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Wahi dusri or


Vritrasur ko jag ker bhahar aate dekh rahu or ketu muskura rahe the , jab usne aaker unhe pranam kiya to rahu bola.


Rahu :- aao mitra aao , varsho pashchAt tumse milke hum kitne khush h hum bata ni sakte.


Vritrasur :- khushi to mujhe bhi hui h mitra , lekin jitna m aapko janta hu , us hisab se m itna to kah sakta hu ki ye khushi sirf mujhse milne ki to ni h .


Kaho mitra jo nind m mane suna tumhari aawaz me wo kya satya h , kya samay aagaya h ab wo .


Ketu :- ha vritrasur wo samay aahigaya h , jiska tumhe varsho se intezar tha or jis samy k liye tumne war praapt kiya tha , ab samay aagaya h tum apne vardaan ka upyog kero or fir se is sansaar m asuro ka adhipaty sthapit kero.


Fir rahu ketu jyoti k shaktihin hone k bare m batate hue kyu ye sahi moka h wo vritrasur ko samjhate h .


Vritrasur :- mitra tum bol to sahi rahe ho avsar to acha h , per in devo ka khaskar us shani ka koi bharosa ni h , isliye is baar vijay humari hi nishchit ho uske liye mere pas ek upay h


Rahu :- to der kis baat ki vritrasur batao kya yojna h.


Vritrasur batane hi wLa hota h ki tabhi ketu bol utha.


Ketu :- ni rahu yaha p ni , ye jagah uchit ni kya pata konsa dev yaha aapas adrishy roop m mojud ho or humari yojna sun le, isliye chalo mere sath.


Ye bol ketu rahu or vritrasur ko leker apne lok m leke chala gaya jo tha ketu lok.


Ketu :- ah hah , kitna acha lag raha h us patal k andhere se nikal waps apne lok lot k , isi lok se nikalwa k us samay devo ne hume patal m pahunchaya tha n , ab yahi se shuru hogi un devo ki barbadi.


Fir wo 3mo mil ler aage ki yojna banane lage


Wahi dusri or


Location :- shani lok


Mata chaya :- putra ye kesi vichitra ghatna ka aarambh ho gaya h mangal dev per karan ne tumhari di hui vakradrishti ka upyog ker dala.


Shani :- ha mata , mangal ka ahankar ab charam p h or is kaaran wo ache bure ki samjh bhi kho bethe , apne purshtv k ahankar m na keval usne jyoti ka , balki uske samet guru maa adishakti samet sari nari jaat ka bhi apman kiya h , unhe durbal bolke.


Isliye guru dev ki icha se hi karan k dwara rachit dand chakra dwara n keval mangal dev ka ahankar nasht hoga , apitu is sansar ko fir ek baar nari shakti ki mahima ka gyaan hoga.


Devi chaya :- parantu putra , mangal dev ek dev h or karan ek manushy kya ese m ye uchit hoga , kya karan ki shaktiya mangal jese shaktishali dev per karya karegi.


Shani dev :- mata mat bhuliye ki meri vakradrishti koi sadharan shakti ni , sakshat mahadev ka wo amogh vardaan h jiske prabhav se koi ni bach sakta swayam khud guru mahadev bhi isse n bach paye the , is drishti k liye chahe dev ho ya manushya ho ya asur sab saman h , isliye kisi bhi prakar ka pad hone ka koi prashna hi ni uthta mata , nayay vahi shashwat h jo sabke liye barabar ho jese ki karan ka , ab mangal dev ko apne karmfal ko bhogna hi hoga.


Mata chaya :- or vritrasur ka kya putra , rahu or ketu ne avsar ka labh utha vritrasur ko jagrit ker diya h , jo maha shakti shali h, jiska ant keval jyoti hi ker sakti thi , adishakti k vardan k anusar lekin wo to swayam abhi shaktihin h putra , fir kya karenge hum..


Shani :- chintit mat hoiye mata , jo bhi ho raha h guru dev ki icha se hi ho raha h , ese m kisi bhi shubh hone ka koi prashn hi ni uthta , aap nishchit ho jaiye mata, jo hoga shubh hoga


Tab tak ap karan or jyoti ki mithi nok jok ka aanand le lijiye.


Back to the hero.


Karan apne hath m chamch liye :- kha lena meri pyari gudiya .


Jyoti jo karan se subah k liye ruthi hui , or wo bacho se nhakre dikhate hue.


