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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Jamesleon

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Karan aaj subah bahoot jald hi utha gaya kyoki aaj uska college khulane wala tha uske bagal mei jyoti soyi
huyi thi. Usne jyoti ki taraf dekha wo bahoot hi masoom bilkul ek choti bachi ki tarah so rahi thi.
Karan ne jyoti ke mathe ko dhire se chum liya tabhi jyoti ne dhire se apni ankhe khol di.
Jyoti:- good morning bhaiya
Karan:- Good morning didi
Karan ki baat sunkar jyoti khilkhilakar huns di phir jyoti ko husta dekh karan bhi husne
laga.. Kuchh der ke baad karan ne jyoti se bola chal jyoti bahoot huns liye jaldi uth tabtak mai fresh hokar
aata hu..karan tauliya lekar bathroom mei guss gaya or jyoti idhar phir se so gayi..............................
..............................
Karan or Jyoti ek hi room mei sote hai inke room mei ek common bathroom hai.
kyoki wo dono ke maa bachpan mei hi mar gayi tab ye dono bilkul chote the.. Uske baad inke papa ne
dusra saadi kar li jo karan or jyoti se thoda bhi matlab nahi rakhati thi in dono bhai-behan mare ya jiye use
Karan ke sauteli maa ko koi matlab nahi tha waise bhi karan ke papa bhi koi matalab nahi rakhte the. Bas har
mahine karan or jyoti ko 10 hazar rupee mil jate the. Lekin peyar nahi mil pata tha..
Isi karan dono bhai behan ek hi room mei sote the koi bhi problem ho dono ek dusre ko bata dete the
apas mei bahoot frenk the bas inke beech bhai behan ka hi pyar tha.. karan or Jyoti dono ek dusre ke pran
the dono bhai behan ke beech bahoot hi peyar tha.. karan ke papa ka apna khud ka buisnuiss hai karan ke
pass ek bike hai ishi se dono bhai behan college jate hai .............................................
Karan jaise hi bathroom mei se fresh hokar jab room mei aaya to dekha ki jyoti fir se so gayi hai. Karan ish
samay kewal underwear or uske uper ek tauliya lapeta huya tha. Karan ne jyoti ko bahoot hi dhire se apne
mazboot baho mei uthaya or jyoti ko lekar bathroom mei ghuss gaya. tabhi jyoti ki nind khul gayi lekin
wo sant rahi ye dekhne ke liye ki uska bhai kya karta hai abhi jyoti yehi soch rahi thi ki tabhi karan ne usko
bhathtub mei phenk diya. Bhathtub mei pehle se hi pani bhara huya tha. Jyoti ke pure kapde gile ho
gaye. Karan khhi khhi karke husne laga. Karan ko husta dekh jyoti ne bhi karan ke uper pani pekhne lagi karan husta
huya room mei chala gaya jyoti bhi fresh hoker nikal aayi tabtak karan kapde pehan chuka tha jyoti ne
kapde pehne or nasta banane chali gayi dono bhai behan ek dusre ke samne hi kapde pehan lete the.
Udhar uske sauteli maa or papa abhi so rahe the nukal gaye. Jyoti nasta bana rahi thi karan uske pass hi
baitha huya tha. Lagbhag aadhe ghante mei hi nasta ban kar taiyar ho gaya.. Dono bhai-behan ne nasta
kiye or college ki wor nikal gaye.
College mei aaj kuchh khas nahi huya karan or jyoti jab ghar aaye to pata chala ki aaj unke sauteli maa ka janmdin hai
So friendsdekhte h ab aage in dono bhai bahan ki life m kya hota h aaj please aap sab comments kerke bataiyega kesa laga first update or kuch kami ho to jarur batana
nice update bro
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Arv313

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Awesome update bro mast laga dil khush ho jata hai update padhake bas shikayat ye hi h ki samay se aa jaya kro atariya pe
Dekha dekhi balam ho jaye.
Bhaiya love you
Waiting for the next update.
 

