Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Update no:- 5
Saam 5:00 baje jyoti ki nind tut gayi abhitak karan uske chhatiyo per sar rakhe so raha tha koi dekhta to
yahi kahta ki indono sex kar rahe hai lekin asali baat indono ko abhi tak aisha bichar man utappan nahi
huya tha ye to puri tarah pak the..
Khair thodi karan ka chehra nihrane ke baad jyoti ne karan ke galo ko sahlate huye uske mathe per kiss kar di
mathe per kiss karte hi karan ki nind khul gayi usne bhi jyoti ke mathe per kiss kiya jyoti dhire-dhire karan ke
balo mei apni ungaliya fira rahi thi achanak karan ke ansu tapak pade jisper jyoti ki najar pad gayi
jyoti:- bhai apki ankho mei ansu kya mujhse koi galti ho gayi
karan:- tumse koi galti nahi huyi hai tera pyar dekh aaj mujhe maa ki koi chinta nahi hai tum bilkul maa ki
tarah mujhe apane sine se lagakar sulati ho.. Tum mere se badi bhi nahi ho hum dono to hai judwa ab to aisha lag raha hai ki tumse ek pal ki bhi judai bradast nahi hogi. Tum mujhe chhodkar kahi mat jana nahi
mai jee nahi pawunga
jyoti:- chal hat pagal mai bhala apne pran priye bhai ko chhodkar kyo jawungi or haa kan kholkar sunlo
aaj ke baad jeene-marne ki baat kiye to bahoot marungi ha dard kaisa hai
Karan:- dard bilkul thik hai
itna kahkar karan or jyoti dono niche utare karan ne ek bahoot hi aramdayak shirt pehan liya dono room se
behar nikal gaye jyoti ne nasta banane lagi raj wahi baitha raha nasta banaker frizde mei rakh di tabtak
raat ho gaya uske papa or sauteli maa ghar mei dakhil huye jo kahi se aarahe the abhi karan ke papa kuchh
bolate usase pahle hi karan bola nasta ban gaya hai frizde mei hai... Itna kahkar dono bhai-behan chhat per
chale gaye raat ho gayi thi chand nikala huya tha jyoti ne is samay ek salwar-kurta pehni huyi thi.. karan ne
jyoti ko pichhe se apane baho mei bhar liya uske kandhe par sar tikakar khada hogaya
Or dono bhai bahan vese ek dusre se pyaar bhari baate kerne lage or apni aage ki life k baare me discuss kerne lage. Vo is tarah ek dusre se chipak ke kadhe the koi dusra anjan unhe ese dekhta to sochta ki ye dono couples h , lekin un dono bhai bahan ka prem ek dam ganga ji jesa pavitra tha jisme koi vasna na thi tha to bas prem.vo dono ese hi aapas m baate ker rahe the ki tabhi koi chhat per aaya or karan or jyoti se jaise hi alag hua to unke samne unki sauteli maa thi
sauteli maa-bada dono bhai-behan mei pyar ho raha hai
jyoti ki wor ungali karte huye ''e karmjali yaha apne bhai se hi nain mataka kar
rahi hai
Karan:- jaban sambhal kar baat karo jo kahna mujhe kaho agar meri behan ko ek sabad boli to bhul jawunga
ki tu humari sauteli maa lagti ho
sauteli maa- achha bada pyar karte ho apni behan se lekin ek baat kan kholker sun lo is ghar mei rahna
hai to mera hukam manana padega nahi to is ghar mei tumhare liye koi jagah nahi hai
(itna bolkar inki dusri maa niche chali gayi)
Karan phir kuchh nahi bola wo janta tha ki agar kuchh or bola to baat bigad sakti thi jyoti jo puri baat
chupchup sun rahi thi wo daudkar apne bhai ke sine chilpak gayi karan thodi der baad jyoti ko apne se alag kiya or
dono chhat se niche utar kar kitchen mei chale gaye jyoti ne khana garam ki or dono apane room mei
aaker nasta finish kiye jyoti jaldi se kitchen mei saare bartano ko rakhkar apne room mei aayi raj bed per
baitha huya kuchh soch raha tha...... Jyoti ne ek nighty uthayi or bathroom mei guss gayi usne apne
saare kapde utadi yaha tak bra-panty bhi or kewal nighty pehankar behar nikali to karan ulta leta huya tha
uske sarir per kapde ke naam per ek underwear tha jyoti ne dawa uthai or mere pith pe lagane lagi dawa
lagane ke baad jyoti ne ek kapda se hanth ko saaf kiya or begal mei aaker pith ke bal let gayi karan ko
bahoot joro ki nind lag rahi to wo jyoti ke uper chadha or uske urojo per sar rakhke so gaya or Thodi hi der
mei nind ke aagos mei chala gaya..

nice update ..

 

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Update no:- 6
Jyoti karan ke balo mei hath firate firate bachpan ki yaado mei kho gayi........ Jab humari maa mari thi to
unka lash nahi mila tha papa kah rahe the wo or maa nadi kinare ghum rahe the ki car blance bigad gaya
or unki car nadi mei gir padi papa to kisi tarah bach gaye lekin maa ka koi pata nahi chala us hum dono
bhai-behan chhote the maa ke marne ke kuchh din hi baad papa ne dusri saadi kar li jo humko apna
dusman samjhati thi lekin
Hum dono bhai-behan ek dusre ka khayal rakhne laga bhai mujhse koi baat nahi chhupate the mai
bhi unse koi baat nahi chupati humare papa bhi humse koi matlab nahi rakhte the na jane maa ne kya
sikha-padha diya
khai hum dono dhire dhire bade hone lage mujhe wo din aaj bhi yad hai ek din sunday ke din hum dono
so rahe the ki ekaek mere pet mei derd suru ho gaya mujhe laga ki mere ander se pesav nikalne wala hai
mai toilet mei jaise hi pesaw karne baithi to mere choot se khoon nikal raha tha meri kachhi puri tarah
khun se bhigi huyi thi khoon dekhkar mere muh se ek jordar cheekh nikal gayi mere muh se nikala
bhai
Karan bhai so rahe the ki mere awaj sunte hi wo hadbada kar uthe or bathroom mei mere pass aagaye kya
hua jyoti
jyoti:- dekho na bhai mere choot se khoon nikal raha hai lagta pet bhi bahoot derd kar raha hai
bhai ne jab dekha ki meri kachhi khoon se bhigi huyi hai to wo kuchh sochate huye aare jyoti tujhe
kuchh nahi huya hai tu ab jawan ho rahi hai tujhko period suru huya hai phir bhai ne bedroom se
dusra kachhi utha ker laye ek bahoot hi mulayam kapda bhi laye
phir bhai niche jhuke ' or mere khoon se sani kachhi nikal diye mai choot pe charo khoon laga huya
tha bhai ne khoon se sanni kachhi se mere choot ko achhi tarah saf kar diye dusra kachhi pehankar
mere choot ke charo wor ek bahoot mulayam kapda jo liye the usko pad ki tarah laga diye jisase meri ye
kachhi bhi kharab na ho phir unhone ne hanth saaf kiya mujhe lekar badroom aagaye..
Jyoti:- bhai aap kaise jante hai ki ise period kahte hai
Karan :- aare bhul gayi humlog ab 10 class mei padhte hai ek din sair bata rahe the ki larkiyo ko ise umar
mei unke sarir se blood nikalta jise period kahte hai
jyoti:- habhai aap thik kah rahe ho
Karan:- ha or mai bar-bar nahi karne wala mere bharose nahi rahna jab toilet karna ho to toilet karke usi tarah
kapde ko set karke phir se pehan lena
jyoti:- mai to hurdam apse hi karwaungi ha ..
Is tarah humdono bhai-behan ek dusro ko madad krate huye bade ho gaye or aaj bhi koi aisha baat nahi
hai jo humdono ek dusre se chhupaye....... Jyoti bachap ki yado se wapas aa gayi wo janti thi ki karan ka
pran usme basta hai karan kabka so gaya tha jyoti bhi apne bhai ke balo mei apne ungaliya phirate huye kabka so
gayi......
Dusre din subah 6:00 baze jyoti ki nind khul gayi abhi tak karan uske uper hi so raha
tha.............................jyoti ne use bagal sulaya or bathroom mei fresh hone chali gayi bathroom se fresh
hone ek baad ek bahoot hi sunder salwar-smiz pehni or darpan ke samane khade hoker apni baal
sawrane lagi tabhi karan uth gaya to jyoti uske pass nahi hai to wo hadbada kar uth baitha tabhi karan ki nazar
jyoti pe padi jo darpan ke samne baith kar apane baal sawer rahi thi karan bed se utara or jyoti ke pass
jaker usko pichhe apane baho mei bhar liya or apne gal ko jyoti ke galo mei ragrate huye ''Good morning
jyoti''
jyoti:-good morning bhai
itna bolte hi karan ke galo per dhire se chum liya
Karan ne bhi jyoti ke galo ko dhire se chum liya
jyoti:- bhai chalo jawo jaldi se fresh hoker aawo tabtak mai nasta bana deti hu...........
Karan ne jyoti ke galo ko apne honto mei bhrate huye thoda jor se chush liya jaise aam chus raha ho fir
hasta huya waha se bathroom mei ghuss gaya. Jyoti thoda muskurate huye jaldi se taiyar huyi or kitchen
mei nasta banane chali gayi............
Karan jaldi se fresh huya or underwear or pant pehankar kitchen mei gaya or ek stool khichkar baith gaya
jyoti ne nasta banayi or apna or karan ke liye nasta nikalkar apne room mei chali aayi raj ne fridge se pani
ka bottol nikal liya
apane room ke ander dono ne nasta finish kiya
jyoti:- bhai ab kaisa apka ghaw hai
Karan:- to dekh na mai bhala kaise apne hi pith per dekh sakta hu
jyoti:- mai bhi kitna budhu hu
itana bolte hi jyoti mere pichhe aaker mere pith ke ghawo ko dekhne lagi ' bhai ghaw to lagbhag thik
ho gaya hai lagta hai kal tak thik ho jayega mai phir se dawa laga deti hu vo dono khade the jyoti ne halke hantho se dawa laga di or karan ne bhi ek shirt pehan liya pant to pehle se hi pe pehan liya tha.
Karan:- chalo jyoti aaj hum ghumne chalenge
jyoti:- lekin humari sauteli maa bahoot bolegi or jaane bhi nahi degi
Karan-tu cinta nakar jyoti mai huna mere rahte huye koi kuchh nahi karega
fir jyoti ne bike ki chabhi liya or room ko lock karke nikal gaye jyoti ne bike nikali or karan jyoti ke pichhe
ushse chipak baith gaya
jyoti:- bhai kaha chale
Karan:- kahi bhi lekin is ghar se dur kahi bhi le chalo
jyoti ne bike douda di or karan jyoti se chipak kar baith huya tha.
Karib 2 3 ghante vo pure shahr ghumte rahe . Or jab dono bhai bahan jab ghar lot rahe the to achanak se unhonne ek jagah jo dekha use dekh ker dono bhai bahan ki aakhe guse se lal go gayi.
(Ab karan or jyoti ne esa kya dekh liya ki dono bhai bahan ko itna gusa aagaya janne k liye sath bane rahiye)