Jyoti muh ferte hue :- ni mujhe ni khana mujhe bhuk ni h.


Karan :- are ese kese bhuk ni h dopahar k baad tune kaha kuch khaya , acha thoda sa to kha le , tu to apni bhai ki achi gudiya h naA.


Jyoti :- m kaha achi hu , m to zidi or buri hu na isliye hi to mujhe datte hue.


Karan :- oh to mera bacha mujhse icliye nalaj h (apne ek hath se kaan pakadte hue ) uske liye Solly na betu , apne bhaiya ko maaf ker do or ache bache ki tarah khana kha lo nAa.


Jyoti muh fulate hue :- ni mujhe ni khana ap bahut gande ho .


Karan :- pakka ni khaogi.


Jyoti :- ji ni ab likh k duu.


Karan :- oh to fir aaj to bhuka hi sona padega yaar.


Jyoti bholepan se :- aap kyu bhuke soyoge .


Karan udaas chahra bana k :- ab meri gudiya bhuki soyegi to m kese kha sakta hu , chalo ye khana m kaya ko khila dunga , or fir so jaunga bhuka.


Ye bol karan uth k jane laga , to jyoti ne us ka hath pakad liya , ab chahe humari jyoti dand nayika hi kyu na ho sath m karan ki gf bhi to thi , use jealous feel hua jealous feel kerti h , bhale hi wo janti thi ki karan or kaya m sirf dosti ka pyara rishta h , per nari k man ko bhagwan bhi kaha samjh paye , use ye hargiz gawara n hua ki uska bf uska bhai uske hisse ka pyar kisi or ko de.


Jyoti :- are ruko to sahi mane kab kaha mujhe ni khana , m to ye bol rahi hu ki...


Karan :- ki kyaaa mera baby.


Jyoti bhole pan se muh bigadte hue :- bhai mujhe ye daliya ni khana iska taste bilkul acha ni.


Karan haste hue :- acha to ab aayi n ladki bat samne .


Ye bol wo jyoti ko gudgudi kerta h or fir bola.


Karan:- ji ni betu , aapki tabiyat kharab h na abhi yahi milega or wese bhi subah hi pizza khaya tha na chalo ab chupchap khao..


Jyoti muh banate hue :- okkkk.


Ye bolte hue vo beman se karan k hatho se khane lagi , tabi karan muskurate hue bola :- jaldi khao na betu , fir ice cream ni milegi ni to.


Jyoti :- kya ice cream , fir to sabse jyada m hi kahungi .


Ye bol wo jaldi jaldi khane lagi , jisse use khasi ane lagi , karan use pani pilate hue .


Karan :- jhali kahiki aram se ni khasakti kya


Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas has deti h , abhi karan ne thoda s hi khilaya tha ki tabhi humari tikhi mirchi yani shruti aaphunchi waha khati mhithi nokjhok m tikhapan lane.


Shruti :- abe mote kitna bhukkad h tu , subah to bhua k hatho k sandwich to akele akele khaye hi or baki bache bhi abhi akele hi nipta diye , bakiyon k liye ek bhi ni choda.


Karan shruti ko chup ho jane ka ishara ker raha tha , lekin shruti ne wo samjha hi ni or apne hero ki sari pol khol di.


Jyoti ye sun gussa nak p late hue :- bhaiiii aap to bol rahe the ki aapne kuch ni khaya...


Ye bol jyoti ghutno k bal uski or bhadne lagi.


Karan darte hue :- are gudiya meri baat to sun .......


Aahhhh


Karan iske aage kuch bol pata use pahale hi apni dand nayika ne apne hero ko hi dand de dala , I mean use dhaka de bister p gira uske sine p muke barsane lagi.
.


Shruti :- are koi mujhe bhi batao chal kya raha h.


Karan pitte hue majakiya way m :- ye sab teri vajah se ho raha h tikhi mirchi , tujhe chodunga ni m


Jyoti karan k bal khichte hue :- pahale mujhse to bach lo mister.


Karan :- aah sorry sorry.


Jyoti fir shruti ko sari baat batati h , jispe shruti has k boli.


Shruti :- hehe keep it up jyoti , inke jhut ki saja to milni hi chahiye is mote ko , sabke sandwich akele hi kha gaya.


Jyoti :- koi baat ni shruti jitne bhi khaye h sab nikal dungi m aaj to.


Shruti :- ager tujhe koi problem n ho to m bahati ganga m hath dho lu.


Jyoti :- sure kyu ni.


