Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
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mujhe kuch bhi shamaj me nahi aya
Or abhi mujhe is baare me nahi sochna hai or na hii puchna hai.
Abhi mujhe apni mom or dad se milna hai.
Or sunaina gate ki bell bajati hai.
Tabi rinky gate kholti hai.
Ab aageee..........
Rinky : mera bacha a gaya.
Sunaina rinky ko dekhte hii rote hue gale laga leti hai.
Sunaina ( rote hue ) : mujhe maaf kardo mom ki meri bajase apko itna kuch jhelna pada.
Mujhe lagta hai ki mein kabi achi beti nahi ban pai
Agar achi beti hoti to us din apko kabi chorkar nahi jati.
Or apko itna dukh nahi jhelna padta.
Rinky sunaina se alag hokar sunaina ke ashu pohochte hue bolti hai.
Rinky : tuze aisa kiu lagta hai sunaina ki tu meri achi beti nahi hai.
Teri jaise beti to kismat walo ko milti hai .
Or jo hona hota hai vo kisi ke bas mein nahi hota sunaina.
Vahi
Suresh piche se aate hue.
Suresh ( sunaina se ) : jo apne mom and dad ko itna pyaar karti hai or tera pyaar hii itna tha ki vo rakshas hamara kuch nahi bigar paye.
Or un rakshas ne hum dono se maafi bhi magi.
Jaise hii sunaina suresh ko dekhti hai to apni mom rinky ko chodkar suresh ke gale lag jati hai.
Sunaina ( rote hue ) : I AM SORRY DAD
Suresh : sorry kis baat ka beta.
Or hum thik hai to ab rona band kar.
Rinky jab sunaina ko dekhti ki sunaina abhi bhi ro rahi hai to rinky sunaina ka mann divert karne ke liye mazak me bolti hai.
Rinky ( sunaina se ) : aare aare apne dad ko dekha to apni mom ko chor diya.
Kahi tu apne dad se jyda pyaar to nahi karti or mujhse kam pyaar to nahi karti.
Suresh masti karte hue.
Kiuki suresh ko bhi pata tha ki rinky mazak me bol rahi hai.
Suresh ( haste hue ) : rinky tume kiu itni mirchi lag rahi hai.
Agar meri beti mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karti hai. To
Rinky ( jhoote gusse me ) : haa haa pata hai rakho apni beti ko apne pass aap to aise bol rahe ho jaise sunaina to mujhse kam pyaar karti hai.
Sunaina rinky ko apne pass late hue
Dono ke gale lag jati hai.
Sunaina ( dono se pyaar se ) : mein aap dono se barabar pyaar karti hue.kiuki u r my best mom and dad in the world
Rinky masti karte hue.
Rinky ( sunaina se ) : to fir bichara rohan ka ab kya hoga.
Ab to rohan gaya kaam se (Yeh baat rinky ne sochte hue kahi )
Yeh baat sunakar locket bhi thoda mayus ho jata hai.
Sunaina ( niche garden karke sharmate hue ) : maa aap bhi naa
Mein rohan se bhi bohot pyaar karti hue.
Or yeh baat sunkar locket bhi khuss se khudne lagta hai or idhar udhar hilte hue chamakne lagta hai.
Rinky : meri beti rohan ka naam sunkar sharmati bhi hai.
Dekh kese tera locket teri baat sunakar chamak raha hai or dance bhi kar raha hai.
Or sunaina locket par nazar dalti hai to vo sahi mein yeh sab kar raha hota hai.
Magar udhar suresh pareshan hokar
Suresh ( mann me ) : kya mein sunaina ko btao ki rohan hii mahakaal hai.
Bta hii deta hu kiuki sunaina bhi kabi koi baat nahi chupati or ek bar ka sach lakho jhoot se upar hota hai.
Ab faisla sunaina ko karna hai ki vo yeh jaan kar ki rohan hii mahakaal hai tab bhi usse pyaar karna chahati hai ya nahi.
