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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Update achchha hai aur sahi ma'ane mein dekha jaye toh K&J ki ab bajegi woh bhi achchhe se khair dekhte hain ki woh dono apni chhutki ki nafrat ko muhabbat mein kaise badalenge?
Naina apni ghalatfahami mein apne bade bhai behanon ke khilaaf kya kya karegi.....
Naina ko apni vastaviktaa ka bhaan kab kaise aur kahan hoga.....
 

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Update no :- 201

part 3 :- pyare rishte :- the conclusion.


Bhutkaal me hue dharm or adharm bich yudh k baad ab charo or shanti or khushiyo ka mahol tha.

Karan k parivaar m aaj har koi khush tha, sagai ko do din ho chuke the, karan apne dada dadi k ghar aachuka tha or uske sath karan k mama mami or unke bache samet nana bhi apne purane dost k yaha kuch din k liye aaye hue the.

Karan k chacha chachi chachi apni varsho purv khoi hui apni ladli yani sonam ko pake itna khush thi ki wo use ek shan bhi apne se dur ni hone de rahi thi, khasker chachi to har waqt sonam k sath rahati , use apne hatho se khilati or apne sine se lagaye hi apni dono bachiyo ko sath hi sulati apni, or vese bhi usko to dugni khushi thi, kyunki na sirf use use barsho purani khoi hui beti wapas mili, balki sath m uski dusri beti yani ki komal bhi ab swasth ho chuki thi, or ab vo bhi ab apne pero p ek Normal jindagi ji sakti thi.

Wahi dusri or hemant or rekha ka bhi yahi hal tha, wo bhi aaj Bahut khush the, aakhir kaar unhe bhi apni varsho purv khoi hui bachi mil gayi thi or finally aaj unka bhi parivaar pura ho chuka tha, shruti ko preety ne apni dosti ker yahi to samjhaya tha ki bhale hi hemant or rekha uske sage maa baap ni, but kabhi unhone shruti ko is baat ka ahasass hone diya , ni naa, wo to ek baar usne akele me chup ke ye sav baate sun li thi, jiske kaaran uske man m ye galat bhavna ka janm hua, verna vo dil ki buri ni thi, or jab shruti ne is baat ko samjha to usne apni sari durbhavnao ko tyag, apne aap ko sudharne ki kasam li, or sath m hi usne bade pyaar se apni badi bahan kaya ko bhi apna liya.

Wahi dada or nana bhi apne gile shikwe ko bhula ker wapas ache dost ban chuke the sab gile shikwe bhula ker , itne salo m jo unhone khoya unka unhe dukh bhi tha, lekin honi ko kon badal sakta tha.

Wahi bhua bhi apni dusri maa yani ki apni bhabhi maa asha ko pake bahut khush thi, wo itne salo ki durio ko or apne bhaiya (ranvir) k kiye gaye dhoke ka dukh jo uski bhabhi ko mila, usko yaad ker unhe dukh na ho isliye wo jyada se jyada waqy apni bhabhi ko de rahi thi.

Is waqt bhi wo apni bhabi k sath bethi gappe lada rahi thi, or uske dono or god me sir rakh naina or jyoti sir rakh apni maa k prem ka aanand le rahi thi.

Garima :- bhabhi maa sach me m bata ni sakti m kitni khush hu aapse dobara mil ke, malum h bhabhi aap jab yaha se gayi thi, to yaha sab suna suna ho gaya tha, aapki bahut yaad aati thi bhabi ma.

Mane or bhai ne aapko kaha kaha n dhunda or jab hume aapko khone ki khabar mili to humari to jaan hi nikal gayi thi..

Ye bolte bolte garima ki ankho m ansu aagaye, jise dekh asha use shant kerwate hue boli.

Asha :- na guddu , na mera bacha yu tote ni, ab m aaagayi hu na wapas, to fir kyu ro rahi ho, tadfi to m bhi bahut thi, aap sab se bichad k guddu, per mujhe bhagwan pe pura bharosa tha ki wo ek din sab sahi jarur ker dega or wesa hi hua, mere bache ne us dusht ko khoj ker mujhe mukt kerwa hi diya.

