Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Harry rocks]

Yeh Chal Jo Naina Ne Chala Hai , Yeh Na Sirf Ish Baat Ko Darshata Hai Ki Woh Kisi Bhi Paristhiti Ko Avsar Main Badalna Janti Hai .

Mujhe Ish Baat Ka Dukh Nahi Ki Hamare Hero Ka Kya Hoga !!! Ya Fir Ish Baat Ka Ki Karan Kaise Ish Mushkil Se Ubhrega.
Darasal Mujhe Khushi Ish Baat Ki Hai Ki Karan Swarthi Nahi Hai Aur Woh Har Decesion Ko Kusal-ta Se Leta Hai , Hamare Writer Ne Ish Baat Ko Bahut Acche Se Darshaya Hai Ki Karan Dandnayak Banne Ke Liye Kitna Sahi Hai . Aur Toh Aur Hamare Writer Harry rocks Ji Samay Samay Par Karan Ke Liye Gaye Bilkul Sahi Decesions Ko Darshate Aye Hai .

Lekin Jyoti Ka Kya ????

Usne Sirf Karan Ke Decesions Ka Keval Samarthan Kiya Hai . Aur Agge Bhi Woh Galat Decesion Legi Karan Ko Dubara Chodne Ka .
Kya Jyoti Ko Sirf Ishliye Dandnayika Maan Lena Chahiye Ki Woh Karan Ka Pehela Pyar Hai .
Sach Kahu Toh Nahi !! Keval Ish Adhar Pe Jyoti Ko Dandnayika Maan Lena Kafi Nahi Hai . Aur Agge Bhi Toh Aur Premika Hai Karan Ki Life Main , Aur SONAM Ka Kya Usko Toh Kuch Nahi Mila .

Meri Vinti Hai Ki Sonam Ko Andhere Main Na Rakkha Jaye Uspar Bhi Thoda Prakash Dala Jaye , Kyu Ki Uske Paas Bhi Kavach Hai . Aur Yahi Nahi Woh Bahut Saanth Swabaw Ki Hai . Kabhi Kabhi Usko Aise Dikhaya Jaye Jaha Pe Wo Karan Pe Haq Jamaye Tab Lagega Ki Karan Ne Usko Puri Tarah Se Swikar Kar Liya Hai Aur Karan Kabhi Bhi Pyaar Main Kami Nahi Rakhta , Woh Barabar Pyaar Karta Hai .

Aur Bhai Ho Sake Toh Thora Comedy Add Kardo Jaise Ki Maine Pichle Post Pe Bataya Tha .
Thora Family Nok-Jhok Bhi Dikhao Jaise ki Kaya Ke Saath Karan Ke Rishte Ki Baat Fir Sonam Aur Jyoti Ka Naraz Hona Fir Kaya Ko Chidhana . Thoda Sonam , Jyoti Aur Karan Ka Maan-Mutav woh Bhi Pyaar Wala . Kab Se Serious Scenes Ko Padh Padh Kar Maza Nahi A Raha Hai .
(RADHE RADHE)

Jyoti kyu sahi maine m.dandnayika h , or koi kyu ni ye to aage aane wali ghatnao se khud hi jan jaoge aap bhai , fir bhi aapnd jab ye sawal khada ker hi diya h to aapke liye mane story m ek naya adhyay joda h aapke quary ko door kerne k liye

 

[Harry rocks]

Bhai Mujhe Mention Karke Edit Kyu Karte Ho . Jo Bhi Kehena Hai Khul Ke Kaho .


Logo Se Kya Sharmana
Log Toh Apne Hai ,
Zara Dekh Kar Yeh Batao
Kitne Yaha Paraye Hai !

Hum Sab Se Kya Chupana
Jo Kehena Hai Khul Kar Kaho Na !
Agar Baat Hai Tumko Kuch Batlane Ko
Toh Ek Private Message Kar Do Na

Agar Tumhe Kuch Zaroori Batein Karni Ho, Toh Hum Number mera Mang Lo Na .

Kisne Roka Hai Tumhein Mujhe Koi Baat Batlane Ko ×2


Agar Hosh Main Ho Toh Sun Lo Meri Baat ×2
Tension main Tum Rehete Ho Din-Raat
Agar Soch Liya Tumne Humko
Toh Badal Do Apne Vichar
Koi Baat Hai Toh Puch Kar Dekho
Main Karunga Tumhare Tension Ka Sudhar ...




