Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Harry rocks]

story shuru se ant tak achhi rahi hai. main shuru se padh rha hun lekin review aaj de rha hun.

Part one ka end achha laga ab dekhna hai aage kya hota hai or kaise story aage badhti hai...
Iss story me emotion ki bharmar thi
Ek perfect story.

Jaldi hi 2nd part shuru karo bhai. Kyoki mujhe wait nhi hota... Main jo chrck karta hun sabhi threads ko or update nhi hote to nirasha hoti hai.... Best off luck for next

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[Vickey1211]

Mast update h bhai
Mazaa a gya
Bada hi dhamakedar update tha bro

 

[Harry rocks]

Brilliant update sir.... keep it up... .

Main kaise tareef karun aapki story ka....?????Words....................nahin mil raha Hain......very good, fantastic,awesome...... Story.....

Woooooooow jabardast update hai bhai. Apne lagbhag sare suspension ka khulasa kar diya ek hi update me. Ab dusare part ka intajar karna bahut muskil lag raha hai. Ummid hai dusara part jald hi start hoga.

Simply one word for the final update is
Awesome
Awesome
Awesome
And waiting for next part

Ye kya kar diya yaar. Itani achi story ka last me satyanash kar diya. Chahe aapko bura lage lekin last ke dono updates mujhe ache nahi lage. Yaar agar aap last me dono ki lash na dikhate tabh bhi hume ek baar ko yakeen rehta ki KFD ne kuch bhi karke karan aur jyoti ko bacha liya hoga. Lekin ye end mujhe pasand nahi aya ise padh kar to aisa laga ki itane dini se iss story ko padh kar mene apna time waste kita. Yaar agar aapko bura laga ho to mafi. Chahunga lekin chahe kuch bhi ho mujhe ye end pasand nahi aya. Sayad aapne socha hoga ki aaj kal jaise trend chal raha he ki movies ke 2 part bana do aur pehle part ke last me kuch dukh bhare scene dilha do to log agle part ka besabri se intezar karte he. Lekin bhai har story me same cheez nahi chalti. Aur mujhe ye bhi pata he ki meri is pratikriya se aapko koi farak nahi padega. Akhir me hu kya ek chota sa reader. Lekin sa h kahu to aaj aapne mera dil tor diya is update ko dekar aur to aur ek beta apni ma ki maut ka badla bhi na le saka. Aaap ki batau abhi ye jo avengers ki series wali ek film ayi thi usake pehle part me bhi aise hi dukhi scene dikhaya gya tha. Aur mujhe itna bura laga ki mene 2 nd part dekha bhi nahi. Ab ek dil to keh raha he ki aapki story ke dusare part ka intezar karu lekin wahi ek dil keh raha he ki rehne de yaar ab dusare part me wo maza bahi ayega jo isame tha. Sach me me apni feeling jahir nahi kar pa raha hu ki mujhe kitna bura lag raha he.
Sorry again agar aapko bura laga ho to. Agar mere comments pehle padhe honge to me last me ek line jarur likhta hu lekin aaj wo lokhne ka dil nahi kar raha he.

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[John Cena]

Baht kameni nikli ya radha or riya to

 

[Harry rocks]

Waiting bhai starting part-2

Sab baat ki ek baat, ye story realistic nahi, ye ek magical, supernatural, fantasy story hai.... aur jaha magic ho, waha logic ka sawal hi nahi uthta... so apki ish story ki naina bhi ek hallucination hi hai. bura ya bhala man ne ki koi sawal hi nahi uthte.... aur mein galat nahi hu to is story ki ending yesi hogi, just like fir se karan aur jyoti ki bhi bapchi hogi. Sonam, kavya, garima, priya, radha, riya, shivani aur naina,,ect. sabhi ke sabhi ekdum thik jayenge... fir se sabhi khushi, khushi ek sath rahenge, khayege piyege mouj karnge . aant bhala to sabh bhala.
Baki achhe likh rahe hai.. wonderful storyline ..... hope,,, part 2 bhi jaldi hi aa jaye.