nice update ..dono ek dusre ka poora khayal rakhte hai ..koi baat chhipate nahi ..ab aisa kya dekh liya dono ne ki unko gussa aa gaya ..

 

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Update no:- 7 ( Mega update)
Dono bhai bahan k gussa hone ka kaaran ye tha ki jab vo ghum fir ker lot rahe the to samne dekhte h ki 4 gunde ek 17 18 sal ki ladki ko ched rahe h or usse jabardasti kerne ki koshis .Jise dekh ker karan ko bahut gusa aajata h . Unme se jese hi ek gunda us ladki k chati ko chune ki koshis kerta h ki usko ek jordar laat padti h piche se or wo kuch dur jaa ke girta h jisse bakiyon ka dhyan bhi ladki se hat ker us taraf jata h to dekhte h ki unke sathi ko marne wala koi or ni ek 20 21 sal ka ladka jisse unhe bahut gussa aajata h.
( In gundo ka aage koi or roll ni h isliye inko g1 g2 g3 g4 likhunga) .

G1 ( gusse me):- kon h be sale tu jisne hamare dost ko marne ki himmat ki jaan pyari h to chup chap yaha se nikal le.bacha samjh k ek moka de raha hu.
Karan:- aakhiri moka to m tumko deta hu ladki ko chod k yaha se nikal jao mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
G2:- bhai logo ye kuch jyada hi uchal raha h sala lagta h isko dikhana hi padega ki humse bhidne ka anzaam kya hota h
G3:- ha bhai or jyoti ki or dekhte hue sale k sath kya mast maal h pahale is sale ki jamkar dhunayi kerte h or fir dono londiyo ko ek saaath......
G3 k apni baat puri kerne se pahale hi vatavaran me ek bhayanak chik gunj uthi jo usiki thi .
Hua yu ki jese hi g3 ne jyoti k baare m ulta sidha bola karan ne apna control kho diya or uki jibh kich ker muh se alag ker di or ek jordar laat uske sine pe de mari jis karan wo kuch dur gir ker dard k maare behosh ho gaya.
Karan:- (gusse k maare uski aankhe ek dam lal ho gayi thi jese sare sharir ka khun vahi aagaya ho or fir vo dahadta hua bol) bahut badi galti ker di tumne meri jaan meri jyoti k baare m bol ker haramzado mane bola tha n ki mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
Uski ye dahad sun ker ek baar baki bache gundo ki bhi ek baar fat gayi lekin fir g1 or g2 ne himmat ker ke apni jeb se chaku nikal kee karan ki taraf dode lekin isse pahale karan ko vo dono chu bhi paate karan ne hava m uchal k ek jordar flying kick dono k jabdo p maari jise vo dono agle hi second jamin pe dhul chate lage ,flying kick itni jordar thi ki dono k aage ke 4 dant shahid ho gaye . Karan itne me hi ni ruka wo dono ko baari bari se utha utha k dhone laga . Or dono k hath tod diye or jab karan undono ki hadiya todne m laga hua tha to usi time g4 (jise karan ne aate uske pichwade p laat mari thi ) ne moke ka fayda utha ker piche se jaa ker jyoti k sir p gun rakh di.lekin wo bhi bevkoof kaha janta tha ki apne hero ki bahan bhi kisi se kam kaha h. jese hi usne hi jyoti k sir p gun rakh k karan ko dhamkana chaha jyoti ne ek jordar kohni uske pet m maar di jiske kaaran wo dard k maare apne pet p apne dono hath rakh diye bas itna hi moka jyoti k liye kafi tha usne furti se piche ho ek jordar flying kick uske muh p bhi jad di jisse wo bhi dul chatne laga or jyoti ne uski dhunayi bhi shuru ker di .

