Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Update no :- 13
Karan ghar se college ki taraf nikal jata h . Uska man to ni tha jyoti ko yu is halat me chod k jane ko but wo project jama karana bhi jaruri tha. Or jese hi wo college pahunchta h to parking m use radha mil jati h.
Radha gale milker karan se miler bolti .
Radha :- good morning bhaiya
Karan :- good morning sweety how are you
Radha :- I'm good as usual, wese kya baat h aaj di ni aayi apke sath.
Karan :- ha wo kal fight m use bhi kayi chote aayi isliye mane use aaj aaram kerne ko bola h.pagal ladki kya jarurat thi use akele bhidne ki.
Radha :- ye to unka aapke liye pyaar h bhaiya jo aapke khilaf ek shabd ni sun sakti wo, fir thoda udaas swar me ye sab meri vajah se hua na di ko meri vajah se chote aayi .
Esa bolte hue uske ankho m ansu aagaye jise dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha . Or use radha ko apne sine se laga liya or use chup karate hue bola.
Karan :- are pagli tu ro kyu rahi h, tu to meri or teri di ki jaan h hamari pyari si doll h, tujhe koi kuch bole ye ham kese sah sakte h,
Fir karan usko sine se laga ke uske sir ko sahalate hue use chup karane laga . Fir thoda majak kerte hue bola
Karan :- or please choti tu roya mat ker kyunki tu rote hue ek dam bandariya lagti h. Or ye bolke wo bhagne lagta h
Radha (jhut mut k guse me) :- kya bole aap bandariya , ruko abhi batati hu aapko m
Esa bol ke wo bhi karan k piche dodti h or use pakad bhi leti h or uspe mukko ki barsat ker deti h par pyar se
Karan :- are bas ker chutki sorry, wese manna padega sweety kya speed h teri itni jaldi pakad liya.
Radha (blush kerte hue) :- hogi kyu ni shayad pata ni h m state level racing champion rah chuki hu
Karan:- are baap re fir to aage se tere se panga lene se pahale 1000 sochna padega.
Radha:- ha bilkul sahi samjhe mister.
Or fir dono hasne lage . Or lunch time m canteen m milne ka bol apni apni class ki or nikal gaye .
Class m jaker karan ne apna or jyoti ka project submit kiya or apni seat pe jaker beth gaya . Lekin aaj uska man ni lag raha tha class m kyunki usko jyoti ki chinta thi ki vo kesi hogi , kyunki ye aaj pahali baar tha ki karan bina jyoti k college aaya tha, college ho ya school esa ek din ni aaya tha unki jindagi m ki wo dono bhai bahan kabhi ek dusre k bina class attend ki ho ya kahi bhi gaye ho. Fir bhi kisi tarah usne do lecture attend kiye or fir lunch time m canteen pahunch gaya vaha pe use radha bhi mil gayi or dono baate kerne lage fir radha ko kuch yaad aaya or boli.
Radha:- wese bhaiya aapne khana khaya aaj
Karan:- ni gudiya vo jyoti ko to aaram kerne ki jarurat h isliye uske liye to order ker diya tha lekin college k liye late ho raha tha to time ni mila tum chinta mat kero ghar jaa ker m kuch bana k kha lunga. Tum chinta mat kero
Radha :- ni bhaiya uski jarurat ni h m apne sath lunch layi hu aap bhi mere sath kha rahe ho or m kuch ni sunne wali , aap meri mummy k hath ka khana khaoge to khane k sath apni ungliyan bhi chat loge ,itna swad khana banati h meri mummy
Or radha use apne hatho se khilne lagti h or jese hi karan khana khata h to uski aankho m ansu aajate h , kyunki us khane ka taste bilkul uski maa k hatho se bane khane jesa tha. Jise kha ker usko apni maa ki yaad aajati h, but wo radha ki najro se bach k apne aansu jaldi se puch leta h. Or karan bhi radha ko apne hantho se khilata h .Fir wo hi khana kha hi rahe hote h ki unke kano m ek awaj padti h jo ki ek ladke ki thi
Ladka:- excuse me kya m yaha beth sakta hu vo actually canteen m baki sabhi table full h.
Karan :- ya sure.
Ladka :- hi I m rohan. From bcom 2nd year.
Fir karan bhi rohan ko khud ka or radha ka intro deta h .
Karan :- vese rohan aaj se pahale to mane tumhe yaha kabhi ni dekha .
Rohan :- ha wo actually mere papa ki govt job h jiske chalte unka transfer hota rahata h , isliye m yaha new hu or aaj hi college join kiya
Karan:- ok
Fir isi tarah in tino me baate hoti rahati or fir tino apni apni classes m chale jate h
College off k tino apne ghar k liye nikal jata h . Karan jese hi ghar pahuch ke dekhta h dekhta h to apna sir pit leta
kyunki wo dekhta h ki jyoti aram kerne k bajaye ek fitting ka suit pahan k khana banane k teyari ker rahi h .
Karan (thoda datte hue) . Are ye kya ker rahi ho jyoti mane tujhe aaram kerne ko bola tha na.
Jyoti :- bhai m ab thik hu vese bhi ab lunch ka time ho gaya tha or aap subah bhi bhuke nikal gaye the , to mane socha ghar bethe yu bore hone se acha h aapke liye khana hi bana lo .
Karan :- wo sub m kuch ni janta chalo mere sath or ye itne tight kapde kyu pahane h mane mana kiya tha na or dikhao ab kesi h tumhari chot kuch farak pada ya ni.
Itna bol ker karan jyoti ko room m

leker jata h or uske kapde utaar k dekhta h to uski chot pahale se kuch thik thi. Fir wapas se kal ki tarah karan jyoti ko apni god me bitha ker dawa lagata h.or fir jyoti bolti h
Jyoti :- bhai raat ki baat kuch or thi per m sare din to ese bina kapdo k ni rah sakti na .

Fir karan kuch soch k cupboard m se ek patla sa frock nikal k jyoti ko deta h or bolta h jao ye pahan lo.or apne undergarments khol dena .
Jyoti bilkul vesa hi kerti h .

Or jab wo frock pahan ker aati h to wo us frock m bahut cute lag rahi thi jese ki koi barbie doll ho . Bilkul esi

Fir karan jyoti k galo p kiss kerke bed p let jata h or apne uper jyoti ko leta ker aaj college m kya kya hua is bare m bate kerne lagta h ki tabhi ghar ki dor bell bajti h or karan jyoti ko vahi leta ker jese hi dorr kholta h khush or thoda heran dono ho jata h
Kyunki samne radha khadi thi.
Karan :- are choti what a pleasant surprise tu yaha .(karan ne radha ko apna address bata diya tha aaj canteen m)
Radha :- ha bhaiya di ko rest ki jarurat h na isliye m special mummy k hatho ka khana aapke liye leke aayi. Ab ander bhi aane doge ya yuhi bahar khada rakhoge .
Karan:- oh ha aana jyoti bhi tumko dekh ke bahut khush hogi.
Karan :- (room me enter kerte hue) dekh to gudiya tujhse milne kon aaya h.
Jyoti bhi radha ko dekh ker bahut khush hoti h. Or fir tino mil ker khana khate h .khana khate hue jyoti ko bhi same wahi feeling aayi jo college m karan ko aayi thi . Khana khane k baad . 3no masti kerne lagte h .
Radha :- wese di aap is frock me bahut hi cute lag rahi ho . Nice dress.
Karan:- akhir laya kon h .
Radha kuch puchti usse pahale hi jyoti boli.
Jyoti :- ha radha ye sach h bhai hi mere liye hamesha kapde choose kerte h or m bhai k liye.
Radha :- wow di kitna pyaar h aap dono m mujhe to aap dono se jealous feel hone lagi h ki kash mere bhi aap jese bhai bahan hote .
Itna bolna hi tha kya karan or jyoti ek sath bol pade .
Dono :- kya kaha hum tere bhai bahan ni h ruk tujhe tu aaj gayi bachi.
Or dono radha pe tut pade or usko gudgudi kerne lage .
Jyoti :- (gudgudi kerte hue) ab bol radha ki bachi aage se esa bolegi .
Radha (jiski halat haste haste kharab ho gayi thi ) :- sorry sorry bhaiya sorry di aage se esa ni bolungi.
Fir karan or jyoti use chod dete h.or ese hi din nikal jata h. Or fir tino bhai bahan mil ker rat ko dinner banate h or ek sath khana kha ker sone ki teyari kerne lagte h radha apne ghar phone kerke aaj yahi rukne ki baat apni maa ko bol deti h.
Or fir sone k time karan bolta h ki
Karan :- tum dono yaha bed p so jao m sofe per so jata hu
per radha or jyoti ni manti or karan ko khich ker dono apne bich m sula leti h or dono radha or jyoti karan ki dono side se chipak ker so jaati h or karan bhi muskurata hua so jata h.
Note :- sorry for late update friends aaj pure din busy tha fir bhi time nikal k ye update likh hi kiya to please comments m jarur bataiyega aapko ye update kesa laga. Or aage karan or jyoti ki zindagi m kya hota h janne k liye sath bane rahiye
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nice update ..karan aur jyoti ko radha ke ghar ka khana khakar apne maa ki yaad aati hai ,,aur waha rohan bhi mil gaya ek dost ki tarah ..

 

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Update no 14
Location: hospital (flashback).
Jyoti ki dhulayi k baad kunal ki halat bahut kharab ho gayi thi, jab commissioner hospital leker use pahuncha to uska operation hua or doctor jab ot se bagar aaya to vo bola .
Doctor :- sorry sir humne aapke bete ko bacha to liya but wo coma m jaa chuka h
Commissioner :- doctor mere bete ko kab tak hosh aajayega (ye baat usne khud p bahut control rakhte hue boli thi)
Doctor:- kuch kaha ni jaa sakta sir coma patient ko kayi baar hosh ek din m bhi aajata h ya kayi baar bahut lamba time bhi nikal jata h hosh ane m.
Itna bol ker doctor waha se chala jata h or commissioner wahi ek chair p beth jata h. Wo apne bete ki halat k liye dukhi bhi tha or gusse m bhi tha karan or jyoti per , lekin kuch ker ni sakta tha kyunki unke pass home minister ka support tha.

Wo abhi vahi betha kuch soch hi raha tha ki waha shahar ka mla aajata h, jo ki commissioner ka bahut acha dost bhi tha .

Commisioner apne dost ko dekh k uske gale lag k rone lagta h .

Mla :- dost m janta hu ki tere bete k sath kya hua tu chinta mat ker tera beta mera bhi beta h. Jinhone uski halat ki h m use chodunga ni. Vese kunal ki halat kesi h ab

Commissioner usko sab kuch bata deta h jo bhi use doctor ne bataya tha.
Mla :- tu esa ker bhai tu kunal ko yaha se discharge kerwa le m kisi ko janta hu jo kunal ko sahi ker sakta h . Or wo hamari aage bhi madad ker sakta h .

Commissioner bilkul wesa hi kerta h or kunal ko discharge kerwa ke wo apne ghar le jata h .

Agle din dono kunal ko leker sahar k bahar bane ek khandar me leker jate h.
Jaha p ek aghori jesa dikhne wala tantrik havan k aage apni sadhna ker raha hota h .

