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Update no :- 94
Location :- nahar singh haveli

Kabir ko shubham le gaya apni car me hospital ki or fir raghunath bola

Raghunath :- naina beti please kuch kijiye, isse pahale wo buri shakti hamare parivar ko tabah ker de.

Thakur ki patni :- per pitaji esa kyu ker rahe h ji , wo bhala apne hi khun ko kyu marna chahate h

Naina :- aap chinta mat kijiye thakur sahab vo jo bhi shakti h , uska aaj raat ko hi ant ho avashya ho jayega , parantu pahale hume nahar singh ji ki aatma se baat kerni hogi kyunki ho na ho baat kuch or hi h.

Hum aaj raat hi kabristan me jayenge or unhe bulane ki kriya karenge

Shina :- lekin ager aap yaha se chali gayi to humara kya hoga,kahi aapke piche se wo aatma yaha aagayi to.

Naina :- aap log chinta mat kijiye , m haveli k charo or ek esa kavach bandh dungi,ki koi bhi buri shakti haveli me pravesh ni ker payegi.

Raghunath :- per ager wo shakti ghar k ander hi hui to.

Naina :- uska bhi intezam h mere pass, aap sabse meri vinti h ki aaj raat aap sab ek hi kamre me rahe or aapki security k liye humari preety to yaha hogi hi, jo kamre k bahar pahara degi.

Preety ye sun ker dar gayi or boli.

Preety :- mmmme

Naina muskurate hue :- ha ni to kya preetu, tu hi to h hum sab me sabse takatwar or bahadur , jisse bhut pret bhi darte h, kyu veer

Veer :- yaa


Preety :- per sister.

Naina :- ruko m tumhe ek mantra or batati hu , jara kaan aage lao apna.

Naina preety k kan me boli.

Naina :- abe jhali, isse acha moka tujhe ni milega veer ko impress kerne ka , or tu bar bar kyu bhul jati h , ki tu kya h or tera ye bhut pret kuch ni bigad sakte .

Veer ka nam sun preety ko man masos k manna pada or naina apni teyariyo me lag gayi.

Usne kali ma ki puja ki bhasm se haveli k charo or ek lakshman rekha khich di , or ghar k main gate pe ek kalash rakh diya.

Naina or veer nikal gaye kabristaan ki or , or preety hall me bethi rakhwali ker rahi thi.

Kabristan raat me bahut jyada hi bhayanak lag raha tha , or uper se barish ka mosam or ho raha tha, jo vatavaran ko or bhayavah bana raha tha , rah rak ker bijli k kadkne or kutto k rone ki aavaje aarahi thi.

Naina or veer ko andhere m time to laga , per nahar singh ki kabar unhe mil hi gayi, naina ne apne or veer k charo or ek kavach rupi ghera bana diya or vahi p beth ker mantra jaap kerne lagi.

Wahi dusri or

Preety hall me bethi thi hath me ek bada sa danda liye bethi thi, lekin akeli bethi hone ki vajah se uska thoda sa mood ban gaya or usne haveli me bane chote se bar me se ek choti bottle utha k pi li.

Preety :- chal bhai preety , bahut din ho gaye mahfil jamaye , ye sister to pine dena to dur , dekhne bhi ni deti.
Abhi sister yaha ni h preety , jaldi se ek peg mar le

Usko thodi chad gayi thi , aakhir purani aadat h , itni jaldi to jayegi ni.


Tabhi puri haveli me fir se kisi admi k rone ki aavaj gunjane lagi , jisse sun preety ki halat kharab ho gayi.

Preety :- kkkon h yaha

Tabhi vaha ek aadmi jisne thakuro wale kapde or pagdi pahani thi , preety ko wo ghumte najar aaya , jo dikhne m bhuda tha.

Nashe me Preety ko laga wo raghunath hoga to wo boli.

Preety :- are thakur sahab , kaheko tension le rele ho , apun h na idher , aap aram se apne kamre me jaiye.

Preety ki aawaz sun jese hi us shaks ne apna chahara preety ki or kiya , to uska to sara nasha hi uter gaya, kyunki wo shaks raghunath ni , thakur nahar singh tha.

Nahar singh bhi preety ki aavaj sun chonka or bola.

Nahar singh :- beti kya tum mujhe dekh sakti ho.

Nahar singh k bolne k dhang se hi pata chal raha tha , ki wo bahut pareshan or dukhi h.

Preety ko to kabir ki halat yaad ji aagayi or wo kabristan ki or bhagi, chilati hui.

Preety :- sister , bachao nahar singh ka bhut yaha h .

Vahi jab naina k mantra chal hi rahe the tabhi veer bola.

Veer :- naina vo dekho .

Naina ne veer k batayi disha m dekha to paya ek kabar khudi hui thi , jab dono ne waha jake dekha to kabar me lash ni thi or us kabar k pathar pe samar singh ka nam likha hua tha.

Abhi vo kuch bole or kare ki itne me preety bhi vaha bhagi bhagi vaha aagayi or hafne lagi.

Naina :- preety tum yaha kya ker rahi ho , tumhe to haveli m rukne ko bola tha na mane.

Or ye kya tumne fir se sharab pi , mane mana kiya tha na tumhe.

Preety :- abhi vo baat chodo sister or meri suno.

Fir preety use sari baat bata deti h or itne me hi nahar singh ki atma bhi vahi aagayi , jise dekh preety naina k piche ho gayi or boli.

Preety :- dekho sister wo yaha tak aagaye.

Naina ko vo dikhe to ni per fir bhi vo boli :- preety tum daro mat inse , ager mere kavach k hone k bavjud bhi ye ghar se bahar nikal yaha tak aagaye h to iska matlab ye ek achi aatma h , kyunki koi bhi buri aatma mere kavach ko langh ni sakti thi.

Nahar singh ki aatma achanak se veer me pravesh ker gayi or boli.

Veer :- tumne sahi kaha beti , m koi buri shakti ni hu , m to khud ek asahaye aatma hu , jo apne parivar ko savdhan kerne k liye raat ko rota hu or unko aane wale sankat ki chetavni deta hu.

Naina :- sankat , kesa sankat nahar singh ji , kya aap jante h kon h vo buri shakti.

Nahar singh :- wo buri shakti or koi ni mera bada beta samar singh h beti or uske sath uska beta yani ki mera pota kabir bhi.

Wo usi nakshe ko pane aayq h jiske chakkar me uski mot hui thi

Short flashback.

Jab naina ne suitcase rakh mandir m gayi thi , to aadhi raat ko kabir ne hi duplicate chabi se gate khol ker suit case se hath ko nikala or mandir k bahar aake bola.

Kabir :- aap chinta mat kero bapu jab tak m hu , hume humara maksad pura kerne se koi ni rok payega. Ab bataiye mujhe kya kerna hoga.

Ji ha dosto ye hath samar singh ka hi tha , jise usne kale jadu k time kaat diya tha

Us hath ne kabir k ek hath ki or ungli ki , fir usi ungli ko kabir k mathe ki or kiya jisse us ungli se ek roshni nikal kabir k sir m sama gayi or use samjh aagaya use kerna kya hoga.

Kabir ne ek bade se chaku se apna hath kat liya or us jale hue hath ko us jagah laga diya , or us pret ki shakti se wo ese chipak gaya , jeSe wo hath kabir ka hi ho.

Esa kerne se kabir k ander samar singh ki sari kali vidyaon ki jankari aagai or wo kabristaan me pahuch samar singh ki lash ko bahar nikalta h or kake jadu ki madad se uske sharir m wo uski aatma dal ker ke use jinda kerne m lag jata h.

Lekin usme 10 ghante lagne the , to usne wahi ek purane jhopde m lash ko chupa diya or waha se nikal gaya.

Aaj subah jab naina or baki sab mandir m gaye to wo apne baap ki lash k pass gaya or usne wo jala hu hath firse kaat ker apne baap ki lash k hath me laga diya.

Vo.darinda jinda to ho gaya tha, lekin puri takat hasil kerne k liye use raat tak rukna pad raha tha.

Or kabir ne naina ko raste se side kerne k liye, jhuti kahani banayi.

Flash back end.

Naina :- oh no , iska matlab shubham ki jan ko khatra h,hume jald hi kuch kerna hoga.

Lekin kya aap bata sakte h ki wo naksha kaha per hoga , taki hum use nasht ker sake.

Nahar singh :- wo usi kamre m h beti jaha wo hadsa hua tha, lekin wo meri ankho k samne ni h.

Ab mere parivar ki kismat tumhare hath me h beti , bhagwan k liye mere parivar ko bacha lo.

Naina ne nahar singh ko ashvast ker unhe mukti dedi.



Lekin ab der ho chuki thi , naina jab mantro charan ker rahi thi or preety ghar ki rakhwali. Tab

Tab Aas pas koi acha hospital na hone k kaarn tha , shubam ne chote hospital me kabir k pati kerwa di or vo dusre bade hospital ki or jaa rahe the.

Tabhi achanak se gadi apne aap ruk gayi or saamne ek shaks khada najar aaya use.

Shubham :- kon h waha or raste me kyu khade ho.

Wo or koi ki samar singh tha , jiska pura sharir jala hua tha or vo bola.

Samar singh :- ye kya bhatije , ek sal bhi ni hua or apne tau ko bhul gaya tu.

Shubham chonk ke :- samar tauji aap , aap to mar chuke the.

Tabhi piche se kabir kamini muskan se bola.

Kabir :- mar to chuke the chote , per kya kare , ye pesa h hi esi kuti chij jo kuch bhi kerwa de or yaha to baat bhi khajane ki thi.

Shubham :- bhaiya , iska matlab aap bhi.

Samar singh :- ab beta to baap p hi jayega na bhatije.

Shubham car se nikal ker bhaga , lekin samar singh ne use apni shaktiyon se niche gira diya tha.

Kabir or samar singh uski or bhadne lage , shubham dar k mare gidgidane laga.

Shubam :- tau ji please mujhe chod do , mane aapka kya bigada h , m bhi to aapke liye kabir bhaiya jesa hi hu na, aapko dadaji ki kasam.

Samar singh ye sun shubham ko uthata h or aram se bola.

Samar singh :- tune sahi kaha beta tu bhii mere liye kabir jesa hi h fir m tujhe kese maru.

Kabir chonkte hur :- baapu.

Samar singh use chup rahane ka ishara ker aage bola.

Samar singh :- per beta ye tune kya galti ker di , mujhe us insaan ki kasam de dali jisse m sabse jyada nafrat kerta hu.

Bas itna bol samar singh shetani hasi haste hue shubam ki gardan tod di.Or fir wo 2no baap bete nikal pade haveli ki or .

Per jese hi samar singh ne apna kadam haveli k ander rakhne ki koshis ki to usko ek jordar jhatka laga or wo dur ja ker gira.

Samar singh chilaya:- kabir , jaldi se us kalash ko waha se hata or ye rekha mita.

Kabir ne apne baap ki baat mante hue vesa hi kiya, tabhi vaha raghunath aagaya or kabir ko dekh chonk k bola.

Raghunath :- kabir beta tum yaha kese or shubham kaha h , or ye tum kya ker rahe ho beta , us kalash ko waha wapas rakho verna.

Samar singh waha aate hue :- verna m aajaunga, kyu chote.

Raghunath chonkte hue :-bhai sahab aap ,aap to mar gaye the.

Samar singh (gusse se) :-ha mar gaya tha , lekin apne khajane ko pane k liye m wapas aagaya hu. Kyu chote apne bhai ko dekh k khushi ni hui, dekh m tere liye ek tohfa laya hu.

Ye bol samar singh ne kuch feka raghunath ki or jese hi raghunath ne wo chij dekhi , wo wahi fut fut k rone laga , or baki sara parivar jo waha aagaya tha vo bhi.

Kyunki samar singh ne shubam ka kata hua sir feka tha, raghunath bola.

Raghunath :- ye aapne kya kiya bhai sahab , apne hi bhatije ko maar dala aakhir kyu.

Samar singh :- ager m ni marta to ye mere bete ka haq marta bhavishya me or pitaji ka sath dene k liye tum bhi maroge.

Ye bol samar singh ne apna ek hath hava me esa ker liya jese usne kisi ka gala pakad rakha ho or usi samay raghunath ka gala apne aap ghutne laga.

Lekin isse pahale samar singh raghunath ko mar pata , use ek or jhatka laga or fir se wo dur ja ke gira, esa isliye hua kyunki naina waha pahunch gayi thi or apne yantra ka istemal ker liya tha usne.

Samar singh :- ladki tujhe ek baar moka diya tha jinda chod ki tu hamare raste m na aaye , lekin ab in sab k sath tu bhi maregi.

Ye bol samar singh fir se aage badha , lekin naina ne use apne yantra se rok ek divar se chipka diya or boli.

Naina :- ant to hoga lekin sirf tera samar singh , lekin usse pahale tujhe mere ko samraat tak pahuchana hoga.

Samar singh tantrik bhi tha or uper se samraat ka ek acha dost bhi , to wo kuch jyada hi takatwar tha, usne ek shakti prahar se naina ko piche dakhel diya.

Samar singh haste hue :- marne k liye samraat tak jane ki kya jarurat h murkh ladki , teri ye khawaish m hi puri ker deta hu or ye tera chota mota yantra mera kuch ni bigad sakta .

Sabse pahale m tere sathiyo ko hi marunga.

Ye bol samar singh ne ek shakti ka gola preety ki or feka , per ye kya preety ne apni or gola aate dekh apna wo hath apne muh ki or ker liya , jispe wo tritya ka nishan tha or jese hi vo gola uss nishan se takraya to wo kisi ball ki tarah gola piche ki or tappa kha k kabir se takra gaya or kabir chinkta hua rakh m tabdil ho gaya.

Apne bete ki mot dekh kabir buri tarah bhokhla gaya or bola.

Samar singh preety se :- Oh to tu ek trittya h , lekin m bhi kam ni hu ladki , samraat k sath rah ker mane bhi trittyao ko marne ki vidya sikh li h , tune mere bete ko mara h ladki ab tu ni bachegi.

Ye bol samar singh apni ankhe band ker kuch mantra bolne laga or usne apna hath jese hi aage kiya uske hath me ek lal or kale rang ka shakti ka gola aagaya or usne wo preety ki or feka.

Naina chilayi :- niiiiiiii

Preety ne to apni ankhe hi band ker li thi , tabhi puri haveli me ek dardnaak chinkh gunj uthi .

Lekin ye chinkh preety ki ni veer ki thi , hua yu tha jese hi veer ne wo gola preety ki or aata dekha , wo jhat se preety ko bachane k liye bich me aagaya or wo gola usko lag gaya.

Naina or preety jor se chilayi :- veeeerr

Veer us prahar k bad piche ki or girne laga , preety ne use tham liya or wahi farsh pe uske sir ko apni god m rakh rote hue boli.

Preety :- ye tumne kya kiya veer , mujhko bachane k liye khud p ye war kyu jhela , akhir kyu mujh jesi ek trittya ko bachane k liye apni jaan sankat me dali.

Veer adhbehoshi ki halat me :- mane tume pahale bhi kaha tha na preetu, mujhe koi fark ni padta tum kya ho or kyu ho , fir ye trittya wali baat kaha se aayi.

(Khaste hue ) m janta hu preety tum mujhse pyaar kerti ho ek dost ki tarah hi ni ek premika ki tarah bhi.

Sach to ye h ki m bhi tumko pasand kerta hu preety , wo bhi aaj se ni bachpan se hi , per kabhi kahane ki himmat ni ker paya , to kese m apni ankho k samne apne bachpan k pyaar ko marta hua dekh sakta tha.

(Atakte hue) lekin shayad khuda ko hamara milan manjur ni tha preetu , isliye m jane se pahale tumhe ye sachai bata dena chahata hu,

I love u preety.

Isi k sath veer ki ankhe band ho jati h or preety chilati h.


Preety :-. Niiiiiiiiiiiiii.

Or wahi beth fut fut k rone lagi , or naina ka bhi wahi hal tha , wo bhi veer se kafi close ho gayi thi.

Samar singh bich me haste hue bola :- tera yaar to gaya ladki , ab tujhe kon bachayega.


Preety ne jese hi ye suna uske gusse ka jwala mukhi fut pada or uski aankhe surk lal ho gayi, jo chamak rahi thi.

Preety bhayanak awaz me :- marega to tu ab kamine .

Ye bol preety ne apna ek hath aage kiya jisme ek aag ka gola aagaya.




Preety ne us gole ko samar singh p fek dala , lekin ye utna takatwar ni tha , jitna ek proper trittya ka hota h , kyunki preety apni shaktiyon se achi tarah vakif ni thi .

isliye us war ne samar singh ko ghayal ker ek baar k liye bhaga to diya , lekin wo mara ni.

Wahi preety ka gusaa or badhta ja raha tha or naina bhi use rok ni pa rahi thi .

Wahi dusri or

Karan or jyoti nikal pade padmanabh swami k mandir ki or.

Sabse pahale to waha jaker unhone ek dharmshala me ek room leker kapde change ker waha k paramparik kapde pahane .

Jyoti ne ek yellow color ki simple saree pahani , lekin wo simple saree me or bhi jyada sunder dikh rahi thi.or usne ek choti bandhi thi.
Jisme bilkul wo ek south indian ladki hi lag rahi thi.

Apna hero to use dekhta hi rah gaya , or usme kho sa gaya, jyoti uske pass aake boli.

Jyoti :- kesi lag rahi hu bhai m.

Karan uske gal chumte :- hamesha ki tarah bahut pyari lag rahi h meri gudiya , per ek chij ki kami h.

Jyoti :- wo kya bhai.

Karan :- hmm , tum yahi ruko m abhi aya,

Ye bol karan kamre se bahar chala gaya or 15 min baad wapas aaya , lekin usne apne piche kuch chupaya hua tha.

Jyoti :- bhai kya chupa rahe ho mujhse jara dikhaiye ,

Karan :- ese ni gudiya , pahale ankhe band kero .

Jyoti :- kya bhai , ap chote bacho jese kerte ho kayi baar to.

Ye bol jyoti ne apni ankh band ker li , karan jyoti ko shishe k pas leker gaya or usne jo chij layi thi wo jyoti ko pahana di.

Karan :- ab tum akh khol sakti ho meri sweety

Jyoti ne jese hi apni ankhe kholi to usne dekha ki uska bhai uske liye ek kajra laya tha , jo uske baalo me bahut hi acha lag raha tha.




Karan :- ab lag rahi h meri gudiya ek dam south ki heroine.

Jyoti sharma ke karan k gale lag k boli .

Jyoti :- thank you so much bhai , it's so beautiful.

Karan pyaar se uske chapat laga ke :-. Hat pagli , apne bhai ko bhi koi thanks kahata h kya.

Fir karan ne bhi kapde change kiye or parampara anusar ek dhoti or uper ek white kapda dal liya.

Jyoti samet tino ladkiya to pagal hue ja rahi thi karan ka wo look dekh ker.

Kiran(man me) :- haaye kitna handsome h karan , man to kerta h abhi propose ker du.

Per ye kawab me hadi ki tarah iski bahan jyoti hamesha isse chipki hi rahati h , karu to kya karu.

Kirti ka bhi kuch esa hi haal tha , jinhe dekh jyoti chid rahi thi.

Jyoti man me :- m bhi ek no ki gadhi hi hu , jo in chudelo ko apne sath yaha le aayi , dekho to kese besharmo ki tarah mere bhai ko ghure ja rahi h.

Karan :- friends ab chale , yaha sara din yahi gujarne ka irada h

Karan ki aawaz se sab hosh me aaye or sab mandir ki or nikal pade

Mandir ki sundarta ka varnan shabdo me varnan asambhav sa tha, mandir ka gumbad swarn nirmit(sone ka bana) tha , or mandir ki divaron poranik patro ki pratimaye nakkashi k roop me sthith thi.




Jese hi sab mandir k garbh grah k pass pahunche to unka hriday samne dekh gad gad ho gaya.

Kyunki bhagwan vishnu ki vo murti jo 1008 se bhi jyada shaligram shilao ko milaker banayi gayi thi , uska roop anupam or avismaraniy tha, jink




Us murti ko dekh ker esa hi prateet ho raha tha , ki jese waha koi murti ni sakshat bhagavan narayan hi anant shaiya pe lete h or unki nabhi se nikal rahe kamal per brahama ji virajman h.

Isi karan to unhe padmanabh swami kaha gaya h , padm yani kamal or nabh yani nabhi.

Arthat jinki nabhi kamal saman vishal h , wo padmanabh swami yaha virajman the.

Karan man me :- he sachidanand, he narayan apne is das ka pranam swikar kare.

He prabhu m abhi tak apne jivan k udeshya se purntah parichit to ni hu , parantu itna ashvast avashya hu ki apne yadi is jivan k sath mujhe ye shaktiya jo pradan ki h wo avashya hi dharm ki raksha k liye hi h.

He madhav m apne guru ki aagya maan yaha nilmani ki khoj me aaya hu, jise aapne dwapar me devo ko sompa tha . M ye janta hu bhagwan ki m bhale hi yaha dwar tak pahunch chuka hu per us mani ko pana itna saral bhi na hoga, dev avashya mere marg me bhadha avashya banege .

Isliye hey dayanidhan apne is bhakt ko apna aashirwad deker is das pe kripya kijiye.

Karan ne kuch der yu hi prathna ki or fir sabhi mandir k parisar m mojud baki mandiro k darshan kerne lage.

Karan or jyoti ko taikhane ka rasta bhi mil hi gaya , lekin waha jana allowed ni tha.

To karan ne apni ankh band ker divya drishti power activate ki or taikhane k gate ki or dekha jisse usko darwaje k aar par dikhne laga.

Or usne dekha ki ander sidiyo se utarne k baad 7 darwaje the , jinme se 6 per to normal tale lage hue the parantu 7ve darwaje per na koi darwaja tha , na koi kundi. Or waha per cctv camera bhi lage hue the.

Karan ne aaj raat ko yaha ane ka decide kiya or apne hotel ki or nikal pade.

Location :- vishnu lok.

Mata lakshmi or bhagwan vishnu ye sab dekh ker muskura rahe the, tabhi lakshmi maa boli.

Lakshmi mata :- dekha swami kitni saralta se aapke in anokhe bhakto ne nilmani k dwar ko khoj liya,mujhe to purn vishwas h ki karan or jyoti saralta se nilmani ko praapt ker lenge.

Narayan :- devi aapko humare bhakt p vishwas h ye to achi baat h , lekin karan or jyoti k liye ye yatra itni saral bhi ni hone wali, jitna aap soch rahe h devi.

Isme karan k bal , budhi ,dhairya or prem sabki pariksha hogi.

Lakshmi :- wo to kabse hoti hi aarahi h na narayan , akhir in bhai bahan k jivan me parikshaon k alawa or aaya bhi kya h abhi tak. To ab konsi badi baat hogi.

Narayan :- badi baat to h priye , aap bhul rahi h ki dwapar yug me krishn roop m mane nilmani ki suraksha k liye kya vyuh rachna karwayi thi or kin kin ko mane uska rakshak niyukt kiya tha.

Isiliye to m kah raha hu devi ye pariksha itni saral ni hone wali

Lakshmi mata :- aap kuch bhi kahiye swami mujhe karan or jyoti p purn vishwas h , wo har pariksha ko avashya paar karenge.

Back to the hero.

Raat ko karib 3 baje karan or jyoti soker uthe or naha dhoker wo jane k liye ready ho gaye, itni jaldi isliye kyunki aaj brahm muharat yani ki subah 4 baje se amavasya ka din aarambh hone wala tha or karan or jyoti is kaam ko jald se jald pura kerna chahate the.

Karan ne apne purse se apni maa ki photo nikali or ashirwad leta hua bola.

Karan :- mumma m janta hu aap hamare sath hamesha ho or aapka aashirwad bhi .

Lekin fir bhi hume or aashirwad dijiye taki hum apne lakshay ko purn ker sake.

Ye bol karan or jyoti ne apni ma ki photo ko mathe se laga ker aashirwad liya .

Jyoti :- to chale bhai.

Karan :- bas ek min gudiya.

Ye bol karan ne ek chutki bajayi jisse waha mojud cctv camera band ho gaye or karan or jyoti teleport ho pahunch gaye us taikhane me.

Jaha per unhone sare dwaro ko dekhne lage, 6 dwaro p to lakshmi ji bani hui thi, jinhe indian govt ne already khol diya tha, wo sabhi sone k bane hue the

Lekin 7va dwar bilkul alag or thoda darawna bhi tha , kyunki 7ve dwar pe lakshmi ji ni saamp bana hua tha




Karan ne us darwaje ko achi tarah check kerne laga , tabhi us darwaje k bichobiche usne ek khali jagah si bani hui dekhi , jiski shape bilkul sheshanag jesi thi.

Karan samjh gaya ki ho na ho yahi h wo jagah , jaha pe us sheshanag ki murti ko rakhne se dwar khulega.

Karan ne apne bag se wo murti nikali or us sthan per usne wo murti rakh di or mantra jap kiya.

