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Kfd se usdin mukable k baad kaal bhanu kafi ghayal hua tha, lekin ab vo swasth tha, lekin ab usne soch liya tha kfd se bhidne k bajaye sidha rakshak per hi hamla ker dega or usko maar dega .


Tabhi vaha vp aata h or bolta h

Vp :- kya soch rahe ho mere bache .

Kaal bhanu unhe saari baat bata deta

Vp:- murkhta mat kero mere bache tum fir se vesi hi murkhta kerne jaa rahe ho ab uski shaktiya jagrit ho chuki h , bhudhi se kaam lo mere bache bhudhi se kaam lo.


Vp :- tumhe apni shaktiyo ko or bhadhana hoga putra tap k madhyam se . Tumhe fir ek baar tap kerna hoga jisse tum or shaktishali ho jao.

Kaal bhanu ko bhi yah baat sahi lagti h or vo bola

Kaal bhanu :- jo aagya pitaji.

Or wo tap pe jane ki teyariyo m lag jata h.

Chaliye chalte h wapas hero ki or .

Aaj subah karan or jyoti rishiwer k kahe anusaar hi aaj se unhone 4 baje uth ker dhayan lagana shuru ker diya.lekin unse ye ho ni paraha tha .

Tab rishi pippalad aate h or unki sahayata kerte hue bolte h.

Rishiwer :- beta sabse pahale apne man ko bilkul khali kero or apne ko bilkul shant kerke prayas kero . Or maha mantra ॐ ka man hi man jaap kero.

Karan or jyoti bhi unki baat maan bilkul vesa hi kerti h . Pahale din to kuch khas asar ni hota per unko aaj apne ander mojud shaktiyon ki anubhuti avashya hoti h.

Fir rishi pippalad unhe kuch or nirdesh diye. Fir jyoti ja ker shivani ko uthati h.shivani jyoti k galo p kiss ker k

Shivani:- good morning didu

Jyoti :- good morning my lil princess.

Phir karan ko bhi vo ese hi wish kerti h .

Rishiwer ne apni shaktiyo se ek baar fir sula diya shivani ko

Karan:- baba ye apne kya kiya or kyu kiya.

Rishi pippalad:- beta jaha tumhara kunal se yudh hua tha wo jagah aashram se bahut dur h , tumhe m waha apni shaktiyon se pahuchunga , isliye mane shivani ko , verna shivani ko ye sab abhi tum kese samjhate .

Karan :- ji baba .

Fir maharishi unhe wahi usi jagah chod dete h or kuch or nirdesh deker vaha se chale jate h.

Jyoti:- chale bhai choti maa abhi bhi tension m hogi na unhonne kuch khaya bhi ni hoga.

Kitna saaf man tha jyoti ka itna sab kuch hone k baad bhi aaj bhi unke dil m kabya k liye wohi samman or wahi pyaar tha.

Karan:- ha gudiya bas ek min .

Fir karan apni jeb se phone nikal ker Hm ko phone milata h.

Karan :- hello namaste uncle m karan bol raha hu , radha ka dost, aapse usdin college m mulakat hui thi na.

Hm:- are haa beta tumhe kese bhul sakta hu beta , tum jese nek or sache dil ka insaan aajkal milta kaha h.
Bolo beta kese yaad kiya koi problem h kya .

Karan :- ha uncle
Fir karan hm ko saari baat bata deta h jo kal hua tha, bas kunal k devil hone or apni powers wali baat chod.

Hm:- us commissioner ki ye majal ruko beta abhi usko dekhta hu.

Karan :- uski jarurat ni h uncle commissioner bhi mar gaya uske apne hi bete ne use maar diya mane chupke se dekha tha ki unki koi baat pe bahas hui thi or kunal ne unke sine m chaku ghop diya.

Hm:- beta itna sab kuch ho gaya tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho raat ko phone ker dete , tumhe apni jaan khatre m dalne ki kya jarurat thi kher chodo tum aaram se ghar jao beta m sab sambhal lunga.

Karan :- thank you uncle
bol phone rakh deta h or karan shivani ko car m letata h or jyoti ko drive kerne ka bol ker khud bike p chal padta h .

Raste m hi shivani ki bhi jind khul gayi per usne koi swal jwab na kiye
Ye rishiwer ka hi kamal tha.

Fir jese hi ghar p wo pahuchte h to shivani dod k apni mummy k gale lag k rone lagti h.

Kabya ki najar jese hi karan or jyoti p padhti h to wo gusse m unke paas ja ker karan ko thappad mar ke bolti h.

