Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

[Siraj Patel]

Update 47

Rinky : par yeh kiska ghar hai.

Kaal ( mushkurate hue ) : aapke damad rohan ka.

Ab aageeeee..

Suresh : par hum yaha kese reh sakte hai

Kaal : kiuki aap sab bhi rohan ke maa or dad hue

Rinky : vo kese

Kaal : kiuki sunaina apki beti jaise hai. To rohan bhi to apka beta jaisa hua na.
Or baaki sab baat bad me abhi mujhe raajlok jana hai.

Or kaal vaha se gayab hokar raajlok chala jata hai.

Rinky kaal se puch or bhi puchne wali thi magar kaal usse pehle vaha se gayab ho jata hai

Rinky ( mann me ) : kaal ne aisa kiu kaha ki sunaina meri beti jaise hai.

Is baat par rinky ko rona aa jata hai ki kahi yeh baat sach hue to
Isliye rinky suresh se

Rinky ( suresh se rote hue ) : kaal ne aisa kiu kaha ki sunaina meri beti jaise hai.
Mein sunaina ko bohot bohot pyaar karti hue.

Rinky suresh ke gale lag kar

Rinky ( behad rote hue ) : suresh sunaina hamari beti hai na.
Bolo na suresh
Sunaina hamari beti hai na.

Suresh ( mann me ) : ab rinky ko kese batau ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.
Sunaina to mujhe piche jeep ki seet par me mili thi.
Or hamari beti to mari hue paida hue thi.
Agar yeh sach rinky ko pata chala to pata nahi rinky kya kar le.
Mujhe yeh sach rinky se chupana hii hoga.
Nahi to rinky kuch bhi kar sakti hai.
Shayad apni jaan na lele.
Kiuki rinky ka jo sunaina se lagav hai uska mein kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta.
Hamesha rinky sunaina ki tension karti rehti hai.
Nahi nahi yeh sach rinky ko kabi nahi pata chalna chahiye.

Suresh ( rinky se ) : rinky rona band karo Sunaina hamari hii beti hai.
Shayad kaal ke muh se galti se nikal gaya hoga.
Ki sunaina hamari beti jaise hai.


Rinky ( rote hue ) : tum sach bol rahe ho na suresh sunaina hamari beti hai na.

Suresh rinky ke ashu pohochte hue.

Suresh : haa rinky sunaina hamari hii beti hai.
Or tume aisa kiu laga ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.
Tumne to sunaina ko bachpan se pala hai.
Or itna pyaar se bada kiya hai.

Suresh ( rinky se puchte hue ) : Tumne kabi laga ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.

Rinky : nahi kabi nahi.
Sunaina to meri jaan hai.
Or mera sab kuch
Mein kabi sunaina ke bina nahi reh paugi suresh.

Suresh : isliye to hamare damad rohan ne hume yaha bheja hai jisse tum hamesha apni beti ke sath reh sako.
Hume to khuss hona chahiye ki rohan hamari beti ko itna chahata hai.
Or hume bhi.

Rinky masoom se sakal banakar.

Rinky : hume kese suresh.

Suresh rinky ke gaal sehlate hue.

Suresh : kiuki rohan ko pata hai ki jaise sunaina hamari jaan hai vaise hii hum bhi sunaina ki jaan hai .
Or rohan kabi bhi sunaina ko dukh me nahi dekh sakta tha.
Isliye to hume bachane ke liye rohan ne kaal ko bheja tha.


Rinky : haa yeh baat to sahi hai. Agar kaal nahi ata to vo rakshas hume mar dalte.
Or yeh dukh shayad sunaina bhi nahi seh pati
Or sunaina ko khon bhi shamalta.
Isliye shayad rohan ne kaal ko bhej diya hume bachane ke liye.
Magar suresh hum apne damad ke ghar me kese reh sakte hai.

Suresh : yeh baat to tum sahi bol rahi ho rinky ki koi bhi maa baap apni beti ke ghar me kese reh sakta hai.
Hume is baare mein sunaina se baat karege.

Rinky : magar ko shaktiya or vo rakshas .
Or vo mahakaal yeh sab kya hai suresh mujhe kuch bhi shamaj nahi aya.
Or agar rohan hii mahakaal hai to vo sunaina se itna door kiu hai.
Humse sunaina ka hath kiu nahi mangne ata.
Agar rohan bhi sunaina se itna pyaar karta hai to.
Or bhi bohot saare sawal hai jinke jawab mujhe nahi pata.

Suresh : rinky jis sawal ka jawab malum na ho to hume in sab ko samay par chor dena chahiye.
Or in sab ki ab tum tension mat lo.
Tum kuch jyada hii tension le leti ho.
Fir tumari tabiyaat kharab ho jati hai.
Hume abhi yeh sochkar khuss hona chahiye ki sunaina hamare paas hai or hum sunaina ke pass.
Or hume kya chahiye.


Rinky : aap sahi bol rahe ho
Magar hamari beti sunaina abhi tak aae kiu nahi.

Suresh : yahi to mein soch raha hu.

Tabi
Roma vaha aa jati hai kaise vo apko pata chal gaya hai.
Or isko baat kya hue vo bhi.

