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Kaya ankho me ansu or dil me apaar dard liye hue pani me hi ek or jane lagi , wo talab kahane ko hi talab tha , lekin usne jungle ka kafi area cover kiya hua tha.

Kaya k ansu thamne ka naam hi nj ke rahe the , bhale hi use apne karan se apni apna ek premika ki tarah wala prem ka abhas na ho parantu fir bhi kaya ka hriday karan se vichoh ki pida m jal raha tha.

Jate jate ek baar usne mudke apne sakha ki or dekha is ummid m ki shayad uska sakha uske ansu dekh pighal jaye or use apne hriday se laga bol de ki sakhi tere sakha ne tujhe maaf kiya.

Parantu vidambana to dekho sidhe or komal dil k karan ko bhi krodh jese avgun ne nishthur bana dala tha.

Isliye hi to nark k tin dwar kaam krodh or lobh me se sabse bhayanak or sabse ashmay bhav krodh ko hi mana jata h.

Kyunki krodh vo shakti h jise yadi sahi se upyog me liya jaye to wo humari shakti banta h ni to vinash ka kaaran.

Aaj usi krodh k kaaran karan itna nishthur ho chuka tha ki usne kaya ko ek baar mudker bhi na dekha.

Kaya ne jab ye dekha to uska dil tut gaya or wo ansuo ko or tezi se chalkate waha se kafi dur chali gayi.

Or is baat ka karan ko ahasas hua to usne piche mud ker dekha to kaya uski ankho se ojhal ho chuki thi.

Esa ni tha karan ko taklif ni ho rahi thi , ansu karan k ankho me bhi the , per krodh or jyoti se dhoka hone ka bhay k kaaran karan use mahasus ni ker pa raha tha.

Karan ka man bahut ashant ho chuka tha , or use apne man ko shant kerne ka keval ek hi rasta dikha wo tha mahadev ki puja.

Snan to ho hi chuka tha karan ka or hua bhi esa jise wo jindgi bhar na bhule , karan abhi sab hui ghatnao ka chintan kerte hue , talab se bahar nikalta h or apne bag se towel nikalkar khud ko ache se poch kapde badalta h .

Fir wahi talab k kinare ek saf jagh pe ek kapda bicha ker ek chota sa shivling jo karan apne sath laya tha , use waha rakhta h or fir talab k jal se hi shivling p jal arpan ker mahadev ki stuti ki or dhyan me beth gaya.

Parantu aaj to karan ka ashant man dhyan lagane se bhi sthir na ho raha tha , ese me karan k pas ek hi rasta shesh rah gaya tha , jiski madad se uska ashant man chutkiyo m shant ho jata.

Ek hi vyakti thi jo is samay karan ko shant ker sakti or wo thi karan ki bahan , ya yu kaho uski parchai , uski atma yani ki uski pyari bahan jyoti ,jiske bina wo adhura tha.

Karan ko jyoti ki is samay bahut yaad aarahi thi, aaj use apni gudiya ki bahut kami mahasus ho rahi thi.

Lekin kahate h na jaha prem ho waha apno ka dard mahasoos kerne k liye uska pas hona jaruri ni hota.

Or yaha to baat hi uski ho rahi thi, jiska pran , uski hriday sabkuch karan hi tha , yani ki jyoti ki, jisne itni doori hote hue bhi bina kisi shakti k mahasoos ker liya ki uske bhai ko uski abhi jarurat h.

Abhi karan dhyan avastha me ashant betha jyoti ko yaad ker raha tha ki tabhi uske man me uski gudiya ki pyaarmayi mithi aawaz gunji.

Bhaiiiiiii

Karan ne jese hi apni gudiya ki aawaz suni to usi shan karan apni sari kasht or pida bhul gaya.

Karan k muh se bhi bas itna hi nikla :- gudiya or uske ankho se bhi ansu nikle , jisme khushi or dukh dono k mishrit bhav the.

Kuch samay tak dono kuch ni bole , fir karan ne bolna start kiya .

Karan :- kesi h meri gudiya , tu thik to h na,

Jyoti :- m to thik hu bhaiya , per aapse naraj bhi.

Karan :- wo kyu bhala.

Jyoti bacho jese shikayat kerte hue :- aapne nikale samay wada kiya tha na ki aap mujhse roj baat karoge , lekin aapne kal baat hi ni ki , kya aapko apni gudiya ki yaad ni aayi.

Karan halke se haste hue :- pagli yaad to use kiya jata h na , jise hum bhul jate h , per tu to meri jaan h gudiya , mere tan se nikli har swash tak se keval tera hi naam nikalta h meri gudiya .

(Dard bhari or dhimi aawaz me ) or tu hi to ekloti h meri jan , jispe ye karan ankh band ker bharosa ker sakta h , verna baki sab rishto se aj bharosa uth hi chuka h.

Karan ne bhale hi ye baat dhire boli lekin uski judwa uski jyoti ne uski ye baat sun li or turant samjh gayi kki uska bhai kash or duvidha me h or uska man ashant h.

Jyoti :- mere pyare bhaiya , kya hua aap itne udaas kyu ho.

Karan apne dukh ko chupate hue :- udaas or m kaha meri jaan m to bilkul thik hu or apni gudiya se baat hone k baad bahut khush bhi.

Jyoti karan pe thoda jor dete hue :- bhaiiiiiiii, aap baar bar kyu bhul jate ho ki aap chahe kitni bhi koshis ker lo aap jhut ni bol sakte or apni is gudiya se to bilkul ni.

Chaliye bataiye kya baat h , ya m abhi aapko apni kasam du.

Karan :- are are ni ni kasam dene ki jarurat ni h , m batata hu tumhe.

Fir karan kal raat or aaj hui sari ghatna k baare m bina kuch chupaye jyoti ko bata deta h or uske chahre pe wapas krodh dikhayi dene laga.

Karan ki puri baat badi hi dhyan se suni kaya ki kahani suni jyoti ki ankho se bhi nir bahane lage.

Or fir ek bar dono or shanti rahi , fir jyoti Ne bolna start kiya.

Jyoti :- bhai ek baat bolu ager aap bura na mano too.

Karan :- meri jaan , bhala tere bhai ne kabhi esa kiya h jo aaj manega , jo man me ho khul ker bol.

Jyoti :- bhai m samjh sakti hu aapki feelings ko ya yu kaho aapko aapse jyada samjhti hu m .

Isliye bol rahi hu bhai aaj jo aapne kiya wo bahut galat kiya .

Karan jyoti ki is baat se chonk ker bola :- ye tu kya bol rahi h mane jo kiya wo galat kese , usne dhoka kiya h mere sath , ye jante hue ki bhi mere dil me sirf tum ho fir bhi usne....

Jyoti bich me tokte hue :- bhaiya ek baar apne man ko shant kijiye or dhyan se meri baat suniye or ager uske baad jo aapko sahi lage wo kijiyega , aapki gudiya humesha ki tarah aapke sath hi rahegi.

Karan :- hmm.

Jyoti :- bhai m ye ni kahati ki aap pure tarike se galat ho ya kaya pure tarike se sahi , lekin m ye jarur kahungi ki aaj jo bhi hua usme n galti aapki h na kaya ki.

Aap hi sochiye bhai , wo bechari ne itni si umer me kya ni jhela , pahale to uske janm dene wale maa baap ne usko marne ko chod diya , fir jin maa baap ne use pala wo bhi us draculla k hatho mare gaye , bechari ne apni jindagi me kasht dukh or akelapan k siwa kuch mila hi kaha.

Or bhai akelapan or apno se dur ho e ka dukh humse jyada or kon samjh sakta h.

(Nam ankho or thodi ruansi aawaz)Hum dono to fir bhi humesha ek dusre k sukh dukh k sathi ki tarah ek dusre k liye mojud the bhai , per us bechari k pass to kon tha , jo usko sahara deta , use apnapan mahasus karwata.

Or ese me jab aap uski jindagi me aaye or use apni saheli banaya to wo bechari aapko dil se apna sab kuch man bethi or usi apnepan or prem k vashibhoot ho wo esa ker bethi.

Bhai m ek ladki hone k naate kaya ki manodasha ko ache se samjh sakti hu . Wo bas aapse kuch nj chahati sivay prem k , jiske liye wo barso tarsi h , use bas aapka yani apne sakha ka keval thoda sa sneh or prem hi to chahiye tha na bhai

or bhala kiss kerne me kya burayi , hum dono to me to ye sab common raha h na shuruat se bhai or to or kabhi humari dusri bahane bhi esa ker deti h to kya hua , ager aapki sAheli ne esa kiya to

mane jitna use samjha or jana h ,m ye dave k sath kah sakti hu bhai kaya ka past bhale hi kesa ho lekin wo tan or man or man dono roop se ek pavitra or saaf dil ki ladki h uske mankoi chal kapat h or nhi h.

Or m janti hu bhai ki aap bhi is satya se anbhigya ni.

Jyoti k prem bhare swaro se samjhane ka prabhav karan pe turant roop se padne laga or vo shant hone laga or sath hi use apni galti ka ahasas hone laga.

Jyoti :- jante ho bhai ki kaya k sath aapko dekh mujhe kabhi krodh kyu na aaya .

Iske 2 kaaran the.

1 . Jo mere jivan ka saar h , yani ki mera aapni jaan apne bhaiya pe akshund vishwas .

M janti hu ki bhale ek baar suraj shitalta de sakta ya chand aag bara sakta ho , parantu mere pran mere bhai , apni jyoti ko kabhi dhoka ni de sakte.

Jiska parinam samne h ,aapne jo hua sab bata diya , kkuch ni chupaya apni jyoti se.

Ye sunker karan k chahre pe muskan aagayi or pucha.

Karan :- or dusra.

Jyoti nakhre dikhate hue :- acha ji ab janab ko dusra kaaran bhi janna h , pahale wala kafi ni h.

Chalo aap itna puch hi rahe ho m bata hi deti hu.

Dusra kaaran ye h bhai ki jesa ki aap humesha kahate h ki hum dono bhale hi do jism ho per jaan ek hi h na or uper se hum twins bhi h

To bhala esa kese ho sakta h ki aap kuch mahasoos kero or vesa mujhe mahasus na ho .

Bhai aapki hi bhanti mujhe bhi esa mahasoos hota h ki koi na koi connection jarur h humara kaya se , na jane kyu humesha se wo mujhe bhi apni si hi lagti h .

Jab aapne mujhe usse milwaya to mujhe bilkul na laga ki hum dono anjan h ,
(Bholepan se ) isliye hi to mane apko bola tha ki aap mujhse bhi dosti kerwayiye , per aapne to meri saheli ko hi dant ker bhaga dala.

Jyoti ka ye bolne ka tarika bhale hi bacho jesa ho , per keval jyoti hi janti thi ki kese apne bhai ko samjhaya jaye or bina usko hurt kiye usko galti ka ahasas dilaye.

Or esa hua bhi sach hi kaha tha shani dev ne jyoti sirf karan ki bahan ya premika hi ni , balki uski shakti , uski prerna , yaha tak ki samay padne per ek guru ki tarah sachi margdarshak bhi thi.

Jyoti k prem bhare shabdo ne apna asar dikhana shuru ker diya tha ,jiske kaaran karan ka krodh shant hone laga tha.

Or jise wo shant hone laga or jyoti ki baato ko dhyan me rakhte hue apne hriday me jhankta h.

Kisi ne sahi kaha h humara hriday jal se bhare ek patra ki tarah hota h.

Jab hum shant or shital jal se bhare patra me jhankte h to hume apna pratibimb saf saf dikhayi deta h .

Parantu yadi hum kholte hue pani me esa kerne ka prayas karege to hume apna pratibimb dikhega ?.

Ni na

Esa hi humara man hota h , yadi hum apne aapko nirmal yani shant rakh kisi baat k baare me chintan kerne k liye apne hriday me jhakenge to humesha sahi decision roopi pratibimb hume humesha milega.

Parantu yadi kholte hue pani ki tarah krodh k aVesh me aKer yadi hriday se bhi decision lenge to baad m hume pachtana hi padta h.

Esa hi kuch karan k sath hua tha,krodh se vashibhoot hoker usne bhi vahi galti ker dali .

Ye baat karan ko ab samjh aachuki thi or uski ankho m glani bhav k sath ansu aane lage.

Karan rote hue :- tu sahi kah rahi h gudiya , is baR tere bhai galat h , usse galti ni paap hua h , jis sakhi ne apni mera itna sath diya , m jab krodh se out of control hua or mere se nikal rahi urja jo sab kuch bhasm kerne jitni shaktishali thi ,bina uski parwah kiye bhi wo mere ko shant kerne me lagi rahi,bina apni jaan ki parwah kiye.

Wo meri sakhi hi to h , jisne bina kisi swarth me meri is yatra me sammilit hui , ye jante hue bhi ki jis safar pe m nikla hu wo bahut hi khatarnak h or pran jane ka bhi bhay h , fir bhi wo mere sath aayi , kyu , kyunki wo ni chahti thi ki uske sakha ko marg me koi taklif ho.

Or mane uske sath kya kiya , use kapti or dhokebaaz bol use dutkara or bhi na jane kya kuch na jaha , bas isliye kyunki us bechari ne bas apne sakha se thoda prem or sneh ki asha ki bas isliye , dhikaar h mujh per.

Jyoti karan ko pyaar se samjhate hue :- bhai jo hua use hum badal to ni sakte per apni bhul to sudhar sakte h na.

Jaiye bhaiya or mana ker wapas ke aaiye meri saheli ko.

Karan :- acha ji aapki saheli kabse ho gayi gf ji.

Jyoti :- ab aap or m alag thodi na mere golu bf ji.

Karan :- dekh chipkali tujhe kitni baar bola h ki mujhe us naam se mat bulaya ker.

Jyoti :- kya m chipkali , to fir ap bandar , ab jaiye or jaldi se kaya ko manaiye verna aapki wo wali pic to yaad h na meri pyari didi (jyoti wahi pic ki baat ker rahi thi , jisme karan ne skirt pahana tha) wo abhi bhi mere pas h , ager aapne jaldi se kaya ko na manaya to wo pic aman bhai samet sabko dikha dungi , fir mat bolna.

Karan jhut mut ka darte hue :- are na baba na , jata hu meri maa jata hu , per tere hath jodta hu wo pic kisi ko ni mat dikhana .

Jyoti :- hmm sochungi, ab jaiye bhi.

Jyoti ki yahi to khasiyat thi ,usne na keval apne bhai ko sahi rah dikhayi apitu uska man bhi hulka kiya masti majak se.

Karan :- per gudiya wo kya ab manegi mane use bahut bura bhala kaha , wo to mujhe dekhna tak na pasand karegi.

Jyoti :- esa kuch ni hoga bhai , aap abhi bhi apni sakhi ko ni samjh pa rahe ho , wo aapko jarur maaf ker degi .

Esa bol karan ko jyoti kuch bate samjhati h.

Karan :- sach kahata hu jyoti yadi.

Jyoti bich me tokte hue jate hue :- yahi bolne wale ho na , ki m na hoti to aapka kya hota , isliye hi to aapki judwa k roop me bhagwan ne mujhe bheja wo jante the ki mere bina aapka kuch ni hone wala

Ye bol wo hasti hui karan se vida leti h or usi ke sath karan ka dhyan tut jata h.

Karan khud se :- sakhi tumhare sakha ko apni galti ka ahasas ho v
Chuka h or ab vo aaraha h apni sakhi yani tumko vapas le jane.

Ye bol karan ne apne kapde utare or wapas talab ke kud pada or tere hue us or jane laga jaha kaya gayi thi.

Wahi dusri or
Location :- rohan house

Aaj radha k ghar me hue kand k baad sabke sath anita bhi sachai jaan chuki thi , jiske kaaran wo bahut jyada gusse me thi riya se.

Is kaaran wo rohan or riya jabse apne ghar wapas lote the , tabse usne ek shabd ni bola tha , riya ache se janti thi ki uski ma jab bhi bAhut gusse m ho ya unme se kisise naraj ho to wo kuch ni bolti bas chup raha ker hi apna gussa dikhati h.

Aaj ek or to riya khush thi ki uski jan uske betu ne use maaf ker diya or use wapas apna liya .

Lekin ab wo or jyada dukhi ho chuki thi , kyunki rohan k baad vo apne maa k hi sabse karib thi , dono ma beti kam or saheli jese jyada rahati h.

Aaj ki hui ghatna k baad sabki bhuk vese bhi mar gayi thi , lekin riya fir bhi sabke liye khana banati h or fir wo anita or rohan k pas ja ker khana khane ka bolti h.

Anita rohan se :- rohan mujhe bhuk ni h , tumhe khana h to kha lo or bol do isse ki mujhse koi baat na kare.

Riya rote hue anita k pero me gir gayi or bolne lagi :- maa please aap to esa n bola , badi mushkilon se bhai ko manaya h or ab aap to mat yu kijiye.

Manti hu mujhse galti hui h or m sharminda bhi hu ma.

Anita gusse se :- galti ni paap hua h tujhse riya , itna waqt tune gujara karan k sath , fir bhi tu apne us bhai ko samjh na payi or tune uspe bina uski safai sune itne ghatiya iljaam lagaye .



Or rohan tumse mujhe esi ummid na thi, itna sab kuch ho gaya or aaj tak tumne bhi mujhse jhut bola, mana ki tune apne dost pe vishwas ni khoya lekin tumne mujhse baat chupa ker bhi kam galti na ki.

Rohan kah de apni bahan se ki jab tak ise mera bacha mera karan maaf ni ker deta , mujhse bhi ye maafi ki ummid bhi na kare.

Rohan :- per ma.

Anita :- mane jo kah diya so kah diya.

Ye bolke Anita apne room me chali gayi or riya rote hue apne room me.

Or hall me rah gaya bichara pareshan rohan , usne kuch soch ker ek plate m khana liya or apni ma k room me gaya .

Rohan ne kese na kese apni maa ko khana khila diya or fir wo ek plate or leker rohan riya k room me jata h.

Jaha riya bed per takiye me muh chupaye ro rahi thi.


Rohan ne kese na kese riya ko shant karwaya or use khana khane ko bola.

Riya :- betu maa bhuki h to me kese khau.

Rohan :- didu aap chinta mat kero mane maa ko khana khila diya h , ab aap bhi khao or mujhe khilao na badi bhuk lag rahi h.

Riya ye sun thodi shant hui ki uski maa khana kha chuki h :- ha kyu ni aaj m apne betu ko apne hatho se khana khilaungi.

Fir rohan ko riya jese hi ek tukda tod krr khilati h to uski ankho me aansu aajate h.

Riya :- ky hua betu tu ro kyu raha h.

Rohan :- di aaj itne dino baad aapke hatho se khana kha raha hu na to khushi control na hui.

Riya :- khush to m bhi hu betu ki itne time baad mera betu mere pas h or vo mujhse naraj ni h.

(Nam ankho se ) bas ek baar karan bhai bhi mujhe maaf ker de to fir chahe mujhe mot bhi aajye to koi gam ni.

Rohan :- di please esa mat bolo , aager aapko kuch ho gaya to kya aapka betu ji payega.

Riya :- to m kya karu bhai , ab mujhse karan ki or narajgi ni sahi jati , m to uske pero m gir ker maafi mange ko teyar hu , vo jo saja dega vo bhi haste haste manjur ker lungi, per wo to mujhe dekhna tak bhi pasand ni kerta.

Rohan :- di please aap mat roiye dekhna ab hum dono sath h na , ab hum dono mil ker manayenge , fir dekhte h kese maaf ni kerte vo aapko.


Riya :- sachi bhai.

Rohan :- muchi betu.

Riya rohan k gale lagte hue :- love u bhai.

Rohan :- love u to didu.

Rohan man me :- chalo didu ko sambhalna to ho gaya , ab dusra kam k liye jaldi se teyar hona hoga , jyada waqt ni h mere pas.


Ye sochte hue rohan man hi man kuch planning kerne laga or fir dono bhai bahan ek dusre se chipak k so gaye.

Wahi dusri or.

Location :- jaipur

Aaj puja ka 3sra din tha or humesha ki tarah 3no dost mandir pahunch gaye the or puja ki teyari m lag gaye tabhi preety ne pucha.

Preety :- sister , bole to aaj konsi maata ka din h or unki puja ka kya mahatv h , jara batao to.

Naina :-
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प्रसादं तनुते मह्यां चन्द्रघण्टेति विश्रुता॥

Navratra ka 3sra din ma chandraghanta ko samarpit h preety , kaha jata h shumb nishunbh , chand mund jese rakshaso ka sanghar inhone hi kiya tha.

Inki puja se hume abhisht var ki prapti hoti h or khaskar ki avivahit ladkiyo ko man chaha var milta h.

Preeti veer ki baho me chipakte hue :- oh fir mujhe to mata ko koi taklif ni deni , mujhe to mere wala mil gaya h .

Ye bol 3no hasne lage tabhi veer ko ek call aata h or wo waha se uth ker chala jata h.

Preety naina ko chedte hue :- vese kya baat h sister aaj to bahut josh k sath puja m lagi hui ho , kahi maa se apnee liye unhi sapne wale jiju ko to ni mangne wali .

Naina muskurate hue :- pahali baat to wo sapna ni tha , vo mera ek suhana sa ahasas tha , jisne mujhe unke astitv ka bhan karwaya or dusri ki unhe ni to or kisko mangugi .

(Preety ko chedte hue) wese mujhe to veer jiju bhi bahut pasand h , tu kahe to unhe hi mang lu.

Preety jhut mut ka darte hue :- na baba na wo mera maal h use door hi rah .


Ye bol dono saheliyan hasne lagi, tabhi preety boli.

Preety :-. Sister ager bura na mano to ek baat kahu .

Naina sir ha m hilati h.

Preety :- man lo sister jinhe tune us drishy me dekha wo yadi watvik m ho hi na, keval tumhara bhram hua to.

Naina :- ni preety mera dil kahata h ki vo.mera vaham ni tha , jo ahasas jo anubhuti mujhe unhe dekhne bhar se hui , wesi mujhe aaj tak na hui or yahi praman h ki wo vastvikta me h or unhe m ek din jarur dhundke apna banungi.

Preety :-. Chalo man liya ki wo vastvikta me h , per man lo unki life m pahale se hi koi hui to tum kya karogi.

Naina ne jese ye suna to achanak se uski ankhe lal ho gayi or uske chahre pr bhayankar krodh aane laga or uski nili ankhe achanak se surkh laal ho gayi.

Naina gusse se bhayanak aawaz me :- ager esa hua to nash kardungi uska jo mere pyaar k aas pas bhi dikha to, wo keval mere h , unper yadi kisi ka hak hoga to wo hoga mera yani ki naina ka or kisi ka ni.

Or jo mere or unke bich aayegi chahe wo koi bhi ho , uska samool nash kar dalungi m.

(Naina to mano gusse se pagal ho chuki thi, usne achanak se ek hath se preety ka gala pakad liya or apni bhayanak aawaz me boli)

Sun liya na tune kya karungi m , samool vinash , jo bhi mere or mere karan k bich m aayega , suna na tune ye h tere sawal ka jawab .



Preety ka dam ghut raha tha :- aah sister mujhe chod do ye kya ker rahi ho tum , mujhe dard ho raha h.

Naina :- dard ho raha h , to le kamini (ye bol usne apni pakad or majbut ker li or boli)

Tadaf kamini tasaf tu isi layak h , tujh jesi ek mamuli tritya ki himat kese hui ki tune mere pyaar ko mujse door hone ki baat sochi bhi kese .

Galti meri hi jo mane tujh jesi ek tritya ko apni saheli banaya, jo kisike sage ni hote , per aaj m apni galti sudharungi , tujhe khatm ker dungi m.

Ye bol naina ne preety ko utha liya , jisse preety chatpante lagi , usne apni puri takat laga li , per wo naina ki pakad se ni chut pa rahi thi.


Vo to acha hua veer jiski call puri ho chuki thi or wo waha aap huncha , or usne jab waha ka najara dekha to uski ankhe bhi fati ki fati rah gayi , use samjh ni aaraha tha ki ye sab kya or kese ho raha h.

Wo turant bhaga or preety ko naina ki pakad se chudane ki kosis kerne laga.

Veer :- naina chodo use ye kya ker rahi ho tum vo mar jayegi , pagal ho gayi ho kya tum.

Lekin naina pe to pata ni konsa bhut swar ho gaya or usne ek dhakka mar diya veer ko , jisse wo kayi door jake gira.

Naina kisi ki sun ni rahi thi , tabhi veer ko apni mala ki yaad aayi or usne jaldi se apni mala nikal naina ko pahana di .

Veer k esa kerte hi ek roshni mala se nikal naina me sama gayi or wo dhire dhire shant hone lagi or uski pakad dhili ho gayi , jiske sath hi wo jamin per gir k sans lene lagi.

Naina bhi achanak se chakkar kha ker farsh pe gir gayi or kuch der gahari sanse lete hue behosh ho gayi

Veer ko to samjh ni aaraha tha ki kya kare usne pahale preety ko sambhala or fir kuch der baad pani dal naina ko hosh me laya.

Naina hosh me aayi to uska sir dird hone laga or use behosh hone se pahale ki apni sari harkat jese hi yaad aayi to wo turant preety k pas gayi or boli.

Naina rote hue :- mujhe maaf ker de meri bahan m ni janti achanak mujhe kya ho gaya tha , per mane wo sab jan bhujker ni kiya , mata rani ki kasam , yadi tu fir bhi gusa h to please chahe mujhe saja de le , per please mujhse door mat jana.

Preeti jo kafi dar chuki thi naina k pahale bartav se , lekin wo fir bhi apni saheli ki ankho me ansu na dekh payi or wo turant naina k gale lag gayi or use maaf ker diya.

Lekin naina ne aaj use jo ek trittya kahakar pukara tha , wo baat preety ko bahut buri lagi thi , uske dil me naina ki wo baat beth chuki thi.


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Preety naina k gale lagi sahmi hui si thi, use abhi tak yakin ni ho raha tha ki naina ne uske sath esa kiya tha kuch der pahale , usko is baat ka dukh na tha ki naina ne usper yu hamla kiya tha

Taklif to use is baat se hui thi ki uski sabsi achi saheli ne use ek shetan kahake bulaya tha.

Kahate h na is sansar m sabse amogh or sabse vidhvansak astra hota h vyakti ki vani.

Kisi astra se kiye gaye ghav to fir bhi bhar sakte h , h lekin jivha se nikle shabd ropi bano se hriday pe aghat pahuchta h , uska bharna bahut mushkil hota h .

Isliye humesha hume apni vani ka prayog sayam se or soch samjh k hi upyog kerna chahiye , verna anarth ki sambhavna ho sakti h.

Lekin anjane me hi sahi per naina se ye galti ho chuki thi , naina k katu shabdo ne preety k dil per aghat ker dala tha.

Preety bahut ko bahut jyada bura lag raha tha , use ek baar to bahut gussa bhi aaraha tha.

Lekin jis tarah naina usse lipte hue sisak sisak k rote hue mafi mang rahi thi, wo preety se na dekha gaya or usne apne gusse ko pi liya.

Preety khud se naina ko alag ker apne dono hatho se naina k ansu poochte hue boli.

Preety muskurate hue :- koi ni sister tum mat royo , m samjh sakti hu apne pyar ko khone ka dar kya hota h , isliye m tumse naraj ni hu , mane tumhe maaf kiya.

Naina sisakte hue :- per....

Preety bich m tokte hue :- bola na jo hua bhul jao , mane tumhe maaf kiya.

Ab jaldi se puja start karo muharat niklta ja raha h .

Tabhi sabke kano m ek aawaz aayi

Preety sahi bol rahi h ladki , jo hua use chod or puja ki shuruat ker.

Us aawaz ki or naina or uske dosto ne dekha to paya samne ghora baba khade the, jinhe dekh 3no unhe pranam kerte h

Ghora baba :- ladki mane tujhse pahale bhi kaha tha or ab bhi vahi kah raha hu , is waqt keval tera dhyan or maksad keval ek hona chahiye , jo ki h is naye astra ki pran pratishtha.

Per tune meri na suni , or abhi hui ghtna usika prinam thi .

Naina :- per baba.

Ghora baba datte hue :- ya to tum mujhse is waqt bahas ker le ladki ya apni maa ko pane ka marg prashast kerne ki vidhi.

Kyunki jesa ki mane pahale hi kaha tha ki ager ek din ki pooja m bhi koi badha aayi ya tera dhyan kahi or gaya to apni maa ko bhul jana.

Naina sharminda hote hue :- mujhe shama ker dijiye baba , aapka kahana uchit h or m aapse vada kerti hu ab mera keval dhyan is pooja m hoga or isiliye abse jab tak pooja sampan ni ho jati m yahi mandir m hi nivas karungi.

Veer :- per naina

Naina bich m tokte hue :- please veer mane jo galti ki h uska prayashchitt kerne ka ab yahi rasta h , tum preety ko leker jao , kyunki uski halat sahi ni h .

Tumhe preety ki kasam tum mujhe ni tokoge

Naina ka atal fesla or preety ki kasam k kaaran aage veer ne bhi use kuch na bola or preety ki bhi halat thodi kharab thi , isliye veer vaha se preety k sath jane laga tabhi baba bole.

Baba :- ruko ladke.

Veer :- ji maharaj.

Baba ne naina k gale se jyoti ki di hui mala jo veer ne naina k gale me dal di thi , use nikal k veer ko vapas dete hue bole.

Ghore :- ladke aaj to esa ker diya ,lekin aage se is mala ko apne se vimukh kerne ki bhul mat ker dena.

Tum logo ne vrushali ka ant ker to diya , lekin ab tum log trittya or is sansar ki sabhi buri shaktiyo k dhyan m aachuke ho.

Jinki najro se keval tum is rudraksh ki vajah se hi bache hue ho , aaj to mandir m hone k kaaran bach gaye .

Per kismat har bar sath ni deti bache , isliye meri or apni muh boli bahan (jyoti) ki baat mante hue ise humesha apne kanth me hi rakhna .

Veer ko ek baat herani to hui ki baba ko kese pata jyoti k bare m , fir use dhyan aaya baba ek mahaaghor h unse kuch ni chip sakta.

Veer :- ji baba.

Ye kahate hue usne mala ko pahana or preety ko leker waha se nikal pada.

Location :- shani lok

Narad ji shani dev se chintit swar me bole.

Naradji :- narayan ! Narayan , prabhu aaj jo bhi naina or preety k bich hua wo acha ni hua , vo to veer ne naina k gale m mala dal ker acha kiya , jisse us mala m mojud karan ka ansh ne use shant ker dala anyatha anarth ho jata bhagwan.