Mla or commissioner dono jaker use pranaam kerte h .(is tantrik ko mla apna guru manta tha , or isi ki kali shaktiyo or sidhiyon k kaaran hi ek pocket maar aaj shahar ka mla bana betha tha or uske kayi ger kanuni kaam bhi the).

Mla:- baba ye mera dost h or ise ..
Abhi kuch aage mla bol pata tantrik uski baat ko kaat k bolta

Tantrik :- kuch batane ki jarurat ni h dushyant(mla ka nam ) tere or tere is dost k khandar m pravesh kerte hi mujhe sab gyaat ho chuka h ki tumhare yaha aane ka maksad kya h.
Or fir commissioner ko bolta h

Tantrik:- tu chinta mat ker tu meri sharan m aaya h isliye tera beta thik bhi hoga or ............................
Kuch or baate bolta h jise sunker commissioner khush ho jata h.
Fir tantrik bolta h.
Tantrik :- mane jo bola h vo sab kuch ho jayega lekin tujhe ek 5 saal ka bacha jo apne maa baap ka ek lota ho uski bali deni hogi shetano k raja.......... Ko.
Mla :- ho jayega baba aap bolo to aaj hi ek bache ko uthva k aaj hi bali dede .
Tantrik :- ni murkh esi galti bhul k bhi mat kerna verna shetaan ki daya ni milegi balki uske gusse ka shikar ho jayega .Bali sirf aane wale chandra grahan ki raat ko deni hogi. Jo agle mahine h.
Or ek pudiya m bavoot dal ke commissioner ko dete hue bolta h ise bali ki raat se pahale roj apne bete k mathe or sine p lagana jisse uska swasth thik rahega.
Fir mla or commissioner vaha se nikal jate h or aage ki planning banate h.

Location :- hero's house

Subah sabse pahale aankh karan ki khulti h fir wo fresh ho ker apni dono gudiya ko uthata h, Unke galo pe kiss kerke .
Karan:- (galo p kiss kerte hue=) good morning sweety (jyoti) , good morning gudiya( radha ) .
Dono (karan k galo pe kiss kerte hue) :- good morning golu bhaiya
Karan chidte hue samjh jata h ki is radha ko jarur jyoti ne hi ye pati padhayi h . Or vo muh fula k beth jata h . Jisko dekh k jyoti bolti h
Jyoti :- ale ale mela babu mujhse nalaj ho gaya.
Jyoti ne ye baat itni funny way m boli thi ki , jise sun ek vaar karan ki bhi hasi nikalne wali thi per usne control ker liya .
Radha :- are di ab kya kare bhaiya to maan hi ni rahe .
Jyoti :- ab to ek hi rasta bacha h radha.
Or wo use kuch ishara kerti h. Ye sun karan ko bhi kuch yaad aajata h per isse pahale vo kuch kerta uski dono bahano ne ek sath uspe dhava bol diya. Or uske pure chahare ko kisses ker ker ke pura gila ker diya . Akhir kar karan ko bhi un dono k aage hatiyaar gerne pade . Or fir apni dono bahano ko apne gale se laga leta h.

( Darasal jab bhi karan bachpan m kisi baat per jyoti se naraj ho jata ya gussa hota to jyoti ese hi usko kisses kerke ya gudgudi kerke manati) .
Ese hi masti kerte hue karan or radha nahaker teyar hote h or fir jyoti bhi nahaker bahar aati h bas bra or panty m fir karan usko dawai lagata h . Ye sab dekh k radha ko bahut herani hoti h or wo bolti h
Radha :- di aap bhai k samne is halat me kese aajati ho .
Jyoti bhi uske kahane ka matlab samjh jati h or bolti h.

Jyoti :- choti hamari maa ki death k baad bhai ne hi hamesha khayal rakha h meri har ek mushkil m mere sath rahe h .Hamare papa ko to dusri shadi k baad hamse koi matlab raha ni hum chahe jiye ya mare unhe koi fark ni padta.per inhone mere judwa bhai hote hue bhi inhone hamesha mera khayal ek bade bhai or ek pita ki tarah rakha h , isliye m inse kuch ni chipati na hi hum dono k bich m kisi bhi prakar ka koi parda h , mujhe bhai k samne ese to kya bina kapdo k aane m bhi koi sharm ni aayegi kyunki m janti hu ki bhai k dil m kabhi bhi mere liye koi galat feeling ni aasakti or unke dil m mere liye sirf nishchal prem . Or mere dil m bhai k liye. to jisse hum pyaar kerte h to unse kisi bhi prakar ka parda rakhna ya koi bhi baat chupana mujhe to sahi ni lagta.

Or esa kahate kahate jyoti thoda emotional ho jati h or karan bhi or karan use sine se laga leta h or dekhta h ki jyoti k baat sun radha bhi emotional ho gayi h to jyoti ko sine lagaye hue apni ek baah fela leta h jise dekh radha bhi dodker karan k gale lag jati h.

thodi der 3no ese hi ek dusre k gale lage rahate h fir karan dono ko samjha kee unhe normal kerta h or radha jyoti ki hi ek dress pahan leti h or 3no bhai bahan nashta kerke college ko nikal jate h karan or jyoti bike pe or radha apni activa pe .

College pahunch k vo dekhte h ki notice board k pass thodi bhid hoti h. 3no vaha pahunch k dekhte ki board p announcement likhi hui hoti h. Jisme likha hua tha ki.......


Dekhte h commissioner or mla ka aage kya plan hota h or kunal sahi hua to apna badla leni ki koshis kis tarah karega janne k liye sath bane rahiye or comments kerte rahiye
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nice update ..ab kahani kuch track par aa rahi hai ..comissioner ka beta comma me chala gaya aur uska dost mla ab usko tantrik ke paas le gaya jo kunal ko theek kar sakta hai .par uske liye ek bachche ki bali deni hogi ..
ab tantrik ke support se dono kaise dushmani nikalte hai karan aur jyoti se dekhte hai ..

 

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Update no :- 15
Ye announcement college k student leader ki taraf se thi jisme likha tha ki valentines day pe college m couples ka dance compitition hoga. jo bhi couple interested ho vo apna name submit kera sakte h.
Jise padh k radha bolti h
Radha:- bhaiya aap bhi participate kero na
Karan (chonkte hue) :- are ni ni choti mujhse na hoga choti na to mere pass koi partner h na hi mujhe dance aata h.

Radha:- usme tension kesi bhai dance m sikha dungi or rahi partner ki baat to di h na.

Jyoti or karan dono is baat se jhep se jaate h.
Jyoti:- gudiya tu kya bol rahi h m bhai k sath kese , ( jyoti bhi radha ki baat sun k ander hi ander na jane kyu khush thi ye baat uske bhi samjh k pare thi),

Radha:- oh come on na di mane jitna aap dono ki bonding dekhi h , use dekh ke m dave se bol sakti hu ki ye compitition aap dono hi jitoge.
Or aap kabse bhai k sath kisi chij m jhijhak ne lagi , wese bhi ek dance hi to h di, itna to aajkal chalta h.or vese bhi college m bahut kam hi log honge jo aapke rishte ko jante ho.(kyunki ye dono bhai bahan hi hamesha sirf apne m mast rahate the to inko kabhi dost banane ki jarurat hi ni padi na hi jyada kisi se baat hoti).

Karan or jyoti baar bar mana ker rahe the but radha ni man rahi thi ki itne m vaha rohan bhi aajata h

Rohan :- hi friends kis baat pe bahas ho rahi h

Radha :- dekho na rohan bhai m kab se inko mana rahi hu but ye man hi ni rahe.
Rohan :- are baAt kya h ye to bata choti.
Radha use puri baat bata deti jise sun ker rohan bhi radha ka support kerne lagta h jis kaaran aakir m karan or jyoti ko unki baat manni padti h.
Radha ek vijayi muskan k sath
Radha :- hooreee yahu

Jise dekh sabhi k chahare p muskan aajati h.

Chaliye ab thodi najar story k main villain p bhi dal li jaye . M abhi yaha kisi ka naam abhi k liye reveal ni karunga, isliye main villain ko mv or uske pita ko . Vp likhunga.

Location :- patal lok.
Patal lok yani vo jagah jaha sirf asur baste h or unka raja h mv . Jo ki ek bahut hi dusht or nirdayi raja h jiska ek hi maksad h vo h devtao ka ant . Or usko k liye usne mahadev ko khush kerke ek ni balki 3 vardaan hasil kiye h , (or vo vardaan kya h vo to aage hi pata chalega). Or usike ant k liye rakshak (karan) ka janm hua h . Lekin usme abhi samay h . Mv apne irado m. shayad safal bhi ho jata ager vo na hote .(unko m abhi kfd likhunga) ke ka samna na to mv na uske pita ker sakte h. vardan pane k bavjood bhi ni k . tridevo k baad kfd hi sabse shaktishali h is samay vo chahe to mv ka ant bhi ker sakte h parantu vo mahadev k vardaan ka apmaan ni kerna chahate . Isi baat se mv bahut gussa rahata h

Abhi mv apni sabha m betha is baare m hi soch tha ki vp pragat hota h vaha jise dekh mv k sath sabhi sabhasad asur khade ho ker uska swagat kerte h.

Mv :- aaiye pitaji aasan grahan kijiye.
Vp:- kya soch rahe ho mere bache .
Mv:- pitaji m us ...... K baare m soch raha hu kitna tej or bal h usme ki mahadev k vardaan k bavjood bhi hum uska kuch ni bigad sakte.
Vp:- sahi kaha tumne mere bache ek vo hi to h jo mere har ek uddeshy k bich yugo se badha raha h . Or jiski vajah se meri ye halat h .

Mv :- or pitaji us rakshak ka kya .

Vp:- uska intezaam bhi shigra ho jayega mere bache . Bas vo dhurt devta koi chal na chale to .

Mv :- haste hue wo kya kuch karenge pitaji wo to khud mere dar se kahi chipe hue h .

Vp : - putra tum in devtao ko abhi ache se ni samjhte, ye bahut hi dhurt h, ye koi na koi chal avashy karenge khas ker ki vo chaliya vishnu or vo kfd .

Mv :- aap nishchit rahiye pitaji . Vijay is baar hamari hi hogi .

Back to the hero.

College m kuch khas ni hota or fir karan or jyoti ghar aajate h or fir bari bari se fresh hote h or karan aaj bhi jyoti k dawa laga deta h or fir dono bhai bahan khana khate h jo ki karan ne pahale hi order ker diya tha kyunki aaj wo bahut thake hue the. Kyunki radha ne college k off hone k baad pure 1.30 ghanta unhe dance practice karwayi thi. Khana khane k baad karan fir jyoti k kapde utaar k uski chot ka muayana kerta h to pata h ki jyoti ki chote ab lagbhag thik ho chuki h to vo usko fir se dawa lagata h .Or fir khud bed pe let ker jyoti ko leta leta h or fir dono bhai bahan aaj jo kuch bhi hua uske baare m discuss ker rahe the. Tabhi karan bolta h

Karan :- wese tu is competition k liye tu ready to h na gudiya I mean tu mere sath dance kerne m uncomfortable feel to ni ker rahi na.