Karan :-

Shaanta-Aakaaram Bhujaga-Shayana m Padma-Naabha Sura-Iisham
Vishva-Aadhaaram Gagana-Sadrsham
Megha-Varnna Shubha-Anggam|

Lakssmii-Kaantam
Kamala-Nayanam Yogibhir-Dhyaana-Gamyam
Vande Vissnnum Bhava-Bhaya-Haram Sarva-Loka-Eka-Naatham ||

Karan ki stuti purn hote hi wo dwar do hiso me batte hue apne aap khulne laga.

Or jese hi gate khula to bhitar se bahut hi jyada prakash bahar aane laga , koi aam insaan hota to kabka andha ho chuka hota , lekin karan or jyoti ko koi khas fark ni padha.

Wo ander jane lage or jese hi wo ander gaye , dwar apne aap wapas band ho gaya.

Karan or jyoti jab dwar k bhitar pahunche to samne ka najara dekh unki herani ka thikana na raha .

Kyunki wo koi kaksh ni balki ek bahut hi sundar van (jungle ) me khade the, jo bahut hi ghana or sunder tha , pass me hi kal kal kerti hui nadi bah rahi thi

Waha se kayi dur ek pahadi thi , jispe ek bahut hi sunder or bada el mahal najar aaraha tha.

Karan abhi un najaro ko dekhne me hi khoya hua tha ki achanak uska dhyan jyoti ki chikh se tuta .

Jyoti :-. Bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii bachao.

Karan ghabra ker jyoti ko dekhta h to pata h ki jyoti ek shakti kavach rupi gole me fasi hui h or wo bahar ni nikal pa rahi.

Karan ne ankh band ker hath aage kiye to uske hath se ek roshni nikal us gole se takrati h per koi asar ni hua.karan ne ek baar fir kosis ki per koi asar ni hua.

Karan gusse se chilaya :- kon h vo jisne meri bahan ko ked karne ka dussahas kiya , veer ho to samne aao , yu kayro ki tarah piche se vaar kyu ker rahe ho

Itna bol karan ne apni talvaar ka aahvahan kiya or usi samay ek roshni k sath uske hatho me talvar aagayi.

Fir usne us ghere pe talvaar se bhi vaar kiya per uska koi asar na hua

Tabhi vaha achanak se ek divya roshni yukt manav akriti prakat hui or boli.

Roshni :- rasaatal lok me tumhara swagat h rakshak .
Ye aawaz kisi purush ki pratit ho rahi thi. Karan us roshni ko dekhta h to najane kyu apne aap uske aage jhuk use pranam kerta h, ye to wo bhi ni janta tha , per usko apne antarman se aawaz aayi ki use us roshni ko pranam kerna chahiye


Roshni :- m janta hu putra ki tum yaha nilmani ko prapt kerne aaye ho , parantu use pana itna saral ni h , nilmani ki priksha ek dhyut krida(jue) ki tarah h , jisme tume nilmami rupi puraskar pana h to apni sabse priya vastu ya vyakti ko danv pe lagana hi hoga, isliye jyoti ab jab tak mere pas surakshit rahegi , jab tak tum nilmani ko pa ni lete.

Karan :- ni , meri bahan koi vastu ni h jise m daav p laga du , isse acha to mujhe nilmani chahiye hi ni , aap meri bahan ko shighra mukt kijiye or hume yaha se jane ki aagya dijiye

Roshni :- ye asambhav h karan , ek baar jisne rasatal lok me kadam rakh diya to use meri chunoti ko swikar kerna hi padta h . Or ager tum jana chahate ho to jayo parantu jyoti tumhare sath ni jayegi.

Karan k paas ye sun or koi chara ni bacha tha , roshni ki parikshao ko paar kerne k bajaye , isliye vo bola.

Karan :- mujhe swikar h.

Fir wo jyoti k pass jaker nam ankho se bola

Karan :- mujhe maaf ker de gudiya , meri vajah se tu yaha fas gayi h or mujhe majburan tumhe danv p lagana pad raha h

Jyoti :- bhai aap please mat roiye, ye sirf aapki hi ni meri bhi pariksha h , to hum dono ko thoda kasht sahana hi hoga na.

Or mujhe aap per pura bharosa h bhai , aap sari chunotiyo ko aasani se par ker loge or mujhe mukt kerwa doge , fir hum sath me ghar jayenge bhai

Rona to jyoti ko bhi bahut aaraha rha tha per wo ni chahati thi ki uska bhai use rota dekh kamjor ho jaye isliye usne khud ko control kiya Or jyoti ne apni ungli se apni anguthi nikal k karan ki or bhadati h jise roshni karan tak pahuchne deti h .

Jyoti :- bhai ise apne pas rakhiye , ager raste me kabhi bhi meri kami aapko mahasus ho to ise apne dil se laga lena , aap mujhe apne pass hi paoge.

Karan :- tu chinta mat ker gudiya tera ye bhai , tujhe jald se jald mukt kerwayega.

Iske aage kuch or vo bol pata dhire dhire karke us gole samet jyoti waha se gayab ho gayi.

Karan tej aawaz me :- jyotiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Or fir wahi ghutno k bal beth apni majburi p kuch der rota raha, tabhi roshni se aawaz ayi.

Roshni :- Rone m samay vyarth mat kero karan , jitna vilamb karoge ,utna samay jyoti se dur rahoge, isliye utho or sajjj ho jao nilmani ko pane k is safar k liye.

Karan ye sun shant hua or bola.

Karan :- hey divya shakti , aap jo koi bhi ho, ye shiv bhakt aapki har ek pariksha ko purn kerne ko sajj h , kahiye kya kerna hoga mujhe.

Roshni se aawaj aayi

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Roshni :- ye samne shivling dekh rahe ho rakshak.

Tabhi karan or us roshni k bich m ek bada sa shivling aagaya , jiska size kafi bada tha.




Roshni :- tumhe is shivling ko samne us parvat ki choti p sahit mahal k mandir m pahuchana hoga.

Karan ne dekha ki vo jaha khada tha vaha se kayi milo dur ek pahad tha jiske shikhar p ek mahal bana hua tha.

Karan :- mujhe aapki ye chunoti swikar h .

Roshni :- parantu , smaran rahe ye karya tumhe bina apni kisi shakti ka prayog kiye hi kerna hoga, arthath tumhe yaha se is shivling ko utha ker pedal hi vaha tak pahuchna hoga , taki marg e milne wale asankhya shiv bhakt bhi mahadev k darshan praapt ker sake.

Or tum shivling ko din me keval ek baar hi dhara pe rakh sakte ho vo bhi keval ratri me vishram kerne k liye , or yadi tumne us samay k alawa is shivling ko kabhi dhara p rakha to ye shivling vahi sthapit ho jayega , arthat ye waha se kabhi ni hilega , or yadi esa hua to tum apni jyoti ko sada sada k liye kho doge.

Karan :- esi sthithi kabhi uttpan hi ni hogi , hey divya shakti . M bhagwan mahadev k is ling swaroop ko inke sthan pe avashya pahuchaunga.

Roshni :- ek baar fir soch lo karan , rah saral na hogi , tumhe kayi mushkilo ka samna kerna hoga or ho sakta h , isme tumhare pran bhi chale jaye. isliye tum chaho to abhi bhi vapas lot sakte ho, parantu jyoti ko tumhe bhulna hoga.

Karan :- meri jyoti mera pran or meri aatma h divya shakt , or bhala koi apni atma k bina bhi koi jivit rah sakta h.

Ek taraf meri jyoti or dusri taraf indra k singhasan samet is sansaar ka sampurn bhaivav bhi ho to bhi m nisankoch ho apni jaan ko hi chununga dev.

Or rahi baat prano k jane ki to , bina meri gudiya k mera ye jivan mrityu se bhi battar hoga , jis jivan ka koi labh ni hoga , isliye he dev aapne mujhe sujhav diya uske liye aapko koti koti dhanyawad, parantu m ab piche ni hatunga

Aap mujhe aagya de

Roshni :- to thik h jesi tumhari icha , tum apni yatra ka aarambh ker sakte ho

Ye bol wo roshni waha se gayab ho gayi ,or karan us ling k pass jaker jese hi use uthane ko aage bhada , to achanak use kuch yaad aaya

Sabse pahale to usne pass wali nadi se jaker apni bottle ko achi tarah dhoya or fir usme jal bhar k laya or pass k bel patra k ped se bel patra ikatha ker shivling ki or aaya .

Fir karan ne wo belapatr shivling chada ker jalabhishek ker bhagwan ashutosh ki puja ki .

Fir karan ne om namah shivay mantra ka jaap kerte hue shivling ko utha ker apne kandhe per rakh liya , bilkul bahubali jese or nikal pada , apni manjil ki or

Karan man me :- tu chinta mat kerna meri gudiya , m jald se jald waha pahunch tujhe mukt kerwaunga.

Wahi dusri or

Preety ka gussa shant hone ka naam hi ni le raha tha , wo bas pagalo jese charo or aag k gole feke jaa rahi thi.

Naina use rokne ki bahut koshis ker rahi thi per koi fayda ni ho raha tha,ab naina ki himmat jwab de gati thi or wo rote hye veer ki body k pas gayi or boli.

Naina :- veer please utho dekho na hamari preety ko kya ho gaya h , wo ruk hi ni rahi , ese to wo khud ko nuksaan pahuncha legi .

Dekho na meri to wo sun hi ni rahi h , tum kuch bolo na veer , ise danto or kaho esa bhi koi kerta h kya.

Lekin veer ab kuch kaha bol pata , lekin naina bole ja rahi thi.

Naina :- veer tum kuch bolte kyu ni , tum bhi to preety se pyaar kerte ho na veer , kya tum chahate ho preety ko kuch ho , please utho , please

Naina ese hi rote hue badbadaye ja rahi thi , or fir veer k sine p sir rkh ker rone lagi , tabhi naina ka locket jo chamak raha tha vo veer k dil wali side touch ho gaya or us locket se ek roshni nikal veer k sine m sama gayi.

Tabhi veer k sharir m kuch halchal honi shuru ho gayi or bahut hi dhire se uske muh se bas itna hi nikla .

Veer :- preety.

Naina ne ye jab dekh to uski khushi ka thikana na raha or vo apne chamakte hue locket ko dekh ker samjh gayi ki ye usi ki karamat h.

Naina ne jaldi se apna locket veer ko pahana diya or bhag ke preety k pass gayi.

Naina khushi k ansu dek :- shant ho ja preety shant ho ja.

Preety :- ni sister jis sansar ne aaj mere se mere veer ko china h , use aaj m tabah ker dungi.

Naina preety ko kandhe se pakad ker hilate hue bolo.

Naina :- shant ho ja meri lado shant ho ja , tera veer kahi ni gaya , veer abhi jinda h , vo dekh vo tumhe bula raha h

Preety khushi se :- kya.

Or jese hi vo veer ki or gayi to veer k muh se ek or baar uska nam nikla.

Preety khushi k ansu :- m yahi veer , tumhare pas apni ankhe kholo dekho tumhari preetu tumhare pas hi h.

Per veer apni ankhe ni khol pata or behosh ho jata h, preety ghabra ker naina se boli.

Preety :- ye kya ho raha h sister , mera veer apni ankhe kyu ni khol raha tha, or ye wapas behosh kyu ho gaya.

Naina gambhir svar me :-. Preety , samar singh ka vaar kitna ghatak hoga is baat ka andaza isi baat se lagaya ja sakta h ki wo vaar trityao ko bhi mar sakta tha.

Ha maa kali k ashirwad se prapt mere is locket ne veer ki jan to bachli, lekin ye sthayi ilaaj ni h , kyunki ye locket sirf mere liye bana h.

Preeti :- to mere veer ka sthayi ilaaj kero na sister , usko thik ker do na .

Naina :- uska upay keval samar singh janta h preety , mere pas ek plan h jisse uska ant bhi ho jayega or hamara kam bhi, lekin pahale hume veer ko ander le jana hoga.

Fir jyoti or naina sabko ander leker jati h or veer ko bed per leta ker apna locket wapas gale me pahan leti h , kyunki.ab veer ko iski filhal k liye jarurat ni thi.fir naina ne baki sare parivar ko usi kamre m rukne ka bol bahar kamre ke ek yantra tang deti h jisse wo safe rahe


Fir naina or preety nahar singh k kamre m jaker us nakshe ko dhundne lagi , unhone har kona chan mara per unhe wo kahi na mila , tabhi naina ko nahar singh ki baat yaad aayi ki naksha kamre m h per uski ankho k samne ni.

Tabhi naina ne apna dimag dodaya or uska dhayan kamre me tangi nahar singh ki tasvir p gaya or use sari baat samjh me aagayi.

Usne jese hi nahar singh ki tasvir k piche dekha to waha naksha fasa hua mila , jo shayad nahar singh or samar singh k jhagde m uchal k waha pahunch gaya tha.

Naina :- preety ab time aagaya h plan ko anjam dene ka

Kuch der baad naina akele hi hal me gati or chilayi.

Naina :- samar singh jis nakshe k liye tu mar k bhi lot aaya , wo mujhe mil chuka h , ager h himmat to aaker mujhse lele.

Tabhi waha samar singh prakat ho gaya or haste hue bola.

Samar ;- are wah ladki tune to mera kaam hi asam ker diya , la ye naksha mujhe dede , m wada kerta hu ki tuje or teri dost ko jinda chod dunga.

Naina :- itni jaldi ni samar singh , pahale tumhe mujhe veer ko thik kerne ka upay batana hoga.

Samar singh :- ek mamuli insan mere samne shart rakh rahi h , mat bhul chori m kon hu .

Naina ne ek hath me lighter or dusre hath me naksha lete hue bola

Naina :- soch lo samar singh , ager tumne mujhe upay na bataya to m nakshe ko jala dungi , fir tumhara mujhe mar k bhi koi fayda na hoga.

Samar singh jhala ker naina ko upaay bata deta h or naksha mangne laga

Tabhi puri haveli ki light chali gayi or sari haveli me andhera ho gaya , or naina vaha se nakshe ko leker bhagne lagi.

Samar singh :- ruk ja ladki , bhagne ka koi fayda ni h , tu bach ni payegi.

Ye bol vo bhi naina k piche bhaga or bhagte bhagte dono ek kamre m pahunch gaye jaha sirf andhera tha.

Samar singh :- ab tu ni bachegi ladki , ab is pure parivar k sath tu bhi maregi.

Ye bol samar singh ne apna ek hath aage kiya or mantra bola , lekin ye kya kuch hua hi ni , esa samar singh ne bahut baar try kiya , per kuch na hua.

Samar singh gusse se :- ye meri shaktiya kaam.kyu ni ker rahi.

Naina muskurate hue :- or kaam karegi bhi ni dusht , jara dhyan se dekh tu kaha khada h.

Tabhi light wapas aajati h or samar singh us jagah ko dekh ghabra jata h , kyunki wo kamra or kuch ni balki haveli ka mandir tha.

Samar singh :- mandir ,

Dhoka kiya h tune mere sath ladki , chal kiya h.

Naina :- tujh jese dusht k sath kiya gaya chal bhi punya ka kaam h samar singh.

Samar singh bhagne ki koshish kerta h , per gate per uska rasta roke preety khadi thi , jisne gate lock ker diya ander aaker.

Preety :- to pret mamu, ab tumhara time over ho gela h , ab merne k liye ready ho jayo,

Sister shuru ho jao


Preety k itna bolte hi naina ne apna yantra nikal samar singh ki or ker diya , jisse nikli roshni se wo tadapne laga , tabhi uska ek hath mandir ki.ghanti se or chu jata h.

Mandir m rakhi har chij pavitra hoti h , jiske kaaran uske sharir m aag lag jati h , uper se side me khadi raghunath ki patni ne mandir me se utha ker us per gangajal or dal diya , jisse wo wahi bhasm ho gaya

Naina :- ab aap sab mukt h thakur sahab , samar singh ab kabhi lot k ni aayega.

Raghunath ki patni :- beti tumne hum per bahut bada upkar kiya h , jisko.hum vese to kabhi bhi ni utaar sakte , per fir bhi m tumhe kuch dena chahati hu, mango kya chahiye tumhe beti ,pese sona kuch bhi mango.

Naina :- ni ni maji aap esa bol ker mujhe sharminda na kijiye , mane jo kuch bhi kiya wo mera farz tha.

Tabhi naina ko ghora baba ki wo baat yaad aati h jisme unhone bola tha , ki.ager use apni maa tak pahuchna h to use kayi maao ka ashirvad lena hoga.

Naina :- or ma ji ager ap kuch dena hi chahati ho to, bas apna aashirwad de dijiye ki m jald hi apni maa ko palu.

Raghunath ki patni :- mera ye ashirvad h beti , durga ma tumhe avashy tumhari maa se jald mila dengi.

Preety :- sister usne kuch upaay bataya .

Naina :- bataya to h sister , veer ko bachane ka keval ek upaay h . Wo h amritunjay jal,jo kisi bhi pret pishach aadi buri shakti ko nasht ker sakta h.

Preety :- to chalo na sister der kis baat ki abhi waha chal ker use late h , kaha milega wo

Naina :- use pana itna asan bhi ni h preety , wo kaalgarh k jungle k bichobich ek gufa me milega , lekin wo jungle khun pine wale darinde yani pishachon ka ada h , isliye hume puri teyari k sath waha din m jana hoga.

Preeti :- ok sister jesa tumhe sahi lage

Location:- kfd lok

Mata or narad ji dono waha bethe , karan or naina k uper hi najar rakh rahe the , parantu kfd waha kahi dikh ni rahe the.

Narad ji :- narayan ! Narayan , ye kesi lila rach rahe h prabhu , ye to meri samjh se pare hi h devi.

Mata :- kya hua devrishi, esa kya hogaya jo aap ese bol rahe ho.

Narad ji :- satya hi to kah raha hu devi , dekhiye to ye kesi pariksha li ja rahi h rakshak ki , pura devalok janta h karan or jyoti k nishchal prem k bare m or sab ye bhi jante h ki karan ka apni jyoti k prati kitna ghahra prem h , fir ye itni kathor pariksha kyu devi , jise is sansar k sabse bade dukh ka nash kerna h , use itne kasht kyu devi

Mata :- devrishi, ye pariksha keval karan ke prem ki ni , uske dharya, uski bhudhi ki bhi hogi. Ye pariksha karan k liye vo.agni hogi , jisme jal kar wo kundan banega or to or ye karan or jyoti ka asthayi virah hi to to unke prem ko or bhi.majbut or shashvat banayega.

Or itna hi ni devrishi karan ki ye yatra keval uske liye hi ni pure rasatal lok k liye hi bhavishya m kalyanakari sidh hogi.

Narad ji :- jesi prabhu ki icha.

Location :- rasatal lok m hi sthit ek chota sa ganv

Yaha k mukhiya k ghar k bahar pura ganv ikhata ho rakha tha or vo sab ek ladke se bahas ker rahe the , jo 20 21 sal ka dikh raha tha or uske sath 14 15 sal ki ek ladki bhi thi , jo dari hui si usse chipke khadi thi.

Mukhiya :- dekho aman(ladka) jesa hum sab ganv valo ne tay kiya tha , uske anusaar ab tumhari bahan ki hi bari h , hume tumhari bahan ko un darindo ko sopna hoga , verna vo.sab pure ganv ko tabah ker denge or ye pahale hi tay ho chuka h.

Baat darasal ye thi ki ,is ganv m pishachon ne aatank macha rakha tha, wo aaye din ganv k kisi bhi janver ladki ya bache ko utha ker le jate .

Jiske chalte pareshan ganv valo ne pishachon k mukhiya se vinti ki or ek soda kiya ki wo har mahine ek ladki k sath , kuch janver bhej diya karenge , jiske badle pishach tabahi ni machayenge.

Isi sode k tahat har ghar se kisi ladki ya bache ka no aata or is baar aman ki bahan ka no aaya tha.

Aman gusse se :- ni bilkul ni , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye m apni jhumki(bahan) ko un shetano k hawale ni karunga , m ladunga unse or m to aap sab se bhi yahi kahata hu ki aap bhi ek ho ker un shetano ka mukabla kijiye , akhir kab tak hum apni bahan betiyo ko un darindo ki havas ka shikar banayenge

Mukhiya :- bevkoof mat bano aman, wo log shetan h or hum aam insan , hum unka kese samna karenge , bhalayi isi me h ki chupchap hum unki bate mane.

Aman :- bilkul ni , meri bahan meri jindagi h , usko m un darindo ko bilkul ni sopunga , aap log to apni bahan betiyo ko unke havale kerne ka soch namard ban chuke ho per m ni , m ladunga un shetano se jab tak meri akhiri sans bhi mere sharir m baki hogi.

Ye bol wo apni bahan ko leker apne ghar m chala gaya or log bhi sham ko kya hoga ye sochte hue waha se nikal gaye.

Sham k vakt ganv me pura sannata chaya hua tha , ek pakshi bhi bahar ni dikh raha tha , tabhi asman me kale badal cha gaye or charo or andhera fel gaya or tabhi vaha 3 chamgadad(bats) udte hue aaye or achanak se vo insan k rop me aagaye per ye koi insaan ni pishach the.
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3no pishachon me se ek jo un dono ka leader chilaya.

Lp(leader pishach) :- are o ganv walo , kaha mar gaye sab k sab , ganv chod k bhag gaye ya humara khouf nikal gaya , jo is mahine ka humara rashan teyar ni rakha.

Bahar aao sare k sare

Aman bahar jane laga to jhumki uske gale lag use rokne lagi isharo se , jhumki bol ni sakti thi , per uski ankho se saf saf pata chal raha tha ki vo apne bhai k liye bahut dar rahi h

Aman :- dar mat choti , mujhe kuch ni hoga , tu bas ghar se bahar mat nikalna , aaj to m in darindo ka ant kerke hi rahunga

Jhumki bechari use rokti rah gayi per aman na ruka or usne ek talvaar leker bahar aagaya or chilaya

Aman :- chale jao yaha se dushto , ab se hum tumhe apni bahan betiyo ki abru lutne bilkul ni denge.

Lp :- e ladke tujhe badi jawani chadi h kya , bhul mat hum pishach h pishach , tere jeso ko machar ki tarah masal de

Tabhi ek dusra pishach bola

Pishach 2:- bhai mane pata kiya tha , aaj k rashan me isi ki bahan ko bheja jana h , suna h sali bahut mast maal h , use ragdne m bahut maja aayega.

Lp haste hue :- oh to bhaiya apni bahan ko bachane aaya h , dekh sale aakhiri moka deta hu , chup chap apni bahan ko humare havale ker de.

Teri bahaduri ki m dad deta hu , isliye wada kerta hu ki ek mahine baad jab humara man bhar jayega , hum tujhe teri bahan lota denge.

Aman gusse se :- kamine teri ye majal , apni gandi juban se meri bahan ka naam lega , ab to tum 3no yaha se jinda ni jaoge.

Lp haste hue :- chal teri ye akhiri khawaish puri kerne ka m moka deta hu tujhe , chal pahala vaar tu ker , koi bhi bich m ni aayega.

Ye bol lp chupchap khada ho gaya , aman dodta hua aaya or usne apni talvar lp k sine k aar par ker di.

Per ye kya lp ko.to mamuli sa fark bhi na pada.

Lp haste hue :- bas bache itna hi dam tha tujme , ab dekh hamari takat

Ye kahate hue lp ne ek jordar muka aman ko mara jisse wo kayi dur jake gira, fir 3no hi pishach use marne lage lato or ghuso se , wo use jan se na mar ker tadfa tarfa k marna chahate the, isliye wo kabhi use lato se marte to kabhi , hava me uchhalte


Apne bhai ko pitta dekh jhumki ghar se bahar bhagi aayi or un pishachon me se ek jo ek ladki thi , jese hi usper najar padi , wo bhag k uske pas gayi or usne jhumki ko balo se ghasitte hue lp k pas layi.

Lp :- yar baat to tu sahi bol raha tha , maal to bahut mast h re iski bahan.

Mujhe ek idea aaya h , hum is ladke ko bhi apne jesa banayenge or iske samne hi ade p le jaker iski bahan k sath maje karenge.

Jhumki bichari rote hue use or uske bhai ko chodne ka ishara ker rahi thi , lekin un darindo ko kaha koi fark padne wala tha.

Lp ne apne sathi ko ishara kiya or usne jese hi apne dant nikal aman ko kaat ker pishach banane ko hua ki achanak kuch esa hua jise dekh pishach samet sabhi k sabhi ki ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi.

Hua darasal ye ki jese hi pishach 2 aman ko katne wala tha ki achanak se ek chandi ka khanjar kahi se udte hue aaya or pishach 2 k muh m dhas gaya or chandi ki vajah se pishach 2 wahi tadaf tadaf k mar gaya or jal gaya.

Jis disha se wo khanjar aaya tha , sabne jese hi us disha me dekha to paya ki waha ek 20 sal ka ladka jisne apne kandhe p ek bada sa shivling rakha h , usne hi wo khanjar feka tha ek hath se.

Ji ha dosto sahi pahachana ye apna karan hi tha , jo apni yatra k doran is ganv tak pahunch gaya tha or aram kerne k liye koi jagah dhundne yaha aaya tha.

Karan :- ager jinda rahana chahate ho to chupchap se nikal jao dush pishachon.

Lp gusse. Se :- sale tu jo bhi ho lekin ab jinda ni bachega , bahut badi galti ker di h tune mere dost ko.maar k, marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Karan muskurate hue :- wo to waqt hi batayega dusht kon marega or kon bachega , baate band ker or yudh shuru ker

Karan or lp dono ek dusre ki or bhadne lage.

