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Us letter me priyanshi ne likha tha ….
Yash tum apne ap ko samjhate kya ho …. Mene tumhe sirf apna ek bahut aacha dost mana hai iska matlab ye nahi ki tum hamari dosti ki diwar par ker jao … mujhe tumse ye umeed bilkul nahi thi… me tumse pyar … tum soch bhi kaise sakte is bare me … kaha per tum … or kaha per me …. Iske bare me bhi kuch to sochte … mene sirf dosti tum per taras khaker kari thi ki tumhara is duniya me koi nahi tha per tumne hamari dosti ki diwar langhne ki koshish kari hai yash ….. me ab tumse nafrat ke siva or kuch nahi kerti hu … or tumhare liye ab ye hi aacha hoga ki ab kabhi bhi mere aas pass aane ki ya mujh se bat kerne ki koi koshish mat kerna ….
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Vo bat batate batate aj bhi yash ki aakho me aasu ka gaye the …
Yash :- Me tab bhi roya tha or aj bhi jab us din ko yad kerta hu to aakho se aasu chalak padte hai … uske bad me us jagah se anath aasram aa gaya tab tak mujhe company ki joining ka msg bhi aa gaya or me aakansha ke sath ye shahar chodker chala gaya …
Dusri jagah jaker maine bahut mahnet kari … taki me use dikha saku ki mere pyar me kitni sachai thi jise ki usne sirf or sirf mere garib or anath hone ke karan thukra diya….meri mahnet ke badolet mene apna business empire khada kara hai … or vapas aj is shahar me laut aaya hu …
Me manta hu ritu ki pyar ager vo mujhse nahi kerti to me bhi us se jaberdasti nahi ker sakta pyar kerne ke liye per vo sidha sidha mana bhi to ker sakti thi usne meri garibi or anath hone ka jis tarah se majak banaya usne mere dil ko bahut gahri chot pahuchayi ..
Yash ne jab apni aap biti sunayi to vaha baithi baithi aakhansha or ritu dono ki aakho me aasu aa gaye ….
Ritu ko yaha per ek bat nahi samajh aa rahi thi …vo ye thi ki jaisa ki yash ne bataya tha ki priyanshi dil ki bahut aachi insaan hai … fir usne yash ki garibi ka is tarah se majak kyo banaya.. … sath hi use sonali ke sath me letter vali bat bilkul bhi nahi pach rahi thi ...
Ritu(man me ) :- Mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe ek bar priyanshi se milna chaiye …
Iske bad ritu vaha se yash ko apna wakt dene ke liye thank you kah ker chali gayi per aj uske dimag me uthal puthal machi padi thi …
Use yash ne jo bhi bataya tha use pach nahi raha tha usne socha ki ho sakta hai yash ne use puri bat nahi batayi ho ya fir ho sakta hai yash ne use kahani itni hi batayi ho jaha per kahani me lage ki vo sahi hai ya fir ho sakta hai yash ye sab kuch bata diya ho …
Ritu ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki … or usne ab apne man me than liya tha ki vo kaise bhi kerke ek bar priyanshi se milker rakhengi or use priyanshi ka pata lagane me jyada wakt bhi nahi laga .. kyoki priyanshi … rajendra singhaniya ki beti thi jo ki is shahar ke bahut bade businessman me se ek the …
Aj yash se mile hue ritu ko do din bit chuke the … or yash apni jindgi me vapas laut chuka tha vahi per abhi ritu priyanshi ke office ke bahar khadi thi …
Ritu ne pichle do dino me priyanshi ke bare me bahut sari jankari juta li thi or ab vo pahuch chuki thi priyanshi se milne ke liye iske bad priyanshi office me pahuch gayi ….
Vaha per pahuchker usne samne ek lady baithi thi us se jaker usne bat kari …
Ritu :- hello I am ritu ….
Ladki :- hello madam how can I help you ?
Ritu :- Mujhe priyanshi ji se milna tha kya ap meri madad ker sakti hai …
Ladki :- Apne unse milne ke pahle ka appointment le rakha hai …
Ritu :- Nahi madam mene nahi liya hai …
Ladki :- To madam apko unse bat kerne ke liye pahle unka appointment lena hoga …
Ritu :- please ek bar ap unse bat kerke to dekhiye ager kuch ho jata hai to mera unse milna bahut jaruri hai ….
