Naughtyrishabh
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Update no :- 177
Aaiye jante h ki kese nidhi yani karan ki chachi ka hriday privartan hua.
Hua yu tha ki nidhi k pitaji ki tabiyat ab sahi thi, isliye ab wo apne ghar lotne ki teyari ker rahi thi.
Tabhi rajiv ka phone aata h.
Nidhi :- hello.
Rajiv :- hello darling kaha tak pahunchi.
Nidhi :- kya aap bhi, abhi kuch hi der m niklungi.
Rajiv :- kya abhi tak ni nikli, are jaan thodi jaldi dikhao ab Or judai bardaasht ni hoti.
Nidhi :- acha ji itna pyar aa raha h aaj bivi per apni.
Rajiv :- pyar to humesha hi tum per aata h janeman per ab to humare bache bhi tumhe bahut yaad ker rahe h.
Nidhi :- bache?
Rajiv :- ha, kabse puch rahe h ki chachi kab ayegi chachi kab aayegi.
Chachi shabd sun ker nidhi samjh gayi ki jisse uska mood kharab ho gaya Or wo rukhe swar m boli.
Nidhi :- acha ab phone rakhoge tab hi to m teyar hougi na aane ko.
Ye bol nidhi ne phone kaat diya Or khud hi badbadate hue packing kerne lagi.
Nidhi nakal kerte hue :- chachi kab aayegi, huhhhh, sab natak h itne saal yaad ni aayi chachi chacha ki or ab bade hote hi aGaye meri beti ka hak chinne, per m esa hone ni dungi.
Meri beti ka hak kisi ko ni lene dungi, ghar jate hi esa kuch karungi ki khud hi bhi jayenge ye sab sochte hue nidhi packing kerne lagi.
Wahi dusri or
Jab karan or jyoti subah hue kand k kaaran dukhi the or ro rahe the band kamre m to koi thi jinki najar un dono bhai bahan per thi or unki ye halat dekh unka hriday trahi trahi ker raha tha, unse apne bacho ki ye halat dekhi ni ja rahi thi.
Wo or koi ni shani mata devi chaya thi jo shani lok me bethi sab dekh rahi thi, karan or jyoti ki ye halat unse or na dekhi gayi or wo turant apne aasan se uth ker jane lagi karan k paas.
Tabhi shani unhe rokte hue bole.
Shani :- ruk jaiye mata, aapka is waqt karan or jyoti k pas jana uchit ni hoga.
Mata :- prantu kyu putra, mujhe mat roko, mere bacho ki avasyakata h ni to wo tut jayenge.
Shani :- wahi to m kahana chaahata hu mata, kabtak aap unko yu sahara de unhe kamzor banate rahogi mata, yadi unhe majboot or saksham banna h to unhe swayam ko sambhalna aana chahiye.
Mata :- putra ye baat tum kese kah sakte ho maa ka prem apne bacho ki kamzori ni balki unki shakti hoti h putra.
Shani :- aapka kahana sarvada uchit h maa, parantu mata ka ek kartvya ye bhi h ki samay aane per kuch kathor bhi bane taki santaan sankat kaal m kamzor na pade.
Kya aap chahti ho mata ki aapke bache kamzor pade.
Shani ki baat sun mata boli.
Mata chaya apne ansu pochte hue :- tumhara kahana uchit h putra, thik h m ni jati, taki karan or jyoti kamzor na pade
(Kuch der ruk jab tak karan or jyoti bhi shant ho chuke the) putra meri ek baat manoge.
Shani hath jod :- aagya kijiye mata.
Mata :- putra mane tumhara kathan mana or waha ni gayi, ab tumhe meri aagya manni hogi.
M chahti hu ki ab karan or jyoti ko koi bhi esa aghat na pahunchaye , m ni chahti ki meri santaano ko ab or koi bhi yu na rulaye balki unke chahro p wo muskan wapas lot aye, jo is ghatnakarm k baad kho chuki h .
Or ye daitv m tumhe deti hu putra, (shani k gaal ko sahalate hue) mere kahane ka tatparya samjh gaye na putra.
Shani :- ji mata, aap nishchit rahiye, ab aapka putra bina kisi vilamb k aapki aagya purn karega.
Aagya dijiye mata
Ye bol shani waha se gayab ho gaye.
Or turant adrishy roop me prakat hue nidhi k kaksh m, jaha wo gusse m badbadate hue apni samman packing krr rahi thi.
Shani man hi man :- putri nidhi hum jante h tum esi bilkul ni ho jesa swabhaav tumhara is samay ho chuka h, ye to bhutkal m biti ghatna ka prabhav h putri jisse pahunche mansik aghat ne tumhari prakritik swabhaav ko badal diya.
Parantu ese samay m bhi tumne koi adhrm ni kiya, isliye hi tum kisi bhi prakar se karan k dand chakra ki adhikari ni or na hi hum hone denge.
