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Zas23

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Update no :- 16
jyoti aram se so hi rahe the ki tabhi jyoti k chahare k hav bhav badal jate h or achanak bahut jor se chilati hui uth jati h

Jyoti :- bhaiiii.
Or fir karan ko apne side m na paker jor jor se rone lagti or bhai bhai chilane lagti .

Karan jo ki bathroom gaya hua tha jyoti ki chikh sun ker kafi ghabra jata h.or jaldi se bhag ker room m wapas aata h . Or jyoti ko is halat m dekh ker or ghabra jata h or puchta h kya
Karan :- kya hua choti ro kyu rahi h .Koi bura sapna dekha.
Jyoti jese hi karan ko dekhti hi usse lipat k or jor jor se rone lagti or rote rote achanak behosh ho jati h.

Karan ki halat or kharab ho jari wo jaldi se pani lake uske chare per chidakta h or use hosh me lata h.

Jyoti hosh me aate hi fir se karan se chipak ke rone lagti .
Karan :- kya hua gudiya kyu ro rahi h chup ho ja tu to meri brave sister h na.acha bata kya hua koi bura sapna dekha.

Jyoti (siskate hue) :- haa bhai mane dekha aapki kisi se fight ho rahi or fir aap pe samne wale ne janleva hamla kiya or aap.

Itna bol ker fir se rone lagi.
Karan lagatar use chup karane ki koshis m laga hua tha.

Karan:- are bas ker gudiya or kitna royegi , wo bas sapna hi to tha. Dekh mujhe kuch ni hua m tere samne hi to hu bilkul sahi salamat hu .
Per jyoti chup hone ka naam hi ni le rahi thi to karan ko or koi raasta n sujha or usne jyoti k chahre ko apne hatho m leker uske hotho pe. Apne hoth rakh deta h or bade hi pyar se use kiss kerne lagta h, pahale to jyoti but bani rahati h fir wo bhi dhire dhire karan ka sath dene lagti h . Per in dono ki kiss m naam matra bhi havas ni thi , bas rha to sirf unka pavitra v nishchal prem.kabhi karan jyoti k uper k hoth ko chumata to kabhi niche wale ko dono ka hi ye pahala kiss tha life ka.
Or jab dono ki sanse ukhadne lagti h. To dono alag ho jate h or jyoti buri tarah sharma k apne bhai se chipak ke us ke sine m khud ko chipane lagti h.

Or thodi der baad normal ho ke jyoti fir bolti h .

Jyoti :- bhai mujhe bahut dar lag raha h kahi wo sapna sach ho gaya to, kahi aapko kuch ho gaya to m bhi ni ji paungi .

Karan :- choti tu kyu dar rahi h wo bas sapna hi to tha bas, or jyoti ko galo p pyar se kiss kerte hue. Or jab tak meri pyari or bahadur gudiya mere sath h duniya ki koi takat mera kuch ni bigad sakti.kyu sahi kaha na mane

Jyoti:- ha bhai aap pe aane wali har musibat ko aap tak pahuche se pahale mujhse bhidna hoga.

Karan:- wah ab ki na meri bahadur bahan wali baat or pagli ese roya mat ker . Roti tu h taklif mujhe hoti h.

Fir isi tarah dono bhai bahan baate kerte hue fir se ek dusre ki baho m so jate h.

Wahi dusri or narad ji pahunch jate h ek bahut hi sundar van (forest) jaha per ek bahut hi tejashvi purush bhagwan shiv ki aradhna ker rahe the shivling k samne . Unko dekh ker hi pata chal raha tha ki vo bahut shant or somya swabhav k h prantu jab krodh aajaye to bahut bahut hi vinashakari ho jate honge.
Or jese hi unki aradhna purna hui . To Naradaji bole.

Narad ji :- bhagwan shiv k param priya bhakt KFD ko narad ka pranam.

Ji ha dosto ye yuwak or koi ni swayam kfd hi h jo tridevo k baad sabse shaktishali h or mv bhi inse yudh kerne me ghabrata h

KFd:- pranam devrishi , kahiye aaj yaha ka marg kese bhul gaye . Koi shanka h kya.

