Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

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Introduction​

Yeh kahani hai Delhi sehar ke ek jaane maane businessman​

Mr. Vikram Malhotra,Malhotra group of companies ke malik ke family ki.​

Jeet Malhotra- (Father of Vikram Malhotra) Malhotra group ki neev inhone hi rakhi thi. Filhaal retire hochuke hai. Inke 2 bete hai aur 1 beti hai. Bada beta Vikram aur chota beta Suraj aur beti Supriya. Inki Shaadi hochuki hai.​

Vikram jaha bahot hi suljha hua aur shant aadmi hai wahi suraj bahot hi khurafat dimaag wala aadmi hai.​

Vikram Malhotra- Ek bahot hi khush mizaaz insaan hai jo apne family ko bahot pyaar karte hai. Inke paas paise ki koi kami nhi hai bahot hi shaan-o-shaukat ki zindagi hai inki.​

Rashmi Malhotra- (Wife of Vikram Malhotra) Ek bahot hi suljhi hui aurat hai. Inki duniya inki family hai. Inki aur Vikram ki love marriage hui thi. Aur inka pyaar aaj bhi waisa hi hai jitna pahle thaa,infact aur jyaada badh gaya hai. Yeh ek college mein MBA ki professor hai. Ek businessman ki wife hone ke baad bhi woh college mein lecturer ki job karti hai.​

Suraj Malhotra- Yeh bahot hi chalak aur lalchi kisam ka insaan hai. Apne bade bhai se hadd se jyaada nafrat karta hai(Reason baad mein pata chalega)lekin yeh chiz kabhi bhi jahir nhi hone di.​

Meenakshi Malhotra- (Wife of Suraj Malhotra) Yeh bhi apne pati ki tarah hi chalak kisam ki aurat hai aur but apne family se pyaar bhi bahot karti hai.​

Supriya Khanna- Yeh thodi ghamandi kisam ki aurat hai. Inke pati ka bhi achha khasa business hai. Yeh hero ko sehan nhi kar sakti. Kyoki usse lagta hai uski wajah se uske bachho ki uske maayke mein koi value nhi hai. Mauka milte hi usse nichha dikhane ki koshish karti.​

Deepak Khanna- (Husband of Supriya khanna). Yeh achha aadmi hai. Yeh sabse pyaar se peshata hai. Kisi se kabhi koi jhagra nhi. Hero ko pasand karta hai. But apni biwi ki wajah se naapasand karna ka naatak karta hai. Kyoki usse pata hai uske bachhe hi nalayak hai. Isme hero ki kya galti.​

Vikram aur Rashmi ke 3 bachhe hai :-​

1) Ankit Malhotra- Yeh Vikram aur Rashmi ka bada beta. Yeh bilkul apne Chacha ke upar gaya hai. Kyoki yeh bachpan se hi usse jyaada close raha hai isiliye uski sabhi aadat isme bhi hai. Padhai puri hochuki hai aur filhal dikhawe ke liye apne papa ke saath office join kiya hai.​

2 ) Neha Malhotra- Yeh Vikram aur Rashmi ki badi beti. Yeh bilkul apne apni Maa ke jaisi hai bilkul uski parchai hai. Apne chote bhai mein iski jaan basti hai. Yeh abhi post graduation ke 2nd year mein hai.​

3) Aryan Malhotra(Hero)- Yeh hai Vikram aur Rashmi ka chota beta. Apni family ke har member se beintehaan nafrat karta hai. Pahle aisa nhi thaa but iski zindagi mein ek aisa toofan aaya jisse yeh aisa hogya hai. Yeh abhi post graduation ke 1st year mein hai.​

Suraj aur Meenakshi ke 2 bachhe hai :-​

1) Raj Malhotra- Yeh Suraj aur Meenakshi ka bada beta. Thoda bewakoof type ka ladka hai. Apna dimaag kam use karta hai. Abhi school mein hai( 9th Standard).​

2) Soniya Malhotra- Yeh Suraj aur Meenakshi ki choti beti. Yeh dimaag wali ladki hai. But bahot hi badmaash hai. Isme Aryan ki jaan basti hai. Isko koi bhi kuch bolne se darta hai kyoki isko dukh dena matlab Aryan ko dukh dena hota hai. Yeh bhi Raj ke saath school mein hai same standard.​

Deepak aur Supriya ke 2 bachhe hai:-​

1) Shivam Khanna- Yeh Deepak ka bada beta. Aryan ke same age mein hai. Yeh bhi apni maa ki soch hi rakhta hai. Galat sangat mein rehta hai isiliye har chiz mein pichhe hai. Yeh bhi apni maa ki tarah Aryan ko pasand nhi karta. Kyoki isko sabkoi usse compare karte hai. Jo isse bilkul pasand nhi.​

2) Dipali Khanna: Yeh bhi Deepak ki choti beti. Yeh bhi Aryan ki age ki hai. Yeh padhai mein thik hai. Isse bas apne aap se matlab hai. Aryan se kabhi kabhi baat toh karti hai but thoda rudely apni maa ki wajah se. Yeh log bhi Delhi mein hi rehte hai.​

