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Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

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Dr. Zeus

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Bhai morals achee se pata hain aur life main follow bhi krte hai but Jahan zaroorat naa ho vaha dalna is like wastage of morals talent as well as time and space you're using.. Rahi baat suspense ki to woh bhi dekhenge hi aur jo apne kaha ki koi dusri story dekh lena Uske liye ye bata dun mai bhi koi bhi story aise hi nahi padhne baith jata.. Story aChi hoti hai tabhi readers Wait krte hai aur appreciate bhi but don't make their appreciation your ego while answering back kyonki readers ho banate bhi hai aur bigaadte bhi agar aap sabhi ko aise hi bologe ki koi aur padhlo then Seriously I don't wanna see your Thread closed and story left incomplete.. This story is good so I hope ours and yours journey will continue along with story.. Waiting for next update


bhai baat yahan moral ki thi hi nahi aapne pucha tha toh bata diya ki koi ek person bhi agar isse sahi samjhega ya kisi or ko samjha sakega toh yeh moral apni jagah maine uske liye likha tha ...or baat rahi ego ki toh bhai yahan ka koi bhi regular friend yeh aapko khud bata dega ki main ego jaisi cheez per khud ko dur rakh leta hun ego or humra 36 ka nahi 66 ka aankda hai...bhai ek baar khud sochna konsa writer chahega ki uska regular reader dost silent reader ban jaye ya story per naa aaye ulta hum toh chahte hain ki har silent reader bhi regular reader ki tarah reaction de kahani me koi kami lage toh khulkar kahe per yahan kami jo aapne kahi maine bhi maan li socha tha moral se kisi ek ko bhi sahi path mil sake toh acha hoga per aapne toh is baat ko hi ego samjh liya bhai ...

nahi bhai aisa nahi hai yeh baat ego ki kabhi thi hi nahi or maine kabhi koshish ki hai kabhi kisi bhi reader ko offend feel ho warna har kisi ko reply nahi deta ...per aap is baat per bhi ego ya kuch or le aaoge toh bhai apne ko har reader se judna acha lagta hai ..isme ego jaisa kuch nahi hai ...insaan hun jab jaisa feel karta hun waisa likhta hun ...apne ko toh critism ki habbit hai ...usme naya kuch nahi hai ...per iske chalte aap ise ego na samjho kahani aap sabke liye likh raha hun ...

or yahan main thoda greedy hun apne har dost ko lekar (main reader ko dost hi manta hun) main kisi ko silent nahi choadna chahta ache se pado or enjoy karo bhai ...kahani aap sab ke liye hai ...jahan lage moral bore kar rahe hain thoda skip kardena ..kahani real life se inspire hai toh jab jo samjh me aata hai likh deta hun usme aapko agar moral laga toh sorry bhai per . jab jaisi feeling ho or waisa na likhun toh woh bemaani hoga ...jo sahi nahi hai ...
i believe also in u ...u also get my point ...and i also believe that ur more smart person then u show ur self...u also think about my side & also feel into putt ur feet into my shoes when u can understand what was my adject point on that time..

kahani per sath bane rahena ...
 
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Dr. Zeus

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Bhai ji

Aap pareshan na ho Jaha story me sex rahe aapke hisab se aa do me vo skip kar ke padhuga mujhe story se matlab hai jisme insaniyat or real life ki jhalak honi chahiye mujhe sex se Nafrat nahi hai bass mera manna hai ek achi story me emotion, action, drama, trill, respect , adventure, pure love etc. Hona chahiye

But aaj kal ke story me sex ki prathmikta jayada ho gai hai jise ham garam Masala kehte hai
Aapki story bahut hi unique hai or Manu ka caracter bahut hi fantastic hai bass uski masumiyat or innocent or Caring hai use sex se kharab nahi karna bass itna kaha mene agar meri baat ka aapko ya kisi bhi aapke reader ko bura laga ho to tahe dil se maafi chahuga
Aap likhte rahe or ham ye story ke 500 + update enjoy kar sake
God Bless u bhai ji
Ham aapke sath rahege is story ke last tak bass aap is story ko jaldi me maat likhna banao ise ek legend story jo sabke dil hi nahi rooh bhi chu le



bhai aap such me bahut ache or smart person hain ...kahani me sex hona apni jarorat hai ...sex also part of life but only sex into life is totaly wrong life is full of emotion when u have also other emotions like ,,anger,happiness,action,crying,thrilling, love, hate nd many more ...this story inspire by real life so koshish toh ki hai har emotion isme imaandari se dikha sakun sex usme se ek hai...har cheez abhi sikh raha hun toh manta hun galti karunga bhi or jahan galti karun toh mera har dost tab mujhe meri galti bata de yahi ummid me sabse karta hun ...aapse bhi yahi ummid hai ...