Narad ji :- ha prabhu vo bhi ek ni do do.

Kfd:- boliye narad hi kya shankaye h aapke hriday(dil) me m aapki shankaye dur karne ka purn prayas karunga.

Narad ji :- meri pahali shanka ye h ki jesa ki sab jante h aap mahadev ko atyant priya h or unhone isi kaaran aapko ek vishal lok or ek mahal bhi pradaan kiya h.taki aap aapna kartavya nirvighn purn kerte rahe , prantu fir bhi un sukh suvidhaye tyag ker yaha is van m hi apna adhiktar samay vyatit kyu kerte ho .

Kfd:- hmm aap to jante hi devrishi mene apna adhiktar balyakaal (bachpan) isi sthan isi van m vyatit kiya h , isiliye mujhe yaha sthan bahut hi priya h. Or m is sansaar ko yah bhi sikh yaha rahakar sikhata hu ki ye bhotik sukh keval mithya h maya h.sacha sukh apna karm kerte hue ishwer ki bhakti m rahana hi h. Or vese derishi jo sukh prakriti maa ki god m h vo mahalo ki char diwari m kaha.

Narad ji :- narayan! narayan ! ati uttam , sahi hi kahate h sabhi aapme or mahadev k swabhav me koi antar ni h , aap dono hi moh maya se virakt ho .
Or mera dusra prashn ...

Kfd:- (bich m hi bol pade) aapka dusra prashn karan or jyoti k baare m hi h na devrishi.

Narad ji :- uchit kaha aapne he shiv priya

Kfd:- m aapke yaha aane prayojan ko jaan chuka hu devrishi aap vyarth hi chintit ho rahe h jo bhi aage karan or jyoti k sath hone wala h vo vidhi ka vidhan h or vese bhi abhi hamara unke jivan m aagman ka samay ni aaya h , or aage jo bhi hone wala h. Vo to undono k prem ki pariksha hogi .ab ye dekhne wali baat hogi ki , kese aane wali pariksha me unka prem unka sahayak hoga.


Naradji :- jesa aapko uchit lage

Kfd:- mera ek karya karenge devrishi ?

Narad ji :- kahiye kfd m aapki kese sahayta ker sakta hu

Fir kfd narad ji ko vo karya batate h jise sun narad ji kfd se agaya le us karya ko kerne ko nikal jate h.

Aiye ek najar commissioner or mla per dal lete h.

Commissioner:- bhai tumhe pakka yakin h na ki humara yah plan successful hoga ager jara si humse chuk hui to tum to jante hi ho ki anajam bahut bura hoga humara.

Mla:- ha mere yaar mujhe pura yakin h ki humara ye plan jarur successful hoga or us home minister ko bhi achha sabak milega.

Or fir dono jor jor se hasne lagte h

Ab dekhte h ki jyoti ne jo sapne m dekha tha vo bas sapna hi tha ya bhavishya m aane wale kisi sankat ki chetavni, or kya karya sopa h kfd ne narad ji ko , or kya plan bana rahe h mla or commissioner janne k liye sath bane rahiye

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Update no :- 17

Agle din karan or jyoti jaldi uth jate h, kyumki aaj somvar tha or unhe hamesha ki tarah aaj mandir jana tha.wo jaldi se teyar ho ker mandir pahunch jate h .


Lekin aaj ek khas baat thi ki aaj karan or jyoti k sath radha bhi hoti h jo unhe raste m hi mil jati h. Mandir pahunch ker karan or jyoti hamesha ki tarah bhagwan shiv ki puri shradha bhav se puja kerte or radha bhi unko dekh dekh ker bilkul wesa hi kerti h .

Puja k baad tino bhai bahan mandir ki saaf safayi kerte h . Or wahi pe bethe ek garib ko puri ijjat se khana khilate h jo jyoti apne ghar se hi bana ker lati h or


fir tino bhai bahan wahi mandir m brth jate h or thoda aaram kerte h tabhi radha bolti h.

Radha:- bhaiya ek baat puchu

Karan:- are chutki tumhe kabse mujhse kuch puchne k liye permission lene ki jarurat pad gayi , jo puchna h bejijhak pucho.

