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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

Kya mujhe story restart kerni chahiye

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sorbobhuk

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Wahi dusri or

Ek gadi kabhi left to kabhi right hote hue bahut hi speed se raste se u ja rahi thi mano ki out of control ho gayi ho, jisse kuch log to takrate takrate bache.

Ek admi jo akhri time pe side ho gaya tha wo us gadi ko jate hue dekh gusse se chilaaya

Admi :- abe andhaaaa h kyaaa, pata ni kaha kaha se aa jate h.

Wo gadi usi speed se hoti hui jake tex brake k sath slide kerte hue ek haveli k bahar ruki, jo ki rekha ka ghar tha.

Naina jo garden m bethi hi apni book ko padh rahi thi, wo gadi aawaz sun choki or bhagker us gadi k pas gayi.

Abhi naina isse pahale kuch kerti ki tabhi driving sit ka gate khula or usse preety bahar nikli.

Preety ki halat dekh naina chok gayi, kyunki uske kapde ast vyast ho rakhe the or uske baal bikhre pade h.

Naina turant uske pas dod k gayi or ladkhadati hui preety ko sambhalne lagi.

Naina :- are di ye kya halat bana rakhi h apne apni

(Sharab ki smell sungh ker narajgi k sath ) or ye kya tumne firse drink kerna start ker diya.

Preety ladkhadati aawaz me :- are relax sister, thodi si hi to pi...

(Girne lagi lekin naina ne sambhal liya) pi h, wo kya h naa apun ki nayi friendship ki khushi m thoda sa mood ban gela tha apoon ka, to laga li partner k sath.

Naina :- ise tum thodi si bolti ho, kya halat bana rakhi , hey bhagwaan m bhi pagal hu jo in bevdiyo ko akele jane diya.

Naina ye bolte hue shruti ko bhi uthane ki kosis kerti h per vo nashe m tum beshud padi so rahi thi gadi m hi.

Naina :- hey bhagwaan ab inko is halat me samne se to ghar k ander ni le ja sakti, verna aunty kya sochegi.

(Preety se) preety kya tum hume is halat m hume teleport ker paogi.



Preety car se shruti ko uthate hue :- neki or puch puch, abhi lo sister, m tumhe abhi hum sab ko pas pahuncha deti hu, wo humari madad bhi ker denge shruti ko ye uske room m pahuchane.


Ye bol naina ka usne hath thama.

Naina :- are ruko m pahale inform to ker......

Naina ki baat isse pahale puri hoti, usse pahale hi preety use or preety ko le teleport ho gayi veer k kamre m.

Naina :- ker du veer ko......

Or waha pahunch naina ne jo najara dekh bichari sharm se lal ho gayi or nii chilate hue apni ankho pr hath rakh piche ghum gayi.

Darasl hua yu tha ki jis waqt vo log veer k kamre p pahunchi us waqt bichara veer nahake aaya tha or keval ek underwear m tha.

Veer bhi achank yu ladkiyon ko dekh hadbada gaya or bichara towel lapet ker bola.

Veer :- are sali sahiba mana teleport m knock wala system ni kam se mind to mind to bata diya kijiye aane se pahale.

Naina jibh apni bhichte hue :- jiju mere koi galti ni h, bolna h to apni gf ko boliye or sambhaliye bhi.

Ye bol bichari naina kese n kese shruti ko leker , waha se bhag gayi or chod gayi piche veer or preety ko unke haal pe

Wahi dusri or

Agli subah karan ki ankh jab khuli to uski najar sonam p padi jiske chahre pe ek pyaari or masumiyat si muskan liye hue kisi bache ki tarah karan ki tarah lipti hui thi usse.

Sonam ki cuteness dekh karan khud ko rok ni pata or bina sonam ko disturb kiye dhire se uske mathe ko chum leta h.

Karan man me haste hue :- ek baat to h meri sari bahane soti hui bahut cute or masum lagti h, verna jagi ho to koi kasar ni chodti meri lene me.

Ye soch karan man hi man hasta h or pyaar se sona k sir p hath pe pherte hue.

Karan :- pagli pyaar to ker bethi apne bhai se, per ye ni samjhti ki aage ka safar itna asan ni h.

Pyaar word karan k juban or dil m aaye or use apni jaan jyoti ki yaad na aaye esa kabhi ho sakta h.

Jyoti ki yaad aate hi karan ki ankho k samne kal raat ka sara vakhya yaad aagaya, use apni gudiya ki ankho ka wo dard yaad aate hi vo tadaf utha or khud se bola.

