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Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

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yeh sunkar unhoone manu per bahut pyaar aaya …or unhoone ek faisla kiya ki ab who manu ke kehne per hi kuch karengi or jo bhi kuch karega uske sath who bhi usi mazbooti se khadi rahengi jaise manu unke sath bina bole khada hai ..unhoone mann me ek kada or mazboot faisla le liya ..or apne behte hue annsoo khud punche or ..ek sakht faisle ke sath wahan se aahista se jass ke room ka door salike se band karke wahan se nikal gayi ..


Ab nita mam yeh sakht faisla or manu ka jagan ke liye soch sath me jass ka sath jagan ke liye kya rang lane wala tha yeh toh waqt or kismat ko hi pata hai ……


Ab Aage........





Manu or jass baton me lage hue the …

Jass “ toh kya socha hai jagan ka ??

Manu “ socha toh acha hi hai waise tumhara koi suggestion ??”

Jass “ suggestion toh yahi hai ki kuch aisa ho ki us jagan ko bhi pata chale ki uska sochna or apni behan ko aise marna sahi nahi hai ..aisa kuch hona chiye …per abhi toh koi cheez dimaag me nahi hai jab hoga tab bata dungi “…

Manu “ haan sahi hai jab socho tab bata dena ..waise tumhare us dealer ka kya hua ??...

Jass “ hona kya hai do din toh inhi sab me lag gaye usse baat bhi nahi hui …ab jab anty sahi hain ..toh usse bhi baat karti hun or time fix karti hun …”

Manu “ toh karo na jaldi se kyuki humko bhi wapas jana hai yahan ka kaam jitni jaldi ho utna acha hoga” …

Jass “ toh thik hai kaam karti hun …

Manu or jass jahan apne kaam ki discuss kar rahe the ..wahin kahin or ek insaan apne aap se laga hua tha …

Suraj “ dekha tu khud ko bada chalak samjhta hai na …socha tha ..bade ghar ki ladki hai asani se fansa lega per dekh …ek call karke hi maine tujhe vrinda se kaise alag kar diya ???”

Suryakant “ beta abhi bhi time hai soch le manu waisa ladka nahi hai ..kuch toh apni beti ka bhi dhyaan rakh …uski umar nikal rahi hai …aisa ladka shayad phir na mile …mujhe ladka pasand hai …meri maan ek baar vrinda se puch le shayad use bhi pasand ho ???”

Suraj “ papa ji mujhe pehle uske baare me tay karne do …?? Waise bhi vrinda ka kya hai ..use toh acha hi lagega na …who toh hai hi mithi mithi batain karne wala ..apni ek louti ladki ko kaise anjan ladke ko soump dun ??”

Suryakant “ beta soch samjhkar faisla lena kyuki ladka kahin se bhi galat nahi lagta hai …jab vrinda ko yeh sab pata chalega toh ..sochkar dekhna use kaisa feel hoga ki usi ka baap uske sathi ko usse alag karne per laga hua hai..?? socha jaror is bare me “

Suraj “ papa aapko toh main hi galat lag raha hun …aap bhi samjho ki bina janch padtal ke ..kaise us ladke ko apni ladki ko soump dun ???”

Suryakant “ beta tujh se jada dunia dekhi hai maine ..aise ladke ke liye loog dundh dundh kar riste ke liye line lagaya karte hain ..use rishton ki kami nahi hogi …kahin na kahin har baa paise ladke ki talash me lage hote hain ki ..unko unki ladki ke liye aisa ladka mile jisme koi kami na ho …ki ladka sharab na pita ho ..na usme ladkibazi ka koi shock ho ..or yeh ladka mujhe such me heera lagta hai …us per bonus main ladke me sanskaar dekh ki ladka apne se badon ki kitni izzat karta hai …are usne toh apne baare me kuch bhi nahi chipaya ..usne toh saaf saaf mujhe bata diya ki uske pita ek mazdoor hain ..or kya chahiye tujhe ladke me ??? soch itna agar tere nana ne socha hota toh aaj teri maa se meri shaadi nahi hui hoti or na tu paida hua hota ..or khud ko bhul gaya teri shaadi ke time agar tere biwi ke mayke wale agar itna sochte toh kya teri shaadi hoti …nahi na ..toh soch ..ki ladki sirf teri hi nahi hai ..itna sochega toh vrinda ki shaadi ho gayi bas …”

Suraj “ papa who sab sahih ai ..per main bina uske baare me jaane apni vrinda ko nahi kahunga “

Suryakant chidte hue “ toh kar apne mann ki ..rakh apni beti ko ..is sone ke pinjare me dekunga kab tak tu apni beti ki khushiyon per lagam lagayega ..aaj main hun kal nahi rahunga tab rote rahena ki papa ki baat man li hoti toh acha hota ..”

Suraj naram padte hue “ papa main konsa apni beti ko dukhi karna chahta hun ..main bhi toh bas uski Khushi hi chahta hun ..aaj ka rona acha hai ..baad me rone se ..so isliye mujhe karne do na ..”

Suryakant “ toh tu kar le ..per yaad rakhna vrinda kahin aise hi na reh jaye …kyuki vrinda ki age nikal rahi hai ..or manu ki shuru ho rahi hai ..ladka abhi college me jaeyga or kya pata wahan kisi ladki ne use pasand kar liya …toh uska baap tere jitna sochne wala na hua ..tab t usar pite te hue apna jaach-padtaal ka manjira bajate rehna ..ek baar vrinda ki taraf bhi dekh le kitni khush rehti hai uske sath …baaki tu baap hai …mera kya hai ??? main thera dada jab ladki kal ko kisi galat ladke ko pakad kar tere samne aa jaye tab rote rehna ..”

Suraj “ aisa nahi hoga mujhe apni beti per pura yakin hai …”

Dono baap bete lage hue the…vrinda ke liye sochne me …



Udhar manu ke ghar per naya matter tyaar tha …

Rajinder “ toh ab main kya karun ??”

Sumitra “ matlab ab aapka bhai jaichand us makan me reh raha hai ??”

Rajinder “ haan ..per isme main kya kar sakta hun ??”

Sumitra “ kar kyun nahi sakte ..kya who makan humne jaichand ya uske family ke liye liya hai ..kya humne uska zindagi bhar ka theka le rakha hai ???kya humare apne bache nahi hain ??? or aap kya nahi kar sakte ..pehle usne tala toadkar apni salli ko makan me ghusa diya ..or ab khud rehne laga …kya humne ghar uske liye liya tha …kya humari kamai sirf uski aish ke liye hai ..ek baar khud sochkar dekho mujhe dekho apne bachon ko dekho ek baar humne aaj taka apse kya manga hai …paisa aapne kamya …per aajtak us paise ko kya hum kharch kar paye nahi na …are main bahar nikali kaam ke liye ..aaj tak is parivaar ke liye kama rahi hun …or mere bache bhi dekho ..kaise apne har shock ko maar kar ji rahe hain ..apne bete se ek baar puchna ki kitni mehnat kar raha hai ..mere manu ko ek baar dekhkar keh do ki usne kya kuch nahi kiya ..is parivaar ke liye ..jahaan aaj ke bache raat din apne shock ke liye maa-baap ki kamai kharch karne me lag jate hain wahin choti si ummar se mere bache ne na sirf humko sahara diya balki khud ke sath is ghar ki har jarorat ke liye din raat ek kar raha hai ..usne na sirf muhboli behan ko padaya balki aaj apna ajay bhi uske chalte har tarah se sahi raste per hai ..aapne toh sirf kamya per usne toh jeena sikha diya ..apne bete se kuch sikhye aap ..kab tak bhai ke moh me pade rohge ..are us kamine jai-chand ko toh sirf bhai ka paisa dikhta hai ..uska parivaar nahi …ab uski niyat us makan per gad chuki hai ..thoda toh kuch karo verna soch lo mujhe majboran manu ko kehna padega who apne aap us jai-chand ko raste per le aayga tab sochte or samjhte rehna ..”

Rajinder soch me pad gaya ki Sumitra ki baat toh sahi hai ..in salo me jaichand ne kiya hi kya hai ?? har baar uske chalte Rajinder or uske parivaar ne sirf dukh hi dekhe the ..or kitni choti si umar me manu or Sumitra kaam karne lage the ..jis umar me bache apne baap se cycle ki zidd karte the wahan manu kaam kar raha tha ..aaj khud ke dum per Rajinder ke ghar me manu ki apni bike thi ,,car thi ..or jahan jata tha ..loog usko izzat dete the …samaz me missal thi Rajinder ki …ki dekho Rajinder ke bache kitne ache hain or inka ladka kaise school me first aata hai ..or sath me business bhi kar raha hai …

Per Sumitra ke manu ko kehne ka sunkar Rajinder ke kaano se dhaun chutne laga tha ..kyuki use abhi tak rajini or apna kissa yaad tha ..jisme manu ne usko bina sharminda kiye rajini ko usse door kar diya tha …per usko yeh pata nahi tha ki ..rajini usse door gayi kyun ?? per agar Sumitra ne jaichand ke liye kuch kiya toh phir iska asar Rajinder or jaichand dono ki family per padna tay tha …so Rajinder soch me tha ..

Sumitra “ kya hua ..aap kuch karoge ya ..main kahun manu ko …kyuki maine kaha toh shayad aapko phir kehne ya sunne ka mauka na mile …or waise bhi sochna kya hai ..konsa jai-chand itna siddha hai jo asani se maan jayega ???”

Rajinder “ main ek baar jai-chand se baat karta hun usko makan khali karne ko kehta hun ..tum manu se kuch mat kehna verna zara se makan ke piche dono parivaaron me dushmani paida ho jayegi ??”