Kiuki mujhe vo mahakaal bohot hii khatarnak shaks lagta hai.
Kiuki jaise hii un rakshas ne mahakaal ka naam sunna tha kaise thar thar kaap rahe the.
Aisa dubara na ho uske liye mujhe sunaina se baat karni hii hogi
Suresh ( pareshan hokar ) : sunaina mujhe tumko ek baat batani hai rohan ke baare me
Or hum yaha kese aaye us baare mein bhi.
Sunaina niche garden karke
Sunaina : mujhe pata hai aap kya batana chahate ho.
Yahi ki rohan hii mahakaal hai.
Or kaal ne aapko bachaya hai.
Is baar rinky or suresh shocked hokar
Rinky : par tum kese pata chala yeh sab.
Tabi
Tiger : vo mom humne bataya tha sunaina ko
Tabi sunaina tiger ko gusse se dekhte hai.
Sunaina ( tiger se ) : mein apni mom or dad se kuch nahi chupati to tume jhooth bolne ki jaruraat nahi hai.
Sunaina : mom dad mujhe yeh sab is locket ne bataya tha.
Rinky : is locket ne kese bataya tumko
Or yeh ladka khon hai kahi yahi to rohan nahi hai.
Fir
Rinky ( tiger se ) : rohan beta mujhe khussi hue ki aaj tum sunaina ko mil gaye nahi to yeh bichari tumari yaad mein hamesha locket ko hii rohan shamaj kar usse baat karti rehti hai.
Ab sunaina ko chorkar mat jana
Sunaina ( mann me ) : yeh kya ho raha hai jo bhi tiger ko dekhta hai rohan hii shamaj leta hai.
Vaha roma ne tiger ko rohan shamaj liya
Or idhar mom ne
Sunaina : mom yeh to pata nahi is locket ne kese bataya .
Or mom yeh rohan nahi hai.
Yeh tiger hai.
Tiger rinky or suresh ko pakar kar apne gale laga leta hai.
Tiger ( rote hue ) : nice to meet u mom
My name is tiger
T silent baki sab voilent.
Rinky suresh or sunaina shocked ho jate hai ki is harkat par
Ki tiger ne apna introductions rote hue kiu diya.
Sunaina : tiger tum kiu ro rahe ho.
Or rote hue kiu apna introduction de rahe ho.
Tiger apna sir khujate hue.
Tiger ( sunaina se ) : vo kya hai na sister jab apko rote hue dekha to mujhe bhi rona aa gaya tha .
Us time meine apni aap ko control kar liya tha.
Par jab mera time aya mom or dad se baat karne kaa to meine bhi apni acting shuru kar di rone ki.
Sunaina : to kya mein us time rone ki acting kar rahi thi.
Tiger : sister mujhe kya pata.
Yeh baat sunkar sunaina gusse mein tiger ki pitai karne liye liye hath utati hai.
Tabi tiger rinky or suresh se alag hokar.
Bhag ne lagta hai.
Tiger bhagte hue
Tiger : sorry sister mein mazak kar raha tha.
Tabi
Rinky ( gusse me ) : khon ho tum
Or tumne mujhe mom kese bola mein sirf sunaina ki mom hu
Shamjhe
Or yeh rote hue english bolne ki acting kiu ki.
Kahi tum sunaina ke dusare boyfriend to nahi ho
Jaise sunaina tumse has ke baat kar rahi hai isse to aise hii lagta hai.
Suresh ( sunaina se ) : beta kya tiger tumara boyfriend hai jo tum isko yaha ghar par laai ho .
Beta ab rohan ka kya hoga.
Sunaina apne sir par hand rakhte hue.
Sunaina ( dono se ) : yeh dekho mere mom or dad ko inko pata hai mein rohan se pyaar karti hue fir bhi puch rahe hai ki yeh tiger mera boyfriend hai ki nahi.