Garima :- aapne sahi kaha bhabi, bhagwan jo kerta h acha hi kerta h, unhi bhagwan ki vajah se hi to hume karan jesa hira apne bache k roop m mila jisne na keval aapko wapas laya, balki pure parivar ko wapas ek ker diya or sabki khushiyaan bhi lotayi, kyu sahi kaha na mane jyoti.

Ye bol garima ne jyoti ki or dekha to ye kya usne or asha ne paya ki jyoti or naina kab yu apni maa ki god m leti hui, baate kerti hui so gayi, pata hi naa chala.

Asha pyaar se :- are .. Dono bachiya to yahi so gayi.

Garima :- sone dijiye na bhabhi inko kuch der esi bichari (jyoti) kafi salo se is pyaar k liye or is god k sukun k liye tadfi h.

Ye bol garima asha ko karan or jyoti ki bachpan se leke abhi tak ki sari kahani batati h jitni bhi use maloom thi, jise sun aasha ki ankho se nir bahane lage.

Uska dil rone laga ki uske piche se uske bacho ne kya kya na saha, asha ka waha unko chod k jana bhale hi majburi thi, per is kaaran na keval unhe bachpan se maa ka pyaar se vanchit rahana pada, balki uske jaane k baad unke pita ne jo unke sath ravaiya kiya, us kaaran pita k sneh se vanchit rahane k sath sath unhe apaar dukh or kasht bhi sahane pade.

Asha ne rote hue halke se jyoti k sir ko apne sine se laga liya or rote hue boli.

Asha :- mujhe maaf ker de meri bachi, mere kaaran tumhe or tumhare bhai ko kya kya sahana na pada, lekin ab m aagyi hu meri bachi, or ye wada h tumhari is maa ka, ab vo apne bacho ko yu chod k kahi ni jayegi.

Ye bol usne apni dono bachiyo k pyar se apne sine se laga, unke mathe ko chuma

Garima :- vese bhabhi humara ladla h kaha.

Are ha pure parivaar ka halchal jan liya, lekin apne hero ko to bhul hi gaye, aaiye jante h apna hero kaha h.

Darasl apna hero abhi apni duty pe laga hua tha.

Siya to aapko yaad hogi hi , wahi ladki jisko uske sasur ne ghar se dahej k liye nikal diya tha or ab apne usi apradh k liye wo dandnayak k danchakra ko bhugat raha tha.

Jiske kaaran uske sharir m bhayak kod ki bimari lag chuki thi, uske dard sw buri halar thi or uske sharir sw esi gandi badbu aane lagi thi, jis kaaran uska beta bhi ab uske karib ni aata tha or use isi halat m chod ke ab vo apne dost k sath hi rahane laga tha uske ghar.

Lekin ese waqt m bhi koi thi, jo aaj bhi siya k sasur ki niswarth bhav se seva or ilaaz ker rahi thi , jo or koi ni khud siya hi thi, jis bechari ko jese hi apne sasur ki khabar mili thi, wo turant apne sasutal lot aayi thi or puri lagan or nishtha k sath din raat apne sasur ki seva ker rahi thi.

Sasur tadafti hui aawaz me :- bahuuuu....

Siya :- ji babuji aapko kuch chahiye.

Sasur :- ni betaaa, mujhe kuch ni h, bas tumse kuch puchna tha.

Siya :- puchiye babuji.

Sasur :- beti mane tumhare sath kitna bura vyavahar kiya , tumhae dutkara dhikara, yaha tak ki tumhe ghar se bahar bhi beijat kerke tak nikal diya.

Fir bhi tum meri itni seva or itni dekhbhal ker rahi ho, aakhir kyuu, tumhe to balki khush hona chahiye ki m is halat m hu.

Siya :- ye aap kesi baat ker rahe h babuji, aap to mere pita saman sasur h, or bhala koi beti apne pita ko is halat me dekh k khush ho sakti h.

Or rahi baat is sab ki to ye to mera dharm h babuji, kyunki ek ladki ki jab shadi hoti j to uska rishta sirf uske parivaar se hi ni balki unke pure parivar se judta h, pati ka parivaar hi uska khudka parivaar ho jata h or apne bhala apne parivaar ko koi bure waqt m chod deta h kya.