Ki roma ne sunaina ke mom dad ko bata diya tha ki sunaina apne friend ke pass gayi hai.
Or subha tak aaegi.

Or rinky or suresh itni dhakan ke baad sone chale jate hai.

Or roma rinky or suresh ka subha tak khayal rakhti hai.

Flashback end.

Flashback khatam hote hii sunaina ke mann me bohot dukh or gusse or khussi ke mile jule bhaw ane lagte hai.
Dukh is baat ka ki un rakshasho ne rinky ke sath aise harkat ki or gussa is baat ka ki sunaina ko apni mom dad ko chorkar party mein nahi jana chahiye tha.
Or khussi is baat ki un rakshasho ne aisa ganda kaam ke liye mafi mangi

Yeh to pata nahi chala ki unrakshasho ne mafi kiu magi rohan ke der se ya iski or koi bhi baja thi.

Or sunaina us time is baat par gour nahi karti ki vo rinky or suresh ki asli beti nahi hai.

Kiuki rinky ka us dukh or takleef mein hii dekhkar sunaina ka dil rone lagta hai.
Shayad yeh baat sunaina ko baad me yaad aae ki suresh ne mann me kaha tha ki sunaina uski beti nahi hai.

Or sunaina saare dard ko apne ander samet leti hai.
Or sunaina ko is baat ki khussi hoti hai ki rohan bhi sunaina se utna hii pyaar karta hai jitna sunaina rohan se

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : acha yeh kaal khon hai.

Tiger : sister saari baat yahi karogi yaa ander bhi chalogi.

Sunaina : thik hai brother chalo ander.

Or sunaina jaise hii gate bajati hai.

Tabi ek guard side ke camere se puchta hai.

Guard : haa jii kisse milna hai.

Sunaina : mere hii ghar mein mujhse puch rahe ho ki kisse milna hai.

Guard : ooo sorry medam
Mein yaha naya hu isliye pehchan nahi paya
Aap sunaina medam hai na.

Sunaina : jii haa
Magar tumko appoint kisne kiya.

Guard : mujhe nahi pata


Sunaina : fir tum yaha kese.

Guard : mere ek friend ne mujhe yaha job karne ke liye kaha to mein yaha job karne laga

Sunaina : thik hai.
Ab gate kholne ke liye bhi thodi pehchan banao ge kya.

Guard : sorry medam.

Jaise hii gate kholne ke liye gurad utta hai

Vaise hii apne aap gate khul gata hai.

Or sunaina or tiger ke ander jate hii apne aap band ho jata hai.

Guard ( mann me ) : yeh kese hua lagta hai iski technology me abhi tak shamaj nahi paya hu.
Choro mujhe kya.

Sunaina jaise hii samne dekhti hai.


Sunaina ( guard se ) : yeh log khon hai.

Guard : khon medam
Yaha to bas hum 20 guard hai
Or mujhe to koi bhi dikai nahi de raha hai.

Sunaina : sabi guard se
Bhai samne dekho samne.

Sabi guard samne dekhte hai magar unko koi bhi dikai nahi deta.
Sabi guard : mam hum sab ko koi bhi dikai nahi de raha.

Sunaina : tumse to puchna hii bekar hai
Mein khud hii inse puch leti hu.
Tum apna kaam karo.

Sunaina un logo ke pass jate hue.

Sunaina ( un logo se ) : ab tum khon ho bhai.
Bade hii azib lag rahe ho.
Or bohot khatarnak bhi.

Tabi unme se ek aadmi sunaina ke gale mein vo locket dekhta hai.

Sabi behad khuss hokar.

Sabi : apka punaar janam ho gaya.
Apko dubara dekhkar hamara jeevan safal ho gaya .

Sunaina fir shocked hokar bolti hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh mere sath ho kya raha hai .
Tum mujhe mata bolte ho.
Or yeh log to or bhi mahan hai bol rahe hai jeevan safal ho gaya.
Mera to dimak kharab ho gaya hai.

Tabi tiger un logo ko gour se dekhta hai.

Tabi tiger shocked hokar un sab se bolta hai.

Tiger : tum yaha par kese.
Kalindi tume yaha kisne bulaya.

Kalindi : rohan ne.

Jab sunaina bhi yeh baat sunti hai to vo bhi shocked ho jati hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh khon hai tiger or tum inko dekhkar shocked kiu hue.

Tiger : sister yeh raajlok ke kuch senik hai or yeh raajlok ka senapati kalindi hai .
Jo apke or apki mom dad ki raksha karne aae hai.
Jisse dubara vo jhatna na ho jo abhi hue thi.
Or apke mom dad ko kuch nahi ho.
Or rohan malikk shayad dubara koi risk nahi lena chahate the isliye shayad unhone kalandi ko bhej diya.
Is mehal ki suraksha ke liye.

Sunaina ( locket se ) : lagta hai mere gusse se tum kuch jyada hii der gaye.
Isliye tumne inko yaha bhej diya ( yeh baat sunaina ne khuss hokar kahi )

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : magar yeh senik un guard ko kiu nahi dikai diye.

