Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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nice update ..jyoty tension me aa gayi thi mangal dev ke gussa hokar jaane se ,isliye wo karan ko maafi maangne ko keh rahi thi ,jyoty ab apna confidence bhi khote jaa rahi hai mangal ke prabhav se ..
par karan apne faisle pe adig hai kyunki wo satya ki raah par hai .

mangal dev ne karan ko dhamki de di par dandnayak ke vakr drishti mangal par pad gayi hai ..

garima ke saath majak masti karke enjoy kiya karan ne par fufa ka jikr karne se garima emotional ho gayi aur chupke se rone lagi jo karan ne dekh liya ..

ye aryan kaun hai ?? karan ya rohan .. riya ko typhoid hua hai aur ab karan aur rohan soch rahe hai ki kuch bura honewala hai par kya ye pata nahi laga paa rahe ..

aur ye kamini yaksh maharani hai ,dekhte hai aur kya kya karegi ye aryan ,prerna ki jindagi narak banane ke liye ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

bonus update
update no :- 223

Wahi dusri or


Vritrasur ko jag ker bhahar aate dekh rahu or ketu muskura rahe the , jab usne aaker unhe pranam kiya to rahu bola.


Rahu :- aao mitra aao , varsho pashchAt tumse milke hum kitne khush h hum bata ni sakte.


Vritrasur :- khushi to mujhe bhi hui h mitra , lekin jitna m aapko janta hu , us hisab se m itna to kah sakta hu ki ye khushi sirf mujhse milne ki to ni h .


Kaho mitra jo nind m mane suna tumhari aawaz me wo kya satya h , kya samay aagaya h ab wo .


Ketu :- ha vritrasur wo samay aahigaya h , jiska tumhe varsho se intezar tha or jis samy k liye tumne war praapt kiya tha , ab samay aagaya h tum apne vardaan ka upyog kero or fir se is sansaar m asuro ka adhipaty sthapit kero.


Fir rahu ketu jyoti k shaktihin hone k bare m batate hue kyu ye sahi moka h wo vritrasur ko samjhate h .


Vritrasur :- mitra tum bol to sahi rahe ho avsar to acha h , per in devo ka khaskar us shani ka koi bharosa ni h , isliye is baar vijay humari hi nishchit ho uske liye mere pas ek upay h


Rahu :- to der kis baat ki vritrasur batao kya yojna h.


Vritrasur batane hi wLa hota h ki tabhi ketu bol utha.


Ketu :- ni rahu yaha p ni , ye jagah uchit ni kya pata konsa dev yaha aapas adrishy roop m mojud ho or humari yojna sun le, isliye chalo mere sath.


Ye bol ketu rahu or vritrasur ko leker apne lok m leke chala gaya jo tha ketu lok.


Ketu :- ah hah , kitna acha lag raha h us patal k andhere se nikal waps apne lok lot k , isi lok se nikalwa k us samay devo ne hume patal m pahunchaya tha n , ab yahi se shuru hogi un devo ki barbadi.


Fir wo 3mo mil ler aage ki yojna banane lage


Wahi dusri or


Location :- shani lok


Mata chaya :- putra ye kesi vichitra ghatna ka aarambh ho gaya h mangal dev per karan ne tumhari di hui vakradrishti ka upyog ker dala.


Shani :- ha mata , mangal ka ahankar ab charam p h or is kaaran wo ache bure ki samjh bhi kho bethe , apne purshtv k ahankar m na keval usne jyoti ka , balki uske samet guru maa adishakti samet sari nari jaat ka bhi apman kiya h , unhe durbal bolke.


Isliye guru dev ki icha se hi karan k dwara rachit dand chakra dwara n keval mangal dev ka ahankar nasht hoga , apitu is sansar ko fir ek baar nari shakti ki mahima ka gyaan hoga.


Devi chaya :- parantu putra , mangal dev ek dev h or karan ek manushy kya ese m ye uchit hoga , kya karan ki shaktiya mangal jese shaktishali dev per karya karegi.


Shani dev :- mata mat bhuliye ki meri vakradrishti koi sadharan shakti ni , sakshat mahadev ka wo amogh vardaan h jiske prabhav se koi ni bach sakta swayam khud guru mahadev bhi isse n bach paye the , is drishti k liye chahe dev ho ya manushya ho ya asur sab saman h , isliye kisi bhi prakar ka pad hone ka koi prashna hi ni uthta mata , nayay vahi shashwat h jo sabke liye barabar ho jese ki karan ka , ab mangal dev ko apne karmfal ko bhogna hi hoga.


Mata chaya :- or vritrasur ka kya putra , rahu or ketu ne avsar ka labh utha vritrasur ko jagrit ker diya h , jo maha shakti shali h, jiska ant keval jyoti hi ker sakti thi , adishakti k vardan k anusar lekin wo to swayam abhi shaktihin h putra , fir kya karenge hum..


Shani :- chintit mat hoiye mata , jo bhi ho raha h guru dev ki icha se hi ho raha h , ese m kisi bhi shubh hone ka koi prashn hi ni uthta , aap nishchit ho jaiye mata, jo hoga shubh hoga


Tab tak ap karan or jyoti ki mithi nok jok ka aanand le lijiye.


Back to the hero.


Karan apne hath m chamch liye :- kha lena meri pyari gudiya .


Jyoti jo karan se subah k liye ruthi hui , or wo bacho se nhakre dikhate hue.


Jyoti muh ferte hue :- ni mujhe ni khana mujhe bhuk ni h.


Karan :- are ese kese bhuk ni h dopahar k baad tune kaha kuch khaya , acha thoda sa to kha le , tu to apni bhai ki achi gudiya h naA.


Jyoti :- m kaha achi hu , m to zidi or buri hu na isliye hi to mujhe datte hue.


Karan :- oh to mera bacha mujhse icliye nalaj h (apne ek hath se kaan pakadte hue ) uske liye Solly na betu , apne bhaiya ko maaf ker do or ache bache ki tarah khana kha lo nAa.


Jyoti muh fulate hue :- ni mujhe ni khana ap bahut gande ho .


Karan :- pakka ni khaogi.


Jyoti :- ji ni ab likh k duu.


Karan :- oh to fir aaj to bhuka hi sona padega yaar.


Jyoti bholepan se :- aap kyu bhuke soyoge .