Inka ghar ek 2 floor ka bunglow hai. Jisme nichhe ke floor mein 4 rooms hai aur upar ke floor mein 4 rooms hai.​

(Hero ke relation ke respect mein)​

Nichhe ke 4 rooms mein se ek room maa papa dusra chacha chachi teesra dadaji ka hai aur last wala guest room hai. Nichhe dining table hai jaha sablog ek saath khana khaate hai.​

Upar ke 4 rooms mein se ek Neha ka dusra Ankit ka teesra Aryan ka aur last wala Raj aur Soniya ka hai but Raj usme akela hi sota hai kyoki Soniya ko Aryan ke saath sona hi pasand hai.​

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Update 5​

Aryan ko apne dadaji ke baare mein sunn bahot achha lagta hai. Par woh kuch keh nhi pata. Sanjay bhi yeh samaj jata hai toh woh bolta hai.​

Sanjay: Dekho beta jo hogya hai usko toh hum badal nhi sakte. But unki achhi yaadon ke saath humhe apne jivan mein aage badhna chahiye. Tumhare dadaji tumko aisi haalat mein dekh ke khush honge kya. Unko bhi dukh hogaa tumko aise dekh. Isiliye ab dukhi hona chor do aur apne jivan mein aage badho.​

Aryan: Ji.​

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad Aryan bolta hai. Aap yaha mujhse kuch bolne aaye thee.​

Sanjay: Aree haa. Main baton baton mein bhul gaya. Maine yeh puchne aaya thaa tum ab aage kya karna chahte ho. Mera matlab aage ki padhai se thaa.​

Aryan: Mujhe business karna hai. So usi ke according mujhe addmission lena chahiye. But mere 12th ka marksheet aur certificate toh Delhi mein hi hoga. Aur shayad ab tak toh result out bhi hogya hoga.​

Sanjay: Tum uski chinta mat karo. Delhi mein mera bachpan ka dost rehta hai main usse keh ke tumhare ceriticates yaha pe mangwa leta hu.​

Aryan: Ji thik hai. Waise mujhe aapse aur bhi kuch puchna thaa.​

Sanjay: Ha ha pucho kya puchna hai.​

Aryan: Ji woh aapne bola thaa main ek superhuman ke jaisa hu.​

Sanjay: Superhuman ke jaisa nhi tum Superhuman hi ho. Tumhari physical aur mental strength normal logo mukable hadd se bahot jyaada hai.​

Aryan: Achha. Toh mujhe aapse ek permission leni thi.​

Sanjay: Kaisi permission.​

Aryan: Main apni inn shaktiyon ka istemal karna chahta hu.​

Sanjay: Par. Agar tumne yeh shaktiyan istemal ki aur agar unlogo ko yeh pata chal gaya toh tumhare liye bahot mushkile aajayengi. Shayad tumhari jaan bhi jaa sakti hai.​

Aryan: Ji main janta hu. Par mujhe business karna hai aur uske liye bahot bade amount ki jarurat padhti hai aur isiliye main Underground fight jaha betting hoti hai waha pe apni physical strength istemal kar sakta hu jisse mujhe amount bhi mil jayegaa aur shaktiyon ka use bhi.​

Sanjay: Ummh. Thik hai par meri kuch sharte hai. Agar tum woh mante ho toh tum yeh kar sakte ho.​

Aryan: Kaisi sharte.​

Sanjay: Tum apni inn shaktiyon aur formula ke baare mein kisi ko nhi bataoge. Kabhi apni identity reveal nhi karoge. Apni taqat par ghamand nhi karoge. Kabhi bhi apni shaktiyan khule aam use nhi karoge. Uss formula ke wajah se tumhe gussa bahot jyaada aayega agar gusse mein tumne kisi ko maar diya toh woh wahi pe mar jayega isiliye kabhi bhi kisi jhagre mein nhi padoge jab tak bahot jaruri naa ho. Aur jab bhi apni yeh shaktiyan use karoge tab humesha mask pahen ke hi karoge. Aur ek aakhri shart tumhare business ke liye main bhi kuch amount dunga jiske liye tum mana nhi karoge.​

Aryan: Mujhe aapki saari sharte manzur sivaay aakhri wali chor ke.​

Sanjay: Kyo. Kya tum humlogo ko apna nhi mante. Jo mana kar rahe ho.​

Aryan: Ji nhi aisi baat bilkul nhi hai. Maine aap dono ko pure dil se apna mana hai. Agar aap nhi hote toh shayad aaj main zinda bhi naa hotaa.​

Sanjay: Toh bas main kuch nhi jaanta. Waise bhi ab humara tumhare sivaay aur koi nhi hai.​

Isiliye tumhe meri saari sharte maani hogi. Warna tum apni shaktiyan use nhi karoge.​

