Romance Pyar Gum Ya Khushi

[Naina]

Jab tak paridhi entry nahi le leti tab tak Rahul adhura hi hai...aur ek besti ki entry honi baaki hai, waise kahani ke suruwati daur mein kahani ko aage le jaane mein mrinal aur sonal ne bahot madad ki hai aur sath hi madad ki hai kiran ne bhi...
Actually is kahani ek bhi kirdaar ko side character kehna munasib nahi hoga, kyunki negative ho positive kirdaar.. Har kisi ne ek aham role nibhaya hai story pe.. Aur ek bhi kirdaar ko agar hata dete to kahani hi adhuri reh jaati ...

 

[Naina]

परिधि और राहुल ，:❤
हवा के झोंके जब जुल्फों को उड़ाकर जाते हैं
पलकों को सहला कर जाते हैं
तब लगता है कि अब जाकर
इस खुली हवा में सांस ली है खुल कर

इसी हवा के संग साथ बहती सी लगती है
जिंदगी हंसकर मुझसे कुछ कहती सी लगती है
चलो चलें कहकर हाथ बढ़ाती है हाथ थमाने को
पास आने को पुकारती है मुझे साथ जाने को
और मैं आँखों में ख्वाबों के बने पंख लिए
जिन्दगी का हाथ कस के पकड़ती हूं आगे बढ़ती हूं

इतने में ही पीछे से एक अदृश्य डोर जो मुझसे बंधी हुई है जिससे मैं बंधी हुई हूं
वो मुझे झटके से अपनी तरफ खींच लेती है बार बार

ऐसा लगता है कि मैं कोई रंग बिरंगे पतंग हूं
जो मस्त मल्लिका के भाती अदा से उड़ रही हैं, नाजनीन हवा से लड़ रही है
मगर मेरी एक बेरंग डोर है जो किसी के हाथ में है
या यूं कहूं कि ऐसा लगता है कि मेरी परवाज एक रील में लपेट रखी है और कोई लगातार

मुझे ढील दे रहा है बेबाक होकर जिन्दगी से मिलाने को
और दूसरे ही पल झटके से डोर को वापस खींच लेता है मुझे मेरी हदें याद दिलाने को
और जितनी बार भी ये डोर तंग होती है
मुझे ये महसूस होता है कि मैं उड़ नहीं रही
बल्कि मुझे कोई अपने मुताबिक उड़ा रहा है
और ये हवाएं उसका बखूबी साथ निभा रही हैं
जो उसके हक में चलती जा रही हैं वो भी मेरी नाक के बिल्कुल नीचे से

ऐसा लगता है कि मुझे उड़ने के लिए बनाया गया
बेशक मुझे उड़ने के लिए बनाया गया बढ़िया से तैयार किया सजाया गया
मगर मेरे पंख किसी और के हाथ में थमा दिए और बनाने वाले ने महज तंज करने को मेरी तकदीर में उड़ान लिख दिए

हर शख्स को अपने हाथ में केवल मेरी डोर चाहिए
पर कितने लोगों तो शायद बेसब्री से इस रंग बिरंगी पतंग के कट जाने की राह तकते होंगे ताकि एक कटी हुई पतंग को किसी गली मोहल्ले में वो गिरा हुआ पा सके और फिर उसे हासिल करके अपने ढंग से उड़ा सके

और मैं पागल हूं एक पागल पतंग,
जो आसमान की ऊंचाइयों को छू कर बार बार,
ये अनदेखा कर देती है कि मेरी एक डोर है
जो वहां किसी के हाथ में है।
By naina

nain11ster

 

[Naina]

To kya karna chahiye tha... Maine abhi abhi 2 story complete ki hai usme kya karna chahiye tha..

2015 me jab main pyar gum ya khushi likh raha tha tab kya karna chahiye tha.. uske baad 8-10 story likh kar complete kar dali tab kya karna chahiye tha..

Fir se ek kahani likh raha hun... Usme kya karun ..

Ghonchu... Apne rai dene se pahle dekh liya kar kise rai de raha hai ...

