Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

[Dr. Zeus]

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[Dr. Zeus]

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agla update jald hi post hoga ....


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[Yash420]

Guru Dev ?
क्या कहूं कोई शब्द ही नहीं मिल रहा है
भाई कहानी दिल को छू गया है
अब ना कोई सिकायत है आप से ना कोई गिला
सायद दिल जिसे ढुंढ रहा था वह यही आ के मिला

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Guru Dev ?
क्या कहूं कोई शब्द ही नहीं मिल रहा है
भाई कहानी दिल को छू गया है
अब ना कोई सिकायत है आप से ना कोई गिला
सायद दिल जिसे ढुंढ रहा था वह यही आ के मिला

thanks bro....

aisa kya mil gaya bhai aapko ...abhi toh ache bhale critics ko dekha hai ...per aapko jo bhi acha lage bhai bata dena or jo galat lage usme bhi koi gila baaki na rakhna pyaare bhai..kyuki aap jaisa acha or pyaara dost jo bhi kahega usme apna koi na koi bhala hi hoga ...chahe aap kami batao ya koi achi baat har baat ke liye aapka yeh bhai tyaar hai ... ??

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[Yash420]

thanks bro....

aisa kya mil gaya bhai aapko ...abhi toh ache bhale critics ko dekha hai ...per aapko jo bhi acha lage bhai bata dena or jo galat lage usme bhi koi gila baaki na rakhna pyaare bhai..kyuki aap jaisa acha or pyaara dost jo bhi kahega usme apna koi na koi bhala hi hoga ...chahe aap kami batao ya koi achi baat har baat ke liye aapka yeh bhai tyaar hai ... ??

thanks for reading & staying with us...

Bhai aaj kal galti batane se author log
Ignor ker rahe he
Baki sach main Bhai Lajawab story hai aap ki or yeh main Dil se keh Raha hoon

 

[Rohit1988]

thanks bro.....

aapko achi lagi story acha laga jaankar .....
kirdar aapko acha laga yeh bhi acha laga jaankar ...

kahani me pyaar nafrat or kismat ka role eham hai yeh kahani ki beginning se hi clear hai ...
or bhai ji yeh kahani adultery section me hai toh kahani me sex na ho yeh ho nahi sakta ...jahan sex hoga wahan sex hoga ...main sirf kirdar ko pyaar or nafrat ke sath uljha kar hi nahi rakh sakta ...kahani real life se inspire hai ...toh jo kuch real life me hota hai woh sab hoga ...yahan kirdar ke sath sahi judge na karun toh kahani ke sath imandari kaise kar paunga ...apne apna point rakha ...khulkar rakha uske liye thanks ...kahani me jo sahi laga maine likha hai ...main aapka point bhi samjh raha hun per aap bhi samjho ...jab insaan real life me sex karta hai waise hi kahani me likha gaya hai ...so what is wrong with it???
khair aapka comment padkar acha laga ...isper bhi dhyaan dunga aage per kahani adultery section me hai toh koi toh wajah rahi hogi ya nahi??? or jab reader adultery section me aya hai toh zahir hai padkar aaya hai ...or agar apne adultery ko hi story justifies na kare toh koi bhi reader khud ko cheat feel karega so bhai kahani me sex toh hoga hi varna jo sex padne aaye hain unke sath cheat hoga jo kahin bhi sahi nahi hoga ..or agar kahani sirf love story hoti toh kahani ka section bhi romance hota ....so aap sirf enjoy karo ..

thanks for reading & staying with us....

Ham aapke sath hai aap likhte raho or ham padhte rahege

God Bless u bhai ji

 

[paarth]

thank bro...

welcome here ...
main jo dil me aaye likh deta hun usme moral lagta hai aapko toh or achi baat hai ...aajke time me agar kahin se moral baat mile toh aap jaise bahut se logon ka reaction yahi hota hai ...per jinko samjh me aa jaye meri mehnat unke liye hai ...agar sirf kahani enjoy karna chahte hai jisme sirf acha ho toh bhai fantasy kahani bahut si hongi wahan dekh lena yeh kahani real life ke har kirdar se inspired hai ...toh jo samjh me aayega woh likhunga ...aapne acha kaha ...usper bhi try karunga ki hotel ka part khatam ho jata per suspense kya hota usme ...manu ka reaction aage kya hoga yeh bhi dekhna hoga ...

thanks for reading & staying with us...