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Karan or lp ek dusre ki or badhne lage , lp ne apne nakhun lambe ker liye the or karan khali hath hi apne kandhe p shivling liye hue tha.

Lp aage bharte hue ruk gaya , or ek ghahri sans lete hue socha.

Lp :- sala aaj to marte marte bacha gaya , is ladke k kandhe p jo shivling h , uske kaaran m to uske pass pahuchne se pahale hi bhasm ho jata.

Fir lp karan se bola.

Lp :- ladke yudh kerne se pahale apne sharir ko halka to ker de , ye bhar to utar k ek or rakh de , taki baad m tu apni mot k samay bahana na ker sake .

Karan muskurate hue :- saaf saaf kyu ni bolta shetan ki bhagwan mahakal k tez se bhaybhit h tu .

Ye bahane kerke chutiya kisi or ko banana , chal m shiv bhakt karan tujhe apne shiv ki or se ashvasan deta hu , ki tujhe shiv tez nuksan ni pahuchaayega , kyunki tere karmo ka fal dene ko mahadev ne mujhe bhejha h.

Karan ne esa bol mahadev se ankhe band ker prathna ki , tabhi lp ko shiv tej ka ahasas hona band ho gaya.

Lp haste hue :- murkh ladke tune esa kerke khud k hi per pe kulhadi maar li h , ab tujhee koi ni bacha sakta.

Or ye bol lp karan ki or bhaga , or jese hi apne chanku jese nakhun karan k sine me gadane ki koshis ki karan ne ek hath se uski kalayi pakad uska hath ghuma k marod k tod diya or usi hath ko uski pith se laga diya , jisse lp ki pith karan ki or ho gayi , or fir karan ne ek jordar lat lp ki gand p de mari.

Jisse wo kayi dur jake gira,or karhane laga ,karan haste hue bola.

Karan :- bas itna hi dam hota h tum pishacho m , ya tu h hi ek nikama.

Lp chilaya:- ni chodunga tuje .

Karan :- abe jaja bache , apni mummy ko bol complain pilaya kare , jo thodi takat aaye .

Lp ab gusse se pagal ho gaya or apne asli roop m aagaya yani k ek bade se chamgadad ban gaya.

Or wo karan k uper jhapata marne laga ,karan uspe var kerta lekin vo ek pishach tha jiski speed bahut tez thi , jiske kaaran wo karan k har ek vaar ko aaram se dodge ker leta .

Karan samjh gaya iski speed ka kuch kerna hoga , karan kuch der to vese hi khali var kerte hue , uske fight k pattern ko samjhne laga , or jab vo samjh gaya , to usne apni ankh band ker bilkul shant khada ho gaya.

Lp ne socha ki karan thak gaya h or usne apna pura dam laga apne panjo ko aage ker karan p piche se prahar kerne ko bhada or jese hi wo karan k najdik pahuncha , karan ne ek jhatke me piche ghum apne talavar se uske ek pankh kaat diya.

Lp chinkta hua wapas apne manushya roop me aagaya , uski halat bahut buri ho chuki thi , uska ek hath tut chuka tha or dusra kat chuka tha.

Karan :- bas bahut hua dusht , ab tere karmo k dand pane ka samay aachuka h .

Or tere jese papiyo k liye keval ek hi dand h , mrityu dand .

Ye bol karan ne apni talvar ko hava me uchala , or vo talvar hava me hi ruk gayi , fir karan ne apni ungli se lp ki or ishara kiya , jisse talvar apne ap udti hui lp k pas pahunch gayi , phir karan apni ungli ko hava m hilane laga , or usi ke sath hi karan ki talvar ne lp k tukde tukde ker diye

Ab bachi vo ladki pishach jo lp k sath thi, karan uski or badne laga. Jise dekh wo pishachini dar k mare kamptee hue piche hatne lagi .

Karan :- daro mat kaya , m ladkiyo pe hath ni uthata .

Kaya(pishachini chonk k ) :- aap mera nam kese jante ho.

Karan :- m tumhare bare m sab kuch janta hu , kese vo sab batane k liye abhi mere pass samay ni h.

Tumhe ager apne pran pyare h to mera ek kaam kerna hoga tumhe , verna m to ni , per ye ganv vale tumhe ni chodenge.

Ye bol karan ne ek hath ganv valo ki or kiya , jisse uske hath se ek roshni nikal ganv valo p padi , or usi samay sabke hath me chandi k khanjar ya bargad k ped ki lakdi se bana hathiyar aagaye.

Kaya :- ni ni mujhe chod dijiye , aap jo bolenge m karungi.

Karan :- to jao or apne malik count Dracula ko sandesh dedo , ki ab se koi bhi rasatal lok ka vasi uski ya uske chamcho ki gulami ni karega .

Or wo khud bhi apne karmo k dand pane ko sajj rahe , kyunki uska kaal shighra hi uske dwar p pahuchega.

Kaya :- jjji m bol dungi

Karan thodi tez aawaz me :- to ab mera muh kya dekh rahi ho , jao yaha se.

Kaya karan ki tez aawaz sun dar gayi or waha se bhag gayi chamgadad ban ker.

Un logo k jate hi mosam bilkul saaf ho gaya or karan ne dekha ki ab raatri bhi ho chuki h.

Tabhi karan k man me rosni ki aawaz aayi ,

Roshni :- ab tum shivling ko dhara per rakh sakte ho karan.

Karan ne ganv k chopal p ek saaf jagah dekh , shivling ko rakh diya, or mahadev ko pranam ker wo aman ki or bhada .

Jo bahut hi ghayal tha or jhumki usse lipte hue ro rahi thi , karan ka jhumki ko.rote hue dekha ni gaya , use jhumki m shivani hi najar aane lagi , jisse mile hue use kafi din ho gaye the , kyunki itne sab hangame k baad kabya ne kuch din k liye use uski nani k pas bhej diya tha.

Karan undono k pass gaya to jhumki karan k pero me gir ker dhanyawad ka ishara kerne lagi , karan samajh gaya ki wo bol ni sakti .

Karan ne use apne pero se uthaya or khud ghutno pe beth uske ansu puchte hue bola.

Karan :- are are aap ro mat , aap ko ager mujhe dhanyawad kerna hi h to bas apme chahre p ek pyari si muskan hi le aaiye .

Jhumki karan k itne prem bhav or ache vyavahar se prabhavit hui or apne chahare pe fiki muskan late hue apne bhai ki or dekhte hue tarasti ankho se karan se madad magne lagi.

Karan samjh gaya or bola.

Karan :- aap fikar mat kero beta , aapke bhaiya ko kuch ni hoga , aapke bhai ek sache or veer yodha h , ye mamuli si choto se veero ko koi fark ni padta.

Fir karan ne aman ko baho me uthate h.

Karan :- isliye beta ro ker apne bhai ki veerta ka majak na udao .

Jhumki ne isharo me pucha ki mere bhaiya to ek aam kisan h to wo yodha kese hue.

Karan :- beta yodha keval janm se ni hota , yodha vo hota h jo veerta se anyay k khilaf lade ya uske khilaf aavaz uthaye .

( ue ganv valo ki or gusse se dekhte hue bola) Un namardo ki tarah ni , jo kayaro ki tarah muthi bhar dushto k atyachar sahate hue , anhe apni bahan betiya somp de.

Fir jhumki kuch na boli or karan ko apne sath apne ghar m le gayi, karan bhi uske piche piche aman ko liye ghar me aaya or jese hi ghar m pahuncha to ghar ki halt dekh use bahut dukh hua.

Aman or jhumki anath the , logo ka kahana tha ki unke maa baap ko pishachon ne mar dala tha or ek bhudi orat ne undono ko pala.

Aman jab kuch samjhdar hua to use pata chala ki vo orat uski ma ni h to usne apne maa baap k bare m jab us orat se puchna chaha to usi din us orat ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi or vo bhi chal basi.

Fir aman ne hi kese n kese dusro ke kheto me kaam kerke jo kuch bhi kamata , usse apna kam chalata or apni bahan ko palta.

Unke ghar me bed k naam pe sirf chatai thi ghas ki bani hui or ghar me to ladkiya bhi ni thi , shayad kal raat se chulha jala hi ni tha.

Karan se ye sab dekha na gaya or usne sabse pahale unki ghar ki halat sudharne ka soch ek chutki bajayi , jisse unki chatayi ek bade se palang me badal gayi , rasoi jo ki vahi ek kone me thi , usme lakdiya or khane ka samman apne aap aagaya or to or ghar jo raat hone ki vajah se andhere m dub gaya tha , usme bhi apne aap roshni fel gayi.

Kul mila ker un dono bhai bahan ki jhopdi , ab ek badiya sa one bhk ghar jesa ho gaya tha.

Jhumki to ankhe fade karan ko dekhi ja rahi thi , or vo fir se karan k kadmo girne hi wali thi to karan usko rokte hye bola.

Karan :- are are ye kya bat bat pe mere pero m girne lag jati ho ap, m jo bhi ker raha hu , vo mera farz h , yu samjh lo mahadev ne mujhe yahi kaam sompa h.

Ab aap mujhe chodo or apne bhaiya ka khayal rakho , wo dekho aapke bhaiya hosh me aagaye

Jhumki ne jese hi aman ki or dekh to sahi m aman ko hosh aagaya tha or jese hi usne apni ankh kholi , wo apne ghar ko pahachan ni pata or uthne ki koshis kerta h , lekin tabhi dard k karaan vo vapis let karhane laga.

Jise dekh jhumki ghabra k rone lagi , karan ne tabhi apna hath aage kiya , jisme turant ek cream jesi davai ka katora aagaya ,or wo katora jhumki ko dete hue bola.

Karan :- lo beta ye apne bhaiya k jhakmo p laga do , isse unhe jald hi aaram milega.

Jhumki karan se davai leker aman k pass gayi or use davai lagane lagi

Aman apni bahan ko sahi salamat dekh rahat ki sans lete hue bola

Aman :- jhumki , meri gudiya , meri bachi tu thik h na , tujhe kuch kiya to ni un darindo ne or ye hum kaha h or vo sab kaha gaye.

Jhumki aman ko isharo se shant rahane ko bolti h or pyaar se uske jhakmo ko sanf ker unpe karan ki di hui dawai lagane lagi, jise aman ko turant rahat pahuchne lagi.

Karan side m ek pathar ki bani bethne ki jagah pe beth dono bhai bahan ka pyar dekhne laga or muskurane laga.

Tabhi achanak use jyoti ki yaad ane lagi , use yaad aane laga ki jyoti bhi ese hi ghabra jati thi , karan ki choti si choti chot pe bhi , chot lagti karan ko or rone wo lagti thi , karan use lakh samjhata ki itni si hi to chot h per vo kaha manti , vo to karan ko us din koi kam ni kerne deti , sare din usko bed pe hi rahane ka order suna deti, use vo din bhi yaad aagaya , jab karan k baap ne uski pith ki halat kharab ker di thi , tab jyoti ne din raat ek ker diye the karan ki dekhbhal me.

Wo sab baate yaad ker karan ki ankho me jyoti k yaad me ansu aagaye .

Fir karan ne man hi man roshni ko yaad kiya .

Roshni :- kaho putra .

Karan:- hey divya shakti , mujhe yaha kuch din rukna hoga , taki m yaha k logo ko in dushto k atyacharo se mukt kerwa saku , iske liye aapse anumati chahata hu.

Roshni :- soch lo karan , karya me jitna vilamb karoge, utne hi samay tumhe jyoti se dur rahana hoga or vese bhi ye pishach tumhari samsya ni h fir kyu vyarth apna samay nasht kerte ho

Karan :- ni param shakti , m itna swarthi ni ho sakta ki in logo ko vipda m chod jau , or jitna mane khud ko jana h uske anusar mujhe ye shaktiya lok kalyan hetu hi prapt hui h , isliye ye mera kartavya bhi h

Or jo apne kartavy se vimukh ho jaye vo jyoti ka bhai ni , or meri bahan bhi yahi chahegi ki uska bhai apna kartavya ko pahale mahatvta de.

Roshni :- hmm, jesi tumhari icha , tumhe anumati h.

Ye bol roshni ka sampark tut gaya or karan bhi shant ho beth gaya.

Jhumki ki najar jese hi karan pe padi to wo turant karan k pas davai ka katora leker aayi or apni ungliyon pe dawai laga ke karan ko badi masumiyat se ishare m pucha , kya apke bhi chot lagi h , to laiye m aapke bhi davai laga deti hu.

Karan ko jhumki ki masumiyat p bahut pyaar aaya or bola.

Karan :- ni beta mujhe chot ni lagi , aap apne bhaiya ka khayal rakho.

Jhumki ne fir se kuch ishare kiye , jese puch rahi ho fir aaap ro kyu rahe ho .

Karan pyar se utha ke jhumki ko apne side me bithatha h or bolta h

Karan :- beta m dard ki vajah se ni ro raha , bas aapko dekh ke mujhe apni bahan ki yaad aagayi , vo bhi bilkul mera aapke jese hi khayal rakha kerti thi.

Jhumki ne isharo me fir pucha , to aap ro kyu rahe ho , aap itne powerful ho na , to aap unse mil lijiye , ya unhe yahi bula lijiye.

Karan nam ankho se :- beta ager esa sambhav hota to m kab ka apni gudiya ko yahi bula leta , lekin sach to ye ki m majbur hu beta or apni bahan ko wapas pane k liye hi yaha tak pahuncha hu

Jhumki bechari ko karan ki baste jyada to samjh ni aayi , per wo itna samjh chuki thi ki karan apni bahan se dur h or uski yad me ro raha h.

Fir jhumki ne apni masumiyat me vo bola z jise sun karan khud ko rok na paya or jhumki ko apne gale laga liya.

Jhumki ne isharo me kaha , aap roiye mat please , aapko aapki bahan jaldi mil jayegi or aap ese royenge to unhe bhi taklif hogi na.

Or rahi baat ki bahan ki yaad aarahi h to m bhi to aapki bahan jesi hi hui na , or aapne bhi meri ijat bacha ker mere bhai jesa hi kam kiya , to please mat roiye na.

Or itna sab ishara kerke bolne ki koshis kerti h , or uske muh se bas ye nikla.

Jhumki:- aahhi(bhai).

Jisse usko taklif bhi hui or uske gale me dard hua.

Karan ye sun k bhavuk ho gaya or usne jhumki ko gale se laga ke bola.

Karan :- ha mera bacha , tum bhi meri bahan hi ho , m hi bevkoof tha jo itni pyari bahan k hote hue bhi ro raha tha.

Jhumki ne pyaar se karan k sir p hath fera or fir vo karan k jhakam p dawai lagane lagi, karan bhi chupchap betha dawai lagwata raha .

Or dawai lagne k baad karan ne jhumki k gal ko chum ke dhanyawad kerte hue bola.

Karan :- beta , apne bhaiya se ni milwaogi.

Jhumki karan ko aman k pass leker gayi , jhumki ne aman ko dawai lagate hue sari baate bata di thi.

Aman uth ker bed per bethate hue hath jodte hue bola

Aman :- m aapka shukriya kese ada keru, aap aaj hamare liye bhagwan ka swaroop hi ho , jinhone meri bahan ki raksha ker mujh per vo upkar kiya h , jiske badle m aapki jindagi bhar gulami karu to bhi kam h.

Karan uske hatho ko pakadte hue bola .

Karan :- ni ni dost , ese hath mat jodo , tum jese veer ko esa kerna shoba ni deta, mane jo bhi kiya wo mera dharm tha or tum jesa veer gulam ni , mujhe tum jesa dost chahiye.

Bolo banoge mere dost , taki hum dono sath mil ker in dushto ka nash ker sake.

Aman khushi se karan se hath milate hue :- ha kyu ni dost , tum jesa dost bhala kon ni chahega.

Ye bol wo karan k gale milta h , tabhi undono ko chudiyo k khankne ki aawaz aati h , jo jhumki ne ki thi or isharo me aman se puch rahi thi , ye kya bhai , naya dost mila to mujhe bhul hi gaye.

Aman :- are m tumhe bhala kese bhul sakta hu meri gudiya , tum to jan ho hamari.

Ye bol aman karan k sath use bhi gale laga leta h ,karan kuch der yu hi apne naye dosto se gale milta h , fir wo alag hota h .

Fir karan bhi jhumki ki khana banane m madad kerta h or jhumki ko soup banana sikhata h , jo waha k liye bilkul nayi chij thi.

Fir 3no beth ker khana khate h , fir aman bola.

Aman :- bhai hume aaj raat ko bahut savdhani rakhni hogi , ho na ho wo pishach aaj raat humla jarur karenge badla lene k liye, hume suraksha k liye kuch to kerna hoga.

Karan :- uski chinta mat kero dost , mane uska intezam bhi ker diya h, ganv k chopal p jo shivling rakha h , uska tez ganv k liye ek suraksha kavach saman h , koi bhi pishach ne ager ganv ki sima k ander ghusne ki kosis ki to vahi bhasm ho jayega.

Fir jhumki ne karan se uski shaktiyo k bare m pucha , to karan jitna janta tha, utna usne apne bare m bata diya .

Fir karan ne rasatal lok ke bare m janne k liye aman se pucha to aman ne bataya.

Aman :- bhai , aaj jesa rasatal lok ka mahol h pahale vesa ni tha , yaha har or kushali or sampanta thi. Hamare rajya ki rajdhani shonitpur , jaha hamare mahan samrat raja vikram dev rai ka raaj tha , wo bahut hi dayalu or nyay priya raja the .Unke rajya me har koi sukhi tha. Unke pass bhi tumhari tarah kayi divya shaktiya thi , jo unhe kal bhairav ki param bhakti se prapt hui thi , jinka prayog wo hamesha praja ki bhalayi k liye hi

Lekin unki khushiyo ko kisi ki najar lag gayi , ek din hamari maharani mandir m puja kerne gayi to waha p mojud ek tantrik ki najar unper pad gayi or wo tantrik un per mohit ho gaya , usne rani ko pane k liye ek ghinoni chal chali ,use ye baat pata thi ki rani ko itr (perfume) bahut pasand h , isliye usne ek abhimantrit itr ki shishi banayi or rani ki ek dasi ko apne vash me kerke us shishi ko rani tak pahuchadi. Jise lagate hi rani uske vash me ho jati or uske pas apne aap aajati

Lekin rani bhi kam ni thi ,vo mahakali ki pujarin thi , isliye unhe itr m kuch gadbad h , unhone wo shishi ek bade se pathar pe de mari jisse itra us chattan p gir gaya or wo chattan hi tantrik k pas pahunch gayi or uske niche dab k vo mar gaya, lekin marne se pahale wo hamare rajya ko shrap de gaya ki , hamara rajya jald hi barbad ho jayega or usper pishacho ka raaj cha jayega.

Us tantrik ki shrap bhi sach ho gaya , ek din pishachon k raja Dracula ne hamare rajya p aakraman ker diya , lekin maharaj ki shakti or veerta k aage wo tik ni paya or dum daba ker bhag gaya.

Usne esa kayi baar kiya , lekin har baar uski sena ko muki khani padi , fir Dracula samjh gaya ki wo bal se kabhi ni jit payega , isliye usne chal ka sahara liya.

Usne maharaj k sotele bhai ko apni side ker liya , jo bahut hi kamina tha uski shuru se apni bhabhi per buri najar thi , isi baat ka pata draculla ko chal gaya tha or isi baat ka fayda utha usne ye vachan diya ki ager vo jit gaya to rani uski hogi.

Or us dhokebaaz bhai ne raat ko mahal k mukhya dwar p lage pishachon ko dur rakhne wale yantra ko hata diya , jisse Dracula apni sena k sath mahal me pahunch gaya or mahal me katleaam macha diya , raja ek sath kayi pishachon se lad rahe the , tabhi draculla ne unper piche se vaar kiya.

Dracula ka maksad sirf raja ko marna hi ni tha , balki maharaj ki divya shaktiyon ko pana bhi tha jisse paker wo itna shaktishali ho jata ki suraj ki roshni , chandi ya , bargad ki lakdi bhi uska kuch ni bigad sakti thi.

Maharaj ye baat samjh chuke the to unhonne apni sari shaktiyon ko apni talvar me dal diya or or pran tyagane se pahale talvar m mojud shakti se bole

Maharaj :- he param shakti , m ni chahata ki aapko paker ye dusht amar ho , isliye aap kisi surakshit jagah chale jaiye , or apne waris k milne tak chupe rahiyega , mera beta apne pita ki mrityu ka badla avashya lega.

Ye bol wo talvar ko hava me uchal diye or apne pran tyag diye , talvar tez gati se vaha se udti hui nikal gayi.

Dracula ne talvar tak pahuchne ki bahut koshis ki uska picha ker per wo nakamyab raha.

Dracula gusse se :- ager wo talvar mujhe ni mili to kisi ko bhi ni milegi , m uske varis ko hi mar dunga.

Ye soch wo rani k kaksh ki or bhada , rani ne jab apne pati ki mrityu ki khabar suni to usne apne satitv ko bachane k liye aag me kud ker apne pran de diye or apne dono bacho ko usne nind ki dawa deker sula diya tha or apni bharosemand dasi ko unhe waha se dur le jane ko bol diya tha.

Lekin un bacho ki kismat me shayad mrityu hi thi , isliye dasi isse pahale bacho ko bed se uthati waha Dracula aagaya or usne sote hue bacho ki gardane kaat di. Bechari dasi kuch na ker payi rone k bajaye

Wo to us dasi ko bhi marne wale the , per usi time din ho gaya or draculla ko waha se jana pada , lekin jate jate wo bol gaya ki wo raat ko vapas aake is mahal ki sata ko hadap lega, or usne wesa hi kiya wo raat ko aaya or usne apni shaktiyon se mahal k charo or kale badalo se asman ko dhak diya , jisse waha andhera ho gaya , or aaj bhi vo andhere ka samrajya waha kayam h.

Uske raja bante hi pura rasatal me hahakar mach gayi , usne shonitpur k adhe se jyada insano ko pishach bana k apni sena me shamil ker liya or baki logo pe atyachar kerne k liye unhe chod diya.

Ab us draculla k samrajya me keval shaitan raaz h or uske admi aaye din hamare pashuo , bacho or bahan betiyo ko utha ker le jate h .

Aas pas k sare ganv k log ya to un pishacho k shikar ho gaye , ya ganv chod k chale gaye , hamara ganv rajdhani se jyada dur h to abhi tak is ganv me Dracula ki najar ni gayi h or ladkiyo k lalach me shayad uske chamcho ne unko is baat ki khabar di bhi ni hogi

Aman ye sab bata shant ho gaya , tabhi jhumki ne kuch ishara kiya aman ko , to use kuch yaad aaya or usne bataya

kuch dino pahale yaha ek bahut tejasvi rishi aaye the , lekin swarthi ganv valo ne unki koi seva ni ki thi , lekin aman or jhumki ne jitna ho saka or utni un sadhu ki seva ki.

Sadhu dono bhai bahan ki seva se bahut khush hue or unko dhyan se dekh bole ki tum dono k sath pure shonitpur k kashto k ant ka samay aachuka h , unhonne bataya tha ki aaj se kuch dino baad ek rakshak unke ganv me aayega , jo unki sahayata karega , tab tum dono bhai bahan use leker mere ashram me aana, or unhone apne ashram ka pata bata waha se chal diye

Aman :- bhai m dave se kah sakta hu , jinke baare m un sadhu ne bhavishyavani ki thi vo tum hi ho dost .

Karan :- ager esa h to hum kal hi un sadhu k pas chalenge dost , per abhi tumhe aaram kerna chahiye, taki tum shigra svasth ho sako.

Fir aman or jhumki us bed pe so gaye , dono bhai bahan shayad pahali bar hi bister p soye the, isliye unhe jaldi or achi nind aagayi.

Karan pas me padi hi chatayi p hi so gaya ,soya bhi kaha bas ankhe band ker jyoti ko hi yaad kerta raha

Wahi dusri or

Location :- shonitpur

Shonitpur ki kisi samay tulna swarg se ki jati thi , itna sundar rajya tha vo , har or hariyali , khushhali or sampamta jo rahati thi vaha

Lekin draculla k baad vaha sirf andhere ka raj tha , har or keval khun ki pyas or havas ka nanga nach tha, pishacho ne kitni hi ladkiyo ko jinme to kayi bachiya thi , unhe apna gulam banaya hua tha.

Draculla bhi apne mahal k singhasan p betha khun pi raha tha , jo uske gulamo ne abhi kayi masumo ko mar k waha laye the.

Tabhi vaha kaya aayi or usne draculla ko pranam kiya.

Draculla :- kaho kaya aaj yaha kese ana hua , koi nayi murgi layi ho kya mere liye.

Kaya :- maharaj ek buri khabar h.

Or ye bol kaya ne sari bate draculla ko bata di or boli.

Kaya :- maharaj wo ladka bahut hi shaktishali h , usne lp ko chutkiyo me hara diya.

Draculla gusse se pagal hote hue bola :- kya un insano ki itni himmat ki draculla se bagawat ker rahe h , senapati jao abhi k abhi sena leker jao or us ladke samet pure ganv ko tabah ker do mardo ko mar ker sabhi orato ko yaha utha lao.

