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Naina :- chahe kuch bhi ho jaye veer , m apni maa ko apne sath leker apne ghar jarur jayungi, or esa kerne se mujhe koi ni rok sakta.

Preety :- per choti...

Preety abhi kuch aage bolti use pahale hi veer ne use rok diya or bola.

Veer :- koi baat ni naina jesa tumko sahi lage, tumhara ye dost humesha tumhare sath h.

Naina :- i know veer, aap dono hi to ho meri asli family, jo mujhe samjhte ho or humesha sath rahatw ho.

Ye bol naina veer or preety k gale lag jati h.

Or kuch der baate kernr k baad wo apne room m chali jati h, uske jane k baad hi preety veer ki baho m aate hue boli.

Preety :- akhir humari naina ko ho kya gaya h veer, kitna badal chuki h vo ab.

Veer ::- yahi to mujhe samjh ni aaraha preety, humari vo dost naina jo dhairya or saralta ki murti hua kerti thi, jiski samjhdari or shant swabhaav ne na keval humko ek kiya balki sath m hi kitno ka udhar ka kaaran vo bani, lekin ab vahi humari dost sab dhairya tyag ker galat raste p ja rahi h, bevajah apne hi parivaar apne hi bhai se shatruta ker rahi h.

Preety :- per sawal to ye bhi h verr ki karan bhai bhi to kuch ni ker rahe, or mujhe to ajtak samjh ni aaya k unhone samar ko mara kyu or ager unhone jesa bataya ki samar gaddar tha to vo kuch kerte kyu ni apni nirdoshta sabit kerne k liye.

Veer :- vo isliye veer kyunki naina ki jesi mansik sthiti h usme vo ya hum chahe kuch bhi ker le , lekin koi fayda ni, naina k samne uski life se jude sach ek sath aaye jinke liye vo teyar na thi, uper se vo hadsa jiske kaaran naina ko or bhi bada aghat laga, isliye karan janta h ki naina ki pareshaanio or uski galat fahmi ka ant ab nishchit samay ane p hi hoga, isliye hi to wo shant h or m bhi.

Preety :- to kya jaan hum kuch ni ker sakte.

Veer romantic mood k sath preeti ka mood sahi kerne k liye :- ker sakte h na jan(preety k kamar p hath leja apni or khechte hue) is pyaari si night pyaar bhara Romance.

Preety sharmate hue :- aji hato bhi, tum bhi....

Preety aage kuch bol pati isse pahale hi veer ne usse pahale hi apne hoth or preety k hotho p rakh diye or bade hi pyaar se unke hotho ka raspan kerne laga.

Pahale to preety achanak hue humle se chonki or alag hone ki kosis kerti h oer veer use esa kerne ni deta or agle hi pal preety per bhi suroor chadne laga or wo bhi veer ka satH dene lagi, or fir wo dono dub gaye prem k sagar m.


Aaiye is premi jode ko yahi chod ek najar un pe bhi dal lete h jo is ghar k mahaman h yani ki humare karan ka priy dost rohan p bhi.

Rohan or riya bhi sone ki teyari ker hi rahe the, rohan k chahre p bhi khushi or sukun tha jo riya ne kaafi dino baad uske chahre p dekha tha.

Rohan riya ko khud ko yu niharta hua pake muskurate hue bola.

Rohan :- kya baat h di aap ese mujhe kyu dekh rahi ho.

Riya :- dekh rahi hu apne betu ki us pyaare muskam bhari khushi ko, jo itne dino na jane kahi gum hi ho gayi thi.

Rohan riya ki god m sir rakhte hue :- khush kese n hou di, aaj itne salo baad humare pyaare dost karan or bahan jyoti k baad jivan m khushiyaan jo loti h, ab varsho baad jake unhe apna pura parivaar mila h, unki wo ronak jo itne salo baad unke chahro p loti h , uske aage to ye kuch bhi ni h.

Riya :- hmm vo to hogi hi na bhai, maa shabd sirf ek shabd ya sirf ek rishta hi ni h , maa to sakshat vo shakti h jiske bina is sansaar ka nirmaan tak sambhav ni, maa santaan ki sirf janmdatri hi ni hoti, wo uski guru, uski dost uski sab kuch hoti h, ese m itne salo k baad jab karan or jyoti asha masi se mile to esa hona swabhavik hi tha na.

Or ab karan or jyoti k dost hone k nate ye humara farz h ki hum apne dosto ki is khushi ko humesha barkrar rakhe, jise humhe bakhubi pura kerna hoga or dhayan rakhna hoga ki humare bhai bahan k parivaar p fir kabhi esi vipati na aaye.

Rohan :- esa hi hoga di mere rahate hue ab mere bhai mere dost karan or uske parivar p koi anch ni aayegi, ye vachan h ka...

Rohan bolte bolte ruk gaya, kyunki use apni galti ka ahasas ho gaya ki vo abhi apni hi pol kholne ja raha tha , anjane me.

Rohan baat badalte hue :- hmm di hum esa hi karenge per abhi mujhe nind aarahi h didu.

Riya :- betu kuch esi baat to ni jo tum mujhse chupa rahe ho.

Rohan :- haklate hue :- m ni to di bhala aapke betu nr aapse kabhi kuch chupaya h, ab sone do na di, bahut din ho gaye aapki baho m chain ki nind soye hue.

Riya pyaar se apni bahe felate hue :- Aaja na mera bacha .

Rohan bhi riya ki baho m simat k so jata h, or kuch hi der m hi wo gahari nind m chala jata h.

Riya kafi der to pyaar se rohan ko yu hi niharti rahi, or fir uske mathe ko chum leti h, tabhi wo dekhti h ki nind m hi rohan k chahre p pareshaani or dar ki rekhaye najar aarahi h jese vo koi bura sapna dekh raha ho.

Rohan nind m badbadate hue :- ni di m aapko kahi ni jane dunga, aap sirf meri ho, m aapke bina ni ji sakta, please mujhe chod k mat jao.

Ye badbadate hue wo riya k or bhi kaske gale laga leta h, riya pyaar se uske sir ko sahalate hue dhime se boli.

Riya :- shant ho jao mere betu, shant ho jao m yahi hu, aapki didu apko chod k kahi ni ja rahi.

Riya k pyaar bhare sparsh se rohan kuch shant hota h or firse uske chahre p ek muskan aajati h or firse wo chain se sojata h.

Riya man me :- m janti hu betu, tum mujhse Bahut pyaar kerte ho, sirf bhai bahan wala hi ni balki usse bhi bad ker ek premi ki tarah.

Or sach to ye h betu ki tumhari didu bhi tumhe vese hi pyaar kerne lagi h ya yu kaho usse bhi jyadda, isliye m tumhari is taklif ko samjh sakti hu mere bhai.

Per ager tumhae apni di ko pana h to bhai tumhe khud pahale apne pyaar ka izhaar kerna hi hoga meri jaan, kyumki tumhari di m itni himmat ni ki vo esa ker sake, khud aage bad ker is samaj k niyamo ko tod sake, isliye yadi hume ek hona h to tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga betu, tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga, isse pahale kahi der na ho jaye

Ye sab sochte hue riya ki ankho m ansu aagaye or per usne jald hi sambhal liya or fir ek baar rohan ka matha chum sone ko hui tabhi use na jane kya suchi usnr halke se rohan k hotho ko chum liya, or fir khud m hi sharmate hue rohan ki baho m bhar so gayi.

Wahi dusri or

Agli subah kaya apni aadat anusar jaldi uth gayi thi, exercise or apni fighting skills ki practice kerne k liye,jo vo kuch dino se ni ker payi thi, kyunki samraat k prahar ko sahane k baad uski tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi, jo ab jaker kuch sahi hui thi.

Sabse pahale to kaya humesha ki tarah puja path ker sabse pahale warmup k sath suryanamaskaar kerti h or uske baad vo talvaar baji ki practice kerti h , jisme to use koi pareshani ni hoti.

Lekin wo uski practice kerne m lag jati h, jiski vo bahut time se practice ker rahi thi, lekin usme wo abhi kachi thi, yani ki dhanurvidya m.

Usne same lage nishan p kayi baat nishana sadhne ka prayaas kiya, lekin har baar vo chunk jati.

Kaya khud se hi :- aakhir kyu, kyu m bar bar chunk jati hu, aakhir kaha chunk ho rahi h mujhse, lekin chahe kuch bhi ho jaye, m haar bilkul ni manungi.

Ye sochte hue Usne firse dhanush per baan sandhan ker fir se lakshya ki or use kendrit kiya or isse pahale wo tir chodti tabhi use apne dhanush pe apne hatho k sath ek or hath dikhayi diya or sath m hi apne kandhe p hi.

Jab kaya chonk ker apne bagal me dekhti h to uske chahre p ek muskan aajati h, kyunki wo hath karan ka hi tha.

Karan :- lagta h meri sakhi ko thodi help ki jarurat h.

Ye bol karan kaya k hath ko thamte hue samne ped ki or nishana lagata h or kaya ko apne hath ek dam sidha kerne ko bol uski vesa kerne m help bhi kerta h or sath m use apne pero ko sahi position k bare m bhi batata h or fir use tir chalane ko kahata h.

Or is baar jese hi kaya ne tir choda to is baar tir sidha satik nishane p laga, jise dekh kaya khushi se uchal padi.

Kaya khushi se karan k gale lag :- aapka bahut bahut shukriya sakha.

Iske sath hi wo khushi khushi m karan k gal p bhi chum leti, jisse karan ek baar sakpaka gaya or kaya ko jab apni josh josh m kiye apni harkat ka ahasas hua wo thoda sharmai bhi.


Karan kaya ko chedte hue :- kya baat h bhai, ager pahale pata hota ki apni sakhi ki help kerne p itni meethi Thanks milti h to m to m to esa roj hi kerte rahata😁.

Kaya sharmate hue :- kya aap bhi sakhaa...

Karan thoda gambhirta k sath :- kyaa kaha sakha......

Karan ka ye shabd sun bholi kaya ko laga ki karan kahi uske sakha bolne se naraj to ni ho gaya, kyunki ab unke samne unka asl rishta aachuka tha, jiske according karan uska bada bhai tha, bhale hi kuch hi dino ka gap ho, per tha to bada bhai hi.


Kaya ghabrati hui :- sorry mere kahane ka matlab tha thank you so much bhai.

Kaya ko yu ghabrata dekh karan ki hasi chut gayi or usne kaya ko khud se sata k pyaar se bola.

Karan :- are meri pyaari Or budu saheli tum bhala kabse mujhse ghabrane lagi, are pagli mat bhulo ki humara sabse pahala rishta to humara ye prem bhari mitrata ka h, meri pyaari sakhi ho tum, or tumhare mukh se jo sakha sunne m jo aand or jo prem ki anubhooti mujhe milti h or kisi me ni, isliye meri pyari sakhi tum humesha mujhe sakha kahake hi pukara kero, kerogi na esa sakhi.

Kaya khushi khusi :- ji sakha.

Fir karan or kaya jake chat p bane jhule p beth jate h or kaya apna sir karan k kandhe p rakh beth jati h

Kaya :- in dino m kitna sab kuch badal gaya na sakha, humari jindagi rishte nate sab kuch h na sakha.

Karan :- hmm, wo to h sakhi per na jane kyu mujhe esa lag raha h ki meri pyari dost is badlav se khush ni h, ager esa h to nisankoch kaho meri saheli ek bhai se ni to kamse kam apne dost se to tum apni parsshani kah hi sakti ho.

Kaya :- ni sakha aapse esa kisne kaha ki m khush ni hu apne jivan me aaye is parivartan se, apne jivan ss jude is pyaare satya se, balki ye to mere jivan ki sanse badi khushnasibi h ki mujhe mera vo parivaar mil gaya jinhe mane varsho pirv kho diya tha or sath m hi mujhe apni is bhul ka bhi ahasaas hua ki m aakaran hi apne janm dene wale mata pita se grihna ki or unhe kosne ka mahapaap bhi ker rahe thi, jisse aapne mujhe bachaya, or sabse bada sukh to mera aapse sambandh hone m hi h sakha, aapka aapki bahano k liye prem to tino loko m. Vikhyaat h, to aapki bahan hone ka sobhagya se m bhala kese dukhi ho sakti hu.

Karan :- sobhahya to mera h priya jo. Mujhe tumhare roop m itni pyaari or samjhdar sakhi mili, parantu tumhari aankhe to kuch or hi kah rahi h sakhi, sakhi tum bhale hi kuch bhi ker lo. Lekin apne sakha se ni sakhi, tumhari ankho m dukh saf saf dikh rahe h mujhe sakhi.

Kaya thodi udaas :- aapnr sahi kaha sakha dukhi to m hu, parantu isliye ni kyunki mujhe ye naye badlav pasand ni, balki m isliye dukhi hu, kyunki ek baar fir mujhe apne us parivaar se apne maa baba se bichadna hoga jinka itne sneh mujhe itne varsho baad praapt hua.


Karan :- bichadna hoga?

Kaya :- ha sakha dekhiye na in khushio k dino m pata hi na chala ki itne din kese gujar gaye , or humare wapas lotne ka din m keval ek hi din bacha, yani ki hume kal hume wapas rasatal lok lotna hoga.

Karan ye sunte hi soch m pad gaya wo to ye baat bhul hi gaya tha, pahale ki baat kuch or thi lekin ab kaya ko wapas rasatal ni lotne de sakta tha, kyunki ab kaya sirf usise ni balki uske pure parivaar se jud chuki thi, uske parivaar ka hissa thi wo.

Karan pyaar se samjhate hue :- sakhi tum udaas mat ho , tumje ab yaha se kahi jane ki jarurat ni h, abse tum mere sath, humare sath, apne parivaar k sath hi rahogi.

Kaya ye sun khush to hui lekin agle hi shan chintit hote hue :- parantu sakha ye kese sambhav hoga, aapne swayam mujhe rastal lok k senapati niyukt kiya tha, to m kese us kartvya se vimukh yaha rah sakti hu.

Aap ji me to sikhaya h na sakha humari sabse badi prathmikta humare kartvya k liye hi honi chahiye, fir bhi.

Karan kaya k dono hatho ko apne hatho m tham:- sakhi tumhe apne sakha p bharosa h na.

Kaya :- khud se bhi jyada..

Karan :- very good to tum bas ye hi bharosa banaye rakho kal m ek esa upaay karunga, jisse tumhara kartvya purnta p bhi koi anch ni aayegi or tumhe humse dur bhi ni jana padega.

Kaya khushi se :- kya sach sakha.

Karan muskurate hue gardan hilata h.

Kaya khushi s :- thank you so much sakha, aap duniya sabse ache mitra ho.

Karan :- to isi baat p ek pyari si jhappi ho jaye.

Kaya bina kuch bole khushi se karan ko kas k hug ker leti h.