Shani :- uchit kaha devrishi aapne , parantu satya to ye h ki jo vidhi k vidhan me likha h vo hona nishchit h, aaj jo ghatna hui wo bhavishya ka ek sanket tha .

guru dev or mane ek bahut hi mahattvapoorn vajah k kaaran se hi to naina ko karan or jyoti se varsho dur rakhne ka nirnay liya tha , kyunki is nirnay ka sambhandh naina k janm k kaaran se jo juda hua tha.

Or ab jab jese jese karan jyoti or naina k milan ka samay aaraha h , vese vese bahut se parivartan bhi ane prarambh ho chuke h naina k jivan lm bhi or karan kr jyoti k bhi.

Narad ji ;- prantu bhagwan naina ka krodh sadharan to bilkul pratit na hua na hi ye poorn roop se prakratik tha

Esa kya h naina k janm ka satya jo aapne or mahadev ne hum devo se bhi varsho se abhi tak gupt rakha h

Shani :- dhairya rakhiye devrishi dhairya rakhiye aapke har prashno k utter milenge to sahi parantu samay aane per , tab tak aap dand nayak ki nayi lila ka anand le.

Ye bol shani dev shant ho gaye .

Wahi dusri or

Location :-. Jungle

Kaya jo karan se bahut hi door aachuki thi , wo ek talab k bicho bich bane chote se island pe bethi apne ghutno m muh chupaye roye ja rahi thi.

Usne apne kapde bhi change ker liye the , or usne ek black frock pahani hui thi , jo uske ghutno se thodi niche tak thi.

Kaya rote hue :- aapne mere sath ese kyu kiya sakha , aapni sakhi k sath esa kyu kiya thoda sa pyaar hi to manga tha mane aapse .

(Khud ko jhinjhorte hue ) ni ni ye m kya sochne lagi , jo hua usme sakha ki kya galti , galti to meri h jo mane ye jante hue bhi ki sakha jyoti ji se apar prem kerte h , ye jante hue bhi mane wo harkat ki , sahi to kiya unhonne mere ko chod ker aakhir.

Sahi to kaha unhonne m unki sakhi banne k layak hi ni , jo unke prem ko kalankit kerne ka prayas kiya.

Ese hi kaya bhavnao k bhavar ne fasi hui thi ki tabhi use hasne ki aawaz aayi.

Haha , dekho to samay bhi kya nirale khel khelta h , ek samay ki ek khunkhar kr shaktishali pishachini jiska nam sun insan ro dete , vo aaj khud ek insan k liye ro rahi h.

Kaya ne us aawaz ki or dekha to use thodi herani hui or usne samne wale ko dekh boli.

Kaya :- jalasur tum .Tum yaha kya jer rahe ho

Ji ha dosto samne jalasur hi tha jo karan ko khojte hue aage badh raha tha , tabhi uski najar roti hui kaya p padhi , kaya bhi kabhi unme se ek thi , to wo dono ek dusre ko bhali bhanti jante the.

Jalasur :- m yaha kya ker raha hu wo chodo or tum apni dekho kya se kya ban chuki ho.

Ek samay tum pishachon ki dena nayika hua kerti thi or ab dekho kya se kya ban gayi.

Apne mahan pad or kul se gaddari ker tumne insano ka sath diya or ab unhi insano k sath rah esi ban gayi ho ki ek mamuli insan k liye ro rahi ho.

Taras aata h tum per kaya , per chalo koi ni , m tumhe ek achi jindagi dila sakta hu , humme wapas mil jao , maharaj se m baat ker lunga , per uske liye tumhe meri bivi banna hoga meri jaan.

Kaya ye sun jer gusse m aagayi or khadi ho ker boli :- shadi or tum.jese asur se hargij bhi ni , bhut kal m bhi mera tum logo ka sath dena majburi thi ,verna tum asuro ka sath dena to dur m tum per thukti bhi ni.

Apne sakha ki di hui is nayi jinjindagi se m khush hu , isliye chale jao yaha se

Jalasur haste hue :- sakha kayi tu us asuro k dushman karan ki to baat ni ker rahi .

Are murk ladki, us gire hue ladke ki tulna mat ker humse , jo apni hi sagi bahan se najayaj sambhandh bana sakta h usse gira hua kon ho sakta h , are hum asur to usse behatar h kamse kam apni bahano ko to apni havas ka shikar ni banate.

Kaya gusse se chilayi :- apni had me raho jalasur tum kya jano mere sakha ki mahanta ko , yadi dobara unke prem ko gali di to ...

Jalasur haste hue :- ni to kya tu maregi mujhe , ager esa h na to sun m tere usi sakha ko marne aaya hu

Usi ke liye hi tune mera prastav thukraya na , aaj teri ankho k samne hi use marunga.

Kaya apni talvar ka avahan kerte hue :- teri ye majal , tu marega mere sakha ko , jab tak m jinda hu tu mere sakha ka bal bhi banka ni ker sakta jalasur.

Ye bol kaya ne jalasur ki or chalane laga ek var kiya usper apni talvar se , per kaya ki talvar jal ko kese bhed pati.

Jalasur k kuch na hua or usne apne hatho se ek jordar prahar kaya p kiya , jisse wo ek ped se ja takrati , jisse usse kafi chote aayi .

Per kaya ne har na mani or fir uspe prahar kiya , lekin natija wahi hua .

Kaya jitni baar prahar kerti , utni baar jalasur kaya ko or bhi jyada ghayal kerta , lekin kaya ne har na mani.

Jalasur :- bas bahut hua khel , mane to tujhe ek achi jindagi dene ka socha lekin kuldroh teri rarago me itna sama chuka h ki tu us insan k piche pagal ho chuki h.

Isliye ab tu marne k liye teyar ho ja .

Ye bol jalasur ne apna hath hava me uthaya or ek pani se bani parantu ghatak talvar ususke hath me aagyi jo usne kaya ki or feki.

Kaya jo ab bahut jyada ghayal jo jamin per giri hui thi , or wo khun se lath path ho chuki thi . Ab usme bhi uthne ki takat na thi , use lagne lag gaya tha ki ab uska ant samay nikat h .

Lekin kaya k chahre pe fir bhi koi dar or ya dukh na tha.

Kaya man me :- apni sakhi ko maaf ker dena sakha, bas aapke m itna hi kaam aasaki , dukh mujhe is baat ka ni ki m marne wali hu , dukh to bas is baat ka h ki aap mere paas na ho mere is antim ghadi me.

Fir bhi mujhe koi shikayat ni , kyunki aapne jo mere liye aajtak kiya uske badle m ek baar to kya ye jindagi 100 bar kurban h .

Ye bol Kaya ek dukh bhari muskan k sath ankh band ker apni mrityu ka intezaar kerne lagi.

Or tabhi jalasur ka feki hui talvar kaya k bilkul najdik pahunch gayi or tabhi ek aawaz pure watawaran me gunj gayi.

Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh

Lekin ye aawaz kaya k chikh ki ni balki jalasur ki chinkh ki thi.

Kaya us chink ko sun chonk ker jese hi ankhe kholi , to apne samne khade shaks ko dekh uski khushi ka thikana na raha or uske muh se sirf itna nikla

Kaya :- sakhaaa

Ji ha dosto kaya or jalasur k madhya karan khada tha , dand nayak k roop me kaya ki dhal ban .

Hua yu tha ki karan jab kafi der tak kaya ko dhund na paya to usne apni shakti ka upyog kerna hi behatar samjha.

Or jese hi usne shakti prayog kiya to or paya ki kaya ki kaya ki jaan khatre me h to uski bhohe tan gayi or uske bhitar mojud dand nayak jagrit ho gaya

Karan apne wahi kale kavach pahane dand nayak k roop me aate hue chilaya :- jalasur ab tujhe dand nayak se koi ni bacha sakta.

Itna bol karan teleport ho pahunch gaya kaya or jalasur k bich , jalasur to ek dam se karan ko dekh chonk gaya .

Vahi karan ne jese hi dekha ki talvar kaya ki or aarahi h , to usne apni ek ungli hava me gol gol ghumayi or usike sath hi jalasur ki feki hui talvar wapas ghum usi se takra gayi.

Karan kaya k pas jaker uske sir ko god m lete hue nam ankho se :- ha sakhi , m aagaya hu , mujhe maaf ker do sakhi mane tumhe bahut dukh pahunchaya , jabki tumhari koi galti bhi na thi.

Kaya :- sakha ap please mat roiye jo hua usme aapki koi galti n thi ,ab jo hua use bhul jaiye or apna kartvya nibhaiye nash ker dijiye is dusht ka.

Karan ha me sir hilata h or usike sath kaya behosh ho gayi , jise dekh pahale karan ghabraya , lekin usne khud ko sambhal pahale wo kaya k charo or ek kavach banata h or turant jalasur k pas pahunch gaya.

Jalasur :- acha hua rakshak jo tu khud b khud samne aagya , m tujhe hi marne aaya hu .

Aaj tujhe mar ker danvo ka udhar or apne mitra agneysur ki mot ka badla lunga.

Karan jo pahale hi gusse me tha kaya ki halat dekh wo gusse se dahada :- kayar mujhse ladne aaya tha to ladki p kya takat dikha raha tha.

Bahut badi bhul ker di h tune meri sakhi, meri kaya p humla kerke , ek baar yadi tune mujhpe humla kiya hota to bhi m shayad tumhe maaf ker deta.

Lekin tune aaj meri sakhi ko ni tune apni mrityu ko chua h ,ab dand pane ko sajj ho ja.

(Muskurahat) Parantu , is baar kuch naya ho jaye

Ye bol karan ne apni ankhe band ki or apna ki or tabhi uske sharir se prakash nikalne laga.

Or jab prakash hata to karan ek naye roop me samne tha .Kuch esa.


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Karan ka black armor ab badal ker black or yellow k combination me aachuka tha.

Is kavach k aane ka matlab tha ki karan ne apni lightning power ko enhance ker or bhi high level per ja chuka h.

Karan ne pahale vaar ka moka jalasur ko diya to jalasur ne apne hath se kuch ishara kiya , jiske sath hi talab ne lahare banne lagi or wo vikral roop karan ki or bhadne lagi per karan apni jagah se hila tak ni.

Lahare jese hi karan k pas pahunchi to karan ne apni talvar dono hatho se pakad niche pani me de mari , jise ke sath hi karan k prahar k veg se lahare nasht jo gayi or pani m current fel gaya , jisse jalasur ki chinke nikalne lagga


Karan :- ab meri bari

Or usike sath hi karan ne ek chalang lagayi or udker jalasur ka gala pakad liya or use leker hava me aagaya.

Is naye kavach ki madad se karan jal se bane us daitya ko bhi asani se pakad pa raha tha or hava me kafi uper aste hi karan ne apni palak jhapkayi jiske sath hi bhayankar bijli k jhatke karan k hatho se hote hue jalasur ko lagane lage.


Jalasur :- aahhhhhhhhhh.

Karib 10 min tak karan ne use yu hi gardan se pakad jhatke deta raha or fir use jor se utha ker niche jamin pe de mara.

Karan k is naye kavach k is prahar k kaaran jalasur jese hi jamin se takraya use bahut jyada dard hua.

Jalasur gusse or dard se chilaya :- bas bahut ho gaya , ab tujhe mujhse koi na bacha sakta.

Karan :- jo kerna h jaldi ker mere pas tere jese chachundro k liye jyda time ni h.

Jalasur gusse se utha or jaker nadi m sama gaya or kuch der baad wo ek bahut hi vishalakay dragon jese daitya k roop me nadi se nikla.
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Jalasur haste hue :- ab keSe bachega tu daitya

Karan ne haste hue :- bas itna hi , tum jeso k sath to jyada time waste kerna bhi paap h.

Jalasur :-. Rakshak

Ye bol jalasur udte hue karan k pas pahuncha or usper prahar kerne laga use apni puch ke bandhne ki kosis kerne laga , lekin karan bade aaram se usse bach raha tha.

Or fir karan ne ek jabardast mukka dragon k muh pe de Mara jisse wo wapas talab ne me gir gaya or apne asli roop m aagaya.

Jalasur :- ab isse bach ker dikha

Ye bol jalasur ne karan pe kayi sare pani se bane baan , trishul ityadi hathiyar uski or chode

Per ye kya wo sab karan ko chu tak na paye.

Karan :- tumhara samay samapt hua dusht tum jo ker sakte the wo tumne ker liya .

Ab apna dand pane ko saj ho ja dusht.

Ye bol karan ne apni ankh band ker apna hath aage kiya or usike sath uske hath me ek chota sa gola aagaya nile rang ka.





Jise karan ne jalasur k uper fek diya , gola jaker sidha jalasur me sama gaya , lekin ye kya use to kuch hua ni.

Jalasur haste hue :- mujhe kamzor bol raha tha na tu to abhi jo tune kiya kya wo hi teri takat.

Karan kuch na bola bas muskurata hua hava me se niche uter kaya ki or bharne laga.

Jalasur haste hue :- haha kese kayar ko marne ko bheja h mahaprabhu ne mujhe , ye to yudh k medan m pith dikha ker bhag raha h.

Bhag kayar bhag , per aaj tu nu bachega.

Karan fir kuch na bola or bina piche mude bas use middle finger dikhate hue aage bada.

Or usike sath hi pure vatavaran me chinkhe gunjane lagi jalasur ki.

Hua yu ki karan ne jo gola feka tha wo bijli ki shakti thi , jo jalasur k ander ja dhire dhire pure sharir me samane lagi , jiske kaaran use jhatke lagne lage or vo bin pani ki machli ki tarah tadafne laga.

Or karib 10 min k baad hi wo nast ho gaya.

Wahi karan kaya k pas pahunch dhire se uske mathe ko sahalata h jiske sath kaya k sare ghav apne aap bharne lage or karib 5 min baad hi kaya ko hosh aagaya.

Kaya ne jese hi karan ko apne pas dekha .

Kaya :- sakha.

Or itna bol wo karan k gale lag gayi or uske esa kerte hi karan or kaya dono ko ek anokhi anand se bhari anubhuti hui .

Kuch der baad kaya ko pahale ki ghatna yaad aayi jav karan ne use apne se door jane ka dand diya tha.

Kaya karan se :- sakha ek baar firse meri jaan bachane k liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya , lekin ab mujhe jana hoga.

Karan nam ankho se :- ni sakhi tumhe kahi jane ki jarurat ni h , mujhe abhas ho gaya h ki jo hya usme tumhari koi galti na thi , tumne to apne sakha se bas thode se prem ki hi asha ki .

Lekin m ye na samjh saka or avesh me aker tumhe kya kya ni kaha , please apne sakha ko maaf ker do sakhi or lot chalo.

Kaya :- sakha please aap mat roiye , aapne kuch galat n kiya.

Balki dosh to mera hi tha, jo m maryada todi , m janti hu aapka dil bahut bada h or mujhe bura na lage isliye aap esa ker rahe ho.

Karan ne kaya ko bahut samjhaya per kaya manne ko teyar hi na thi , vo karan k vachno k karan khud ko hi doshi samjhne lagi thi.

Jiske kaaran karan k pas bas ek hi rasta bacha tha or usne aaj wo ker diya jiski ummid kaya ko to kya readers ko bhi na hogi.

Karan ne ek chutki bajayi or agle hi pal dono usi jah pahunch gaye jaha wo sab hua tha or kaya bhi vapas bikini or karan v shape underwear m pani m the .
Tabhi karan ne achanak se kaya ko kamar se pakad apni or khicha jisse kaya k 36 k boobs karan k sine se takraye or kaya isse pahale kuch bol pati karan ne apne hoth kaya k hotho per rakh diye or unke ras ko pine laga, kaya ko apni god me le.

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Kaya to achanak se karan k is jumle se haki baki rah gayi ,kuch der to use samjh ni aaya ki ye sab kese or kya hua.
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Lekin dhire dhire wo bhi khud ko control na ker payi or karan k naram hoth or uski mardana chati ka sparsh pa vo hot hone lagi or usike sath vo bhi karan ka khul k sath dene lagi .




Usne apni bahe karan k gardan m dal karan ka pura sath dete hue uske hotho ka ras pine lagi.
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Dono ki kissing 10 min tak chali or jab karan ko laga ki kaya ki sans ful rahi h to usne kissing kerna chod diya

Kaya ka muh to esa ban gaya jese usse kisine uska favorite khilona chin liya ho.

Karan :- lo sakhi jo kuch der pahale jo tumse galti hui thi , vo mane bhi jer di , ab ho gaya na hisab baraber.

Kaya bichari kya bolti vo to sharm se lal hue ja rahi thi, fir karan firse mafi mangta h to kaya boli

Kaya :- sakha m aapse gussa ni hu , isliye aapko mafi mangne ki jarurat bhi ni h , per mujhe lagta h ki hume thodi distance bana k rakhni chahiye , kyunki esa kerne se kahi jyoti ji ye samjh na bethe aap unhe dhoka de rahe ho or ye kissing wagerah kya sahi h.

Karan haste hue :- pagli tum abhi tak meri jyoti ko na samjh payi , jyoti meri premika meri bahan hi ni balki wo meri shakti bhi h , lekin itna sab hone k baad bhi uske man me kabhi esa vichar na aaya ki vo mujhe bas apne tak bandh k rakhe ya ki mujh per bss uska adhikar ho.

Ha apne premi ko or ladkiyo se batna taklif bhara to hoga uske liye , lekin use malum h humara relation keval prem or dosti ka pavitra sangam h.

Isme vasna ka koi sthan ni h , isliye use humare is dosti k rishte se koi problem ni h .

Janti ho jab tum chali gayi thi , tab meri gudiya ne hi mujhe apni galti ka ahasa dilaya or samjhaya ki jaha prem ho vaha itna sab chalta h .

Ye bata karan ne use apni or jyoti k bich ki sari vartalap bata di or karan ne man hi man than liya tha ir khud se vada kiya ki ab vo kabhi bhi kaya pe gussa ni karega or jesa wo chahegi vesa use kerne dega , kyunki wo janta tha ki kaya kabhi kuch galat na karegi.

Jise sun kaya k dil m jyoti k liye ijjat or bhi bad gayi.

Kaya :- sach ms jyoti ji bahut mahan h , mera to sobhagya hoga unki saheli banna

Karan :- or meri saheli banna kya tha fir .

Kaya majak kerte hye :- sir dird or kya

Fir dono hasne lage or kuch der yu hi masti majak k baad dono nikal pade aage k safar ko.

Or is nirnay k sath hi karan apni niyati ko swikar kerne k path per chal pada tha , wo khud ko apni bhavishya m aane wali premikao k liye mentally prepare kerne laga tha

Lekin use ye baat to confirm thi ki kaya unme se na hogi , kyunki mahadev k anusar uske jivan m aane wali har ladki se uska koi na koi sambhandh hoga hi.

Kher karan ne in baato kk ek baar side rakh kaya k sath enjoy kerte hue aage bhadne laga

Raste m muskile to aayi lekin dono ne mil ker aaram se sab musibat par ker li.

Ab raat ho chuki thi or charo or andhere ka samrajya fel chuka tha Or fir ek jagah pahunch kaya ne karan ko rukne ko kaha or vo na bhi bolti to karan ko rukna hi padta kyunki samne ek bada sa pahad tha .

Fir kaya ne ankh band ker kuch mantra padhe Or usike sath kaya ke hatho se ek lal roshni nikal samne pahad se takrayi.

Or usike sath waha ek vishal gufa jo pahale adrishy thi , ab vo najar aane lagi.

Kaya gufa ki or ishara kerte hue :- lijiye sakha , ye h humare aage ka marg , ye gufa hi pishach lok ka dwar h jo keval vahi khol sakte h jinhe ek special pishchi mantr yad ho , jo mane aabhi padha .

Karan gufa ki or dekhte hue :- goblin king tera paap ka ghada bhar chuka h , m aarahu apni jyoti ka badla lene.

(Apni ankhe lal kerte hue) or sath hi aaraha h dand nayak tumhare karmo ka tumhe dand dene.

Kaya karan ka hath thamte hue :- keval aap hi ni sakha , aapki sakhi bhi aarahi h aapke sath

Karan ne kaya ko ek baar fir samjhaya ki vo vapas mahal lot jaye per kaya na mani .

Fir aakhir kar karan ne apni swikriti de di or dono dost ek dusre ka hath tham chal pade us gufa k bhitar.

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Wahi dusri or.

Location :- patal lok.

Vp ko jalasur ki mot ki khabar mil chuki thi , lekin is baar yaha ka mahol to bilkul ulat tha.

Humesha ki tarah jaha apne bheje gaye pyade ki mot pe vp gussa ho tod phod machata tha , vahi aaj uske ulat wo bahut khush najar aaraha tha.

Khush itna ki paglo ki tarah hase ja raha tha apni bhayankar hasi m. Waha mojud baki sare asur ankhe fade herani se use dekhe ja rahe the.

Asur 1 (dusre asur se ) :- ye maharaj ko kya ho gaya h bhai , itna has kyu rahe h , wo bhi sab kuch jante hue.

Asur 2 :- lagta h bhai ,rakshak se bar bar har ker mansik santulan kho bethe h maharaj.

Yaha hum logo ne ek or asur veer kho diya h or yaha maharaj ese khush ho rahe h jese unhone 3no lok jit liye ho.

Abhi wo dono baate kerne me mashgul the ki piche se ek aawaz aayi, jisko sun un dono ki fat k hath m aagayi.

Jite ni to kya hua , jit lenge vo bhi jald hi.

Dono ne piche mud ker dekha to unki halat kharab ho gayi, kyunki piche vp khada tha jo apne chahre p ek kamini or darawani muskan liye khada tha.

Vp :- kya hua dar kyu gaye,are bhai khushi ka mahol h khushiyan manane ki teyari kero.

Dono ne man me socha :- lagta h maharaj ne humari baate ni suni.

Vp :- kya hua yahi soch rahe ho na ki jalasur ki mrityu hone per bhi m yu kyu has raha hu.

Dono haa m sir hilate h

Vp :- murkho jalasur ki mrityu humari parajay ni balki humari vijay ka pahala kadam h.

Janna chahte ho kese , to dekho.

Ye bol vp ne apni shakti se samne ek screen banayi jis per ek drishy najar aane laga.

Drishya tha us jungle dekh jisme karan or kaya gufa k dwar ko khol chuke the.

Karan or kaya ek dusre ka hath thame aage bad hi rahe the ki tabhi achanak se karan ko chakkar se aane lage or wo ladkhada ker gir gaya ghutno k bal.

Kaya dar k chintit hote hue chilayi :- sakha.

Or wo bhi niche beth karan ko sambhalne lagi.

Kaya :- sakha aap thik to h na , kya hua ye achanak aapko.

Karan mathe ko pe hath pe hath rakh bola :- kuch ni bas halki si kamzoori aagayi h.

Kaya :- aapki tabiyat sahi ni h sakha hume aaj yahi rukna chahiye , hum kal nikalenge.

Karan :- ni kaya ab or samay ni h humare pas kharab kerne k liye, jese jese samay bit raha h , meri gudiya ki tabiyat or kharab hoti ja rahi h.

M use or taklif me ni dekh sakta or na hi un logo dand dene k liye or pratiksha ker sakta hu , jiski vajah se meri bahan ki ye halat hui.

Hume aage bhadna hi hoga.

Kaya :- per sakha

Karan khade hote hue :- meri chinta mat kero sakhi , jab tak meri gudiya ka prem or tumhari jesi sakhi ka sath h , mera koi kuch ni bigad sakta.

Kaya ne karan ko bahut samjhay per karan na mana or wo kaya ka hath tham chal pada us gufa k bhitar.

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Vp :- ab kuch samjh aaya ya ni murkho

Sab na m sir hilate h.

Vp haste hue :- aayega bhi kese , yadi tum me itni budhi hoti to tum me or mujhme anter kya hota.

To suno m aarambh se hi janta tha ki jalasur rakshak ka nash kerna to dur use hani tak na pahuncha payega .

Parantu fir bhi mane use bheja kyu ?

matr isliye taki m us karan ki urja ko vyarth jaya kerwa saku , jyoti shaktihin ho chuki h .

Or kyunki jyoti apne bhai ki shakti ka stotra h or dono ek hi shakti k 2 bhin roop h , is kaaran wo karan bhi kamzor ho chuka h.

Nilamani k prabhav se vo shaktihin to na hua jyoti samman , parantu ab wo pahale samman wo mahashakti shali bhi ni raha , jisne prachandasur ko sena samet akele hi yamalok pahunchaya.

Ese me jalasur k khilaf yudh me uski kafi urja nasht ho chuki h , jisse wo durbal ho chuka h.

Or jesa ki hum jante h pishach lok kali shaktiyo ka gad h or usme paishachi shaktiya or bhi jyada shaktishali ho jati h.

To is sthiti me tum hi batao kya wo rakshak pishach lok se jivit lot payega.

Ye bol wo hasne laga or sath me sabhi asur bhi uska sath dene lage khush ho.

Asur 1 :- aapne satya kaha maharaj , is baar to wo rakshak gaya kaam se.

Asur 2 :- ha maharaj , aap sach me mahan ho dhanyawad humari uljhan ko dur kerne k liye.

Vp :- are ni ni dhanywad kesa , jo marne wala ho uski akhiri icha to puri kerni hi chahiye.

Itni akal to mujh jese mansik santulan khoye hue ko bhi hoti h.

Vp ki ye baat sun kar to dono ki fath k char ho gayi or unki dhoti gili ho gayi , wo samjh gaye the ki unka ant samay aagaya h.

Abhi vo mafi mangne k liye kuch bolte usse pahale hi vp ki ankho se 2 2 rays nikal un dono se takrayi or dekhte hi dekhte wo 2no wahi bhasam ho gaye.

Bhasm kerne k baad vp jaker apne singhasan pe beth bola.

Vp :- murkh kahike bina baat jane hi muh khola or mot ko gale laga liya.

Or tum sab bhi dekh lo ye anter h mujhme or tum sab me , tum sab murkh ho isliye aaj tak devo se hare .

Parantu m tum jesa ni , .............. Naam h mera , jiske naam se prathvi ka bacha bacha kampta h , shani samman hi mera bhay is sansar me sab logo me vyapt h.

Ek baar jiske uper mera saya pad jaya to uska jivan nark se bhi battar bana dene wala.............. Hu m.

Rakshak tu jyoti k ilaaj ki or ni apitu apni mrityu ki or badh raha h , mot tera intezaar ker rahi h rakshak , intezaar ker rahi h.

Wahi dusri or

Aaiye ek najar is kahani ki villain bhai bahan ki jodi yani viraaj or maya pe bhi daal li jaye.

Jyoti k kahane pe us din pret roopi uske bodyguards ne unhe jail me to bhijwa diya tha or sath me karan ki company ki itni pahachan hone ki vajah se bhi police ne jyada koi janch kiye bina unhe bas jail me dala hua tha.

Na jane kya chal raha tha karan k man me ki usne sirf ek tarah se unhe jail me ked karwaya tha, unper koi kanuni karwayi ni ki thi.

Viraj ne yaha bhi police ko pese deker apne or maya k liye suvidhaye to bana li , lekin karan ki power k kaaran wo bahar ni nikal pa raha tha.

Viraaj or maya dono lockup me bethe baate ker rahe the.

Maya :- bhai or kitne din hume is nark m rahana hoga .

Viraaj :- m konsa khush hu yaha rakhe maya , per sala pata ni esa kya kiya h us kutiya jyoti ne , jo humari jamanat ho hi ni pa rahi.

Sumit (in dono ka dost or peshe se vakil h , jo khud ek ghatiya or lalachi admi h , jo peso k liye kuch bhi ker sakta h) apni puri koshis ker raha h , per sala kamyab hi ni ho raha .

Maya :- jo bhi kerna h jaldi kero bhai , ab mujhse or ni raha jata yaha , mujhe badla lena h us kutiya jyoti se , jiske kaaran hum is halat me h.

Viraaj :- ha bahana , mera bhi yahi haal h , bas ek baar yaha se bahar nikal jaye , fir us sali ko pure shahar ki randi na banaya to mera naam viraj ni.

Tabhi ek constable aaker un dono ka lockup kholta h or bolta h.

Constable :- chalo niklo , tum dono ki jamanat ho chuki h.

Maya or viraj jese hi ye sunte h dono khush or heran dono ho jate h , unhe laga ki sumit ne unka kaam ker diya h

Wo jese hi bahar nikal inspector ki table k pas pahunche to paya ki waha sumit ni balki koi or vakil hi tha

Vakil :- hello mr viraj , my name is raghav , m sumit sir ka assistant hu , wo darasal wahi aane wale the aapko riha karwane , per unki wife ki achanak se tabiyat kharab ho gayi or unhe hospitalised kerna pada , isliye unhone mujhe bheja h.

Viraaj sumit ki family k baare me janta tha or use ye bhi pata tha ki uski wife ki tabiyat sahi ni rahati , isliye use shak na hua , na hi usne jyada sawal jawab kiye , kyunki is waqt wo bas yaha se nikalna chahta tha.

Fir sabhi formality puri kerne k baad 2no bhai bahan raghav k sath car md beth waha se nikal pade.

Raghav :- viraj ji ab aap kaha jana pasand karenge , aapko ghar chod du aapke.

Viraj :- ni ghar ni , tum hume kisi badiya se hotel le chalo.

Maya :- hotel kyu bhai.

Viraj :- vo isliye bahana kyunki hum ghar gaye or is baat ki bhanak bhua radha ya us kamini ko hui.to wo log satark ho jayenge , isliye hi to mane un police walo ko pese khila k filhal k liye apna muh band rakhne ko kaha.

(Maya k Kaan me) or jaan bahut din ho gaye tumhara ras piye, pahale jaker ek jabardast round lenge , fir aage ki planning karenge.)

Maya viraj ki bat thoda sharmayi or uske chahre p bhi ek kutil muskan aGayi.

Raghav :- vese mr viraj ,aap chahe to mere ghar rah sakte ho, vese bhi m akela hi rahata hu or mujhe kisi kaam se out of town bhi jana h.

Viraaj or maya jhat se ha bol dete h or tino nikal pade raghav k ghar ki or.

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Karan or kaya ne jese hi gufa k darwaje k ander pravesh kiya to wo kuch hi second me teleport ho pahunch gaye , kaya k purane ghar yani ki pishach lok.