Ye bol shani ne apna ek hath aage kiya jisme se ek nili roshni nikal samne nidhi k saman p padi .
Nidhi ne apna wo hi saman uthaya to usme se achanak se ek photo niklke niche giri
Nidhi :- are ye photo kiski h or Yaha kese aayi.
Nidhi ne wo photo utha k dekhi to chonk gayi.
Nidhi :- are ye to asha bhabhi ki photo h , ye yaha kese aayi.
Tabhi shani ne apni ankhe band ker kholi jisme se ek roshni nikal nidhi m sama gayi.
Or achanak se asha ki photo ko dekhte hue uski ankho m ansu bahane lage, or use past m ghati ghatnaye yaad aane lagi.
Hua yu tha ki ek samay aaya tha ki jab nidhi k mayke or sasuraal dono jagah bahut tangi chal rahi thi or nidhi k pitaji ki tabiyat usi samay bahut bigad gayi thi, unhe turant jaipur k bade hospital m leke jaya gaya, jaha unhe pata chala ki unka operation kerna hoga or kharcha 10 lakh ka hoga.
Jise sunte hi nidhi buri tarah rone lagi, Rajiv ki bhi us samay halat kharab thi or wo apne mata pita ki ekloti olaad thi, isliye use samjh ni aa raha tha ki kese vo itne peso ka intezaam kere or apne pita ka ilaaj karwaye.
Tabhi nidhi per najar asha ki padi, jo udher aayi hui thi, kyunki ye usika hospital tha, wo kisi official kam se yaha aaayi hui thi.
(Yaha m bata du ki asha ye ni janti thi ki wo uski devrani h or na hi us waqt karan or jyoti ka janm hua tha)
Asha to wese hi bahut hi komal swabhav ki thi, usse nidhi kk yu rona acha n laga, usne turant waha mojud doctor se uske baare m pucha to doctor ne sari baat batayi , jise sun komal hriday asha ka hriday pasij gaya.
Asha :- doctor aap esa kijiye inke pita ka operation turant start kijiye or jo bhi kharcha ho mere account m likh diniyega.
Doctor :- ok mam
Fir asha waha se apne office m chali gayi, kyunki use show off ka shok ni tha or yahi to. Ek dani or udar swabhaav k vyakti ki nishani ese hoti, wo koi bhi acha kam kare kabhi uske badle fal ya badayi ki apeksha ni kerta, karta ho ker bhi wo khud ko karta ni manta, ise hi to shri krishna ne geeta m nishkam bhakti kaha h.
Asha ka order milte hi doctor nidhi k pita ko opd m le jane lage, jise dekh ek baar to nidhi dar gayi, ki kahi pese n milne k kaaran kahi wo uske pita ko icu se nikal to ni rahe.
Nidhi rote hue :- doctor sahab m aapke aage hath jodti hu kripya mere pita ko bahar mat nikaliye m jald hi peso ki vyavastha ker lungi.
Doctor :- mam aap tension mat lijiye, hum aapke pita ko opd leker ja rahe unke operation kerne.
Nidhi herani se :- kya per pese.
Doctor :- aap peso ki tension mat kijiye mam humari madam yani is hospital ki owner ne sab payments ker di h.
Ye sun nidhi ko bahut herani hui,phir 2 ghante nidhi k pita ka operation chala, jo successful raha, jab ye khabar khushi ka thikana raha.
Nidhi :- aapka bahut Bahut shukriya doctor, aap ni jante aapne kitna bada ahasan kiya h aapne mujh per.
Doctor :- it's ok, ye to humari duty h mrs sharma or aapko thanku kahana hi h to aap humari mam ko kijiye .
Nidhi :- ji jarur, aap plz mujhe bataiye wo mujhe kaha milegi.
Tab doctor unhe asha k office jis floor p h wo batata h nidhi turant waha jati h or gate knock kerti h.
Asha :- come in
Nidhi jese hi ander enter kerti h to asha ko dekh chonk jati h or uske muh se bas itna nikla.
Nidhi :- bhabhi aap.
Nidhi kabhi asha se mili na thi, lekin usne Rajiv se bahut suna tha asha k bare m or pic bhi dekhi thi asha ki.
Asha nidhi ko dekh :- are aap aaiye bethiye kesa raha aapke pitaji ka operation or aap mujhe bhabhi kyu bol rahe ho.
Nidhi :- wo bilkul thik h bhabhi , or ye aapki wajah se hi sambhav hua bhabhi Rajiv ne jesa aapke bare m bataya tha aap bilkul wese hi ho.
Nidhi k muh se Rajiv ka naam sun asha bhi chonk k uchal padi or puchne lagi.
Asha :- kya Rajiv, yani mere raju nee, tum use kese janti ho.