( Jab tak ye dono bhai bahan gundo ki dhunayi ker rahe hai aayiye in dono k baare thoda or jan lete h ki inhone itni achi fight kerna kese sikhi. Actually baat ye h ki karan or jyoti ne apni pocket money se kuch pese bacha ker judo or karate or martial arts classes join ki thi, jiske baare m undono k alawa kisi ko malum ni tha . Pahale to jyoti ne iske liye mana ker diya or boli bhai m sikh ker kya karungi aap hi bas join ker lo lekin karan ne jor dete hue kaha aajkal self defense ki training har kisi k liye bahut jaruri h chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki. To vo bhi apne bhai ki baat man join ker li. Is tarah dono bhai bahan college k baad training m jaate or sham ko park m jaker practice kerte)
Un gundo ki ache se dhunayi kerne k baad karan or jyoti us ladki k pass pahunche jise vo gunde ched rahe the . Wo ladki bhi kafi himmat wali thi jo itna sab kuch hone k baad jyada dari ni
Karan(uske pass pahunch k ) tum thik to ho na kahi chot to ni lagi .
Ladki :- ji m bilkul thik hu aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne mujhe bachaya verna m kahi ki ni rahati bol bhaiya bol k rone lagi .
Jyoti ne use apne gale laga je sambhala .
Karan:- pagli bhaiya bhi bolti h or shukriya bhi bolti h bhala koi bhai apni bahan ki madad ker ke ahasan kerta h kya.
Ye sun ke vo ladki chup ho gayi
Fir jyoti boli
Jyoti :- are tumne apna naam to bataya hi ni kya naam h tumhara.
Vo ladki boli
Ladki :- mera nam radha h didi
Karan :- bahut hi pyara naam h, acha tumhara ghar kaha pe h aao hum tumhe chod denge
Radha:- are ni ni bhaiya iski jarurat ni h m khud chali jaungi .
Jyoti :- (thode se banawati guse me)are ese kese dil se ager hame apne bhai bahan manti ho to chupchap apni di ki baat mano or apna address batao
Thodi naa nukur k baad radha man jati h or 3no kisi tarah bike p adjust ho k radha k ghar ki taraf nikal jate h thodi dur jaaker radha ek bade se ghar , ni sorry use ghar kahana galat hoga ek bungalow k aage gadi rokne ko kahati h .
Bike se uter k radha bolti h
Radha :- aayiye na bhaiya ander chaliye maa bhi aap dono se mil ke bahut khush hogi.
Per wo dono kese n kese agli baar aane ka wada ker k apne no exchange kerte h or karan or jyoti apne ghar ki or nikal jate h . Unko ghar pahuchne m late ho jata h jis kaaran unki soteli ma unko khub khari khoti sunati h but vo chupchap apne kamre m ja ker apne kapde badal k so jaate h . Or dusri tarf radha bhi aaj jo kuch hua jaker apni maa ko bata deti h jisse sun pahale to uski maa kafi dar jati h but aage ki baat sun relax ho jati h or bolti h ki
Radha ki maa ka naam garima hai
Garima:- tujhe bola tha n ki teri activa kharab h to ek din ruk ja but tu ni mani or bus se hi chali gayi , tujhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota ye baat usne radha ko gale lagate hue boli tu to sab kuch janti h fir bhi esa kerti h.
Radha :- are mummy aap to ese hi pareshan ho rahi ho m bilkul thik hu na or vese bhi aaj college m admission ki last date thi ager aaj na jati to fir mushkil ho jati isi tarah maa beti m baate hoti rahi or vo dono bhi khana khake aram kerne apne apne kamre m chali gayi

Note:- Dosto bhale hi ye is story ka 7 update h but mera likha hua to first update hi h bhai kyunki abhi tak mane pahale likhe hue update m thode bahut changes kiye the . Lekin ye first update h jo pura mane likha h to please batana aap sab ko kesa laga or koi ager galti hui to bhi jarur batana .

nice aur majedar update ..maja aa gaya dono bhai behen ne milke gundo ki achchi dhulaai ki
dono ne karate bhi sikh rakhe hai ..
jyoti ke baare me bura kehne par karan ne gunde ki jibh hi alag kar di ..

 

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Update no:- 8
Sham ko karan ki ankh jaldi khul jati h to wo dekhta h ki uski jaan uski pyari bahan sote hue bilkul ek choti si bachi lag rahi h .Tabhi karan ko ek shararat sujhti h or wo kuch dhundne lagta h or jab vo chij mil jati h to apna kaam kerke wapas bed p let jata h or sone ki acting kerta h . karib 10 min baad jyoti ki bhi nind tutti h or woh adhkhuli ankho k sath washroom m jaati h apna mooh (face) dhone.or jese hi apne aapko mirror m dekhti h uski halki si chikh nikal jati h shock k kaaran . Or sath me dekhti h ki karan bathroom k darwaje pe kadha pet pakad ker jor jor se has raha h, to jyoti samjh jati h ki ye uske bhai ki hi karamat h, (darasal hua yu tha ki jab jyoti so rahi thi to karan ko ek sharat sujhi or usne soti hui jyoti k chahre p munche or funny design bana diye).
Jyoti :- bhai aaj to aap gaye , bolker karan ki or jhapti, karan bhi pahale se hi teyar tha or vo bhi bhagne laga fir shuru ho gayi dono bhai bhahn ki pyaar bhari nok jhok, karan ne pahale to jyoti ko khub dodaya fir khud janbhujh ker apni speed slow ker di jiski vajah se vo pakda gaya . Fir kya tha jyoti ne usko bed p dhakela or us k uper chad ker use jor jor se gudgudi kerne lagi
Karan:- haste hue , are bas ker gudiya sorry sorry
Jyoti:- aaj m aapko ni chodungi bhai bahut masti sujh rahi h na aapko , or fir se gudgudi kerne lagi
Or apne hero ka jab has has k bura hal ho gaya tab jaker jyoti ne karan ko choda or uske uper hi let gayi.
Jyoti:- kya bhai aap kabhi ni sudhroge .
Karan:- are pagli ab bhagwan ne itni pyari or itni achi bahan di h to uske sath masti ni karunga to or kiske sath karunga.
Or fir thoda emotional hote hue
Karan:- or vese bhi yahi to time h ye sab masti majak kerne ka fir tu jab shadi kerke apne sasural chali jayegi m to bilkul akela hi ho jaunga na .
Karan ki ye baat sun ker jyoti kuch jyada hi emotional hogayi or sisak sisak ke rone lagi or boli
Jyoti:- mujhe ni kerni koi shadi vadi m bhale hi jindagi bhar kuwari rah lungi but m aapke bina ni rah sakti or ager esa hua to apki bahan ji ni payegi bhaiya apke bina ji ni payegi.or karan ko kas k pakad liya
jese ki ager usne apne bhai ko choda to wo sach me usse dur h bhej dega.
Jyoti ki ankho m aasu dekhkar karan ka bhi dil dahal gaya ,vo chahe kitne bhi dukh or taklif bardasht ker sakta h but apni bahan apni gudiya ki ankho m aansu ki ek bund bardasht ni ker sakta , or sachai to ye thi ki bhale hi karn ne jyoti ki shadi ki baat ker di holekin vo bhi bina jyoti k rahane ki kalpana (imagination) tak ni ker sakta . Jyoti bhale hi uski judwa ho but hamesha usne usko judwa bahan k sath ek maa or ek badi bahan ki tarah pyaar diya or uska khayal rakha .
Karan ko aaj bhi vo din yaad h jab uske usdin subah se halka sa sir dird or bhukhar tha but usko is baat ka jyoti ko pata ni chalne diya , itni si baat k liye vo apni bahan ko pareshan ni kerna chahata tha but sham hote hote uski halat kharab ho gayi sham ko jese hi jyoti ne usko uthana chaha to dekha ki uska shari bhati k jesa garam ho gaya h, pahale to usne ye baat na batane k kaaran khub data lekin fir use medicine di or uski pani ki pati se sek kerne lagi, unke maa bap ko to koi parwah ni thi , unke pita or soteli maa to party m chali gaye enjoy kerne ye bolke ki wo raat ko late aayenge , yaha bechari jyoti akele hi apne bhai k ilaaj m lagi hui thi.jyoti karan ko sone k liye bolti h , lekin karan ni sota .
Jyoti:- bhai aapko aaram ki jarurat aap so jao .
Karan:- kya karu jyoti is bhukar k karan mujhe nind ni Aarahi tum esa kero mujhe sleeping pills de do
Jyoti ko tension hone lagi wo apne bhai ko sleeping pills ni dena chahati thi kyunki uske side effects bhi ho sakte h , wo soch hi rahi thi ki uske chahare pe ek muskan aajati h or wo karan k sir ko apni god m rakh k wo lori gane lagi h karan k baalo m ungaliyan ferte hue jo kabhi unki maa bachpan m gati thi thi undono ko sulane k liye.
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सो जा प्यारे राजदुलारे
मुखड़ा चूमे तेरी मैया
Or lori sunte hue karan kab so jata h use pata hi ni chalta or jyoti puri raat apne bhai ki patiya badalti rahati h or uska dhyan rakhti h or jab karan subah utthta h to wo bilkul sahi ho chuka hota h . Or dekhta h ki uska sir abhi bhi jyoti ki god m hi h ,or jyoti bethe bethe hi so rahi h.wo samjh jata h ki uski bahan ne puri raat jaag ke uska khayal rakha h jabse , jo karan k dil m jyoti k liye pyaar or ijjat thi vo dugni(2×), ni choguni (4×) ,ni kayi hajar guna or bad jati h .
Present :-
Karan:- apni purani yado se bahar aaker jyoti ko chup karata h or bolta h are pagli tu to rone lagi m to majak ker raha tha m to apni jaan se bhi pyari bahan ko apne se dur kerne ki kabhi ni soch sakta or haa age se ye marne ki baat ki to m tujhse kabhi baat ni karunga
Jyoti:- jo ab thoda normal ho gayi thi to esi baat kerte hi kyu ho jisse mujhe rona aaye bhai.
Jyoti ne ye baat itni masumiyat se boli thi ki karan ko uspe bahut pyaar aata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga leta h .
Or fir mahol ko halka kerne k liye majak me
Karan:- wese tere pe ye muche bahut suit ker rahi h kahe to inhe permanent banadu or bol k fir se hasne lagta h.
Or jyoti fir se "bhai aap" bol fir se usper tut padti h or pillows se uski pitayi shuru ker deti h ,dono bhai bahan isi tarah hasi majak kerte hue fresh ho ker khane ki teyari m lag jaate h. Or fir khana khaker or baki sab freze m rakh k chat(terrace) aaj pure din m jo jo hua wo discuss kerne lagte h.
Jyoti kuch soch rahi thi jise dekh ker karan puchta h
Karan:- kya hua gudiya kya soch rahi ho
Jyoti (apne khayalo se bahar aate hue) :- kuch khas ni bhai bas radha k bare me soch rahi thi kitni pyari bachi thi vo h na , na jane usko dekh ke esa kyu laga ki vo koi apni hi h koi anjaan ni .
Karan:- sahi kaha jyoti tune mujhe bhi esa hi mahasus hua jabki hum dono hi usse pahali baar mile.
Is tarah hi dono bhai bahan baate kerne lage or fir wapas sone chale gaye apne room m.
Thanks for support friends and please comments kerke jarur jarur bataiyega ki update kesi lagi aap sab ko taki mujhe bhi aage likhne m maza aaye
Stay tuned.