Paridhi & Rahul ❤

 

[Destiny]

Welcome back to xf
Ek aur new story ke liye bahut bahut badhayi guruji. ​

 

[Destiny]

Update 1

Milta Hai Kya Tujhse Dekh Loon Ae Zindgi
Ruh Me Basa Mera Pyar -Gum Ya Khusi​

Khusiyan hi khusiyan aur ek khila sa pariwar. Dost ki tarah mere papa aur meri hitlar mom sasan pasand, maa ke bad meri doosri maa meri Di Alisha aur ek pyari si chhoti bahan Mrinal jiski chubuli shararten yun to bahut padesan karti thi par ek halki si muskan chhor jati. Aur main Rahul ek nadan alhar sa jiski duniya kaphi simti.

Barhwi ki Imtihaan khatam hue abhi 10 din hi hue the aur main bilkul apne ghar me aasan jamaye na kanhi aana aur na kanhi jana. Jindgi me koi aisha nahi jiske liye khud ko taiyar kar aaina dekh sakoon aur na hi koi dil me khayal. Kuch dost na hote to mujhe sayad is duniya ke bare me pata bhi na hota. Meri jindgi ek perfect track par Jisme kewal mera pariwar aur mere dost.

Chhutiyon ke din the aur main aalsi roj ki tarah so raha tha .... Achanak hi di ne mujhe niche hall se awaz di................. "Betu Betu". Ghar par mujhe sab pyar se Betu hi bulate hai

Main........ (Upar se hi chillate hue) Kya hai Di sone do na please

Didi........ Niche aa khuch bat karni hai phir chale jana sone.... Waise bhi tu itna soyega to tere pet bahar aa jayenge.

Main........ Abhi aaya. Ye Di bhi na aaj lagta hai sone bhi nahi degi.

Garrmiyon ka din tha main nage badan kewal short main leta hua tha is tarah achanak bulaye jane par main usi awstha main didi ke pas chal Gaya Main................. "Kya hai Di aishi bhi kya jaroorat aa gayi"

Didi........... Pagal ja pahle fresh hokar kapre Pahan kar aa

Main..... Ufff ! Main na jaunga aur mujhe jitne kapre pahne hona chahiye main pahne hoon aur kaun sa yanha party chal rahi hai.

Didi......... Bari jiddi hai Kiran apni Di ki to bat sunta hi nahi

Main.... Band karo Di apna ye emotional atyachar, aur Kiran ye batao ki apne ghar me aishe rahne me koi problem hai.

Kiran, Didi ki un khas saheliyon me se hai jiska aana jana humare ghar par laga rahta hai isliye main bhi janta tha. Kiran.................. Rahul awesome look hai bas thoda pani mar face par , bal sawar aur bahar chala ja larkiyon ki line lag jayegi.

Main in sab mamlon me thoda kaccha abhi abhi jawani ki dahliz par kada rakhe hue 18 sal ka bachha...... Thoda sharma gaya aur apna sir niche karke........................................................................................................"Kya Kiran mujhe to koi dekhti hi nahi"

Kiran...... Pagal, tu to budhhu hai. Jab koi dikhe gi jo pasand aayegi to tu samajh jayega ki koi tujhe dekhti hai ki nahi. Itni mast persanality hai teri hight sadhe chheh fit ki. Ek kam kar tu mere sath mera BF bankar kabhi kabhi disco chala kar............... Tere jaise cute personality wala BF dekh na jane kitni larkiyan aahhh bhar mar jay.

Di..... Chup kar Kiran bigar mat mere bhai ko. Jaisa hai achha hai. Tujhe kuch kam tha wo bhi batayegi ya time pass kar rahi hai.

Kiran....... Haan Rahul sun main next month Police academy main physical test ke liye ja rahi hoon but mujhe long jump aur 800m running main thodi Paresani ho rahi hai to kya tum mujhe help kar doge?

Main.............. Ji bilkul kab se suru karna hai

Kiran....... Kal se kar de

Main...... Thik hai Kal subah 5am sharp on the ground

Kiran....... Thik hai Rahul Kal subah 5 baje..

Iske bad wo dono baat karte rah gaye aur main ghumane Chala gaya. Agli subah main apne roj ki tarah 4am baje subah uth gaya. Main aur mere dost Rishabh, mera class 1 se abtak ka sathi dono yahi routaine follow karte the. Ground gaya ground par mera dost rishabh bhi wanha mauzood tha. Hum dono ne running aur kuch exercise practice ki tabtak Kiran bhi aa chuki thi dono ne good morning wish kiya phir main Rishabh se bida lekar kiran ko practice karwane laga.