Sumitra “ haan abhi toh bada pyaar hai na …?? Mere dono bache raksha -bandhan per behan ke naam per sirf pushpi se hi rakhi bandwate aaye hain …jabki jai-chand ki ladki aaj tak yahan rakhi bandhne tak nahi aayi …main kehti nahi hun iska matlab yeh nahi hai dikhta nahi hai ..mujhe ..per aapki tarah bhai ke pyaar me andhi nahi hun …soch lo kyuki agar jai-chand kehne se maan jaye toh acha ..verna usko road per na la diya toh …aage mujhe kuch nahi kehna …”Sumitra ne Rajinder ko ultimatum de diya tha ..

Ajay bahar dono ki baat sun raha tha ..or samjh raha tha ki ..such hi kaha tha uski maa ne ki uske bhai or maa agar kaam nahi karte toh aaj yeh ghar me kya haal hota ..or uske har shock ke liye who sirf bhai ko kaha karta tha …or manu bhi ajay ke har shock ke liye mana nahi karta tha …apne dum per hi restaurant chala raha tha ..uska bhai ..or jahan sikh raha tha wahan kaise loog uske bhai ki izzat karte the dekha tha usne ..or sath me aaj dekh bhi liya tha ki uski maa bhi kaise ajay or manu ke haq ke liye pehli baar sakt hokar Rajinder ko suna rahi thi …sumitra ko sakt hote ajay ne pehli baar dekha tha ..per sath me use manu ka ghar ka dhayaan rakhna ka matlab bhi samjh aa chuka tha ..jai-chand ke liye ajay ke dil me bhi nafrat bhar chuki thi …

Jaichand yeh who naam tha ..jisne aaj tak bhai ko sirf thuga hi tha ..ajay bhi sab samjhne laga tha ..manu toh jaichand ko usi din samjh gaya tha jab jaichand ne uska sath nahi diya tha ..woh bhi jab …jab manu ki jaan per bani hui thi ..tab jaichand manu ko akela choad gaya tha ..waise hi ab jai-chand ke naam se ek or insaan nafrat se bhara hua tha …ajay …



Or insab se anjaan jaichand apni shaitani hansi hans raha tha ..uska sasur sath me tha ..kya karen do kamino ki jodi hai ..saale sath me hi raha karte the ..

Jaichand “ ab toh thik hai na ?? dekh ab toh hum apne makan me hain??ab toh khush ho ja…”

Jaichand ki biwi “ bahdwe khus kaise ho jaun abhi toh makan me hi aaye hain ..makan humare naam toh nahi hua ..toh isme Khushi kaisi ??”

Jaichand” are pagali sochkar dekh …kamse kam ab humko kiraye ke makan me toh nahi rehna hai ..sochkar dekh ..ab kiraye ke paise se tu araam se parlor ja sakti hai …or jo bhi paisa bachega who tere hi toh hoga na ..”

Sasur “ haan beti damad ji ki baat sahi hai ..kuch time ki baat hai ..tum loog besharmi se pade raho main tab tak is makan ke kagaz banwa lunga tab yeh makan kanonan tumhara hoga tab aish karna aish ..”

Jaichand ki biwi “ ohh papa or tum such me bade shatir ho mujhe maaf karna ji ,,,main toh bhuk hi gayi thi ki ab humara apna ghar hoga or kiraye ke paise bachenge so alag ..ab main araam se naye kapde or gehne lungi ..tum dekhte rehna kaise lungi main??”

Jaichand “ tu chahe jo bhi le lagegi toh tu sirf raani hi ..joki tu hai hi ..mere dil ki raani …bas tu khush reh yahi mujhe acha lagta hai “

Is baat per jaichand ki biwi or uska sasur ke sath jaichand tino milkar shaitani hansi hasne lage …..





Udhar ek bed per ek ladki leti hui thi yeh koi or nahi heena thi..jiske hath me manu ki pick thi ..pata nahi apni kisi artist se usne manu ki yeh sketch banwai thi …jis se shamo or subah who batain kiya karti thi ..

Abhi bhi kar rahi thi heena “ aap kahan hain …har baar zidagani jab mujhe takliif me pati hai khuda aapko mere samne behj dete hain …kya aapko taras nahi aata ki ..har baar aapki yeh chahat ki maari jab bhi aapko dekhti hai ..uska dil bhi nahi bhar pata ki aap phir se mujhse ek baar door ho jaate hain ..dekho bhai jaan ne keh diya hai ki main aapse nikah kar sakti hun ..or jab bhaijaan ne keh diya toh mere liye farmaan tadbir ho chuka hai ..jiske bad heena ke har alfaaz me sirf aap hain…uff ! abhi bhi nahi bhuli hun who Dehradun jahan aapne mujhe darindon se hifazat se bachaya ..or yahan bhi jab mujhe laga ki marne se pehle bas khuda aapko mere samne ek baar la den toh aapko main dekhkar mout ko gale laga lun ..per kismat se aap aaye bhi or mujhe bachaya bhi ..jahan main jeene ki ummid hi haar chuki thi wahan aapne phir ek baar apni is Diwani ko jeene ki ek nayi wajah de di …or pata hai us chai ki dukan me jan who film ka scene chal raha tha …kaise hero apni heroine ko mang me khoon bhar kar bacha leta hai ..waise hi aapne is mohbbat ki maari ki mang me apne khoon se apna naam likh diya ..or jab us amma ne kaha toh aapki who masoomiyat jis tarah se aapne mujhe dekha tha ..aaj bhi dil ko halke se gudguda jaati hai …kaas har roz main aapke pehloo me hoti ..aap kyun nahi milte mujhse ??? kya meri chahat per aapko shaq hai ??ya koi or mil gayi hai aapko ??? nahi nahi aisa mat karna ..mujhe sab Manzoor hai ..per soutan nahi ..bas ek baar phir se aapko dekh sakun ..aapse baat kar sakun yahi tamannahh hai is Diwani ki ..i love u so much ,,,,muhhhaaa!!!” heena ne us sketch ko kiss kar liya …bahar se uska bhai shahid dekh raha tha ..or sun raha tha ..

Yeh roz ka scene tha …shahid bhi ab heena ki chahat ko samjhta tha ..per uske samjh me bhi nahi aa raha tha ki rocky( manu )aakhir kyun nahi aata uske ghar usse milne ?? usne kai baar master se bhi pucha tha ki rocky kyun nahi aata ..toh usko itna pata chala ki rocky apne kaamo me busy hai …jise sunkar shahid bhi samjh gaya ki rocky se aamne samne milna hi sahi hoga ..kyuki ghar per heena ki chahat me raat din izafa ho raha tha ..sketch shahid bhi dekh chuka tha …or heena ki chahat bhi …so ab usko intzar tha rocky se milne ka …



Udhar manu in sabse anjaan nita mam ke room me jaata hai ..jahan nita mam soch me gum thi ..per door knock hote hi khud ko normal kar chuki thi …

Nita mam “ haan beta kya hua ??”

Manu “ kuch nahi maa ..toh kahiye kya seva karni hai aaj aapki ?? kyuki aajka din aapke naam hai ..”

Nita mam “ beta ek baat manega na meri …”

Manu “ aap kehkar toh dekho maa “

Nita mam “ toh beta ek kaam kar jass ke sath mujhe aaj bhaiya ke ghar le chal ..unse ek baar baat kar lun phir wapas chalte hain ..”

Manu sochte hue “ toh maa finally aapne soch hi liya mamaji se milne ka .per wahan yeh mat batana ki aapko pata hai ..ki aap janti ho ki unko cancer nahi hai ..”

Nita mam gusse ko dabate hue “ haan nahi kahungi ..jab unhone cancer bola tha ..or jaisa tune kaha tha party me wahi sahi tha ..mujhe bekar me react nahi karna chahiye ..jab unko jhunth bolne ki padi hai toh ..hum kyun such kahen?? Sahi hai na “

Manu “ kya baat hai aap itna jaldi samjh gayi acha hai …maa chalo tyaar ho jao …ab mama ji ke ghar jana hai …”

Nita mam manu ko gale lagte hue ..” haan beta tere mama keg har jana hai,unko bhi pata chale ki unki choti behan ab badi ho gayi hai “ nita mam ki Aankhen apne bhai ki kartoot yaad karke angaare barsa rahi thi …

Manu ki aankhon me bhi ek chamak thi ..jo is baat ka sabot tha ki jagan babu ka acha time aa raha hai ..



Udhar manu or nita mam apne apne dimaag me jagan ke liye faisle le rahe the ki achanak se manu ka mobile baja …

Manu ne call pick kiya ..call tha ajay ka ..manu ne Khushi Khushi usse baat ki ..or ajay ne bhi aaj jo ghar per hua tha sab bata diya ..manu ne hanskar use pyaar se samjhya …

Manu “ dekh ajay ..teri or meri life utni asan nahi hai ..pehle mujhe bhi lagta tha ki har roz ..jab main ek musibat se ladkar aage badhta hun tab nayi musibat tyaar hoti hai ladne ke liye …kabhi kabhi is per gussa bhi aa jaya karta tha ..per jab samne tum logon or sath me itna support dekhta tha toh samjh jata tha …ki life isi ka naam hai …jo loog galat kar rahe hain yeh unka side hai ..usme hum sirf ummid kar sakte hain ki who sahi karen …kyuki hum sirf acha soch sakte hain …or aisa sirf kahaniyon me hota hai ki ..hero se impress hokar loog apni galati maan lete hain ..jabki asal zindagi me insaan jo aapka bura karne ke liye soch raha hai ..woh pure hosh-o-hawaas me apna kaam kar raha hai ..jisko aap kitna bhi samjha lo karna usne wahi hai ..jo who kar raha hai ..kyuki jaise kisi saamp ki fitrat hoti hai …dansna ..waise hi bure logon ki fitrat hoti hai ..bura karna koi ek ya do logon badal jate hain ..kyuki who badalna chahte hain jinko sirf ek mouke ki talash hoti hai ..per kuch loog sirf yahi zindagi chunte hain ..kyuki jo unki soch hai who unper haavi rehti hai har waqt …or apna chacha thik waisa hi hai …so tune mujhe bata diya na ..tera kaam khatam ..jab mummy ko thik lagega tab kuch karunga ..ya jab lagega ki ab kuch karna hai tab chacha se sahi tarah se baat hogi ..tu bas khush reh ..badon ke kaam me dimaag mat khapa ..apni life enjoy kar ..hum toh bachpan se khud se ladte rahe per tu mere bhai ..apni life ache se enjoy kar ..kyuki tu sabse chota hai ..papa-or mummy ko apne kaam karne de ..or tu padai or masti se ji ..baaki jab kuch chahiye tab bata dena ..tera bhai har kadam tere sath hai ..tu tension na le …or mast reh ..”