nice update ..dono bhai behen ki nok jhok mast thi ..
radha ke baare me sochkar aisa kyu laga inko ki wo koi apni hai .

 

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Update no:- 8
Sham ko karan ki ankh jaldi khul jati h to wo dekhta h ki uski jaan uski pyari bahan sote hue bilkul ek choti si bachi lag rahi h .Tabhi karan ko ek shararat sujhti h or wo kuch dhundne lagta h or jab vo chij mil jati h to apna kaam kerke wapas bed p let jata h or sone ki acting kerta h . karib 10 min baad jyoti ki bhi nind tutti h or woh adhkhuli ankho k sath washroom m jaati h apna mooh (face) dhone.or jese hi apne aapko mirror m dekhti h uski halki si chikh nikal jati h shock k kaaran . Or sath me dekhti h ki karan bathroom k darwaje pe kadha pet pakad ker jor jor se has raha h, to jyoti samjh jati h ki ye uske bhai ki hi karamat h, (darasal hua yu tha ki jab jyoti so rahi thi to karan ko ek sharat sujhi or usne soti hui jyoti k chahre p munche or funny design bana diye).
Jyoti :- bhai aaj to aap gaye , bolker karan ki or jhapti, karan bhi pahale se hi teyar tha or vo bhi bhagne laga fir shuru ho gayi dono bhai bhahn ki pyaar bhari nok jhok, karan ne pahale to jyoti ko khub dodaya fir khud janbhujh ker apni speed slow ker di jiski vajah se vo pakda gaya . Fir kya tha jyoti ne usko bed p dhakela or us k uper chad ker use jor jor se gudgudi kerne lagi
Karan:- haste hue , are bas ker gudiya sorry sorry
Jyoti:- aaj m aapko ni chodungi bhai bahut masti sujh rahi h na aapko , or fir se gudgudi kerne lagi
Or apne hero ka jab has has k bura hal ho gaya tab jaker jyoti ne karan ko choda or uske uper hi let gayi.
Jyoti:- kya bhai aap kabhi ni sudhroge .
Karan:- are pagli ab bhagwan ne itni pyari or itni achi bahan di h to uske sath masti ni karunga to or kiske sath karunga.
Or fir thoda emotional hote hue
Karan:- or vese bhi yahi to time h ye sab masti majak kerne ka fir tu jab shadi kerke apne sasural chali jayegi m to bilkul akela hi ho jaunga na .
Karan ki ye baat sun ker jyoti kuch jyada hi emotional hogayi or sisak sisak ke rone lagi or boli
Jyoti:- mujhe ni kerni koi shadi vadi m bhale hi jindagi bhar kuwari rah lungi but m aapke bina ni rah sakti or ager esa hua to apki bahan ji ni payegi bhaiya apke bina ji ni payegi.or karan ko kas k pakad liya
jese ki ager usne apne bhai ko choda to wo sach me usse dur h bhej dega.
Jyoti ki ankho m aasu dekhkar karan ka bhi dil dahal gaya ,vo chahe kitne bhi dukh or taklif bardasht ker sakta h but apni bahan apni gudiya ki ankho m aansu ki ek bund bardasht ni ker sakta , or sachai to ye thi ki bhale hi karn ne jyoti ki shadi ki baat ker di holekin vo bhi bina jyoti k rahane ki kalpana (imagination) tak ni ker sakta . Jyoti bhale hi uski judwa ho but hamesha usne usko judwa bahan k sath ek maa or ek badi bahan ki tarah pyaar diya or uska khayal rakha .
Karan ko aaj bhi vo din yaad h jab uske usdin subah se halka sa sir dird or bhukhar tha but usko is baat ka jyoti ko pata ni chalne diya , itni si baat k liye vo apni bahan ko pareshan ni kerna chahata tha but sham hote hote uski halat kharab ho gayi sham ko jese hi jyoti ne usko uthana chaha to dekha ki uska shari bhati k jesa garam ho gaya h, pahale to usne ye baat na batane k kaaran khub data lekin fir use medicine di or uski pani ki pati se sek kerne lagi, unke maa bap ko to koi parwah ni thi , unke pita or soteli maa to party m chali gaye enjoy kerne ye bolke ki wo raat ko late aayenge , yaha bechari jyoti akele hi apne bhai k ilaaj m lagi hui thi.jyoti karan ko sone k liye bolti h , lekin karan ni sota .
Jyoti:- bhai aapko aaram ki jarurat aap so jao .
Karan:- kya karu jyoti is bhukar k karan mujhe nind ni Aarahi tum esa kero mujhe sleeping pills de do
Jyoti ko tension hone lagi wo apne bhai ko sleeping pills ni dena chahati thi kyunki uske side effects bhi ho sakte h , wo soch hi rahi thi ki uske chahare pe ek muskan aajati h or wo karan k sir ko apni god m rakh k wo lori gane lagi h karan k baalo m ungaliyan ferte hue jo kabhi unki maa bachpan m gati thi thi undono ko sulane k liye.
Lori:-

नींद नगर का सपना बटोही
ढूंढे रे पलको की छैया
चंदा की चादर
तारे बिछोना
कोमल सी बदली की शैया
सो जा प्यारे राज दुलारे
लोरी सुनाये तेरी मैया
सो जा प्यारे राजदुलारे
लोरी सुनाये तेरी मैया