Sunaina : dad yeh tiger mere bache ki tarha hai.
Suresh shocked hokar
Suresh : bacha matlab yeh tiger tumara bacha hai.
Rinky (rote hue ): beta tum maa kab bani or yeh to tumari hii umar ka lag raha hai .
Rinky sunaina ko hilate hue.
Rinky : sach bata sunaina kahi tune.
Yeh baat sunkar tiger gusse me.
Tiger ( gusse me ) : kesi baat kar rahi ho aap
Yeh meri mata hai mein inka boyfriend kese ho sakta hu.
Or apko sharam ani chahiye aisi baat karte hue.
Gusse mein bhi tiger mann me
Tiger ( mann me ) : mein boyfriend to sirf us ladki ( roma ) ka hii banuga.
Sunaina gusse me
Sunaina : tiger kesi baat kar rahe ho tum mom se yahi sanskar hai tumare ki tum apne se bado se aise baat karo.
Tiger ko apni bhool ka abhas hota hai.
To tiger niche garden karte hue.
Tiger : sorry sister
Agli baar aisi galti nahi hogi.
Sunaina ( halke gusse me ) : or kabi honi bhi nahi chahiye aisi galti tiger.
Tume respect karni chahiye sab logo ki or mere mom dad ki bhi.
Tiger rinky ke samne hand jorkar maafi magte hue.
Tiger ( rinky se ) : sorry mom
Mein dubara kabi aisa nahi boluga.
Rinky ( gusse me tiger se ) : mujhe dubara mom bola na to tere daath ( teeth ) tod dugi.
Mein mom sirf sunaina ki hu teri nahi
Sunaina : mom tiger ko rohan ne bheja hai.
Yaha rehne ko or aap sab ki dekhbal or suraksha karne ko.
Rinky or suresh ko dubara ek bada jhatka lagta hai.
Rinky : kya tu rohan se mil chuki hai.
Sunaina haa mein garden hila deti hai.
Rinky : par kese.
Fir sunaina desh 2 ki saari baat bta deti hai.
Yeh baat sunakar suresh or rinky bohot ghabra jate hai.
Tabi
Sorry dosto mein abhi kisi kaam me phasa hua hu.
Magar fir bhi ek chota sa update de diya.
Update regular de duga but small.
Or agar bada update chahiye to 2 ya 3 din wait karna hoga.
Yeh apko sochna hai
Small update chahiye
Ya do teen din wait karke bada update.
Keep support bhaiyo.
Abhi jitna likha utna post kar diya.
mujhe kuch bhi shamaj me nahi aya
Or abhi mujhe is baare me nahi sochna hai or na hii puchna hai.
Abhi mujhe apni mom or dad se milna hai.
Or sunaina gate ki bell bajati hai.
Tabi rinky gate kholti hai.
Ab aageee..........
Rinky : mera bacha a gaya.
Sunaina rinky ko dekhte hii rote hue gale laga leti hai.
Sunaina ( rote hue ) : mujhe maaf kardo mom ki meri bajase apko itna kuch jhelna pada.
Mujhe lagta hai ki mein kabi achi beti nahi ban pai
Agar achi beti hoti to us din apko kabi chorkar nahi jati.
Or apko itna dukh nahi jhelna padta.
Rinky sunaina se alag hokar sunaina ke ashu pohochte hue bolti hai.
Rinky : tuze aisa kiu lagta hai sunaina ki tu meri achi beti nahi hai.
Teri jaise beti to kismat walo ko milti hai .
Or jo hona hota hai vo kisi ke bas mein nahi hota sunaina.
Vahi
Suresh piche se aate hue.
Suresh ( sunaina se ) : jo apne mom and dad ko itna pyaar karti hai or tera pyaar hii itna tha ki vo rakshas hamara kuch nahi bigar paye.
Or un rakshas ne hum dono se maafi bhi magi.
Jaise hii sunaina suresh ko dekhti hai to apni mom rinky ko chodkar suresh ke gale lag jati hai.