Kaya :- ni maharaj esi bhul kadapi mat kijiyega, kyuki mane dekha h us ladke k hatho me jo shivling tha uska tez pure ganv k liye ek kavach ka kam ker raha h , ager humne waha per rakhne ki koshis bhi ki to hum bhasm ho jayenge.

Draculla :- to ab tum hi batao kaya hume kerna kya hoga

Kaya :- maharaj ek upay h , kuch dino pahale ek sadhu us ganv me aaya tha , jisne un bhai bahan ko bataya tha us ladke k ane k bare m or usko leker apne ashram p bhi bulaya tha un dono bhai bahan ko.

Isliye mere hisab se vo us ashram me jarur jayenge , to kyu na hum udher hi unko gher ker mar dale


Dracula haste hue :- ha ye upaay sahi rahega , kal un murkh insano ki akhiri ummid ko bhi m khatam ker dunga

Ye bol wo senapati ko teyari kerne ko bola

Wahi dusri or

4 din bit gaye the samar singh k ant ko , veer ki halat me to koi khas sudhar na aaya , lekin fir bhi ab bahut kuch change ho chuka tha.

Naina ne preety ko dhyan lagane ka suggestion diya tha ,jis per preety ne amal bhi kiya or uska ye asar hua ki ab preety ko apni bahut si shaktiyo ka upyog kerna sikh kiya tha or kafi had tak khud p control bhi ker liya tha.

Jise dekh naina ko khushi or herani dono hui , ab vo kalgad k jungle jane ko teyar thi.

Naina ne apni teyari bhi puri ker li thi , usne do chandi k khanjar or 2 banduk jisme chandi se bani goliya thi or 2 bargad ki lakdi se bane trishul teyar kiye , in sab saman k liye raghunath ne naina ki madad ki.


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Naina :- teyar ho na preety .

Preety :- ha sister puri tarah , aaj chahe kuch bhi ho jaye , m apni jan ko bacha k rahungi us amritunjay jal ko laker.

Fir naina or preety nikal pade kaalgarh k jungle ki or . Jungle se kuch dur naina ne jeep rok di


Naina :- lo aagaya kalgarh ka jungle preety

Preeti ne dekha ki jungle dikhne m hi bahut bhayanak tha , wo itna ghana tha ki surya ki roshni to pahuch hi ni rahi thi .

Naina :- dhyan rahe preety , hum yaha sirf wo jal lene aaye h , in pishachon se bhidne ni , isliye ander hume bilkul shant rahana hoga.

Preety ha me gardan hilati h or fir wo dono jungle m enter kerti h , thodi der chalne k baad naina ruk k preety ko ishara kerti h ek or , or jab preety ne us or dekha to paya ki pedo per normal se double bade size k chamgadad ulte latke hue so rahe h.

Naina dhire se :- wo koi mamuli chamgadad ni h preety , wo pishach h jo din m sote h or raat m shikar kerte h .

Hume bas itna dhyan rakhna h ki unhe bilkul ni jagana bas

Fir naina or preety fir aage bhadne lage , karib ded ghante m wo gufa k karib pahunch hi gaye the, ki tabhi preety ka panv fisal gaya or wo gir gayi , jisse uski chikh nikal gayi or uske hath se thoda khun nikalne laga.

Tabhi waha k pedo p soye hue pishachon ki nind preety ki chikh or uske khun ki khushbu se khul gayi


Or wo sare jag gaye or unhone apne chamgadad rup me hi hamla kerne lage , lekin preety or naina bhi teyar thi .

Naina jaha apni chandi ki goliyo se un pishachon ko marne m lagi rahi wahi dusri or preety un per aag k gole barsane lagi.

Lekin wo pishach aate hi ja rahe the , naina preety se boli.

Naina :- preety hume kuch bada kerna hoga , verna ese to raat ho jayegi or raat me ye apne pishachi roop me aajayenge, jinse ladna or muskil hoga.

Preety ne ye sun apni aankhe band ki or ek hath uper kiya , tabhi uske hath me ek purple colour ka shakti gola aagaya.


Preety ne wo gola us dish ki or fek diya jaha se pishach aarahe the , or wo gola tezi se bada hote hue us or se aarahe sare pishachon ko marta hua aage badhta raha or sath sath uska size bhi , or kuch hi der me wo waha se kafi dur jake gayab hogaya , jiska matlab tha ki preety k gole ne us or ke sare pishachon ka safaya ker diya

Preety :- lo sister ho gaya in mamu logo ka kaam khalas.

Naina :- I really impressed with you yaar ,itne kam samay me akhir tumne in shaktiyo pe kabu kese paya.

Preety :- ye to m bhi ni janti sister , bas jabse tumne mujhe dhyan lagane ko kaha tha , uski agli subah hi mane dhyan lagana aarambh ker diya. Pahale din to sirf man ki shanti mili per dusre din jab m dhyan laga rahi thi ki ,

Tabhi dhyan me mujhe ek kale or safed rang ka urza punj dikhne laga , mere man me ek aawaz apne aap aayi ki mujhe is punj ko apni aatma me samahit kerna h.

Mane wese hi kiya , pahale din me to m us gole ki 1/3 urza ko apne ander hi samahit ker payi or ese hi 3 dino m mane us gole ko apne ander samahit ker liya , jiske baad kuch der to mujhe kamjori mahasus hui, per phir uske baad mane apne ander maha shakti ka abahas kiya or pata ni kese mujhe in shaktiyon k gyan ka bhi apne aap gyan ho gaya

Naina :- tum chinta mat krro pretty ek na ek din hum jarur in shaktiyon ka raaz ka pata jarur laga lenge.

Fir wo dono saheliyan gufa me ander gayi , gufa bikul sadharan si hi thi , herani ki baat to ye thi ki usme koi bhi paharedar ni tha .

Kuch dur jane k baad unhe ek chota sa talab diya , jiska pani bahut jyada chamak raha tha , naina samjh gayi ki yahi h wo kund , jisme amritunjay jal h.




Lekin fir bhi ek baar check kerne k liye usne khud wo pani pike deka , or pani pite hi uske wo ghav jo abhi pishachon se ladayi k doran aaye the wo turant bhar gaye.

Naina turat khush ho ker us pani ko apni bottle me bharti h or jese hi piche mudti h to chilati h preety jhuko

Preety turant niche jhuk gayi or sath me naina bhi , tabhi unke uper se ek bhala nikal gaya.

Naina or preety ne uth ker dekha to paya ki ye humla ek pishach ne kiya tha, wo pishach chilaya.

Pishach :- kon ho tum dono or bina is jagah k paharedar yani meri anumati k ander kese aayi.

Naina ko ek idea aaya or ulta wo usper chilayi.

Naina :- tumhara dimag to sahi h na bevkuf pishach , teri ye majal ki tune ek trittya ko marne ki koshis ki.

Ye dekh.

Esa bol naina ne preety ki bah uper ker di , jisse uske hath ka trittya ka nishan dikhayi dene laga
Trittya ka naam sunte hi wo

pishach kampne laga or ghutno k bal beth bola.

Pishach :- kya trittya, tumhara dhanyawad ladki ki tune sahi time p mujhe sachai bata di , verna samraat to mere tukde tukde ker apne kutto ko khila deta.

Samrat ka naam sun samjh gayi ho na ho in pishachon se samraat ka pata mil sakta h mujhe , tabhi vo fir boli.

Naina :- maroge to tum pishach ab bhi gulam , mujhe or is trittya ko samraat ne hi bheja h , tumhare raja ko unke pas lejane , wo tum pishachon se bahut gussa h , isliye ager marna ni chahata to chup chap hume apne malik tak le chal

Pishach kamptee hue :- jesa aap kahe , chaliye mere sath

Fir preety or naina waha se chal pade pishacho k raja k pass.

Lekin yaha m ek baat confirm ker du dosto , yaha jungle wala pishachon ka raja or rasatal ka Dracula dono alag alag h.

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Aman or jhumki jab subah jaldi uthe to unhone dekha , karan to pahale hi jag chuka h or dhyan me laga hua h
Uske sharir se ek anokha tez nikal raha tha, use dekh ker ese pratit ho raha tha, jese koi brahmarshi dhyan me bethe ho.

Aman or jhumki to uske tez ko dekh ker heran the or use nihare ja rahe the, kyunki undono ko ek alag hi sukun mil raha tha karan k dhyan avastha se nikle hue prakash ko apne sharir p mahasus ker

Thodi der baad karan ki sadhna purn hui or jese hi apni ankhe kholi to apne samne aman or jhumki ko khud ko ghurta hua paya to vo muskurate hue bola.

Karan :- suprabhat dosto , ese kyu ghur rahe ho mujhe.

Fir aman ne jo anubhav kiya tha , vo sab karam ko bataya

Karan :- dost wo prakash mera ni , meri bhakti ka tez tha , jo meri sabse badi shakti h , or bhakti hi wo madhyam h jo manushya ko sacha aanand deti h

Chalo ab tum dono teyar ho jao , hume ab ashram bhi jana h.

Karan ki baat sun sabhi naha dhoke teyar hue or ghar se bahar nikle to sare ganv vale bahar unka hi intezaar ker rahe the.

Karan ko dekh sabne usse or aman or jhumki se apne vyavahar ki shama mangi , karan k sath sath aman or jhumki ne bhi bada dil rakhte hue unhe maf ker diya or ganv valo ko shivling k kavach k bare m bataya or unhe ganv se bahar na nikalne ki chetavani de vo 3no nikal pade sadhu k aashram ki or

Jab karan , aman or jhumki k sath vaha pahuncha , to ek awaz sun wo chonk gaya , jo ye thi.

Aakhir tum sab yaha pahunch hi gaye mere bacho ,

Or karan k chonkne ka kaaran ye tha ki ye aawaz or kisi ki ni swayam baba , yani ki rishi piplad ki thi.

Or karan ne us disha ki or dekha to sach me waha ek ped k niche use baba hi bethe dikhe

3no jan baba k pass gaye or unhe pranam kiya

Karan :- baba aap yaha .

Aman :- karan , kya tum inhe jante ho , yahi to h vo jinhone hume tumhare aane k bare m bataya tha

Karan abhi kuch bolta usse pahale hi baba bol pade.

Baba :- ashcharyachakit hone ki jarurat ni h putra , tumhara yaha aana purv nirdharit hi tha nor mujhse yaha tumhari bhet hona bhi

Chalo m tumhe kuch dikhata hu .

Baba karan aman or jhumki ko apne sath ek disha me leker gaye , jaha kuch der chalne k baad wo ek medan me pahunch gaye , jiske bicho bich ek bahut hi khubsurat talvar dhasi hui thi.



Baba :- putra aman , yahi h wo talvar jisme tumhare maharaj vikram dev rai ne apne ant samay me apni sari shaktiya daal di thi or unhone mujhe man hi man yaad ker is talvar ki suraksha ka dayitv sompa tha.

Putrao Dracula ki mrityu vidhata ne isi talvar k dwara hi nishchit ki h or is talvar ko keval iska varis hi utha sakta h

Aman :- parantu maharaj , is talvar ka varis to kabka mara ja chuka h , draculla k hatho , fir kese draculla ka ant sambhav hoga.

Abhi baba kuch bolte ki tabhi aasman me kale badal cha gaye or andhera cha gaya

Karan samjh gaya ki esa kyu ho raha h or vo ashram k mukhya dwar ki or bhaga or vaha pe pishachon ki puri sena thi or sath me kaya bhi.

Kaya haste hue boli :- kyu be ladke kal to bahut bol raha tha tu , ab kya hua bolti band ho gayi na , ab ladna himmat h to.

Karan ne apni talvar ka aahavahan kiya or jese hi aage bhadne laga to aman bola

Aman :- bhai ruk m bhi tere sath chalunga .

Karan :- ni mere dost , tum chutki ka khayal rakho , waha bahut khatra hoga.

Aman :- dost bhi bolte ho or ye bhi bol rahe ho ki m tumhe khatre se akele bhidne du , ni bhai m esa ni ker sakta , m bhi tumhare sath aarahu or. Kuch ni sununga, tumhe meri kasam or jhumki ki kasam.

Aman ki veerta se karan kafi prabhavit hua or usne hath uper ker ek or talvar mangwai jo pure chandi ki bani hui thi or use aman ko deta hua bola.

Karan :- jab tumne than hi liya h to ye lo dost , ye tumhare kaam aayegi.

Aman ne karan se wo talvar li or jhumki ko kese n kese samjhata h or fir dono dost ashram se bahar nikal bhid gaye sena se.

Karan to humesha ki tarah apna prakram dikha hi raha tha , per aman bhi kam ni tha, karan ki di hui talvar se vo bhi badi veerta se pishacho ko maar raha tha.

Lekin karib aadhe ghante baad karan ko pata ni kya hua , wo thoda sa thakne laga or uske war bhi kamjor hone lage , lekin wo kese n kese sena ko katte hue senapati tak pahunch gaya or usse yudh kerne laga , lekin karan ko pata ni aaj kya ho gaya tha , wo ab thak chuka tha ya wo senapati hi takatwar tha , pata ni kya hua tha , per iska asar ye ho raha tha ki senapati karan pe bhari padne laga.

Or vaha aman bhi thak chuka tha or kuch der bad karan or aman dono hi gir gaye , abhi senapati aage war karan pe kerne hi wala tha ki.

Achanak se dharti hilne lagi or ye kya jamin me gadi wo talvar apne aap nikal ker hava me udti hui aayi , uske ander se surya jesi roshni nikal rahi thi or wo talvar apne aap pishachon ki sena me ghus ker pishachon ko katne lagi , or jyada tar pishach to usse nikal rahi roshni se hi jal ker mar rahe the.

Talvar pishachon ko katte hue , achank ruk gayi or kisi k hath me aagayi or usike sath hi wo jiske hath me aayi , uske sare ghav bhar gaye or uski thakan dir ho gayi or us bande k sharir se ek tez roshni nikalne lagi , jiske sath hi us bande k kapde apne aap change ho gaye or ek yodha ki bheshbhusha uske sharir pr aagayi.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi , next update parso aayeha

Tav tak aap sab Guess kijiye friends wo banda kon ho sakta h , jiske hath me vo talvar aachuki h.

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Talvar jis bande k hath me gayi thi , uske charo or itna prakash ho gaya tha mano ki suraj dharti p uter aaya ho.

Kuch der baad prakash hata to us bande ka chahara najar aaya or ye or koi ni aman hi tha.

Lekin ab wo pahale jesa ni raha tha , uska sharir or bhi balishth or chahara tez yukt ho gaya tha, uske kapde bhi bilkul change ho gaye the or uske hath me wo talvar lal rang se chamakti hui shoba pa rahi thi.



Darasal hua yu tha , jab aman ne apne dost yani ki karan ko thak ker girta hua dekha , to apni parwah kiye bina wo uski or doda, lekin pishachon ne use charo or se hi gher liya , wo unse bahaduri se lad raha tha , lekin wo sab bahut jyada the , to isliye wo bhi jyada der tik na paya or wo bhi gir gaya.

Lekin use abhi tak bhi khud se jyada apni bahan or dost ki chinta thi.

Wo apne man me prathna kerne laga .

Aman :- hey , mahakal k priye , bhairav baba, mane aaj tak aapki niswarth bhakti ki , kabhi aapse apni bahan ki khushi k alawa kuch na manga.

Parantu aaj m mang raha hu bhagwan , kripya mujhe shakti dijiye bhagwan taki m apne us dost ki raksha ker saku, jisne bina kisi swarth k mere or meri bahan ki raksha k liye apne is das ko shakti dijiye.

Fir usne kaal bhairav ka jaap kiya.

Aman :- देवराजसेव्यमानपावनांघ्रिपङ्कजं व्यालयज्ञसूत्रमिन्दुशेखरं कृपाकरम् ।
नारदादियोगिवृन्दवन्दितं दिगंबरं काशिकापुराधिनाथकालभैरवं भजे ॥ १॥

Usi samay talvar apni jagah se nikalkar aman k hatho m pahunch gayi.

Or uske baad jo hua aapke samne h

Aman turant udta hua karan k pas pahuncha or jese hi uski or dekha to ye kya karan to gire hue bhi muskura raha tha , uske sare ghav apne aap bhar gaye or vo bas itna bola.

Karan :- rajkumar aman swagat h apka

Aman ye sun heran ho gaya or fati hui ankho se karan ki or dekhne laga.

Karan aman ki or apna hath kerte hue :- are bhai yuhi ghurta hi rahega , ya uthne me meri madad bhi karega.

Aman ye sun jaldi se apna hath bhadata h ,jise pakad karan khada ho gaya or ese aram se apne kapde saaf kerne laga , jese kuch hua hi na ho, uski thakan to jese kahi gayab ho gayi.

Aman :- bhai ye sab kYa h, ye talvar mere hath me kese or tu thik to h na.

Karan :- bhai wo sabke baare me baad m baat karenge , pahale in Dracula ke pilo se to nipat le.

Aman karan ki baat se sahamat ho ha me sir hilata h .Or talvar le saj ho jata h yudh ko.

Ab karan bhi yu bacho ki tarah ladte hue thak gaya tha , usne aman se kaha

Karan :- bhai tu dayi or walo ko sambhal or m baye or walo ki band bajata hu.

Aman :- thik h bhai, per shuruat m karunga , akhir nayi nayi mili shaktiyon ka test to karu.

Karan :- thik h jesi tumhari marji , dekhte h kon kam time me in namuno ka kaam tamam kerta h

Aman :- ha thik h or jo hara use aaj pure ghar ki safai akele kerni hogi , bolo manjur h.

Karan :- manjur h.

Ye sunte hi aman aage bada , pishachon ki to pahale hi fat gayi thi , aman k hath me vikram ki talvar dekh ker or uper se wo lag bhi bilkul vikram ki copy raha tha.

Aman ne aage bhad apni ankhe band ki or kuch mantra bola , tabhi uski talvar se aag nikalne lagi.

Fir wo apni talvar ko pakad k jor jor se apni jagah ghumne laga or uski speed itni tez ho gayi ki , uske charo or ek bavander ban gaya or wo bhi hava ka ni balki aag ka , jisme aman tha , lekin dikhayi ni de raha tha.


Fir aman ruk gaya or usne jab dekha ki usne jesa socha tha vesa ho gaya h , yani ki uske charo or ek bavandar ban gaya h to , vo udte hue bavander se bahar aya or vapas karan ki or aake khada ho gaya.

Fir usne apne talvar ko sena ki or kiya , jese bavander ko ishara ker raha ho , or aman k ishara kerte hi wo bavander , sena ki or bhadne laga or sare pishachon ko khud m nigal k bhasm kerne laga , pishachon ne bhagne ki koshis ki lekin vo nakamyab rahe or bavander m khiche jane lage or karib 5 min baad hi aman vali side puri khali ho gayi thi.

Jinhe dekh baye or wali sena bhagne lagi , lekin ye kya wo apni jagah se hil bhi na saki , jese kisi ne unhe usi jagah bandh liya ho.

Ye karan ne hi kiya tha , usne jab dekha ki wo sab bhag rahe h to chutki baja k sabko bandh diya.

Karan :- are yar ab tum log kaha bhag rahe the , meri bari aate hi , ye to galat baat h na , mujhe bhala safai thodi kerni h.

Fir vo aman se bola.

Karan :- 5 min , not bad , ab apne bhai ka kamal dekh mere dost.

Ye bol wo medan me aagaya or apni ankh band ker kuch budbudaya or jese hi usne apni ankh kholi to uski ankhe bilkul bijli k jese rang ki ho gayi thi , jese uski ankho m bijli dod rahi ho.

Fir karan ne dono hatho se apni talvar ko hatho me pakada or dhire dhire hava me udne laga, or jese jese wo udta ja raha tha , uske charo or or uske sharir se bijli nikal rahi thi , bilkul thor jese .

Or jab vo kafi uchayi pe pahunch gaya to uper ane ki speed se choguni speed me niche ki or aane laga , jese wo gir raha ho or.

Or niche pahuchte hi usne apni talvaar ko jor se jamin me de mara , jisse wo jamin me dhas gayi or jiske sath hi waha ki puri jamin k ander se bijli ki tarange bahar nikalne lagi or waha khade pishachon ka bharta banne laga.

Or jab sari sena mitti me mil gayi tab karan aman ki or lota.

Aman to karan ki power ko ankhe fade dekh raha tha , karan uske pas pahuch uska muh band kerte hue bola.

Karan :- muh band ker le sale , verna makhi ghus jayegi.
Ab bata kya score raha mera.


Aman :- hosh me aate hue , wah bhai man gaya tujhe , keval 2 min me sabhi ka kaam tamam ker diya , you are the best bhai

Karan :- ha ha malum h malum h , jyada maska mat laga safai to tujhe kerni hi padegi.

Aman chota muh kerte hue :- ha to thik h na kamine , ker dunga na, koi baat ni mera bhi din aayega .

Karan :- ha ha dekha jayega, ab mr notanki aaoki permission ho to wapas chale.

Ye bol dono dost apne ashram ki or chal pade , jese hi karan or aman ashram me pahuche ,jhumki bhagte hue aayi or aman k gale lag pahale to royi or fir khud hi chup ho ker aman ki janch kerne lagi , ki kahi use chot to ni lagi.

Aman :- are are meri lado , tu ro kyu rahi h , m bilkul thik hu dekh mujhe kuch ni hua.

Karan majak kerte hue :- are bha ye to bahut galat baat h , aman ki itni chinta or hamari or dekha bhi ni , lagta h hamari chutki bhul hi gayi hume.

Karan ne bhale hi ye baat majak me boli , per jhumki ne use dil pe leliya or wo bhagi bhagi karan k pas gayi or uske gale lagi or usko check kerne lagi .

Fir badi masumiyat se nam ankho se kan pakad mafi mangne ka ishara kerti h.

Karan uske ansu puchte hue :- are meri bholi bahan , m to majak ker raha tha , tu to rone lagi , beta ye rone ka ni balki khushiyan manane ka time h , kyunki aapke bhaiya ne aaj is rasatal lok k bahut se bhojho ka nash jo kiya h.

Aman apna sawal dobara doharate hue bola :- per bhai ye hua keSe , rishiwer ne to kaha tha ki ye talvar sirf iska varis hi utha sakta h , fir m kese.

Karan :- iska jwab bhi baba hi de to uchit hoga dost.

Fir 3no baba jane baba k pas jate h or isse pahale aman kuch bolta , baba bol pade .

Baba :- putra m janta hu tumhare man k sawalo ko or samay aagaya h tumhe tumhare satya k bare m gayat ho.

Aman :- kesa satya maharaj .

Karan :- yahi ki dost , tum hi ho maharaj vikram k varis , unke putra rajkumar aman or hamari jhumki or koi ni rajkumari shweta h.

Aman :- bhai ye tu kya bol raha h or tujhe choti ka asli nam kese pata .

Jhumki ka nam shweta hi tha , lekin pyar se use sab jhumki hi bola kerte the.

Baba :- m tumhe batata hu putra wo satya , jisse tum abhi tak anbhigya the.

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Aaj subah karan ne apni shaktiyon ko jagrit ker dhyan me beth , Dracula or vikram k bare m or janne ki koshis ki to usne dekha ki jesa aman ne bataya tha sab vesa hi hua tha.

Lekin jab draculla sabko marker vikram k bacho k kamre ki or badh raha tha , to ye baat us dasi ko pata chal gayi .

Use samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kya kare, tabhi usne vo mahan balidan diya , jiske liye use karodo baar bhi naman kiya jaye to kam hoga.

Usne raja k dono bacho ko bed se uthaya or ek pass me hi pade bade se bakse me chipa diya .

Or uske bache jinke sath vikram ke bache khela kerte the ,or kabhi kabhi apne kaksh me hi sula liya kerte the jid ker, unhe rajsi vastra pahana ker nind ki dawa pilakar bed pe sula diya .

Or wo rote hue boli.

Dasi :- apni is maa ko maaf ker dena mere bacho , jo apne hi bacho ko mot k kue me dhakelne jesa adharm ker rahi h , parantu shastro me ye bhi likha h ki ager matrabhumi ki raksha k liye apna sabkuch tyagna pade to bhi piche ni hatna chahiye .

(Sanduk ki or dekhte hue) rajkumar or rajkumari shonitpur ka bhavishya or unki antim aas h jo bhavishya me is dusht draculla ka ant ker rasatal ko in papiyo k bhar se mukt karegi , isliye mujhe inki raksha kerni hi hogi.

Abhi dasi kuch or bolti ki tabhi kaksh ka darwaja jor jor se aawaze kerne laga , jise dekh dasi ne khud ko sambhala or apne ansu poche .

Tabhi vo gate tut gaya or Dracula ander aste hue bola

Dracula :- bata kaha h us kamine ki olade, verna tera vo hal karunga ki tu mot ki bhik mangegi.

Dasi kuch ni boli or apne dil p pathar rakh usne us bed ki or ishara ker diya.

Dracula ishare ko dekhte hi us or gaya or badi hi nirmamta se un sote hue bacho ki gardan talvar k ek jhatke se alag ker di.

Or us mahan virangana ki deshbhakti to dekho ,ki usne apni ankho k samne apne bacho ko marte dekha , per apni ankho me ek ansu tak na ane diya us samay , taki us draculla ko shak na ho jaye.