माता पे अपने करना भरोसा
न छोड़ेगी तेरी बैया
तुझमे ही में हु
मुझमे ही तू है
संग तेरे है तेरी मैया
सो जा पयारे राजदुलारे
मुखड़ा चूमे तेरी मैया
सो जा प्यारे राजदुलारे
मुखड़ा चूमे तेरी मैया
Or lori sunte hue karan kab so jata h use pata hi ni chalta or jyoti puri raat apne bhai ki patiya badalti rahati h or uska dhyan rakhti h or jab karan subah utthta h to wo bilkul sahi ho chuka hota h . Or dekhta h ki uska sir abhi bhi jyoti ki god m hi h ,or jyoti bethe bethe hi so rahi h.wo samjh jata h ki uski bahan ne puri raat jaag ke uska khayal rakha h jabse , jo karan k dil m jyoti k liye pyaar or ijjat thi vo dugni(2×), ni choguni (4×) ,ni kayi hajar guna or bad jati h .
Present :-
Karan:- apni purani yado se bahar aaker jyoti ko chup karata h or bolta h are pagli tu to rone lagi m to majak ker raha tha m to apni jaan se bhi pyari bahan ko apne se dur kerne ki kabhi ni soch sakta or haa age se ye marne ki baat ki to m tujhse kabhi baat ni karunga
Jyoti:- jo ab thoda normal ho gayi thi to esi baat kerte hi kyu ho jisse mujhe rona aaye bhai.
Jyoti ne ye baat itni masumiyat se boli thi ki karan ko uspe bahut pyaar aata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga leta h .
Or fir mahol ko halka kerne k liye majak me
Karan:- wese tere pe ye muche bahut suit ker rahi h kahe to inhe permanent banadu or bol k fir se hasne lagta h.
Or jyoti fir se "bhai aap" bol fir se usper tut padti h or pillows se uski pitayi shuru ker deti h ,dono bhai bahan isi tarah hasi majak kerte hue fresh ho ker khane ki teyari m lag jaate h. Or fir khana khaker or baki sab freze m rakh k chat(terrace) aaj pure din m jo jo hua wo discuss kerne lagte h.
Jyoti kuch soch rahi thi jise dekh ker karan puchta h
Karan:- kya hua gudiya kya soch rahi ho
Jyoti (apne khayalo se bahar aate hue) :- kuch khas ni bhai bas radha k bare me soch rahi thi kitni pyari bachi thi vo h na , na jane usko dekh ke esa kyu laga ki vo koi apni hi h koi anjaan ni .
Karan:- sahi kaha jyoti tune mujhe bhi esa hi mahasus hua jabki hum dono hi usse pahali baar mile.
Is tarah hi dono bhai bahan baate kerne lage or fir wapas sone chale gaye apne room m.
Thanks for support friends and please comments kerke jarur jarur bataiyega ki update kesi lagi aap sab ko taki mujhe bhi aage likhne m maza aaye
Stay tuned.

nice update ..dono bhai behen ki nok jhok mast thi ..
radha ke baare me sochkar aisa kyu laga inko ki wo koi apni hai .

 

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Update no:- 09
Agle din dono bhai bahan jaldi uth jate h aaj somvar ka din tha to dono bhai bahan mil ker mandir jane ki teyari kerte h
(Dono bhai bhahan modern hone k sath sath bahut dharmik bhi hai or bhagwan mahadev k bahut bade bhakt bhi hai or vo har somwar mandir jarur jate)
Karan:- jaldi ker gudiya mandir k liye late ho raha h or fir hame aaj se college bhi jana h.
Jyoti:- bas 5 min bhai ye puja ki thali to teyar ker lu .
Jyoti ne aaj pile color ka punjabi suit pahana hua tha jisme vo bahut sunder lag rahi thi .
Mandir unke ghar se jyada dur ni tha to dono bhai bahan pedal hi nikal pade .
Mandir pahunch ker vaha jaker dono bhai bahan shivling per dugdadbhishek or jalabhishek kerte h or dono hu bahut hi sunder tarike se bhagwan mahakal ki stuti kerte h
Jiski shuruat jyoti is prakaar kerti h
Jyoti:-
ॐ कर्पूरगौरं करुणावतारं
संसारसारं भुजगेंद्रहारम
सदावसन्तं हृदयारविन्दे
भवं भवानी सहितं नमामि
Fir karan ne mahakal ki stuti is prakar ki
Karan:-
आशुतोष सशाँक शेखर चन्द्र मौली चिदंबरा,
कोटि कोटि प्रणाम शम्भू कोटि नमन दिगम्बरा,

निर्विकार ओमकार अविनाशी तुम्ही देवाधि देव ,
जगत सर्जक प्रलय करता शिवम सत्यम सुंदरा ,

निरंकार स्वरूप कालेश्वर महा योगीश्वरा ,
दयानिधि दानिश्वर जय जटाधार अभयंकरा,

शूल पानी त्रिशूल धारी औगड़ी बाघम्बरी ,
जय महेश त्रिलोचनाय विश्वनाथ विशम्भरा,

नाथ नागेश्वर हरो हर पाप साप अभिशाप तम,
महादेव महान भोले सदा शिव शिव संकरा,

जगत पति अनुरकती भक्ति सदैव तेरे चरण हो,
क्षमा हो अपराध सब जय जयति जगदीश्वरा,

जनम जीवन जगत का संताप ताप मिटे सभी,
ओम नमः शिवाय मन जपता रहे पञ्चाक्षरा,
Dono ne itni surili aawaj m bhagwan chandrashekhar ki stuti ki mandir m aaye sabhi bhakt mantra mugdh ho gaye . Sabne dono bhai bahan ki khub tarif ki fir puja k baad dono bhai bahan mandir ki safayi kerne me lag gaye .
{Ye inka hamesha ka niyam tha har somwar ye dono bhai bahan subah jaldi mandir aate or puja kerke mandir k gharb grah ( jaha bhagwan ki murti sthapit hoti h) or pure mandir ko jhadu se saf kerte or fir ek garib ko jarur khana khilakar bhagwan mahakal ki sewa kerte} . Mandir ki safai kerke or gareeb ko khana khilake jese hi karan ne jyoti ko nikal ko kaha tabhi jyoti boli
Jyoti:- rukiye bhai dekhiye aaj mandir m koi sant aaye hue kitne tez h unke chahare pe chaliye unse jaaker aashirwad le lete h.
Karan:- ha tu sahi bol rahi h jyoti .
Or un sant k or badh jate h
Wo sant ek pipal k ped k niche bane chabutre pe bethe hue the Or mandir m aaye hue sabhi bhakt Unse ashirwad leker apni samsyao(problems) ka upaaye puch rahe the .Or vo sant bhi khushi khushi sabko upaye bata rahe the. Fir dono bhai bahan bhi vaha pahunch ker un rishi k charan sparsh kerte h or unhe pranaam kerte h.
Sant jese hi un dono bhai bahan ko dekhte h to unke man m pata ni kya baat aati h ki wo karan ko bolte h
Sant :- beta jara apna hath aage kero .
Karan bhi bina kisi sawal kiye apna hath aage ker deta h
Or jese hi sant karan ki hasthrekhaye dekhte h unke chahre p khushi or ashchary k bhaw aajate h. Fir vo jyoti ka bhi hath dekhte h

Karan:- kya hua rishiver sab kuch khushal mangal to h na . Meri bahan pe koi sankat to ni aane wala na.

Rishi jese hi kuch bolne ko hote h k unke kaan m awaj gunjati h or wo usi samay dhyan awastha m chale jate h or wo aawaj jinki thi unko jese hi dhayan m apne samne dekhte h to unki khushi ki koi sima ni rahati kyunki unke samne koi or ni saakshaat devadhidev bhagwan mahadev khade the.

rishi dhyan awastha m hi mahadev ko dandvat pranam kerte h or bolte h
Rishi:- mai dhanya ho gaya prabhu aaj itne yugo baad aapke darshan praapt hue. Or unki ankho se khushi ke ansu nikalne lage.
Mahadev:- uthiye rishi piplaad m aapse dur hi kab tha m to sadev apne bhakto k hriday m vaas kerta hu . Or is samay m ek prayojan se aapke pass aaya hu.
{Dosto ye vahi rishi pippalad h jinke pita maharishi dadhichi ne devtao ki raksha k liye apni asthiyon (bones)ka daan ker diya jo mahadev k hi vardan k kaaran vajra saman kathor ho gayi thi or unhi sathiyo se devraj indra ka maha shaktishali vajra bana , jisse unhone mahashakti shali vratrasur nam k rakshas ka vadh kiya tha. Rishi pippalad bhi apne pita k samman mahagayani or mahadev k param bhakt h or unhone bhi kayi baar devo ki sahayta ki h}
Rishi pippalad :- aagaya dijiye prabhu
Mahadev:- rishi pippalad abhi karan or jyoti ka unki jivan ki sachai or unke jivan ka lakshay janne ka uchit samay ni aaya h , isliye aap unhe abhi unke satya se avgat na karaye .
Or fir mahadev rishi pippalad ko kuch or baate bata ker anterdhayan ho jate h.
Or rishi piplad jese hi apne netra kholte h to karan fir ek baar apna prashn doharata h to rishi bolte h

Rishi pippalad :- nahi putra esa kuch bhi ni h , balki ab tumhare sare kasht shighra hi khatam hone wale h or tumhara shubh samya aane wala h. Lekin uske sath kayi parikhaye bhi aayengi lekin jab tak tum dono bhai bahan sath me ho koi bhi esi pariksha na hogi jise tum naa paar ker pao, isliye putra sada apni bahan ka khayal rakhna or use hamesha khush rakhna jese abhi tak rakhte aaye or same nirdesh(instructions) jyoti ko bhi diye or vapas dhayan awastha m chale gaye or karan or jyoti bhi apne ghar ko nikal liye kyunki unko bhi college k liye late ho raha tha.
Ab dekhte h esi kya sachai h karan or jyoti ki jise is samay k liye swayam mahadev ne rishi piplaad ko darshan de ker batane se roka . Or dekhte h aaj college m dono bhai bahan ka din kesa jata .
Janne k liye sath bane rahiye or please comments jarur kijiye
Stay tuned

nice update ..mandir me dono ne mahadev ki stuti mast ki dono mahadev ke bhakt hai ..
aur in dono ki wajah se rishi ko bhagwan shiv ne darshan bhi diye .
inke jivan me aage kya honewala hai jo bhagwan nahi chahte ki karan aur jyoti abhi jaan jaaye .