Kabya:- teri vjah se hi meri beti ki jaan ko aaj khatra aaya , manhus pahale apni maa ko kha gaye dono or ab beti ko .

Tabhi shivani jor se gusse se chilati h .

Shivani :- bas mummy bahut ho gaya aapka , aapki himmat kese hui mere bhaiya didi ko esa bolne ki ,

Karan:- thoda jor se :- chutki ye kya tamiz h bado se baat kerne ki .

Shivani:- bhai aap itna sab kese sah lete ho , m ab chup ni bethungi bahut sah liya , inko bhi to pata chale ki ye jise manhoos kah ke kos rahi h , aaj unhi ki vajah se unki beti yaha sahi salamat h .

Or wo kal ki saari ghatna suna deti h or wo gusse m apne room m chali jati h.

Karan (hath jod ker) :- choti ki taraf se m maafi mangta hu choti maa ,wo to bachi h , aap badi ho aap chahe to hume kuch bhi bol sakte ho kyunki aap bhi humari maa ho . Aap hume jaan se bhi maar dogi to koi shikwa na hoga aapse choti maa.bas shivani ko mat kuch kahiyega

Or nam aankho se

Karan :- or aapne shayad sahi hi kaha h hum h hi manhoos shayad hamare kaaran hi mummy

Bol ker rone lagta h jor jor se jyoti use kese n kese sambhal k apne room m le jati h . Ro to wo bhi rahi thi per usne apne bhai ko sambhalna pahale jyada jaruri samjha.

Kabya to ye sab sun ker but ban gayi thi , or kuch der baad uski aanko m aansu aajate h or wo bhag ke apne kamre m chali jati h or rone lagti h.

Aaj k liye itna hi.
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Karan or jyoti jese hi ghar pahunchte h or thodi der rest kerte h tabhi jyoti bolti h

Jyoti :- bhai dekho mera locket chamak raha h.iska kya matlab

Karan:- kya dikha to

Karan dekhta h ki sachme uska locket chamak raha h. tabhi jyoti ki nazar karan ki shirt p padhti h jiske ander se roshni nikal rahi thi .Or jab jyoti button khol k dekhti h to dekhti h ki uske gale m jo locket h wo bhi chamak raha h.

Jyoti:- bhai dekho aapka bhi locket chamak raha h dono bhai bahan is baat se heran the .



Ye locket kabse unke gale me the ye to dono bhai bahan ko gyat ni the per unhe bas itna yaad tha ki ek baar is bare m unhone apni maa se bhi pucha tha to. Unki maa ne bola tha. Beta ye locket hamesha tum dono bhai bahan ki raksha karega ise kabhi mat utarna. Ise tum apni mummy ka ashirvad hi samjhna . Tabse dono bhai bahan chahe kuch bhi ho jaye in locket ko ni utarte.

Abhi wo dono soch hi rahe the is bare m ki tabhi kahi se ek roshni ki rays aaker undono per padti h or wo abhi hue is incident k bare m bhul jate h . Or apne daily routine m lag jate h.

Vahi kfd apne lok me ye sab dekh ker muskura rahe the .or vaha unke sath narad ji bhi the.or ye roshni kfd ne hi dali thi karan or jyoti per.

Narad ji :- narayan narayan prabhu karan or jyoti k kanth(gale) wo do locket kyu h or unke chamkane ka kya kaaran h or vo bhi aaj itne varsho pashchat achanak ye kyu chamke .

Kfd:- devrishi in do locket ka karan or jyoti k kanth m hone k do mahatvapoorn kaaran h . Pahala ye ki ye mere or swayam mahadev ki shaktiyo se nirmit h to ye unka sabse bada kavach h jiske kaaran abhi tak kalbhanu or vp un koi unhe hani ni pahucha sake , inhike kaaran to karan ya jyoti ka bade se bada ghav ek ya do din m hi bhar jata tha , jabki unki shaktiya abhi jagrit ni h or sabse mahatvapoorn kaarn aapko shighra hi gyaat ho jayega devrishi.

Yuhi do tin din nikal jate h. Fir aaj sunday tha . Aaj karan and party mil ker picnic k liye ek jangal m jate h jo bahut hi sunder tha vaha ek waterfall bhi tha .

Radha :- wow bhaiya kitni beautiful jagah h ye kyu riya di

Riya :- riya ha gudiya tu bilkul sahi bol rahi h .

Rohan (riya se) :- chalo na didu swimming kerte h .

