Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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विलंभ के लिए माफ़ी, फिल्हाल व्यस्त था हैरी भाई... रही बात रिव्यू की तो मै बाद मे देने बाला था, किन्तु इस अंश को पढ़ने के बाद खुद को रोक न सका,
अद्भुत, ... अद्भुत अंश था ये... कहानी मे पुराने कीरदारो की चर्चा की गयी...
ज़ोया... मुझे लगा था की कही आप इस किरदार को भी न बदल दो, पर आपने इस पात्र को रख कर हम पाठक के विचारों का मान रखा उसके लिए तहे दिल से धन्यवाद । शायद अब ज़ोया की कहानी मे कुछ बदलाव देखने को मिले, वैसे एक और पात्र थी.. उसका नाम याद नही आरहा परंतु वो शायद ज़ोया की ही बहन थी जो कब्रिशतान के बाहर फूल बेचते हुए दिखाई दी थी, शायद अंधी भी थी....
तो क्या उस किरदार को भी आप पुनः किसी नये रूप मे लाने बाले हो?
यहाँ काया की तुलना ज़ोया से की है आपने, हो सकता है ज़ोया की कहानी को काया की कहानी से जोड़कर हमे कुछ बेहतर पढ़ने को मिले, जो की हमेशा से मिलते आरहे है ।
करण और काया के बीच का एक प्रेम भरा पल, अच्छा लगा पढ़कर ।
इधर ये अक्षरा को उसका मन चाहा वरदान मिल चुका है, अब आगे वो कामिनी और परिवार के साथ क्या करती है ये देखने योग्य होगी ।
बाकी कहानी का ये अंश पहले की तरह ही लज़ाबाब था । आगे के लिए सुभकामनाएँ ।

Bhai kamini koi character ni h Naya , usne kisi ladki ko gali dete hue kamini bola hai

 

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update no :- 213
Location :- baikUnth lok

(Friends pichle update k end m much changes ker raha hu )



Narad ji or narayan Jo naina or Asha k bich hui batchit ko hi dekh hi rahe the or naina k emotional blackmailing k khel ko dekh narad hi bole.

Narad :- narayan narayan , prabhu ye kesi Lilla h aapki , naina jesi apne baba k mahan sanskaro se yukt ladki, itne nimn star tak gir jayegi , esa to kabhi dekhne ki humne asha bhi ni ki thi.

Narayan :- ye Lila ni dervishi , ye sansar ka wo shaswat staya h jise yadi ye sansar m sabhi samjh ker , apne me badlav le aaye to ye Sara sansar har burayi we mukt ho jaye.

Ha devrishi naina k sabhi guno or achai p krodh or pratishod rupi vikaro ne esa grahan laga diya , Jo us tak satya roopi Surya k prakash pahuchne ni de raha.

Narayan :- or niyati ka khel to dekhiye prabhu , in dono hi avguno k jite jagte udaharan humhare samaksh h.

Ek or jaha naina krodh or hat k vashibhoot ho marg se bhatak chuki h , vahi dusri or irsha or pratishod ki bhavna se grasit ho vo kerne ja rahi h jis kaaran sare sansar p khatra mandra raha h

Ha prabhu m shuchika ki baat ker raha hu, jo apne bhutkal ki bhul se sikh lene k bajay apne pratishod k apurti hetu aaps shakti prapti hetu kathor tap ker rahi h , or yadi uane aapse manchaha vardaan praapt keer liya to anarth ho jayega prabhu

Narayan :- devrishi karm kiya to fal to avashya praapt hota hi h , usi prakar tapasya ka fal dene k liye bhagwan bhi badhit hote h naradji .

Lekin aap kaha un chijo k liye kyu pareshan ho rahe ho devrishi , jo hui hi ni , filhal to hume ye dekhna hoga ki karan kese is bhavnao or karm k chakrvyuh ropi pariksha m kamyab hota h.

ye samay aane wali samasyao k bare m vichar kerne ka nindevrishi samay h ki kese is samay karan or jyoti k jivan m aane wale bhuchal se wo kese sambhalega ispe vichar kerne ka



Vo dekhiye devrishi kese niyati ne apna khel aarambh ker diya h.

Back to hero.

Jyoti ruansi or shikati anddaz me :- ye aap kya kah rahe ho bhai , maa humare sath esa kese ker sakti h.

(Yaha last update se thoda change h friends)

Karan ne naina or asha k bich hui baat or asha k fesle k bare m sari baat jyoti ko detail batata h

Karan nam ankho se :- gudiya jo hua usme maa ki koi galti ni , mane hi unhe esa kerne ko kaha.

Jyoti ko ye baat sun ek dhakka sa laga , wo herani se ruansi aawaz me boli.

Jyoti :- bhai aapne , lekin kyu.

Karan apni vivashata jatate hue :- m janta hu gudiya tujhe mere is fesle se tumhe bahut taklif ho rahi h , per m lekin yahi mama ji ki akhri icha thi gudiya or naina bhi yahi chahti h , to mamaji ki aatma or naina ki khushi k liye mujhe esa kerna pada.

Jyoti nam ankho k sath shikayati andaaz :- lekin humari khushi ka kya bhai , kyu humesha hume hi apni khushiyo ka balidaan dena padta h , bachpan se jis maa k pyaar ko hum dono tadfe us pyaar k wapas milne k bavjood use tyagne ka fesla aap akele kese le sakte ho.

Sabki khushi ki chinta rahati h aapko lekin apni is bahan ki hi khushi k baare m. Bilkul na socha aapne.

Kyu bhai kyu , kya aapke lie meri khushi apni khushi koi maine rakhti.

Karan rote hue jyoti k galo ko tham use samjhane ki koshis kerte hue :- kesi baat kerti h tu gudiya , tu to meri praan h , teri. Khushi hi meri khushi h , to bhala m uska khayal kyu ni rakhunga.

Jyoti masumiyat se :- to apne esa fesla kyu liya bhai jisse mujhe or aapko dono ko hi taklif jhelni pade.

Karan :- meri baat ko samjhne ki koshis kr gudiya, ki mamaji k ahasan h humpe to humara bhi farz banta h na gudiya is tyag ka.



Jyoti gusse me :- sab farz sab jimedari ka theka kya humne hi le rakha h kya bhai , kya humare prati kisi ka koi farz ni milta.

Or bachpan se hum tyag hi to kerte aaye h bhai , apni khushiyo ka apne sapno ka or mila bhi apno ka tyag hi to h , pahale humare hi maa humara tyag ker humse dur chali gayi or papa ne to hume kabhi apnaya hi ni bhai , humare pita ne bhi humarre tyag ker diya or choti maa ko bhi esa kerne ko majbur hi kiya, jab sabne mera tyag ker diya to sirf mera bhai hi tha yani ki aap hi the jisne apni is gudiya ko tyagne k bajaye apni gudiya ki har khushi

Or aaj jab aaj itne varsho baad jab hume apni wo khushi wapas mili to mere wahi bhaiya use tyagne ka bol rahe h ni bhai ni mujhse esa ni hoga , please bhai aap maa ko mana ker do na please

Karan nam ankho se sir jhuka k :- mujhe maaf ker de gudiya , tera bhai vivash h.

Jyoti ye sun rote hue gusse me :- i hate you bhai , i hate u.

Ye bol jyoti bhagte hue waha se chali gayi .

Karan jyoti ko pukarte hue :- are gudiya sun to..

Lekin jyoti ne karan ko bilkul ansuna ker diya or waha se roti hui chali gayi or piche chod gayi puri tarah se hatash or vivash rote hue apne bhai ko.

Karan bhi vahi beth k rone laga , usne bhale hi apne dandnayak hone k nate ye kathor fesla le liya tha , lekin sach to ye tha ki karan ki halat bhi jyoti jesi hi thi , usko esa mahasus ho raha tha ki jese usse uska sab kuch chin liya ho.

Lekin vidambna to dekho dandnayak k daitvo k kaaran vo jyada der tak apna dukh bhi jahir na ker saka , kyunki abhi vo jyoti ko manane ka soch hi raha tha ki tabhi usko kisi ka msg aaya

Jise sun wo apni priority apne farz ko di or wo turant waha se gayab ho aapahuncha apni chat pe jaha preto k raja uska inteezaar keer rahe the.

Note :- ye wahi raja tha jiska jikra part 2 m hua tha kal k sath mulakat hui thi.

Karan is samay apne dandnayak roop m waha mojud tha, usne hi pretraj ko pata lagane k liye kaam p lagaya tha.

Pret raj ::- pranaam dand nayak.

Dand nayak :- pranam pret raj , swagat h aapka , ab bekar ka samay vyarth kiye mudde p aate h , pret raaj kya aap pata laga paye wo pret kon the or unhonne vo sab kyu kiya.

Pret raj :- m shama chahta hu hey dand nayak , parantu puri kosis k baad bhi hum pata ni laga paaye ki wo log kon the , apitu jesa vivran aapne un logo ka kiya h or jesi us jagah pahunch hume urja mahasus hui us hisab se hum itna hum itna to purn vishwas se kah sakte h ki wo pret to bilkul ni the.


Tabhi vaha kaya or diya bhi pragat ho bolti h

Kaya :- pret raz bilkul sahi kah rahe h sakha wo pret ni the or diya k vivran or pishach lok m bhi pata lagane k baad bhi kuch na hasil hone k baad bhi hum bhi isi nirnay p pahunche h bhai.

Tabhi veer or preety bhi waha aa pahunche jinko bhi karan ne hi usi kaam p lagaya tha , wo dono mil ker hi ab tritya or brahamrakshaso ko lead ker rahe the.

Veer ;- maf kerna bhai hum bhi kuch pata ni laga paye.

Preety :- ha bhai , na hi wo braham rakshas the or trityao ki nishani bhala chupti thodi naa apse , I really very sorry bhai.

Dand nayak :- koi baat ni bhabhi aap udas mat hoiye m janta hu ki aapne veer or aap sab ne apni puri kosis ki h.

Lekin sawal ye h ki wo log ager pret , pishach , brahm rakshas ya tritya m se koi ni the to the kon.

Karan kuch der un sab se baat kerta h phir sabko apni khoj m lage rahane ko kah vida kerta h , sab chale bhi jate h , siway kaya ka.

Kyunki jo dost apni dost ki pareshani ko na pahachan paye , wo dost hi kesa.

Sabke jane k baad karan shunya ko nihar raha tha to kaya uske bagal m jaker usko puchti h ki .

Kaya :- kya baat h sakha , aap aj itne pareshan kyu najar arahe ho , koi problem h to apni sakhi se share ni karoge.

Karan :- are ni ni sakhi esa kuch ni h m to bas ye soch raha tha ki wo log kon the.

Kaya karan ka hath tham :- jyoti sahi bolti h sakha aapko jhut bolna bilkul ni aata , bhai problem share kerne se problem kam hoti h , mujhko apni cousin ko ni to kya , apni friend apni sakhi k sath share ker hi sakte ho.

Jyoti ka nam sun or kaya k pyaar bhare shabdo se karan ka dhairya tut gaya or wo kaya k gale lag rone laga or sari baat khul k kaya ko bata di

Kaya ko bhi ye sab sun bura laga , lekin is samay baki sab chod karan ko samjhana uchit samjha .

Kayaa ;:- sakha please shant ho jaiye , m manti hu ki aapne jo kiya wo sahi kiya , lekin jyoti bhi apni jagah galat kaha h , aap khud hi sochiye , ki itne varsho baad ek beti ko apni maa mili or achanak se firse usse yu dur hona pade to kesa mahasus hota h ye sirf ek beti hi samjh sakti h , m ye ni kah rahi ki aapne galat kiya lekin aapko decision lene se pahale aapko jyoti se puchna to chahiye tha na , isliye unki narajgi to banti hi h naa, per koi baat ni sakha m jyoti ko bahut ache. Se janti hu unki ye narajgi jyada time tak ni rahane wali , kyunki unka man bhi aapki tarah bilkul saf h .

Isliye aap chinta chodiye or ye sochiye ki humari pyari bahan ko manaya kese jaye or fir family se bhi to is bare m.baat kerni hi hogi na .

Kaya k samjhane se karan k chahre p muskaan aagayi or bina kuch bole wo kaya ko apne sine se laga uske gal chum use shukriya kerta h use is dukh se ubhar ek positines dene k liye.

Fir karan or kaya kuch der yu hi baate kerte rahe or karan apna man halka kerta raha.

Wahi dusri or

Jyoti or karan ki anban p char ankhe najar rakhe hui thi kamre k bahar se , jinme do ankhe to naina ki jo khush ho rahi thi karan ki ye tadaf or vivashata dekh vahi dusri do ankhe thi asha ki jo ansuo se bhari hui thi apne jigar k tukdo ko yu tadapte dekh.

Jab jyoti bhagte hue kamre se gayi to usne aaspas kuch ni dekha bas bhagte hue maa kali.k mandir m pahunchi or ghutne k bal beth rote hue boli


Jyoti mata se ;- kyu ma kyu humesha humare e sath hi esa anyay kyu ma , aakhir kis paap ka dand aap hume de rahi ho , mane or mere bhai ne kabhi sapne m bhi kisi ka ahit kerne ka socha tak , sadev dharm k path p chal har ek dukh ko jhela is aas m ki kabhi to aapko humpe daya aayegi or humari jindagi m.bhi khushiyan lotegi


Lekin hua kya , jab salo baad hume humari khushi humari ma hume wapas mili to wo bhi aapse dekhi na gayi or aapne firse humse door ker diya or to or jis bhai ne humesha mera sath diya , mere sath kadam p khade rahe unko bhi mere khilaaf ker dala .

Duniya aapko maa kahati h naa , aap jagat janni ho na to fir apni is santan k sath ye anyay kyu ma, apni santano m bhedbhav kyu maa.

(Tabhi jyoti k kandhe p kisi ne hath rakha or ek aawaz uske kano m aawaz padi ).

Asha :- maa kabhi apne bacho m bhedbhav ni kerti meri bachi

Jyoti jese hi apni ma ki aawaz sunti h to rote hue apni maa k gale lag rote hue boli


Jyoti ;:- ager esa h to please humare sath wapas ghar chaliye na maa , m ab aapke bina ni rah sakti bhai aapke bina ni rah sakte maa.

Asha nam ankho se :- m bhi konsa apne bacho k bina rah sakti hu beti , tum.domo to mere tukde ho atma k or bina. Atma k bhala koi rah sakta h bhala.

Jyoti :- yadi esa h to aap humare sath kyu ni chal rahi ma.

Tab asha ne bhi wahi sab use samjhaya jo karan ne samjhaya tha , apni vivashata ko prakat kerte hue .

Asha ;- beti tumhare mama k humpe bahut ahasan h tum hi batao jab tum apne bhai se itna prem kerti ho to m to tumhari ma hu na bhala m kese apne bhai ki antim icha ko nakaru meri bachi , m ni chahti ki aage jaker tum p koi lanchan lagaye krtighnta ka meri bachi , isliye m mjbur hu

Asha k kafi der tak samjhane p jyoti ko bhi dil p pathar rakhkar apni swikriti deni padi.

Jyoti :- thik h maa m esa kuch bhi aapko kerne ko force ni karungi jisse mamaji ko taklif pahunche , per aapko vada kerna hoga ki aap humse milne aate rahoge or roj phone p baat bhi karogi

Asha jyoti ko gale laga :- ye bhi koi bolne ki baat h meri bachi , m tum dono se milne jald waha aayungi or fir hum khub masti bhi karenge

Tabhi kuch esa hua jisse asha k muh se hasi nikal gayi or jyoti sharma gayi , kyunki jyoti k pet m bhuk se gud gud hone lagi.

Asha :- ale ale meri gudiya ko bhuk lagi h , aaj to m apni bachi ko apne hatho se khilaungi

Ye bol wo jyoti ko apne sath le jane lagi , tab jyoti boli.

Jyoti :- ma bhai ne bhi subH se kuch ni khaya.

Asha jyoti k bolne k.tarike se samjh gayi ki wo abhi bhi apne bhai se naraj h, lekin apne bhai ki chinta bhi h , jis kaaran vo khul k bol ni pa rahi , lekin usne itna jyada uspe dhyan ni diya , kyunki ye sab to bhai bahan m aam si baat hoti h.