Dracula ko bhi marne k liye badha , lekin usi samay subah ho gayi or surya k prakash k dar se use bhagna pada.

Uske jane k baad dasi ne khud ka niyantran chod fut fut ker rone lagi , fir usne samay ki mahatva ko samjhte hue , jaldi se apne bacho k parthiv sharir ko dafnaya mahal k bagiche me or raja k dono bacho ko shonitpur se kafi dur dusre ganv me aagayi or un dono bacho ko apne bacho ki tarah palne lagi.

Or wo dono bache or koi ni aman or shweta(jhumki) hi the.

Us veerangana ki deshbhakt or kartavyanishta dekh karan ki ankhe bhi nam ho gayi or usne nishchay kiya ki draculla ka ant ker wo un veerangna ko sarvoch saman dilwayega.

Fir karan ne apni shaktiyo se hi us talvar k bare me pata ker liya or ye bhi ki use keval aman hi utha sakta h or use sab kuch gyat ho chuka tha. Or use apni shaktiyon se us pishachon ki sena k hamle ka bhi gyat ho gaya tha tabhi usne plan banaya.

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Aman or jhumki ko sari bate bata ker baba unke sir pe hath rakh kuch mantra bolte h , jisse unhe sab yaad aajata h.

Dono hi bahan bhai ki ankho me ansu the ,jiske do kaaran the , pahala ye ki jin maa baap ko vo itne salo se khoj rahe the , unke bare me pata bhi chala to kya , ki ab vo duniya me ni rahe , ek darinde k hatho vo dono veergati ko prapt hue.

Or ansu apni dai ma (dasi) ke balidan ka sun bhi ankho me aagaye the , jinhone pahale to undono ki raksha k liye apne bacho ka balidan diya , fir baad me khud kasht sahate hue bhi un dono ko apne bacho ki tarah pala.

Jhumki Dracula pe mahan krodh dikhate hue isharo me boli :- bhai aapko apni is bahan ki kasam h , aap us draculla ka aaj hi ant karoge or hamari mata pita ki mrityu ka pratishodh or hamari dai ma ke balidan ko sarthak karoge.

Aman :- ha meri bahan , m maharaj vikram dev rai ka putra aman , apni bahan k sir pe hath rak , bhagwan kal bhairav ko sakshi man ye pratigya leta hu , ki aaj sham hone se pahale us draculla ka shish kat ker apni bahan ke charno me dalunga

Karan :- esa avashya hoga mere dost or m bhi tumhare sath hu , parantu ab hume waha keval Dracula ko marna h or kisi ko ni.

Aman :- esa kyu bhai , jaha tak m janta hu , abhi humne keval Dracula ki adhi sena ko tabah kiya h or adhi to abhi baki hi hogi.

Karan :- aao mere sath bhai , batata hu.

Fir karan or aman ashram k bahar ki or wapas gaye , jaha kaya abhi bhi khadi thi , jise dekh aman ko gussa aaya or apni talvar leker uski or bhadne laga , to karan ne use rokte hue bola.

Karan :- ruk ja bhai , ye hamari or h.

Aman :- kya , per kese.

Karan batata h.

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Karan ne jb lp ko marker kaya ki or badha tha or kaya ko Dracula k liye msg diya tha , tabhi usne man to man kaya se baat ki.

Karan man me :- dekho kaya m janta hu ki tum ab is darindo ki jindagi se tang aagayi ho or draculla k dar se majburi m kaam ker rahi ho , ager tum chaho to m tumhe is pishach yoni se mukt ker sakta hu .

Kaya man me :- kya sach me aaap esa karenge , ager ha to m kuch bhi kerne ko teyar hu.

Apka ye mahan tez hi saf saf bata raha h ki ab us dusht draculla ka ant nishchit h.

Karan :- to thik h , filhal abhi k liye tum yaha se jao or jab tak m na kahu draculla ko yaha hui ladayi ki kano kan khabar ni honi chahiye, m tumse yu hi sampark m rahunga.

Kaya :- jesa aap kahe.

Fir karan ne usko vaha se bhej diya or jab raat ko dhyan me karan ko aman ki sachai pata chali to use ye bhi pata chala ki talvar ko pana aman k liye bhi asan ni hoga , kyunki talvar pahale uska parikshan ker ye pata karegi ki kya aman in shaktiyo k liye yogya bhi h ya ni.

Tab karan ne plan banaya or telepathy ki madad se usne kaya ko plan samjha diya , jiske chalte draculla k kaya ne ese kan bhare ki usne apni aadhi se jyada sena bhej di uske sath marne k liye , or kaya ne bhi un logo ko sena me ni liya jo ya to uski tarah majbur the ya vo jinhe jabardasti pishach bana diya gaya tha.

Or plan k mutabik bilkul sahi time pe kaya waha pahunch gayi sena ko leker , fir jab aman or karan ladayi me uttre to karan ne janbhujker thakne ka natak kiya , taki talvar k sath vo sari duniya ko dikha sake ki aman keval waris hi ni , in shaktiyon k liye purntah yogya bhi h.

Or hua bhi esa hi , aman khud ghayal tha fir bhi use khud se jyada chinta apne dost , apni bahan or apne rajya ki thi , usne khud se pahale dusro ki rakha ka socha , jo ek yogya raja ki pahachan h .

Isiliye talvar apne aap hi uske pass pahunch gayi.

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Aman :- maaf kerna kaya ji mane aapko galat samjha .

Kaya :- ji aap mafi mat mangiye, isme aapki koi galti ni h , hum pishach jati ne bhut kal me kaam hi ese kiye h jis karan sab humse ghrina hi kerte h.

Karan :- parantu abse esa ni hoga kaya , tumne jo aaj dharm ka sath dete hue papiyo k nash m yogdan diya h ,uska rasatal sadev abhari rahega.

Aman :- bhai ab hume us Dracula ka ant ker dena chahiye , kyunki raat hone me keval ek hi pahar ka samay rah gaya h.

Karan :- ha kyu ni.

Fir karan or aman jhumki ko baba k pas surakshit chod nikal gaye .

Location :- mahal .

Draculla becheni se apni sena k wapas lotne ka intezaar ker raha tha , tabhi use bahar se dhamake ki aawaz aayi.

Tabhi ek pishach dodta dodta hua aaya or draculla se bola.

Pishach :- malik gajab ho gaya , hamare uper hamla hua h.

Dracula gusse se :- kya humla or wo bhi Dracula k mahal per , kiski mot aayi h jo usne ye dussahas kiya.

Pishach :- wahi ladka maharaj , jisne kal lp ko mara tha , khabar mili h kaya ne humse gaddari ki h or uski hi madad se us ladke ne apne dost k sath mil ker humari bheji sena ko chinti jese masal diya.

Dracula :- namumkin , 2 ladko ne puri ki puri sena tabah ker di , kahi bhang to ni khayi na tumne.

Pishach :- ni maharaj m sach bol raha hu or ha maharaj , us ladke k dost me vikram dev ki talvaar thi , jise aap kab se dhund rahe h.

Dracula ka to ab dimag chakra gaya use samjh ni aaraha tha ,ye sab kya or kese ho raha h.

Dracula :- tum hamari bachi hui sena teyar kero abhi , m abhi un dono ko dekhta hu or us gaddar kaya ki to m vo halat karunga jiske baad koi draculla k khilaaf jane ki sapne tak m ni sochega.

Tabhi Dracula k kaksh k kaksh k gate dhamake k sath tutta h or ander karan or aman aagaye.

Aman :- tu kyu taklif kerta h Dracula hum hi tere pas aagaye h , tera ant kerne ko.

Dracula :- wo to wakt hi batayega bache kon kiska ant karega ,

Ye bol draculla aman ki or apni talvar leke bada , or jese hi talvar se usne aman k sir pe var kerna chaha , aman ne bade aaram se use rok liya or ek laat pet pe jad di.

Jisse Dracula jaker divar se takraya , aman ki shakti dekh Dracula buri tarah chonk gaya.

Use vese bhi aman ka chahara jana pahachana lag raha tha , or uski shakti bhi.

Dracula :- kon ho tum ladke or tere pass ye talvar kaha se aayi or teri mujhse kya dushmani h.

Aman :- dusht , m unhi maharaj vikram dev rai ka putra hu jinse tu bar bar hara or kayaron k bhanti pith dikha k bhaga .

Dracula :- kya, per tu bach kese gaya , tujhe to mane apne hatho se mara tha.

Aman :- jako rakhe saiya , mar sake na koi.

Or vese bhi draculla bhala koi apni mot ko mar sakta h kya , ha Dracula m hi hu tera kaal , jo tera ant ker apne mata pita ki hatya ka pratishodh lega or shonitpur ko tujh papi k atyacharo se mukt kerwayega.

Draculla :- haste hue , tu mujhe kya marega bache , m vo hu jisne tere baap ko mara tha , vese dhanyawad to tumhe kahana padega , jis talvar ki m itne varsho se khoj me tha , use tum khud hi mere pas leker aagaye.

Ab tujhe or tere dost ka khatma ker is talvar ki shakti se m amar ho jaunga or suna h teri bahan bahut hi sundar h , tere marne k baad m use to apni rakh...


Dracula abhi aage bolta , usse pahale hi ek jordar mukka uske sine p pada , jisse wo udta hua divar se takra gaya , or ye mukka karab ne mara tha .

Karan :- kutte teri himat kese hui meri bahan ko gali dene ki , man to kerta h tere tukde tukde ker dalu , abhi k abhi .

Per ni ye adhikar mere dost ka h , isliye tu shukra mana ki tujhe aasan mot milegi.

Fir wo aman ko ishara ker piche ho gaya , Dracula bhi vapas khada ho aman se talvarbaji kerne laga , lekin aman us pe bhari pada.

Or kuch hi minuto me aman ne ek jordar prahar ker Dracula ki talvar k 2 tukde kee dale.

Fir Dracula apne chamgadad roop me aagaya , jo sabhi pishachon se choguna size ka tha.


Fir wo usi roop me aman per jhapata , aman dodge kerte hue usper prahar kerne ki koshis kerne laga , per Dracula har var se bach raha tha aman ka.

Tabhi aman k man me karan ki aawaz aayi.

Karan :- dost , ankho se use dekhne ki ni , balki apne kano se uski aawaz ko sun ker apna dhyan kendrit ker prahar kero.

Aman ne bilkul vesa hi kiya or kuch der shant raha or jese hi is bar draculla uske pass asta , usne ek jor dar mukka kaske Dracula k muh pe de mara .

Jiski chot se vo ghayal ho vapas apne asli roop me aagaya , fir aman us per tut pada , pahale to aman ne use ache se doya, fir usne Dracula ki gardan talvar se uda di, per ye kya uski gadan vapas jud gayi.

Esa kayi baar hua to karan sochne laga tabhi kaya boli.

Kaya :- aman ji uske dil pe war kijiye , ek vampire king ka ant keval tab hi ho sakta h jab uske dil ko chandi k khanjar se bhed diya jaye.

Dracula :- kamini kul drohi , aaj mere sath tu bhi maregi .

Ye bol Dracula ne apni bachi hui takat se ek shakti gola banaya or kaya ki or feka .

Lekin karan bich me aaker usne wo prahar apne uper leliya , war thoda takatwar tha isliye shuru me pida to hui lekin baad me vo sambhal gaya. Lekin kaya dar gayi or uske pas aaker use check kerte hue boli

Kaya (khun k ansu rote hue):- ye kya karan ji , mujh jesi ek papin pishachini ko bachane k liye aapne kyu kasht saha , mar jane dete na mujhe kam se kam is pishach yoni se mukti to milti .

Karan :- ye tum kesi baat ker rahi ho kaya , kisne kaha tum papin ho , tum to wo punyatma ho jisne pishach yoni m janm leker bhi burayi k khilaf jane ki himmat ki.

Or rahi baat tumhe bachane ki , to meri aatma mujhe dikharti esa na kerne per ki saksham hote hue bhi apni saheli ki raksha na ker paya.

Kaya khush hote hue :- kya m aapki saheli .

Karan :- ha mane to tumhe apni saheli hi man liya , kyu tumhe kya m pasand ni hu apne dost k roop me.

Kaya :- are ni ni ye kesi baat ker rahe h aap , m bhala kese khush na houngi , aap jese veer or mahan aatma ko apna dost k roop me paker.

Ye to mujh jesi tuch jati ka sobhagya hoga.

Ye bol vo karan k per chune lagi to karan ne use gale laga liya.

Karan :- ye kya ker rahi thi tum pagli ,dosto ki jagah pero me ni balki dil k pas hoti h .

Chalo ab jaldi se chup ho jao or muskurao.

Kaya karan k apne pan or prem se prabhavit ho muskurati h , jise dekh karan ne pyar se uska matha chum liya , lekin bas ek sakha ki tarah or kuch ni.

Jisse kaya sharma gayi , tabhi aman ki aawaz aayi.

Aman :- are o laila majnu, tumhara pyar vyar ho gaya ho to jara iske ant ka upay to batao.

Karan :- abe hum jo bhi kare tujhe kyu jalan ho rahi h , or abhi to bataya is chutiye ka ant tumhe kata ne (apne hath me ek chandi ka khanjar lata h or aman ko pakadate hue bola) ye le or ker de is dusht ka ant.

Aman wo khanjar se jese hi Dracula k dil ko chedta h ,Dracula chinkta hua tadafne laga , uske sharir se kali roshniya nikal k idher udher fel ker nasht hone lagi.

Or ek Dracula ka sharir jal ker rakh ho gaya , or uske ant k sath hi mahal k charo or se andhera gayab ho gaya.

Or suraj ki roshni aane lagi , jise kaya jalne lagi or gir ke chilane lagi , karan ne jab ye dekha jaldi se usne ek kavach kaya ke charo or bana diya , jise wo suraj se surakshit ho gayi.

Karan kaya ko uthate hue :- tum thik to ho na kaya.

Kaya rote hue :- ji karan ji , per esa kab tak chalega , akhir kab tak m yu hi chupti rahungi , m tang aachuki hu is jindagi se .

Karan baba ko yaad kerta h , tabhi baba vaha jhumki k sath pragat hue or aman ko dekh jhumki uske gale lag gayi.

Aman :- dekh gudiya , mane apna vachan pura kiya , mane us dusht ka ant ker diya bahana , ant ker diya us papi ka.

Karan :- baba Dracula ka to ant ho chuka h , per kya hum unko ni bacha sakte jinhe Dracula ne jabardasti pishach banaya tha or kya hum kaya ko is pishach yoni se mukt ni ker sakte , jisne apni jan ko khatre me dal hamari madad ki .

Baba :- upay h putra , keval ek hi upay h .

Aman :- vo kya baba.

Baba :- amritunjay jal , jo dharti lok k kaal garh k jungle m mojud gufa m h .Uska prabhav pishachon k jahar ko katne k liye amrit saman hi h or to or vo har buri shakti k prabhav ko nasht ker sakta h.

M tumhe abhi vaha pahuncha deta hu , parantu hume ye karya shighra kerna hoga , kyunki Dracula mar chuka h or ab in baki pishachon k pas bhi jyada samay ni bacha h , kyunki ye sab apne raja se jude hue hote h.

Baba ne ye bol apna ek hath aage kiya or jisse vaha ek portals khul gaya.

Location :- kalgarh gufa.

Naina or preety abhi us pishach k sath gufa se bahar nikali hi thi ki tabhi naina ko ek anokha sa aanand ka aahasas hua , jese koi varso pahale bichde hue apne ke asapas hone ka ahasas ho

Naina k chahare pe ek smile aagayi or ankho me ansu or wo gufa ki or wapas badne lagi.

Tabhi preeti bol padi .

Preety :- are sister udher kidher ja rahi ho wapas , humara rasta is or h.

Preety ki aawaz se naina ka dhyan bhang hua or usne preety ki or mud k deka , tabhi vo ahasas hona use band ho gaya.

Use to kuch samjh hi ni aaraha tha , usne sab bhavishya pe chod , vapas preety ki or jate hue boli

Naina :- are sorry yaar , mujhe laga ki m waha kuch bhul gayi thi , fir mujhe yaad aYa ki wo mere bag me hi h.

Or (pishach se) tum hamara muh kya dekh rahe ho , jaldi leke chalo hume Apne raja k pas hamare pas jyada samay ni h.

Pishach :- jjjji

Wahi gufa me karan ko bhi bilkul vesa hi ahasas hua jesa ki naina ko hone laga tha , wo bhi gufa k bahar ki or jane laga or wo naina se karib 25 30 meter dur hi hoga ki use aman ki aawaz aayi.

Aman :- bhai udher kidher ja raha h , jal ye raha jaldi ker hamare pas jyada samay ni h.

Karan bhi apni tandra se bahar aaya or apni shaktiyo se usne ek vishal bartan me wo jal ikatha kiya or pahunch gaye wo rasatal wapas.

Fir karan ne sabse pahale kaya ko woh jal pilaya , shuru shuru me to usko kafi taklif hui fir baad me uska rang roop bilkul badal gaya , pahale uska rang thoda bluish tha , jo ab ek dam gora ho gaya tha , uski kali bhayanak aakhe , ab sunder or jhil si ho gayi thi , esa ni tha ki vo pahale sunder ni thi , per thi to pishachini hi na , lekin ab vo ek pari jesi lag rahi thi.

Aman to jese usne kho hi gaya ,jise dekh pata ni jhumki ko kyu gussa aaya , usne aman k ek mukka uske pet me mara.

Aman :- ouch kya hua meri rani , mara kyu.

Karan :- ek or mar chutki is ghade ke.

Aman :- abe mane kiya kya.

Karan majak me kaya k kandho pe bah rakh :- abe kaya ko ese ghur kya raha h , jese kabhi ladki dekhi hi na ho or (ankh marte hue) vese bhi dur hi rahiyo isse , ye teri hone wali bhabhi h.

Ye bol karan hasne laga sath me aman or jhumki bhi , or kaya sharmane lagi.

Aman :- bhai ladki hasi to fasi.

Ye sun kaya or jyada sharmane lagi , jise dekh karan bola.

Karan kaya ko gale lagate hue:- bas bas or koi tang ni karega ab meri hone wali wife ko verna.

Kaya karan k pyar se mukka marti hui :- kya aap bhi kuch bhi bolte ho.

Fir hasi yu hi hasi majak k sath , un sab ne milker us din to sabko thik kerne m gujara.

Fir agle din aman ka rajyabhishek tha , lekin tabhi baba ne ek bomb fod diya.

Baba :- putra tum abhi raja ni ban sakte .

Karan :- kyu baba.

Baba. :- esa isliye putr , kyunki aman k kul ki parampara h ki singhasan pe bethne wala vivahit hona jaruri h.

Ye sun to aman or jhumki pe to bahut bada dhamaka ho gaya , jhumki to jeSe chakkar kha ke girne hi wali thi , esa kyu aayiye jante h.

Karan :- parantu itni shighr hum ek yogya vadhu kese dhundenge baba , kyunki aman ki patni maharani hogi or esa jimedari wala pad her kisi ko ni diya ja sakta.

Baba :- uski jarurat ni h putra , aman k liye yogya kanya yaha per mojud h , jo aman se apne prano se bhi adhik prem kerti h or aman bhi usse .

Karan :- kon baba .

Baba :- wo kanya or koi ni rajkumari shweta h yani ki tumhari jhumki.

Baba to bomb pe bomb fode ja rahe the , or jese hi jhumki ne ye suna , usko to samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kese react kare , khush ho ya samaj k dar se prabhavit.

Karan :- parantu ye kese sambhav h baba , aman or shweta sage bhai bahan h , to unme vivah kya mahapap na hoga.

Baba :- putra , ye to vidhi ka vidhan h , aman or shweta ka janm ese nakshatron me hua h ki ager inhonne ek dusre k alawa kisi or se vivah kiya to ye kabhi sukhi na rah payenge or ho sakta h inke pran bhi chale jaye , isliye ye vidhata ki hi marji h ki in dono ka vivah ek sath hoga .

Or wese bhi putra vidhi ka vidhan to dekho aman or shweta bhi ek dusre ko usi had tak prem kerte h jiski koi had ni, aman or shweta ek dusre se premi or premika ki tarah hi prem kerne lage h(aman or shweta se puchte h) kyu satya kaha na mane

Aman or shweta sharma ker apna sir jhuka lete h.

Karan :- parantu baba.

Baba :- parantu kya putra , isme kuch galat ni h , jab ishwer ne hi inki ye niyati likh di h to hum kon hote h use badalne wale .

(Dhire se) Or putra esa sanyog pratham baar to ni h ki ek bhai or bahan me esa prem uttpan hua ho

Karan baba ka ishara ache se samjh gaya or usne mon rahana hi uchit samjha.

Baba man me :- m tumhari manodasha ache se samjh sakta hu putra , parantu yahi tumhari or jyoti ki bhi niyati , is satya ko tum jitna jaldi swikar karoge utna uchit hoga.

Aman :- parantu baba meri gudiya ki abhi aayu hi kya h , kya abhi vivah uchit hoga.



Baba :- hmm baat to tumhari uchit h putra , iska bhi upaay h mere pas , filhal k liye tumhari sagai kerwa dete h or uchit samay aane pe tumhara vivah kerwa diya jayega.

Fir baba ne aman or jhumki ki vidhi vidhan se sagayi kerwa di, fir aman k rajyabhishek ki teyari hone lagi.

Sabse pahale to aman ko dudh, dahi , sato pavitra nadi k jal se snan kerwaya gaya , fir use sunder rajsi vastra pahanaye gaye.

Fir use singhasan pe bithaya karan ne tabhi kaya bhi shweta ko teyar ker waha leke aayi , jo ek dam swarg se utri pari lag rahi thi.

Wo aaker sabse pahale karan k per chuti h to karan use gale laga karan bolta h.

Karan :- pagli bhai k per ni chuye jate , uske gale laga jata h .

Fir karan uska hath pakad use aman k sath singhasan pe bithatha h or fir puri vidhi vidhan k sath aman or shweta ko mukut pahante h.

Fir waha mojud sabhi kuch na kuch upahar dete h , fir karan bachta h , vo aaker shweta se bola


Karan :- gudiya mere pas abhi dene k liye kuch jyada to ni bas yahi h, apne is bhai ki taraf se ye chota sa tohfa swikar kero

Karan ne apni jeb se ek chocolate nikal ker shweta ko di ,shweta ne esi chij hi pahali baar dekhi to isharo se pucha.

Ki bhai ye kya h.

Karan :- choti ye prathvi lok ki wo mishthan h , jo ladkiyo ko waha sabse jyada pasand h , jara khake to dekho.

Shweta ko karan chocolate ka packet nikal ker khane ko deta h or jese hi shweta chocolate khati h to use bahut pasand aayi or kuch hi second me puri kha gayi wo chocolate

Karan :- kesi lagi chocolate gudiya .

Shweta ne isharo me bataya use bahut achi lagi.

Aman bhi apni bahan ki khushi dekh khush tha , lekin waha mojud logo me bate hone lagi ki raja k dost ne uphar me diya bhi to kya keval ek mishtan.

Lekin karan ne in bato pe dhyan na diya or usne sharata kerte hue bola.

Karan :- choti jara bachke , waha chipkali h.

Chipkali ka nam sun shweta uchal padi or singhasan pe hi khadi ho gayi .

Jise dekh aman or karan hasne lage , shweta karan ki shararat samjh gayi or uske piche dodi .

Tabhi ek chamatkar hua shweta bolne lagi.

Shweta :- ruk jaiye bhai , esa bhi koi majak kerta h , aaj m aapko ni chodungi

Fir achanak se jab shweta ko aahasa hua ki vo bolne lagi , to uski bhi herani or khushi ka thikana na raha or vo akhe fade karan ko dekhne lagi.

Karan :- sagai mubarak ho meri chutki , ye chota sa tohfa mere dost k liye.

Aman or shweta apne prati karan ka prem dekh bhavuk ho gaye or karan k gale lag rone lage.

Darasal jo chocolate karan ne shweta ko di thi , wo koi sadharan chocolate ni thi , usme karan ne apni shakti dal di thi , jise khate hi shweta ki aawaz lot aayi.

Aman ne raja bante hi sabse pahale kaya ko senapati ki upadhi di. Or apne khas mantri ki bhi , unhone apni dai ma ki vishal murti banvane ka aadesh diya or unke bacho ki kabro pe samdhi banane ka bhi.



Fir ese hi wo din nikal gaya , fir agle din karan apni yatra pe nikal gaya , aman , shweta or kaya se vida li or dobara jald milne ane ka wada le nikal pada karan apni yatra pe shivling ko dharan kiye.

Yu to karan k jane se sabhi dukhi thie , parantu kaya ki ankho me to ek alag hi tadaf si thi , uska karan se bahut hi kam samay me bahut jyada lagav ho gaya tha.ab ye lagav keval dosti tak hi simit tha ya , kuch or , ye to bhavishya m hi pata chalega

Ab karan waha se kafi dur aagaya tha or ab vo bilkul bhi rukne k mood me ni tha, wo lagatar chalte hue aakir pahad k pas pahunch hi gaya.