Dono mitra jaha apne mitrvrat prem m vyast the, lekin wahi 2 ankhe or thi jinki ankho m unka ye mitravat prem dekha na ja raha tha, uski ankho m krodh or irsha k angare baras rahe the, parantu wo kon tha ya thi iska aage k updates m pata chalega aapko.

Tab tak k liye yu hi sath bane rahiye.

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Naina :- chahe kuch bhi ho jaye veer , m apni maa ko apne sath leker apne ghar jarur jayungi, or esa kerne se mujhe koi ni rok sakta.

Preety :- per choti...

Preety abhi kuch aage bolti use pahale hi veer ne use rok diya or bola.

Veer :- koi baat ni naina jesa tumko sahi lage, tumhara ye dost humesha tumhare sath h.

Naina :- i know veer, aap dono hi to ho meri asli family, jo mujhe samjhte ho or humesha sath rahatw ho.

Ye bol naina veer or preety k gale lag jati h.

Or kuch der baate kernr k baad wo apne room m chali jati h, uske jane k baad hi preety veer ki baho m aate hue boli.

Preety :- akhir humari naina ko ho kya gaya h veer, kitna badal chuki h vo ab.

Veer ::- yahi to mujhe samjh ni aaraha preety, humari vo dost naina jo dhairya or saralta ki murti hua kerti thi, jiski samjhdari or shant swabhaav ne na keval humko ek kiya balki sath m hi kitno ka udhar ka kaaran vo bani, lekin ab vahi humari dost sab dhairya tyag ker galat raste p ja rahi h, bevajah apne hi parivaar apne hi bhai se shatruta ker rahi h.

Preety :- per sawal to ye bhi h verr ki karan bhai bhi to kuch ni ker rahe, or mujhe to ajtak samjh ni aaya k unhone samar ko mara kyu or ager unhone jesa bataya ki samar gaddar tha to vo kuch kerte kyu ni apni nirdoshta sabit kerne k liye.

Veer :- vo isliye veer kyunki naina ki jesi mansik sthiti h usme vo ya hum chahe kuch bhi ker le , lekin koi fayda ni, naina k samne uski life se jude sach ek sath aaye jinke liye vo teyar na thi, uper se vo hadsa jiske kaaran naina ko or bhi bada aghat laga, isliye karan janta h ki naina ki pareshaanio or uski galat fahmi ka ant ab nishchit samay ane p hi hoga, isliye hi to wo shant h or m bhi.

Preety :- to kya jaan hum kuch ni ker sakte.

Veer romantic mood k sath preeti ka mood sahi kerne k liye :- ker sakte h na jan(preety k kamar p hath leja apni or khechte hue) is pyaari si night pyaar bhara Romance.

Preety sharmate hue :- aji hato bhi, tum bhi....

Preety aage kuch bol pati isse pahale hi veer ne usse pahale hi apne hoth or preety k hotho p rakh diye or bade hi pyaar se unke hotho ka raspan kerne laga.

Pahale to preety achanak hue humle se chonki or alag hone ki kosis kerti h oer veer use esa kerne ni deta or agle hi pal preety per bhi suroor chadne laga or wo bhi veer ka satH dene lagi, or fir wo dono dub gaye prem k sagar m.


Aaiye is premi jode ko yahi chod ek najar un pe bhi dal lete h jo is ghar k mahaman h yani ki humare karan ka priy dost rohan p bhi.

Rohan or riya bhi sone ki teyari ker hi rahe the, rohan k chahre p bhi khushi or sukun tha jo riya ne kaafi dino baad uske chahre p dekha tha.

Rohan riya ko khud ko yu niharta hua pake muskurate hue bola.

Rohan :- kya baat h di aap ese mujhe kyu dekh rahi ho.

Riya :- dekh rahi hu apne betu ki us pyaare muskam bhari khushi ko, jo itne dino na jane kahi gum hi ho gayi thi.

Rohan riya ki god m sir rakhte hue :- khush kese n hou di, aaj itne salo baad humare pyaare dost karan or bahan jyoti k baad jivan m khushiyaan jo loti h, ab varsho baad jake unhe apna pura parivaar mila h, unki wo ronak jo itne salo baad unke chahro p loti h , uske aage to ye kuch bhi ni h.

Riya :- hmm vo to hogi hi na bhai, maa shabd sirf ek shabd ya sirf ek rishta hi ni h , maa to sakshat vo shakti h jiske bina is sansaar ka nirmaan tak sambhav ni, maa santaan ki sirf janmdatri hi ni hoti, wo uski guru, uski dost uski sab kuch hoti h, ese m itne salo k baad jab karan or jyoti asha masi se mile to esa hona swabhavik hi tha na.

Or ab karan or jyoti k dost hone k nate ye humara farz h ki hum apne dosto ki is khushi ko humesha barkrar rakhe, jise humhe bakhubi pura kerna hoga or dhayan rakhna hoga ki humare bhai bahan k parivaar p fir kabhi esi vipati na aaye.

Rohan :- esa hi hoga di mere rahate hue ab mere bhai mere dost karan or uske parivar p koi anch ni aayegi, ye vachan h ka...

Rohan bolte bolte ruk gaya, kyunki use apni galti ka ahasas ho gaya ki vo abhi apni hi pol kholne ja raha tha , anjane me.

Rohan baat badalte hue :- hmm di hum esa hi karenge per abhi mujhe nind aarahi h didu.

Riya :- betu kuch esi baat to ni jo tum mujhse chupa rahe ho.

Rohan :- haklate hue :- m ni to di bhala aapke betu nr aapse kabhi kuch chupaya h, ab sone do na di, bahut din ho gaye aapki baho m chain ki nind soye hue.

Riya pyaar se apni bahe felate hue :- Aaja na mera bacha .

Rohan bhi riya ki baho m simat k so jata h, or kuch hi der m hi wo gahari nind m chala jata h.

Riya kafi der to pyaar se rohan ko yu hi niharti rahi, or fir uske mathe ko chum leti h, tabhi wo dekhti h ki nind m hi rohan k chahre p pareshaani or dar ki rekhaye najar aarahi h jese vo koi bura sapna dekh raha ho.

Rohan nind m badbadate hue :- ni di m aapko kahi ni jane dunga, aap sirf meri ho, m aapke bina ni ji sakta, please mujhe chod k mat jao.

Ye badbadate hue wo riya k or bhi kaske gale laga leta h, riya pyaar se uske sir ko sahalate hue dhime se boli.

Riya :- shant ho jao mere betu, shant ho jao m yahi hu, aapki didu apko chod k kahi ni ja rahi.

Riya k pyaar bhare sparsh se rohan kuch shant hota h or firse uske chahre p ek muskan aajati h or firse wo chain se sojata h.

Riya man me :- m janti hu betu, tum mujhse Bahut pyaar kerte ho, sirf bhai bahan wala hi ni balki usse bhi bad ker ek premi ki tarah.

Or sach to ye h betu ki tumhari didu bhi tumhe vese hi pyaar kerne lagi h ya yu kaho usse bhi jyadda, isliye m tumhari is taklif ko samjh sakti hu mere bhai.

Per ager tumhae apni di ko pana h to bhai tumhe khud pahale apne pyaar ka izhaar kerna hi hoga meri jaan, kyumki tumhari di m itni himmat ni ki vo esa ker sake, khud aage bad ker is samaj k niyamo ko tod sake, isliye yadi hume ek hona h to tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga betu, tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga, isse pahale kahi der na ho jaye

Ye sab sochte hue riya ki ankho m ansu aagaye or per usne jald hi sambhal liya or fir ek baar rohan ka matha chum sone ko hui tabhi use na jane kya suchi usnr halke se rohan k hotho ko chum liya, or fir khud m hi sharmate hue rohan ki baho m bhar so gayi.

Wahi dusri or

Agli subah kaya apni aadat anusar jaldi uth gayi thi, exercise or apni fighting skills ki practice kerne k liye,jo vo kuch dino se ni ker payi thi, kyunki samraat k prahar ko sahane k baad uski tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi, jo ab jaker kuch sahi hui thi.

Sabse pahale to kaya humesha ki tarah puja path ker sabse pahale warmup k sath suryanamaskaar kerti h or uske baad vo talvaar baji ki practice kerti h , jisme to use koi pareshani ni hoti.

Lekin wo uski practice kerne m lag jati h, jiski vo bahut time se practice ker rahi thi, lekin usme wo abhi kachi thi, yani ki dhanurvidya m.

Usne same lage nishan p kayi baat nishana sadhne ka prayaas kiya, lekin har baar vo chunk jati.

Kaya khud se hi :- aakhir kyu, kyu m bar bar chunk jati hu, aakhir kaha chunk ho rahi h mujhse, lekin chahe kuch bhi ho jaye, m haar bilkul ni manungi.

Ye sochte hue Usne firse dhanush per baan sandhan ker fir se lakshya ki or use kendrit kiya or isse pahale wo tir chodti tabhi use apne dhanush pe apne hatho k sath ek or hath dikhayi diya or sath m hi apne kandhe p hi.

Jab kaya chonk ker apne bagal me dekhti h to uske chahre p ek muskan aajati h, kyunki wo hath karan ka hi tha.

Karan :- lagta h meri sakhi ko thodi help ki jarurat h.

Ye bol karan kaya k hath ko thamte hue samne ped ki or nishana lagata h or kaya ko apne hath ek dam sidha kerne ko bol uski vesa kerne m help bhi kerta h or sath m use apne pero ko sahi position k bare m bhi batata h or fir use tir chalane ko kahata h.

Or is baar jese hi kaya ne tir choda to is baar tir sidha satik nishane p laga, jise dekh kaya khushi se uchal padi.

Kaya khushi se karan k gale lag :- aapka bahut bahut shukriya sakha.

Iske sath hi wo khushi khushi m karan k gal p bhi chum leti, jisse karan ek baar sakpaka gaya or kaya ko jab apni josh josh m kiye apni harkat ka ahasas hua wo thoda sharmai bhi.


Karan kaya ko chedte hue :- kya baat h bhai, ager pahale pata hota ki apni sakhi ki help kerne p itni meethi Thanks milti h to m to m to esa roj hi kerte rahata😁.

Kaya sharmate hue :- kya aap bhi sakhaa...

Karan thoda gambhirta k sath :- kyaa kaha sakha......

Karan ka ye shabd sun bholi kaya ko laga ki karan kahi uske sakha bolne se naraj to ni ho gaya, kyunki ab unke samne unka asl rishta aachuka tha, jiske according karan uska bada bhai tha, bhale hi kuch hi dino ka gap ho, per tha to bada bhai hi.


Kaya ghabrati hui :- sorry mere kahane ka matlab tha thank you so much bhai.

Kaya ko yu ghabrata dekh karan ki hasi chut gayi or usne kaya ko khud se sata k pyaar se bola.

Karan :- are meri pyaari Or budu saheli tum bhala kabse mujhse ghabrane lagi, are pagli mat bhulo ki humara sabse pahala rishta to humara ye prem bhari mitrata ka h, meri pyaari sakhi ho tum, or tumhare mukh se jo sakha sunne m jo aand or jo prem ki anubhooti mujhe milti h or kisi me ni, isliye meri pyari sakhi tum humesha mujhe sakha kahake hi pukara kero, kerogi na esa sakhi.

Kaya khushi khusi :- ji sakha.

Fir karan or kaya jake chat p bane jhule p beth jate h or kaya apna sir karan k kandhe p rakh beth jati h

Kaya :- in dino m kitna sab kuch badal gaya na sakha, humari jindagi rishte nate sab kuch h na sakha.

Karan :- hmm, wo to h sakhi per na jane kyu mujhe esa lag raha h ki meri pyari dost is badlav se khush ni h, ager esa h to nisankoch kaho meri saheli ek bhai se ni to kamse kam apne dost se to tum apni parsshani kah hi sakti ho.

Kaya :- ni sakha aapse esa kisne kaha ki m khush ni hu apne jivan me aaye is parivartan se, apne jivan ss jude is pyaare satya se, balki ye to mere jivan ki sanse badi khushnasibi h ki mujhe mera vo parivaar mil gaya jinhe mane varsho pirv kho diya tha or sath m hi mujhe apni is bhul ka bhi ahasaas hua ki m aakaran hi apne janm dene wale mata pita se grihna ki or unhe kosne ka mahapaap bhi ker rahe thi, jisse aapne mujhe bachaya, or sabse bada sukh to mera aapse sambandh hone m hi h sakha, aapka aapki bahano k liye prem to tino loko m. Vikhyaat h, to aapki bahan hone ka sobhagya se m bhala kese dukhi ho sakti hu.

Karan :- sobhahya to mera h priya jo. Mujhe tumhare roop m itni pyaari or samjhdar sakhi mili, parantu tumhari aankhe to kuch or hi kah rahi h sakhi, sakhi tum bhale hi kuch bhi ker lo. Lekin apne sakha se ni sakhi, tumhari ankho m dukh saf saf dikh rahe h mujhe sakhi.

Kaya thodi udaas :- aapnr sahi kaha sakha dukhi to m hu, parantu isliye ni kyunki mujhe ye naye badlav pasand ni, balki m isliye dukhi hu, kyunki ek baar fir mujhe apne us parivaar se apne maa baba se bichadna hoga jinka itne sneh mujhe itne varsho baad praapt hua.


Karan :- bichadna hoga?

Kaya :- ha sakha dekhiye na in khushio k dino m pata hi na chala ki itne din kese gujar gaye , or humare wapas lotne ka din m keval ek hi din bacha, yani ki hume kal hume wapas rasatal lok lotna hoga.

Karan ye sunte hi soch m pad gaya wo to ye baat bhul hi gaya tha, pahale ki baat kuch or thi lekin ab kaya ko wapas rasatal ni lotne de sakta tha, kyunki ab kaya sirf usise ni balki uske pure parivaar se jud chuki thi, uske parivaar ka hissa thi wo.

Karan pyaar se samjhate hue :- sakhi tum udaas mat ho , tumje ab yaha se kahi jane ki jarurat ni h, abse tum mere sath, humare sath, apne parivaar k sath hi rahogi.

Kaya ye sun khush to hui lekin agle hi shan chintit hote hue :- parantu sakha ye kese sambhav hoga, aapne swayam mujhe rastal lok k senapati niyukt kiya tha, to m kese us kartvya se vimukh yaha rah sakti hu.

Aap ji me to sikhaya h na sakha humari sabse badi prathmikta humare kartvya k liye hi honi chahiye, fir bhi.

Karan kaya k dono hatho ko apne hatho m tham:- sakhi tumhe apne sakha p bharosa h na.

Kaya :- khud se bhi jyada..

Karan :- very good to tum bas ye hi bharosa banaye rakho kal m ek esa upaay karunga, jisse tumhara kartvya purnta p bhi koi anch ni aayegi or tumhe humse dur bhi ni jana padega.