Karan :- hey bhagwaan ye kesi vidhna banayi h tune meri, ek bahan ko khush kerne jata hu or dusri ko dard de bethata hu, pata ni kya biti hogi raat ko meri gudiya p.

Ye bol karan jaldi se teyar hoker jyoti ko dhundte hue haveli k mandir ja pahuncha, jaha wo jyoti ko bhagwan ki prtima aage betha hua pata h .

Karan jyoti ko pukarne ko hi hota h usse pahale hi bina dekhe hi jyoti bol uthi.

Jyoti :- uth gaye bhaiya aap, good morning.

Karan to ek baar chonk sa gaya , tab jyoti boli.

Jyoti :- vaha kyu khade ho bhai, mere paas aao na.

Karan chupchaap jyoti k pas jaker beth jata h or uske sath pooja kerta h.

Pooja k baad karan jyoti se bola.

Karan :- gudiya ek baat puchu.

Jyoti :- yahi na bhai ki mujhe bina dekhe aapke aane k kese pata challa.

Karan ha m gardan hilata h,

Jyoti karan ka hath thamte hue :- mere pyare bhaiya isme puchne jesa kya h, aap to mere hriday ki dhadkan meri aatma ho, aap hi to mere astitv h or astitv ko pahachanne k liye bhala ankho ki kya jarurat.

Karan jyoti ko gale lagate hue :- Tu sach m bahut mahan h gudiya, tera ye nishchal prem mahan h.

Or ek m hu jo tere itne tyag or itne prem k badle bhi tumhe sukh ni de pa raha.

Jyoti :- ssshhh ye kya bol rahe ho bhai , kisne kaha aap mujhe sukh ni de pate balki sach to ye h bhai aapka prem hi mera parmanand h, jiske sahare apki gudiya ji rahi h bhai.

Karan :- parantu wo prem bhi to m tumhe kaha de pa raha hu gudiya vidhina ka khel to dekho ,jis samay tumhe sabse jyada mere prem ki avshayta h us samay m na chahte hue bhi tumhe prem k batware k dukh de raha hu.

Gudiya Tu chahe kitni bhi has le ya khud ko khush dikhane ki kosis ker le, lekin tera bhai apni gudiya ka dard na samjh sake esa ho ni sakta.

Karan ki baate sun jyoti thodi emotional ho gayi or karan k gale lag boli.

Jyoti :- ha bhaiya aapne sach kaha m us pal bahut dukhi thi or mera man chikh chikh ker rone ka bhi ker raha tha,or ho bhi kyu na aakhir apne prem ka jo batwara kiya tha.

lekin rone se bhi kya fayda hota isse satya to ni badal jata , lekin dard k sath ek santushti bhi thi ki jiske sath prem baat rahi hu vo koi parayi ni humari hi apni bahan h jiski bbas ek hi chahat h apke yani apne bhai ka prem ko pana.

Ese me m apni bahan ko kese tadafne de sakti thi bhai, ab m samjh chuki hu ki aap per sirf mera hi ni balki humari har ek bahan ka bhi utna hi adhikaar h jitna mera.

Isliye bhaiya jo hua usme aapka koi dosh ni, ab aap bhi mat roiye or dil se humari sona ko apna lijiye.

Karan jyoti k hath jod :- Tu sach m mahan h gudiya , m bahut khusnasib hu jo mujhe tujh jesi sangini mili h.

Jyoti karan k hath pakad :- khushnasib to m hu bhai jo mujhe aap mile ye bol jyoti karan k gale lag gayi.

Kuch der dono bhai bahan yu hi gale mile rahe or fir dono alag ho apne baki k normal routine pure kerte h.

Kuch der baad jab sab lunch p bethe the to tabhi ek lady siya se milne aayi jo uski saheli thi.

Usne siya ko uske sasur k baare m khabar di, jisme sabko pata chala ki uske sasur ki halat or bhi battar ho chuki h, ab to wo hil dul bhi ni pata, or yaha tak ki uska beta bhi usse tang aaker use chod k ja chuka h.

Jise sun siya chintit swar me garima se boli.

Siya :- didi mujhe abhi ghar jana hoga pitaji ko meri jarurat h.

Karan :- ye kya bhabhi un logo ne aapke sath itne atyaachaar kiya, aapko aapke pati se alag kiraor aapko abhi bhi un dushto ki itni chinta.

