina ka land ko chusna kisi lallu ka bhi land khada karde ..toh who toh pakka Saand jaisa mard tha or usper uska land kadak us aurat ka ab muh me lena bhi muskil tha so usne muh se nikala …or who aadmi bhi shayad aapne pure josh me aa chuka tha …so usne us aurat ke jism se ek ek kapde ko usse juda kar diya tha ..or uske jism ki tarf dekha kya saanche me tarasha hua jism tha …bina daag ka goora badan ..us per uski shaandaar gazab ki kasi hui chuchiyan jinke sidhe kadak nipple is baat ko cheekh -cheekh kar keh rahe the …ki ek baar hume chu lo …uske un gori chuchiyon me laal nishaan is baat ka sabot tha ki kaise unko zor se masla hua tha….or uska kasa hua pet is baat ka pukhta sabot tha ki us aurat ko kasrat karne or khud ko maintain rakhne me maharat haasil hai …uski janghe dekh kar koi kisi chikne ped ke baare me soch sakta hai …us admi ne jag us aurat ko dekha toh usne sabse pehle uski chut ki taraf dekha uski chut fully shaved thi jisper baalon ka naamo Nishan nahi tha kehte hain chut chut me rang ka hi anter nahi hota hai kisi kisi ko shyad khud upperwala apne hath se taraashta hai …jiska jism shayad uski banayi is dunia me kehar dha deti hai ..us aurat ki chut bhi kuch aisi hi thi ..puri gori jiske honth abhi thode gelle the jinse chuta paani is baat ka ishara tha ki usko chudai ki kitni talab hai …us admi ne jab uski chut ko dekha toh uske land ne ek alag zordar thumka lagaya …
or uske baad us aadmi ne khud ko bhi apne kapdoon se aazaaad kiya or us aurat ko apni tarf kicha or siddha ek kiss …kiaya jis me uske honth us aurat ke hotton ki mithaas pine lage or uske ek hath ne uski ek chuchi ko maslna chalu kar diya ….or dusre hath ne uski gilli chut ko maslana …ek tarfa hamla ho toh shayad koi she bhi sake per yahaan toh humla bhi 3 tarfa tha ..us aurat ki halaat is baat se pata laga sakte hain aap ki ..koi 5 minutes me hi uska paani nikal gya …sirf chut masalne se hi …or paani hi nahi saath me uska pishaab bhi (squirt)jisme us aadmi ka hath bhi gilla ho gya …per shayad husn or jism ka nasha …sharab or shabaab ka nasha uske sar chad chuka tha usne jaise hi us aurat ko jhadete dekha …uske baad siddha ek hath se jo uski ek chuchi per chal raha tha …siddha uska gala pada or thoda dabba diya jisse uski aurat ki nase akad agye or uska gora chehra laal ho chala tha …ek dum laal …usne phir shidha use bed ki tarf fekh diya …who aurat bhi shayad pani nikal jane ke baad thodi dhili ho chali thi ..so siddha bed per dhadam se gir paadi …
Jiske baad who aadmi sidhe bed per chada or uska garma garm land su aurat ko apni chut per laga hua mehsoos hua …or jab use chut per land mehsoos hua …toh usne apna hath niche le jaakar us land ko apni chut ke ched per lagya ..or baaki ka kaam us aadmi ke dumaar jhatke ne kar diya …..khaaaacccch ..paani se labalab bhari chut me aawaz ke sath land ne apni entry maar li …jiske sath hi us aurat ne ek siski li ….iiiisssssshaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!...araaaammmmmmmmm..haayyyyyy uske baad us aadmi ne us aurat ke dono pair utha liye or apne kandhe per rakh liye or tufaani jhatke dene shuru kar diye….