Asha :- us badmash ne meri beti ko.rulaya h na aaj , to uski yahi punishment h ki usko aj kuch ni milega.

Jyoti chintit swar me :-. Maa

Asha :- are bas bas meri maa , itni chinta mat ker teri choti maa ko mane bhej diya h tere bhai ko khilane , ab chal tu bhi chup chap khale fir sone bhi chalna bhaiya ki chamchi kahiki .

(Ye bol wo jyoti k gal khich leti h ) .

Tab wo jyoti ko apne hatho se khilati h or baad m apne pas hi sula leti h

Wahi dusri or

Kavya bhi shivani k sath apne hatho m khane ki plate leker pahunch gayi karan k paas.

Kavya :- shivu dekhna lagta h tere bhaiya ne aaj apni choti maa or apni princess ko bhuka sulane ka irada bana rakha h.

Karan jese hi sunta h ki kavya or shivani bhuke h to wo turant khud k khayalo se bahr ate hue bola

Karam :- choti ma shivani aapne ab tak khana ni khaya per kyu

Kavya :- ese kese kha lu , jab tak mera lala bhukha betha ho ,bhala tab tak mere gale se ek bhi nivala kese uter sakta h

Shivani :- ha bhai isliye hi to mumma ne special plate ready ki h jisme hum dono ki favorite dish h aj hum sath m hi khana khayenge

Karan :- choti maa aap or shivani kha lijiye mujhe bhuk ni h

Kavya :- lala bad manners apni maa se kabhi jhut ni bolte chalo aaj m apne lal ko apne hatho se khana khilaungi.

Lekin karan jab bar bar kavya ka hath jhatak deta h to kavya apni kasam dete hue boli.

Kavya :- dekh lala ager tu ni khana khayega to m bhi kuch ni khane wali.

Shivani :- or m bhi ni khaungi (fir masumiyat se ) bhai please kha lo na mujhe bahut bhuk lagi h.

Shivani ki bachkani bat sun dono ma bete has dete h or fir karan apne hathiyar girane se pahale last koshis kerte hue.

Karan :- per choti ma gudiya.

Kavya :- tu apni gudiya ki chinta chod or apni ker kitna kamzor ho gaya h , ghar chal tujhe khila pila k motu ram na bana diya to m bhi teri choti maa ni .

Shivani haste hue :- motu ram bhaiya , acha nam h mummy keep it up.

Kavya :- chup badmash or beta jyoti ki chinta mat kero use ashu bhabhi ne khana khila diya h

Or fir kavya batati h ki asha ne use sab bata diya jo hua , lekin yaha fark ye tha ki asha ne kavya ko sirf ye bataya tha ki naina ki jid h ki wo thode din yahi ruke fir wo wapas kolkata lot aayege.

Kavya ko bhi asha k is decision se bura to laga , per wo bhi naina ko karan jyoti saman hi pyar kerne lagi thi , isliye kuch dim ki hi to baat samjh baat man gayi thi or sath m hi asha ne use karan or jyoti k jhagde k bare m bhi bataya tha , or karan ko sambhalne bhej diya tha jyoti k pas jane se pahale.

Karan jab kavya k muh se jyoti ka nam sunta h to firse udas ho jata h jab kavya use samjhati h

Kavya :- koi baat ji beta ese udas ni hote bhai bahan k bich to esa chalta rahata h , or tumhari gudiya to tumse chahker bhi jyada der naraj ni rah sakti , isliye tum tension free ho jao or taki hum ye soch sake ki humari ladli ko keSe manaya jaye

Ma to ma hi hoti h , bhale hi kavya karan ki sagi ma ni thi , lekin uska prem sagi maa se kam bhi na tha , jis kaaran asha ne jese jyoti ko shant kiya vese hi kavya bhi karan ko shant ker payi


Or fir kavya ne bhi karan ko aaj apne pas hi sulaya.

Agle din kavya or asha ne sabko apne kuch din yahi rukne ka fesla bataya to sabke chahro p mayusi to aayi , lekin kuch din ki baat samjh sab jald hi man gaye, lekin asli sachai to karan , jyoti naina or kaya hi jante the , jinke chahre latke hue the , jinpe ek fake muskan thi.

Or fir dopahar tak asha or naina ko chod sabne apni packing ker li , karan or jyoti sabse pahale veer or preety k gale mil unse vida lete h

Jyoti ;:- veer bhai ab m kuch ni sunungi , ab aapko bhabhi k sath jald hi aana hoga or roj phone bhi kerna padega kolkata humse milne ni to yahi aaker band baja dungi apka

Preety kalayi marodte hue ;:- ha bilkul didi or ager aapka kaha ni mana to aapko taklif kerne ki jarurat ni aapki bhabhi h na inki khatidari k liye.

Jyoti :- that's like my bhabhi .

Komal firse chedte hue :- bhAi m firse kah rahi hu ek baar fir soch lo , koi dusri dhund lo

Veer :- to sahi bol rahi h komal , vese teri koi friend single ho to kerwa de na setting

Ye bol wo preety ko chidate hue komal ko ankh marta h , jiske sath hi komal has padi.

Preety ye sun chidte :- veer k bache kya bola tu , ruk teri m kerati hu setting or tu bhaiya ki chamchi teri bhi aaj kher ni.
Ye bol wo dono ko pakadne k liye bhagi or uske aage aage bhage dono bhai bahan , veer bhag k jyoti k piche chup k

Veer :- bahan apni bhabhi se mujhe bacha le.

Jyoti nakhre dikhate hue :- bacha lungi per mujhe kya milega.

Veer :- are meri ma tu jo bolegi wo karunga , tujhse roj phone kiya karunga or jald hi milne bhi aaunga , bas is aafat ki pudiya se mujhe bacha.

Preety :- kya m aafat ki pudiya , tu to aaj gaya veer k bache.

Jyoti veer ko bachte hue :- are bhabhi bhabhi bhai to yahi h , abhi kuch time apni nAnad ko bhi dedo or vese bhi thoda wait kijiye jab aap sab vaha aoge to ek sath band bajayenge.


Preety :- to fir deal pakki nanad rani (veer se) ja bacha maaf kiya tujhe.


Veer hath jod :- bahut ahasan aapka meri amma .

Priya haste hue :- hihi bhabhi to bhaiya ti wifr se mumma ban dayi.

Priya k sath baki sab has pade tab tak sabka saman leke karan or rohan bhi bahar aata h or sabki good morning wish kerte hue jyoti k pas jane ko hua to jyoti preety ko sath leker dusri side chale gaye

Jise karan k dil m ek tis to uthi lekin usne khud ko control ker liya taki ese time p kisi ka mood kharab na ho


Karan bhi aage bad ker veer se gale milta h or gale milta h or bolta h ki .

Karan :- apna or bhabhi ka khyal rakhna dost or jald hi wapas milenge.

Veer bhi :- tu bhi apna or jyoti ka khayal rakhna dost or ha jarur milenge.

Ye bol veer muskurate hue firse ek baar gale lagta h or fir karan preety k sir p hath rakh k pyar se usse vida leta h

Fir last m dono bhai bahan ek sath bade unki or jinse bad ker unke liye kuch ni tha.

Yani ki apni maa asha ki or vo nam ankho k sath dukhi man se jhuk k apni maa k per chute h.

Asha bhi apne aapko rok ni pati or ankho se neer bahate hue apne jigar k tukdo ko gale laga liya.

Dukh or itne sal k purane jhakam abhi tak sukhe ni the ki nishthur niyati ne firse un 3no p apna julm dha diya tha , ek maa ko unke bacho se , ek bhabhi ko apni beti jesi nanad se or ek bahu ko uske pure parivaar se dur kerwa ke.

Karan or jyoti ka bhi bura hal tha firse apni ma se bichadne ka , jinhe kese n kese asha shant karane m lagi thi ,lekin karan or jyoti apni maa se alag hone ko teyar hi na the , lekin jab asha ko ye mahasus hua apne akele k bas ki baat ni to usne help ki ummid se kavya ki or dekha.

Kavya kese n kese karan or jyoti ko usse alag kerte hue :- are bas bas mere ankho k taro or kitna royoge, thode hi din ki to baat h , fir tumhari mumma bhi ghar lot aayegi, h naa bhabhi .

(Asha bechari kya bolti, vo bas jhut mut ki ha m gardan hilati h , jise kavya to normal samjhti h , lekin us ishare ka k piche ka asli dard sirf ya to asha janti thi ya fir karan or jyoti ko)


Garima :- dekha ab jaldi se apne chahre p apni pyari muskan lao or chalne k liye jaldi ready ho jao chalne ko mumy tumhari jald hi lot ayegi , waha tab tak tumhe apni choti maa ko hi jhelna padega samjhe.

Ye bol wo karan or jyoti ko gudgudi ni kerne lagi , jisse dono bhai bahan k chahro p hasi lot aayi, jise dekh asha or garima k chahro p muskan aagayi , lekin ye baat waha mojud sirf do log hi samjh sakte the ki dono bhai bahan ki ye muskaan jhuti h , or wo do the ek to karan ki dost uski sakhi kaya or dusri un dono ki maa asha .

Kyunki sirf wahi jante the ki jo ho raha h uski vastvikta kya h

Fir yu hi thodi bat chit k baad karan last m apni ladli or choti bahan naina k pas jata h or use bas pyaar se gale laga k bas itna hi bolta h .

Karan :- apna or maa ka dhyan rakhna meri gudiya.

Naina jo apni jeet or karan or jyoti ki ye halat dekh khushi se nach hi rahi thi man hi man , wo karan k yu khud k gale lagane p kuch na boli , kyunki uska mood bahut acha tha or vo is time koi bhakeda ker ke apna mood kharab ni kerna chahti thi.

Lekin naina ne apni krurta ni chodi , or ek tanz bhari muskan k sath bas itna kaha.

Naina :- ji bhai , aakhir abse maa ka humesha khayal m ni rakhungi to or kon rakhega yaha , aap bhi apna or di ka khayal rakhna vaha.

Naina k is tanz ko karan or jyoti achi tarah samjh rahe the , jisse unke dukhi man p ek or aghat hua , lekin dono hi bhai bahan ne khud p control kiya or jyoti bhi naina se gale milti h or ek akhri baar apne maa k gale mile or uske baad garima or kavya bhi .

Karam dhuki swar me jyoti se :- chale gudiya .

Ye bol wo apna hath aage bhadati h lekin jyoti ne bilkul usko ignore ker priya ko god m lete hue.

Jyoti :- chalo bacha ghar chalne ka waqt ho gaya.

Priya :- ha didi talo, m.aapki godi m hi bethungi.

Jyoti priya k pyar se uske gal khich uske gal chum :- ha kyu ni mera bacha , ab chale .

Priya :- ha chalo didi.


Ye bol wo gadi m chali gayi or uske piche baki sab bhi.

Karan ko jyoti k ignore kerne se dukh to bahut pahuncha lekin usne apni maa k samne jahir na hone diya or fir wo bhi gadi k chad driver ko chalne ka bol jab tak darwaje p khade rah ker apni maa ko niharta raha jabtak wo uski ankho se ojhal na ho gayi esa hi kuch jyoti bhi khidki se ker rahi thi.

Asha bhi nam ankho se vivashata purn apne bacho ko apne se dur jate hue vahi khadi jab tak dekhti rahi jab tak gadi dur ni chali na gayi.

Naina asha se :- ma wo log gaye , ab hum bhi chale ghar me

Asha ek baar naina ki or ek baar dekhti h or fir kuch na bol waha se dodte hue ghar m chali gayi.

Jise dekh ek second naina ko chinta hui , lekin agle hi pal uske chahre p khushi fel gayi , khushi jeet ki , khushi apne swarth ki pushti ki.

Naina (side m khadi preety se jo veer k sath vahi khadi ye sab hote dekh rahi thi) se boli :- dekha preety mane kaha tha na ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye m apni maa ko kahi ni jane dungi us hathiyare k sath to bilkul ni , dekha aakhir jo bola vo ker hi dikhaya na mane , kese apni har se rote muh latkate hue gaye wo dono kamine.

Preety gusse or dukh k bhale swar m :- sister aaj jo tumne kiya wo bahut galat kiya , mujhe tumse umid ni thi.

Naina :- galat or mane , mane kya galat kiya di.

Preety :- sister itni bholi mat bano ,. Mujhe sab pata h jo tumne bhua ko kal emotional blackmail kerke tumne jo roka h na.

Ji ha dosto preety ko sachai pata chal chuki thi , darasal hua yu ki jab karan chat p kaya se is bare m baat ker raha tha to vaha preety bhi aaphunchi thi kuch puchne wapas chat per tab usne sab sun liya tha , or sari baat sunne k baad usko samjh aagayi ki ye sab naina ka ek shatir plan h , or wo karan ko is bare m agah bhi kerna chahti thi.

Lekin ye unka family matter soch k chup rah gayi .

Naina ne jab ye suna to wo apni najre idher udher firate hue boli :- to kya galat kiya mane mere baba k kitne ahasan h hum ma beti p to unki akhri icha puri kerna humara dharm h
Or dharm nibhana kabse galat hua.

Veer ;- ager esa h to yahi baat humari ankho m ankhe dal k kah sakti ho tum naina yu najre chupane k bajaye , or sabit ker do ki tum galat ni ho.

Naina apni najre bachate hue :- kyu veer tumhe ab bharosa ni raha kya apni dost p


Veer :- mre kahane ka matlab vo ni tha naina per.

Naina :- per ver chodo veer mane kaha na m jo bol rahi hu sach hi bol rahi hu , or chalo ab ghar chalte h vese bhi mujhe maa ka bhog laga k dopahar ka vishram bhi karwana h unhe.

Ye bol vo bina age bat kiye ghar m chali gayi of piche chod gayi khud uske liye hi parshan apne dosto ko.

Veer :- preety aaj jo naina ne kiya vo bahut hi galat hi kiya h ,mujhe vishwas ni. Ho raha humari naina aisa kam ker sakti h

Preety udaas aawaz se :- yahi bat to mujhe bhi khayi ja rahi h jaan kya ho gaya h humari naina ko , kitna badal gayi h wo kayi baar to mujhe essa lagta h ki ye wo naina h hi ni jiske sath humne itna lamba safar kiya , ek dusre k sath har dukh sahe

Veer :- ha jan Humesha dusro ko marg p lane wali dost aaj khud hi apna marg bhatak chuki h , dwesh m usne wo marg ko hi chun liya , jiske khilaf wo aajtak ladti aayi

Preety :- or dost hone k nate ye humara kartavya banta h veer ki hum use samjhaye or wapas humari purani naina ko lota laye , ise pahale ki kuch anarth ho jaye humari pyari saheli k ssth.

Veer :- tum bilkul sahi bol rahi ho preety , ab hume hi kuch kerna hoga.

Veer or preety naina ko samjhane ka nishchit ker nikal pade apne ghar ki or

Next day :- raat ki 10 baje

Karan or uski family ab kuch hi door thi apni city se , sab k chahro p khushi to thi ghar lotne ki lekin mayusi bhi ki asha unke sath ni aayi thi

Lekin karan or jyoti to muskurana hi bhul chuke the , specially karan to mano dugni mar jhel raha tha ek or to ma se bichudne ka dukh or upper se apni jan apni gudiya jyoti ki usse narsjgi.

Parso ki kaha suni k bad jyoti ne ek shsbd ni kaha tha karan se , karan jab bhi usse baat kerne ki kosis kerta to ya to wo ignore ker deti ya koi bahane se uth ker chali jati.

Karan firse ek koshiskerte hue jyoti k pas jakee bola.

Karn :- gudiya tujhko pata h ab thodi drr bad hum apni city m enter ker jayenge , kitna maja aayega na aaj itne din baad hum apne ghsr m apne room m soyenge ek sath.

Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas window ki taraf dekhte hue sirf itna jwab deti :- hmm.

Tabhi priya waha ati h or bolti h

Priya :- didu , didu mujhe aaj aapke pas sona h to please aj aap humare yaha ruk jao na.