Iron Man

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Jamesleon

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Update no - 2
Karan ki sauteli maa ke janmdin ke party mei karan to aata tha lekin jyoti nahi aati thi..
Ishi chalte uske papa jyoti per or kapha rahte the.
Aaj bhi Janmdin ki party ki taiyari suru ho gayi thi.
Karan ke papa Ranbir sarma ek bahoot nirdayi admi the.
Janmdin ki party bhi khatam ho gayi lekin aaj bhi jyoti party mei nahi aayi. Aaj to uske papa ka krodh
satwe asman per tha. Jab sare mehman chale gaye to karan ke papa room mei aagaye.
Papa- jyoti se kyo re kya samjhati hai apneaap ko aaj teri yeshi dhunayi karunga ki aaj ke baad tu jo mai
kahunga wahi karegi.. karan wahi baithi huya tha itna bolkar uske papa behar nikal gaye karan jyoti ke pass
baith gaya. Jab uske papa dobara ander aaye to unke hantho mei ek landa tha unke saath mei karan ki
sauteli maa bhi thi ander aate hi karan ke papa ne jyoti ke uper wo danda barasan suru kar diye lekin karan ne
jyoti ko apne se bilkul kabhar kar liya isliye jyoti ko to ek bhi danda nahi laga lekin karan ka pura pith ka
chamda ulat gaya lekin karan ne jyoti ko apne niche se nahi nikalane diya kyoki wo apne behan se bahoot
peyar karta tha.. Kisi bhi halat mei wo apne pyari si behan ko pitate nahi dekh sakta tha. ..
karan ke papa karan ko tabtak marte rahe jabtak unka danda tut na gaya..karan to pitate-pitate behos ho gaya
lekin jyoti ko ek bhi danda na padne diya..
Jab danda tut gaya to karan ke papa uske room se behar nikal gaye. Jyoti ke ankho mei ansu ki dhara bahe
jaa rahi thi. Jyoti kisi tarah karan ke niche se bahar nikali apne room ka darwaja band kar di. karan pet ke bal
behos pada huya tha jyoti ki nazar jaise hi karan ke uper padi uska kaleza kaanp gaya aise laga ki kisi ne
uske pet chhura mar diya ho. karan ke pith ki chamdi ulat gayi thi. Jaldi se jyoti ne karan ke short or baniyan jo
ki dande ki pitayi se phat kar khun se ranga huya tha. Kaichi (scissors) se katkar nikal di Unke room mei emergancy
ke liye dawa rakha huya tha. Jyoti ne pure pith ko bahoot hi dhime se saaf ki phir dawa laga di. Ab karan ke
badan per ek pant tha kisi tarah jyoti ne use bhi nikal diya ab kewal karan underwear mei tha. Jyoti bed pe
let gayi or raj ko apne uper kichhkar lita li ab behosi awasta mei karan ka sar jyoti ke chhatiyo pe tha.....
Jyoti apne bhai karan ke sar ke bal sahala rahi thi uske ankho se yamuna-ganga beh rahe thi aaj jo bhi huya
wo sab jyoti ke chalte huya tha aaj jyoti ke chalte uska pran se pyare bhai ka ye hal huya tha...
jyoti ne soch liya ki wo is ghar ko chhodkar dono bhai-behan dusre sahar chale jayenge ab uske papa ke
dil mei thoda sa bhi pyar nahi bacha tha aaj uske papa ekdam nirdayi ban gaye the jab se jyoti or karan ke
nayi maa aayi thi tabse inke papa ka mat kharab ho gaya tha... Tab se thoda bhi pyar nahi karte the lagta
hi nahi tha ki ye dono ranbir ke santan hai..
Jyoti ne karan ke taraf dheyan diya wo kisi masoom bache ki tarah uske naram-naram chhatiyo per sar
rakhkar behosi halat mei so raha raha tha.. Is samay to doctor ko dikhana nammukin tha kyoki to uske
papa aaj bahoot krodhit the gher se behar nahi jane dete.. Aaj jyoti ke ankho se nind koso dur thi anshu
the jo rukne ka nam nahi le rahe the un ansuwo ko pochhane ka koi kosish nahi kar rahi thi. kisi tarah 3
baje jyoti ko thoda sa ankh lag gayi. karan ka koi hosh nahi tha wo to apne behan ko bachane mei behos ho
gaya tha
Thanks for support friends ese hi sath bane rahieyega
Nice update bro
dono bhai behen ka prem pavitre lag raha he 😊😊❤❤
 

Jamesleon

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subah lagbhag 8 baze karan hosh mei aaya or hosh mei aate hi sabase pahle uske muh se sabse pehle ' jyoti
' nikala tabhi karan ki nazar apne niche padi to paya wo apne behan ke uper so raha hai achanak karan ke
dimag mei raat ki saari ghatnaye kisi film ki tarah daud gayi.. karan thoda uper uthna chaha lekin tabhi uske
sare sarir mei dard ki lahar daud gayi.. karan dard ke mare kahrane laga...
karan ko kahrate dekh jyoti ki nind khul gayi
jyoti ekdam paglo ki tarah karan ke pure chehre ko chumne lagi phir se ansu behane lage
karan ki nazar jab jyoti pe padi to jyoti ke ankho se ansu bahe jaa rahe the
jyoti ke ankho mei ansu dekhkar karan apana dard bhul gaya or jyoti ke dono galo pe apne hanth rakhte
huye jyoti jo karan ke chehre ko chume jaa rahi thi thoda alag kiya
karan:- jyoti apna rona bandkar nahi to mai bhi ro dunga tu to janti hai ki mai tere ankho mei ansu nahi
dekh sakata
jyoti meri baat sunkar wor jor jor se rone lagi
karan:- tujhe meri kasam jo tune katra bhi apne ansuwo ko bahaya itna sunte hi jyoti chup ho gayi.
Jyoti :- chup hote huye bhai kyo bar bar kasam de dete ho.. Raat ko mujhe pitane bhi nahi diya ab rone bhi nahi
de rahe ho..
Karan:- aare pagal bhai ka to pharj hi hota hai behan ka raksha karna duniya ki to baat mai nahi kah sakta
lekin mai apni behan ko ek kharoch bhi nahi aane dunga.. Phir tuto meri pran pyari behan hai
jyoti:- itna bhi pyar bhi mat karo ki mai usko chuka na saku..
Karan:- chal pagal mai tujhe koi chiz chukane ki jaroorat nahi hai bas tu apne in naram-Naram hantho se
khana banaker khilati jaa Tabhi jyoti ka hanth mere pith per thoda touch huya to karan ke dard ke mare
chhatpata gaya hai.. Aaaaa ....aaaaa
jyoti bahoot dard ho raha hai
jyoti mere niche se nikali ek dard ka tablet or ek glass pani layi mai jyoti ke sahare baith gaya goli kha liya
jyoti:- bhai chalo aap bhi fresh ho jawo doctor ke pass chalte hai.. karan jyoti ke sahare khada huya or
bhathroom ghus gaya uske sarir pe kapde ke naam per ek underwear tha kyunki jyoti ne raat
ko hi or kapde nikal di thi hato toilet karne ke baad karan ne jyoti ko pukara-jyoti jara idhar awo to karan ka
awaj sunker jyoti ander aagayi karan:- mai nahaunga kaise
jyoti :- aap chinta mat karo bhai uska upay mere pass hai bhai
phir jyoti ne karan ko bhathtub ke kinare per baitha diya ek tauli ko bigokar ushi se apne bhai ke saare sarir ko
pochh-pochh kar saaf kar di. Phir karan ne room mei aakar pant pehan liya ek bahoot hi mulayam or dhila
sa shirt pehan liya..
Tabhi jyoti bhi fresh hoker behar nikal gayi.. Jyoti ne ek salwar kurta pehana apne dupata ko apne
chhatiyo ko dhakte huye kamar mei bandh li. Jyoti:- bhai bike ki chabhi kaha hai
karan- study tabal per hai utha le
jyoti bhi kabhi kabhi bike chala leti thi unke papa ke pass ek se badhkar ek car thi lekin unko chhuna
allowed nahi tha..............................