Kaya khushi se :- kya sach sakha.

Karan muskurate hue gardan hilata h.

Kaya khushi s :- thank you so much sakha, aap duniya sabse ache mitra ho.

Karan :- to isi baat p ek pyari si jhappi ho jaye.

Kaya bina kuch bole khushi se karan ko kas k hug ker leti h.

Dono mitra jaha apne mitrvrat prem m vyast the, lekin wahi 2 ankhe or thi jinki ankho m unka ye mitravat prem dekha na ja raha tha, uski ankho m krodh or irsha k angare baras rahe the, parantu wo kon tha ya thi iska aage k updates m pata chalega aapko.

Tab tak k liye yu hi sath bane rahiye.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Naina :- chahe kuch bhi ho jaye veer , m apni maa ko apne sath leker apne ghar jarur jayungi, or esa kerne se mujhe koi ni rok sakta.

Preety :- per choti...

Preety abhi kuch aage bolti use pahale hi veer ne use rok diya or bola.

Veer :- koi baat ni naina jesa tumko sahi lage, tumhara ye dost humesha tumhare sath h.

Naina :- i know veer, aap dono hi to ho meri asli family, jo mujhe samjhte ho or humesha sath rahatw ho.

Ye bol naina veer or preety k gale lag jati h.

Or kuch der baate kernr k baad wo apne room m chali jati h, uske jane k baad hi preety veer ki baho m aate hue boli.

Preety :- akhir humari naina ko ho kya gaya h veer, kitna badal chuki h vo ab.

Veer ::- yahi to mujhe samjh ni aaraha preety, humari vo dost naina jo dhairya or saralta ki murti hua kerti thi, jiski samjhdari or shant swabhaav ne na keval humko ek kiya balki sath m hi kitno ka udhar ka kaaran vo bani, lekin ab vahi humari dost sab dhairya tyag ker galat raste p ja rahi h, bevajah apne hi parivaar apne hi bhai se shatruta ker rahi h.

Preety :- per sawal to ye bhi h verr ki karan bhai bhi to kuch ni ker rahe, or mujhe to ajtak samjh ni aaya k unhone samar ko mara kyu or ager unhone jesa bataya ki samar gaddar tha to vo kuch kerte kyu ni apni nirdoshta sabit kerne k liye.

Veer :- vo isliye veer kyunki naina ki jesi mansik sthiti h usme vo ya hum chahe kuch bhi ker le , lekin koi fayda ni, naina k samne uski life se jude sach ek sath aaye jinke liye vo teyar na thi, uper se vo hadsa jiske kaaran naina ko or bhi bada aghat laga, isliye karan janta h ki naina ki pareshaanio or uski galat fahmi ka ant ab nishchit samay ane p hi hoga, isliye hi to wo shant h or m bhi.

Preety :- to kya jaan hum kuch ni ker sakte.

Veer romantic mood k sath preeti ka mood sahi kerne k liye :- ker sakte h na jan(preety k kamar p hath leja apni or khechte hue) is pyaari si night pyaar bhara Romance.

Preety sharmate hue :- aji hato bhi, tum bhi....

Preety aage kuch bol pati isse pahale hi veer ne usse pahale hi apne hoth or preety k hotho p rakh diye or bade hi pyaar se unke hotho ka raspan kerne laga.

Pahale to preety achanak hue humle se chonki or alag hone ki kosis kerti h oer veer use esa kerne ni deta or agle hi pal preety per bhi suroor chadne laga or wo bhi veer ka satH dene lagi, or fir wo dono dub gaye prem k sagar m.


Aaiye is premi jode ko yahi chod ek najar un pe bhi dal lete h jo is ghar k mahaman h yani ki humare karan ka priy dost rohan p bhi.

Rohan or riya bhi sone ki teyari ker hi rahe the, rohan k chahre p bhi khushi or sukun tha jo riya ne kaafi dino baad uske chahre p dekha tha.

Rohan riya ko khud ko yu niharta hua pake muskurate hue bola.

Rohan :- kya baat h di aap ese mujhe kyu dekh rahi ho.

Riya :- dekh rahi hu apne betu ki us pyaare muskam bhari khushi ko, jo itne dino na jane kahi gum hi ho gayi thi.

Rohan riya ki god m sir rakhte hue :- khush kese n hou di, aaj itne salo baad humare pyaare dost karan or bahan jyoti k baad jivan m khushiyaan jo loti h, ab varsho baad jake unhe apna pura parivaar mila h, unki wo ronak jo itne salo baad unke chahro p loti h , uske aage to ye kuch bhi ni h.

Riya :- hmm vo to hogi hi na bhai, maa shabd sirf ek shabd ya sirf ek rishta hi ni h , maa to sakshat vo shakti h jiske bina is sansaar ka nirmaan tak sambhav ni, maa santaan ki sirf janmdatri hi ni hoti, wo uski guru, uski dost uski sab kuch hoti h, ese m itne salo k baad jab karan or jyoti asha masi se mile to esa hona swabhavik hi tha na.

Or ab karan or jyoti k dost hone k nate ye humara farz h ki hum apne dosto ki is khushi ko humesha barkrar rakhe, jise humhe bakhubi pura kerna hoga or dhayan rakhna hoga ki humare bhai bahan k parivaar p fir kabhi esi vipati na aaye.

Rohan :- esa hi hoga di mere rahate hue ab mere bhai mere dost karan or uske parivar p koi anch ni aayegi, ye vachan h ka...

Rohan bolte bolte ruk gaya, kyunki use apni galti ka ahasas ho gaya ki vo abhi apni hi pol kholne ja raha tha , anjane me.

Rohan baat badalte hue :- hmm di hum esa hi karenge per abhi mujhe nind aarahi h didu.

Riya :- betu kuch esi baat to ni jo tum mujhse chupa rahe ho.

Rohan :- haklate hue :- m ni to di bhala aapke betu nr aapse kabhi kuch chupaya h, ab sone do na di, bahut din ho gaye aapki baho m chain ki nind soye hue.

Riya pyaar se apni bahe felate hue :- Aaja na mera bacha .

Rohan bhi riya ki baho m simat k so jata h, or kuch hi der m hi wo gahari nind m chala jata h.

Riya kafi der to pyaar se rohan ko yu hi niharti rahi, or fir uske mathe ko chum leti h, tabhi wo dekhti h ki nind m hi rohan k chahre p pareshaani or dar ki rekhaye najar aarahi h jese vo koi bura sapna dekh raha ho.

Rohan nind m badbadate hue :- ni di m aapko kahi ni jane dunga, aap sirf meri ho, m aapke bina ni ji sakta, please mujhe chod k mat jao.

Ye badbadate hue wo riya k or bhi kaske gale laga leta h, riya pyaar se uske sir ko sahalate hue dhime se boli.

Riya :- shant ho jao mere betu, shant ho jao m yahi hu, aapki didu apko chod k kahi ni ja rahi.

Riya k pyaar bhare sparsh se rohan kuch shant hota h or firse uske chahre p ek muskan aajati h or firse wo chain se sojata h.

Riya man me :- m janti hu betu, tum mujhse Bahut pyaar kerte ho, sirf bhai bahan wala hi ni balki usse bhi bad ker ek premi ki tarah.

Or sach to ye h betu ki tumhari didu bhi tumhe vese hi pyaar kerne lagi h ya yu kaho usse bhi jyadda, isliye m tumhari is taklif ko samjh sakti hu mere bhai.

Per ager tumhae apni di ko pana h to bhai tumhe khud pahale apne pyaar ka izhaar kerna hi hoga meri jaan, kyumki tumhari di m itni himmat ni ki vo esa ker sake, khud aage bad ker is samaj k niyamo ko tod sake, isliye yadi hume ek hona h to tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga betu, tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga, isse pahale kahi der na ho jaye

Ye sab sochte hue riya ki ankho m ansu aagaye or per usne jald hi sambhal liya or fir ek baar rohan ka matha chum sone ko hui tabhi use na jane kya suchi usnr halke se rohan k hotho ko chum liya, or fir khud m hi sharmate hue rohan ki baho m bhar so gayi.

Wahi dusri or

Agli subah kaya apni aadat anusar jaldi uth gayi thi, exercise or apni fighting skills ki practice kerne k liye,jo vo kuch dino se ni ker payi thi, kyunki samraat k prahar ko sahane k baad uski tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi, jo ab jaker kuch sahi hui thi.

Sabse pahale to kaya humesha ki tarah puja path ker sabse pahale warmup k sath suryanamaskaar kerti h or uske baad vo talvaar baji ki practice kerti h , jisme to use koi pareshani ni hoti.

Lekin wo uski practice kerne m lag jati h, jiski vo bahut time se practice ker rahi thi, lekin usme wo abhi kachi thi, yani ki dhanurvidya m.

Usne same lage nishan p kayi baat nishana sadhne ka prayaas kiya, lekin har baar vo chunk jati.

Kaya khud se hi :- aakhir kyu, kyu m bar bar chunk jati hu, aakhir kaha chunk ho rahi h mujhse, lekin chahe kuch bhi ho jaye, m haar bilkul ni manungi.

Ye sochte hue Usne firse dhanush per baan sandhan ker fir se lakshya ki or use kendrit kiya or isse pahale wo tir chodti tabhi use apne dhanush pe apne hatho k sath ek or hath dikhayi diya or sath m hi apne kandhe p hi.

Jab kaya chonk ker apne bagal me dekhti h to uske chahre p ek muskan aajati h, kyunki wo hath karan ka hi tha.

Karan :- lagta h meri sakhi ko thodi help ki jarurat h.

Ye bol karan kaya k hath ko thamte hue samne ped ki or nishana lagata h or kaya ko apne hath ek dam sidha kerne ko bol uski vesa kerne m help bhi kerta h or sath m use apne pero ko sahi position k bare m bhi batata h or fir use tir chalane ko kahata h.

Or is baar jese hi kaya ne tir choda to is baar tir sidha satik nishane p laga, jise dekh kaya khushi se uchal padi.

Kaya khushi se karan k gale lag :- aapka bahut bahut shukriya sakha.

Iske sath hi wo khushi khushi m karan k gal p bhi chum leti, jisse karan ek baar sakpaka gaya or kaya ko jab apni josh josh m kiye apni harkat ka ahasas hua wo thoda sharmai bhi.


Karan kaya ko chedte hue :- kya baat h bhai, ager pahale pata hota ki apni sakhi ki help kerne p itni meethi Thanks milti h to m to m to esa roj hi kerte rahata😁.

Kaya sharmate hue :- kya aap bhi sakhaa...

Karan thoda gambhirta k sath :- kyaa kaha sakha......

Karan ka ye shabd sun bholi kaya ko laga ki karan kahi uske sakha bolne se naraj to ni ho gaya, kyunki ab unke samne unka asl rishta aachuka tha, jiske according karan uska bada bhai tha, bhale hi kuch hi dino ka gap ho, per tha to bada bhai hi.


Kaya ghabrati hui :- sorry mere kahane ka matlab tha thank you so much bhai.

Kaya ko yu ghabrata dekh karan ki hasi chut gayi or usne kaya ko khud se sata k pyaar se bola.

Karan :- are meri pyaari Or budu saheli tum bhala kabse mujhse ghabrane lagi, are pagli mat bhulo ki humara sabse pahala rishta to humara ye prem bhari mitrata ka h, meri pyaari sakhi ho tum, or tumhare mukh se jo sakha sunne m jo aand or jo prem ki anubhooti mujhe milti h or kisi me ni, isliye meri pyari sakhi tum humesha mujhe sakha kahake hi pukara kero, kerogi na esa sakhi.

Kaya khushi khusi :- ji sakha.

Fir karan or kaya jake chat p bane jhule p beth jate h or kaya apna sir karan k kandhe p rakh beth jati h

Kaya :- in dino m kitna sab kuch badal gaya na sakha, humari jindagi rishte nate sab kuch h na sakha.

Karan :- hmm, wo to h sakhi per na jane kyu mujhe esa lag raha h ki meri pyari dost is badlav se khush ni h, ager esa h to nisankoch kaho meri saheli ek bhai se ni to kamse kam apne dost se to tum apni parsshani kah hi sakti ho.

Kaya :- ni sakha aapse esa kisne kaha ki m khush ni hu apne jivan me aaye is parivartan se, apne jivan ss jude is pyaare satya se, balki ye to mere jivan ki sanse badi khushnasibi h ki mujhe mera vo parivaar mil gaya jinhe mane varsho pirv kho diya tha or sath m hi mujhe apni is bhul ka bhi ahasaas hua ki m aakaran hi apne janm dene wale mata pita se grihna ki or unhe kosne ka mahapaap bhi ker rahe thi, jisse aapne mujhe bachaya, or sabse bada sukh to mera aapse sambandh hone m hi h sakha, aapka aapki bahano k liye prem to tino loko m. Vikhyaat h, to aapki bahan hone ka sobhagya se m bhala kese dukhi ho sakti hu.

Karan :- sobhahya to mera h priya jo. Mujhe tumhare roop m itni pyaari or samjhdar sakhi mili, parantu tumhari aankhe to kuch or hi kah rahi h sakhi, sakhi tum bhale hi kuch bhi ker lo. Lekin apne sakha se ni sakhi, tumhari ankho m dukh saf saf dikh rahe h mujhe sakhi.

Kaya thodi udaas :- aapnr sahi kaha sakha dukhi to m hu, parantu isliye ni kyunki mujhe ye naye badlav pasand ni, balki m isliye dukhi hu, kyunki ek baar fir mujhe apne us parivaar se apne maa baba se bichadna hoga jinka itne sneh mujhe itne varsho baad praapt hua.


Karan :- bichadna hoga?

Kaya :- ha sakha dekhiye na in khushio k dino m pata hi na chala ki itne din kese gujar gaye , or humare wapas lotne ka din m keval ek hi din bacha, yani ki hume kal hume wapas rasatal lok lotna hoga.

Karan ye sunte hi soch m pad gaya wo to ye baat bhul hi gaya tha, pahale ki baat kuch or thi lekin ab kaya ko wapas rasatal ni lotne de sakta tha, kyunki ab kaya sirf usise ni balki uske pure parivaar se jud chuki thi, uske parivaar ka hissa thi wo.

Karan pyaar se samjhate hue :- sakhi tum udaas mat ho , tumje ab yaha se kahi jane ki jarurat ni h, abse tum mere sath, humare sath, apne parivaar k sath hi rahogi.

Kaya ye sun khush to hui lekin agle hi shan chintit hote hue :- parantu sakha ye kese sambhav hoga, aapne swayam mujhe rastal lok k senapati niyukt kiya tha, to m kese us kartvya se vimukh yaha rah sakti hu.

Aap ji me to sikhaya h na sakha humari sabse badi prathmikta humare kartvya k liye hi honi chahiye, fir bhi.