Ajay “ thik hai bhaiya ..jab aap kehte hain tab sirf apne kaam per hi dhyaan dunga ..per apne kaha tha ki dhayaan rakhun so socha aapko bata dun ..so bata diya …ab aage aap sochna ki karna kya hai ???”

Manu “ ajay ek baat ka dhayaan rahe na tune mujhe kuch kaha hai ..or na maine kuch suna hai ..kyuki yahan mummy ko jab lagega tab socha jayega ..tab tak unko kuch mat batana kit u mujhe bata chuka hai ..waise tere swimming ka kya haal hai ??”

Ajay “ bhaiya bas thik thak hai ..per aap kab aa rahe ho ?? chuttiyaan over hone wali hain bhulna mat “

Manu “ haan pata hai ..sir ji aap sahi keh rahe hain ..jaldi aaunga wahan ..bas kuch din ka kaam hai ..tu apna dhyaan rakhna or master or guruji ke pass bhi jate rehna …ok ab rakhta hun ajay ..take care..”

Manu call cut kar deta hai ..or sochne lagta hai ..” yeh chacha ne naya drama tyaar kar diya ..yeh pata nahi is kamine ki dikkat kya hai ..na chain se jeeta hai ..na jeene deta hai …koi nahi chacha tub hi papa ke raaz me mann ki kar le ..jis din tera acha time aayega tujhse bhi mulakat hogi ..tab tak maze le …”

Nita mam sochte hue manu ko dekhkar “ kya hua beta sab thik toh hai na ??”

Manu “ haan maa sab thik hai ajay ka call tha yaad dila raha hai ..ki chuttiyaan over hone wali hain ..”

Nita mam “ haan yeh ladka bhi na …dekho mujhe patli bana diya tum dono ne kahan maina achi khasi khati piti insaan thi ..or ab dekho mujhe …”

Manu “ kya kharbi hai aise dikhne me .??? achi toh lag rahi ho ..balki main toh kehta hu nek dum ..solid ek apsara jaisi lag rahi ho aap …kisi model ko bhi aap tips de sakti ho …ab toh …”

Nita mam “ jaane de ache se pata hai mujhe kaise maze le raha hai …dekho toh zara …waise ab achi lag rahi hun ..matlab pehle mere size ko dekhkar tumko sharam aati thi hai na ??”

Manu gale lag jata hai ..or kehta hai ..” aisa sochna bhi nahi maa, aapko doctor ne bataya nahi..per aapka jab test hua tha ..tab aapka weight normal se bahut jada tha ..tab aapko doctor ne bataya nahi per aapke heart ko khatra tha ..or aapka badhta hua cholesterol or aaage aane wale time me shayad diabetes jo ki aapke family back-ground me common hai..ho jaani tay thi …tab aapki report dekhkar …hi hum dono ne tay kiya ki ..aapko change ki jarorat hai ..or aapko hanskar ladkar kiya bhi verna aaj aapko ..sorry maa keh nahi paunga …main ….i m sorry ki humne aapke sath itna jayadti ki …per iska mujhe rati bhar afsos nahi hai ..ki aap patli ho ya moti mere liye aapka thik hona aapke size se jada zarori hai ..kyuki …we both love u maa ..”

Nita mam “ pagale mujhe bata bhi sakte the na ..akele hi itna sab sehte rahe ..or main pagal kabhi kabhi gusse me lad bhi jati thi ..mujhe toh pata bhi nahi hai ..ki tum dono ne kaise mujhe jeena sikha diya ..or haan yeh such hai ki mujhe ghutno me problem hone lagi thi ..per tum dono ne mujhe ek baar phir nayi zindagi de di …or yeh bhi such hai ki bhale hi main gussa karun ya ..naraz ho jaun ..per mere bachon mere liye tum dono bete mere jeene ka ek hi sahara ho ..and I also love u both ..mujhe kabhi chodna mat beta ..”

Manu yeh sunkar or kas leta hai ..” aisa aapne socha bhi kaise maa hum dono aapse behad pyaar karte hain ..choadna toh door ek baar humse picha chudakar toh dekho …hum aise hi maa nahi mante aapko …jab tak hum hain aap humari maa ho …kismat se insaan ko maa milti hai ..meri or ajay ki kismat hai jo hum dono ko ek nahi do maa mili hain ..aise me thoda laalch toh hum dono me hai ..ki hum ek bhi maa ko apne se alag nahi karne wale ..so don’t u worry …aapko humko chaho ya na chaho jhelna toh padega hi ..”

Manu ke bahon me kasne se jahan nita mam ko uska pyaar pata chal raha tha ..wahin manu ke kasne se ab sans lena tight ho gaya tha …per nita mam ne usko roka nahi ..

Manu ne jab samne ke mirror me dekha toh khud hi nita mam ko choad diya ..nita mam ka chehra pura laal ho chuka tha …

Manu “ sorry maa ..aapko dard hua per aapne kaha kyun nahi ??”

Nita mam “ bete kyuki tum dono ko mera dard bina kehe pata chal hi jata hai so ..kehkar faida hi kya ..tum itna mat socho ..itni bhi kamzor nahi hai tumhari yeh maa ki tumhare kasne se dum nikal jaye uska ..so don’t u worry beta ..per acha laga jaan kar ki tumko meri itni fikar hai ..” nita mam ne kaha toh jagan or abhi dono ke liye tha ..per manu samjh nahi paya ..

Khair manu wahan se baat karke nikal gaya …kyuki ab time tha ..jagan se milne ka ….

Or kuch hi der me sab jagan ke ghar ke samne the apne pure saman ke sath …kyuki hotel me rehkar jagan or suman ko samjhna ya sahi raste per lana muskil tha …so sabhi apne apne gusse ko jaise taise kam kiye jagan ke ghar ke samne the ..nita mam door bell bajane se pehle ek baar piche mudkar manu ko dekhti hain …manu uske mann ki pareshani samjh kar unko himmat deta hai ..unke kandhe per dono hath rakh kar …or nita mam ko bell ring karne ka ishara karta hai .. nita mam bhi aage badkar door bell ka botton daba deti hain …

Under sabhi the jagan ..suman or raj ..kyuki riya raat bhar ke dard se ubhari nahi thi so who apne room me gel laga kar leti hui thi …

Bell bajte hi door khulta hai samne raj tha jo …nita mam ko pehli baar dekh raha tha ..per manu ko dekhkar usne aage badkar usse hi hello kiya ..

Raj “ what a pleasant surprise maanav ji aap humare ghar kya baat hai ..main toh soch raha tha ..aapse kab mulakat hogi …per aap toh ghar hi aa gaye ..chalo acha hua ..or kaise aana hua ??”

Raj ke manu ko aise treat karne se jass or nita mam soch me pad gayin ki yeh manu ko kaise jaanta hai ??? per samne se dono ne normal rakha khud ko ..

Manu ne bhi raj ko greet kiya “ hum ko shayad kismat yahan le aayi hain verna mujhe kya pata ki jis kaam se delhi aana hoga usme tumse phir mulakat hogi ..waise bhi lagata hai ..aapka ghar shayad chota hoga ??”

Raj hairani se “ chota nahi hai ghar ..per aapko aisa kyun laga ??”

Manu “ kyuki ghar ke bahar se hi aap humko nibatane wale hain na isliye ??”

Raj “ ooh sorry yaar main toh khushi me bhul hi gaya ..aaoo na under ..”

Raj ke piche se suman “ kya baat hai raj kissel aga hua hai ??? kon hai door per ???”jis per raj tezi se under gaya ..

Manu ne jass or nita mam ko dekha or kaha ..kal hi isse mulakat hui hai ..so jada mat sochna jo puchna ho under akele me ya mobile per puch lena …okay ??” dono samjh chuki thi ki manu kisi plan ke tehat kaam per lag chuka hai …

Jahan jass fakra se soch rahi thi ki unske dimaag me koi idea nahi aaya per manu inse pehle hi mil chuka hai meanse manu already plan per amal kar raha hai ..

Or nita mam mann me “ beta raj tumhare maa baap ko tumhari bua ko marne ki sazish nahi karni thi ..ab main akeli nahi hun ..mera beta tumhare pure parivaar ko ab sahi se samjha dega …ki nita ko akela samjhna kitni badi bhul thi ..are ek baar muh kholkar kehte property tumhare muh per maar deti ..per tumne mere pyaar or bharose ko thes pahunchai hai ..jiska ab Insaaf hoga ..or yeh akeli aurat ab akeli nahi hai …uske piche or aage dunia ki sabse badi takat uske do sapoot hain ..bhale hi dono ne is nita ki khookh se janam nahi liya ..per uske liye yeh bete tumhare parivaar toh kya dunia me kisi ke samne bhi sabse badi dhal hain …tu dekh teri bua ab har kadam apne bete ke sath hai ..kyuki dunia me maa beton ko janam deti hai ..per mere beton ne har baar meri jaan bacha kar mujhe naya janam diya hai ..so ab tumhare ko mera beta hi handle karega ..chahe who sahi kare ya galat yeh nita uske sath hai …bhaiya aaj se tumhare parivaar ka acha time shuru ho gaya hai …kyuki ek widwa aurat ke vishvaas ko usi ke bhai ne chala hai ..ab toh jung hogi …ithaas ghwah hai ..Mahabharat me jab ek widwa kunti or uske beton ke sath uske apne jeth ne galat kiya toh uske beton ne Mahabharat kar di thi ..mere bete bhi itihaas bana denge tumhare ghamand or Kamini soch ka ..”