karan or Jyoti room se behar nikale or jyoti ne room ko lock kar di. karan apni bahan ke kandhe per sar rakhe bahar
nikala jyoti ne bike nikali raj kisi tarah bike pe baith gaya..............................
Jyoti:-bhai achhi tarah pakad kar baith jawo jyoti ne bike start ki or mai jyoti ke pith per sar rakh diya
or apne dono hantho ko aage lejakar jyoti ke ko pakd liya..
jyoti ne bike hospital ki taraf dauda di jyada raftar se bike nahi chala rahi thi karan bilkul jyoti se chipak kar
baitha tha karan k man ish samay koi bhi galat bichar nahi tha..30minutes ke baad hum hospital ke gate
per the...
jyoti ne bike ko side lagaya karan jyoti ke sahare ander chala gaya jyoti ne raj ko ek sofe pe baithayi or jaldi
emergancy ki purji le aayi koi jayada bhid nahi tha ishiliye turant karan ke purji ka line mil gaya karan jyoti ke
ke sahare ander doctor wale room mei dakhil huya
Doctor:- ha to kya problem hai mr. karan
karan abhi kuchh bolta ushe pahle jyoti boli ' bhai ko kal raat papa ne marmar ke inke pith ke chamre ko
udhel diya hai
dr.:- woh my god thik hai aap apna shirt
nikal kar ispe apane pet ke bal let jayiye
karan ne dhire se shirt nikal kar jyoti ko thamaya or jyoti ke sahare bed pe let gaya... Dr. Ne pahle injection
laga diya or ek dawa laga di fir karan jyoti ke sahare uthkar baith gaya..
Jyoti:- doctor sahab kab tak bhai thik ho jayenge
dr.:- ghabarane ki koi baat nahi 2ghante ke baad inko aram milega bas aap ye dawa laga dijiyega ab
aaplog ghar jaa sakte hai. Jyoti ne payments kar diya or hum ghar ki wor nikal gaye idhar se bhi jyoti hi
bike chala rahi thi karan jyoti ke pichhe se chipaka huye tha.
ek dam zakas bro
❤❤❤😊😊
 

Jamesleon

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jyoti ne bike park kar di or dono jaise hi ghar mei dakhil huye to sauteli unki samne
khadi thi karan ko to bahoot hi nind aarahi thi or dard utana nahi tha sayad injection ka kamal tha lekin
Karan adhkhuli ankho se dekh raha tha ki unki sauteli maa bahoot krodhit thi thodi der baad vo jyoti ke kandhe per sar tikaye hi so gaya tha
Sauteli maa- kaha gayi thi maharani ghar mei kam dhanda hai ki nahi apne aap ko kya rajkumari samjhati
ho jaldi se khana bana bahoot jor ki bhuk lag rahi...
Jyoti kuchh nahi boli chupchap apne bhai ko lekar apne room chali gayi
(jo uske kandhe per hi so gaya tha )
jyoti ne karan ke shirt nikali or usko bed pe pet ke bal lita kar fan chala di or kitchen mei khana banane
chali gayi 11:00 baje rahe the khair 12:30 tak khana banker taiyar ho gaya pet chuhe daud rahe the
pasine se pura kapde gile ho gaye the khair jyoti ne apna or raj ke liye khana nikala or apane room ke
ander chali gayi.. Udhar raj bhi gaya tha jyoti khana ke plate ko table pe rakh di raj ab uthkar baitha huya
tha..... jyoti:- bhai dard kaisa hai
Karan:- tere jaisi jiski behan hogi uska derd rah sakta hai kya bhala
jyoti :- thik hai chaliye muh hanth dho lijiye uske baad karan or jyoti dono ek sath bathroom ghuss gaye karan
uper se nanga tha arthat uske jism pe kapde ke naam per ek pant tha fir dono ne ek saath fresh huye ek
saath hi baith kar khana bhi khaye karan or jyoti dono ek hi thali mei bachapan se hi khate the khana khane
ke baad jyoti ne karan ke pithper fir se dawa laga di jyoti:- bhai aap aram karo mai bartan saaf karke aati
hu..
Karan:- nahi jyoti chal mai bhi chalta hu dono room se behar nikal gaye jyoti bartan saaf karne lagi karan baith
kar ushe bartan saaf karta huya dekh raha tha. Lagbhag 10 minutes ke baad pura bartan saaf ho gaya.
dono phir apne room mei aagaye room ghuste hi jyoti ne room ko ander se band kiya or bed per
apne pith ke bal let gayi gayi
jyoti:- bhai aap mere uper let jawo doctor ne aram karne ko kaha hai aap ho ki mere sang mei ghum
rahe ho
Karan:- nahi jyoti mai side mei let jata hu tu bhi aram kar
jyoti:- mai kuchh nahi mere uper sote ho ki nahi
Karan:- thik hai meri dadi itna kahker vo jyoti ke chhatiyo pe sar rakhkar let gaya jyoti mere balo mei apni
ungaliya firate huye boli :- bhai ek baat kahu
karan:- ha kah na
jyoti:- mai to kahti hu hum is ghar ko chhod de waise ye ghar kisi jell se kam nahi hai
Karan:- Nahi jyoti hume abhi ye uchit nahi rahega ishi saal hum Graduation finell hone wala hai gradution
ke finell ho jane de fir hum ye ghar chhod denge
Jyoti:- thik hai bhai aap jaisa kahe jyoti dhire-dhire apne bhai ke sar ke balo mei ungaliya fira rahi thi .. Ungaliya
firaye jaane se karan ko bahoot sakoon mil raha tha or uski ankhe band ho gayi fir karan jyoti ke chhatiyo per
sar rakhe huye hi so gaya jyoti bhi karan ke balo mei ungaliya firate-firate so gayi dono bhai-behan duniya
se bekhabar bina kisi der ke bade hi sokoon se so gaye.
Karan or jyoti dono bhai-behan duniya se bekhabar so rahe the yehi to ek samay tha jab dono ko sakoon
milata tha.
{ note:- Dono hi bhai bahan apne pita dwara kiye jaa rahe rawiye se bahut dukhi h but In masumo ko kya pata ki inke sath jo hua h past m or jo ho raha h vo kisi ka ek bahut bada shadyantra h,or us shadyantra ka kya kaaran (reason) h vo to sirf is shadyantra ko rachne wala hi janta hai. }
Ab dekhte h ki kya ye dono bhai bahan samye rahate is shadyantra se bach payenge kya kabhi in dono ko kabhi apne pita ka prem nasib hoga janne k liye sath bane rahiye