Karan udaas chahra bana k :- ab meri gudiya bhuki soyegi to m kese kha sakta hu , chalo ye khana m kaya ko khila dunga , or fir so jaunga bhuka.


Ye bol karan uth k jane laga , to jyoti ne us ka hath pakad liya , ab chahe humari jyoti dand nayika hi kyu na ho sath m karan ki gf bhi to thi , use jealous feel hua jealous feel kerti h , bhale hi wo janti thi ki karan or kaya m sirf dosti ka pyara rishta h , per nari k man ko bhagwan bhi kaha samjh paye , use ye hargiz gawara n hua ki uska bf uska bhai uske hisse ka pyar kisi or ko de.


Jyoti :- are ruko to sahi mane kab kaha mujhe ni khana , m to ye bol rahi hu ki...


Karan :- ki kyaaa mera baby.


Jyoti bhole pan se muh bigadte hue :- bhai mujhe ye daliya ni khana iska taste bilkul acha ni.


Karan haste hue :- acha to ab aayi n ladki bat samne .


Ye bol wo jyoti ko gudgudi kerta h or fir bola.


Karan:- ji ni betu , aapki tabiyat kharab h na abhi yahi milega or wese bhi subah hi pizza khaya tha na chalo ab chupchap khao..


Jyoti muh banate hue :- okkkk.


Ye bolte hue vo beman se karan k hatho se khane lagi , tabi karan muskurate hue bola :- jaldi khao na betu , fir ice cream ni milegi ni to.


Jyoti :- kya ice cream , fir to sabse jyada m hi kahungi .


Ye bol wo jaldi jaldi khane lagi , jisse use khasi ane lagi , karan use pani pilate hue .


Karan :- jhali kahiki aram se ni khasakti kya


Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas has deti h , abhi karan ne thoda s hi khilaya tha ki tabhi humari tikhi mirchi yani shruti aaphunchi waha khati mhithi nokjhok m tikhapan lane.


Shruti :- abe mote kitna bhukkad h tu , subah to bhua k hatho k sandwich to akele akele khaye hi or baki bache bhi abhi akele hi nipta diye , bakiyon k liye ek bhi ni choda.


Karan shruti ko chup ho jane ka ishara ker raha tha , lekin shruti ne wo samjha hi ni or apne hero ki sari pol khol di.


Jyoti ye sun gussa nak p late hue :- bhaiiii aap to bol rahe the ki aapne kuch ni khaya...


Ye bol jyoti ghutno k bal uski or bhadne lagi.


Karan darte hue :- are gudiya meri baat to sun .......


Aahhhh


Karan iske aage kuch bol pata use pahale hi apni dand nayika ne apne hero ko hi dand de dala , I mean use dhaka de bister p gira uske sine p muke barsane lagi.
.


Shruti :- are koi mujhe bhi batao chal kya raha h.


Karan pitte hue majakiya way m :- ye sab teri vajah se ho raha h tikhi mirchi , tujhe chodunga ni m


Jyoti karan k bal khichte hue :- pahale mujhse to bach lo mister.


Karan :- aah sorry sorry.


Jyoti fir shruti ko sari baat batati h , jispe shruti has k boli.


Shruti :- hehe keep it up jyoti , inke jhut ki saja to milni hi chahiye is mote ko , sabke sandwich akele hi kha gaya.


Jyoti :- koi baat ni shruti jitne bhi khaye h sab nikal dungi m aaj to.


Shruti :- ager tujhe koi problem n ho to m bahati ganga m hath dho lu.


Jyoti :- sure kyu ni.


Iske sath hi shruti bhi tut padi bichre hero pe or unki aawaz sun sari bahane waha aphunchi to unhonne jab ye najara dekha to haye bichare ki kismat esi kharab ki sari bahane bhi jyoti or shruti k sath mil gayi or baja dala apne hero ka band.


Bichara hero to ye soch raha tha ki abhi to bahane h jab yr hal h , inme se age chal kuch biviya bhi banegi , to kya haal hoga.


Karan kisi tarah unse chutte hue :- ha maro maro kaminiyo, mujhko zinda mat chodo , m koi mandir ka ghanta hu jo jo aaraha h bajaye ja raha h.


Isle sabhi bahane hasne lagi , tabhi unki aawaze sun waha bhua or choti ma bhi aaphunchi .


Kavya :- are kya ho raha h yaha , kyu itna shor macha rakha h.


Karan bhag k kavya k piche chup k. :- choti ma , bachao apne lala ko dekho kese mar rahi h ye sab mujhe .


Kavya ye sun hasne lagi , to karan use ghurte hue bola


Karan :- choti maa aap bhi ,jaiye m apse bat ni kerta


Kavya :- ale ale mera lala ko mara inhone ab sabko saja milegi, barabar milegi.


Bhua :- or tumhari saja ye h ki tumme se kisi ko icecream ni milegi , sab sirf hum or karan hi khayenge.


Karan jibh chidate hue :- kyu bahano kesi rahi aagaya swad .


Bhua k farman sun sab bahNo ka muh latak gaya , or jab icecream serve hone lagi to sab bahane heran ho gayi kyunki bhua ne unhe bhi icecream di.


Bhua :- mera kya muh dekh rahi ho , jis bhai ko abhi pita tha n uski request p hi tumhe icecream mili h .


Ye sun sari bahano ko bahut pyaar ata h or sabhi fir se ek bar karan p tut padi lekin marne k liye ni use kisses kerke pyaar jatane.


Karam :- aaah choti maa bachao.


Kavya haste hue :- ye musibat tune hi mol li h lala ab tu hi sambhal inhe.


Fir yu hi masti majak k sath raat ho gayi , karan ek baar fir phone ker riya ki tabiyat ka jayza leta h or fir pahale jake jyoti ko sulata h or fir bhua k room m jata h , lekin bhua to so chuki thi , isliye usne kal baat kerne ka soch wapas jyoti k pas aagaya or pyaar se uske sir p hath fer dhime se hath ferte hue bola.


Karan :- kal kitni khush hogi meri gudiya surprise ko dekh k.


Ye bol wo bhi jyoti se chipak k so gaya.


Agli subah


Karan kisi kam se subah uth k jaldi kHi chala jata h or bas apni choti ma ko planning batake chala jata h.


