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ragish7357

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are Dr. Zeus sir aap busy honge or aapki job bhi esi h ki kb busy ho jaye or kitne samay k liye kuch pta nhi hota h
hum to phle bhi wait hi kiye the ab bhi kr rhe h or karenge
reader jb koi story pdta h or wo use acchi lgne lg jati h
to wo usse emotionally attach ho jata h
or sath hi writer se bhi
iske bad jb wo story adhuri rh jati h to bhai insaan or attach hone ke naate hurt unhe bhi ho jata h thoda
iske bad bhi wo intzar krte rhte h
haan kuch reader ese hote h jo kuch jyada hi bol jate h
to bhaiya wo to hote hi iske liye h
aapko shayad naa pta ho but kafi sare acche writer forum chod kr jaa chuke h iss wjh se
or ye forum aadhi - adhuri stories se bhra pda h
to agr aapko koi bat buri lgi ho kisi reader ki to unhe maaf kijiyega
or jldi se free hokr iss behatrin kahani ko aage badhaiye
hum apka besabri se intzar kr rhe h
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aapka ek masoom reader:winknudge:
 

Ayush2017

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priye mitra aapne yeh kaise socha ki main aapko hatotsahit ya bharamit kar raha hun ..maine toh sirf apna side bataya ...or waise bhi main ache se jaanta hun ki kami meri side se hai ..or kyuki jab commitment kiya jata hai toh usko pura karna hi eternal target hota hai insan ka ..per mere pyaare dost such me bahut busy hun pehle ke comment me bhi mera matlab tha ....

un loogon se jo baar baar sirf ek hi line copy paste karte hain ki ......" writer chod chuka hai yeh kahani " ....
or yeh pehli baar nahi hai ...
lagataar baar baar

yahi line dekhta hun ..ignore kar deta hun ..kyuki criticism face karna aaj se nahi shuru se aata hai ...toh sirf maine apni side se aapko dikhaya ki jab is per main naraz nahi hota toh aap per bhala kyun hone laga bhai ...

yahaan toh maine shuru se aap sabhi ke idea ko welcome kiya hai ...per kya karun dear hun toh insaan hi thoda thak jata hun ot me duty hai ummid hai samjh sakte ho ki thakan se likhne ka time nahi lag pata ...

or pyare mitra isi me badnaam ho jata hun ...aap sab smart hain ...please itna samjh lo ruka hun per bhaaga nahi jab shuru kiya hai toh likhunga ...
or bhi bahut kuch plan hain likhne ke liye per time problem hai ...dear .... or kuch galat laga ho toh sorry mitra..

or sorry isliye ki time commit karne ke baad bhi update late ho rahi hai ..

tab tak ke liye apne is dost ko thoda time or de do priye mitra ...
Take your time bro. When you are free, then you write and post his update.

I know, you are really busy in your job.
 

Bilal jan

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Dr shab update kab tak aaye ga
 
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Sky07

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urc4me bhai baat narazgi ki nahi hai ...isse pehle jab koi writer story chod deta tha tab ek reader ki tarah hum yeh socha karte the ki shayad koi wajah rahi hogi ..writer ki personal...

mere case me bhi kuch aisa hi hai bhai emergency me night shift chal rahi thi...dear bhai ab kyuki night shift ki aadat nahi hai ...so bhai time nahi lag pa raha tha ..per jab likhne ka time milega toh wapas tezi se likhna shuru kar dunga ...

per bhai ek baat keh deta hun ...aaj tak jab bhi aapne pucha maine humesha apka jawab diya ...kyuki aap sab mere apne ho ...meri pyari reader family ...

per kuch comment dekh kar toh aisa lagta hai ki main bhaag hi gaya hun .....or kuch toh bechare comment dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki main unke hisaab se aaj hi story band kar dun ...
yakin na aaye toh apne comment ke thik upper wala comment dekh lo bhai ....


khair main apne kaam se busy hun ..isme kisi ke bawasir ka kya ho sakta hai bhai ...

or haan bhai baat sirf night shift ki hai main apno se naraz nahi hota or na hi mujhe bhagoda sabit karne walon se ... unka kam woh kar rahe hain mera main ...

bhai 23 tak thoda or busy hun per haan jaise hi wapas likhunga tab aapke liye is baar kuch or bonus bhi hoga kyuki kuch or ideas bhi hain jin per kaam karna hai ..per time ki kami se kar nahi pa raha hun ..
OK Dr. Zeus we will wait till your comeback but we deserve megs updates and not one or two but constantly
 

Naik

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urc4me bhai baat narazgi ki nahi hai ...isse pehle jab koi writer story chod deta tha tab ek reader ki tarah hum yeh socha karte the ki shayad koi wajah rahi hogi ..writer ki personal...

mere case me bhi kuch aisa hi hai bhai emergency me night shift chal rahi thi...dear bhai ab kyuki night shift ki aadat nahi hai ...so bhai time nahi lag pa raha tha ..per jab likhne ka time milega toh wapas tezi se likhna shuru kar dunga ...

per bhai ek baat keh deta hun ...aaj tak jab bhi aapne pucha maine humesha apka jawab diya ...kyuki aap sab mere apne ho ...meri pyari reader family ...