Jyoti :- kesi baat ker rahe ho bhai aap , ek aap hi to ho jinhone bachpan se leker abhi taki har ghadi m sath rahe ho chahe kesi hi mushkil ho aapne use mere tak pahuchne se pahale hi apne uper jhela h . Aap mere liye mere bhai k sath sath mere dost mere sab kuch ho. M aapke sath comfortable ni hongi to or kiske sath houngi.

Karan jyoti k dil m apne liye itni pyaar or ijjat dekh k bahut khush hota h . Or uske dono galo ko pyar se chum ke
Karan :-really you are the world's best sister , I love u my sweet gudiya.
Jyoti:- or aap duniya k sabse best bhai ho . I love u tooooo my sweetest bhaiya .
or wese lete hi jyoti karan se or jyada chipak jati h jese usko hug ker rahi ho. Or fir dono bhai ese hi so jate h .

Sham ko dono uthte h or kuch der bahar hall m beth ke tv dekhte h ki tabhi ghar ki door bell ring hoti h.karan jese hi darwaja kholta h to dekhta h ki uske papa or soteli ma wapas aachuke h . Per unka behavior hamesha wala hi h. Itne dino baad ghar aane k bavjood bhi unke papa usse ek min k rukke itna bhi ni puchta ki koi taklif to ni hui hamre piche se . Or sidha apne kamre m chale jate h .
Apne pita ka esa rude dekh k dono ko bahut dukh hota h , per dono bhai bahan ko insab ki aadat ho chuki thi. Raat ko jyoti khana banati h apne or apne bhai k liye , kyunki unki soteli maa ko to koi matlab ni tha.
Flashback:-
Ye baat tab ki h jab karan or jyoti 6th class m the . Ek din jyoti ko bahut bhuk lagi thi to vo kabya (soteli maa ) k pass jati or bolti h ki
Jyoti :- choti maa bahut bhuk lagi h kuch khane ko do na.

Kabya ka mood pahale hi kisi kaaran se off tha to . Sara gussa jyoti p utaar diya.

Kabya :- to marja na karm jali jab dekho tab bhuk bhuk kerti rahati h dono bhai bahan mare to kam se kam jaan chute .

Jyoti karan k baare m esa sun k thoda gusse m bolti h ,

Jyoti :- choti maa aapko jo bolna h vo mujhe bol lo mere bhai ko kuch mat bolo.

Kabya ye sun or bhadak jati h or guse m jyoti ko thappad mar ke bolti h ki.
Kabya:- kamini mujhse jaban ladati h ja ni milega khana ager bhuk lagi h to khud bana le verna bhuki mar tu or tera bhai.

Bichari jyoti rote hue apne kamre m chali jati h or bed pe pet k bal let sisak sisak ke rone lagti. Itne m karan bhi ghar aajata h jo kuch apne or jyoti ki padhayi ka samaan lene gaya tha. Or jese hi room me pahuch jyoti ko is halat me dekhta h to uska dil tadaf uthta g jese kisi ne uske sine m chaku nar diya ho.
Vo jyoti k pass ja ker bolta h

Karan:- kya hua gudiya tu ro kyu rahi h.

Jyoti karan ko dekhte hi uske gale lag or jor jor se rone lagti h ,or jo bhi hua sab karan ko bata deti h .

Jise sun karan ko bahut gussa aata h per vo bechara bhala kya ker sakta tha tabhi vo kuch sochta h or jyoti bichari bhukhi hi so jati h.

Tabhi karan k dimag m ek idea aata h or vo kitchen m jaker cooking book nikal leta h jo ki uski maa ki thi . Kyunki karan or jyoti ko ki maa ko cooking ka bahut shok tha.or vo new new dishes banati rahati thi .

Or karan usme se padh ker khana banane lagta h or kese n kese bana hi leta h jo thoda sa jal bhi gaya tha per khane layak tha.

Fir vo khana le jaker jyoti ko uthata h or bolta h le choti khana khale .

Jyoti bahut puchti h khana kaha se aaya to karan baad m batane ka bol tal deta h or jyoti ko apne hath se khilane lagta h.

Per jese hi jyoti ki najar karan k hatho p padti h to wo sab samjh jati h or uski ankho m pani aajata h, kyunki karan k hath pe kayi jagah jalne k nishan the jo khana banate time ho gaye the.

Jyoti :- (rote hue)dekho na bhai kitna jal gaya h aapka hath kya jarurat thi aapko esa kerne ki m ek din bhukhi rah leti to kya ho jata .

Karan :- are ese kese mere hote hue meri jaan meri gudiya bhuki rahe ye m kese bardasht ker sakta hu. Chal ab chup chap khana kha. Or fir khana khake jyoti karan k hatho p dawai lagati h.

Or ese hi dono bhai bahan ne book se padh padh ke khana banana sikha.
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Dono bhai khana kha ker sone jate h or jyoti aaj karan k uper to ni but uske sine pe apna sir rakh k so rahi thi ki tabhi achanak.

Achanak esa kya ho gaya dosto , kon h ye mv vp, aakhir kon h kfd jo eklote ese h jinka samna is mv bhi ni ker sakta .
Janne k liye sath bane rahiye friendsan comments kerte rahiye.
Stay tuned

nice update ..to main villain ki bhi entry ho gayi .mv asuro ka raja hai aur vp uska baap ..
aur ye kfd kaun hai jo tridevo ke baad sabse jyada shaktishali hai ..
karan hi rakshak hai .
kavya to bahut buri hai jyoti ko khana nahi deti aur gaaliya deti hai .usike chalte karan aur jyoti khana banana sikh gaye apni maa ki kitaab se ..

 

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Update no :- 16
jyoti aram se so hi rahe the ki tabhi jyoti k chahare k hav bhav badal jate h or achanak bahut jor se chilati hui uth jati h

Jyoti :- bhaiiii.
Or fir karan ko apne side m na paker jor jor se rone lagti or bhai bhai chilane lagti .

Karan jo ki bathroom gaya hua tha jyoti ki chikh sun ker kafi ghabra jata h.or jaldi se bhag ker room m wapas aata h . Or jyoti ko is halat m dekh ker or ghabra jata h or puchta h kya
Karan :- kya hua choti ro kyu rahi h .Koi bura sapna dekha.
Jyoti jese hi karan ko dekhti hi usse lipat k or jor jor se rone lagti or rote rote achanak behosh ho jati h.

Karan ki halat or kharab ho jari wo jaldi se pani lake uske chare per chidakta h or use hosh me lata h.

Jyoti hosh me aate hi fir se karan se chipak ke rone lagti .
Karan :- kya hua gudiya kyu ro rahi h chup ho ja tu to meri brave sister h na.acha bata kya hua koi bura sapna dekha.

Jyoti (siskate hue) :- haa bhai mane dekha aapki kisi se fight ho rahi or fir aap pe samne wale ne janleva hamla kiya or aap.

Itna bol ker fir se rone lagi.
Karan lagatar use chup karane ki koshis m laga hua tha.

Karan:- are bas ker gudiya or kitna royegi , wo bas sapna hi to tha. Dekh mujhe kuch ni hua m tere samne hi to hu bilkul sahi salamat hu .
Per jyoti chup hone ka naam hi ni le rahi thi to karan ko or koi raasta n sujha or usne jyoti k chahre ko apne hatho m leker uske hotho pe. Apne hoth rakh deta h or bade hi pyar se use kiss kerne lagta h, pahale to jyoti but bani rahati h fir wo bhi dhire dhire karan ka sath dene lagti h . Per in dono ki kiss m naam matra bhi havas ni thi , bas rha to sirf unka pavitra v nishchal prem.kabhi karan jyoti k uper k hoth ko chumata to kabhi niche wale ko dono ka hi ye pahala kiss tha life ka.
Or jab dono ki sanse ukhadne lagti h. To dono alag ho jate h or jyoti buri tarah sharma k apne bhai se chipak ke us ke sine m khud ko chipane lagti h.

Or thodi der baad normal ho ke jyoti fir bolti h .

Jyoti :- bhai mujhe bahut dar lag raha h kahi wo sapna sach ho gaya to, kahi aapko kuch ho gaya to m bhi ni ji paungi .

Karan :- choti tu kyu dar rahi h wo bas sapna hi to tha bas, or jyoti ko galo p pyar se kiss kerte hue. Or jab tak meri pyari or bahadur gudiya mere sath h duniya ki koi takat mera kuch ni bigad sakti.kyu sahi kaha na mane

Jyoti:- ha bhai aap pe aane wali har musibat ko aap tak pahuche se pahale mujhse bhidna hoga.

Karan:- wah ab ki na meri bahadur bahan wali baat or pagli ese roya mat ker . Roti tu h taklif mujhe hoti h.

Fir isi tarah dono bhai bahan baate kerte hue fir se ek dusre ki baho m so jate h.

Wahi dusri or narad ji pahunch jate h ek bahut hi sundar van (forest) jaha per ek bahut hi tejashvi purush bhagwan shiv ki aradhna ker rahe the shivling k samne . Unko dekh ker hi pata chal raha tha ki vo bahut shant or somya swabhav k h prantu jab krodh aajaye to bahut bahut hi vinashakari ho jate honge.
Or jese hi unki aradhna purna hui . To Naradaji bole.

Narad ji :- bhagwan shiv k param priya bhakt KFD ko narad ka pranam.

Ji ha dosto ye yuwak or koi ni swayam kfd hi h jo tridevo k baad sabse shaktishali h or mv bhi inse yudh kerne me ghabrata h

KFd:- pranam devrishi , kahiye aaj yaha ka marg kese bhul gaye . Koi shanka h kya.

Narad ji :- ha prabhu vo bhi ek ni do do.

Kfd:- boliye narad hi kya shankaye h aapke hriday(dil) me m aapki shankaye dur karne ka purn prayas karunga.

Narad ji :- meri pahali shanka ye h ki jesa ki sab jante h aap mahadev ko atyant priya h or unhone isi kaaran aapko ek vishal lok or ek mahal bhi pradaan kiya h.taki aap aapna kartavya nirvighn purn kerte rahe , prantu fir bhi un sukh suvidhaye tyag ker yaha is van m hi apna adhiktar samay vyatit kyu kerte ho .

Kfd:- hmm aap to jante hi devrishi mene apna adhiktar balyakaal (bachpan) isi sthan isi van m vyatit kiya h , isiliye mujhe yaha sthan bahut hi priya h. Or m is sansaar ko yah bhi sikh yaha rahakar sikhata hu ki ye bhotik sukh keval mithya h maya h.sacha sukh apna karm kerte hue ishwer ki bhakti m rahana hi h. Or vese derishi jo sukh prakriti maa ki god m h vo mahalo ki char diwari m kaha.

Narad ji :- narayan! narayan ! ati uttam , sahi hi kahate h sabhi aapme or mahadev k swabhav me koi antar ni h , aap dono hi moh maya se virakt ho .
Or mera dusra prashn ...

Kfd:- (bich m hi bol pade) aapka dusra prashn karan or jyoti k baare m hi h na devrishi.