Practice khatam karate-karate 8am baj chuki thi main kiran se vida lekar ghar jane laga par Kiran ke jid karne par main uske ghar nasta karne aur unki family se Milne Chala Gaya. Jab main Kiran ke ghar ke main gate par tha tabhi Di ka phone aaya.

Main........ Haan didi
Alisha...... Ho gayi practice
Mai......... Ji didi
Alisha....... Ghar aa ja der kyun laga raha hai

Phir Maine puri baat bata di ki kiran ke ghar se nasta kar ke lautunga. Maine phone cut ki aur jaise hi muda ki main sannn rah gaya. Jane kya thi uske chehre me ek khichaw, ek aakarshan ek lalak ki meri najar uspar se hati hi nahi.

Samne ek khoobsorat larki kamsin si 5'6" ki lambi personality, chehra ka tej aisha ki man moh le, chehra ke upar latkte kale gungrale bal, kan me bari-bari baliyan. Maine aisha roop-yowan pahle kabhi nahin dekha. Mere liye to jaise ye pal tham chuka tha aur main apni roop ki devi ko waise hi shant khara niharta rah gaya. Tabhi mere kan main kisi ki Aawaj sunai pari......

Main use dekhne main is kadar khoya tha ki pata nahin usne kitni bar aawaz di ho, jab dhyan tooti to pata chala ki Kiran mujhe aawaz de rahi thi. Main kuch pal ke liye harbraya phir samblate hue "Kya hua Kiran"

Kiran......... Hanste hue, kya hua kanha khoye ho

Main....... Mujhe thodi asahjta ke sath, kuch nahin Kiran main ghar ki outlook dekh raha tha

Kiran, Hanste hue............ outlook ho Gaya ho to andar chale

Main chal diya Kiran ke sath. Kiran aage chal rahi thi main piche-piche chal raha tha par mera dhyan to usi khoobsorat par ataka tha. Kiran ke ghar andar aaya to dekha puri family dining table par jama thi. Ek-Ek karke kiran ne mujhe sabse milwaya. Wanha Sabse namskar aur hi hello ho rahi thi tabtak wo larki jise dekh kar mere dil ka tar baj chuka tha, hawaon main ajib is dhun bajne lagi thi aur aankon main bas usi ki shoorat wo bhi pahunch chuki thi. Kiran ne mijhe us se introduce karwaya....... Kiran is se milo ye meri cousin Ruhi hai abhi 12th main gayi hai.

Main.... Hello Ruhi
Ruhi....... Gusse bahri najaron se ghoorte hue "hi"

Uske baad sab nasta karne baith gaye par rah-rah kar bar -bar najar uspar hi ja rahi thi. Is bat ka ehsas sayad use bhi tha isliye wo bahut gusse main jaldi jaldi kha rahi thi aur is baat ki ek muk darsak aur thi kiran wo hum dono ki ore dekh kar muskurate hue kha rahi thi.

Khair nasta kar main bare mayus man se wanha se jane laga dil main bas yahi khayal liye "Aahhh! Kash koi mujhe yanha rok le to main sara din yanhi ruk sakta hun" bas isi khayal ke sath apne aah bhare arman liye wanha se nikal kar apne ghar pahuncha. Bare udasi ke sath main apne ghar pahuncha. Ghar pahunch kar mera samna Alisha Di se hue. Alisha Di mujhe tokte hue vayang bhare sabdon main ..... "Hunnn! to aaj Kal aap logon ke ghar ki outlook dekha karte hain". Main didi ke vayang bhare sabd samajh gaya aur bina koi jawaw diya apne kamre main chala gaya.

Abhi subah ke 9.30am hi baje the aur mera ek ek pal katna muskil ho raha tha. ye umar hi aishi hoti hai jab aap ka dil aap ko nakara bana deta hai. Yanha ek pal ke mulakat ke bad meri bechaini ki koi sima na thi ki kab uski ek aur jhalak mile.Main inhi sab khyalon main khoya tha tabhi darwaje par aahat hue mur ke dekha to mom thi Mom........ Betu .........MAin Ji maa

Mom......... Kanha khoya hai beta
Main...... Kuch nahin maa result ke bare main soch raha tha (jhut)
Mom........ Chal itna sochne ki jaroorat nahin hai acha hi hoga waise abhi tu kya kar raha hai
Main........ Kuch nahin mom free hun
Mom........ Mujhe aur Shilpa (meri padosi and mom's friend) ko Mrs Roy ke yanha jana hai
Main......... Kaun Mrs Roy maa
Mom........ Shilpa ki friend hai Mrs. Roy usi ke ghar aaj kitty party hai.