Kaya :- lijiye sakha hum pahunch gaye pishach lok, yahi wo jagah h jaha mane apna bachpan gujara , apne ma baba or saheli k sath rahi.

(Udaas hote hue ) yahi h wo jagah jaha mane ma baba ko khoya bhi.

Karan kaya k kandhe p hath rahker santwna deta h, or apne aas pas najar dodata h.

Pishach lok apne nam ki tarah hi bada bhayankar tha , yaha kabhi suraj ni ugta tha , wo log abhi ek pahad k uper khade the , jiske kinare se niche pishachon ka ganv dikh raha tha.



Jaha k sare ghar bhi kale rang k or bhayanak the , waha k ped podhe bhi kale the.

Waha charo or koi lal rang ki urja k gole dikhayi de rahe the , jo waha ujale k ek matra strot the.

Abhi vo dono yu hi uper se najare dekh rahe the ki un dono ko waha kayi logo ki aane ki ahahat sunayi di.

Karan or kaya jaldi se ek ped per chad ker niche dekhte h to pate h kuch pishach aaye h , jo apni tez nak se kuch sungh rahe h.

Pishach :- ye yahan insano ki khushbu kaha se aarahi h.

Pishach 2 :- aa to rahi h , lekin wo yaha pahunche kese.

Pishach 3 :- kese bhi pahunche ho jaldi se dhundo unhe , bade din ho gaye insani mas khaye hue , aaj yo dawat hogi dawat

Wo pishach aas pas khojne lage insano ko , karan samjh gaya ki ye log use dhund rahe h

Karan chahta to unhe aaram se mar sakta tha , lekin ek esa ker dushman ko savdhan hone ka moka ni dena chahata tha , isliye usne apni ankhe band ki or apne charo or ek kavach bana liya , jisse uski khushbu chup gayi.

Lekin un pishacho ko abhi bhi khushbu aarahi thi, jo kaya ki thi , kaya bhi ab insan ban chuki thi, isliye wo bhi khatre m thi.

Karan ne jhat se kaya ko gale laga liya , jisse karan k kavach k kaaran uski khushbu kuch der k liye chup gayi.

Kafi time tak pishach aas paas dhundte rahe , per unhe kuch na mila.

Jiske kaaran wo log nirash ho or apna waham man waha se chale Gaye.

Jiske baad dono niche aate h

Kaya :- oh no m is baare m to bhul hi gayi sakha , hum ese to jyada der chupker na rah payenge , kuch to kerna hoga hume.

Karan bhi pareshan tha kyunki usme abhi itni urja ni thi ki wo ek or kavach bana sake use aaram ki jarurat thi.

Abhi dono is samasya k baare m soch rahe the ki tabhi kaya ko us box ki yaad aayi jo mata chaya ne use diya tha.

Use samjh aagaya ki is box k upyog ka samay aagaya h , usne jhat se apne bag se or kholne se pahale ek baar karan ki or dekha.

Karan ha me gardan hila apni sahamati deta h , kaya ne karan ka ishara pate hi box ko khol diya.

Or wo box jese hi khula to usme se ek nile rang ki roshni nikal kaya me samane lagi , ek samay to esa aaya jab kaya us roshni m naha gayi or karan ko to ek baar roshni k kaaran dikhayi deni band ho gayi.

Kuch der baad jab roshni hati or kaya ne khud ko dekha to uske muh se ek chinkh nikal gayi


Kaya jor se :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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Jese hi box se roshni lupt hui to kaya jiski us roshni k kaaran swatah hi ankhe band ho chuki thi , use apne band ankho se ek urja or sath me dard ka ahasas hone laga.

Jisse vo bhali bhanti parichit thi , jiske kaaran uske man me ek bhay utpan hone laga.

Uski ankhe jalne si lagi or danto me bhi dard hone laga , vo chikhna to chahti thi lekin chikh bhi na pa rahi thi, jiska ka kaaran tha vo bhay.

Dhire dhire jab kaya ka dard khatm hua or use apne pahale wala ahasas mano ek bhram sa laga kyunki wo khud ko ab normal feel ker rahi thi.

Kaya ne apni ankhe kholi to paya ki karan use ankhe fade dekh raha h.

Kaya ne :- kya hua sakha aap mujhe ese kyu dekh rahe ho

Karan k chahre p ashchary chinta or asamnjas k bhav saf dikhayi pad rahe the , use samjh ni Aaraha tha ki wo kya kahe.

Karan ka koi utter na pa kaya apna swal doharati h

Karan :- bolo na sakha kya baat h aap mujhe yu kyu ghur rahe ho.

Karan kuch ni bola or usne apna hath hava me gol ghumaya kaya k samne or usi samay kaya k thik samne ek chota sa megic mirror ban gaya.

Kaya ne jese hi us mirror me khud ko dekha to mano uski sans wahi tham si gayi or uske muh se ek jordar chikh nikli.

Kaya :- niiiiiiiiiiiiii

Kaya ki is jordar chinkh karan tha uska vo bhay jo ab sasach ho chuka tha.

Yani ki kaya ek baar phir ek pishach ban chuki thi , uski ankhe pahale ki tarah kaali or ankhe kali ho chuki thi , jinki putliya gayab ho chuki thi or uske sharir per ek kavach bhi achuka tha







Kaya wahi rote hue jor jor se chilane lagi :- ni ye ni ho sakta , mai mmmm....m fir se pishchini ni ban sakti .

(Karan se ) sakha yadi aapke ye koi majak h to please ise band ker dijiye ,mujhe esa majak bilkul pasand ni h , please apni sakhi k sath esa majak mat kijiye.

Karan ko khud samjh ni aaraha tha ki ye sab esa kese or kyu hua , mata chaya ne kaya k sath esa kyu kiya .

Karan apna sir jhukaye hue bola :- ni sakhi ye mane ni kiya .

isse aage kuch ni bol paya.

Kaya rote hue :- to fir ye kese hua sakha , aapne to kaha tha na ki m is nark se bhi krur yoni se mukt ho chuki hu , fir ye kese sakha.

Tabhi un dono k kano me mata chaya ki aawaz padi.

Karan ne bilkul uchit kaha tha putri

Karan or kaya ne aawaz ki or dekha to paya ki samne mata chaya ka ek pratibimb khada h , jinhe dekh karan or kaya pranam kerte h.

Karan :- mata ye sab kese or kyu hua ....

Karan ki baat bich m katte hue mata bol.

Mata chaya :- ghabrao ni putra sab kuch sahi h , kuch bhi anuchit ni hua h.

(Kaya se ) or putri tum yu vyarth ro ker apni urja ko nasht kerna band kero or jo m bol rahi hu use dhyan se suno

Jesa ki tum janti ho ki is pishach lok me asuri shaktiya kayi guna prabal ho jati h or visheshkar bone pishachon k liye yaha ka andhkar kisi amrit kalash se kam ni h.

Or ese samay me putra karan jo jyoti ki shaktihin hone se swayam bhi nirbal ho chuka h , or shatru is baat se bhalibhanti avgat h , is kaaran tumhare sakha per prano k sankat ke megh mandra rahe h .

Isliye shani ki icha se hi tumhe punah apni paishachi shaktiya mili h , kyunki is samay keval tum hi ho jo is asuri lok se bhali bhanti parichit ho or in nayi shaktiyo k yogya bhi.

Kaya :- nayi shaktiya ?

Mata chaya :- ha putri nayi shaktiya , tumhe bhabhit ya dukhi hone ki avashyakata ni h , kyunki ab tum apni icha anusar roop dharan ker sakti ho.

Arthat tum rahogi to manushy hi , parantu avashyakata padne per tum apne is roop , yani ki pishach roop ko bhi dharan ker sakogi , taki dharm ki raksha me tum bhi yogdan de sako.

Karan bich me :- per mata yadi shaktiya hi kaya ko lotani thi to ye pishach roop hi kyu.

Mere kahane ka tatparya h ki bina pishach bane bhi to shaktiya di ja sakti thi na .

Chaya muskurate hue :- putra kuch prashno k utter samay aane per swayam gyat ho jate h .

Isliye tum is bat ko chod apna dhyan apne udeshya per kendrit kero putra kyunki samay gujarta ja raha h.

Humare pas keval 2 din hi shesh h , yadi do din me jyoti ka upchar na hua to vo sadev k liye shaktohin ho ha jayegi or wo kabhi swasth na ho payegi.

Chaya ki ye baat sun to mano karan k pran sukh gaye , usne turant bola.

Karan :- ni maa , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ye karan apni jyoti ko swasth kerke hi rahega wo bhi in 2 dino me hi .

Chaya :- mujhe tumse yahi asha h putra.

Kaya or karan ek baar fir mata chaya k panv chuker ashirwad lete h .

Mata chaya :- vijayi bhavah.

Or usike sath unka pratibimb anterdhyan ho jata h.

Mata chaya k jane k bad karan majak me bola .

Karan :- kya baat h bhai new dress new shaktiya , party to banti h bhai.

Kaya bhi full maje kete hue :- haha kyu ni , aayo aaj aapko pishach lok ki special dish khilwati hu.

Ab apne karan ji to thare khane k shokin , khane ka nam sunte hi muh m pani aagaya.

Karan :- acha wo kya h.

Kaya :- mast chatakedar.

Karan muh m pani late hue :- bolo bolo .

Kaya :- tanduri insani brain or sath me taja taja khun .

Karan ne jese hi ye suna to uske sare arman chaknachur ho gaye or ulti jesa hone laga.

Karan muh banate hue ;- chii, ye bhi koi khana h.

Kaya haste hue :- or ni to kya , pishach lok me or kya milega bhala , vese aapko insan ka ni to samp ka bheja mil jayega.

Karan muh banate hue :- lagta h tu ulti kerwake manegi , mujhe ni khana kuch bhi , tu hi kha.

Kaya :- are ese kese ab bola h to party to leni hi padegi.

Karan hath jodte hue :- mujhe maaf ker meri ma , meri galti ho gayi jo tujhse party mangi.

Kaya karan ko khichte hue :- ji ni party to ab aapko milegi.

Ye bol kaya karan ko khichte hhye ek or le jane lagi.

Karan majak me :- koi bachao mujhe , ye bhutni mujhe mar dalegi.

Kaya darwani aawaz nikalte hue :- are wah tumko to mera plan bhi pata chal gaya insan , bilkul sahi kaha tune , aJ pahale tujhe khila pila k mota karungi , phir (jibh laplapate hue ) maza aajayega.

Ye bol kaya hasne lagi .

Karan ( natak kerte hue ) :- bhagwN k liye mujhe chod do please.

Kaya ankh marte hue :- bhagwan k liye tumhe chod diya to humara kya hoga janeman.

Kaya ki is harkat k sath dono has pade or nikal pade ek or.

Wahi dusri or.

Raat ka samay tha or naina or ghora baba yagya kund me ahuti dete hue apni pooja m lage hue the.

Naina pure tan man se dhayan me lagi hui thi , tabhi ek chota sa sshakti punj yagya k havan se nikla or samne rakhe naina k naye shastra yani ki us trishul me sama gaya.

Usike sath ghora baba bole

Baba :- utam , shabas naina tune apni tisre din ki sadhna ko bhi bhali bhanti purn ker , is shastra ko jagrit ker liya.

Ab 6 or 9 din ki puja k baad ye shastra purn roop se teyar ho jayega.

Ab tum jao or bhojan or vishram kero.

Ye bol baba waha se chale gaye , tab naina khud se boli.

Naina :- yaar bhuk to badi lagi h , per kya karu , ja bhi to ni sakti hotel wapas

Tabhi uske kano me aawaz padi .

Aap ni ja sakti to kya hua hum to aasakte h na sali sahiba.

Ye aawaz veer ki thi , jo preety k sath khana leker aaya tha naina k liye.

Naina :-. Are wah jiju , aapko to bada khayal h apni sali sahiba ka.

Veer :- ab kya kare , wo kahavat h na sari khudai ek taraf , or joru ka bhai sorry bahan ek taraf

Ye bol veer hasne laga sath me naina bhi or preety sharmane lagi.

Naina preety ko chedte hue :- oye oye kudi sharma gayi.

Vese veer aJ apni preety kitni cute lag rahi h na , I really jealous

Preety wakayi m aaj bahut cute lag rahi thi , usne ek dangri dress pahani thi, jisme kuch esi lag rahi thi wo.
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Preety bhuje man se :- thanks

Naina preety k bolne k style se samjh gayi ki preety abhi bhi usse naraj h.

Veer :- chalo ab baate band kero aayo khana khate h , badi bhuk lagi h

Naina :- tum logo ne khaya ni abhi tak.

Veer :- kaha apki saheli ne to ultimatem dediya , khayenge to sister k sath , verna ni.

Naina ye sun thoda emotional ho preety ki or dekhti h , preety bhi bina kuch bole masumiyat se gardan ha m hilati h.

Jisse naina ko uspe bahut pyaar aata h or vo boli .

Naina :- aaj m apni bahan ko apne hath se khilaungi.

Fir 3no dost milker wahi mandir k bahar bane angan me bethe khana khate h.

Naina ek kor tod preety ki or bhadate hue fir se mafi mangti hui boli.

Naina nam ankhon se:- preety meri bahan , please jo bhi hua use bhul ja or apni sister ko maf ker de.

Mata rani ki kasam wo sab mujhse anjane m hua , mera maksad tumhara dil dukhana na tha.

M janti hu tumne jo bola majak tha , per ye jante hue bhi na jane kyu m bardasht na ker payi or na hi unki jindgi m kisi or k hone ki kalpana bhi mere liye sambhav ni.

Fir bhi meri bahan yadi meri is harkat ka bura laga to mujhe chahe mar le , saja dede , per ese mujhse muh to na mod

Naina ye bol sisak sisak k rone lagi , preety apni ek loti saheli ko yu rota hua na dekh payi or usko gale laga shant karane lagi.

Jab naina kuch shant hui to preety boli.

Preety :- sister tumhe mafi ek shart p hi milegi.

Naina :- wo kya preety .

Preety :- tumhe abhi humare sath ghumne jana hoga.

Naina :- m , per m kese .

Veer :- oh common naina , chalo na , vese bhi aaj ki puja to ho hi gayi na.

Naina pahale to thoda hichki chayi lekin baad m maan gayi . Fir 3no jaldi se khana kha khate h or mandir se nikalne lage.

Lekin achanak naina ko na jane kya sujhi , wo mandir m wapas jati h or us trishul ko utha apne sath rakh leti h or fir wo log nikal pade jaipur ki ser kerne .

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Kaya karan ko leker ek raste se leker ganv ki or jati h , jaha is samay koi ni dikhayi de raha.

Karan :- kaya yaha koi dikhayi kyu ni de raha.

Kaya :- wo isliye kyunki ye samay sabke sone ka h , yaha din to hota hi ni , lekin fir bhi ye log 12 ghante sote h jab dharti pe din hota h or jab dharti p rat hoti h to shikar kerne nikalte h.

Karan aaaas pas dekhte hur jata h , vo ganv dikhne m to ek simple ganv jesa tha , per esa ganv jaha insan ni hevan rahate h, sabhi ghar ache se bane hue the.



Kaya fir karan ko ganv k bahar le ja ker ek chote se jhopdi numa ghar ki or rukti h.

Karan :- ye konsi jagah h saki.

Kaya nam ankho se :- ye mera ghar h sakha, jaha aapki sakhi ne jindagi gujari .

(Siskte hue ) or jaha mAa baba ne ....

Ye bol kaya sisak sisak k rone lagi , karan kaya ko gale laga ker uske ansu pochte hue bola.

Karan :- mat royo sakhi , jo ho gaya hum use ni badal sakte , lekin apne aane wale kal ko to sudhar sakte h na .

Or tum hi socho kya tumhe yo rota dekh uncle aunty ki atma ko dukh na pahunchega , kya tum chahti ho ki vo dukhi ho.

Kaya na m sir hilati h .

Karan :- shabas to chalo ab rona band kero.

Yaar tumhara dost pahali baar tumhare ghar aaya h , use apna ghar ni dikhaogi.

Kaya alag hote hue :- ha kyu ni sakha aaiye.

Tabhi kaya ko kuch yaad aaya or wo boli.

Kaya :- sakha aap ander chaliye m bas 5 min me aayi.

Karan :- are achanak kya hua.

Kaya :- are kuch bhi to ni m bas abhi aayi.

Kaya ye bol jaldi se waha se nikal gayi , kaya bahut jyada utsuk thi , isliye karan ne bhi use ni roka.

Or wo ghar k ander ki or jane laga , wo ghar bhi ganv k baki gharo jesa hi tha , but chota sa tha or uper se tut fut bhi gaya tha , jo shayad warsho se waha kisi k na ane k kaaran hua tha.

Kyunki kaya ne jabse Dracula ko marne k mission p nikli thi wapas ghar na loti thi.

Karan ghar k ander gusta h or ghar ko dekhte hue wo ek kamre ki or jane laga or jese hi wo us gate k pas pahuncha tabhi achanak

Se ek vampire girl ander se ulti latki hui gate k samne aagayi or uspe ek bhayanak chikh se cillayi

Uske achanak ke is hamle se karan sambhal ni paya or chonk k piche gir pada or usike sath wo vampire girl bhi niche kud gayi , uski ankhe surkh laal thi , jese ki sare sharir ka khun wahi utter aaya ho or uske pankh nikle hue the , jo use or bhayanak bana rahe the.

Vampire jibh laplapate hue bhayanak aawaz me :- insan yaha.

Karan khud ko sambhalte hue :- kon ho tum or yaha kya ker rahi ho.

Vampire girl :- wah insan daat deni padegi teri to , ek to tu pishach lok m ghusa or uper se mere ghar m hi ghus ker puch raha h kon hu m .

Karan :- tumhara ghar ?

Vampire :- ha mera ghar .

Ye bol us vampire girl karan pe jhapad padi , lekin karan jaldi se side m ho gaya.

Karan :- dekho tum jo bhi ho , m tumse ladna ni chahata , isliye shanti se baat kerte h ek baar tum chaho to.

Vampire :- shanti ki baat or vo bhi tum insano se , kabhi ni.

Mujhe nafrat h Tum insano se , tum insano ne mera sab kuch chin liya h pahale bhi ,
or ye bol wo fir se humla kerti h karan pe.

Karan fir se dodge kerta h, vo vampire bar bar esa kerti lekin karan bach jata .

Jisse wo vampire gusse se pagal hone lagi , or usne or bhi bhayanak roop dharan ker liya , or apne lambe danto ko dikhate hye chillayi.
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Chinkh itni jor ki thi ki karan ko apne kan band kerne pade , jisse uska dhyan bhatak gaya or us vampire ne moke ka fayda utha usper chalang laga di.

Jisse karan niche gir pada or vo vampire uske uper chad usko katne ki kosis kerne lagi

Lekin karan har manne walo m se na tha , usne us vampire ko pakad apne se dur kerne ki kosis kerne laga

Lekin uski urja kam thi , isliye wo mamuli vampire bhi use jordar takkar de rahi thi.

Fir dono me niche gire hue hi shuru hui ek jang , jisme kabhi karan uske uper aaker use control kerne ki kosis kerta to kabhi vo vampire ladki karan k uper aaker use katne ki koshis kerne lagti.

Karan kafi thak chuka tha kuch der baad , jis kaaran wo kamjor padne laga tabhi wo vampire girl uske uper aake boli.

Vampire :- bahut jan h re tujhme ladke , tujhe to ab m kahungi ni balki apna gulam banaungi , tujhe apne jesa vampire banaker .

Ye bol vo vampire karan ki gardsn ki or bhadne lagi , usne karan k dono hath apne ghutno se daba liye the. Usne apne tez nakhuno ko karan ki chati m gada diya , jisse karan ki chinkh nikal gayi ek baar

Karan :- aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh jyotiiii.....

Vampire haste hue :- ker le ker le aakhiri baar yaad ker le apni mashuka ko , kyunki ab to yu use kabhi dekh to payega ni.

Ye bol vampire ne apne nakhuno ko nikal karan ki t shirt phad di or fir

Us vampire ne jese hi karan ko katne k liye apna hAth uske sine pe rakha , tabhi karan k gaLe m mojud uske locket ne use ek jordar jhatka dete hue dur fek diya or vo vampire sidhe jaker takrayi ek diwar se.

Us locket se ek nile rang ki roshni nikal karan me samane lagi , jiske sath karan ko apne sharir m ek urja mahasus hui.

Karan khada hote hue apni talvar ka aahvahn kerta h , jiske sath hi uske hatho m talvar aajati h.

Talvar le karan us vampire ki or bhadne laga , jo us jhatke se kafi ghayal ho gayi thi or usse utha ni ja raha tha.

Karan :- mane tumhe moka doua tha , lekin tumne yudh ka chayan kiya , ab apne karmo k fal ko saj ho jao.

Vampire :- marna h to marde insan , lekin chahe kuch bhi ho jaye mere dil se tum insano k liye nafrat khatm na hogi.

Karan :- jesi tumhari marji.

Ye bol karan apni talvar ko utha ker us vampire pe war kerne hi wala hota h ki tabhi uske kano ke ek aawaz padi.

Ruk jaiye karan ji....

Ye aawaz kaya ki thi , jo karan ko rok rahi thi.

Kaya ko dekh na jane kyu wo vampire bhi khush ho gayi or uske muh se nikla :- kayaaaa.

Kaya bhi khushi k ansu liye use pukarti h :- diyaaaa.

Karan kaya se puchta h :- kaya kya tum ise janti ho.

Kaya :- ha karan ji bahut ache se , yahi to h meri saheli , meri diya , jiske baare m aapko bataya tha.

Ise hi to dhundne m gayi thi iske ghar , per diya tum yaha kya ker rahi ho or sakha aap ise mar kyu rahe the.

Karan tab kaya ko jo hua wo sab bata deta h ,jise sun kaya diya se boli.

Kaya :- diya ye sab kya tha , tum yaha kya ker rahi thi , or tumne sakha pe humla kyu kiya , humne to ek dusre se wada kiya tha na ki hum kabhi kisi bekasur insan ko ni marenge.

Diya kaya k lagte hue :- kaya meri jan meri bahan tu jinda h , m.bata ni sakti m kitna khush hu.

Mujhe to laga Dracula k sath in insano ne tera bhi ant jer diya , isliye m in insano se nafrat kerne lagi thi , tu to janti hi h na mera tere siwa h hi kon is duniya m.

(Sisakte hue )Teri bahut yaad aati thi , isliye m yahi rahane lagi ke jab mane is insan ko yaha aate dekha to khud ko rok na payi or uspe humla kiya.

Lekin ab mujhe koi gila ni h , meri saheli jo mere pas wapas aagayi , ye bol diya kaya kaske gale lag gayi or rone lagi.

Kaya bhi kafi der uske gale lage kafi der roti rahi , karan ne dono saheliyan jo itne sal baad mili thi , is kaaran use disturb ni kiya or ek side me jaker apni healing power se dhire dhire ganv bharne laga , sath me karan ne chupchap ek chota sa kam or ker diya.

Jiski bhanak filhal to dono saheliyon ko bilkul na lagi, kyuki wo dono to ek dusre se gale lagi hui apne gile shikwe dur kerne m lagi hui thi.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske friend kafi time tak yu hi ghumte rahe , preety boli.

Preety :- aaj to bahut maja aaya h na sister.

Naina :- ha , kafi dino baad yu moj masti k sath ghumna hua verna apna to vahi bhut preton ko marne ka safar.

Veer :- are auntyi ab aapka adesh ho to wapas chale , verna is safar pe bhi kahi bhut preto ka samna na ho jaye


Preety :- ek second tumne aunty kisko bola.

Naina :- or kise tumhe hi bola hoga.

Preety jhut ka gussa kerte hue :- acha m aunty to tum dadi ma.

Naina natak me sath dete hue :- kya boli m dadi ma

Preety :- tumne bhi to mujhe aunty kaha.

Naina :- mane kaha kaha , wo to veer jiju ne bola tha

Preety veer ko ankhe dikhate hue :- veer ye kya tumne mujhe aunty bola.

Veer darte hue :- ni ni meri jan , m tumhe bhala aunty kese bol sakta hu.

Naina veer ko ankh dikhate hue :- to kya mujhe bola tha tumne veer.

Veer :- nii naina m to.

Preety :- iska matlab tumne mujhe hi bola tha na , ek baar tum hotel chalo m batati hu tumhe

Veer bichare ki halat kharab ho gayi ,majak majak m bechara bura fas chuka tha veer.

Kuch der yu hi veer ko satane k baad ,jab veer ka muh dono ne dekha to dono khud ko control ni ker payi or has padi .

Or isike sath ho gaya veer ka popat .

Veer hath jodte hue :- mujhe maaf kardo deviyon jo mane aapse panga liya.

Naina or preety ek sath :- ja bacha kiya tujhe maaf , aGe se dhyan rakhna.

Ye bol dono fir se hasne lagi or veer bhi muskurahat k sath gadi aage bhada di.

Aage bhadne k thodi der baad hi veer ne gadi rok di.

Preety :- kya hua veer , aapne gadi kyu roki.

Veer :- samne dekho preety 2 raste h , dono hi humare hotel ki or jate h per fark, pahale wala wo h jisse hum aaye the or dusra shahar k bahar bypass se h .

Tum batao konse raste se jaye.

Preety :- isme puchna kesa veer , pahale wale raste se hi chalo raat ko anjan highway se jana safe ni.

Lekin tabhi naina k bag me pada trishul orange roshni m chamka or usike sath hi naina ki ankh bhi same vese hi chamki ek second k lie.

Or usike sath naina boli.

Naina :- veer hume dusre yani highway k raste se jana chahiye.

Preety :- esa kyu sister.

Naina :- ni janti , janti hu to bas itna ki highway wale raste se jana acha rahega.

Veer :- naina sahi bol rahi h preety, tum bekar m hi ghabra rahi ho , or vese bhi highway wala rasta shortcut h or darne ki kya baat h hum 3no sath me hi to h.