Jhatake itne dumdaar the ki har jhtake per uski sisiski ke sath uska pura sharir hill jata …khas tour per uski bhaari rasili chuchiyan har jhatake ke sath upper niche ek taal mel se hil rahi thi ….us aadmi ka har jhtaka us aurat ki chut ke aakhiri hisse per use mehssos hota tha …jahan shayad aaj tak hi koi land pucha ho ….use kitna mazaa aa raha tha …ap is baat se samjh sakte hain ki uskaa pani 15 min me ek baar or jor ke pishaab ke pressure ke sath nikal gya or koi 30sec ke liye jabardast orgasm hua use …tab tak ke liye bhi us aadmi ne us per koi reham nahi kiya usnea ab use gumya or ghodi banakar apna land ek baar me siddha uttar diya or uske lambe baal apne hath gool guma kar ek lagam ki tarah khich liye or fir se laga tufaani jhatake ….har baar us aurat ke jhatak ke sath maze or dard jo ab uski chut me mehsoos hone laga tha ….bura haal tha…per phir bhi us aadmi ne use …zor ke sath chudai jaari rakhi …koi 20 min baad me ab shayad who aadmi bhi jhadne ke kaagar per tha …
per us aurat ki halat ab thakan or koi 4 baar jhadne se khasta ho gyi thi ….per phir bhi who aadmi laga hua tha ki 5 baar uska paani chut gya ….pishaab ke sath ….woh aadmi bhi apna land nikaal kar use ishara karta hai …toh who apni jagah se uthti hai or uska land muhme lekar zor se chusne lagti hai…jisper shayad aapne antim palo ke chalte us aadmi ne uske sar me aapne aakhir chand jhatke uske muh me laga kar apna land jabardasti uske halk me utaar diya or apna maal uske pet me uttar diya …phir unse uska sar choda jisper us aurat ne uska land chusa or bacha hua maal bhi chus liya …jiske baad dono bed per gir gaye…
Thodi der ..baad who aurat uthi or “malik chalti hun aap or na pina ..”
Who aadmi “thik hai per malik kab tak kahogi mujhe ..”
Aurat “ aap mere liye malik hai or rahenge humesha ..verna kon kothe ki randi fatima ko azad karta ..aaj sar uthakar aapke office me kaam karti hun …aapko nahi kahun toh kise kahun malik aapne use nayi zindagi di hai jise khud uske paida karnwale bhi bhul chuke the …aap humesha mere malik hi rahenge..”
Who admi” per azadi ke baad bhi toh tum wahi karti ho jo wahan karti thi…tum ko kehta hun abhi bhi chaho toh kahin bhi sattle ho jao …main dekh lunga…”
Aurat”malik aapne aaj toh keh diya aage se na kehna …aap kaisi baat karte hain …wahan meri ruh tak ko har roz nocha jata tha …randi ka matlab kya hota hai …koi randi ke dil se puchkar dekhe …yahan sirf aap hain or aapke sath meri marzi bhi shamil hai isme..so aap khud ko na jimmedar mane iske liye….verna randikahne ki Fatima sheikh yahan ki Shabnam nahi hoti ..malik mujhe aapse koi shikat nahi hai bas aap khud se mujhe dur na karene or mujhe apne sath hi rahne den yeh meri aakhri iltza hai aapse..”
Aadmi “thik hai tum jaise chaho tumhe khuli azadi hai …tum jo chaho karo acha ..apna dhyan rakhna “or who utha or bathroom ki taraf chal diya …
Uske baad who nangi hi uthi or aapne kapde jo zamin per bikhre the uthaya or chaldi room se bahar…
Who admi bahar aya naha kar bath room se or aakar nanga hi apne dusre room ki taraf chal pada ,hath me ek or scotch ki bottal lekar ..jahan shyad uske naukar ne pehle se saaf kapde uske bed per rakh diye the …usne kapde pehne or samne rakhi tasveer jisme koi bacha or koi or aurat uske sath thi shayad koi family photo thi..use hath me laker …”I miss u my love my only love ..my life my wife ,,,and my dearest son Mohit kitna miss karta hai tumhara yeh baap yeh hath me bottal is baat ka sabot hai kyu chod gaye tum dono mujhe tanhaa is dunia me akela ..ki jo insaan jisne kabhi zindagi me sharaab ko chua tak nahi tha aaj duba hai isi me …I miss u both …”
Ek zor daar dhaad ke sath uske ansoo bha chale …uska rona itna dard se bhara tha ki paas ke servant room tak jaati uski awaaz ko sunkar who naukar bhi aansoo bahane lagta hai …”hey upperwale itna acha insan aaj kitna akela or tanha hai ..kya tujhe zara bhi reham nahi hai ache logon per ..??kya yahi hai tera Insaaf who insaan kitna tanha hai jisne zindagi bhar sharab ko hate kiya aaj usi me duba hua hai kuch toh reham kar malik mere ache malik per …”us naukar ne rote hue upperwale se shikayat karte hue kaha..