Nidhi khusi k ansu rote hue :- ha bhabhi m Rajiv yani aapke raju ki hi baat ker rahi hu, jo aaj bhi aapke lotne k intezaar m h.
Or m aapke raju ki hi patni yani aapki devrani hu bhabhi.
Asha ye sun khushi k ansu rote hue :- kya mere raju ki patni , meri devrani.
Asha se khushi k mare kuch bola bhi ni ja raha tha, wo turant bhag k nidhi ko apne gale laga leti h.
Dono kafi der ek dusre k gale lag rote rahe or fir asha use apne sath bithate hue boli.
Asha :- yakin ni hota mera raju itna bada ho gaya , uski shadi bhi ho gayi, kitni durbhagi hu m jo apne rahi ki shadi m aabhi na saki
(Nidhi k gaal sahalate hue) choti mujhe bata kesa h mera raju, meri guddu kesi h kya vo mujhe yaad kerte h
Nidhi :- aap ye pucho bhabhi ki wo aapko kab yaad ni kerte, jabse aap gaye wo hasna hi bhul gaye, humesha aapko yaad kerte hi unka din jata h, esa koi pal ni hoga jab unhone aapko yaad na kiya ho, esa hi kuch haal garima didi ka h.
Fir nidhi ghar k Sare hal batati h or sath m Rajiv ki business m peso ki problem bhi batati h, jise sun asha ka hriday kano utha.
Asha jese hi ye sunti h to turant phone kerke ek vakil ko bulati h kuch papers leke aane ko or thodi der m vakil aajata h.
Tab asha vakil k diye hue papers p sign kerti h or nidhi se bhi ketwati h or fir vakil waha se chala jata h.
Asha :- le choti ye papers Tu raju ko dedena.
Nidhi :- ye kya h bhabhi.
Asha :- ye ramgarh m mojud meri ek plot k papers h jo mane abhi tumhare or raju k naam ker diye h, taki raju us land per apna naya business start ker sake.
Nidhi :- ni bhabhi m ye ni le sakti, ye aapki h, Rajiv bhi kabhi ise ni lenge.
Asha :- janti hu mera raju swabhimani h, isliye hi to mane ye jamin tumhare naam ki or tum use yahi bataogi ki ye jamin tumhari h.
Nidhi bahut mana kerti h parantu asha use kese n kese mana hi leti h or ye kasam bhi deti h wo is bare m kabhi jikra uske sasuraal m na kare.
Tabhi ek nurse aaker batati h ki nidhi k pita ko hosh aagaya h, nidhi fir apne pita k pas chali gayi, isi bich asha bhi apna sara karya nipta k waha se wapas apne ghr ya kolkata k liye nikal gayi kyunki wo jamti thi ki uske sasuraal wale bhi yaha jarur aayenge or wo is samay wo unka samna ni kerna chahti thi, bina ranvir ki icha k or satj sath apne staff ko bhi mana kiya ki kisi bhi halat m wo uske bare m ya uska adress kisi ko na bataye.
Or asha ka andaza bhi sahi tha kuch der baad Rajiv or garima bhi waha aapahunche, pahale to usne apne sasur ka halchal liya.
Fir nidhi boli.
Nidhi :- Rajiv m aapko kisi se milwana chahti hu.
Ye bol wo dono ko asha k office leke jati h per wo to yaha se ja chuki thi, jab ye baat Rajiv ko pata chali to wo bahut roya use bahut pachtawa ho raha tha ki wo kuch der pahale yaha kyu na aaya or yahi hal garima ka bhi tha, unhone hospital m bahut puchne ki kosis ki lekin kisi ne is bare m unhe kuch n bataya.
Fleshback end.
Jese hi ye sab ghatna nidhi ko yaad aati h to uske man me pashchaataap ki agmi jal uthi.
Nidhi :- hey bhgwan kitni giri hui hu m, jin bhabhi k kaaran mere pita jivit h mere suhag aaj kamyab h, aaj unki hi santano pe mane itna ghinona iljam lagaya or wo bhi unper jinse mera rishta maa bete jese h.
Ni m esi bhul kadapi ni karungi m khushi khushi apne bacho ko apnaungi or unhe mamta dungi.
Shani side m khade muskurate hue :- tumse hume yahi asha thi putri, jo karuna or prem us ghatna k kaaran tumhare hriday m dab gaya tha, wo. Aaj fir jagrit ho gaya, isse sidh hota h ki tum niraparaadh ho, isliye hum tumhe ashirwaad dete h tumhara sabse bada kasht tumhara dukh shighr hi nasht hoga, jiska madhyam swayam putra karne hi hoga.
Or is tarah shani dev k margdarshan se nidhi ka hriday parivartan hua.
Back to hero.
Khana khane or masti k baad sab apne room m jane lage karan or jyoti bhi, tabhi nidhi bol padi.