Ye bol siya apnw sasur k ghavo pe maraham lagane lagi, wahi siya k sasur ki ankho se ansu bahane lage or use aaj apni bhul ka ahasas ho raha tha ki anjane m usse kitna bada apradh ho gaya tha.

Jis bahu ko usne itne kasht diye the, wo hi aaj uske liye itna pareshan ho rabi thi, vo bhi jab uska saga beta tak use chod ker chala gaya tha.

Tabhi waha dandnayak bhi prakat hue , jinhe dekh siya ghabra gayi, tab dandnayak ne apna parichay dete hue us na ghabrane ko kahatw h.

Dandnayak :- akhir tumhe aahasas ho hi gaya (sasur ka nam) ki tumne kitna bada apradh kiya h.

Sasur :- hey bhagwan, aapne uchit kaha, m mahapapi hu, jo apni beti saman bahu ko itne kasth diye or aapne mujhe bilkul sahi dand diya h, bhagwan m isi layak hu, m isi layak hu ki m mar jau.

Siya :- esa na kahiye pitaji (dandnayak) hey bhagwaan , yadi aap mere kaaran mere bapuji ko ye dand de rahe h, to meri vinti swikaar kijiye bhagwan, mere bapuji ko shama ker dijiye, unhe apni bhul ka pashchatap h bhagwan, kripya daya kijiye.

Dandnayak karan siya ki prathna or uske sasur k pashchatap ko dekh use shama ker apni vakrdrishti hata leta h or jiske sath hi siya k sasur wapas sawasth ho jate h or sath hi uska beta bhi bhaga bhaga wapas aata h or apne pita se shama mangta h.

Siya or uska parivar dandnayak ko koti koti dhanyavaad kerte h or fir dandnayak waha se gayab ho wapas karan k roop me apni chat p aajata h.

Karan chain ki saas lete hue :- hash chalo ye kaam pura hua, ab chalo chal ker thoda waqt apni family ko bhi diya jaye or specially maa se, wo to naraj hogi ki itne warsho baad milne k babjood bhi m unhe time ni de raha.

Ye bol karan sidiyo ki or bhada hi tha ki uske kaano m aawaz padi.

"Mata se milne se purv apne pita se to milte jao putra".

Karan is aawaz ko bhali bhanti tha pahachanta tha , us aawaz ko sunte hi wo turant piche muda or samne khade shaks ko hath jod pranam kerte hue bola.

Karan :- pranam karamfal data.

Ji ha dosto aawaz deme wale or koi ni karan k dharm pita, karmfal data shani hi the, jo unse milne or bhadhai dene k sath sath uske aage k margdarashan bhi kerne aaye the.

Shani :- ayushmaan bhavah putra, evam abhinandan bhi putra, tumhare kaaran aaj ek or papi ka sanghar hua.

Karan :- dhanyavaad pitashri, (udas swar me) dhanyavaad to mujhe aapka kerna chahiye pitaji, jo aapne meri maa ki suraksha k liye kya kuch ni kiya or ek m hu jin pita k liyw m apni gardan bhi kaat ker charno m arpit ker du vo bhi kam h, unka mane kitna apmaan kiya us din, aapko kya kuch ni kaha mane pita ji, (shani k pero m gir ker rote hue) apne is nadan putra ko shama ker do.

Ye bol karan fut fut k rone laga, kyunki use wo din yaad aagaya tha, jab usnr apne pita k aavesh m aake na keval ghor apman kiya, balki unka dil dukha unse bina vajah narajgi rakhi.

Shani karan ko utha ker shant kerte hue :- shant ho jao putra, ye ashru tum jese veer ko shoba ni dete, jo hua vo karm ka vidhan tha , jise koi ni badal sakta or rahi bast mere apman ki, to putra mat bhulo tum. Mere hi ansh ho yani ki tum or m alag ni ek hi h , to ese m hum dono k bich apmaan samman ki baat kaha se aayi.

