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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

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भाई आपने अगले अपडेट में कई राज खोलने की बात की है लेकिन अगला अपडेट दे कब रहे हैं???
 
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Raj

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Rohan said:
Raj bhai yeh mujhe bhi pata hai ki story abhi vahi ruki hue hai

Magar yeh update jaruri tha is story ke liye
Or next update me yeh sara khel khatam ho gaega
Or haa yeh atma mani bhi ek raaz hai
Or abhi to story 5 percent bhi sahi se nahi hue hai
Agar mein abhi hii raaz khol duga to age ki story me kuch bache ga hii nahi

Or agar apne update dhyaan se pada hoga to apko pata chala hoga ki
Is atma mani ke karan hii ek ladka mahakaal bana hai
Or mahakaal to rohan hai
To iska matlab ki rohan hii mahakaal bana is atma mani ke jariye
Magar kiu or kese vo bhi raaz hai
Yeh baat me kuch update me clear karna chahata tha
Magar apko story sahi se shamaj nahi aa rahi is bajase mein ne yeh raaz khol diya


Or rohan is atma mani se mahakaal kese bana or is atma mani me aise khon si shakti hai yeh bhi abhi raaz hai
Apko itna to pata chal gaya ki koi kali shakti hai isme
Magar abhi bhi bohot sii baate raaz hai




Jo ane wale update me clear hogi


Abhi next update me rahul ka mahakaal (rohan ) se samna hoga jisse yeh pata chal jayega ki rohan ka asli sach kya hai .


Abhi to yeh baat clear hue hai ki rohan hii mahakaal hai
Magar yeh baat abhi clear nahi hue ki agar rohan mahakaal hai to rahul khon hai


Jo 1 ya 2 update ke baad clear hogi





Agar aap sab bologe to mein age ke update me yey baat puri clear kar duga magar fir kahani ka plot fir mujhe change karna padega or story ke bohot sare update delete karne padege

Jisse kahani bohot hii jaldi khatam ho jaegi


Bohot se reader ne mujhe comment me kaha ki sunaina ko rohan se jaldi milao
Or isse bajase mujhe story ka first chapter jaldi khatam karna pada



Next update me rahul ka mahakaal se samna hoga


Or rahul jo do bhago mein divide hua tha
Or jo dusara bhag vaha se gayab ho gaya tha
Iska raaz bhi next 2 update me khulega

Thanks your friend
Rohan
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Rohan said:
Raj bhai yeh mujhe bhi pata hai ki story abhi vahi ruki hue hai

Magar yeh update jaruri tha is story ke liye
Or next update me yeh sara khel khatam ho gaega
Or haa yeh atma mani bhi ek raaz hai
Or abhi to story 5 percent bhi sahi se nahi hue hai
Agar mein abhi hii raaz khol duga to age ki story me kuch bache ga hii nahi

Or agar apne update dhyaan se pada hoga to apko pata chala hoga ki
Is atma mani ke karan hii ek ladka mahakaal bana hai
Or mahakaal to rohan hai
To iska matlab ki rohan hii mahakaal bana is atma mani ke jariye
Magar kiu or kese vo bhi raaz hai
Yeh baat me kuch update me clear karna chahata tha
Magar apko story sahi se shamaj nahi aa rahi is bajase mein ne yeh raaz khol diya


Or rohan is atma mani se mahakaal kese bana or is atma mani me aise khon si shakti hai yeh bhi abhi raaz hai
Apko itna to pata chal gaya ki koi kali shakti hai isme
Magar abhi bhi bohot sii baate raaz hai




Jo ane wale update me clear hogi


Abhi next update me rahul ka mahakaal (rohan ) se samna hoga jisse yeh pata chal jayega ki rohan ka asli sach kya hai .