Dopahar m jyoti tv dekh rahi thi hal m tabhi bell ring hui to jyoti jese hi Jake gate kholti h to samne khade vyakti ko dekh ek baar to use yakin hi ni hota , lekin agle hi pal wo khushi se chillate hue samne wale shaks se lipat gayi.


Jyoti :- maaaaa, choti aap


Ji ha dosto samne asha or naina khadi thi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


Stay tuned

majedar update ..mata chhaya aur shanidev ke bich baate huyi karan ki vakr drishti mangal pe lagne ko lekar ,shanidev ne bhi karan ko sahi bataya ..
rahu ketu apne lok chale gaye vritasur ko lekar ,ketu ko darr tha ki kahi unki planning koi sun naa le ..
ab jyoty kamjor hai isliye vritrasur ko saare loko par asuro ka zanda fehrane me dikkat nahi hogi ..

karan aur saari behano ke bich meethi si nok jhok ho gayi ..

aur karan ka surprise mast hai jyoty aur baaki sabke liye asha aur naina ko yaha laane ka ..
par naina maan kaise gayi yaha aane ko ..

 

[Akil]

bonus update
update no :- 223

Wahi dusri or


Vritrasur ko jag ker bhahar aate dekh rahu or ketu muskura rahe the , jab usne aaker unhe pranam kiya to rahu bola.


Rahu :- aao mitra aao , varsho pashchAt tumse milke hum kitne khush h hum bata ni sakte.


Vritrasur :- khushi to mujhe bhi hui h mitra , lekin jitna m aapko janta hu , us hisab se m itna to kah sakta hu ki ye khushi sirf mujhse milne ki to ni h .


Kaho mitra jo nind m mane suna tumhari aawaz me wo kya satya h , kya samay aagaya h ab wo .


Ketu :- ha vritrasur wo samay aahigaya h , jiska tumhe varsho se intezar tha or jis samy k liye tumne war praapt kiya tha , ab samay aagaya h tum apne vardaan ka upyog kero or fir se is sansaar m asuro ka adhipaty sthapit kero.


Fir rahu ketu jyoti k shaktihin hone k bare m batate hue kyu ye sahi moka h wo vritrasur ko samjhate h .


Vritrasur :- mitra tum bol to sahi rahe ho avsar to acha h , per in devo ka khaskar us shani ka koi bharosa ni h , isliye is baar vijay humari hi nishchit ho uske liye mere pas ek upay h


Rahu :- to der kis baat ki vritrasur batao kya yojna h.


Vritrasur batane hi wLa hota h ki tabhi ketu bol utha.


Ketu :- ni rahu yaha p ni , ye jagah uchit ni kya pata konsa dev yaha aapas adrishy roop m mojud ho or humari yojna sun le, isliye chalo mere sath.


Ye bol ketu rahu or vritrasur ko leker apne lok m leke chala gaya jo tha ketu lok.


Ketu :- ah hah , kitna acha lag raha h us patal k andhere se nikal waps apne lok lot k , isi lok se nikalwa k us samay devo ne hume patal m pahunchaya tha n , ab yahi se shuru hogi un devo ki barbadi.


Fir wo 3mo mil ler aage ki yojna banane lage


Wahi dusri or


Location :- shani lok


Mata chaya :- putra ye kesi vichitra ghatna ka aarambh ho gaya h mangal dev per karan ne tumhari di hui vakradrishti ka upyog ker dala.


Shani :- ha mata , mangal ka ahankar ab charam p h or is kaaran wo ache bure ki samjh bhi kho bethe , apne purshtv k ahankar m na keval usne jyoti ka , balki uske samet guru maa adishakti samet sari nari jaat ka bhi apman kiya h , unhe durbal bolke.


Isliye guru dev ki icha se hi karan k dwara rachit dand chakra dwara n keval mangal dev ka ahankar nasht hoga , apitu is sansar ko fir ek baar nari shakti ki mahima ka gyaan hoga.


Devi chaya :- parantu putra , mangal dev ek dev h or karan ek manushy kya ese m ye uchit hoga , kya karan ki shaktiya mangal jese shaktishali dev per karya karegi.


Shani dev :- mata mat bhuliye ki meri vakradrishti koi sadharan shakti ni , sakshat mahadev ka wo amogh vardaan h jiske prabhav se koi ni bach sakta swayam khud guru mahadev bhi isse n bach paye the , is drishti k liye chahe dev ho ya manushya ho ya asur sab saman h , isliye kisi bhi prakar ka pad hone ka koi prashna hi ni uthta mata , nayay vahi shashwat h jo sabke liye barabar ho jese ki karan ka , ab mangal dev ko apne karmfal ko bhogna hi hoga.


Mata chaya :- or vritrasur ka kya putra , rahu or ketu ne avsar ka labh utha vritrasur ko jagrit ker diya h , jo maha shakti shali h, jiska ant keval jyoti hi ker sakti thi , adishakti k vardan k anusar lekin wo to swayam abhi shaktihin h putra , fir kya karenge hum..


Shani :- chintit mat hoiye mata , jo bhi ho raha h guru dev ki icha se hi ho raha h , ese m kisi bhi shubh hone ka koi prashn hi ni uthta , aap nishchit ho jaiye mata, jo hoga shubh hoga


Tab tak ap karan or jyoti ki mithi nok jok ka aanand le lijiye.


Back to the hero.


Karan apne hath m chamch liye :- kha lena meri pyari gudiya .


Jyoti jo karan se subah k liye ruthi hui , or wo bacho se nhakre dikhate hue.


Jyoti muh ferte hue :- ni mujhe ni khana mujhe bhuk ni h.


Karan :- are ese kese bhuk ni h dopahar k baad tune kaha kuch khaya , acha thoda sa to kha le , tu to apni bhai ki achi gudiya h naA.


Jyoti :- m kaha achi hu , m to zidi or buri hu na isliye hi to mujhe datte hue.


Karan :- oh to mera bacha mujhse icliye nalaj h (apne ek hath se kaan pakadte hue ) uske liye Solly na betu , apne bhaiya ko maaf ker do or ache bache ki tarah khana kha lo nAa.


Jyoti muh fulate hue :- ni mujhe ni khana ap bahut gande ho .


Karan :- pakka ni khaogi.


Jyoti :- ji ni ab likh k duu.


