Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Naina]

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[Naina]

चलो आज फिर थोडा मुस्कुराया जाये…
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[Sunilgupta]

Superb update

 

[Agniban]

Koun nahi hai

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[Carry Minati]

update no :- 199 part 1
Subah k waqt jab sabhi breakfast table per milte h , kal raat k hadse k baas veer ka man bilkul udas tha, wo bilkul tut sa gaya tha, usko khane ki bilkul icha ni thi, lekin jyoti ne kese n kese use table le le hi aati h.

Jaha jab rekha khana serve kerne aati h to usne notice kiya to usne paya ki aaj kayi jan waha mojud ni.

Preety ka to karan ne ek jhuta bana diya ki use raat ko hi kisi kam sw delhi jana pada, or kaya ki tabiyat kharab hone wali baat bhi bata di.

Rekha kaya ki tabiyat ka sun atyadhik chintit hote hue :- kya kaya beti ki tabiyat kharab h or tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho, m abhi doctor ko bulati hu

Karan ek rahasmayi muskaan k sath jese kuch to h jo vo janta h per uske alawa koi ye baat ni janta, jyoti bhi ni.



Rekha sabko nashta paros ker ek plate m khana leker kaya k room per jati h or gatw knock keeti h, tabhi ander se kaya ki aawaz aati h.

Kaya :- ander aajaiye.

Rekha ander jaker kaya k pas bethti h or uske mathe ko sahalate hue pyaar se puchti.

Rekha :- ab kesi tabiyat h tumhaari beti.

Kaya uthne ki kosis kerte hue :- ji pahale se bahatar....

Isse aage wo kuch bol ni pati or khasne lagi, rekha use uthne se rokte hue,

Rekha :- sambhal k beti , tumhe aaram ki jarurat h.

Kaya bas ha m gardan hilati h, tabhi rekha ka hath kaya k mathe ko touch hota h or wo pati h ki kaya ko to tez bhukar h.

Rekha :- are ye kya beti tumhe to bahut tez bhukar h, ruko m abhi tumhare pani ki pati kerti hu.

Kaya :- are ni ni aunty aap kyu taklif kerti ho, m medicine lelungi.

Rekha :- isme taklif kesi beti, tum humari mahaman ho or meri beti jesi hi ho, or bhala ek beti ka khayal rakhna koi maa k liye taklif ka kam ho sakta h.


Ye bol rekha jaldi se jakee kitchen m se pani or saf kapda leker aati h or kaya k sek kerne lagi, kuch der k sek k baad kaya ko aaram mila or wo so gayi.

Kaya ko aaram se sota dekh rekha k chahre p ek sukun or santushti bhari muskaan thi.

Rekha waha se bina aawaz kiye uthate hue waha se jane lagi, lekin tabhi wo ek baar piche mudi or kaya k mathe ko pyaar sw chumti h, or usko niharte hue nikal jati h hall ki or.

Jaha aaker wo dekhti h ki naina abhi tak ni aayi.

Rekha :- bacho naina kaha h , uski to tabiyat thik h na.

Veer :- ha aunty wo to bilkul thik thi, ho sakta h raat ko late hone k kaaran abhi uthi na ho.

M dekhke aata hu abhi.

Rekha :- tum khana khao beta m bula lati hu use.

Ye bol rekha naina k room per jati h or wo jese hi uske room ko knock kerti h to gate lock na hone k kaaran apne aap khul jata h.

Rekha ander jate hue :- naina, naina beti.

Rekha ander jaker dekhti h ki room to khali h, rekha bathroom bhi check kerti h to pati h to naina waha bhi ni thi.

Rekha ko ab thodi chinta hone lagi ki achanak subah subah naina kaha chali gayi, tabhi uski najar pas hi padi tabltable p rakhe ek page p padti h, jo shayad ek note tha jispe veer ka naam likha tha.

Rekha turant jake sari baat veer ko ye letter dete hue sari baat batati h, jise sunte hi veer jaldi se karan or jyoti ko terrace p lejaker turant sari baat batata h, karan turant use chithi padhne ko kahata h.

Letter naina ki juban

Mere pyare dost veer, kal jo hua uske baad mere m itni himmat bhi ni thi ki itna sab hone k baas bhi m tumse mafi mang saku, isliye ye chithi likh rahi hu.