Kaisi Lagi Meri Poem .
Jis kisi Ko pasand Aayi Reply Zaroor Karna . Aur kuch Sudhar Karni Ho Toh Woh Bhi Batana ..

Poem to bahut badiya h bhai per bura mat manna ye poem ye shayari apne bas ki baat nni h , sab bounser jate h jyadatar isliye aap jo bolna chaho saf bol diya kijiye , kyunki ager m aapki shayri ka reply ni de pau to apko bura lag sakta h

 

[Harry rocks]

Mahi Maurya ji aapke review ki pratiksha m.h hum

 

[Boxerji]

Poem to bahut badiya h bhai per bura mat manna ye poem ye shayari apne bas ki baat nni h , sab bounser jate h jyadatar isliye aap jo bolna chaho saf bol diya kijiye , kyunki ager m aapki shayri ka reply ni de pau to apko bura lag sakta h

Bhai Tum Kaha Ki Baat Kaha Utha Rahe Ho .Mana Ki Mera Mood Usdin Kharab Tha Toh Maine Kuch Zyada Hi React Kar Diya , Iska Yeh Matlab Toh Nahi Ki Main Bekar Main Naraz Ho Jata Hu .
Ab Agar Apka Mood Nahi Hai Reply Dene Ka Toh Koi Baat Nahi , Humko Bura Nahi Lagega .

 

[Harry rocks]

Bhai Tum Kaha Ki Baat Kaha Utha Rahe Ho .Mana Ki Mera Mood Usdin Kharab Tha Toh Maine Kuch Zyada Hi React Kar Diya , Iska Yeh Matlab Toh Nahi Ki Main Bekar Main Naraz Ho Jata Hu .
Ab Agar Apka Mood Nahi Hai Reply Dene Ka Toh Koi Baat Nahi , Humko Bura Nahi Lagega .
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Chalo chhodo bhai jo hua so hua aapke review ka intezaar ho raha h

 

[Boxerji]

Jyoti kyu sahi maine m.dandnayika h , or koi kyu ni ye to aage aane wali ghatnao se khud hi jan jaoge aap bhai , fir bhi aapnd jab ye sawal khada ker hi diya h to aapke liye mane story m ek naya adhyay joda h aapke quary ko door kerne k liye

Waise Thanks Kehena Chahunga Ki Sirf Mere Liye Ek Chapter Joda Ja Raha Hai .
Main Ajj Sach Main Khud Ko Bahut Zyada Special Feel Kar Raha Hu Ki Meri Value Itni Hai Iss Forum Main .
Thanks Brother

 

[Harry rocks]

Waise Thanks Kehena Chahunga Ki Sirf Mere Liye Ek Chapter Joda Ja Raha Hai .
Main Ajj Sach Main Khud Ko Bahut Zyada Special Feel Kar Raha Hu Ki Meri Value Itni Hai Iss Forum Main .
Thanks Brother

Ab apne kand hi esa kiya tha meri heroine p sawal utha ker to jwab to dena hi padega na

 

[Mahi Maurya]

Mahi Maurya ji aapke review ki pratiksha m.h hum

आपकी कहानी बहुत ज्यादा आगे बढ़ चुकी है सर जी। इतनी लंबी कहानी पढ़ने में बहुत समय लगेगा। और मेरी आदत ये है कि मैं हर भाग पढ़ने के बाद उस भाग पर अपनी प्रतिक्रिया देती हूँ। मैने आज तक कोई कहानी बीच से नहीं पढ़ी है और न ही बीच से प्रतिक्रिया ही दी है, इसलिए माफी चाहती हूं आपसे की मैं आपकी इस कहानी में प्रतिक्रिया देने में असमर्थ हूँ।

क्योंकि मेरे पास समय नहीं है पूरी 186 भाग तक कहानी पढ़ने का, फिर भी अगर समय मिलता है तो हम आपकी कहानी पढ़ते हुए अपनी प्रतिक्रिया देते जाएंगे। आपकी इस कहानी की तारीफ सुनी है मैंने। अच्छी कहानी है ये। इसके अलावा अगर आप कोई नई कहानी शुरू करते हैं तो आरंभ में ही मुझे बता दीजिएगा। उस कहानी में मेरी समीक्षा नियमित और हर भाग पर मिलेगी आपको।