Sunaina ( rote hue ) : I AM SORRY DAD
Suresh : sorry kis baat ka beta.
Or hum thik hai to ab rona band kar.
Rinky jab sunaina ko dekhti ki sunaina abhi bhi ro rahi hai to rinky sunaina ka mann divert karne ke liye mazak me bolti hai.
Rinky ( sunaina se ) : aare aare apne dad ko dekha to apni mom ko chor diya.
Kahi tu apne dad se jyda pyaar to nahi karti or mujhse kam pyaar to nahi karti.
Suresh masti karte hue.
Kiuki suresh ko bhi pata tha ki rinky mazak me bol rahi hai.
Suresh ( haste hue ) : rinky tume kiu itni mirchi lag rahi hai.
Agar meri beti mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karti hai. To
Rinky ( jhoote gusse me ) : haa haa pata hai rakho apni beti ko apne pass aap to aise bol rahe ho jaise sunaina to mujhse kam pyaar karti hai.
Sunaina rinky ko apne pass late hue
Dono ke gale lag jati hai.
Sunaina ( dono se pyaar se ) : mein aap dono se barabar pyaar karti hue.kiuki u r my best mom and dad in the world
Rinky masti karte hue.
Rinky ( sunaina se ) : to fir bichara rohan ka ab kya hoga.
Ab to rohan gaya kaam se (Yeh baat rinky ne sochte hue kahi )
Yeh baat sunakar locket bhi thoda mayus ho jata hai.
Sunaina ( niche garden karke sharmate hue ) : maa aap bhi naa
Mein rohan se bhi bohot pyaar karti hue.
Or yeh baat sunkar locket bhi khuss se khudne lagta hai or idhar udhar hilte hue chamakne lagta hai.
Rinky : meri beti rohan ka naam sunkar sharmati bhi hai.
Dekh kese tera locket teri baat sunakar chamak raha hai or dance bhi kar raha hai.
Or sunaina locket par nazar dalti hai to vo sahi mein yeh sab kar raha hota hai.
Magar udhar suresh pareshan hokar
Suresh ( mann me ) : kya mein sunaina ko btao ki rohan hii mahakaal hai.
Bta hii deta hu kiuki sunaina bhi kabi koi baat nahi chupati or ek bar ka sach lakho jhoot se upar hota hai.
Ab faisla sunaina ko karna hai ki vo yeh jaan kar ki rohan hii mahakaal hai tab bhi usse pyaar karna chahati hai ya nahi.
Kiuki mujhe vo mahakaal bohot hii khatarnak shaks lagta hai.
Kiuki jaise hii un rakshas ne mahakaal ka naam sunna tha kaise thar thar kaap rahe the.
Aisa dubara na ho uske liye mujhe sunaina se baat karni hii hogi
Suresh ( pareshan hokar ) : sunaina mujhe tumko ek baat batani hai rohan ke baare me
Or hum yaha kese aaye us baare mein bhi.
Sunaina niche garden karke
Sunaina : mujhe pata hai aap kya batana chahate ho.
Yahi ki rohan hii mahakaal hai.
Or kaal ne aapko bachaya hai.
Is baar rinky or suresh shocked hokar
Rinky : par tum kese pata chala yeh sab.
Tabi
Tiger : vo mom humne bataya tha sunaina ko
Tabi sunaina tiger ko gusse se dekhte hai.
Sunaina ( tiger se ) : mein apni mom or dad se kuch nahi chupati to tume jhooth bolne ki jaruraat nahi hai.
Sunaina : mom dad mujhe yeh sab is locket ne bataya tha.
Rinky : is locket ne kese bataya tumko
Or yeh ladka khon hai kahi yahi to rohan nahi hai.
Fir
Rinky ( tiger se ) : rohan beta mujhe khussi hue ki aaj tum sunaina ko mil gaye nahi to yeh bichari tumari yaad mein hamesha locket ko hii rohan shamaj kar usse baat karti rehti hai.