ShadyantrA koi bhi rache
lekin uska kat to akhir
hero ko hi nikal na padta he

nice writing skil
Harry rocks bhai
😊😊❤❤❤
 
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Saam 5:00 baje jyoti ki nind tut gayi abhitak karan uske chhatiyo per sar rakhe so raha tha koi dekhta to
yahi kahta ki indono sex kar rahe hai lekin asali baat indono ko abhi tak aisha bichar man utappan nahi
huya tha ye to puri tarah pak the..
Khair thodi karan ka chehra nihrane ke baad jyoti ne karan ke galo ko sahlate huye uske mathe per kiss kar di
mathe per kiss karte hi karan ki nind khul gayi usne bhi jyoti ke mathe per kiss kiya jyoti dhire-dhire karan ke
balo mei apni ungaliya fira rahi thi achanak karan ke ansu tapak pade jisper jyoti ki najar pad gayi
jyoti:- bhai apki ankho mei ansu kya mujhse koi galti ho gayi
karan:- tumse koi galti nahi huyi hai tera pyar dekh aaj mujhe maa ki koi chinta nahi hai tum bilkul maa ki
tarah mujhe apane sine se lagakar sulati ho.. Tum mere se badi bhi nahi ho hum dono to hai judwa ab to aisha lag raha hai ki tumse ek pal ki bhi judai bradast nahi hogi. Tum mujhe chhodkar kahi mat jana nahi
mai jee nahi pawunga
jyoti:- chal hat pagal mai bhala apne pran priye bhai ko chhodkar kyo jawungi or haa kan kholkar sunlo
aaj ke baad jeene-marne ki baat kiye to bahoot marungi ha dard kaisa hai
Karan:- dard bilkul thik hai
itna kahkar karan or jyoti dono niche utare karan ne ek bahoot hi aramdayak shirt pehan liya dono room se
behar nikal gaye jyoti ne nasta banane lagi raj wahi baitha raha nasta banaker frizde mei rakh di tabtak
raat ho gaya uske papa or sauteli maa ghar mei dakhil huye jo kahi se aarahe the abhi karan ke papa kuchh
bolate usase pahle hi karan bola nasta ban gaya hai frizde mei hai... Itna kahkar dono bhai-behan chhat per
chale gaye raat ho gayi thi chand nikala huya tha jyoti ne is samay ek salwar-kurta pehni huyi thi.. karan ne
jyoti ko pichhe se apane baho mei bhar liya uske kandhe par sar tikakar khada hogaya
Or dono bhai bahan vese ek dusre se pyaar bhari baate kerne lage or apni aage ki life k baare me discuss kerne lage. Vo is tarah ek dusre se chipak ke kadhe the koi dusra anjan unhe ese dekhta to sochta ki ye dono couples h , lekin un dono bhai bahan ka prem ek dam ganga ji jesa pavitra tha jisme koi vasna na thi tha to bas prem.vo dono ese hi aapas m baate ker rahe the ki tabhi koi chhat per aaya or karan or jyoti se jaise hi alag hua to unke samne unki sauteli maa thi
sauteli maa-bada dono bhai-behan mei pyar ho raha hai
jyoti ki wor ungali karte huye ''e karmjali yaha apne bhai se hi nain mataka kar
rahi hai
Karan:- jaban sambhal kar baat karo jo kahna mujhe kaho agar meri behan ko ek sabad boli to bhul jawunga
ki tu humari sauteli maa lagti ho
sauteli maa- achha bada pyar karte ho apni behan se lekin ek baat kan kholker sun lo is ghar mei rahna
hai to mera hukam manana padega nahi to is ghar mei tumhare liye koi jagah nahi hai
(itna bolkar inki dusri maa niche chali gayi)
Karan phir kuchh nahi bola wo janta tha ki agar kuchh or bola to baat bigad sakti thi jyoti jo puri baat
chupchup sun rahi thi wo daudkar apne bhai ke sine chilpak gayi karan thodi der baad jyoti ko apne se alag kiya or
dono chhat se niche utar kar kitchen mei chale gaye jyoti ne khana garam ki or dono apane room mei
aaker nasta finish kiye jyoti jaldi se kitchen mei saare bartano ko rakhkar apne room mei aayi raj bed per
baitha huya kuchh soch raha tha...... Jyoti ne ek nighty uthayi or bathroom mei guss gayi usne apne
saare kapde utadi yaha tak bra-panty bhi or kewal nighty pehankar behar nikali to karan ulta leta huya tha
uske sarir per kapde ke naam per ek underwear tha jyoti ne dawa uthai or mere pith pe lagane lagi dawa
lagane ke baad jyoti ne ek kapda se hanth ko saaf kiya or begal mei aaker pith ke bal let gayi karan ko
bahoot joro ki nind lag rahi to wo jyoti ke uper chadha or uske urojo per sar rakhke so gaya or Thodi hi der
mei nind ke aagos mei chala gaya..