Radha:- bhaiya mane jab bhi mane mahadev ki koi photo dekhi h unme hamesha unke sharir per bhasm or rudraksh hoti . To mera question ye tha ki mahadev ye apne sharir per bhasm kyu lagate h or unke sharir per ye rudraksh kyu h.

Karan :- choti mahadev apne sharir per bhasm lagaker is sansaar ko ye sikhate h ki is sansaar ki pratek vastu pratyek prani nashvar jisne is sansaar m janm liya h uski mrityu bhi nishchit h to hame kisi ka bhi ni hona chahiya or hamesha nishkam bhav se apne karma kerte hue ishwer ki bhakti kerni chahiye. Or rahi baat rudraksh ki to wo hame ye darshata h ki is sansaar k pratyek prani ka janm usi bij rupi parmatma se hi hua h .

Radha :- vah bhaiya aapko bahut knowledge h is baare m vese ek baat or bataiye ki mahadev to swayam bhagwan h na to wo kiska dhyan kerte h .

Karan :- bhagwan shiv hamesha bhagwan vishnu ka dhyan kerte h or bhagwan vishnu hamesha bhagwan shiv ka. Kyunki ye dono hi ek dusre ko apna aradhya mante h . Per sach to ye h ki in dono m koi fark ni h ye dono hi ek hi shakti k do bhin bhin roop h .

Radha:- bhaiya ye dono dono alag alag ho ker bhi dono ek kese h please inki story shuru se bataiye na .

Karan:- thik h jyoti to suno:-

Ye us samay ki baat h jab samya ka hi koi astitva ni tha, na tab din thi na raat , na surya tha chandrma . The to keval vo nirakar parmatma tab unke man me srishti ki utpati ki icha hui or un nirakar parmatma ne sharir dharan kiya or wo sakar swarup or koi ni bhagwan sadashiv the .

Fir unhi sadashiv ne ek se anek hone ka sankalp liya or unhi ke andar se ek atyant hi sundar or tejasvini naari uttpan hui jo or koi ni mata aadi shakti thi.

Fir bhgwan sadashiv k hriday se bhagwan vishnu uttpan hue . Unhone bhagwan sadashiv k kahane per aakash ka nirman kiya fir vo apni shakti se nirmit shir sagar m apni sheshanag ki shaiya per aaram kerne lage , tabhi unki nabhi se ek bada sa kamal ka ful nikla or usme se brahma ji uttpan hue or jese hi unhone apni aankh khol ke charo or dekha to unke char mukh ho gaye. Tab unhone har jagah apne nirmata ko dhundne lage . Tabhi unki najar bhagwan vishnu per padi .

Tab vo bhagwan vishnu se mile or unse pucha ki aap hi mere or is shrishti ko banane wale ho to bhagwan vishnu ne mana ker diya .

Tab brahma ji ko laga ki wahi h srishti or bhagwan vishnu k nirmata .Or sadashiv ki maya se bhagwan vishnu ko bhi yahi laga ki vo hi h srishti k nirmata or vo sada shiv k bare m bhul gaye . Or fir brahma or vishnu m bahas hone lagi ki kon bada h. Baat yudh tak pahunch gayi ,tabhi un dono ke bich m agni stambh pragat hua or ek akashavani hui

Akashavani :- he brahma dev he narayan aap aap me se jo bhi is stambh ki shuruaat ya ant ko khoj lega vo hi sreshta hoga .

Dono bhi is baat ko man gaye vishnu ji niche ki taraf jane lage or brahmA ji uper ki taraf per dono ki us stambh ki shuruaat ya ant ni mil raha tha .

Aakhir bhagwan vishnu ko to samjh m aagaya k ye stambh gyan rupi pramatma ka pratik h iska koi aadi ya ant ni h or brahma ji ko bhi bahut uper jane pe bhi kuch ni mila .
Isliye dono hi vapas sthan pe pahunche bhagwan vishnu to sach bol diye per brahma ji ne jhut bola ki mujhe is stambh ka
ant mil gaya h .Or usike sath hi usi stambh me se bhagwan shiv pragat hue or bole

Shiv :- he narayan aapme vinamrata h or aapne satya ko swikaar kiya isliye Aap har jagah puje jayenge or fir brahmdev se bole aap ek dev ho ker bhi apne mithya ahankar m asaty kaha isliye aap srishti k rachayita ho ker bhi aapki kahi puja na hogi .