Riya:- per betu hum to apne sath extra kapde laye hi ni fir kese

Karan :- di aapki uski chinta aap mat kijiye mane or jyoti ne sabke liye hi extra kapde le aaye h . Hume pata tha ki yaha aake sabka swimming ka man karega isliye.


Actually picnic location karan or jyoti ne sabke liye hi surprise rakhi isliye koi bhi puri teyari k sath ni aapaya bas karan or jyoti ko chod.

Fir sabhi ja ker sabhi swimming kerte h .

Lekin radha ko thoda dar lag raha tha. Wo bas bahar kadhi sab ko dekh rahi thi tabhi karan jyoti ko jaldi se kuch samjhata h .

Or jyoti radha se bolti h ki

Jyoti:- gudiya aana dekh kitna maja aaraha h kuch ni hoga hum h na .

Radha:- ni di m yahi thik hu aap sab enjoy kero .

Radha jyoti se bato m lag gayi uska dhayan or kisi per ni raha isi moke ka fayda utha ker karan jaldi se pani se bahar nikal uske piche se aaya or jaldi se use god m utha liya or radha isse pahale kuch samjh pati .Karan use goad m liye hue hi pani m kud gaya.

Radha bhi puri bhig gayi. Radha abi bhi dar rahi thi wo abhi bhi karan ki god m hi usse lipti hui thi .

Karan :- are gudiya tu bekar hi dar rahi h kuch ni hoga dekh hum h na yaha sab

Sab ke kahane p radha karan se alag ho ker pani m darti darti utarti h. Or kuch hi der m normal ho ker sabke sath masti kerti rahati h.

Or radha karan per pani fekte hue

Radha:- bhai ye kya baat hui pata h m kitna dar gayi thi esa bhi bhala koi kerta h.

Karan:- are meri barbie doll m esa na kerta to tum yaha enjoy kese ker pati.

Fir ese hi sab masti kerte rahe.or jab thak gaye to bari bari se jaker sabne car m jaker kapde change kiye.

Fir sabko bhuk lagi thi to khana khane beth jate h .Khane k baad radha bolti h

Radha:- chalo na hum sab antakshri khelte h.

Fir shuru ho jati h antakshri.

Sabse pahale radha ka hi no aata h to
Riya bolti h

Riya:-chalo gudiya t se gana gao.

Radha kuch soch ker karan or jyoti ki or dekhke gati h.

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Radha ne ye gana pure dil se gayi thi
Radha ka gana sunker sab tali bajate h or karan or jyoti ko radha p bahut pyar aata h to vo uske dono galo ko bari bari se chum use gale laga lete h.

Fir karan ka no aata h

Radha:- bhaiya j se gana gaiye .

Karan kuch second sochta h or fir jyoti ki or dekhte hue gata h .

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जैसी तू है वैसी रहना
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Ye pura gana karan ne jyoti ki or dekhte hue gaya or fir uske galo pe ek kiss kerdi.

Jisse jyoti ka chahara ek dum tamatar jesa lal ho gaya sharm k mare .

Karan:- oye hoye kudi sharma gayi

Rohan bhi maje lete hue.

Rohan :- are bhai ladki hasi to fasi.

Ye bat sun sab hasne lagte h or jyoti rohan k piche bhagti h use

Jyoti :- rohan bhai ruko kya bole aap abhi apko batati hu

Rohan :- mujhe kisi pagal kute ne ni kata jo m tere hath aayunga.mane wo fight dekhi thi teri , kya halat ki thi un ladko ki tune, mujhe marne ka koi shok ni h abhi to meri shadi bhi ni hui .

Rohan ki is baat pe sab hasne lagte h.

Fir isi tarah sabhi masti ker rahe the ki vaha pass m hi mojud mandir se ghatiyon ki aawaj aane lagi .

To sab samjh gaye ki mandir m aarti ho rahi h.

To wo sab ja ker us aati m sammilit hote h. Ye bhagwan shiv ka bahut purana mandir tha .

Mandir chota tha to ek baar m bas do hi jane ja sakte the .

Aarti khatam hone k baad pandit ji sab ko prasad dete hue sabko darshan kerne ko bolte h.Sabse pahale rohan or riya jate h , fir radha jati h .

Or fir karan or jyoti mandir m jate h or shivling k samne ankhe band kerke jese hi prathna kerne lagte h tabhi shivling se do prakash punj nikal ker karan or jyoti m sama jate h . Jis pee kisiki nazar ni jati.

Or jab wo dono darshan kerke bahar nikalte h to ,Karan or jyoti apne sharir m ek nayi urza mahasoos kerte h .