Siya :- beta ek patni ka farz keval uske pati tak hi simit ni hora balki uske pure parivaar ko hi apna parivar manna hi ek pativrata nari ka dharm h.

Or vese bhi sasur to pita saman hote h, ager pita daat de to iska ye matlab to ni ki hum apne pita se muh hi mod le, isliye mujhe jana hoga beta.

Karan serious tune m:- thik h bhabhi aapki yahi icha h to thik h, chaliye m aapko aapke ghar tak chod deta hu.

Siya ne karan ko mana kiya lekin karan ne use convince ker liya or fir karan jeep me beth nikal pada siya k ghar ki or

Kuch der m gadi karan k ghar k aage roki or siya ne karan ko dhanyavaad dete hue apne ghar m chali gayi.

Karan man me :- surajmal samay aagaya h Tumhara nyaay chakra purn hone m..

Ye bol karan ne apni drishti ek baar fir us ghar ki or dalii or wapas ghar ki or .

Karan kuch dur hi aage chala tha ki use raste m ek jagah kafi bhid dikhi, karan ko kuch gadbad lagi.

Jab karan waha jake dekha to paya ki ek bacha mara pada h or uske ma baap bichare uski lash se lage ro rahe h.

Karan se aas pass pata kiya to pata chala ki vo bacha kal sham ko khelte khelte jungle pahunch gaya tha galti se or maa bap k dhundne p bhi unhe na mila or aaj subah fir unhe bache ki lash mili.

Karan ye sun gusse se laal ho man me.

Karan man me :- bas bahut hua in dushto ka aatank, ab samay aa chuka h inke sarvnash ka.

Ye bol karan chal pada apne ghar ki
bahut badhiya..... dekhye aage kya hota hai....or kya karta hai jungle ka sharp ka...waiting for next update
 
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update no :- 188
Wahi dusri or

Ek gadi kabhi left to kabhi right hote hue bahut hi speed se raste se u ja rahi thi mano ki out of control ho gayi ho, jisse kuch log to takrate takrate bache.

Ek admi jo akhri time pe side ho gaya tha wo us gadi ko jate hue dekh gusse se chilaaya

Admi :- abe andhaaaa h kyaaa, pata ni kaha kaha se aa jate h.

Wo gadi usi speed se hoti hui jake tex brake k sath slide kerte hue ek haveli k bahar ruki, jo ki rekha ka ghar tha.

Naina jo garden m bethi hi apni book ko padh rahi thi, wo gadi aawaz sun choki or bhagker us gadi k pas gayi.

Abhi naina isse pahale kuch kerti ki tabhi driving sit ka gate khula or usse preety bahar nikli.

Preety ki halat dekh naina chok gayi, kyunki uske kapde ast vyast ho rakhe the or uske baal bikhre pade h.

Naina turant uske pas dod k gayi or ladkhadati hui preety ko sambhalne lagi.

Naina :- are di ye kya halat bana rakhi h apne apni

(Sharab ki smell sungh ker narajgi k sath ) or ye kya tumne firse drink kerna start ker diya.

Preety ladkhadati aawaz me :- are relax sister, thodi si hi to pi...

(Girne lagi lekin naina ne sambhal liya) pi h, wo kya h naa apun ki nayi friendship ki khushi m thoda sa mood ban gela tha apoon ka, to laga li partner k sath.

Naina :- ise tum thodi si bolti ho, kya halat bana rakhi , hey bhagwaan m bhi pagal hu jo in bevdiyo ko akele jane diya.

Naina ye bolte hue shruti ko bhi uthane ki kosis kerti h per vo nashe m tum beshud padi so rahi thi gadi m hi.

Naina :- hey bhagwaan ab inko is halat me samne se to ghar k ander ni le ja sakti, verna aunty kya sochegi.

(Preety se) preety kya tum hume is halat m hume teleport ker paogi.



Preety car se shruti ko uthate hue :- neki or puch puch, abhi lo sister, m tumhe abhi hum sab ko pas pahuncha deti hu, wo humari madad bhi ker denge shruti ko ye uske room m pahuchane.


Ye bol naina ka usne hath thama.

Naina :- are ruko m pahale inform to ker......

Naina ki baat isse pahale puri hoti, usse pahale hi preety use or preety ko le teleport ho gayi veer k kamre m.

Naina :- ker du veer ko......

Or waha pahunch naina ne jo najara dekh bichari sharm se lal ho gayi or nii chilate hue apni ankho pr hath rakh piche ghum gayi.