Jiju mere kaaran hi mane aapni di or aapne apni premika ko khoya or ab m khud hi apni bhul sudharungi, ab chahe mujhe apni jan ki baji hi lagani pade, m di ko leker us shetan ko mar ker hi lotungi.

M janti hu ki aapko mera yu akela jana bilkul pasand na aayega, per ab mane fesla ker liya h ki ye ladayi meri h or m apni is ladayi m aap logo ko sammaanit kerke aap logo ki jan ko khatre m ni dal sati, isliye please mujhe dhundne ki kosis bilkul mat kijiyega.

Aapki dost

Naina

Veer jese hi ye letter padhta h to wo or bhi tension m aajata h or turant karan se bola.

Veer :- karan jyoti, hume turant naina k piche jana hoga, uski jaan ko khatra h.

Ye bol veer sari baate batati h, jise sun karan or jyoti bhi bahut tension m aajate h, un dono ko bhale hi apne rishte ka pata na ho, lekin unka dil chikh chikh k gawahi de raha tha ki naina se koi to rishta h unka.

Karan :- kyaa, ager esa h to hume jald hi use dhundna hoga, ki isse pahale der ho jaye.

Ye bol karan veer or jyoti jaldi se niche ja ker niche jate h , or aman or rohan ko vaha ka or dadi k ghar ki rakhwali ki jimedari somp nikal jate h jungle ki or.

Lekin unme se kisi ne bhi dhyan ni diya tha ki naina ka alawa ek shaks or tha jo waha mojud ni tha.


Wahi dusri or.

Naina jo subah jaldi hi nikal chuki thi, wo jald hi nikal chuki thi, wo usi jungle k kinare pahunchi.

Naina ne jungle k bahar hi gadi park ker usi gufa ki or jati h jaha se preety gayab hui thi, is umid m ki waha use koi n koi surag jarur milega.


Naina gufa k ander jaker chanbin shuru kerti h.

Naina :- kuch to, kuch to hoga yaha, jiski madad se m samraat tak pahunch saku,

ye bol wo aaspas chanbin kerte hue idher udher dekhne lagi.

Kuch na milne per usne dhyan lagaker apni tantra shakti jo use kerne ki socha or usne apni ankhe band ker dhyan lagane ki kosis kiya.

Usne jese hi dhyan lagane ki kosis ki to use ahasas hua ki koi to h jo uske piche khada h.

Usne turant apne side bag se apna trishul nikala or tezi se piche ghumte hue gusse se chilayi.

Naina :- kon h waha.

Naina jese hi piche ghumti h to chonk jati h samne khade shaks.

Shaks :- are aaram se bahana, apne bhai p thoda to taras khao.

Naina :- samar bhai aap.

Ji ha dosto wo shaks samar hi tha.

Naina :- bhai aap yaha kab or kese aaye.

Samar :- ha bahan, jab tum haveli se nikal rahi thi to m bhi chupke se jeep m beth gaya tumhare sath.

Or ye sawal to mujhe puchna chahiye bahan tum yaha kya ker rahi ho, wo bhi yu akele, tum to janti ho na hum jis situation m h usme yu akela nikalna khatarnaak sabit ho sakta h.

Naina :- usi khatre se to m aap sab ko bachana chahti hu bhai, m ni chahti ki meri vajah se ab aap logo per or koi khatra aaye, isliye mane ye fesla liya h ki aage ki ladayi m khud akele hi ladungi.

Isliye bhai please aap bhi vapas lot jaye.

Samar :- tumne soch bhi kese liya bahan ki tumhara ye bhai, apni ekloti bahan ko yu hi jane dega ese khatarnaak safar pe.

Bahan tumhare kaaran hi mujhe ye nayi jindagi mili h or ager ye jindagi mujhe tumhari raksha k liye nyochavar bhi kerni pade to m piche ni hatunga.

Naina ne samar ko samjhane ki bahut kosis ki lekin samar apni jid per ada raha, jiske kaaran naina ko jhukna pada.

Naina :- thik h bhai, ager aapki yahi marji h to thik h , lekin aap vada kijiye mujhse ki aage k safar pe kabhi bhi hum pe koi khatra aaye to aap pahale aap khud ki raksha ka prabhandh keroge, meri raksha k liye khud khatre m dalne k bajaye.

Samar muskurate hue :- tum ni sudhrogi, thik h meri nainu, wada raha.

