thanks bhai ...socha tha inform kar dun ki late night reply aayega ..
per aalu bhai ne itne detail me story ka sara means bata diya acha laga dekhkar ...
per bhai na main yeh kahunga ki yeh sirf ek romance story hai ..or sirf ek action story hai...story me jitne tag diye hain har tag ko justifie karna mera kaam hai ..so thoda toh aapko bharosa as a friend hi kar lo kyuki writer toh main khud ko manta nahi ...
per aapne story ko just ek stearotype kaha jo shayad aapka nazariya hoga ...jo mostly loog dekha bhi karte hain ..jaise ek english me quote hai .." don't judge book by its cover "
so yahan bhi yahi hai ...aapne story ke update pade or soch bhi liya ki story same old filmi story jaise typical type hai ...aapne jo kaha sahi kaha ..
thik waise hi story ko shuru kiya tha ..taaki sabko waise hi story lage bhi or waise hua bhi ...sabhi ne baad me hero ko lekar kaha bhi ki hero kamzor hai ...
toh jaisa uska bachpan tha waise usko imandari se dikhya bhi ..aage hero me bahut se change aaye ..jo shayad aapne dekhe nahi ..koi baat nahi ..
kahani ke starting me hi kaha tha ...jahan jaisa emotion hoga use puri imandari se likhunga ...waise hi likh bhi raha hun ...
aapne kaha 12 ya 13 ki age me chintu ko mastermind dikhaya hai ...toh yaar konsi planning karte hue dikhaya hai ...loog is age me mostly hyperactive hote hain jisme bache se jawani ka safar aata hai ..is age me toh loog chess bhi kehla karte hain ..lagta hai aap news se door hain ..koi baat nahi ..ek baar dekhna jaroor ..bachpan me insaan pyaar ko lekar jaise soch rakhta hai waise hero ne bhi kiya ...samne se jab usko laga ki uska pyaar hi usko dhokha de raha hai toh use chid si ho gayi usi pyaar se ...isme konsa rocket science hai yaar ???
insaan ka jab jaisa mood hota hai waise uska action or reaction hota hai ...so hero ne jab jaise uski maturity thi waise reaction diya bhi ...ab bada hota toh shayad uska reaction thoda alag hota bhai ...isme main jaise wada kiya tha ki jahan jaisa hoga puri imaandari se likhunga ..so isme aapko kya lagta hai ..kya main hero ki age ke hisaab se maturity dikhata ..yaar sochna alag baat hai or gusse me sochna alag ..aap bhi cool mind se sochna ...story me jo likha hai soch samjh kar likha hai ..manta hun story likna me pehli baar hai ..per yaar baad presence of mind ki bhi hai ...jo first ho ya last har insaan ka alag alag hota hai ...
or rahi kahani ki baat yaar simple hai ..jiski jaisi soch waisa uska reaction ..ab har koi ek jaise mind ka nahi hua karta na ..so jo bura sochta hai ya story ko criticize karta hai ..usko azaadi hai ..kare jaise aapne kiya ...mujhe isme koi problem nahi lagti bhai ...
apne ko toh critcism ki habit hai ...story ek slow touch se shuru ki thi maine ..jo hero ke jawan hone ke baad thodi change hui...aage bhi jahan change apply hoga ..use apne har dost ke hisab se modify karunga ..kyuki life me bhi modification hota hai waise hi story me ...so aapko jaise laga aapne kaha ..
or acha laga jaan kar ki aapne aapne thought ko bina filter kiye share kiya ...isme bura bilkul nahi laga ..bura toh tab lagta jab aap kehte nahi honestly ...
uske liye thanks bhai ...aapse itna kahunga bhai ..ki aap is slow story ko thoda or aage read karo modification aap khud samjh jaoge ..
or such kehta hun jaise maine bura nahi mana ..aap bhi offend or bura mat maanna ..kyuki yaar jaise aapki soch hai waise is insaan ki soch bhi hai ...yaar main abhi tak reader hun so aapki baat bura kaise maan sakta hun ..itna lamba saar likhne ki wajah yahi hai ..jaise aapne detail me mujhse pucha ..waise hi maine aapko detail me reply diya ...
ab zara kaam kar liya jaye...kyuki update per kaam kar raha hun late night tak pura hoga ...so thoda kaam kar lun bhai ...per aapne such me acha comment kiya bhai ..kyuki aapke comment me jo bhi kamiyan thi meri dikhi bhi ..per sorry yaar ek baar thoda update ko aage skip karke padna shayd koi achi cheez bhi mil jaye ..kyuki action ya romance sirf ek hi cheez story me nahi hai ..sab hai jitna jahan jarori hai woh wahan hoga bhai ...
thanks for reading & staying with us ...
yours, Dr. Zeus
thanks bhai itna calmy mere criticism ko lene ke liye, saare log apne criticism ko itna easily handle nahin karte hain.
aacha laga aapki soch dekh kar, bas shayad maine jaldi kar dee comment karne mein ho shakta hain aapne wo bhi koi wajah se hi likha hoga.
bhai wajah hain na kee mujhe romance story achhi lagti hain, aur mostly mein maine aisa dekha hain kee writers issi tarah ek aisi galatfehmi jissi easily handle kiya jaa shakta hain uski wajah se couple ko alag kar dete hain.
wo aisa hain na bhai kee apne hero ko kuchh jyada hi mature dikhaya tha jo aapni age ke ladko se aage badh ke calmly situation handle karta hain aur thora mature bhi hain.
issi liye laga kee wo iss situation mein bhi thora different react karega, itna jaldi decision pe nahin pahunchega, jaise usne didi ke case mein galatfehmi ka shikar hua tha toh wo usse shabaq lega, kyunki pyar ka mamla hain toh ek baar explanation toh banta hain na.
kyunki kachhi umar ka pyar hamesha yaad rahta hain wo kehte hain na first love aadmi itni jaldi se nahin bhoolta hain.
again thanks for reply, you are great writer kuchh mistakes mujhe lagee toh maine point out kee aage bhi karoona phir maafi bhi maang loonga.
aur achhii lagee toh dil khol ke tareef bhi karoonga bhai. abhi aage padh raha hooon. see you bhai.