Manu nita mam ko gheri soch me dekhta hai toh unke dono kandhon ko pakad leta hai or dheere se kaan me kehta hai “ maa jada mat socho aapka beta aapki dhal or aapka hathiyaar dono hai …aap ke baare me sochne bhar se inke sapne bhi kale ho jayenge ..per sirf itna baat manna ki aapko inke baare me kuch pata nahi hai ..baaki main dekh lunga ..or bhulna mat ki mama ji ko cancer nahi hai ..aapko iske baare me pata nahi hai ..samjh rahi ho na ??”

Nita mam me sar hila diya ..”haan beta jab tak tum ho ..yeh aurat akeli nahi hai ..bas jo karna soch samjh kar karna ..baaki tum jo bhi karoge main sath hun usme ..gussa toh bahut aata hai apne bhai ke jhunth per ..lekin jaise taise khud ko sambhal lungi ..baaki tum or jass hai na sath me ..so dekh lungi ..”piche se jass ne bhi nita mam ko support karne ke liye hath se unko pakad kar bharosa dilaya ki who bhi unke sath hai …

Raj ke jaane ke baad suman bahar aayi kyuki raj ne bata diya tha ..ki kal manu se mile the or raat ko usne unki help kit hi ..per kya help kit hi yeh nahi bataya …so suman bahar aayi dekhne ke liye manu ko…

Samne itne loog dekhkar suman soch me pad chuki thi ..kyuki nita mam who pehle wali moti or bahri bharkam nahi thi ..unka sara haal or huliya badala hua tha ..ek silk ki saadi me uska figure dekhkar koi bhi unko model se kam nahi samjhega …or us per jass ne halka sa touchup kiya tha aane se pehle khud ka or nita mam ka or sath me sabhi ne sunglasses laga rakhe the ..tino ko dekhne se tino kisi tourist se kam nahi lag rahe the …suman jahan manu ko dhayan se dekhne bussy thi ..kyuki manu kisi handsome hunk jaise ya kisi top actor jaisi personality ka mailk tha ..usper uska toned athletic build body jisko dekhkar ek baar toh suman bhi gheri saans le gayi ..woh manu ko dhyaan se dekhne me kho si gayi …

Suman ke manu ko ghurne se nita mam ko suman or jagan ki makkari yaad aa gayi ..gusse se dil jal utha ..per samne se jada expression na late hue nita mam ne suman ko toka ..

Nita mam “ Bhabhi kya baat hai ?? thoda apni nanand ko bhi dekh lo ya mere bete ko hi dekhti rahogi …”

Suman ne yeh sunkar nita mam ko dekha ..per kahan who golo molu nita …or kahan yeh fit & fine model type nita .usne soch ki koi hogi jo Bhabhi keh rahi hai ..

Nita mam “ Bhabhi main nita ..lagta hai pehchana nahi aapne …mujhe ??”

Suman “ kya Mazak hai tum nita kaise ho sakti ho ..humari nita toh ..”

Nita mam “ haan aate ki bori ..hua karti thi ..per ab fit & active hun ..acha nahi laga mere make-over aapko ya pehle jaise lagne ke liye gubbare bandh kar aaun ??”

Suman ne nita mam ko dhayan se dekha or pehchana “are nita didi tum …such me tum toh kisi heroine si lag rahi ho ..”

Nita mam “ haan main toh pehle hi achi thi ..ab dekho kaise meri sagi Bhabhi hi mujhe pehchan nahi pa rahi hain ?? hay re julm karne wale …”

Suman “ bas bas didi kaan pakadti hun jo tumko pehchan nahi payi ..acha ander chalo tumhare bhaiya under hi hain ..”

Yeh kehte hue sab under chale gaye ..under jagan nita ko jhat se pechaan leta hai ..per nita ka achanak se aana or jagan ka araam se tv dekhna …yeh sochte hi uske hath se kanch ka glass chut kar farsh per tut jata hai …or farsh per kanch hi kanch fell jata hai …

Jagan “ are nita tum toh bilkul badal gayin ..kya baat hai bachpan me jab tumhari shaadi nahi hui thi thik waisi hi lag rahi ho ??”

Nita “ haan bhaiya badal toh bahut kuch gaya hai ..or ab aapko araam hai aapki bimari me ..maine toh socha tha kia ap bed per hi honge per upperwale ka sukra hai kia ap chal fir rahe hain ..”

Jagan yeh sunkar sakpaka gaya …uske muh se awaz nahi nikali yeh sunkar ..suman ne jab dekha toh morcha sambhal liya ..

Suman “ who didi pehle se aapke bhaiya ko thoda aaram hai ..tabhi ghum fir rahe hain ..”

Nita mam ne nehle per dehla jad diya “ bahut kirpa hai us upperwale ki ..per ek baat samjh nahi aayi ..”

Suman “ who kya didi ..”

Nita mam “ bhaiya ne kaha tha ki unko cancer hai ..per bhaiya ne Kimmo therapy nahi li abhi tak ..kyuki agar li hoti toh bhaiya ke baal bache nahi hote uski wajah se ..lagta hai bhaiya ko apni jaan ki parvaah nahi hai ..”

Nita mam ke is baat per jagan or suman dono ko jawab nahi sujh raha tha ..kyuki jawab hota toh dete na ..

Per nita mam ne clean bold karte hue kaha “ koi baat nahi ab bhaiya ki behan aa chuki hai ..main ab khud apne bhaiya ki Kimmo therapy karwaungi ..kyuki baal se jada jaan jarori hai ..beta manu kal hi is sheher ke ache se ache hospital me bhaiya ke liye appointment fix karlo …ab bhaiya ka dhayan main rakhungi ..”

Jagan or suman ke hath paav ful chuke the kyuki agar aisa hota toh unki saari baat khul jaati hospital me test hote hi pata chal jata ki cancer ka naam jagan jhunth muth me le raha hai..

Suman himmat karke “ didi ab aap aa gayi ho na ..apne bhaiya ko baad me dekhna pehle bachon se toh mil lo uske baad apne bhaiya ko thik kar lena ..”

Suman ne dono bachon ko awaz lagayi ..per riya nahi aayi ..bas raj aa gaya …samne

Suman “ beta raj inse milo yeh tumhari nita bua hain ..pehchana nahi tumne inko ..”

Raj hairani se “ohh! My god suchi me per main toh aapki old pick dekhi thi jisme aap kuch or hi lag rahi thi..per aap toh samne se gazab ka makeover kar chuki hain bua ..” raj ne aage badhte hue nita mam ke pair chute hue kaha ..

Nita mam bhi usko pyaar se aashirwad dete hue “ haan beta yeh tumhari bua ka who roop badlne wala mera beta jimmedaar hai ..or yeh hai mera beta Manu jisse tum mil chuke ho ..”

Raj “ ohhh wow maanav tumne bataya kyun nahi ki tum bua ke bete mera matalb hai mere bhai ho ??”

Nita mam “ beta yeh aisa hi hai ..ab isne mathe per mera naam toh lagan ahi rakha na ..ki yeh mera beta hai ..jaise tumne apni maa ka naam nahi likh rakha hai ..”

Nita mam na chahte hue bhi gusse se bhari hui thi …so jass ne aage badkar nita mam ko halke se pakad liya ..nita mam thodi normal hui ..

Jahan raj ke sath suman or jagan hairan the ki nita kya keh rahi hai ..or nita ka itna bada beta kahan se aaya ..raj cool tha ..per suman or jagan soch me dube hue the …

Suman ne himmat ki “ didi aap thak gayi hongi …araam kijiye ..raj didi or insabko room me le jao ..”

Raj “ mummy per nita bua or manu se toh mil liya per yeh kon hain ..”

Nita mam “ beta yeh hai Jassica Gurung urf jass yeh manu ki dost hain or uske business me uski help karti hai ..or mere liye beti saman hai …”

Raj “ nice to meet u miss jass..”

Jass “ sorry mr raj but please call me jassica ..kyuki jass naam mere jaanne wale hi kaha karte hai ..or abhi aapse mile bas kuch minute hi hue hain ..so please if u don’t mind call me jassica …”

Raj “ ok done jab aap mujhe jaan lene tab bata dena ..anyway aao chalte hain ..”

Raj unko lekar ghar ke saare room dikhane or samjhane laga ki konsa room kiska hai ..upper wale floor per kuch room the jo khali the …

Aapko batana bhul gaya yeh jagan ka ghar two floor ka tha jisme sabse upper open chat thi ..uske niche wale floor me 4 room the ..or sabse niche wale floor per 3 room including drawing room or kitchen tha ..or basement me parking thi ..delhi me itna bada ghar bhi badi baat hai or aise ache area me hona matlab rich family se belong karna …

Khair raj ne apne or riya ke samne ke room me unko thera diya jisme ..raj ke samne wale room me nita mam or jass dono room share karne wale the ..or manu ko spreate room mil gaya tha ..us per kismat ki samne thik samne riya ka room tha ..jisme riya abhi manu ke khayalon me khoyi hui thi ..raj us sabke saman ko rakhwa kar ..jarorat padne per awaz marne ko kehkar chala gaya ..jass or nita mam room me the ..

Jahan jass nita mam ko shant rehne ko keh rahi thi …

Jass” anty thoda kaboo rakho khud ko aapke bolne se saaf pata chal raha tha ..ki aap kitni naraz hain ..jab main samjh gayi toh aapke sage bhai samjhe nahi honge kya ..”

