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Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

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Narayan14

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tumhari problem kya hai bhai ....jab dekho yahi sawal ki manu bada kab hoga ....pata nahi kahani padi bhi hai ya nahi tumne manu naam sabko pata hai per monu likhte ho tum ...pata lag jata hai ...kon regular hai or kon ????khair....or rest ka aisa hai ....tumse akele puchkar rest nahi liya tha ...sab ko inform kiya tha .....kahani likhta hun yaha uska koi bhi paisa nahi hai ...yeh sabhi ko pata hai ....mujhe bhi pata hai ...apne saare reader friends ko jab bhi koi wajah hoti hai bata deta hun ...tum akele anokhe nahi ho yaar har baar same question tum bore nahi hote is sawal se ???

yahan sab free hain agar koi acha suggestion ho toh welcome hai ....agar kisi ne koi suggestion diya toh agar usable hua toh apply bhi kiya hai ...per bhai main har bar tumhare is ek sawal se bore ho chuka hun ....kyuki jawab har baar diya hai iska ...ki iski wajah thi ...

khair aage dekhte hain ...koi suggestion ya idea aapse toh possible nahi lagta hai ....:einsteink:
[/QUOTE] Kahaani padhi he ki nehi jab mere sab reply dekhoge to pata chal jayega bhai or rahi baat manu ko monu bolne ki to apne bachpan se manu ko cute cute bol rahe ho esliye mujhe manu se monu naam thik laga bolna. Dusri baat mujhe problem nehi he par aap koi bhi story padhlo kisi bhi story me kisi ka bachpan etna lamba nehi he 63 updates ho chuka he sirf etne me, agar esme training me kya kya kiya add kardo to bachpan hi 100 update ho jayega. Pata he ki stories me bachpan honi chahiye par etna lamba bhi nehi ki story boring lagne lage or mujhe ab boring lag rahi he !! Sujestion ki baat karo to me bahat sujestion diya he aap agar dekhe to unmese koi bhi bura nehi he. Last 3,4 update ke reply nehi diya he kyu ki me jab manu bada hoga to ek sath dene ka socha tha kher apko bura laga to sorry.
 
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Arjun Singh 72

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tumhari problem kya hai bhai ....jab dekho yahi sawal ki manu bada kab hoga ....pata nahi kahani padi bhi hai ya nahi tumne manu naam sabko pata hai per monu likhte ho tum ...pata lag jata hai ...kon regular hai or kon ????khair....or rest ka aisa hai ....tumse akele puchkar rest nahi liya tha ...sab ko inform kiya tha .....kahani likhta hun yaha uska koi bhi paisa nahi hai ...yeh sabhi ko pata hai ....mujhe bhi pata hai ...apne saare reader friends ko jab bhi koi wajah hoti hai bata deta hun ...tum akele anokhe nahi ho yaar har baar same question tum bore nahi hote is sawal se ???

yahan sab free hain agar koi acha suggestion ho toh welcome hai ....agar kisi ne koi suggestion diya toh agar usable hua toh apply bhi kiya hai ...per bhai main har bar tumhare is ek sawal se bore ho chuka hun ....kyuki jawab har baar diya hai iska ...ki iski wajah thi ...

khair aage dekhte hain ...koi suggestion ya idea aapse toh possible nahi lagta hai ....:einsteink:
Kahaani padhi he ki nehi jab mere sab reply dekhoge to pata chal jayega bhai or rahi baat manu ko monu bolne ki to apne bachpan se manu ko cute cute bol rahe ho esliye mujhe manu se monu naam thik laga bolna. Dusri baat mujhe problem nehi he par aap koi bhi story padhlo kisi bhi story me kisi ka bachpan etna lamba nehi he 63 updates ho chuka he sirf etne me, agar esme training me kya kya kiya add kardo to bachpan hi 100 update ho jayega. Pata he ki stories me bachpan honi chahiye par etna lamba bhi nehi ki story boring lagne lage or mujhe ab boring lag rahi he !! Sujestion ki baat karo to me bahat sujestion diya he aap agar dekhe to unmese koi bhi bura nehi he. Last 3,4 update ke reply nehi diya he kyu ki me jab manu bada hoga to ek sath dene ka socha tha kher apko bura laga to sorry.
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Tum phir aa gaya aacha Bata uska bachpan bada hua lakin Kya waha koi bacho Wala kaam tha Jo tum bol rha h ab har story tumhare point se nahi likha jayega agar jayeda hi tumhe experience h story likh main review duga tumhe kaise likhte h
 