Jyoti ek bar karan ki or dekhti h or fir priya ko god m lete hue boli :- mera bacha kuch bole or m na manu kabhi esa hua h , chalo thik h aaj hum ek sath soynge or khub masti karenge.

Priya khushi se :- yaay.

Jyoti uth ker garima k pas jati h or bolo.

Jyoti :- bhua kya m please aapke yaha ruk sakti hu.

Karan jo ye sab dekh raha tha , jab usne jyoti ka ye rawaiya dekha to uska dil mano yut hi gaya , aaj pahali bar tha jab jyoti uske sath sone se na keval mana ki thi , balki use bbilkul najarandaz hi ker diya tha

Kavya jo wahi thi jab usne karan ki or dekha to sara majra samjh gayi or boli :- Are jyoti beti bhua itne lambe safar k bad thak chuki h unhe kyu pareshan kerti ho , aap esa kerma na ap kal chale jana.

Garima :- are bhabi jyoti to meri beti h , mujhe radha se jyada pyari h meri gudiya , to bhala kya maa kabhi apne bacho se pareshan hoti h bhala .

(Jyoti se) jyotu tumhe mere sath chalna h na .koi baat ni aap ab mere sath hi aarahi ho , hum domo bhua bhatiji khub masti kerenge hai na.

Ye bol garima jyoti ko lejane ko ready ho jati h , jisse karan ka dil beth sa gaya or karan ko taklif m dekh keer kavya ka bhi yahi hal tha

Kuch der bad karan apni city m pahumch gaya , jaha sabse pahale garima ka hi ghar aaya , jaha abhi abhi hue decision k hissb se garima or uski family k sath jyoti bhi uter gayi.

Karan apni gudiya ko rokna chahta tha lekin chahker bhi hhimat ni ker paya , kyunki ab wo khud ko hi doshi samjhne laga tha apni bahsn k dukh ko or is narajgi ko wo apni saja man betha tha .

Wo kuch na bola or jyoti ko jata hua dekhta raha nam ankho se.

Jyoti bhi ghar m entee kerne se pahale ek baar piche mud k dekhti h or jese hi uski ankhe karan se takrayi to uska rota chahra dekh wo bhi tadaf uthi uski amkho se bhi pani bahane laga , lekin agle hi pal khud ko control ker wo wapas mud ghar m chali gayi or gate band ker liya.

Kavya or kaya k sath waha ek jan or tha jo karan k bina kshe hi uski taklif ko bhali bhanti pahachan chuka tha or wo thi uski dusri shakti sonam , jo apne bhsi ko yu taklif m dekh mam hi mam khud bhi ro rahi thi , use sachai ka to pata n tha , lekin kal se apne bhai ki ye halat dekh wo samjh chuki thi ki kuch to bahut bura hua h uske bhai k sath

Or isliye wo apne bhai se bat ker uska dukh mitana chahti thi , lekim uske liye ye jagah sahi ni thi , isliye wo ghar pahuchne ka intezar ker rahi thi.

Jyoti k jane k baad karan khud ko sambhalta h or driver ko gadi apne ghar le jane ko bolta h.

Karib adhe ghnte baad karan or uska parivar ghar m pahunch jate h , wo apni bahano or choti ma ko ghar m jane ko kahata h or rohan k sath mil sab saman bahar niksl driver ko pay ker chal pada hatash man k sath apne ghar k ander

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

Stay tuned

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai

 

[Akil]

Ye kya bhai itna chota review wo bhi 2 update k liye that's not fair

Bada review chahiye bro hmmm......
Vidya ab kya karegi kya woh Vicky ke changul se aazaad hona chalegi.....
Kya Vicky Vidya ko aazaad hone dega.....?
Kya Vidya Teena ke sharir ko chhodkar itni aasaani se jaa paayegi ya Naina ko iske liye bahut mehnat karni padegi......?
Naina kaise Teena aur Vidya ko Vicky ke changul se aazaad karakar Vidya aur Vicky ko mukti dilwayegi.....?
Vicky aur Vidya ki maut se Vidya ke ghar ka kya connection......?
Riya kisse phone par baat kar rahi thi......?
Kahin woh Karna ki koi aur bahan toh nahin na like Radha jo Riya ke kaafi qareeb bhi hai.......
Akshara ne kya vardaan maanga hai...... ?
Akshara ka Karna Jyoti Naina se kya connection.....? Woh apne maange gaye vardaan ka ist'a'maal kab kaise aur kis par karegi.......? Aur uska Karna Jyoti Naina etc ke yahan tak ke khud Akshara ke jeevan mein kya prabhaav padega......?
Zoya se Jyoti behad naaraaz kyun hai.....? Kya vajah hai iski naaraazgi ki.....?
Naina ka Teena aur uske friends ki madad karna Karna Jyoti ka romance bahut sahi tha
Karna ka Jyoti ko samjhana bhi kaafi saraahneey qadam hai....... Par Jyoti ka Zoya se aur Naina ka Karna Jyoti se naaraaz hona......... aakhir iska asl kaaran kya hai.........?
Zoya ki maut ka rahasya aur Karna ka Kaaya ko dekhkar Zoya ke saath hone ki feeling aane ka rahasya kya hai........?
Aakhir Karna Jyoti ka Zoya se juda past hai kya........?
Karna Kaaya ka romance bhi kaafi umda raha........
Zoya ne Karna ko kaunsi qasam di thi kab aur kyun di woh qasam jisse ki aaj Jyoti usse naaraaz hai..... ? Aur Karna us naaraazgi ko dur karne ke liye kuch kar kyun nahin paa raha hai.........?

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

romanchak update ..to ye ek psycho ki prem kahani hai jisse ratlam pret ban gaya vicky .ab ye divya bhi galat hai aisa lagta hai jo naina ki madad nahi kar rahi .
naina ne jo plan banaya hai usne syn liya hai to ab wo kya decision legi dekhte hai .
riya aur rohan ka pyar apne sahi mukam tak pahuch gaya par aisi kaun dost hai jise salaah de rahi hai riya . us ladki ne abhi apne pyar ko dikhaya nahi hai isliye use aur mehnat karni hogi .

akshara ka tap pura ho gaya aur usko vardan dene ke liye aa gaye bhagwan .ab kya maangti hai akshara dekhte hai .kutil muskan se lagta hai koi galat hi maangnewali hai .

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Update no :- 248
Friends zoya to yaad hi hogi aapko , ha wahi jiske chakkar m kuch samay pahale karan itna bhaybhit tha ki kahi jyaoti ko uske baare m yaad n aajaye per ab uski story m usse jude har character m changes laye gaye h or sath m rakshabandhan ko bhi 2 din baad hoga agle din k bajaye to aap sab log confuse mat hoiyega.

Location :- kabristan k pas wali road
Karan or jyoti sham ko kuch shopping kerke apni bike per lot rahe the .
Jyoti :- aaj to maja aagaya na bahut kitne dino baad hume yu akele me ghumne or waqt bitane ka moka mila ni to aajkal aapko mere liye waqt hi kaha milta h
Ye bolte hue jyoti ne karan k pith per mukka mara pyaar se per, jyoti ne ye baat bhale hi mazak m boli ho per sach to ye tha ki jyoti bhi apni jagah sahi thi , jab se unhe apna parivar pura wapas mila tha tabse unke berang jindagi m khushi bhare rang to aagaye the , per sath m kahi n kahi dono ko hi apni purani life k sunhare pal bhi yaad aate the, jab wo ek dusre k sath akele m kafi pyara or acha waqt bitate the or unke is pyare quality time m dakhl dene wala koi ni tha
Lekin ab itna badi family hone k kaaran esa hona un dono k liye bahut mushkil ho gaya tha , kyunki har waqt un dono se ya to unki bahane ya ma sath rahate , esa ni tha ki ye sab unhe pasand n tha wo to khush the per wo thodi privacy bhi chahthe the.
Ye sab sochte hue dono bhai bahan ghar ki or lot rahe the , tabhi ek mod p karan ne bike left m ghuma li.
Jyoti :- bhai ye kya ghar ka rasta to sidhe tha n to ye bike aapne is taraf kyu modi is taraf to kabristan h naa.
Karan :- ha gudiya , m janta hu per mane socha ki bahut din ho gaye , hume apni purani swargiya saheli se mile hue, use sharadhanjli diye to socha aaj moka or waqt dono h to .
Karan ki baat sun jyoti ki bhohe tan gayi or muh or hath krodh se kale padne lage or uski muthi bhichne lagi.
Jyoti gusse se :- koi jarurat ni h us gaddar k yaha jane ki bhai ,bhul gaye us kamini zoya ki wo qartut jis k kaaran hum.
Ni bhaiii bilkul bhi ni n to m waha jaungi na hi na hi aapko jane dungi.
Jyoti ka gussa bahut ugra ho raha tha bitte palo k sath jise karan ache se mahasus ker pa raha tha , jiska ahasas kerte hi karan turant bike rokta h or jyoti ko turant sine se laga ker bolta h.
Karan :- sshh shant meri gudiya shant , tum to meri achi bahana ho na , yu gussa ni kerte or gudiya tum to sakshat karuna ki jiti jagti murti ho devta tak tumhare saral or madhur swabhav ki prashansa kerte h , ese m tumhara yu krodh kerna kya sahi h.
Wo bhi uske liye jo ab is duniya m bhi ni h , ni gudiya , gudiya mat bhulo shree ram ne kya kaha tha divangat bhale hi aapka apne jeevan kal m koi bhi raha ho ya kesa bhi ho marnoprant wo saman k layak hi hota hai h chahe wo shatru ho ya mitra .
Karan k samjhane or prem bhare sparsh se jyoti shant to ho gayi per usne kabristan m karan k sath jane ko mana ker diya
Karan kuch dur jaker bike rokta h kyunki samne hi kabristan tha.
Karan ek baar jyoti se ek baar fir chalne ko kahata h per jyoti saf saf mukar jati h ,jisse karan hatash ho chal pada kabristan k pas ki dukan se Zoya k favorite yellow rose leker chal pada under or pahunch gaya kabar ki or.
Jaha jakee uski ankhe nam ho gayi or uske samne bhutkal k madhur pal samne aagayi ho thi ,Jisse wo bhavuk ho gaya.
Pahale to karan ne kaya ki kabar ki safai ki pas m rakhi jhadu se or phir ghutno p bal uski shanti ki prathna kerte hue karan bola
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Karan :- janta hu zoya tum naraj to bahut hogi apne prince se , or hona bhi chahiye us din vada kerke gaya tha ki jald firse milne aaunga per fir bhi itne dino baad aaya
(Karan yaha us din ki baat ker raha tha , jab use yaha use aradhya mile the apne , per jesa ki aapko bataya yaha ab kuch changes kiye gaye h.)
Per tumne dekha n mane apna vada nibhaya h , m is baar bilkul ni ro raha , isliye ab tumhari ye narajgi ni chalegi ha .
Ulta m tumse naraj hu , pata h kyu , (nam ankho se ) kyu ki tum mujhe chod k to gayo sath m esi kasam bhi de gayi ,jis kaaran hum timo ka pavitra Prem k rishe k bich nafrat ki diwar khadi ker di .
Aakhir tumnr esa kyu kiya zoya , kyu , dekha aaj tumhari usi kasam k kaaran hi tumhari sabse achi saheli tumse is kadar nafrat ker bethi h ki yaha tak aayi or fir bhi tumse milne ni aayi
Per usme uski bhi kya galti wo bechari to janti bhi ni ki jisse wo nafrat ker bethi h anjane m aaj usike kaaran hi Humara ye rishta or hum salamat h , or tumhari Kasam or jyoti ko khone k dar k kaaran m na chahte hue bhi kuch kah ni pata.
(Fir kuch der mand mand rone k baad karan khud ko sambhalte hue bola.)
Kher tum bhi kya soch rahi hogi ki ek to tumhara ye dost itne time baad to aaya or apna hi dukhda leke beth gaya.
Or chinta mat kerna meri darling tumhara prince kabbi tumse naraj ni ho sakta or ek waqt esa. Bi. Aayega jab gudiya ko bhi tumhari qurbani ka ahasas hoga or wo bhi apni jhute gusse ko bhula tumse milne aaya karegi .
Or ishwer se meri yahi prathma h meri dost k tum jaha bhi ho khush raho .

Yu hi kuch der yu hi zoya ki kabr se bAte kerne k baad karan waha se bahar aata h.

Jyoti :- mil aaye ho to chale .

Karan :- ha chalo .

Ye bol karan or jyoti nikal pade apne ghar ki or .

Ghar jake karan or jyoti thodi der aaram kerte h tabhi karan k man m baba ki aawaz gunjti h.

Baba :- putra karn kal tum or putri jyoti mujhse aaker milna , ek vishesh karya h tumhare liye.

Karan :- jo aagya baba.

Karan fir jata h apni sakhi k room k pas.

Uska darwaja to khula tha , per fir bhi karan darwaje ko knock kerte hue .

Karan :- kya hum ander aasakte h senapati mahodaya.

Kaya haste hue :- kya sakha aap bhi sakha aapko bhi ab apni sakhi k room m aane k liye permission leni padegi kya.

Karan ander aate hi kaya jo bed p bethi hui ki god m sir rakh bola.

Karan :- sakhi ye baat sahi h ki hum dost h per tum ek ladki ho tumhari bhi kuch privacy ni.

Kaya :- ji ni dosto k bich koi private chij ni hoti , vese janab aaj humari yaad kese agayi.

Karan :- are bas bas yaar ab tum mat shuru ho jana yaar vese hi jyoti is kaaran udaas h ab tum mat muh mat fula lena.

Kaya :- jyoti bhi apni jagah sahi h naa karan , per hum dono samjhte h ki badi family m thoda to adjustment kerna padta h , per aap fir bhi thoda thoda try keroge to manage ho jayega na.

Karan :- sahi m kaya tum jesi saheli ko pakee m fir se apne ko bhagyashali samjhne laga hu.

Kaya :- fir se matlab ?

Karan ko ahasaas hua ki anjane m usne zoya ki baat ched di , jo wo Kaya ko ni batana chahta tha kyunki isse kaya bhi dukhi hoti or vo bhi , vo apne past ko bhula dena chahta tha.

Per na jane kyu vo jab bhi kaya k sath samay bitata to esa pratit hota ki jese wo apne past m pahunch gaya or apni zoya k paas , or uske sath firse u hi pyar or masti bhare pal bita raha ho , jaha wahi ruthna Manana , ek dusre se hasi majak , tang khichayi wagerah sab .

Shayad esa isliye hota tha karan ki najar m kyunki zoya k baad kaya hi uski zindagi me ek saheli ki tarah aayi thi , jo thi to uski rishte m cousin , per unka dil ka rishta dosti ka tha , jinme swarth or havas jesi kisi burayi ka namonishan na tha , tha to bas masumiyat bhara prem.

Kya sach m esa hi tha ya kuch or kaaran tha iska to aage hi pata chalega.

Karan apne khayalo se bahar aate hue :- kuch ni , vese tumhe pata h aaj friendship day h or m tumhare liye froendship band k sath or sath m gift bhi laya hu

Kaya :- wah yaar what a coincidence m bhi.

Karan :- kya tum bhi.

Kaya :- or ni to kya , mera bhi to apne sakha k sath pahala friendship day h to m ni la sakti kya.

Karan apne jeb se ek choti si dabi nikal kaya ko hath aage bhadane ko bolta h.

Kaya hath aage bhadati h to karan hath pe ek Bahut hi sunder silver ka breslet pahanate hue.

Bola

Karan :- happy friendship day my beautiful sakhi .

Ye bol karan kaya k gal chum leta h jisse kaya khush ho jati h or sath m karan ek necklace bhi gift deta h white gold ka jise dekh Kaya boli

Kaya :- ni ni karan m ye ni le sakti , ye bahut expensive h or ye breclet ki bhi kya jarurat thi itne mahange ki

Karan kaya se :- hat pagal gift ki kabhi value dekhi jati h kya , m kich ni sunne wala tumhe ye lena ho hoga tumhe meri kasam .