na koi hawas na koi galat vichar
ek dam sahi ja rahe ho bhai
ati uttam update bro
Harry rocks brother
 

Jamesleon

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Jyoti karan ke balo mei hath firate firate bachpan ki yaado mei kho gayi........ Jab humari maa mari thi to
unka lash nahi mila tha papa kah rahe the wo or maa nadi kinare ghum rahe the ki car blance bigad gaya
or unki car nadi mei gir padi papa to kisi tarah bach gaye lekin maa ka koi pata nahi chala us hum dono
bhai-behan chhote the maa ke marne ke kuchh din hi baad papa ne dusri saadi kar li jo humko apna
dusman samjhati thi lekin
Hum dono bhai-behan ek dusre ka khayal rakhne laga bhai mujhse koi baat nahi chhupate the mai
bhi unse koi baat nahi chupati humare papa bhi humse koi matlab nahi rakhte the na jane maa ne kya
sikha-padha diya
khai hum dono dhire dhire bade hone lage mujhe wo din aaj bhi yad hai ek din sunday ke din hum dono
so rahe the ki ekaek mere pet mei derd suru ho gaya mujhe laga ki mere ander se pesav nikalne wala hai
mai toilet mei jaise hi pesaw karne baithi to mere choot se khoon nikal raha tha meri kachhi puri tarah
khun se bhigi huyi thi khoon dekhkar mere muh se ek jordar cheekh nikal gayi mere muh se nikala
bhai
Karan bhai so rahe the ki mere awaj sunte hi wo hadbada kar uthe or bathroom mei mere pass aagaye kya
hua jyoti
jyoti:- dekho na bhai mere choot se khoon nikal raha hai lagta pet bhi bahoot derd kar raha hai
bhai ne jab dekha ki meri kachhi khoon se bhigi huyi hai to wo kuchh sochate huye aare jyoti tujhe
kuchh nahi huya hai tu ab jawan ho rahi hai tujhko period suru huya hai phir bhai ne bedroom se
dusra kachhi utha ker laye ek bahoot hi mulayam kapda bhi laye
phir bhai niche jhuke ' or mere khoon se sani kachhi nikal diye mai choot pe charo khoon laga huya
tha bhai ne khoon se sanni kachhi se mere choot ko achhi tarah saf kar diye dusra kachhi pehankar
mere choot ke charo wor ek bahoot mulayam kapda jo liye the usko pad ki tarah laga diye jisase meri ye
kachhi bhi kharab na ho phir unhone ne hanth saaf kiya mujhe lekar badroom aagaye..
Jyoti:- bhai aap kaise jante hai ki ise period kahte hai
Karan :- aare bhul gayi humlog ab 10 class mei padhte hai ek din sair bata rahe the ki larkiyo ko ise umar
mei unke sarir se blood nikalta jise period kahte hai
jyoti:- habhai aap thik kah rahe ho
Karan:- ha or mai bar-bar nahi karne wala mere bharose nahi rahna jab toilet karna ho to toilet karke usi tarah
kapde ko set karke phir se pehan lena
jyoti:- mai to hurdam apse hi karwaungi ha ..
Is tarah humdono bhai-behan ek dusro ko madad krate huye bade ho gaye or aaj bhi koi aisha baat nahi
hai jo humdono ek dusre se chhupaye....... Jyoti bachap ki yado se wapas aa gayi wo janti thi ki karan ka
pran usme basta hai karan kabka so gaya tha jyoti bhi apne bhai ke balo mei apne ungaliya phirate huye kabka so
gayi......
Dusre din subah 6:00 baze jyoti ki nind khul gayi abhi tak karan uske uper hi so raha
tha.............................jyoti ne use bagal sulaya or bathroom mei fresh hone chali gayi bathroom se fresh
hone ek baad ek bahoot hi sunder salwar-smiz pehni or darpan ke samane khade hoker apni baal
sawrane lagi tabhi karan uth gaya to jyoti uske pass nahi hai to wo hadbada kar uth baitha tabhi karan ki nazar
jyoti pe padi jo darpan ke samne baith kar apane baal sawer rahi thi karan bed se utara or jyoti ke pass
jaker usko pichhe apane baho mei bhar liya or apne gal ko jyoti ke galo mei ragrate huye ''Good morning
jyoti''
jyoti:-good morning bhai
itna bolte hi karan ke galo per dhire se chum liya
Karan ne bhi jyoti ke galo ko dhire se chum liya
jyoti:- bhai chalo jawo jaldi se fresh hoker aawo tabtak mai nasta bana deti hu...........
Karan ne jyoti ke galo ko apne honto mei bhrate huye thoda jor se chush liya jaise aam chus raha ho fir
hasta huya waha se bathroom mei ghuss gaya. Jyoti thoda muskurate huye jaldi se taiyar huyi or kitchen
mei nasta banane chali gayi............
Karan jaldi se fresh huya or underwear or pant pehankar kitchen mei gaya or ek stool khichkar baith gaya
jyoti ne nasta banayi or apna or karan ke liye nasta nikalkar apne room mei chali aayi raj ne fridge se pani
ka bottol nikal liya
apane room ke ander dono ne nasta finish kiya
jyoti:- bhai ab kaisa apka ghaw hai
Karan:- to dekh na mai bhala kaise apne hi pith per dekh sakta hu
jyoti:- mai bhi kitna budhu hu
itana bolte hi jyoti mere pichhe aaker mere pith ke ghawo ko dekhne lagi ' bhai ghaw to lagbhag thik
ho gaya hai lagta hai kal tak thik ho jayega mai phir se dawa laga deti hu vo dono khade the jyoti ne halke hantho se dawa laga di or karan ne bhi ek shirt pehan liya pant to pehle se hi pe pehan liya tha.
Karan:- chalo jyoti aaj hum ghumne chalenge
jyoti:- lekin humari sauteli maa bahoot bolegi or jaane bhi nahi degi
Karan-tu cinta nakar jyoti mai huna mere rahte huye koi kuchh nahi karega
fir jyoti ne bike ki chabhi liya or room ko lock karke nikal gaye jyoti ne bike nikali or karan jyoti ke pichhe
ushse chipak baith gaya
jyoti:- bhai kaha chale
Karan:- kahi bhi lekin is ghar se dur kahi bhi le chalo
jyoti ne bike douda di or karan jyoti se chipak kar baith huya tha.
Karib 2 3 ghante vo pure shahr ghumte rahe . Or jab dono bhai bahan jab ghar lot rahe the to achanak se unhonne ek jagah jo dekha use dekh ker dono bhai bahan ki aakhe guse se lal go gayi.
(Ab karan or jyoti ne esa kya dekh liya ki dono bhai bahan ko itna gusa aagaya janne k liye sath bane rahiye)
Awesome update
Bhai
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Jamesleon