Tiger : sister vo ek insaan hai or yeh raajlok ke senik
To un guard ko yeh senik kese dikai de sakte hai.
Yeh senik sirf unko hii dikai de sakte hai jo is dharti lok ka na ho.

Sunaina : par mein to dharti lok ki hii hu or mein insaan bhi hu.

Tiger : kiuki apka relation raajlok or rohan se hai is bajase.
Jis bhi insaan ka relation raajlok se hoga yeh senik sirf unko hii dikai dege.

Sunaina : acha thik hai
Magar jo bhi tumne kaha mujhe kuch bhi shamaj me nahi aya
Or abhi mujhe is baare me nahi sochna hai or na hii puchna hai.

Abhi mujhe apni mom or dad se milna hai.

Or sunaina gate ki bell bajati hai.

Tabi rinky gate kholti hai.

Sorry bhaiyo abhi mere relative me kisi ka opration hai.
Jis baja se mujhe vaha jana pada isliye update nahi likh paya tha.
Abhi bhi vahi hu magar thoda time nikal kar ek chota sa update likh diya.
Jyada waiting ke comment dekhte hue

Dhansu update bhai Mast aur Zabardast bole to ekdum jhakaas or rapchik

Bahut hi badiya update hai bhai aur aap ki story Mein suspense pe suspense milte hi jaa rahe hain jisse besabri se Agle update Ka Intezar rehne laga hai or story read karne ka maza double Hota ja raha hai
Aise hi badiya update dete raho aage ka intezar rahega

Keep going
We will wait for next update

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[Raguhalkal]

Bhai mujhe lagta hai apko story pasand nahi aae kiuki apne mere kisi bhi update ka review nahi diya


Bhai 47 update posted


Aap apna review jarur dena ki apko vo update kesa laga

Bhai bhai....


Pyar ki hadd paar karo baat ki nahi maine sari update pichle ek hafte me padi or sari ki sariko ek hi comment diya bas abb ek ek update ko ek ek comment nahi likh sakta na kyunki isse page bi bad jaye gi or mera time bi bekaar me bas issi me chala jayega ki me koi or story pad na saku


Pls pls..... bura mat manna muje story bahut matlub bahut achi lagi or me har kisi update me cmt nahi deta ye aap kisi bi thread per jaa kar pata karo jo muje bahuti bhata hai jaha muje kuch gadbad lagti bas wahi per cmt karta hu

Ek tarah se keh sakte ho me ek silent reader hu

Iss cmt ko bi aap ab likh raha hu kyunki mera ab night shift chal raha hai to thoda time hai mobile dekne ka agar mera day shift lagg gaya to aap ko pata bi nahi chalega ki me kab aya or kab update pada or chala gaya

Bas aap ye samjlo ki story muje bahut achi lagi or cmt me jab chahe jaha chahe karunga pls mera bi kuch majboori hai samjne ki koshish karo


pls......

 

[Raguhalkal]

Or update 47th ke bare batana hi hai to rinky ko suresh such bata dena chahiye tha agar ye baat sunaina ki muh galti se bi nikal gayi ya kisi or se pata chali to rinky ko bahut jyada dukh hoga ye mera manna hai baki jo apko teek lage

 

[Raguhalkal]

Or ek last baat baki hai bhai

Update jate jate chota hote ja rahe hai

Aap thoda samay lelo koi load nahi jitna chahe lelo shanti se baitke socho aaj kya dhamake karna hai haan har kisi update me damake hona jaruri nahi hai per hoto or intresting hojayega or last me matlub update ki end koi suspence dalo isse agli update ki prateeksha or bad jayegi or update thoda bada likho jaldbaji me likke koi gadbad mat kardena kyunki itni achi story ki band baj jayegi ha ha.....ha.....

 

[King Aryan]

Update 47

Rinky : par yeh kiska ghar hai.

Kaal ( mushkurate hue ) : aapke damad rohan ka.

Ab aageeeee..

Suresh : par hum yaha kese reh sakte hai

Kaal : kiuki aap sab bhi rohan ke maa or dad hue

Rinky : vo kese

Kaal : kiuki sunaina apki beti jaise hai. To rohan bhi to apka beta jaisa hua na.
Or baaki sab baat bad me abhi mujhe raajlok jana hai.

Or kaal vaha se gayab hokar raajlok chala jata hai.

Rinky kaal se puch or bhi puchne wali thi magar kaal usse pehle vaha se gayab ho jata hai

Rinky ( mann me ) : kaal ne aisa kiu kaha ki sunaina meri beti jaise hai.

Is baat par rinky ko rona aa jata hai ki kahi yeh baat sach hue to
Isliye rinky suresh se

Rinky ( suresh se rote hue ) : kaal ne aisa kiu kaha ki sunaina meri beti jaise hai.
Mein sunaina ko bohot bohot pyaar karti hue.

Rinky suresh ke gale lag kar

Rinky ( behad rote hue ) : suresh sunaina hamari beti hai na.
Bolo na suresh
Sunaina hamari beti hai na.