Nita mam “ sorry beta gussa aa gaya tha ..per bhaiya ko pata hai main muhfatt hun ..so don’t u worry unko chup rehne se jada shaq hoga ..baaki manu hai na or tum bhi ho mujhe kaabo karne ke liye ..so chill beta ..waise raj ko tumne jass kehne se kyun roka …”

Jass “ aapko kya lagta hai gussa aapko hi aata hai …mujhe bhi aata hai ..per mere tarika thoda alag hai ..gussa karne ka “

Nita mam “ haan manu ki sherni jo their tu …hahahhahaha! “

Jass manu ki sherni sunkar sharam se laal ho gayi …

Nita mam jass ko chedte hue “ aay hay dekho toh zara sherni bhi sharam se laal ho jati hain ..waise hai tu ladki kadak …mere manu ki kismat khul jaani hai agar tu uske sath hogi toh main bhi soch se free rahungi ..usko bol bhi de ..ki tu usko chahti hai ..”

Jass “ anty aap bhi na pal me baat badal deti ho ..”

Nita mam or jass me ab chedkhani aam thi dono manu ko lekar ache se khincha taani karti rehti thi …



Udhar manu aate hi kaam per lag chuka tha raj ke room dikate time hi usne jagan ke bedroom me ek chota sa spy receiver throw kar diya tha …jo ek chote se kide se bhi chota tha ..jo chipka siddha jagan ke bed ke pass wale flower wass me jo artificial tha means usko chedne ka sawal hi nahi hota ..or aate time jagan ke drawing room me bhi manu ek aisa hi receiver fit kar chuka tha ..jo siddha chipka tha sofe ke side wale joint me sofe ka who point jisme kabhi kabhi koi key ya sikka gir jaata hai toh dundhna muskil hota hai ..wahin per ..

Ab manu room band karke sun raha tha ..ki drawing room me kya ho raha hai ..kyuki jagan or suman wahin the ..

Jagan “ suman yeh kya hua nita ka toh maine socha hua tha ..ki who akeli aayegi or call karke hi aati hai har baar ..toh isbaar kaise bina call kare aa gayi ..or uska beta kahan se paida ho gaya jiska mujhe pata nahi hai ..”

Suman “ aap bhi na jada soch rahe hain hoga koi muhbola …aap apne plan per dhyaan do kaise bhi nita ko yahan rokna hai ..or aage saari property jaise sochi thi waise hi leni hai …”

Jagan “ per suman agar nita akeli hoti toh jada sahi hota …per who ladka or uski dost normal se nahi lag rahe ..or nita agar mujhe hospital le gayi tab kya hoga ..”

Suman “ hoga kya wahan aap admit honge or apni sugar ke naam per ..per nita ke samane aap honge cancer ke naam per report hum dekh lenge ..aap itna socho mat main hun na ..”

Jagan “ per who ladka or ladki ke hote hue nita ko slow posion karna asaan hoga kya ??”

Suman “ aap bhi na khana toh maine banana hai ..usme main kiske aage kya rakhungi yeh mere upper hai ..aap bas befikra raho ..”

Jagan “ such me suman tum na hoti toh shayad main akela kya hi kar pata ..love u suman “

Suman “ aap bhi na ..aagar jada pyaar aa raha hai toh raat ko dil khush kar dena apni jaan ka …dekho main kaise tadap rahi hun aapke liye ..”

Jagan ..” tu chinta mat kar aaj raat sex tablet lekar raat bhar tujhe sone nahi dunga ..tu bas maze leti rehna ..or raat ko apne pati ki power dekhna bas ..”

Suman “ haan dekhungi ..waise apni sugar ka bhi dhyaan rakhna aap ..isi ke chale main pyaasi reh jaati hun per aap aaj mujh per reham mat karna …toad kar rakh dena apni suman ko …jaise shaadi ke time toad diya tha bed ko waise hi aaj mujhe sair karni hai ..”

Jagan “ haan done aaj bistar toad dunga ..tu bas sath dena ..”



Manu sab sun chuka tha ..usne yeh sunkar jass ko massage kiya or apne room aane ko kaha ..jass massage dekhte hi manu ke room me aa chuki thi..

Jass “ haan kya hua ??”

Manu ne usko bataya ki jagan or suman ka slow poison ka plan aaj se hi amal me aa sakta hai …jisko sunkar jass bhi tesh me aa chuki thi …

Jass “kamine kahin ke apni hi behan ki jaan lene per tule hain…ab karna kya hai ??”

Manu “ ab sab tumhare hath me hai …”

Jass “ matlab “

Manu “ ab tumhari kitchen me entry ka time hai …ab tum maa or humare liye khana dekhogi ..or agar suman ne pucha toh kehna ki diet ko lekar doctor ka kehna saaf hai jisko tum dekhti ho …samjh gayi na …”

Jass “ haan ache se samjh gayi ..”

Manu “ kya samjhi ..”

Jass “ yahi ki ab ek salary me mujhe ghar ki bai wale kaam bhi karne honge ..mujhe salary me increment chahiye ..”

Manu “ tumko Mazak lag raha hai ..per koi baat nahi tumhari salary bhi tumhare hath me hi hai ..jitna chaho khud badha lena main sign kar dunga ..or kuch ..”

Jass “ are buddhu kahin ke ….tum har baat itni asani se kyun maan jate ho ..??”

Manu “ kyuki paisa tumhare or maa se badkar nahi hai ..paisa agar gaya toh main kama sakta hun ..per maa or ek jaan se pyaari dost ko daav per laga kar main ameer nahi banana chahta so ..ab marzi tumhari hai ..kyuki bai kisi ko rakh nahi sakte kyuki pata nahi kab who jagan ke paise kea age jhuk jaye ..so tumse kehna hi iski wajah hai ..kyuki maa agar kitchen me gayi toh suman …unko kisi na kisi bahane se bahar kar degi ..so ab tum dekhlo ..”

Jass “ toh bai hazir hai saab ..kahiye kya karna hai ..tumhare or anty ke liye bai bhi banan Manzoor hai ..”

Manu “ meri pyaari sherni agar mere sath hai toh is dunia me jagan toh kya kisi se bhi bheed sakta hun ..love u jass thank u so much ..” manu ne emotion me love u keh diya jass ko per jass ko jaise aaj dunia mil chuki thi …

Uske chehre kis Khushi dekhne wali thi …usko bhi pata tha ki manu ne usko thanks or dosti ke lehze me love u kaha hai ..per is khambhakt dil ko love u me bhi sirf pyaar bhare sapne nazar aate hai ..jass bhi Khushi se phuli nahi sama rahi thi …manu ne thanks ke lehze me ek or kaam kar diya ..

Or who tha jass ko gale lagana ..jass jo love u …sunkar hi jameen per nahi aayi thi ..use is time dunia me or kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha ..manu ke seene me simat kar usko dono bahaoon me bhar kar manu ki dhadkano me har pal khud ka naam dund rahi thi jass …uske liye dunia ki sabse safe jagah thi manu ki bahain ..jisme simat kar jass khud ko safe mehsoos kiya karti thi …

Manu ne kuch der usko gale laga kar rakha or use ab apne se alag kiya ..jass khush thi ..or manu ne usko sab clearly sunwa diya ..kyuki recording sunkar hi shayad jass ko sahi se samjhaya ja sakta tha …or waise hua bhi jab usne suna ki nita mam ko kaise who slow poison karne wale hain so who samjh gayi ki manu kyun usko kitchen me bhej raha tha ..manu ne sirf thodi hi recording sunai thi jass ko chudai wali baat aane se pehle rok di thi …per yeh sab sunkar jass bhi gusse me aa chuki thi …per manu ne usko bina gusse ke kaam karne ko kaha ..jass bhi jaise taise gusse per control karne ko kehkar kaam per lagne ko kehkar chali gayi …

Jass jab wapas aayi toh nita mam ne usse pucha ki baat kya hai …toh jass ne sirf itna kaha ki manu chahta hai aapki diet ka dhyaan main rakhun …jise sunkar nita mam ne jada kuch nahi kaha ..kyuki hotel room me who sun chuki thi ki kaise unka bhai unko marna chahta hai ..or manu ka jass ko diet ke liye kehna means yeh sab such hai …unko or jada nafrat ho chuki thi jagan or suman se ..per kyuki manu ne mana kiya tha ..so gusse ko jada zahir nahi kiya or chupchap so gayi ..jass bhi apne kaam me lag gayi ..or usne aaj ka restaurant ka hisab guru bhai se liya or dealer se baat ki or who bhi so gayi …

Idhar manu ne jab dekha ki aas pass loog din me so chuke hain tab usne sidhe rukh kiya samne ke room ka jism riya thi …or kyuki riya ka room lock nahi tha ..so usne dheere se room ka door open kiya or ghus gaya …or room me ghuste hi usne room ka door lock kar liya …riya halki neend me thi kyuki subha se bas leti hi hui thi..so manu chupchap uske bed ke pass gaya ..or pyaar se riya ke sar per hath fera …toh riya ne socha ki manu sapne me uske pass aaya hai ..

So riya ne uske hath ko chumkar kaha “ jaanu aap aa gaye dekho na mujhse na uthte ban raha hai na chalte ..main kaise khud ko sabhalu …dard se jada aapki yaad ne jeena dushvaar kar diya hai ..kaash aap yahan hote toh jee bhar kar aapko chumti …I ..iiii ..miss u my love ..”

Manu uske kaan ke pass “ yahi hun jitna chaho chum lo …or ab bhi dard hai kya ..??”

Riya neend se jagte hue ..aankhen malti hai …uska dil chillane ka hai …per manu aage badhkar uske hothon ko chum leta hai ..verna who chillane hi wali thi ..

