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Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

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Rohit1988

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Bhai log ye storyclose ho gayi writer khali bewakoof bana raha h apke comments padhega aur chala jayega
Aur kabhi aake kahega busy hu etc but update ni dega so update ki asha na kare dusre writer ko motivate kare
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Bhai ji aapko uski tension nahi leni chahiye agar aapko lagta hai writer bewakuf bana raha hai to aap kar kya rahe ho yaha ham to nahi bane bewkuf ham to writer ke sath hai
Aap nahi ho fir bhi yaha ho is hisab se aap bane ho bewkuf
Ab bhi Saram hai to fir mat aana yaha
 

Dr. Zeus

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are Dr. Zeus sir aap busy honge or aapki job bhi esi h ki kb busy ho jaye or kitne samay k liye kuch pta nhi hota h
hum to phle bhi wait hi kiye the ab bhi kr rhe h or karenge
reader jb koi story pdta h or wo use acchi lgne lg jati h
to wo usse emotionally attach ho jata h
or sath hi writer se bhi
iske bad jb wo story adhuri rh jati h to bhai insaan or attach hone ke naate hurt unhe bhi ho jata h thoda
iske bad bhi wo intzar krte rhte h
haan kuch reader ese hote h jo kuch jyada hi bol jate h
to bhaiya wo to hote hi iske liye h
aapko shayad naa pta ho but kafi sare acche writer forum chod kr jaa chuke h iss wjh se
or ye forum aadhi - adhuri stories se bhra pda h
to agr aapko koi bat buri lgi ho kisi reader ki to unhe maaf kijiyega
or jldi se free hokr iss behatrin kahani ko aage badhaiye
hum apka besabri se intzar kr rhe h
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aapka ek masoom reader:winknudge:



thanks doston aap sabhi ka jinhone sath diya un sabhi ka dil se thanks ...


dear ragish7357 bhai mere dear pyaare masoom reader ... sirf aapke through hi bata raha hun

aapne yeh samjha ki main busy hun uske liye dil se thanks ... such me dost bahut busy tha ...yeh alag baat hai ki kaam se bachne ka bahana maine kabhi sikha nahi ... haan yeh baat or hai ki main apne kaam ke liye aap sabhi se time per time leta chala gaya hun ..

per yeh bhi such hai ki story meri wajah se hi late ho rahi hai ...aapne yeh kaha ki story jab achi lagti hai tab reader kahin na kahin usse emotionally attach ho jata hai ... yeh baat bhai aapne jo kahi main kyuki aaj bhi ek reader ke haisiyat se manta hun ...

or shayad aapko yeh loog batate nahi ki khud writer bhi apne reader's ki is family se attach rehta hai ..yeh baat bhi aapko main bata raha hun ....ki aap sab meri ek or pyaari si family hi ho ..main apne se alag nahi manta aap sab ko ...
per haan yeh bhi such hai yeh last year meri life se bahut tezi se gaya ...isme jo normal schedule hua karta tha uska 200 * times karlo aap toh bhi galat nahi hoga ...per main kabhi bhaaga nahi ..haan yeh alag baat hai jab bhi time mila toh kamse kam aap sab ko inform jaroor kiya ...isse aap chahe meri jawabdehi samjho ya apna is reader family ke liye pyaar ...ki jab bhi time mila tab jahan hun jis wajah se late hua hun aapko bata diya ...

verna is site pe hi bahut si adhuri story hain jinme jaane wale apne hone ya nahone tak ka koi jawab nahi dete ...iska means yeh nahi hai ki unki apni wajah nahi hogi ..per jaise aapne apni side rakhi waise main apni side rakh deta hun ...or dear yakin maano kaam ka bahana nahi such me bahut busy raha hun ..

kyuki is story ke sath or bhi kai story ke plans the likhne ke liye mere ..per sab is kaam ke aandhi me thaame hue hun .. agar samjh sakho dost toh is writer dost ki halat or hasrat samjh lena ...


" dost kuch toh wajah hoti hai har kisi ke chup ya ruk jaane ki ...
verna ek kalam sa shoor is puri dunia me or kahin nahi janaab ."