Super mind-blowing update Bhai
Lajawab story

Ending sad hai but aage dekhna
hai kya hota hai bahi jaldi se next part start krna wait nahi ho raha ki kya hua
Karan aur joti ke jane baad

Super fantastic mind-blowing heartbroken Update
1st part ki ending thi to ye condition jyada shocking nhi h
Abhi bhi mujhe karan or jyoti ke maut pr vishwash nhi koi na koi upay hoga hi unhe waps aane ka ya we abhi mare hi na ho smjhne me bhul huyi ho
Aakhirkar karan ki maa kr maut ka raj clear ho gya phle dout tha ki karan ka baap ranvir apni wife se pyar karta h to phir achhnk good man se devil jaisa kyo bn gya
Radhika bhi karn ki cousin h
Ab naina or karan ke relation ka raaj bakki h
Riya or radhika ke karan se dur jane or maya dwara lgaye gye iljam me sath dene or jyoti ka karan ko uswakt na protect kr pane ka bhi karan vp dwara diya gya aushdi tha
Ending achhi thi ek khani ke ek part ke ant karne ke liye
Umid h agle part me karan or jyoti ke new identity se start hogi
Es update me aapki mehnat dikhti , aapki rachni atti utam
So
Waiting for next part
Kab se start hoga

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Mai kuchh bhi nahi kah Santa.
Nihshabd
Laajwaab kar diya aapne.
Ek dhuandhar ant Part 1 ka.
Isse behtar nahi ho sakta tha.
Garda macha diye bhai.
Sare raaz khul gye , Ranveer ka , aghora ka , mla ka , viraj-maya ka , garima ka.
Jyoti ke Sare scene too good.
Besabri bahut h.


Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjaar

Nice update bhaii maza aya giea par kar

Bhaii part 2 kb shuro karo ga yeha to bta doo ku ka intazar ni hota

Jabardasth update bhai... excellent.. mind blowing.. badhiya suspense rakha hai aapne... keep writing and keep rocking

Jabardasttt update bhai


Waiting for next part

Boht kamal ki update thi maza aa geya parh k ab next part ka update kb aaye ga

Nice update.

Nice update

Although in a tragic way, the first part has completed in a mind boggling manner.
When will the 2nd part be posted?

B

Bhai bus 4 din aur uske baad ek dum free

Ending bahut shocking tha.
But achchha bhi laga, par unka antim sanskar karwa ke aur sab ka reaction batate to jyada achchha lagta.
Yaane ek update aur mangta hai 1st part ke liye.
Bahut se swaal rah gaye
1.Sabse bada naina ka karan aur jyoti se kya relation hai?
2.Kya dono ki mrityu se radha ritu ko galti ka ahasas hoga?
3.Saari daulat trust me jaane ke baad kavya ke saath ranvir ab kya karega, apni beti ke saath kaisa vyavhar karega?
4.Sabse bada dono wapas usi rup me karan aur jyoti bankar lautenge yaa naye rup me?
5.Iss sawal ka jawab sabse pahle chahiye ki agla part kab start ho raha hai?

Ya bro part 2 kab start karoge Harry bhai

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[Harry rocks]

Wah Kya baat h..
Hamara Kal aana hua aur Kal hi story ka 1st part end hogaya. Firstly mujhe ni pata tha ki 1st part ka end hone Wala h to main araam s updates index k through padh Raha tha .. Kal beech m story chod b di darr ki wajah s jab jyoti ki shadi wali baat aayi thi . Tab socha ki ab drama hone Wala h to baad m padhunga but phir Mann ni Mana to Kal raat aur aaj sare updates padhe..

Ending of first part was of course very emotional n sad . Jyoti aur Karan ka end is tarah hoga ar aisi conditions m hoga ye to kisi n socha b ni hoga.. totally unthinkable .
Main thing is ki Karan Jyoti ka end unhi cheezo s hua jinhe wo hamesa s karte aaye the . Sabko khushiya batna, dost aur bhai behan bana k sabki madad karna , Jin logo ko itna samman dia , pyar dia aur aaj wahi log Karan jyoti k ant ka Karan ban gae ..