Suresh ( mann me ) : ab rinky ko kese batau ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.
Sunaina to mujhe piche jeep ki seet par me mili thi.
Or hamari beti to mari hue paida hue thi.
Agar yeh sach rinky ko pata chala to pata nahi rinky kya kar le.
Mujhe yeh sach rinky se chupana hii hoga.
Nahi to rinky kuch bhi kar sakti hai.
Shayad apni jaan na lele.
Kiuki rinky ka jo sunaina se lagav hai uska mein kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta.
Hamesha rinky sunaina ki tension karti rehti hai.
Nahi nahi yeh sach rinky ko kabi nahi pata chalna chahiye.

Suresh ( rinky se ) : rinky rona band karo Sunaina hamari hii beti hai.
Shayad kaal ke muh se galti se nikal gaya hoga.
Ki sunaina hamari beti jaise hai.


Rinky ( rote hue ) : tum sach bol rahe ho na suresh sunaina hamari beti hai na.

Suresh rinky ke ashu pohochte hue.

Suresh : haa rinky sunaina hamari hii beti hai.
Or tume aisa kiu laga ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.
Tumne to sunaina ko bachpan se pala hai.
Or itna pyaar se bada kiya hai.

Suresh ( rinky se puchte hue ) : Tumne kabi laga ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.

Rinky : nahi kabi nahi.
Sunaina to meri jaan hai.
Or mera sab kuch
Mein kabi sunaina ke bina nahi reh paugi suresh.

Suresh : isliye to hamare damad rohan ne hume yaha bheja hai jisse tum hamesha apni beti ke sath reh sako.
Hume to khuss hona chahiye ki rohan hamari beti ko itna chahata hai.
Or hume bhi.

Rinky masoom se sakal banakar.

Rinky : hume kese suresh.

Suresh rinky ke gaal sehlate hue.

Suresh : kiuki rohan ko pata hai ki jaise sunaina hamari jaan hai vaise hii hum bhi sunaina ki jaan hai .
Or rohan kabi bhi sunaina ko dukh me nahi dekh sakta tha.
Isliye to hume bachane ke liye rohan ne kaal ko bheja tha.


Rinky : haa yeh baat to sahi hai. Agar kaal nahi ata to vo rakshas hume mar dalte.
Or yeh dukh shayad sunaina bhi nahi seh pati
Or sunaina ko khon bhi shamalta.
Isliye shayad rohan ne kaal ko bhej diya hume bachane ke liye.
Magar suresh hum apne damad ke ghar me kese reh sakte hai.

Suresh : yeh baat to tum sahi bol rahi ho rinky ki koi bhi maa baap apni beti ke ghar me kese reh sakta hai.
Hume is baare mein sunaina se baat karege.

Rinky : magar ko shaktiya or vo rakshas .
Or vo mahakaal yeh sab kya hai suresh mujhe kuch bhi shamaj nahi aya.
Or agar rohan hii mahakaal hai to vo sunaina se itna door kiu hai.
Humse sunaina ka hath kiu nahi mangne ata.
Agar rohan bhi sunaina se itna pyaar karta hai to.
Or bhi bohot saare sawal hai jinke jawab mujhe nahi pata.

Suresh : rinky jis sawal ka jawab malum na ho to hume in sab ko samay par chor dena chahiye.
Or in sab ki ab tum tension mat lo.
Tum kuch jyada hii tension le leti ho.
Fir tumari tabiyaat kharab ho jati hai.
Hume abhi yeh sochkar khuss hona chahiye ki sunaina hamare paas hai or hum sunaina ke pass.
Or hume kya chahiye.


Rinky : aap sahi bol rahe ho
Magar hamari beti sunaina abhi tak aae kiu nahi.

Suresh : yahi to mein soch raha hu.

Tabi
Roma vaha aa jati hai kaise vo apko pata chal gaya hai.
Or isko baat kya hue vo bhi.

Ki roma ne sunaina ke mom dad ko bata diya tha ki sunaina apne friend ke pass gayi hai.
Or subha tak aaegi.

Or rinky or suresh itni dhakan ke baad sone chale jate hai.

Or roma rinky or suresh ka subha tak khayal rakhti hai.

Flashback end.

Flashback khatam hote hii sunaina ke mann me bohot dukh or gusse or khussi ke mile jule bhaw ane lagte hai.
Dukh is baat ka ki un rakshasho ne rinky ke sath aise harkat ki or gussa is baat ka ki sunaina ko apni mom dad ko chorkar party mein nahi jana chahiye tha.
Or khussi is baat ki un rakshasho ne aisa ganda kaam ke liye mafi mangi

Yeh to pata nahi chala ki unrakshasho ne mafi kiu magi rohan ke der se ya iski or koi bhi baja thi.

Or sunaina us time is baat par gour nahi karti ki vo rinky or suresh ki asli beti nahi hai.

Kiuki rinky ka us dukh or takleef mein hii dekhkar sunaina ka dil rone lagta hai.
Shayad yeh baat sunaina ko baad me yaad aae ki suresh ne mann me kaha tha ki sunaina uski beti nahi hai.