Preety man masosker veer or naina ki baat man leti h or fir 3no dost nikal pade highway wale raste ki or.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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Naina or uske dost masti kerte hue aage bhad rahe the , tabhi achanak se vatavaran me thand si bad gayi.
Veer :- sal k is mahine m itni thand ?
Naina :- hmmm, maybe rat ka time or khula h na isliye koi baat ni mere pas shawl h .
Naina apna bag kholti h to dekhti h ki shawl to bas 2 hi h , or odhne wale 3 .
Lekin naina kuch sochte hue dono shawl veer or preety ko de deti h .
Preety :- ye kya sister, tumhare pas to shawl h hi ni.
Naina :- it's ok preety , vese bhi mujhe thand ni lag rahi.
Ye bol naina dono shawal veer or preety ko de deti h or fir se jeep chal padi.
Lekin preety ne ye baat notice ker li k naina ko thand lag rahi h or uski kapkapi chut rahi h.
Preety :- veer jara gadi rokna.
Veer gadi rokta h to preety aage ki seat se uter ker piche naina k pas beth jati or use apne se chipka ker apne shawl me le leti h.
Sach me dono bahane ek dusre se chipki ek hi shawl me bahut hi pyari lag rahi thi.
Naina ko apni bahan ki is pyari harkat pe pyar aata h or wo uski taraf dekhti h to preety boli.
Preety :- kamini thand lag rahi h bol ni sakti , piche bethi kamp rahi thi , abhi bimar pad jati to.
Naina preety k gal khichte hue :- ese kese pad jati , teri jesi saheli k hote .
Preety :- ha ha malum h ab maska mat laga.
Yu hi abhi vo safar ker hi rahe the ki achanak se unki Jeep ruk gayi .
Naina :- kya hua veer jeep kyu roki.
Veer :- pata ni naina ye apne aap ruk si gayi , ruko m check kerta hu.
Veer ne gadi ko tin char bar start kerne ki kosis ki lekin gadi start n hui.
Veer ne niche uter ker check kerne ko bonut khola to paya koi wiring ki problem h.
Veer :- oh no yaar , ab kya kare.
Preety :- dekh kya rahe ho veer , apni powers ka use kero na.
Naina :- ni veer humhe shaktiya mili h iska matlab ye ni ki hum inke hi adhin ho jaye
Maharaj ne bhi yahi kaha tha ki jitna ho sake utna kam hi shaktiyo ka prayog kiya jaye , kyunki khatra as pas kahi bhi ho sakta h
Tum esa kero hotel phone kero , wo jarur kisi mechanic ko bhejenge.
Veer vesa hi kerta h to hotel wale bole ki machenic ane m kamse kam 2 ghante lagege.
Tino ne wahi intezar kerne ka decide kiya , tabhi preety ki najar samne padi.
Preety :- sister dekho samne kitna sunder kila h
Naina k ishare ki taraf naina dekhti h to pati h samne sach me thodi uchai per ek kila dikhayi deta h.
Preety :- chalo na sister chalte h waha.
Veer :- tumhara dimag to sahi h na preety itni raat ko kile m , ab tak to wo band bhi ho chuka hoga.
Preety :- ni veer mane suna h ki jaipur k kile bhale hi band ho jaye rat me lekin waha k kuch hisse hamesha khule rahate h , mane logo ki selfie bhi dekhi h raat ko bahut acha view hota h waha.
Or dekho hum shayad akele ni h z yaha or bhi gadiya khadi h.
Veer or naina ne dekha sahi m waha gadiya thi , preety ko pata ni kyu waha itna attraction ho raha tha ki wo waha jane ki jid kerne lagi.
Tabhi naina ka trishul fir se chamka sath me uski ankh bhi ek second k liye or fir wo boli.
Naina :- ab ye itna kah hi rahi h to chalte h na veer.
Naina k kahane per veer man jata h or preety bhi khush ho jati h, veer or preety mil ker gadi ko dhakka lagaker kinare pe park ker dete h.
Or fir chal pade us kile ki or.
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Kaya or diya kafi time tak ek dusre k kafi der gale lagi rahi , fir kaya ne khud ko use alag kerte hue bola.
Kaya :- chal tere chot p maraham laga du
Karan bich m :- konsi chot
Kaya :- ye aap kesa sawal ker rahe ho karan ji , dekho to kitni chot...
Kaya ne diya k badan p dekha to paya ki diya k to kharoch bhi ni h or
Usne apne aas pas ghar m najar dodayi to uski ankhe ek baar khuli ki khuli rah gayi .
Kyunki uska tuta futa ghar ab bilkul pahale jesa ho gaya tha, matlab jesa tab tha jab uske maa baba jinda the.
Kaya to khush ho gayi or sath me Purani yade taza hone se emotional bhi.
Wo samjh gayi ye kam karan ne hi kiya h wo bhag ker karan k gale lag gayi or fir uske chahre ko pakad chum chum ker gila ker diya.
Kaya :- thank u thank u so much sakha .
Karan :- are bas bas , ab kya mujhe kha hi jaogi kya.
Kaya haste hue :- ha or wo bhi mst tel m fry kerke .
Karan :- are bhai mujhe baad m kha lena , usse pahale apni saheli se to ache se mil lo jo itne time baad nile ho .
Ha per usse pahale yar mujhe jara mera room dikha do , mujhe aram ki jarurat h.
Ye baat karan ne apne sir ko pakad ker boli , kyunki uska sir dird ho raha tha.
Kaya :- ji sakha.
Ye bol kaya karan ko ek kamre me le jati h , jaha ek charpai thi , karan thakan or kamzori k kaaran lette hi so gaya , yaha tak ki usne apne jute tak ni utare.
Kaya ne karan k jute utar use dhang se letaya or fir use ek kambal odha diya.
Kaya karan ko sulane k baad jane hi lagi ki uski najar karan k chahre pe padi, jo sote hue bahut masum lag raha tha , bilkul kisi bache jesa , jise dekh wo khud ko rok na payi or usne karan k gal ko chum liya.
Diya jo ye sab hote hue darwaje se dekh rahi thi , usko bada ajib kag raha tha ye sab.
Use ye bilkul gawara na ho raha tha ki uski saheli ek insan ka itna khayal rakh rahi h , ek insan k sath uska itna lagav ho gaya h.
Kaya ne sab kuch ker darwaje ki or dekha or paya ki diya use hi ghur rahi h to wo uske pas jaker boli.
Kaya :- kya hua diya ? Ese kyu ghur rahi h.
Diya thodi tez aawaz me herani se :- wahi to m tujhse puch rahi hu kaya , tujhe kya hua , ye sab ...
Kaya bich me :- sssshhhh dhire bolo,verna karan ji jag jayenge, chal dusre kamre m chal ker baat kerte h.
Fir kaya or diya dusre kamre m aagaye , to diya ne apne swalo ki train dobara chala di.
Diya :- ab bata kaya , kya h ye sab ,kon h ye mayavi insan or tu iske sath kya ker rahi h or sabse bada sawal kaha thi tu ab tak.
Kaya :- are bhai aarsam se , sab batati hu.
Suno ye jo mere sath h na inka naam karan h or ye mere sakha h.
Diya :- tu pagal ho gayi h kaya , ek pishachini hoke ek insanse dosti kese ker sakti h , m to heran hu ki tu khud ko kabu kese ker pa rahi h , ususko dekh k hi m andaza laga sakti hu uska khun kitna swadisht hoga.
Meri maan kaya chod ye apni insano ko na marne ki jid or aaja sath mil ker uska shikar kerte h , aaj 2 saheliyon ki milne ki khushi m aaj khub dawat karenge uske mas se
Kaya thoda gusse me :- diya , esa sochna bhi mat , unko ager ek kharoch bhi aayi to acha na hoga.
Diya :- ye kya kaya kitna badal gayi ho tum , ek insan k liye tum mujhse jhagad rahi ho .
Kya ye Bhul gayi ye insan kese hote h , bhul gayi m inse kyu nafrat kerti ho , ha mana ye wo ni h , per sab insan ek jese hi hote h , isliye nafrat h mujhe in insano se .
Kaya :- iska to matlab ab tum mujhse bhi nafrat kerne lagogi na diya.
Diya :- ye tum kya bol rahi ho kaya m bhala tumse nafrat kyu karungi , tum to meri saheli meri bahan ho , tumhare siwa h hi kon mera.
Kaya apne insani roop me aate hue :- kyunki m bhi ab insan bam chuki hu.
Diya ne jese hi ye najara dekha uski ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi ,use apni ankho p vishwas ni ho raha tha ye sab kese hua.
Diya :- yee yeeee kya h kkaya tum insan kese .
Tab kaya ne apni sari story kaya ko shuru se leker ant tak bina kuch chupaye bata di or usne karan k baare m bhi sab bata diya.
Jise sun kaya k chahre per ashchary dukh har tarah k bhav ubhare or sab kuch sunne k baad wo boli.
Diya :- dekh kaya m khush hu ki tumne apna badla pura kiya ,isliye bhi ki tum ab is pishach yoni se mukt ho gayi ho .
Per m fir bhi kahungi , tu us karan se dur hi rah , mujhe vo sahi ni lagta.
Kaya :- per kyu diya , esi kya burayi dikhai di tumhe sakha m jo tum unhe esa bol rahi ho .
Yadi tum kuch der pahale ki ghatna ko leker gussa ho to please bhul jao , unhonne jo kiya anjane m kiya.
Diya :- baat wo ni h kaya.
Kaya :- fir kya baat h diya.
Diya :- meri baat ko samjho kaya , tu khud hi soch kesa insan h wo jisne apni hi sagi bahan se najay rishta banaya hua h , to oro k bare m to kese khayal hoge uske.
Are jiski najar khud ki hi bahan pe kharab h , uska tere sath rahana sahi hoga.
Mana usne teri madad ki per h to wo ek insan hi na , uska teri madad kerne k piche bhi koi na koi swarth hi hoga, jese abhi h , use yaha aana tha , to kese tera istemal kiya
Isliye kahati hu kaya isse pahale uski buri najar tujhpe pade usse pahale hi use bhaga de yaha se or use dur kerde apne aap se.
Tu bhale hi insan ban gayi ho per h to meri pyari saheli hi na, or uper se tu ab pishach bhi ban sakti h.
Isliye kahati hu meri bahan bhul ja un insano ko , us raja ki gulami chod or lot aa humari duniya m , hum dono aaram se jivan yapan karenge.
Kaya jo diya ki baat sun gusse se pagal ho gayi thi , wo chilayi
Kaya :- bas diya bahut bol chuki tu , ager teri jagah koi or hota to gardan uda deti uski.
Mane tumhe sakha k bare m sab kuch bataya unke or jyoti k nishchal prem se avgat bhi karwaya , per fir bhi tu unke bare m esa ghatiya kese soch sakti h.
Mere sakha utne hi pavitr h jitne havan kund se prajvalit agni , vasna or vyabhichar jese gun unme mojud ni h .
Or jesa tu bol rahi h , ager unhe esa kerna hota na to wo kab ka ker chuke hote , kyunki m unke jitna karib ja chuki hu , utna karib yadi kisi or k jati to ab tak pata ni mera kya haal hota.
Diya :- kaya meri bahan tu bahut bholi h , isliye tu ni samjhti in mardo ki chalakiyo ko, meri baat samjhne ki kosis ker.
Kaya :- ager tune dobara sakha k bare m kuch ulta sidha kaha na diya to m ye ghar chod k chali jaungi or wapas tere se milne kabhi ni Ayengi.
Kaya ki ye baat sun diya ko bhi gussa aagaya or boli :- fine tu meri baat ni man rahi na to koi baat ni ,aaj rat m sabit ker dungi m sahi hu or tu galat
Kaya :- kya kerne wali h tu aaj rat.
Diya challenging way me :- tere us sakha ki sachai aaj tere samne lane wali hu m kaya.
Kaya ne challenge manjur kerte hue :-. Thik h diya , tumhe jo kerna h ker .
Mujhe apne sakha per pura bishwas h or vo apni sakhi ka vishwas kabhi ni todenge dekh lena.
Diya :- wo to aaj raat ko hi pata chalega kaya kiska jhuta brham tutta h.
Wahi dusri or
Naina or uske dost uper pahunch kile k bahar wale area m hi ghum rahe the dono bahane waha k sunder view ka najara dekh rahe the.
Preety :- kitna sunder view h na sister dekho to.
Naina :- ha mano jese asman k sitare dharti p uter aaye ho.
Preety :- or tum log yaha aane se mana ker rahe the.
Naina :- acha ji ulta chor kotwal ko Dante , yaad kero wo tum hi thi jo is raste se aana hi ni chahati thi.
Or dusri baat yaha aane se bhi mane ni aapke hone wale pati dev ne hi mana kiya tha.
Veer :- ha per jab itni cute sali sahiba ne request ki to kese mana kerta .
Naina sharmate hue :- kya veer tum bhi
(Or fir wo preety se boli ) dekha preety jiju ne meri baat mani , iska matlab vo mujhse jyada pyar kerte h.
Preety haste hue :- ha ha vo vo to dikh raha h.
Naina majak kerte hue :- jiju m to kahati hu ki aap preety ko chodo mujhse hi shadi ker lo.
Veer naina ka majak m sath dete hue :- bhai mujhe to koi problem ni h , per sali sahiba jara apni saheli se to puch lo.
Naina :- are usse kya puchna , jab miya bivi raji , to kya karega kaji.
Preety :- kya boli kamini m kaji , ruk tujhe m batati hu , meri hi saheli hoker mere hi mal p daka.
Ye bol preety uske uper lalapki , naina bhi teyar thi or wo bhagne lagi. Or unke piche bichara veer bhi , unhe rokne.
Wo log yu hi masti majak kerte hue idher udher dodne lage , preety ne naina ko pakad liya or boli.
Preety :- ab aayi na pakad m kamini , ab bol kya kah rahi thi.
Abhi naina kuch bolti tabhi waha pure vatavaran me ek chink sunayi di , jo kisi aadmi ki thi.
Naina or uske dosto ne jese hi wo chikh suni , 3no us taraf dode , ye soch ki koi khatre m h.
Wo us aawaz ki disha ki or bad hi rahe thi ki unhone dekha ki samne se kile k ander mojud ek or bada dwar jo shayad bagiche ka tha , usme se ek admi dodta hua aaraha tha , jo bahut hi ghayal tha or uski god m ek 10 11 sal ki ek bachi thi jo ro rahi thi , dar k mare.
Us admi ne white kapde pahane the , dekh ker pata chal raha tha ki wo ek driver h.
Driver ki najar jese hi naina or uske dosto pe padi to wo unke pas gaya or madad mangte hue bola.
Driver :- madad kijiye , please help us , meri malkin ko bacha lijiye , verna vo mar dalega.
Naina :- kon h aap , kaha h aapki malkin , aapki ye halat kese hui .
Driver hampte hue :- vo vo vetal , vo vetal ne meri malkin ko bandi bana liya h , badi mushkil se m unki beti ko (god m li hui bachi ko veer ki god m dediya .) ko waha se bahar nikal ker laya hu.
Isse pahale wo yaha aaye , aap inhe please yaha se door le jaiye .
Ye bolte bolte vo admi behosh ho ker gir gaya , jise dekh wo bachi or ghabra gayi or un 3no se boli.
Bachi sisakte hue :- bhaiya didi , please meri mummy ko bacha lo , please bachbacha lo unhe
Naina ko pata ni kyu us ladki k ankho me ansu pata ni kyu bilkul bhi ni dekhe ja rahe the , use mano esa pratit ho raha tha ki jese roto wo ladki rahi h , lekin taklif use ho rahi ho , na jane kyu vo ladki naina ko koi apni si lag rahi thi.
Naina apni god me us bachi ko lete hue :- royo mat beta , aap to bahadur ladki ho na , ager aap hi yu royogi to aapki mummy ko aap kese bachaoge.
Beta aap rona band kero , aapki didi aapse vada kerti h ki kuch bhi ho jaaye vo apki mummy ko jarur bachayegi , lekin pahale aap rona band kero .
Ladki naina k samjhane se chup ho jati h.
Naina ladki k gaal chumte hue :- veery good , acha ye batao kya naam h aapka.
Ladki :- piya.
Naina :- are wah kitna pyara name h bilkul aapki tarah .
Naina ese hi pyari pyari bato se piya ko shant kerne m lagi thi ki tabhi achanak se tez hawa chalne lagi or kuch hi secondo m hawa ki gati esi ho gayi ki mano tufaan sa aagaya ho.
Or usi tufan k bich ek bhayanak hasi gunjane lagi , or jab sabne us hasi ki disha yani uper ki or dekha to piya dar k mare wapas rone lagi .
Kyunki hava me ek bahut hi bhayanak vetal khada tha , jiske dant bahar nikle hue the or bal bikhre hue .
Betaal haste hue :- hihihi, mane kaha tha na bachi tu mujhse bach ke ni ja payegi .
Aaja mere pas aaja tune teri pas leker chalta hu.
Piya darke mare naina se chipak gayi , naina chilayi.
Naina :- piya kahi ni jayegi dusht vetal , or teri bhi bhalayi isi me h ki tu piya ki maa ko mukt ker de, ni to anjam acha na hoga.
Vetaal haste hue :- haha murkh ladki , tu mujhe ni janti m kon hu , or kya jer sakta hu.
Kher mere pas tere se ulajhne ka na to samay h na koi maksad , mujhe to bas ye ladki chahiye.
Ye bol betaal ne apne dono hath agge ker diye jese ki wo kisi ko pakadane ki kosis ker raha ho .
Or tabhi ye kya naina k hatho se piya apne aap chutne lagi or hava me udte hue apne aaap vetal k hatho m ja pahunchi .
Piya chila rahi thi :- didi bachao , didi bachao.
Lekin naina kuch kerti isse pahale hi vetaal piya ko leker gayab ho gaya.
Ye sab itna jaldi hua ki naina ya uske dost kuch ker hi na paye.
Naina chilayi :- niiiiiiii.
Preety :- ye kya tha sister , aajtak k safar m itna shaktishali or esa dikhne wali shakti pahale to na dikhi.
Ye kesa pret tha.
Naina :- ye pret ni preety ye vetal tha .
Veer :- vetaal ? vo vikram vetal ki kahani wala vetal , per mujje to lagta tha , betaal sirf kahani m hote h.
Naina :- ha vahi betaal veer or ye sach m hote h , jesa tumne abhi dekha .
Vetal jinh ki vo prajati jo bahut hi khatrnak or shaktishali hoti h , sath me dayano se jyada kale jadu m mahir bhi, ye jiske piche pad jaye uska sarvanash hone tak sas ni lete
Preety :- ager esa h to hume piya ko bachana hoga sister , uski jan khatre m h , chalo use dhundte h.
Naina kuch sochte hue :- hum ni keval m preety , ye kam sirf mujhe hi kerna hoga.
Veer :- ye tum.kya bol rahi ho naina , hum tumhe akela chod k ni jayenge.
Naina :- please samjho veer yaha tum logo ki jan ko khatra h, specially preety ki.
Preety ye sun thoda aggressive hoker :- khatra or ek mamuli vetal se or mujhe ho hi ni sakta , ye mamuli vetal ko m chutkiyo m masal dungi.
Naina thode gusse:- mane kaha na sirf m jaungi or koi ni , har jagah jid achi ni h preety .
Veer tum preety k sath inhe(driver ) hospital leker , jao inke jeb m jarur inki car ki chabi hogi.
Naina ka ek baar fir gussa bhara roop dekh preety saham gayi or sath me use naina ka yu chilana thoda bur bhi lag raha tha.
Veer :- per naina , tum use dhundogi kese or tum akele kese karogi uska samna bina apne yantra k.
Naina :- tum chinta mat kero veer (apne bag se trishul nikal use dikhate hue ) ma ka aashirwad mere sath h , vo vetaal mera kuch ni bigad sakega.
Or rahi baat dhundne ki to uska thikana yahi aas pas hi hoga kahi , kyunki vetal chahe kitna shaktishali ho , vo apne ped se jis per wo rahata h , usse kabhi dur ni jata , Ab tum jao jaldi.
Ye bol naina ne veer ko jane ko kaha or telepathy k jariye kuch bate jaldi se use samjha bhi di.
Veer ne us driver ko utha ker preety ko leker waha se chala gaya , preety bhi naina ki dant se kuch na boli , lekin naina usko dekh ker hi samjh gayi thi ki uske dantne se uski bahan usse naraj hui h.
Naina man me :- mujhe maaf ker de meri bahan ki mane tujhe danta , per m jo bhi jer rahi hu , vo sab tumhari suraksha k liye hi ker rahi hu.
Ye bol naina chal padi us taraf jaha se driver aaya tha
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Sham ko karan ki nind tuti to usko pyas lagi thi , to usne band ankho se hi usne kaya ko pani k liye pukara.
Karib 5 min baad kisi ne usko pani ka glass pakdaya, karan band ankho se hi pani pita h.
Or jese hi glass ko wapas dete hue usne uper dekhte hue .
Karan :- shukriya kay...
To samne najara dekh uski ankhe khuli ki khuli rah gayi , kyunki samne kaya ni diya thi , jo karan k liye pani layi thi.
Or karan ka usko ese dekhne ki vajah thi , kyunki usne ek bahut hi sexy dress pahani hui thi jo uske ghutno tak hi thi or uska gala itna khula hua tha ki uski cleavage saf saf dikhayi de raha tha.



Karan haklate hue :- tttum yaha.
Diya madak aawaz me :- ji , kyu ni aasakti.
Karan :- are ni mera ye kahane ka vo matlab ni tha , kaya kaha h.
Diya :- wo jara bahar gayi h kam se , vese kya m pasand ni hu aapko jo picha chuda rahe ho.
Karan :- ni wo m.
Diya karan k side m bethte hue :- samjh gayi , aaj jo hua subah usko leker aap abhi tak mujhse gussa ho na.
(Karan ka hath thamte hue ) Please mujhe maf ker dijiye na .
Karan apna hath chudate hue :- ji m gussa ni hu , mane aapko usi samay maaf ker diya tha, jab kaya se aapke bare m pata chala.
Diya karan se kuch jyada hi chipak rahi thi , isliye karan kafi uncomfortable feel ker raha tha , or wo usse picha chudana chahta tha.
Diya khush hote hue :- kya sachi
Or ye bol wo karan k itna kaske gale lag gayi ki uske stan karan ki chati m dhas se gaye or uska asar niche karan k chote ustad p hone laga.
Jise dekh karan ko bahut glani hui or usne jaldi se diya ko khudse alag kiya or apne humesha wale saaf lahaje me bola , diya k maksad ko samjhte hue.
Karan :- dekho diya m sab samjh raha hu tum kya chahti ho , isliye saf saf bol raha hu kyunki mujhe ghuma fira k bolne ki aadat ni.
Jo tum chahti ho mujhse vo ni ho sakta , m pahale hi kisi se athah prem kerta hu vo h meri jyoti , tum kisi or ko dhund lo.
Diya karan ko seduce kerne k liye uski chati pe hath ferte hue :- janti hu , or m konsa kah rahi hu ki mujhse shadi kero .
(Karan k shirt k button kholte hue ) M to bas itna kah rahi hu ki tum or m dono hi jwan ek ghar m akele h or m pyasi bhi hu , tum meri bas pyas bhuja do , bas aaj raat k liye mujhme sama jao.
Karan ko diya ki in harkato pe bahut hi gussa aaraha tha , lekin kaya ki saheli hone ki vajah se vo khud ko kabu kiye hue tha.
Karan diya ko dhakelte hue :- tumhe ek baar kaha samjh ni aata kya , m sirf jyoti se pyar kerta hu or m apni jann se dhoka kerne ka soch tak ni sakta
Diya apni dress ki aage ki chain ko niche sarkate hue apni cleavage dikhate hue :- oh common na karan ji , kya fark padta h , ek hi raat ki to baat h kisiko kuch bhi ni pata .
(Karan ka hath apne boobs p rakhte hue ) na m kisi ko kuch bataungi , na aap kisi ko batana.
Karan ne apna hath hatane ki kosis ki to diya ne uska hath pakad liya or apne boobs per or kaske daba diya or boli
Diya sisakte hue :- aah , ab chodo na jan sharm or sama jao mujhme , pi lo meri jawani ka ras .
Diya ne badi besharmi se karan ke dusre hath ko apni chut k uper rakh diya , jisse uski chut ka ubhar saf saf mahasus ker raha tha karan
Karan to jyoti k prem k karan ye sab ni kerna chahta tha , lekin uska land ko ye baat kon samjhaye , wo to pant faad k bahar aane ko ho raha tha
Diya uski or dekhte hue :- dekhiye aapka ojar bhi kese tadaf raha h mere ander jane k liye.
Ye bol usne karan k land ko pant k uper se pakad liya , ab karan ka vaha thaharna muskil ho gaya tha
Karan gusse se uthate hue :- band kero apni bakwas , m ja raha hu yaha se.
Ye bol karan waha se jane laga , wo darwaje k pass pahuncha hi tha ki darwaja apne aap band ho gaya.
Karan gusse se uski taraf mudte hue jesi bolne laga :- ye kya badtameezi h diy.....
To uska muh pahale se jyada khula rah gaya , wo ankhe fade samne dekhne laga.
Kyunki jese hi usne piche mud ker dekha to paya , diya ne apni dress puri utaar di h or ab wo keval sirf ek bikini m h
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Diya karan k pass aate hue uski ankho me ankh dal apni sammohan vidya use kerte hue :- mera babu naraj ho gaya mujhse , ha hona bhi chahiye, kyunki dekho to mane itna pareshan to ker diya tumhe , lekin na hi tumhe in kapdo ki ked se mukt kiya or na hi tumhe apni jwani ka ras pilaya, bas time pas jo ker rahi thi m.
Diya ne man me than liya tha ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye , sam dam dand bhed , vo kaya ko karan se door kerke hi rahegi , iske liye wo esa kerke karan ko kaya ki najro m girana chahti thi, chahe iske liye wo karan k sath sone ko bhi teyar thi.
Or shayad uski chal kamyab bhi hone lagi thi , karan abhi kamzor tha , jiske kaaran sammohan vidya usper aser kerne lagi.
Karan sammohit hote. Hue diya k balo.m hath phirate hue.
Karan :- ha jaan m tadaf raha hu tumhari jawani ka ras pine ko , aaj m tumhari sari pyaas bhuja dunga.
Diya:- to aao na jaan.
Ye bol diya ne karan ko shirt se pakad apni or khicha or tut padi uske hoto per .
Diya bahut hi wildly tarike se karan ko kiss ker rahi thi ,or jisme karan bhi uska pura sath de raha tha.
Diya ne kiss kerte hue hi karan ki shirt uar dali or uska pura sath dete hue wo karan ko bed p le jane lagi.
Diya ne karan ko bed pe dhaka diya or sochte hue uske pass jane lagi.
Diya man me :- wah kya dimag paya h tune diya ek tir se sidha 2 nishan , aaj raat pahale to iske mardana jism se apni pyas bhujaungi or fir subah ise kaya ki najro m gira ise humesha k liye usse door ker dungi.
Wese ladke m dam to h , pant k uper se hi kitna bada najar aaraha h iska ojar, meri to iske chune bhar se hi gili ho gayi.
Ye sab sochte hue diyq karan k uper chad gayi ir fir se dono ka shuru ho gaya hotho se hotho ki jang.
Dono hi ek dusre k hoto ki ek ek katra
Pi jana chahte the , kabhi diya karan k uper hoti to to kabhi karan.
Dhire dhire dono ki raftar badne lagi , or diya ne karan k hath apne stan pe rakh diya .
Karan unhe achi tarah masalne laga or fir apne hath ko karan kamar k niche lejate hue diya ko neck kiss dene laga.
Diya siskiya lete hue :- oh aah yes suck me.
Fir karan ne diya ko achanak se apni god me bithaya or usko chumte hue uski bra khol dali or fir uske boobs ko chumte hue karan uski puri body ko chumne laga.
Diya se or bardasht ni hua , usne karan ko dhakka diya or fir uske uper aaker karan k sine ko chumte hue niche ki or bhadte hue wo karan ki pant k pas pahunchi .
Jaha karan ka land pant ko fadne ko ho raha tha .
Diya :- jaan dekho kese tadaf raha h mera khilona bahar aane ko , abhi ise aajad kerti hu.
Ye bol diya ne karan ki belt khol dali or uska pent utar ker ghutno tak ker di.
Ab karan sirf underwear m tha , diya k ander mojud vasna usper havi ho chuki thi , jiske kaaran vo apne ander mojud sachai ko bhul rahi thi or usne karan k land ko underwear k uper se hi chumma or chatna start ker diya.
Wahi karan jo diya ki maya se vashibhoot tha , vo bhi vasna m bhara hua bas siskiyan le raha tha.
Aaj wo fir ek bar ek ladki k jaal m fas chuka tha ,jese ki kabhi maya k fas tha, lekin fark sirf itna tha , pahale jo hua wo sirf jhuta natak tha or is baar sabkuch sach me ho raha tha ,jiske chakkar m vo fasta ja raha tha.
Lekin wo kahate h na ese hi vakt me sacha prem sabit hota h , vesa hi karan k sath hone laga.
Vo band ankho se jab siskiya le raha tha , tabhi uske samne jyoti ka masum chahara ane laga or sath me undono k apas k bitaye pyar bhare pal.
Jiske samne aate hi ekdam se karan ko hosh aagaya or apni galti ka ahasas hone laga ki vo kya kerne ja raha h.
Karan ne jhat se apni ankhe kholi or gusse se diya ki or dekhte hue usko jordar dhakka mara.
Karan gusse or glani se :- hey mahadev ye anjane me m kya kerne ja raha tha .
Apni jan apni jyoti se daga.
Diya bich me hi karan se chipakte hue :- kya hua jan tum uth kyu gaye , maja ni aaya kya.
Karan ki ab gusse ki sima par ho chuki thi , usne ek jhanatedar thappad diya ko jad diya, jisse kaya muh k bal niche gir gayi or gusse se chilaya.
Karan :- dur hato mujhse , m apni jyoti k sath dhoka kerne ki soch bhi ni sakta tha , fir bhi m itna aage bada.
Jarur tumne hi kuch kiya hoga mere sath.
Ye bol karan ne apni ankhe band ki or dhyan me use diya ki harkat saf saf najar aagayi.
Karan gusse se dahada :- kamini , mane ab tak tera isliye lihaj kiya ki tu kaya ki saheli h , or tune ye sila diya.
Pishach to kaya bhi thi , lekin usne to kabhi esi harkat kabhi na ki , tu to wo h jinka naam lete hue bhi mujhe sharm aarahi h.
Diya karan ka krodh dekh thar thar kampne lagi or gidgidane lagi.
Diya :- mmmujhe maaf ker dijiye , mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi.
Diya ne jab karan se apni shakti ka prabhav hatte dekha to wo jaan gayi ki karan kya h or sath hi wo karan or jyoti k prem ki shakti ko bhi samjh gayi thi.
Jiske kaaran ab use apni harkat per pachtava hone laga tha , lekin karan to kisi or mood m hi tha.
Karan lal ankho se :- bilkul ni , tumhara apradh ashamya h , tune mere or jyoti k prem ki pavitrata ko kalankit kerne ki kosis ki h .
Mujhe meri jyoti k sath dhoka kerne k liye usksaya , ab tumhari saja keval h mrityu.
Ye bol karan ne apni talvar ko bula liya or jese hi karan ne prahar kerna chaha ki kaya waha aaphunchi.
Kaya karan ko rokte hue :- ruk jaiye sakha m aapke aage hath jodti hu , please usko mat mariye.
Karan gusse se :- ni kaya tum ni janti ki isne abhi kya harkat ki h , jiske liye isko mrityu dand to milker hi rahega.
Kaya :- m sab janti hu sakha isne kya kiya h or mane sab dekha bhi h.
Diya heran hote hue :- kya tune dekh liya sab ,per mane to.
Kaya gusse se :- ha tune mujhe nind ki dawai ka sharbat diya tha per mane tujhe usme dawai milate dekh liya tha , isliye mane wo piya hi ni , or sone ka natak kiya taki , taki dekh saku ki tu kya kerti h.
Tujhse mujhe ye ummid ni thi diya chii, shame on u
(Ji ha dosto diya ne apne plan ko anjam.deme k liye kaya ko sharbat m nind ki.dawai mila ker di thi taki wo apne plan ko kamyab bana sake or subah karan per uski ijjat lutne ka anjam laga sake .)
Karan gusse or herani se :- kya tumne sab dekha or for bhi tumne isse rokne ka prayas na kiya ye jante hue ki m iske vash m hu , kyu.
Kaya :- wo isliye sakha , kyuki aapki is sakhi ko apne sakha per unke nishchal prem per purn vishwas h or vishwas is baat ka bhi tha ki aap apni sakhi ka vishwas tutne na doge or esa hua bhi.
Or apne vishwas ko diya k samne pramanit kerne ko hi mane ye sab kiya
Karan :- jab tum sab janti hi ho or fir bhi ise bachane ki kosis ker rahi ho.
Ni sakhi ni iska ant to m kerke hi rahunga.
Ye bol usne phir se talvar uthayi.
Kaya :- please sakha ek baar meri baat to sun lijiye , ek baar jan to lijiye ki diya k ese bartav or insano se nafrat kerne ka kaaran kya h.
Fir uske baad aapko jo sahi lage wo hi kerna , mujhe aapka fesla manjur hoga.
Kaya ki request ko karan mana na ker paya or usne talvar ko wapas bhej diya , jisse diya ki.sans m sas aayi.
Karan :- batao kya baat h.
Kaya mahol halka kerne k liye karan ko chedte hue boli.
Kaya haste hue :- bat sunne se pahale kapde to pahan lo nangu maharaj ji.
Kaya ki is baat sa karan ko apni halat ka abhas hua or usne jhat se apne kapde pahanana shuru kiye.
Fir kaya ne diya ka past batana karan ko shuru kiya , jisse sunte hue ek bar dand nayak ki ankho m bhi ansu aGaye or sath me kaya k bhi .
Diya to apne past ko yaad ker sisak sisak k rone lagi.
Sab batane k baad kaya ne diya ko gale se laga liya or use shant karane lagi.
Or sath hi karan ki or dekhte hue uske nirnay ka intezaar kerne lagi.
Karan kafi der tak mon raha or thodi der baad usne bolna start kiya
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Aaj k liye bas itna hi.
Stay tuned
(Note :- diya ka past or karan ka nirnay pata chalega next mega update m or sath me us update m khatm hoga rastal ka chapter.
To aage kya hota h ye janne k liye sath bane rahiye .)
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Sab kuch sunne k baad karan kafi der mon raha , uske chahre per koi bhav na the .

Na hi krodh k na hi karuna k bhav, usne kuch der apni ankh band rakhi , jese mano khud ko shant ker raha ho ya kisi vichar ka manthan ker raha ho.

Kuch der kamre mr esa sanata chaya raha mano yadi koi sui bhi gire to uski aawaz bhi sunayi de .

Fir karan ne apni jagah se khade hote hue kaha

Karan (kaya se ) :- sakhi jo bhi diya k sath hua , manta hu vo galat tha or m kuch had tak uske dukh ko samjh bhi sakta hu , kyunki esa hi kuch dard mane saha h.