Karan kaya k dono hatho ko apne hatho m tham:- sakhi tumhe apne sakha p bharosa h na.

Kaya :- khud se bhi jyada..

Karan :- very good to tum bas ye hi bharosa banaye rakho kal m ek esa upaay karunga, jisse tumhara kartvya purnta p bhi koi anch ni aayegi or tumhe humse dur bhi ni jana padega.

Kaya khushi se :- kya sach sakha.

Karan muskurate hue gardan hilata h.

Kaya khushi s :- thank you so much sakha, aap duniya sabse ache mitra ho.

Karan :- to isi baat p ek pyari si jhappi ho jaye.

Kaya bina kuch bole khushi se karan ko kas k hug ker leti h.

Dono mitra jaha apne mitrvrat prem m vyast the, lekin wahi 2 ankhe or thi jinki ankho m unka ye mitravat prem dekha na ja raha tha, uski ankho m krodh or irsha k angare baras rahe the, parantu wo kon tha ya thi iska aage k updates m pata chalega aapko.

Tab tak k liye yu hi sath bane rahiye.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.
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Karna apni behan ke dono kartavyon ko ek saath purn karne ka kaun sa tareeq'a izaad karega?
Yeh do aankhen Naina ki hi hongi na
Riya ko Rohan ki haqeeqat kab pata lagegi kab aur kaise Rohan apne pyaar ka Riya se izhaar karega?
Karna aur Rohan kaise apne pyaar ki pavitrata apanon ke samne saabit karenge?
In sab ki haqeeqat kab inke parivaar ko pata lagegi?
 
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Naina is wrong but it is very important to make her realize this. Riya said absolutely right, no one can take the place of mother. Seeing Rohan and Riya happy, my heart gets happy but when Riya comes to know the truth what will happen and when will love be expressed? In today's update almost everything was good, everyone is happy, some problems are averted, some problems are going to come.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
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Jyoti karan ki baat sun k chonk gayi or boli.

Jyoti :- ye aap kya bol rahe h bhai , kya yahi h ...

Karan bich me :- ha gudiya yahi h vo , jinka na koi shatru h , na koi mitra , na koi sambhandh na koi pratibandh .

Shrasti me kaal ko niyantran me rakhne wali keval 3n hi shaktiya h .

1 swayam mahadev

2 mata adishakti

Or 3 :- swayam karmfal data shani.

Kyunki sharasti me kal or karmfal ke santulan bana rahe , isliye swayam mahadev ne inka srijan kiya h.

Ha jyoti yahi h vo jinki chal h dhimi , tez h jinki maar , jinki padchap.sunati h nyaya dhwani.

Karm fal data

Jyoti :- shani.

Karan :- das ka pranam swikar kare prabhu.

Ye bol karan or jyoti shani dev ko dandvat pranam kerte h.

Yuvak :- tumne bilkul uchit uttar diya putra , m hi hu karmfal data shani .



Tumne apni har pariksha ko ache se purn kiya or sath hi sath tumne rasatal lok ko dusht pishachon k aatank se bhi mukt karwaya , isliye hum tumse prabhavit or kafi prasan bhi h putra .

Parantu hum yaha tumhare samaksh karmfal data k roop me ni apitu , nilmani k rakshak k roop me prakat hue h.

Karan :- kya nilmani k rakshak or vo bhi karmfal data , esa kyu bhagwan,

Shani dev :- esa isliye putra , kyunki jab shrikrishna nilmani devo ko.somp.rahe the , tab indra samet sabhi devo k man me is nilmani ko pane ki lalsa aagayi or wo sab usko pana chahate the.

Tab shrikrishna ne mera aahavahan kiya or m waha pahunch gaya.

M :- pranam prabhu.

Shrikrishna :- aaiye shani dev , hum aapse sahayta chahte h , bas usike liye ek vinati kerna chahata hu.

M :- vinati ni prabhu , aap to aadesh dijiye.

Tab shrikrishna ne mujhe nilmani dete hue bole.


Shrikrishna :- lijiye karmfal data , is sansar me keval aap hi h jis per ye mani apna prabhav ni dal sakti , kyunki aap apne guru mahadev ki tarah virakt h , isliye ye mani hum aapko somp rahe h , aapko is mani ki suraksha ka dayitv tab tak nibhana hoga , jab tak iske yogya koi aa ni jata astitv me.

M :- jo aagya prabhu.

To is tarah shrikrishna ne mujhe is mani ka dayitv sompa, or jesa mane pahale hi kaha tha , nilmani ko pane ki icha se hi tum yaha aaye , isliye rasatal lok me tumhare aate hi tumhari sabse priya yani ki jyoti danv per lag chuki thi.

Isliye ager nilmani ko ager tumhe pana h to tumhe mujhse to yudh kerna hi hoga, anyatha tumhe jyoti ko sadev - 2 k liye bhulna hoga.

Shani dev ki ye baate sun ker karan or jyoti k to chahre hi safed pad gaye , unhe samjh hi ni aaraha tha , ab vo kya kare.

Unki to ek or kua to dusri or khai wali situation wali sthithi uttpan ho gayi thi.

Ek or unka hamesha hamesha k liye bichadna tha , to dusri or swayam shani dev ki chunoti , jo swayam aajay h , or uper se karan unse yudh ker maryada bhang bhi ni ker sakta tha.

Shani dev fir bole :- shigra nirnay lo karan , humare paas vyarth kerne ko adhik samay ni h.

Karan :- ye aapne kese dharm sankat me dal diya bhagwan apne is daas ko .

Na to ye karan apni bahan , apni atma , apni shakti jyoti se dur ho sakta h , or na hi unper shastra uthane ka sahas ker sakta h jo mere mahadev k sabse priya h or jinka ye karan ansh h.

Shani :- dono me se ek marg ka chayan to tumhe kerna hi hoga karan , kyunki yahi niyati or karmfal ka vidhan h , yadi fal pana h to karm to kerna padega.

Karan ne kafi der sochta raha, fir wo bola.

Karan :- shama kijiyega prabhu ,parantu ye karan apni jyoti ko chod ker ni ja sakta.

Shani :- arthat , tum yudh kerne ko sajj ho , chalo jesi tumhari icha.

Ye bol shani dev ne apne dand ko to gayab kiya or ab unke hath me aagaya unka divya dhanush.

Shani :- apne shastra uthao karan or yudh kero mujhse.

Ye bol shani dev ne apni pratyncha khich ker chod di , jisse pure rasatal lok m ek bhayanak garjana hui.

Karan ne bhi apna hath upper kiya or uske hath me ek dhanush aagaya , usne shastra to utha liye the , per uski antaratma is baat k liye use bilkul swikriti ni de rahi thi.

Kyunki shani dev unke liye utne hi pujniya or samanniya the , jitne ki mahadev.

Shani dev :- kaha kho gaye karan , yudh me dhyan kendrit kero.

Ye bol unhone ek baan karan ki or choda , jo sidha ja ker karan k kandhe me ghus gaya or karan ki chink nikal gayi .

Jyoti rote hue chillayi :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii

Wo karan k pass jana chahati thi , lekin shani dev ki adrishy divar k karan wo asmarth thi.

Shani dev :- utho karan or yudh kero , yu kayaro wali pravarti tumhari kabse ho gayi .

Bhul jao tumhare samne kon khada h or jis karmpath ka tumne chayan kiya h , uska palan bhi kero.

Dekho jyoti ko kese tadaf rahi h tumhare liye wo , kya tumhe jara si bhi daya ni aarahi apni bahan ki is dasha per , ya tumhara itna hi prem tha , apni bahan k prati .

Ager esa h to abhi k abhi nikal jao tum yaha se , tum jyoti k bilkul yogya ni ho.

Shani dev k kathor vachan sun karan k ander ek tis si uthi or usne ek jhatke me apne kandhe se wo tir nikal ker, wapas khada hua or bola

Karan :- ni shani dev , karan apne pran tyag sakta h , per apni jyoti ko ni , m apni jyoti ko yaha se bina liye ni jaunga , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.

Shani :- yadi esa h to fir yudh kero.

Ye bol shani dev ne ek or tir karan ki or choda , pet is baar karan bhi teyar tha , usne bhi apne dhanush se ek tir choda , jo shani dev k tir se ja ker takraya , wo shani dev k tir ko bhed to na saka , parantu uski gati kam kerne m kamyab raha , jisse karan shani dev k tir se is baar bach gaya.

Fir dono ka mahasangram ka aarambh ho gaya ,dono ne ek dusre k uper tiro ki varsha kerna aarambh ker diya , karan khud shani ka hi ansh tha , to kuch had tak wo shani dev ko takkar de pa raha tha.

Kabhi shani dev ka tir karan kaat deta , to kabhi karan ke tir shani dev


Unke bano ki takrahat itni bhishn thi ki 3no lok dol rahe the, sare dev aasman me bhagwan or unke ansh k is adbhut sangram ko dekhne waha upasthit ho chuke the.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- shani lok.

Shani dev ki mata yani ki devi chaya bhi vaha bethi apne putra or uske ansh ka ye sangram dekh rahi thi.

Tabhi vaha chintit swar me narad ji prakat hue or devi chaya ko pranam kerte hue bole.

Narad ji :- ye kesi lila ker rahe h shani dev devi chaya , apne hi ansh se sangram , bhala is sab ki kya avashyakta h.

Ye baat aap or hum sabhi bhali bhanti jante h ki , shani dev ajay h or unhe tridev or trideviyo k alawa koi prajit ni ker sakta , karan matra shani ka ansh h , swayam shani ni.

Aap kuch kerte kyu ni devi , apne putra ko rokiye , kyunki karan to bina jyoti ko paye rukne wala ni h , chahe uske pran bhi kyu na chale jaye is sangram me.

Devi chaya :- devrishi ye aap bhalibhanti jante h ki shani ne ek baar jo than liya , wo use avashya purn kerta h , yahi gun karan ne bhi shani se prapt kiya h , isliye m bhi is sandarbh me kuch ni ker sakti .

Or aap to vyarth hi chintit ho rahe h devrishi, mat bhuliye shani h vo , jo kuch bhi , vo jo kuch bhi kerta h soch samjh ker or samaj k kalyan k liye hi kerta h , to uske kisi bhi karm per prashn chinh lagane ka koi sawal hi ni uttha .

Isliye hey devrishi aap kripya shant rahe or mujhe apne putra ki is lila ka anand lene dijiye.

Wahi dusri or .

Location :- samraat haveli.

Megha abhi hamesha ki tarah us sthan pe bethi hui mahadev ka dhyan ker rahi thi , tabhi vo bhi vichlit ho dhyan se bahar aagayi

Megha :- ye achanak se mera man vichlit kyu ho raha h , esa kyu pratit ho raha h ki mera koi apna kisi sankat me h.

Mujhe jaldi se is baare me pata kerna hoga , ye soch usne dobara dhyan me beth gayi.

Megha ko bhi apne dhyan me karan or shani dev ka maha sangram dikhai deta h , jise dekh wo chonk gayi or wapas dhyan se bahar aagayi or hath jod bolne lagi.

Megha rote hue :- hey shani dev , hey prabhu ye kya ker rahe h ap , esa anarth kyu bhagwan , mere.............. Se kya galti ho gayi ki aap apne ansh se yudh ker rahe h bhagwan .

Esa anarth mat kijiye prabhu , kripya shant hoker is sangram ko samapt ker dijiye bhagwan , verna bahut bada anarth ho jayega , or ager mere.............. Ko kuch hua , to aapki ye bhakt bhi jivit ni rah payegi prabhu , kripya shant ho jaiye.

Ye bol megha wahi mala leker shani dev ka dhyan kerne lagi.

Wahi dusri or

Naina us pishach k sath pishachon k raja k pass pahunch gayi , jaha vo ek badi si gufa me beth tha , din hone ki vajah se , lekin wo gufa bhi kisi mahal se kam ni thi , kyunki us raja ne apni mayavi shaktiyo se us gufa me mahal jesi har sukh suvidha banayi hui thi.

(M us raja ko Dracula 2 yani d2 likhunga).

D2 abhi apne bade se sofe pe tange pasare hue leta hua tha or ek glass me khun pi raha tha ,
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tabhi uski najar pishach k sath khadi naina or preety pe padi.


D2 :- are wah ranga(pishach) tune to aaj dil khush ker diya re , ek sath 2 2 itni kadak maal laker , inko to me apni vishesh dasi banaunga.

Ranga ghabra ker d2 k pass gaya or dhire se uske kan k pas bola.

Ranga :- are malik jara apni jawan ko lagam dijiye , verna lene k dene pad jayenge.

D2 :- abe chutiye tu mujhe dara raha h or vo bhi in ladkiyo se.

Ranga :- are malik puri baat to sun lo , ye koi mamuli ladki ni h(preety ki or ishara kerte hue ) ye ladki ek trittya h.

D2 ye sunte hi chonk k khada ho gaya or bola .

D2 :- kkkya trittya.

Naina :- ha trittya or wo bhi koi mamuli trittya ni , maharaj samrat ne hume bheja h tera ant kerte hue.

Ye sun k to d2 ki gand gale me aagayi or vo gidgidate hue bola.

D2 :- maharaj ne mujhe marne ko bheja h , per kyu.

Preety :- kyunki tume sabko ye bata diya h ki maharaj ka thikana kaha h.

D2 :- ni ni mane esa kuch ni kiya , ye jhut h.

Preety :- to kya tum ye kahana chahate ho ki maharaj jhut bol rahe h.

D2 :- ni ni mane esa to ni kaha , lekin jhut m bhi ni bol raha , mane to unhe akhiri baar hi tab dekhe hi salo ho gaye.

Naina :- kab or kaha dekha tha tune , bata.

D2 :- jab vo apni pujarin , danav dadi komolika ko darshan dene aaye the, madhavgarh me.

Preety :- madhavgarh me kaha.

D2 :- madhavgarh me ....

D2 bolte bolte ruk gaya or use dal me kuch kala hone ka ahasas ho gaya , tab usne apni ankhe band ki to use positive shakti ka ahasas hua , jisse vo samjh gaya ki ye dono use bakra bana rahi h.

D2 haste hue :- bahut chalak samjhti h na khud ko tu ladki , per ek bevkufi to tune ker di , yaha aane se pahale tujhe apne yantra or vesi hi pavitr chijo ko kahi chod k aana chahiye tha .

Ranga ye samrat ki bheji hui ni , balki koi bhut nashak h jo hamara nash kerne or hamse maharaj k bhed lene aayi h.

Or ye trittya ek gaddar h , jo samraat k khilaf ja rahi h, bandi bana lo dono ko.

Ranga ye sun apne dant bahar nikalta h or aawaz ker apne sathiyo ko bulata h.

Lekin bas 10 jane hi vaha pahunche kyunki bakiyon ka kaam to preety ne pahale hi tamam ker diya tha .