Karan :- oh to fir aaj to bhuka hi sona padega yaar.


Jyoti bholepan se :- aap kyu bhuke soyoge .


Karan udaas chahra bana k :- ab meri gudiya bhuki soyegi to m kese kha sakta hu , chalo ye khana m kaya ko khila dunga , or fir so jaunga bhuka.


Ye bol karan uth k jane laga , to jyoti ne us ka hath pakad liya , ab chahe humari jyoti dand nayika hi kyu na ho sath m karan ki gf bhi to thi , use jealous feel hua jealous feel kerti h , bhale hi wo janti thi ki karan or kaya m sirf dosti ka pyara rishta h , per nari k man ko bhagwan bhi kaha samjh paye , use ye hargiz gawara n hua ki uska bf uska bhai uske hisse ka pyar kisi or ko de.


Jyoti :- are ruko to sahi mane kab kaha mujhe ni khana , m to ye bol rahi hu ki...


Karan :- ki kyaaa mera baby.


Jyoti bhole pan se muh bigadte hue :- bhai mujhe ye daliya ni khana iska taste bilkul acha ni.


Karan haste hue :- acha to ab aayi n ladki bat samne .


Ye bol wo jyoti ko gudgudi kerta h or fir bola.


Karan:- ji ni betu , aapki tabiyat kharab h na abhi yahi milega or wese bhi subah hi pizza khaya tha na chalo ab chupchap khao..


Jyoti muh banate hue :- okkkk.


Ye bolte hue vo beman se karan k hatho se khane lagi , tabi karan muskurate hue bola :- jaldi khao na betu , fir ice cream ni milegi ni to.


Jyoti :- kya ice cream , fir to sabse jyada m hi kahungi .


Ye bol wo jaldi jaldi khane lagi , jisse use khasi ane lagi , karan use pani pilate hue .


Karan :- jhali kahiki aram se ni khasakti kya


Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas has deti h , abhi karan ne thoda s hi khilaya tha ki tabhi humari tikhi mirchi yani shruti aaphunchi waha khati mhithi nokjhok m tikhapan lane.


Shruti :- abe mote kitna bhukkad h tu , subah to bhua k hatho k sandwich to akele akele khaye hi or baki bache bhi abhi akele hi nipta diye , bakiyon k liye ek bhi ni choda.


Karan shruti ko chup ho jane ka ishara ker raha tha , lekin shruti ne wo samjha hi ni or apne hero ki sari pol khol di.


Jyoti ye sun gussa nak p late hue :- bhaiiii aap to bol rahe the ki aapne kuch ni khaya...


Ye bol jyoti ghutno k bal uski or bhadne lagi.


Karan darte hue :- are gudiya meri baat to sun .......


Aahhhh


Karan iske aage kuch bol pata use pahale hi apni dand nayika ne apne hero ko hi dand de dala , I mean use dhaka de bister p gira uske sine p muke barsane lagi.
.


Shruti :- are koi mujhe bhi batao chal kya raha h.


Karan pitte hue majakiya way m :- ye sab teri vajah se ho raha h tikhi mirchi , tujhe chodunga ni m


Jyoti karan k bal khichte hue :- pahale mujhse to bach lo mister.


Karan :- aah sorry sorry.


Jyoti fir shruti ko sari baat batati h , jispe shruti has k boli.


Shruti :- hehe keep it up jyoti , inke jhut ki saja to milni hi chahiye is mote ko , sabke sandwich akele hi kha gaya.


Jyoti :- koi baat ni shruti jitne bhi khaye h sab nikal dungi m aaj to.


Shruti :- ager tujhe koi problem n ho to m bahati ganga m hath dho lu.


Jyoti :- sure kyu ni.


Iske sath hi shruti bhi tut padi bichre hero pe or unki aawaz sun sari bahane waha aphunchi to unhonne jab ye najara dekha to haye bichare ki kismat esi kharab ki sari bahane bhi jyoti or shruti k sath mil gayi or baja dala apne hero ka band.


Bichara hero to ye soch raha tha ki abhi to bahane h jab yr hal h , inme se age chal kuch biviya bhi banegi , to kya haal hoga.


Karan kisi tarah unse chutte hue :- ha maro maro kaminiyo, mujhko zinda mat chodo , m koi mandir ka ghanta hu jo jo aaraha h bajaye ja raha h.


Isle sabhi bahane hasne lagi , tabhi unki aawaze sun waha bhua or choti ma bhi aaphunchi .


Kavya :- are kya ho raha h yaha , kyu itna shor macha rakha h.


Karan bhag k kavya k piche chup k. :- choti ma , bachao apne lala ko dekho kese mar rahi h ye sab mujhe .


Kavya ye sun hasne lagi , to karan use ghurte hue bola


Karan :- choti maa aap bhi ,jaiye m apse bat ni kerta


Kavya :- ale ale mera lala ko mara inhone ab sabko saja milegi, barabar milegi.


Bhua :- or tumhari saja ye h ki tumme se kisi ko icecream ni milegi , sab sirf hum or karan hi khayenge.


Karan jibh chidate hue :- kyu bahano kesi rahi aagaya swad .


Bhua k farman sun sab bahNo ka muh latak gaya , or jab icecream serve hone lagi to sab bahane heran ho gayi kyunki bhua ne unhe bhi icecream di.


Bhua :- mera kya muh dekh rahi ho , jis bhai ko abhi pita tha n uski request p hi tumhe icecream mili h .


Ye sun sari bahano ko bahut pyaar ata h or sabhi fir se ek bar karan p tut padi lekin marne k liye ni use kisses kerke pyaar jatane.


Karam :- aaah choti maa bachao.


Kavya haste hue :- ye musibat tune hi mol li h lala ab tu hi sambhal inhe.


Fir yu hi masti majak k sath raat ho gayi , karan ek baar fir phone ker riya ki tabiyat ka jayza leta h or fir pahale jake jyoti ko sulata h or fir bhua k room m jata h , lekin bhua to so chuki thi , isliye usne kal baat kerne ka soch wapas jyoti k pas aagaya or pyaar se uske sir p hath fer dhime se hath ferte hue bola.


Karan :- kal kitni khush hogi meri gudiya surprise ko dekh k.


Ye bol wo bhi jyoti se chipak k so gaya.