Parantu , iska ye matlab to ni ki uska kiya gaya apradh ko bhula diya , jaye

Diya ne aaj jo kiya wo galti ni ashmya apradh h , kyunki is karan k liye is sansar m apne mahadev or maa k baad koi sabse jyada priya h to wo meri jyoti h , or isne mere or meri jyoti k rishte ko kalankit kerne ki kosis ki h.

Fir bhi m ise dand ni de raha hu , keval tumhare kahane per meri saheli.

Kaya khush hote hue :- aapka bahut bahut shukriya sakha....

Karan :- parantu , apradh ka pashchatap to ise kerna hi hoga kaya , tum apni saheli se is baare m discussion ker lo ki wo teyar h ya ni .

Itna m apna sandhya vandan ker leta hu.

Ye bol karan waha se nikal gaya or piche chod gaya kaya or diya ko vichar kerne k liye.

Karan k jate hi diya bhi uth ker ghar se jane lagi , kaya ne bahut pucha ki vo kaha ja rahi h , parantu usne koi jwab na diya or bas itna boli.

Diya :- pashchatap kerne ja rahi hu sakhi.

Or wo bhi nikal gayi waha se.

Wahi dusri or

Naina kile ki diwar se preety or veer ko jate hue jab tak dekhti rahi jab tak wo uske ankho se ojhal na ho gaye.

Fir naina nikal padi kile ki us or jis taraf se driver aaya tha.

Naina us taraf yu to badi shanti se bad rahi thi , per uska man bilkul bhi shant na tha . Wo bahut hi ashant thi

Kyunki jabse naina ko preety ki sachai pata chali thi , jabse use preety ki or bhi jyada chinta rahane lagi thi.

Ye chinta uski in dino se ya sirf isliye hi na thi ki preety uski bahan thi , ye chinta to use tabse rahati thi , jabse preety naina ka sath dene ko ready hui thi.

Kyunki bhale hi preety ka naina k dene k piche uska chota sa swarth , ni ni kisi k prem ko swarth ka naam dena to us pavitra prem ka apman hoga, or prem k liye to insan kya kuch ni kerta

Isliye bhale hi preety ka naina ka sath dene k piche ka kaaran uska veer k liye prem tha , parntu lagav preety ka bhi kam na tha naina se.

Kyunki naina uski pahali saheli thi jindagi ki , kyunki preety ki garibi or baad m uske khatarnak swabhav ki vajah se koi bhi use dosti ni kerta tha.

Uska sirf ek hi dost raha tha vo tha veer , jise wo kab dil de bethi ye baat use bhii yaad na thi.

Per naina ne bhi uske dil me ek alag hi jagah bana li thi , bhale hi preety apni vastvikta or naina se apne rishte k bare m na janti ho .

Parantu prem k rishte k kaaran hi aaj naina uske liye uska parivar ka hissa hi ban chuki thi.

Is kaaran naina chintit rahati thi , kyunki preety naina ki jimedari thi .

Naina man me :- m janti hu meri bahan ki mere is rude behavior se tumhe bahut dukh pahunchta h or tum mujhse is baat k liye naraj bhi ho , per m kya karu meri jaan.

Bhua k baad tu meri jimedari h, meri jaan h tu to m kese tumhe sab jante hue khatre k muh m jane deti.

Tabhi apne khayalo se bahar aate hue Naina khud se boli :- naina abhi tumhe apne mission pe dhyan dena chahiye or rahi baat preety ki to wo to jaan h apni , hum use mana hi lenge , per pahale hume us vetal ka ant kerna hoga.

Ye sochte hue naina kile k ander ghumte hue hue vetal or piya ko dhundne lagi.

Lekin naina ko piya to kya uska koi surag tak na mil raha tha


Naina :- akhir kaha leke gaya h wo dusht us ful si bachi ko,kya chahta h vo un dono ma beti se.

Pura kila to chan mara , wo to kahi bhi ni h .

Naina abhi ye sab soch rahi thi , tabhi uske dimag ke ek baat aayi , jiske sath hi naina ek or tezi se bhagi.

Naina bhagte hue :- m bhi na , sara kila chan Mara , lekin ek jagah jaha us dusht k hone ka pura chance ho sakta h , waha to gayi hi ni.

Naina kile ki piche ki side bhagti hui gayi or kuch der baad ek jagah ruki , wo jagah thi kile ka bagicha.

Lekin aam baghicho ke viprit ab vo jagah bahut bhayanak ho chuki thi , kyunki is kile ki govt ne sahi se dekhbhal na ki .

jiske chalte wo bagicha ab waha mojud adivasi logo ka shamshan ban chuka tha.

Uper se wo raat bhi ekdam andheri thi , chand bhi najar na aaraha tha or waha ka mosam bhi bahut kharab tha , rah rah ker aasman me bijli kadak rahi thi or dur kahi se bhediyon k rone ki Awaz aarahi thi, jo watawaran ko or bhi bhayanak bana rahi thi.

Lekin naina to mano un sab baato se koi farak na par raha tha , uski najare to piya or us betaal ko khoj rahi thi.

Or jald hi use wo dono dikhayi bhi diye .

Naina ne dekha ki kuch door per wo dusht betaal ek bade se bargad k ped ki ek tahani pe ese latka hua h jese koi kapda sukh raha ho.

Or ped k niche hi piya ek mayavi pash me bandhi hui thi or uske muh pe bhi pati thi or uske baju m hi ek orat bhi usi halat me thi .

Shayad wahi piya ki maa thi, naina thodi der wahi ek ped k piche chip ker usper najar rakhti h ye dekhne ko ki wo aakhir kerna kya chahata h.

Kuch der baad wo betaal udte hue niche utra or udte hue dono ma beti k pas jata h.

Usne fir jaker piya ki maa k muh se pati hata di , or jese hi pati utri to wo rote hue bolne lagi.

Orat :- hume chod didijiye please , humne aPka kya bigada h jo aap hume yu bandhi bana ker rakhe hue ho, kasur kya h humara .

Betal haste hue :- hihi, kasur keval tumhara itna h ki tum log yaha aaye or aaye to aye , uper se tumhara samna mujhse hua.


Ab tum dono yaha se jinda wapas ni jane wali hihihi....

Orat request kerne lagi ki chahe to use bandhi bana le per uski beti ko chod de.


Betaal haste hue :- hihi , chalo sun li ek maa ki pukaar ,ek moka deta hu tumhe ager bach sako to bach lo

Orat :- hume kya kerna hoga.

Betaal :- jyada kuch ni , wahi hum betalo ka pasandida khel , yani ki swalo k jwab .

Tum 2 log ho or mere swal bhi keval 2 hi honge , sahi jwab diya to mukti ni to hihihi

Bolo manjur h.

Orat bechari kya bolti or koi rasta bhi to na tha , to usne haa kah diya.

Betaal pahala sawal :- hindustan k rashtra dhwaj per jo chinh h chakra ka uska kya nam h ,or wo kis chij ka pratik h.

Piya jiska muh khul chuka tha wo jhat se boli :- ashok chakra , use ashok chakra kaha jata h ,or wo chakra humari desh ki ekta or akhandta ka pratik h , jesa samrajya mahan raja ashok ne banaya tha.


Betaal :- hihi shabas bachi , kafi kuch janti ho apni umer k mukable

Chalo bas ek sawal or jiska sahi uter dega tumhe aajadi or galat utter dega hihi hii

Betaal :- mahabharat m pandvo ki sankhya 5 thi , to korv bhai kitne the

Is sawal ko sun dono maa beti thodi mushkil m pad gaye , wo dono hi shahri thi , ha dharmik jarur thi , lekin unhe in sab ki itni knowledge ni thi.

Betaal :- hihi bolo bolo jaldi bolo jyada samay ni h , na hi mere na hi tumhare pas.



Orat :- darte hue 100 , 100 korav the.


Betaal bhayanak hasi haste hue:- hahaha , ker di na galti , ab jwab galat diya h to saja bhugatne ko teyar ho ja.

Ye bol vetal apne hath me ek talvaar liye hue un dono ki or bhadne laga.

Tabhi uske kano me ek aawaz padi .

Ruk jaoo betaal


Ye aawaz naina ki thi, jise dekh betaal bola.

Betaal :- hihi tu gayi ni ladki yaha se , lagta h tujhe apni jan pyari nahi h.

Naina :- jaan to lagta h tumhe pyari ni h apni betaal , jab hi ye mahapap kerne ja rahe ho.

Lekin pahale apbe sawal ka jawab to sun le.

Korav 100 ni balki 101 the ,100 bhai or ek bahan , jiska naM tha , dushala , jiska vivah jaidrath se hua.

Betaal :- hihi bahut ache , bilkul sahi jwab , gandhari ne shivji ko tap se prasan ker 100 putro ka vardan manga , tab uske man me ek putri ki bhi icha hui , to mahadev ne bina kahe hi vo putri gandhari ko di.

Naina :- gyani ho or fir bhi esa apradh kerne ja rahe ho per esa kyu , kya bigada h inhone tumhara.

Betaal :- isse tumhs koi matlab ni hona chahiye ladki, aaj ye dono maregi or sath me ab tu bhi.

Ye bol betaal ne naina ki or wo aag ka gola feka per ye kya naina k takrane se pahale hi vo nasht ho gaya.

Hua yu tha ki naina ne jese hi wo gola apni or aate dekha to jadi se usne apna trishul nikal ker aage ker diya.

Jisse ek orange roshni nikal us gole se takrayi or vo gola nasht ho gaya.

Betaal :- acha to tu maya bhi janti h.

Naina :- ye maya ni betaal ye maa ki shakti h.

Ye bol naina ne apna trishul betaal ki or ker diya , jisse ek roshni nikal betaal se takrayi or vo tadafne laga.

Wahi dusri or

Karan sandhya vandan ker dhyan me betha hua tha ki tabhi uska man ashant hone laga , use apne parivaar ki chinta hone lagi or jyoti ki bhi yaad aane lagi , or sabse ajib baat to tab hui jab use aaj varsho baad apni maa ki jhalak najar aane lagi , use apni maa ki yaad atyadhik vyakul kerne lagi thi, use abhas ho gaya ki ab jald hi use prathvi lok kitna hoga

Uska man itna ashant ho gaya ki vo or dhyan me na rah saka or usne uthate hue ghar k ander gaya or usne kaya se kaha.

Karan :- sakhi yudh k liye saj ho jao , hum aaj hi un pishachon p humla karenge.

Kaya :- parantu sakha , hume to kal yudh kerne ka nirnay kiya tha na , or abhi aapki tabiyat sahi ni h.

Karan :- ha mane kaha tha sakhi , parantu niyati sanket de rahi h mujhe ki hume jo kerna h aaj hi kerna hoga

Kaya ne karan ko bahut samjhaya parantu karan ne ab nirnay le liya tha.


Kaya :- parantu sakha , diya to yaha h hi ni , wo abhi ..

Karan :- acha h na , m vese bhi ni chahta tha ki vo yudh m shamil ho or uski jan pe khatra bne.

Tum esa kero uske liye ek sandesh chod do .

Kaya ne vesa hi kiya or dono nikal pade mahal ki or.

Kaya mahal k bare m batate hue :- sakha mahal k char dwar h , jo 4 ro dishaon m h.

Purv , uter or dakshin dwar pe to sadev bahut jyada pahara rahata h , parantu , pashchimi dwar pe bahut kam matra m hi senik rahate h , hume wahi se ander pravesh kerna chahiye.


Karan ne hami bhari or dono us dwar ki or badh gaye.

Pashchimi dwar pe 2 paharedar hi khade the , tabhi unhone dekha ki kahi se ek sone ka sikka aagira

Ab insan ho ya shetan sone ka lalach to dono ko hi hota h .

Dono hi us sone k sikke ko pane ki hod me ek sath dode, lekin ye kya wo dono jese hi waha pahunche , tabhi pata ni kaha se 2 rasi k phande aaye uper se or undono k gale m bandh uper ki or jane lage .

Jisse agle hi pal dono ne dam tod diya.

Or tabhi kile ki us diwar jiske pas se wo sika gira tha uske uper se do jane kude jo or koi ni kaya or karan the.

Ye sone k sikke ka lalach unhi ka tha , taki rasta saf ho.

Kaya hi five dete hue :- 2 to gaye , ab bakiyon ki bhi band baja di jaye.

Karan apni talvar ka avahan kerte hue :- neki or puch puch .

Let's go, dekhte h pahale kon jyada asuro ko marta h.

Kaya challange accept kerte hue :- to ho jaye


Ye bolte hi dono gate ki or dode , or ander ghuste hi dono ne apna khel shuru ker diya.

Karan in asuro ko dekhte hi kafi aggressive ho chuka tha , unhe dekhte hi karan k samne jyoti ki vo halat aRahi thi , jinka kaaran vo goblins hi the

Jiske chalte karan un goblins ko badi berahami se katte gue hi aage bad raha tha.

Kaya bhi karan ka pura sath dete hue un asuro ko kkatte hue aage bad rahi thi.

Yu hi wo log un shetano ka nash kerte hue pahunch gaye goblin king k room ki .


Karan ne ek jordar laat mari darwaje per , or karan k ek hi prahar k sath dono gate ukhad k gir gaya.

Ander goblin king jo aashiyana ker raha tha apni rakhail k sath , wo achanak se chok gaya.

Goblin chonk k :- kon ho tum or yaha kese aaye.

Karan jiska para goblin king ko dekh ker high ho chuka tha :- m hu teri mot

Goblin :- mere hi mahal me aaker mujhe hi dhamki .

Sipahiyon.

Lekin sipahi to mare ja chuke the , aate kaha se.

Karan or kaya goblin ki or bhadte hue

Karan :- tujhe bachane aaj koi ni aayega dusht , teri mrityu nishchit h

Ye bol karan or kaya jese hi uske najdik pahunche , tabhi achank se dono ko.jabardast bijli ka jhatka laga or dono gir pade.

Dono hi behosh ho gaye , lekin behoshi ki halat m jane se pahale unhone prahar kerne wale ko dekhna chaha to kya dekhte h , wo prahar kisi or ne ni goblin king ne hi piche se kiya tha or jo samne khada tha wo bas maya thi

Goblin king haste hue :- haha , fas hi gaya na mere jaal m tu rakshak , ab dekh kon kiski mot banta h.

Wahi dusri or

Naina apne naye shastra se betaal pe kafi had tak kabu pa hi chuki thi ki betaal ne ek chal di.

Betal tadapte hue :- aah ladki yadi m mara to tu in ma beti ko bhi ni bacha payegi .

Naina :- tu kuch ni ker sakta betaal , m janti hu , isliye bachne k bahane band ker .

Betaal :- bahana hihi, ager yakin ni hota to khud dekh lo.

Ye bol usne un dono ki or ishara kiya or ye kya dekhte dekhte piya or uski maa ko ped ki tahaniyon ne jakad liya or khich ker un dono ko ped m hi samahit ker liya.

Vetal :- hihi, ab bhi tu bolegi m bahana ker raha hu.

Naina ne apna trishul hatate hue :- kya chahta h tu betaal .

Betaal :- ladki tu badi hi samjhdar or bahadur h , tere sath khelne m bada maja aayega.

Naina :- kesa khel.

Betaal :- hihi , wahi m swal touching or tum dogi jwab.

Sahi jwab dega tumhari or un ma beti ki mukti or galat jwab hihihi

Naina :- manjur h betaal , pucho jo puchna h.

Betaal :- hihi ese maja na aayega naina , is baar kuch naye andaz se hoga ye khel hihi.

Ye bol betaal ne chutki bajayi or tabhi achanak.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Update no :- 154
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Karan or kaya ko bandhi banta dekh devrishi chintit hote hue shani se bole

Narad ji :- ye kya prabhu , ye to.anarth ho gaya , karan or kaya to badi hi saralta se bone pishachon k jaal m fas gaye h

Karan apni is pariksha me asafal raha , ab to aapko hi kuch kerna hoga hey chaha putra , anyatha ye sansar apne rakshak ko kho dega.

Shani :- aapne sahi kaha devrishi , karan ne adhir ho ker ye nirnay liya , isliye wo bone pishachon k changul m fas gaya.

Isliye kaha jata h devrishi marg ka chayan kerne se pahale hume ek vichar ker lena chahiye

Per aap itne adhir kyu h devrishi , jara sayam rakhiye or kisne kaha aapse ki karan pariksha m asafal raha , satya to ye h ki wo apni pariksha k antim charam m h , jo shighra hi purn hogi.

Parantu usse pahale abhi to kisi or ki pariksha shuru hone wali h devrishi.

Dekhiye

Wahi dusri or

Diya nadi kinare ashru bahaye ja rahi thi

Diya khud se :- ye mane kya kiya , diya tu apni nafrat m itni andhi kese ho sakti h ki tu ek pavitra aatma ko hi kalankit kerne ja rahi thi.

Unlogo ne tumhare kiya wo galat tha , lekin tune aaj jo harkat ki uske baad tumme or unme fark hi kaha raha .

Ye sab bolte hue diya apne flashback ko yaad kerne lagi.

Short flashback

Diya humesha se hi vampire ni thi , wo bhi kisi samay ek insan , ek normal ladki thi.

Baat tab ki h jab wo 11 sal ki thi , jab use apni maa ki harkato or character ajib lagne laga , usne kayi baar apni maa ko apne pita k ek dost k sath bate kerte or chipakte hue dekha tha , jo jab hi aate jyadatar jab uske pita ghar pe na hote, kayi baar to dono ghanto kamre m band kerke bhi rahate.
Or jab diya puchti to uski maa bol deti ki wo bas uske uncle se baate kerti h , diya choti thi , isliye usko jyada insab bato ki samjh to ni thi , lekin wo itna samjh chuki thi jo ho raha h , wo sahi ni h.

Or ek din diya ne apni maa ko range hatho pakad hi liya , jab uski maa or uske papa k dost ek dusre ko kiss ker rahe the , us din vo gate lock kerna bhul gaye the, jiske kaaran diya ander aagayi.

Jab uski maa ne dekha ki diya ne sab dekh liya h , to wo use bahan bana k samjhane lagi

Admi haste hue uski ma se bola :- are janeman kya chupa rahi ho isse , isko bata hi do na ki m iska naya baap hu.

Diya ki ma boli :- chup kero tum , ye apne baap ko bol di to.

Diya ki ma ne use samjha ker use chup rahane ko kaha , lekin diya ni mani , or usne sham ko sari baat apne papa ko bata di.

Jiske chalte ghar m khub jhagda hua ,lekin diya ki chalak maa ne apne baato k jal se diya ko hi jhuta sabit ker diya or use bahut mara or us din khana bhi na diya.

Lekin diya ne than liya tha ki vo apni maa ki pol khol k hi rahegi , or moke ka intezaar kerne lagi.

Or wo moka ek din use mil hi gaya , hua yu ki ek din wo admi kamre m to chala gaya apni maa k sath, tab vo apna phone wahi hal me bhul gaya.

Or tabhi diya ne moka dekh ker usne us phone se apne papa ko phone ker usi time ghar bula liya or range hatho pakda diya.

Jiske chalte dono ka itna bada jhagda hua ki diya k papa ne uski maa ko talak dene ka nirnay le liya.

Or diya ko apne sath leker wo ghar se nikal gaye apni car me usi shahr m mojud apne dusre ghar me.

Lekin raste me hi unka ek bhayanak accident ho gaya , jisme diya to kismat se bach gayi , lekin uske pita na bach paye.

Diya ko bhi kafi chot aayi thi , lekin uski ma ne uski dekhbhal ki , lekin jab diya thik hui to usne uske sath bahut hi bura vyavhar kerna shuru ker diya or use kayi dino tak khana ni deti or humesha marti rahati.

Diya us time bechari thi to bachi , kab tak ye sab sahati ,uski himmat tut gayi.

Or ek din jab uski ma usko mar rahi thi , jab wo rote hue apni ma k pero m gir k rote hue boli.

Diya :- muma, please mat maro , mujhe mat maro ,aap jesa bologe m wesa hi karungi , please mat maro .

Uski ma ne kuch sochte hue boli.

Jo bolungi wo karegi

Diya ha me sir hilati h to wo use marna band ker usse khana deti h or thoda bahut jhuta pyar bhi , wo use marti to ni lekin nokro jese sab kam karwati, lekin diya santusht thi ki kamse kam uski ma use marti to ni or wo uske sath to h

Kuch time baad uski maa ne fir wahi sab kaam shuru ker diya or dhire dhire wo kafi pese wali bhi ho gayi, aaye din ghar per alag alag anjan mard aate.

Diya jese jese badi hoti gayi , wo sab samjhne lagi thi , use apni maa se ghin aati thi , lekin wo ker bhi kya sakti thi.

Diya jab 19 sal ki hui to uski maa ne uski shadi jabardasti ek 40 sal k admi se tay kerwa di , diya ko na chahte hue bhi shadi k liye ha bolna pada , kyunki uski ma ne use dhamki di thi ki ager usne ye shadi na ki to wo usko jinda jala degi.

Bachpan ka dar aaj bhi bechari k dil m tha , isliye usne haa kah diya , or apne bhavishya k sapne dekhne lagi.

Lekin bechari ko kya pata tha , ye shadi uska bhavishya ni banayegi , apitu uska sabkuch nasht ker degi.

Shadi k baad jab suhagrat k samay jab vo sej pe bethi apni pati ka intezar ker rahi thi.

thodi der bad jab darwaza khula to uski ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi , usne dekha ki uska budha pati akela hi ni balki apne 6 or dosto k sath aaya h , sab uper se nange or nashe m dhut the.

Diya chonk ker:- ye sab kya h ji

Pati :- wo kya h na jan , hum dost jo kerte h sab mil bat ker kerte h , to aaj humari suhagrat m ye sab bhi shamil honge.

Or tumhe in sab ko bhi pura naha dena h.

Diya :- aapka dimag kharab to ni ho gaya , ye kya bol rahe h aap , bhala koi apni patni ko yu apne dosto se batta h.

Pati chillaya :- chup sali randi , mane kaha na ye sab bhi maje karenge .

Diya ne bahut virodh kiya , lekin vo sab havsi na mane or usko gher ker uski ijat se khilwad kerne lage , uske kapde fad diye or uske private parts ko buri tarah masalne lage.

Diya rote hue :- please mujhe chod do , ni to.

Ek admi :- ni to kya randi.

Diya :- ni to m apni maa ko sab bata dalungi , tum log jante ni ho meri ma ko , vo tum sab ko jail pahuncha degi.

Diya ka itna bolna hi tha ki sab jor jor se hasne lage or uska pati bola.

Pati :- janeman , pahachana to ab tak tumne ni h apni maa ko .

Chalo tumhe ek nayi sachai bata hi du , ye sab shadi wagerah to sirf natak tha , baat to darasal ye h ki teri maa ne tera soda kiya h mere sath , tu ek mahine tak meri randi ban k rahegi.

Diya gusse se :- kya bakwas ker rahe ho , ye jhut h.

Pati :- lagta h tum ese ni manogi, chalo tumhe abhi proof deta hu.

Saasu maa ab aabhi jao ander.

Tabhi diya ki to herani ki sima na rahi , jab usne apni maa ko waha dekha.

Diya :- maa aap yaha , acha hua aap aagayi , dekhiye na ye kya bol rahe h , please maa mujhe bacha lo.

Diya ki maa haste hue :- are beti ro kyu rahi h , yehi to asli maja h jindagi ka , khub maje ker na.

Diya :- ma ye kya bol rahi ho Tum

Diya ka pati usko pakadte hue :- yahi randi ki ab bahut dikha liye tune nakhre , ab chudne k liye teyar ho ja.

Ye bol sab wapas tut pade usper , diya se ab raha na gaya , wo apni maa ko dutkarne lagi.

Diya :- kesi maa h tu , sharm ni aayi tujhe apni olaad ka soda kerte hue , kesi giri hui orat h tu , ye log mujhe gali de rahe h , per sach to ye h ki randi tu h tu, tu ma ni ho sakti , tu bas ek randi h , sirf randi.

Diya k man me ab nafrat bhar chuki thi , apni maa k liye , jo uske shabdo m saf saf najar aarahi thi.

Jisse uski maa ko gussa aagaya or wo diya ko ek thapad marte hue boli.

Diya ki ma chillayi :- ha kamini sahi boli tu , m ni hu teri maa , tere baap ne 2 shadi ki thi or tu uski pahali bivi ki olaad thi , lekin ek hadse m teri ma jab mari gayi to mane tere baap ko apne pyar k jal m fasa k shadi ki , sirf uske peso k liye or teri maa ban jer tujhe pala bas peso k liye.

Lekin jab mujhe pata chala ki us kamine ne apni sari jayadad tere naam ker di h to mera sabar ka bandh tut gaya , lekin mane sabar se kam liya.

Wo mujhe khush bhi ni ker pata tha , isliye mane amir logo ko fasana shuru kiya , jisme tere baap ka wo dost bhi tha or call girl ban gayi.

Jab teri vajah se tere baap ko meri sachai pata chali to mane hi apne contact se usko accident kerwake mar dala.

Mar to m tujhe bhi deti , lekin us property k liye jo tere naam thi , uske liye mane maa hone ka natak jari rakha or tere 18 sal ki hone tak ka intezaar kiya or moka dekh tujhse sign leker wo property bhi leli.

Lekin itne sal tujhe palne ki kimat bhi to byaj sahit vasulne k liye hi to mane aaj tujhe yaha becha h meri bachi , ab ye tere p h tu maje karegi ya dard sahegi

Diya to sachai sun ker tut chuki thi , use yakin hi ni ho raha tha , jise usne apni ma mana tha aajtak , wo uski ma thi hi ni , balki ek lalchi or havsi orat thi , jisne uske baap ko mara.

Vo vahi gir padi , uski ankhe to khuli thi , lekin use apne aaspas ka koi hosh na tha.

Lekin un darindo ko kaha taras aana tha , un logo ne puri raat uska gang rape kiya or uski ijat ko tar tar ker dala.

Rape itna brutal tha ki diya marnasaran halat me pahunch gAyi subah tak.

Diya k pati or uski ma ko laga ki wo mar gayi , to unhone use jungle m jaker fek diya

Lekin diya us waqt jinda thi , or kismat se usi samay kaya bhi dharti lok ki ser pr nikli thi usi jungle m

Tab usne diya k pati ko diya ko fekte hue or dekh liya .

Unke jate hi kaya jaldi se diya ko check kerti h to use jinda pati h to jaldi se diya ko hosh m lati h.

Diya jese hi hosh me aati h to use rat ka sara vyakhya yad aajata h or wo rote hue kaya se boli.

Diya ;- aap jo bhi h mujhe akela chod dijiye , mar jane dijiye mujhe , m ab kahi ki ni rahi .

Ye bol diya rone lagi ,kaya ne use shant ker sari baat puchi or jab usne diya ki kahani suni to use insano pe bahut gussa aaya or wo diya se boli

Kaya :- rona band karo saheli , ye tum kya kah rahi ho , tumhe marne du .

Are tumhe to marne k bajay un logo se apne badle k bare m sochna chahiye, socho kya unka jinda rahna sahi hoga ,aj jo harkat unhonne tumhare sath ki h , wo kal kisi or k sath bhi ker sakte h.

Kaya ne ese hi use samjhaya , jise sun diya m bhi himmat aayo.

Diya :- aapne mujhe saheli kaha.

Kaya :- ha saheli , banogi meri dost

Diya :- ab kya fayda saheli , m to marne wali hu , to kuch pal ki dosti ka kya matlab

Kaya :- jaha matlab ho wahan dosti kese ho sakti h saheli , or m bhi konsi jinda hu.

Diya :- kya matlab

TTab kaya ne diya ko apne bare m bataya or apne bade dant dikhaye.

Jise dekh wo dar gayi , lekin kaya ne use na darke ka kahate hue kaha.

Kaya :- saheli m tumhari madad to ker sakti hu badla lene m or tumhe bacha bhi sakti hu.

Lekin uski ek bahut badi kimat chukani hogi.

Diya :- m har kimat chukaNe ko teyar hu kaya ji (rote hue ) or vese bhiek ladki ki sabse kimti uski ijat hoti h saheli use to kho chuki hu m to ab or kisi kimat se kya daru.

Kaya :- to tumhe meri tarah vampire banna hoga diya , kyunki tumhari halat bahut kharab h , ye insani yoni m tum jivit ni rah paogi.

Diya :- mujhe manjur h saheli , m apna badla lene k liye kuch bhi karungi , apna or apne papa ka badka leke rahungi.

Wese bhi ab mujhe insano se nafrat ho gayi h , ye insani jat sirf havasi or matlabi h, mujhe khud ka insan hone se bhi ghin aane lagi h.

Hey sakhi bana do mujhe bhi apni tarah vampire or mukti dedo mujhe is gande insani yoni se.

Tab kaya ne diya ko bhi apni tarah vampire bana dala , or apni vampire powers ki madad se usne kuch hi dino me apni soteli ma or un sab admiyo ko badi dardnak mot mar dala.

Lekin diya k dil me ab insano k liye nafrat itni katar ho chuki thi , ki use insaan k nam se nafrat thi

Flashback end

Diya ye sab yaad kerte hue :- mane aaj jo kiya , uska vahi dand mujhe milna chahiye , jo varsho purv un sabko diya tha.

Ye sab sochte hue vo nadi ki or jane lagi.

Lekin tabhi usne dekha ki ek 16 17 sal ka bacha bhi nadi me kud gaya or dubne laga.

Diya ne jab ye dekha to jhat se use bachne k liye bhagi or pani se use bahar nikala

Bacha diya se bola :- aapne mujhe kyu bachaya didi , mar jane deti mujhe.

Diya :- ye kya bol rahe ho tum , tum janbhujker kude the , per kyu.

Bacha rote hue :- didi mujhse bahut badi galti hui h , jiske pachtave ka yahi rasta h

Diya :- esa kya kiya tumne jo marne ja rahe the.

Bacha :- didi , meri ek bahan h jo mujhse bahut pyaar kerti h , itna ki wo mere tan pe ek kharoch tak ni dekh sakti.

Lekin mane kabhi uske pyar ki kadar na ki , use humesha marta or dutkarta, usse pyaar se ek baar bola tak ni.

Lekin mane uski jara si bhi kadar na ki , or to or ek din vo bol se khel rahi thi , to galti se uski baal mujhe a lagi to m gusse m itna pagal ho gaya ki mane uske uper ek pathar fek mara.