Or fir shiv ji bole he narayan he brahma hum tino ek hi shakti k teem alag alag roop h isliye hum me na koi chota h na koi bada or jo hum tino m antar kerega usse bada murkh or papi koi na hoga

Karan :- to is tarah aage hamri shrishti ki rachna hui or ye tino alag alag ho ker bhi ek h.

Radha :- wow bhai aapko itni knowledge kese h .

Jyoti :- radha bhai or mujhe dono ko hi shuru se indian mythology m bahut interest h isliye hum insab k bare m hamesha research kerte rahate h .

Or isi tarah 3no thodi der baate ki or college k liye nikal gaye.

Wahi swarg me devraj indra apne singhasan pe bethe hue mv k baare m soch rahe the ki vaha devtao k shilpi dev vishwakarma prakat hue or unhone indra ko pranam kiya

Devaraj :- aaiye dev bataiye kese aana hua .

Vishwakarma:- devaraj m bas aapko bas itna hi batane aaya hu ki jin astro k nirmaan ka aapne mujhe aadesh diya tha unke nirmaan me abhi kuch samay lagega.

Devaraj (thoda guse me) :- devaraj se bhi mahatvapoorn aapke liye kiska aadesh ho gaya dev vishwakarma jo aap mujhe pratiksha k liye bol rahe h.

Vishwakarma:- (muskurate hue) to aap kya mujhe mahadev k aadesh m vilamb kerne ko kah rahe h

Mahadev ka nam sunte hi indra ghabra jate h or bolte h .

Devaraj:- ni ni dev mane esa to ni kaha . Prantu mahadev ko kisi astra ki kya avashyakata pad gayi wo to swayam sarvashaktiman h.

Vishwakarma:- mahadev ne us astra ka nirman swaym k liye ni balki us rakshak k liye karwaya h.jo nikat samya me is sansar ki raksha karega.

Devraj :- ager esi baat h to m bhi vo astra dekhna chahunga dev.

Fir devraj vishwakarma k sath unke bhawan m jate h or vishwakarma unhe vo astra dikha te h ho kuch is tarah ka tha.
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Devraj :- ye kya dev ye to ek sadharan sa dand h bhala ye kese rakshak k kam aayega aage jaker .

ager aapko iski shakti pe sandeh h to swayam iska parikshan ker lijiye devraj . Ye swar waha gunjate h .

Or jab devraj us aawaj ki taraf dekhte ho to pate h ye aawaj kisi or ki ni swayam kfd ki thi or unke sath me daityaguru bhi the .

Devraj kfd ko pranam kerte h or jese hi shukrachary ko dekhte h vo krodhit ho jate h or bolte h

Devraj :- ye yaha kya ker rahe h kfd inhi ke shishye us mv ki vajah se hum sab dukhi h.

Kfd :- devraj apne shishya mv dwara kiye ja rahe papo se shukrachary bhi kafi rusht h or vo bhi mv ka ant chahte h isliye ye bhi rakshak k us divy astra ko dekhne k liye utsuk the isliye m inhe bhi yaha apne sath le aya or aap ruk kyu gaye kijiye is astra ka parikshan .

Devraj itna sun us dand ko uthane ka prayas kerte h per puri shakti lagane k baad bhi use hila tak ni pate .

Fir kfd shukrachary ko bhi prayas kerne ko kahate h per vo bhi asfal rahate h.

Kfd:- dekha devaraj ye h is dand ki shakti ki isko iske swami k alawa koi hila tak ni sakta or jiska dand hi kisi k niyntran m ni h usko bhala vo dusht kese niyantran m karega.