 

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Just Completed The First Part, Kehna Hoga Aapki Writing Kamaal ki he, Or Is Story Ki Jagah Logo Ke Dil Me He. Very Excited To Read The 2nd Part
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Update 10
Mandir se nikal ker karan or jyoti ghar pahuchte h ,or nashta ker college k liye nikal jate h .
Jab tak ye dono college pahunchte h tab tak aayiye dekhte h college m kya ho raha h.
Location :- st xaviors college.

Ek 18 sal ki ladki apni activa k sath sath college m enter kerti h ,or jese hi apni gadi parking m laga ker ground m pahuchti h to dekhti h ki har jagah seniors fresher's ki raging le rahe h . Vo pahale hi din koi jhamela ni chahti thi isliye wo side se nikalne ki koshis kerti h per uski kismat kharab thi ki college k sabse badnam or bigde hue group ki nazar us per pad jati jinme 5 ladke or 1 ladki thi.(m us group wali ladki 1 likhunga)
Ladki 1 :- e ladki bina apne seniors ko introduction diye kidher chali chal jaldi se idher aa.
Ladki unke paas chali jati h
Us group ka leader jiska naam kunal h wo bola.
Kunal:- Chalo apna introduction do
Ladki :- ji mera nam radha h or mane yaha bcom first year m admision liya h.
Ji ha dosto ye ladki or koi ni balki radha hi h jisko apne hero ne us din un gundo se bachaya tha.
Kunal:- ok chalo tumhara task ye h ki tum mere dost ko kiss kero abhi
Radha (gusse se ) ye kya badtamiji h m esa kuch ni kerne wali .
Amit(jisko kiss kerne k liye kunal ne radha ko bola tha) :- itna natak kya ker rahi h sali ,ek kiss k liye hi to bola konsa ek raat hum sab k sath sone ko....
Amit isse pahale apni baat puri kerta usse pahale hi radha ne gusse m apni pancho ungliyan uske galo per chaap di .
Kunal:- sali chinal teri ye himmat ki tune mere dost p hath uthaya aaj pure college k samne teri wo halat karunga ki tu kisi ko muh dikhane k layak ni rahegi.
Or jese hi uske sath jabardasti kerne k liye aage badha itne m ek jordaar mukka uske muh pe padha jisse uska pura jabda hil gaya .
Or radha jese hi us mukke marne wale ladke ko dekhti h to bahut khush ho jati h s, or bhaiya bol ker uske gale lag jati h , kyunki wo ladka or koi or ni apna hero karan hi tha. Ek baar to karan radha ko dekh ker shock ho jata h.
Short flashback.
Hua yu tha ki Karan or jyoti jese hi college pahunchte h to dekhte h ki h ki kunal or uska dost kisi ladki ko pareshan ker rahe h or uske sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis ker rahe h.(karan kunal k baare m ache se janta tha jo ki ek number ka ghatiya ladka or aayash kism ka ladka tha . apne baap k sahar k commissioner hone ka najayaj fayda uthata . Or apne hero se is ka 36 ka aakda tha kyunki apna hero padhayi or ya sports dono m no 1 tha . Jiske kaaran kunal karan se bahut chidta tha).karan ne abhi tak radha ka chahra ni dekha tha kyunki radha ki pith uski taraf thi . Or jese hi kunal ne jese hi radha ki taraf jabardasti k irade se badha karan ne furti se us tarf ja ker kunal k muh per ek jabardast mukka chipka diya .

Present
Karan jese hi dekhta h ki kunal jiske sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis ker raha tha vo or koi ni radha h to uska gussa or bad jaata h . Kyunki wo bhale hi uske liye anjaan ho abhi tak lekin pahali hi mulakat m najane kyu use or jyoti ko vo koi apni lagi, isliye dono bhai bahan ne use dil se apni bahan maan chuke the .
Kunal :- karan tu ! Teri ye mazzal ek anjaan ladki k liye mujh per hath uthaya .
Karan:- swal ye ni h ki ye ladki meri jan pahachan ki h ya ni swal ye uthta h ki , he hak kisne diya ki tu ek ladki ki ijjat k sath khilwad ker sakta h.
Kunal:- band ker apni bakwas ab bahut hua m abhi hi pata is college se saaf ker dunga. aaj tu yaha aya to apne pero p h lekin jayega 4 kndho per.
Kunal ka itna bolna hi tha ki k ek jordar laat uske sine p padhi laat itni jordar thi ki wo apni jagah se 5 ft dur jaker gira . Per is baar ye war apne hero ne ni balki uski jaan yani jyoti ne kiya . Wo bahut gusse m thi or uski ankhe ekdam laal ho chuki thi.
Jyoti:- kute teri himmat kese hui mere bhai meri jan k bare me yu bolne ki , tujhe m dikhati hu aaj ki ek ladki ki ijjat pe haat dalne ka kya hashr hota h. Or jyoti kunal per buri tarah tut padhi or usko utha utha ker marne lagi. Apne jabardast fighting skills k kaaran usne kunal ki halat bahut jald hi kharab kerdi. Tabhi amit hokey stick leke jyoti ko marne k liye uski taraf doda per jyoti uske liye pahale hi teyar tha or or iske pahale ki amit jyoti per hamla ker pata usse pahale hi jyoti ne amit ki tango k bich uske main point pe ek jabardast laat mari.jiske kaaran wo jamin pe let ke lage tadfne laga or uske hath se hokey stick chut gayi jise jyoti ne utha liya or kunal k baki sathi jo jyoti ki or badh rahe the, to usi hokey stick ke sath jyoti baki sab ladko pe tut padhi. Jyoti or un ladko ki itni jabardast ladayi dekh ker college k sabhi students or teachers jo is hungame ko dekhne waha ikatha ho gaye the dekh ker heran ho gaye the(karan ko chod ker) ki kese ek akeli ladki 5 hate kate ladko p bhari pad rahi h .Or ek herani ki baat or thi ki itna sab kuch hone k bavjood bhi karan kuch ni bola na hi jyoti ki madad k liye aage badha. Idher jyoti k ladte hue uske lambe kale baal pure khul ker bikhar gaye the or uski fight dekh ker esa pratit ho raha tha jese mata mahakali asuro ka sanghar ker rahi ho . Or jab karan ko laga ki bas ab bahut hua or uske hastakshep ka time aagaya h to wo pahale to jyoti ko rukne ko bolta h per jyoti rukne ka naam hi ni le rahi thi. Jab karan dekhta h ki jyoti ruk hi ni rahi to , karan bhag ker jata h jyoti k pass or jyoti ko apne sine se laga leta h. Jyoti bhi apne bhai k gale lagte hi dhire dhire shant ho gayi . Or karan fir sabhi college k ladko or male teacher ko bolta h .
Karan:- sharm aani chahiye aap logo ko aap sab k samne ye chand badmash ladke ek ladki ki ijjat lutne wale the or aap sab log tamasha dekh rahe the. Thu h esi napunsakta per .
Or phir sabhi ladkiyo or females ko bolta h
Karan:- or girls and teachers m aap sab ko ek hi baat bolna chahata hu ese ghatiya log isiliye aap ladies ki ijjat se khilwad kerne ki himmat ker pate h kyunki aap sab khud k liye awaz ni uthati or chup chap har zulm sahti ho. Or ese darinde tab tak ni sudher sakte tab tak aap khud apne liye ni ladogi .
Tabhi bhid m se ek ladki bolti h
Ladki:- lekin hum ladkiya bechari zulm sahane k kaaran ker bhi kya sakti h in takatwar darindo k aage.