Agli subah


Karan kisi kam se subah uth k jaldi kHi chala jata h or bas apni choti ma ko planning batake chala jata h.


Dopahar m jyoti tv dekh rahi thi hal m tabhi bell ring hui to jyoti jese hi Jake gate kholti h to samne khade vyakti ko dekh ek baar to use yakin hi ni hota , lekin agle hi pal wo khushi se chillate hue samne wale shaks se lipat gayi.


Jyoti :- maaaaa, choti aap


Ji ha dosto samne asha or naina khadi thi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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Naina aur Aashaa Karna ke yahan?
Ab yeh yahan kaise aa gayin..... Aur Naina kya mantavya lekar yahan aayi hai kyunki woh toh Karna-Jyoti ko apni dushman maanti hai aise mein woh yahan inke paas aana bhi nahin chaahati thi aur na apni maa ko hi yahan aane dena chaahati thi toh aise mein woh yahan aane ke liye maan gayi yeh kuch hazam nahin ho raha.....aur uska yahan inke paas aana kahin kisi nayi musibat ka aaghaaz toh nahin na?
Karna Jyoti ab Naina ki ghalatfahmi se upji nafrat ka shaman kaise karenge?
Naina ki nafrat jab tak khatm hogi tab tak woh kya kya karegi kahin woh koi aisa anarth na kar baithe ki use praayashchitt toh dur pashchaataap ka bhi mauq'a na mile.....
Aur Raahu Ketu aur Vritrasur ne kya yojna banaai hai dushton ka raaj failaane ki?
Aur inki is yojna aur MangalDev ke ahankaar ka naash ab Jyoti kaise karegi?

 

[Akil]

Bhai bonus update ni pada kya aapne

Padh liya bhai

 

[Shanu]

Awsum Superb Update Bhai.............

 

[Manojsharma]

Bahut badiya update h bhai super mind blowing update bahut achha likha h bhai super

 

[RAAZ]

update no :- 222
Mangal dev k jane k baad jyoti jo chintit thi mangal dev k krodhit hone k jane k kaaran se thi , baba k jate hi jyoti karan p rashan pani leker chad padi.


Jyoti :- kya jarurat thi aapko bhai mangal dev se bahas Kerne ki , dekha kese krodhit ho ke gaye h wo.


Karan :- meri isme kya galti gudiya, mane to.sirf apni baat rakhi.


Jyoti :- lekin aapki baat ko to unhone apna apman samjh liya n bhai , aap.kese bhul gaye ki bhai wo dev h or koi sadharan dev ni navgraho m se ek , unka virodh kerna kitna khatarnak ho sakta h bhai , ye aap or m bhali bhanti samjhte h na bhai.


dekha n kese unhone aapko dhamkaya, mujhe to dar lag raha h kahi kuch ker na de bhai wo.


Karan :- gudiya mane jo kaha satya kaha gudiya , isme unhone apna apmaan samjha to m kya ker sakta hu or rahi baat unke dev hone ki , to karmfal sabke liye samman h ,chahe dev ho ya manushy, per ese m or ager unhonne kuch bhi galat marg chuna to karmfal unhe bhi bhugtna hoga.


Isliye gudiya tum.chinta mat kero kyunki satya humare sath h , jo sacha ho use dar kis baat ka .


Jyoti :- bhaybhit kese n hou bhai , aaj itne waqt baad to hume do pal sath m sukun k mile h , parivar m bhi badi mushkilo k baad khushiya aayi h , sab kuch mangal hua h , ese m mangal dev ka krodh kahi amangal na le aaye bhai, isliye bhai m chahti hu ki aap mangal dev se mang le or ......


Karan gusse me :- or unke dawara kiya gaya nari shakti ka or tumhara apmaan sah krr unke jhute purushtv k ahankar k aage jhuk jau, kadapi nii


Jyoti thoda gussa ho :- to kya kare fir hum , unke dawara firse apne pariwar m kisi sankat ko aane de hum, itne dino baad aayi khushi ko hum fir se kho de .


Wese bhi kya galat kaha unhone , aajtak mane jo bhi yudh lada ya jita usme aapka to sahyog tha hi na bhai , kya ye satya ni tha ki ager aap.swarg m samay p n pahunchte to asur sena dawar m.bhi bandi bana li jati , baki sabhi ki tarah.


Pari lok m bhi ager aap waqt p na aate to m khud hi apni shaktiyo k dwara out of control ho kuch anarth ker bethti.


Bataiye bhai esa koi yudh jisme m vijay hui , are kii yudh to.chodo kal un mamuli gundo se bhi m khud ko na bacha saki, to ese m bataiye kya galat kaha unhone , satya to ye h bhaiya ki m in shaktiyon k layak hi ni , kyunki m.ek ladki hu or ladkiya chahe kitni shakti van ho jaye , lekin wo kabhi ek yodha ya masiha ni ban sakti.


Karan man me :- oh to mangal dev ne apna karya aarambh ker diya h , mangal dev jyoti p prabhav dal aapne acha n kiya , ab saj ho jaiye apne karmfal ko.


Apne lok.se karan ki baat sun udher se hi uter dete hue .


Mangal dev :- karmo ka fal to m tumhe dunga dand nayak , tu ni janta mangal ka apmaan ker tune kitne badi bhul ki h jivan ki.


Ji ha dosto ye mangal ka hi prabhav tha jisse jyoti apna confidence kho rahi thi thi ,or kamzor pad rahi thi , mangal ko garv or insani bhavo ka dev kaha jata h , garv , krodh jesi bhavnao ko manushy k jivan m niyantran kerne ka pad unko hi praapt h.


Karan chutki bajata h jisse time ruk jata h or fir wo telepathy se utter dete hue :- mangal dev ye aap uchit ni ker rahe mana ki aapko manushy k bhavo p niyantran kerne karne ka adhikar praapt h , parantu aap apne ahankar k vashibhoot ho ker galat istemaal ker rahe h , abhi bhi samay h jitna jaldi is mithya ahankar ko tyagenge utna hi shubh hoga aapke


Mangal dev gusse se chilate hue :- karannn...... Apni sima mat bhulo , mat bhulo ki hum kon h.


Karan :- m apni sima ni bhul raha mangal dev , balki bhul to aap rahe ho apna uchit marg , isliye ise aap ise meri vinti samjhiye ya chetavani ki..