Fir wo sab waha se apne ghar ki or nikal jate h .

Or jese hi wo sab waha se dur pahunchte h mandir k pandit ji apni aankhe band kerke apne asli roop m aajate h , or ye or koi ni rishi piplaad the.

Or fir vo aakash ki or dekhte hue hath jod ker bole

Rishiwer :- he kfd aapne jo mujhe karya sompa tha vo mane poorn ker diya h .
Or fir waha se anter dhyan ho ker apne ashram lot jate h.

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Mandir se nikal ker sabhi car me beth k nikal jate h. Car riya chala rahi thi or uske sath aage rohan betha tha. Piche karan radha or jyoti k bich m betha tha .
Ghar pahuchne m unko do ghante lagne wale the , tabhi karan dekhta h ki radha ko nind aachuki h to per wo comfortable ni h to karan riya ko ishara kerke gadi rukwata h or jyoti ko dhire se kuch bolta h to jyoti jaldi se jaker piche wali seat p beth jati h or karan radha ka sir apni god me rakhkar use leta deta h seat per.
Unki gadi suv 7 seater thi to unhe koi problem ni hui.
Fir wo karib do ghante m rohan k ghar pahuch jate h . Karan radha ko god m utha k ghar m lejata h or use rohan or riya k room aaram se sula
Deta h . Radha sote hue bahut cute lag rahi thi ek dam choti bachi jesi. Jise dekh karan uske gal chum ker.room se bahar nikal jata h.
Fir baki aker sofe pe beth jate h . Or aaj unhonne jo sab kiya wo anita ko batane lagte h.
Anita :- lagta h tum sab ne bahut masti ki h ,
Karan :- ha aunty.
Anita :- beta mane tumhe us din bhi kaha tha na ki tum mujhe aunty mat bolo. Ha tumhari mummy meri saheli hi ni meri bahan jesi bhi thi to tum mujhe mosi bol sakte ho .
Karan:- ok mosi maa.
Anita karan k muh se mosi sun ker bahut khush hoti h .
Rohan :- vese mummy karan ki mummy aapki best friend thi na to aap to unki family k bare m bhi janti hi hogi to kuch bataiye na . Karan or jyoti ko to apne nana nani k bare m kuch ni pata.
Anita:- beta mujhe jyada to kuch yaad ni but ha ashu ne ek baar bataya to tha ki uske parivar me do uska ek bhai ek bahan or uske mummy papa h or wo unke sath rajasthan k kisi shivpur gao m rahati thi.
Riya :- wah mummy kam se kam itna to pata chala aunty rahane wali kaha ki thi , (karan se) bhai hum sab waha chalenge vacation m ho sakta h tumhare nana nani hume mil jaye.
Sabhi us baat se sahmat the per abhi to vacation m bahut time h.
Fir ese hi bate kerte kerte raat ho jati h. Radha bhi jag chuki thi . Fir sabhi wahi dinner kerte h . Anita bahut rukne k liye bolti h karan or jyoti ko wahi aaj rat or karan or jyoti bhi rukna chahte the but apne pita k bure swabhav k kaaran ruk ni sakte the. Isliye unhe waha se jana padta h . Radha unhe waha unke ghar p chod deti h. Or driver ko bula ker waha se apne ghar ki or nikal jati h.
Karan or jyoti bhi apne kamre m ghus jate h.
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20 year ago
Ek bade se ghar k hal me ek aadmi betha hua tha apni patni k sath jo bahut pareshan tha .Uski bhi patni bhi .
Aadmi :- lagta h asha humare nasib santaan ka sukh likha hi ni h asha , shadi k itne salo baad bhi hum nisantan h or ager tum pregnant ho bhi jati ho to vo bacha garbh me tikta ni h . Arthat garbhpat ho jata h ab to doctors ne bhi jwab de diya h.
Orat :- ni ranbir esa mat boliye bhagwan pe bharosa rakhiye mujhe apne shiv ji per ki wo ek na ek din hamari prathna jarur sunenge .

Ji ha dosto ye or koi ni apne hero k mummy papa h ranbir or asha. Jinke pass kisi chij ki kami ni h , asha ne ranbir k sath bhag k shadi ki h . Inke pariwar k baki members k bare m aage pata chalega.