Or sunaina saare dard ko apne ander samet leti hai.
Or sunaina ko is baat ki khussi hoti hai ki rohan bhi sunaina se utna hii pyaar karta hai jitna sunaina rohan se

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : acha yeh kaal khon hai.

Tiger : sister saari baat yahi karogi yaa ander bhi chalogi.

Sunaina : thik hai brother chalo ander.

Or sunaina jaise hii gate bajati hai.

Tabi ek guard side ke camere se puchta hai.

Guard : haa jii kisse milna hai.

Sunaina : mere hii ghar mein mujhse puch rahe ho ki kisse milna hai.

Guard : ooo sorry medam
Mein yaha naya hu isliye pehchan nahi paya
Aap sunaina medam hai na.

Sunaina : jii haa
Magar tumko appoint kisne kiya.

Guard : mujhe nahi pata


Sunaina : fir tum yaha kese.

Guard : mere ek friend ne mujhe yaha job karne ke liye kaha to mein yaha job karne laga

Sunaina : thik hai.
Ab gate kholne ke liye bhi thodi pehchan banao ge kya.

Guard : sorry medam.

Jaise hii gate kholne ke liye gurad utta hai

Vaise hii apne aap gate khul gata hai.

Or sunaina or tiger ke ander jate hii apne aap band ho jata hai.

Guard ( mann me ) : yeh kese hua lagta hai iski technology me abhi tak shamaj nahi paya hu.
Choro mujhe kya.

Sunaina jaise hii samne dekhti hai.


Sunaina ( guard se ) : yeh log khon hai.

Guard : khon medam
Yaha to bas hum 20 guard hai
Or mujhe to koi bhi dikai nahi de raha hai.

Sunaina : sabi guard se
Bhai samne dekho samne.

Sabi guard samne dekhte hai magar unko koi bhi dikai nahi deta.
Sabi guard : mam hum sab ko koi bhi dikai nahi de raha.

Sunaina : tumse to puchna hii bekar hai
Mein khud hii inse puch leti hu.
Tum apna kaam karo.

Sunaina un logo ke pass jate hue.

Sunaina ( un logo se ) : ab tum khon ho bhai.
Bade hii azib lag rahe ho.
Or bohot khatarnak bhi.

Tabi unme se ek aadmi sunaina ke gale mein vo locket dekhta hai.

Sabi behad khuss hokar.

Sabi : apka punaar janam ho gaya.
Apko dubara dekhkar hamara jeevan safal ho gaya .

Sunaina fir shocked hokar bolti hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh mere sath ho kya raha hai .
Tum mujhe mata bolte ho.
Or yeh log to or bhi mahan hai bol rahe hai jeevan safal ho gaya.
Mera to dimak kharab ho gaya hai.

Tabi tiger un logo ko gour se dekhta hai.

Tabi tiger shocked hokar un sab se bolta hai.

Tiger : tum yaha par kese.
Kalindi tume yaha kisne bulaya.

Kalindi : rohan ne.

Jab sunaina bhi yeh baat sunti hai to vo bhi shocked ho jati hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh khon hai tiger or tum inko dekhkar shocked kiu hue.

Tiger : sister yeh raajlok ke kuch senik hai or yeh raajlok ka senapati kalindi hai .
Jo apke or apki mom dad ki raksha karne aae hai.
Jisse dubara vo jhatna na ho jo abhi hue thi.
Or apke mom dad ko kuch nahi ho.
Or rohan malikk shayad dubara koi risk nahi lena chahate the isliye shayad unhone kalandi ko bhej diya.
Is mehal ki suraksha ke liye.

Sunaina ( locket se ) : lagta hai mere gusse se tum kuch jyada hii der gaye.
Isliye tumne inko yaha bhej diya ( yeh baat sunaina ne khuss hokar kahi )

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : magar yeh senik un guard ko kiu nahi dikai diye.

Tiger : sister vo ek insaan hai or yeh raajlok ke senik
To un guard ko yeh senik kese dikai de sakte hai.
Yeh senik sirf unko hii dikai de sakte hai jo is dharti lok ka na ho.

Sunaina : par mein to dharti lok ki hii hu or mein insaan bhi hu.

Tiger : kiuki apka relation raajlok or rohan se hai is bajase.
Jis bhi insaan ka relation raajlok se hoga yeh senik sirf unko hii dikai dege.

Sunaina : acha thik hai
Magar jo bhi tumne kaha mujhe kuch bhi shamaj me nahi aya
Or abhi mujhe is baare me nahi sochna hai or na hii puchna hai.

Abhi mujhe apni mom or dad se milna hai.

Or sunaina gate ki bell bajati hai.

Tabi rinky gate kholti hai.

Sorry bhaiyo abhi mere relative me kisi ka opration hai.
Jis baja se mujhe vaha jana pada isliye update nahi likh paya tha.
Abhi bhi vahi hu magar thoda time nikal kar ek chota sa update likh diya.
Jyada waiting ke comment dekhte hue

Nice Update

 

[Gagan]

Nice update bro

 

[Heartnot4u]

Update 47

Rinky : par yeh kiska ghar hai.

Kaal ( mushkurate hue ) : aapke damad rohan ka.