Marg p aajaiye mangal dev , anyatha mujhe aapko marg p lana hoga.


Mangal dev gusse se :- Bass's... Ab tumne shama ka antim avsar bhi kho diya h udand manushya , ab tak humne sirf isliye khud ko roka tha kyunki hume sirf is baat ka lihaz tha ki tum ek devansh ho , lekin ab ni ab mangal k kahar k liye teyar ho jaao .


Ye bol mangal dev ne apna sampark tod liya karan se , lekin unhone ek baat p dhyan ni gaya , jo un pe aage bahut bhari padne wali thi.


Wo thi karan ki nile rang se chamakti ankhe jo sandesh thi ki .


Karan :- mangal dev apko mane antim avsar diya , per aapne apne ahankar ko tyagne ko sire se nakar diya , isliye ab saj ho jaiye shani putra karan k dandchakar k liye.


Aaj se meri vakt drishti aap per aarambh hoti h mangal dev .


Ye bolne k sath hi karan ki ankho se vakr drishti nikal mangal dev k lok k laal rang roopi kavach ko tod unme sama gayi.

Karan fir chutki baja k sB normal kerta h



Jyoti karan ko apni baat n mante dekh :- thik h bhai , ager aapki yahi marji h to thik h , ager aap ni jaoge to m jaungi or mAngal dev se maafi mangungi taki humara parivar surakshit rahe.


Ye bol jyoti apni ankhe band teleport hone ki koshis kerti h , baba ne use kuch special mantra de diye the janese pahale , jis kaaran wo apni thodi powers use ker pa rahi thi , lekin limited way m


Lekin karan ne uska hath pakad k rok liya.


Karan :- ni jyoti mane kaha n hum sache h hume mafi mangne ki jarurat ni h , isliye tum kahi ni jaogi.


Jyoti :- ni bhai m......


Karan :- tumko meri kasam h gudiya ager tumne is ghar se ek kadam bhi bahar rakha to.


Jyoti jhunjhulate hue :- thik h ni jaungi bas


Ye bol jyoti gusse se apni dawai leker so gayi, karan samjh gaya ki karan k esa kerne se uski judwa fir usse ruth gayi h , lekin is baar uske chahre p use manane ki chinta n thi ,kyunki uske pas already ek plan tha , wo.tha jyoti ka surprise gift jise dekhte hi wo sab bhul khushi se jhum uthati.


Ye sochte hue wo jyoti ko sir sahalate hue use ek baar chuma or apne room se nikal k pahunch gaya apni bhua k ghar kaya or diya ko lene.


Karan dorbell bajata h darwaja geeta kholti h or karan ko dekh khushi se


Geeta :- are karan beta tum....


Karan :- sssshhhhh mosi dhime.....


Geeta samjh jati h karan masti k mood m h or tabhi bhua ki piche se aawaz aati h .


Bhua :- geeta kya huaa kon h gate p.


Geeta :- koi ni h di , lagta h koi Bacha masti ker raha hoga.



Bhua :- ok


Bhua jo kitchen m kam lagi hui thi , wo kitchen se hi geeta se puch rahi thi apne kaam m lage hue hi tabhi achanak se kisi ne use piche se apni baho m jakad liya , jisse pahale to wo ek dam se ghabra gayi
Or kese n kese un baho se nikal piche mudti h to pati h esa to uske pyare or iklote bhatije ne kiya tha.


Jise dekhte hi garima k ek pal muskaan aagayi , lekin agle hi pal usne narajgi se muh mod liya or apne kamo m lag gayi.


Karan :- bhua naraj ho apne bete Se.


Garima :- m tumse naraj kyu hongi bhala , hum to tere dushman lagte h n jinhone teri gudiya ko chot lagne di.


Karan samjh gaya ki uski bhua kal k kaaran kafi ahat h , bhale hi karan ne wo sab gusse or chinta m kaha tha , wo bhi anjane m , lekin galti to hui thi , jiska usko bahut pachtava bhi tha.


Karan nam ankho se :- bhua sorry na , mane anjane m aapka bahut dil dukhaya , m bhul gay tha ki jitna pyaar m apni gudiya se kerta hu , utna hi aap bhi kerti ho , gusse m bhul hi gaya ki aap pahale hi apni beti (jyoti ) k accident k kaaran taklif m thi or uper se mane aapko or taklif di.


Please bhua aap chahe apne is bete ko uski badtamiji k liye pit lo jo chahe saja do per usse yu apna muh to mat modo na bhuaa.


Ye bolte hue karan ka gala rundh gaya tha , or jese hi garima ko ahasas hua ki karan ro raha h to uska sara gussa chu mantar ho gaya , ya yu kaho ki wo gussa ker hi ni rahi thi , wo to apne bhatije k sath masti ker rahi thi.


Garima karan ko sine se lagate hue :- na mera bacha n , yu royo mat , bhua tumse bilkul bhi naraj ni h , shant ho ja mere bache , shant ho ja.


M janti hu mera bacha ki tu jyoti se bahut pyaar kerta h or ese m tujhe gussa aana normal tha , chal ab chup ho ja or apni bhua ko has k dikhao


Karan bhola sa chahara bana :- kya sachi ap naraj ni ho bhua.


Garima karan k gal chum :- muchi mera bacha, lagta h tera nam karan se badal k kiran rakhna padega , jab dekho ladkio ki tarah rone lagta h.


Ye bol garima ne karan k sir p ek tapli laga di , tabhi karan daat dikhate hue .


Karan :- hihi kisne kaha bhua ki m ro raha tha , natak kerna sirf aapko hi ni aata meri deepika padukon bhua.


Ye bol karan jaldi se garima k gal p kaat bhag gaya , or piche piche uske garima bhagi ,


Garima :- thahar badmash tujhe m batati hu.bahut badmash ho gaya h ruk to sahi .


Kuch der usne apni bhua ko khub dodaya or fir jab usne dekha ki uski bhua ab thak gayi h to jan bhujker speed slow ker li apni or garima ki pakad m aagaya.


Garima karan k kaan khichte hue - ab aaya n badmash pakad m, ab tera kya hogaa kaliyaaa


Karan :- bhua I mean sardar mujhe chod do mane aapke hatho ka tasty khaya h.