Karan(thode josh k sath bolta h ki):-
Naari ager shanka tyag de to khud shanker (mahadev) ban jati h, jese bhut kal m maa parvati ne shanka tyag ker mahakali bani or asuro ka vinash kiya jese , aaj jyoti ne akele hi in darindo ko dhul chata di m , m chahata to khud bhi jyoti ki madad k liye insab se bhid sakta tha, but aap sab ko dikhane k liye . Ki nari shakti kya hoti h .
Fir karan jyoti ko apne se alag kerta h jo ab puri tarah shant ho chuki thi.

Karan abhi aage kuch bolta ki tabhi college k gate k samne police ki 5 gadiya aaker rukti h or unme se ek gadi me se commissioner yani kunal ka baap utarta h . Or jab apne bete ki halat dekhta h to guse m pagal ho jata h or jor se chilata h
Commissioner:- kisne ki mere bete ki ye halat
Hua darasal yu tha ki jab jyoti kunal or uske dosto ki dhunayi ker rahi thi to ladki 1(jo kunal k sath uske group m thi ) ne commissioner ko sari baat bata di thi.
Or fir ladki 1 commissioner k paas jaker sari baat details m bata deti h jisko sun vo gusse m aag babula ho ker jese apne sath aye inspector ko bolta h
Commissioner:- arrest ker lo in dono ko or lockup m in dono ki ache se kharidari honi chahiye.
Commissioner ka order man ker jese hi inspector karan or jyoti ki taraf badhte h ki achaanak ek gadiyo ka kafila college k gate per aaker rukta h or jese hi us gadi m se ek shaks utarta h jisko dekh ker commissioner ki bhi hawa tight ho jati h kyunki wo or koi khud home minister tha .
Or vo aaker sidha radha k pass jata h or usse puchta h
Home minister ( H.M) beti tum thik to hona kahi us badmash ne tere sath kuch kiya to ni .
Commissioner ki to buri tarah fat gayi thi or usko apne bete pe bhi gussa aaraha tha ki us sale ne usko kaha fasa diya .
Small flashback.
Jab ladki 1 ne commissioner ko phone kiya tha tab radha ne ladki 1 ko notice ker liya tha or usne bhi jaldi se H.M ko phone ker diya (jo ki uske swargiya (late) pita k bahut hi ache dost the) or unhe sari baat batadi .

Back to the present

Radha:-ha uncle mujh ko kuch ni hua . Or m aapke samne yu salamat ager khadi hu to sirf karan bhaiya or jyoti di ki badolat or ye commissioner unhi ko arrest ker raha , please uncle bhaiya or di ko bachaiye.
H.M :- tum chinta mat kero beti ab aage m sambhal lunga,
or commissioner ko datte hue H.M bolte h

H.M :- e commissioner teri ye himmat ek to tera beta us ladki k sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis kerta h jo mere liye meri khud beti se bhi badhkar h , or phir tu usiko bachane walo ko arrest kerta h .Lagta h tu commissioner banne layak ni raha ab tu .
Commissioner ki to pahale hi fati padi thi wo bolta h
Commissioner :- sorry sir mujhe ye ni pata tha ki ye bachi aapki rishtedar h verna m esi galti kabhi .

H.M :- meri rishtedar se tumhara kya matlab h ager ye meri rishtedar na hoti ya koi or ladki abhi situation m phasi hoti to tu kya apne bete ki is giri harkat ka sath deta , kya shahar k commissioner hone k naate teri koi zimmedari ni banti shahar k ladkiyo ki prati soch ager is bachi ki jagah teri apni beti hoti or koi or powerful aadmi ka beta esi harkat uske sath kerta to tujhe kesa lagta.
Commissioner ko sahi m apni galti ka pachtava hota h or wo apni galti k liye radha, karan or jyoti se or sabhi se mafi mangta h or kunal ko leker nikal jata h .
H.M (karan or jyoti se ) hath jodker :- tumhara bahut bahut shukriya bacho k tumne radha ki madad ki
Karan or jyoti ko ye acha ni lagta ki koi bada uske aage hath jode
Karan:- H.M k hatho ko pakdte hue are are uncle ye aap kya ker rahe h aap kya radha hamari kuch ni lagti , radha ne mujhe bhaiya bola h or ek bhai ka farz hi hota h apni bahan ki hamesha raksha kerna .
Jyoti:- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha uncle or ye please ap hath mat jodiye kyunke bado k hath hamesha aashirvad dete hue hi ache lagte h . Or dono bhai bari bari se per chu ker aashirwad lete h .
Or H.M bhi unke itne saral nature ko dekh ker bahut impress hota h . Or apna card dete hue bolta h
H.M :- beta ye apne paas rakho or jab bhi jarurat ho bejhijak ek call ker dena bas
Fir radha bolti
Radha:- uncle please aaj jo kuch bhi yaha hua uska pata mumma ko ni chalna chahiye.
Or H.M kuch bolta usse pahale hi radha ne use apni kasam dedi .
Fir kya tha H.M ko uski baat manni hi padhi or fir wo waha se nikal gaya.

Or fir karan or jyoti radha se ache se mile or kal milne ka bolker. Apne ghar ko nikal gaye. Or sath m radha bhi nikal gayi apne ghar ki or. College m itna sab kuch hone k baad principal ne bhi college ka aaj ke liye off ker diya

Note :- Sorry for delay dosto reason to aapko m bata hi chuka hu . To please bura mat maniyega and yuhi sath bane rahiyega
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nice aur zabardast update ..jyoti ne kunal aur uske saathiyo ki achchi dhulaai ki ..maja aa gaya ..

karan ne sab students ko sahi nasihat di ..
comissioner apne bete ki side lene aaya tha par minister ne aakar uski saari akad nikal di ..

 