Ab aageeeee..

Suresh : par hum yaha kese reh sakte hai

Kaal : kiuki aap sab bhi rohan ke maa or dad hue

Rinky : vo kese

Kaal : kiuki sunaina apki beti jaise hai. To rohan bhi to apka beta jaisa hua na.
Or baaki sab baat bad me abhi mujhe raajlok jana hai.

Or kaal vaha se gayab hokar raajlok chala jata hai.

Rinky kaal se puch or bhi puchne wali thi magar kaal usse pehle vaha se gayab ho jata hai

Rinky ( mann me ) : kaal ne aisa kiu kaha ki sunaina meri beti jaise hai.

Is baat par rinky ko rona aa jata hai ki kahi yeh baat sach hue to
Isliye rinky suresh se

Rinky ( suresh se rote hue ) : kaal ne aisa kiu kaha ki sunaina meri beti jaise hai.
Mein sunaina ko bohot bohot pyaar karti hue.

Rinky suresh ke gale lag kar

Rinky ( behad rote hue ) : suresh sunaina hamari beti hai na.
Bolo na suresh
Sunaina hamari beti hai na.

Suresh ( mann me ) : ab rinky ko kese batau ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.
Sunaina to mujhe piche jeep ki seet par me mili thi.
Or hamari beti to mari hue paida hue thi.
Agar yeh sach rinky ko pata chala to pata nahi rinky kya kar le.
Mujhe yeh sach rinky se chupana hii hoga.
Nahi to rinky kuch bhi kar sakti hai.
Shayad apni jaan na lele.
Kiuki rinky ka jo sunaina se lagav hai uska mein kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta.
Hamesha rinky sunaina ki tension karti rehti hai.
Nahi nahi yeh sach rinky ko kabi nahi pata chalna chahiye.

Suresh ( rinky se ) : rinky rona band karo Sunaina hamari hii beti hai.
Shayad kaal ke muh se galti se nikal gaya hoga.
Ki sunaina hamari beti jaise hai.


Rinky ( rote hue ) : tum sach bol rahe ho na suresh sunaina hamari beti hai na.

Suresh rinky ke ashu pohochte hue.

Suresh : haa rinky sunaina hamari hii beti hai.
Or tume aisa kiu laga ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.
Tumne to sunaina ko bachpan se pala hai.
Or itna pyaar se bada kiya hai.

Suresh ( rinky se puchte hue ) : Tumne kabi laga ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.

Rinky : nahi kabi nahi.
Sunaina to meri jaan hai.
Or mera sab kuch
Mein kabi sunaina ke bina nahi reh paugi suresh.

Suresh : isliye to hamare damad rohan ne hume yaha bheja hai jisse tum hamesha apni beti ke sath reh sako.
Hume to khuss hona chahiye ki rohan hamari beti ko itna chahata hai.
Or hume bhi.

Rinky masoom se sakal banakar.

Rinky : hume kese suresh.

Suresh rinky ke gaal sehlate hue.

Suresh : kiuki rohan ko pata hai ki jaise sunaina hamari jaan hai vaise hii hum bhi sunaina ki jaan hai .
Or rohan kabi bhi sunaina ko dukh me nahi dekh sakta tha.
Isliye to hume bachane ke liye rohan ne kaal ko bheja tha.


Rinky : haa yeh baat to sahi hai. Agar kaal nahi ata to vo rakshas hume mar dalte.
Or yeh dukh shayad sunaina bhi nahi seh pati
Or sunaina ko khon bhi shamalta.
Isliye shayad rohan ne kaal ko bhej diya hume bachane ke liye.
Magar suresh hum apne damad ke ghar me kese reh sakte hai.

Suresh : yeh baat to tum sahi bol rahi ho rinky ki koi bhi maa baap apni beti ke ghar me kese reh sakta hai.
Hume is baare mein sunaina se baat karege.

Rinky : magar ko shaktiya or vo rakshas .
Or vo mahakaal yeh sab kya hai suresh mujhe kuch bhi shamaj nahi aya.
Or agar rohan hii mahakaal hai to vo sunaina se itna door kiu hai.
Humse sunaina ka hath kiu nahi mangne ata.
Agar rohan bhi sunaina se itna pyaar karta hai to.
Or bhi bohot saare sawal hai jinke jawab mujhe nahi pata.

Suresh : rinky jis sawal ka jawab malum na ho to hume in sab ko samay par chor dena chahiye.
Or in sab ki ab tum tension mat lo.
Tum kuch jyada hii tension le leti ho.
Fir tumari tabiyaat kharab ho jati hai.
Hume abhi yeh sochkar khuss hona chahiye ki sunaina hamare paas hai or hum sunaina ke pass.
Or hume kya chahiye.


Rinky : aap sahi bol rahe ho
Magar hamari beti sunaina abhi tak aae kiu nahi.

Suresh : yahi to mein soch raha hu.

Tabi
Roma vaha aa jati hai kaise vo apko pata chal gaya hai.
Or isko baat kya hue vo bhi.

Ki roma ne sunaina ke mom dad ko bata diya tha ki sunaina apne friend ke pass gayi hai.
Or subha tak aaegi.