Ab sunaina ko chorkar mat jana
Sunaina ( mann me ) : yeh kya ho raha hai jo bhi tiger ko dekhta hai rohan hii shamaj leta hai.
Vaha roma ne tiger ko rohan shamaj liya
Or idhar mom ne
Sunaina : mom yeh to pata nahi is locket ne kese bataya .
Or mom yeh rohan nahi hai.
Yeh tiger hai.
Tiger rinky or suresh ko pakar kar apne gale laga leta hai.
Tiger ( rote hue ) : nice to meet u mom
My name is tiger
T silent baki sab voilent.
Rinky suresh or sunaina shocked ho jate hai ki is harkat par
Ki tiger ne apna introductions rote hue kiu diya.
Sunaina : tiger tum kiu ro rahe ho.
Or rote hue kiu apna introduction de rahe ho.
Tiger apna sir khujate hue.
Tiger ( sunaina se ) : vo kya hai na sister jab apko rote hue dekha to mujhe bhi rona aa gaya tha .
Us time meine apni aap ko control kar liya tha.
Par jab mera time aya mom or dad se baat karne kaa to meine bhi apni acting shuru kar di rone ki.
Sunaina : to kya mein us time rone ki acting kar rahi thi.
Tiger : sister mujhe kya pata.
Yeh baat sunkar sunaina gusse mein tiger ki pitai karne liye liye hath utati hai.
Tabi tiger rinky or suresh se alag hokar.
Bhag ne lagta hai.
Tiger bhagte hue
Tiger : sorry sister mein mazak kar raha tha.
Tabi
Rinky ( gusse me ) : khon ho tum
Or tumne mujhe mom kese bola mein sirf sunaina ki mom hu
Shamjhe
Or yeh rote hue english bolne ki acting kiu ki.
Kahi tum sunaina ke dusare boyfriend to nahi ho
Jaise sunaina tumse has ke baat kar rahi hai isse to aise hii lagta hai.
Suresh ( sunaina se ) : beta kya tiger tumara boyfriend hai jo tum isko yaha ghar par laai ho .
Beta ab rohan ka kya hoga.
Sunaina apne sir par hand rakhte hue.
Sunaina ( dono se ) : yeh dekho mere mom or dad ko inko pata hai mein rohan se pyaar karti hue fir bhi puch rahe hai ki yeh tiger mera boyfriend hai ki nahi.
Sunaina : dad yeh tiger mere bache ki tarha hai.
Suresh shocked hokar
Suresh : bacha matlab yeh tiger tumara bacha hai.
Rinky (rote hue ): beta tum maa kab bani or yeh to tumari hii umar ka lag raha hai .
Rinky sunaina ko hilate hue.
Rinky : sach bata sunaina kahi tune.
Yeh baat sunkar tiger gusse me.
Tiger ( gusse me ) : kesi baat kar rahi ho aap
Yeh meri mata hai mein inka boyfriend kese ho sakta hu.
Or apko sharam ani chahiye aisi baat karte hue.
Gusse mein bhi tiger mann me
Tiger ( mann me ) : mein boyfriend to sirf us ladki ( roma ) ka hii banuga.
Sunaina gusse me
Sunaina : tiger kesi baat kar rahe ho tum mom se yahi sanskar hai tumare ki tum apne se bado se aise baat karo.
Tiger ko apni bhool ka abhas hota hai.
To tiger niche garden karte hue.
Tiger : sorry sister
Agli baar aisi galti nahi hogi.
Sunaina ( halke gusse me ) : or kabi honi bhi nahi chahiye aisi galti tiger.
Tume respect karni chahiye sab logo ki or mere mom dad ki bhi.
Tiger rinky ke samne hand jorkar maafi magte hue.
Tiger ( rinky se ) : sorry mom
Mein dubara kabi aisa nahi boluga.