Waise to mujhe kisi kam main man nahin lag raha tha socha mom ka hi kam kar dun. Aur main unhe drop karne ke liye ok bol diya. Main jaldi hi taiyar hokar niche chala aaya. Niche meri ladli Mrinal bhi taiyar hokar baithi thi. Maine use chidhane ke liye bola.... "Maa ye kitty party tum ladies ke liye hai wanha bachi ka kya kam".

Mrinal gusse main....... "Maa ise kah do main bachi nahin aur chupchap se apna kam kare.
Uski bat sunkar main use aur chidhane ke irade se...
Main....... Tu itna ban sabar kar kiski shadi main ja rahi hai
Mrinal...... (Gusse se) Maa dekho na bhaiya ko
Mom........ Kyon tang kar raha hai usko
Main......... Main kanha tang kar raha hun. Main to bas pooch raha tha ki kanha ja rahi hai.
Mom........ Mujhe chorne ke baad tu isko marketing ke liye le jane wala hai.
Main........ Nahin main nahin le jaunga didi ke sath bolo do chale jane
Mrinal.... Mom abhi mujhe bato ki bhaiya chal raha hai ki nahin ya phir main akele jaun
Mom........ Le ja betu teri pyari bahan hai, tera kitana khayal rakhti hai.
Main........ Haan janta hoon lunch box main ke khane main kewal box hota hai lunch to kitchen main hi chod deti hai.
Mom.......... (Dante hue mujhe) Tu chup kar. Aur Mrinal se.......... ye tujhe le jayega chinta mat kar.

Inhi sab baton ke dauran Shilpa aunti bhi aa jati hai phir hum sab car main Roy aunti ke ghar jane lagte hai.
Lekin ab jaise jaise shilpa aunti rasta bata rahi thi mera dil jor-jor se dharak raha tha kyonki ye pata aur Kiran ke ghar ka rasta ek hi tha. Main man hi man bhagwan se mana raha tha........................................... "Hey Bhagwan ye mrs roy wahi roy family ho jis se abhi main mil kar aaya hoon". Aur lagta hai Bhagwan jaise aaj mujhpar mehrban ho ye wahi ghar tha janha se kuch ghante pahle main jana nahin chahta tha aur ab main wanhi khara tha. Main car se utra to niche Renuka aunti (Kiran's mom) khari thi mujhe dekha to ascharya se........... "Kya hua Rahul kuch bhool gaye kya"Tabhi unki najar mom aur Shilpa aunty par gayi.
Mom........ Ye mera beta Rahul hai mujhe chhorne aaya hai.

Renuka aunty...... Dekh Shilpa hum ek dooshre ko jante hai. Humare bache ek dooshre ke bachhon ko jante hai kya itaffak hai. Fir mom mujhe ghar jane ke liye kah kar sabke sath ander chali gayi. Par ye baiman man socha ek jhalak Ruhi ki dekh lun phir chala jaunga. Yahi sochte hue andar jane laga ki tabhi mujhe gate par Kiran najar aayi. Kiran ascharya se...... "kay hua Rahul koi kam tha mujhse"

Phir Maine sari ghatna batayi......... Kiran ..."chalo koi baat nahin chay loge". Yun to main ghar main kabhi chay nahin pita par Ruhi ko dekhne ke chakkar mai maine haan kar di aur andar hall me aakar baith gaya. Upar sabhi ladies ki kitty party suru ho chuki thi.

Kiran kitchen main ja kar chay bana rahi thi aur meri bechain najren Ruhi ko dhoond rahi thi. Sayad Kiran upar kuch bhool aayi ho isliye Kiran bhagte hue upar chali jati hai.

Abhi main kuch soch raha tha ki samne se Ruhi chay lekar aati hue dikhi. Main aah bharte hue socha.............................................................................................................................. Kash, Ahhhhh!

Wo mujhe chay de kar chali gayi aur uske piche-piche meri najar gayi. Main gaur se usi ore dekhta raha bina palken jhukayen. Main us ore lagatar dekh raha tha kitni der pata nahin.