Or rinky or suresh itni dhakan ke baad sone chale jate hai.

Or roma rinky or suresh ka subha tak khayal rakhti hai.

Flashback end.

Flashback khatam hote hii sunaina ke mann me bohot dukh or gusse or khussi ke mile jule bhaw ane lagte hai.
Dukh is baat ka ki un rakshasho ne rinky ke sath aise harkat ki or gussa is baat ka ki sunaina ko apni mom dad ko chorkar party mein nahi jana chahiye tha.
Or khussi is baat ki un rakshasho ne aisa ganda kaam ke liye mafi mangi

Yeh to pata nahi chala ki unrakshasho ne mafi kiu magi rohan ke der se ya iski or koi bhi baja thi.

Or sunaina us time is baat par gour nahi karti ki vo rinky or suresh ki asli beti nahi hai.

Kiuki rinky ka us dukh or takleef mein hii dekhkar sunaina ka dil rone lagta hai.
Shayad yeh baat sunaina ko baad me yaad aae ki suresh ne mann me kaha tha ki sunaina uski beti nahi hai.

Or sunaina saare dard ko apne ander samet leti hai.
Or sunaina ko is baat ki khussi hoti hai ki rohan bhi sunaina se utna hii pyaar karta hai jitna sunaina rohan se

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : acha yeh kaal khon hai.

Tiger : sister saari baat yahi karogi yaa ander bhi chalogi.

Sunaina : thik hai brother chalo ander.

Or sunaina jaise hii gate bajati hai.

Tabi ek guard side ke camere se puchta hai.

Guard : haa jii kisse milna hai.

Sunaina : mere hii ghar mein mujhse puch rahe ho ki kisse milna hai.

Guard : ooo sorry medam
Mein yaha naya hu isliye pehchan nahi paya
Aap sunaina medam hai na.

Sunaina : jii haa
Magar tumko appoint kisne kiya.

Guard : mujhe nahi pata


Sunaina : fir tum yaha kese.

Guard : mere ek friend ne mujhe yaha job karne ke liye kaha to mein yaha job karne laga

Sunaina : thik hai.
Ab gate kholne ke liye bhi thodi pehchan banao ge kya.

Guard : sorry medam.

Jaise hii gate kholne ke liye gurad utta hai

Vaise hii apne aap gate khul gata hai.

Or sunaina or tiger ke ander jate hii apne aap band ho jata hai.

Guard ( mann me ) : yeh kese hua lagta hai iski technology me abhi tak shamaj nahi paya hu.
Choro mujhe kya.

Sunaina jaise hii samne dekhti hai.


Sunaina ( guard se ) : yeh log khon hai.

Guard : khon medam
Yaha to bas hum 20 guard hai
Or mujhe to koi bhi dikai nahi de raha hai.

Sunaina : sabi guard se
Bhai samne dekho samne.

Sabi guard samne dekhte hai magar unko koi bhi dikai nahi deta.
Sabi guard : mam hum sab ko koi bhi dikai nahi de raha.

Sunaina : tumse to puchna hii bekar hai
Mein khud hii inse puch leti hu.
Tum apna kaam karo.

Sunaina un logo ke pass jate hue.

Sunaina ( un logo se ) : ab tum khon ho bhai.
Bade hii azib lag rahe ho.
Or bohot khatarnak bhi.

Tabi unme se ek aadmi sunaina ke gale mein vo locket dekhta hai.

Sabi behad khuss hokar.

Sabi : apka punaar janam ho gaya.
Apko dubara dekhkar hamara jeevan safal ho gaya .

Sunaina fir shocked hokar bolti hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh mere sath ho kya raha hai .
Tum mujhe mata bolte ho.
Or yeh log to or bhi mahan hai bol rahe hai jeevan safal ho gaya.
Mera to dimak kharab ho gaya hai.

Tabi tiger un logo ko gour se dekhta hai.

Tabi tiger shocked hokar un sab se bolta hai.

Tiger : tum yaha par kese.
Kalindi tume yaha kisne bulaya.

Kalindi : rohan ne.

Jab sunaina bhi yeh baat sunti hai to vo bhi shocked ho jati hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh khon hai tiger or tum inko dekhkar shocked kiu hue.

Tiger : sister yeh raajlok ke kuch senik hai or yeh raajlok ka senapati kalindi hai .
Jo apke or apki mom dad ki raksha karne aae hai.
Jisse dubara vo jhatna na ho jo abhi hue thi.
Or apke mom dad ko kuch nahi ho.
Or rohan malikk shayad dubara koi risk nahi lena chahate the isliye shayad unhone kalandi ko bhej diya.
Is mehal ki suraksha ke liye.

Sunaina ( locket se ) : lagta hai mere gusse se tum kuch jyada hii der gaye.
Isliye tumne inko yaha bhej diya ( yeh baat sunaina ne khuss hokar kahi )

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : magar yeh senik un guard ko kiu nahi dikai diye.

Tiger : sister vo ek insaan hai or yeh raajlok ke senik
To un guard ko yeh senik kese dikai de sakte hai.
Yeh senik sirf unko hii dikai de sakte hai jo is dharti lok ka na ho.