Narad ji :- uchit kaha aapne he shiv priya

Kfd:- m aapke yaha aane prayojan ko jaan chuka hu devrishi aap vyarth hi chintit ho rahe h jo bhi aage karan or jyoti k sath hone wala h vo vidhi ka vidhan h or vese bhi abhi hamara unke jivan m aagman ka samay ni aaya h , or aage jo bhi hone wala h. Vo to undono k prem ki pariksha hogi .ab ye dekhne wali baat hogi ki , kese aane wali pariksha me unka prem unka sahayak hoga.


Naradji :- jesa aapko uchit lage

Kfd:- mera ek karya karenge devrishi ?

Narad ji :- kahiye kfd m aapki kese sahayta ker sakta hu

Fir kfd narad ji ko vo karya batate h jise sun narad ji kfd se agaya le us karya ko kerne ko nikal jate h.

Aiye ek najar commissioner or mla per dal lete h.

Commissioner:- bhai tumhe pakka yakin h na ki humara yah plan successful hoga ager jara si humse chuk hui to tum to jante hi ho ki anajam bahut bura hoga humara.

Mla:- ha mere yaar mujhe pura yakin h ki humara ye plan jarur successful hoga or us home minister ko bhi achha sabak milega.

Or fir dono jor jor se hasne lagte h

Ab dekhte h ki jyoti ne jo sapne m dekha tha vo bas sapna hi tha ya bhavishya m aane wale kisi sankat ki chetavni, or kya karya sopa h kfd ne narad ji ko , or kya plan bana rahe h mla or commissioner janne k liye sath bane rahiye

Stay tuned.

nice update ..jyoti ne aisa kya sapna dekha ki wo itni jyada darr gayi ..
kfd ne narad ke sawaal ka jawab nahi diya karan aur jyoti ke prem ki pariksha honewali hai aage aisa lagta hai .
ye comissioner aur mla ne aisa kya plan banaya hai ki minister ko bhi sabak milega aur wo karan aur jyoti ke saath kya karne ki soch rahe hai ..

 

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Update no :- 17

Agle din karan or jyoti jaldi uth jate h, kyumki aaj somvar tha or unhe hamesha ki tarah aaj mandir jana tha.wo jaldi se teyar ho ker mandir pahunch jate h .


Lekin aaj ek khas baat thi ki aaj karan or jyoti k sath radha bhi hoti h jo unhe raste m hi mil jati h. Mandir pahunch ker karan or jyoti hamesha ki tarah bhagwan shiv ki puri shradha bhav se puja kerte or radha bhi unko dekh dekh ker bilkul wesa hi kerti h .

Puja k baad tino bhai bahan mandir ki saaf safayi kerte h . Or wahi pe bethe ek garib ko puri ijjat se khana khilate h jo jyoti apne ghar se hi bana ker lati h or


fir tino bhai bahan wahi mandir m brth jate h or thoda aaram kerte h tabhi radha bolti h.

Radha:- bhaiya ek baat puchu

Karan:- are chutki tumhe kabse mujhse kuch puchne k liye permission lene ki jarurat pad gayi , jo puchna h bejijhak pucho.

Radha:- bhaiya mane jab bhi mane mahadev ki koi photo dekhi h unme hamesha unke sharir per bhasm or rudraksh hoti . To mera question ye tha ki mahadev ye apne sharir per bhasm kyu lagate h or unke sharir per ye rudraksh kyu h.

Karan :- choti mahadev apne sharir per bhasm lagaker is sansaar ko ye sikhate h ki is sansaar ki pratek vastu pratyek prani nashvar jisne is sansaar m janm liya h uski mrityu bhi nishchit h to hame kisi ka bhi ni hona chahiya or hamesha nishkam bhav se apne karma kerte hue ishwer ki bhakti kerni chahiye. Or rahi baat rudraksh ki to wo hame ye darshata h ki is sansaar k pratyek prani ka janm usi bij rupi parmatma se hi hua h .

Radha :- vah bhaiya aapko bahut knowledge h is baare m vese ek baat or bataiye ki mahadev to swayam bhagwan h na to wo kiska dhyan kerte h .

Karan :- bhagwan shiv hamesha bhagwan vishnu ka dhyan kerte h or bhagwan vishnu hamesha bhagwan shiv ka. Kyunki ye dono hi ek dusre ko apna aradhya mante h . Per sach to ye h ki in dono m koi fark ni h ye dono hi ek hi shakti k do bhin bhin roop h .

Radha:- bhaiya ye dono dono alag alag ho ker bhi dono ek kese h please inki story shuru se bataiye na .

Karan:- thik h jyoti to suno:-

Ye us samay ki baat h jab samya ka hi koi astitva ni tha, na tab din thi na raat , na surya tha chandrma . The to keval vo nirakar parmatma tab unke man me srishti ki utpati ki icha hui or un nirakar parmatma ne sharir dharan kiya or wo sakar swarup or koi ni bhagwan sadashiv the .

Fir unhi sadashiv ne ek se anek hone ka sankalp liya or unhi ke andar se ek atyant hi sundar or tejasvini naari uttpan hui jo or koi ni mata aadi shakti thi.

Fir bhgwan sadashiv k hriday se bhagwan vishnu uttpan hue . Unhone bhagwan sadashiv k kahane per aakash ka nirman kiya fir vo apni shakti se nirmit shir sagar m apni sheshanag ki shaiya per aaram kerne lage , tabhi unki nabhi se ek bada sa kamal ka ful nikla or usme se brahma ji uttpan hue or jese hi unhone apni aankh khol ke charo or dekha to unke char mukh ho gaye. Tab unhone har jagah apne nirmata ko dhundne lage . Tabhi unki najar bhagwan vishnu per padi .

Tab vo bhagwan vishnu se mile or unse pucha ki aap hi mere or is shrishti ko banane wale ho to bhagwan vishnu ne mana ker diya .

Tab brahma ji ko laga ki wahi h srishti or bhagwan vishnu k nirmata .Or sadashiv ki maya se bhagwan vishnu ko bhi yahi laga ki vo hi h srishti k nirmata or vo sada shiv k bare m bhul gaye . Or fir brahma or vishnu m bahas hone lagi ki kon bada h. Baat yudh tak pahunch gayi ,tabhi un dono ke bich m agni stambh pragat hua or ek akashavani hui

Akashavani :- he brahma dev he narayan aap aap me se jo bhi is stambh ki shuruaat ya ant ko khoj lega vo hi sreshta hoga .

Dono bhi is baat ko man gaye vishnu ji niche ki taraf jane lage or brahmA ji uper ki taraf per dono ki us stambh ki shuruaat ya ant ni mil raha tha .

Aakhir bhagwan vishnu ko to samjh m aagaya k ye stambh gyan rupi pramatma ka pratik h iska koi aadi ya ant ni h or brahma ji ko bhi bahut uper jane pe bhi kuch ni mila .
Isliye dono hi vapas sthan pe pahunche bhagwan vishnu to sach bol diye per brahma ji ne jhut bola ki mujhe is stambh ka ant mil gaya h .Or usike sath hi usi stambh me se bhagwan shiv pragat hue or bole

Shiv :- he narayan aapme vinamrata h or aapne satya ko swikaar kiya isliye Aap har jagah puje jayenge or fir brahmdev se bole aap ek dev ho ker bhi apne mithya ahankar m asaty kaha isliye aap srishti k rachayita ho ker bhi aapki kahi puja na hogi .

Or fir shiv ji bole he narayan he brahma hum tino ek hi shakti k teem alag alag roop h isliye hum me na koi chota h na koi bada or jo hum tino m antar kerega usse bada murkh or papi koi na hoga

Karan :- to is tarah aage hamri shrishti ki rachna hui or ye tino alag alag ho ker bhi ek h.

Radha :- wow bhai aapko itni knowledge kese h .

Jyoti :- radha bhai or mujhe dono ko hi shuru se indian mythology m bahut interest h isliye hum insab k bare m hamesha research kerte rahate h .

Or isi tarah 3no thodi der baate ki or college k liye nikal gaye.

Wahi swarg me devraj indra apne singhasan pe bethe hue mv k baare m soch rahe the ki vaha devtao k shilpi dev vishwakarma prakat hue or unhone indra ko pranam kiya

Devaraj :- aaiye dev bataiye kese aana hua .

Vishwakarma:- devaraj m bas aapko bas itna hi batane aaya hu ki jin astro k nirmaan ka aapne mujhe aadesh diya tha unke nirmaan me abhi kuch samay lagega.

Devaraj (thoda guse me) :- devaraj se bhi mahatvapoorn aapke liye kiska aadesh ho gaya dev vishwakarma jo aap mujhe pratiksha k liye bol rahe h.

Vishwakarma:- (muskurate hue) to aap kya mujhe mahadev k aadesh m vilamb kerne ko kah rahe h

Mahadev ka nam sunte hi indra ghabra jate h or bolte h .

Devaraj:- ni ni dev mane esa to ni kaha . Prantu mahadev ko kisi astra ki kya avashyakata pad gayi wo to swayam sarvashaktiman h.

Vishwakarma:- mahadev ne us astra ka nirman swaym k liye ni balki us rakshak k liye karwaya h.jo nikat samya me is sansar ki raksha karega.

Devraj :- ager esi baat h to m bhi vo astra dekhna chahunga dev.

Fir devraj vishwakarma k sath unke bhawan m jate h or vishwakarma unhe vo astra dikha te h ho kuch is tarah ka tha.

Devraj :- ye kya dev ye to ek sadharan sa dand h bhala ye kese rakshak k kam aayega aage jaker .

ager aapko iski shakti pe sandeh h to swayam iska parikshan ker lijiye devraj . Ye swar waha gunjate h .

Or jab devraj us aawaj ki taraf dekhte ho to pate h ye aawaj kisi or ki ni swayam kfd ki thi or unke sath me daityaguru bhi the .

Devraj kfd ko pranam kerte h or jese hi shukrachary ko dekhte h vo krodhit ho jate h or bolte h

Devraj :- ye yaha kya ker rahe h kfd inhi ke shishye us mv ki vajah se hum sab dukhi h.

Kfd :- devraj apne shishya mv dwara kiye ja rahe papo se shukrachary bhi kafi rusht h or vo bhi mv ka ant chahte h isliye ye bhi rakshak k us divy astra ko dekhne k liye utsuk the isliye m inhe bhi yaha apne sath le aya or aap ruk kyu gaye kijiye is astra ka parikshan .

Devraj itna sun us dand ko uthane ka prayas kerte h per puri shakti lagane k baad bhi use hila tak ni pate .

Fir kfd shukrachary ko bhi prayas kerne ko kahate h per vo bhi asfal rahate h.

Kfd:- dekha devaraj ye h is dand ki shakti ki isko iske swami k alawa koi hila tak ni sakta or jiska dand hi kisi k niyntran m ni h usko bhala vo dusht kese niyantran m karega.

Or fir isi tarah kfd indra or shukrachary se kuch mahatvapoorn baate kerte h or sabhi apne apne lok ko chale jate h

Stay tuned.

nice update ..karan ko bahut jaankari hai ..shrishti ka nirmaan kaise hua ye usne radha ko bataya ..vishnu ne apni haar sweekar ki par bramha ne nahi ki isliye unko koi nahi pujata ..
rakshak ka astra taiyar ho gaya hai aur wo itna shaktishali hai ki uske mailk ke alawa use koi utha nahi sakta .
daityaguru bhi mv ka ant chahte hai isliye devtao ka saath dena chahte hai ..