Kaya :- per sakha,

Karan :- are mane kaha na , chalo ab ye faltu baate chodo vese bhi ye dusra necklace tumhari saheli jyoti ki or se use choti ma k sath koi kaam se jana pada isliye mane hi dediya .

Wo sab chodo mujhe mera gift do.

Ab kaya ki halat kharab hone lagi , wo sochne lagi ki kaha karan ne use itne mahange band or gift diya or kaha uska ek sadharan sa band or chota sa gift, karan uske baare m kya sochega.

Per karan ne shayad uske man ki baat jan li thi , to usne kaya k bagal m rakhe gift ko utha ker khud hi khol liya.

Kaya to sharmindagi ss sir jhukaye niche karan k reaction ka intezar ker rahi thi , per jab uske kano m karan ki aawaz padi to chok k wo samne dekhti h.

Karan :- wow sakhi its so beautiful, ye mere life ka ab Tak ka best gift h kyunki ye tumne jo Diya h sakhi.

Darasla gift me ek locket tha heart-shaped ka jis per likha tha ki for my best friend my life likha tha , per wo ek sadharan sa tha koi sone chandi ka ni

Kaya :- kya sach m aapko pasand aaya sakha mujhe to laga tha ki ...

Karan bich me :- ki m gift ki value dekh ker ise pasand ni karunga , pagli tumne abhi tak apne sakha ko ni jana , pagli mere liye peso ka koi mahatv ni , balki mahatv rakhta h to wo prem jo is locket roopi gift k roop m mujhe aaaj jo prapt hua h wahi mere liye sabse important h.

Kaya ye sun apni soch p pachtati h or rote hue karan se mafi mangti h jise karan apne sine se shant kerata h or apna hath aage bhadata h or jispe kaya bhi friendship band bandhti h.

Tab karan ko ek idea aata h or wo kaya k locket ko hath m laker us heart sape wale locket k do part ker do locket bana deta h.

Or ek locket khud pahanta h dusra kaya ko pahanate hue bola.

Karan :- aaj se ye locket humare dosti ka wo prateek hoga , jo hum dono k sath humesha rahega.

Kaya ye sun khushi se gale lag jati h karan k or pure chahre ko chumne lagti h or dono ki ankhe ek shan takra jati h or kab dono k hoth mil jate h dono ko pata hi ni chalta.



Dono pationate kiss kerne lage , jisme keval prem tha , kabhi karan kaya k uper k hotho ko chumta to kabhi niche k , kabhi kaya karan k muh m jibh dalti jise karan chusta to kabhi kaya esa kerti or sath sath dono ek dusre k badan ko sahalate hue bed per let gaye




or jab dono ki saanse ukhadne lagi to dono alag hue or kaya sharma k karan ki baho m muh chupa leti h or karan uss baho m leke wahi uske sath bed p late jata h

Tabhi achanak se bijli ki garjana k sath bahar barish shuru ho jati h jise dekh sari bahane waha aapahunchi or karan ko sath m unke chal k barish m nahane ko bolti h pahale to karan mana kerta h or unhe bhi rokta h per sabki jid k aage usko manna pada or wo bhi sath m chat pe chal diya jaha sab khub khelte h barish m tab tak jyoti bhi aagayi thi .

Karan kuch der baad jhule pe beth jata h jo chat k bichobich laga hua tha bada sa or apni bahano ko aanand lete hue dekhta h.

Tabhi thak ker komal bhi vaha aajati h or bolti h .

Komal :- bhaiya kya m yaha aapke sath beth sakti hu.

Karan kuch ni bolta bas use khich k apni god m bitha ker uske gal khichte hue bolta h.

Karam :- pagli tu to jaan h apne bhaiya ki , tujhe bhala puchne ki jarurat h kya.

Komal :- oouch bhai esa mat kiya kero .

Karan dusra gaal khichte hue :- m to karunga .

Komal :- acha ye baat , ruko m batati hu aapko ye bol wo karan k gudgudi kerne lagi , jispe karan ki hasi nikalne lagi.

Karan kuch der baad :- acha ye bata komal tera man to lag raha h na yaha koi pareshani to ni na.

Komal :- ni bhaiya esa kuch ni h , domo tayiji mera khub khayal rakhti h mumma k jese or aapke hote esa ho sakta h , bas sare din ghar p rahakar bore ho jati hu .

Karan ::- acha meri choti gudiya bore ho jati h koi ni jald hi jab sab bade office k kaam se free ho jayenge to sab chalenge.

Komal :- itna intezar kyu kerna bhai , aapke pas powers h na to chaliye kahi ghumke aate h.

Komal ne thoda tez bol di ye baat , jisse karan hadbadda gaya or komal ko shant kiya wo to acha hua barish ki aawaz m kisi ne suna ni .

Komal udass ho ker '- sorry bhaiya.

Karan :- koi baat ni mera bacha bas aage se thoda dhyan rakhna , wese bahut din ho gaye yaar chachi se baat ni ki chalo unko call kerte h.

Apni maa ka naam sun kee komal khush ho jati h or karan turant nidhi ko video call kerta h jisse Nidhi 2 ring m utha leti h.

Karan :- namaste my beautiful chachi kesi ho aap.

Nidhi :- khush raho beta , aakhir mere bete ko Chachi ki yaad aahi gayi .

Karan :- ni ni chachi esi baat ni h wo to.

Nidhi :- na beta n koi bahana ni chalega , teri to m udher aake hi khabar lungi sheetan , or kesa h mere laal

Karan :- bas ek dam mast chachi , per aapki bahut yaad aati h , aap jaldi se aajao na.

Nidhi :- mera to khud tere bina kaha ji lagta h mere laal , bas tere chachu or mamu ka jese hi kam pura hua ni hum turant aajayenge.

Karan :- ji chachi , lo komal se baat kijiye.

Phir karan komal ko phone dedeta h , komal bhi apni maa se baat ker bahut khush hoti h or tabhi sari bahane bhi waha ikhatha ho nidhi se baato m lag jati h.

To karan ek side chala jata h or aasman ko niharne lagta jh per kahi n kahi use kuch bahut bure hone ka ahsas ho raha tha , jese koi sankat aane wala ho uske jivan m or u ye mosam usi ka ishara ho

Saal k is waqt barish aam baat thi per fir bhi najane kyu karan ko esa anubhav ho raha tha.

Fir kuch der baad wo apne chacha se baat ker phone rakhta h , itne m choti ma bhi aajati h or bolti h

Choti maa :- chalo bacho ab niche chalo bahut bhig liye, ab jyada der yaha rahe to bimar pad jaoge

Kavya ki baat maN sabhi niche chal dete h

Kavya karan se :- lalla naina kaha h itni der ho gayi mujhe to chinta ho rahi h.

Sonam or komal jo kal k hue baat se gussa the sonam se vo bol padi.

Sonam :- chodiye na maa , aap kyu us nakchadi ki chinta kerti ho , kitna ganda vyavhar kiya tha aapse or bhai or didi p to kal hath bhi uthaya ,

Karan datte hue :- sonuu ,

Karan ki daat se sonam sir jhuka leti h to kavya use sine se laga k boli.

Kavya :- ni beta esa ni bolte , wo abhi choti h uper se usne itni si umer m kya kya ni jhela , to hum sab me adjust hone or sabko samjhne m time to lagega hi na , dhire dhire sab thik ho jayega.

Kash naina yaha hoti to kavya k madhur vyavahar ko dekh ker use apni bhul ka shayad ahasas ho jata .

Karan :- choti maa ap chinta mat kijiye naina aaj rohan or riya di k yaha rukne wali h meri baat ho gayi thi mosi ee.

Karan yaha jhut bolta h kyunki wo janta tha ki Naina jarur apne kisi mission p hi hogi.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- Himalaya.

Yaha bhi bhayank tufan sa mosam ho raha tha , charo or bijli kadak rahi thi , musladhar barish ho rahi thi, wahi usi tufan k bich choti p khadi akshara narayan se var mang rahi thi

Narayan :- ek baar punah vichar ker lo putri akshara , tumne jo abbi kaha wahi var tumhe chahiye .

Akshara :- ha karuna nidhan mujhe yahi var chahiye kripya mujhe mera ichit var pradan kare.

Narayan ye sun soch m pad gaye , tab akshara boli .

Akshara '- kis soch m pad gaye prabhu mane amratv jesa koi esa var to ni manga jism aapko itna sochna pade ya mera itna tap prayapt ni , yadi esa h to m or bhi kathor tap k liye saj hu.

Narayan :- ni putri, tumhe or kisi tap ki avshyakta ni itna prayapt h , isliye m shrishti palak vishnu tumhe tumhara icchit vardan pradan kerta hu .

Parantu smaran rahe putri is vardan ka kabhi durpyog mat karna ni to ye var kahi tumhare liye abhishap ban jayega , ise tum meri tumhare prati chinta samjho ya chetavani.

Akshara :- jo aagya Prabhu, ab ap mujhe mera ichit var pradan kare.

Narayan ashirvad mudra me :- tathastu.

Ye bol narayan vaha se anterdhyan ho gaye or unke jate hi akshara shetani hasi haste hue.

Akshara :- sharap to avshya banega aapka vardaan prabhu parantu mere liye ni apitu us kamini or uske parivar k liye.

Hahahahaa

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.

nice update ..to jyoty ko aisa lagta hai ki zoya gaddar hai isliye wo kabristan nahi gayi .
par abhi ye suspense bana hua hai ki aisa kya hua tha zoya ke saath jo wo marr gayi .kyu karan ko usne kasam di thi ki jyoty ko sach nahi bataye .

kaya ke saath friendship day manaya karan ne aur dono ke bich pyar bhare pal bhi beete .
barish me sab behano ne bhigne ka maja liya karan ke saath . komal jaldbaji me bol gayi shaktiyo ke baare me par barish ki wajah se koi sun nahi paya .
baba ne kyu milne bulaya hai karan aur jyoty ko ye aage pata chale shayad .
par karan ko jo anhoni ki aashanka ho rahi hai wo shayad naina ke saath honewale bura hone ka sanket ho .

aisa kya var maanga akshara ne jisko dene se katra rahe the narayan .par tap kiya hai to dena hi padega var par uske saath warning bhi de di .

 

[Charles William]

Update no - 1
Karan aaj subah bahoot jald hi utha gaya kyoki aaj uska college khulane wala tha uske bagal mei jyoti soyi
huyi thi. Usne jyoti ki taraf dekha wo bahoot hi masoom bilkul ek choti bachi ki tarah so rahi thi.
Karan ne jyoti ke mathe ko dhire se chum liya tabhi jyoti ne dhire se apni ankhe khol di.
Jyoti:- good morning bhaiya
Karan:- Good morning didi
Karan ki baat sunkar jyoti khilkhilakar huns di phir jyoti ko husta dekh karan bhi husne
laga.. Kuchh der ke baad karan ne jyoti se bola chal jyoti bahoot huns liye jaldi uth tabtak mai fresh hokar
aata hu..karan tauliya lekar bathroom mei guss gaya or jyoti idhar phir se so gayi..............................
..............................
Karan or Jyoti ek hi room mei sote hai inke room mei ek common bathroom hai.
kyoki wo dono ke maa bachpan mei hi mar gayi tab ye dono bilkul chote the.. Uske baad inke papa ne
dusra saadi kar li jo karan or jyoti se thoda bhi matlab nahi rakhati thi in dono bhai-behan mare ya jiye use
Karan ke sauteli maa ko koi matlab nahi tha waise bhi karan ke papa bhi koi matalab nahi rakhte the. Bas har
mahine karan or jyoti ko 10 hazar rupee mil jate the. Lekin peyar nahi mil pata tha..
Isi karan dono bhai behan ek hi room mei sote the koi bhi problem ho dono ek dusre ko bata dete the
apas mei bahoot frenk the bas inke beech bhai behan ka hi pyar tha.. karan or Jyoti dono ek dusre ke pran
the dono bhai behan ke beech bahoot hi peyar tha.. karan ke papa ka apna khud ka buisnuiss hai karan ke
pass ek bike hai ishi se dono bhai behan college jate hai .............................................
Karan jaise hi bathroom mei se fresh hokar jab room mei aaya to dekha ki jyoti fir se so gayi hai. Karan ish
samay kewal underwear or uske uper ek tauliya lapeta huya tha. Karan ne jyoti ko bahoot hi dhire se apne
mazboot baho mei uthaya or jyoti ko lekar bathroom mei ghuss gaya. tabhi jyoti ki nind khul gayi lekin
wo sant rahi ye dekhne ke liye ki uska bhai kya karta hai abhi jyoti yehi soch rahi thi ki tabhi karan ne usko
bhathtub mei phenk diya. Bhathtub mei pehle se hi pani bhara huya tha. Jyoti ke pure kapde gile ho
gaye. Karan khhi khhi karke husne laga. Karan ko husta dekh jyoti ne bhi karan ke uper pani pekhne lagi karan husta
huya room mei chala gaya jyoti bhi fresh hoker nikal aayi tabtak karan kapde pehan chuka tha jyoti ne
kapde pehne or nasta banane chali gayi dono bhai behan ek dusre ke samne hi kapde pehan lete the.
Udhar uske sauteli maa or papa abhi so rahe the nukal gaye. Jyoti nasta bana rahi thi karan uske pass hi
baitha huya tha. Lagbhag aadhe ghante mei hi nasta ban kar taiyar ho gaya.. Dono bhai-behan ne nasta
kiye or college ki wor nikal gaye.
College mei aaj kuchh khas nahi huya karan or jyoti jab ghar aaye to pata chala ki aaj unke sauteli maa ka janmdin hai
So friendsdekhte h ab aage in dono bhai bahan ki life m kya hota h aaj please aap sab comments kerke bataiyega kesa laga first update or kuch kami ho to jarur batana

Nice story....and marvelous writing

 

[Anas moavia]

Update no :- 214

Karan ek jhuti muskan k sath ghar m enter kerta h , or saman side m rakh apni bahano or choti maa k sath sofe pe beth jata h.

rohan or riya karan se vida leker apne ghar ko nikal jate h

Shivani angdai lete hue :- home sweet home , kitna acha lag raha h na sonu di ghar lot ke

Sonu :- sahi bola tune shivani sahi kisi ne kaha h ghar jesa swarg or kahi ni kyu sahi kaha na bhai.

Karan :- hmm

Kavya :- bacho chalo ab raat bahut ho gayi , ab sab sone chalo

Komal :- ha taiji per hum soyenge kaha .

Sonu :- are usme konsi badi baat h , aaj meri gudiya ko m apne sath sulaungi.

Shruti :- or bhua m to big bro k sath adjust ker lungi.

Karan ye sun thoda pareshan ho jata h kyunki wo ekant chahta tha is samay or wo shruti ko mana ker uska dil bhi dukhana ni chahta tha.

Kavya karan ki pareshani samjh jati h or turant bol padi.

Kavya :- are beti so to ja lekin kal subah doctor k jane ko ready rahana

Shruti :- wo kyu bhala.

Sonam :- aisa isliye didi kyunki aapke big bro yani ki humare pujniya bhrata shri ko nind m apni martial arts ki practice kerne ki purani aadat h , baki aap khud samjhdar ho.

Shruti ghabrate hue :- na baba na fir to tumhara room tumhe hi mubarak bro , mujhe jwani m hath per tudwane ka shok ni.

Ek baar tumse pahale hi panga lena bhari pada tha .

Ye bol shruti apna or karan ka wo kissa batati h jisme karan ne gadi ki chabi lene k bahane maje liye the

Jise sun sabhi khila khila k hasne lagi.

Kavya haste hue :- bas bas ab chalo sobe bahut late ho gayaa h ld shruti beta aap aj shivani k sath adjust Kerr lo , kal m aapka or komal ka room ready kerwa dungi.

Yaha m bata du karan or jyoti ka ghar 2 manjila tha , jisme 4 rooms ground floor or 3 room first floor p the .

Lekin karan or jyoti samet sabhi members ground floor wale room m hi rahate the , or baki first floor k rooms guest rooms ki tarah h hi use hote the.

Sab kabya ki baat maan ker apne apne rooms m chale gaye or last m karan bhi uth ker jane laga.

Kabya pyaar se karan k sir p hath pherte hue fir se use dukhi na hone ko samjhati h or fir bolti.

