Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

[Bunny..]

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[Jaguaar]

Nice update

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[Jaguaar]

Fantastic update

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[Jaguaar]

BAHUT HI SANDAR UPDATE HAI BHAI

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[Jaguaar]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

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[Jaguaar]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

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[Jaguaar]

nice update. minister ko uski aukaat dikha di par inspector kuch jyada hi uchhal raha tha usko bhi line pe le aaya aryan ..

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[Jaguaar]

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[The king]

Main ek new story start karna chahta hu jo The 15 shades of Rick se match karti hai. Usme bahot saare scenes usse copy kiye hai. Par bahot kuch usse alag bhi hai. Aur usme aisa bahot kuch hai jo shayad asli uss story ke writer ko pasand naa aaye.

Aur mujhe bola gaya tha bina writer ki permission ke main start nhi kar sakta par phir bhi main kar raha hu kuch changes karke.

Aur starting ke pahle hi bata deta hu bahot-bahot kuch copy paste hogaa.

Toh aaplog bataiye mujhe kya start karu.

Aapka answer iss post ko leke tag karke bole.

Bhai pahle aap is story ko complete kijiye bad me ye bhi start kar dena par start karne se pahle kisi mod se baat kar lijiyega warna kuch problem ho sakti he 1 kam kijiye aap siraj patel bhai se hi puch lena ki aap ye story likh sakte ho ya nahi

 

[The king]

kuch scenes hi copied hoge naa....aur wo bhi ditto to nahi hi kar doge aap usme bhi apni likhayi ka thoda jaadu to daaloge hi....
aur naam bhi alag hoga...dikkat nahi honi chahiye fir to..kyunki bahut si stories aisi mil jaayengi jaha pe kuch baatein match karti hai...

Bhai me bhi aap ki baat se sahmat hu par ho sake to pahle hi iske bare me siraj patel bhai se bhi puch le to achha rahega