Or kiss me riya ne apne saare sikve ek sath manu ko keh diye …us kiss me riya ka manu ke liye pyaar or uske liye chahat saaf saaf jhalak rahi thi…usne ek second bhi manu ko apne se alag nahi kiya ..jiska naitja yeh hua ki kiss ke chalte riya ki saanse ukhadne lagi …

Manu ne jab dekha riya ko saans lene me dikkat ho rahi hai ..tab usi ne kiss toada ..

Manu “ tum pagal ho kya ??thoda toh apni fikar karo …sans toh lo kamse kam ..”

Riya “ aapko pata bhi hai yeh sansain bhi maine aapke naam likh di hain …jin per ab aapka haq hai ..”

Manu shant lehze me “ riya itna pagal bhi mat bano main or tum dono hi jante hain ki pata nahi aage is rishte ka kya ho??phir itni diwangi thik nahi hai ..ho sakta hai baad me nafrat karo tum mujhse …”

Riya “ ho hi nahi sakta yeh toh Is janam me …khud aap bhi mujhse nafrat karne ko kahoge tab bhi nahi …khair abhi aap mere ghar me kaise aaye ??”

Manu “ tumse milne ka dil kiya …toh raha nahi gaya ..so chala aaya ..”

Riya “ suchi me ..yeh toh bahut acha kiya aapne ..per ghar me sab hain toh aap aaye kaise ??”

Manu “ tumhari nita bua hain na ,,,unka beta hun main ??”

Riya “ yeh toh acha hua ..ab aapse jab chaun mil sakti hun ..aahhh! “ riya ne uthne ki koshish ki toh dard hua jisse uski aahh! Nikal gayi ..

Manu “ thoda toh dhayan rakho apna ..chalo dekha na kaise dard ho raha hai ..thoda araam se bhi toh uth sakti thi na …” manu ne riya halke se dantte hue kaha ..jiss per bhi riya ko manu ki apne liye care dekhkar pyaar hi aaya ..

Manu uske chut or gand ko ek baar phir check karta hai …suzan thi .usme toh manu riya se medicine puchkar uski chut or gand me halke halke hath se gel laga deta hai ..jisse riya ko araam milta hai ..manu bhi bade dhayan se uske suzan ko dekhkar soch raha tha ..so bina kuch kahe riya ke bathroom me jata hai ..jahan geezer on karke riya ke towel ko lekar garam pani ko nahane ke dibbe me le aata hai ..or bahar aakar us pani me towel duba kar riya ki chut or gand ki sikai karne lagata hai ..jisse riya ki siski nikal jati hai ..jahan riya baar baar manu ke hath lagne se garam hone lagi thi …per manu apne kaam me laga hua tha …kyuki suzan se chut ka haal burger bun jaisa ho chuka tha ..or gang ka ched to suzan se bahut chota dikh raha tha ..per garam pani or manu ke hathon or apne hi ghar me nange hona ..riya ke liye naya excitement tha jisme ek naya nasha ya kick thi ..jawan riya ke dil me tarah tarah ke khayal aa rahe the ..

Manu sikai karte hue “ toh riya ab bhi mujhse nafrat nahi karogi ki main tumhari bua ka ladka hun matlab tumhara bhai laga rishte me ..”

Riya gand ki sikai karwate hue ghum kar samne ho jaati hai ..or manu chupchap uski chut ki sikai karne lagata hai ..riya uski aankhon me aankehn daal kar dekhti hai ..or kehti hai ..

Riya “ meri zindagi me ab mard ka sirf ek hi naam hai ..jo sirf hai manu ..koi bhi faisla ab mujhe aapse pyaar karne se rok nahi sakta ..or kis rishte ki baat kar rahen hain …aap ..main ache se jaanti hun bua ko koi bacha nahi hua tha aaj tak ..means aap unke muh bole bete honge ..per usme Rishta bhi aapka or mera door ka hua ..so sochna kaisa …jab meri ek friend nazma ne mujhe bataya ki uske yahan cousin marriage aam hai ..or south me bhi loog mama or bua ki beti ya beton me marriage kar lete hain toh yahan toh aap sage bete bhi nahi hain bua ke ..so usme sochna kaisa hua ..or waise bhi is dunia me saare ladkon ko bhai bana sakti hun per aapko nahi ..so nafrat jo aapne pehle kaha ..woh hona toh possible hi nahi hai ..kyuki riya aapse sirf pyaar or pyaar hi kar sakti hai ..nafrat nahi …abhi dard main hun ..or dard me insaan dard dene wale ko kosa karta hai ..per apko dard me bhi dekhne ki tamanna thi ..sochiyye jab dard me aapke liye pal bhar me ulta sochne ka khayal nahi aaya tab kya main aapse nafrat kar sakti hun nahi ..is janam me toh nahi ..haan agar mere sar per koi chot lage or main yaad dast bhul jaun toh bhi shayad aapko dekhkar aapse phir se pyaar kar bethungi ..nafrat toh door ki baat hai ..aap jada sochiye mat jaisa chal raha hai chalao ise ..”

Manu riya ki soch sunkar hairan tha ..per usko bhi riya ko dard me dekhkar acha nahi lag raha tha ..

Manu “ riya I m sorry ki tum itne dard me ho ..per tab kya hoga jab samne se tumko mujhe bhai kehne ke liye kaha jayega ??”

Riya “ ooofoo! Aap bhi na kitna sochte hain ..dekhiye pehli baat aapki or meri age same si hai toh aise me aap mera naam lena ,,,main aapko aap hi kahungi ..bhai kehne ki zarorat hi kya hai ..or rahi ghar walon ki baat ..so unki soch unke sath humari soch humare sath ..jada sochungi toh chain se ji bhi nahi paungi ..aap bhi jada mat sochiye..”

Manu “toh kya karna chahiye mujhe ??”

Riya “ sirf pyaar bas pyaar kijiye mujh se or kuch nahi ..”

Manu “ per tum abhi recover kahan hui ho ??”

Riya “ aapke hath lagne se thik ho gayi hun kuch kjiye na mujhse raha nahi ja raha hai ..”

Manu “ soch lo dard hoga or samne ke room me maa hain or sath ke room me shayad tumhara bhai bhi hoga suzan me cheekh bhi nikal sakti hai …”

Riya ne pass me pade towel ko muh me thuste hue kaha “ ab jo hoga aap mujhe aise tadapte hue choad kar mat jaiye na .please “

Manu “ toh towel ko ache se thus lo or mujhe kaam karne do ..”

Riya ne towel se muh bandh liya ..manu ne niche se nangi riya ke bache hue kapde bhi nikal diye ..or khud bhi nanga hua ..or riya ke dressing table se hair-oil lekar usko apne lode par laga liya ..or riya ki chut per nishana laga kar siddha ek baar me hi uske ander utaar diya ..

Riya “ ummmmm! Ahhhhh!! “ uske muh se cheekh nikali per towel se muh me hi dab kar reh gayi ..or manu usko danadan chodta raha ..riya uske har jhatke per hil jaati thi …

Per manu thera manu us ne tezi se chodna jaari rakha ..or sath me riya ki chuchiyaon ko ek baar phir se kas kaskar bhicha …riya maze me uffan rahi thi …chut or chuchi ka mazza uske sar chadkar bolraha tha …

Manu ne or tezi se uski chudai karni shuru kar di ..riya ka muh agar band nahi hota towel se toh uski siski or cheekhain sunkar pure ghar ko pata chal jata ki ander kya chudai ho rahi hai ..riya 15 minute laga taar hulabi lode ko jhelne ke baad paani baha chuki thi ..bechari jhel nahi paayi dard or lode ke aage haar man leti hai …pani nikalte hi riya ghumkar ghodi ban chuki thi ..

Kyuki use pata tha manu ka pani nahi nikala hoga ..or uska agala shikaar uski gand hi hogi ..so bina kahe who ghodi ban gayi …manu bhi pass se hair oil laga kar ek baar phir uski gand me apna loda pel deta hai riya siski lekar lode ko ander le leti hai ..

Manu pura loda ek baar me hi utaar deta hai ..or tabadtoad chudai karna shuru kar deta hai ..riya ghodi bani lode ko gand me aate jaate mehsoos kar rahi thi ..manu ne ek julm or kiya ..riya ke lambe balloon ko pakad kar usne ek lagam tham li …ab riya such me kisi ghodi jaise lag rahi thi …

Manu balloon ko lekar uski lagam thame usko lagatar choad raha tha …sath me niche se usne apne hath ko le jakar chut ke daane (clitoris ) ko sehlana shuru kar diya or riya ki masti or badh gayi ..yeh toh sukhra hai ki riya ka bed lohe ka tha verna …chirr mirr ki awaz se pata chal jata riya ki chudai ka ..per lohe ke bed per awaz aa rahi thi ..jo sirf riya ki siskiyon ki thi …

Riya lagatar gand chudai or chut ke sehlane se ek baar phir hathiyaar daldeti hai ..uska paani nikal chuka tha …ab manu riya ko rok deta hai ..

Manu “ riya ab bahut hua …tumhari baat maan li maine per aab karunga toh dard or hoga ..toh ab rehne do ..”

Riya towel hata deti hai or lode ko pakad kar kehti hai “ jab tak yeh nahi thakega main karti rahungi chahe kuch bhi ho ..”

Manu “ soch lo ..itna zid karna thik nahi hai ..”

Riya “ aap meri baat maniye na mujhe abhi chudai ki jarorat hai mujhe ache se chodiye na please ..”

Manu “ thik hai waise tum ziddi bahut ho ..”

Riya “ haan bachpan se hun ..per abhi main towel laga rahi hun aap bas ache se chodiye mujhe ..”riya yeh kehkar towel laga leti hai ..

Manu siddha chut per phir se attack kar deta hai ..or 20 minute ki chudai ke baad apna paani chut me baha deta hai …” riya bhi uske sath paani baha deti hai ..dono pasine pasine ho chuke the …dono ne itni mehnat jo ki thi ..