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Dono bhai bahan k gussa hone ka kaaran ye tha ki jab vo ghum fir ker lot rahe the to samne dekhte h ki 4 gunde ek 17 18 sal ki ladki ko ched rahe h or usse jabardasti kerne ki koshis .Jise dekh ker karan ko bahut gusa aajata h . Unme se jese hi ek gunda us ladki k chati ko chune ki koshis kerta h ki usko ek jordar laat padti h piche se or wo kuch dur jaa ke girta h jisse bakiyon ka dhyan bhi ladki se hat ker us taraf jata h to dekhte h ki unke sathi ko marne wala koi or ni ek 20 21 sal ka ladka jisse unhe bahut gussa aajata h.
( In gundo ka aage koi or roll ni h isliye inko g1 g2 g3 g4 likhunga) .

G1 ( gusse me):- kon h be sale tu jisne hamare dost ko marne ki himmat ki jaan pyari h to chup chap yaha se nikal le.bacha samjh k ek moka de raha hu.
Karan:- aakhiri moka to m tumko deta hu ladki ko chod k yaha se nikal jao mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
G2:- bhai logo ye kuch jyada hi uchal raha h sala lagta h isko dikhana hi padega ki humse bhidne ka anzaam kya hota h
G3:- ha bhai or jyoti ki or dekhte hue sale k sath kya mast maal h pahale is sale ki jamkar dhunayi kerte h or fir dono londiyo ko ek saaath......
G3 k apni baat puri kerne se pahale hi vatavaran me ek bhayanak chik gunj uthi jo usiki thi .
Hua yu ki jese hi g3 ne jyoti k baare m ulta sidha bola karan ne apna control kho diya or uki jibh kich ker muh se alag ker di or ek jordar laat uske sine pe de mari jis karan wo kuch dur gir ker dard k maare behosh ho gaya.
Karan:- (gusse k maare uski aankhe ek dam lal ho gayi thi jese sare sharir ka khun vahi aagaya ho or fir vo dahadta hua bol) bahut badi galti ker di tumne meri jaan meri jyoti k baare m bol ker haramzado mane bola tha n ki mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
Uski ye dahad sun ker ek baar baki bache gundo ki bhi ek baar fat gayi lekin fir g1 or g2 ne himmat ker ke apni jeb se chaku nikal kee karan ki taraf dode lekin isse pahale karan ko vo dono chu bhi paate karan ne hava m uchal k ek jordar flying kick dono k jabdo p maari jise vo dono agle hi second jamin pe dhul chate lage ,flying kick itni jordar thi ki dono k aage ke 4 dant shahid ho gaye . Karan itne me hi ni ruka wo dono ko baari bari se utha utha k dhone laga . Or dono k hath tod diye or jab karan undono ki hadiya todne m laga hua tha to usi time g4 (jise karan ne aate uske pichwade p laat mari thi ) ne moke ka fayda utha ker piche se jaa ker jyoti k sir p gun rakh di.lekin wo bhi bevkoof kaha janta tha ki apne hero ki bahan bhi kisi se kam kaha h. jese hi usne hi jyoti k sir p gun rakh k karan ko dhamkana chaha jyoti ne ek jordar kohni uske pet m maar di jiske kaaran wo dard k maare apne pet p apne dono hath rakh diye bas itna hi moka jyoti k liye kafi tha usne furti se piche ho ek jordar flying kick uske muh p bhi jad di jisse wo bhi dul chatne laga or jyoti ne uski dhunayi bhi shuru ker di .