Bhai morals achee se pata hain aur life main follow bhi krte hai but Jahan zaroorat naa ho vaha dalna is like wastage of morals talent as well as time and space you're using.. Rahi baat suspense ki to woh bhi dekhenge hi aur jo apne kaha ki koi dusri story dekh lena Uske liye ye bata dun mai bhi koi bhi story aise hi nahi padhne baith jata.. Story aChi hoti hai tabhi readers Wait krte hai aur appreciate bhi but don't make their appreciation your ego while answering back kyonki readers ho banate bhi hai aur bigaadte bhi agar aap sabhi ko aise hi bologe ki koi aur padhlo then Seriously I don't wanna see your Thread closed and story left incomplete.. This story is good so I hope ours and yours journey will continue along with story.. Waiting for next update

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Bhai aaj kal galti batane se author log
Ignor ker rahe he
Baki sach main Bhai Lajawab story hai aap ki or yeh main Dil se keh Raha hoon

bhai aapko jo acha lage ya bura lage aap mujhse khulkar keh sakte ho ..bas ek baat hai jisse main humesha dur rahta hun woh hai jab samne koi or na ho tab uski baat ..or us topic per main bachta hun kuch kehne se ...jaisa aapne kaha ki or author log ignore kar dete hain ,,,bhai main koshish karta hun kabhi kisi or ki baat me na padun aapko agar mera koi udpdate acha lage toh aap kehdo na lage toh khulkar kehdena mujhe bura nahi lagega balki aage or kaam karne or aapke negative ko positive me badalne me mazza aayega ...yeh mera manna hai ...or apna funda saaf hai ...criticism se aapko sikhne ko agar mile toh isse acha kya hoga bhala??per criticism sirf hum apni jhel sakte hain bhai usme jo samne hai nahi uska kya kar sakte hain ...toh plz dusre ki baat se mujhe dur rakhna bhai baaki mujhe jitna criticize karo chalega ...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Ham aapke sath hai aap likhte raho or ham padhte rahege

God Bless u bhai ji

thanks bhai aapne yeh samjha bahut acha laga jaankar plz mujhe galat mat samjhna kyuki main bhi janta hun sabhi ko khush nahi rakha ja sakta hai per koshish karta hun jitna jada hosake sabhi ki wishes ki respect kar sakun ...or sabhi ke suggestion ko respectfully add kar sakun ...apne yeh samjha bahut hai bhai ...
thanks aap such me nice person hain bhai ...thank you so much main bhi aapki wish ka dhyaan rakhunga or jahan sahi lagega wahan aap khud dekhenge ki kahani me aapki wishes kaise puri hoti hai ...hai sex na dalne ki wish puri nahi kar sakta uske liye sorry bhai ...kyuki aapke sath or bhai bhi hain jinki wish ki respect bhi karni hai so aage aap bhi smart hai ...

thank u so much consern samjhne ke liye ..

 

[Rohit1988]

thanks bhai aapne yeh samjha bahut acha laga jaankar plz mujhe galat mat samjhna kyuki main bhi janta hun sabhi ko khush nahi rakha ja sakta hai per koshish karta hun jitna jada hosake sabhi ki wishes ki respect kar sakun ...or sabhi ke suggestion ko respectfully add kar sakun ...apne yeh samjha bahut hai bhai ...
thanks aap such me nice person hain bhai ...thank you so much main bhi aapki wish ka dhyaan rakhunga or jahan sahi lagega wahan aap khud dekhenge ki kahani me aapki wishes kaise puri hoti hai ...hai sex na dalne ki wish puri nahi kar sakta uske liye sorry bhai ...kyuki aapke sath or bhai bhi hain jinki wish ki respect bhi karni hai so aage aap bhi smart hai ...

thank u so much consern samjhne ke liye ..

Bhai ji

Aap pareshan na ho Jaha story me sex rahe aapke hisab se aa do me vo skip kar ke padhuga mujhe story se matlab hai jisme insaniyat or real life ki jhalak honi chahiye mujhe sex se Nafrat nahi hai bass mera manna hai ek achi story me emotion, action, drama, trill, respect , adventure, pure love etc. Hona chahiye

But aaj kal ke story me sex ki prathmikta jayada ho gai hai jise ham garam Masala kehte hai
Aapki story bahut hi unique hai or Manu ka caracter bahut hi fantastic hai bass uski masumiyat or innocent or Caring hai use sex se kharab nahi karna bass itna kaha mene agar meri baat ka aapko ya kisi bhi aapke reader ko bura laga ho to tahe dil se maafi chahuga
Aap likhte rahe or ham ye story ke 500 + update enjoy kar sake
God Bless u bhai ji
Ham aapke sath rahege is story ke last tak bass aap is story ko jaldi me maat likhna banao ise ek legend story jo sabke dil hi nahi rooh bhi chu le