Tabhi mere mobile ring baji aur mera dhyan bhang hua. Main call dekh kar ascharya main par gaya..

Pahli hi najar me dil de baitha ye chadti umr ki khumari ka kiya hi kahna. Ek bar dekh kar hi be chain ho gaya sara dhyaan ruhi par hi kendrit kar diya.ye umr ka takaja hai yah aagaj ho chuka hai ishq ke fharebi jaal me ulajne ka. Khai ghar ka outlook ke jaal me ulajh kar betu ghar to pahuch gaya lekin apna dil kahi aor hi chod aaya.guruji pahli revo me bas itna hi kuch samajh hi nehi aa raha revo me kiya likhu I'm fully blocked.

अद्भुत अतुलनीय update tha

 

[Destiny]

Update 2


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Mere mobile par ring hoti hai aur mera dhyan bhang hota hai aur call dekh kar main ascharya main par Jata hoon..... Ye call meri mom ka tha main soch main par jata hun ki abhi abhi to inhe main kitty party main chor kar aaya hun itni jaldi phone kyon kar rahi hai. Main call uthakar...................... Hello maa

Mom...... Kanha hai betu ghar nahin pahuncha
Main....... Maa abhi to main niche hi baitha hun nikla kanha ghar ke liye
Mom- Ascharya se beta 1/2 ghatna ho gaye abhi tak ghar nahin gaya Mrinal intzar kar rahi hai. Main................ Thik hai maa abhi ja raha hun (bare udas man se)
Mom....... Ruk upar aa pahle phir jana

Main dhime kadam se upar ki ore badhte hue mom ke pas pahuncha. Upar jab pahuncha to Roy aunty ne mujhse kaha " Rahul tumhari mom bata rahi thi tumhe market jana hai apni sis ke sath to Ruhi ko bhi sath lete jao wanha Ruhi ko bhi apne liye kuch kharidna hai." Itna sun ne ke bad to mere dil main jaise khushi ki lahar daur gayi aur rah rah film ka dailog yad aa raha tha......"Jab aap kisi ko siddat se chahte ho to puri kaynat use Milane main lag jati hai"

Main yahi sab soch raha tha ki Roy aunty ne Ruhi ko bulaya aur taiyar hokar mere sath market jane ke liye kahne lagi. Par Ruhi ko dekh kar aisha lag raha tha ki wo mere sath nahin jana chahti. Ruhi Roy aunty ki bat ko talte hue......... "Massi main Kiran ke sath sam ko market chali jaungi".

Roy aunty......... Abhi kuch der pahle to Kiran se lar rahi thi ki tujhe urgent market jana hai, ab sam ko bol rahi hai jana hai kyon kya hua.
Ruhi ne jab itna suna to wo jhep gayi aur najren nichi kar boli "Masssi mujhe kiran ke sath jana hai main akele confuse ho jati hoon kya lun kya na lun (jhut)". Roy aunty ruk abhi........ Kiran-Kiran.......................................................................... Kiran-yes mom

Roy aunty......... Ja dono bahan taiyar ho ja Rahul abhi apni sis ke sath market ja raha hai tum dono bhi chale jao. Kiran yes mom bolkar Ruhi ko bhi sath le jati hai man to uska bilkul bhi na tha par ab koi rasta bhi nahin bacha tha. Main man hi muskate hue niche car main aa gaya. Kuch der baad dono bahne taiyar hokar niche aayi. Unko aate dekh mera dhyan Ruhi ki ore jata hai aur main apne aap ko use dekhne se nahin rok pata hoon dekhna kya main to use lagatar Ruhi ko ghoorte ja raha tha.

Is samay wo single dress main upar se lekar niche gutno tak frock type red colour dress main kisi apsarase kam nahin lag rahi thi. Main lagatar use dekhe ja raha tha tabhi kiran ne mujhe tokti hue.................................................................. "Phir se outlook dekhne lage kya".