Manu bade pyaar se nanga hi riya ko bahon me sama leta hai or uske mathe per kiss karta hai …riya bhi manu ki bahon me simat jati hai ..

Kuch der baad manu riya se alag hota hai or use uthakar bathroom me le jata hai jahan ache se garam paani se dono nahate hain or manu usko bed per le jakar uski chut or gand me ek baar phir se gel laga deta hai …riya ko kapde pehna ne ke baad khud bathroom me jakar ache se hath doh kar atta hai or apne kapde pehan kar ..

Riya ke mathe ko chumkar usko sone ko kehta hai or bahar dekhkar safely apne room me aa jata hai ..

Shaam ko sab normally uthte hain …toh shaam ki chai ke time jass niche jati hai ..or tino ke liye chai banati hai .uske chai banana kar ready karte time …suman wahan aa jati or hairani se dekhti hai use ..

Suman “ beta mujhe keh deti chai main bana deti ..tum mehmaan ho kaam karne ki jarorat nahi hai tumko ..”

Jass “ koi baat nahi anty nita anty ki diet ke liye main khud kaam karti hun so mujhe habit hai ..aap tension na lo main dekh lungi ..abhi toh chai hi banayi hai …raat ko dinner bhi mujhe hi banana hoga so aapko tension lene ki jarorat nahi hai ..and sorry aapke kitchen ko bina aapki permission ke use kiya ..”

Suman ke kaano se dhuan nikal chuka tha ..kyuki slow-poison karna nita ko yahi uska plan tha ..per jass ke kitchen me rehne se plan fail hota mehsoos ho raha tha usko ..so aakhiri koshish ki usne ..

Suman “ beta koi baat nahi ..per humare yahan mehmano se kaam nahi karwaya karte yeh thik nahi lagta ..or waise bhi mujhe aadat hai ..tum bina wajah pareshan hongi …”

Jass “ nahi anty isme pareshaani ki koi baat nahi hai ..waise bhi mujhe yeh kaam karna hi hai ..aap ko agar dikkat hai toh main anty se keh deti hun ..tab jada se jada hum hotel me rehnge kyuki diet me laparwahi nahi kar sakte na unke liye …so koi baat nahi..aap tension mat lo main anty se baat karti hun ..”

Suman ko laga such me agar nita wahan se chali gayi toh kya hoga means unke plan ka ..ek toh itne din baad bahane se nita unke ghar aayi thi ..or agar hotel me gayi toh raj or riya se uska bond kaise banega ..or usko slow-poison karna bhi muskil hoga ..so aise me na chahte hue bhi suman ne jass ko permission dena socha ..

Suman “ koi baat nahi beta nita didi se kehne ki jarorat nahi hai tum apna kaam kar lo mujhe kitchen share karne me koi problem nahi hai …per jab time mile thodi meri help bhi kar dena ..verna meri beti toh kitchen me kadam tak nahi rakhti ..”

Jass “ haan jaroor anty acha chai thandi ho jayegi ..main chalti hun ..”

Jass wahan se nikal gayi piche choad gayi soch me gum suman ko ki jass ke kitchen me aane se ab kya uska plan pura hoga ya nahi ..or hoga toh kaise ..per shaam ko suman ki zindagi me bhi ek tufaan aana baaki tha …jiska pata toh ab waqt or kismat ko hi hoga ….
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Beautiful update bhai ji
 

Xabhi

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Sahi kha bhaiya ji aapne
Tarif karu kya uski jisne tumhe banaya bhai ji dil prafullit ho uthata hai es apratim rachana ke updates padhkar.

1.Suraj ji ke najariye se dekhe to ek baap apni aulad ke liye chinta saaf najar aa jyegi.
2.Heena ki chahat ke taruf me meri aur se chand lafz:-
Dil ko hai yakin ko ek din mil hi jaoge
Nhi kar sakti khud ko juda aapse ab ye deewani,
aap kitna bhi dur jao humko kareeb hi paoge.

3.nita ke bhai ke achchhe din shuru ho gye hai,wahi usi ke ghar me uski ladki ko apne pahlu me lekar kya scene create kiya hai bhai Adbhut jabardast.

ab aata hu kahani par ki ye aisi hai vaisi hai ye kahne wale bhai ji agar nhi honge to aap apna 101% kaise doge.
Nhi chahiye koi safai
bas hume to teri likhai hi pyari hai
tune agar update na dene ki sochi bhi
to anasan ki humari taiyari hai.
Love you dear brother
Waiting for the next update.
Ham sb Aapko kahi Jane bhi nhi denge update is just awesome Bhai...
 

Dr. Zeus

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Aapka pyar bhai
Superb update Dr. Zeus, bhai I have a small request to you that please cut short the conversation between characters.
Awesome update bro
Awesome update 👍
Keep posting
Awesome updates
Tarif karu kya uski jisne tumhe banaya bhai ji dil prafullit ho uthata hai es apratim rachana ke updates padhkar.

1.Suraj ji ke najariye se dekhe to ek baap apni aulad ke liye chinta saaf najar aa jyegi.
2.Heena ki chahat ke taruf me meri aur se chand lafz:-
Dil ko hai yakin ko ek din mil hi jaoge
Nhi kar sakti khud ko juda aapse ab ye deewani,
aap kitna bhi dur jao humko kareeb hi paoge.

3.nita ke bhai ke achchhe din shuru ho gye hai,wahi usi ke ghar me uski ladki ko apne pahlu me lekar kya scene create kiya hai bhai Adbhut jabardast.

ab aata hu kahani par ki ye aisi hai vaisi hai ye kahne wale bhai ji agar nhi honge to aap apna 101% kaise doge.
Nhi chahiye koi safai
bas hume to teri likhai hi pyari hai
tune agar update na dene ki sochi bhi
to anasan ki humari taiyari hai.
Love you dear brother
Waiting for the next update.
Nice update bhai
Fantastic update bhai ji
Ese hi likhte raho
Super ❤ update
Lajawab Bemisal Behtareen update. Waiting for next update
Nice update
Sandarrrr update bhai
Nice going bro
bhai ek sawal yaar 5 saal hone ko aaye hain, nisha aur manu ko alag hue.

aur usne toh bas apne nanaji ke theek hone tak rukne ki baat kee thee, chalo uske baad bhi usne apne education ke liye rukna theek samjha.
toh itne paanch saal mein ek baar bhi india nahin aayee,aisa kaise ho shakta hain bhai study hi kar rahi thee koi jail mein nahin thee, toh break toh milta hi hoga, aise bina india aaye itne saalo tak.
kya sirf tashveerio mein manu ko dekhkar usse sukoon mil jata hain, bhai agar koi larki kisi ko apna shabkuchh maan le toh wo usse milne ke liye toh itne saalo tak toh wait nahin kar shakti hain.

ek aur sawal manu chintu kee chal se wakeef tha kee wo usse nisha se alag karna chahta hain, toh usne ek baar bhi yeh nahin socha kee yeh bhi koi chal ho shakti hain ek baar usse mauka de.
matlab hum akhir kyun ka jawab janne ke liye bechain jaroor rahte hain us bewafa se kee usne bewafai kyun kee.
chalo shuruat mein toh maan liya wo gusse mein tha, lekin ab toh itne saalo baad wo kitna mature ho chuka hain aur wo usse ab nafrat bhi beintah karne laga hain toh ek baar bhi kosis na kee usne yeh sawal ka jawab dhundhne kee.

bhai thora iske baare mein bhi explain kar de please. agar time ho toh.

matlab agar pyar hain toh itne saalo tak bina izhar ke koi door kaise rah shakta hain, yeh baat thori ajeeb lagee, nisha kee, explain please.

aur bhai manu abhi kaun si class mein hain yeh bhi bata de kyunki wo abhi atharah saal ka ho chuka hain amuman usse school toh clear kar lena chahiye tha.
bhai yeh sofia ka character explain kare khud toh mardo se nafrat karti ladkio kee izzat kee baat karti hain aur khud joker gang kee maut pe afsos jatati hain.
matlab yeh khud ladkio kee izzat ke saath khel rahi hain, aisa toh ho nahin shakta kee usse pata nahin ho kee wo gang kya kar rahi hain . bhai yeh confusion hain iske character mein.
Kitna achha likteho aap.....shukriya...
Beautiful update bhai ji
Sahi kha bhaiya ji aapne
Ham sb Aapko kahi Jane bhi nhi denge update is just awesome Bhai...
Fantastic superb update...,waiting for next updated .
nice update
Awesome Update


thanks bhai ...

aaj Arv313 bhai ka comment dekha ..such me dil chu liya ...bhai aap ansahan jaise kade faisle mat lena ..hum aapko aise tang nahi hone denge ...if u love me bhai ...so i also love u bhai (per bhai love ek bhai ki tarah hai ) ..aapne acha likha ummid karta hun aapki shayari heena ke liye use karun toh aapki permission hogi bhai ... Xabhi bhai thanks aapko bhi ...

waise din bana diya bhai ..aapne Arv313 bhai ..

or thanks shabjaila bhai aapko bhi ...acha main likhta hun ya nahi ..per sukriya aapko ki aapne is kabil samjha apne bhai ko ...tahe dil se sukriya ...

aalu bhai aapne pucha ki nisha jab gayi toh 5 saal hone tak wapas nahi aayi ..iski wajah maine wahan saaf saaf likhi thi ..uske nana ki bimari or kyuki wajah kai thi wapas na aane ki ...shayad aap story me dekh nahi paye ya ..aapne shayad dhyaan nahi diya ..ki nisha se manu ne wada liya tha ..ki woh apni study puri kare ..or bhi kai wajahain thi ..jaise aaye wapas toh kyun ?? jab uski family me uski maa hi uske sath new zealand me hai ..or chalo maan bhi liya ki woh apne papa ke liye wapas aaye toh wahan maine uska bhi detail me clear kiya tha ..ki nisha ke father ashok khud wahan new zealand jab tab chale jate the ..or kyuki nisha ki bachaini dekhkar uski maa ne manu ke piche jasoos laga diya tha ..taaki usko manu ke baare pata chalta rahe ...