 

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Update no :- 18 .
Mandir se nikal ker tino bhai bahan college ko nikal jate h. Wahi p unko rohan bhi mil jata h . Rohan bhi ab karan or jyoti ka bahut acha dost ban chuka tha .

Rohan :- or bhai aagaya aaj late kese ho gaya.

Karan :- ha bhai wo aaj monday tha na to aaj mandir gaye hue the.

Karan or rohan ese hi baate ker rahe the ki tabhi ek ladki ne aker piche se rohan ki aankhe band ker di, jese rohan ko bol rahi ho ki pahachano m kon hu.

Kisi anjaan ladki ko esa kerta dekh sabhi chonk gaye . Rohan ko bhi pahale herani hui phir kuch second baad uske chahre per muskaan aagayi .

Rohan :- mane aapko kitni baar bola h ki mujhe aapko pahachanane k liye in ankho ki jarurat ni h meri pyari didu.

Or itna bol k wo us ladki k hatho ko hatha deta h or jaldi se piche mud ker us ladki k kaske gale lag jata h.

New introduction

Riya:-(age:- 23 years) jyoti ki tarah ye bhi ek simple or bahut hi sunder ladki h or rohan ki badi bahan h. Ye pichle 4 saalo se delhi m study ker rahi thi . Or aaj hi vapas loti h. Ye apne bhai rohan se bahut pyaar kerti h . Ye to rohan ko chodker delhi jana hi ni chahati thi but rohan ne inko apni kasam de ker delhi bheja tha.kyunki wo ni chahata tha ki uski di ka career unki vajah se kharab ho.

Now back to story.

Rohan riya k gale lagte hi khushi k ansu rone laga .

Rohan :- didu aap aagayi m bata ni sakta m aajkitna khush hu .

Riya :- ha betu m bhi khush hu m hi janti hu k ye char saal mane tere bina kese gujare h, or tu ro kyu raha h ab to m aagayi hu na.

Rohan :- ye to khushi k aansu h didu
Aapne bataya kyu ni ki aap aane wali hu .

Riya:- (galo ko pyar se khinchate hue) bata deti to mere pyare betu k chahareye surprise milne ki khushi kese dekh pati.

Rohan :- didu ab to aap mujhe chod k ni jaogi na.

Riya:- ni ab m apne betu ko chod k kahi jaungi or tere liye ek or surprise h betu .

Rohan (excited hote hue) :- kya di

Riya :- yahi ki mane apni post graduation k liye tere hi college m hi admission leliya h betu or ab m tere sath har waqt rah sakungi.


Rohan :- wow di I m so happy .

Bol ker fir se riya k gale lag jata h.

Riya :- are betu apne friends se mujhe ni milwayega

Rohan :- are ha di .
Fir rohan, karan jyoti or radha ko riya se milwata h.
Per fir rohan dekhta h ki karan or jyoti ki ankho m aansu h .

Rohan :- kyu hua jyoti , kya hua bhai tum dono ro kyu rahe ho.

Karan :- bhai ye ansu to tere or riya di k pyaar ko dekh ker aagaye h ankho m hamari.

Jyoti :- ha rohan bhai bhai aaj pata chala ki badi bahan ka pyaar kya hota h , ye dukh is baat ko sochkar aarahe h ki kash hamari bhi ek badi bahan hoti.

Riya bhi unki baate sun ker bahut emotional ho gayi or karan or jyoti ko apne sine se laga k boli.

Riya:- kisne kaha ki tumhari koi badi bahan ni h, m rohan k sath sath tum dono ki bhi badi bahan hu samjhe aajse. Or dobara esa kaha na ki tum dono ki koi badi bahan ni h to bahut pitayi hogi tum dono ki samjhe .

Karan or jyoti ye sun ker bahut khush ho jate h or riya ko tightly hug kerke bolte h .

Dono :- ok di.

Tabhi radha bol padti h

Radha:- are ye kya m sabse choti hu to mujhe to aap sab mujhe to bhul hi gaye , bhul gaye kya m bhi aap sab ki kuch lagti hu .

Karan:-(radha k galo pe kiss kerte hue) are tujhe kese bhul sakte h tu to hum sabki jaan humari pyari gudiya h.

Or fir sabhi milker baari bari se radha k galo p kiss kerke radha ko charo taraf se gale laga lete h.

Fir ese hi sabhi apni apni classes ke liye chale jate h.

Or ese hi din nikal jata h fir college k off hone p sabhi parking m milte h .

Rohan :- friends aaj aap 3no ko raat ko mere ghar pe aana h kyunki meri family ne di k wapas aane ki khushi m ek party rakhi h.

Karan isse pahale kuch bolta usse pahale hi riya bol padi.

Riya:- ha bhai tumko or jyoti ko Aaj aana hi padega m koi bahana ni sunugi. Ye tumhari di ka apne chote bhai se ye request h or radha tu bhi aarahi h samjhi .

Riya k itna kahana tha ki 3no man jate h or sham ko milne ka bol apne apne ghar ki taraf nikal jate h.

Room m pahunch k karan or jyoti fresh hote h or or khana khaker thodi der let jate h.

Sham ko dono bhai bahan teyar hote h . Or jyoti ne aaj red colour ki ethnic dress pahani thi jisme vo bahut pyari lag rahi thi. kuch is tarah ki lag rahi thi jyoti

Fir wo dono jese hi ghar k bahar nikalte h to unke samne ek car aake rukti h jisme se radha nikalti h jo unko pic kerne aayi thi .

Fir vo 3no rohan k ghar ki taraf nikal jate h or vaha jese hi pahunchte h to rohan or riya bahut khush hote h or gale mil ker milte.

Fir party m shamil hote h party jyada badi ni thi bas kuch khas log hi aaye the jo thodi der m chale jate h

Introduction :-

Sunil gupta :-age 49 dil k bahut hi ache insaan h or apne biwi or rohan or riya se bahut pyar kerte h. Inki love marrige hui thi.

Anita gupta :- age 49 ek housewife or ek sushil grahni h or dil ki bahut hi saaf h .

Rohan or riya k baare m to aap jante hi h friends

Now back to story .

Anita or sunil dono hi karan ,jyoti or radha k nature se bahut impressed hote h .

Anita:- wese karan beta I really impressed with u tumhare mummy papa ne tumhe bahut ache sanskaar diye h jara batao unke baare m kuch.

Ye sab sunker karan or jyoti ko apni maa ki yaad aajati h or vo khud ko control ni ker pate or dono hi rone lagte h

Anita ye dekh k ghabra jati h or bolti h
Anita :- kya hua bacho tum ro kyu rahe ho.

Karan :- aunty aapki baate sunker hame apni mummy ki yaad aagayi or karan fir apni jindagi ki sari kahani suna dete h .

Anita bhi ye sun ker bhavuk ho jati h per khud ko thoda control kerte hue



Anita:- bas kero beta ese rote ni h aage se esa kabhi mat bolna ki ki tumhari maa ni h , m bhi to tumhari maa jesi hi hu. aaj se mere do ni 4 bache h.

Ye sun ker karan or jyoti dono bahut khush hote h kyunki aaj unhe ek badi bahan or maa dono mil gayi thi.

Fir anita kuch soch ker bolti h

Anita :- wese beta tumhari mummy ka naam kya tha. Or wo kaha ki rahane wali thi.
Anita ne esa isliye pucha tha kyunki use jyoti ka face kuch jana pahachana sa laga tha.
Jyoti :- aunty hamari mummy ka naam asha sharma tha or wo mumbai se thi.

Anita:- thoda excited hote hue beta tumhare pass unki koi pic h kya .
Kya m dekh sakti hu .

Karan anita ko apne mobile pic dikha deta h or jese hi Anita wo pic dekhti h to.


Anita :- (khushi k maare chonkte hue) kya tum ashu k bache ho.

Itna bol ker hi wo un dono ko fir se gale laga leti h or unke pure chaharo p kisses ki jhadi laga deti h

Karan :- kya hua aunty kya aap meri mummy ko jante ho

Anita:- beta tum janne ki baat ker rahe ho tumhari mummy meri bahut hi achi dost kum bahan jesi thi hum dono ek sath ek college m padhte the or ek hihostel m rahate the.but graduation k baad tumhari mummy se koi contact ni ho paya mane bahut koshis ki or aaj itne time baad uski khabar mili bhi to ye khabar mili ki wo ab is duniya m ni rahi .Jyoti beta tumhara chahara bilkul apni mummy jesa h.

Esa bol ker wo bhi rone lagi badi mushkil se anita ko chup karwaya sab ne . Aaj wo khush or udaas dono hi thi dukh is baat ka ki uski sabse achi saheli ab is duniya m ni rahi or khushi apni saheli k bacho se milne ki thi.

Isi tarah sab thodi der pyar se mile .
Anita ne karan or jyoti ko apne hatho se khana khilaya or radha ko bhi or fir karan jyoti or radha 3no apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.

Ghar pahunch k karan or jyoti aaj ki hui sabhi incidents k bare m baat kerte hue jyoti or karan so gaye per unhe kya pata tha kal un dono ko ek or surprise milne wala h.
Note :- sorry for late friends ab dekhte h ki kya surprise milne wala h kal karan or jyoti ko
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nice update .to rohan ki behen bhi aa gayi isi college me aur sabme achche se bhai behen wala pyar bhi ho gaya ..
rohan ki maa anita karan ki maa asha ki saheli hai .
karan aur jyoti ko ek pariwar mil gaya jo unse pyar karta hai ..

 

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Update no :- 19
Agle din or jyoti uth ker bari bari se nahate h or fir teyar hote h .Tabhi jyoti bolti h.

Jyoti :- bhai aaj rahane dete h college jane ka man ni h

Or fir wo jaker karan ki god m beth jati h or aapni bahe karan k gale me dalkar.

Jyoti:- m aaj aajaka pura din apne pyare bhaiyu k sath spent kerna chahati or masti kerna chahati hu please.

Jyoti ne ye baat itni masumiyat or pyar se boli thi ki karan mana ni ker paya.

Karan:- (uske galo ko apne sahalte hue bolta h) jesi meri gudiya ki mazi .
Or ye bol ker jyoti k galo ko chum liye.

Jyoti:- (bilkul bacho ki tarah khush hote hue) yahooooooooooo! Thank u thank u thank u so much bhai.

Or fir usne karan k chahare per kisses ki jhadi laga di.

Karan:- are bas ker bas ker gudiya.

Jyoti thodi masti kerte hue uske gal per kaat leti h

Karan :- ouch kat liya , gandi bachi.
Or apna gal sahalane lagta h.

Karan ne ye sab itni funny way m bola ki jyoti khil khilakar hasne lagti h.or use dekh karan bhi khush ho jata h.

Fir karan jyoti se bolta h

Karan:- chal choti nashta kerte h .

Jyoti :- ha bhai chalungi na but ese ni.

Karan :- fir kese ?

Jyoti :- jara ghumiye bhai.