D2 :- kaha rah gaye wo sare nikamme

Preety :- kahi tum inko to ni bula rahe.

Ye bol preety ne apna ek hath aage kiya , jisse ek roshni nikal gufa ki divar se takrayi or waha ek tv screen ban gayi or us screen per mare hue sare pishachon ki lashe dikhne lagi.

D2 :- ni chodunga tumhe, bhale hi m tumse ni lad sakta , per teri ye dost to maregi

Ye bol d2 apne chamgadad roop me aagaya or naina p jhapat pada .

Naina ne us per firring kerni chahi to ye kya goliya hi khatam ho gayi or jese usne apna khanjar nikala .

Lekin usse pahale wo kuch ker pati ranga ne ek bada sa patthar naina k hath pe de mara , jisse wo khanjar uske hath se chut k gir gaya.

Preety naina ki madad k liye aage bhadi to ranga samet sare 20 pishachon ne use charo or se gher liya tha, or wo unse ulajhne me lagi hui thi , halaki wo sab ek trittya k aage kuch ni the , per preety abhi apni shaktiyon ko puri tarah full power m use ni ker pa rahi thi abhi , jab usne pahale wo puple gola bana ker choda tha ,uske baad se use kuch kamjori mahasoos ho rahi thi , fir bhi vo unse lad rahi thi .

Wahi d2 naina ki or bhadne laga , or haste hue bola.

D2 :- ab kese bachegi ladki , tere sare hathiya to khatam ho gaye.

Yr bol wo naina k jese hi karib aa us per hamla kerna chaha , tabhi naina ne apna secret hathiyar nikal ker d2 pe dal diya .

Wo hathiyar or kuch ni bas lahsoon ka ras tha , lekin lahsoon ka ras pishachon p tejab ki tarah kaam kerta h , or naina ye baat janti thi , isliye emergency k liye usne ek choti si bottle me ras dal ker layi thi or apni shorts ki pichli jeb me usne rakh liya tha use.

Ras sidhe d2 k chahare pe gira tha , jisse usse bhayanak jalan hone lagi or wo apne chahre pe hath rakh chikhne laga.

Naina ne usi time moke ka fayda utha , jaldi se apne bag se bargad ki lakdi ka bana trishul nikala or d2 k sine m dil wali side ghop diya.

Jiske sath hi d2 chinkhta chilata hua mar gaya or uske marte hi baki pishach bhi kamjor pad gaye , or tabhi preety ne bhi moke ka fayda utha ek bada sa aag ka gola banaya or unki or fek diya , jise wo sare bache hue pishach bhi tadaf tadaf k mar gaye.

Jiske sath kalgarh ka jungle pishach mukt ho gaya.

Lekin tabhi d2 k sharir se ek pile rang ka gola nikla or naina k paas ja ker ruk gaya.

Use chune k liye jese hi naina ne apna hath uthaya to wo gola apne aap hi aagaya or wo apne aap hi ek lohe k tukde me badal gaya.

Dekh ker mano esa lag raha tha ki vo kisi hathiyar ka hisa ho , jiske aage or piche dono ka hissa ni tha.

Naina ne is baare ne baad me sochne ka soch use bag me rakha or preety k paas gayi



Preety ko kamjori se chakkar aane lage , lekin uske girne se pahale hi naina ne use sambhal liya or sahar deker jungle k bahar aagayi or preety ko aaram kerne ka bol vo khud gadi chala nikal padi wapas nahar singh ki haveli ki or.

Lekin jesa ahsaas megha ko ho raha tha , achanak se use bhi hone laga , use to kuch samjh hi ni aaraha tha , esa kyu ho raha h , lekin use bhi ahasas ho raha tha ki jese koi apna musibat me h.

Naina :- hey maa , ye kesi lila h aapki , kyu ese ahasas mujhe bar bar hote h , jese kabhi mera koi bahut karibi mere pass ho or ab ye ki ab vo sankat me h ma.

Maa meri bas aapse yahi prathna h ki ager mere ahasas me jara bhi satya h to he maa , wo jo bhi h , unki raksha kijiyega..

Ese hi prathna ker wo apne raste nikal padi.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- karan house

Sonam or rohan ka aaj last exam bhi khatam ho gaya tha , to vo aaj ghar aaker dopahar me so gaye the , dono ek hi room me ek sath hi so rahe the , lekin dono k dil me koi galat bhavna ni thi , vo bas ek bhai bahan ki tarah hi soye hue the.

Tabhi achanak se soti hui sonam k chahare pe bechani k bhav aane lage or wo achanak tez aawaj me bhai bolte hue uth gayi.

Sonam ki aawaz sun rohan bhi hadbada ker uth gaya or sonam ko hampte hue dekh , wo uski pith sahalate hue bola.

Rohan :- kya hua sonu , koi bura sapna dekha.

Sonam :- ha bhai esa hi kuch samjh lijiye , mujhe ba jane ese kyu lag raha h ki karan bhai or di musibat me h .

Rohan :- off oh , gudiya tum bekar me pareshan ho rahi, wo bas ek bura sapna hi to tha , tum relax ho jao , karan or jyoti bilkul thik honge.

Sonam :- ni bhai , mera man ni man raha , mujhe abhi bhai se bat kerni h.

Rohan :- acha thik h sonu , m abhi karan ko phone lagata hu.

Ye bol rohan karan ko phone lagata h , lekin karan ka phone not reachable aaraha tha.

Sonam :- dekha bhai , unka phone bhi ni lag raha , mujhe bahut dar lag raha h bhai, kuch kijiye

Rohan kayi baar try kerta h , lekin phone ni lag raha tha or lagta bhi keSe vo prathvi pe the hi ni.

Rohan sonam ko samjhane ki bahut koshis ker raha tha , lekin wo sun hi ni rahi thi.

Rohan :- sonu please tum shant ho jao , mujh per ni to kam se kam apne kanha pe to bharosa rakho , vo karan or jyoti ko bhala kuch hone denge kya.

Kanha ka nam sun sonam sidha mandir ki or bhagi or ladoo gopal k pass jaker boli.

Sonam :- kanha dekho na mera man bahut ghabra raha h , jese ki bhai koi musibat me ho , tum to sab kuch jante hona kanha , agr meri is ghabrahat me jara si bhi sachai h to please kanha , apni is bhakt ki prathna suno kanha or mere bhai or di ki raksha kerna.

Ye bol sonam vahi beth gayi or prathna kerne lagi , rohan k chahre pr bhi pareshani or dar ki lakire saf saf dikh rahi thi or wo bhi sonam k sath vahi beth prathna kerne laga.

Or karan k purane ghar p kavya ka bhi kuch yahi hal tha , wo bhi ishvar se prathna ker rahi thi.

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Karan or shani dev ka sangram bahut hi bhishan ho gaya tha ab , ab dono or se hi or bhi ghatak ban chal rahe the.

Lekin karmfal data shani ko karan bhi kitni der takkar de pata , shani dev k har ban ka tez or bal badta ja raha tha .

Ab to ye hal ho gaya tha ki karan k sare tir kat rahe the , or shani dev ke tir chodne ki gati bhi bhadti ja rahi thi

Ab to ye haal ho gaya tha ki karan unki speed ka mukabla hi ni ker pa raha tha , vo jitni der me ek tir chodta utne me to shani dev 5 tir chod dete , jinko wo dodge bhi ni ker pata .

Karan man me :- ager esa hi chalta raha to m shigra hi parajit ho jaunga or meri jyoti mujhse hamesha hamaesha dur ho jayegi .

(Nam ankho se ) ni ni me esa ni hone de sakta , m apni jyoti ko khud se dur ni hone de sakta , per m karu bhi to kya karu , kyunki mere samne pratidvandvi k roop me khade bhi shani dev h , jinse m chaha ker bhi na to lad sakta hu or na hi jit sakta hu.

Karan puri tarah se hatash hota ja raha tha ki apni vivashata k kaaran , use kuch samjh ni aaraha tha .

Tabhi shani dev ka ek or tir aaaker karan k sharir me dhas gaya or vo gir pada.

Jyoti rote hue fir se chilayi .

Jyoti :- bhaiiiiii

Karan uthne ki koshis kerte hue :- mat ro meri gudiya , m bilkul thik hu , tum chinta mat ker , m shighra hi tujhe mukt kerwa lunga.


Jyoti rote hue :- bhai ab or mujhse aapki ye halat ni dekhi jati , aap please mujhe chod k chale jaiye yaha , m aapse duri kese n kese fir bhi bardasht ker lungi ,per ye m kadapi bardasht ni ker paungi ki meri vajah se aapko meri ankho k samne kuch ho gaya ho to.

Jyoti ne ye itni hriday vidarak baat kah to di thi , per ye jyoti hi janti thi ki is baat ko kahane me usne kitni ashaniya pida mahasus ki thi , karan se uska bichadna matlab tha , uski mrityu . Lekin usse apne bhai ki ye halat bhi ni dekhi ja rahi thi , isliye usne dil per patthar rakh ye baat kahi.

Isliye bhai please aap lot jaiye , shayad niyati ne hamara sath yahi tak likha tha.

Karan rote hue chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiii, ye asambhav h gudiya , ye karab apni jyoti ko kabhi ni chod k ja sakta or ager ye niyati h to (shani dev ki or dekhte hue ) aaj us niyati ko likhne wale ishvar ko bhi apne kaal chakra me parivartan kerna hoga, kyunki aaj ager karan jyoti se vimukh hua to ye karan bhi jivit ni rahega or apne is bhakt ki mrityu k jimedar aap honge shani dev aap.

Shani dev :- jo kaha h ager use purn kerna chahate ho to tir apne dhanush k chalayo karan , shabdo k ni.

Ye bol unhone ek or tir karan pe choda , or karan ne bhi khud ko sambhal tir choda, lekin ek baar fir karan ka hi tir kat gaya.

Karan man me :- esa chalta raha to is sangram ka nirnay mere khilaf hi aayega.per m karu bhi to kya karu.

Tabhi ek sath 2 tir karan ki or aaye , jisme se ek to karan ne apne tir se kaat diya , per dusra uski bah ko chu k nikal gaya.

Karan man me :- hey mahadev , hey prabhu , apne is bhakt ki sahayata kijiye .

Hey triloki nath , apne bhakt ki apne hi priya shishya se raksha kijiye.

Shani dev man me :- putra tum marg jante ho ya yu kaho wo tumhari chetna me hi h , avashyakata h to bas tumhe apni chetna ka aatm manthan kerne ka, tab tumhe swatah hi marg ka gyan ho jayega.

Tabhi ek or tir karan k ek bah per lag gaya , karan ne use nikala or fir mahadev se prathna kerte hue bola.

Karan :- hey bholenath , kya aapko apne bhakto ki is dasha pe jara si bhi daya ni aarahi , jo aap koi pratikriya ni ker rahe , ya apke hi is das ki bhakti me kuch kami rah gayi jo .......

Karan apni bat bolte bolte hi bich me rah gaya or uske chahre pe ek asha bhari muskan aagayi ,jise dekh kfd k chahare pe bhi muskan agayi.

Karan man me :- mil gaya marg , ha yahi ek matra upaay bacha h jisse meri vijay nishchit bhi ho jayegi or shani dev ka apman bhi na hoga.

Bhakti , bhakti hi wo marg h evam vo kavach h ,jiske aage ishvar bhi apne bhakt k aage har jate h.

(Mahadev se man me) dhanyawad bholenath , aapne apne bhakt ko marg hi dikha hi diya.

Ye sab soch karan ne apna dhanush dharti pe rakh diya.

Shani dev sab jante hue bhi bole.

Shani dev :- kya hua karan , itni shigra hi apni prayay swikar ker le.

Karan muskurate hue :- jo prajay swikar ker le wo karmfal.data ka ansh kaha bhagwan .

Karan hath jod shani dev ka sabse priya stotra gana shuru kerta h.

Karan :- krishnah , shani pingal mand sorihi

kono-antaka roudra-yama-tha babhruh
krishnah shanih pingala manda sourih
nityam smrito yo harate cha peedam
tasmai namah shree ravi-nandanaya

Karan na keval stotra k shlok ga raha tha ,balki sath sath un stotra ka bhavarth bhi ga raha tha.

Bhavarth 1 :- bhakti bhav se samarpit ho ker jo das naam pukarega , sada sada jo japta rahe dukh uska nasht ho jayega.

Hey ravinandan namaskar , namaskar prabhu namaskar.

Karan :- shlok 2 :-
tilairya-vair-masha gudanna danaih
Lohena neelambara danato va
preenati mantrair-nijavasare cha
tasmai namah shree ravi-nandanaya

Bhavarth 2 :- til, gud, udad ,ann , jou ,loha ,nilvastra jo kerte dan , shani mantro ka jaap kare to shani kerte unka kalyan , shani mantro ka jap kare to shani karte unka.

Shradha bhav se namaskar , bhakti bhav se namaskar .

Karan :- shlok :-3
Shanaishtakm ch pyatah prabhat.
Nityam suputrahi pashu bhanhveshch .
Pathetu sokhyam bhuvi bhan yuktah
Prapnoti nirvan padam tadante

Bhavarth :- shani ashtak ka path kare jo subah sada jo milker parivar , jivan lila me sukhi rahe , mrityu k baad mile moksh ka dvar ,

Jivan lila me sukhi rahe , mrityu k baad mile moksh ka dwaar.

Hey ravi nandan namaskar , hey ravinandan namaskar.

Karan apna gaan purn kerte hue , ghutno pe beth gaya or shani dev k charno m apna shish rakh diya.

Karan ki madur aawaz me apna priya stotra sun shani dev kafi prasan ho gaye the or prabhavit bhi .

Unhone apna dhanush gayab kiya or karan ko khud uthate hue bole.

Shani :- utho putra , ab iski aavashyakta ni h , tum meri is pariksha or yu kahe ki antim parikrama me bhi uttirn hue.

Tumne aaj ye pramanit ker diya , ki tumhari rachna ka mera nirnay bilkul uchit tha.


Tabhi waha narad ji prakat hue ,, jinhe dekh karan or jyoti ko kafi khushi hui or wo unhe pranam kerte h .

Karan or jyoti ek sath :- pranam devrishi.

Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Aayushmam bhavah putra , sakal manorath purn ho tumhare putri.

Shiv priya bilkul uchit kH rahe h bacho aaj Na keval Tumne apni budhi , apni shakti or apni bhakti se marg me aayi har kathinaee ko saralta se paar kiya, apitu is pure sansaar ko prem ki ek nayi paribhasha se bhi avgat karwaya .

Tumne aaj sidh kiya h ki man me sachi bhakti or apne priya k prati vishuddh prem ho to , vyakti ishwer se bhi jit jata h.

Fir narad ji shani dev se bole .