so bhai kaid kaise hua ...aap ne sawal pucha uska detail reply de raha hun ..isko kaid kaise define karoge aap ??? jabki woh wahan study kar rahi hai ...uska parivaar uske sath hai toh kaid kaise hua ??? sochna aap ek baar ...
ab aate hain manu or chintu per ...kabhi kabhi aankhon ka dekha insaan ko ander tak toad deta hai ..jisse aap pyaar karo woh kahin or ek bar sochna samjh jaoge ...or kyun kiya or nisha ko chintu hi kyun ?? yeh sawal aap mature dimaag se soch rahe hain ..thik hai per us time manu ko nisha ke naam uske chintu ki bahon me hone bhar se hi pyaar se nafrat ho gayi ...jo uska apna point of view hai ...or nisha ke naam ko bhi usne is update tak apne dimaag me aane tak nahi diya kyuki usko nisha ko yaad karke sirf dard hi milta tha ..or jab insaan dard me hota hai ..tab kabhi kabhi samne pade tale ki chabhi bhi nazar nahi aaya karti ...ummid hai aap smart ho samjh gaye hoge ki nisha ko manu kaise or kyun dekhta hai ...

bhai jahan aap jo update read kar rahe ho wahan uske sawal comment me honge ..plz unko bhi ..pad lena kyuki jo aapne pucha hai sirf aapke hi mind me nahi aaya hoga ...so comment bhi ek baar read kar lena ...old update me mujhe baar baar aapko samjhane me problem nahi hai ..per abhi ke update or old update ka clearification mix up ho jayega ..jo abhi ke liye sahi nahi hoga ...baki

bhai jahan jo likha hai sochkar or detail me likha hai ..ab yeh aap per hai ..ki aap usko kaise dekhte hain??? pata nahi aapne kaise update padha tha ...khair main yahan har update me kuch chote per aane wale update ke liye point deta rehta hun taaki aage ki story me aap confuse na ho..

per yeh aap per hai ki aap kitna read karte hain or kitna skip karte hain ...bhai ise narazgi mat samjhna ..aapne pucha tha so clear kar raha hun ...or please isko disrespect ya offend hokar mat lena ..aapne detail me pucha tha so clear karna jarori tha ...kyuki kuch pyaare dost aise hi read karte hain story ko ..ki jahan bore laga wahan skip kar diya ...

per bhai khud sochna update main jab itne bade de raha hun ..toh kuch soch samjh kar hi de raha hun ..verna chote update me toh mera hi time bachta hai na ..per tab na likhne me mazza aanewala hai or na read karne me ..so jitna likhta hun ..soch samjhkar likhta hun ...haan spelling or auto-speace ke chalte ...word thode jud se jaate hain ..jo ek meri kami hai ..manta hun ..per bhai itna aap bhi adjust kar lena ..kyuki yahan thoda adjust main kar leta hun toh thoda aapse adjust ki ummid rakhta hun ...

ab aate hain sofia ke baare me aapne pucha uska character samjh nahi aaya ..so bhai uske baare jitna bataya hai kaafi hai ..uska role ka kaam jab start hoga tab aap samjh lena ..kyuki suspence main bigadna nahi chahta ...sirf aapke liye itna detail me clear kiya ..per akele aapke liye baaki doston ka mazza bekaar nahi kar sakta ...itna samjh lo jab jahan jiska kaam hoga woh active hoga ...yeh sirf aapke liye special tip hai ...


thank for reading & staying with us ....


yours Dr. Zeus
 
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thanks bhai ...

aaj Arv313 bhai ka comment dekha ..such me dil chu liya ...bhai aap ansahan jaise kade faisle mat lena ..hum aapko aise tang nahi hone denge ...if u love me bhai ...so i also love u bhai (per bhai love ek bhai ki tarah hai ) ..aapne acha likha ummid karta hun aapki shayari heena ke liye use karun toh aapki permission hogi bhai ... Xabhi bhai thanks aapko bhi ...

waise din bana diya bhai ..aapne Arv313 bhai ..

or thanks shabjaila bhai aapko bhi ...acha main likhta hun ya nahi ..per sukriya aapko ki aapne is kabil samjha apne bhai ko ...tahe dil se sukriya ...

aalu bhai aapne pucha ki nisha jab gayi toh 5 saal hone tak wapas nahi aayi ..iski wajah maine wahan saaf saaf likhi thi ..uske nana ki bimari or kyuki wajah kai thi wapas na aane ki ...shayad aap story me dekh nahi paye ya ..aapne shayad dhyaan nahi diya ..ki nisha se manu ne wada liya tha ..ki woh apni study puri kare ..or bhi kai wajahain thi ..jaise aaye wapas toh kyun ?? jab uski family me uski maa hi uske sath new zealand me hai ..or chalo maan bhi liya ki woh apne papa ke liye wapas aaye toh wahan maine uska bhi detail me clear kiya tha ..ki nisha ke father ashok khud wahan new zealand jab tab chale jate the ..or kyuki nisha ki bachaini dekhkar uski maa ne manu ke piche jasoos laga diya tha ..taaki usko manu ke baare pata chalta rahe ...


so bhai kaid kaise hua ...aap ne sawal pucha uska detail reply de raha hun ..isko kaid kaise define karoge aap ??? jabki woh wahan study kar rahi hai ...uska parivaar uske sath hai toh kaid kaise hua ??? sochna aap ek baar ...
ab aate hain manu or chintu per ...kabhi kabhi aankhon ka dekha insaan ko ander tak toad deta hai ..jisse aap pyaar karo woh kahin or ek bar sochna samjh jaoge ...or kyun kiya or nisha ko chintu hi kyun ?? yeh sawal aap mature dimaag se soch rahe hain ..thik hai per us time manu ko nisha ke naam uske chintu ki bahon me hone bhar se hi pyaar se nafrat ho gayi ...jo uska apna point of view hai ...or nisha ke naam ko bhi usne is update tak apne dimaag me aane tak nahi diya kyuki usko nisha ko yaad karke sirf dard hi milta tha ..or jab insaan dard me hota hai ..tab kabhi kabhi samne pade tale ki chabhi bhi nazar nahi aaya karti ...ummid hai aap smart ho samjh gaye hoge ki nisha ko manu kaise or kyun dekhta hai ...

bhai jahan aap jo update read kar rahe ho wahan uske sawal comment me honge ..plz unko bhi ..pad lena kyuki jo aapne pucha hai sirf aapke hi mind me nahi aaya hoga ...so comment bhi ek baar read kar lena ...old update me mujhe baar baar aapko samjhane me problem nahi hai ..per abhi ke update or old update ka clearification mix up ho jayega ..jo abhi ke liye sahi nahi hoga ...baki

bhai jahan jo likha hai sochkar or detail me likha hai ..ab yeh aap per hai ..ki aap usko kaise dekhte hain??? pata nahi aapne kaise update padha tha ...khair main yahan har update me kuch chote per aane wale update ke liye point deta rehta hun taaki aage ki story me aap confuse na ho..

per yeh aap per hai ki aap kitna read karte hain or kitna skip karte hain ...bhai ise narazgi mat samjhna ..aapne pucha tha so clear kar raha hun ...or please isko disrespect ya offend hokar mat lena ..aapne detail me pucha tha so clear karna jarori tha ...kyuki kuch pyaare dost aise hi read karte hain story ko ..ki jahan bore laga wahan skip kar diya ...

per bhai khud sochna update main jab itne bade de raha hun ..toh kuch soch samjh kar hi de raha hun ..verna chote update me toh mera hi time bachta hai na ..per tab na likhne me mazza aanewala hai or na read karne me ..so jitna likhta hun ..soch samjhkar likhta hun ...haan spelling or auto-speace ke chalte ...word thode jud se jaate hain ..jo ek meri kami hai ..manta hun ..per bhai itna aap bhi adjust kar lena ..kyuki yahan thoda adjust main kar leta hun toh thoda aapse adjust ki ummid rakhta hun ...

ab aate hain sofia ke baare me aapne pucha uska character samjh nahi aaya ..so bhai uske baare jitna bataya hai kaafi hai ..uska role ka kaam jab start hoga tab aap samjh lena ..kyuki suspence main bigadna nahi chahta ...sirf aapke liye itna detail me clear kiya ..per akele aapke liye baaki doston ka mazza bekaar nahi kar sakta ...itna samjh lo jab jahan jiska kaam hoga woh active hoga ...yeh sirf aapke liye special tip hai ...


thank for reading & staying with us ....


yours Dr. Zeus

Update kado de rahe ho fer dr. Sahab assi te wait kar re h twadi bhi aur update di bhi.
AUr aapnu full chhut h ji heena de Sadke.
Love you dear brother
Waiting eagerly.
 
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Update kado de rahe ho fer dr. Sahab assi te wait kar re h twadi bhi aur update di bhi.
AUr aapnu full chhut h ji heena de Sadke.
Love you dear brother
Waiting eagerly.
Waiting for next update

thanks praji ...

Arv313 praji tawade warge hi ta aasi lage paya si ...tawade varge hi tahan aasi lateain te lateain vi updatain kartain hain si ..teh praji tawade warge haan assi likhte haan ..abhi vi aasi likhte payan ...pra tusi thoda thand pao teh..aaj tawade warge updatain jaroor teh jarooraan aana si ...
love u to dear praaji (per as an brother love u bhai )....

urc4me ...don't worry dear i m writing right now ...today when update will complete i ll post as soon as possible ...

thanks for reading & staying with us ...
 
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