Darasl hua yu tha ki jis waqt vo log veer k kamre p pahunchi us waqt bichara veer nahake aaya tha or keval ek underwear m tha.

Veer bhi achank yu ladkiyon ko dekh hadbada gaya or bichara towel lapet ker bola.

Veer :- are sali sahiba mana teleport m knock wala system ni kam se mind to mind to bata diya kijiye aane se pahale.

Naina jibh apni bhichte hue :- jiju mere koi galti ni h, bolna h to apni gf ko boliye or sambhaliye bhi.

Ye bol bichari naina kese n kese shruti ko leker , waha se bhag gayi or chod gayi piche veer or preety ko unke haal pe

Wahi dusri or

Agli subah karan ki ankh jab khuli to uski najar sonam p padi jiske chahre pe ek pyaari or masumiyat si muskan liye hue kisi bache ki tarah karan ki tarah lipti hui thi usse.

Sonam ki cuteness dekh karan khud ko rok ni pata or bina sonam ko disturb kiye dhire se uske mathe ko chum leta h.

Karan man me haste hue :- ek baat to h meri sari bahane soti hui bahut cute or masum lagti h, verna jagi ho to koi kasar ni chodti meri lene me.

Ye soch karan man hi man hasta h or pyaar se sona k sir p hath pe pherte hue.

Karan :- pagli pyaar to ker bethi apne bhai se, per ye ni samjhti ki aage ka safar itna asan ni h.

Pyaar word karan k juban or dil m aaye or use apni jaan jyoti ki yaad na aaye esa kabhi ho sakta h.

Jyoti ki yaad aate hi karan ki ankho k samne kal raat ka sara vakhya yaad aagaya, use apni gudiya ki ankho ka wo dard yaad aate hi vo tadaf utha or khud se bola.

Karan :- hey bhagwaan ye kesi vidhna banayi h tune meri, ek bahan ko khush kerne jata hu or dusri ko dard de bethata hu, pata ni kya biti hogi raat ko meri gudiya p.

Ye bol karan jaldi se teyar hoker jyoti ko dhundte hue haveli k mandir ja pahuncha, jaha wo jyoti ko bhagwan ki prtima aage betha hua pata h .

Karan jyoti ko pukarne ko hi hota h usse pahale hi bina dekhe hi jyoti bol uthi.

Jyoti :- uth gaye bhaiya aap, good morning.

Karan to ek baar chonk sa gaya , tab jyoti boli.

Jyoti :- vaha kyu khade ho bhai, mere paas aao na.

Karan chupchaap jyoti k pas jaker beth jata h or uske sath pooja kerta h.

Pooja k baad karan jyoti se bola.

Karan :- gudiya ek baat puchu.

Jyoti :- yahi na bhai ki mujhe bina dekhe aapke aane k kese pata challa.

Karan ha m gardan hilata h,

Jyoti karan ka hath thamte hue :- mere pyare bhaiya isme puchne jesa kya h, aap to mere hriday ki dhadkan meri aatma ho, aap hi to mere astitv h or astitv ko pahachanne k liye bhala ankho ki kya jarurat.

Karan jyoti ko gale lagate hue :- Tu sach m bahut mahan h gudiya, tera ye nishchal prem mahan h.

Or ek m hu jo tere itne tyag or itne prem k badle bhi tumhe sukh ni de pa raha.

Jyoti :- ssshhh ye kya bol rahe ho bhai , kisne kaha aap mujhe sukh ni de pate balki sach to ye h bhai aapka prem hi mera parmanand h, jiske sahare apki gudiya ji rahi h bhai.

Karan :- parantu wo prem bhi to m tumhe kaha de pa raha hu gudiya vidhina ka khel to dekho ,jis samay tumhe sabse jyada mere prem ki avshayta h us samay m na chahte hue bhi tumhe prem k batware k dukh de raha hu.

Gudiya Tu chahe kitni bhi has le ya khud ko khush dikhane ki kosis ker le, lekin tera bhai apni gudiya ka dard na samjh sake esa ho ni sakta.

Karan ki baate sun jyoti thodi emotional ho gayi or karan k gale lag boli.