Sunaina : par mein to dharti lok ki hii hu or mein insaan bhi hu.

Tiger : kiuki apka relation raajlok or rohan se hai is bajase.
Jis bhi insaan ka relation raajlok se hoga yeh senik sirf unko hii dikai dege.

Sunaina : acha thik hai
Magar jo bhi tumne kaha mujhe kuch bhi shamaj me nahi aya
Or abhi mujhe is baare me nahi sochna hai or na hii puchna hai.

Abhi mujhe apni mom or dad se milna hai.

Or sunaina gate ki bell bajati hai.

Tabi rinky gate kholti hai.

Sorry bhaiyo abhi mere relative me kisi ka opration hai.
Jis baja se mujhe vaha jana pada isliye update nahi likh paya tha.
Abhi bhi vahi hu magar thoda time nikal kar ek chota sa update likh diya.
Jyada waiting ke comment dekhte hue

Superrrb update Rohan bhaii..
Chalo ek flashback to end hua. ..
Kaal ne khuch had tkk sb clear krr dia...
Rinki ko kch to doubt hua h k sunaina uski beti nii h..
Suresh ne usko sach na bta k accha kia...ye ek maa k lye bht bda shock hota....
Sayad isse wo sambhal na pati..
Bechara guard v confuziya gya h...jadu usko technology lgg rha h...
Rohan ne to swaim Rajlok k Senapati ko hi bhej dia...wahh..
Sunaina ne locket se kha... (lagta hai mere gusse se tum kuch jyada hii der gaye.)...
Bhaii..unko kon btaye jisse hm pyar krte h use gusse m dkh ....k lgta h jse aaj to TITANIC2 banegi....
....
Bhaii...agr upr wale line smj m naa aai ho to ...mjse mtt puchna....q k...mje v nii malum....
Flow flow m jo aaya likh dia...
..
Waiting for next maa beti ka milan update...

 

[Raja thakur]

Nice update

 

[king of darkness0411]

Bura manne ki koi bhi baat nahi hai bhai.
Apko jaisa laga apne vaisa review diya.

Magar mujhe ek baat shamaj me nahi aae ki apko yeh story adultery kiu lagi
Agar apne iske saare update pade hai to.

Or second baat bhai.

Isme jo bhi mantr ke bare me bataya gaya hai.
Unka ek raaz hai bhai

Jo raajlok mein khulega

Kiuki bohot se vardan hote hai bhai .
Jiske karan yeh sab ho raha hai.

Or vaise bhi jo bhi story mein likhta hu .

Vo sari illusions hoti hai.

Meri pyaar ki had ki story bhi actual mein kuch or hai.
Jo dikai ja raha hai vo to bas ek dikava hai.

Asli story to raajrok mein shuru hogi.

Or pyaar ki had paar ek adultary story nahi hai bhai.

Ha or iske baare mein apko aage pata chal jarga.

Or rahi baat sex ki to hero herione ke sath to sex kar hii sakta hai.

Or aapne sahi se sonam ka sex scene pada hoga to apko pata chalega ki sonam sunaina ka hii roop hai.

Or iska kya karan hai.

Or sonam ne sex kiu kiya rahul ke sath vo baat abhi suspence hai bhai.
Jo dheere dheere khulega.


Or story koi bhi ho yaha bhagwan ka jikar ho vaha jaruri nahi hai ki vaha pyaar na ho.

Or sonam ek sath jo rahul ne kiya vo pyaar tha.
Or kuch nahi.
Kya koi bhi bhagwan ko manne wala insan sex nahi kar sakta kya apni patni ya kisi us insaan se jisko vo pyaar karta ho.


Mein sirf is story me ek hii sex scene dikaya hai.


Or aap is baja se soch rahe ho ki meine dusare thread ke hero ko yaha bulaya tha jo ek adultery thread tha.
To mein clear kar du ki meine sirf yaha ek jhalak dikai hai hero ki.


Or life ke full maze ki jo story hai vo bhi illusions hai.
Or life ke full maze thread ki jo story adultary dikai ja rahi hai actual mein vo bhi story adultary nahi hai vo aapko baad mein bataya gayega jab sagar ka raaz khulega.


Meri dono story dikava hai actual mein story kuch or hii hai.

Asha hai apke saare sawal clear ho gae hoge bhai.

Or mujhe acha laga ki apne apni baat rakhi.
Chahe vo kesi bhi ho.

Sabko apni baat kehne ka adhikar hai.


Bhai maine jo story ka plot banaya hai uske baare mein pura to nahi bata sakta ki meine vaha mantar or bhagwan ke baare mein kiu likha.

Magar asha hai ki jo meine aapse kaha hai usse apko mere sawal ka jawab mil gaya hoga.


Bhai bas meine yeh baat apko apke sawal clear karne ke liye kaha hai.
Please in baat ki dil sa mat lagana or bura mat manna.

Its a only story or kuch nahi hai

Thanks bhai Mae samjh gaya
Waiting for next

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome fantastic update
super
jabardast like it
keep posting