Iske sath hi shruti bhi tut padi bichre hero pe or unki aawaz sun sari bahane waha aphunchi to unhonne jab ye najara dekha to haye bichare ki kismat esi kharab ki sari bahane bhi jyoti or shruti k sath mil gayi or baja dala apne hero ka band.


Bichara hero to ye soch raha tha ki abhi to bahane h jab yr hal h , inme se age chal kuch biviya bhi banegi , to kya haal hoga.


Karan kisi tarah unse chutte hue :- ha maro maro kaminiyo, mujhko zinda mat chodo , m koi mandir ka ghanta hu jo jo aaraha h bajaye ja raha h.


Isle sabhi bahane hasne lagi , tabhi unki aawaze sun waha bhua or choti ma bhi aaphunchi .


Kavya :- are kya ho raha h yaha , kyu itna shor macha rakha h.


Karan bhag k kavya k piche chup k. :- choti ma , bachao apne lala ko dekho kese mar rahi h ye sab mujhe .


Kavya ye sun hasne lagi , to karan use ghurte hue bola


Karan :- choti maa aap bhi ,jaiye m apse bat ni kerta


Kavya :- ale ale mera lala ko mara inhone ab sabko saja milegi, barabar milegi.


Bhua :- or tumhari saja ye h ki tumme se kisi ko icecream ni milegi , sab sirf hum or karan hi khayenge.


Karan jibh chidate hue :- kyu bahano kesi rahi aagaya swad .


Bhua k farman sun sab bahNo ka muh latak gaya , or jab icecream serve hone lagi to sab bahane heran ho gayi kyunki bhua ne unhe bhi icecream di.


Bhua :- mera kya muh dekh rahi ho , jis bhai ko abhi pita tha n uski request p hi tumhe icecream mili h .


Ye sun sari bahano ko bahut pyaar ata h or sabhi fir se ek bar karan p tut padi lekin marne k liye ni use kisses kerke pyaar jatane.


Karam :- aaah choti maa bachao.


Kavya haste hue :- ye musibat tune hi mol li h lala ab tu hi sambhal inhe.


Fir yu hi masti majak k sath raat ho gayi , karan ek baar fir phone ker riya ki tabiyat ka jayza leta h or fir pahale jake jyoti ko sulata h or fir bhua k room m jata h , lekin bhua to so chuki thi , isliye usne kal baat kerne ka soch wapas jyoti k pas aagaya or pyaar se uske sir p hath fer dhime se hath ferte hue bola.


Karan :- kal kitni khush hogi meri gudiya surprise ko dekh k.


Ye bol wo bhi jyoti se chipak k so gaya.


Agli subah


Karan kisi kam se subah uth k jaldi kHi chala jata h or bas apni choti ma ko planning batake chala jata h.


Dopahar m jyoti tv dekh rahi thi hal m tabhi bell ring hui to jyoti jese hi Jake gate kholti h to samne khade vyakti ko dekh ek baar to use yakin hi ni hota , lekin agle hi pal wo khushi se chillate hue samne wale shaks se lipat gayi.


Jyoti :- maaaaa, choti aap


Ji ha dosto samne asha or naina khadi thi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


Stay tuned







Wow ek baad ek aur update maza aa Gaya bhai purane giley shikwe sab khatam. Isi baat per badiya Hai sir ji.
Kafi important part se start Kia aapne update jaha vritrasur ke naam se ek aur naye dushman ka agamen khas taur pe Jyoti ke liye aaya Hai coz uska ant sirf Jyoti se हो sakta Hai as per verdan of jagat janni matey. To woh sab se pehlay apne kaal ko khatam karega. Lekin uski doosri aur ahem karya Kia Hai jis ki wajah se Rahu ne usko abhi yaad Kia aur jagrit Kia shayad iska jawab jald hi milega. Gahr sab behnay ek sath Hai to Karan ke liye musibat to PAKKI thee hi naa specially pehlay thukai aur phir pyaar waisay waqai logo se ek na sambhalti ab yah to apne Karan ka caliber Hai ki itni sambhalna. Best of luck.
Aakhir me surprise me aaye Asha and Naina. Ab kaisay laaya Karan yah aage Pata chalega. Lekin ek baat Tai hain Naina aayi Hai to kuch na kuch khurafat bhi sath layi hogi coz Itni sharafat se to aane se rahi aur upar se Apni woh Rahu ke asar me bhi hain.
Aakhir me yah man bada hi bawra hota Hai jitna mil Jaye utna Kam kaha ek ke upar ek update mil Gaya Par ab Dil chah raha Hai ki jaldi doosri update bhi mil Jaye taki Naina and Karan Joyti ka amna samna हो.
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Wahi dusri or


Vritrasur ko jag ker bhahar aate dekh rahu or ketu muskura rahe the , jab usne aaker unhe pranam kiya to rahu bola.