Shani kafi der karan ko samjhane k baad bole :- putra tumne apni maa ko mukt kerwa ke or samrat ka ant kerke na keval is sansaar ko paap mukt kiya h, balki jyoti k baad tumhari sabse mahan shakti ko bhi khoj liya h.

Karan :- konsi shakti prabhu.

Shani :- wo shakti or koi ni balki ttumhari choti bahan naina h putra, yahi tumhaari wo shakti h jisne tumhari or jyoti ki rasatal lok m raksha ki thi.

Ye bol shani karan ko sari kahani us din ki batate h, jisse karan ko sMjh aata h ki wo parchai wali ladki or koi mi naina thi.

Karam :- parantu pitashri.

Shani :- hum jante h putra, tumhare or naina k bich bahut badi galat fahmi ho chuki h, jisko waqt aane Pr hi khatam kiya ja sakega or tumhari agli pariksha bhi yahi hogi ki tum kese apmi choti bahan ko uchit marg pe late ho or ye karya tumhe shigra kerna hoga putra, kyunki naina k uchit marg pe aane se purb usne anuchit marg chun liya to is sansaar ko ghor sankat se ubharna asambhav sa ho jayega putra.

Karan ye sun chonk gaya, use aaj pata chala tha ki uski choti bahan bhi ek shakti thi or vo bhi itni khatarnaak.

Karan k mN me or bhi ksyyi sawal the, jinhe shani ne ye kahker tala ki waqt aane pe sawyam pata chal jayega.

Karam :- ab mere liye kya aagaya h pitaji.

Shani :- tumhe punah aapne shahar lotna hoga putra, kyunki kuch log or bhi h jinhe is khushiyon k liye kafi lamnse samay se tadfe h


Karan apne pita ka ishara samjh jata h or muskurate hue unse vida leker niche bad chala apni maa ki or

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Main hairan hoon hi ki yeh log kitne khush hai.. btw achha hai khush ho lene do kyunki dukh ke badal jaldi hi madrane wale hai hai inpar..
waise siya kaafi uchha vichar wali tatha naik dilwali nikli... koi aur hoti toh us ghar par kadam bhi na rakhti par isne na keval wapas sasural aayi balki apne sasur k seva mein bhi lag gayi.. woh sasur jisne itna kuch galat kiya iske sath phir bhi kayi mann bair na rakh ilaz karti rahi..
So yeh karan wapas apne sahar aane ko hai..
Khair let's see what happens next
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Shani or karan ki vartalap abhi chal rahi thi ki tabhi karan ko ek anubhuti hui, esi anubhuti jisme aanand or sankat dono ka ahasas tha.

Karan shani se :- pitaji mujhe ye abhi kesi anubhuti hui, kya arth h iska.

Shani :- ye anubhooti tumhare aane wale bhavishya ka purvabhas h putr , ye sanket h putra ki ab tumhare jivan ke sabse mahatvapurn adhyay ka aarambh hone wala , or sath me aarambh hone wali tumhare jivan ki sabse kathin parikshaye, jinke parinam p keval na ki tumhare apitu is pure brahamand ka bhavishya nirdhaarit karegi.

Isliye putra mujhe asha h ki tum aane wali un parikshao m humesha ki tarah dhairya or satkarm k raste p chal ker un parikshao m uttirn hoge.

Karan :- esa hi hoga pitaji, mera ye purn pariyatna rahega ki m aapki asha p khara utru .

Ab mere liye kya aagaya h bhagwan.

Shani :- putra philhal k liye to tum apne parivaar ko samay do or swayam bhi maa k prem roopi amrit ka aanand lo.

Parantu uske sath ye bhi praytn kerna ki naina ko kisi bhi tarike se krodh or burayi se dur rakhna or fir tum shighr apne karmbhumi (karan ka shahar jaha wo rahata h) kyunki bhale hi samraat ka ant ho chuka h, iska ye arth ni ki burayi ka nash ho chuka.

Balki ab vo or bhi sajak ho chuki h or apne aap ko or bhi sudrid bana bal se ya chal se kese bhi vo tumhe or is sansaar ko hani pahuchane ka prayaas karegi or sabse mahatvapurn tumhara or jyoti ka 21 va janm din bhi aane ko h, jiske sath na keval tumhari shaktiya tumhe praapt hogi, apitu sath m vo kali shakti bhi lotegi, jiska ant kerne k liye tumhara janm hua h.