( Jab tak ye dono bhai bahan gundo ki dhunayi ker rahe hai aayiye in dono k baare thoda or jan lete h ki inhone itni achi fight kerna kese sikhi. Actually baat ye h ki karan or jyoti ne apni pocket money se kuch pese bacha ker judo or karate or martial arts classes join ki thi, jiske baare m undono k alawa kisi ko malum ni tha . Pahale to jyoti ne iske liye mana ker diya or boli bhai m sikh ker kya karungi aap hi bas join ker lo lekin karan ne jor dete hue kaha aajkal self defense ki training har kisi k liye bahut jaruri h chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki. To vo bhi apne bhai ki baat man join ker li. Is tarah dono bhai bahan college k baad training m jaate or sham ko park m jaker practice kerte)
Un gundo ki ache se dhunayi kerne k baad karan or jyoti us ladki k pass pahunche jise vo gunde ched rahe the . Wo ladki bhi kafi himmat wali thi jo itna sab kuch hone k baad jyada dari ni
Karan(uske pass pahunch k ) tum thik to ho na kahi chot to ni lagi .
Ladki :- ji m bilkul thik hu aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne mujhe bachaya verna m kahi ki ni rahati bol bhaiya bol k rone lagi .
Jyoti ne use apne gale laga je sambhala .
Karan:- pagli bhaiya bhi bolti h or shukriya bhi bolti h bhala koi bhai apni bahan ki madad ker ke ahasan kerta h kya.
Ye sun ke vo ladki chup ho gayi
Fir jyoti boli
Jyoti :- are tumne apna naam to bataya hi ni kya naam h tumhara.
Vo ladki boli
Ladki :- mera nam radha h didi
Karan :- bahut hi pyara naam h, acha tumhara ghar kaha pe h aao hum tumhe chod denge
Radha:- are ni ni bhaiya iski jarurat ni h m khud chali jaungi .
Jyoti :- (thode se banawati guse me)are ese kese dil se ager hame apne bhai bahan manti ho to chupchap apni di ki baat mano or apna address batao
Thodi naa nukur k baad radha man jati h or 3no kisi tarah bike p adjust ho k radha k ghar ki taraf nikal jate h thodi dur jaaker radha ek bade se ghar , ni sorry use ghar kahana galat hoga ek bungalow k aage gadi rokne ko kahati h .
Bike se uter k radha bolti h
Radha :- aayiye na bhaiya ander chaliye maa bhi aap dono se mil ke bahut khush hogi.
Per wo dono kese n kese agli baar aane ka wada ker k apne no exchange kerte h or karan or jyoti apne ghar ki or nikal jate h . Unko ghar pahuchne m late ho jata h jis kaaran unki soteli ma unko khub khari khoti sunati h but vo chupchap apne kamre m ja ker apne kapde badal k so jaate h . Or dusri tarf radha bhi aaj jo kuch hua jaker apni maa ko bata deti h jisse sun pahale to uski maa kafi dar jati h but aage ki baat sun relax ho jati h or bolti h ki
Radha ki maa ka naam garima hai
Garima:- tujhe bola tha n ki teri activa kharab h to ek din ruk ja but tu ni mani or bus se hi chali gayi , tujhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota ye baat usne radha ko gale lagate hue boli tu to sab kuch janti h fir bhi esa kerti h.
Radha :- are mummy aap to ese hi pareshan ho rahi ho m bilkul thik hu na or vese bhi aaj college m admission ki last date thi ager aaj na jati to fir mushkil ho jati isi tarah maa beti m baate hoti rahi or vo dono bhi khana khake aram kerne apne apne kamre m chali gayi


Note:- Dosto bhale hi ye is story ka 7 update h but mera likha hua to first update hi h bhai kyunki abhi tak mane pahale likhe hue update m thode bahut changes kiye the . Lekin ye first update h jo pura mane likha h to please batana aap sab ko kesa laga or koi ager galti hui to bhi jarur batana .
Nice Update bro
dekh te he
radha or gareema ka kya
role he is story me
or apka likha huwa pehla update mast he Harry rocks Bhai
 