Kavya :- beta ese udas ni hote , bhai bahano m ese ruthna manana to chalta jhi rahata h , yahi to is pyare rishte ki majbuti ki pahachan h , or wese bhi mujhse jyada to khud janta h apni gudiya ko , wo kya bhala jyada time tak naraj rah sakti h , dekhna kal hi wo bhagte hue aake tere gale lagegi, kyu sahi kaha na mane sona.

Sonam aate hue :- maa bilkul sahi kah rahi h bhai , aap tension mat lijiye, bhala humare pyare bhaiya se koi bhala naraj rah sakta h or di to bilkul hi ni.

Sonam or kavya dono kese n kese karan ka man bahalane m lagi hui, kyunki unko lag raha tha ki karan ki is halat ki vajah sirf jyoti ki narajgi h , per ye baat sirf karan hi janta tha ki wo kitna pareshan h bhitar se , pareshaniyo ka chakravyooh use nigalne ko ho raha h bhitar hi bhitar .


Sonam bhale hi bahar se normal khud ko dikha rahi thi , lekin ander hi ander use bhi andesha tha ki uske prem uske bhai ki samasya sirf itni si hi ni h. , Jis kaaran wo bhi parshan thi , wo apne bhai se baat kerna chahti thi , lekin wo janti thi ki karan ko ekant ki sakht jarurat h isliye usne ko rok liya.

Jab karan ne apni choti maa or sonam ko pareshan hote dekha to usne khud ko sambhal thoda normal kiya or unko tasali kerwa or good night wish ker apne room m enter ker apna room lock ker leta h.

Or jese hi usne room ko lock ker apne kamre ko ek najar dekha to usse or ruka n gaya , uska sabar ka bandh toot gaya or wo wahi gir fut fut k rone laga.


Or esa hona lajmi bhi tha , kyunki jab usne paya tha ki uska sab kuch yani ki uski maa jivit h to usne kya kya ni khwab sajaye the ki wo apni maa ko leker wapas apne ghar m layega or is ghar ki khoi sari khushiya lotayega , or fir apni gudiya or maa k sath phir apne bachpan k wo pyare pal jiyega, apni gudiya or maa k sath wahi msti majak karega , wahi pyari nok jhok, or thak jane k baad phir apni maa k god m hi so jayega.

Lekin wo sare uske khwabo ko ek hi bar m chaknachur ker diya gaya tha naina k dwara , karan is samay hatah pida m tha or dukh ki baat to dekho , is baar to use sambhalne wali use is dukh se ubharne wali shakti bhi usse uske pas na thi , yani ki uski gudiya uski jyoti bhi use ruth chuki thi , uski kismat ki tarah

Ese m karan ki halat or bhi kharab ho gayi thi , usne sisakte hue apna hath aage kiya or uske hath m ek wahi photo aagayi , jise karan us raat ko bhi nihar raha tha.

Or sath m hi wo apne wardrobe k pas jata or usko khol k usme lage ek secret drawer ko kholta h , ye drawer itna secret tha ki iske bare m jyoti tak ko ni pata tha , usme hath dal ek chij nikalta h jo kuch ni ek mouth organ yani ki harmonica tha , jispe badi hi sunder nakashi ki hui thi or sath m badi khubsurti se ek pyaara naam likha hua tha.

Jise padte hi karan ki ankho m ansu or teji se bahane lage or use firse apna atit yaad aane laga jisse uski taklif or bhad jati h , sach m jab hum buri tarah parshan hote h to humare sare dukh dard ek sath hi aajate h hume satane ko.

Lekin sath me hi karan ko us organ ko dekh apne purane kuch khas pal jo us organ se juda thabhi yaad aajata h , jisme uske kano m ek aawaz gunjti h

"Ek baat humesha yaad rakhna motu , jab bhi tumhe lage ki tum akele pad gaye ho or bahut dukhi ho to isko pure dil se bajana or dil se mujhe yaad kerna , m chahe jaha hou , lekin esa kerne p tu humesha tu mujhe apne pas hi payega"

Karan ko jese hi ye baat yaad aati h to uske chahre p ek halki muskan k sath dukh kam kerne ki asha aajati h , jiske sath hi wo apne room ko apni power se sound proof ker wo organ bajane laga.

Or man hi man dhun k sath gungunane laga.

Thodi jagah de de mujhe

Tere paas kahin reh jaaun main

Khamoshiyaan teri sunu

Aur door kahin na jaaun main


Apni khushi deke main tujhe

Tere dard se jud jaaun main...


Mila jo tu yahaan mujhe

Dilaaun main yaqeen tujhe

Rahoon hoke tera sadaa

Bas itna chaahta hoon main


Thodi jagah de de mujhe

Tere paas kahin reh jaaun main

Khamoshiyaan teri sunu

Aur door kahin na jaaun main


Hoon besahara tere bina main

Tu jo na ho to main bhi nahin

Dekhun tujhe yaara jitni dafaa main

Tujhpe hai aata mujhko yaqeen


Sabse main juda hoke abhi

Teri rooh se jud jaaun main


Mila jo tu yahaan mujhe

Dilaaun main yaqeen tujhe

Rahoon hoke tera sadaa

Bas itna chaahta hoon main


Thodi jagah de de mujhe

Tere paas kahin reh jaaun main

Khamoshiyaan teri sunu

Aur door kahin na jaaun main.

Karan ko esa kerne se thodi rahat milti h , kyunki esa Kerne se ek baar uske ankho k samne uske past k kuch khubsurat pal aagaye the , jo uski jindagi k sabse khubsurat palo m se ek the


Jisse uska rona to tham gaya , lekin uske man ki ashanti ni.

Wahi dusri or

Humari dandnayika yani karan ki gudiya jyoti ka bhi yahi haal tha , wo bhi apni bhula se chupke bathroom m shower k bahane niche beth ker khub der se ro rahi thi.

Pida to uske dil m bhi kam ni thi , wo bhi buri tarah bhikhari padi thi , use bhi apne bhai k sahare ki jarurat to thi , lekin apne bhai se uski narajgi esa kerne se shayad use rok rahi thi.

Or wese jyoti bhi apni jagah kaha galat thi , bichari ne bachpan se sirf taklife hi to jheli thi , jis samay ek bachi ko sabse jyada prem or sneh ki jarurat hoti h us samay use sirf nafrat hi mili thi.

Jis umer me bache har choti moti chij ki jid kerte h apne maa baap se , us umer m apne bhai or khud k halato se samjhota ker usne apni har khushi ka gala hi to ghota tha


Or ese m jab itne salo baad mili uski sabse badi khushi yani uski maa k sath ka tyag kerne ko use kaha gaya to wo kese sah pati.

Jyoti ko bathroom m kafi der ho gayi thi yu rote hue to garima chintit swar me

Garima ;- jyoti beti kya hua sab sahi to h na koi problem to ni h na , m ander aake kuch help karu.

Jyoti apni bhua ki aawaz sun khud ko sambhal :- are ni ni bhua esi kuch baat ni aap chaliye m 5 min m ayi.

Garima :- ok beta.

Garima k jane k baad jyoti ne bhi khud ko sambhala or jaldi se apni night dress pahan apni bhua k room m aagayi sone.

Lekin kitni bhi koshis k baad bhi wo apni udasi na chupa payi.

Bhua :- jyoti beti m kal se dekh rahi hu , tum badi udaas najar aarahi ho , kya hua meri bachi.

Jyoti talte hua :- are ni ni bhua esi koi baat ni h.

Bhua :- beta bhua hu teri , chah ker bhi mujhse kuch ni chupa sakti , chal ab bata kyaa baat h , bhai se jhagda hua.

Jyoti pahale to na nukur kerti h fir, baar bar puchne p khud ko control ni ker payi or rote hue apni bhua ko sab bata deti h jo karan ne kabya ko bataya tha.

Garima jyoti ko sambhalte hue :- are meri bachi tu rone kyu lagi , bhai bahan me to ye sab chalta rahata h , tere chachu or meri to esa to chalta hi rahata tha , to usme kya hua.

Ager aapko bura lag raha h to kal jaker apne bhaiya se gale lag jana , dekhna sari problem sortout ho jayegi.

Garima kese n kese jyoti ko samjhati h , jisse jyoti ka man bhi shant to hota h lekin uski halat bhi karan jesi hi thi.

Usne kafi der tak apni bhua se baate ki jinme kuch important bhi thi , jo age pata chalegi .

Yu hi dono bhai bahan ko udasi m dube dube kab nind aagayi pata hi na chala.


Agli subah

Kabya jaldi uth pooja path ker sabke liye nashta bana rahi thi , tab hi piche se sonam bhi hug kerte hue.

Sonam :- good morning maa.

Kabya :- good morning mera bacha

Sonam :- maa bhai uth gaye.

Kabya :- ni beti lala abhi tak so raha h , or tum use abhi uthana bhi mat kal jesi uski halat thi , wo late hi soya hoga, isliye use aaram kerne do.

Sonam :- ji maa.

Tabhi piche se aawaz aayi .

Karam :- kise aram kerne dene ki baat ho rahi h choti ma.

Karan apni choti maa ko good morning wish kerte hue bola.

Kabya :- are uth gaya mera lala , per beta aaj to sunday h to itni jaldi uthne ki kya jarurat thi , thodi der or so lete.

Karan :- are ni ni choti maa , I m fine wo choti ma, wo m ek jaruri office k kaam se ja raha hu , thoda urgent h isliye aane m time lagega, to aap chinta mat kijiyega.

Kabya :- per beta sunday ko office.

Karan :- ji choti maa , wo kam urgent h na , ok choti ma , sona sham ko milte h.

Kabya :- are beta nashta to kerte jao.

Karan :- choti maa mujhe late ho raha h , m party k sath hi ker lunga waha, aap tension mat lena.

Ye bol karan choti maa k gal p kiss ker bye bol jaldi se waha se nikal pada .

Kavya :- are beta sun to..., Hey bhagwan ye ladka bhi na.

Sonam :- jane dijiye na ma bhai ko unka mood bhi thoda fresh ho jayega , or aapne dekha ni kal k mukable aaj unke chahre p udasi bhi kam thi.

Kabya sonam se. :- m to bhagwan se yahi prathna kerti hu beti ki tera bhai kabhi udaas ho hi na.

Sonam muskurate hue :- m bhi, chaliye ma m bhi aapki help kerti hu.

Ye bol sonam or kavya apne apne kaamo m lag gayi.

Wahi karan ghar se jaldi se jese hi ghar se bahar nikalta h uske sath hi uske chahre ki muskan ya yu kaho jhuti muskaan firse kahi gayab ho gayi, lekin kal k mukabale karan shant tha or fir wo garage m jake apni bike nikalta h or chal pada us sthan ki .Or jaha jaker wo apna dil halka ker sakta tha .

Ji ni dosto ager aap soch rahe h ki karan apne jungle wale ghar ja raha h to is baar aapka guess galat h.

Karan ki bike to balki bilkul ulte raste ja rahi thi , kuch adhe ghante baad karan ki gadi ek sunsan jagah p ruki or karan wahi park ker wahi idher udher dekhne laga ,jese uski najrre kisi ko dhund rahi ho.

Or jald hi karan k chahre p ek muskaan aagayi , kyunki jise karan dhund raha tha wo use mil hi gaya ya yu kaho mil gayi.

Karan ek or chal pada , jaha ek choti si kamra numa dukan thi , jisme ek pyari si ladki bethi thi , jiske pas hi karan jata h or pyaar se dhime dhime bina aawaz kiye uske pass jata h or uske sir p pyaar se hath pherte hue bola.

Karan :- kesi ho asma

Wo ladki yani ki asma shayad dekh ni sakti thi , yani ki wo andhi thi , jab usne apne tan p achanak kisi ka sparsh mahasus kiya to wo ghabra gayi or boli.

Asma :- kon , kon h.

Karan muskurate hue :- kya yaar asu tune to dil tod diya , itne time baad milne aaya , to iska matlab ye thodi na ki apne bhai jaan ko bhul jao.

Asma :- kya kaha aapne , aasu , is naam se to mujhe....

Asma ko jese hi dhyaan aaya to wo uchal k "karan bhai jaan" khushi se chilate hue karan k gale lag gayi.

Karan bhi pyaar se asma ka matha chum usko wapas apne sine se laga ke chum bola

:- ye ki na meri pari wali baat.

Asma rote hue :- bhai jan aap aagaye , aap kaha chale gaye the , aap itne din mujhse milne kyu ni aaye , lagta h bhul to aap gaye the apni asu ko.

Karan pyar se asma k sir ko sahalate hue :- kesi baate kerti h meri bahan , bhala tere bhaijan kese apni aasu ko bhul sakta h wo to har baar ki tarah tere bhai jan ki kismat or halato ne hi esa khel khela ki m chahker bhi yaha aana saka.

Asma bhale hi karan ka parshan chahra ni dekh sakti thi , lekin usne uski aawaz se hi samjh gayi k uska bhai abhi bahut hatash or dukhi.

Aasma :- kya baat h bhai jaan aap itne udaas kyu ho koi problem h to apni aasu se share ni karoge.

Karan :- are ni ni aasu m kaha udas hu m to fit n fine hu.

Asma :- bhai jaan aapki asu bhale hi ankh se andhi h , lekin aapki ye bahan apki aawaz sun k hi mahasus ker sakti h k uske bhai jaan taklif me .

Karan k dono hath tham :- bhai jaan , problem ko khud m hi samet k rakhne se problem badhti h bhai , or batne se kam hoti h , isliye bhai ager apni aasu se aap thoda bhi pyaar kerte ho to please bataiye bhai , (karan ka hath apne sir p rakh ker ) aapko meri kasam.

Asma ki kasam or pyaar se karan khud ko rok ni paya or usne karan ki rulayi fut gayi or usne apni sari kahani aaj tak jo bhi story m bataya gaya aap sab ko story m av tak bataya gaya h karan ki jindagi m ghatit hua sab kuch shuru se leker aaj tak jo sab hua bina kuch chupaye sab kuch bata diya.

Asma ko sab sun bahut. Dukh hua or herani hona to lajmi tha hi lekin usse jyada hairani ki baat hum sab k liye ye h ki , use karan ki shaktiyo or ab tak k safar ko leke hairani ni thi , balki use hairani uske jyoti or sonam ko relation ko leker hi thi , jiske baare m bhi usne karan se kisi or din is baare m baat soch , karan ko sambhalne lagi.


Lekin karan k shant hone k baad masumiyat k sath khud hi ro padi.

Asma rote hue :- mere bhai jaan ne itna sabb kuch saha or m idher itne aaram se rahi , or jab itna pareshan hote hue bhi aap mujhse milne aaye to m apni hi shikayat leke beth gayi

kitni buri bahan hu na m bhaijaan.


Asma ko rota dekh karan khud ka dukh bhul asma ko shant.

Karan :- are aasu meri gudiya , meri pari tu kkuyu rone lagi , tu to meri sabse achi or pyaari bahan h , teri ankho m ye ansu bilkul ache ni lagte.

Buri tu ni balki tera ye. Bhai jan h , khuda ne itni pyaari bahan h , itna pyaar kerti h fir bhi. Use rulata h.

Aasu shant hote hue ek pyar se mukka marte hue :- khabardar mere bhai jan ko bura kaha to , mere bhai jan duniya k sabse ache bhai h.

Karan :- ager esa h to chalo rona chodo or chalo muskurao.

Ye bol karan asma ko gudgudi kerne laga , jisse asma khil khila k hasne lagi , fir thodi der aasma se yu nok jhok k baad karan thoda serious ho gaya , or asma se kuch bolna chaha.

Karan :- aasu mujhe yaha aaye kafi deer ho gayii h , ager abhi m usse na mila na to kaho esa na ho vo naraj ho jaye.

Asma karan k in shabdo m chupe dard or dukh ko ache se samjh rahi thi , jisse uski ankhe nam ho gayi or vo boli.

Asma :- ji bhai jaan , aap jake unse miliye , itna m sab saman ready kerke waha pahunchti hu.


Karam :- are aasu tu kyu taklif kerti h m khud le lunga.