Samar :- naina fir tumne socha ki hum preety ji ko kese dhundenge.

Naina :- ek rasta h mere pas bhai.

Naina apne bag se ek packet kapde m lipta hua kuch nikalti h, jise dekh naina chonk jati h, jise dekhte hi samar chonk gaya.

Kyunki wo ek dayan ka kata hua hath tha.

Samar :- ye kya h bahan

Naina :- ye mari hui dayan ka kata hua hath h bhai, kahate h ki ager isse koi bhi sawal pucho to ye uska sahi jwab jarur deta h, chalo ise bhi ajma lete h.

Naina us hath ko jamin pe rakh ker :- batao samraat tak pahuchne ka rasta kese milega.

Swal puchne k kuch der m hi wo hath hilta h or kuch der gol ghumne baad uska ek ungli us or ishara kerti h jis or samar khada tha.

Samar herani se pareshan ho :- kya m, per bahana mujhe sach m kuch yaad ni tum to janti hi ho.

Naina :- hmm bhai, aap chinta mat kijiye mujhe lagta h iska ishara aapke ni balki us disha ki or h.

Naina us or jaker chanbin kerne lagi tabhi uski najar ek bade se pathar p padi, jo apne size p hisab se bahut halka tha.

Naina samjh gayi waha kuch h, usne samar ki madad se use hataya to waha ek megical compass pada tha, jise naina turant pahachan gayi.

Naina :- mayavi disha suchak yantra, ye hui ns baat.

Samar :- ye kya h bahan

Naina :- ye wo yantra h bhai jo hume samraat tak pahuchayega, mane apni kitav m padha h, iski madad se hum jiska bhi nam le, ye hume us tak pahuchne ka sabse aasan marg bata hi deta h.

Samar :- ye to bahut achi baat h bahan, fir der kis baat ki bahana, chalo aj us shetan ko dikha hi de hum bhai bahan ki shakti.

Naina ha m gardan hila h or disha ko samraat tak pahuchne ka rasta puchti h, tabhi us yantra m lagi sui apne ap lagi kr dakshin disha m ishaea kerne lagi.

Naina or samar bhi chal pade.

Wahi dusri or

Preety ko leker samraat apne mahal aahi pahuncha.

Samraat :- aao beti tumhara swagat h tumhare ghar m, tumhare asli ghar m, dhyan se dekho meri bachi yahi h wo humara samrajya jaha se tumhe raj kerna h is duniya p.

preety rosh bhare swar me :- mujhe abhi is sab m koi ruchi ni h pitaji, mera filhal k liye ek hi maksad h wo h us dhokebaj naina or uske sathiyo ko mot dena.

Samraat :- shabas meri bachi mujhe tumse yahi ummid thi, lekin hume nirnayak yudh p jane se purv apmi sampurn shaktiyo ko jagrit kerna hoga, or uske liye tumhe apmi sampurnta prapt kerni hogi .

Ha meri bachi, uske liye tumhe ek sampurn trittya banna hoga, jo m karunga, ek raja ki shaktiyo se.

Preety :- yadi esa h to der kis bast ki pitaji ker dijiye mujhe sampoorn bana dijiye mujhe ek shaktishali trityatritya, taki us kamini ko dikha saku uski okaat.

Preety ki maa bich me :- are meri bachi itni jaldi bhi kya h, itne samat baad to hum mile h, kya thoda bhi samayaomi maa ko na dogi.

Preety :- esa mat bolo ma, tum ni janti kitna tadfi hu tumhare bina itne warsho se.

Savitri :- to aaja meri bacchi lag ja apni maa k gale.

Preety bhag k gale lag jati h apni maa k or savitri use apne sath le jati h ek kamre m.

Samraat muskurate hue :- meri bachi ker lo jitna aram kerna h tumhe abhi, baad m tumhe ek badi jung ladni jo h tumhe.

Tabhi samraat ko kuch ahasas hua, jise mahahasus ker samraat k chahre p ek shetani muskan k sath.

Samraat :- tab tak m tumhari purani dost ya yu kahe nayi dushman ka sawagat kerta hu.

Wahi dusri or.

Karan veer or jyoti bhi naina ko khojte khojte usi gufa m pahunche jaha unhe wo dayan ka hath dikhayi diya, karan bhi us hath ki vishesta k bare m jabta tha , isliye usne us hath se pucha.