Jyoti :- ha bhaiya aapne sach kaha m us pal bahut dukhi thi or mera man chikh chikh ker rone ka bhi ker raha tha,or ho bhi kyu na aakhir apne prem ka jo batwara kiya tha.

lekin rone se bhi kya fayda hota isse satya to ni badal jata , lekin dard k sath ek santushti bhi thi ki jiske sath prem baat rahi hu vo koi parayi ni humari hi apni bahan h jiski bbas ek hi chahat h apke yani apne bhai ka prem ko pana.

Ese me m apni bahan ko kese tadafne de sakti thi bhai, ab m samjh chuki hu ki aap per sirf mera hi ni balki humari har ek bahan ka bhi utna hi adhikaar h jitna mera.

Isliye bhaiya jo hua usme aapka koi dosh ni, ab aap bhi mat roiye or dil se humari sona ko apna lijiye.

Karan jyoti k hath jod :- Tu sach m mahan h gudiya , m bahut khusnasib hu jo mujhe tujh jesi sangini mili h.

Jyoti karan k hath pakad :- khushnasib to m hu bhai jo mujhe aap mile ye bol jyoti karan k gale lag gayi.

Kuch der dono bhai bahan yu hi gale mile rahe or fir dono alag ho apne baki k normal routine pure kerte h.

Kuch der baad jab sab lunch p bethe the to tabhi ek lady siya se milne aayi jo uski saheli thi.

Usne siya ko uske sasur k baare m khabar di, jisme sabko pata chala ki uske sasur ki halat or bhi battar ho chuki h, ab to wo hil dul bhi ni pata, or yaha tak ki uska beta bhi usse tang aaker use chod k ja chuka h.

Jise sun siya chintit swar me garima se boli.

Siya :- didi mujhe abhi ghar jana hoga pitaji ko meri jarurat h.

Karan :- ye kya bhabhi un logo ne aapke sath itne atyaachaar kiya, aapko aapke pati se alag kiraor aapko abhi bhi un dushto ki itni chinta.

Siya :- beta ek patni ka farz keval uske pati tak hi simit ni hora balki uske pure parivaar ko hi apna parivar manna hi ek pativrata nari ka dharm h.

Or vese bhi sasur to pita saman hote h, ager pita daat de to iska ye matlab to ni ki hum apne pita se muh hi mod le, isliye mujhe jana hoga beta.

Karan serious tune m:- thik h bhabhi aapki yahi icha h to thik h, chaliye m aapko aapke ghar tak chod deta hu.

Siya ne karan ko mana kiya lekin karan ne use convince ker liya or fir karan jeep me beth nikal pada siya k ghar ki or

Kuch der m gadi karan k ghar k aage roki or siya ne karan ko dhanyavaad dete hue apne ghar m chali gayi.

Karan man me :- surajmal samay aagaya h Tumhara nyaay chakra purn hone m..

Ye bol karan ne apni drishti ek baar fir us ghar ki or dalii or wapas ghar ki or .

Karan kuch dur hi aage chala tha ki use raste m ek jagah kafi bhid dikhi, karan ko kuch gadbad lagi.

Jab karan waha jake dekha to paya ki ek bacha mara pada h or uske ma baap bichare uski lash se lage ro rahe h.

Karan se aas pass pata kiya to pata chala ki vo bacha kal sham ko khelte khelte jungle pahunch gaya tha galti se or maa bap k dhundne p bhi unhe na mila or aaj subah fir unhe bache ki lash mili.

Karan ye sun gusse se laal ho man me.

Karan man me :- bas bahut hua in dushto ka aatank, ab samay aa chuka h inke sarvnash ka.

Ye bol karan chal pada apne ghar ki
Update achchha hai dekhte hain preeti naina veer milkar shruti ki hansi muskurahat use lauta paayenge ki nahin?
Karan jyoti sonam ka prem aur samarpan saraahniy raha hai abhi tak dekhte haina prem ki agli pariksha mein yeh teenon kitna kaamyaab ho paate hain.....
Toh ab karna chhalaave se ladne jaane wala hai par yeh un sab ki koi nayi chaal na ho....
 

Akil

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Friends update chota ni balki adhura h post hua, raat ko mane thodi jaldbazi k chakkar m post kiya tha, usme lagta h technical problm k chakkar m aada hi notepad se copy hua, verna apne notice kiya hi hoga ki m update pura kerne k baad jarur likhta hu aaj k liye bas itna hi, jo isme ni tha, ab sala double chot ese ho gayi ki mane update ko save bhi ni kiyaa tha, is chakkar m baki ka adha phir se likhna padega, to aaj raat baki ka bhi post ho jayega
Ok waiting hai bro
 
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