Asma :- isme taklif kesi bhai , ye to mera kaam or aapki bahan hone k nate farz h mera.

Asma karan ko samjha k bhej deti h or fir karan chal pada samne lage ek bade gate ki or jiski dusri or wo jagah thi , jo har ek insan k jivan ka antim gantavya h , jaha ek n ek din har kisi ko jana hi h , jo is sansaar k har prani ka moksh dham h , jise har sampraday m alag nam or riti se jana jata h , lekin sabka kaam ek hi mukti pradan kerna.


Bas unhi naamo m se se ek naam samne gate p lage board per likha hua tha

Jo tha.

Kabristan.

kyu aaya tha karan kabristan or kon h ye asma jise karan ki sari sachai janne k baad bhi hairani na hui or kya sambhandh. H uska asma or is kabristan m mojud us shaks se jisse wo milne aaya h , janne. K liye sath bane rahe

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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update no :- 221


Location :- karan house .

Karan jese hi ghar pahuncha sabse , wo jyoti k room m pahuncha jaha paya ki jyoti uth chuki h or thoda bahut uncomfortable mahasus ker rahi h garmi k kaaran or pasine se tar batar ho wo uthne ki koshis ker rahi h.

Karan turant jyoti k pas jate hue :- are gudiya tu kaha ja rahi h esi halat m kuch chahiye to mujhe bol.

Jyoti :- bhaiya wo bahut garmi lag rahi h to socha ki shivani k room m chali jau , waha ac h naa.

Karan or jyoti aaj bhale hi itne amir ho gaye the , lekin unhone kabhi bhi apne uper amiri ka nasha n chadne diya tha , wo aaj bhi apni pahale ki tarah simple life ji rahe the , or khud se pahale apne pariwar ka sochne wale ye dono bhai bahan apne liye kerna kuch bhul hi jate

Pichli baar unhonne jo apne liye ek second hand ac k liye pese jode the , wo bhi unhone apne ghar m laga diye the , or uske baad wo hadsa hua or jab wo wapas lote to pahale mosam ki thandK or ganw jane k chakkar m wo is bare m bhul hi chuke the


Karan pyaar se jyoti k gal p sahalatee hue dusre hath se apna ek. Kaan pakad. :- maaf ker de gudiya , m to bhul hi gaya ki itni garmi m or uper se ese plaster m or pattiyo k sath tujhe kese aaram milegz

Jyoti :- are bhai aap mafi kyu maNg rahe ho , m samjhti hu bhaiya humari family m gujre waqt m jo hua uske baad aapko time hi kaha mila.

Karan :- per ab ye tera bhai apni gudiya ko apna sara time dega.

Ye bol karan jyoti ka matha chum leta or fir ridhima ko phone lagata h.

Ridhima :- hello good afternoon bhai, ab kesi h gudiya ki tabiyat.

Phone speaker pe tha , to jyoti bol padi.

Jyoti :- good morning didu , mujhe bhala kya hoga m to ek dM fit and fine hu , ye to bhai ko bas bahana chahiye mujhe kamre m ked kerne se.

Ridhi haste hue :- acha esa kiya isne , ruko sham ko m jaldi ghar aati hu or fir dono bahane milke khabar lete h is mote ki.


Karan mazak kerte hue ;- to ms ridhima, esa sochti ho ap apne boss k bare m , lagta h ab aapko nayi job dhund leni chahiye.

Ridhi jhut mut ka ghabra k :- ye kya gudiya teri side lena bahut mahanga pada yaar , apni job se hi hath dhona pad raha h


Jyoti karan k kan khichte hue :- esa kuch ni hoga di , mat bhuliye ye aapke boss h to inki boss m hu , inhone esa socha bhi n to ye khud apni tange or is room se hath dho bethenge

Karan :- are n baba n malkin daya kero ,, meri to shadi bhi ni hui abhi.

Ese bolne k sath karan jyoti or ridhima has pade , tab karan .

Karan :- di aapki ek help chahiye thi please.

Ridhima :- tu na mujhse pitega kisi din , bhala koi apni di ko please bolta h.

Karan :- di aap please ek bhadiya sa ac or ek led tv bhijwa doge ghar p .

Fir karan apni problem batata h ridhima ko.

Jyoti :- are bhai tv ki kya jarurat h ghar m already tv to h hi na or ridhu di aap to bas ek second hand ac bhej dijiyega , bhai ki to adat h jabardasti kharcha kerne ki.

Karan :- ji ni tv ki bhi jarurat h , kyunki jabtak tum thik ni ho jati tab tak kamre se bahar ni niklogi , isliye tum yaha bethe bethe bore n ho or tumhara favorite serial dekhne bahar n jana pade , isliye tv mangwaya h

Jyoti :- thik h bhai , per tv bhi second hand hi mangwana di.

Ridhima :- per...

Ridhima aage kuch bolti isse pahale hi kavya ghar waha aati h jo gate p khadi sab sun rahi thi , or usne ridhima ko dono k liye hi mana ker diya ,

Ridhima k puchne p kavya boli.

Kavya :- vo isliye beta kyunki ye sab mane already order ker diya h or wo ane hi wale Honge.

Tabhi ghar ki door bell ring hoti h to darwaja komal kholti h or new tv or ac ko dekh uchhalte hue .

Komal :- woww new ac or tv ye kiske liye h choti taiji ji.

Kavya :- komal beta ye sab aapke bhaiya or didi k liye h , unke room m ac ni h n.

Komal :- kya bhai aap itni garmi m kyu so rahe the aap or didi mere room m aajate.

Karan :- are choti ma aapko taklif kerne ki kya zarurat thi , m bas order ker hi raha tha.

Kavya :- ha dekh liya tha , kese kisi ka use kiya hua manga raha tha , mere bache kya kisi ki use ki hui chij use karenge , mere hote hargiz ni .

(Nam ankho se ) or vese bhi lala kerne de mujhe ye sab , mane bahut se pap kiye h apne phul se bacho per , ab apni is abhagi ma ko apne kartvya nibhane de use pashchatap kerne ka moka dede mere bache.

Kavya ko rota dekh karan turant apni choti maa k gale lag gaya or use chup karate hue bola.

Karan :- are ye kyaa choti maa , aapne apna promise tod diya , aapne mujhse vada kiya tha n ki aap purani baate yad kerke ni royogi, lekim aap to rone lagi , lagta h aap apne lalla se pyaar ni kerte .

Kavya karan ko sine se lagake :- apni nadan choti maa ko maaf ker de lala , esa aage se kabhi n hoga , per aage se esa kabhi mat bolna ki m tujhse pyaar ni kerti.

Shruti mahol ko.halka kerte hue :- are mote bahana acha banaya sabko emotional kerke party na dene ka , lekin afsos chalne ni wala , hume party chahiye , kyu bahano.

Sari bahane ek sath :- ha party party .

Sari bahane party party kahake ho halla kerne lagi to karan ne sabke liye pizza order kiya or pizza aane tak tv or ac bhi install ho gaya ,

or sab lag gaye pizza party m

wahi dusri or
Zoya k vaha se jane k baad mahadev bhi waha se anter dhyan ho wapas pahunch gaye apne kailash apne sthan per yani ki mata parwati k bagal m.

Mata parwati :- aagaye swami , parantu aapke jane ka mantavya purn roop se kaha safal hua bhagwan , ek or jaha aap karan ko shanti v sthirtha pradan kerne gaye wo bhi lambe samay tak n rah payi.

Or dusri or zoya bhi aapke kathan ko n samjh payi , wo bhut kaal m hui ghatnao ka doshi swayam ko manti h , wo samjhti h ki jo hua usme uski bhul thi , lekin satya to ye h ki bhul to ab ker rahi h wo apne satya ko karan or jyoti se chupa ker.

Yadi aaj wo aapka kaha maan leti to kinchit bhavishya m ghatne wali ashubh ghatnaye tal jati.

Mahadev :- priye , niyati ki ek khasiyat h , usne jo likh diya , use n koi tal sakta h or na hi badal sakta h , hum bhii ni

Bhavishya m hone wali wo ghatnaye jinki or sanket aapki or h wo ho ker to rahegi hi , or raha prashn humare mantavya ka to humara matvyA bhavishya m hone waLi un ghatnao ko rokne ka kabhi tha hi ni.


Humara mantavya to keval karan ko ane wali paristhitiyon k liye visheshkar jyoti k sath us hadse k baad khud ko sambhalne ka tha jo avashyak tha.

Parwati :- hmm , parantu mere man m ek or prashn tha swami.

Mahadev :- yahi n gouri ki humne mangal dev ko darshan dena aswikar kyu kiya.

Parwati :- ha swami hum yahi janne k ichhuk h ki aapne mangal dev ko darshan kyu n diya jabki wo to kitne prem se aapke darshan k liye aaye the.

Unhe darshan dene k bajaye aapne unhe rishi pippalad k sath karan or jyoti k pas kyu bhijwaya, jabki yah karya to akele rishiwer bhi to ker sakte the.

Mahadev haste hue :- aap swayam jagat janni adishakti bhawani ho priye, is sansaar ka koi rahasya apse kya chupa rah sakta h , fir bhi aap humare mukh se sunna chahti h to suniye.

Gouri,mangal dev ko bhi wahi mithya brham or ahankar ho chuka h , jo bhut kaal m bhi kaiyo ko ho chuki h .

Nari shakti ko kam ankhne ki bhul , devi mangal dev apne purshtv k ahankaar m itne dub chuke h ki unhone uchit se aapka bhi abhivadan or prathna n ki , unhe to bas humse hi milne ki pratiksha thi , jis kaaran unhone aapki upeksha yu ki jese aap yaha ho hi na , or jo unhone aapka samman kerte hue apki aagya ka palan kerte hue waha pahunche h , wo isliye ni ki aap jagat janni h , apitu isliye kiya ki unhe humare krodh ka bhay tha , jo aPki agya ki avhelna p hume aana swabhavik tha

Isliye hey Priye , aane wali ghatna keval jyoti ki pariksha ban use ek naye makam p pahunchayegi apitu , mangal dev k ahankar ko nasth ker ,is sansaar ko fir nari shakti ki mahima batayegi.

Vo dekhiye devi mangal dev apne ahankaar ka pradarshan ab karan or jyoti k samne

Fir thodi der sabke sath waqt gujarne k baad karan jyoti ko god m le wapas room m aate h

Jyoti new tv ko chalu ker karan k sine se ek side lag tv dekhte hye boli

Jyoti :- choti maa ne to ek dam surprise ker diya n bhai , ek sath do do gift deke n bhai.

Karan muskurate hue :- choti maa ne to gift deker apni beti ko khush ker diya , ab meri bari h , jald hi m bhi apni gudiya ko ek surprise gift dene wali hu .

Jyoti excited ho ke :- gift , kesa gift bataiye n bhai.

Karan halke se jyoti k chapat laga :- bata diya to surprise kaha rahega jhali , tujhe thoda wait kerna padega.

Jyoti abhi age kuch bolti tabhi waha ek roshni k sath baba pragat hue lekin unke sath mahal dev bhi the mata parwati k adesh anusar

Karan or jyoti ek sath bister se khade ho baba ko pranam kerte h or mangal dev ki or ishara kerte h jese puch rahe ho ki wo kon h, kyunki aaj unhonne mangal dev ko dekha tha

Magal dev :- putra karn , hum bhumi putra mangal dev h.

Karan or jyoti jeSe hi sunte h ki unke ghar m swayam navgraho m se ek shubhta or garv k swami mangal dev padhare h to unki khushi se jhum uthe , un dono ne mangal dev ki stuti ki or karan ne unke bethne k liye ek singhasan bhi mangaya jadu se.

Fir dono baba se unke aane ka kaaran puchte h to baba bole.

Baba :- putra karn hum tumhare samasya k nidhan kerne aaye h , tum isi chinta m ho na ki putri jyoti ki shaktiya uchit roop se karya kyu ni kerti or na hi uspe tumhari shktiya karya kyu ni ker rahi.

Karan ha m sir hilata h to baba bole.

Baba :- putra karan shama kerna , hume tumhe is bare m pahale hi agah ker dena chahie tha , lekin hum bhul vash tumhe batana bhul gaye the , is baare m lekin mangal dev ne jab hume aake jyoti k sath hui ghatna k bare m bataya to unki h or ma parwati ki anumati se hum yaha padhare.

Putra bat darasal ye h bhale hi purti jyoti m divya shaktiya h parantu uska ye tan to h ek manushy yoni ka hi na is kaaran iski kuch simaye h , isliye tum ye baat jan lo , jab jyoti putri ka masik dharm chal raha hota tab tak uski shaktiya nishkriya ho jati h or wah durbal pad jati h , isliye tumhe in dino m jyoti ka vishesh khayal rakhna hoga, pure ek 10 din tak , kyunki is samay jyoti k uper khatra ho sakta h.

Karan ye sun chintit ho jata h or bolta h.

Karan :- kyu baba akhir meri hi gudiya k sath esa kyu hota h , kyu dand nayika ho ker bhi use niyati uska manobal badhane k bajaye use girane m lagi hui h , ese halat pragat ker, aaj jyoti ki shaktiya us samay nishkriya hui jis samay use sabse jyada jarurat thi , ager meri gudiya ko kuch ho jata to uska jimedar kon hota baba.

Karan ne abhi apni baat bhi puri na ki thi ki tabhi un logo k kaano m hasne ki aawaz padi , karan or jyoti ne paya hasne wala koi or ni balki mangal dev hi the.

Mangal dev hasi control kerte hue :- vyavadhan k liye shama kerna dand nayak , parantu tumne baat hi esi ker di , are bhai ek ladki ko ager itni badi jimedari sompoge to esa hi hoga na.

Bura mat mana karan , parantu mujhe samjh ni aata ki kya soch k tumhare pita ne tumhari bahan ko bhi itni shakti di , kya wo bhul gaye ki jyoti ek stri h , ye yudh , shaktiya kaha nari k vash ki baat h , nari ka kam to keval apna ghar sambhalna or apne swami ki seva kerna hota h , or use ese kam sompege to wahi hoga jo aaj jyoti k sath hua.

Karan mangal dev k shabdo se samjh gaya ki ye mangal dev ni unke purushtv k ahankar bol raha h

Karam :- mangal dev aap apne purushtv m ye bhul rahe h ki is shrishti ki rachna kerne wali devi aadishakti h ek nari hi h , bhul rahe h aap ki mahishasur , shunbh nishunbh jese asuro ne jab aapko apne loko se nikal diya tha , tab unka sanghar ker aapka udhar kerne wali ma durga bhi nari thi , yaha tak ki aapki to pahachan bhi ek nari se , yani ki aaapki mata devi bhumi se hi h , bhumi putr mangal dev.

Mangal dev krodh se :- apni sima mat bhulo dand nayak , humari pahachan humare purushtv humare pad se h dand nayak , sansar k pratyek jivan ko shubh may ya ashubh may banane wale navgraho m se ek mangal dev h hum


Karan :- or unhi dev ki raksha kerne k liye meri gudiya hi age aayi thi , jab swarg p asuro ne akraman kiya tha, bhul gaye mangal dev .

Mangal deb :- parantu vijay to tumhare waha ane k baad hi praapt hui na dand nayak , tum waha aaye yani jab yudh m ek purush utra tav hi vijay safal hui na , anyatha jyoti bhi baki deviyon k sath bandi ban jati, to ye yahi sabit ho jati h ki bina purush k stri ka koi mulya ni.

Karan :- shama kijiyega mangal dev , lekin aap apne purush tv k ahankar m itne lipt ho chuke ho ki aapko mere bato se satya ka ahasas ni hoga , av to samay hi aapko satya se avgat kerwYega , tabhi apni aaj ki is nishkarisht soch p pachtava hoga.

Mangal dev :- pachtava to hoga karan per mujhe ni tumhe ki tumne mangal ka apman ker use shatruta kyu mol li .

Ye bol mangal dev waha se anter dhyan ho gaye or kuch bate batane k baad baba bhi anter dhyan ho gaye.

Karan or jyoti dono k mukh p chinta thi , lekin dono k karan alag the, jaha karan ko keval jyoti ki chinta thi , wahi jyoti ko ye bhay sata raha tha ki.mangal dev uske bhai ko kuch nuksan n pahuncha de .