Manna padega ki sheetan ki chaal safal Hui aur kafi achi pr ghantiya chaal chal Kar VP n apne kaal ka Nash kardia . Atleast usko to aisa hi lagta h.


Ye to kahi s b end ni h kyuki ye to ek shuruat h. Ek aisi shuruat Jiski end khatarnak to hogi hi but ab bht kch acha b hoga..

Aane wale part shuru hone s pehle hi kafi demand p h jaise Bahubali 2 ki demand thi ki jaldi aaye .


Najane unka Kya hoga jinko sachai ka pata ni h like Sonam Rohan Shivani kabya garima aur Rohan ki ma Anita .
Shivaye Riya aur Radha k Baki savko jab sachai pata chalegi to pata hi ni Kya halat hogi un sav ki aur tab Kya hoga jab unhe pura case pata chalega..

Jahir h viraaj aur Maya k chakkar m Riya Radha wahi Sach manege Jo unhone dekha h but Baki sab to Karan Jyoti ko itna pyar aur vishwash karte h ki unhe to vishwash hi ni hone ka ...

M sure Rohan Sonam ye sunke to Riya aur Radha dono s hi rishta hi khathm krlenge aur wahi garima jinhe abi hi pata chala ki Karan Jyoti uske banjhe h aur jab unhe pata chalega ki wo dono marr b chuke h to wo to Sach m hi shock m Chalo jaegi ..

Waise ye scene samajh ni aaya ki garima aur ranvir Bhai behan h kyuki garima n bola ki asha Radha ki Mami h means ranvir Radha k mama aur garima k Bhai hue to phir ek city m rah Kar unhe kaise pata ni Chala ki ranvir Kahan h. Agar unhe ranvir ka pata hota to shayad unhe ye b pata hoga ki Karan jytoi Kon h .. phir chahe wo ek baar k liye asha k Bache ho b ya ni but still ranvir k Bache to uske banjhe hi hote .. ye scene mere palle ni pada ki sirf asha ko hi garima manti h aur ranvir ko ni ..


Kher, mujhe to doubt h ki Karan jytoi ki laash b kaise mil gai bcoz unka ant to ho ni sakta aur is pure hadse m ek Banda to bilkul samne hi ni aaya jabki uska kaam to Karan ka sath Dena hi tha aur wo h unka SAHAYAK Jo itna to shaktishali tha hi ki wo Karan Jyoti ko maut k muh s bacha hi sakta tha.

Mana ki khud Shani Maharaj b is pure incident m interference ni karna chahte the kyuki ye test Karan jyoti k prem ki thi jisme dono Jeet to gae but haar b gae waise to harna kehna b galat hoga kyuki at d end Jyoti Karan k sath hi thi aur usko Karan p purn vishwash b tha but is baat ka dukh h ki karan p ek kalank lag gaya h jisko mitane ka sankalp Jyoti n Lia tha but wo b marr chuki h...



Let's see Kya hota h next part m..


Sorry buddy m very late but m very happy with ur work. It's a masterpiece from ur side .. totally impressed and honestly never expected this level ..


Extremely excited n waiting for nxt part..

All d best.

Na na aisa kaise ho sakta h . Maine Jo likha wo tto sirf ending s related tha .. ABI ek aur cmmnt likhne Wala tha but reply aagya..

As I said Ek comment m sab kch ni likh saka pehle.