Narad ji :- prabhu , kripya ab to jyoti ko mukt ker apne ansh per kripya kijiye.

Shani dev ashirwad dete hue :- tathastu ..


Itna bolte hi karan or jyoti k bich ki wo divaar hat gayi , lekin karan ab bahut jyada thak chuka tha, jiska kaaran tha ki ek to uski itni kathin yatra or uper se fir sakshat shani se yudh , jisme wo bahut ghayal ho chuka tha.

Lekin fir bhi vo himat kerte hue utha or jyoti ki or bhadne laga , or khushi se muskurate hye jyoti bhi karan ki or dhire dhire badne lagi.

Lekin karan k kadam kamjori k mare ladkhada gaye or wo girne laga , jab jyoti ne ye dekha to wo dodte hue karan k pas gayi or use sambhal te hue use leker niche beth gayi or karan ka sir apni god me takh rone lagi.

Karan ko to is halat me bhi jyoti k rone ki chinta ni thi or wo lete lete hi jyoti k ansu ponch na rone ka ishara kerta h or muskurane ka ishara kerta h.

Karan ka apne prati itna prem dekh , jyoti ki khushi ki koi sima hi ni thi , lekin use rona bhi aaraha tha , ki usi prem k chalte karan ki ye halat thi.

Isliye usne karan k chahare ko rote hue sine se laga liya , or bolne lagi.

Jyoti :- bhai itna bhi prem mat kijiye mujhe , jiska karj m na chuka pau.

Karan :- kesi baat kerti h pagli , prem bhi kabhi koi karz ho sakta h kya or tu to meri jan meri shwas sab kuch h , bhala tujhse dur hoker mera astitv rahata kya, tu sirf meri bahan hi ni , meri aatma h tu , or bina apni aatma k bhala m .Jinda rah sakta hu kya.

Jyoti karan k muh pe hath rakh esi mahus baat bolne se mana kerti h , tabhi achanak karan k khasi aane lagi or jyoti ghabra k pani dhundne k liye uthne wali hi thi ki tabhi kisi ne piche se jyoti k sir ko sahalaya or jyoti k kano m ek aawaz padi.

Aawaz :- jyoti beti.

Jyoti jab ye aawaz sunti h to chonk k jese hi piche mud ker dekha to wo khushi se

Jyoti :- maa

Ye bol aawaz wali shaks k gale lag gayi , jo or koi ni asha thi.

Asha ne jyoti ko gale lagaye hue hi karan k sir ko utha ker apni god me rakh liya.

Karan bhi apni ma ko dekh khush ho gaya or itna hi bol paya

Karan :- maaa

Or iske sath hi vo behosh ho gaya , jisse jyoti ghabra gayi or asha se boli.

Jyoti rote hue :- mA dekho na bhai ko kya ho gaya , kuch kijiye na ma.

Asha :- ro mat beti , karan ko kuch ni hoga.

Ye bol wo shani dev ki or dekhti h or shani dev bhi ishara samajh karan ko uthate h or usi mahal ke ek kaksh me le jaker letate h.

Shani dev :- putri chinta ki koi baat ni h , karan keval durbalta ke karanavash , behosh hua h.

(Apne hath me ek lep ka katora mangwa ker ) lo putri ise karan ke tan k ghavo pe laga do , isse wo shighra hi swasth ho jayega.

Jyoti unse lep le ker karan k lagane lagi or jab usne wo lep laga diya to asha ne jyoti k sir per hath fera , jisse jyoti ko bhi nind aagayi or wo bhi karan k side me hi so gayi.

Fir un dono ko sote hue chod asha or shani dev dusre ek kaksh me gaye .

Jaha asha ne apne asli roop me aagayi , ji ha dosto ek baar fir devi chaya hi asha k roop me aayi thi , karan or jyoti se milne.



Asha ka chahara bilkul devi chaya jesa hi tha , bas unko apne vastra badlne ki hi avashyakta hoti thi .

Shani :- pranam mata.

Devi chaya :- kalyan ho putra .

Ye bol unhone shani ko gale laga liya , parantu jese hi devi chaya ka hath shani dev k tan se chua , to shani dev ki halki si aah nikal gayi.

Jise sun devi chaya ek baar tk ghabra gayi , fir unhe samjh aagaya ki mamla kya h.

Devi chaya :- putra apne uper ka vastra utaro.

Shani :- are ni ni mata , iski koi avashyakta ni h , m bilkul swasth hu.

Devi chaya :- are kaha na ek baar vastra utaro , apni mata se kya sharmana.

Ye bol devi chaya ne khud hi uper ka vastr utar diya shani ka or jese hi unhone esa kiya to shani ka tan dekh ker wo ghabra gayi , kyunki unke badan pe kayi jagah tir k nishan the.

Hua yu tha ki jese jese shani dev karan per yani apne ansh per pariksha k chalte prahar ker pida pahucha rahe the , utni hi pida wo swyam ko bhi de rahe the.

Devi chaya nam ankho se :- ye ky putra , itni chot , is sabki kya avashyakta thi putra.

Shani :- avashyakta thi mata , bhale hi karan ki pariksha lena mera karm tha , parantu apne hi ek ansh or apne guru k param bhakt k uper prahar jo mane kiye the , uska karmfal to mujhe bhi milna avashyak tha na.

Manushya sochte h ki unke karmo k dand k roop me jo m unhe kasht deta hu , uske mujhe aanand aata h .

Parantu vo ye ni samjhte ki jitne kasht m unhe deta hu , usse kayi guna pida mujhe swayam hoti h .

Isiliye to m kisi ko marg per lane se pahale use chetavani avashya deta hu mata , ki vo anuchit marg ko tyag uchit marg pe aajaye.

Devi chaya :- m bhi na kitni murkh hu , jise baato me swayam devaguru brihaspati ni hara paye , to m bhala kon hoti hu.

Ye bol devi chaya bhi shani k tan per oshadhi ka lep lagati h or fir kuch der unhe bhi vishram karwati h.

Fir sham tak karan or jyoti jag jate h to apne pas apni maa (devi chaya) ko dekh khushi se jhum uthe or unke gale lag khushi rote hue bole.

Karan :- mumma aap aagayi , aap usdin hume chod ker kyu chali gayi thi .

Jyoti :- ha mumma , hum ne aapko kitna miss kiya or ye aapke kapdo ko kya hua , ye ese kapde kyu .

Darasal ab devi chaya apne devi vale roop me hi thi, unhone apne kapde ni badle the , kyunki wakt aagaya tha ki ab karan or jyoti ko apna sach batane ka.

Tabhi kaksh me shani dev bhi aate h , jinhe dekh karan or jyoti unhe pranam kerte h.

Per shani dev un dono ko ashirwad dete hue , asha yani apni mata devi chaya ko pranam kerte h.

Jise dekh karan or jyoti dono hi heran ho jate h , tab shani dev bole.

Shani dev :- m janta hu putra , tumhare man me kayi prashna h , jinme se kuch ke uttar m tumhe deta hu

Putra jo tumhare samne abhi mojud h vo meri bhakt aasha ni , balki surya patni , arthat meri mata Devi chaya h, or mata ne hi us din tum dono ko us din sambhala tha


Ye sun to mano karan or jyoti mano jam se hi gaye , abhi jo thodi der pahale unke chahre pe khushi thi vo secondo me gayab ho gayi

Jise dekh devi chaya ko acha ni laga or unhone wapas se karan or jyoti ko sine se laga boli.

Devi chaya :- ha putra ye satya h ki m asha ni hu , parantu ye satya bhi ni h ki tum dono meri santan ni h ki tum dono meri santan ni ho .

Tum dono hi mere putra shani k hi ansh ho , is naate m tumhari bhi mata hui

Karan or jyoti hath jod :- dhanyawad devi, aapne hume sahi samay per sambhala or hume durbal hone se roka.

Devi chaya :- are abhi to kaha mane , tum dono bhi meri santan ho , bhala koi mata ko bhi dhanyawad kahata h , or ha ye devi ka sambhodan band kero , abse tum mujhe shani ki bhanti hi mata kaha karoge or jab bhi aavashyakata ho mera smaran ker lena , tumhari mata sadev tumhare liye upasthit rahegi.

Karan or jyoti :- ji mata.

Ye sun devi chaya muskurate hue apni bahe fela deti h or jisme karan or jyoti sama jate h.

Kuch der yuhi devi chaya ne karan or jyoti ko gale lagaye rakha fir wo sab alag hue.

Shani dev :- putra karan , ab samay aachuka h , karmfal pane ka.

Ye bol shani dev ne apna ek hath uper kiya or ek nili roshni k sath unke hath me nilmani aagayi .
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Shani :- apne puraskar ko grahan kero putra.

Karan :- jo aagya prabhu.

Ye bol karan hath jod apni ankhe band ker leta h , jiske sath hi nilamani apne aap udker karan me sama gayi. Or usike sath kuch der tak karan ka sharir nile rang ki roshni se chamakta raha .

Fir dhire dhire karan samanya hone laga , tabhi usko fir se thodi kamjori si mahasus hui , lekin jyoti ne sambhal liya.

Shani dev gambhir swar me bole :- putra nilmani ko to tumne praapt ker liya h , parantu .

Jyoti :- parantu kya shani dev.

Shani dev :- parantu putri , nilmani ki shaktiya karan k sharir me dhire dhire jagrit hogi , jiske chalte ek mah tak karan apni baki shaktiyon ka prayog bhi bhali bhanti ni ker payega , wo lagbhag ek samanya manushy saman hi hoga.

Isliye putri tumhe karan ka vishesh dhyan rakhna hoga , karan ki suraksha ab tumhara dayitv h , kyunki aane wale samay me tum dono per , visheshkar karan pe sankat ke megh mandra rahe h , jinse keval tum hi karan ki raksha ker sakti ho

Isliye smaran rahe putri tumhara prem or karan k prati vishwas hi karan ki sabse badi shakti or kavach h , ise kabhi bhi khone mat dena.

Jyoti :- jesa aap kahe bhagwan , aaj tak mere bhai ne meri har sankat se bhalibhanti raksha ki h .

Ab mera samay aagaya h apne bhai ki raksha ka uttaradayitv nibhane ka ,jise me apne pure man se nibhaungi, mera prem or vishwas apne bhai k liye , us kailash ki tarah adig h bhagwan , jis per mahadev nivas kerte h .

Is vishwas ko is sansar ki koi bhi shakti khatam ni ker sakti.

Shani dev man me :- asha to meri bhi yahi h putri ki bhavishya me esa hi rahe.

Shani dev :- vese putra karan , tumne mujhe pahachana kese.

Karan muskurate hue :- prabhu aap sach me apne guru mahadev ki bhanti bhole h .

Apke gale me sthit is mala se hi mujhe aapki pahachan ho gayi thi prabhu.

Or ha bhagwan apko apne janmdivas ki hardik shubkamnaye .

Flashback.

Jab karan or jyoti padmanabh mandir jane ko teyar ho rahe the, tabhi unhe dhyan aaya ki aaj to shani amavasya h or sath me shani jayanti bhi.

Itna dhyan me aate hi dono bhai bahan pass k mojud shani mandir me gaye , jo aaj itne bade utsav k kaaran braham muhurat me hi khul chuka tha.

Vaha pahunche to un dono ne paya ki mandir to khul chuka h , lekin puja samagri ki koi bhi dukan abhi tak ni khuli to karan ne apni chutki bajayi or uske hath me puja ki sabhi samagri aagayi .

Arthath sarso ka tel , til , udad or shani dev se sambandhit sabhi samgri , jinke pese karan ne apni shaktiyo se hi band dukano k gale me rakh diye the.

Jyoti :- ye kya bhai , aapne mala to mangwayi hi ni.

Mala isliye ni aayi thi , kyunki us dukan me phulo ki mala mojud ni thi.

Tabhi jyoti ko idea aaya or usne mandir k bagiche se ful chun ker vahi beth ek mala banyi un fulo ki or dono bhai bahan mandir me jaker puja kerte h or shani dev ki murti per wo mala chada dete h

Ab shani dev to thare saral swabhav k , karan or jyoti ki bhakti bhav se chadayi hui mala unhonne turant swikar ker li or vo mala murti se gayab ho sidha shani dev k gale e aagayi thi

Or jab shani dev ne karan ko apni pahachan batane ko kaha to karan turant us mala ko pahachan gaya or uper se shani dev k vastra or rang roop dekh ker use ye baat confirm bhi ho gayi.

Flashback end.

Devi chaya :- manna padega , mera karan putra satya me hi kafi budhiman h

Shani dev :- aakhir ansh kiska h .

Devi chaya majak kerte hue :- mera .

Jiske sath sab hasne lage . Fir karan or jyoti ne shani dev se lotne ki aagya mangi.

Shani dev :- thik h putro , ab tum prasthan ker sakte ho or meri baat sadev smaran rakhna ki tum dono ka prem or ek jutta hi tumhari sabse badi shakti h.

Fir kuch bate devi chaya or shani dev ne karan or jyoti ko samjhayi or fir shani dev ne karan or jyoti ko ankhe band kerne ko bola .

Or kuch samay bad jab dono ne apni ankhe kholi , to unhone paya ki vo ab apne hotel k room me h.

Karan or jyoti abhi is yatra se thak chuke the , isliye wo kapde badal ker ek dusre ki baho me lipat ker so gaye .

Dharti lok k samay k anusar to unhe bas ek hi din alag rahna pada tha, parantu rasatal ka samay chakra dharti se bhin tha , jiske anusar wo pure ek hafte baad mile the or ek dusre ki baho me the .

Jis karan unhe parmanand ki anubhuti ho rahi thi , jiske karan unhe jald hi nind aagayi.

Wahi dusri or sonam , megha ,naina or kavya ko bhi ab chen aagaya tha , jiske liye unhone ishvar ko dhanywad kiya .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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nice update ..to kfd matlab karmfal data shani dev ..
karan ne shani dev ki stuti karke unko khush kiya warna bal se wo haar jaata ..
ab asha ka raaz bhi khul gaya ki wo devi chhaya thi jisne karan aur jyoti ko sambhala tha ..
aakhir karan ko nilmani mil gayi par uski shakti hasil karne tak wo apni dusri shaktiya istemal nahi kar sakta 🤔..
aur aisa kya sankat hai jo sirf karan ke upar aanewala hai 🤔🤔..

pishach ko naina ki asliyat pata chal gayi par wo naina ke saamne tik nahi paaya 😁 aur maara gaya ..
 
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Sham ko karan ki ankh pahale khul jati h to wo pata h ki uski jan yani jyoti sote hue kab uski chati p aagayi na to use na jyoti ko pata chala

Jyoti sote hue bahut hi pyari dikh rahi thi , bilkul jeSe ek choti bachi ho , karan use kuch der yu hi dekhte raha , uska man to ni tha , apni gudiya ko uthane ka , per kal unhe jana tha , jiski unhe teyari bhi kerni thi.