Karan jese hi piche ghumta h to jyoti jaldi se bad per chad ker
karan k piche se uske gale m bahe dal ker uski pith p latak jati h or apne per karan k pet per lapet leti h.or bolti h

Jyoti:- ese bhai .


Karan jyoti ki is harkat p muskura uttha h or achanak usko apne bachpan ki yaad aajati h jab unki maa jinda thi to unke papa bhi undono se bahut pyaar kerte the , or jab bhi vo 4ro kahi ghumne jate to unke papa kabhi use ya kabhi jyoti ko ese apni pith per leker ghumte the. Ye sab yaad aate hi wo thoda emotional ho jata h per jaldi khud ko control ker leta h.or jyoti ko leker kitchen m aata h

Fir dono bhai bahan mil ker khana banate h or jyoti aaj. Karan ki god m beth k hi usko khana khilati or karan jyoti ko khilata h or

fir wapas jyoti karan ki pith p sawar ho jati h . Dono k papa or soteli maa to as usual ghar p the ni to wo befikar the.

Karan jyoti ko leker hall m aaker usko sofe per bithaya h or dusre sofe pe let ker

Karan:- (natak kerte hue) haye meri pith , jyoti tu kitni bhari ho gayi h , moti kahi ki meri pith ki band baja di.

Jyoti (banawati gusse me ) kya bole bhai aapne mujhe moti bola ruko.

Or jyoti karan k uper chad k usper pyar se mukko ki barsaat ker di

Fir karan sofe per beth gaya or jyoti ne apna sir uski god m rakh diya or dono bhai bahan tv dekhne lagte h

Tabhi karan bolta h
Karan :- chal choti bahut din ho gaye tere liye shopping ni ki jaldi se ready ho ja fir mall chalte h.

Jyoti itna sun ker bahut khush ho jati h or ho bhi kyu naa aakir ladkiyo ka pasandida kaam jo h shopping.

Fir dono bhai bahan ready ho ker mall pahunchte h or ek esi shop p jaate jaha ladies or gent dono k kapde milte ho , waha jaker har ladki ki tarah puri dukan sir o utha li

Chaliye jab tak inki shopping ker rahe h ek najar narad ji per daal lete h.

Narad ji kfd se mil ker sidha rishi piplaad k aashram me pahunchte h .rishiwer unhe dekh ker bahut khush hote h.

Rishiwer:- pranam devrishi ! Aapka swagat h

Fir rishiwer narad ji ki khub dil se seva kerte h unhe bhojan karwate h.

Fir bolte h

Rishiwer :- kahiye narad ji mere liye kya aagya h

Narad ji :- narayan narayan rishiwer m aapke liye kfd ka ek sandesh le ker aaya hu unhonne aapko ek karya sompa h .

Rishiwer:- ye to mera soubhagya h devrishi ki swayam kfd ne mujhe is layak samjha kahiye kya sandesh h .
Narad ji unhe wo karya bata ker waha se chala jata h.

Wahi dusri taraf shahr k bahar khandar m vo tantrik jisse mla milne aaya tha (uska naam aghora) sadhna m betha hua tha ki tabhi usko ek awaj sunayi deti h ki
"
"Aankhe kholo aghora"

Aghora jese hi ankhe kholta h to dekhta h ki uske samne 'vp' khada thA .

Aghora:- prabhu aap yaha is samay mujhe se koi bhul hui kya.

Vp :- ni aghora balki tumhe to khush hona chahiye ki shetano k shahnshah (Mv) ne tumhe apne ek kaam k layak samjha.

Aghora :- aagya dijiye prabhu

Phir vp usko vo kam bata ker gayab ho jata h or aghora us kam ki teyari m lag jata h.

Chaliye wapas chalte h hero ki taraf

Pure do ghante baad jyoti ki shopping khatam hoti h to karan chen ki saas leta h.

Fir wo ek restaurant m jaker lunch kerte h .Apna hero aaj bahut handsome lag raha tha to waha mojud sabhi ladkiya use hi ghure jaa rahi thi ,karan to dhayan ni deta per jyoti sab notice kerti h or usko pata ni kyu use gussa aaraha tha.

Jyoti man me. :- dekho to in kaminiyo ko kese mere bhaiyu ko ghur rahi h kese kha hi jayenge . Per in bechariyo ki bhi kya galti bhai h hi itne handsome or jane kyu sharmane lagti h man hi man.

Karan :- are jyoti kaha kho gayi dekh khana aagaya h jaldi .

Fir dono ek dusre ko apne hatho se khilate h jise dekh ladkiya unhe couple samjh k jalne lagti h.or ladko ka bhi jyoti ko dekh yahi hal tha . Or jyoti bhi ye sab dekh ker man hi man muskura rahi thi .

Fir dono khana kha ker ghar pahunchte h or dono so jate h.
Sham ko unki nind doorbell ki aawaj se khulti h.

Karan jeSe hi gate kholta h to bahut khush ho jata h kyunki uske ma baap k sath gate k bahar shivani khadi thi

Intro
Shivani :- age 16 saal ranbir or kabya ki beti or karan or jyoti ki soteli bahan h. Ye abhi tak delhi m hostel m rah ker padh rahi thi .
Iske nature k bare m aage pata chalega .

Karan or jyoti shivani ko dekh bahut khush hote h per shivani bhi unhe ignore kerti h or esa behave ker rahi thi jese unhe janti hi na ho . Shivani ese behave ker rahi thi ki unhe janti hi na ho. Uska esa behave dekh dono bhai bahan ko bahut dukh hota h.

Fir karan or jyoti khana banaker apne room m jake khane bethte h to jyoti bolti h .

Jyoti (nam aankho se) :- bhai humari esi kya galti h ki papa or choti maa esa bartaav kerte h hamse or ab shivani bhi .

Bol k rone lagi . Karan bhi kuch ni bola or usko gale laga liye .

Fir dono bhai bahan khana khaker so jate h.

Note :- sorry for late update friends

Stay tuned

nice update ..karan aur jyoti shopping karne gaye the waha pe sab unko couple samajhke jalte hai .
ye narad ne kya kaam bataya rishi piplaad ko .
vp bhi aghora ko kuch kaam bataya hai dekhte hai kya hai wo .
hero ki ek sauteli behen bhi hai shivani jo hostel me padhti hai ,aur wo bhi hero se nafrat karti hai apne maa baap ki tarah ..

 

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Update no:- 20
Karan or jyoti so hi rahe the ki karan ko ahasas hua ki koi uske pero ko pakda hua h or usne nind m hi aadh khuli ankho se dekha ki koi sach m hi betha h bethi h uske pero k paas, per andhera hone ki vajah se kon h ye wo dekh na paya

samne wale ya wali ko bhi pata chal gaya ki karan jag gaya h to vo bhi jaldi se uth ker room se nikal gaya/gayi .

aaj k din hi dopahar k time jab shopping ker rahe the usi samay dusri taraf .

Mla or commissioner car me kunal ko leker shahar k bahar ja rahe the ,kunal to koma m hi tha . Mla gadi chala raha tha or commissioner apne bete ka sir apni god m rakh k piche wali seat per betha tha.

Commissioner:- yaar ye achanak se guruji(aghora) ne itni jaldi kyu bulaya h. Kahi kuch gadbad to ni ho gayi na or (ghabrate hue) kahi esa to ni ki humara kunal sahi ni ho sakta.

Mla :- tu chinta mat ker bhai esa kuch ni hoga mujhe baba pe pura bharosa h hamara kunal sahi bhi hoga or hamara badla bhi pura hoga.

Ese hi baate kerte hue wo dono aghora k adde per pahuch jate h

Mla:- pranam guru ji aapne

Aghora:- aao dushyant betho.

Dono fir beth jate h wahi jamin per aghora k pass .

Commisioner :- kya hua guruji koi sankat to ni aagaya na jo aapne hame itni jaldi yaha bulaya or wo bhi kunal k sath . Mera beta thik to ho jayega na.

Aghora:- chinta mat kero putra koi sankat ni h , tumhe to balki khush hona chahiye ki teri kismat kitni achi h ki tumhe ab grahan tak rukne ki aavashyakata ni h aaj amavas ki raat ko hi kaal muhoort padne wala h jisme tumhare dwara di gayi bali na sirf tumhare bete ko jivan daan degi apitu sath sath shetano k badsha "kaalbhanu" kali shaktiya bhi pradaan karenge.



Introduction :-

Kaalbhanu urf mv:- ji ha dosto yahi is story ka main villain ek 7 feet ka maha kroor or nirdayi asur h ye . Or charitra se bhi bahut gira hua h . Iski najar to har sunder naari per rahati h . Mahadev se ek do ni pure 3 3 wardan prapt ker iske hatyachar
Bahut bad gaye h. Isne mahadev se vardaan kya prapt kiye h wo to aage hi pata chalega.

Now back to story.

Commissioner:- kya sach me gurudev mera beta jaldi thik ho jayega.

Aghora :- ha bilkul

Flash back

Vp:- tumhe maharaj kaalbhanu ka ek karya kerna h aghora.

Aghora:- aagya dijiye prabhu .

Vp :- aaj se kuch dino pahale tumhare do shishya aaye the na tumhare pass apne putra k jivan daan k liye.

Aghora:- ha prabhu or vo aane wale grahan ko maharaj ko bali bhi pradan karenge.

Vp:- m tumse usi vishay m vartalap kerne aaya hu aghora. Apne shishyo se kah do k unhe 1 mah tak ki pratiksha kerne ki aavashyakata ni h , ager unhe apne putra k pran chahiye to aaj hi maharaj ko bali pradaan kare .

Aghora :- jesi aapki aagya prabhu ,parantu

Vp bich me hi tokte hue tej awaj me bola.

Vp:- apni jivha ko yahi pe lagam do aghora, jitna mane tumhe bataya h wo paryapt h , isse adhik janne ki tumhe koi avashyakta ni h . Jitna kaha gaya h utna kero bas. Or ha unhe bolna ki apna pratishodh aaj ni grahan wali raat ko hi le kyunki us samay uski shaktiya kayi guna bad jayegi.


Or ye bol k vp vaha se gayab ho gaya.

Present

Aghora :-ha ab shighrata se bali k liye us balak ka intezaam kero jese k baare m tumhe mane bataya tha.

Mla:- jesa aap kahe guruji

Or fir mla apne aadmi ko phone lagata h apne ek aadmi ko

Mla:- ha raka us londe ko utha lao address tumhe m msg ker raha hu.

Jis din aghora ne bola tha bache ki bali k baare m usi din se mla ne apne aadmiyo ko ek ese bache ki khoj m laga diya tha jo apne maa baap ka eklota ho or 5 saal ka ho or uske aadmiyo ne bache ko dhund bhi liya tha bas mla k order ka hi wait ker rahe the.

Karib 1 ghante baad raka us bache ko vaha le aata h, bacha behosh tha . Fir mla use wapis chale jane ko bol deta h. Or uske jaane k baad aghora bali ki teyari m lag jata h . Or mla or commissioner raat ka intezaar kerne lage .

Raat ko karib 12 baje sari tayariya puri ho chuki thi . Aaghora kuch der to pahale mantra jaap karke havan ki agni m aahuti de raha hota h or uske thik samne shetan ki ek badi si murti thi . Or usike side m wo jagah thi jaha bali di jani thi us masoom ki .