Main harbdarate hue..... kk kya.
Kiran....... maine poocha phir se ghar ki outlook dekh rahe the?.
Main jhepte hue bola........ "Nahin main to apne 12tn ke result ke bare main soch raha tha (jhut)".​

Kiran aage mere sath driving seat par aur Ruhi piche baithi. Kiran baithte hue mujhse poochi........ "Tum to dist. topper the na 10th main to tumhe kab se result ki chinta hone lagi". main Kya bolata ab phir bhi maine kaha........... "Chinta kyon na ho ek marks se 1st position se 2nd par aa sakta hoon" Aur phir isi tarah se hum bate karte Mrinal ko lene ghar pahunch gaye.

Jab main car se utra to pahli bar Ruhi ne meri taraph normal najaron se dekhi ho sakta hai topper ki baat ko jankar. Hum ghar pahunche to Alisha hall main baithi thi. Us se Mrinal ke bare main poocha to pata chala ki wo apni saheli Sonal ko lene gayi hai. Plan kuch aisha tha ki main mom ko drop kar ghar se Mrinal ko pick karunga phir Sonal ke ghar jana tha aur wanha se market but main late ho gaya to Mrinal pick karne chali gayi.

Alisha ne jab kiran ko dekhi to us se bate karne lagi aur aane ke bare main pooch ne lagi. Wo dono bat kar rahe the tabhi mere kano main pahli bar Ruhi ki awaz aayi "Washroom kanha hai". Main ati prasan pahli bar Ruhi ki awaz suni badi surili aur manmohak awaz thi.Maine use washroom tak le gaya wanha se aane ke bad maine poocha.... "Kuch tea ya coffee chalegi".

Mere is tarah poochne se pahli bar Ruhi ne smile ke sath jawab di..... "Ji nahin" Par use dekhne ke baad to jaise mera dimag hi kam na kare phir poocha............................................. khana lagaun kya? Mere itna bolte hi wo hasne lagi sach kahoon to use haste dekh aisha laga ki jaise mere upar phoolon ki barish ho rahi hai, background music baj rahe hai, sara mahol tham chuki thi bas kewal Ruhi main hi halchal najar aa rahi thi. Main chup chap khara dekh raha tha.

Ruhi meri chuppi todte hue, Ruhi chuktki bajati hue........ "Hello kanha kho gaye Rahul sir"
Main......... Kahin nahin bas tumhe haste dekh raha tha
Ruhi apni hansi ko rokti hue....... Main saf saf bata dun ki is tarah kisi ka ghorna mujhe acha nahin lagta
Maim.......... Sorry
Ruhi......... Ok but aage se dhyan rakhna
Main....... Waise Ruhi kya main ek bat pooch sakta hoon
Ruhi apne aap main kuch badbadti hue chid kar........ Haan ! Poocho
Main......... Kisi bhi khoobsorat prakritik soundrya ko dekhne main kya burai hai
Ruhi.......... Normal way main, samjhi nahin
Main............ Suppose bahut khoobsorat manmohak panchhiyon ka jhaund khule aasman me urr rahi hai, ya kisi dal par baith kar uski sobha bdha rahi hai. kya karogi ?
Ruhi......... Use dekhun gi.
Main........... Achha ! Aur chune ya pakrne ki kosis ki to ?
Ruhi.......... Dar kar ud jayegi
Main............ Bas usi tarah main tumhare manmohak roop ko dekhta hoon kya burai hai, bura tab jab kuch galat karun main to natural beauti dekh raha hoon.

Ruhi ko mera logic sayad samajh main aa Jata hai wo is topic ko change kar deti hai..... "So Rahul apne school ka topper boy aap to kaphi intteligent nikle"
Main..... Nahi bas thodi mehnat or topic related clearence hone se aisha hua hai aur kuch nahi.
Ruhi..... O' matlab ek routaine ko follow karte hai aap
Main..... Haan kah sakti ho.... Waise aam tor par padne ka subject rendom hota hai par subject ke ander ki topic ek sequence ko follow karti hai
Ruhi..... Hmmmm ! To itne bare topper ke to kai fan honge. Kitni GF hai aap ki ab tak ?

Ruhi ki is sawal par main thoda sharma gaya kyonki main abtak kabhi kisi larki se yun kahi gayi baten nahi suni thi. Ye mera pahla mauka tha jab koi mujh se mere GF hone ke bare me pooch rahi thi. Waise to Ruhi ko dekh hi mera dil dharak jata tha. Ek man hua ki bol doon "abtak to koi GF nahi Ruhi ji par na jane kyon jab se aap ko dekha aap ko hi GF banane ki khwaish hai" Par kya karoon himmat jo hai wo kanha se laun. Bari widmabna thi Ruhi larki hokar mujh se mere GF ke bare me pooch rahi thi aur main larka hokar kuch bhi kahne ki himmat nahi juta pa raha tha.

