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Tum phir aa gaya aacha Bata uska bachpan bada hua lakin Kya waha koi bacho Wala kaam tha Jo tum bol rha h ab har story tumhare point se nahi likha jayega agar jayeda hi tumhe experience h story likh main review duga tumhe kaise likhte hKahaani padhi he ki nehi jab mere sab reply dekhoge to pata chal jayega bhai or rahi baat manu ko monu bolne ki to apne bachpan se manu ko cute cute bol rahe ho esliye mujhe manu se monu naam thik laga bolna. Dusri baat mujhe problem nehi he par aap koi bhi story padhlo kisi bhi story me kisi ka bachpan etna lamba nehi he 63 updates ho chuka he sirf etne me, agar esme training me kya kya kiya add kardo to bachpan hi 100 update ho jayega. Pata he ki stories me bachpan honi chahiye par etna lamba bhi nehi ki story boring lagne lage or mujhe ab boring lag rahi he !! Sujestion ki baat karo to me bahat sujestion diya he aap agar dekhe to unmese koi bhi bura nehi he. Last 3,4 update ke reply nehi diya he kyu ki me jab manu bada hoga to ek sath dene ka socha tha kher apko bura laga to sorry.
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