Is story m jitna contribution Karan Jyoti Kar Raha h utna hi Naina ka b Raha h.. Karan jyoti , dono apni journey p h. Unki journey m na sirf dono n apni shaktiya arjit ki h sath M dono m ek dusre ka sathi ban kafi sari musibato ka samna b Kia h abtk. Bachpan s abtk dono m ek dusre ka sath dia h aur Sahara bane rahe h aur bade hone k baad b waisa hi h. Ab dono ki achai s unse kitne hi log prabhavit hue h aur unke sath b h Bhai behan aur dosto k Roop m but ab end m aake sav badal Chuka h.. maybe ho sakta h Riya Radha ki baat sunke kisi ko yakeen na ho specially Rohan , Sonam aur shivani ko to bilkul ni hoga aur shayad Anita aur garima ko h b na ho but viraaj aur Maya koi mauka ni chodenge aur Riya Radha k sath milkar Puri koshish karenge ki wo Karan ko doshi bana Kar sabki nazaro m gira de .
But ye sab to Karan jytoi k aane k baad hi sahi hoga ya phir agar Radha Riya ko waqt s pehle sab sachai pata chal jae too warna Jo plan Maya viraaj ka tha us hisab s wo riya k sath to galat krne hi wale the but I think jyoti k na hone p unki gandi nazar Radha p b na chali jae kyuki Jo viraaj havas m Maya k sath ye sav Kar Chuka h aur Maya b uski havas k liye kitni hi masoom ladkio ka shikar bana chuki h bhala ye dono radha ko b kyu chodenge.. ha Radha p direct kuch Kia to ho sakta h mushkil m aajae but mujhe ni lagta ki Radha safe h. But ye mushkil b Riya aur Radha n khud hi mol li h to thoda bht bhugatna b padega.

Waise to Karan ki ek behan aur dost dusre Lok m b h but pata ni aman aur Swati ko ye sb k bare mpata chalega b ya ni. Waise to Karan n Kaya ko b ek hope dedi thi but I hope ki Kaya kahi Sach m Karan k pyar m na pad jae warna jyoti to Kaya ko bakshegi ni..


Well Karan jyoti n Jahan parayo ko apnaya tha aur aaj unse dhokha mil gaya h wahi dusri taraf Naina ki journey bhi alag aur mushkilo s bari Hui h..

Naina ko ek behan k Roop m preety aur dost k Roop m veer Mila h Jo ab Naina ki journey m unka sath de rahe h. Naina ek gaon s dusre gaon apne lakshye bole to samraat ki taraf badhti ja rahi h aur rah m Jahan b jarurat padi h wahan ruk Kar problem solve b karti ja rahi h..
Lila k gaon m lila k sath nayaye kara aur lila ki bataye hue raste p chalte hue wo nahar Singh thakur Tak ja pahuchi. Wahan s b unhe Samar Singh k through samraat k thikane ka pata chal gaya h aur ab wahi Jane wale the but Naina ko b najane Kya hua jisse wo coma m chali gai h...

Naina ki halat dekh Kar aur past m kuch hadso ko dekh Kar to ye confirm hogaya h ki Naina ka ek gehra rishta h Karan jyoti s .. iski wajah s pehle jab Naina lila k gaon m jab out of control Hui to Karan jyoti ko Shakti k ansh s wo sath Hui aur jab b Karan jyoti p musibat aayi h tab tab Naina b pareshan hojati h ar end m Jahan Karan jyoti hi Jan khathm hogae to shayd isi Karan Naina b coma m h..

Well ab ek sath teeno log effect hogae to kaise kaam chalega . Isliye b ye ant ni h Karan jyoti ka bcoz agar aisa hua to Naina b kabi apni manjil tk ni pahuch paegi Jiski wajah s Jo b niyati n likha h sab galat sabit hone lagega..

Naina ki MAA megha n b Karan jyoti ka jikr Kia h .. iska mtlb wo b janti h dono k bare m. Although unhone naam ni Lia is rishte ka but lag to aisa Raha h jaise ek MAA ka hi rishta ho. But ye hona b impossible hi h bcoz asha MAA to Marr chuki h but megha samraat ki qaid m jinda h..

Naina b Karan Jyoti ki taraf bht important part h story k aur uska hona b bhtjaruri h .





Abtk story m Karan jyoti aur Naina hi main part rahe h but is part m Pretty n b apni Shakti Jo ki trittya ki shaktiya h uska pradarshan Kia h aur ab to usko uska pyar b mil gaya h veer k Roop m ..
Wahi ek aur shaks h Jo avtk chupa hua h ar wo h shayak ..