Or fir isi tarah kfd indra or shukrachary se kuch mahatvapoorn baate kerte h or sabhi apne apne lok ko chale jate h

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Update no :- 18 .
Mandir se nikal ker tino bhai bahan college ko nikal jate h. Wahi p unko rohan bhi mil jata h . Rohan bhi ab karan or jyoti ka bahut acha dost ban chuka tha .

Rohan :- or bhai aagaya aaj late kese ho gaya.

Karan :- ha bhai wo aaj monday tha na to aaj mandir gaye hue the.

Karan or rohan ese hi baate ker rahe the ki tabhi ek ladki ne aker piche se rohan ki aankhe band ker di, jese rohan ko bol rahi ho ki pahachano m kon hu.

Kisi anjaan ladki ko esa kerta dekh sabhi chonk gaye . Rohan ko bhi pahale herani hui phir kuch second baad uske chahre per muskaan aagayi .

Rohan :- mane aapko kitni baar bola h ki mujhe aapko pahachanane k liye in ankho ki jarurat ni h meri pyari didu.

Or itna bol k wo us ladki k hatho ko hatha deta h or jaldi se piche mud ker us ladki k kaske gale lag jata h.

New introduction

Riya:-(age:- 23 years) jyoti ki tarah ye bhi ek simple or bahut hi sunder ladki h or rohan ki badi bahan h. Ye pichle 4 saalo se delhi m study ker rahi thi . Or aaj hi vapas loti h. Ye apne bhai rohan se bahut pyaar kerti h . Ye to rohan ko chodker delhi jana hi ni chahati thi but rohan ne inko apni kasam de ker delhi bheja tha.kyunki wo ni chahata tha ki uski di ka career unki vajah se kharab ho.

Now back to story.

Rohan riya k gale lagte hi khushi k ansu rone laga .

Rohan :- didu aap aagayi m bata ni sakta m aajkitna khush hu .

Riya :- ha betu m bhi khush hu m hi janti hu k ye char saal mane tere bina kese gujare h, or tu ro kyu raha h ab to m aagayi hu na.

Rohan :- ye to khushi k aansu h didu
Aapne bataya kyu ni ki aap aane wali hu .

Riya:- (galo ko pyar se khinchate hue) bata deti to mere pyare betu k chahareye surprise milne ki khushi kese dekh pati.

Rohan :- didu ab to aap mujhe chod k ni jaogi na.

Riya:- ni ab m apne betu ko chod k kahi jaungi or tere liye ek or surprise h betu .

Rohan (excited hote hue) :- kya di

Riya :- yahi ki mane apni post graduation k liye tere hi college m hi admission leliya h betu or ab m tere sath har waqt rah sakungi.


Rohan :- wow di I m so happy .

Bol ker fir se riya k gale lag jata h.

Riya :- are betu apne friends se mujhe ni milwayega

Rohan :- are ha di .
Fir rohan, karan jyoti or radha ko riya se milwata h.
Per fir rohan dekhta h ki karan or jyoti ki ankho m aansu h .

Rohan :- kyu hua jyoti , kya hua bhai tum dono ro kyu rahe ho.

Karan :- bhai ye ansu to tere or riya di k pyaar ko dekh ker aagaye h ankho m hamari.

Jyoti :- ha rohan bhai bhai aaj pata chala ki badi bahan ka pyaar kya hota h , ye dukh is baat ko sochkar aarahe h ki kash hamari bhi ek badi bahan hoti.

Riya bhi unki baate sun ker bahut emotional ho gayi or karan or jyoti ko apne sine se laga k boli.

Riya:- kisne kaha ki tumhari koi badi bahan ni h, m rohan k sath sath tum dono ki bhi badi bahan hu samjhe aajse. Or dobara esa kaha na ki tum dono ki koi badi bahan ni h to bahut pitayi hogi tum dono ki samjhe .

Karan or jyoti ye sun ker bahut khush ho jate h or riya ko tightly hug kerke bolte h .

Dono :- ok di.

Tabhi radha bol padti h

Radha:- are ye kya m sabse choti hu to mujhe to aap sab mujhe to bhul hi gaye , bhul gaye kya m bhi aap sab ki kuch lagti hu .