" Rukne ki wajah ka alaam kuch is tarah hai janaab ki ..
har patta or har zara is khamoshi ki wajah puchta hai..

or munaseeb nahi yun chup reh jana meri apni fitrat ..
ke chilla kar main apne andaaz-e-bayan nahi kiya karta ...."




thanks urc4me bhai aap tension na lo dear likh raha hun or kal likh nahi paya tha bhai kyuki last pure month se night shift chal rahi thi ..so kyuki ab day shift hogi toh adjust karne me 1 se 2 din lag jate hain ..kyuki Sky07 bhai ka megaupdate ka promise bhi yaad hai so aaj likh raha hun ...or may be aaj ya kal tak update post kar dunga bhai ...or late kyun ho raha hai iski wajah abhi isme ek jagah atka hua hun bhai ...or kyun ki thode time baad likhne beth raha hun toh speed me thoda time lagega...


thanks Rohit1988 bhai itna batane ke baad bhi ki bhaaga nahi hun tab bhi jab aapka reaction aisa hai tab mujhe kaisa feel hota hoga ???? per kyuki sabka apna way of living hai ...main apna kaam karta hun baaki sab apna ..mujhe criticism se rati bhar problem nahi hai ..per har bar ek hi baat sunkar pata chal jata hai ki likhne wale ka intention kya hai ???.. aap mujhe story ko lekar criticise karo naye idea or naye suggestion ko lekar baat karo ...jitna hard criticise kar sakte ho ..i m ready for that ..per jab apne kaam se late ho raha hun or jab aap sabhi ko already bata raha hun ..tab bhi aisa comment dekhkar samjh aa jata hai ..ki unka matlab clear or loud hai ...story choad do writer ...

per unka apna kaam hai or humara apna ...ab hum ko roz poke karnewale ko bhi busy rakhna humari aadat hai so hum toh samjh gaye per kya aap sab inka matlab samjh paye dear family ????
 

Kala Nag

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abhi likh raha hun or kyuki kaafi time baad likh raha hun toh time lagega ..
so doston
update kal shaam tak post kar dunga ...
आपकी इस कहानी को अंजाम जरूर दीजिएगा
अब प्रतीक्षा है अगले अपडेट की
 

Rohit1988

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thanks doston aap sabhi ka jinhone sath diya un sabhi ka dil se thanks ...


dear ragish7357 bhai mere dear pyaare masoom reader ... sirf aapke through hi bata raha hun

aapne yeh samjha ki main busy hun uske liye dil se thanks ... such me dost bahut busy tha ...yeh alag baat hai ki kaam se bachne ka bahana maine kabhi sikha nahi ... haan yeh baat or hai ki main apne kaam ke liye aap sabhi se time per time leta chala gaya hun ..

per yeh bhi such hai ki story meri wajah se hi late ho rahi hai ...aapne yeh kaha ki story jab achi lagti hai tab reader kahin na kahin usse emotionally attach ho jata hai ... yeh baat bhai aapne jo kahi main kyuki aaj bhi ek reader ke haisiyat se manta hun ...

or shayad aapko yeh loog batate nahi ki khud writer bhi apne reader's ki is family se attach rehta hai ..yeh baat bhi aapko main bata raha hun ....ki aap sab meri ek or pyaari si family hi ho ..main apne se alag nahi manta aap sab ko ...
per haan yeh bhi such hai yeh last year meri life se bahut tezi se gaya ...isme jo normal schedule hua karta tha uska 200 * times karlo aap toh bhi galat nahi hoga ...per main kabhi bhaaga nahi ..haan yeh alag baat hai jab bhi time mila toh kamse kam aap sab ko inform jaroor kiya ...isse aap chahe meri jawabdehi samjho ya apna is reader family ke liye pyaar ...ki jab bhi time mila tab jahan hun jis wajah se late hua hun aapko bata diya ...

verna is site pe hi bahut si adhuri story hain jinme jaane wale apne hone ya nahone tak ka koi jawab nahi dete ...iska means yeh nahi hai ki unki apni wajah nahi hogi ..per jaise aapne apni side rakhi waise main apni side rakh deta hun ...or dear yakin maano kaam ka bahana nahi such me bahut busy raha hun ..

kyuki is story ke sath or bhi kai story ke plans the likhne ke liye mere ..per sab is kaam ke aandhi me thaame hue hun .. agar samjh sakho dost toh is writer dost ki halat or hasrat samjh lena ...