Ab ye SAHAYAK mahasaye kon h ye to next part m hi pata chalega..


Lets see Kya hota h next part m...

Awesome update bhai
Very long very emotional
Maza aa gya par
Karan ko aaj Sach pata chal
Gya ki uski maa asha ko kisne maara hai
Aur Jo khel Karan k saare dushmano
Ne mil k khela hai uska bhi aaj pata chal
Gya

Ranvir sirf paiso k liye Karan aur
Jyoti ke peeche tha aur is paiso
K liye hi usne asha se Shaadi bhi ki
Thi ab jab Karan ye sab jaan gya hai
To usko chodega nai wo aur kavya
Aur Karan ko kàb pata chalega ek
Doosre ka Sach

Ranvir viraaj aur Maya ko chodd k
Karan k saare dharti Lok k dushman
To Mar chuckle hai aur aaj Jo main
Bàat pata chali ki Karan ND Jyoti
Radha k Mami k Bache hai lekin
Garima ko jab Sach pata chalega
To Kya hoga aur Rohan ND Sonam
Ka Kya reaction hoga jab unhe Sach
Pata chalega

Kahi Jyoti ne bhi koi plan to nai
Banaya hai ki Karan aur wo khud
Agle 2 mahine Tak safe rahe taaki
Ek to wo Karan ka khayaal rakh sake
Aur uske theek hone aur uski shaktiyon
K wapis lotne Tak k liye sahi samay ka
Intezaar Kare but agar aisa kuch hua hai
To Jyoti Karan ko leke kaha gayi hogi
Kahi rasatal Lok to nai gayi

Naina bhi coma mein chali gayi hai
Wo bhi kab theek hogi

Waiting for the next update

Sandar jabardast majedar update bro
Waise bhi mai aap ki story ka fan hu
Aur mujhe lagta hai 2 part jaldi hi start hoga
I am wating
Mujhe lagta hai karan aur jyoti abhi jinda hai kyo ki karan jyoti ko kuch nhi hone de sakta hai
Dekhte hai aage kya hota aur aap ne kya socha hai

Really a sad ending but overall a fantastic story. Hats off to Harry rocks for this excellent journey of love, suspense, magic & sorrow.
Can't wait for the 2nd part.............
A personal request to you please inform us when will be the 2nd part will begin...

O M G
Itne bare suspense pe aakar part 1 khatm ho gya Ab mujhe lagta hai naina hi kuch kar sakti hai par wo bhi to coma me hai
Aur use sachayi v pata nhi hero heroine ka to ant ho gya
Ab dekhna dilchasp hoga ki kahani aage kaise badhegi kaise naina coma se bahar aayegi
Kaise karan aur jyoti wapas aayenge

Next part kab se suru hoga kuch hints dedo Bhai

Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
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[Innocent]

Congratulations for 2nd part bro...very good nd fantastic star...this is my favorite story on xf...

 

[Harry rocks]

Waiting for next part

Next part yahi shuru hoga yaa nayee kahani shuru hogi?

Bhai 2 part kab se suru hoga

Bhai itna imotional update padte hue aankhon se aansu nikal aaye, honestly bolun to ye update mere se char se panch baar me pada gaya kyunki ye ab tak ka sabse jyada dukhad bhag hai iss kahani ka, bhai mind blowing outstanding hai ye wala, last me aap ne aisa shock diya hai ki I can't explain ki Kaise react Karu i am speechless dono ko khatam kar diya. Bas itna hi bol sakta hu kyunki abhi itna hi samajh aa raha hai.
Please start second part as well soon waiting for next part.

.....

Bhai ispar he starts karkna

Bhai isi thread par sahi rahega mere hisab se.

Next part ishi thread par start kijie...
Waiting......

Bhai jyada time mat lena baaki writer ki tarah
Vo to rest ka bol k gayab hi ho gye

Naya thread naye title ke saath
Pyare rishte
Saath me subtitle
Like agni versha meri pasandida story me se ek.