Isliye usne pyaar se jyoti ko dono galo ko chum k, halke se hotho ko bhi chum liya.

Or karan k esa kerte hi jyoti uth gayi or pyaar se boli.

Jyoti :- good evening bhaiyu...

Karan :- good evening my sweety , to tum jag rahi thi , fir ye sone ki acting kyu ker rahi thi

Jyoti bacho ki tarah :- ager ni kerti to apni pyare bhaiyu ki itni pyari kissi kese milti or kiss do na bhai

Karan :- acha natkhat or kisi chahiye ..

Or ye bol wo jyoti ko apne niche leker gudgudi kerne laga or jyoti khil khila k hasne lagi .

Uska khilkhilata pyara chahera dekh karan to usi me kho sa gaya , or ye baat jab jyoti ne dekhi to wo sharmate hue boli.

Jyoti :- bhai ese mat ghuro, mujhe sharam aati h.

Karan :- dekhne de mujhe gudiya , tera ye sunder or masum chahera , tu ni janti tera ye bhai kese raha bina tere rasatal lok me , jis chahare ko bina dekhe , m rahane ka soch bhi ni sakta tha , us chahre k didaar in ankho ko ek hafte baad hua h meri bahana , in ankho ki pyaas bujha lene de meri gudiya .

Jyoti nam ankho se:- bhai aapse dur ho ker mujhe bhi kaha chen tha , bhale hi shani dev ne mujhe us mahal me har suvidha di , per sath sath mane aapka pura safar bhi dekha , kese aapne mere liye , kitni taklif jheli , kese aapne aman or jhumki ka nayay kiya mane sab dekha bhai,

mujhe khud p bahut gussa bhi aaya ki vaha meri jaan itni taklif jhel raha h or yaha me aaram se bethi hu , lekin shani dev ki maya k kaaran m kuch ker bhi to ni sakti thi na bhai.

Jyoti ki ankho me ansu dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha or vo use sine se lagate hue bola.

Karan :- are meri gudiya tu bat bat pe rone kyu lagti h , jo hua use badla to ni ja sakta na , ab use bhul ja.

Wese ye sab acha hi to hua , humare karan pure rasatal ko pishachon se mukti mili or hume aman or shweta k roop me naye dost bhi .

Kuch din baad jab meri shaktiya jab wapas mil jayegi , to m tumhe bhi waha lekar jaunga .Tumhe un dono se mil ker bahut maja aayega

Jyoti :- sirf aman or shweta se hi bhai , aap kisi or ko bhul to ni rahe ya mujhe kisi se chupa rahe ho

Karan samjh gaya ki uska ishara kaya ki or tha , karan ko jab ye pata chala ki jyoti ne sab kuch dekha h to uski fat gayi ye soch kee ki ,ki usne jarur kaya k sath ki gayi uski masti bhi dekh li hogi.

Karan :- or kon gudiya , tu kiski baat ker rahi h m kuch samjha ni.

Karan ne janbhujker anjan banne ki koshis ki , bachne ki koshis kerte hue.

Jyoti thode gusse me :- kyu itni jaldi bhul gaye , aapke dost aman ki bhabhi , yani ki apni hone wali wife yani us kaya k baare me.

Ye sab kya chal raha h bhai , m kuch din aapse dur kya hui , aapne ye sab shuru ker diya.

Karan ghabra gaya, vo bhale hi duniya ka rakshak tha, per use apni bahan k gusse se bahut dar lagata tha.

Karan ghabrate hue :- are are gudiya , jesa tu soch rahi h vesa kuch ni h , vo to sirf meri ek saheli h.

Jyoti :- acha to kon apni saheli ko apni hone wali wife bolta h.

Karan or jyada ghabrate :- are meri lado m to wo majak ker raha tha, bhal jiski tere jesi itni pyari gf hogi , vo kisi or ki or kyu dekhega bhala , koi pagal hi hoga wo to

Karan ko yu ghabrata dekh jyoti khud ko control ni ker payi or jor se hasne lagi.

Jyoti :- are mere budu golu bhaiya , just relax me to majak ker rahi thi.

Karan ki ye sun jan me jan aayi or wo bola.

Karan :- kya chipkali tune to mujhe dara hi diya.

Jyoti :- kyu itna dar lagta h mujhse .

Karan :- dar ni gudiya , ye to pyaar h mera tere liye or dar to bas is baat ka h ki tum mujhse dur na ho jao kisi galat fehmi k chalte hue.

Jyoti karan k gale lagte hue :- awwww , you are so sweet bhaiya , or aaapko darne ki jarurat ni h mere bhaiyu , aapki jyoti ko apse dur koi ni ker sakta , mane aapse pahale bhi bola h na , aapse jyada bharosa to m mahadev p bhi na karu to fir ye dar kyu bhai.

Karan :- pata ni gudiya jabse hum rasatal se lote h tabse ek ajib sa dar lag raha h , jese kuch bahut bura hone wala h , jese ki tujse mujhe koi dur ker dega.

Jyoti :- aap chinta mat kero bhai , aapse dur to mujhe swayam ishvar bhi na ker paye , to ye chote moti musibaton se kya darna.

Yu hi karan ko jyoti santwana deti h or fir dono bhai bahan thoda tiruanntapuram shahr ghumte h or raat ko hotel aake so jate h


Wahi dusri or


Ek ghar me ek ladka or ek ladki ek dusre ko kiss ker rahe the , ladka bahut hi wildly kiss ker raha tha or ladki bhi uska pura sath de rahi thi.

Wo dono ek dusre ko kiss kam ker rahe the or kaat jyada rahe the , jese ek dusre ko kha hi jayenge.

Kuch der baad ladka ladki k hotho ko chod uski gardan ko chumne laga , jisse ladki siskiya lene lagi.

Ladki :- aahhh assi. Ohhh yeah.

Fir ladka ladki k piche jaa ker uske boobs dabate hue uski gardan chumne laga or uske mummo ko janvaro ki tarah dabane laga

Kuch der isi position m rahane k baad ladki se bardasht ni hua or usne piche mud ker ek hi jhatke me
Buttons ko todte hue uski shirt ko utar diya or uski chati ko chumti hui pent k uper se uske land ko pakadke boli.

Ladki :- bas mere raja , ab or mat tarsao, ab or bardasht ni hota , ab apne ye ustad se meri muniya ki pyas bhuja do

Ladka us ladki ko baho me bhar ke chumte hue :- abhi thoda ruko to sahi janeman , abhi to maja shuru hua h.

Ye bol ladke ne ladki ka top fad dala , jisse uke aam jese bade bade boobs uske samne aagaye , jo ek choti si lal rang ki transparent bra me kaid the.

Ladke k to ye najara dekhte hi muh me pani aagaya or wo ladki k boobs p tut pada or bra k uper se hi unhe chusne or katne laga or ek hath se dusre boobs ko dabane laga or ladki ladke ka land pant k uper se dabane lagi

Ladke ne kiss kerte hue ladki ki shorts ko kab utar diya , ye us ladki ko bhi pata na chala or ab vo sirf hare yellow bra or yellow panty me rah gayi thi.

Panty m kapda na k barabar hi tha , jo bas uski chut ko dhak raha tha or wo panty string wali thi , transparent.

Fir ladka uski bra ko fad hi dala or uske boobs ko chuste hue ek hath us ladki ki panty m dal k chut ragadne laga.

Fir kuch der baad jab ladki se control na hua to usne ladke ko khud se alag kiya or niche ghutno k bal beth ker uski pant khol deti h

Ladke ne under wear ni pahana tha to , jese hi ladki ne pent kholi , to uska land spring ki tarah nikal ke ladki k chahare se takraya.

Ladka :- dekh kya rahi ho meri jaan , apne khilone se pyaar ni karogi.

Ye sunte hi ladki ne muskurate hue us ladke k land ko pahale to ache se chata or fir ek hi baar me uske adhe land ko muh me leker lolipop ki tarah chusne lagi.

Ladka :- aahhh ohhh , suck it , ese hi chus meri jaan, ese hi chus , kya mast chusti h re tu

Ye bol ladka khud hi apna land aage piche ker us ladki k muh ko chodne laga.

10 min land chuswane k baad , ladka ladki ko utha ke bed pe patak deta h or uski panty bhi fad k uski chut per tut pada or kute ki tarah uski chut chatne laga.

Ladki :- aahhh bhai ese hi chato meri chut , kha jao apni randi bahan ki chut , aah ese hi .

Ladka :- ha meri pyari randi bahana , aaj to teri chut kha jaunga , kya mast chut h teri , itne salo se chod raha hu , per aaj bhi utni hi tight h

Ladki :-. Aahh , ye sab mane aapke liye hi to kiya h bhai, roj exercise kerke aaj tak ise dhili ni hone diya

Aaahh chodo bhai , aapki jib se chodo meri chut.

Ladka apni jib ko apni bahan ki chut me daal kee aage piche ker raha tha or fir uski chut ko uper se leke niche tak chat ne laga

Ladki :- aah ab or bardaasht ni hota bhai , chod dalo mujhe , faad do meri bur apne is mote lode se viraj bhai , ab or ni bardast hota

(Ji ha dosto ye ladka or ladki or koi ni viraaj or maya hi the , jo ek dusre k sath sex ker rahe the.

Kam umer me maa baap k marne k baad , akele ye jab delhi me rah rahe the , to dono ek dusre ka bahut ache se khayal rakhte , dono bhai bahan kam dosto ki tarah jyada rahate or kab indono ko ek dusre se pyaar ho gaya , inhe khud hi ni pata chala or koi inke sath na hone ki vajah se inme kisi ka dar bhi ni tha .

Or ek din inhone ek dusre ko purpose ker diya or delhi me apna ghar badal ker waha pati patni ki tarah rahane lage or sex relation bhi inme ban chuke the.

In dono me pyaar jarur tha , lekin havas bhi dono me kut kut k bhari thi , viraaj k sexual relation or bhi kayi ladkiyo k sath the , jiska maya ko bhi pata tha , maya bhale hi viraaj k alawa kisi se ni chudwati , lekin use dusri ladkiyo ko apne bhai k niche letane me bhi kaafi maja aata

Yaha tak ki usne apni kayi saheliyon ko viraaj se chudwaya bhi , chahe pyaar k bahane , ya blackmail ker.

Jo ladki unki baato m na aati to uske liye bhi plan tha unke pas , wo raat ko us ladki ko as a friend rukne k liye bulate or usko nind ki dawai deke sula ker , uski nudes pic lelete or baad me use blackmail kerte.)

Viraj :- ha jarur meri darling , pahale apne bhai k land ko gila to ker de

Ye sun Maya uthi or uska dobara ek baar 2 min land chus k gila ker diya

Or fir viraj ne maya ki chut ki fanko p apna land rakh ek jordar dhaka mara , jisse uska pura land ek hi baar me pura maya ki chut me ghus gaya .

Jise maya ki ek jordar chikh nikal gayi or boli.

Maya :- aaah dhire kero na bhai , m bahan hu apki koi randi ni.

Viraj uske hoth chumte hue :- are meri randi bahan , tu to ese chila rahi h ,jese pahali baar chud rahi ho.

Ruk tujhe abhi maja deta hu.

Ye bol viraaj ne dhakke lagane shuru ker diye or uske boobs dabate hue use chodne laga.

Maya :- aaaaaahhhhhhhhh ohhhhhh, yeahhhhhh, chodo mujhe bhai , ese hi chodo mujhe or tej bhai or tej , fuck me hard aaaaahhhh ohhhhhhhhhhhh.

Kuch der tak viraj maya ko usi position me choda , fir usne use ghodi bana diya or ek hi jhatke me pura land uski chut me ghused ke chodne laga.


Viraaj :- aaahhhhh , kya tight chut h teri ,meri randi bahan , pura ka pura land jakda hua h isne .

Bol tujhe maja aaraha h ki ni meri randi.

Maya :- aaahhhh bhai , bHut maja aaraha h , ese hi chodo mujhe bhai meri chut ko faad dalo , m aapki randi hu bhai , apni chinal bahan ki chut ka aaj bhosda bana dalo.
Aaahhhh ohhh yeah , fuck me hard ,

Ye sun viraj or josh me aagaya or maya k balo ko khichte hue jor jor se use chodne laga .

Or fir uske balo ko chod ker , uski gand pe taphad barsate hue use chodne laga.

Maya :- aaah bhai aaaah fucke me deaper bhai , maro or maro bhai meri gand pe , aaahhhhh kya mast land h tera bhai , ese hi thodi na meri sari randi saheliya jo aapse chudi h wo apki tarife kerti ghumti h , ohh yeah.

Viraaj :- haa wo to h meri bahana , per sala bahut din ho gaya nayi chut chode hue .

Maya :- aaah bas kuch din or intezaar ker lo bhai , humare plan k kamyab hote hi vo kamini jyoti or vo randi riya , dono hi aapke niche hogi , fir ji bhar ke dono ki gand fadna.

Viraaj :- ha yar ,m to kabse us din ka intezaar ker raha hu jab us kutiya ko apne lode ka swad chakhau , sali kya. Mast maal h , per sare din apne us bhai k sath chipki rahati h , pata bhi kiya college me uske baare me , per sali pata hi ni kis miti ki bani h , kisi ko rati bhar bhi bhav ni deti.

Maya :- aaahhhh ohhhh bhav de ya na de usse kya fark padta h bhai tumhe , tere ko to bas uska ras nichodna h.a

Viraaj :- bas itna hi ni meri bahan , us sali ko to m apni rakhail banaunga , sali ki vajah se humne bahut bejiti sahi h z jiska hisab wo jindagi bhar chukayegi.

Maya :- bhai wo hoga jo hoga , pahale mujhe to thanda ker do...


Viraaj :- ha kyu ni meri rani bahana , le ...

Ye bol viraj maya ki chut me or jor jor se dhake lagane laga or fir usne maya ko apne uper leker niche se dhake lagane laga .

Maya bhi uchal uchal k sath dene lagi , or kuch der bad wo jab thak gayi to viraj k sine p let gayi .

Viraj bhi jhadne wala tha to , usne full speed se dhake lagane laga or maya k hotho ko chusne laga or 10 min baad vo jhad gaya or sara pani maya ki chut me chod diya.

Or maya ko apne uper hi letaye hue bola ,

Viraj :- wese vo dono aa kab rahe h wapas.

Maya :- radha bata rahi thi ki unka phone aaya tha , wo dono kal lot rahe h.

Viraj kamini muskan k sath :- ye to bahut achi baat h , ab aayega maja , jab us karan ko m puri tarah barbad ker dunga , uski jyoti ko usise chin ker.

Ye bol wo or maya dono hasne lage or dono apne aap ko saf ker , nange hi ek sath so gaye

Back to the hero.