Karan :- batao naina kis or gayi h batao.

Tabhi vo hath hilte hue dakshin disha ki or ishara kerta h.

Karan :- dakshin disha, man gaye samraat, kya dimag lagaya h tune.

Veer :- m kuch samjha ni bhai.

Jyoti :- m samjhati hu bhai, dakshin disha mrityu ki disha mani jati h, or isi kaaran nakaratmak shaktiyo ko waha or jyada urja milti h.

Is kaaran hi shayad aajtak ka sabse khatarnaak shetan jo h samraat, kyumki vo shaktishali hi ni, kafi chalak bhi h, wo har ek us baat ka istemaal kerna janta h jo use fayda pahucha sake.


Veer :- yadi esa h to hume jald se jald naina ko khojna hoga bhai, isse pahale wo kisi musibat m pade.

Karan :- sahi kaha tumne veer, chalo.

Fir veer k sath karan or jyoti bhi usi disha ki or nikal jate h.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or samar kafi der se chal rahe the or ab sham hone ko aayi thi.

Samar :- naina hume or kitni der tak chalna hoga, subah se sham ho gayi lekin samraat ka koi aata pata ni.

Naina :- wahi to m soch rahi hu bhai, abhi tak to.

Naina bolte bolte ruk gayi , kyunki uski najar jese hi samne padi to uski khushi ka najara hi kuch esa tha.

Samne do ek jesi do pahadiya thi, jiski lambai or chodayi ek jesi thi .

Jisko dekte hi use kundera wali lila ki yaad aagayi jisne use bataya tha ki uski maa yaha se 300 km dur ek haveli m ked h, jo do ek jesi pahadiyon k bich m bane raste m mojud h.

Naina :- akhir kar, akhir kar hum pahunch hi gaye bhai, inhi pahadiyo k bich h samraat ki haveli.

Samar :- to der ki baat ki bahana, chalo chale.

Samar or naina chal pade us disha ki or kuch hi der m wo us haveli se kuch dur pahunch ek jhadiyo m pahunch usper najar rakhne lage.

Samar :- naina hum ander kese ghusenge, yaha to charo or rakshaso ka pahara h.

Naina :- iska bi rasta lila ne mujhe bataya tba bahan, usne mujhe bataya tha ki haveli k piche ki or ek band rasta h, wahi se hum, ander jayenge or kese n kese pahale Trishastr or preety di ko khojna hoga or unhe wapas apni or kerke hi hum samraat se bhidenge.

Samar :- hm acha plan h naina, chalo fir chalte h.

Naina :- ni bhai ander sirf m jaungi, aap bahar hi rukoge, taki kuch bhi gadbad ho to aap surakshit rahe or aap bhi ese mujhe koi gadbad ka ishara ker saktw ho..

Samar :- ni bahan m tumhe akele ander ni jane dunga.

Naina :- ni bhai aap yahi mera intezaar keroge aapko meri kasam.

Samar :- ye tumne kya kiya bahan, tumne mujhe apni kasam kyu di.

Naina :- maaf kerna bhai, per mere pass yahi rasta bacha tha, ab aap yadi apni bahan se pyaar kerte h to aap mere bulane tak bilkul bhi ander ni aaoge.

Samar na chahte hue bhi naina ki bat ko ni tal pata.

Or wo dono chupte chupate hue pahunch jate h haveli k piche hisse m jaha ek divar p jhadiya ugi hui thi, naina samar ko vo turant jhadiyo ko katnr ko kshati h, samar bilkul vesa hi kerta h or turant us jhadiyo ko katne laga.

Jhadiya hatne k baad unhe ek gufa numa rasta najar aata h, jo haveli ka ek gupt marg tha.

Naina samar ko apni kasam yaad dilate hue chal padi ,us gufa k ander jane se purv use ek or galti ho gayi thi anjane m jo aage pati chal jayegi.

kuch der chalne k baad waha andhera itna ho gaya ki naina ko kuch dikhayi ni de raha tha, tabhi use idea aaya, usnr apna hath uper kiya or apni fire power ko ese use kiya jisse uska hath ek mashal jesa ban gaya.

Naina yu hi aage bhadte hue mahal k ander pahunch hi gayi or vo paharedaro se chipte hue dhundne lagi samraat ko.