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Update :- 11
Ghar pahunch ker dono bhai bahan bari bari se fresh hote h . Or fir jyoti bolti h
Jyoti:- bhai aap thodi der aaram kijiye aapka ghav abhi pure tarike se sahi ni hua h itna m lunch bana deti hu
Karan:- uski jarurat ni h jyoti tum rahane do , mane bahar se khana order ker diya h . Mujhse jyada tumhe jarurat h aaram ki
Jyoti:- are bhai bahar se mangane ki kya jarurat h m bana rahi hu na.aap esa kero ki order cancel ker do.
Lekin karan ni manta or jyoti ko lete lete hi uska ek hath pakad ker apni or khich leta h.jise jyoti ka balance bigad jata h or vo sidha karan k uper girti h or uske muh se ek halki si chikh nikal jati h but wo jaldi se khud ko normal ker ke karan k side m late jati h.
Per karan ne ye baat notice ker li thi
Karan:- kya hua gudiya tum chikhi kyu .
Jyoti:- kuch bhi to ni bhai m kaha chikhi.
But karan ni manta ,masla kya h usko kuch kuch samjh achunka tha or vo jaldi se jyoti ko bitha ker uska top or lower nikal deta h or ab jyoti k sharir per kapdo k nam per sirf bra or panty bachi thi .( jese ki aapko pichle updates m bataya tha ki dono bhai bahan shuru se ek dusre se hi apni koi baat chupate h na sharmate h yaha tak ek dusre k samne kapde bhi badal lete h. Isliye karan ka esa kerna in dono k liye normal baat thi. Lekin karan k man m kabhi bhi jyoti ko bina kapdo k dekh ker bhi kabhi koi galat feeling ni aayi.) or jese hi karan uske kapde utar ker dekhta h to uski ankho m ansuo ka selab aajata h ,kyunki dekhta h ki uski jan se bhi pyari bahan k gore or najuk badan pe kayi jagah chot k nishan the or sujan bhi aagayi thi.
Joki us fight doran jyoti ko aayi thi.
Karan:- nam ankho se kya jarurat thi unse akele bhidne ki dekh to sahi kitni chote aagayi h tujhe .
Jyoti:- are bhai mujhe kuch ni hua m bilkul thik hu , or thoda gusse m aaker m kese chup rah sakti bhai ,koi mujhe ek baar kuch bhi bol
De m fir bhi bardasht ker sakti hu, lekin koi aapke khilaf yaa aapke bare m kuch ulta sidha bole ye m hargiz bardasht ni ker sakti. Wo to aapne mujhe rok liya werna m unko jinda ni chodti.
Karan:- chup, badi aayi thik hu ki bachi ek to itni chote aayi h or uper se batati bhi ni.
Jyoti:mahol ko halka kerne majak me boli .
Jyoti:- bas isiliye aapko m ni bata rahi thi , kyunki aap choti choti baat p ladkiyo jese rone lagte ho mere golu bhaiya.
Karan:- kya kaha ye koi choti baat h ruk chipkali tujhe m batata hu .Or fir se dono bhai bahan ki pakdam pakdai shuru ho jati h.(bachpan m apna hero thoda golu molu tha tha to kabhi kabhi jyoti karan ko chedne k liye golu bhaiya bola kerti thi jisse vo chid jata tha or vo bhi jyoti ko chipkali bol ker chidata or ese hi dono bhai bahan me pyar bhari nok jhok chalti rahati). Fir jese hi karan jyoti ko pakadta h to uska hath galti se jyoti k chot wali jagah lag jata h . Jisse karan ko apni galti ka ahasas hota . Or fir jaldi se first aid box lata h . Fir vo jyoti ko apni god m bitha ker uski chot wali jagah per dawai lagata h or use medicine deta h , or fir jyoti k dono galo kiss ker deta h or pata ni kya sujhta h ki vo apni bahan k dono galo p kiss kerke uske hontho ko p bhi halki si kiss kerke unhe chum leta h.jisse jyoti gussa hone k bajay jyoti sharma jati or karan k sine m apna muh chipa leti h. Thodi der dono bhai bahan isi position m bethe aapas m baate ker rahe hote ki unka khana aajata h. Or fir jese hi jyoti apne kapde pahane lagti h to karan use rok deta h or bolta h
Karan:- rahane de choti abhi teri choto p mane abhi dava lagayi h use abhi khule m hi rahane de verna dawai sari mit jayegi or teri chote jaldi thik ni hogi.
Jyoti :- ok bhai jesa aap kaho.
Or fir karan khane ko plate m daal ker lata h or hamesha ki tarah dono bhai bahan ek sath ek hi plate m ek dusre k hatho se khana khate h . Or fir pure din kuch khas ni hota or raat ko karan jyoti ko apne upper sulata h taki uski choto per dard na ho pahale to jyoti mana kerti h or bolti h ki are are bhai aap kyu takleef kerte ho , lekin karan uski ek ni sunta or usko apne uper sula leta h or jyoti ko apne se chipka k khud bhi so jata h
Note - sorry for delay friends apko to pata hi h ki hamare ghar ek nanhi mahaman ayi jiski kharidari m m busy hu or isliye hi aaj ye ek chota update de paaraha hu , so please bura mat maniyega or ese hi sath bane rahiyega
Or ha comments kerke batana jarur aapko update kesa laga.
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nice update ..

 

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Update no:- 12
Location:- kailash parvat.
Kailash parvat jo ki is pure brahmand ka sabse pavitra sthan h, kyunki ye kayi mahan rishiyon ki tapobhoomi h, yahi se hoker pandavo ne swarg ko prasthan kiya tha. Or sabse mahatvapoorn kaaran ki ye devadhidev bhagwan aashutosh ka nivas sthan h . Isliye kalash ko moksh bhumi bhi kaha jata h.
Aaiye dekhte h ki yaha per kya ho raha h.
Aaj yaha mahadev or mata parvati k sath bhagwan narayan bhi upasthit h.
Mata parvati jo karan or jyoti ko hi dekh rahi thi or vo undono se bahut prabhavit thi .
Mata parvati mahadev se boli
Mata parvati :- adhbhut prem h na in dono ka swami na hi koi swarth na hi koi vasna , keval h to matra nishchal prem.indono ko dekh ker ese pratit hota h ki radha or shri krishna dobara dharti per avatarit ho gaye ho.
Mahadev :- tumne bilkul uchit kaha gori , ye prem hi in dono ki sabse badi shakti bhi h or inka sabse bada kavach bhi jo bhavishya me pure sansaar k liye ek mahan udharan sidh hoga.
Abhi mahadev or mata k bich ye baate ho hi rahi thi ki mata parvati ki najar bhagwan vishnu per padhti h jinke kamal saman vishal netro m ashu the.
Mata parvati :- kya baat h bhaiya narayan sansaar k palan haar ke netro m ye ashru kese aaj ( mata parvati ne bhgwan shiv ko pane k liye kathor tap ker rahi thi tab narayan hi unko bina tap se uthaye unko bhojan or jal ka sevan kerwa dete or unki raksha kerte her sankat se , unka ese khayal rakha narayan ne jese ek bhai apna bahan ka rakhta h isliye mata parvati narayan ko apna bhai hi manti h) .
Narayan:- ha bahan uma (mata parvati ka hi ek naam) sansaar ko prakash dene wale surya dev ko swayam jalna padta h, usi prakar jise bhavishya m pure brahmand ki raksha kerni h use hi vartmaan m sabse jyada kasht jhelna padta h.jesa is samy karan or jyoti k sath ho raha h .Parantu fir bhi in dono k prem per koi dushprabhav ni pad raha in sankato ka. Bas yahi sab dekh k bhavuk ho gaya hu.
Mahadev:- ha narayan in kasht or prikshao ki agni m hi jal ker to karan or jyoti ka vyaktitv lohe se kundan (gold) ban bhavishya me hamare or is pure sansar k samaksh upasthit hoga. Jo is sansaar ko karm ki mahatvata batayega.
Tabhi vaha devrishi narad prakat hote h . Or sabko pranam kerke bole
Narad ji:-narayan narayan , prabhu or kitna samay pratiksha kerni hogi is sansaar ko apne rakshak ki jo Us dusht...... K hathya charo se is sansaar ko mukti dilwayega. Aapse se vardan paker dusht..... Vo dusht ajey ho chuka h . Koi dev uska kuch ni bigad sakta or aap tridevo k baad jo us dusht se yudh kerne m saksham h unhone vidhi k vidhan m hastakshep kerna aswikar ker diya h prabhu. Us dusht ....... K hathayachar din pratidin badhte jaa rahe h jisse prathvi lok m paap badhta ja raha h.
Mahadev:- devrishi bij se vriksh dhire dhire banta h. Nyaya ki gati bhi dhimi hoti h dhiraj k sath . Is tarah hi dhire dhire rakshak m dhirajta ka gun aayega . Or vo dhirajta hi uski chetna ko sthirtha pradan karegi . Or usi dhirajta or sthirtha k sath rakshak is sansaar k sath hi rakshak bhavishya m is sansaar k sath uchit nyay ker payega isliye aap sabhi rakshak ko samay dijiye . sab kuch apne aap hi sahi hojayega prantu " Shanay shanay" .
Itna bol mahadev muskurate hue apni samadhi m chale jate h or narad ji bhi santusht ho ker vaha se prasthan ker lete h.

Chaliye ab wapas chalte h apne hero ki tarf

Apna hero aaj bhi jaldi uth jata h or fresh hone lagta h or thodi der baad jyoti bhi uth jati h or jese hi college jane k liye teyar hone lagti h to karan use rok deta h
Karan:- tu aaram ker choti aaj hum college ni jayenge vese bhi tujhe abhi aram ki jarurat h.
Jyoti:- per bhai aaj hamare project submit kerne ki aakhiri date h uska kya .
Fir karan kuch soch ker bolta h
Karan :- thik h gudiya tu aaram ker m chala jata hu college or or hum dono ka project submit ker dunga. But tu yaha sirf koi kam ni karegi sirf aaram karegi mane tere liye khana order ker diya h , tujhe banane ki koi jarurat ni or vese bhi hamare papa or soteli maa 3 din k liye bahar gaye hue h to tujhe chinta kerne ki jarurat ni h .
Jyoti bhi ache bache ki tarah apne bhai ki baat mante hue bolti h
Jyoti:- ok bhai
Fir karan jaldi se ready ho ker collegek liye nikal jata h.

Dekhte h ab aage college m aaj kya hota h karan k sath janne k liye sath bane rahiye
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nice update ..swayam mahadev ,mata parvati aur bhagwan vishnu taarif kar rahe hai karan aur jyoti ke prem ki naa unke prem me vaasna hai naa hi koi swaarth ..

ye dusht kaun hai jo paap faila raha hai ..

aaj karan akele ja raha hai college dekhte hai kya hota hai ..