Jamesleon

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Update no:- 8
Sham ko karan ki ankh jaldi khul jati h to wo dekhta h ki uski jaan uski pyari bahan sote hue bilkul ek choti si bachi lag rahi h .Tabhi karan ko ek shararat sujhti h or wo kuch dhundne lagta h or jab vo chij mil jati h to apna kaam kerke wapas bed p let jata h or sone ki acting kerta h . karib 10 min baad jyoti ki bhi nind tutti h or woh adhkhuli ankho k sath washroom m jaati h apna mooh (face) dhone.or jese hi apne aapko mirror m dekhti h uski halki si chikh nikal jati h shock k kaaran . Or sath me dekhti h ki karan bathroom k darwaje pe kadha pet pakad ker jor jor se has raha h, to jyoti samjh jati h ki ye uske bhai ki hi karamat h, (darasal hua yu tha ki jab jyoti so rahi thi to karan ko ek sharat sujhi or usne soti hui jyoti k chahre p munche or funny design bana diye).
Jyoti :- bhai aaj to aap gaye , bolker karan ki or jhapti, karan bhi pahale se hi teyar tha or vo bhi bhagne laga fir shuru ho gayi dono bhai bhahn ki pyaar bhari nok jhok, karan ne pahale to jyoti ko khub dodaya fir khud janbhujh ker apni speed slow ker di jiski vajah se vo pakda gaya . Fir kya tha jyoti ne usko bed p dhakela or us k uper chad ker use jor jor se gudgudi kerne lagi
Karan:- haste hue , are bas ker gudiya sorry sorry
Jyoti:- aaj m aapko ni chodungi bhai bahut masti sujh rahi h na aapko , or fir se gudgudi kerne lagi
Or apne hero ka jab has has k bura hal ho gaya tab jaker jyoti ne karan ko choda or uske uper hi let gayi.
Jyoti:- kya bhai aap kabhi ni sudhroge .
Karan:- are pagli ab bhagwan ne itni pyari or itni achi bahan di h to uske sath masti ni karunga to or kiske sath karunga.
Or fir thoda emotional hote hue
Karan:- or vese bhi yahi to time h ye sab masti majak kerne ka fir tu jab shadi kerke apne sasural chali jayegi m to bilkul akela hi ho jaunga na .
Karan ki ye baat sun ker jyoti kuch jyada hi emotional hogayi or sisak sisak ke rone lagi or boli
Jyoti:- mujhe ni kerni koi shadi vadi m bhale hi jindagi bhar kuwari rah lungi but m aapke bina ni rah sakti or ager esa hua to apki bahan ji ni payegi bhaiya apke bina ji ni payegi.or karan ko kas k pakad liya
jese ki ager usne apne bhai ko choda to wo sach me usse dur h bhej dega.
Jyoti ki ankho m aasu dekhkar karan ka bhi dil dahal gaya ,vo chahe kitne bhi dukh or taklif bardasht ker sakta h but apni bahan apni gudiya ki ankho m aansu ki ek bund bardasht ni ker sakta , or sachai to ye thi ki bhale hi karn ne jyoti ki shadi ki baat ker di holekin vo bhi bina jyoti k rahane ki kalpana (imagination) tak ni ker sakta . Jyoti bhale hi uski judwa ho but hamesha usne usko judwa bahan k sath ek maa or ek badi bahan ki tarah pyaar diya or uska khayal rakha .
Karan ko aaj bhi vo din yaad h jab uske usdin subah se halka sa sir dird or bhukhar tha but usko is baat ka jyoti ko pata ni chalne diya , itni si baat k liye vo apni bahan ko pareshan ni kerna chahata tha but sham hote hote uski halat kharab ho gayi sham ko jese hi jyoti ne usko uthana chaha to dekha ki uska shari bhati k jesa garam ho gaya h, pahale to usne ye baat na batane k kaaran khub data lekin fir use medicine di or uski pani ki pati se sek kerne lagi, unke maa bap ko to koi parwah ni thi , unke pita or soteli maa to party m chali gaye enjoy kerne ye bolke ki wo raat ko late aayenge , yaha bechari jyoti akele hi apne bhai k ilaaj m lagi hui thi.jyoti karan ko sone k liye bolti h , lekin karan ni sota .
Jyoti:- bhai aapko aaram ki jarurat aap so jao .
Karan:- kya karu jyoti is bhukar k karan mujhe nind ni Aarahi tum esa kero mujhe sleeping pills de do
Jyoti ko tension hone lagi wo apne bhai ko sleeping pills ni dena chahati thi kyunki uske side effects bhi ho sakte h , wo soch hi rahi thi ki uske chahare pe ek muskan aajati h or wo karan k sir ko apni god m rakh k wo lori gane lagi h karan k baalo m ungaliyan ferte hue jo kabhi unki maa bachpan m gati thi thi undono ko sulane k liye.

Lori:-

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तुझमे ही में हु
मुझमे ही तू है
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Or lori sunte hue karan kab so jata h use pata hi ni chalta or jyoti puri raat apne bhai ki patiya badalti rahati h or uska dhyan rakhti h or jab karan subah utthta h to wo bilkul sahi ho chuka hota h . Or dekhta h ki uska sir abhi bhi jyoti ki god m hi h ,or jyoti bethe bethe hi so rahi h.wo samjh jata h ki uski bahan ne puri raat jaag ke uska khayal rakha h jabse , jo karan k dil m jyoti k liye pyaar or ijjat thi vo dugni(2×), ni choguni (4×) ,ni kayi hajar guna or bad jati h .
Present :-
Karan:- apni purani yado se bahar aaker jyoti ko chup karata h or bolta h are pagli tu to rone lagi m to majak ker raha tha m to apni jaan se bhi pyari bahan ko apne se dur kerne ki kabhi ni soch sakta or haa age se ye marne ki baat ki to m tujhse kabhi baat ni karunga
Jyoti:- jo ab thoda normal ho gayi thi to esi baat kerte hi kyu ho jisse mujhe rona aaye bhai.
Jyoti ne ye baat itni masumiyat se boli thi ki karan ko uspe bahut pyaar aata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga leta h .
Or fir mahol ko halka kerne k liye majak me
Karan:- wese tere pe ye muche bahut suit ker rahi h kahe to inhe permanent banadu or bol k fir se hasne lagta h.
Or jyoti fir se "bhai aap" bol fir se usper tut padti h or pillows se uski pitayi shuru ker deti h ,dono bhai bahan isi tarah hasi majak kerte hue fresh ho ker khane ki teyari m lag jaate h. Or fir khana khaker or baki sab freze m rakh k chat(terrace) aaj pure din m jo jo hua wo discuss kerne lagte h.
Jyoti kuch soch rahi thi jise dekh ker karan puchta h
Karan:- kya hua gudiya kya soch rahi ho
Jyoti (apne khayalo se bahar aate hue) :- kuch khas ni bhai bas radha k bare me soch rahi thi kitni pyari bachi thi vo h na , na jane usko dekh ke esa kyu laga ki vo koi apni hi h koi anjaan ni .
Karan:- sahi kaha jyoti tune mujhe bhi esa hi mahasus hua jabki hum dono hi usse pahali baar mile.
Is tarah hi dono bhai bahan baate kerne lage or fir wapas sone chale gaye apne room m.
Thanks for support friends and please comments kerke jarur jarur bataiyega ki update kesi lagi aap sab ko taki mujhe bhi aage likhne m maza aaye
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