" dost kuch toh wajah hoti hai har kisi ke chup ya ruk jaane ki ...
verna ek kalam sa shoor is puri dunia me or kahin nahi janaab ."

" Rukne ki wajah ka alaam kuch is tarah hai janaab ki ..
har patta or har zara is khamoshi ki wajah puchta hai..

or munaseeb nahi yun chup reh jana meri apni fitrat ..
ke chilla kar main apne andaaz-e-bayan nahi kiya karta ...."




thanks urc4me bhai aap tension na lo dear likh raha hun or kal likh nahi paya tha bhai kyuki last pure month se night shift chal rahi thi ..so kyuki ab day shift hogi toh adjust karne me 1 se 2 din lag jate hain ..kyuki Sky07 bhai ka megaupdate ka promise bhi yaad hai so aaj likh raha hun ...or may be aaj ya kal tak update post kar dunga bhai ...or late kyun ho raha hai iski wajah abhi isme ek jagah atka hua hun bhai ...or kyun ki thode time baad likhne beth raha hun toh speed me thoda time lagega...


thanks Rohit1988 bhai itna batane ke baad bhi ki bhaaga nahi hun tab bhi jab aapka reaction aisa hai tab mujhe kaisa feel hota hoga ???? per kyuki sabka apna way of living hai ...main apna kaam karta hun baaki sab apna ..mujhe criticism se rati bhar problem nahi hai ..per har bar ek hi baat sunkar pata chal jata hai ki likhne wale ka intention kya hai ???.. aap mujhe story ko lekar criticise karo naye idea or naye suggestion ko lekar baat karo ...jitna hard criticise kar sakte ho ..i m ready for that ..per jab apne kaam se late ho raha hun or jab aap sabhi ko already bata raha hun ..tab bhi aisa comment dekhkar samjh aa jata hai ..ki unka matlab clear or loud hai ...story choad do writer ...


per unka apna kaam hai or humara apna ...ab hum ko roz poke karnewale ko bhi busy rakhna humari aadat hai so hum toh samjh gaye per kya aap sab inka matlab samjh paye dear family ????



Bhai ji ham aapke sath hai or rahege or aapka intejar karege relex Bhai ji
Kisi ki faltu baato pe dhayan maat do
 
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ragish7357

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thanks doston aap sabhi ka jinhone sath diya un sabhi ka dil se thanks ...


dear ragish7357 bhai mere dear pyaare masoom reader ... sirf aapke through hi bata raha hun

aapne yeh samjha ki main busy hun uske liye dil se thanks ... such me dost bahut busy tha ...yeh alag baat hai ki kaam se bachne ka bahana maine kabhi sikha nahi ... haan yeh baat or hai ki main apne kaam ke liye aap sabhi se time per time leta chala gaya hun ..

per yeh bhi such hai ki story meri wajah se hi late ho rahi hai ...aapne yeh kaha ki story jab achi lagti hai tab reader kahin na kahin usse emotionally attach ho jata hai ... yeh baat bhai aapne jo kahi main kyuki aaj bhi ek reader ke haisiyat se manta hun ...

or shayad aapko yeh loog batate nahi ki khud writer bhi apne reader's ki is family se attach rehta hai ..yeh baat bhi aapko main bata raha hun ....ki aap sab meri ek or pyaari si family hi ho ..main apne se alag nahi manta aap sab ko ...
per haan yeh bhi such hai yeh last year meri life se bahut tezi se gaya ...isme jo normal schedule hua karta tha uska 200 * times karlo aap toh bhi galat nahi hoga ...per main kabhi bhaaga nahi ..haan yeh alag baat hai jab bhi time mila toh kamse kam aap sab ko inform jaroor kiya ...isse aap chahe meri jawabdehi samjho ya apna is reader family ke liye pyaar ...ki jab bhi time mila tab jahan hun jis wajah se late hua hun aapko bata diya ...

verna is site pe hi bahut si adhuri story hain jinme jaane wale apne hone ya nahone tak ka koi jawab nahi dete ...iska means yeh nahi hai ki unki apni wajah nahi hogi ..per jaise aapne apni side rakhi waise main apni side rakh deta hun ...or dear yakin maano kaam ka bahana nahi such me bahut busy raha hun ..

kyuki is story ke sath or bhi kai story ke plans the likhne ke liye mere ..per sab is kaam ke aandhi me thaame hue hun .. agar samjh sakho dost toh is writer dost ki halat or hasrat samjh lena ...