Wahi dusri or

Location :- patal lok.

Baba ne jese hi karan k ghar m mangal dev k sath prakat hue the , to unki shakti ko mahasus rahu or ketu ne turant ker liya or unpe najar rakhte hue bate sunne lage.

Or jab unhone suna ki.jyoti abhi shaktihin ho chuki h or baba ki baki baat suni to dono k chahre p muskan aagayi.

Ketu :- bhrata rahu aap bhi vHi soch rahe h , jo m soch raha hu


Rahu :- ha ketu , ye yo bahut hi acha avsar h karan or jyoti ko prast ker phir se is sansaar p asuro ka shasan niyukt kerne ka.

Fir wo dono apne sthan se gayab ho ek gufa k samne pahunche..

Rahu tez aawaz me pukara :- tumhe jis waqt ka intezaar tha wo samay aachuka h mitra.

Ketu :- ha mitra samay agaya h tino loko p phir se asuro ka adhipaty kerne ka , isliye nindra tyag bahar aao

Tabhi gufa se ek bhayanak dahad ki aawaz aayi or dharti kampne lagi , or ek bhayanak asur jo 10 feet uncha tha or uska sir ek bhese ka tha.

Wo rahu ketu k samne aaker jhuk k bola.

Asur :- daitya raaj rahu evam asur raj ketu ko
Vritrasur ka pranam.

wahi dusri or
location :- mangal lok.

mangal dev gusse se idher udher tahalate hue .

mangal deb :- us manushya ki himat kese hui humse mangal dev se ese baat kerne ki

kah raha tha ki hum , mangal dev ko sabak sikhayega.

(karan ko wahi se dekhte hue ) sabak to ab hum sikhayenge tumhe karan , ab dekhega ye sara sansar kese pachtayega tu jab tumpe padega mangal ka prabhav.

sajj ho ja dussahasi karan

kyumki ab tere jivan m aagman hoga mangal k prabhav ka.

(bhayanak hasi haste hue)

prabav mangal dosh ka.



Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai

 

[Anas moavia]

update no :- 215

Aayiye thoda haal is katha ki dusri heroine yani ki naina or asha ka bhi leliya jaye

Location :- naina's house.

Karan or jyoti k sath baki sab ko yaha se gaye hue 2 din se uper ho gaya tha.

Jaha naina khush thi apni purani life or routine m lot k , usne apne tantra sadhna or saman ko ab side m ker firse apni normal life jine lagi thi , wahi normal ladkio ki tarah thodi moj masti , subah sham maa kali ki puja kerna , or to or usne ab wapas study continue kerne ka soch liya tha

Usne jo apni yatra k doran apni study miss ker di thi , or ab use apne 12 k exam dene mushkile hone wali thi, kyunki uska school k rules bahut hi strict the , specially atandence k mamle me.

Wo isi bare m wo apni classmate jo uski hostel m roommate bhi thi, usse usi bare m baat ker rahi thi phone pe.

(Is friend ka aage shayad hi kabhi role ho to. Isliye iska intro rahane dete h).

Naina :- yaar koi to rasta hoga na jisse m exam de saku .

Friend :- yaar naina mane try kiya tha , mane principal se bhi baat ki , lekin tum to janti hi hona , school trust k rules kitne strict h

Naina :- ha yaar tu ek kaam kyu ni kerti , apne uncle se baat kerna yaar plz wo to school k trustee m se ek h na.

Friend :- hmm , are ha acha yaad dilaya tune , m uncle se baat kerti hu , mujhe pura yakin h uncle tere kuch na kuch jarur karenge, tu tension na le.

Naina :- ha yaar please jarur , ni to mera sal kharab ho jayega.

Friend :- ha ha meri jan tu tension na le , m tera sal kharab ni hone dungi.


Naina :- thank you so much yaar .


Fir yu. Thodi der apni studies ki baat kerne k baad naina apni ma k pas jati h jo gumsum si. Kitchen m apna kam ker rahi thi , uska tan to yahi tha , lekin uska man kahi or ths or uski ankho ko dekh saff saf pata chal raha tha ki uski ankho m apar dukh tha.

Or uski halat aaj se ni thi , balki pichle do din se thi , jabse uski ankho k tare uske karan or jyoti yaha se gaye the.

Jo halat abhi karan or jyoti ki thi , usse kayi jyada buri halat unki maa ki thi , bechari ne apni jingi k lagbhag 16 saal samraat ki kaid m gujare the is aas m ki ek din uske bache us dusht ka ant kerwa apni maa ko aajad kerwayenge, or fir wo unke sath apni ek nayi kushal jindagi ki shuruaat karegi jisme uske sath uske 3no bache honge ji per wo khub mamta lutayegi or uske bache bhi khub prem se sath rahenge.

Per bichari ka ye khwab adhura hi rah gaya , uske 3no bacho ne use aajad to kerwa liya , lekin halato k kaaran wo apne bacho se mil ker bhi apna parivaar purn ni ker payi .

Or bichari k liye sabse dukh ki baat to ye thi ki wo bichari khul k ro bhi ni sakti thi , kyunki wo ni chahti thi ki usko rota dekh naina ko lage ki wo uski ki khushi k liye ni balki majburi m ruki h.

Bas inhi apaar dukho ko sahate hue asha ko dhyan hi na raha ki naina kab waha aagayi or kabse use pukar rahi thi.

Naina :- ma ma..

Ye bolte hue naina asha ko jab hilati h to asha hosh m aate hue

Asha :- hhaa, kya hua beta kuch chahiye.

Naina :- kaha khoyi hui ho maa aap , kabse pukar rahi hu , khana do na maa , bahut bhuk lagi h.

Asha :- hmm ha tum chalo m abhi leker aati hu.

Naina :- ji maa

Thodi der m asha khana leker aati h , or naina ko parosti h.

Naina tab asha kk apne hatho se khilane kk kahati h.

Asha apni beti ki baat mante hue hue apne hatho se naina ko khilane lagi , tan naina ki ankho m ansu aagaye .

Asha :- kya hua meri bachi tu rone kyu lagi , khana pasand ni aaya kya.

Naina :- ni maa esa bhala kese ho sakta h ki sakshat anpurna ka khana pasand naa aaye , ye aansu to khushi k h maa , jis pyaar k liye m bachpan se tarsi aaj wo mujhe mil jo raha h .

Baba ne mere liye bahut kuch kiya maa , unhone mujhe bahut pyaar diya , mujhe koi kami naa hui , lekin maa to maa hi hoti h naa maa.

Ye bol wo sisak sisak k rone lagi , asha turant use gale laga k shant kera ke bolo.

Asha :- tadpi to teri maa bhi h meri bachi , 17 sal ye maa tadpi apni mamta lutane ko ,lekin jo hua uski bhagwan se mujhe koi shikayat ni , kyunki.aakhir kar is maa ko usne apni beti se mila hi diya, lekin kitna acha hota na tere bhai bahan k sath humara parivar bhi yaha hota, to ye adhura pan dur ho jata.

Karan or jyoti ka nam sun ekbar naina ki bhoye to tani lekin usne control kerte hue boli.

Naina :- wo yaha ni ruk sake to kya hua mumma hum to waha unse milne ja sakte h naa.

Asha khushi bhari ummid se :- kya sachi , kab chalna h beta unse milne.

Naina ye sun ek bar to sakpaka gayi lekin fir usne kaha.

Naina :- maa hum jald hi jayenge , lekin usse pahale mujhe apni study or exam ki preparation kerni hogi ma , jo pahale hi bahut disturb ho chuki h.

Ye bolne k sath usne apni school wali problem apni maa ko batayi jisse asha ka chahra fir latak gaya , lekin usne naina k bhavishya k liye khud k dil ko bahala liya or lag gayi apne kamo m


Wahi dusri or

Aaiye ek najar rohan or riya p bhi dal li jaye.

Location :- karan second house

Karan ka vo ghar jo usne jeeta tha , uski chabi rohan k pas hi rahati thi , jaha ki chat rohan daily apna dhyan or workout kerta tha.

Wo abhi kafi der se push-ups ker raha tha or use pahale usne kafi exercise bhi ki thi , jis kaaran uska t shirt pasine se tar batar ho gaya tha.

Isliye usne apne pasine se tar batar T-shirt utarne laga , tabhi riya bhi waha agayi rohan ko uska juice dene aayi thi , tabhi jab usne rohan ko shirtless dekh uski ankhe khuli khuli ki rah gayi.

Rohan bhi kisi se kam ni tha fitness k mamle m uski six pack body or ladkiyo ka fida kerne wale curve itne shandar the ki uski bahan bhi unse najare ni hata pa rahi thi.

Riya man hi man :- haye kya body h meri betu ki bilkul kisi film star k jesi , haye najar na lag jaye kisi ki meri jaan ko.

(Fir apni sir p chapat laga ker ) pagli riya kuch to sharam ker , tera bhai h wo , ese ghurti hi rahi to kahi teri hi najar nA lag jaye use , lekin isme m kya karu mera babu h hi itna pyara acha or handsome h mera bhai , itna handsome or acha ki uski sagi bahan bhi use dil de bethi , or usi dewangi ka ye aalam h ki usko is halat dekh meri (ye bol wo apni tango k bich hath rakh sharma jati,)

lekin wo h ki kuch samjhta hi ni , yaha uski didi usko pyaar ko pane k liye tadaf rahi h , lekin samjhte or jante hue bhi anjan banta h

Lekin isme uski bhi kya galti , humara rishta hi esa h ki kese ek dusre ko apne pyaar ka ijhar kese kare isi duvidha m h mera betu , jese m hu.

Lekin betu ager tumhe apni didu ko pana h to ijhar to tumhe kerna hoga hi mere bhai , kyunki teri di m itni himmat ni h.

Ye sochte hue riya k ankho m ansu aagaye , tabhi rohan ki najar apni di p padi to wo bola.

Rohan :- are didu aap waha kya ker rahe ho.

Riya rohan ki aawaz se apni tandra Se bahar aati hui boli.

Riya :- wo betu m tumhare liye juice leke aayi thi .


Rohan :- thank you so much di , mujhe isi ki jarurat thi.

Riya :- bhai apni di k ek baat manega.

Rohan :- di aaj tak apke betu ne apko kabhi na kaha h.

Riya :- betu tumhe ni lagta ki m thodi moti ho gayi hu , to kya kalse tu mujhe bhi workout kerwaoge please.

Rohan :- koi pagal hi hoga di jo aapko moti bolega , aap to ek dam fit nd sexy ho mera bas chale to m aapko abhi apni gf bana lu.

Riya dhime se :- to bana hi lena betu , roka kisne h.

Rohan :- aapne kuch kaha di.

Riya baat badalte hue :- kya bola m sexy , tu bahut bigad gaya h betu , koi apni bahan ko sexy bolta h , ruk tujhe abhi batati hu.

Ye bol riya jhute gusse k sath rohan ko marne bhagi or fir rohan ko niche gira k uske uper chad usko pyaar se marne lago.

Rohan :- aah di sorry sorry didi ,or ha aap kalse subah ready rahana kalse hum dono ek sath workout ho gaye the.

Riya khushi se :- sachi ,thank u so much my sweetu , ye bolte hue riya ne rohan k galo p chumban ki jhadi laga di.

Or moka dekh k usne rohan k hotho ko bhi chum liya , jise rohan sakpakate hue sharma gaya or sath m riya bhi sharmate hue uske sine p sir rakh diya.

Rohan majak kerte huw:- wese di aap bol to sahi rahi ho workout ki jarurat to h aapko , aapka vajan bad gaya h pahale se , jan nikal di meri.

Riya :- kya bola tu , ruk kute tujhe m batati hu .

Ye bol firse usne rohan p hath saf ker diya or fir dono alag ho yu hi masti majak kerte hue baate kerne laga.

Tabhi achanak se riya ko kuch ajib sa ahasas hone laga or usko chakkar aane lage.

Jise dekh rohan ghabrate hue riya ko leker niche room m lata h or bed p leta bola

Rohan ::- di , aap thik to h na , rukiye m abhi doctor ko leker aata hu.

Riya rohan ka hath pakad ghabrate hue :- m thik hu betu , lekin please bhai tu mujhe chod k mat ja.

Riya k muh se bhai sun k rohan samjh gaya ki riya koi badi tension m h , kyunki riya humesha betu hi kahke bulati thi , wo use bhai ya nam se jab hi pukarti jab wo ghabrayi hui hoti ya koi tension m hoti.

Rohan riya k bagal m beth :- di aap ghabraiye mat m yahi hu , per achanak se aapko hua kya , achanak se aapko kya hua, aapki tabiyat to sahi to h na.

Riya rohan k gale lag :- betu pata ni achanak se bahut ghabrahat ho rahi h , esa ahasas ho raha h jese kuch bahut bura hone wala h koi mujhe tumse chinne wala h

Rohan ye sun khud bhi tension m aagaya lekin usne riya ko sambhala or samjha k shant karwaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Nice update bhai

 

[Anas moavia]

update no :- 216
Riya ko yu ghabraya dekh rohan bhi tension m aajata h kyunki anhoni ka ahasas to use bhi dhire dhire hone laga tha ,Riya ko yu ghabraya dekh rohan bhi tension m aajata h kyunki anhoni ka ahasas to use bhi dhire dhire hone laga tha ,lekin usne khud ko sambhalte hue riya ko sine se laga ker bola

Rohan :- di aap dar kyu rAhi ho m yahi to hu m bas abhi doctor ko call kerke aata hu , kyunki mera phone uper chat p hi rah gaya h.

Riya :- ni betu m thik hu , bas tu yahi rah , mujhe chod k kahi mat jaa, na jane kyu achanak se mujhe bahut ghabrahat ho rahi h , esa lag raha h bhai tumhe koi mujhse chin lega .

Rohan :- are di aap bekar m hi ghabra rahi ho , esa kuch ni hone wala , bhala aapke hote hue kisi ki itni himmat ho sakti h ki wo mujhe apse dur le jaye .

Ye bol rohan firse jane ki koshis kerta h lekin riya use jor se pakad use kaske sine se laga bolti h.

Riya :- mane kaha na bhai m thik hu , tu bas yahi rah mere pas.

Rohan :- per di

Riya ruansi aawaz me :- ager tu mujhe abhi yaha gaya na betu to m tere se bilkul baat ni karungi.

Ye bol wo rone lagi , jisse rohan ghabra k bol.utha.

Rohan :- are di aap ro kyu rahi ho , acha baba ni jata m bas ab to shant ho jao.

Lekin riya shant hone ka naam hi ni le rahi thi , bas subak subak k ro hi rahi thi , jiske kaaran rohan pareshan ho gaya , use riya ko shant karane ka use bas ek hi upay sujhta h

Usne riya ko apne sine se hata uske hatho ko tham wo kiya jise ek shan to riya chonki, lekin agle hi shan uski khusi ka koi thikana na raha.

Hua yu tha ki rohan ko jab kuch na sujha to usne riya ka chahra tham apne hoth uske hotho p rakh diya or bade hi pyaar se apni bahan k hotho ka ras pite hue use kiss kerne laga.

Jiska kuch hi second m riya bhi sath dene lagi , dono hi bhai bahan sab kuch bhul ek dusre ko passionate way m kiss kerne lage , rohan bade hi pyaar se kabhi riya k nichle hotho ko chumta to kabhi uper wale hotho ko , or riya bhi apne bhai ka sath dete hue bilkul wesa hi kerne lagi.




Dono bhai bahan k bich havas naam matra bhi ni thi , tha to keval pavitra prem wesa hi prem jesa karan or jyoti m tha

Dono hi ek dusre ko ese chum.rahe the ki mano kabhi alag hi na hoge , rohan riya ki backless top k uper se uski pith sahalne laga to riya bhi josh m aaker uske t shirt m hath dal uske sine ko sahala rahi thi.

Thodi der baad jab dono ki hi sanse ukhadne lagi to majburan alag hona pada , jiske sath hi riya sharma k dusri or muh ker leti h jisse rohan ko lagta h ki riya naraj ho gayi jise rohan ghabra gaya.