Jisse us bichari ki ankh fut gayi or khun bahane laga , or jab mummy papa ne ye dekha to us bichari ne rote hue ye jhut bol diya ki vo ek patthar pe gir gayi , taki mujhe dant na pade , lekin m dhurt uske pyar ko na samjh saka.

Or aaj jab m apne khet ki jhopdi m so raha tha , to achanak se meri ankh bahan ki chikh se khuli to mane dekha ki meri bahan vahi farsh pe giri padi h or uske hath me ek samp h jisne use das liya tha.

Mere puchne per usne bataya.

Bahan behosh hote hue:- bhaiya ye samp aapko katne ko bad raha tha , m kese aapko kuch hone deti .

Ye bol wo bbehosh ho gayi .

(Jor se rote hue ) meri bahan meri vajah se marnasaran m h , kesa bhai hu m jo kabhi apni bahan k pyar ko samjh na saka or usne mere liye.

(Rote hue) ni di mujhe jine ka koi hak ni , mujhe mar jane dijiye.

Diya ne sab sun use samjhate hue bola :- beta aap marne to ja rahe the , lekin aapne socha ki ager aapko kuch ho jata or apki bahan ko ye baat pata chalti ki , jis bhai k liye usne apni jan ki baji lagayi , wo uski ke kaaran is dunia m na raha.

Beta ek baat humesha dhyan rakhna , jiv to galtiyo ka pitara h , galtiya sabse hoti h , lekin jo apni galti ka pashchatap ker le , wo apradhi ni rah jata.

Bacha :- kya sach me didi , bhagwan mujhe maf ker denge .

Diya :- ha bacha ,Pashchatap wo agni h jo sare papo ko bhasm ker deti h or bhagwan bhi mafi de dete h

Diya

(Apni jeb se ek pudiya deye hue) lo beta ye apni bahan ko pani me mila ker de dena samp ka jahar khatam ho jayega

Bacha gale lagte hue :- thank you didi.

Or fir wo bacha apne ghar ki or bhad jata h or diya bhi dusri taraf , lekin wo piche mud us bache ko kuch bolne ko hui to usne dekha ki waha koi ni h.

Diya :- are wo bacha kaha gaya .

Tabhi diya ko ahasas hua ki jis galti ko kerne se diya ne roka tha , kuch der pahale wo bhi to wahi kerne ja rahi thi

Tab use ja ker ahasas hua or wo pashchatap ka drid nishchay ker jab ghar pahunchi, to kaya ko waha na paker wo chintit ho gayi.

Use jab pata lagaya to khabar mili ki goblin king ne kaya or karan ko bandi bana liya h or unki jan khatre m h.

Diya :- yahi wakt h diya , tere pashchatap ka , yahi wakt h teri saheli ka karz utarne ka.

Mujhe kaya or karan ji ko bachana hoga.

Ye soch wo diya mahal ki or nikal gayi .

Back to the hero.

Karan ko jab hosh aaya to uska sir dard se fata ja raha tha, jisse uski ankhe tak na khuli.

Usne apne hath hilane chahe to wo hila tak na paya , usne ankhe khol k dekha to paya ki wo mayavi salakho se bhandha hua tha , or usne paya ki wo jaha bhandha hua h wo koi kargrah ni balki ek bada sa hall h .

Us hall k bicho bich ek murti rakhi hui thi , jo dekhne se hi pata chal rahi thi ki wo shetan ki murti h.

Us murti k samne ek havan kund jal raha tha or uske as pas kale jadu ka samman pada tha or pas m hi ek bali ki bedi bhi thi.

Usne najar thodi or ghumayi to pas m hi kaya ko bhi vese hi pash m bandha hua paya.

Karan kaya ko hosh lane ki kosis kerne laga use aawaz dete hue .

Karan :- kaya utho , utho sakhi.

Thodi der aawaz dene k baad kaya bhi uth gayi or usne ye najara dekha to sara majra samjhte hue boli


Kaya :- oh no sakha , ye goblin to humari bali dene k chakkar m h lagta h .

Chakkar m h ni , bali dene wale hi kaya.

Ye aawaz goblin ki thi jo waha enter hota h.

Goblin :- to tumhe hosh ahi gaya rakshak , to tu hi h wo jisko devo ne chuna h hum asuro ka ant kerne.

(Haste hue ) Per herani ki baat kaho ya yakin na aana , ki shani ka ansh itna bebkuf nikla itni saralta se mere jal m fas gaya.

Kya kahata h wo , yahi na ki karmo ka fal sabko milta h , to dekh shani aaj tere karmo ka fal tere ansh ko milega.

Tere hi diye hue kavach k kaaran mane apna beta khoya tha or ab tere hi ansh ki m bali deker m apne bete ko punarjivit karunga.

Kaya :- murkhta mat kero goblin king , ye prakriti k niyamo k khilaf h or teri bhalayi isi m h chupchap wo dede jiske liye hum yaha aaye h ho sakta h tujhe baksh diya jaye.

Goblin king haste hue :- haha khud dono mot k kagar pe ho or dhamki mujhe deti ho

Vese tu chinta mat ker kaya , tujhe m ni marne wala , tu to jivit hone k baad mere bete ki bivi banegi , teri jesi mal mere bete ko uski nayi jindgi ki bhadai ka tohfa hoga.

Karan goblin king ki is baat se gussa aaya jab usne kaya p buri najar dal uske liye ese shabd bole.

Karan chillaya :- dusht ni chodunga tujhe.

Ye bol karan apna dam lagate gye janjiro ko todne ki kosis kerne laga , lekin ek to pishach lok or uper se wo shetan k mandir m tha , is kaaran wo kamzor pad raha tha , wo janjir ni tod paya.

Goblin king ne jab ye dekha to usne karan k uper fir se bijli se prahar kiya.

Jisse karan chikane laga .

Goblin king :- ab jab tak teri bali ni chad jati , yu hi bijli ka swad chalta rah rakshak.

Or wo yagya k pas pahunch bethne hi wala tha ki tabhi kuch senik aaye.

King :- tumhari himmat kese hui meri puja me vighn dalne ki.

Senik :- shama kijiyega maharaj per aana bhi jaruri tha.

Humne ek ghuspathiye ko pakda h jo in dono ki sathi h

King :- kon h wo lao mere samne use

Senik jab use leker aaye to kaya chonk k boli ;:- diya tu yaha .

Ji ha dosto ye diya hi thi , jisne chupke se mahal m ghusne ki kosis to ki lekin pakdi gayi.

Kaya :- tu yaha kyu aayi diya.

Diya :-. Tujhe esi mushkil ki ghadi m kese chod deti bahan , ye jindagi teri hi to di hui h .

King haste hue :- dono sahelio m bahut yarana h , per afsos ye yarana aaj hi khatam hota h.

(Seniko se ) mar dalo ise

Senik diya ko marne aage badhe hi the ki tabhi shetan k is mandir k pujari bol utha.

Pujari :- ni maharaj esa mat kijiye , yadi aapne aaj ki rat bali purush k alawa kisi ka vadh kiya ya karwaya to rajkumar kabhi jivit na ho payenge.

King :- kismat achi h teri ladki , ek din ki mohalat tujhe or mil gayi .

(Apne seniko se ) ise karagar m dal do , iske sath hum kal jashn ki rat ko rangin karenge.

Adesh sunte hi senik diya ko kargah ki or le gaye or wo goblin puja m beth gaya.

Wahi dusri or

Veer or preety us admi ko leker nikal pade shahr ki or , preety gadi chala rahi thi or veer piche beta use sambhal raha tha.

Preety :- jan tumhe ni lagta ki hume sister ko waha ni chodna chahiye tha , khaskar ye jante hue bhi ki is baar samna kisi mamuli pret se ni.

Veer :- bol to tum sahi rahi ho jan, per ek baat tum khud hi socho yadi naina ne koi nirnay liya h to kuch soch samjh k hi liya hoga na

Preety :- hmm vo bhi h , per

Veer :- preety tum chinta chodo , mujhe naina pe pura vishwash h use kuch ni hoga , abhi tum inper dhyan do , inhe hume jaldi se jaldi hospital pahuchana hoga.

Preety muskurate hue :- abhi lo my baby.

Ye bol preety ne apni ankhe band ki or agle hi pal wo hospital k samne the.

Veer :- tum bhi na jan , kerne se pahale sochti ni ho , abhi koi dekh leta to.

Preety :- ha ye baat to sach h j, jab hi to tum jese budu se pyar ker bethi .

Preety ankh mar hasti hui boli , fir veer jaldi se ward boy ko bula ker lata h or fir wo log use stature pe leta ker le jate h
.

Preety :- veer tum chalo m.jara gadi park kerke aati hu.

Veer preety ki baat man chala gaya ander lekin kafi der baad bhi preety wapas ander na aayi to veer ko kuch gadbad lagi.

Or jab vo parking m pahuncha to usne paya , parking m gadi to thi per preety ni.

Veer :- ye preeti kaha chali gayi ,oh no kahi vo naina k pas to ni chali gayi.

Ye soch veer pareshan hone laga.

Wahi dusri or

Diya ko seniko ne le jaker karagrah m dal diya , diya abhi soch hi rahi thi ki wo aage kya kare to tabhi use karagrah k ek kone se lohe ko pitne ki aawaz aane lagi.

Diya samjh gayi ki wo yaha akeli ni h , wo us or jane lagi , jaha se aawaz aarhi thi ye janne k liye ki kin h waha.

Wo waha pahunchi to unhone paya k ek bahut hi vishal kaya k bujurg , jo the to daitya lekin tez devo jesa kuch bana rahe h , kuch hathiyar jesa ,lohe ko pighla ker


Diya ne usne pucha ki :- kon h aap or inlogo ne aapko bandi kyu banaya h.

Admi :- dusro ka parichay janne se pahale khud ka to parichay do ladki.

Tab diya ne un admi ko parichay dete hue , apne yaha hone ka kaaran bataya , na jane kyu diya ko esa kag raha tha , ye bujurg unke kam aasakte h


Fir jab us admi ne diya ko apna parichay diya to uski herani ki sima na rahi



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Admi :- to ye dusht is had tak gir chuke h.

(Diya se ) beti m daitya shilpi or vishwkarma ka mitra may danav urf mayasur hu.

Diye ne jese hi ye suna to uski sima na rahi herani ki , use yakin ni ho raha tha , uske samne wo shaks khade h or vo bhi esi jagah per , jo guno me vishwakarma samman h or danvo k sath sath devo k liye bhi sammanniya h.

Mayasur yani daityon k vegyanik or hathiyaro k nirmata h , jese devo k vishwakarma h.

Inhone brahama k kahane per patal lok ka nirman kiya tha , asuro k rahane k liye or to or shri krishna k kahane per inhonne hi vishwakarma k sath mil , pandvo ki nagri basayi, jo indraprasth k nam se vikhyat hui.

Lekin sawal ye tha ki ye yaha kese.

Diya ne turant unko jhuk ker pranam kerte hue kaha .

Diya :- prabhu aap yaha kese , in dusto k karagrah me ?

Mayasur :- karmo ka fal putri karmo ka fal , kisi samay ye vishesh bhawan jisme in dushto ki shakti kahi guna bad jati h , iska nirman mane hi inke liye kiya or in dushto ne mujhe hi chal se bandhi bana diya , Yaha chal se.

Diya :- per kyu.

(Friends yaha m flashback ko ni khichne wala , short m nipatana hi sahi h , kyumki kuch khas ni h)

Mayasur :- iske liye.

Unhone ye bol apne dono hath aage kiye or tabhi unke hatho m ek satrangi shaktipunj aagaya or iske sath hi pura karagrah ese prakashit ho gaya.




Diya :- ye kya h prabhu.

Mayasur :- ye wahi shakti h putri jiske liye rakshak or tumhari saheli yaha aaye h.

Yahi h vo ekmatra shakti or oshadhi jisse goblin k jahar k prabhav ko bhi nasth kiya ja sakta h.

Diya :- kya per mane to suna tha ki inke jahar ka koi upay h hi ni.

Mayasur :- varsho purv esa hi tha ,parantu fir jab inlogo ka utpad badne laga to devo ne unhe parajit to kiya , lekin unka bhi isme bahut nuksan hua

Tab parampita brahma ji ne mujhe is oshdhi k nirman ka nirdesh diya, mane varsho ki mahanat k baad is oshdhi ko teyar ker liya .

Parantu isse pahale m ise devo ko somp pata , un bone pishachon ko is bare m na jane kaha se suchna mil gayi or unhone chal se mujhe bhojan ka nimantran de ker yaha bulaya or chal se karagrah me dal diya.

Rakshak jyoti jo unki shakti h , unke shaktihin hone se swayam bhi kamzor ho chuke h or pishach lok ka andher unki bachi shakti ko bhi sokh raha h .

Yadi unko apni khoyi hui shakti pani h to unhe ise dharan kerna hoga.

Lekin lakh kosiso k baad bhi ise hasil na ker sake mujhse .

Diya :- yadi esa h to hume shighra hi kuch na kuch ker ise karan ji tak pahuchana hoga prabhu , anyatha anarth ho jayega.

Mayasur :- parantu putri uske liye hume pahale yaha se nikalna hoga.

Diya :- hey daityashreshth, aap to danvo k pramukh astra nirmata h , fir aap kyu ni apni kisi rachna ka prayog ker yaha se ni nikalte.

Mayasur :- yahi to vidambana h putri , hum shilpiyo ka ek niyam kahe ya niyati , hum apne banaye kisi ashtra ka prayog swayam ni ker sakte , ager kerne ka prayas kiya to wo shastr shaktihin ho jayega.

Diya :- parantu ye karya m to ker sakti hu, hey prabhu kripya aap mujhe ye avsar de taki m apna prayashchitt purn ker apni saheli or unke sakha ki raksha ker saku.

M aapko vachan deti hu , chahe mere pran chale jaye , lekin m is shakti ko kabhi un dushto k hath ni lagne dungi.

Diya ne ye baat drid nishchay or purn aatmvishwas se boli thi , mayasur kuch der diya ki ankho m dekhte h , jese usko parakh rahe ho.

Mayasur :- thik h putri , yu to mera swabhav shigra hi kisi pe vishwas kerna ni , parantu m tumhari ankho m satya or pashchatap ki jwala saf saf dekh sakta hu, isliye sambhalo ise

Ye bol mayasur ne diya k hatho me vo shaktipunj pakda diya , diya ne jese hi use hath me liya , wo us tez punj k prakash se mano ek har naha si gayi ek shan to .

Per agle hi shan uski chinkhe nikalne lagi , kyunki diya uske tez ko sambhal ni pa rahi thi, wo jalne lagi thi uske sharir m darare si aane lagi.

Mayasur ye dekh turant us shaktipunj ko lete h or ek jadui gole type bakse m band ker bole.

Mayasur :- lo putri ab tum ise chu sakti ho, per apna vada yaad rakhna.

Mayasur ne fir apna hath uper kiya or unke hath me ek megical dhanush aagaya.




Mayasur diya ko dete hue :- lo putri ye tumhari sahayta karega rakshak tak pahuchne k liye , parantu dhyan rahe ye ashthayi h , kyunki mere pas yaha meri prayogashala ni thi , isliye m tumhare liye itna hi ker sakta hu.

Iska upyog tum sirf ek ghadi(20 min) tak hi ker sakti ho , uske baad ye apne aap vilupt ho jayega.

Isliye tumhe shighrata kerni hogi putri.

Diya dhanush lete hue :- dhanyawad prabhu , m aapke nirdesho ka smaran rakhungi.

Ye bol diya maysur k charan chuti h .

Mayasur :- vijayi bhavah putri.

Ye bol mayasur ek jagah jaker beth gaye or diya ne apne hathiyar ka prayog kerna aarambh kiya.

Usne jese hi dhanush ki pratyancha khichi to swath hi uspe ek nila baan aagaya or diya ne wo ban karagah k darwaje p choda.

Tir jese hi darwaje se takraya ek bahut hi bade dhamake k sath us darwaje k parkhache ud gaye.


Diya mayasur se :- chaliye prabhu , ab aapko yaha rahane ki koi avashyakta ni.

Mayasur :- putri tum meri chinta chodo or apne udeshya p dhyan do , tumhare pahale prayog k sath hi tumhara samay arambh ho chuka h.

Diya :- ji prabhu.

Diye ye kah shetan k mandir ki or bhagi , tabhi raste m use apni or bahut se goblin aate hue dikhe , jo shayad dhamake ki aawaz se aapahunche the.

Diya ko jese hi unhonne dekha to use pakadne k liye vo sab uski or dode.

Diya bhi unki or tezi se bhag k gayi or uchal ker ek tir choda , ttir jese hi dhanush se chuta tabhi wo ek se anek tiro m badal gaya or sare danav diya k us prahar se yamalok sidhar gaya.




Diya usike sath hi tezi se aage bhadi , kyunki uske oas time kam tha or mandir mahal k dusre kone m tha.

Wahi dusri or

Betaal ne jan chutki bajayi tabhi waha charo or roshni fel gayi jiske kaaran naina ki ankhe ek shan to band hi ho gayi.

Kuch shan baad naina ne jab ankhe kholi to usne paya ki wo ab shamsan me ni , balki ek ese kamre m h jisme as pas najar na hi khidki najar aarahe h or na hi koi darwaza.

Tabhi naina k kano m ek aawaz aayi ,

Didi

Naina ye aawaz sun chonki or piche dekha to paya ye aawaz piya ki thi.

Naina ne jhat se pita ko gale lagaya or boli :- ro mat bacha , aapki didi aapko or aapki mummy ko kuch ni hone degi.

Tabhi uske kano me vetaal ki aawaz padi

Vetal :- hihi ager bharat milap ho gaya ho to khel shuru kare ladki

Naina :- m teyar hu vetal .

Vetal :- pahala sawal thoda aasan h,

Wo kya h jiska upyog use kharidne wala ni kerta .

Or jo uska prayog kerta h , wo use kharid ni sakta..

Naina ye sawal sun soch me pad gayi ki kya ho sakta h vo

Tabhi vetal ne apna ganda khel shuru ker diya , achanak se us kamre ki diwaro pe bade bade kante aAgaye or kamre ki charo diwar apne aap un dono ki or bhadne lagi.

Jise dekh piya or rone lagi or vetal haste hue bola.

Vetaal :- utter jaldi do ladki , kahi esa na ho ki der ho jaye.

Diware naina k bilkul pas aahi gayi thi ki naina k chahre pe muskan aagayi or vo tezi se boli.

Naina :-. Tumhare pahale sawal ka jwab h kafan.

Ha vetal kafan hi vo chij h jo kharidne wala pahanta ni or jo pahanata h vo use kharid ni sakta.

Naina k uter dete hi diware apne aap ruk gayi or ye kya piya bhi gayab ho gayi.

Naina :- kya kiya tumne piya k sath.

Betaal :- hihi ab tak to kuch ni , lekin agle padav me hari to aage ka kah ni sakta .

Ye bol betaal ne fir se chutki bajayi.

Isi tarah ki ajib ajib maya me vetal ne naina ko harane ki kosis ki lekin naina ne apni samjhdari or sujh bujh se vetal ko usi khel me hara diya.

Jiska parinam ye hua ki piya or uski maa apne aap aajad ho gayi , kyunki betalo ke is khel ka nishpaksh hi parinam hota h.

Naina piya se :- chalo beta ab ghabrane ki koi jarurat ni h , chachi aap ab shanti se ghar ja sakte h.

Abhi piya ki ma kuch bol pati usse pahale hi betaal gusse se dahada.

Betaal :- itni jaldi ni ladki , aaj to m in dono ko mar ker hi rahunga.

Ye bol betaal ne 2 aag k gole ma beti ki or feke lekin ek baar fir naina ne apni trishul ki madad se un golo ko nasht ker diya or ek baar fir naina ne us betaal ko apni shakti se bandhna shuru ker diya.

Betaal chikte hue :- tu mujhe bandh to sakti h ladki per tu maR ni sakti.

Abhi naina kuch bolti usse pahale hi ek aawaz waha gunji jise sun naina chonk gayi .

Ye aawaz preety ki thi jo hospital se sidha teleport ho idher aachuki thi.

Preety gusse se :- ek mamuli sa vetal hoker itna ghamand , ruk teri ye galat fahmi m dur kerti hu.

Ye bol usne apna ek hath aage kiya or usme ek gola aagaya.

Naina ye dekh ghabra gayi uske pasine chutne lage or wo preety ko rokte hue chillayi.

Naina :- ni preety ...

Lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi , preety ka gola jese hi betaal se takraya or tabhi wo hua jiski umid naina ko thi per preety ko bilkul ni.

Betaal ko jese hi wo gola laga , usse vetal ghayal hone k bajaye or taqatwar ho gaya or wo naina ki ked se chut gaya or haste hue bola.

Vetal haste hue :- tu jo bhi h ladki , lekin madad kerne k liye shukriya.

Ye kahate hue betaal hava me uda or bijli ki raftaar se piya ko utha ker le gaya or ped m sama gaya.

Piya ki ma chilayi :- niiiiiiiiiiiiii....

Or usike sath vo behosh ho gayi sadme se.

Preety naina se :- ye sab kya h sister , us vetal ko kuch kyu ni.

Naina jo preety k yaha aane se bahut jyada gussa thi wo uspe chilayi .

Naina :- mane tumhe mana kiya tha na , to tum kyu aayi yaha, mana kiya tha na tumhe

Preety naina k gusse ko dekh ghabra gayi or boli.

Preety :- wwo sister mane socha ki ttumhari help ker



Naina gusse se :- madad kerne ya kam bigadne , mana kiya tha na tumhe mane ane se fit kyu aayi tum

Preety haklate hue :- wo mane socha ki tum akeli ho , kisi mushkil me na fas jao , isliye ....

Naina :- mushkile to tumne yaha aaker bhadayi h meri preety.

M koi pagal ni hu jo bina vajah tumhe yaha se nikala tha , tum janti bhi ho kya humara samna kis shakti se hua.

Ye koi aam aatma ni , betaal h betaal , jinka ant pavitra or deviya shaktiyo se hi kiya ja sakta h .

Na ki tumhari asuri or nakaratmak shaktiyo se , ulta in shakti k sampark m ane se inki shakti m or vridhi hoti h , jesa abhi hua , isi kaaran to braham rakshaso k baad betaal hi vo h , jinpar trityao ka bhi vash ni, isliye hi to mane veer k sath tumhe yaha se nikala tha .

Vo to shukar h uska dhyan is baat p ni gaya ki tum tritya ho verna vo itna shaktishali h tumhari bhitar us tritya ki urja ko vo humare hi khilaf use kerne ki shamta rakhta or wo tumhe nuksan tak pahuncha deta


Lekin ni tumhe to koi baat samjh hi ni aati na , har chij me jid or manmani hi kerni h tumhe.

Yu hi naina preety ko bahut kuch sunate hue dant rahi thi , piya ki raksha or preety ki security ki tension me use itna bhi dhyan na raha ki jis preety ki chinta m vo ye sab ker rahi h , anjane m hi vo khud hi anjane m apne shabd bano se use hurt ker rahi h.

Preety jo naina k kaaran batane pe jitna heran hui , usse kahi jyada vo hurt ho rahi thi , kyunki aaj pahali baar tha jab naina ne usse is tarah baat ki thi.

Subah ki durghatna ko vo hadsa man abhi bhulne ki kosish bhi m hi thi ki vesa hi uske sath dusri baar ho gaya.


Jisse is baar usse saha na gaya , or preety ki ankho se nir chalakne lage .

Naina aas pas kuch dhundte hue piya ko bachane ka idea sochte hue dant rahi thi preety ko to ek baar to uska dhyan preety k ansuo p ni gaya.

Lekin fir naina thoda shant hote hue uski taraf mudte hye bolne lagi.

Naina rukhe swar me:- acha jo hua use chodo or su..

Naina bolte bolte ruk gayi jab uski najar preety k ansu bhare chahre p padi , to naina ka dil kamp gaya or uske ankho m bhi ansu aagaye.

Jab usne dekha ki uski saheli uski pyari bahan ka masum chahra pure ansuo se bhar chuka h , uska ankho ka kajal bhi nikal ker galo pe bahane laga tha or to or wo sisak - 2 k rone lagi

Preety ki ye halat dekh naina ko bhi apni galti ka ahasas hone laga ki wo anjane m kuch jyada hi bol gayi.

Naina :- preety wo m...

Preety rote hue :- kuch mat bolo sister , tum shayad sahi hi kah rahi ho m tum logo ki madad kam kerti hu or kam bigadti jyada hu , humesha meri nadani ki vajah se hi tum or veer musibat me pad jate ho, per aage se esa ni hoga sister , m aaj hi chali jaungi yaha se.

Taki tumhe ya veer ko koi problem na ho.


Preety ki in baat me dard or tanj dono ka mishran tha , jise naina saf saf mahasus ker sakti thi.

Naina :- preety mere kahane ka vo matla...

Abhi naina aage kuch bol pati ki preety waha se apni baat bol bhag gayi ek or .

Veer bhi jo us admi ko hospital m admit kerwake vaha pahunch gaya tha vo unhike taraf aaraha tha , preety usse takra gayi.

Veer ne abhi uski ankho m ansu dekhe ni the isliye wo majak kerte hue bola.

Veer :- kya baat h meri fulan devi , itni jaldi m kaha ja rahi ho , hum to yaha h.

Lekin preety ne bina jwab diye hi veer k side se vaha nikal gayi or veer ne usne rokne ki kosis ki to usne bhi preeti ki ankho m ansu dekh liye

Abhi veer preety k piche ja hi raha tha , ki uske kano me ek or rone or siskiyo ki awaz padi.

Veer ne us or dekha to paya naina ghutno k bal bethi ro rahi h.

Veer turant naina k pas gaya or puchne laga.

Veer :- kya hua naina tum ro kyu rahi ho or preety rote hue kyu gayi yaha se ?

Naina veer ko sari baate batate hue boli.

Naina sisakte hue :- tumhi batao veer Mane kya galat kiya , mane to uski bhalayi k liye hi danta tha , lekin vo h ki samjhne ki bajaye usne galat matlab nikal liya.

Mana m kuch jyada hi bol gayi gusse m , lekin use bhi to samjhna chahiye na ki m uski dushman ni hu , vo meri saheli hi ni meri bahan jesi h , mane jo kiya uski bhalayi k liye hi kiya.

Veer naina ko gale se laga bola :- sssh shant ho jao naina , tum to janti hi ho humari preety sidhi or bholi h ,jo dil m aye saf bol deti h , to uska kya bura man na .

Galti meri bhi h naina , tumne mujhe sari baat telepathy k jariye pahale hi bata di thi , taki m use aaram se samjha saku , lekin mane hi deri ker di.

Chalo ab shant ho jao , hum dono milker preety ko manayenge , pahale hume piya ko bachana hoga.

Piya ka nam se naina kuch shant hui or fir dono lag gaye firse nayi planning m .

Back to the hero.

Karan abhi bhi goblin ki bijli ki power se tadaf raha tha or karan ko tadapta dekh kaya bhi roye ja rahi thi.

Usko khud pe bahut gussa aaraha tha ki vo chah ker bhi kuch ni ker pa rahi , or jese jese samay gujar raha h uske sakha ki jaan ko khatra bhadta ja raha h.

Wahi dusri or shetani pandito jo shetani mantro ka jap kerte hue havan kund m khun ki ahuti de raha tha .

Kuch der baad usne goblin king se kaha ,

Pandit :- maharaj bali purush ko le aayiye samay achuka h

Goblin king apne seniko ko karan ko pakad k lane ka adesh deta h.

Kaya chilate hue :- akhiri baar bol rahi hu betaal murkhata mat ker , verna bahut bura anjam hoga tera , mot k liye tadfega tu.

Goblin king gusse se apne saniko se :- ye sali bahut bol rahi h , jao iski okat ni ki ye rani bane , mar to ni sakte aaj hum ise, lekin iska vo hashra karo ki ye mot ki bhik mange , ijat lut lo iski.

Apne raja ka adesh sun sare goblin havas ki nigah se kaya ki or bhadne lage , lekin isse pahale wo usse chu bhi pate ki kaya or goblin k bich ek dhamaka hua , jisse goblin to mare gaye or kaya ki janjire tut gayi.

Goblin king chilaya :- kisne kiya ye.

Diya waha uper mojud balcony se kudte hue niche aayi or boli.

Diya :- ye mane kiya h dusht ,bahut hua tere atyachar, aaj tu marega.

Goblin king haste hue :- tu kya sochti h ladki is dhanush ki madad se tu akele meri sena ko hara sakegi.

Kaya jo aajad ho chuki thi vo waha aate hue boli :- kisne kaha ye akeli h , iski bahan iske sath h

Goblin king ne ishara kiya or tabhi waha achanak pata ni kaha kaha se kudte hue hajaro ki sankhya me goblin aagaye.

Kaya hath aage badhate hue:- chal diya aaj inhe dikhate h ki kya h hum dono bahano ki takat .

Diya hath milate hue :- neki or puch puch.

Isike sath shuru ho gaya goblin or kaya ka ek bhayanak sangram , mayasur k divya dhanush ne diya ki kafi sahayta ki or kaya bhi apni nayi shaktiyo k sath.

Uske sharir per ek lal rang ka kavach aagaya or wo dono hatho se aag barsane lagi.

Goblin king ne jab dekha ki uski sena kamzor pad rahi h to wo bhi yudh m kud pada or kaya se bhid gaya.

Or fir dono k bich shakti k golo se ek dusre k uper prahar kerne ka silsila shuru ho gaya jisme kabhi kaya bhari pad rahi thi to kabhi king.

Lekin king jyada hi takatwar tha or wo kaya ka dhyan bhatka ek shaktishali prahar kerta h kaya pe , jisse uske muh se chikh nikal gayi.

Kaya :- aaahhh..

Or wo ghayal ho gir padi.

Diya :- kayaa

Ye bol vo kaya ki or jane ko bhadi , per goblins ne use gher liya or badkismati se dhanush ka samay bhi khatam ho gaya or vo gayab ho gaya.

Fir bhi diya har na mante hue vo apni talvar se ladte hue aage bhadne lagi , lekin goblin ki sankhya bahut jyada thi or diya k samjh me bhi aagaya tha ki vo ab or ni lad sakti.

Ab usko bachne ki ek umid hi najar aarahi thi , vo thi apna hero , lekin wo to kamzori or bijli k jhatko se behosh tha.

Diya ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kya kare , lekin kuch der baad use ek hi upay sujha or usne kaya ko dur se hi dekhte hue nam ankho se .