Fir karan ne om namah shivay ka jaap kerte hue pahad pe chadne laga , marg me kayi badhaye bhi aayi , jese tufan barish , wagera per karan k na rukne k irade ko.wo na tod paye.

Akhir kar karan pahad ki choti pe pahunch hi gaya, or usne dekha ki ek bahut hi sunder mahal tha waha , jiske dwar k pas ek mandir bana hua tha, lekin usme koi murti ni thi.

Karan samjh gaya ki yahi wo sthan h jaha shivling ko rakhna h or usne bilkul vesa hi kiya.

Shivling ko rakhte hi waha vo roshni prakat hui or boli.

Roshni :- shabash putra karan tum apni pahali pariksha me kamyab rahe .

Ab tum jyoti ko punah prapt ker sakte ho parantu

Karan :- parantu kya bhagwn.

Roshni :- ye jo tumhare samne mahal h na , usike ek kaksh me jyoti tumhe milegi.

Parantu tumhe waha tak pahuchne k marg me 3 bhin bhin drishy dikhenge , tumhe un drishyo k sar sahit vyakhya kerni hogi.

Ager tumhari vyakhya uchit hui to tum jyoti ko pa loge , anyatha sadev sadev k liye jyoti se dur yahi bandi ban jaoge

Bolo.swikar h tumhe.

Karan :- swikar h .

Roshni ye sun use aage bharne ko kahati , karan mahal k mukhya dwar se enter ker sidhe jata h to samne ek darwaza tha.

Karan jese hi darwaja kholta h to dekhta h ki samne ek khula medan h , jisme 2 chote kue or unke bich me ek bada kua h .

Tabhi bade wale kue k pani m udan aata h , jisse pas wale kue bhar jate h or thodi der bad un chote kuo me bhi ufan aaya or unka pani uchal ker bade kue me gira , lekin bada kua na bhara.

Esa 2 3 bar hua, tabhi roshni ki aawaz aayi.

Roshni :- to batao rakshak , kya arth h is drishya ka.

Karan muskurate hue :-. Ye 2. Chote kue santan ka pratik h or bade kua pita ka.

Is drishya ka arth yah h ki ek pita apni ek se jyada santan ka bhale hi kese n kese bharan poshan ker unhe pal sakta h , parantu 2 santan milker bhi apni pita k us niswarth prem ka karz ni utar sakti.

Roshni :- ati utam uttar karan , m tumhare uttar se santusht hu tum aage badh sakte ho.

Fir karan aage badha to kuch aage ek divar k sath ek or gate najar aaya , karan jese hi us kaksh me enter hua to paya.

Ki wo bhi ek medan hi h , jaha ek gaay or uski bachiya (gaay ki bachi) per ajib baat ye thi ki , gaay apni hi bachde ka dudh pi rahi thi

Roshni ne fir wahi prashna kiya to karan bola.

Karan :- ye drishy kaliyug ki paristhiti dikhata h ki , jesa aaj ke yug me ho raha , beta apni maa ko akela chod alag ghar basa leta h , lekin usi ma ki beti ek bete ka farz nibha ker apni ma ko bete ki tarah sambhalti h.

Roshni karan k is utter se bhi santusht hui or aage ka marg diya

Tabhi 3sre kaksh me pahuch dekha ki ek chandi ki bol ko ek sone ki shila dabane ki koshis ker rahi h , lekin bal.tas se mas ni ho rahi

Karan :- ye bhi kaliyug ki paristhiti hi h , aaj paap or adharm is chatan ki bhanti dharm rupi gend ko dabane ki koshis ker raha h , parantu dharm adig h

Roshni :- ati utam putra , tum apne isi pariksha me safal rahe .

Roshni k bolte hi waha ek tez roshni k sath jyoti pragat hui jise dekhte hi karan ki ankhe jo itne dino se jyoti k liye taras rahi thi, wo bahane lagi.

Karan :- jyoti.

Jyoti :- bhai.


Dono ek dusre k gale lagne dode hi the ki achanak un dono k bich ek adrishy divar aagayi.

Tabhi vo roshni boli.

Roshni :- itni bhi shighrata kya h karan , pahale apni antim pariksha to par ker lo

Tabhi roshni tez chamki , jisse karan or jyoti ki ankhe kuch second k liye band ho gayi or jab unhone ankhe kholi.to us roshni k sthan pe ek bahut hi tejashvi , bade netro wale , shyam varn yuvak khade the.
Yahi the wo jo roshni k roop me karan ki pariksha le rahe the.

Yuvak :- tumhari antim pariksha yah h ki , tumhe mujhe yudh me parajit kerna hoga karan , parantu usse pahale tumhe ye bhi batana hoga m kon hu.

Karan ko pahale to samjh ni aata ki wo kya kare , lekin fir karan ne un yuvak ko uper se niche tak ache se dekh to vo unhe pahachan gaya or bola.

Karan :- he prabhu , mujh jesa tuch prani m bhala itna samarthya kaha , jo unka parichay de sake , jo swayam nayay ki paribhasha h , jinka nayay ka loha mahadev samet sabne mana h , jin shiv priya ke tez k aage surya dev ka tez bhi kam pad gaya, jinhone janm lete hi apni mata k apman k pratishodh me apne pita tak ko grahan laga diya or apne pita ko unke kiye gaye anyay ka dand diya.

M shiv bhakt karan un shiv priya , surya putra evam chaya nandan
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Jyoti karan ki baat sun k chonk gayi or boli.

Jyoti :- ye aap kya bol rahe h bhai , kya yahi h ...

Karan bich me :- ha gudiya yahi h vo , jinka na koi shatru h , na koi mitra , na koi sambhandh na koi pratibandh .

Shrasti me kaal ko niyantran me rakhne wali keval 3n hi shaktiya h .

1 swayam mahadev

2 mata adishakti

Or 3 :- swayam karmfal data shani.

Kyunki sharasti me kal or karmfal ke santulan bana rahe , isliye swayam mahadev ne inka srijan kiya h.

Ha jyoti yahi h vo jinki chal h dhimi , tez h jinki maar , jinki padchap.sunati h nyaya dhwani.

Karm fal data

Jyoti :- shani.

Karan :- das ka pranam swikar kare prabhu.

Ye bol karan or jyoti shani dev ko dandvat pranam kerte h.

Yuvak :- tumne bilkul uchit uttar diya putra , m hi hu karmfal data shani .



Tumne apni har pariksha ko ache se purn kiya or sath hi sath tumne rasatal lok ko dusht pishachon k aatank se bhi mukt karwaya , isliye hum tumse prabhavit or kafi prasan bhi h putra .

Parantu hum yaha tumhare samaksh karmfal data k roop me ni apitu , nilmani k rakshak k roop me prakat hue h.

Karan :- kya nilmani k rakshak or vo bhi karmfal data , esa kyu bhagwan,

Shani dev :- esa isliye putra , kyunki jab shrikrishna nilmani devo ko.somp.rahe the , tab indra samet sabhi devo k man me is nilmani ko pane ki lalsa aagayi or wo sab usko pana chahate the.

Tab shrikrishna ne mera aahavahan kiya or m waha pahunch gaya.

M :- pranam prabhu.

Shrikrishna :- aaiye shani dev , hum aapse sahayta chahte h , bas usike liye ek vinati kerna chahata hu.

M :- vinati ni prabhu , aap to aadesh dijiye.

Tab shrikrishna ne mujhe nilmani dete hue bole.


Shrikrishna :- lijiye karmfal data , is sansar me keval aap hi h jis per ye mani apna prabhav ni dal sakti , kyunki aap apne guru mahadev ki tarah virakt h , isliye ye mani hum aapko somp rahe h , aapko is mani ki suraksha ka dayitv tab tak nibhana hoga , jab tak iske yogya koi aa ni jata astitv me.

M :- jo aagya prabhu.

To is tarah shrikrishna ne mujhe is mani ka dayitv sompa, or jesa mane pahale hi kaha tha , nilmani ko pane ki icha se hi tum yaha aaye , isliye rasatal lok me tumhare aate hi tumhari sabse priya yani ki jyoti danv per lag chuki thi.

Isliye ager nilmani ko ager tumhe pana h to tumhe mujhse to yudh kerna hi hoga, anyatha tumhe jyoti ko sadev - 2 k liye bhulna hoga.

Shani dev ki ye baate sun ker karan or jyoti k to chahre hi safed pad gaye , unhe samjh hi ni aaraha tha , ab vo kya kare.

Unki to ek or kua to dusri or khai wali situation wali sthithi uttpan ho gayi thi.

Ek or unka hamesha hamesha k liye bichadna tha , to dusri or swayam shani dev ki chunoti , jo swayam aajay h , or uper se karan unse yudh ker maryada bhang bhi ni ker sakta tha.

Shani dev fir bole :- shigra nirnay lo karan , humare paas vyarth kerne ko adhik samay ni h.

Karan :- ye aapne kese dharm sankat me dal diya bhagwan apne is daas ko .

Na to ye karan apni bahan , apni atma , apni shakti jyoti se dur ho sakta h , or na hi unper shastra uthane ka sahas ker sakta h jo mere mahadev k sabse priya h or jinka ye karan ansh h.

Shani :- dono me se ek marg ka chayan to tumhe kerna hi hoga karan , kyunki yahi niyati or karmfal ka vidhan h , yadi fal pana h to karm to kerna padega.

Karan ne kafi der sochta raha, fir wo bola.

Karan :- shama kijiyega prabhu ,parantu ye karan apni jyoti ko chod ker ni ja sakta.

Shani :- arthat , tum yudh kerne ko sajj ho , chalo jesi tumhari icha.

Ye bol shani dev ne apne dand ko to gayab kiya or ab unke hath me aagaya unka divya dhanush.

Shani :- apne shastra uthao karan or yudh kero mujhse.

Ye bol shani dev ne apni pratyncha khich ker chod di , jisse pure rasatal lok m ek bhayanak garjana hui.

Karan ne bhi apna hath upper kiya or uske hath me ek dhanush aagaya , usne shastra to utha liye the , per uski antaratma is baat k liye use bilkul swikriti ni de rahi thi.

Kyunki shani dev unke liye utne hi pujniya or samanniya the , jitne ki mahadev.

Shani dev :- kaha kho gaye karan , yudh me dhyan kendrit kero.

Ye bol unhone ek baan karan ki or choda , jo sidha ja ker karan k kandhe me ghus gaya or karan ki chink nikal gayi .

Jyoti rote hue chillayi :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii

Wo karan k pass jana chahati thi , lekin shani dev ki adrishy divar k karan wo asmarth thi.

Shani dev :- utho karan or yudh kero , yu kayaro wali pravarti tumhari kabse ho gayi .

Bhul jao tumhare samne kon khada h or jis karmpath ka tumne chayan kiya h , uska palan bhi kero.

Dekho jyoti ko kese tadaf rahi h tumhare liye wo , kya tumhe jara si bhi daya ni aarahi apni bahan ki is dasha per , ya tumhara itna hi prem tha , apni bahan k prati .

Ager esa h to abhi k abhi nikal jao tum yaha se , tum jyoti k bilkul yogya ni ho.

Shani dev k kathor vachan sun karan k ander ek tis si uthi or usne ek jhatke me apne kandhe se wo tir nikal ker, wapas khada hua or bola

Karan :- ni shani dev , karan apne pran tyag sakta h , per apni jyoti ko ni , m apni jyoti ko yaha se bina liye ni jaunga , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.

Shani :- yadi esa h to fir yudh kero.

Ye bol shani dev ne ek or tir karan ki or choda , pet is baar karan bhi teyar tha , usne bhi apne dhanush se ek tir choda , jo shani dev k tir se ja ker takraya , wo shani dev k tir ko bhed to na saka , parantu uski gati kam kerne m kamyab raha , jisse karan shani dev k tir se is baar bach gaya.

Fir dono ka mahasangram ka aarambh ho gaya ,dono ne ek dusre k uper tiro ki varsha kerna aarambh ker diya , karan khud shani ka hi ansh tha , to kuch had tak wo shani dev ko takkar de pa raha tha.

Kabhi shani dev ka tir karan kaat deta , to kabhi karan ke tir shani dev


Unke bano ki takrahat itni bhishn thi ki 3no lok dol rahe the, sare dev aasman me bhagwan or unke ansh k is adbhut sangram ko dekhne waha upasthit ho chuke the.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- shani lok.

Shani dev ki mata yani ki devi chaya bhi vaha bethi apne putra or uske ansh ka ye sangram dekh rahi thi.

Tabhi vaha chintit swar me narad ji prakat hue or devi chaya ko pranam kerte hue bole.

Narad ji :- ye kesi lila ker rahe h shani dev devi chaya , apne hi ansh se sangram , bhala is sab ki kya avashyakta h.

Ye baat aap or hum sabhi bhali bhanti jante h ki , shani dev ajay h or unhe tridev or trideviyo k alawa koi prajit ni ker sakta , karan matra shani ka ansh h , swayam shani ni.

Aap kuch kerte kyu ni devi , apne putra ko rokiye , kyunki karan to bina jyoti ko paye rukne wala ni h , chahe uske pran bhi kyu na chale jaye is sangram me.

Devi chaya :- devrishi ye aap bhalibhanti jante h ki shani ne ek baar jo than liya , wo use avashya purn kerta h , yahi gun karan ne bhi shani se prapt kiya h , isliye m bhi is sandarbh me kuch ni ker sakti .

Or aap to vyarth hi chintit ho rahe h devrishi, mat bhuliye shani h vo , jo kuch bhi , vo jo kuch bhi kerta h soch samjh ker or samaj k kalyan k liye hi kerta h , to uske kisi bhi karm per prashn chinh lagane ka koi sawal hi ni uttha .

Isliye hey devrishi aap kripya shant rahe or mujhe apne putra ki is lila ka anand lene dijiye.

Wahi dusri or .

Location :- samraat haveli.

Megha abhi hamesha ki tarah us sthan pe bethi hui mahadev ka dhyan ker rahi thi , tabhi vo bhi vichlit ho dhyan se bahar aagayi

Megha :- ye achanak se mera man vichlit kyu ho raha h , esa kyu pratit ho raha h ki mera koi apna kisi sankat me h.

Mujhe jaldi se is baare me pata kerna hoga , ye soch usne dobara dhyan me beth gayi.

Megha ko bhi apne dhyan me karan or shani dev ka maha sangram dikhai deta h , jise dekh wo chonk gayi or wapas dhyan se bahar aagayi or hath jod bolne lagi.

Megha rote hue :- hey shani dev , hey prabhu ye kya ker rahe h ap , esa anarth kyu bhagwan , mere.............. Se kya galti ho gayi ki aap apne ansh se yudh ker rahe h bhagwan .

Esa anarth mat kijiye prabhu , kripya shant hoker is sangram ko samapt ker dijiye bhagwan , verna bahut bada anarth ho jayega , or ager mere.............. Ko kuch hua , to aapki ye bhakt bhi jivit ni rah payegi prabhu , kripya shant ho jaiye.

Ye bol megha wahi mala leker shani dev ka dhyan kerne lagi.

Wahi dusri or

Naina us pishach k sath pishachon k raja k pass pahunch gayi , jaha vo ek badi si gufa me beth tha , din hone ki vajah se , lekin wo gufa bhi kisi mahal se kam ni thi , kyunki us raja ne apni mayavi shaktiyo se us gufa me mahal jesi har sukh suvidha banayi hui thi.

(M us raja ko Dracula 2 yani d2 likhunga).

D2 abhi apne bade se sofe pe tange pasare hue leta hua tha or ek glass me khun pi raha tha ,
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tabhi uski najar pishach k sath khadi naina or preety pe padi.


D2 :- are wah ranga(pishach) tune to aaj dil khush ker diya re , ek sath 2 2 itni kadak maal laker , inko to me apni vishesh dasi banaunga.

Ranga ghabra ker d2 k pass gaya or dhire se uske kan k pas bola.

Ranga :- are malik jara apni jawan ko lagam dijiye , verna lene k dene pad jayenge.

D2 :- abe chutiye tu mujhe dara raha h or vo bhi in ladkiyo se.

Ranga :- are malik puri baat to sun lo , ye koi mamuli ladki ni h(preety ki or ishara kerte hue ) ye ladki ek trittya h.

D2 ye sunte hi chonk k khada ho gaya or bola .

D2 :- kkkya trittya.

Naina :- ha trittya or wo bhi koi mamuli trittya ni , maharaj samrat ne hume bheja h tera ant kerte hue.

Ye sun k to d2 ki gand gale me aagayi or vo gidgidate hue bola.

D2 :- maharaj ne mujhe marne ko bheja h , per kyu.

Preety :- kyunki tume sabko ye bata diya h ki maharaj ka thikana kaha h.

D2 :- ni ni mane esa kuch ni kiya , ye jhut h.

Preety :- to kya tum ye kahana chahate ho ki maharaj jhut bol rahe h.

D2 :- ni ni mane esa to ni kaha , lekin jhut m bhi ni bol raha , mane to unhe akhiri baar hi tab dekhe hi salo ho gaye.

Naina :- kab or kaha dekha tha tune , bata.

D2 :- jab vo apni pujarin , danav dadi komolika ko darshan dene aaye the, madhavgarh me.

Preety :- madhavgarh me kaha.

D2 :- madhavgarh me ....

D2 bolte bolte ruk gaya or use dal me kuch kala hone ka ahasas ho gaya , tab usne apni ankhe band ki to use positive shakti ka ahasas hua , jisse vo samjh gaya ki ye dono use bakra bana rahi h.

D2 haste hue :- bahut chalak samjhti h na khud ko tu ladki , per ek bevkufi to tune ker di , yaha aane se pahale tujhe apne yantra or vesi hi pavitr chijo ko kahi chod k aana chahiye tha .

Ranga ye samrat ki bheji hui ni , balki koi bhut nashak h jo hamara nash kerne or hamse maharaj k bhed lene aayi h.

Or ye trittya ek gaddar h , jo samraat k khilaf ja rahi h, bandi bana lo dono ko.

Ranga ye sun apne dant bahar nikalta h or aawaz ker apne sathiyo ko bulata h.

Lekin bas 10 jane hi vaha pahunche kyunki bakiyon ka kaam to preety ne pahale hi tamam ker diya tha .

D2 :- kaha rah gaye wo sare nikamme

Preety :- kahi tum inko to ni bula rahe.

Ye bol preety ne apna ek hath aage kiya , jisse ek roshni nikal gufa ki divar se takrayi or waha ek tv screen ban gayi or us screen per mare hue sare pishachon ki lashe dikhne lagi.

D2 :- ni chodunga tumhe, bhale hi m tumse ni lad sakta , per teri ye dost to maregi

Ye bol d2 apne chamgadad roop me aagaya or naina p jhapat pada .

Naina ne us per firring kerni chahi to ye kya goliya hi khatam ho gayi or jese usne apna khanjar nikala .

Lekin usse pahale wo kuch ker pati ranga ne ek bada sa patthar naina k hath pe de mara , jisse wo khanjar uske hath se chut k gir gaya.

Preety naina ki madad k liye aage bhadi to ranga samet sare 20 pishachon ne use charo or se gher liya tha, or wo unse ulajhne me lagi hui thi , halaki wo sab ek trittya k aage kuch ni the , per preety abhi apni shaktiyon ko puri tarah full power m use ni ker pa rahi thi abhi , jab usne pahale wo puple gola bana ker choda tha ,uske baad se use kuch kamjori mahasoos ho rahi thi , fir bhi vo unse lad rahi thi .

Wahi d2 naina ki or bhadne laga , or haste hue bola.

D2 :- ab kese bachegi ladki , tere sare hathiya to khatam ho gaye.

Yr bol wo naina k jese hi karib aa us per hamla kerna chaha , tabhi naina ne apna secret hathiyar nikal ker d2 pe dal diya .

Wo hathiyar or kuch ni bas lahsoon ka ras tha , lekin lahsoon ka ras pishachon p tejab ki tarah kaam kerta h , or naina ye baat janti thi , isliye emergency k liye usne ek choti si bottle me ras dal ker layi thi or apni shorts ki pichli jeb me usne rakh liya tha use.

Ras sidhe d2 k chahare pe gira tha , jisse usse bhayanak jalan hone lagi or wo apne chahre pe hath rakh chikhne laga.

Naina ne usi time moke ka fayda utha , jaldi se apne bag se bargad ki lakdi ka bana trishul nikala or d2 k sine m dil wali side ghop diya.

Jiske sath hi d2 chinkhta chilata hua mar gaya or uske marte hi baki pishach bhi kamjor pad gaye , or tabhi preety ne bhi moke ka fayda utha ek bada sa aag ka gola banaya or unki or fek diya , jise wo sare bache hue pishach bhi tadaf tadaf k mar gaye.

Jiske sath kalgarh ka jungle pishach mukt ho gaya.

Lekin tabhi d2 k sharir se ek pile rang ka gola nikla or naina k paas ja ker ruk gaya.

Use chune k liye jese hi naina ne apna hath uthaya to wo gola apne aap hi aagaya or wo apne aap hi ek lohe k tukde me badal gaya.

Dekh ker mano esa lag raha tha ki vo kisi hathiyar ka hisa ho , jiske aage or piche dono ka hissa ni tha.

Naina ne is baare ne baad me sochne ka soch use bag me rakha or preety k paas gayi



Preety ko kamjori se chakkar aane lage , lekin uske girne se pahale hi naina ne use sambhal liya or sahar deker jungle k bahar aagayi or preety ko aaram kerne ka bol vo khud gadi chala nikal padi wapas nahar singh ki haveli ki or.

Lekin jesa ahsaas megha ko ho raha tha , achanak se use bhi hone laga , use to kuch samjh hi ni aaraha tha , esa kyu ho raha h , lekin use bhi ahasas ho raha tha ki jese koi apna musibat me h.

Naina :- hey maa , ye kesi lila h aapki , kyu ese ahasas mujhe bar bar hote h , jese kabhi mera koi bahut karibi mere pass ho or ab ye ki ab vo sankat me h ma.

Maa meri bas aapse yahi prathna h ki ager mere ahasas me jara bhi satya h to he maa , wo jo bhi h , unki raksha kijiyega..

Ese hi prathna ker wo apne raste nikal padi.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- karan house

Sonam or rohan ka aaj last exam bhi khatam ho gaya tha , to vo aaj ghar aaker dopahar me so gaye the , dono ek hi room me ek sath hi so rahe the , lekin dono k dil me koi galat bhavna ni thi , vo bas ek bhai bahan ki tarah hi soye hue the.

Tabhi achanak se soti hui sonam k chahare pe bechani k bhav aane lage or wo achanak tez aawaj me bhai bolte hue uth gayi.

Sonam ki aawaz sun rohan bhi hadbada ker uth gaya or sonam ko hampte hue dekh , wo uski pith sahalate hue bola.

Rohan :- kya hua sonu , koi bura sapna dekha.

Sonam :- ha bhai esa hi kuch samjh lijiye , mujhe ba jane ese kyu lag raha h ki karan bhai or di musibat me h .

Rohan :- off oh , gudiya tum bekar me pareshan ho rahi, wo bas ek bura sapna hi to tha , tum relax ho jao , karan or jyoti bilkul thik honge.

Sonam :- ni bhai , mera man ni man raha , mujhe abhi bhai se bat kerni h.

Rohan :- acha thik h sonu , m abhi karan ko phone lagata hu.

Ye bol rohan karan ko phone lagata h , lekin karan ka phone not reachable aaraha tha.

Sonam :- dekha bhai , unka phone bhi ni lag raha , mujhe bahut dar lag raha h bhai, kuch kijiye

Rohan kayi baar try kerta h , lekin phone ni lag raha tha or lagta bhi keSe vo prathvi pe the hi ni.

Rohan sonam ko samjhane ki bahut koshis ker raha tha , lekin wo sun hi ni rahi thi.

Rohan :- sonu please tum shant ho jao , mujh per ni to kam se kam apne kanha pe to bharosa rakho , vo karan or jyoti ko bhala kuch hone denge kya.

Kanha ka nam sun sonam sidha mandir ki or bhagi or ladoo gopal k pass jaker boli.

Sonam :- kanha dekho na mera man bahut ghabra raha h , jese ki bhai koi musibat me ho , tum to sab kuch jante hona kanha , agr meri is ghabrahat me jara si bhi sachai h to please kanha , apni is bhakt ki prathna suno kanha or mere bhai or di ki raksha kerna.

Ye bol sonam vahi beth gayi or prathna kerne lagi , rohan k chahre pr bhi pareshani or dar ki lakire saf saf dikh rahi thi or wo bhi sonam k sath vahi beth prathna kerne laga.

Or karan k purane ghar p kavya ka bhi kuch yahi hal tha , wo bhi ishvar se prathna ker rahi thi.

Back to the hero .

Karan or shani dev ka sangram bahut hi bhishan ho gaya tha ab , ab dono or se hi or bhi ghatak ban chal rahe the.

Lekin karmfal data shani ko karan bhi kitni der takkar de pata , shani dev k har ban ka tez or bal badta ja raha tha .

Ab to ye hal ho gaya tha ki karan k sare tir kat rahe the , or shani dev ke tir chodne ki gati bhi bhadti ja rahi thi

Ab to ye haal ho gaya tha ki karan unki speed ka mukabla hi ni ker pa raha tha , vo jitni der me ek tir chodta utne me to shani dev 5 tir chod dete , jinko wo dodge bhi ni ker pata .