Rohan :- sorry didu wo mane aaapko shant karane k liye, kiya lekin fir bhi aapko bura laga to please apne betu ko maaf ker do , per please mujhse naraj mat ho.

Itna bolne k sath rohan ki aawaz ruasi ho gayi thi , jisse sun riya turant ghabra k rohan ko rota dekh riya turant sine se laga k boli.

Riya :- are pagal tu ro kyu raha h , pahale m tujhse naraj ni hu , wo to tune achanak wo kiya na t.o..

Ye bol riya fir sharmane lagi , jise rohan samjh k chedte hue

Rohan :- mane mane kya kiya di.

Riya jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kute tu bahut bigad gaya h ruk tujhe m abhi batati hu.

Ye bol riya rohan ko marne jhapti per ussse pahale hi rohan bach k bhagne laga or uske piche piche riya bhi.

Rohan bhag k apne ghar jake apni mummy k piche chup gaya or uske piche piche riya bhi aagayi.

Rohan :- mummy mujhe bachao ni to aaj ye bandariya apke bete ko noch khayegi.

Riya :- tune mujhe bandariya bola ruk kute tujhe abhi dikhati hu bandariya kya hoti h, mummy aap hat jaoo.

Anita :- hey bhagwaan itne bade ho gaye lekin harkate bacho se bhi gaye gujri , tum dono ka kya karu m

Riya :- mummy jo kerna h m karungi, aap bas hat jao.

Ye bol wo rohan ko kese n kese pakad hi leti h , or usko sofe p sofe p.gira k uske uper use gudgudi kerne lagi.

Rohan haste haste :- diduu please chod please, aah mummy mujhe bachao.

Anita :- na baba n m tum bhai bahan k bich ni aane wali .

Ye bol wo hasne lagi.

Tabhi rohan riya se dhire se bola.

Rohan :- di dekho to mummy kese maje le rahi h apne

Riya ankh mar :- to mummy ko bhi lapet le.

Iske sath hi dono bhai bahan :-1..... 2......3.

Or itna bol apni maa ko hi hath pakad k khich lete h or fir apni maa ko hi sofe p gudgudi kerne lage.

Jisse anita bhi has has k thak gayi or phir dono bhai bahan ruk ke dono taraf se apni maa ko hug ker use masum si shakal bana k dekhne lage.

Pahale to anita dono ko gusse se dekhti h jisse ek bar dono bhai bahan dar jate h lekin unke dare hue chahre dekh khud ko control ni ker pati or khil khila k hasne lagi or uske sath dono bhai bahan bhi.

Fir anita dono bhai bahan ko apne se lapet unke matha chum leti .

Ek or jaha ek tino maa bete or beti ek dusre p pyaar or vatsalya luta rahe the , wahi dusri or ek beti , ek bahan or thi , jise abhi apne bhai or ma dono k prem ki kami khal rahi thi , jo or koi ni humari dand nayaika humare hero ki praan jyoti thi.

Location :- bhua ka ghar

(Aage jyoti ki jubani)

Dikhane ko to m sabko yahi dikha rahi thi ki m normal hu or mujhe koi pareshani ni , lekin satya to ye tha ki is samay mujhse jyada koi parshan or taklif m is waqt shayad hi koi tha.

Or ab is taklif or dard ki mano aadat si hi ho gayi h , kyunki bachpan se mujhe or mere judwa ko uske alawa or mila hi kya tha

Bachpan m jab hume sabse jyada maa k prem ki jarurat thi , us samay halato ne humse humari maa ko china , pita k durvyavahar or upeksha k kaaran to unka hona n hone k barabar tha , lekin bhaiya ka prem or. Sath ne mujhe kabhi tutne ni diya or mere sobhagya ki baat to dekho jinke sath mane is duniya m ane tak ka safar tay kiya , ishwer ne unko hi mera jivan sathi bana diya or jab ye hua to mano meri khushi ka thikana n raha , parantu nishthur niyati ne to kabhi hum bhai bahan p daya dikhayi kaha , pahale us hadse se humare parivar m darar dal lagbhag tod hi dala tha or jab mere swami mere premi yani mere bhaiya ne mera prem swikaar , tab niyati ne ek or chal chal di , mere prem ka batwara kar dala , mahadev k mukh se ye kahalwa ki mere bhai. Ki or bhi jivan sangniya hogi.

Mane yaha bhi apni niyati ko swikar kiya , kyunki mujhe apna batwara kisi praye se ni balki apni bahano se kerna tha.

Or jab hum dono bhai bahan ko laga ki sab kuch normal. Ho gaya h , to fir hum dono ko laga apni life ka sabse bada shock jab hume pata chala ki humari maa na keval jivit h , balki ek choti pyaari si ek bahan bhi h.

Lekin nishthur niyati ne to nishthurata ki hi sima hi langh di , usne esa chakra chalaya jisse aaj meri hi sagi choti bahan humse yani apne hi sage bhai bahan se nafrat kerti h or maa humse door h or had to tab jo gayi jab mere praan mere bhaiya ne bhi apni gudiya ka khayal na kiya or apne kartvya ki duhai dette hue , unhone niyati k aage ghutne tek maa ko khud se or mujhse dur ker dala.

Ese m mera sabra ka bandh tut gaya or m wo ker bethi jo aajtak na hua ,mane apne bhai apni jaan se jhagda kiya , unse naraj ho ker yaha aagayi, ye jante hue bhi ki mere bhai kitna tadaf rahe honge , kitna dard m honge wo , ek taraf to maa or naina se judai ka dard or uper se meri narajgi ka bhi , or ese m m unhe akela chod aayi.

M bhale hi apne bhaiya se chahe kitni door hu , lekin m apne bhaiya ka dard saf saf mahasus ker sakti thi , lekin wo ye ni samjh rahe the ki unhe apne kartavya ka to bodh tha , lekin wo anjane m hi apni gudiya ka dard bhul gaye the , unhone aaj mera dil dikhaya tha ese m m bhi kya kerti .

Inhi anter dwand or apne bhai k dard ko mahsus kerte hue meri sari raat jagte hue kati ,, or mujhe nind bhi kese aati kyunki m mahasus ker sakti thi mere bhai bhi ni so pa rahe the isi dard m.

Lekin subah hote hote nind ki devi ne mujhe apne vashibhoot ker liya or mujhe kab nind aagayi mujhe khud hi naa pata chala.

Thodi der baad bhua jab uthi to unhone mujhe sone diya kyunki wo janti thi k m raat ko late hi soyi houngi.

Mujhe soye hue kuch hi der hui thi , jisse mere man ko thodi shanti mili thi , per mere nasib m ye sukun jyada dr thodi na tha.

Kyunki achanak se mujhe sapno m kuch aawaz sunayi dene lagi or kuch anjane dhundhale drishya , lekin wo mere liye jane kyu mujhe anjaan hokr bhi anjaan ni the.

Unhe dekh esa pratit ho raha tha, jese wo meri koi yade ho.

Sabse pahale mujhe ek drishya dikhayi diya ki m humare collage k park me bethi hu , or mere sat do jan or h ek to wo. The jo mera sab kuch the , jinhe m bina ankho k bhi pahachan sakti thi , wo or koi ni mere bhaiya the , jinke sath m bethi humesha ki tatah unke hatho se lunch ker rahi thi or unhe kerwa rahi thi .

Lekin wo 3sr saksh jo bhi tha ya yu kaho thi , uska chahara mujhe saf dikhayi ni de raha tha , lekin na jane kyu use dekh meri ankho se apne apne aap ansu chalak pade or mera dil na jane kyu teji se dhadak pada or mere dil m ek tis uthi , na jane kyu wo mere liye anjan ni thi , balki mujhe to esa pratit ho raha tha ki jese usse to mera ek bahut hi gahara rishta ho, lekin na jane kyu dimag p bahut jor dene k baad bhi mm use pahachan ni pa rahi thi.

Us drishya m hum 3no khub enjoy ker rahe the or hasi majak kerte hue nashta ker rahe the or dhire dhire drishya badale or kayi ese drishya dikhe jisme m bhai or vo sath har lamha ji tahe the jindagi ka , jiske kaaran mere chahre p muskan hoti kabhi dukh to kabhi kuch or bhav

Lekin in sab drishyo ko dekh m kuch or soch ya samjh pati usse pahale hi meri ankho k samne andhera cha gaya or ek goli k tez aawaz k sath 2 dard bhari chikhe sunayi di , jiske kaaran mujhse or sahan ni hua .

Or m dard se chilate hue uth bethi.

Mai :- Niiiiiiiiiiiiii

Uth ker m jor jor se hafne lagi , or khud per kabu kee abhi jo hua wo kya tha use smjhne ki Koshis kerne lagi.

Tabhi meri chikh sun bhua waha bhagi aayi or mere sir ko sahalate hue puchne lagi ki m chikhi kyu.

Tab mane bhua ko bura sapna dekhne ka bahana bana diya.

Tab bhua boli.

Bhua :- koi baat ni beta shant ho jao tum to to meri bahadur bachi ho na, chalo jaldi se naha dhoke jaldi se aajao, nashta ready h

Mai :- ji bhua.

Ye bhua k ghar ka rule tha ki ghar m bina nahaye koi khana ni kha sakta tha , ye maa k hi diye hue sanskar the bhua ko jo wo aaj bhi follow kerti thi.

Bhua k jate hi m fir soch m dub gayi vo drishya bar bar mere dimag m ghum rahe the , mujhe itna to samjh aagaya tha ye drishy se kuch to sambhandh jarur h , or mane than liya ki in drishyo ka rahasya pata laga k rahungi.

Ye sochte hue jyoti uth ker nahane chali gayi.

Back to the hero.

Kabristan k ek kone m apna hero ghutno k bal betha kisi se baat ker raha tha.

Karan :- m janta hu naraj to tum bahut hogi or hona bhi chahiye m hu hi is layak , khud ko tumhara sabse acha or best friend kahane wala dost aaj kitne waqt baad aaya usse tumse milne.

Per tu janti hi h na meri saheli ki tere is motu ka or pareshaniyo se bhare halato or k sath esa gahara sambhandh ho chuka h ki ab to pareshaniya kabhi picha hi ni chodti dekh na or vese bhi tere se duur hone k baad bhi tera ye price kaha chen se ji pa raha h.

Ye bolne k sath hi karan apne jivan ki sari vyatha kah dala jisko dohrate dohrate uska gala rundh gaya or uski ankho se ansu chalak pade or wo usse or control ni hua to wo samne jisse baat ker raha tha usse lipat gaya.

Aaiye dekhte h wo kon h.

Are ye kya aaj jo drishya humare samne tha wo bada hi marmik tha , kyunki karan jisse lipta hua tha wo koi jivit shaks ni balki ek thi to wo jiska ye sthan tha , yani ki ek qabar thi.

Ji ha dosto karan ek qabra se lipta ro raha tha, wo usse yu lipta tha jese koi kisi apne se lipta ho.

Karan :- kabhi kabhi to man kerta h ki sab kuch chod m bhi tere pas aajau, lekin mere bina teri saheli bhi kaha ji payegi , bas inhi kartavya or prem ne hi hum dono ka virah kiya hua h ni to m kabka tere pas aajata.

Ab tu hi bata m kya karu , kya apna kartavya nibha k mane koi galti ki , ab tu hi samjha n apni saheli ko.....

Jyoti ka dhyan aate hi karan subakne laga or fir bola

Karan :- dekh na yaar , ab to gudiya bhi mujhse ruth gayi h , tu to janti hi h na tere prince ko har chij bardasht h per apni gudiya ki narajgi ni or dukh ki baat to ye h ki esa kerke wo khud ko hi taklif de rahi h , ye jante hue bhi ki wo apne is bhai k bina ek pal bhi ni rah sakti or ab kahi beth k ro rahi hogi or khud ko takilf de rahi hogi,or uski taklif se mera hriday chalni ho raha h ab tu hi samjha na apnin saheli ko zo........

Tu hi samjha.

Isse aage karan kuch ni bol paya or bas us qabar k lipte roye ja raha tha

Tabhi karan ko apni pith per kisi ka hath mahasus hua , jab usne piche mud k dekha to paya asma khadi thi phoolo ka boque liye hue.

Karan asma ko dekh usse lipat gaya or shikayti andaaz m bola :- dekh na asu itne din baad aaya fir bhi teri di mujhse baat hi ni ker rahi , ab tu hi samjha n apni di ko asu ki ab apne budu dost ko maf bhi ker de , bol na apni di ko asu.

Karan ki ye halat dekh asma ki ankho m ansu the or usko bhi atit ki wo sari yaade samne aagayi jo usne karan or apni us di k sath bitaye the , jiski qabra p karan or wo mojud the.

Asma :- bhai please shant ho jao , aap yu hi rote rahe to di kya sochenge ki itne din baad unke dost milne aaye or yu ro rahe h, a

Asma k prem bhare sparsh se karan kuch shant hua.

Asma :- chaliye ab meri di ko unka gift dijiye jo aap unke liye laye ho.

(Qabar ki or dekhte hue ) dekha di bhai ko aj bhi aapki pasand ache se yaad h , aapke favorite yellow rose laye h aapke liye

(Karan) dijiye bhai di ko unka gift .

Karan kuch ni bolta or wo flower us qabra p chadata h or uski shanti ki dua mangta h .

Fir karan or asma wahi khade rakhe kafi der bate kerte h , lekin karan abhi bhi bahut hatash tha , tabhi uske kaano m ek aawaz gunji.

Aawaz :- karan.

Ye aawaz sun karan pahale to chonk gaya or fir khushi se us disha m.dekha to uski khushi ki sima na rahi.

Ab wo kon tha ya thi , wo to agle update m pata chalega.

Wahi in sab se bahut dur

Location :- rani ka mahal.

Time :- pichli rat

Wo maharani jiske bando ne brihaspur m karan or uske sathiyo p humla kiya tha wo is samay apne mahal m mojud ek mandir m thi jo danvo ki devi nikumbhla ka tha.

Us mandir m maa ki murti k samne ek havan kund jal raha tha , jiske pas ek tantrik betha tha , jo rani ka khas admi chamund tha

Rani :- chamund humare varsho ka intezaar khatm ho hi gaya akhirkar aryan lot aaya h , ab bas tum apni shaktio se esa kuch kero ki aryan khud yaha lot aaye or humara adhura maksad pura ho.

Chamund :- rani sahiba m aap jesa kah rahe ho vesa avashya karunga, lekin dhyan rahe ki aryan k sath wo prerna jarur yaha aayegi , kyunki wo is janam m bhale hi uski bahan k roop m janmi h lekin uski niyati m uska vivah aryan se hi hona nirdharit h.

Rani gusse se :- prerna prerna , is kamini ne jina haram ker rakha h , pichle janm m bhi m apni jit k itne karib thi lekin us kamini ne sara khel chopat ker dala or jab mane usko mar dala to kamini firse janm lekr agyi mujhse aryan ko chinne.

Lekin is baar m use kamyab ni hone dungi , is baar esi.mot marungi us kamini ko ki uperwala ye punarjanm ka system hi khatm ker dega.

Chamund aane do us kamini ko , wo yaha aayegi to jarur lekin jivit lotegi ni , bas tum m jesa kahati hu vesa karo .

Ye bol wo apna plan batati h , jisse chamund puchta h isse kya hoga .

Rani.:- isse ye hoga chamund ki wo yaha ane tak wese hi tut jayegi mansik roop se kamzor ho jayegi or fir hume use kutiya ko marne m jyada samay vyarth ni kerna padega or iska asar us prerna p kal subah se hi aarambh ho jayega

Ye bol zor zor se hasne lagi.

Aryan ki diwar p lagi tasvir dekhte hue.

Rani :- aakhir kar tum lot hi aaye aryan apni rani k liye , or is baar hum ek hoker hi rahenge , is baar hume koi zuda n ker payega (gusse me ) wo kamini prerna bhi ni.

Ye bolte bolte rani shetani hasi hasne lagi or chamund ko apne kam ki shuruat kerne lagi.

Kon tha ye aryan or prerna kya sambhandh tha unka is rani se or humare hero se janne k liye sath bane rahiye yu hi

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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