Isliye apni anant shaktiyo ko dharan kerne k liye tumhe swayam ko sajj kerna hoga or vo bhi shighra ati shighra.

Karan :- jo aagaya pitashri, aapne jese nirdesh diye h vesa hi hoga.

Ye bol karan shani se vida le niche chal pada apne room ki or dopahar ka time tha to sab apne apne kamre m aaram ker rahe the.

Isliye karan ne kisi ko disturb kerna sahi ni samjha or jyoti ko pukarte hue apne room m enter hua.

Karan pukarte hue :- gudiya, gudiya...

Karan bolte bolte ruk gaya kyunki usne paya ki uski gudiya yani ki uski pyaari bahan to soyi hui h.

To karan chup ho bas muskurate hue jyoti k paas jata h or pyaar se jyoti k mathe ko chum leta h or apne aap m hi bolta h.

Karan :- sote hue kitni pyaari lagti h meri gudiya.


Tabhi uski najar pas m hi soyi hui Uski choti bahan naina bhi soyi hui thi, dono jab apni maa ki god m so gayi thi, tab aasha ne undono ko eksath sula diya tha, bhale hi bhai bahano k bich k man mutav k kaaran bilkul ni banti thi, lekin naina apni maa k samne shant rahati thi, kyonki vo ni chahti thi ki uski maa ko filhal k liye thes pahunche , vo bhi jab jab itne salo baad unke jivan m khushiyaan aayi thi.

Karan pyaar se naina k bhi mathe ko chumta h, or uske sir ko pyaar se sahalata h or pyaar or chintit swar m use niharne laga, kyunki karan ne jo ahasas kiya tha uske baad uski chinta naina k liye or jyada bad gayi thi.

Karan man ne :- naina meri bahan, kese kese tumhe yakin dilau apni nirdoshta ka kese tumhe samjhau ki tum anjane m us rah ki or agrasar hone ko tatpar ho jiska parinam atyant bhayankar hone wala h, kese..

Tabhi karan k kaano m asha ki aawaz padi.

Asha majak kerte hue :- haaye kash hume bhi koi esa milta jo humari itni chinta kerta.

Karan muskurate hue apni maa k majak ko aaage bhadate hue :- ye aap kya bol rahi ho mumma

Asha :- or ni to kya bolu, dekho to mera babu to jese bhul hi gaya, use apni bahano ki to khub chinta h, per ese ni ki apni maa se bhi uska hal chal puch le, mano jese apni mumma ko to bhul hi gaya mera babu.


Asha karan k bagal m bethte hue ye baat boli.

Karan apni maa ko side sw gale lagate hue bola :- kesi baat kerti ho mumma aapka babu kabhi apni mumma ko bhul sakta h, (nam ankho se) aap ni janti mumma kitna tadfa h aapka babu aapko yu gale lagane ko , aapke is amritmay prem ko.

Karan ka ab sabra ka bandh tut chuka tha, itne dino usne apne aap p control rakha hua tha, taki sabki khushiyo k rang m bhang na pade or specially apni gudiya ko bhi sambhalne k liye bhi, taki usko rota dekh jyoti bhi kahi na kamzor pad jaye.

Karan :- mumma aapko pata h ki aapke jane k baad m bilkul tut chuka tha, mere to jine ki koi chah hi ni bachi thi, or gudiya..
(Siskte hue) or gudiya bhi sara din bas roti rahati thi, aapke janti h mumma, humne to bas jine ki ummid hi kho di thi, or uper se papa k vyavhaar k baad to hume hum....

Iske baad karan se kuch ni bola gaya or wo apna dhairya purn roop se kho fut fut k rone laga, aaj karan k sine m daba itne salo ka sara dard ek sath bahar aagaya tha, jab usko apni maa ka prem ka sahara mila to usne apna sara dird nikal rakh diya apni maa k anchal m.