Bhua :- to ab jhadu bhi kha.


Ye bol garima side m padi jhadu se karan k fatke lagane lagi , per pyaar se.


Karan :- aah bhua sorry....


Bhua :- mafi ek shart p hi milegi , aaj tumhe yaha mere sath rukna hoga or mere pas hi soyega tu , m kuch ni sunungi, bata de rahi hu haa.


Karan :- per bhuaa jyoti


Garima :- are mere laal sari chinta tu hi karega kya apni gudiya ki kuch hum bakiyon k liye bhi chod de or ha vese bhi mane choti bhabhi se baat ker li h , aj sab yahi rukne wale h wo sab aate hi honge thodi der m


Karan ye sun khush ho jata h , chalo sari family ek sath hogi to jyoti ka mood bhi thik ho jayega, isliye wo ha bol deta h.


Tab dono bhua bhatija jake sofe p beth jate h or karan apna sir apni bhua ki god m rakh let jata h.


Garima jo bhagne se thoda haaf rahi thi wo karan k sir m hath ferte hue uske gaal khich ke boli :- vese aaj kal kuch jyada hi badmash ho gaya h tu , apni bhudi bhua ko koi ese is umer m dodata h bhala.


Karan garima k sath majakiya flirt kerte hue :- kyaa baat ker rahi ho bhua, aap or bhudi, koi pagal hi hoga jo esa sochega , m to kahata hu ki aap to abhi bhi puri young hi lagti ho , (ankh mar)ager aap jeans ya skirt pahan lo to aapko sab radha ki badi bahan hi samjhenge.


Garima apne bhatije k muh se apni tarif sun sharmate hue uske sir p ek chapat lagati hui boli .


Garima :- hat badmash ab kya is umer m apni bhua ko skirt pahanayega pagla kshika, befaltu hi mujhe chane k jhad p chada raha h , mujhe bhi pata h ki m itni sunder ni hu.


Karan :- are bhua aapki sundarta ka m kya bakhan keru, mera bas chale to m aapko abhi apni gf banake date p le jau, haaye kitni pyaari meri bhuaa.


Karan bhua k gal chum :- love u bhuaaa.


Karan esa ker garima k reply ka wait ker raha tha , tabhi garima ne wo kiya jisse karan ek baar to chok gaya.


Garima niche jhuk karan k hotho p halka sa chum boli :- love u to mera bachaaaa.


Karan ek baar to sakpaka gaya is harkat se .


Karan ki ye halat dekh bhua haste hue boli :- ese kya dekh raha h , m ab kya apne cute se bf ko kiss bhi ni ker sakti


Ye bol garima bhi karan ko ankh mar deti h , jisse karan apne dil p hath rakh gayal hone ki acting kerta h.


Garima :- hat shetan.


Karan. Bacho jese pet p hath rakh :- bhua bhuk lagi h kuch khane ko do naa.


Ye sun garima turant uth kitchen m jati h or karan k liye sandwitch bana k lati h or karan ko apne hatho se khilane lagti h .


Karan apni bhua ki tarif kerte hue :- sachi bhua bahut tasty h ye , fufaji bade hi lucky the jinhe aap wife k roop m mili.


Karan k muh se apne fufa ka jikar sun garima emotional ho gayi or uski ankho se ek shan pani aagaye , lekin usne karan ki najaro se bacha jaldi se puch , wo boli.


Bhua :- acha ab tum khao mujhe kuch kaam h office ka.


Ye bol wo jaldi se uth ker chali jati h room m or use lock ker apne bed k side m padi apne pati yani radha k papa ki tasvir leker rone lagi


Karan ko dukh na pahunche usko rota dekh isliye wo jaldi se room m to aagayi thi , lekin wo apni khidki band kerna bhul gayi thi , jis kaaran bahar kidhki se karan ne use dekh liya , darasal usne apni bhua ko emotional hote dekh liya tha hall m hi lekin wo isse pahale kuch bolta isse pahale hi garima ja chuki thi.


Apni bhua ko rota dekh karan ko bhi bahut dard hua , kyunki anjane m hi sahi usne apni bhua k purane jhakam kured diye the, lekin wo kuch ker bhi kaha sakta tha is bare m kyunki yahi ek dard ek kami thi uski bhua k jivan m jise wo ni dur ker sakta tha .


Kuch der baad jab uski bhua shant hui to karan ne raat ko apni bhua se baat kerne ka soch , waha se wapas hall m aagaya.


Tabhi radha kaya or diya bhi wapas ghar aagayi jo kuch jaruri saman lene market gayi thi , wo jese hi karan ko aaya dekhti h to radha or diya to bhagke karan k gale lag jati h , karan bhi pyaar se unke gal chumta h .


Karan :- oh hello madam , ab aapko likh ker dena padega kya , aap ni lagogi apne sakha k gale.


Kaya to jese us pal ka intezaar ker rahi thi , or usne turant dod k kArN k sine se yu itna kas k gale lagi , jese kitne salo baad mili ho or ek bAt jispe n hi karan ne or n hi kisi ne dhyan diya , ek shan kaya ki ankho m ek khushi or dard k milE jule asu bhi the , lekin usne sabse najre chura k puch liye.


Kaya k gale lagne se humesha ki tarah ek aanand ek sukun karan ko bhi mila tha , na jane kya tha kaya m ki jyoti k baad ek wahi thi , jiske liye karan ka man kerta tha ki wo humesha uske sath hi rahe, kabhi use door na ho , karan confuse tha , ki usko kaya se pyar to ni hogya , lekin wo to use humesha se hi ek achi saheli manta aaya tha, ye ahasas kuch kuch vesa bhi tha jesa use apni purani saheli urf zoya k sath hota tha , lekin esa hone ka to 2 reason the , jo karan samjhta tha , pahala ye ki shayad karan ki zoya k baad kaya pahali or ekloti saheli jo thi or ek kaaran or tha jo aage pata chalega


Diya kaya k sir p mar :- are bas bhi ker moti , kya daba k mar hi degi kya mere bhai ko , hum kal hi mile the inse koi warso bAad ni mil rahe.


Diya ki is baat se kaya ko hosh aata h or wo turant karan se hat sharmane lagi.


Diya :- haye haye dekho to kamini ko sharma to ese rahi h jese bhai hume lene ni , balki inke patidev barat leke inhe lejane aaye h.