Aryan: Ji thik hai. Mujhe aapki yeh shart bhi manzur hai. Par jab mujhe zarurat hogi tab main aapse maang lunga. Tab tak ke liye main apne dum pe sab karungaa.​

Sanjay: Thik hai.​

Aryan: Achha kya aap kisi aise ko jaante hai jo mujhe fighting skills sikha sakta hai.​

Sanjay: Tum chinta mat karo. Kal tumhare teacher tumhare samne honge.​

Aryan: Thank You.​

Sanjay: Chalo chalke khaana kha lo.​

Aise hi woh din guzar jaata hai. Agle din se Aryan har tarah ki fighting skills sikhna start kardeta hai. Jise woh bahot hi achhi tarah se aur jaldi sikhta hai uss formula ki wajah se.​

1 hafte baad Aryan ke documents bhi aajate hai aur uska Mumbai ke best Business college mein admission hojata hai kyoki Aryan ne apne school mein Top kiya thaa. Isiliye usse Scholorship bhi mili thi.​

Mumbai mein human riots ke wajah se government ne saare schools and colleges band kar diye thee jiske wajah se abhi bhi addmissions chal rahe thee.​

Toh Aryan bhi apna Addmission kara leta hai. Aur waha usse pata chalta hai ke classes 10 din ke baad start hongi.​

Toh inn 10 dino mein Aryan apni saari fighting skills bahot achhe se sikh leta hai. Uske teachers bhi hairan the. Jo fights sikhne mein kisi insaan ko saalo lag jaate hai wahi Aryan ne woh fights bas kuch hafto mein hi sikh li woh bhi bahot achhe se.​

Yeh saari fights sikhne se Aryan ki body jo pahle se hi strong thi woh aur bhi Strong hogyi thi.​

Aise hi 10 din ke sham ko Aryan apne liye kuch shopping karne jaata hai kyoki agle din se college start horaha thaa.​

Woh shopping karne ek mall mein jaata hai waha woh apne liye thodi shopping karta hai aur Sanjay aur Sanjana ke liye bhi shopping karta hai. Shopping ke baad jab Aryan ghar aaraha hota hai tab achanak uski bike ke saamne ek ladki road cross karte hue galti se uski bike ke saamne aajati hai. Aryan jaldi se break mar deta nhi toh accident pakka thaa. Phir bhi woh ladki ghir jaati hai.​

Aryan jaldi se bike se utar kar usko paas jaata hai aur puchta hai​

Aryan: Aree aap thik toh hai aapko chott toh nhi lagi.​

Ladki: Ji main thik hu. Woh actually thoda jaldi mein thi isiliye road cross karne ke chakar mein galti se aapke bike ke saamne aagyi. Aap thik hai naa.​

Aryan: Ji main thik hu. But aap thoda sambhal ke chaliye agar sahi time pe break nhi lagta toh aapko bahot chott lag sakti thii.​

Ladki: Ji main dhyaan rakhungi. And I am sorry once again.​

Aryan: Koi baat nhi. Agar aapko kahi jaana ho toh boliye main chorr deta hu.​

Ladki: Nhi nhi. Main yaha pass mein hi rehti hu main chali jaungi. Aap pareshan naa ho.​

Aryan: Achha thik hai.​

Yeh bol Aryan apne raaste aur woh Ladki apne raaste nikal jaati hai.​

Aryan ghar aakar Sanjay aur Sanjana ko unke liye ki gayi shopping ke shoppers pakda deta hai. Jisse dekh woh bahot khush hote hai.​

Uske baad Aryan fresh hoke kuch der apni fight practice karta hai aur dinner karke so jaata hai.​

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Update 9​

Bookie: Thik hai chal agar aaj tune uss Undertaker ko maar diyaa toh aaj yaha ki jitni bhi kamayi hogi woh sab teraa. ​

Aryan: Manzur hai. Chal ab jaldi naam announce karwa.​

Bookie: Rukh jaa bachhe mujhe pata hai tujhe marne ki jaldi hai abhi 1 match baaki hai uske baad tera naam aayegaa. Tab tak ke liye apne bhagwan ko yaad karle aur bol de ke tu unke paas jaaraha hai. Tab tak ke liye aakhri baar apna naam bata de. ​

Aryan: Likh Black Beast. ​

Bookie: Naam toh achha hai. But kisi kaam ka nhi hai. Yeh naam aaj pahli aur aakhri baar main hi bolungaa. Uske baad humesha ke liye yeh naam kho jayegaa. Meri taraf se best of luck. ​

[ Aryan jab se yaha aaya thaa tab se usne apna mask pehna hua thaa isiliye bookie ne uska chehra nhi dekha hai ]. ​

10 minutes baad Aryan ka naam announce hota hai. ​

Aryan ring ke andar jaata hai toh usko dekh kar Undertaker hasne lagta hai aur chilla kar uss bookie ko bulata hai. ​

Undertaker: Kyo be tere paas aadmi khatam hogye hai kyaa jo iss bachhe ko aaj death to death khelna bhej diya hai. ​