Karan man me :- ager esa hi chalta raha to m shigra hi parajit ho jaunga or meri jyoti mujhse hamesha hamaesha dur ho jayegi .

(Nam ankho se ) ni ni me esa ni hone de sakta , m apni jyoti ko khud se dur ni hone de sakta , per m karu bhi to kya karu , kyunki mere samne pratidvandvi k roop me khade bhi shani dev h , jinse m chaha ker bhi na to lad sakta hu or na hi jit sakta hu.

Karan puri tarah se hatash hota ja raha tha ki apni vivashata k kaaran , use kuch samjh ni aaraha tha .

Tabhi shani dev ka ek or tir aaaker karan k sharir me dhas gaya or vo gir pada.

Jyoti rote hue fir se chilayi .

Jyoti :- bhaiiiiii

Karan uthne ki koshis kerte hue :- mat ro meri gudiya , m bilkul thik hu , tum chinta mat ker , m shighra hi tujhe mukt kerwa lunga.


Jyoti rote hue :- bhai ab or mujhse aapki ye halat ni dekhi jati , aap please mujhe chod k chale jaiye yaha , m aapse duri kese n kese fir bhi bardasht ker lungi ,per ye m kadapi bardasht ni ker paungi ki meri vajah se aapko meri ankho k samne kuch ho gaya ho to.

Jyoti ne ye itni hriday vidarak baat kah to di thi , per ye jyoti hi janti thi ki is baat ko kahane me usne kitni ashaniya pida mahasus ki thi , karan se uska bichadna matlab tha , uski mrityu . Lekin usse apne bhai ki ye halat bhi ni dekhi ja rahi thi , isliye usne dil per patthar rakh ye baat kahi.

Isliye bhai please aap lot jaiye , shayad niyati ne hamara sath yahi tak likha tha.

Karan rote hue chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiii, ye asambhav h gudiya , ye karab apni jyoti ko kabhi ni chod k ja sakta or ager ye niyati h to (shani dev ki or dekhte hue ) aaj us niyati ko likhne wale ishvar ko bhi apne kaal chakra me parivartan kerna hoga, kyunki aaj ager karan jyoti se vimukh hua to ye karan bhi jivit ni rahega or apne is bhakt ki mrityu k jimedar aap honge shani dev aap.

Shani dev :- jo kaha h ager use purn kerna chahate ho to tir apne dhanush k chalayo karan , shabdo k ni.

Ye bol unhone ek or tir karan pe choda , or karan ne bhi khud ko sambhal tir choda, lekin ek baar fir karan ka hi tir kat gaya.

Karan man me :- esa chalta raha to is sangram ka nirnay mere khilaf hi aayega.per m karu bhi to kya karu.

Tabhi ek sath 2 tir karan ki or aaye , jisme se ek to karan ne apne tir se kaat diya , per dusra uski bah ko chu k nikal gaya.

Karan man me :- hey mahadev , hey prabhu , apne is bhakt ki sahayata kijiye .

Hey triloki nath , apne bhakt ki apne hi priya shishya se raksha kijiye.

Shani dev man me :- putra tum marg jante ho ya yu kaho wo tumhari chetna me hi h , avashyakata h to bas tumhe apni chetna ka aatm manthan kerne ka, tab tumhe swatah hi marg ka gyan ho jayega.

Tabhi ek or tir karan k ek bah per lag gaya , karan ne use nikala or fir mahadev se prathna kerte hue bola.

Karan :- hey bholenath , kya aapko apne bhakto ki is dasha pe jara si bhi daya ni aarahi , jo aap koi pratikriya ni ker rahe , ya apke hi is das ki bhakti me kuch kami rah gayi jo .......

Karan apni bat bolte bolte hi bich me rah gaya or uske chahre pe ek asha bhari muskan aagayi ,jise dekh kfd k chahare pe bhi muskan agayi.

Karan man me :- mil gaya marg , ha yahi ek matra upaay bacha h jisse meri vijay nishchit bhi ho jayegi or shani dev ka apman bhi na hoga.

Bhakti , bhakti hi wo marg h evam vo kavach h ,jiske aage ishvar bhi apne bhakt k aage har jate h.

(Mahadev se man me) dhanyawad bholenath , aapne apne bhakt ko marg hi dikha hi diya.

Ye sab soch karan ne apna dhanush dharti pe rakh diya.

Shani dev sab jante hue bhi bole.

Shani dev :- kya hua karan , itni shigra hi apni prayay swikar ker le.

Karan muskurate hue :- jo prajay swikar ker le wo karmfal.data ka ansh kaha bhagwan .

Karan hath jod shani dev ka sabse priya stotra gana shuru kerta h.

Karan :- krishnah , shani pingal mand sorihi

kono-antaka roudra-yama-tha babhruh
krishnah shanih pingala manda sourih
nityam smrito yo harate cha peedam
tasmai namah shree ravi-nandanaya

Karan na keval stotra k shlok ga raha tha ,balki sath sath un stotra ka bhavarth bhi ga raha tha.

Bhavarth 1 :- bhakti bhav se samarpit ho ker jo das naam pukarega , sada sada jo japta rahe dukh uska nasht ho jayega.

Hey ravinandan namaskar , namaskar prabhu namaskar.

Karan :- shlok 2 :-
tilairya-vair-masha gudanna danaih
Lohena neelambara danato va
preenati mantrair-nijavasare cha
tasmai namah shree ravi-nandanaya

Bhavarth 2 :- til, gud, udad ,ann , jou ,loha ,nilvastra jo kerte dan , shani mantro ka jaap kare to shani kerte unka kalyan , shani mantro ka jap kare to shani karte unka.

Shradha bhav se namaskar , bhakti bhav se namaskar .

Karan :- shlok :-3
Shanaishtakm ch pyatah prabhat.
Nityam suputrahi pashu bhanhveshch .
Pathetu sokhyam bhuvi bhan yuktah
Prapnoti nirvan padam tadante

Bhavarth :- shani ashtak ka path kare jo subah sada jo milker parivar , jivan lila me sukhi rahe , mrityu k baad mile moksh ka dvar ,

Jivan lila me sukhi rahe , mrityu k baad mile moksh ka dwaar.

Hey ravi nandan namaskar , hey ravinandan namaskar.

Karan apna gaan purn kerte hue , ghutno pe beth gaya or shani dev k charno m apna shish rakh diya.

Karan ki madur aawaz me apna priya stotra sun shani dev kafi prasan ho gaye the or prabhavit bhi .

Unhone apna dhanush gayab kiya or karan ko khud uthate hue bole.

Shani :- utho putra , ab iski aavashyakta ni h , tum meri is pariksha or yu kahe ki antim parikrama me bhi uttirn hue.

Tumne aaj ye pramanit ker diya , ki tumhari rachna ka mera nirnay bilkul uchit tha.


Tabhi waha narad ji prakat hue ,, jinhe dekh karan or jyoti ko kafi khushi hui or wo unhe pranam kerte h .

Karan or jyoti ek sath :- pranam devrishi.

Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Aayushmam bhavah putra , sakal manorath purn ho tumhare putri.

Shiv priya bilkul uchit kH rahe h bacho aaj Na keval Tumne apni budhi , apni shakti or apni bhakti se marg me aayi har kathinaee ko saralta se paar kiya, apitu is pure sansaar ko prem ki ek nayi paribhasha se bhi avgat karwaya .

Tumne aaj sidh kiya h ki man me sachi bhakti or apne priya k prati vishuddh prem ho to , vyakti ishwer se bhi jit jata h.

Fir narad ji shani dev se bole .

Narad ji :- prabhu , kripya ab to jyoti ko mukt ker apne ansh per kripya kijiye.

Shani dev ashirwad dete hue :- tathastu ..


Itna bolte hi karan or jyoti k bich ki wo divaar hat gayi , lekin karan ab bahut jyada thak chuka tha, jiska kaaran tha ki ek to uski itni kathin yatra or uper se fir sakshat shani se yudh , jisme wo bahut ghayal ho chuka tha.

Lekin fir bhi vo himat kerte hue utha or jyoti ki or bhadne laga , or khushi se muskurate hye jyoti bhi karan ki or dhire dhire badne lagi.

Lekin karan k kadam kamjori k mare ladkhada gaye or wo girne laga , jab jyoti ne ye dekha to wo dodte hue karan k pas gayi or use sambhal te hue use leker niche beth gayi or karan ka sir apni god me takh rone lagi.

Karan ko to is halat me bhi jyoti k rone ki chinta ni thi or wo lete lete hi jyoti k ansu ponch na rone ka ishara kerta h or muskurane ka ishara kerta h.

Karan ka apne prati itna prem dekh , jyoti ki khushi ki koi sima hi ni thi , lekin use rona bhi aaraha tha , ki usi prem k chalte karan ki ye halat thi.

Isliye usne karan k chahare ko rote hue sine se laga liya , or bolne lagi.

Jyoti :- bhai itna bhi prem mat kijiye mujhe , jiska karj m na chuka pau.

Karan :- kesi baat kerti h pagli , prem bhi kabhi koi karz ho sakta h kya or tu to meri jan meri shwas sab kuch h , bhala tujhse dur hoker mera astitv rahata kya, tu sirf meri bahan hi ni , meri aatma h tu , or bina apni aatma k bhala m .Jinda rah sakta hu kya.

Jyoti karan k muh pe hath rakh esi mahus baat bolne se mana kerti h , tabhi achanak karan k khasi aane lagi or jyoti ghabra k pani dhundne k liye uthne wali hi thi ki tabhi kisi ne piche se jyoti k sir ko sahalaya or jyoti k kano m ek aawaz padi.

Aawaz :- jyoti beti.

Jyoti jab ye aawaz sunti h to chonk k jese hi piche mud ker dekha to wo khushi se

Jyoti :- maa

Ye bol aawaz wali shaks k gale lag gayi , jo or koi ni asha thi.

Asha ne jyoti ko gale lagaye hue hi karan k sir ko utha ker apni god me rakh liya.

Karan bhi apni ma ko dekh khush ho gaya or itna hi bol paya

Karan :- maaa

Or iske sath hi vo behosh ho gaya , jisse jyoti ghabra gayi or asha se boli.

Jyoti rote hue :- mA dekho na bhai ko kya ho gaya , kuch kijiye na ma.

Asha :- ro mat beti , karan ko kuch ni hoga.

Ye bol wo shani dev ki or dekhti h or shani dev bhi ishara samajh karan ko uthate h or usi mahal ke ek kaksh me le jaker letate h.

Shani dev :- putri chinta ki koi baat ni h , karan keval durbalta ke karanavash , behosh hua h.

(Apne hath me ek lep ka katora mangwa ker ) lo putri ise karan ke tan k ghavo pe laga do , isse wo shighra hi swasth ho jayega.

Jyoti unse lep le ker karan k lagane lagi or jab usne wo lep laga diya to asha ne jyoti k sir per hath fera , jisse jyoti ko bhi nind aagayi or wo bhi karan k side me hi so gayi.

Fir un dono ko sote hue chod asha or shani dev dusre ek kaksh me gaye .

Jaha asha ne apne asli roop me aagayi , ji ha dosto ek baar fir devi chaya hi asha k roop me aayi thi , karan or jyoti se milne.



Asha ka chahara bilkul devi chaya jesa hi tha , bas unko apne vastra badlne ki hi avashyakta hoti thi .

Shani :- pranam mata.

Devi chaya :- kalyan ho putra .

Ye bol unhone shani ko gale laga liya , parantu jese hi devi chaya ka hath shani dev k tan se chua , to shani dev ki halki si aah nikal gayi.

Jise sun devi chaya ek baar tk ghabra gayi , fir unhe samjh aagaya ki mamla kya h.

Devi chaya :- putra apne uper ka vastra utaro.

Shani :- are ni ni mata , iski koi avashyakta ni h , m bilkul swasth hu.

Devi chaya :- are kaha na ek baar vastra utaro , apni mata se kya sharmana.

Ye bol devi chaya ne khud hi uper ka vastr utar diya shani ka or jese hi unhone esa kiya to shani ka tan dekh ker wo ghabra gayi , kyunki unke badan pe kayi jagah tir k nishan the.

Hua yu tha ki jese jese shani dev karan per yani apne ansh per pariksha k chalte prahar ker pida pahucha rahe the , utni hi pida wo swyam ko bhi de rahe the.

Devi chaya nam ankho se :- ye ky putra , itni chot , is sabki kya avashyakta thi putra.

Shani :- avashyakta thi mata , bhale hi karan ki pariksha lena mera karm tha , parantu apne hi ek ansh or apne guru k param bhakt k uper prahar jo mane kiye the , uska karmfal to mujhe bhi milna avashyak tha na.

Manushya sochte h ki unke karmo k dand k roop me jo m unhe kasht deta hu , uske mujhe aanand aata h .

Parantu vo ye ni samjhte ki jitne kasht m unhe deta hu , usse kayi guna pida mujhe swayam hoti h .

Isiliye to m kisi ko marg per lane se pahale use chetavani avashya deta hu mata , ki vo anuchit marg ko tyag uchit marg pe aajaye.

Devi chaya :- m bhi na kitni murkh hu , jise baato me swayam devaguru brihaspati ni hara paye , to m bhala kon hoti hu.

Ye bol devi chaya bhi shani k tan per oshadhi ka lep lagati h or fir kuch der unhe bhi vishram karwati h.

Fir sham tak karan or jyoti jag jate h to apne pas apni maa (devi chaya) ko dekh khushi se jhum uthe or unke gale lag khushi rote hue bole.

Karan :- mumma aap aagayi , aap usdin hume chod ker kyu chali gayi thi .

Jyoti :- ha mumma , hum ne aapko kitna miss kiya or ye aapke kapdo ko kya hua , ye ese kapde kyu .

Darasal ab devi chaya apne devi vale roop me hi thi, unhone apne kapde ni badle the , kyunki wakt aagaya tha ki ab karan or jyoti ko apna sach batane ka.

Tabhi kaksh me shani dev bhi aate h , jinhe dekh karan or jyoti unhe pranam kerte h.

Per shani dev un dono ko ashirwad dete hue , asha yani apni mata devi chaya ko pranam kerte h.

Jise dekh karan or jyoti dono hi heran ho jate h , tab shani dev bole.

Shani dev :- m janta hu putra , tumhare man me kayi prashna h , jinme se kuch ke uttar m tumhe deta hu

Putra jo tumhare samne abhi mojud h vo meri bhakt aasha ni , balki surya patni , arthat meri mata Devi chaya h, or mata ne hi us din tum dono ko us din sambhala tha


Ye sun to mano karan or jyoti mano jam se hi gaye , abhi jo thodi der pahale unke chahre pe khushi thi vo secondo me gayab ho gayi

Jise dekh devi chaya ko acha ni laga or unhone wapas se karan or jyoti ko sine se laga boli.

Devi chaya :- ha putra ye satya h ki m asha ni hu , parantu ye satya bhi ni h ki tum dono meri santan ni h ki tum dono meri santan ni ho .

Tum dono hi mere putra shani k hi ansh ho , is naate m tumhari bhi mata hui

Karan or jyoti hath jod :- dhanyawad devi, aapne hume sahi samay per sambhala or hume durbal hone se roka.

Devi chaya :- are abhi to kaha mane , tum dono bhi meri santan ho , bhala koi mata ko bhi dhanyawad kahata h , or ha ye devi ka sambhodan band kero , abse tum mujhe shani ki bhanti hi mata kaha karoge or jab bhi aavashyakata ho mera smaran ker lena , tumhari mata sadev tumhare liye upasthit rahegi.

Karan or jyoti :- ji mata.

Ye sun devi chaya muskurate hue apni bahe fela deti h or jisme karan or jyoti sama jate h.

Kuch der yuhi devi chaya ne karan or jyoti ko gale lagaye rakha fir wo sab alag hue.

Shani dev :- putra karan , ab samay aachuka h , karmfal pane ka.

Ye bol shani dev ne apna ek hath uper kiya or ek nili roshni k sath unke hath me nilmani aagayi .
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Shani :- apne puraskar ko grahan kero putra.

Karan :- jo aagya prabhu.

Ye bol karan hath jod apni ankhe band ker leta h , jiske sath hi nilamani apne aap udker karan me sama gayi. Or usike sath kuch der tak karan ka sharir nile rang ki roshni se chamakta raha .

Fir dhire dhire karan samanya hone laga , tabhi usko fir se thodi kamjori si mahasus hui , lekin jyoti ne sambhal liya.

Shani dev gambhir swar me bole :- putra nilmani ko to tumne praapt ker liya h , parantu .

Jyoti :- parantu kya shani dev.

Shani dev :- parantu putri , nilmani ki shaktiya karan k sharir me dhire dhire jagrit hogi , jiske chalte ek mah tak karan apni baki shaktiyon ka prayog bhi bhali bhanti ni ker payega , wo lagbhag ek samanya manushy saman hi hoga.

Isliye putri tumhe karan ka vishesh dhyan rakhna hoga , karan ki suraksha ab tumhara dayitv h , kyunki aane wale samay me tum dono per , visheshkar karan pe sankat ke megh mandra rahe h , jinse keval tum hi karan ki raksha ker sakti ho

Isliye smaran rahe putri tumhara prem or karan k prati vishwas hi karan ki sabse badi shakti or kavach h , ise kabhi bhi khone mat dena.

Jyoti :- jesa aap kahe bhagwan , aaj tak mere bhai ne meri har sankat se bhalibhanti raksha ki h .

Ab mera samay aagaya h apne bhai ki raksha ka uttaradayitv nibhane ka ,jise me apne pure man se nibhaungi, mera prem or vishwas apne bhai k liye , us kailash ki tarah adig h bhagwan , jis per mahadev nivas kerte h .

Is vishwas ko is sansar ki koi bhi shakti khatam ni ker sakti.

Shani dev man me :- asha to meri bhi yahi h putri ki bhavishya me esa hi rahe.

Shani dev :- vese putra karan , tumne mujhe pahachana kese.

Karan muskurate hue :- prabhu aap sach me apne guru mahadev ki bhanti bhole h .

Apke gale me sthit is mala se hi mujhe aapki pahachan ho gayi thi prabhu.

Or ha bhagwan apko apne janmdivas ki hardik shubkamnaye .

Flashback.

Jab karan or jyoti padmanabh mandir jane ko teyar ho rahe the, tabhi unhe dhyan aaya ki aaj to shani amavasya h or sath me shani jayanti bhi.

Itna dhyan me aate hi dono bhai bahan pass k mojud shani mandir me gaye , jo aaj itne bade utsav k kaaran braham muhurat me hi khul chuka tha.

Vaha pahunche to un dono ne paya ki mandir to khul chuka h , lekin puja samagri ki koi bhi dukan abhi tak ni khuli to karan ne apni chutki bajayi or uske hath me puja ki sabhi samagri aagayi .

Arthath sarso ka tel , til , udad or shani dev se sambandhit sabhi samgri , jinke pese karan ne apni shaktiyo se hi band dukano k gale me rakh diye the.

Jyoti :- ye kya bhai , aapne mala to mangwayi hi ni.

Mala isliye ni aayi thi , kyunki us dukan me phulo ki mala mojud ni thi.

Tabhi jyoti ko idea aaya or usne mandir k bagiche se ful chun ker vahi beth ek mala banyi un fulo ki or dono bhai bahan mandir me jaker puja kerte h or shani dev ki murti per wo mala chada dete h

Ab shani dev to thare saral swabhav k , karan or jyoti ki bhakti bhav se chadayi hui mala unhonne turant swikar ker li or vo mala murti se gayab ho sidha shani dev k gale e aagayi thi

Or jab shani dev ne karan ko apni pahachan batane ko kaha to karan turant us mala ko pahachan gaya or uper se shani dev k vastra or rang roop dekh ker use ye baat confirm bhi ho gayi.

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Devi chaya :- manna padega , mera karan putra satya me hi kafi budhiman h

Shani dev :- aakhir ansh kiska h .

Devi chaya majak kerte hue :- mera .

Jiske sath sab hasne lage . Fir karan or jyoti ne shani dev se lotne ki aagya mangi.

Shani dev :- thik h putro , ab tum prasthan ker sakte ho or meri baat sadev smaran rakhna ki tum dono ka prem or ek jutta hi tumhari sabse badi shakti h.

Fir kuch bate devi chaya or shani dev ne karan or jyoti ko samjhayi or fir shani dev ne karan or jyoti ko ankhe band kerne ko bola .

Or kuch samay bad jab dono ne apni ankhe kholi , to unhone paya ki vo ab apne hotel k room me h.

Karan or jyoti abhi is yatra se thak chuke the , isliye wo kapde badal ker ek dusre ki baho me lipat ker so gaye .

Dharti lok k samay k anusar to unhe bas ek hi din alag rahna pada tha, parantu rasatal ka samay chakra dharti se bhin tha , jiske anusar wo pure ek hafte baad mile the or ek dusre ki baho me the .

Jis karan unhe parmanand ki anubhuti ho rahi thi , jiske karan unhe jald hi nind aagayi.

Wahi dusri or sonam , megha ,naina or kavya ko bhi ab chen aagaya tha , jiske liye unhone ishvar ko dhanywad kiya .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Sham ko karan ki ankh pahale khul jati h to wo pata h ki uski jan yani jyoti sote hue kab uski chati p aagayi na to use na jyoti ko pata chala

Jyoti sote hue bahut hi pyari dikh rahi thi , bilkul jeSe ek choti bachi ho , karan use kuch der yu hi dekhte raha , uska man to ni tha , apni gudiya ko uthane ka , per kal unhe jana tha , jiski unhe teyari bhi kerni thi.

Isliye usne pyaar se jyoti ko dono galo ko chum k, halke se hotho ko bhi chum liya.

Or karan k esa kerte hi jyoti uth gayi or pyaar se boli.

Jyoti :- good evening bhaiyu...

Karan :- good evening my sweety , to tum jag rahi thi , fir ye sone ki acting kyu ker rahi thi

Jyoti bacho ki tarah :- ager ni kerti to apni pyare bhaiyu ki itni pyari kissi kese milti or kiss do na bhai

Karan :- acha natkhat or kisi chahiye ..

Or ye bol wo jyoti ko apne niche leker gudgudi kerne laga or jyoti khil khila k hasne lagi .

Uska khilkhilata pyara chahera dekh karan to usi me kho sa gaya , or ye baat jab jyoti ne dekhi to wo sharmate hue boli.

Jyoti :- bhai ese mat ghuro, mujhe sharam aati h.

Karan :- dekhne de mujhe gudiya , tera ye sunder or masum chahera , tu ni janti tera ye bhai kese raha bina tere rasatal lok me , jis chahare ko bina dekhe , m rahane ka soch bhi ni sakta tha , us chahre k didaar in ankho ko ek hafte baad hua h meri bahana , in ankho ki pyaas bujha lene de meri gudiya .

Jyoti nam ankho se:- bhai aapse dur ho ker mujhe bhi kaha chen tha , bhale hi shani dev ne mujhe us mahal me har suvidha di , per sath sath mane aapka pura safar bhi dekha , kese aapne mere liye , kitni taklif jheli , kese aapne aman or jhumki ka nayay kiya mane sab dekha bhai,

mujhe khud p bahut gussa bhi aaya ki vaha meri jaan itni taklif jhel raha h or yaha me aaram se bethi hu , lekin shani dev ki maya k kaaran m kuch ker bhi to ni sakti thi na bhai.

Jyoti ki ankho me ansu dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha or vo use sine se lagate hue bola.

Karan :- are meri gudiya tu bat bat pe rone kyu lagti h , jo hua use badla to ni ja sakta na , ab use bhul ja.

Wese ye sab acha hi to hua , humare karan pure rasatal ko pishachon se mukti mili or hume aman or shweta k roop me naye dost bhi .

Kuch din baad jab meri shaktiya jab wapas mil jayegi , to m tumhe bhi waha lekar jaunga .Tumhe un dono se mil ker bahut maja aayega

Jyoti :- sirf aman or shweta se hi bhai , aap kisi or ko bhul to ni rahe ya mujhe kisi se chupa rahe ho

Karan samjh gaya ki uska ishara kaya ki or tha , karan ko jab ye pata chala ki jyoti ne sab kuch dekha h to uski fat gayi ye soch kee ki ,ki usne jarur kaya k sath ki gayi uski masti bhi dekh li hogi.

Karan :- or kon gudiya , tu kiski baat ker rahi h m kuch samjha ni.

Karan ne janbhujker anjan banne ki koshis ki , bachne ki koshis kerte hue.

Jyoti thode gusse me :- kyu itni jaldi bhul gaye , aapke dost aman ki bhabhi , yani ki apni hone wali wife yani us kaya k baare me.

Ye sab kya chal raha h bhai , m kuch din aapse dur kya hui , aapne ye sab shuru ker diya.

Karan ghabra gaya, vo bhale hi duniya ka rakshak tha, per use apni bahan k gusse se bahut dar lagata tha.

Karan ghabrate hue :- are are gudiya , jesa tu soch rahi h vesa kuch ni h , vo to sirf meri ek saheli h.

Jyoti :- acha to kon apni saheli ko apni hone wali wife bolta h.