Or esa hona bhi swabhavik tha , kyunki ek maa se bada santaan ka mitra uska hiteshi bhala koi ho sakta h, ek maa hi to h jiske aanchal m santaan apna har dard or dukh bhula deti h.

Asha apne jigar k tukde ko yu rote dekh tadaf uthi, usse ye saha na gaya usne turant karan ko sine se laga liya kas k or pyaaar se chup kerate hue.

Asha :- (puchkarte hue) na mere bache na rote ni h, tu to mera bahadur laal h naa.

M janti hu mere bache tumne kya kya ni saha tumne to mujhse sab chupa liya tha lekin tumhaari bhua ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya.

(Rote hue) apni is abhagi maa ko maaf ker de mere bache m tumhari or tumhari gudiya ki doshi hu, mane apne swarth m tum dono ko akela jo chod diya is jalim duniya me, apni maa ko maaf ker de mere bache.

Ye bol asha bhi rone lagi, jab karan ne apni maa ko yu rote dekha to usko bilkul acha naa laga, usne turant apne dukh ko bhula k jaldi se apni maa ko shant kerwate hue aansu poche or unka hath thamte hue niche uske samne bethte hue bola

Karan :- ni mumma please aap maafi mat mangiye, aapka babu aapse bilkul naraj ni h, aapne jo kiya humari bhalayi k liye to kiyaa na mumma or choti (naina) ki safety k liye bhi to ye jaruri tha na, or vese bhi maa aapka babu itna bada to ho hi chuka h Or itna samjhta h ki jitna hum aapke jane se dukh sahe usse kayi jyada dukh to aapne jhele h, taki hum surakshit rah sake, to ese m esi mahan maa se bhala koi santaan kese naraj ho sakti, balki i Proud of you mumma.

Aap duniya ki sabse best mumma ho, m kitna lucky hu jo aap mujhe meri mumma k roop m mili.

Karan ki yu bacho bhare swar m itni samjhdari vali baat sun asha ka hriday gad gad ho gaya usne turant karan ko niche se utha apne sine se lagate hue boli.

Asha :- Lucky to m hu mere laal, mere chand, m kese shukriya karu mahadev ko jo mujhe tum jesa samjhdar or apmi maa ko itna pyaar kerne wala beta mila,(jyoti or naina) jyoti or naina jesi samjhdar or bahadur betiya mili.

Karan :- mumma.

Asha :- ha mera bacha.

Karan :- mumma aap vada kero ki ab aap mujhe or gudiya ko chod k kabhi ni jaogi.

Asha karan ko or jor se apne sine se lagate hue :- ha mere laal m tumse wada kerti hu ki jab tak is deh m pran h tab tak tumhari maa to humesha sath rahegi or fir marn...

Asha aage kuch bolti usse pahale hi karan asha k muh p hath rakh deta h or nam ankho se apni gardan na m hilata h, jese bol raha ho ki na mummy aage se esi manhoos baat kabhi mat bolna.

Or fir karan wapas asha k sine se lag jata h abhi dono maa bete abhi aapas me gle lage hue the ki tabhi karan ko mahasus hua ki koi piche se uske gale laga, jisko usne agle hi shan bina dekhe pahachana liya.

Karan bas itna hi bola :- badi jaldi uth gayi meri gudiya.

Ji ha dosto ye jyoti hi thi jo abhi abhi uthi.

Jyoti :- ji bhaiyu, or ye kya bhaiyu sara pyaar mumma ko hi doge apni gudiya ko to bhul hi gaye or mumma aap bhi, lagta h mujhe koi pyaar hi ni kerta .

Tabhi asha karan ko kuch ishara kerti h jise samjhte hi karan k chahre p shararti muskaan aajati h or isse Pahale jyoti kuch samjh pati.

Usse pahale hi asha or karan ne jyoti ko sofe p apni or khich liya or ek sath gudgudi kere lage.

Karan gudgudi kerte:- kya boli chipkali hum tujhe pyaar ni kerte, pyaar ni kerte ab bata kesa laga humara pyaar.

Jyoti haste haste lot pot hote hue :- hihaha, haha, mumma bhaiyu, bas kero haha, sorry m to majak ker rahi thi.