Agle din karan or jyoti flight se wapas apne shahar pahunch gaye to paya unhe receive kerne keval rohan sonam or shivani hi aayi h.

Karan radha ko na paker heran to hua , per us baat ko jyada mahatv na dete hue vo apne dosto ki or bhada

Rohan jese hi karan ko dekhta h to vo usse gale milta h or sonam jyoti se , fit sonam karan se or jyoti rohan se gale mili

Sonam bacho jese naraj hone ki acting kerte hue .

Sonam :- ye kya bhai , aapne to bola tha ki aap 3 din baad aajaoge or aaj 6th day h , ye to galat baat h

Karan pyar se sonam k gal chum ker usse mafi mangta h or exam khatam hone k baad use ghumane le jane ka promise kerta h , jisse wo khush ho jati h.

Jyoti :- rohan bhai , riya di ni aayi aapke sath

Karan :- ha aaj esa pahali baar hua ki radha hume recive kerne ni aayi.

Sonam shikayati andaz me :- bhai mane to use aapke aane ki timing bhi batayi thi , per usne busy hone ka bol k mana ker diya , vo boli ki vo baad m mil legi

Rohan :- ha bhai , riya di ne bhi kuch esa hi bola.

Karan :- oh acha chalo koi baat ni , ao ghar chale

Fir wo charo rohan ki gadi me beth ker karan k ghar ki or nikal pade , raste me jab gadi ek red light pe ruki to karan ne jo dekh use dekh herani bhi hui or dukh bhi.

Usne dekha radha or riya maya or viraj k sath samne ek theater se movie dekh k nikal rahi h .

Karan ne ishare se jyoti ko bhi ye dikhaya , jise dekh jyoti ko taklif hui .

Fir wo sab apne ghar pahunch gaye or sonam ki jid k kaaran aaj wo tino ek kamre me hi soye.

Fir kuch din ese hi nikal gaye or karan or jyoti k final exam bhi start ho gaye

Lekin karan or jyoti ne ye baat notice ki ki ab pahale jesa kuch ni raha tha.

Jo radha karan se ek din bhi bina baat kiye rah ni pati thi , wo kayi kayi din milna to chodo , usse phone bhi ni kerti or esa hi kuch hal riya ka bhi tha.

Riya bhi jo apna jyadatar samay , rohan ya karan or jyoti k sath bitati thi , wo bhi ab jyadatar samay radha ki tarah viraj or mAya k sath bitati , pata ni esa kya jadu sa ker diya tha un per maya or viraaj ne .

Lekin rohan or sonam ko shuru se hi maya or viraj pasand ni the , isliye wo unse dur hi rahate the , jiske chalte wo kafi close ho gaye the ek dusre ki or.

Ek din sonam.thoda sa tension me bethi thi , tab karan uske pass jaker bola .

Karan :- kya hua sonu , tu itna tension m kyu h.

Sonam :- kuch ni bhai , wo mere kuch papers shimla k hi govt office m rah gaye h , or wo kafi important h , unhe hi mujhe jaldi collect kerne k liye jana hoga.

Karan :- oh to ye baat h , to kya hua tum jaa ao na ek baar , mere or jyoti k to exam chal rahe h , tum esa kero tum rohan ko apne sath le jao , wo thoda ghum bhi lega .

Sonam ko karan ka ye idea pasand aagaya or karan ne jab rohan se is baare me baat ki to pahale to wo thoda hichkichya , shayad use kisi chij ki tension thi , jiske chalte wo jana ni chahata tha , per fir karan or jyoti k baar bar bolne per wo bhi man gaya or vo dono agle din shimla k liye nikal gaye train se.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or preety bhi karib 3 ghante k safar k baad haveli pe pahunch gayi or preety ne sabse pahale ghuste hi veer k kamre me gayi or amritunjay ko veer k muh me dalne lagi.

Jal k prabhav se kuch der veer ka sharir kuch der chamka or fir vo vapas normal ho gaya.

Or wo uthate hi chilaya

Veer :- preetyyyyy.

Preety veer ko sahi salamat dekh khushi k ansu rote hue boli.

Preety :- m yaha hu veer .

Veer jese hi preety ko dekhta h to jhat se use baho me bhar bola.

Veer :- tum thik to hona preetu, tumhe kuch hua ni.

Preety :- jiska itna pyaar kerne wAla dost ho , use bhala kuch ho sakta h kya veer

Veer :- preety m tumse kuch kahana chahata hu ,

I love u preety.

M tumse aaj se hi ni bachpan se pyaar kerta aaya hu, per tumse kah pane ki himat ni ker paya , per ab m or ni ruk sakta preety, tumne meri jaan bana ker mujhe apna karzdar bana diya h .

Ab mujhe apna karz chukane ka moka do meri preetu, please accept my love.

Preety :- I love u tooo veer , m bhi tume bachpan se chahati thi , per mera bhi hal tum jesa tha.

Or khabardat aage se ye karz ki baat ki to , pyar me karz nam ki koi jagah ni hoti

Veer preety ke muh se I love u tooo sun khushi se jhum utha or uske pure chahare ko chumne laga or preety bhi

Tabhi naina bol uthi

Naina :- oh laila majnu , ye sab kerne se pahale gate to band ker liya kero or jhali tu to jese bhul hi gayi ki m bhi yaha hu.

Naina ki baat sun dono love birds sharma gaye , jinhe dekh naina hasti h or unhe kuch time sath bitane dene k liye , waha se nikal gayi.

Or apne kamre me jaker packing kerne lagi, tabhi usne apni maa ki photo dikhi.

Naina photo dekhte hue :- maa aap jyada chinta mat kerna , aapki beti jald hi aapko dhund legi or us samraat ka ant ker aapko mukt kerwayegi.

Ye bol wo apna bag pack kerke sone chali gayi.


2 din baad karan or jyoti k final exam khatam ho gaye ab vo free the or wo dono khush bhi the ki ab unhe ful time job bhi jald hi mil jayegi .

Lekin karan apni shaktiyo k vihin hone k kaaran aane wale khatre se anjan tha.

Or kuch din baad vo.manhus din aahi gaya , jis din karan ki puri jindagi badalne wali thi

Aaj maya or viraj ka janmdin tha , wo dono bhi judwa the , jiske chalte unhone ek badi si party rakhi thi

Jisme usne karan or jyoti samet sabhi ko invite kiya , karan or jyoti ache se teyar ho ker viraaj k ghar pahunche jaha party thi.

Jyoti ne aaj ek black colour ki dress pahani thi , jisme wo bahu sunder lag rahi thi , kuch esi .




Hamesha ki tarah karan uski khub tarif kerta h or vo dono sonam or rohan k sath nikal pade viraj k ghar ki or jaha radha or riya pahale se hi mojud the

Viraj ne karan or jyoti samet sabka ache se welcome kiya , or fir karan or jyoti radha se mile , jo unse kafi din bad mili thi

Radha ne tab bhi jyada bhav na dete hue , ek formality k sath un dono se mili, jisse karan or jyoti ko had se jyada taklif hui , per unhonne khud ko control kiya or is baare m baad me radha se baat kerne ka soch, party ko enjoy kerne ki koshis kerne lage.

Thodi der baad sare guest chale gaye or ab sirf wo sab dost hi bache the.

Tabhi maya jyoti samet sabhi ladkiyo ko apne room me le gayi .

Viraaj :- chal bhai , ye sab ladkiya to apne me lag gayi , chal kyu na hum bhi chat pe gum lete h

Karan viraaj ki baat man uske sath chat pe chal pada , kuch der baat kerne k baad viraj ne karan ko ek glass drink di.

Karan :- sorry yar m alcohol ni pita.

Viraj :- ha yaar m janta hu , isliye tere liye ye soft drink hi laya hu

Karan ye sun usse vo glass le leta h or usse baate kerne laga


Tabhi viraj ko kisi ka phone aata h or wo excuse me bol waha se nikal gaya or fir waha maya aagayi.

Karan :- are maya tum yaha , wese birthday girl apni friends ko chod k yaha kya ker rahi h

Maya :- kyu , kya tum mere dost ni ho karan jo esa bol.rahe ho.

Karan :- are ni ni maya mere kahane ka vo matlab ni tha , tum meri ek achi dost ho

Maya :- oh I see , are ye kya tumne abhi tak apni drink ni pi , acha lao m pila deti hu tumhe

Karan :- are ni ni maya , iski kya jarurat h , m pi lunga na.

Maya :- abhi tumne kaha na m tumhari dost hu , to kya apni dost ki baat ni manoge or vese bhi birthday girl ko mana ni kiya jata.

Ye bol wo karan k hatho se glass leker use pilane lagi or jab hi glas uske muh se hataya , jab glass pura khali ho gaya.

Fir wo wahi khadi karan se baate kerne lagi or kuch der baad fir karan ko chakker se aane lage , shayad us drink me kuch milaya hua tha , jiski vajah se esa ho raha tha.

Maya :- kya hua karan ....

Karan sir pakadte hue :- pata ni maya , per achanak se mujhe chakkar se aarahe h.

Maya ye sun muskurane lagi or fir natak kerte hue boli.

Maya :- kya tumhari tabiyat kharab h , tum esa kero thodi der rest ker lo

Karan ko maya ki baat sahi lagi or maya ka sahara le wo uper hi bane kamre me chala gaya.

Karan jese hi us kamre me pahuncha to kisi me piche se uske sir p kisi vajandar chij se vaar ker dala , or shaktiya na hone ki vajah se or drink ki vajah se behosh ho gaya.

Thodi der baad karan ki ankh jab khuli jab uske uper kisi ne pani dala or jab bo utha to usne paya wo shirtless bed pe pada h or uske sare dost use ghur rahe h or jyoti to bina kisi reaction k butt jese bani khadi h.

Or sabse jyada herani to tab hui , jab usne dekha ki maya jiske kapde fate hue h wo viraaj k gale lage ro rahi h

Karan ko kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki ye ho kya raha h , usne riya se pucha.

Karan :- di , yaha kya ho raha h , m ese bina shirt k yaha kese or ye maya ko kya hua.

Riya ne jese hi ye suna , usne gusse se ek jordar thappad karan ko marte hue bola.

Riya :- mat bol apni gandi juban se mujhe di kamine.

Karan ki to riya ki aakhe fati ki fati rah gayi riya ka ye ravaiya dekh .

Usne jyoti se pucha.

Karan :- gudiya , ye sab kya ho raha h , ye di mujhse ese kyu baat ker rahi h.

Per jyoti to pathar bani si vahi khadi thi.

Viraaj :- vo kya bolegi kamine , tune apni gandi harkat se use bolne layak choda hi kaha

Karan gusse se :- ye kya bakwas ker raha h tu viraaj , jawan sambhal k baat ker

Tabhi karan k gaal pe ek or thappad pada , lekin is baar thappad radha ne mara tha

Radha gusse se :- jawan sambhal k baat ker mere bhai se mr karan , tamij ki baat to dur tu shukar mana , teri is harkat k baad bhi humne police ko ni bulaya .

Radha ka ye reaction to karan pe ek bahut bada bomb tha , jo radha uski itni ijjat kerti thi , wo aaj itni badtamiji se baat ker rahi thi

Karan :- aakhir aap sab ko ho kya gaya h , jo aap mujhse yu bartav ker rahe ho

Riya :- dekho to iski besharmi ko , itna sab kuch kerne k baad bhi puch raha h , isne kiya kya .

Ek to tume maya ka rape kerne ki koshis ki or ab humpe hi chila raha h.

Karan ye sun ker to jese pagal hone wala tha.

Karan :- ni ye sab jhut h , mane kuch ni kiya

Tabhi radha ne karan ko ek or thappad mar k bola

Radha :- besharam kamine , itne sab hone k baad bhi tum bol rahe ho ki tumne kuch ni kiya , humne tume range hatho pakda h .

Vo to viraaj bhai sahi time p pahunch ker tere sir pe mar ke tuje behosh ker diya , verna to tum ...

Chiii

Karan bahut samjhane ki koshis kerta h un sabko samjhane ki per koi bhi uski ni sunta or use dutkarne or marne lage.

Karan jyoti k pass gaya or ghutno k bal rote hue bola.

Karan :- gudiya , kam se kam tum to apne bhai p yakin kero , tum to janti hi ho na m esa ni ker sakta hu , tum kuch bolti kyu ni gudiya kuch to bolo.

Jyoti achanak se vahi gir padi or behosh ho gayi ,shayad use sadma laga tha, ye dekh karan ki halat or kharab ho gayi or wo rote hue jyoti ko uthane ki koshis kerne laga.

Aj wo pahali baar khud ko itna asahay samjh raha tha , wo chah ker bhi sach samne ni la sakta tha.

Riya :- ab to thodi sharam ker lo karan , tere is ghatiya harkat se jyoti ko sadma laga h , ager tujhme jara si bhi sharm bachi h or jara si bhi tune jyoti se tune pyaar kiya h to.

Tujhe usi jyoti ki kasam h , chale ja hamari jindagi se dur or kabhi lot k wapas mat aana.

Riya ki ye baat sun karan ki to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gayi ,riya k muh se jyoti ki kasam sun ker to wo khud kisi sadme me chala gaya.

Karan ansuo k sath :- thik h ager aap sab ko yahi lagta h ki me gunehgar huu or meri bahan ki ye halat meri vajah se hui h to , m abhi hi aap sabko chod k chala jata hu

(Hath jodte hue) per aap sabse meri bas ek vinti h ki , aap log meri gudiya ka khayal rakhna , vo bahut hi bholi h , use duniyadari ki koi jyada samjh ni h , please usko kuch mat hone dena, bas itni vinti h aapse

Lekin kisi ne karan ki or mudker dekha tak ni or karan ghar se bahar nikal apni bike se nikal gaya , shahar k bahar ki or lekin ye rasta uske jungle wale ghar ka to bilkul bhi ni tha, is baat se anjaan ki ek bahut bada khatra uske piche hi chal raha h

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.
Sorry for late update friends , or haa kuch readers ki bahut request pe mane sex add to ker diya , per m iske liye abhi mentally prepare ni tha , isliye jesa bhi aapko lage aap apne review jarur dijiyega.

Or janne k liye ki kya khatra karan ki or badh raha h or kya jyoti ka karan p vishwas kya tur jayega , ya jyoti ka vishwas adig rahega or adig raha to wo kese karan ko bachayegi janne k liye sath bane rahiye
nice update ..to viraj aur maya ka plan tha karan ko fasane ka 😡 aur wo kamiyab bhi ho gaye ..par riya aur radha thi hi alag par jyoti ko to trust karna chahiye tha apne bhai par ..
jab shani dev ne kaha tha karan ko sambhalnecko aur raksha karne ko to jyoti khud hi sadme me chali gayi aise raksha karegi apne bhai ki .

veer aur preety dono ne apne pyar ko accept kar liya 😍😍..
 
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