Karan:-(radha k galo pe kiss kerte hue) are tujhe kese bhul sakte h tu to hum sabki jaan humari pyari gudiya h.

Or fir sabhi milker baari bari se radha k galo p kiss kerke radha ko charo taraf se gale laga lete h.

Fir ese hi sabhi apni apni classes ke liye chale jate h.

Or ese hi din nikal jata h fir college k off hone p sabhi parking m milte h .

Rohan :- friends aaj aap 3no ko raat ko mere ghar pe aana h kyunki meri family ne di k wapas aane ki khushi m ek party rakhi h.

Karan isse pahale kuch bolta usse pahale hi riya bol padi.

Riya:- ha bhai tumko or jyoti ko Aaj aana hi padega m koi bahana ni sunugi. Ye tumhari di ka apne chote bhai se ye request h or radha tu bhi aarahi h samjhi .

Riya k itna kahana tha ki 3no man jate h or sham ko milne ka bol apne apne ghar ki taraf nikal jate h.

Room m pahunch k karan or jyoti fresh hote h or
or khana khaker thodi der let jate h.

Sham ko dono bhai bahan teyar hote h . Or jyoti ne aaj red colour ki ethnic dress pahani thi jisme vo bahut pyari lag rahi thi. kuch is tarah ki lag rahi thi jyoti

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Fir wo dono jese hi ghar k bahar nikalte h to unke samne ek car aake rukti h jisme se radha nikalti h jo unko pic kerne aayi thi .

Fir vo 3no rohan k ghar ki taraf nikal jate h or vaha jese hi pahunchte h to rohan or riya bahut khush hote h or gale mil ker milte.

Fir party m shamil hote h party jyada badi ni thi bas kuch khas log hi aaye the jo thodi der m chale jate h

Introduction :-

Sunil gupta :-age 49 dil k bahut hi ache insaan h or apne biwi or rohan or riya se bahut pyar kerte h. Inki love marrige hui thi.

Anita gupta :- age 49 ek housewife or ek sushil grahni h or dil ki bahut hi saaf h .

Rohan or riya k baare m to aap jante hi h friends

Now back to story .

Anita or sunil dono hi karan ,jyoti or radha k nature se bahut impressed hote h .

Anita:- wese karan beta I really impressed with u tumhare mummy papa ne tumhe bahut ache sanskaar diye h jara batao unke baare m kuch.

Ye sab sunker karan or jyoti ko apni maa ki yaad aajati h or vo khud ko control ni ker pate or dono hi rone lagte h

Anita ye dekh k ghabra jati h or bolti h
Anita :- kya hua bacho tum ro kyu rahe ho.

Karan :- aunty aapki baate sunker hame apni mummy ki yaad aagayi or karan fir apni jindagi ki sari kahani suna dete h .

Anita bhi ye sun ker bhavuk ho jati h per khud ko thoda control kerte hue



Anita:- bas kero beta ese rote ni h aage se esa kabhi mat bolna ki ki tumhari maa ni h , m bhi to tumhari maa jesi hi hu. aaj se mere do ni 4 bache h.

Ye sun ker karan or jyoti dono bahut khush hote h kyunki aaj unhe ek badi bahan or maa dono mil gayi thi.

Fir anita kuch soch ker bolti h

Anita :- wese beta tumhari mummy ka naam kya tha. Or wo kaha ki rahane wali thi.
Anita ne esa isliye pucha tha kyunki use jyoti ka face kuch jana pahachana sa laga tha.
Jyoti :- aunty hamari mummy ka naam asha sharma tha or wo mumbai se thi.

Anita:- thoda excited hote hue beta tumhare pass unki koi pic h kya .
Kya m dekh sakti hu .

Karan anita ko apne mobile pic dikha deta h or jese hi Anita wo pic dekhti h to.


Anita :- (khushi k maare chonkte hue) kya tum ashu k bache ho.