Bookie: Bhai maine isse bahot samjhaya par ise hi marne ka shock chadha hai toh main kya karu. ​

Aryan jo itni der se inki baate sunn raha tha woh bolta hai​

Aryan: Suna hai koi bhi tere samne 3 mins se jyaada tikk nhi paaya hai. Chal main tujhe aaj 5 mins deta hu. Mujhe maar ke dikha. Agar tune mujhe 5 mins ke andar maar diya toh thik warna uske agle hi min mein main tujhe maar dungaa. ​

Waha lagbhag hazaro aadmi thee jo Aryan ki yeh baate sunke jor jor se hasne lagte hai. Koi bolta hai yeh pagalkhane se bhagg aaya hai toh koi bolta hai yeh aaj apna aakhri din yaha pura karne aaya hai. ​

Undertaker uski baate sunke jor jor se hasta hai. Aur bolta hai ​

Undertaker: Are bachhe 3 mins toh durr ki baat hai. Main toh tujhe 1 min mein maar dungaa. Tujhe aaj marna hi hai toh chal aaja​

Phir match start hota hai. ​

Undertaker Aryan ke muh pe ek jordaar punch marta hai. Aryan durr jaake girta hai. Yeh dekh waha sab Undertaker ke naam ki hooting start kardete hai. ​

Undertaker: Abhi bhi time hai wapas chala jaa bachhe. Main tujhe chorr deta hu. ​

Aryan khada hote hue 4 mins 10 sec. ​

Undertaker yeh sunn gusse mein uske pet mein ek laat mar deta hai jisse woh wapas udd ke durr jaa girta hai. ​

Aryan phir khada hote hue 3 mins. ​

Issbaar Undertaker usko punch marne aata hai toh Aryan uske punch ko block kar usko punch maar deta hai( Jorse nhi)​

Punch lagte hi Undertaker thoda pichhe hojaata hai. Jisse uska gussa bahot badh jaata hai. Woh bolta hai​

Undertaker: Abhi tak toh tere saath bachha samaj ke khel raha thaa. Par ab aur nhi. ​

Yeh bol woh Aryan ko marne aata par Aryan uske waar ko duck kar uske peeth mein ek mukka marte hue aaj tera recore toot gaya aur kuch der baad tu humesha ke liye toot jayegaa. ​

Waha khade hazaro log shock mein thee jab maine Undertaker ke record ko todd diya. Ab waha pe unki taraf se koi awaaz nhi aarahi thii. ​

Undertaker apne record tootne se bahot jyaada hairan aur gusse mein hota hai. ​

Woh aake Aryan ke gardan ko pichhe se apne bazuyon mein jakar leta hai. Aryan apne sir ko jor se uske chest mein marta hai. Toh uska balance bigadta hai aur Aryan uski pakad se azaad hojaata hai. ​

Aryan usko dekhta hai aur bolta hai tere paas aur 40 second hai maar sakta hai toh mar le. ​

Woh daud ke aata hai toh Aryan uske right ribs mein apni aadhi taqat se ek punch marta hai toh uske ribs ke tukde hojaate hai. ​

Phir woh uske left ribs ke saath bhi same karta hai. ​

Phir pichhe se uske spinal cord ke upperside ke saath bhi same karta hai aur uske saamne aake uske aankho mein dekh kar bolta hai Time Up​

Undertaker ko Aryan ki aankho mein ab apni maut nazar aati hai. ​

Aryan apni puri taqat se uske heart wale hisse mein ek waar karta hai jisse Undertaker ke muh se khoon nikalta hai aur uska dil wahi pe dhadkna band kardeta hai. Aur wahi pe humesha ke liye girr jaata hai. ​

Kuch der baad koi aata hai aur Undertaker check karta hai toh usko shock lagta hai. Aur woh usko death finalize kar deta hai. Waha saare log shock mein khade hote hai kisi ke muh se koi awaaz nhi nikal rahi hoti hai. ​

Aryan chup chap ring se bahar aake uss bookie ke paas jaata hai. ​

Bookie usse shock aur darr se dekhne lagta hai. Uski toh ab bolti hi band hochuki thii. ​

Aryan: Kya bol raha tha tu. Mujhe uss waqat samaj nhi aaya thaa jara phir se bolna. ​

Bookie: Mujhe maaf kardo bhai. Maine aapko kam samaj liya. Mujhe chorr do. Mere parivaar mein mere alawa aur koi mard nhi hai agar mujhe kuch hogya toh woh raste mein aajayenge. Pls mujhe chorr do. ​

Aryan: Chal bata kitni kamayi hui hai aaj. ​

Bookie: Bhai pure 120 crore ki kamayi hui hai. ​

Aryan: Itna kaise huaa. ​

Bookie: Bhai yeh Undertaker ek match ka crores leta thaa aur aaj usne kul 10 fights ladhi thi. Toh uske hue 80 crore. Aur jitne bhi uske opponents the uske mila hue 40 crore. ​