Ladki :- ok madam apko uske liye apna important kam batana hoga …
Ab ritu ke pass koi option nahi bacha tha isliye use sirf itna bataya ki yash meheshwari ke bare me bat kerni hai …
Iske bad us ladki ne priyanshi ko call lagaya …
Priyanshi :- Ha sheetal bolo …
Ladki (sheetal ) :- Madam apse ek ladki hai jinka nam hai miss ritu …milna chahti hai .. vo kah rahi hai apse kuch jaruri bat kerni hai yash maheshwari ke bare me …
Sheetal ne priyanshi ko yash ka sirf nam liya tha iske bad na to priyanshi ne koi sawal jawab nahi kiye or ritu ko apne cabin me bula liya …
Ritu ye bat sunker bahut khush ho gayi or 5 min ke bad vo priyanshi ke cabin me pahuch gayi …
Ritu room me enter hoti us se pahle usne kisi ko call lagaya …
Ritu :- hello sir …
Dusri taraf se :- ha ritu bolo ….
Ritu :- sir me aj apko kuch sunana chahti hu apke pass wakt ho to vo apki jindgi ke liye bahut jaruri hai yash sir …
Ritu abhi or kisi se nahi yash se hi bat ker rahi thi or vo yash ko priyanshi se jo b \hi bat kerne vali thi sab sunane vali thi ….
Iske bad usne apna phone jeb me rakha or ander chali gayi …
Samne kursi per ek bahut hi sunder ladki baithi thi …. Dikhne me bahut khoobsurat lag rahi thi uske bal is wakt khule the … uske chahre per ek muskurahat thi … jisme ki vo bahut pyari lag rahi thi …
Ritu use dekhte hi samajh chuki thi ki ye priyanshi hai … to dosto ab aage kya hoga priyanshi se ritu to kya pata chalta hai .. ye dekhne vali bat hogi … kya yash ne jo bataya vo hi priyanshi batane vali hai ya uska jawab kuch or hoga or yaha per yash sab kuch sun raha hai to dekhte jaiye ab aage kya hota hai …
Us letter me priyanshi ne likha tha ….
Yash tum apne ap ko samjhate kya ho …. Mene tumhe sirf apna ek bahut aacha dost mana hai iska matlab ye nahi ki tum hamari dosti ki diwar par ker jao … mujhe tumse ye umeed bilkul nahi thi… me tumse pyar … tum soch bhi kaise sakte is bare me … kaha per tum … or kaha per me …. Iske bare me bhi kuch to sochte … mene sirf dosti tum per taras khaker kari thi ki tumhara is duniya me koi nahi tha per tumne hamari dosti ki diwar langhne ki koshish kari hai yash ….. me ab tumse nafrat ke siva or kuch nahi kerti hu … or tumhare liye ab ye hi aacha hoga ki ab kabhi bhi mere aas pass aane ki ya mujh se bat kerne ki koi koshish mat kerna ….
Back to present ..
Vo bat batate batate aj bhi yash ki aakho me aasu ka gaye the …
Yash :- Me tab bhi roya tha or aj bhi jab us din ko yad kerta hu to aakho se aasu chalak padte hai … uske bad me us jagah se anath aasram aa gaya tab tak mujhe company ki joining ka msg bhi aa gaya or me aakansha ke sath ye shahar chodker chala gaya …
Dusri jagah jaker maine bahut mahnet kari … taki me use dikha saku ki mere pyar me kitni sachai thi jise ki usne sirf or sirf mere garib or anath hone ke karan thukra diya….meri mahnet ke badolet mene apna business empire khada kara hai … or vapas aj is shahar me laut aaya hu …
Me manta hu ritu ki pyar ager vo mujhse nahi kerti to me bhi us se jaberdasti nahi ker sakta pyar kerne ke liye per vo sidha sidha mana bhi to ker sakti thi usne meri garibi or anath hone ka jis tarah se majak banaya usne mere dil ko bahut gahri chot pahuchayi ..
Yash ne jab apni aap biti sunayi to vaha baithi baithi aakhansha or ritu dono ki aakho me aasu aa gaye ….
Ritu ko yaha per ek bat nahi samajh aa rahi thi …vo ye thi ki jaisa ki yash ne bataya tha ki priyanshi dil ki bahut aachi insaan hai … fir usne yash ki garibi ka is tarah se majak kyo banaya.. … sath hi use sonali ke sath me letter vali bat bilkul bhi nahi pach rahi thi ...