Ese hi din pratidin inki pareshani or badhti ja rahi thi , lekin asha ka shiv ji per pura vishwas tha vo roj mandir jati mandir k piche hi ek rishi ki kutiya thi. Vo rishi roj subah jaldi dhyan m beth jate. Asha bahut hi ache dil ki orat thi to wo har roj unke dhayan wali jagah ki safai kerti rishi k dhyan m bethne k baad taki unhe koi kida n kaat le or roj unki kutiya ki saf safayi ker unke pine ka pani bhar k lati . Or pass k pedo se unke bhojan k fal tod ker unki kutiya me rakh deti or fir waha se apne ghar lot jati.
Rishi dhyan m avashya hote per unko asha ki niswarth seva k bare m gyat tha .
Ek din jab hamesha ki tarah asha rishiwer k sabhi karya kerke jane lagti h to rishiwer bolte h
Rishiwer:- ruko beti
Asha:- kahiye baba mujhse koi galti hui kya.
Rishiwer:- ni putri balki hum tumhari
Niswarth seva se prasan h beti mango jo icha ho mango beti.
Asha :- baba aapne hi to kaha abhi ki mane niswarth bhav se aapki seva ki h, to m niswarth seva k badle kese kuch mang sakti hu.
Baba ye baat sun ker or khush hote h or apni aankhe band kerke thodi der dhyan lagate h fir bolte h.
Rishi:- tum dhanya ho putri aaj k kaliyug m bhi tumme ye niswarth seva ka bhavna h , mujhe gyat ho gaya h tum santan k abhav se bahut dukhi ho putri , tumhare bhagya m abhi tak santan sukh ni likha tha ,
lekin tumne apne satkarmo se apne bhagya ko bhi parivartit ker diya h putri .Satya hi kaha h kisine bhagya se bada karm hota h.
m dekh sakta hu bhavishya m tumhe ek ni balki do do santano ka sukh praapt hoga .
Asha bhi khush ho ker apne ghar ki or nikal jati h .
Usi raat asha so rahi hoti h ki usko sapna aata h. Ek bahut hi tejasvi vyakti unke samne pragat hota h jike hatho m do shakti punj h .Or wo vyakti un shakti punj ko asha k ki taraf chod dete h jo uski garbh m sama jate h.
Or 1 mahine baad vo rishi k kahe anusaar pregnent ho jati h or thik 9 mahine baad .
Asha k pet m dard uthata tha h usko hospital m le jaya jata h . Or jese hi un bacho ki ankho m doctor dekhta h wo kho jata h . 5 min baad vo hosh m aata h
Fir doctor ot se bahar aata h or bolta h ki
Doctor:- congratulations mr sharma aapko ek ni balki judwa bache hue h .
Ranbir ye sun ker khushi se jhum uthata h or apni jeb se noto ki gadi nikal ker doctor ko deta h or bolta h.
Ranbir :- jaiye doctor meri taraf se pure hospital ko mithai khilwaiye , kya m apne biwi bacho se mil sakta hu .
Doctor :-abhi thodi der m hum unhe normal ward m shift mer denge tab aap unse mil sakte h.
Abhi asha or bacho ko ward m shift kiya hi gaya tha .
Ki tabhi sab kuch jaha tha vahi ruk jata h kyunki samay ruk chuka tha asha jo bilkul normal thi ye sab dekh ker heran thi .
Tabhi waha ek roshni fel jati h or ek divya purush prakat hote h.
Asha unhe pahachan jati h kyunki ye wahi the jo us raat asha k sapne m aaye the .
Asha:- hath jodker he divya aatma aap kon h or mujhe yu darshan dene ka aapka kya prayojan h .
Vyakti :- he devi hum bhagwan shiv k shishya kfd h .
Ji ha dosto ye kfd hi the jo mamta ko satya se avgat karwane aayi thi
Asha :- prabhu aap m dhanya ho gayi prabhu jo aaj aapke darshan hue .
Kfd :- putri m tumhe tumhare santaan k vishay m batane aay hu .
Tumhari santaane koi sadharan santane ni h putri apitu ye do mahan shaktiyo ka ek or janm h putri jinka janm jag kalyan k liye hua h .
Fir kfd asha ko karan or jyoti k pichle janmo ki katha or unke uddeshy k bare me batate h or fir wo apna ek hath aage badha ker karan or jyoti k uper roshni dalte h jisse unke gale m wo locket aajate h.
Kfd:- putri humne jo tumhe bate batayi h ye matr tumhare tak simit rahani chahiye or in dono k kanth se ye locket kabhi alag mat hone dena
or fir wo waha se anter dhyan gaye

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To ye thi karan or jyoti k janm ki story janne k liye ki kfd ne asha ko kya kya bataya or kon h wo mahan shaktiya jinka karan or jyoti k roop m hua janne k liye sath bane rahiye
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