Asha gudgudi kerte hue :- majak ker rahi thi, majak ker rahi thi, ab humara majak kesa laga .

Karan or asha pahale to jyoti ko khub hasate h or fir ek sath dono side se gale lagate hue karan.

Karan :- pagli , tu to humari pyari gudiya humari jaan h tu, tujhe bhala hum bhul sakte h, kyu mumma.

Asha dono ko fir se apne sine se lagate hue :- mere to mere dono bache hi mrmeri jaan h mere laal, tum dono humesha yu hi bas khush rahanaere bacho or humesha hi apna ye pyaar barkraar rakhna.

Karan or jyoti ek sath :- ji mumma.

Ye bol vo dono ek sath apni maa se lipat gaye, jaha tino maa bete beti itne salo ki duriya dur ker rahe the.

Wahi usi kamre m mojud do ankhe thi, jo unhe hi dekh rahi thi, jo or kisi ki thi, jo naina ki hi thi, jo jag to chuki thi, lekin wo wahi leti hui sab dekh rahi thi, uske chahre pe ek ni kayi tarah k bhav najar aarahe the or sath m uski ankho m pani bhi tha, parantu ye ansuo ka kyaa kaaran tha wo rahasya sirf naina hi janti thi.

Wahi dusri or

Tridev bhi in tino ka milam dekh jaha man hi man muskura rahe the, wahi brahmdev k chahre pee chinta ki lakire saf saf najar aarahi thi.


Narayan :- kya baat h brahmdev, aapke chahre per karan or jyoti ko sukh ko dekh prasanta to h per mukh per ye chinta ki rekha kyu.

Brahmdev :- chinta ka vishay to h hi narayan or mere chinta ka kaaran h naina, uske vyavahaar m aaya ye parivartan kisi bhi roop m sadharan to kadapi ni h, na jane kyu mujhe lagta h ki naima ko itne varsho tak karan or jyoti se yu dur rahana koi sadharan sanyog to bilkul na tha, kuch to bahut guhd rahasya chupa h iske piche.

Mahadev :- aapka aashanka uchit h brahmdev, karan or jyoti ko itne varsh door rakhne ka sirf unki suraksha ka hi kaaran na tha, ek bahut bada rahasya h jo aaj tak humne , narayan or shani ne is sansaaar se yaha tak ki aap se bhi brahmdev.

Brahmdev chonk ker :- kesa rahasya mahadev.

Mahadev narayan ki or dekhte h to narayan ha m apma shish hilate hue bole.


Narayan :- wo rahasya hum aapko batate h brahmdev.

Ye bol narayan ne brahamdev ko naina k janm ki katha aarambh se batayi jise sun brahmdev buri tarah chonk gaye or bole.

Brahmdev :- mahadev mujhe aap per purn vishwas h bhagwan, parantu apne esa kerke bahut bada jokhim liya h bhagwan, karan ki ek bhul is sansaar ko nash tak pahuncha sakti h.

Mahadev :- jokhim to hum esa na kerte to bhi or jyada tha brahmdev, kyunki sach to ye h ki bina naina k karan or jyoti apne lakshya ko kabhi purn ni ker payenge.

Or rahi baat jokhim ki to he brahmdev, is sansaar m sabse bada karm h, or mujhe putra karan k satkarmo p purn bharosa vo sirf karn or uskr parivar k hi ni balki is sansaar ko suraksha pradan karegi.

Lekin vese bhi abbi samay h usme brahmdev, is samay to samay h ek or adbhut premi jode ko unke prem k ahasas hone ka, jo dandnayak ki is yatra m vishesh bhumika nibhayegi.

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Raat ka time ho chuka tha or aaj sara parivaar ek sath dinner ker rahe the lekin ye kya yaha to apne hero ki halat kharab ho chuki thi.

Kyunki uski sabhi bahane , bhua or uski chachi mami or dono mao ne apne hatho se khilane k chakkar m use itna khila diya tha ki uski halat patli ho gayi thi.

Karan pet pakad ker :- are bas kero deviyo, daya kero, ab kya khila khila k bache ki jaan logi kyaa.