Aryan: Samjha. Chal ab bata isme tera commission kitna hua hai. ​

Bookie: Rehne do bhai. Mujhe kuch nhi chahiye. ​

Aryan: Black Beast kabhi kisi ka hakk nhi marta. Kitna hua hai bol. ​

Bookie: Darte hue. 2 crore. ​

Aryan: Thik hai. Apna commission le lena aur baaki ka amount tujhe iss account mein transfer karna hai. Usko ek page dete hue kaha. Aur haa yeh mera mobile number hai. Jab bhi aisi koi fight ho toh mujhe call kar lena aur tum log jo betting karte ho fight pe uski puri details isme message kardena. Jab bhi mujhe jarurat padegi main boldungaa. ​

Bookie: Ji bhai. Yeh bol woh page le leta hai. ​

Aryan apne car ki taraf aake usne apna mask nikala aur dekhta hai uske chehre pe koi bhi chott ka nisaan nhi hai. Yeh uske liye bahot hairaani wali baat thi. Kyoki maar toh usse bhi padhi thi. ​

Woh jaldi se ghar aata hai aur Sanjay se uski chott ke baare mein baat karta hai toh Sanjay bolta hai​

Sanjay: Yeh sab uss formula ka kamaal hai. Uski wajah se tumhari healing power badh gayi hai. Tumhari koi bhi chott jald se jald thik hojayegi. ​

Sanjana: Waise tum kaha gaye the aur yeh chott ki kya baat horahi hai. ​

Aryan phir usse saare baate batata hai. ​

Sanjana: Achha toh kitna amount jitaa tumne. ​

Aryan: 118 crore. ​

Sanjay aur Sanjana: Kitnaa. ​

Aryan: 118 crore. ​

Dono: Itna amount kaise hua. ​

Aryan unko bolta hai kaise itna amount hua. ​

Sanjana: Ooo. Toh phir itne amount ka kya karne ka socha hai. ​

Aryan: Maine socha hai yeh paise stock market mein invest karu. Kya aap log kisi achhe investor ko jaante hai jo yeh kaam karta hai aur mujhe achhe deal karwa sakta hai. ​

Sanjay: Yeh stock market bahot risky hai. Isme paise khone ka khatra jyaada hai. ​

Aryan: Pata hai. Par yeh saare paisa ek tarah se black money hai. Aur agar paise dubb jaate hai toh dukh nhi hogaa waise bhi kisi ko maar kar hi kamaya hai. ​

Sanjay: Jaisi tumhari marzi. Tumhare paise hai. Aur tumhari baat bhi sahi hai. Kal tumhare college ke baad tum mujhe call karlena main tumko le chalunga ek investor ke paas. Meri jaan pehchan ka bhi hai woh. ​

Aryan: Thik hai. ​

Sanjana: Chalo jaldi se fresh ho jao. Main dinner laga deti hu. ​

Aryan fresh hoke dinner karke apne room mein aake apna mobile check karta hai toh waha unknown number se 2 missed call aaye hue thee aur ek message bhi thaa. Jo bank se thaa ke saare paise transfer hogaye hai. ​

Aryan itni raat ko uss number pe call lagana thik nhi samajta isiliye woh aaj college mein jo padhaya thaa woh ekbaar dekh leta hai. Ab uska brain ek super brain thaa isiliye ek baar dekh lene se hi usko yaad hojaata thaa. ​

Phir woh sojaata hai. ​

Subah roj ki tarah Aryan jaldi uth kar apna workout finish kar ready hoke breakfast kar apni car leke college ki taraf nikal jaata hai. ​

Raaste mein usse Meera khadi dikhayi padhti hai. Toh woh uske paas jaake car rokhta hai aur puchta hai.​

Aryan: Good Morning. Kya baat hai yaha khadi ho. ​

Meera: Good Morning. Haa woh college ke liye bus ka wait kar rahi thii. ​

Aryan: Main bhi college hi jaaraha hu. Chalo saath chalte hai. ​

Meera bhi bina kuch bole uske saath baith ke college nikal jaati hai. ​

Meera: Thanks for lift.​

Aryan: Aree isme Thanks kaisa tum meri dost ho. Dosti mein No Thank You No Sorry. ​

Meera: Achha okk. Jara mujhe bataoge kal tum kaha thee maine call kiya thaa par tumne uthaya hi nhi. ​

Aryan: Main toh ghar par hi thaa. Tumne kab call kiya thaa. ​

Meera: Raat ke taraf. ​

Aryan: Oo. Tab mein thoda kaam se bahar gaya thaa aur mobile ghar meim bhul gaya tha. Aate aate late hogya tha maine mobile mein dekha tha 2 missed calls the but number save nhi thaa isiliye pehchan nhi paya aur itni raat ko call karna bhi thik nhi samajha. ​

Meera: Okkk koi baat nhi. ​

Aryan: Waise koi kaam tha kya jo raat mein call kiya. ​

Meera: Nhi koi kaam nhi thaa bas aise hi baate karne ke liye hi call kiya thaa. ​