Radha karan ko chedte hue usko kohni marte hue :- diya sach to ni bol rahi n bhai , ager esa h to bata do , mujhe to bhabhi shuru se hi pasand h or dono mami se bhi hum baat ker lenge, kyu diyu.


Diya :- ha radha , bhai ha boldo , fir bhai k sath jiju bhi ban jaoge aap mere to h na kaya ...


Ye bol wo or radha hasne lagi.


Karan majak m unke kan khichte hue :- badi maati sujh rahi h tumhe shetan ki naniyo , khabardar jo kisi ne ab kaya ko chidaya tha.


Radha :- are wah bhai , kaya didi ki itni care so sweet , (diya ko ankh marte hue ) matlab saf h aag dono taraf se barabar lagi h .


Ye bol wo dono keSe n kese karan se chut bhagne lagi , per karan ne dono bahano ko pakad k uthake sofe p pataka or kaya or karan dono ek sath gudgudi kerne lage.


Radha diyu ek sath :- hahaa hiii , ahhh bhai sorry didu sorry ab ni karege.


Kuch der gudgudi kerne k baad karan or kaya ne un dono ko chod diya fir unhike sath beth bola.


Karan ;- khabardar ab esa majak kiya to kaya meri ek pyari si dost h bas or kuch ni (fir ankh marte hue ) wese mohtarma bahano ki sceme bura ni h , ager man m h to ha boldo , barat k arrangement m jyada time ni lagega.


Ye bol karan haste hue radha or diya ko tali deta h or kaya sharm se lal ho karan k sine p mukke marne lagi.


Thodi der ki masti majak k baad radha karan se boli ,


Radha :- bhai jab sab aa hi rahe h to rohan bhai or riya di ko bhi bula lijiye n , bahut maja aayega .


Karan :- sahi kaha tume meri babie doll .


Tab karan rohan ko phone lagata h or 2 ring k baat rohan phone utha k bola.


Rohan :- ha bol bhai , jyoti ab kesi h .


Karan :- jyoti to thik h bhai , per teri aawaz se tu itna kyu pareshan najar aaraha h..


Rohan :- kya batau bhai jab se hum ganv se lote h pata ni kiski najar lag gayi h humari bahano ko , ek or to jyoti ka accident hua or ab riya didi ki bhi tabiyat kharab h unhe thypyd ho gaya h kal raat se , abhi hospital hi leke aaya hu unhe m .


Karan ye sun chintit ho :- kya di ki tabiyat rat se kharab h or tu ab baata raha h mujhe , wo bhi jab mane phone kiya tu , ruk m bhi aaraha hu vaha tu city hospital hi h na


Rohan :- are tu tension mat le mere sath mummy h or papa bhi bas aate hi honge , tu bas jyoti ka khyal rakh kuch dino se mujhe kuch bhi acha ni lag raha , esa lag raha h jese kuch bahut bur hone wala h.



Karan man se :- lag to esa mujhe bhi lag raha h dost , kuch to gadbad h jo hume najar ni aarahi , per tu tension mat le ,jab tak hum dono bhai sath h duniya ki koi takat n hi humara or n humari family ka bal bhi bAka ni ker sakti.


Fir karan kafi bolta h rohan ko ki wo use
waha aane de per rohan kese n kese samjha k use rok hi deta h.


Wahi dusri or


Location ;- maharani mahal.


Jo apne mahal m apne singhasan p bethi karan or rohan dono p najar rakhe hue unki baate sun rahi thi , wo ek kamini muskan k sath boli.


Rani :- ye to bas shuruat h my love aryan , abhi aage age dekho hota h kya , m us kamini prerna ka wo hal karungi ki dekhne wale ki ruh kamp jaye or is baar , marungi ni pichli baar ki tarah , balki uski jindagi ko mot se bhi battar bana dalungi , jisse wo pachtayegi ki kyu usne mujhe yani


Yaksh maharani


Kamini


se panga liya



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Is update ko 3 part me divide kare to behtar hoga. 1st part ki manushya हो Devta हो koi bhi ho lekin ahankaar use Patan ki taraf lekar jaata Hai ab dekhna Hai ki Jyoti kaisay Apni negativity se Bahar aati hain aur dand chakr ka Kia asar hota hain kaisay woh apne dand chakr ko bhugatey hain. Phir ghar ki nok jhok jo zada हो Gaya magar Kaya ka aur Karan ke feelings me kuch izafa Hua hain. Aur sabse aakhir me to aakhir yah yaksh rani kamini Hai jo in dono ladkio ke peechay padey hain. Yani ek baar phir kai taraf se hamle hone waley hain.
Intezar rahega next update ka

 

[Harry rocks]

Is update ko 3 part me divide kare to behtar hoga. 1st part ki manushya हो Devta हो koi bhi ho lekin ahankaar use Patan ki taraf lekar jaata Hai ab dekhna Hai ki Jyoti kaisay Apni negativity se Bahar aati hain aur dand chakr ka Kia asar hota hain kaisay woh apne dand chakr ko bhugatey hain. Phir ghar ki nok jhok jo zada हो Gaya magar Kaya ka aur Karan ke feelings me kuch izafa Hua hain. Aur sabse aakhir me to aakhir yah yaksh rani kamini Hai jo in dono ladkio ke peechay padey hain. Yani ek baar phir kai taraf se hamle hone waley hain.
Intezar rahega next update ka

Ek bonus update baki h bhai abhi

 

[Harry rocks]

Is update ko 3 part me divide kare to behtar hoga. 1st part ki manushya हो Devta हो koi bhi ho lekin ahankaar use Patan ki taraf lekar jaata Hai ab dekhna Hai ki Jyoti kaisay Apni negativity se Bahar aati hain aur dand chakr ka Kia asar hota hain kaisay woh apne dand chakr ko bhugatey hain. Phir ghar ki nok jhok jo zada हो Gaya magar Kaya ka aur Karan ke feelings me kuch izafa Hua hain. Aur sabse aakhir me to aakhir yah yaksh rani kamini Hai jo in dono ladkio ke peechay padey hain. Yani ek baar phir kai taraf se hamle hone waley hain.
Intezar rahega next update ka

Nokjhok wale part m.kya jyada hua bhai

 

[Krishna kumar]

Acha update bhai