 

[Boxerji]

Ab apne kand hi esa kiya tha meri heroine p sawal utha ker to jwab to dena hi padega na

Chaliye isi bahane yeh toh pata chala ki apki heroine kaun hai

 

[Asif khan]

Update no - 1
Karan aaj subah bahoot jald hi utha gaya kyoki aaj uska college khulane wala tha uske bagal mei jyoti soyi
huyi thi. Usne jyoti ki taraf dekha wo bahoot hi masoom bilkul ek choti bachi ki tarah so rahi thi.
Karan ne jyoti ke mathe ko dhire se chum liya tabhi jyoti ne dhire se apni ankhe khol di.
Jyoti:- good morning bhaiya
Karan:- Good morning didi
Karan ki baat sunkar jyoti khilkhilakar huns di phir jyoti ko husta dekh karan bhi husne
laga.. Kuchh der ke baad karan ne jyoti se bola chal jyoti bahoot huns liye jaldi uth tabtak mai fresh hokar
aata hu..karan tauliya lekar bathroom mei guss gaya or jyoti idhar phir se so gayi..............................
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Karan or Jyoti ek hi room mei sote hai inke room mei ek common bathroom hai.
kyoki wo dono ke maa bachpan mei hi mar gayi tab ye dono bilkul chote the.. Uske baad inke papa ne
dusra saadi kar li jo karan or jyoti se thoda bhi matlab nahi rakhati thi in dono bhai-behan mare ya jiye use
Karan ke sauteli maa ko koi matlab nahi tha waise bhi karan ke papa bhi koi matalab nahi rakhte the. Bas har
mahine karan or jyoti ko 10 hazar rupee mil jate the. Lekin peyar nahi mil pata tha..
Isi karan dono bhai behan ek hi room mei sote the koi bhi problem ho dono ek dusre ko bata dete the
apas mei bahoot frenk the bas inke beech bhai behan ka hi pyar tha.. karan or Jyoti dono ek dusre ke pran
the dono bhai behan ke beech bahoot hi peyar tha.. karan ke papa ka apna khud ka buisnuiss hai karan ke
pass ek bike hai ishi se dono bhai behan college jate hai .............................................
Karan jaise hi bathroom mei se fresh hokar jab room mei aaya to dekha ki jyoti fir se so gayi hai. Karan ish
samay kewal underwear or uske uper ek tauliya lapeta huya tha. Karan ne jyoti ko bahoot hi dhire se apne
mazboot baho mei uthaya or jyoti ko lekar bathroom mei ghuss gaya. tabhi jyoti ki nind khul gayi lekin
wo sant rahi ye dekhne ke liye ki uska bhai kya karta hai abhi jyoti yehi soch rahi thi ki tabhi karan ne usko
bhathtub mei phenk diya. Bhathtub mei pehle se hi pani bhara huya tha. Jyoti ke pure kapde gile ho
gaye. Karan khhi khhi karke husne laga. Karan ko husta dekh jyoti ne bhi karan ke uper pani pekhne lagi karan husta
huya room mei chala gaya jyoti bhi fresh hoker nikal aayi tabtak karan kapde pehan chuka tha jyoti ne
kapde pehne or nasta banane chali gayi dono bhai behan ek dusre ke samne hi kapde pehan lete the.
Udhar uske sauteli maa or papa abhi so rahe the nukal gaye. Jyoti nasta bana rahi thi karan uske pass hi
baitha huya tha. Lagbhag aadhe ghante mei hi nasta ban kar taiyar ho gaya.. Dono bhai-behan ne nasta
kiye or college ki wor nikal gaye.
College mei aaj kuchh khas nahi huya karan or jyoti jab ghar aaye to pata chala ki aaj unke sauteli maa ka janmdin hai
So friendsdekhte h ab aage in dono bhai bahan ki life m kya hota h aaj please aap sab comments kerke bataiyega kesa laga first update or kuch kami ho to jarur batana

Boht badhiya introduction dia h bahi behn ki perm katha lajawab h
Karan joyti ki maa baap ko koi Matlab nahi h in se very bad
Maa ka to samjh Mai ata h butt baap bhi ignore Karta h apne bacho ko ye kia baat hoi