Aryan: Achhaa. ​

Aise hi yeh log baate karte karte college pahonch jaate hai. Jab Aryan ki car college mein enter karti hai tab saari ladkiyon ko pata chal jaata hai ke Aryan ki car hai isiliye woh usi taraf nazare kare hue khadi thii​

Jab Aryan car se utarta hai toh sab usse dekhte rehte hai. But jab dusri side se Meera ko utarte dekhte hai. Sabki aankho jalan saaf nazar aarahi hoti. ​

Saari ladkiyan Meera ko Aryan ke car se utarte dekh jalan mein naa jaane kya kuch bolne lagti hai. ​

Phir woh dono waha se Canteen mein jaate hai. Jaha aaj bhi Yash baitha hua tha. ​

Dono: Good Morning Yash. ​

Yash: Good Morning. Kya baat hai aaj dono saath mein. ​

Aryan: Haa. Actually main aaraha tha toh raaste mein isse khade dekha toh saath le aaya. ​

Yash: Oo achha kiya. Aaj first lecture off hai kyoki Kunal sir aaj nhi aaye hai isiliye class mein jaake koi faiyda nhi yehi pe baithe raho. ​

Aryan: Chalo thik hai. Main coffee leke aata hu. Tumlog piyoge​

Dono: Haa jarur. ​

Phir Aryan Coffee leke aata hai aur teeno peene lagte hai. ​

Tabhi Yash bolta hai. ​

Yash: Aree tumlogo ne suna kal Kisi Black Beast ne famous underground fighter Undertaker ko maar diya hai fight mein. ​

Aryan ko yeh sunte hai khashi aajati hai. ​

Meera: Aree ab tumhe kya hua aaram se piyo. ​

Yash: Pata nhi kaun tha sirf 5 mins mein hi usko maar giraya. Main toh uska fan hogya. ​

Meera: Haa maine bhi suna hai. Waise achha hi hua jo usko maardiya naa jaane usne kitne logo ko behrami se maara tha. ​

Yash: Haa sahi bola tumne. Are tu kyo itna chup hai.​

Aryan: Ab main jinhe jaanta nhi unke baare mein kya baat karu. ​

Yash: Kya tu Undertaker ko nhi jaanta. Mumbai ke underground fight ka famous fighter tha woh. ​

Meera: Tum bhi kamaal karte ho Yash. Woh kaun sa Mumbai se hai jo usse janegaa. Yeh toh kuch mahine pahle hi yaha aaya hai. ​

Yash: Aree haa main toh bhul hi gaya thaa. ​

Yeh log aise hi baat karte rehte hai. ​

badhiya update

 

[Jaguaar]

mast update hai

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[Jaguaar]

badhiya update

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[PARADOX]

Maph karna , lekin kahani ka upkram itna prabhavi nahin tha , wese kahani ka theme fantasy hai so kahani me paripakvata dhundna itna uchit nahin rahega... Lekin achhi kosis thi....

 

[Jaguaar]

Maph karna , lekin kahanti upkram itna prabhavi nahin tha , wese kahani ka theme fantasy hai so kahani me paripakvata dhundna itna uchit nahin rahega... Lekin achhi kosis thi....

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Aur yeh meri pehli story thi. Aur waise bhi main koi writer toh hu nhi.

Dusro ki story padh padh ke usme se hi kuch scenes leke kahani likhta hu. Aur yeh bhi waisi hi hai. Sirf yehi hi nhi meri dusri stories bhi.

 

[Gaandu No 1]

Update 1​

Ek aadmi Hospital mein operation theatre ke bahar tension mein chakar laga raha tha. Uske saath uske pita bhai aur bhai ki biwi thi. Kyoki uski biwi ot mein thi delivery ke liye. Uss aadmi ka pita kehta hai Vikram tension matlo sab kuch achha hi hogaa. Vikram yeh sunn ek tension mein bhari smile pass karta hai aur phir se chakar lagane lagta hai.​

Kuch der baad ot ka door open hota hai aur doctor bahar aakar kehte hai :-​

Doctor: Mr. Malhotra mubarak ho aapko beta hua hai.​

Yeh news sunte hi sabke chehre mein ek khushi ki lehar aajati hai sab khushi se nachne lagte hai.​

Vikram: Doctor meri wife toh thik hai naa.​

Doctor: Ji aapka beta aur apki wife dono bilkul fit hai. Aap thodi der baad unse mil sakte hai.​

Vikram: Thank You Doctor.​

Doctor: Your Welcome and Congratulations.​

Yeh bol doctor waha se chala jata hai. Thodi der baad bachhe aur maa ko cabin mein shift kar dete hai. Phir sabse unse milne cabin mein aate hai.​

Sabse pahle sab bachhe se milte jo bagal ke palne mein so raha thaa.​

Uske chehre mein duniya bhar ki masoomiyat thi ek alag sa hi tej thaa.​

Bachhe ko dekh kar sabki aankho mein khushi ke aansu thee.​

Uske baad sab Rashmi se milte hai jo bed mein aaram kar rahi thi. Uski aankho mein bhi khushi ke aansu the. Sabkoi usse congratulate kar raha thaa. Vikram uske paas mein uska haath pakar ke baith jata hai aur bolta hai Thank You Rashmi aaj tumne mujhe complete kardiya itna pyaara beta dekar.​