Diya :- alvida meri bahan meri saheli , shayad humara itna hi sath tha , apni saheli ko bhul mat jana or har bar ki tarah meri is galti ko bhi bhula dena.

Kaya ghabra ker :- ye kya bol rahi h tu diya , kya kerne ja rahi h tu.

Diya :- wahi jiske liye karan ji ne kaha tha , galti ka pashchatap.

Ye bol diya ne vo gola nikala , jisme wo shakti band thi or use khol diya , or jese hi wo gola khula pure mandir m prakash fel gaya , jisse goblin ki chinkhe gujne lagi.


Or diya bhi fir se jalne lagi.

King darte hue :- yyee kya h .

Diya :- ye teri wo mot h dusht , jise tune khud chal se apne mahal me bandi banaya tha.

King samjh gaya tha ki ye mayasur ki banayi vo oshadhi h vo turant use pane diya ki or doda , per isse pahale diya k pas pahuchta diya ne dard me tadapte hue bhi apni puri takat laga karan k pas pahunchi or wo gola uske samne ker diya , jiske sath wo shakti karan m sama gayi or diya jamin per gir dard se tadafne lagi.


Or jese hi wo shakti karan me samayi , karan ka sharir nile rang ki urja se yu chamkane laga , jese dharti pee mano surya uter aaya ho.

Kuch der baad jab roshni hati to karan ne apni ankhe kholi or jese hi usne samne diya or kaya ko is halat me dekh uska para high hone laga.

Uska tez or uska bal wapas usme ane laga tha or sath me hi uske sharir se jwala nikalne lagi , jisse pal bhar me uske bandhi bediyan pighal gayi.




Or karan aajad ho gaya , karan aajad ho ek jagah apni ankhe band ker bilkul shant khada raha , lekin ye shanti tufan se pahale ki shanti thi.

Or 5 min baad karan ne apni ankhe kholi to uski nili ankhe lal ho chuki thi.

Karan gusse se :- bas bahut hua timepass , ab apna apna dand pane ko saj ho jao dushto.

Ye bol karan ne ek second fir ankhe band ki or jese hi usne apni ankhe fir kholi , uski ankho se ek laal rang ki roshni nikal sabhi pishachon p padne lagi.

Or vo sabhi pishach roshni k padte hi yu karahane lage , mano uper kisi ne tezab dal diya ho.

Karan ne kuch shan me hi king ko chod baki sab ko rakh bana dala.

Rakshak apni sena k ye hal dekh gusse se chilaya :- ye tune acha ni kiya rakshak , m tujhe aaj ni chodungaaaaaaaa....


Goblin ne apni baat bhi puri ni ki thi , karan apni speed se uchhalte hue waha aaya or apna ghutna uske muh per de mara.

Jisse wo bahut dur jake gira or dard se karahane laga.

Karan fir tezi se uske pas gaya or use dono hatho se utha ek divar pe de mara.

Karan k sir p khun swar tha , vo kuch ni bol raha tha , vo bas goblin King ko mara ja raha tha , use baar bar apni jyoti ki vo halat yaad aarahi thi , jiske kaaran karan ne khud ko sambhalne la bikul prayas na kiya.

Karan ne goblin ko fir se uthaya or uske chahre pe mukke mar mar uske sare dant tod diye.

Karan ne king pe kisi bhi medical power ka use na kiya tha kyunki wo goblin ko tadfa tadfa k.marna chahta tha.

Karan ne uske pet me ek jabardast ghutna mara , jisse uski pasliya tut gayi or uske muh se khun ki ultiya hone lagi or wo gir pada.

Karan ne goblin ka ek hath pakadte hue kaha :- kamine isi hath se tune meri jyoti ko chune ka prayas kiya tha na.

Ye bol karan ne badi berahami se vo hath hi ukhad ker fek diya or fir usne uska ek per bhi uska ukhad feka .


Lekin tabhi king marna saran me bhi hasne laga.

Kaya :- nirlaj , mot ki shaiya p leta h or karmo ka dand pa raha h fir bhi hasta h.

King :- chalo man liya meri ye halat mere kamro ka dand h , per m ye soch k.heran ho raha hu ki is rakshak ne esa kya karm ker dale , jo iske sabse priya jan yani yani us shani or shiv ne iske sath itna bada chal ker rahe h

Karan gusse se :- kya bakwas ker raha h tu , mere mahadev or shani dev ne mere sath kya chal kiya.

Goblin haste hue :- rakshak tu sahi m bahut bhola h , tu in devo k chal ko jo na samjh paya , tere se ek bahut hi bada sach chupaya gaya h , janta h kiske bare me.

Teri ma yani asha devi k bare me.

Karan goblin ki gardan pakadte hue :- apni gandi juban se meri ma ka nam bhi mat le dust , m ab tere kisi chal me ni aane wala.

Goblin :- mere gala pakdne se sachai ni badlegi rakshak , sach to yahi h ki tere un devo ne chal kiya h tere sath , tere se ye sach chupa ker ki .

Teri maa....

Fir goblin ne jo bataya use sun karan or kaya ki herani ki sima na rahi , ye baat to confirm thi ki king jhut ni bol raha tha, kyunki ek marta hua koi bhi danav ya chudel ho wo jabhi jhut ni bolte , ye unke swabhav k virudh h.

Jese marte hue bhi rawan k mukh se shri ram nikla tha or usne lakshman ji ko niti ka gyan diya tha.

Lekin jese hi karan ne ye suna wo kuch der k liye murti ban gaya, uski ankho se ansu nikalne lage or wo chilaya.

Karan :- maaaaaaaaaaa

Karan ki ankho se nikal rahe ansu kis bhav k the , ye abhi kahana mushkil tha.

Kuch der baad karan ne khud ko sambhala or usne goblin ko dono hatho se hava me uthate hue pucha

Karan gusse se :- ager tune jo bola wo sach h to bata kaha h vo

Goblin bolne ki kosis ker hi raha tha ki tabhi achank se kahi se ek udta hua khanjar aaya or sidha goblin k dil me ja ghusa jiske sath hi vo parlok sidhar gaya.

Karan :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.

Vo goblin ko pagalo ki tarah uthane ki kosis kerne laga , jese ager use apna jwab na mila to pata na kya ho jayega.

Tabhi karan ki najar divar per bane ek nishan pe padi , jo king ne marte hue apni khun bhari ungliyon se bana diya tha.

Karan ne jese hi vo nishan dekha to use wo nishan jana pahachana to laga per use yaad ni aaraha tha ki ye nishan usne kaha dekha tha.

Karan dhire dhire shant hone laga tha tabhi uski najar kaya pe khadi jo karan k is roop se sahmi ek or khadi thi .

Karan ne jab ye dekha to pahale usne khud ko saf kiya kr apni bahe fela di , jise dekh kaya bhag ker aayi or karan se lipat gayi.

Karan pyaar se kaya k balo ko sahalate hue use shant karane laga.

Kaya rote hue ;- sakha diya.

Karan or diya turant diya k pas gaye jo dard se tadfte hue apni antim sanse gin rahi thi

Diya hath jodte hue :- karan ji , mujhse jitna ho sakta tha mane kiya apne prayashchitt k liye , fir bhi yadi mujhse koi truti rah gayi ho to bi ek marte hue ki antim icha samjh mujhe maf ker dijiyega.

Kaya rote hue :- ni diya tum mujhe chod k ni ja sakti , tumne mujhse vada kiya tha ki tum humesha mere sath rahogi.

Diya :- kaya meri bahan , mujhe maf ker de , jo m apna vada pura na ker saki , mujhe jana hi hoga , apne karmo ka dand to mujhe bhogna hi hoga.

Karan :- kaya sahi bol rahi h diya , tumhe kuch ni hoga , prayashit vo agni h jo samast papo ka nash ker deti h or jab koi pap hi ni to pap ka dand kesa.

Karan ne apna ek hath hava me ghumaya ,or usike sath hi diya per jal barasne laga.

Ye jal koi mamuli jal ni tha , ye wahi amritunjay jal tha , jisse kaya insan bani.

Shuru shuru me to diya ko taklif hui per fir diya k sare ghav bharne lage or vo bhi insan ban gayi.

Karan :- diya tumne apni nafrat ko tyag jo dharm k liye apne jivan bhi dav per laga uske kaaran tum ab pavitra aatma ban chuki ho.

Isliye m shani ansh karan tumhe is pishach yoni se sadev sadev k liye mukti deta hu , ab tum bhi kaya k sath rah sakoge.

Diya to karan k pero me gir gayi uska dhanywad kerne to karan ne use kaha.

Karan :- are are bahan ye kya ker rahi ho tum

Karan k muh se sakhi sun diya k ankho m ansu aagaye.

Diya emotional hote hue :- bahan ?

Karan :- ha bahan , jabse mane tumhara past k bare m pata chala , mere man ko ek man bhi shanti na padi.

Yakin mano bahan mane bhi kayi sal ese hi jiye , mere pas to fir bhi meri jyoti thi , lekin tumne to akele hi sab dukh dard sahe , jo aajtak sahti bhi aayi ho.

Isliye m jo hua use badal to ni sakta , lekin ek bhai ban tumse ye vada jarur kerta hu ki tumhare kadmo m duniya ki sabhi khushi rakh dunga bahan .

Bolo banogi meri bahan , meri pyari diyu.

Diya rote hue :- ji bhai.

Or ye kah vo karan k gale lag gayi or sisak sisak k rone lagi , lekin ye ansu khushi k the , jo khushi use karan k roop me ek bhai paker mil rahi thi.

Tabhi diya ki najar karan k right hand pe gayi jiski kalayi se khun nikal raha tha.

Diya ghabrate hue :- ye kya bhai aapke to khun nikal raha h.

Ye bol diya ne apna palu fad karan ki kalyi pe band diya.

Kaya mahol halka kerte hue :- are wah to bahan ne bhai ko rakhi bhi bandh di , to bhai sahab aapka bhi gift dena banta h

Diya :- mujhe bhai mil gaye yahi sabse bada gift h mere liye , tu bakwas mat ker.

Kaya :- acha ji bhai mil gaye to saheli ko bhul gayi , that's not fare.

Diya kaya k gale lagte hue :- kitna natak kerti h tu kamini , tu to jan h meri tujhe kese bhul sakti hu m.

Karan majak kerte hue:- are diyu kaya se thoda tamiz se baat kero , tumhari hone wali bhabhi h vo.

Diya karan ka sath dete :- acha ji to mere liye bhai k sath madam ne jiju bhi dhund liye .

Kaya sharmate hue diya ko marti hui boli :- hat pagli wo majak ker rahe h bas

Kaya ko sharmate dekh karan or diya hasne lage or sath kaya bhi or unhone pishach lok ko ek swatantra lok ghoshit ker nikal pade talatal ki or.

Karan to kafi adhir tha , or ho bhi kyu na , vo jald se jald apni pran priye bahan jyoti se milne ko lalahit tha.

Lekin sath me hi uska man ashant tha or uske man me abhi tak goblin ki bate ghum rahi thi.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Aaiye chaliye dekhte h patal k kya haal h.

Ab aap bolenge ki hona kya h bhai , vahi vp apne chamcho pe gussa raha hoga.

Haha ,bilkul sahi, bichara vp ek baar fir har k dard se bhokhlaya hua tha , lekin is baar uska krodh kuch jyada hi tha or sath me uske chahre pe chintaon ki rekha kuch jyada hi thi.

Vp gusse se:- har bar har bar , vo mamuli insaan or hum yu hi hath per hath dhare rah jate h, kab tak chalega ye.

(Ek bada sa aag ka gola gusse se ek taraf fek , jor se chillate hue ) kab tak

Ye bol wo hafne laga or kuch der shant raha or tabhi shukrachary waha aapahunche.

Jinhe dekh vp ko chod baki sabhi asur apne guru ko pranam kerte h, vp ne ghamand m unka koi satkar na kiya

Shukrachary :- tumhare prashn ka utter wahi h vp jo varsho se atal satya raha h

Tum karan se har baar isliye prajit hote ho , kyunki wo dharm k paksh me h or tum adharm k , to tum apni vijay ki apeksha ker bhi kese sakte ho.

Shukrachary ki bato se vp ka para high hone laga tha, ek to vese hi vo hara hua tha or uper se us agyani ko koi gyan de ye use kese bardasht hota

Vp gusse se chilaya :- shukrachary

Shukrachary :- chilane se sachai ni badal jayegi asurraj.

Vyakti jese marg per chalta usko sathi bhi vese hi milte h , jiska udaharan aaj tumhare samaksh h , karan ne jis ko apnaya, usse sache hriday or dhrm purvak rishta apnaya.

Uske kaaran aaj uska har sambandh uski shakti ban chuka h .

Or ek taraf tumhare apne hi khas admi yani us bone pishach ne tumhare sath hi daga kiya , varsho purane us bhed ko karan k samne ujagar ker.

Jiske kaaran Ab tumhara varsho purani yojna bhi ab vifal hone ki kagar per h .

Vp :-. Esa kadapi na hoga shukrachary , meri yojna ko m bilkul nasht ni hone dunga , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye karan kabhi ustak ni pahunch payega.

Or jo uski sahayta karega , uska bhi vahi hashr hoga jo us gaddar ka hua ,(goblin king) ka hua.

Ji ha dosto king ko khanjar marne wala or koi ni vp hi tha , usne esa isliye kiya kyunki vo karan ko kisi k bare m batane wala tha , or wo ni chahta tha ki esa ho ,esa kyu vo to aage hi pata chalega.

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Karan apni saheli kaya or nayi bahan diya k sath usi gufa k dwar se wapas rasatal aaphunche, jaha se unhonne shuruat ki thi.

Karan diya ka hath thamte hue :- chale diyu.

Diya ek baar mud k akhiri baar apni us purani duniya ko akhiri baar dekhti h , bhale hi wo duniya pishacho ki thi , lekin usko waha rahate kafi time ho gaya tha , isliye kuch lagav to tha wahase, per wo lagav se bhi use ab koi khas moh ni raha tha , kyunki uski saheli jiske kaaran wo waha pahunchi thi , ab vo bhi uske sath hi ja rahi thi or ab to uske sath uska apna ek bhai bhi tha , jiske sath vo apne naye jivan ki nayi shuruaat kerne ja rahi thi.

Diya :- ji bhai chaliye.

Ye bol wo karan k hath ko tham leti h , tab karan apna dusra hath kaya ki or bhada muskurata h , jese puch raha ho chale.

Kaya bhi uski muskurahat ka jwab apni pyari muskrahat k sath dete hue uska hath tham leti h or chal padte h mahal ki or.

Kaya :- sakha aapne humare ane ki suchna to dedi na waha.

Karan :- ni sakhi , kyunki m apni gudiya ko surprise dene wala hu.

Ye bol karan apni ankhe band kerta h or kaya or diya k sath teleport pahunch gaya , mahal k main darwaje se dur.

Karan :- kaya , diyu tum jaker aman or jhumki se milo , m kuch der bad tumse milta hu..

Diya :- bhai aap kaha ja rahe ho.

Kaya karan ko chedte hue :- or kaha jayenge diya , m pakka kah sakti hu ki ye tumhari bhabhi yani jyoti ji k pas hi ja rahe honge or koi inhe disturb na kare , isliye hume bakiyon k pas bhej rahe h.

(Haste hue) kyu sakha sahi kaha na mane.

Karan ka muh to vese ho gaya jese uski chori pakdi gayi ho.

Karan hadbadahat me sharmate hue :- m tum sabko thodi der m mahal m hi milunga , sambhal ker jana tum dono.

Ye bol karan waha se gayab ho gaya or karan ki is harkat per dono saheliyan khilkhila ker haste hue chal padi mahal ki or.

Wahi dusri or

Karan waha se sidhe pahunch gaya apni jan , yani apni pran priya bahan jyoti k pas.

Jyoti is waqt so rahi thi , kyunki uski halat bad se badtar hote ja rahi thi , uska chand sa sundar chahra , jis per kabhi surya saman tez hua kerta tha, wo ab kantihin ho gaya tha or kala bhi pad chuka tha , or wo had se jyada kamzor bhi ho gayi thi.

Karan ki jese hi najar usper gayi to kafi der to wo apni jyoti ko prem se niharta raha , kyunki apni jis gudiya se wo bachpan se leker jawani tak ek pal bhi dur na hua tha.

Aaj apni usi bahan ko wo 3 din k baad dekh raha tha , jo 3 din uske liye 3 yug k saman the , jiske kaaran uski ankhen taras rahi thi , apni gudiya ko dekhne k liye , aj wo apni usi tadaf ko kafi der tak dur kerta raha , jyoti ko niharte hue apni ankho ko tript ker.

Fir karan ka dhyan jese hi jyoti ki halat pe gayi to uski ankho se nir bahane lage , jo ashaniya pida k the.

Akhir ho bhi kyu na , karan or jyoti ne bhale hi ab tak kesi bhi jindagi ji ho , lekin karan ne apni jyoti ko ek pita or ek bade bhai saman bade hi najo se pala tha, jyoti ko aayi jara si jara si kharoch bhi karan ko bardasht na hoti or jiske kaaran karan pura ghar sir p utha leta or is jara si baat k chalte jyoti ko kuch kam ni kerne deta.

To us bhai ko apni bahan ko is halat me dekh pida ni to or kya hogi.

Karan halke se jyoti k balo m hath firate hue :- chinta mat ker gudiya tera bhai ab aagaya h tu jald pahale jesi swasth ho jayegi.

Ye bol karan jyoti k side m hi bed per bethte hue jyoti k mathe ko pyar se chumta h.

Ki tabhi jyoti bina ankh khole hi karan ko khinch ker leta deti h or uske gale lag ker jyoti boli.

Jyoti dhimj aawaz me :- bhai aagaye aap.

Karan ko herani to bahut hui , ki usne to socha tha ki wo jyoti ko surprise dega , lekin yaha to jyoti ne hi use surprise ker diya ese reaction se.

Lekin fir use samjh aaya ki esa sochna hi uski nadani thi ,kyunki karan or jyoti ka prem sharirik ni balki atma se h , dono bhale hi kahane ko do jism ho , per dono ek hi jaan h.

Isliye ,Dono ko ek dusre ko mahasus kerne k liye ek dusre k pas hone ki jarurat ni.

Karan khud ki nadani pe haste hue jyoti se bola.

Karan :- ha meri jaan , meri gudiya m aagaya , aakhir m kab tak apni gudiya se dur rahane ki taklif sah pata.

Jyoti bacho ki tarah :- to kya jarurat thi aap sahane ki , mane kaha to tha m bhi chalti hu.

Karan udasi se :- mera bacha , aapki tabiyat kharab h na , to m kese aapko le jata.

Jyoti karan ki udasi ko ni dekh pati or use dur kerne ki koshis k liye , bacho jesi harkat kerti h.

Jyoti khadi hote hue :- aapko kisne kaha m bimar hu ye dekho m thik tu bhaiya.

Lekin tabhi jyoti ko chakkar aane lage or wo ladkhadane lagi , karan use turant sambhalta h or use or pyar se datte hue bola.

Karan :- thik hu ki bachi , kisne bola tha tujhe khada hone ko , ek to itni bimar h , fir bhi masti se baaz ni aati.

Jyoti apne bhai ki pyaar bhari dat sun kuch ni bolti , bas muskurati hui uske hoto ko chum leti h .

Jisse karan k chahre pe bhi kuch der tension ko bhul muskan aajati h.

Fir karan or jyoti kuch der yu hi ek dusre ki baho me rahate h , lekin na karan kuch bolta h na hi jyoti .

Un dono ka prem hi esa tha ki unko ab apni bhavnao ko ya prem ko vyakt kerne k liye shabdo ki jarurat ni thi , dono k pas ek dusre ka sath hi kafi tha.

Fir karan ko dhyan aata h ki samay kafi kam rah gaya h , ab use jyoti ka upchar ki prakriya shuru ker deni chahiye , kyunki ab unke wapas lotne ka samay bhi ho raha h.

Unhe yaha aaye 1 hafte hone wale h , yani prathvi ka ki ek raat .

Karan jyoti ko apni god me leta h or chal padta h , sabha ki or jaha aman , jhumki , kaya or diya samet , sabhi unhiki pratiksha ker rahe the.

Karan ko dekhte hi jhumki karan ki or dodi or karan ne bhi jyoti ko ek pas me pade aasan per bithaya or fir apni bahe fela di, jisme jhumki sama gayi.

Kuch der un dono ka pyar bhara milan hua , fir karan aman se bhi gale mila.

Aman :- bahut bahut bhadayi ho dost aakhir ek baar jit tumhari hui.

Karan :- jit meri ni dost , jit to humesha ki tarah satya or dharm ki hui or adharm ka vinash hua.

Or age bhi esa hi hoga.

'bilkul uchit kaha tumne karan putra'

Is aawaz k sath waha devi chaya prakat hui , jinhe dekh sabhi unhe pranam kerte h.

Or jab karan unke charan sparsh kerne jata h to mata chaya use utha ker apne hriday se laga leti h.

Chaya mata :- sadev yu hi vijay bante raho putra or dharm k marg pe yu adig raho , yahi tumhAri is mata ki kamna or ashirwad h.

Karan :- mata jesa ki aapko gyaat h ki samay bahut kam h humare pas to hume ab jyoti ko sahi kerne ki prakriya shuru kerni chahiye.

Mata chaya ;:- avashya putra.

Fir karan ko upaay mata chaya batana shuru kerti h.

Mata chaya ;- putra tumhe apne ander nihit us oshadhi ko urja ka roop pradan kerna hoga.

Or fir tumhe jyoti ki kundalini k sato chakra sharir k jis jis bhag me upasthit hote h , un sabhi bhago ko sparsh ker us urja ko jyoti k tan m pravahit kerna hoga.

Karan bilkul vesa hi kerta h , sabse pahale karan ne jyoti k muladhar chakra se shuruat ki, karan ne jyoti ki pith k piche jaha uska sthan hota h , waha apna hath rakha or apne ander mojud us shakti ko jyoti k tan me pravahit kerne laga.

Karan sapta chakra mantra ka jaap kerta h m

Karan :- ॐ लं

Or uski ke sath karan k sharir se ek urja nikal jyoti k ander samane lagi or kuch hi shan bad jyoti ka muladhar chakra jagrit ho gaya

Jiske jagrit hote hi jyoti ka rang vapas se saf hone laga or vo fir se apni sundarta ko prapt ker chuki thi

Karan swadhisthan chakra k bhag , yani jyoti ki nabhi Se char angul niche wali jagah hath rakhte hue .

Karan :- ॐ वं

Fir jagrit hua jyoti ka swadhistan chakra , jiske sath hi uske yudh me aaye ghav jo bhar ni rahe the , wo apne aap bharne lage.

Karan khush hote hue aage bhada.

Maipurak chakra k bhag yani jyoti ki nabhi per hath rakh.

Karan :- ॐ रं

Manipurk chakra jagrit hua , Jiske sath uski kamzori ka nash hua

Fir yu hi karan ne karan k hriday sthan per hath rakh anahat chakra ko jagrit kiya.

Karan :-. ॐ यं

Jisse jyoti pahale ki tarah mentaly strong hui.

Fir aayi vishuddh chakra ki bari ,jiske liye karan ne jyoti k kanth per hath rakha or jaap kiya.

Karan :- ॐ हं

Uske jagrit hote hi goblin ka diya use ghav apne aap bhar gaya , jiske sath uski mithi misri jesi vani , jo us hadse se kayi kho si gayi thi vo lot aayi, usne pure aatmvishwas or prem se sirf itna hi bola .

Jyoti :- bhaiii

Karan apni jyoti ki baat samjh gaya or usne apne tan se wo shakti punj nikal jyoti ko somp diya.

Ab jyoti ne swayam hi us tez ko apne ankho k madhya bhag k samaksh ek hath se layi or fir usne apne aagya chakra ko jagrit kiya.

Jyoti :- ॐ उं

Jiske sath hi jyoti ka wo divya tez , jiske kaaran dharti lok ki ladkiya to chodo , swarg ki apsara bhi usse irsha kerti thi , wo lot aaya.

Usi prakar wo hi tez ko apne shish ki or ker usne apne sahasrar chakra ko bhi jagrit kiya.

Jyoti :- ॐ

Or jeSe hi jyoti k sato chakra jagrit hue , wo apne aap hava me uthne lagi or usike sath uske sharir se ek divya prakash nikal pure mahal me fel gaya , jiske chalte ek baar mahal m mojud sabki ankhe band ho gayi.

Dhire dhire jab prakash hata or karan samet sabne jab ankhe kholi to sabhi ki khushi ka thikana na raha.

Jyoti ab puri tarah se swasth or sath me hi punah shaktishali ho chuki thi , ya yu kaho pahale se bhi kayi guna jyada .

Karan to apni bhavukta ko rok hi na paya or jyoti ko jaker apne sine se kas ker gale laga liya.

Uski ankho se ansu bahane lage.

Jyoti ye dekh jaldi se karan k asu poochti hui boli :- bhaiya ab to m bilkul thik bhi ho gayi , phir bhi aP kyu ro rahe ho.

Karan jyoti k gal sahalate hue :- pagli ye to khushi k ansu h , m bata ni sakta ki m kitna khush hu tujhe pahale jesa dekh.

Aman :- sirf tu hi ni bhai , hum sab bahut khush h jyoti bahan k swasth hone per.

Jhumki :- apne bilkul sahi kaha bhai , apko ni lagta is khushi k moke per aJ jashn hona chaiye.

Aman :- ha bilkul choti , ab maharani ji ka adesh kon tal sakta h .

(Apne seniko se) nagar me dhindhora pitwa do , aaj rat pure nagar ko bhojan raj mahal me hi kerna h.

Aaj mere dost ne ek baar fir is lok ko tabah hone se bachaya h ,aaj maha utsav hoga.

kaya or diya khud sare intezam ki jimedari leti h or aman or jhumki rajya k kuch kamo ko purn kerne m lag jate h.

Sham k vakt

Aaj karan ne apni gudiya ko apne hatho se teyar kiya tha , karan ne ek bahut hi sunder nili dress jyoti ko pahanayi jisme wo bilkul rajkumari si lag rahi thi.

Kuch esi.



Fir karan khud hi jyoti ko aaine k samne bitha ker uske balo ko sawarne laga.

Karan :- gudiya ab kesi h tumhari tabiyat.

Jyoti :- of o bhai kitni baar bolu ,m bilkul thik hu , aap tension mat lo , kahi esa na ho meri tension m aap bimar ho jao.

Karan piche se jyoti ko apni baho me bharte hue jyoti k pet ko sahalate hue :- mujhe kuch ho jaye to chalega , per meri gudiya meri jaan ko kuch ni hona chahiye

Jyoti :- ji ni , meri jaan ko kuch ho ye mujhe bhi ni chalega.

Ye bol jyoti piche ghum gayi or apne hatho ko karan k sine pe rakh boli, uski ankho me ankhe dal boli

Karan jyoti ki ankho m khone se laga or apna chahara jyoti ki or bhadane laga or jyoti bhi vesa hi kerne lagi.

Or agle hi shan dono k hoth kab ek dusre se mil gaye pata hi na chala.

Karan bade hi prem se jyoti k gulab ki pankhudiyo se komal hotho ke ras ka pan kerne laga , jisme jyoti bhi karan ka pura sath de rahi thi.

Kyunki wo bhi kafi pyasi thi apne bhai k prem ki , jo pyas use in 3 dino ki karan ki duri se prapt hui thi.

Dhire dhire jyoti to karan ko bhi mat dene lagi or dhire dhire wo thodi wild hone lagi , wo karan k hoto ko chumne k sath sath dhire dhire kat bhi rahi thi.

Jisse karan ko dard to ho raha tha , lekin us dard me bhi jyoti ka prem tha , jisse use dard me bhi aanand mil raha tha.

Karan ne bhi apna ek hath jyoti k boobs or dusra uski ass pe rakh diya or dhire dhire unhe masalne laga.

Karan k hath jese hi jyoti ne apne sine or back p mahasus kiya to wo or josh k sath karan ka sath dene lagi.

Or sath hi wo apni yoni ko karan k ling se ragadne lagi , kuch der baad jab dono ka sans lena mushkil hua to dono alag hue or jyoti sharmake karan k sine m muh chupane lagi.

Tabhi karan k kano me hasne or sitiyo ki aawaz padi , jiske sath hi dono hadbada k alag hue.

Or samne paya to darwaze pe kaya , diya or jhumki khadi has rahi thi.

Karan :- are tum sab kab aayi.

Jhumki haste hue :- jab aap bhabhi k sath romance m lage hue the

Kaya :- are mere sakha ko kyu bol rahi ho , tumhari bhabhi bhi to unko kha hi jane wali thi.

Yr bol fir 3no hasne lagi or karan or jyoti sharmane lagi

Jhumki :- vese manna padega bhabhi , aap lag to aaj bahut sunder rahi ho ,bhaiya to kya , m khud hi contol ni ker pa rahi khud ko.

Hehe

Jyoti :- vese kam to tu bhi ni lag rahi meri pyari nand rani , lagta h aaj bahanoi ji pe bijliya girane ka irada h.

Jyoti k yu bolne se jhumki sharma gayi , jyoti ne sahi kahi thi , jhumki bhi lahange choli m badi pyari lag rahi thi.



Sath me kaya ir diya bhi bahut sunder lag rahi thi , unhone bhi lahenga choli hi pahana tha.

Specially kaya to badi hi sunder lag rahi thi green dress me , jisko nikharne se to khud karan bhi khud ko rok na pa raha tha



Karan k muh se apne aap shayri nikli :-
Kya Likhoon Teri Tareef-E-Soorat Mein Yaar,
Alfaaz Kam Pad Rahe Hain Teri Masoomiyat Dekhkar.

Kaya apni tarif sun kafi sharma gayi or wo khush bhi thi karan k muh se apni tarif sun , isliye wo karan k gale lagne k liye aage badi , lekin fir jyoti ko samne dekh hichkichane lagi .

Jyoti muskurate hue boli :- kya hua sakhi , tumhare sakha ne itni khubsurti se tumhari tarif ki , unke gale lag unhe thanks ni bologi.

Kaya jyoti k is line se bahut khush hui or heran bhi , vo karan k jhat se sine se lag gayi.

Jyoti :- kya hua sakhi yahi soch rahi hona ki m ye kya bol rahi hu.