Karan ne ye baat itni funny way m boli thi ki sabhi has pade, tab kavya boli.

Kavya ek grass badhate:- tu chup ker abbi to tune kuch khaya ki kaha, dekh to kitna kamzor ho chuka h.

Shruti haste hue :- are bas kero choti bhua ese hi aap big bro ko khilati rahi to unka six pack family pack ban jayega or fir sab inhe motu motu kahake chidayegi, specially m to kah k lungi inki

Rekha :- e nigodi chup rah,khabardaar mere bache ko kuch kaha to itni badi ho gayi h, fir bhi akal ni h kidher kya bolna chahiye or ye koi tarika h apne bade bhai se Baat kerne ka , chal abhi. Maafi mang karan se.

Karan :- are relax my dear mami, ab bahan apne bhai se majak ni karegi to or kisse karegi or vese bhi maami, m is tikhi mirchi ko seriously leta hi ni.

Ye bol karan has deta h or uske sath rekha bhi.

Shruti karan k chati p mukka marte hue :- kya tum bhi big bro.

Yu hi hasi majak k bich sabne dinner kiya, Per karan ne ek baat notice ki ki jabse kaya ko uski sachai pata chali h jabse wo khush to h lekin bahut shant bhi h or yaha tak ki us din k baad se undono k bich baat bhi ni hui dhang se, to karan ko laga ki shayad usse naraj h kaya, isliye usne jald hi kaya se baat kerme ka decide kiya.

Wahi dusri or

Naina apni team yani veer or preety ko dinner k baad chat p bulati h.

Preety :- kya baat h sister, tumne is wawt hume yaha kyu bulaya sab sahi to h na

Naina :- ha di, sab sahi h, tension mat lo.

Veer :- fir is waqt yu hume yaha bulane ka kaaran.

Naina :- wo isliye veer kyumki waqt aagaya h humari is yatra k us sathi se vida lene ka jinke margdarshan k bina hum kabhi is sukh bhare palo ko ni ji pate jo aaj ji rahe h.

Naina ki apni baat puri kerne k sath hi vahi ghora baba prakat hue , jinhe dekh tino pranam kerte h.

Ghora baba :- khush raho mere bacho or tumhe bahut bahut abhinandan ki tumne na keval apni manjil ko praapt kiya balki is sansaar ko durachaario se mukt bhi kiya.

Or isike sath mera bhi karya purn hua mere bacho devi ma ki agya se hi m tumhare jivan m aaya tha, ab samay aachuka h mere tap k liye lotne ka.

Naina nam ankho se :- baba apni is bavhi k liye koi margdarshan.

Ghora baba :- meri bachi satkarm k marg p sadev chalti rahana jese abbi tak chalti aayi ho.

Or kuch nirdesh deker baba bhi anterdhyan ho gaye , naina ki ankho m viyog k aansu aane swabhavik the , kyonki vo ghora baba hi the jinke margdarshan k kaaran hi aaj vo apne parivar ko pa saki thi.

Preety :- to sister ab aage ka kya plaan h.

Naina :- plan kya h di, thode din yaha dadu or nanu k ghar rukenge or fir lot chalengw wapas apne ganv maa k sath.

Veer :- ganv? Kya matlab naina ganv kyu kya tum apne asli ghar ni jaogi apne bhai bahan k sath.

Naina tez aawaz me :- ni h wo mere bhai bahan.

(Fir khud ko control kerte hue) mere liye mera ghar to mera vahi h jaha mane mere baba k sath jindagi bitayi veer or mujhe or meri maa ko vaha jane se koi ni rok sakta.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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naina jab jaagi tab uski Aankhon mein krodh, jwala aur apne muh bole bhai ko khone ka dard tha aur sath hi ek ajib si kasma -kas.. ek bechaini...
waise ab nafrat ho ya kuch aur.. par ab joh karne jaa rahi hai naina.. yeh sarasar galat hai.. ushe koi hak nahi ki ek maa se uske santano ko alag ya dur karne ki..
Btw ek ghar mein rahe... bas ignore kare karan aur jyoti ko... simple :hippi:
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
 
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