Kon tha yeh aadmi itna akela tanha kyu tha or kyu bana aisa …or manu ki or Nisha ki kasam ka kya ..hoga …sabse bada sawal is admi ka in sabme kya kaam …
aur ussi time un dono ko kaheen door jana hota hain, aur larka typically kasam bhi khata hain kee usse bhula dega.
matlab had hain yaar ek baar puchh toh leta, aur bewafa wo kaise hui kya tumne pyar ka izhar kiya tha ussse, nahin na toh phir wo bewafa kaise hui.
yaar typical kahanio kee tarah likhte aa rahe ho, jab itna bardast nahin hua toh bhai kuchh bola hain, aur yeh chintu koi mastermind hain kya sala theek se na padh pata hain na likh pata hain umar bhi kya hain12 ya 13 itne mein hi usse aapne dikha diya hain kee koi bahut shatir hain.
aare yaar itni umar mein toh dhang se kuchh hosh nahin hota hain aur yehan planning ke saath matlab saare classs ek saath hi uske khilaf kaise ho jayega.
had hain aur teachers bhi saare gandu hain kya matlab saare ke saare are koi toh hoga jisme akal hogi, had hain bhaij.
bhai shuruat kaafi achhi lagee thee lekin aap bhi typical writer jo baaki romance kahanio mein padhte aa rahe hain wahee kar rahe ho, matlab shab kuchh achanka aur yeh galatfehmi wala kand jisme na hero kuchh puchhta hain aur na ladki koi explanation deti hain aur dono apne man mein hi alag hone ka faisla kar lete hain.
aur yeh gandu kee tarah shabke taane kyun seh raha hain, koi jamadar bolta hain toh bole kya hain kaam karta hain mera baap koi chori toh nahi karta hain.
na kabhi chandu ke samne stand up kiya hain abhi, tak aapne kahani mein action ka bhi tag diya hain, lekin hero toh ek dum gandu type bana diya hain bhai aapne.
jab wo itna hi samajhdar hain itna hi deemag wala hain shab uski tareef karte hain uske deemag kee toh wo apni problem ka bhi hal khud hi dhund leta.
bhai in the end aapko agar feelings hurt hui toh sorry tahe dil se kyunki koi aapki creation ke bare mein kuchh galat bole toh gussa aata hain lekin mujhe yeh story achhi lag rahi hain lekin yeh hero kee stereotype walli mistakes jo aap karwa rahe ho uske liye bura lagta hain.
fan hoon aapki story ka toh thora hardly criticise kar diya.
sorry again bhai.
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thanks bhai ...socha tha inform kar dun ki late night reply aayega ..
per aalu bhai ne itne detail me story ka sara means bata diya acha laga dekhkar ...
per bhai na main yeh kahunga ki yeh sirf ek romance story hai ..or sirf ek action story hai...story me jitne tag diye hain har tag ko justifie karna mera kaam hai ..so thoda toh aapko bharosa as a friend hi kar lo kyuki writer toh main khud ko manta nahi ...
per aapne story ko just ek stearotype kaha jo shayad aapka nazariya hoga ...jo mostly loog dekha bhi karte hain ..jaise ek english me quote hai .." don't judge book by its cover "
so yahan bhi yahi hai ...aapne story ke update pade or soch bhi liya ki story same old filmi story jaise typical type hai ...aapne jo kaha sahi kaha ..
thik waise hi story ko shuru kiya tha ..taaki sabko waise hi story lage bhi or waise hua bhi ...sabhi ne baad me hero ko lekar kaha bhi ki hero kamzor hai ...
toh jaisa uska bachpan tha waise usko imandari se dikhya bhi ..aage hero me bahut se change aaye ..jo shayad aapne dekhe nahi ..koi baat nahi ..
kahani ke starting me hi kaha tha ...jahan jaisa emotion hoga use puri imandari se likhunga ...waise hi likh bhi raha hun ...
aapne kaha 12 ya 13 ki age me chintu ko mastermind dikhaya hai ...toh yaar konsi planning karte hue dikhaya hai ...loog is age me mostly hyperactive hote hain jisme bache se jawani ka safar aata hai ..is age me toh loog chess bhi kehla karte hain ..lagta hai aap news se door hain ..koi baat nahi ..ek baar dekhna jaroor ..bachpan me insaan pyaar ko lekar jaise soch rakhta hai waise hero ne bhi kiya ...samne se jab usko laga ki uska pyaar hi usko dhokha de raha hai toh use chid si ho gayi usi pyaar se ...isme konsa rocket science hai yaar ???