Rahu :- aao mitra aao , varsho pashchAt tumse milke hum kitne khush h hum bata ni sakte.


Vritrasur :- khushi to mujhe bhi hui h mitra , lekin jitna m aapko janta hu , us hisab se m itna to kah sakta hu ki ye khushi sirf mujhse milne ki to ni h .


Kaho mitra jo nind m mane suna tumhari aawaz me wo kya satya h , kya samay aagaya h ab wo .


Ketu :- ha vritrasur wo samay aahigaya h , jiska tumhe varsho se intezar tha or jis samy k liye tumne war praapt kiya tha , ab samay aagaya h tum apne vardaan ka upyog kero or fir se is sansaar m asuro ka adhipaty sthapit kero.


Fir rahu ketu jyoti k shaktihin hone k bare m batate hue kyu ye sahi moka h wo vritrasur ko samjhate h .


Vritrasur :- mitra tum bol to sahi rahe ho avsar to acha h , per in devo ka khaskar us shani ka koi bharosa ni h , isliye is baar vijay humari hi nishchit ho uske liye mere pas ek upay h


Rahu :- to der kis baat ki vritrasur batao kya yojna h.


Vritrasur batane hi wLa hota h ki tabhi ketu bol utha.


Ketu :- ni rahu yaha p ni , ye jagah uchit ni kya pata konsa dev yaha aapas adrishy roop m mojud ho or humari yojna sun le, isliye chalo mere sath.


Ye bol ketu rahu or vritrasur ko leker apne lok m leke chala gaya jo tha ketu lok.


Ketu :- ah hah , kitna acha lag raha h us patal k andhere se nikal waps apne lok lot k , isi lok se nikalwa k us samay devo ne hume patal m pahunchaya tha n , ab yahi se shuru hogi un devo ki barbadi.


Fir wo 3mo mil ler aage ki yojna banane lage


Wahi dusri or


Location :- shani lok


Mata chaya :- putra ye kesi vichitra ghatna ka aarambh ho gaya h mangal dev per karan ne tumhari di hui vakradrishti ka upyog ker dala.


Shani :- ha mata , mangal ka ahankar ab charam p h or is kaaran wo ache bure ki samjh bhi kho bethe , apne purshtv k ahankar m na keval usne jyoti ka , balki uske samet guru maa adishakti samet sari nari jaat ka bhi apman kiya h , unhe durbal bolke.


Isliye guru dev ki icha se hi karan k dwara rachit dand chakra dwara n keval mangal dev ka ahankar nasht hoga , apitu is sansar ko fir ek baar nari shakti ki mahima ka gyaan hoga.


Devi chaya :- parantu putra , mangal dev ek dev h or karan ek manushy kya ese m ye uchit hoga , kya karan ki shaktiya mangal jese shaktishali dev per karya karegi.


Shani dev :- mata mat bhuliye ki meri vakradrishti koi sadharan shakti ni , sakshat mahadev ka wo amogh vardaan h jiske prabhav se koi ni bach sakta swayam khud guru mahadev bhi isse n bach paye the , is drishti k liye chahe dev ho ya manushya ho ya asur sab saman h , isliye kisi bhi prakar ka pad hone ka koi prashna hi ni uthta mata , nayay vahi shashwat h jo sabke liye barabar ho jese ki karan ka , ab mangal dev ko apne karmfal ko bhogna hi hoga.


Mata chaya :- or vritrasur ka kya putra , rahu or ketu ne avsar ka labh utha vritrasur ko jagrit ker diya h , jo maha shakti shali h, jiska ant keval jyoti hi ker sakti thi , adishakti k vardan k anusar lekin wo to swayam abhi shaktihin h putra , fir kya karenge hum..


Shani :- chintit mat hoiye mata , jo bhi ho raha h guru dev ki icha se hi ho raha h , ese m kisi bhi shubh hone ka koi prashn hi ni uthta , aap nishchit ho jaiye mata, jo hoga shubh hoga


Tab tak ap karan or jyoti ki mithi nok jok ka aanand le lijiye.


Back to the hero.