Diwas

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tumhari problem kya hai bhai ....jab dekho yahi sawal ki manu bada kab hoga ....pata nahi kahani padi bhi hai ya nahi tumne manu naam sabko pata hai per monu likhte ho tum ...pata lag jata hai ...kon regular hai or kon ????khair....or rest ka aisa hai ....tumse akele puchkar rest nahi liya tha ...sab ko inform kiya tha .....kahani likhta hun yaha uska koi bhi paisa nahi hai ...yeh sabhi ko pata hai ....mujhe bhi pata hai ...apne saare reader friends ko jab bhi koi wajah hoti hai bata deta hun ...tum akele anokhe nahi ho yaar har baar same question tum bore nahi hote is sawal se ???

yahan sab free hain agar koi acha suggestion ho toh welcome hai ....agar kisi ne koi suggestion diya toh agar usable hua toh apply bhi kiya hai ...per bhai main har bar tumhare is ek sawal se bore ho chuka hun ....kyuki jawab har baar diya hai iska ...ki iski wajah thi ...

khair aage dekhte hain ...koi suggestion ya idea aapse toh possible nahi lagta hai ....:einsteink:
Kahaani padhi he ki nehi jab mere sab reply dekhoge to pata chal jayega bhai or rahi baat manu ko monu bolne ki to apne bachpan se manu ko cute cute bol rahe ho esliye mujhe manu se monu naam thik laga bolna. Dusri baat mujhe problem nehi he par aap koi bhi story padhlo kisi bhi story me kisi ka bachpan etna lamba nehi he 63 updates ho chuka he sirf etne me, agar esme training me kya kya kiya add kardo to bachpan hi 100 update ho jayega. Pata he ki stories me bachpan honi chahiye par etna lamba bhi nehi ki story boring lagne lage or mujhe ab boring lag rahi he !! Sujestion ki baat karo to me bahat sujestion diya he aap agar dekhe to unmese koi bhi bura nehi he. Last 3,4 update ke reply nehi diya he kyu ki me jab manu bada hoga to ek sath dene ka socha tha kher apko bura laga to sorry.
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Tumahri problem kya hai ??? Kahani ko Apne tarike se chelne do na... Manu bada toh hora hai aur kitna bada chaiye tumhe.. aur Kisi ki problem nahi hai aram SE padh rahe hai sirf ek tum ho jo prblm create kar rahe ho... Maine Dekha hai jab bhi koi bahut khubsurat story chal rahi hoti hai fir achanak ek tum Jaise hi reader aate ho aesye hi nonsense topic nikal kar writer ke sath misbehave karte ho fir story band.. Kahi tum wohi to nahi Jo ye story band karneke liye aaye ho...
 

Narayan14

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Mene koi misbehave nehi kiya bhai or mujhe jo laga wo me bol raha hu agar writer ko mere comments se koi aitraz he to me nehi karunga. Sorry.
 
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Dr. Zeus

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Bahot hi Sandar story h Bhai aapki aur achcha Laga ki Manu ko aapne bohot hi mehanati dikhaya h sath hi aage aane wale Situation ka samna karne k liye use bachpan se hi Taiyar kar rahe h. Yhi chise aapki story ko bhid se alag la kr khadi karti h. Keep updating, God bless you...




thanks bro....


bro ...apni taraf se toh imaandaari se likh raha hun per aapko achi lagi uske liye dil se thanks ...


thanks for reading & staying with us ...
 

Dr. Zeus

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Bhai aap wapas aage Dil khud kardiya aap ne.. bhai aap Apne tarike se hi kahani continue kare aise hi padhne Mai aanand milta hai.. 1 / 2 logo ki wajah se ham se aur hamare pyar se naraj na hona Bhai.. aap Apne tarike se hi kahani Ka hame maje dete rahiye ham sabi readers aap ke sath hai.. Kuch hi aise writers hai jis Ka story bahut khubsurat hai aur update bhi continue aata hai.. unmai se ek aap bhi ho jis ki kahani bakai mai romanchkari hai.. thank you


thanks bhai ....


bhai aapke support ke liye thanks bhai kahani shuru karne se pehle hi clear likha tha ki jitna hoga imaandari se likhunga ...or bhai main naraz nahi hun aap sabhi ka sath or support kisi ke in saawaloon se jada acha hai so aapka yeh dost likhta rahega aise hi bhaag jaana apni fitrat nahi hai ...per aapne jo kaha uske liye dil se thanks aapko ...

thanks for reading & staying with us...
 

Dr. Zeus

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bhai manu ka apne ek business suru kara do jo sirf manu to pta ho or kisi ko pta na chala bad mai show kar dna jab koi use nicha dikya to



thanks bro ....


aapka suggestion kamal ka hai .....


thanks for reading & staying with us......
 
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