"Hello.... Aap ye bar-bar kanha gum ho jate hai. Kanhi Gf ke pas to khayalon me nahi pahunch gaye"​

Main..... Are nahi Ruhi ji. Main to bas ye soch raha tha ki kya jawaw doon kyonki GF to koi hai nahi, haan yadi jhooth bol doon to kaisa rahega. Kyonki sayad aaj kal kisi larke ke pass GF na ho ya kisi larki ke pas BF to use inferior najron se dekha jata hai

Ruhi..... Hansti hue, Are aissha nahi hai main to yun hi pooch rahi thi kewal ye janne ke khyal se ki kya toppers ke bhi GF/BF hoti hai ya poora din kitabon me hi doobe rahte hai.

Main...... Dekha aap bhi mazak urane lagi. Khair kuch-kuch aap sahi hai. Lekin mere pas paryapt samay bachta hai apne doston aur ghar ke logon ke liye. Par aaj tak kabhi khyal nahi aayi ki koi GF ho. Ghar, dost aur apna study room bas yahi duniya...

"Aur tum bhi Ruhi, jo sayad main kah na sakoon"

Adha gahnta Ruhi ki khumari me khoya raha aisa bhi koyi karta hai.isse ladki nehi pategi ulta chappal utarkar de maregi aur bolegi bhag chichore kahi aur jakar apni roti senk. Yaha ka tava tanda hain.

betu ke sath market jane ko bola to Ruhi jhuthi bahne banane laga lekin uski jhuthi bahana kisi kam na aaya. Miss.roy ne kiran ke sath use bhej hi diya.bato bato me jab pata chala bande ko jitna nakara aur nalayak samjha jaa raha tha utna hain nehi banda district toopar hai.bato ka silshila sooroo hua jisme Ruhi ne saaf saaf bol diya use taka jhaki karne wale ladke bilkul pasand nehi hai.to mahasay jara chhichhore harkate karna kam kar do agar Ruhi ko gf banana hai to.bat akar atki gf par to betu to atak gaya gf thi nehi to kiya bolti jo bolna tha wo to man me hi kah diya.taarif shavdh hai bada gajab ka, shavdho ko ek lay me sajakar kisi ko kaha jaye to sunne wala Mohit ho jaye waisa hi betu ne bade hi khubsurt shavdho me tariff bhi kiya air bata bhi diya kyu vo Ruhi ko dekh raha tha.

Shandar adbhut aatulniy update tha jisne shavdo ka maya jal rach diya.

 

[Destiny]

Desibee par copy paste kahani chal rahi thi jo beech mein atki hui thi.... Usme kisi reader ne comment mein aapka nam diya ...Original writer bataya...Meine apka id name google search me dala to gossip par completed story ka link mil gaya....
Xp par akar jab kahaniyan padhi to fb, twitter sab chhod diya ....Kyonki yahan ke dost aur unki post jyada realistic lagi...

To kamdev ji aap bhi desi bee ke redar the mai bhi un me se ek hu aur bahut si kahani xf ki Desi bee par adha hu.​

 

[Destiny]

kya baat hai .... ....

waise desibaba par adhuri story dekh kar kya aapne wariter ko dil se gali di thi kya

Pakka gali di hogi ye bhi koyi poochane ki bat hi

 

[kamdev99008]

To kamdev ji aap bhi desi bee ke redar the mai bhi un me se ek hu aur bahut si kahani xf ki Desi bee par adha hu.​

Desibees band hone ke samay
..hindi story section ka moderator (MOD ya MAD ) bhi tha

Xossip par registration isi story par comment karne ke liye kiya tha
Varna pahle to guest appearance me chupchap kahani padhkar nikal jata tha

 

[Destiny]

Desibees band hone ke samay
..hindi story section ka moderator (MOD ya MAD ) bhi tha

Xossip par registration isi story par comment karne ke liye kiya tha
Varna pahle to guest appearance me chupchap kahani padhkar nikal jata tha

Desi bee par makki ban bahut ghuma lekin mod par jyada dhyn nehi diya tha gest jo tha