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ok aisa hi karta hu bas tum petrol ka intazam kardo
Romance Pyar Wali Love Story ~ Written By Love1994
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for your previous review Bhai musibat nahi tofaan bolo to sahi rahega
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Bhai hero ki what lageli hai...
Phle conductor ne bajai
Fir ishu vishu ne bajai
Wese conductor kuchh jyada hi rob dikha rha tha n hero bhiga billa bna tha
Wese wo ladki thi badi kamal ki phle number lene ni diya fir khud ka achhe se darshan bhi ni karaya
Hero k sath prank ho gawa re baba...
for your previous review Prank
Wese ye idea bhi sahi hai
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Waaaaah kyaa waat lagai hai tino ladkiyo ne milkar akash ki bechare ko pata hi nhi chala ki hua kya tha... Wese hame bhi pata nahi chala ki esa kya huaa hai. Par update bohot mast hai.
for your previous review Bhai mujhe bhi nahi pata akhir ye huwa kya hai
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The matter is about love. When it comes to love, victory is always love. From the words of the hero, it seems that he loves the heroine very much. The conductor is desperate to hear the story. Hero is very innocent. The flashback was also very good. aakash wow what a name.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...
for your previous review Aur ye galat soch mat rakhna ki wo Akash tum ho
Kyu ki aage jake uski bahut wat lagegi
Jo tum apne sath kabhi hone dena nahi chahoge
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Fantastic update bhai Ishu aur Vishu to Aakash ki baja gayi, but woh tufani ladki Kaun Thi Jisne Bina Tel ke Aakash ko pel Ke Chali gayi ,,,,, khair mujhe lagta hai yeh teeno ladkiyan Mili Huyi Hai, Jo planning ke hisab se Bakre Ko Halal Karke maja Lene Ki sochi hongi ,,,,, anyway inka Jawab to Samay hi Dega,, aur Agar ho sake toh flashback ko Jyada Lamba mat khincho,, khair dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai.....
Waiting for next update_____
for your previous review Bhai story puri flashback pe hi tiki hui hai
Use jitna sahi se likhunga utni achhi story tumhe lagegi
Aur jab flashback end hoga to samjhlo wo story ka end part hai
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Had hai yaar ye ladka shiruaat matlab jab janm hua tha tab se shuru ho gayaye scene to mast ban gayi hai lobb dear aur haan mujhe ye lines bhi heart touching lagi ..
Ye kehte huwe mai uske pair pakdne ke liye jhukne laga lekin usne mujhe kandho se pakad ke sida kiya shayad uska dil pighal gaya tha ya fir baki passengers ko pata naa chale is wajah se usne aisa kiya.
Sirf ek jhalak dekhne ke liye kisi ke pairon par bhi jhukne me parhej nahi wah re ishq
fir unhone "kutte, kamine se leke jo galiya shuru ki thi wo mere baap bhai ek karne ke baad hi roki"
Aur uske baad ek aur baar unhone apna hath saaf kiya aur wapas mud ke train me chali gayi..
Lol ye kya ho gaya Aakash ke sath . Gajjab ka prank tha ye . Ho na ho ishu vishu ki ye teesri sathi thi
for your previous reviewWese tumne 2part me review diya wo kafi sahi laga
Kyu ki maine update bhi 2part me likha tha ek abhi aur ek flashback me
Aise hi review dete rehnaa
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