insaan ka jab jaisa mood hota hai waise uska action or reaction hota hai ...so hero ne jab jaise uski maturity thi waise reaction diya bhi ...ab bada hota toh shayad uska reaction thoda alag hota bhai ...isme main jaise wada kiya tha ki jahan jaisa hoga puri imaandari se likhunga ..so isme aapko kya lagta hai ..kya main hero ki age ke hisaab se maturity dikhata ..yaar sochna alag baat hai or gusse me sochna alag ..aap bhi cool mind se sochna ...story me jo likha hai soch samjh kar likha hai ..manta hun story likna me pehli baar hai ..per yaar baad presence of mind ki bhi hai ...jo first ho ya last har insaan ka alag alag hota hai ...
or rahi kahani ki baat yaar simple hai ..jiski jaisi soch waisa uska reaction ..ab har koi ek jaise mind ka nahi hua karta na ..so jo bura sochta hai ya story ko criticize karta hai ..usko azaadi hai ..kare jaise aapne kiya ...mujhe isme koi problem nahi lagti bhai ...
apne ko toh critcism ki habit hai ...story ek slow touch se shuru ki thi maine ..jo hero ke jawan hone ke baad thodi change hui...aage bhi jahan change apply hoga ..use apne har dost ke hisab se modify karunga ..kyuki life me bhi modification hota hai waise hi story me ...so aapko jaise laga aapne kaha ..
or acha laga jaan kar ki aapne aapne thought ko bina filter kiye share kiya ...isme bura bilkul nahi laga ..bura toh tab lagta jab aap kehte nahi honestly ...
uske liye thanks bhai ...aapse itna kahunga bhai ..ki aap is slow story ko thoda or aage read karo modification aap khud samjh jaoge ..
or such kehta hun jaise maine bura nahi mana ..aap bhi offend or bura mat maanna ..kyuki yaar jaise aapki soch hai waise is insaan ki soch bhi hai ...yaar main abhi tak reader hun so aapki baat bura kaise maan sakta hun ..itna lamba saar likhne ki wajah yahi hai ..jaise aapne detail me mujhse pucha ..waise hi maine aapko detail me reply diya ...
ab zara kaam kar liya jaye...kyuki update per kaam kar raha hun late night tak pura hoga ...so thoda kaam kar lun bhai ...per aapne such me acha comment kiya bhai ..kyuki aapke comment me jo bhi kamiyan thi meri dikhi bhi ..per sorry yaar ek baar thoda update ko aage skip karke padna shayd koi achi cheez bhi mil jaye ..kyuki action ya romance sirf ek hi cheez story me nahi hai ..sab hai jitna jahan jarori hai woh wahan hoga bhai ...
thanks for reading & staying with us ...
yours, Dr. Zeus
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bhai likh hi raha hun late hoga aaj raat tak ..per aaj update aayega jaror ...
thanks for reading & staying with us...
Bhai apko ek baat bolunga aapne pure stroy ko ek baar me bta diya acha tha but bhai ek writer her view of point se dekhta hai ki readers ko kya psnd hai public demand kya hai or kya sahi hai kya got hoga aisa nhi hai ki wo starting me sochte hai nahi wo daily baithate hai or sochte hai ki kya likha jaye apne jo abhi bataya bilkul sahi hai but ye story thodi alag hai subse baki story ki tarah hai isme sex hai kyuki wo public demad hai but baki story ki tarah nhi hai ki sirf sex hi sex ho isme lots of meaningfull baate bhi hai agar apne pdha hoga to or dusri baat apne kaha ki agar wo use bewafa kahne se pahle usse confirm kr leta to achha hota to bhai agar aisa hota to suspense naam ki chiz na hoti story me writer likh raha hai ye unki mind pr hai ki kb kya hoga or rahi baat ki sub ek story ek jaisi hai to bhai her story alag hai sub ka ek apna Patten hota hai wo ussi tarah likhta hai ab jaise ki sub mobile no. 10 no. Ka hi hota hai but sub me 1 se le kr 9 tk ke no. Use kiye jaate hai but sub same nhi hota na same yaha bhi wahi hai hero ki jeet ,hero ka struggle , family problems etc. But aap isko kis tarah likhte ho ye imp hota hai to yahi bolunga ki bhai story ko padhte raho or enjoy kro ye one of the best story hai iss pure forum ka