Phir aise hi sablog thodi der maa bete ke paas reh kar cabin ke bahar jaake hospital mein baaki ki formality puri karte hai.​

Doctor ne kal tak ke liye maa bete ko observation mein rakh lete hai. Raat ko kisi ek ko rukhne ka kaha jaata hai toh Meenakshi raat ko rukh jaati hai aur baaki sab ghar wapas aajate hai.​

Ghar aakar Jeet Malhotra ne apne kul pandit ko phone kar yeh khush khabri di aur apne pote ke naamkaran ke liye ek mahapuja ka aayojan bhi karte hai jo 3 din baad ki thi.​

Subah sab wapas hospital jaate hai aur waha se Rashmi aur bachhe ko leke wapas ghar aate hai.​

Ghar mein bachhe ko leke Neha ke bagal mein sula dete hai. Neha uss bachhe ko dekhe hi jaa rahi thi. Aur phir apne chote chote haatho se uske haatho ko pakad leti hai jaise agar uska haath chor diya toh woh kahi chala jayega.​

Sab Neha ke iss behave ko dekh kar hase jaarahe thee.​

Ankit thoda bada hogya thaa woh bhi apne chote bhai ke paas aake uske saath khelne lagta hai.​

Jaise hi Ankit ne Neha ka haath apne chote bhai ke haath se hataya waise hi Neha ne rona suru kardiya jaise usse kisine uska khilona chinn liya ho.​

Aise hi hasi mazaak mein 3 din guzar jaate hai.​

Subah subah Kulpandit mahapuja ki taiyaari kar rahe thee. Rashmi, Meenakshi ,Vikram, Suraj sab unki madad kar rahe the. Wahi ek palne mein bachhe ko sulaya gaya thaa​

Ankit ko Jeet Malhotra ne apne paas rakha thaa.​

Neha toh apne chote bhai ke paas hi thi. Usko aisa lag raha thaa agar woh usse durr gayi toh uske bhai ko koi le jayega.​

Aise hi 1 ghante ke baad mahapuja khatam hojaati hai. Phir Kulpandit ne Vikram aur Rashmi ko bachhe ke saath hawankund ke saamne baithaya aur uski kundli banane lage. Jaise jaise kundli ban rahi thi waise waise Kulpandit ke facial expression mein bhu badlav aarahe the jo Jeet Malhotra ne dekh liya tha but uss time unhone ne kuch nhi bola.​

Kuch der baad Kulpandit bole yeh bachha bahot bhagyashaali hoga,iska dimaag baakiyon ke mukable bahot takatwar hogaa. Yeh jisse bhi mohabbat karega aur toot ke mohabbat karega but yeh jisse ek baar nafrat karle phir uske dil mein uske liye pyaar lana,bharosa lana hadd se jyaada mushkil hogaa phir chahe woh iske kitna bhi close kyo naa ho. Aur iss bachhe ka naam hoga ARYAN.​

Bachhe ka naam sabko bahot pasand aata hai. Phir sab ko khaane ke liye baithaya jaata hai.​

Khane ke baad Jeet Malhotra Kulpandit se akele mein baat karne ke liye unko apne kamre le jaate hai.​

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[Gaandu No 1]

Update 2​

Phir Kulpandit unko batate hai kyo kundli banate waqat unke chehre ke bhaav badal rahe the. Kulpandit ke baat sunne ke baad Jeet Malhotra ke chehre ke bhaav bhi badalne lagte hai. Yeh dekh Kulpandit bolte hai chahe kuch bhi hojaaye aap apne pote ke saath hi rahenge usse galat nhi samjhenge aur naahi aap baakiyon ko yeh baat batayenge kyoki yehi unki niyati hai unko yeh sehna hi padega. Aur isse unko ek sikh bhi milegi. Uske baad Kulpandit chale jaate hai aur Jeet Malhotra tension mein reh jaate hai.​

Kuch din baad Jeet Malhotra apne lawyer ke paas jaake kuch baat karte hai aur unko ek kaam dete hai.​

After 18 Years​

Ek Ladka mumbai ke ek hospital mein zindagi aur maut se ladh raha tha. 3 ghante se OT mein uska operation chal raha tha. Bahar ek aadmi aur aurat aansu bahaye jaa rahe thee. Aurat baar baar bol rahi thi humhari wajah se kisi nirdosh ki aaj yeh halat hai. Kaash woh waha nhi aaya hotaa toh aaj uski aisi halat nhi hoti.​

Aadmi uss Aurat ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha but andar se woh bhi bahot dukhi thaa.​