Itna bol ker hi wo un dono ko fir se gale laga leti h or unke pure chaharo p kisses ki jhadi laga deti h

Karan :- kya hua aunty kya aap meri mummy ko jante ho

Anita:- beta tum janne ki baat ker rahe ho tumhari mummy meri bahut hi achi dost kum bahan jesi thi hum dono ek sath ek college m padhte the or ek hihostel m rahate the.but graduation k baad tumhari mummy se koi contact ni ho paya mane bahut koshis ki or aaj itne time baad uski khabar mili bhi to ye khabar mili ki wo ab is duniya m ni rahi .Jyoti beta tumhara chahara bilkul apni mummy jesa h.

Esa bol ker wo bhi rone lagi badi mushkil se anita ko chup karwaya sab ne . Aaj wo khush or udaas dono hi thi dukh is baat ka ki uski sabse achi saheli ab is duniya m ni rahi or khushi apni saheli k bacho se milne ki thi.

Isi tarah sab thodi der pyar se mile .
Anita ne karan or jyoti ko apne hatho se khana khilaya or radha ko bhi or fir karan jyoti or radha 3no apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.

Ghar pahunch k karan or jyoti aaj ki hui sabhi incidents k bare m baat kerte hue jyoti or karan so gaye per unhe kya pata tha kal un dono ko ek or surprise milne wala h.
Note :- sorry for late friends ab dekhte h ki kya surprise milne wala h kal karan or jyoti ko
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Nice update
 

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Mast update
Relatives mil rhe hain
Didu maa wah
Bhai thoda update badecdo chahe to ek din skip krke hi
Darwaze me step mom hi hogi I think
Waiting

Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya

Nice update

Thank you bhai but ye darwaje wali baat kaha se aayi.

Bahot hi shandar aur lajawab update bhai Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai,
Your update was awesome Hats off to you bro keep rocking we love your story and your writing skills,
Keep going
We will wait for next update
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lovely update..... ek doubt : - Radha ki maa bhi to shayad kuch lagti hai Karan n Jyoti ki shayad Mousi....

lets see kal kya surprise miltaa hai

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awesome update
keep posting

Aapki story jb padhna shuru kiya to pta chala ki ye story to padha hua h
Lekin jb aage aapne jo change kiya h wo bhut hi jabardast h
Story ka plot to superb h hi

Aage padhenge tb
Baad me review

Story based on mythology.....

Very nice and fantastic update

naye rishte Jud rahe hai purani yadon ke sath
wah bhai nice narration
badhiya update
keep going

Superb update bhai

review of update 8

jyoti or karan ka ruthna manna, masti majak,phir karan ko apne bimar padne per jyoti ka use care karna yaad ajana hai...bahut pyar bhare lamhe enjoy kar rahe dono

nice update :flowers2:

Nice update

Awesome update bhai,
karan aur jyoti ko riya ke roop me ek badi bahan mil gayi,
aur anita ke roop me ek maa bhi mil gayi,
aaj ka din unke liye bahot lucky saabit hua hai,
College ke dino me anita karan ki maa ki best friend thi,
dekhte hai ab aage kaun sa sock unhe lagne wala hai,
Waiting for next update

Jabardast Update bhaii

Karan or jayoti ko maa baap or behan ka pyar mila

Dekhte h aage kya hone wala h

Amaizing Update Dear...


Keep Posting...

Sbhi ka mil milap ho gya family drama achha tha bhai abb aage ka intzaar rhega

Current update tk padh Liya
Bhut hi lajwaab update h bhai

Awesome update bro

Agla twist lagta hai Radha ki mom hi Karan aur joityi ki mom hai I guess

Keep going

Will wait for next update

Nice update

Nice update

Nice update

Waiting for next

Waiting for next update


☆..Waiting for next update bro..☆
Sorry friends aaj update ni de paya pura update likh liya tha but save kerne se pahale hi phone hang ho gaya or sab delete ho gaya to please sorry friends kal ek bada update dunga promise or ager possible hua to late night tak bhi dena ka try karunga
 

Siraj Patel

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Sorry friends aaj update ni de paya pura update likh liya tha but save kerne se pahale hi phone hang ho gaya or sab delete ho gaya to please sorry friends kal ek bada update dunga promise or ager possible hua to late night tak bhi dena ka try karunga
It's ok bhai
Update Ka Intezar rahega
 
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