Karan apne hath m chamch liye :- kha lena meri pyari gudiya .


Jyoti jo karan se subah k liye ruthi hui , or wo bacho se nhakre dikhate hue.


Jyoti muh ferte hue :- ni mujhe ni khana mujhe bhuk ni h.


Karan :- are ese kese bhuk ni h dopahar k baad tune kaha kuch khaya , acha thoda sa to kha le , tu to apni bhai ki achi gudiya h naA.


Jyoti :- m kaha achi hu , m to zidi or buri hu na isliye hi to mujhe datte hue.


Karan :- oh to mera bacha mujhse icliye nalaj h (apne ek hath se kaan pakadte hue ) uske liye Solly na betu , apne bhaiya ko maaf ker do or ache bache ki tarah khana kha lo nAa.


Jyoti muh fulate hue :- ni mujhe ni khana ap bahut gande ho .


Karan :- pakka ni khaogi.


Jyoti :- ji ni ab likh k duu.


Karan :- oh to fir aaj to bhuka hi sona padega yaar.


Jyoti bholepan se :- aap kyu bhuke soyoge .


Karan udaas chahra bana k :- ab meri gudiya bhuki soyegi to m kese kha sakta hu , chalo ye khana m kaya ko khila dunga , or fir so jaunga bhuka.


Ye bol karan uth k jane laga , to jyoti ne us ka hath pakad liya , ab chahe humari jyoti dand nayika hi kyu na ho sath m karan ki gf bhi to thi , use jealous feel hua jealous feel kerti h , bhale hi wo janti thi ki karan or kaya m sirf dosti ka pyara rishta h , per nari k man ko bhagwan bhi kaha samjh paye , use ye hargiz gawara n hua ki uska bf uska bhai uske hisse ka pyar kisi or ko de.


Jyoti :- are ruko to sahi mane kab kaha mujhe ni khana , m to ye bol rahi hu ki...


Karan :- ki kyaaa mera baby.


Jyoti bhole pan se muh bigadte hue :- bhai mujhe ye daliya ni khana iska taste bilkul acha ni.


Karan haste hue :- acha to ab aayi n ladki bat samne .


Ye bol wo jyoti ko gudgudi kerta h or fir bola.


Karan:- ji ni betu , aapki tabiyat kharab h na abhi yahi milega or wese bhi subah hi pizza khaya tha na chalo ab chupchap khao..


Jyoti muh banate hue :- okkkk.


Ye bolte hue vo beman se karan k hatho se khane lagi , tabi karan muskurate hue bola :- jaldi khao na betu , fir ice cream ni milegi ni to.


Jyoti :- kya ice cream , fir to sabse jyada m hi kahungi .


Ye bol wo jaldi jaldi khane lagi , jisse use khasi ane lagi , karan use pani pilate hue .


Karan :- jhali kahiki aram se ni khasakti kya


Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas has deti h , abhi karan ne thoda s hi khilaya tha ki tabhi humari tikhi mirchi yani shruti aaphunchi waha khati mhithi nokjhok m tikhapan lane.


Shruti :- abe mote kitna bhukkad h tu , subah to bhua k hatho k sandwich to akele akele khaye hi or baki bache bhi abhi akele hi nipta diye , bakiyon k liye ek bhi ni choda.


Karan shruti ko chup ho jane ka ishara ker raha tha , lekin shruti ne wo samjha hi ni or apne hero ki sari pol khol di.


Jyoti ye sun gussa nak p late hue :- bhaiiii aap to bol rahe the ki aapne kuch ni khaya...


Ye bol jyoti ghutno k bal uski or bhadne lagi.


Karan darte hue :- are gudiya meri baat to sun .......


Aahhhh


Karan iske aage kuch bol pata use pahale hi apni dand nayika ne apne hero ko hi dand de dala , I mean use dhaka de bister p gira uske sine p muke barsane lagi.
.


Shruti :- are koi mujhe bhi batao chal kya raha h.


Karan pitte hue majakiya way m :- ye sab teri vajah se ho raha h tikhi mirchi , tujhe chodunga ni m


Jyoti karan k bal khichte hue :- pahale mujhse to bach lo mister.


Karan :- aah sorry sorry.


Jyoti fir shruti ko sari baat batati h , jispe shruti has k boli.


Shruti :- hehe keep it up jyoti , inke jhut ki saja to milni hi chahiye is mote ko , sabke sandwich akele hi kha gaya.


Jyoti :- koi baat ni shruti jitne bhi khaye h sab nikal dungi m aaj to.