Rinky ( gusse me tiger se ) : mujhe dubara mom bola na to tere daath ( teeth ) tod dugi.
Mein mom sirf sunaina ki hu teri nahi
Sunaina : mom tiger ko rohan ne bheja hai.
Yaha rehne ko or aap sab ki dekhbal or suraksha karne ko.
Rinky or suresh ko dubara ek bada jhatka lagta hai.
Rinky : kya tu rohan se mil chuki hai.
Sunaina haa mein garden hila deti hai.
Rinky : par kese.
Fir sunaina desh 2 ki saari baat bta deti hai.
Yeh baat sunakar suresh or rinky bohot ghabra jate hai.
Tabi
Sorry dosto mein abhi kisi kaam me phasa hua hu.
Magar fir bhi ek chota sa update de diya.
Update regular de duga but small.
Or agar bada update chahiye to 2 ya 3 din wait karna hoga.
Yeh apko sochna hai
Small update chahiye
Ya do teen din wait karke bada update.
Keep support bhaiyo.
Abhi jitna likha utna post kar diya.
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Bhai aap king of darkness0411 bhai ke review ka reply dene ke liye jo itna Bada comment Kiya Hai itni der Mein To aap ek mast wala update de sakte the
Koi baat nahin un bhai sahab ka doubt be clear karana zaroori Tha Jo aap ne Kar Diya
Sahi kaha bhai magar mein kisi bhi reader ki ke mann koi bhi duvidha nahi rakhna chahata tha.
To yeh karna mujhe sahi laga
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Dhansu update bhai Mast aur Zabardast bole to ekdum jhakaas or rapchik
Bahut hi badiya update hai bhai aur aap ki story Mein suspense pe suspense milte hi jaa rahe hain jisse besabri se Agle update Ka Intezar rehne laga hai or story read karne ka maza double Hota ja raha hai
Aise hi badiya update dete raho aage ka intezar rahega
Keep going
We will wait for next update
Thanks for beautiful comment siraj bhai.
Aap to itna kamal ka comment karte ho ki dil khuss ho jata hai .
Aisi hii support karte roha siraj bhai.
Apne mera bohot support kiya hai siraj bhai.
Har kisi chiz me.
Iske liye mein apko specially thank kahuga.
Aise hi sabki madad karte raho Bohot acha kaam kar rahe ho siraj bhai har kisi ki kabi bhi or kisi bhi time madad karna ek kabiliye tarif hai jo har koi nahi kar pata ,
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Mein bhai apki baat se bilkul sehmat hu
Ki kaam ke time par aap comment nahi kar sakte
Magar aap meri baat nahi shamjhe meine bhai yeh bola tha ki aap ko jab bhi time mila karib 8 ya 10 update mein ek comment to karo jisse pata chale ki logo apko ko meri kahani kitni pasand aae
Agar silent reader ki kabi kawar ek ya 2 comment kar dega kuch update ke bad kar dega to writer ko acha lagega ki unko bhi story pasand aae hai.
Asha hai aap meri baat shamaj gaye ho.
Or agar koi baat buri lagi ho to sorry
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Or ek last baat baki hai bhai
Update jate jate chota hote ja rahe hai
Aap thoda samay lelo koi load nahi jitna chahe lelo shanti se baitke socho aaj kya dhamake karna hai haan har kisi update me damake hona jaruri nahi hai per hoto or intresting hojayega or last me matlub update ki end koi suspence dalo isse agli update ki prateeksha or bad jayegi or update thoda bada likho jaldbaji me likke koi gadbad mat kardena kyunki itni achi story ki band baj jayegi ha ha.....ha.....
Bilkul bhai magar har time suspence dalne se story sirf supence ko hii clear karte nikal gaegi
Magar mein is story mein
Pyaar , dukh , suspence , mazak , unexpected scene ,
Sab kuch dalna chahata hu.
Jisse story me har emosion or baat ka vardan ho.
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