Kuch der baad doctor OT se bahar aate hai. Aur kehte hai:-​

Doctor: Aap uss ladke ke kya lagte hai​

Aadmi(Thoda soch kar): Woh mera beta hai. Kya ab woh thik hai.​

Doctor: Dekhiye main aapko jhooti tasalli nhi dunga but ab uska bachna naa ke barabar hai. Goli uske dil ke bahot kareeb lagi thi. Humne goli toh nikal di hai but ab uski body mein blood generate nhi horaha hai aur uska jo blood group hai woh bahot hi rare hai. Ab uske bachne ke chances 5% se bhi kam hai I am Sorry.​

Yeh sab sunne ke baad aadmi toh jaise taise khud ko sambhal leta hai but woh Aurat toh behosh hogyi thi.​

Doctor usko check karte hai aur aaram karne ko kehte hai.​

Thodi der baad jab aurat hosh mein aati hai toh phir se rona start kardeti hai. Aadmi usko bolta hai​

Aadmi: Sanjana ab chup hojao. Humlog ab kuch nhi kar sakte.​

Sanjana: Kaise chup hojau Sanjay aaj humari wajah se ek nirdosh ki yeh halat hai. Naa woh humhe bachane aata aur naa uski yeh halat hoti. Yeh bol phir se rona start kardeti hai.​

Phir achanak uske dimaag mein ek idea trigg karta hai toh woh bolti hai​

Sanjana: Sanjay kyo na jiske liye yeh sab horaha hai woh chiz hum isko dede shayad yeh bach jaaye.​

Sanjay: Bachho jaisi baate mat karo Sanjana. Humlog isko jaante tak nhi yeh kaisa ladka hai achha hai ya bura hai agar koi problem hogyi toh sab barbaad hojayegaa.​

Sanjana: Jo ladka bina kisi jaan pehchan ke kisi ajnabi ki madad kare uske liye apne seene mein 4 goliya khaaye uss hisab se isse achha ladka shayad hi koi hoga.​

Sanjay: Thik hai main yeh baat manta hu. But abhi tak humlogo ne woh properly test nhi kiya hai agar kuch garbar hogyi toh.​

Sanjana: Doctor ne toh bolhi diya hai iske bachne ke chances 5% se bhi kam hai. Agar uske baad isko kuch hota hai toh itna dukh nhi hoga. But agar sab thik raha toh yeh bach jayega aur humhara test bhi hojayegaa. Aur shayad humlogo ko humara beta bhi mil jaaye.​

Sanjay: Thik hai main doctor se baat karke isko ghar shift karwane ki koshish karta hu. Tum ghar jaake saari taiyaari dhayan se karo.​

Sanjay Singh- Yeh ek bahot bade scientist hai. Inhone bahot saare research aur experiments kiye hai jinme bahot saare successfull rahe hai. Ab yeh aur inki wife milke human body and brain ke upar ek research and experiment kar rahe hai. Agar yeh success hota hai toh ek human ke body and brain ko kisi bhi normal human ke body and brain se jyaada powerfull bana dega matlab ek tarah se usko super human mein convert kar dega.​

Sanjana Singh- (Wife of Sanjay Singh) yeh bhi ek scientist hai aur apne pati ke saath hi saare kaam karti hai.​

Inke iss research ke baare mein India ke sabse bade terrorist organization ko pata chal jaata hai aur woh iss research ko hatiyane ki koshish karte hai jinme inke ek laute bete ki jaan chali jaati hai. But yeh uss research ko unke haath nhi lagne dete. Phir bhi inke upar aaye din humle hote rehte hai. Aise hi ek humle mein inko ek ladke ne toh bacha liya par ab woh khud zindagi aur maut se ladh raha hai.​

Sanjay Singh Doctor ke baat karke uss ladke ko apne ghar lejaate hai. Ab Sanjay Singh ek jaane maane scientist hai unhe Mumbai mein sab hi jaante hain isiliye unko jyaada mehnat nhi karni padhi.​

Sanjay aur Sanjana uss ladke ko le apne ghar ke underground mein bane laboratory mein chale aate hai. Jaha bade bade machines lage hue the. Matlab Sanjana ne pahle hi sab taiyaariyan kar rakhi thi.​

Sanjay uss ladke ko waha ek bed pe leta deta hai. Aur sab kuch phir se ek baar check kar us ladke haath mein machines se kuch lagata hai aur uske sir mein kuch lagata hai aur aakhir mein uske chest ke paas dhyaan se lagata hai kyoki waha par pahle se hi ghaav the.​

Phir Sanjay computer mein kuch kaam kar uss ladke ke body mein woh research aur Experiment se bane formula ko insert karta hai. Jaise jaise woh formula uske andar jaaraha hota hai waise waise uski body vibrate honi start karti hai. Pure formula insert hone ke kuch der baad uss ladke ki body vibrate honi band kardeti hai aur dheere dheere uski heartbeat bhi band hone lagti hai yeh dekh woh Sanjay aur Sanjana dono ke aankho mein hi aansu aajate hai. Unko lagta hai ki ab yeh ladka nhi bachegaa yaani unki saari koshish aur mehnat barbaad hogyi.​

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