Shruti :- ager tujhe koi problem n ho to m bahati ganga m hath dho lu.


Jyoti :- sure kyu ni.


Iske sath hi shruti bhi tut padi bichre hero pe or unki aawaz sun sari bahane waha aphunchi to unhonne jab ye najara dekha to haye bichare ki kismat esi kharab ki sari bahane bhi jyoti or shruti k sath mil gayi or baja dala apne hero ka band.


Bichara hero to ye soch raha tha ki abhi to bahane h jab yr hal h , inme se age chal kuch biviya bhi banegi , to kya haal hoga.


Karan kisi tarah unse chutte hue :- ha maro maro kaminiyo, mujhko zinda mat chodo , m koi mandir ka ghanta hu jo jo aaraha h bajaye ja raha h.


Isle sabhi bahane hasne lagi , tabhi unki aawaze sun waha bhua or choti ma bhi aaphunchi .


Kavya :- are kya ho raha h yaha , kyu itna shor macha rakha h.


Karan bhag k kavya k piche chup k. :- choti ma , bachao apne lala ko dekho kese mar rahi h ye sab mujhe .


Kavya ye sun hasne lagi , to karan use ghurte hue bola


Karan :- choti maa aap bhi ,jaiye m apse bat ni kerta


Kavya :- ale ale mera lala ko mara inhone ab sabko saja milegi, barabar milegi.


Bhua :- or tumhari saja ye h ki tumme se kisi ko icecream ni milegi , sab sirf hum or karan hi khayenge.


Karan jibh chidate hue :- kyu bahano kesi rahi aagaya swad .


Bhua k farman sun sab bahNo ka muh latak gaya , or jab icecream serve hone lagi to sab bahane heran ho gayi kyunki bhua ne unhe bhi icecream di.


Bhua :- mera kya muh dekh rahi ho , jis bhai ko abhi pita tha n uski request p hi tumhe icecream mili h .


Ye sun sari bahano ko bahut pyaar ata h or sabhi fir se ek bar karan p tut padi lekin marne k liye ni use kisses kerke pyaar jatane.


Karam :- aaah choti maa bachao.


Kavya haste hue :- ye musibat tune hi mol li h lala ab tu hi sambhal inhe.


Fir yu hi masti majak k sath raat ho gayi , karan ek baar fir phone ker riya ki tabiyat ka jayza leta h or fir pahale jake jyoti ko sulata h or fir bhua k room m jata h , lekin bhua to so chuki thi , isliye usne kal baat kerne ka soch wapas jyoti k pas aagaya or pyaar se uske sir p hath fer dhime se hath ferte hue bola.


Karan :- kal kitni khush hogi meri gudiya surprise ko dekh k.


Ye bol wo bhi jyoti se chipak k so gaya.


Agli subah


Karan kisi kam se subah uth k jaldi kHi chala jata h or bas apni choti ma ko planning batake chala jata h.


Dopahar m jyoti tv dekh rahi thi hal m tabhi bell ring hui to jyoti jese hi Jake gate kholti h to samne khade vyakti ko dekh ek baar to use yakin hi ni hota , lekin agle hi pal wo khushi se chillate hue samne wale shaks se lipat gayi.


Jyoti :- maaaaa, choti aap


Ji ha dosto samne asha or naina khadi thi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


Stay tuned
rahu ki to jabardast planning chal rhi hai jo apne karan or jyoti ke liye bilkul thik nhi hai..... Mangal dev ka kya hal hua karan ke vakradristi ke prabhav se ye aage dekhne layak hog.......
sab behno ne milkar karan ki mar li😁😁..........
chlo bhai last me matasri ke Darshan to huye jis se apni jyoti khus ho gyi...........
or ye naina ki nfrat kb khatam hogi apni second heroine hai vo ese muh fula kr rhti hai to acha nhi lgta......uske dil me bhi karan ke pyar ka deep jalao.........
lajwab awesome superbbbb speechless as always............
keep posting bhai..........
waiting for next update...........
 

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Harry bhai itne saare updates ko me regularly padh raha hu. And believe me i am completely speechless.

Kehne ko kuch hai hi nahi hamari soch se bahut uchi hone lagi hai kahani.


Jab mujhe lagega ki kuch kehne layak hu toh jaroor kahoonga but abhi toh budhhi me taqat hi nahi.
Lekin kuch to review kuch to comment kiya kero bhai acha lagta h usse mujhe
 
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