" dost kuch toh wajah hoti hai har kisi ke chup ya ruk jaane ki ...
verna ek kalam sa shoor is puri dunia me or kahin nahi janaab ."

" Rukne ki wajah ka alaam kuch is tarah hai janaab ki ..
har patta or har zara is khamoshi ki wajah puchta hai..

or munaseeb nahi yun chup reh jana meri apni fitrat ..
ke chilla kar main apne andaaz-e-bayan nahi kiya karta ...."




thanks urc4me bhai aap tension na lo dear likh raha hun or kal likh nahi paya tha bhai kyuki last pure month se night shift chal rahi thi ..so kyuki ab day shift hogi toh adjust karne me 1 se 2 din lag jate hain ..kyuki Sky07 bhai ka megaupdate ka promise bhi yaad hai so aaj likh raha hun ...or may be aaj ya kal tak update post kar dunga bhai ...or late kyun ho raha hai iski wajah abhi isme ek jagah atka hua hun bhai ...or kyun ki thode time baad likhne beth raha hun toh speed me thoda time lagega...


thanks Rohit1988 bhai itna batane ke baad bhi ki bhaaga nahi hun tab bhi jab aapka reaction aisa hai tab mujhe kaisa feel hota hoga ???? per kyuki sabka apna way of living hai ...main apna kaam karta hun baaki sab apna ..mujhe criticism se rati bhar problem nahi hai ..per har bar ek hi baat sunkar pata chal jata hai ki likhne wale ka intention kya hai ???.. aap mujhe story ko lekar criticise karo naye idea or naye suggestion ko lekar baat karo ...jitna hard criticise kar sakte ho ..i m ready for that ..per jab apne kaam se late ho raha hun or jab aap sabhi ko already bata raha hun ..tab bhi aisa comment dekhkar samjh aa jata hai ..ki unka matlab clear or loud hai ...story choad do writer ...


per unka apna kaam hai or humara apna ...ab hum ko roz poke karnewale ko bhi busy rakhna humari aadat hai so hum toh samjh gaye per kya aap sab inka matlab samjh paye dear family ????
sbb thik h jeus sir
or hum aapki sbhi baato se purn sahmati rakhte h
or ye bhi smjhte h ki personal life jof or carrier ko bhi importance deni pdti h
aapko lga aap update de skte ho lekin kaam ki wjh se nhi de paye
it's not an issue ye hota h or sb kuch jesa hum chahe wesa hi to nhi hota har baar
prr abhi aap jb wapas aa hi gye ho
or update dene ka bhi bol rhe ho to jld se jld update chaappooooo
nhi to ab hogi :protest2:
to jeus sir we want :announce: update
 

Dr. Zeus

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आपकी इस कहानी को अंजाम जरूर दीजिएगा
अब प्रतीक्षा है अगले अपडेट की
Bhai ji ham aapke sath hai or rahege or aapka intejar karege relex Bhai ji
Kisi ki faltu baato pe dhayan maat do
sbb thik h jeus sir
or hum aapki sbhi baato se purn sahmati rakhte h
or ye bhi smjhte h ki personal life jof or carrier ko bhi importance deni pdti h
aapko lga aap update de skte ho lekin kaam ki wjh se nhi de paye
it's not an issue ye hota h or sb kuch jesa hum chahe wesa hi to nhi hota har baar
prr abhi aap jb wapas aa hi gye ho
or update dene ka bhi bol rhe ho to jld se jld update chaappooooo
nhi to ab hogi :protest2:
to jeus sir we want :announce: update
OK bhai intzar rahe ga
Doctor Saheb intejar he kar rahe hai. Aap se itna jud chuke hai ki iltija he kar sakte hai atyachar nahi. Pratiksharat



thanks dear one's aapne itna sath diya uske liye dil se thanks ...aaj update dene ka kaha tha so post kar raha hun ...

jaanta hun thoda chota hai ..per abhi bhi likh raha hun post ka ek part aaj de raha hun baaki ka kal jab ready hoga tab post kar dunga ...
may be night me kal ...
 
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