Wo abhi dhund hi rahi thi ki ek kamre se use kuch aawaz aayi usne us room m jhanka to paya ki koi ek rajsi poshak k lambe kurte m samne khada h or uske aage baki sipahi jhuke hue h, lekin wo tha kon ye wo ni dekh payi, kyunki uski pith naina ki or thi.

Naina dhime se khud se :- ye rajsi poshak or in seniko ka iske aage yu jhukna kahi yahi to samraat ni.

Ager esa h to abhi k liye mujhe nikalna hoga kyunki, abhi mere pas Trishastr ni or bina uske isse ladma matlab mot se bhidna.


Ye soch naina abhi aage jane hui thi ki us shaks ka chahra ghuma or jese hi use naina ne dekha to wo chonk gayi kyunki wo shaks samraat ni balki preety thi.

Naina khushi se :- diiii...

Ye bolte hue naina abhi preety ki or bhadi thi ki uske piche sir p ek tez prahar hua, jiske sath hi vo dard bhari chik k sath behosh ho gayi.

Kuch der baad naina ki ankh khuli to uska sir dard se phata ja raha tha or usne paya ki wo abhi salakho k piche jail m band h.

Naina :- m yaha kese pahunchi or preety kaha h, mujhe jald hi yaha se nikalne ka sochna hoga.

Abhi naina soch hi rahi thi Tabhi use kisi k kadmo ki aawaz sunayi di or tabhi waha ek shaks aapahuncha.

Shaks muskurate hue :- aao tantika aao, rajkumaari preety ki or se m aaya hu yaha tumhara swagat kerne.

Swagat h tumhara naina, trityao k is mahan samrajya m.


Naina gusse se :- kon ho tum or meri bahan k sath kya kiya h tum logo ne.

Shaks :- kamal ki baat h miss naina, jiski khoj m itni lambi yatra ki or samne khada hone k babjood bhi use ni pahachan saki.

Naina k muh se herani or gusse k bhav se bas ek hi naam nikla muh se.

Naina :- samraat




Aaj k liye bas itna hi
kisne kiya naina p piche se humla jiski vajah se vo ked hui

kese bachegi naina samraat se, or kese vo pahuch sakegi Trishastr tak punah.

kya preety ko vo vapas sahi marg p la payegi ya ni

or sabse bada sawal kya karan or jyoti kya sahi vakt p pahunch k bacha sakengw apni maa or choti bahan ko janne k liye sath bane rahe


Stay tuned

Bohot khub Bhai


Kahir Naina ke bare Mai joti ko PTA to chl hi gya hoga n .....
Sath Mai Karan ko bhi

 

[Carry Minati]

Next update kal raat ko jisme shayad hoga samraat ka or uske kale samrajya ka ant or sath m hi khulegi story k main villains m se ek yani ki vp ki real identity

Aaj ayega dekhte hai aage Kya hota hai to

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update

 

[Prince Charlee]

Awesome update. Naian Samrat ki hawaili pohanch hi gai dekhte hai ab K&J kaise Naina ko bachate hai. Mujhe to lagta hai Preety bhi shayad koi game khail rahi Samrat se kiun ke Samrat ki maut to usi ke hatho hi honi hai aur lagta hai Naina pe vaar karne wala Samar hi hai. Baki dekhte hai next update me kya hota hai.

 

[Boxerji]

Ma

Harry saheb ne congratulations wish na kiya meko jab meko best reader award mili

Chaliye koi baat nahi hum kisliye baithe hai .
Kabhi humko bhi yaad kar liya kijiye Naina ji wada raha apki khidmat mein hazir zaroor honge.
Kaha aap Harry saheb ke chakkar mein padi ho woh toh busy admi hai .

Kabhi humein bhi mauka dijiye .
BTW ( By The Way ) Congratulations for your achievement ??.

 

[Boxerji]

Ma

Harry saheb ne congratulations wish na kiya meko jab meko best reader award mili

Chaliye koi baat nahi hum kisliye baithe hai .
Kabhi humko bhi yaad kar liya kijiye Naina ji wada raha apki khidmat mein hazir zaroor honge.
Kaha aap Harry saheb ke chakkar mein padi ho woh toh busy admi hai .

Kabhi humein bhi mauka dijiye .
BTW ( By The Way ) Congratulations for your achievement ??.