per kuch comment dekh kar toh aisa lagta hai ki main bhaag hi gaya hun .....or kuch toh bechare comment dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki main unke hisaab se aaj hi story band kar dun ...
yakin na aaye toh apne comment ke thik upper wala comment dekh lo bhai ....


khair main apne kaam se busy hun ..isme kisi ke bawasir ka kya ho sakta hai bhai ...

or haan bhai baat sirf night shift ki hai main apno se naraz nahi hota or na hi mujhe bhagoda sabit karne walon se ... unka kam woh kar rahe hain mera main ...

bhai 23 tak thoda or busy hun per haan jaise hi wapas likhunga tab aapke liye is baar kuch or bonus bhi hoga kyuki kuch or ideas bhi hain jin per kaam karna hai ..per time ki kami se kar nahi pa raha hun ..
Ok bhai
Koyi baat nahi
Aapko jab time mile tab update dijiyega
 

Rohit1988

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urc4me bhai baat narazgi ki nahi hai ...isse pehle jab koi writer story chod deta tha tab ek reader ki tarah hum yeh socha karte the ki shayad koi wajah rahi hogi ..writer ki personal...

mere case me bhi kuch aisa hi hai bhai emergency me night shift chal rahi thi...dear bhai ab kyuki night shift ki aadat nahi hai ...so bhai time nahi lag pa raha tha ..per jab likhne ka time milega toh wapas tezi se likhna shuru kar dunga ...

per bhai ek baat keh deta hun ...aaj tak jab bhi aapne pucha maine humesha apka jawab diya ...kyuki aap sab mere apne ho ...meri pyari reader family ...

per kuch comment dekh kar toh aisa lagta hai ki main bhaag hi gaya hun .....or kuch toh bechare comment dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki main unke hisaab se aaj hi story band kar dun ...
yakin na aaye toh apne comment ke thik upper wala comment dekh lo bhai ....


khair main apne kaam se busy hun ..isme kisi ke bawasir ka kya ho sakta hai bhai ...

or haan bhai baat sirf night shift ki hai main apno se naraz nahi hota or na hi mujhe bhagoda sabit karne walon se ... unka kam woh kar rahe hain mera main ...

bhai 23 tak thoda or busy hun per haan jaise hi wapas likhunga tab aapke liye is baar kuch or bonus bhi hoga kyuki kuch or ideas bhi hain jin per kaam karna hai ..per time ki kami se kar nahi pa raha hun ..



Bhai ji ham samjhate hai aapki paresani
Kuch log hote hai jinme khud likhne ka dam nahi vo bas logo ka manobal torne ka kaam karte hai
Ese logo ki mansik dasa achi nahi hoti
Aap ese logo ke baato ko dil se na lagao
We love u or we will waiting for u bhai ji
 

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urc4me bhai baat narazgi ki nahi hai ...isse pehle jab koi writer story chod deta tha tab ek reader ki tarah hum yeh socha karte the ki shayad koi wajah rahi hogi ..writer ki personal...

mere case me bhi kuch aisa hi hai bhai emergency me night shift chal rahi thi...dear bhai ab kyuki night shift ki aadat nahi hai ...so bhai time nahi lag pa raha tha ..per jab likhne ka time milega toh wapas tezi se likhna shuru kar dunga ...

per bhai ek baat keh deta hun ...aaj tak jab bhi aapne pucha maine humesha apka jawab diya ...kyuki aap sab mere apne ho ...meri pyari reader family ...

per kuch comment dekh kar toh aisa lagta hai ki main bhaag hi gaya hun .....or kuch toh bechare comment dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki main unke hisaab se aaj hi story band kar dun ...
yakin na aaye toh apne comment ke thik upper wala comment dekh lo bhai ....


khair main apne kaam se busy hun ..isme kisi ke bawasir ka kya ho sakta hai bhai ...

or haan bhai baat sirf night shift ki hai main apno se naraz nahi hota or na hi mujhe bhagoda sabit karne walon se ... unka kam woh kar rahe hain mera main ...

bhai 23 tak thoda or busy hun per haan jaise hi wapas likhunga tab aapke liye is baar kuch or bonus bhi hoga kyuki kuch or ideas bhi hain jin per kaam karna hai ..per time ki kami se kar nahi pa raha hun ..
Dr Sahab
Thaks For replying
Mai apki baat se Sehmat hu Bhai
Kyuki Is Forum per Manhus se mahan tak
story vale Raja Chauhan bhai KO
kuch reader logo ne itna pareshan kiya ke
ab vo story adhuri chodhne ki bat kar rahe hai
Bas aap ye Story mat छोड़ Dena

Aap aaram se Update Dena
Saal bhar wait kiya hai is story ke update ke liye
Kuch months or Sahi
Take care bhai
 
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Sandeep singh nirwan

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Bhai log ye storyclose ho gayi writer khali bewakoof bana raha h apke comments padhega aur chala jayega
Aur kabhi aake kahega busy hu etc but update ni dega so update ki asha na kare dusre writer ko motivate kare
 
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urc4me

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Sayad aaj 24 ho gayi hai. Aapne 23 tak ka samay liya tha. Pratiksha agle update ki
 
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