Karan or jyada ghabrate :- are meri lado m to wo majak ker raha tha, bhal jiski tere jesi itni pyari gf hogi , vo kisi or ki or kyu dekhega bhala , koi pagal hi hoga wo to

Karan ko yu ghabrata dekh jyoti khud ko control ni ker payi or jor se hasne lagi.

Jyoti :- are mere budu golu bhaiya , just relax me to majak ker rahi thi.

Karan ki ye sun jan me jan aayi or wo bola.

Karan :- kya chipkali tune to mujhe dara hi diya.

Jyoti :- kyu itna dar lagta h mujhse .

Karan :- dar ni gudiya , ye to pyaar h mera tere liye or dar to bas is baat ka h ki tum mujhse dur na ho jao kisi galat fehmi k chalte hue.

Jyoti karan k gale lagte hue :- awwww , you are so sweet bhaiya , or aaapko darne ki jarurat ni h mere bhaiyu , aapki jyoti ko apse dur koi ni ker sakta , mane aapse pahale bhi bola h na , aapse jyada bharosa to m mahadev p bhi na karu to fir ye dar kyu bhai.

Karan :- pata ni gudiya jabse hum rasatal se lote h tabse ek ajib sa dar lag raha h , jese kuch bahut bura hone wala h , jese ki tujse mujhe koi dur ker dega.

Jyoti :- aap chinta mat kero bhai , aapse dur to mujhe swayam ishvar bhi na ker paye , to ye chote moti musibaton se kya darna.

Yu hi karan ko jyoti santwana deti h or fir dono bhai bahan thoda tiruanntapuram shahr ghumte h or raat ko hotel aake so jate h


Wahi dusri or


Ek ghar me ek ladka or ek ladki ek dusre ko kiss ker rahe the , ladka bahut hi wildly kiss ker raha tha or ladki bhi uska pura sath de rahi thi.

Wo dono ek dusre ko kiss kam ker rahe the or kaat jyada rahe the , jese ek dusre ko kha hi jayenge.

Kuch der baad ladka ladki k hotho ko chod uski gardan ko chumne laga , jisse ladki siskiya lene lagi.

Ladki :- aahhh assi. Ohhh yeah.

Fir ladka ladki k piche jaa ker uske boobs dabate hue uski gardan chumne laga or uske mummo ko janvaro ki tarah dabane laga

Kuch der isi position m rahane k baad ladki se bardasht ni hua or usne piche mud ker ek hi jhatke me
Buttons ko todte hue uski shirt ko utar diya or uski chati ko chumti hui pent k uper se uske land ko pakadke boli.

Ladki :- bas mere raja , ab or mat tarsao, ab or bardasht ni hota , ab apne ye ustad se meri muniya ki pyas bhuja do

Ladka us ladki ko baho me bhar ke chumte hue :- abhi thoda ruko to sahi janeman , abhi to maja shuru hua h.

Ye bol ladke ne ladki ka top fad dala , jisse uke aam jese bade bade boobs uske samne aagaye , jo ek choti si lal rang ki transparent bra me kaid the.

Ladke k to ye najara dekhte hi muh me pani aagaya or wo ladki k boobs p tut pada or bra k uper se hi unhe chusne or katne laga or ek hath se dusre boobs ko dabane laga or ladki ladke ka land pant k uper se dabane lagi

Ladke ne kiss kerte hue ladki ki shorts ko kab utar diya , ye us ladki ko bhi pata na chala or ab vo sirf hare yellow bra or yellow panty me rah gayi thi.

Panty m kapda na k barabar hi tha , jo bas uski chut ko dhak raha tha or wo panty string wali thi , transparent.

Fir ladka uski bra ko fad hi dala or uske boobs ko chuste hue ek hath us ladki ki panty m dal k chut ragadne laga.

Fir kuch der baad jab ladki se control na hua to usne ladke ko khud se alag kiya or niche ghutno k bal beth ker uski pant khol deti h

Ladke ne under wear ni pahana tha to , jese hi ladki ne pent kholi , to uska land spring ki tarah nikal ke ladki k chahare se takraya.

Ladka :- dekh kya rahi ho meri jaan , apne khilone se pyaar ni karogi.

Ye sunte hi ladki ne muskurate hue us ladke k land ko pahale to ache se chata or fir ek hi baar me uske adhe land ko muh me leker lolipop ki tarah chusne lagi.

Ladka :- aahhh ohhh , suck it , ese hi chus meri jaan, ese hi chus , kya mast chusti h re tu

Ye bol ladka khud hi apna land aage piche ker us ladki k muh ko chodne laga.

10 min land chuswane k baad , ladka ladki ko utha ke bed pe patak deta h or uski panty bhi fad k uski chut per tut pada or kute ki tarah uski chut chatne laga.

Ladki :- aahhh bhai ese hi chato meri chut , kha jao apni randi bahan ki chut , aah ese hi .

Ladka :- ha meri pyari randi bahana , aaj to teri chut kha jaunga , kya mast chut h teri , itne salo se chod raha hu , per aaj bhi utni hi tight h

Ladki :-. Aahh , ye sab mane aapke liye hi to kiya h bhai, roj exercise kerke aaj tak ise dhili ni hone diya

Aaahh chodo bhai , aapki jib se chodo meri chut.

Ladka apni jib ko apni bahan ki chut me daal kee aage piche ker raha tha or fir uski chut ko uper se leke niche tak chat ne laga

Ladki :- aah ab or bardaasht ni hota bhai , chod dalo mujhe , faad do meri bur apne is mote lode se viraj bhai , ab or ni bardast hota

(Ji ha dosto ye ladka or ladki or koi ni viraaj or maya hi the , jo ek dusre k sath sex ker rahe the.

Kam umer me maa baap k marne k baad , akele ye jab delhi me rah rahe the , to dono ek dusre ka bahut ache se khayal rakhte , dono bhai bahan kam dosto ki tarah jyada rahate or kab indono ko ek dusre se pyaar ho gaya , inhe khud hi ni pata chala or koi inke sath na hone ki vajah se inme kisi ka dar bhi ni tha .

Or ek din inhone ek dusre ko purpose ker diya or delhi me apna ghar badal ker waha pati patni ki tarah rahane lage or sex relation bhi inme ban chuke the.

In dono me pyaar jarur tha , lekin havas bhi dono me kut kut k bhari thi , viraaj k sexual relation or bhi kayi ladkiyo k sath the , jiska maya ko bhi pata tha , maya bhale hi viraaj k alawa kisi se ni chudwati , lekin use dusri ladkiyo ko apne bhai k niche letane me bhi kaafi maja aata

Yaha tak ki usne apni kayi saheliyon ko viraaj se chudwaya bhi , chahe pyaar k bahane , ya blackmail ker.

Jo ladki unki baato m na aati to uske liye bhi plan tha unke pas , wo raat ko us ladki ko as a friend rukne k liye bulate or usko nind ki dawai deke sula ker , uski nudes pic lelete or baad me use blackmail kerte.)

Viraj :- ha jarur meri darling , pahale apne bhai k land ko gila to ker de

Ye sun Maya uthi or uska dobara ek baar 2 min land chus k gila ker diya

Or fir viraj ne maya ki chut ki fanko p apna land rakh ek jordar dhaka mara , jisse uska pura land ek hi baar me pura maya ki chut me ghus gaya .

Jise maya ki ek jordar chikh nikal gayi or boli.

Maya :- aaah dhire kero na bhai , m bahan hu apki koi randi ni.

Viraj uske hoth chumte hue :- are meri randi bahan , tu to ese chila rahi h ,jese pahali baar chud rahi ho.

Ruk tujhe abhi maja deta hu.

Ye bol viraaj ne dhakke lagane shuru ker diye or uske boobs dabate hue use chodne laga.

Maya :- aaaaaahhhhhhhhh ohhhhhh, yeahhhhhh, chodo mujhe bhai , ese hi chodo mujhe or tej bhai or tej , fuck me hard aaaaahhhh ohhhhhhhhhhhh.

Kuch der tak viraj maya ko usi position me choda , fir usne use ghodi bana diya or ek hi jhatke me pura land uski chut me ghused ke chodne laga.


Viraaj :- aaahhhhh , kya tight chut h teri ,meri randi bahan , pura ka pura land jakda hua h isne .

Bol tujhe maja aaraha h ki ni meri randi.

Maya :- aaahhhh bhai , bHut maja aaraha h , ese hi chodo mujhe bhai meri chut ko faad dalo , m aapki randi hu bhai , apni chinal bahan ki chut ka aaj bhosda bana dalo.
Aaahhhh ohhh yeah , fuck me hard ,

Ye sun viraj or josh me aagaya or maya k balo ko khichte hue jor jor se use chodne laga .

Or fir uske balo ko chod ker , uski gand pe taphad barsate hue use chodne laga.

Maya :- aaah bhai aaaah fucke me deaper bhai , maro or maro bhai meri gand pe , aaahhhhh kya mast land h tera bhai , ese hi thodi na meri sari randi saheliya jo aapse chudi h wo apki tarife kerti ghumti h , ohh yeah.

Viraaj :- haa wo to h meri bahana , per sala bahut din ho gaya nayi chut chode hue .

Maya :- aaah bas kuch din or intezaar ker lo bhai , humare plan k kamyab hote hi vo kamini jyoti or vo randi riya , dono hi aapke niche hogi , fir ji bhar ke dono ki gand fadna.

Viraaj :- ha yar ,m to kabse us din ka intezaar ker raha hu jab us kutiya ko apne lode ka swad chakhau , sali kya. Mast maal h , per sare din apne us bhai k sath chipki rahati h , pata bhi kiya college me uske baare me , per sali pata hi ni kis miti ki bani h , kisi ko rati bhar bhi bhav ni deti.

Maya :- aaahhhh ohhhh bhav de ya na de usse kya fark padta h bhai tumhe , tere ko to bas uska ras nichodna h.a

Viraaj :- bas itna hi ni meri bahan , us sali ko to m apni rakhail banaunga , sali ki vajah se humne bahut bejiti sahi h z jiska hisab wo jindagi bhar chukayegi.

Maya :- bhai wo hoga jo hoga , pahale mujhe to thanda ker do...


Viraaj :- ha kyu ni meri rani bahana , le ...

Ye bol viraj maya ki chut me or jor jor se dhake lagane laga or fir usne maya ko apne uper leker niche se dhake lagane laga .

Maya bhi uchal uchal k sath dene lagi , or kuch der bad wo jab thak gayi to viraj k sine p let gayi .

Viraj bhi jhadne wala tha to , usne full speed se dhake lagane laga or maya k hotho ko chusne laga or 10 min baad vo jhad gaya or sara pani maya ki chut me chod diya.

Or maya ko apne uper hi letaye hue bola ,

Viraj :- wese vo dono aa kab rahe h wapas.

Maya :- radha bata rahi thi ki unka phone aaya tha , wo dono kal lot rahe h.

Viraj kamini muskan k sath :- ye to bahut achi baat h , ab aayega maja , jab us karan ko m puri tarah barbad ker dunga , uski jyoti ko usise chin ker.

Ye bol wo or maya dono hasne lage or dono apne aap ko saf ker , nange hi ek sath so gaye

Back to the hero.


Agle din karan or jyoti flight se wapas apne shahar pahunch gaye to paya unhe receive kerne keval rohan sonam or shivani hi aayi h.

Karan radha ko na paker heran to hua , per us baat ko jyada mahatv na dete hue vo apne dosto ki or bhada

Rohan jese hi karan ko dekhta h to vo usse gale milta h or sonam jyoti se , fit sonam karan se or jyoti rohan se gale mili

Sonam bacho jese naraj hone ki acting kerte hue .

Sonam :- ye kya bhai , aapne to bola tha ki aap 3 din baad aajaoge or aaj 6th day h , ye to galat baat h

Karan pyar se sonam k gal chum ker usse mafi mangta h or exam khatam hone k baad use ghumane le jane ka promise kerta h , jisse wo khush ho jati h.

Jyoti :- rohan bhai , riya di ni aayi aapke sath

Karan :- ha aaj esa pahali baar hua ki radha hume recive kerne ni aayi.

Sonam shikayati andaz me :- bhai mane to use aapke aane ki timing bhi batayi thi , per usne busy hone ka bol k mana ker diya , vo boli ki vo baad m mil legi

Rohan :- ha bhai , riya di ne bhi kuch esa hi bola.

Karan :- oh acha chalo koi baat ni , ao ghar chale

Fir wo charo rohan ki gadi me beth ker karan k ghar ki or nikal pade , raste me jab gadi ek red light pe ruki to karan ne jo dekh use dekh herani bhi hui or dukh bhi.

Usne dekha radha or riya maya or viraj k sath samne ek theater se movie dekh k nikal rahi h .

Karan ne ishare se jyoti ko bhi ye dikhaya , jise dekh jyoti ko taklif hui .

Fir wo sab apne ghar pahunch gaye or sonam ki jid k kaaran aaj wo tino ek kamre me hi soye.

Fir kuch din ese hi nikal gaye or karan or jyoti k final exam bhi start ho gaye

Lekin karan or jyoti ne ye baat notice ki ki ab pahale jesa kuch ni raha tha.

Jo radha karan se ek din bhi bina baat kiye rah ni pati thi , wo kayi kayi din milna to chodo , usse phone bhi ni kerti or esa hi kuch hal riya ka bhi tha.

Riya bhi jo apna jyadatar samay , rohan ya karan or jyoti k sath bitati thi , wo bhi ab jyadatar samay radha ki tarah viraj or mAya k sath bitati , pata ni esa kya jadu sa ker diya tha un per maya or viraaj ne .

Lekin rohan or sonam ko shuru se hi maya or viraj pasand ni the , isliye wo unse dur hi rahate the , jiske chalte wo kafi close ho gaye the ek dusre ki or.

Ek din sonam.thoda sa tension me bethi thi , tab karan uske pass jaker bola .

Karan :- kya hua sonu , tu itna tension m kyu h.

Sonam :- kuch ni bhai , wo mere kuch papers shimla k hi govt office m rah gaye h , or wo kafi important h , unhe hi mujhe jaldi collect kerne k liye jana hoga.

Karan :- oh to ye baat h , to kya hua tum jaa ao na ek baar , mere or jyoti k to exam chal rahe h , tum esa kero tum rohan ko apne sath le jao , wo thoda ghum bhi lega .

Sonam ko karan ka ye idea pasand aagaya or karan ne jab rohan se is baare me baat ki to pahale to wo thoda hichkichya , shayad use kisi chij ki tension thi , jiske chalte wo jana ni chahata tha , per fir karan or jyoti k baar bar bolne per wo bhi man gaya or vo dono agle din shimla k liye nikal gaye train se.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or preety bhi karib 3 ghante k safar k baad haveli pe pahunch gayi or preety ne sabse pahale ghuste hi veer k kamre me gayi or amritunjay ko veer k muh me dalne lagi.

Jal k prabhav se kuch der veer ka sharir kuch der chamka or fir vo vapas normal ho gaya.

Or wo uthate hi chilaya

Veer :- preetyyyyy.

Preety veer ko sahi salamat dekh khushi k ansu rote hue boli.

Preety :- m yaha hu veer .

Veer jese hi preety ko dekhta h to jhat se use baho me bhar bola.

Veer :- tum thik to hona preetu, tumhe kuch hua ni.

Preety :- jiska itna pyaar kerne wAla dost ho , use bhala kuch ho sakta h kya veer

Veer :- preety m tumse kuch kahana chahata hu ,

I love u preety.

M tumse aaj se hi ni bachpan se pyaar kerta aaya hu, per tumse kah pane ki himat ni ker paya , per ab m or ni ruk sakta preety, tumne meri jaan bana ker mujhe apna karzdar bana diya h .

Ab mujhe apna karz chukane ka moka do meri preetu, please accept my love.

Preety :- I love u tooo veer , m bhi tume bachpan se chahati thi , per mera bhi hal tum jesa tha.

Or khabardat aage se ye karz ki baat ki to , pyar me karz nam ki koi jagah ni hoti

Veer preety ke muh se I love u tooo sun khushi se jhum utha or uske pure chahare ko chumne laga or preety bhi

Tabhi naina bol uthi

Naina :- oh laila majnu , ye sab kerne se pahale gate to band ker liya kero or jhali tu to jese bhul hi gayi ki m bhi yaha hu.

Naina ki baat sun dono love birds sharma gaye , jinhe dekh naina hasti h or unhe kuch time sath bitane dene k liye , waha se nikal gayi.

Or apne kamre me jaker packing kerne lagi, tabhi usne apni maa ki photo dikhi.

Naina photo dekhte hue :- maa aap jyada chinta mat kerna , aapki beti jald hi aapko dhund legi or us samraat ka ant ker aapko mukt kerwayegi.

Ye bol wo apna bag pack kerke sone chali gayi.


2 din baad karan or jyoti k final exam khatam ho gaye ab vo free the or wo dono khush bhi the ki ab unhe ful time job bhi jald hi mil jayegi .

Lekin karan apni shaktiyo k vihin hone k kaaran aane wale khatre se anjan tha.

Or kuch din baad vo.manhus din aahi gaya , jis din karan ki puri jindagi badalne wali thi

Aaj maya or viraj ka janmdin tha , wo dono bhi judwa the , jiske chalte unhone ek badi si party rakhi thi

Jisme usne karan or jyoti samet sabhi ko invite kiya , karan or jyoti ache se teyar ho ker viraaj k ghar pahunche jaha party thi.

Jyoti ne aaj ek black colour ki dress pahani thi , jisme wo bahu sunder lag rahi thi , kuch esi .




Hamesha ki tarah karan uski khub tarif kerta h or vo dono sonam or rohan k sath nikal pade viraj k ghar ki or jaha radha or riya pahale se hi mojud the

Viraj ne karan or jyoti samet sabka ache se welcome kiya , or fir karan or jyoti radha se mile , jo unse kafi din bad mili thi

Radha ne tab bhi jyada bhav na dete hue , ek formality k sath un dono se mili, jisse karan or jyoti ko had se jyada taklif hui , per unhonne khud ko control kiya or is baare m baad me radha se baat kerne ka soch, party ko enjoy kerne ki koshis kerne lage.

Thodi der baad sare guest chale gaye or ab sirf wo sab dost hi bache the.

Tabhi maya jyoti samet sabhi ladkiyo ko apne room me le gayi .

Viraaj :- chal bhai , ye sab ladkiya to apne me lag gayi , chal kyu na hum bhi chat pe gum lete h

Karan viraaj ki baat man uske sath chat pe chal pada , kuch der baat kerne k baad viraj ne karan ko ek glass drink di.

Karan :- sorry yar m alcohol ni pita.

Viraj :- ha yaar m janta hu , isliye tere liye ye soft drink hi laya hu

Karan ye sun usse vo glass le leta h or usse baate kerne laga


Tabhi viraj ko kisi ka phone aata h or wo excuse me bol waha se nikal gaya or fir waha maya aagayi.

Karan :- are maya tum yaha , wese birthday girl apni friends ko chod k yaha kya ker rahi h

Maya :- kyu , kya tum mere dost ni ho karan jo esa bol.rahe ho.

Karan :- are ni ni maya mere kahane ka vo matlab ni tha , tum meri ek achi dost ho

Maya :- oh I see , are ye kya tumne abhi tak apni drink ni pi , acha lao m pila deti hu tumhe

Karan :- are ni ni maya , iski kya jarurat h , m pi lunga na.

Maya :- abhi tumne kaha na m tumhari dost hu , to kya apni dost ki baat ni manoge or vese bhi birthday girl ko mana ni kiya jata.

Ye bol wo karan k hatho se glass leker use pilane lagi or jab hi glas uske muh se hataya , jab glass pura khali ho gaya.

Fir wo wahi khadi karan se baate kerne lagi or kuch der baad fir karan ko chakker se aane lage , shayad us drink me kuch milaya hua tha , jiski vajah se esa ho raha tha.

Maya :- kya hua karan ....

Karan sir pakadte hue :- pata ni maya , per achanak se mujhe chakkar se aarahe h.

Maya ye sun muskurane lagi or fir natak kerte hue boli.

Maya :- kya tumhari tabiyat kharab h , tum esa kero thodi der rest ker lo

Karan ko maya ki baat sahi lagi or maya ka sahara le wo uper hi bane kamre me chala gaya.

Karan jese hi us kamre me pahuncha to kisi me piche se uske sir p kisi vajandar chij se vaar ker dala , or shaktiya na hone ki vajah se or drink ki vajah se behosh ho gaya.

Thodi der baad karan ki ankh jab khuli jab uske uper kisi ne pani dala or jab bo utha to usne paya wo shirtless bed pe pada h or uske sare dost use ghur rahe h or jyoti to bina kisi reaction k butt jese bani khadi h.

Or sabse jyada herani to tab hui , jab usne dekha ki maya jiske kapde fate hue h wo viraaj k gale lage ro rahi h

Karan ko kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki ye ho kya raha h , usne riya se pucha.

Karan :- di , yaha kya ho raha h , m ese bina shirt k yaha kese or ye maya ko kya hua.

Riya ne jese hi ye suna , usne gusse se ek jordar thappad karan ko marte hue bola.

Riya :- mat bol apni gandi juban se mujhe di kamine.

Karan ki to riya ki aakhe fati ki fati rah gayi riya ka ye ravaiya dekh .

Usne jyoti se pucha.

Karan :- gudiya , ye sab kya ho raha h , ye di mujhse ese kyu baat ker rahi h.

Per jyoti to pathar bani si vahi khadi thi.

Viraaj :- vo kya bolegi kamine , tune apni gandi harkat se use bolne layak choda hi kaha

Karan gusse se :- ye kya bakwas ker raha h tu viraaj , jawan sambhal k baat ker

Tabhi karan k gaal pe ek or thappad pada , lekin is baar thappad radha ne mara tha

Radha gusse se :- jawan sambhal k baat ker mere bhai se mr karan , tamij ki baat to dur tu shukar mana , teri is harkat k baad bhi humne police ko ni bulaya .

Radha ka ye reaction to karan pe ek bahut bada bomb tha , jo radha uski itni ijjat kerti thi , wo aaj itni badtamiji se baat ker rahi thi

Karan :- aakhir aap sab ko ho kya gaya h , jo aap mujhse yu bartav ker rahe ho

Riya :- dekho to iski besharmi ko , itna sab kuch kerne k baad bhi puch raha h , isne kiya kya .

Ek to tume maya ka rape kerne ki koshis ki or ab humpe hi chila raha h.

Karan ye sun ker to jese pagal hone wala tha.

Karan :- ni ye sab jhut h , mane kuch ni kiya

Tabhi radha ne karan ko ek or thappad mar k bola

Radha :- besharam kamine , itne sab hone k baad bhi tum bol rahe ho ki tumne kuch ni kiya , humne tume range hatho pakda h .

Vo to viraaj bhai sahi time p pahunch ker tere sir pe mar ke tuje behosh ker diya , verna to tum ...

Chiii

Karan bahut samjhane ki koshis kerta h un sabko samjhane ki per koi bhi uski ni sunta or use dutkarne or marne lage.

Karan jyoti k pass gaya or ghutno k bal rote hue bola.

Karan :- gudiya , kam se kam tum to apne bhai p yakin kero , tum to janti hi ho na m esa ni ker sakta hu , tum kuch bolti kyu ni gudiya kuch to bolo.

Jyoti achanak se vahi gir padi or behosh ho gayi ,shayad use sadma laga tha, ye dekh karan ki halat or kharab ho gayi or wo rote hue jyoti ko uthane ki koshis kerne laga.

Aj wo pahali baar khud ko itna asahay samjh raha tha , wo chah ker bhi sach samne ni la sakta tha.

Riya :- ab to thodi sharam ker lo karan , tere is ghatiya harkat se jyoti ko sadma laga h , ager tujhme jara si bhi sharm bachi h or jara si bhi tune jyoti se tune pyaar kiya h to.

Tujhe usi jyoti ki kasam h , chale ja hamari jindagi se dur or kabhi lot k wapas mat aana.

Riya ki ye baat sun karan ki to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gayi ,riya k muh se jyoti ki kasam sun ker to wo khud kisi sadme me chala gaya.

Karan ansuo k sath :- thik h ager aap sab ko yahi lagta h ki me gunehgar huu or meri bahan ki ye halat meri vajah se hui h to , m abhi hi aap sabko chod k chala jata hu

(Hath jodte hue) per aap sabse meri bas ek vinti h ki , aap log meri gudiya ka khayal rakhna , vo bahut hi bholi h , use duniyadari ki koi jyada samjh ni h , please usko kuch mat hone dena, bas itni vinti h aapse

Lekin kisi ne karan ki or mudker dekha tak ni or karan ghar se bahar nikal apni bike se nikal gaya , shahar k bahar ki or lekin ye rasta uske jungle wale ghar ka to bilkul bhi ni tha, is baat se anjaan ki ek bahut bada khatra uske piche hi chal raha h

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Sorry for late update friends , or haa kuch readers ki bahut request pe mane sex add to ker diya , per m iske liye abhi mentally prepare ni tha , isliye jesa bhi aapko lage aap apne review jarur dijiyega.

Or janne k liye ki kya khatra karan ki or badh raha h or kya jyoti ka karan p vishwas kya tur jayega , ya jyoti ka vishwas adig rahega or adig raha to wo kese karan ko bachayegi janne k liye sath bane rahiye
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