I must say k jis pr bhi karen uske bAare m ynhn isi thread pr link zaroor daal dein

K

Bro kal thaka huaa tha isliye soch kr ise edit krk bada kr dunga

Super & Jabardast update bro

Karan k baap ka kamina chehra aasha k samne pahle hi aa chuka hoga isliye use apni mout hone wali h y pta chal gya tha or y b ki ranbir achha insan nhi h tbi to usne usse duri bna li varna koye apne pati se dur bna kyo apne bachho ko palegi

Jyoti ka killing scene mast h pr apne bhai k liye marna or b kamaal ka h

Ek baat jo kahni thi sonam ka charachar bahut bada h uska kanha ki bhakti y sb use sabse alg krti h to use b karan k sath love filling se judte to achha hota

Karan or jyoti se jude sbi ko usk dukh ko mahsus kiya

Y dead body ek chal h ya fir janm hoga unka dekhte aage kya hota h ?


Waiting for next

Take your time bro

Jese aapko tik lage

Story going on a good pace..
Read my kinkiest incest story
https://xforum.live/threads/ghar-ho-toh-aisa.2033/page-41

Bhaii jasa ap bhatar samjo

Bhai jaisa aapka man kare

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Waiting

Thanks for your support bhai
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[Harry rocks]

Thank Bhai waiting for the next update

Ok bro waiting for your next update

Waiting for the next update

Sorry for late review.
I have mixed feelings about this review.
Yes,it was good & big but didn't that great to end the first part of the story.

Ranvir's secret finally reavelled but it wasn't a big twist.I thought that it would be more better if u reavelled it after some updates.

Jioty's action agaist Bajaj was fantastic.I hope we will see more action in next part from jioty.Drama between Jioty,Radha & Riay was amazing.
I thought that you did good at the end of the story.Tragedy scene was awesome. Even I liked the way how jioty & karan expressed their love to each other.
But it was very common like hindi movie or serial.I was expecting something new.
I think you shouldn't have to show the deadbody of karan & jioty because here it's all messed up.If a Rakshakh/super hero cann't save him,how will he save the world from villan.
It could be a trick of kfd.Let's see what u have thought about it.

It was your first story that's why some things weren't that great.But at the end u have done well.
Keep it up.....

BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR FANTASTIC AWESOME MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI.


BHAI UPDATE PADH KE MOOD TIH NAHI THA PAR LIKH RAHA HU.
AAP BAHUT HI KHOOBSOORAT TAREEKE SE SAJAYA HAI LAST UPDATE KO.HAR CHEEJ KA DHYAN RAKHA HAI.HAR KISI KI FILLING KI BAKHOOBI DIKHAYA HAI.



TOH SARE GAME PLANNER EKATTHE HO GAYE AGHORA MLA BAJAJ AUR RANVIR.
AUR IN LOGON NE MOHRA BANAYA MAYA AUR USKE BHAI KO.JO KI ISI TAAK ME THE KI KAB UNKO MOUKA MILE KARAN AUR JYOTI SE BADLA LENE KE LIYE.
AUR WOH LOG BHI KAMYAAB HUYE BAHUT HI GAHRI CHAAL CHALI THI SAB NE MIL KE.JISKA PAHLA SHIKAR RADHA AUR RIYA HUYE.OAR RAHUL AUR SONAM UNKE JHANSE ME NAHI AAYE.
BIRTHDAY PARTY KA PLAN KARKE MAYA NE BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR ACTING KE SATH KARAN KO FASAYA JISME USKE BHAI NE BHARPOOR SATH DIYA.
YAHA RANVIR NE ASHA KI MOUT KA RAJ BHI KHOL DIYAJISE JAAN KAR KARAN SHAKTIHEEN HOTE HUYE BHI BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR TAREEKE SE LADA.OAR BUJDIL LOGON NE PEETH PICHE SE WAAR KAR KARAN KO GHAYAL KAR DIYE.
JYOTI BHI PAHUCH GAYI APNE ANDER MOUJOOD BURI SHAKTI KO HARA KAR AAJ TOH JYOTI BHADRAKALI KA AVTAAR BAN KAR TOOT PADI HAI DUSHMANON PAR AUR ANTATAH AGHORA NE APNI GHATIYA CHAAL CHAL KE JYOTI KO HARA HI DIYA.PAR AGHORA APNI MOUT SE BACH NAHI PAYA.
YAHA RADHA KI MA KO BHI KARAN AUR JYOTI KE BAARE ME JAAN KAR BAHUT DUKH HUA OAR AB KAR BHI KYA SAKTI HAIRADHA BAHUT JYADA DAR GAYI HAI APNI MA KA REACTION DEKH KAR KARAN AUR JYOTI KE BARE ME.
USNE AONI MAA SE BHI JHOOT BOL DIYA .
PAR KYA HOGA JAB SABKO SACH PATA CHALEGA KI RIYA AUR RADHA NE MAYA AUR USKE BHAI KE SATH MIL KAR KARAN AUR JYOTI KA YE KIYA HAI.SONAM AUR RAHUL KA KYA HAAL HOGA.
KHAIR AB TOH AGALA PART SHURU HOGA TABHI KUCH PATA CHALEGA.
RANVIR KE TOH TOTE HI UD GAYE KARAN KE SATH JYOTI KE MRIT SHAREER KO DEKH KAR.