Abhi to yeh baat clear hue hai ki rohan hii mahakaal hai
Magar yeh baat abhi clear nahi hue ki agar rohan mahakaal hai to rahul khon hai


Jo 1 ya 2 update ke baad clear hogi





Agar aap sab bologe to mein age ke update me yey baat puri clear kar duga magar fir kahani ka plot fir mujhe change karna padega or story ke bohot sare update delete karne padege

Jisse kahani bohot hii jaldi khatam ho jaegi


Bohot se reader ne mujhe comment me kaha ki sunaina ko rohan se jaldi milao
Or isse bajase mujhe story ka first chapter jaldi khatam karna pada



Next update me rahul ka mahakaal se samna hoga


Or rahul jo do bhago mein divide hua tha
Or jo dusara bhag vaha se gayab ho gaya tha
Iska raaz bhi next 2 update me khulega

Thanks your friend
Rohan
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ROHAN BHAI MAIN YE NAHI KAH RAHA HU KI AAP KAHANI ME PHER BADAL KARO .KAHANI KA PLOT BIGADO MAIN YE NAHI KAH RAHA HU.MAI BAS ITNA JAH RAHA HU KI ITANI SAMAY HAR UPDATE SUSPENSE SE BHARA HUA HAI CHARO TARAF BAS SUSPENSE HI SUSPENSE HO GAYA HAI .MAIN YE KAHANA CHAHATA HU KI IN SUSPENSE KE WAJAH SE KAHANI WAHI RUK GAYI HAI .SUSPENSE APNI JAGAH SAHI HAI JO AAPNE SOCHA HAI WAIAA HI LIKHO PAR KAHANI AAGE BADHAO .
AGAR MERI KOI BHI BAAT BURI LAGI HO TOH BHAI DIL SORRY BOLTA HU .
AAP KO JO SAHI LAGE AAP LIKHO KYUN KI KAHANI AAP KI HAI LIKHANA AAP KO HAI KAISE LUKHANA HAI YE AAP SE BEHTAR KOUN JAAN SAKTA HAI .
 
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Sorry bhaiyo kaam ke bajase update nahi likh paya to tomorrow subha update likhta hu

Or raat ko post karta hu


Keep support bhai



Thanks your friend
Rohan
 
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Rohan said:
Raj bhai yeh mujhe bhi pata hai ki story abhi vahi ruki hue hai

Magar yeh update jaruri tha is story ke liye
Or next update me yeh sara khel khatam ho gaega
Or haa yeh atma mani bhi ek raaz hai
Or abhi to story 5 percent bhi sahi se nahi hue hai
Agar mein abhi hii raaz khol duga to age ki story me kuch bache ga hii nahi

Or agar apne update dhyaan se pada hoga to apko pata chala hoga ki
Is atma mani ke karan hii ek ladka mahakaal bana hai
Or mahakaal to rohan hai
To iska matlab ki rohan hii mahakaal bana is atma mani ke jariye
Magar kiu or kese vo bhi raaz hai
Yeh baat me kuch update me clear karna chahata tha
Magar apko story sahi se shamaj nahi aa rahi is bajase mein ne yeh raaz khol diya


Or rohan is atma mani se mahakaal kese bana or is atma mani me aise khon si shakti hai yeh bhi abhi raaz hai
Apko itna to pata chal gaya ki koi kali shakti hai isme
Magar abhi bhi bohot sii baate raaz hai




Jo ane wale update me clear hogi


Abhi next update me rahul ka mahakaal (rohan ) se samna hoga jisse yeh pata chal jayega ki rohan ka asli sach kya hai .


Abhi to yeh baat clear hue hai ki rohan hii mahakaal hai
Magar yeh baat abhi clear nahi hue ki agar rohan mahakaal hai to rahul khon hai


Jo 1 ya 2 update ke baad clear hogi





Agar aap sab bologe to mein age ke update me yey baat puri clear kar duga magar fir kahani ka plot fir mujhe change karna padega or story ke bohot sare update delete karne padege

Jisse kahani bohot hii jaldi khatam ho jaegi


Bohot se reader ne mujhe comment me kaha ki sunaina ko rohan se jaldi milao
Or isse bajase mujhe story ka first chapter jaldi khatam karna pada



Next update me rahul ka mahakaal se samna hoga


Or rahul jo do bhago mein divide hua tha
Or jo dusara bhag vaha se gayab ho gaya tha
Iska raaz bhi next 2 update me khulega

Thanks your friend
Rohan
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Apki story bohot fantastic hai rajeev jii

Apko isme koi bhi change karne ki jaruraat nahi hai apne story me suspence bohot acha dala hai or har scene ko bohot alag tarike se dikaya hai apko jaisi story likhni hai vaise story likho rajeev ji hum sab readers apke sath hai
Aap acha likh rahe ho aise hii likhte raho


Apke next update ke intzaar me

Your friend roshni :hspin:claps::ciao: :dost::hidee:
 
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I m excited for next update bro

Keep posting soon as soon
 
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