Nidhi :- are bacho tum. Kaha chal diye.
Karan :- sone chachi.
Nidhi :- apni chachi ki ek baat manoge, aaj tum dono ko m apne sath sulana chahti hu
Karan ka ye sunte hi mood off ho gaya kyunki uska romance ka mood chopt ho gaya tha , lekin kya kare bichara chachi ko mana bhi ni ker sakta tha.
Wahi jyoti hasne lagi.
Karan man hi man :- tujhe badi hasi aarahi h chipkali.
Jyoti :- hihi aapka muh dekh k control na hua.
Karan :- has le chipakali has le, apna bhi time aayega.
Jyoti :- hihi jab aayega tab dekh lenge.
Fir karan Or jyoti aaj raat apni chachi k sath hi sote h Or apna program raat ka decide ker.
Wahi dusri Or
Wo saya udta hua naina k kamre m aaphucha.
Saya :- oh to ye h wo naina, badi hi hasin h dikhne m, per afsos aaj mere hatho merne wali h.
Ye bol saya naina ki or bhadne laga, naina nishchit so rahi thi, apni or bhadte khatre se anjan
Saye ne jese hi naina ko chua to naina k gale m mojud locket ne use ek jhatke k sath dur feka or uske sath hi pade naina k evp meter se tez aawaaz aane lagi, jise sun naina uth gayi.
Naina ne jese hi us saye ko dekha to turant savdhan ho boli :- kon ho tum or yaha kyu aaye ho.
Saya :- teri mot.
Ye bol wo naina p jhapta per naina side m ho gayi.
Naina :- ye to mritykerni shakti h, yani kala jadoo.
Ye soche hi wo turant wo apne bag k pas gayi or apna trishul nikal ek mantra bol apna trishul us saye ki or kiya, per ye kya trishul ki roshni se usper koi asar na pada.
Tab naina ne ek mantra or pad wo trishul us saye k sine m ghop dala jiske sath hi wo saya chikte hue nasht ho gaya.
Parantu naina samjh gayi ab khatra sar k uper se ja chuka h.
Wo turant preety k pas gayi or uske sath usi samay vidhi ker ek lakshman rekha ghar k charo or ki.
Wahi tantrik ko jese hi ye baat pata chali ki uski bheja hua saya nasht ho gaya usne gusse se or sayo ko bheja lekin is baar wo ghar k bahar hi nasht ho gaye, naina ki lakshman rekha k kaaran.
Tantrik gusse se :- ni chodunga tujhe naina, ek baar jit ker ye mat sochna ki Tune mujhe hara diya ab dekh kal kese tera anushthan nasht kerta hu m.
Wahi haveli m naina jo sayo ko nasht hote dekh rahi thi wo preety se boli
Naina :- preety khatra bahut jyada bad chuka h, ab waqt sone ka ni hume abhi se hi teyari kerni hogi.
Preety :- jesa tum kaho sister.
Fir dono bahan usi samay anushthaan ki teyari m lag gayi.
Wahi dusri or.
Shakal jise kubdi ne samar ko khojne ko bheja tha p, use abhi tak samar ka kuch pata na chala, jis kaaran wo gusse se pagal hue ja raha tha.
Shakal :- aakhir gaya kaha wo kuta jamin kha gayi ya asman nigal gaya, ager esa hi chala to kya muh dikhaunga m malik ko.
Tabhi waha kubdi prakat hui, jise dekh shakal dar gaya or wo or mohalat mangne laga.
Kubdi :- murkh kisi kaam k ni tum log, ab suno meri baat mane us samar ka pata laga liya h, wo is waqt shivgarh ki haveli m h.
Shakal :- kya to m abhi use utha k lata hu.
Kubdi :- murkh, esap sochna bhi mat verma bemot marega.
Tab kubdi use naina ki lakshman rekha or anushthaan k baare m batati h to shakal bola
Shakal :- to kya karu m.
Kubdi :- wahi batane to aayi hu tujhe m, malik ne ek esi yojna banayi h jisse wo ladka bhi hume milega or trityao k dushmno ka ant bhi hoga.
Fir kubdi wo yojna shakal ko batati h jise sun shakal khush ho jor jor se hasne laga.
Aaj k liye bas Itna hi
Stay tuned.
friends sorry for late update, or ye mat sochiyega ki karan or jyoti ka romance seen mane cancel kiya h, bus wo samay ki kami ki vajah se mane delay ker diya h, kyunki mere liye sabse mushkil kam ye hot scenes hi likhna h or sath m hi story ki slow spped ko bhi bhadana tha isliye, ise m thoda free hoke hi likhunga taki padhke aapko maja aaye , jo ane wale ek ya do update m jarur aayega or next update kal ya parso tak aajayega
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khud superb.
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