OAR YAHA MAIN APNA EK ANUMAAN YA TUKKA MAAN LO SHARE KAR RAHA HU.
KARAN AUR JYOTI MARE NAHI HAIN JO BODY RANVIR KO MILI HAI WILL H MAHAJ EK BHRAM CHHALAWA YA MAYA JAAL JO BHI KAH LO HAI.
MUJHE LAGTA HAI KHAYI ME GIRNE KE BAAD KARAN AUR JYOTI KO SHANI DEV NE KAHI SURAKSHIT KAR DIYA HOGA.TAKI BURAYI AB KHUL KAR SAMANE AA JAYE KYUN KI ABHI TAK RAKSHAK KE WAJAH SE KOI BHI BURI TAKAT KHUL KAR SAMNE NAHI AAYI THI.
KHAIR JO BHI HO YE MERA EK ANUMAAN MATRA HAI


BHAI BAHUT HI BESABRI SE AGLE PART KA INTEJAAR HAI

Second part ka besabri se intjaar
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Bhot hi behtarin ant kiya bhai aapne 1st part ka lagbhak jyadatar logoki sachai samne aagayi he ab aap dusre part me kya twest late he ye dekhna he aapse ek riqwest he bhai riya or radha ko jaldi maaf mat karna bhai or koi bhi maf na kare chahe vo rohan or sonam bhi

not an issue bhai...... waiting for the the update

Waiting for the update

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Waiting for next update bhai

Ok I realized my mistake I am so sorry...

waiting for next update...

Yr tumne to pura confused kr diya i think mujhe to lgta h kuch nhi hua un logo ko sb maya h karan ki ab to dono ne ek dusre ko prapose bhi kr diya gajab ab to story or interesting ho gyi h.
Gajab ka update tha bhai maza aa gy padh kr

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waiting for next update harry bhai

Kar di 650.... update dijiye abhi

Waiting bhai jldi se updatr fo

Dhanya ho madam ji aap , 11 baje tak mil jayega aap sabko update

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Harry rocks Bhai ab apna promise kro Aapne bs 650 page Ka target dia th@ Jo ki Naina ne puraa krdiaaq now give dhamakedar entry for new part update 1 ki we r waiting @naina

Boh me nahi janti .. update dijiye..

Waiting Bhai...

. Dandaàa aagya Harry rocks Bhai smhl kr

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Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 651

 

[Abhaych]

Fully emotional start of second part
har kirdar ke emotions ko bahot bakhubi se darshya hai
ant me dandnayak ki entry zabardast thi jo ki karan hi hai
par ye pari lok mein kaise aa gaya
HARRY BHAI aapne meri jigyasa ko badha diya hai ab aage ka janane ke liye jyada Intezar na hoga bhai