Thodi der baad aghora mla ko bache ko hosh m laker bali sthan per letane ka ishara kerta h . Mla us bache ko hosh m lata h or jese hi bacha hosh m aata h jor jor se rone lagta h or apni ma k pass le jane ko bol raha tha lekin un hevano ko us masoom per taras na aaya or jaldi se use bali wali sthan pe leta ker uski gardan talvaar k ek hi vaar m alag ker di . Us maasoom ka sir jaa ker shetan ki murti k pero m gir gaya. Fir aghora uth ker us bache k sir k khoon se kunal k sir p tilak kerta h or baki khun ek katore m daal ker kuch mantra jaap kerne lagt h .

Kuch hi der m kunal ko hosh aajata h or vo uth ker beth jata h , commissioner jese hi uske pass jane ko hota h ki aghora dur se hi use rukne ka ishara kerta h or us katori m rakha hua us bache ka khoon use pilata h jisse usko nayi shakti ka ahasas hota h . Fir aghora commissioner se bolta h h.

Commissioner:- tumhare bete ko shetan ne naya jivanadan or shaktiya to pradaan ker di h prantu aaj se ise shetan ka bhakt ban ker rahana hoga or sath sath ise har hafte ek bali deni hi hogi shetan ko khush kerne k liye.

Commissioner aghora ki sab baat maan leta h or fir wo charo aage ki planning kerne lagte h .

Wahi dusri or kfd bhi apne lok m singhasan per bethe hue ye sab drishya dekh rahe the or vo bahut krodhit the or bolte h.

Kfd:- manushya swarth me purntah andha ho chuka h aaj ye pramanit ho chuka h . Ek or karan or jyoti h jo apne pita or soteli ma k dwara unke sath kiye ja rahe dur vyavhar k bavjood bhi unke liye bhi un dono k dil m aaj bhi utna samman h or ek or ye paap Aatmaye h jinhone apne swarth purti hetu ek massom balak k pran lene m bhi sankoch n kiya . Apne putra k prano k liye kisi dusri maa ki khokh ujaad di . Hum chahe to abhi in dushto ka sarv nash ker de prantu niyati ne hamare hath bandhe hue h.

Prantu apni mrityu or apne karmfal se bhi bhala koi bach paya h or shighra hi inko bhi apne karmo ka fal praapt hoga.

Itna bol kfd waha se antardhyan ho gaye.

Back to the hero

Subah dono bhai bahan apna daily routine pura kerke nashte ki table p jaate h jaha shivani bhi bethi hoti h or breakfast ker rahi hoti h , wo jese hi karan or jyoti ko dekhti h to apna muh fer leti h or jaldi se khana kha ker apne room m chali jati h. Dono bhai bahan fir dukhi hote h. Or nashta banaker khane lagte h karan to bas yahi soch raha tha ki kal raat ko unke room m kon tha ya thi. Fir dono breakfast kerke college k liye nikal jaate h.

Thanks for support friends.
Stay tuned.

nice update ..raat ko karan ke pair ke paas kaun tha ..
aghora ne kunal ko hosh( comma se ) me la diya .aur ab kunal ko har hafte ek bali deni hogi .
kfd ye sab dekhkar gussa huye par wo kuch kar nahi sakte ..
shivani ka vyavahaar dono ke prati kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai ..

 

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Update no:- 21
Karan or jyoti jese hi college pahunchte h to parking m hi unhe unke dost mil jate .

Karan and jyoti :- good morning everybody

Sab dono ko good morning wish kerte h . Lekin sabne ye baat notice ki thi aaj dono bhai bahan k chahare murjhaye hue se h .

Lekin baad m baat kerne ka soch ker sabhi apni apni classes m chale jate h.

Or lunch time per riya karan se bolti
H

Riya :- kya baat h bhai aaj subah se dekh rahi tum dono bahut udas
Ho.

Karan:- kuch bhi to ni di m thik to hu.

Lekin riya ni manti or use apni kasam de deti h to karan ko kal ki sab baate batani padti h.

Riya:- koi bAat ni bhai ek din sab thik.ho jayega tum chinta mat kero .

Fir karan ka mood thik kerne k liye baat badalte hue boli

Riya:- wese m tum dono se naraj hu

Jyoti :- kyu di .

Riya :- kyu ki bachi kal akele akele shopping p gaye dono or mujhe bataya bhi ni , jao m tumse baat ni kerti .

Radha :- ha bhai that's not fare m bhi ni karungi aapse baat .

Rohan:- ha m bhi ni

Karan :- abe kamine kam se kam tu to sath de mera , acha sorry baba mujhse galti ho gayi is sunday hum sabhi picnic p jayenge ab khush.

Picnic ka nAam sun sabhi khush ho jate h
Radha riya or jyoti tino karan ko kiss kerke
Dono :- thank u bhai
Rohan ko masti sujhti h wo bhi kiss k style m hoth banake karan ki taraf badta h

Karan :- abe sale tu is tarah meri taraf kyu bad raha h .

Rohan :-(masti kerte hue) ab tere idea se m bhi khush hu to m bhi to thank you bolunga nA

Karan :- bhag sale dur rah mujhse m us type ka ni hu.or vese bhi ye idea mera ni jyoti ka tha usne aaj subah hi is baare m mujhse baat ki thi.


Sabhi is bat pe hasne lagte h or sath m jyoti ko bhi sab thanks kahate h bari bari se riya radha karan or rohan uske galo pe kiss kerke thank u bolte h (yaha m ek baat clear ker du rohan k dil m jyoti k liye koi galat intention ni h vo use apni bahan hi manta h or jyoti use bhai isliye rohan ka uske galo p kiss kerna jyoti ko bura na laga)

Riya :- wese bhai tumne hume apne mummy papa k baare m to bataya, lekin tumhare koi relatives ni h kya jinke pass tum aaram se rah sako apni step mom k hatyachar sahan kerne k bajaye.

Karan :- (serious hote hue)hume apne relatives k baare m kuch ni pata di humare mummy papa ne bhag k shadi ki thi mummy se apne nana nani k bare m puch pate usse pahale wo manhoos hadsa ho gaya or papa k baare m to aap janti hi ho unhe to humse koi matlab hi ni h to unse puchna to dur baat hi ni hoti.

Ese hi inki bate hoti rahi or fir sab apni apni class m chale gaye .

Wahi dusri or patal m

kaalbhanu apne plan k pahale step ki safalta k kaaran bahut hi khush tha or madira ka paan kerte hue jashn mana raha tha k

tabhi waha bijli ki awaaj k sath ek nilli roshni fel jaati h or jb roshni gayab hoti h to apne saamne khade shaks ko dekh ker wo krodhit ho uthta h.

Kaal bhanu:- tum yaha tumhara sahas kese hua yaha aane ka kfd

Ji ha dosto wo shaks or koi ni kfd hi the .

Kfd:- ha kaalbhanu m yaha tum bhul rahe ho ki mahadev ne jo mujhe pad sompa h uske anusaar mujhe kahi bhi aane jane k liye kisi ki aagya ki avashyakta nahi h or tum jese paapi ki to bilkul bhi ni.

Kaalbhanu :- tum yaha aatogaye gaye ho kfd per yaha se vapas jaa ni paoge or
Or apne saniko or mantriyo ko aadesh dete hue

Kaalbhanu:- bandi bana lo ise or dal do karagrah me ise .

Sabhi senik kfd ki or dode unhe pakdne k liye but kfd bas apni jagah p khade muskura rahe the bas.

jese hi wo sab kfd k pass pahunche to kfd ne bas ek chutki hi bajayi itne me kaal bhanu ki sena jaha thi vahi ek adrishy pash (invisible rope) m bandh gaye .

Kfd :- kitne murkh ho tum kaalbhanu sab kuch jante hue bhi tumne ye murkhta poorn kadam uthaya.

Kaalbhanu:- (gusse se pagal hote hue) kyu aaye ho tum yaha.

Kfd:- to bas apna karya kerne aaya hu kaalbhanu tumne jo aaj ek nirdosh balak ki bali dilwaker jo paap karam kiya h aaj tumne apni papo ki sima lang li h tumhare paap ka ghada bharne wala h . Isliye tumhe antim chetavani dene aaya hu tumhe ki abhi bhi samay hMaarg per aajao ye adharm ka maarg tyag do verna tumhara bhi vahi hashra hoga jo rawan kans mahishasur aadi ka hua.


Kaal bhanu:- mujhe us vyakti se naitikata ka gyaan sikhne ki aavashyakata ni h kfd jisne janm lete hi apne pita k tez or pratishtha p grahan laga k unhe kalankit kiya.jisne apne guru ko bhi musibato m dala . . Ese vyakti k mukh se ye naitikta ki baate shobha ni deti .

Kfd shanti se uski ye baate sun rahe the kyunki kahi na kahi uski baato m aadha satya tha.lekin fir usne jo bola usse unka vinashakari krodh jagrit ho gaya

Kaal bhanu:- or kon karega mera aant wo sadharan sa balak karan haha haha use to m yu hi chutkiyo m masal dunga or uski vo bahan jyoti use to m apni ......aaaaaahhhh

Isse aage kaal bhanu kuch bol pata ki tabhi usper ek shakti prahar hua or vo kafir dur udker gira jo kfd ne kiya tha.

Kfd(jinki aankhe puri tarah se laal ho chuki thi krodh m ) :- bas kaalbhanu tumne apni sima langh di h us bachi k bare m apshabd bol ker jo meri putri samman h , aajtak mane mahadev k vardaan ka samman rakhte hue har baar tumhe shama kiya parantu Aaj ni. Aaj tumhara ant nishchit h.

Itna bol ker kfd ne apna ek hath hava me utha diya or ek bijli girne k sath unke hath m unka divya dand aagaya . Kfd k krodh k kaaran patal k sath tino lok dagmagane laga .Jise dekh kaalbhanu ki fat k hath m aagayi.

Vahi swarg me sabhi devta kfd ko krodh me dekh ker dar k maare bekunth pahuch gaye.

Or bhagwan Vishnu se prathna kerte hue devraaj bole

Devaraj:-trahi mam prbhu raksha kijiye kfd ko krodh ko shant kerne k liye shighra hi kuch kijiye anyatha
Mahadev k vardaan k bhang hone k sath sath ye srishti bhi nasht ho jayegi.

Devo ki prathna sun bhagwan vishnu apni aankhe band kerke kisi ka smaran kerte h or man hi man bolte h

Narayan:- he devi ab to keval aap hi kfd k krodh ko shant ker sakti h shighra ki kuch kijiye

Location :- patal lok

Kfd bas prahar kerne hi wale the ki unke kaano m ek ati madhur aawaj gunjati h

Awaaj :- putra !

Us awaj ko sun jese hi vo apni ankhe band kerke dekhte h vo bahut khush ho jate h or unke mukh se bas itna hi nikla.

Kfd(thoda shant hote hue) mata

Kfd ne ye shabd kuch is tarah bole the ki jese ek pyase ko amrit mil gaya ho unke mukh per vesi hi khushi or santosh tha.