Sakhi m janti hu ki bhai sirf mere bhai hi ni tumhare sakha bhi h , or tumhara apne sakha pe itna to hak banta hi h , or tumhara to bahut bada ahasan h mujhpe , pahale tumne bhai ki sahayta ki thi or aaj mere prano ki raksha.

Kaya :- ni ni jyoti ji esa bolke mujhe sharminda mat kijiye , mane jo kiya vo mera dharm bhi tha or apne sakha ki sakhi hone k nate farz bhi.

Jyoti :- tumhari isi saralta or sidhe pan ne mera dil jita h kaya , kya tum bhai k sath meri bhi sakhi banna pasand karogi.

Kaya :- ye to mera sobhagya hoga jyoti ji.

Jyoti :- are yar pahale to mujhe ji kahakar bulana band kero yar , m kya tumhe koi budhi najar aati hu.

Tum mujhe sakhi kahaker bula sakti ho , jese bhai ko sakha bulati ho.

Fir ese hi thodi baato k baad jyoti or kaya bhi saheliya bani , karan ne jyoti ka intro diya se bhi karaya.

Diya ki story sun jyoti ko bhi dukh hua or sath me khushi bhi ek nayi bahan urf nanad ko paker.

Fir sabhi hall me pahunche jaha aman or baki sab mahaman the.

Aman bhi jyoti ki khub tarif kerta h or fir tabhi mata chaya bhi vaha sammilit ho jati h utsav me.

Kuch der baad karan diya ka hath pakad ek or le jata h.

Diya :- bhai hum kaha ja rahe h

Karan :- tumhe kisise milwana h diyu , tum unse mil ker bahut khush hogi.

Karan diya ko le jaker jis shaks se milwata h unhe dekh diya khush or heran dono hui .

Kyunki usse milne mayasur aaye the.

Diya :- prabhu aP.

Mayasur :- ha putri , hum bhi yaha dharm ki vijay k utsav me sammilit hone aaye h or sath me tumhare nav jivan ki bhadhai k sath puraskar bhi dene.

Diya :- puraskar ?

Mayasur :- ha putri , jis veerta k sath tumne un pishachon ko nasht ker us shakti ko uske hakdar yani rakshak tak pahunchaya, hum usse kafi prabhavit h , isliye hum khudko tumhe puraskar dene se na rok paye.

Lo.sambhalo putri apna puraskar.

Ye bol mayasur ne apna hath aage kiya or unke hath me ek dhanush aagaya , jise dekh diya khush ho gayi.

Ye vahi temporary dhanush tha , jise mayasur ne diya ko diya tha , karan tak pahuchne k liye

Diya khush isliye thi ki ye dhanush use kafi pasand aaya tha pahale bhi , per ye temporary tha is vajah se vo dukhi bhi ho gati

Mayasur :- udas na ho putri , ab ye kabhi vilupt na hoga , abse ye tumhara pramukh astra hoga , jo bhavishya m dharm ki raksha me tumhara sahayak sidh hoga.

Ye sun diya k chahre ki muskan lot aayi or wo khushi se uchal ker karan k gale lag gayi.

Karan :- are diyu, ab mere gale hi lagi rahogi ya apne naye ashtra ko bhi dharn karogi.

Karan ki baat sun diya karan se alag hui or us dhanush ko lete hue apne mathe se lagaya or mayasur ko dhanyawad ker iska humesha samaj kalyan k liye upyog ka vachan diya.

Fir dono bhai bahan sabke pas wapas aaker utsav ko enjoy kerne lage.

Or utsav k sampan sabne lantern uda ker ki , jisse rasatal ka akash puri tarah jagmaga gaya.


Fir sab apne apne kaksh me aaram kerne chale gaye or diya bhi kaya k room m shift ho gayi.

Next morning

Aaj mahal me mahol bada hi emotional tha , kyunki aaj karan or jyoti wapas apne ghar lotne wale the.

Jhumki to rote hue karan or jyoti se lipti hui , thi wo un dono ko jane hi ni dena chahti thi.

Karan or jyoti ne use kafi samjhane pe wo shant hui or unse jald hi milne aane ka vachan bhi liya.

Karan diya se :- diyu kya ye tumhara final decision h ki tum yahi rukogi, m to kahata hu ki tum bhi ab humare sath chalo na , yakin mano meri choti maa tumhe bahut pyaar degi , or meri bahane bhi tumse mil bahut khush hogi.

Diya :- bhai mujhe aapki baato per purn vishwas h or mujhe aapke rahkar khud bhi bahut khushi hogi.

Per m iske liye apni saheli ko bbhi akela ni chodna chahti , aakhir mujhe jo ye nayi jindagi mili h , aap or jyoti di mili , iski vaah to meri kaya hi h na.

Or mane humesha uska sath dene ka vada bhi kiya h , to isliye bhai m yahi rukna chahungi bhai , please bura mat manna.

Karan diya ko gale lagate hue :- are isme bura kesa manna diyu, ulta m to khush hu tumhe apni saheli ki kitni parwah h or kitna prem h usse.

Ha ye sahi bhi rahega , tumhare sath se kaya ko asani bhi rahegi , rajya k karyabhar ko sambhalne me.

Jyoti :- kaya diya jhumki or bhai aap bhi chalo na humare sath

Aman tab apni majburi batate hue bola :- bahan vada raha , samay avadhi khatm hote hi m jarur aaunga .

Jhumki bhi apne bhai ko yaha akela ni chod sakti thi , kyuki fir aman ka khayal kon rakhta.

Kaya or diya bhi yaha karyabhar ki majburi bata jald hi aane ka vada kerti h.

Fir karan or jyoti sabse vida lete h gale mil , karan k sath jyoti ki ankho m bhi aasu the , kyunki itne kam samay me hi karan jese aman and family uske bhi kafi karib aachuki thi dil k.

Karan sabse akhir me kaya k gale mila , kaya ne karan ko kafi der ladke gale lagaye rakha.

Karan kaya k chahre ko hath me kete hue :- roti kyu h sakhi m konsa tumse dur ja raha , tum jab bhi mujhe yaad karogi , turant apne samaksh paogi mujhe ye wada h tumhare sakha ka.

Ye bol karan kaya ka math chumta h or sabse vida le karan or jyoti teleport ho pahunch k gaye wahi apni car k pas jaha se vo rasatal k liye nikle the.

Yaha aaker dono ne paya tha ki subah ho chuki h , yani unka itne din ka safar yaha ki ek raat me hi nikal gaya.

Karan or jyoti ne jaldi se wahi kapde pahane jinme wo ghar se nikle the or wo wapas car me beth nikal pade , apne ghar ki or

Yu to wo ek second m ghar pahunch jate , lekin wo ab thak chuke the medical life se , ab vo kuch din normal life hi chahte the.

Isliye wo normal way me ghar pahunche or jese hi wo ghar k gate pe pahunche to dono k kano me ek madhur aawaz padi , jisse dono mantra mugdh ho gaye.


Ye aawaz kisi or ki ni apni sonam ki thi , jo subah jaldi uth ker puja kerte hue bhajan ga rahi thi.

Sonam :-
श्याम तेरी बसि
पुकारे राधा नाम
श्याम तेरी बसि
पुकारे राधा नाम
लोग करे मीरा को
यूँ ही बदनाम

श्याम तेरी बसि
पुकारे राधा नाम
श्याम तेरी बसि
पुकारे राधा नाम
लोग करे मीरा को
यूँ ही बदनाम
लोग करे मीरा को
यूँ ही बदनाम

सांवरे की बंसी को
बजने से काम
सांवरे की बंसी को
बजने से काम
राधा का भी श्याम
वो तो मीरा का भी श्याम
राधा का भी श्याम
वो तो मीरा का भी श्याम

जमुना की लहरे
बंसीबट की छैया
किसका नहीं है कहो
कृष्ण कन्हैया
जमुना की लहरे
बंसीबट की छैया
किसका नहीं है कहो
कृष्ण कन्हैया
श्याम का दीवाना
तो सारे बृज धाम
श्याम का दीवाना
तो सारे बृज धाम
लोग करे मीरा को
यूँ ही बदनाम

Tabhi sonam atak gayi ir aage ka bhajan bhul gayi , tabhi uske kano me ek aawaz padi , jise sun wo chini bhi gayi or khushi se uchal bhi padi.

Karan mandir m aate hue :-

सांवरे की बंसी
को बजने से काम
सांवरे की बंसी
को बजने से काम
राधा का भी श्याम
वो तो मीरा का भी श्याम
राधा का भी श्याम
वो तो मीरा का भी श्याम

कौन जाने बंसुरिया
किसको बुलाए
जिसके मनन भए
वो उसी के गुण गाए
कौन जाने बंसुरिया
किसको बुलाए
जिसके मनन भए
वो उसी के गुण गाए

कौन नहीं
कौन नहीं बसि की
धून का गुलाम
राधा का भी श्याम
वो तो मीरा का भी श्याम
राधा का भी श्याम
वो तो मीरा का भी श्याम

श्याम तेरी बसि
पुकारे राधा नाम
श्याम तेरी बसि कन्हैया
तेरी बंसी पुकारे राधा नाम
लोग करे मीरा को
यूँ ही बदनाम
राधा का भी श्याम
वो तो मीरा का भी श्याम
राधा का भी श्याम
वो तो मीरा का भी श्याम.

Karan ne jese hi bhajan pura kiya sonam bhai bolte hue uchal k karan k sine se lag gayi or karan k chahre ko chum chum ker gila ker diya.

Jyoti :- are sona bhai se ko hi sara pyar dogi , ya kuch didi ko bhi milega.

Sonam ye sun jyoti k jhat se gale lag gayi or dono bahane bhi bade prem se mili.

Unsab ki aawaz sun kabya or shivani bhi waha aaphunchi , or karan or jyoti ko dekh wo bhi khush ho gayi.

Karan or jyoti bhi kavya k per chu uske gale lag gaye , bhale hi dharti k hisab se vo sirf ek raat k liye ghar k bahar the , per rasatal m vo 7 din tak ghar se or apni choti ma se jo dur the.

Kabya dono k sir p pyar se hath ferte hue :- aagaye mere bache , beta tum aaye kab.

Karan :- wo choti ma ghar ka gate khula tha or sona ki madhur aawaz sun khud ko rok na paye.

Shivani :- bhaiyu aap mujhe to bhul gaye.

Karan :- ale ale m apni princes ko kese bhul sakta hu ,.

Acha ye batao camping ki teyari to ho gayi na.

Shivani :- ha bhaiya sab kuch ready , h ab aap batao hume kab nikalna h.

Kabya :- are nigodi , mere bache abhi to ghar aaye thoda aaram kerne de unhe , aaj koi kahi ni jayega , sab ghar pr hi rahenge.

Ab choti maa k order ko bhala hero bhi kese tal pata or fir sabne kal jane ka nishchit kiya.

Karan or jyoti jaker swati se bhi mile , jo abhi apni pregnancy m aaram ker rahi thi.

Wahi dusri ir shivani ne bhi radha or baki sab ko karan or jyoti k lot aane ki khabar dedi .

Jise sun radha khush ho gayi or wo adhe ghante baad nikal padi karan k ghar ki or saath m riya or rohan bhi.

Ab dekhte h keSe radha or riya karan or jyoti ko manati , vo bhi ese samay me jis samay karan khud badi tension or uljhan me h king k batayi hui baat se

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Wahi dusri or

Ek anjaan si jagah per ek bachi roye ja rahi thi , jo lakdiyo ki mayavi rasi se roye ja rahi thi.

Tabhi ek udta hua shaks waha aata h or haste hue bola.

Shaks :- hihi, na na piya ese rote ni , aaj ki raat badi shubh h , isme rona acha ni.

Ji ha dosto wo bachi or koi ni balki piya thi or wo shaks betaal tha, or ye jagah wo ped k ander ka hissa tha , jo betaal ne apni maya se ek kamre m parivartit ker diya tha.

Betaal k irade sahi m bahut bure the ,vo betaal kali sadhna ker raha tha , jiske dwara vo amar hona chahta tha.

Or esa kerne k liye use amavas ki raat ek esi ladki ki bali deni thi , jiski umar 13 sal se ka kam ho wo bhi amavasya ki rat, jo aaj thi.

Usne abhi tak 20 ladkiyo ki bali dedi thi or piya uski 21vi or akhiri bali thi.

Betaal usi teyari m laga hua tha , wo shetan ki murti k aage khun or maas ki ahutiya de raha tha .

Us darinde ne us bachi k samne wo harkat ker dali , jiske kaaran wo dar se behosh ho gayi.

Usne piya ki ankho k samne hi ek bade se bhese ki bali de dali , jisse wo masum dar se behosh ho gayi.

Kuch der ki ahuti k baad betaal haste hue piya k pas bhadne laga.

Betaal :- hihi , chalo ladki uthne ka samay ho gaya h , akhiri baar dekh lo apni nanhi ankho se is duniya ko.

Abhi betaal ye bol hi raha tha ki ek aawaz uske kaano m padi.

Awaaz :- betaal , bahar nikal , ager h himmat to meri chunoti swikaar ker , yu kisi chuhe ki tarah bil m kya ghusa hua h.

Betaal ne jese hi ye aawaz suni , uska para high ho gaya or usne apna megical portal khol jese hi ped se bahar aaya to paya ek nojwaan ladka khada tha , jo use lalkaar raha h.

Ye ladka or koi ni veer hi tha jo betaal ko lalkaar raha tha.

Betaal :- hihi ladke tu to wahi h na jo us tantrik ladki k sath tha, lagta h tu apni saheli ki haar bhul gaya jab hi mujhe lalkaar raha h.

Chala ja yaha se bache , mujhe harana tum logo k bas ki baat ni.



Veer haste hue :- chala jau , kyu betaal , kya dar gaya is bache se , ya tu sirf ladkiyo k samne sher banta h.


Ager veer h to mera samna ker betaal.

Betaal aag k gole banate hue :- to aaja bache.

Veer :- ese ni betaal, mukabla to hoga ,per tere hi khel k sath.

Betaal :- matlab

Veer :- matlab ye betaal ki m tere wala hi khel khelunga , lekin is bar fark bas itna hoga ki swal m puchunga or jwab tu dega.

Bol manjur h.


Betaal apne gyan k ghamand me :- hihi manjur h ladke puch kya puchna chahta h.

Veer :- pahala swaal .

Is dhara ko prathvi kyu kaha jata h.

Betaal haste hue :- itna saral sawal ,sun ladke.

Prachin kal me ek bada hi nirdayi raja hua , jiska naam tha ven , usne apni praja pe bahut atyachar kiye or puri prathvi per yagyadi sare dharm karm band kerwa diye .

Jiske kaaran sari dharti tabah hobe lagi , sari upjau bhumi nasht hone lagi or prathvi se ann nikalna bhi band ho gaya.

Jab kuch mahan rishiyon ne mil ker apne tapobal ki madad se us dusht ka ant to ker diya , lekin bina raja k ye prithvi ni chal sakti thi.

Tab ishvar k adeshanusar us raj ven k sharir ka manthan hua , or uske hatho se ek divya purush ne or dusre hath se ek kanya ne janm liya.

Jinka nam rakha gaya prathu or prathi.

Ven putra prathu bahut shaktishali the jab unhe pata chala ki unke rajya me ann ka akal pad gaya h to unhone devi dhara se vinti ki.

Tab unhone ye upaay dhara ne bataya ki yadi wo bel k sthan pe khud hal chalaye tab hi unke pita k kiye gaye paap karmo ka nash hoga.

Tab raja prathu ne vesa ker is dhara ko fir se upjau banaya , tab devo ne unko sammanit kerte hue hi unke naam per dhara ka nam prathvi padha.


Veer :- hmm sahi jwab.

Betaal :- kyu ladke ho gayi na bolti band,puch puch.

Phir veer ne bahut se swal kiye lekin betaal ne sabke asani se sabke jwab de diye.

Betaal ghamnd m pagal haste hue :- kyu ladke ho gayi na bolti band , mil gaye sare swalo k jwab , bol or koi swal puchna chahega ya ni.

Meri maan apna or mera samay waqt nash na ker or chala ja yaha se.

Betaal ghamand m itna pagal ho chuka tha ki wo khud ko brhamgyani samjhne laga tha or na jane kyu veer betaal ka ye ghamand dekh muskura raha tha





Tab veer ne apna aakhiri swal pucha ya yu kaho apne plan k according apna akhiri daw khela.

Veer ne jamin se chote chote muthi bhar pathar uthaye or band muthi uski or kerte hue bola.

Veer :- betaal ye mera aakhiri swal h , ager iska jwab tume dediya to tu vijeta ban jayega.

Bata meri muthi m kitne pathar h ?

Betaal jor jor se haste hue :- haha puch bhi to kya tume ladke , ese bachkane sawal ki umid na thi tumse .

Lekin chal teri ye icha bhi puri ker deta hu.

Betaal ne veer ki muthi ko ek baar dhyan se dekha fir bola .


Vetal :- 15 , 15 pathar h teri muthi m.

Veer :- afsosh vetal tera ye jwab is baar galat h.

Meri muthi m 15 ni 14 pathar h ye dekh

Ye bol veer ne apni muthi kholi or janbujhker ek pathar kam gina.

Betaal :- hihi , har k dar se jhut kyu bolta h bache , ya har k sadme se ginti bhul gaya , pathar 15 hi h.

Lekin veer apni baat per ada raha , jiske kaaran betaal chidte khud hi ginti ker veer ko dikhane laga.


Betaal :- ruk ladke abhi tera jhut samne lata hu.

(Vetal ne apni ungli se veer ki muthi m sthit pathar ki or kia or jiske sath hi wo pathar gava me uda or ese hi betaal ne ginti chalu ki ) 1 , 2 , 3 , 4 , 5 , 6 , 7 , 8 , 9 , 10 , 11 , 12, 13 , 14 , 15.

Vetal haste hue :- hihi dekha ladk..
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Abhi vetal ne apni baat puri bhi ni ki thi ki vo apne aap apne ped se 30 fit dur ja gira.

Veer haste hue ;:- betaal gyani hona buri baat ni , lekin gyan k ghamand m jo apni hesiyat or kamzori bhul jaye usse bada murkh koi ni hota.

Ji ha dosto yahi to veer ki chal thi , ek betaal ki adhe se jyada shakti uske ped jis per wo latkta h uspe hi hoti h , jiske kaaran wo apne ped se jyada dur kabhi ni jate.

Or betaal ki ek kamzori bhi hoti h , jo ki ye ki wo kabhi bhi ginti ni ker sakta or yadi wo esa kerta h , to jaha tak wo ginti kare usse dugni duri tak apne ap feka jata h , jo baat vetal bhul chuka tha apne ahankar me


Veer ne apni shaktiyo ko activate ker apne hatho se roshni nikalte hue kaha.

Veer :- marne ko teyar ho ja vetal.

Betaal jese hi ped ki or bhagne ki kosis kerta h to veer use apni megical rope m fasa leta h.

Betaal unme jakda jane laga or tadapne laga .

Betaal :- murkhta mat ker ladke m janta hu tera maksad us bachi ko bachane ka h , lekin ager m mara to mere sath vo ladki bhi maregi , kyunki wo meri ked me h vo bhi us mayavi kaksh m jo meri mrityu k sath nasht ho jayega.

Veer muskurate hue :- janta hu betaal or uska bhi intezaam ho chuka h pahale hi.

(Veer tez aawaz me ) naina aajao yahi sahi moka h.

Veer k aawaz dete hi naina bahar aagayi or boli.

Naina :- veer tum ise sambhalo m piya ko abhi bahar leker aati hu.


Ye bol naina ped k ander ghus gayi usi portal se jisse betaal bahar aaya tha.

Betaal chilaya :- chal , chal kiya h tune mere sath .

Veer :- dhokebaaz k sath dhoka kerna galat ni h betaal .


Betaal :- hihi,wo ladki andr to chali gayi ladke per wapas jinda ni lotegi.

Veer :- vo to wakt hi batayega dusht , kon marega or kon bachega.

Wahi dusri or

Naina jese hi ander ghusi or usne ander ka najara dekha to wo betaal k sare mansube samjh gayi.

Or tabhi uski najar piya pe padhi jo ek diwaar pr lakdiyon ki bani rasi se band padi thi.

Piya ko is halat me dekh naina ka to hriday kamp gaya , us masum k ankho k ansu sukh uske chahre p nishan bana chuke the or unke najuk sharir per chot ki vajah se khun nikal raha tha , jo us rasi ki vajay se aayi.


Naina turant piya k pas bhagi or piya ki rasiyo ko todne ki kosis kerne lagi , lekin wo mayavi rasi itni asani se kaha tutne wali thi.

Tab naina ne kuch soch jaldi se apne bag se gangajal nikala or us rasi per dala , gangajal padte hi , rasiya apne aap tut gayi.


Fir naina jaldi se piya ko hosh me lati h .

Piya hosh me aate hi naina ko dekhti h to didi didi kerte hue naina k sine se lipat sisak sisak k rone lagi.

Naina piya ko apni baho m kaste hue :- ro mat beta , didi aagayi h na , ab aapko wo kuch ni hone degi , aap to apni didi ki brave girl ho na.


Lekin piya chup hone ka nam hi ni le rahi thi , kyunki us najuk dil ki bachi k samne vetal ne esi bhayanak harkat jo ki thi.

Naina bhi piya ki halat ko samjhte hue , use jaldi se god me uthati h or portal ki or bhagti h.

Per ye kya naina jese hi portal k karib pahunchi to achanak se pata ni kaha se bahut si ped ki tahaniya uske aage aagayi.


Or isse pahale wo kuch ker pati ki tahaniyon ne uske dono hath pero ko jakad k alag alag disha me khichna shuru ker diya , jis kaaran piya uske hath se chut gayi or wo chillate hue rone lagi.


Piya :- didi.

Tahaniyon k jor se naina ko bhi bahut dard hone laga or uski chikh nikalne lagi.

Chinkhe baar tak aane lagi jinhe sun betaal hasne laga or veer dar gaya .

Veer chilaya :- naina , kya hua tumhe , tum thik to hona , ruko m aaraha hu.

Veer ki aawaz sun naina chilayi:- ni veer , tum kuch bhi ho jaye betaal ko mat chodna verna anarth ho jayega , m thik hu.

Naina bahut kosis ker rahi thi , lekin wo jitna kosis kerti utna or dard jhelti .

Ek time to esa aagaya ki naina haar manne lagi or khud ko dhila chodne lagi.

Usne apni ankhe band ker li , lekin uske esa kerte hi kuch chahre uske samne ghumne lage.

Pahala chahra jo piya ka tha , uske man me aawaaz aayi

Ye kya ker rahi h tu naina , tu kese har man sakti h , tujhe jina hoga , is bachi ki jindagi ki akhiri umid tu hi h , kya tu chahti h ki teri is buzdili k kaaran ye masoom ki vali chade.

Fir chahre aaye pandit ji or megha k , jiski photo hi usne dekhi thi.

Ager tu har man gayi to kon lega tere baba ki mrityu ka pratishodh kon karayega us ma ko aajad jo varsho se keval tere intezaar me h.

Kya tum apne baba k balidan ko vyarth jane dogi naina.

Fir aaya wahi rasatal ka drishy jisme naina ne pahali baar karan ko dekha tha or bina chahara dekhe hi apna dil unhe de bethi.

Ager tu aaj apne pran ko tyag degi to kya tu apne prem ko kabhi pa payegi , kya tujhe manjoor h apne prem , apne karan ko khona.


Karan ka naam jese hi naina k man ne gunja , tab achanak se naina k gale me sthit locket apne aap chamakne laga or naina ki ankhe nile rang se hari rang ki hone lagi.

Naina chilayi :- ni m haar ni man sakti , mujhe jina h apni maa k liye , apne baba k balidan ko sarthak karne k liye.

(Ek second ankh band ker kholte hue )

Apne karan k liye.

Naina ek baar fir chilayi :- karan...

Or karan ka nam lete hi naina ka sharir chamakne laga or us chamak k sath hi naina k sharir se jwala nikalne lagi or jisse wo lakdi ki bani rasiya jalne lagi.

Rasiya jalte hi naina jaldi se piya k pas gayi or jaldi se use god me le ped k bahar aagayi.

Jaha naina ko sahi salamat dekh jaha veer k chahre p muskan aagayi vahi betaal k hosh ud gaye.

Betaal :- asambhav , ye ni ho sakta , tune meri maya ko nasht ker diya , keSe

Naina :- maya hi ni dusht ab tere bhi ant ka samay aachuka h.

Betaal :- hihi per maregi kese murkh ladki , m koi mamuli pret ni jo tere us trishul se mara jau.

Naina muskurate hue :- janti hu dusht , tu kya sochta h m ni janti ki tujh jese dusht vetalo ka ant kese kiya jata h.

(Ye bol naina ne apna hath uper kiya or uske hath me aag ka gola aagaya, ped k ander walwale hadse k sath hi naina ki fire power apne aap jagrit ho chuki thi , jo uske self defense k liye thi , jo uske roj ki sadhna or dyan k kaaran hua tha.)

naina veer se :- jante ho veer ye vetal kyu apne ped se kyu ni dur jate, kyuki inke pran inke ped me hi baste h.

(Ped ki or dekhte hue ) Kyu na musibat ki jad hi khatam ker di jaye.

Veer :- shubh kam me deri kesi sali sahiba.

Betaal gidgidate hue :- ni ni , esa mat kerna , m hath jodta hu , m vada kerta hu , m kabhi aage se adharm ka rasta ni apnayunga.

Naina :- bahut der ho gayi h betaal , ab jalo nark ki agni me


Ye bol naina ne wo gola ped ki or fek diya or wo gola jese hi ped se takraya ,ped bhabhak bhabhak k jalne laga.

Sath me hi betaal bhi chikte hue jal ker nasht ho gaya.

Uske nasht hote hi naina normal hui jiske sath usme kamzori si aayi , veer ne use sambhala.

Tabhi piya ki maa bhag ker aayi or piya ko god m le pahale khub der royi fir apni bachi ko shant karane lagi.

Lekin piya ka is sab ghatna se uske masum man pe bahut gahara asar pada tha , jiske kaaran wo sahmi si thi , dar to is baat ka tha ki wo nanhi si jan sadme me na chali jaye.

Tabhi naina ne veer ko kuch ishara kiya , tab veer ne kuch bol piya k sir pe hath fera or wo ek second m ghahri nind m chali gayi.

Piya ki ma dar gayi , to naina boli.

Naina :- ghabraiye mat aunty , piya bilkul thik h , bas veer ne use sulaya h or jab kal subah jab wo uthegi to wo bilkul thik ho jayegi or vo kisi bhi sadme me ni jayegi.

Ye sun piya ki ma ko shanti padi tab naina ne piya ki ma ko apne or veer k bare m jitna jaruri tha itna batate hue pucha

Naina :- vese aunty aap yaha ker kya rahi thi or aap is betaal k changul me fasi kese.

Piya ki ma ka nam rekha tha , wo boli.

Rekha :- kya batau beti , hum shivpur ganv ki rahane wali h , vese to hum bahut samridh h lekin kuch samay se humare ghar me pareshaniyo ka tufan sa aagaya h.

Aaye din ghar me koi na koi bimar pad jata h , kabhi kisi ka accident ho jata h , raat ko ajib ajib saye dikhayi dete h or karobaar me bhi bahut nuksan hone laga tha.

Mujhe dar lagne laga ki mein bachi ko kuch na ho jaye , to pata kerne per pata chala ki yaha kile k piche wale shamsan me ek aghori baba rahate h , jo humari madad to ker sakte h , lekin uske liye mujhe usko bhi sath me le jana hoga , jiske liye m baba k pas ja rahi hu or wo raat ko hi milte h

Isliye m apni beti ko leker yaha ayi , per yaha koi baba to mile ni per is betaal ne hume pakad liya , mane driver ki madad se apni bachi ko bhagane ki kosis bhi ki lekin jo hua wo tum janti ho.

Rekha ki baat sun naina samjh gayi ki kisi ne bahut badi chal chali h rekha k ghar k khilaff , lekin wo abhi puja chod ker ja bhi ni sakti thi madad ko unki to usne rekha ko ek temporary ilaj batate hye bataya.

Naina :- aunty jarur aapke ghar per kisi ne kala jadu kiya h , kyunki jo sab aapne bataya h wo usike lakshan h.

Rekha ghabra gayi or naina se madad mangne lagi.


Naina :- aunty aap esa kijiye aap ghar me durga shaptsati ka or chandi stotra ka path karwaiye , isse aapke ghar ki sari nakaratmak urja khatam ho jayegi or kala jadu bhi.

Rekha :- kya sach me sab sahi ho jayega beti

Naina :- aap chinta mat kijiye aunty maa per bharosa rakhiye or jesa mane kaha h vesa kijiye or maa per bharosa rakhe , ma sab thik ker degi

Or 10ve din m bhi vaha aaungi path k samapan pe or aapki puri sahayta karungi.

Naina k vachan or ashvasan se rekha prabhavit hui or usne vesa hi kerne ka nishchay kiya.

Rekha :- beti ek baat bolu , tu na jane kyu ese lagti h ki meri koi apni hi ho tum , kya m tumhe gale laga sakti hu ek baar.

Naina :- aunty aapne mujhe beti kaha to rishta to apapne aap hi ban gaya na or bhala ek maa ko apni beti ko gale lagane k liye kisi ki permission ki jarurat hoti h.

Ye bol naina khud hi rekha k gale lag gayi kaske, or jese hi naina rekha k gale lagi , to use bade hi apnepan ka or shashwat prem ka ahasas hone laga.

Use esa bilkul ni lag raha tha ki vo kisi anjan se gale mili ho , esa hi kuch ahasas rekha ko hua.

Fir naina ne rekha or piya ko apne sath hi hotel le gayi , kyunki raat m gav k liliye nikalna safe ni tha or driver bhi hospital me tha.

Naina or veer ne hotel ja ker reception p pata kiya to pata chala preety yaha achuki h , ye baat sun naina ko shanti padi.

Usne kal preety se baat kerne ja decide kiya or vo rekha or piya ko leker apne kamre me chali gayi.

Kyunki preety itna gussa thu ki usne apna sara saman naina k kamre se nikal veer k kamre m shift ker liya tha.

Naina bechari is baat se dukhi or pareshan kuch der roti rahi or fir usne khud ko shant kiya or aaram kerne lagi kyunki use subah jaldi bhi uthna tha.

Per sawal ye tha ki kon thi ye rekha or piya , aKhir kon tha wo jisne un dono ko waha bheja or kya sambhandh tha un ma beti ka naina se

Janne k liye sath bane rahe

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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