Ritu(man me ) :- Mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe ek bar priyanshi se milna chaiye …
Iske bad ritu vaha se yash ko apna wakt dene ke liye thank you kah ker chali gayi per aj uske dimag me uthal puthal machi padi thi …
Use yash ne jo bhi bataya tha use pach nahi raha tha usne socha ki ho sakta hai yash ne use puri bat nahi batayi ho ya fir ho sakta hai yash ne use kahani itni hi batayi ho jaha per kahani me lage ki vo sahi hai ya fir ho sakta hai yash ye sab kuch bata diya ho …
Ritu ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki … or usne ab apne man me than liya tha ki vo kaise bhi kerke ek bar priyanshi se milker rakhengi or use priyanshi ka pata lagane me jyada wakt bhi nahi laga .. kyoki priyanshi … rajendra singhaniya ki beti thi jo ki is shahar ke bahut bade businessman me se ek the …
Aj yash se mile hue ritu ko do din bit chuke the … or yash apni jindgi me vapas laut chuka tha vahi per abhi ritu priyanshi ke office ke bahar khadi thi …
Ritu ne pichle do dino me priyanshi ke bare me bahut sari jankari juta li thi or ab vo pahuch chuki thi priyanshi se milne ke liye iske bad priyanshi office me pahuch gayi ….
Vaha per pahuchker usne samne ek lady baithi thi us se jaker usne bat kari …
Ritu :- hello I am ritu ….
Ladki :- hello madam how can I help you ?
Ritu :- Mujhe priyanshi ji se milna tha kya ap meri madad ker sakti hai …
Ladki :- Apne unse milne ke pahle ka appointment le rakha hai …
Ritu :- Nahi madam mene nahi liya hai …
Ladki :- To madam apko unse bat kerne ke liye pahle unka appointment lena hoga …
Ritu :- please ek bar ap unse bat kerke to dekhiye ager kuch ho jata hai to mera unse milna bahut jaruri hai ….
Ladki :- ok madam apko uske liye apna important kam batana hoga …
Ab ritu ke pass koi option nahi bacha tha isliye use sirf itna bataya ki yash meheshwari ke bare me bat kerni hai …
Iske bad us ladki ne priyanshi ko call lagaya …
Priyanshi :- Ha sheetal bolo …
Ladki (sheetal ) :- Madam apse ek ladki hai jinka nam hai miss ritu …milna chahti hai .. vo kah rahi hai apse kuch jaruri bat kerni hai yash maheshwari ke bare me …
Sheetal ne priyanshi ko yash ka sirf nam liya tha iske bad na to priyanshi ne koi sawal jawab nahi kiye or ritu ko apne cabin me bula liya …
Ritu ye bat sunker bahut khush ho gayi or 5 min ke bad vo priyanshi ke cabin me pahuch gayi …
Ritu room me enter hoti us se pahle usne kisi ko call lagaya …
Ritu :- hello sir …
Dusri taraf se :- ha ritu bolo ….
Ritu :- sir me aj apko kuch sunana chahti hu apke pass wakt ho to vo apki jindgi ke liye bahut jaruri hai yash sir …
Ritu abhi or kisi se nahi yash se hi bat ker rahi thi or vo yash ko priyanshi se jo b \hi bat kerne vali thi sab sunane vali thi ….
Iske bad usne apna phone jeb me rakha or ander chali gayi …
Samne kursi per ek bahut hi sunder ladki baithi thi …. Dikhne me bahut khoobsurat lag rahi thi uske bal is wakt khule the … uske chahre per ek muskurahat thi … jisme ki vo bahut pyari lag rahi thi …
Ritu use dekhte hi samajh chuki thi ki ye priyanshi hai … to dosto ab aage kya hoga priyanshi se ritu to kya pata chalta hai .. ye dekhne vali bat hogi … kya yash ne jo bataya vo hi priyanshi batane vali hai ya uska jawab kuch or hoga or yaha per yash sab kuch sun raha hai to dekhte jaiye ab aage kya hota hai …
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are bhai readers ka khayal hai.. Per shayad kahani ko ek aise point per chodne se suspense bana rahta hai.. Vaise bhi 9 baje ke aas pass update Aa jayega.. Apka suspense clear ho jayega... Per dusra suspense ban jaye to bhai kuch mat kahna..
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I know...ye to hota hai...bas main bhi aapko pareshan kar raha tha...??
Ye kya ek suspense khatm hote hi dusra dene ka vichar hai...??
Yani double maza....
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Correct bhai .. mujhe pata hai kyoki meri ek bahut hi gandi aadat hai .. jab bhi me koyi nayi story padhna shuru kerta hu to sabse pahla kam ye kerta hu ki check kerta hu story completed hai ya nahi .. kyoki me khud suspense me nahi ji sakta .. or me aache se samajh sakta hu as a reader suspense badi muskil se handle hota hai ..