Ab m us awaj ko abhi k liye mata hi likhunga.

Mata (pyaar se) :- ashchary ki baat h sabko sahi marg dikhane wala mera pyara putra aaj khud hi galat maarg per jaa raha tha , putra mahadev ko tum shri ganesh samaan hi priy ho or tum unhi k vardaan ko bhang kerne jaa rahe ho ni putra tum ese bilkul ni ho mera putra esa ni h , isliye putra apne krodh ko tyag do , isko iske karmo ka fal shighra hi milega , ye baat bhala tumse bhahater kon jaan sakta h putra. Shant ho jao mere bache shant ho jao.

Or fir mata pyar se kfd k mathe or galo ko chum leti h .jisse kfd puri tarah shant ho jate h.or fir waha se mata anterdhyan ho jati h.

Kfd(kaalbhanu se) :- tumne sudharne ka antim avsar bhi kho diya h kaalbhanu ab apne karmfal ko pane k liye sajj ho jao.shighra hi tumhara ant hoga.

Itna bol kfd vahe se anterdhyan ho gaye.

nice update ..karan aur uski team picnic ka programme bana rahi hai ..aur patal lok me kfd ne aakar kaalbhanu ko sabak sikhaya ..shayad gusse me jaan se hi maar dete kaalbhanu ko par mahadev ka vachan bhang na ho jaaye isliye mata ne kfd ko shant kiya ..
aur apne mata ki baat maanni hi padti hai ..

 

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Update no :- 22
College off hone k baad sabhi college k second floor p jate h practice hall m . jaha radha karan or jyoti ko dance sikha rahi thi . Karan or jyoti bhi kafi jaldi hi sikh rahe the . Or us dance form m achi pakad bana rahe the.jise dekh ker radha k sath sabhi heran bhi the or khush bhi.
Radha :- kya baat h di and bhaiya aap to bahut jaldi hi dance sikh rahe ho or vo bhi itni jaldi . Kahi esa to ni h na ki aapne mujhse jhut bola tha ki aap dono ko dance ni aata.
Jyoti:- ni choti humne bilkul sach kaha tha ki humko dance bilkul ni aata , pata ni kese m or bhai tere ek baar samjhane per hi us step ko asani se sikh jate h or us per achi pakad bhi bana lete h.
Karan :- ha gudiya sirf dance hi ni bachpan se hi chahe koi chij ho padhayi , sports etc hum har chij ko jald hi sikh jate h.

Karan or jyoti ki baat sun sabhi heran the bas ek ko chod ker uske chahre per ek muskan thi.
Phir 2 ghante practice k baad sab apne apne ghar ki or nikal jate h .Radha bhi apne ghar k liye nikal jati h.

Ghar pahunchkar wo apni activa park kerke hamesha ki tarah sabse pahale apni maa k pass kitchen ki taraf badhti h ,to dekhti h ki uski mummy kitchen m h hi ni . Or fir wo apni mummy k room m jati h . To dekhti h ki uski mummy kisi ki photo ko kabhi sine se laga ker or bar bar dekh ker ro rahi h. Unhone abhi tak radha ko bhi ni dekha .
apni mummy ko is halat me dekh ker uski bhi ankho m pani aagaye or wo ruansi awaaj m boli
Radha:- mummy !
Garima (radha ki mummy jese hi ye awaaj sun ker radha ko dekhti h to jaldi se vo photo chupa leti h)
Radha jaldi se bhag k apni mummy k gale lag gayi or boli.
Radha:- kya hua mummy aap kyu ro rahi thi or aapke hath m vo pic kiski thi.
Garima radha k ansu pyar se puchti h or usko gale se laga ker.
Garima:- are beta tum kyu rone lagi are beta mujhe to bas tumhare papa ki yaad aarahi thi bus isliye thodi emotional ho gayi thi. Tu ese royegi to unki aatma ko bahut dukh pahuchega beta tu to unki princess h na , kya tum chahati ho k tumhare papa ko koi taklif ho .
Radha :- ni mummy bilkul ni
Or vo chup ho jati h per wo itna to samjh hi gayi thi ki uski mummy usse jhut bol rahi h or kuch chupa rahi .Usne is baat ka baad m pata lagane ka man bana liya .
Garima:- (uska mind divert kerne k liye) wese meri princess kya mujhe ni batayegi ki aaj usne college m kya kiya.

Itna sun radha aaj jo jo hua uske baare m dab kuch bata deti h apni mummy ko. Ye radha ka roj ka schedule tha wo college se
Lotte hi sabse pahale apni mummy se din m jo kuch bhi hua wo sab baate share kerti thi.
Garima:- wese beta tere muh se tere karan bhaiya or jyoti di ki tarife sun sun k mera bhi unse milne ka man ker raha h, mujhe kab mila rahi ho apne friends se wese .
Radha :- bahut jald hi milvaungi mumma vese aapko ek baat to batana hi bhul gayi is sunday hum sab picnic jane wale h to m jau na mumma please.
Garima :- are meri gudiya mane kabhi tujhe kabhi mana kiya h jo ab karungi , jao or khub enjoy kerna.

Radha:- (khushi se uchhalte hue) thank u mummy you are so sweet .
Or ye bol ker wo garima k gal pe kiss kerke uchhalte hue apne room m chali jati h.
Radha ko khush dekh garima bhi bahut khush thi per uski muskaan m ek bhi kahi na kahi dukh ki chavi thi.
Vahi dusri or patal lok me.
Kfd k ek hi prahar se kaalbhanu ki halat kharab ho gayi thi mayasur jo danvo ka shilpi or vaidya h(jis prakar devtao k vishwakarma h usi prakar danvo k mayasur h)
Uska upchaar m lage hue the .
Tabhi vaha vp pragat hota h jiske mukh per krodh or chinta dono k bhav spasht dikhai de rahe the. Vp kaalbhanu se bola.
Vp:- murkh kya avashyakata thi sab kuch jante hue bhi us kfd se bhidne ki.ager aaj us chaliye vishnu ne kuch kiya na hota to tum abhi jivit na hote uske prahar ki shakti se is sansaar ka koi kavach tumhari raksha ni ker sakta tha. Ager tumhe kuch ho jata to socha h tumhare is pita ka kya hota uske us lakshay us ummid ka kya hota, jante ho kyu wo kfd itna tejasvi or balwan h or tum mahadev k vardan k bavjood bhi itne durbal uske aage kyunki vo josh k bajye dhiraj or bhudhi se kaam leta h usme shakti h to tez bhudhi bhi h or tum hamesha keval josh se kaam lete ho .Kitni baar kaha h tumse ki har jagah keval bal kam ni aata , kayi baar bhudhi or chal ka prayog bhi kerna padhta h.

Kaalbhanu(sharminda ho ker )
:- shama kijiyega pita ji aapka kahana uchit h ab jesa aap bolenge wesa hi hoga. Kahiye mere liye kya aagya h.
Vp:- ab tumhe kuch kerne ki avashyakata ni h mere bache hamari yojna abhi tak bilkul sahi jaa rahi h shighra hi humko safalta prapt hogi.
Itna bol ker dono baap bete hasne lagte h.
Vahi kfd vaha se gayab ho sidha baikhnth pahuch jate h
Or bhagwan vishnu ko pranam kiya or bole .
Kfd :- aaj jo bhi ghatit hua uske liye shama chahata hu prabhu or dhanyawad prabhu ki aapne sahi samay per mujhe shant ker diya. Anyatha mere hatho bahut bada anarth ho jata.
Narayan :- dhanyawad mujhe ni apni mata ko kijiye kfd , or jaha tak m aapko janta hu aapke aane ka prayojan keval itna hi ni ho sakta .
Kfd:- he lakshmi pati aap to antaryami h aapse bhala kya chupa h , aapko to gyaat hi h ki m yaha mata mahalakshmi se sahayta mangne aaya hu .
Narayan :- ab apni mata se sahayta chahiye to swayam hi bol dijiye aap kfd vese bhi aapki mata aapse kafi rusht h kyunki itne samay se na to aap unse milne aaye or na hi unse kisi bhi prakar se sampark kerke unse vartalap kiya.isiliye to vo is samay yaha upasthit ni h jese hi unhe aapke yaha ane ka pata chala vo to anter dhyan ho gayi.
Kfd :- ab to aap hi sahayta kijiye prabhu mata ko manane m.
Narayan (masti kerte hue):- hame to aap shama kijiye kfd hum aap mata putra k madhya m ni aana chahte kahi esa na ho ki hamari dharm patni hamse bhi rusht ho jaye.
Kfd(muh banate hue) :- thik h ab mata ko mane rusht kiya h to manana bhi mujhe hi padhega na .
Or itna bol kfd ne apni ankhe band ker hath jod ker stuti kerne lage
Kfd:-
ॐ महालक्ष्मी च विधमये
विष्णुपत्नी च धि महि
तनो हरिप्रिये प्रचोदयात।
Stuti purn hote hi vaha mata maha lakmi prakat hoti h.
Or sidha ja ker kfd ke pran pakad ker boli .

Lakshmi ji - kyu bache apne karyo m itne vyast ho gaye putra ki apni mata k pass aana to dur unse sampark kerne ka bhi samay ni mila .

Yu to kfd ko dard ka koi abhas na ho , lekin bhai kaan pakde bhi to mata lakshmi ne the to ek maa ki pakad se bhala koi kese bach sakta h.

Kfd:- aah mata bas kijiye pida ho rahi h (bhagwan vishnu ki taraf madad ki najar se dekhte hue) prabhu aap kuch boliye na mata ko

Bhagwan vishnu kuch bolne ko hote h to mata lakshmi unko ghur k dekhti h to vo bhi bolte bolte ruk jate h.ab bhaiya dharm patni k aage bhagwan ki bhi kaha chalti h

Mata lakshmi:- narayan se kya bol rahe ho mujhse baat kero na.

Kfd :- aah mata bhool ho gayi ab shama bhi ker do apne putra ko .Aage se esa ni hoga.

Lakshmi mata :- thik h antim baar avsar de rahi hu aage esa ni hona chahiye or haa aaye ho to bina bhojan kiye tumko yaha se jane ki anumati ni milegi .

Kfd :- mata m murkh thodi na hu jo sakshat annapoorna maa k hatho se bane bhojan ko aswikar karunga.

Isi tarah mata lakshmi ke se kuch samay tak yu hi bate chalti rahi fir mata lakshmi ne kfd ko apne hatho se bhojan karwaya or awsar dekh ker kfd ne bhi us karya k liye maa lakshmi se sahayta mang li ,jiske liye wo aaye the. Or mata lakshmi ne bhi khushi khushi kfd ki vinti swikar ker li .
Stay tuned
Note :- friend yaha m ek baat clear ker du ki ma lakshmi wo ni h jinhone kfd ka krodh shant kiya tha.

nice update ..karan aur jyoti jaldi dance sikh rahe hai par unko pehle dance karna nahi aata tha ,,par unhe aisa dekhkar kaun muskura raha tha ..
mv aur vp ne aisa kya plan banaya hai jisse wo itne khush hai .
radha ki maa garima kiska photo chhipa rahi thi radha se ..

kfd ne maata laxmi ki stuti karke unhe khush kar diya .