or jahan tak sex ka sawal hai ...woh apne time se aayega ..per sirf sex hi hoga kahani me toh kahani ka matlab hi kya hai???

jahan bhi aapko suggestion dene ka dil kare bindass bata dena ya koi acha idea ho toh bhi bindass keh dena ...agar posible hua toh zaroor add karunga bhai ...

 

Rohit1988

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bhai aap such me bahut ache or smart person hain ...kahani me sex hona apni jarorat hai ...sex also part of life but only sex into life is totaly wrong life is full of emotion when u have also other emotions like ,,anger,happiness,action,crying,thrilling, love, hate nd many more ...this story inspire by real life so koshish toh ki hai har emotion isme imaandari se dikha sakun sex usme se ek hai...har cheez abhi sikh raha hun toh manta hun galti karunga bhi or jahan galti karun toh mera har dost tab mujhe meri galti bata de yahi ummid me sabse karta hun ...aapse bhi yahi ummid hai ...

or jahan tak sex ka sawal hai ...woh apne time se aayega ..per sirf sex hi hoga kahani me toh kahani ka matlab hi kya hai???

jahan bhi aapko suggestion dene ka dil kare bindass bata dena ya koi acha idea ho toh bhi bindass keh dena ...agar posible hua toh zaroor add karunga bhai ...



Ham to aapke kayal hai aap aage badhe vaha bhi ham aapke sath khare dikhege aap likhte rahe ham aapka picha karte rahege
Aap aapne hisab se likhe bass usme mashala thora kam sakhe hame chatpata pasand par abhi Corona ka time hai to hajme ki bhi parvah Karni parti hai
 

paarth

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bhai baat yahan moral ki thi hi nahi aapne pucha tha toh bata diya ki koi ek person bhi agar isse sahi samjhega ya kisi or ko samjha sakega toh yeh moral apni jagah maine uske liye likha tha ...or baat rahi ego ki toh bhai yahan ka koi bhi regular friend yeh aapko khud bata dega ki main ego jaisi cheez per khud ko dur rakh leta hun ego or humra 36 ka nahi 66 ka aankda hai...bhai ek baar khud sochna konsa writer chahega ki uska regular reader dost silent reader ban jaye ya story per naa aaye ulta hum toh chahte hain ki har silent reader bhi regular reader ki tarah reaction de kahani me koi kami lage toh khulkar kahe per yahan kami jo aapne kahi maine bhi maan li socha tha moral se kisi ek ko bhi sahi path mil sake toh acha hoga per aapne toh is baat ko hi ego samjh liya bhai ...

nahi bhai aisa nahi hai yeh baat ego ki kabhi thi hi nahi or maine kabhi koshish ki hai kabhi kisi bhi reader ko offend feel ho warna har kisi ko reply nahi deta ...per aap is baat per bhi ego ya kuch or le aaoge toh bhai apne ko har reader se judna acha lagta hai ..isme ego jaisa kuch nahi hai ...insaan hun jab jaisa feel karta hun waisa likhta hun ...apne ko toh critism ki habbit hai ...usme naya kuch nahi hai ...per iske chalte aap ise ego na samjho kahani aap sabke liye likh raha hun ...

or yahan main thoda greedy hun apne har dost ko lekar (main reader ko dost hi manta hun) main kisi ko silent nahi choadna chahta ache se pado or enjoy karo bhai ...kahani aap sab ke liye hai ...jahan lage moral bore kar rahe hain thoda skip kardena ..kahani real life se inspire hai toh jab jo samjh me aata hai likh deta hun usme aapko agar moral laga toh sorry bhai per . jab jaisi feeling ho or waisa na likhun toh woh bemaani hoga ...jo sahi nahi hai ...
i believe also in u ...u also get my point ...and i also believe that ur more smart person then u show ur self...u also think about my side & also feel into putt ur feet into my shoes when u can understand what was my adject point on that time..

kahani per sath bane rahena ...
Mitti dalo is baat p.. Let's continue Story.. Wait rahega next update ka
 
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