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Fantasy R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

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Naik

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UPDATE 8

In E¹
Mumbai city hospital

Hospital hospital ke kamre ke bahar kuch log bahut hi pareshan lag rahe the vah bar bhagwan se dua kar rahe the tabhi us kamre ke andar Se ek doctor nikal kar bahar aata hai

Doctor - congratulation Singh Sahab aapko beta hua hai
doctor Ki yah baat sunkar use vyakti ke chehre per thodi sukun aati hai fir bhi vah thoda pareshan lag rahe the

tabhi ek dusre kamre se ek dusra doctor bahar aata hai

Doctor-Mubarak ho Singh Sahab aapko bhatija hua hai hai
Donon doctor ki baton ko sunkar use vyakti ke chehre per Khushi ki lahar daur jaati hai
Ab tak to aap ko pata chal gaya hoga Ki vah vyakti aur koi nahi Raj(mai) ke pita Dev Pratap Singh hai
Thodi der mein papa parivar ke sadasyon ke pass jaate Hain jahan ek Buddha vyakti aur ek Jawan vyakti baithe hue the

papa-papa sanjana aur sivani donon ko beta hue hai

Dada-yah to bahut Khushi Ki baat hai tum jakar pure hospital mein mithaai batvao

Dada-Amrit tuhe pareshan hona ki koi jarurat Nahin hai bhagwan per bharosa rakho sab theek ho jaega

Abhi abhi dadaji kahani rahe the ki ek dusre kamre se ek aur doctor nikal kar bahar aata hai

Doctor-Mubarak ho Chauhan Sahab aapko judwa betiyan hue hain
Doctor ki is baat ko sunkar sab log bahut khush hote Hain

Main to aapko batana hi bhul gaya 1 mahine pahle ek accident me mere chacha ki mrutyu ho gai hai aur sath hi papa apne business partner aur friend Amrit Chauhan ke sath ek hi ghar mein rahte hain

Kuchh samay baad sabhi log Surya nivas me jaate Hain.
Surya nivas Dev Singh aur Amrit Chauhan ke naye ghar ka naam
Aaj ghar per sabhi log bahut khush the kyunki aaj is parivar mein char char mein sadasya aaye Hai

Sham ko puja ki vyavastha ki gai aur vahin per sabhi bacchon ka naamkaran hua hai

Raj partap Singh
Daivik Pratap Singh
Divya Chauhan
Nisha Chauhan
Lekin abhi Kisi ko yah pata nahin tha ki unke Ghar per char char maha shaktiyo Ne janm liya hai

Raj aur Daivik donon ke bich bachpan Se Hi ram lakshman ke jaisa pyar tha donon bachpan Se Hi hamesha ek sath rehte the ek jagah sote the ek sath khelte the lagbhag sabhi kam vah ek sath hi karte the
Kisi pariksha mein Raj first aata to kisi me Daivik

Donon mein bas ek hi antar hai
Raj aastik hai vahi Daivik nastik

Vahi dusri taraf Divya aur Nisha judwa behan ke sath sath ek dusre ki parchhaiyan ban Gaye the vah Kabhi ek dusre ka sath Nahin chhodte

Raj aur Divya bachpan se hi man hi man ek dusre ko pyar karte the lekin ek dusre ko batane se darte the

Vahi dusri taraf
Daivik bhi Nisha se man hi man pyar karta tha lekin Nisha abhi tak Apne Man ki baton ko Jaan Nahin pai thi

Kahate Hain samay Kisi ke liye Nahin rukta

Aaj un Charon ke 12th ka result aane wala tha aur 2 dinon ke bad unka janmdin
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Naik

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Update 9

In E²
hero - Ram Chauhan

Jis waqt hamari dharti per raj ka janm hua tha theek usi waqt pahle dimension me Ram ka

Chauhan Bhawan
E² ka ek bahut hi mashhur jadugaro ka school
Is school ki khasiyat yah thi
Ki prati varsh is school se ek vidyarthi jo sabse Uttam tha Himalaya par sthit sabse bade jadugaro ki school mein jata tha

Iis School ki sthapna Mr Chauhan Ne ki thi jo ki Himalaya par sthit Daivikalay ka sabse prasiddh chhatra tha

Ram ka janm inhi ke ghar mein hua tha Ram ke janm ke samay daivik ka dusra bhag bhi vahi maujud tha
Ram ki Mata miss.Chauhan ki mrutyu Ram ke janm ke samay hi ho chuki thi
Chauki Mr Chauhan apni patni se bahut pyar karte the isiliye unhone Ram Se Sara rishta Tod liya
Daivik 2-yah kya bachpana hai ismein is navjaat ki kya Galti
Mr Chauhan-Nahin sab kuchh isi Ka Kiya ja raha hai iske aate hi meri patni chali gai main aisa Kabhi Nahin apna aaunga
Daivik 2-fir bhi tum iske bare mein kuchh sochana Hoga tum iske pita ho
Mr Chauhan-to samajh lijiye iska peete mar Gaya

Daivik ke dusre bhag ke samjhane per jab Mr Chauhan Nahin mane to daivik ke dusre bhag ne ram ko Apne sath lekar Apne vishwavidyalay ja ke vahin per unhone Ram ka naamkaran Kiya
Jab daivik ne Ram ki kundli dekhi tabhi unse pata chal gaya ki yah usi Ka ek ansh hai
Iske bad daivik ka dusra bhag
Ram ko hamesha Apne sath rakhta

Daivik ke dusre bhag ne ram ko 5 sal ki avastha se hi Uski shiksha shuru kar di
Aur aur varsh ki umra Tak aate aate Ram E2 ka sabse bada jadugar ban chuka tha ek aisa jadugar jiske pass 5 element ki shaktiyan thi
Daivik ke dusre bhag ne ram ko har kala hai mai nipurn kar diya
Lekin abhi Tak Ram ke andar vh energy ball Nahin gai

Jab Ram 15 sal ka hua tab daivik ke dusre bhag ne use vah laane ke liye Kaha
Jo aaj Tak Kabhi koi dekh bhi nahin paya tha
Suraksha kavach ek Abhed suraksha kavach
Yah vah kavach tha Jo Pravikasur ke parajit hone ke bad E2 per a gira tha

jab daivik ne Pravikasur ko parajit kiya tha tab uski Shaktiya usse alag ho gai thi aur E1,E²&E³ per bikhar gai thi usi mein Se ek tha suraksha kavach Jo E² par rah gaya tha

Dusri taraf
In E3
Hero- Raja Pandey
Bharat ka sabse pavitra sthan mein se ek Haridwar

Ek lab ke andar 2 scientist kam kar rahe the
S1-ab ham apni safalta ke bahut najdeek hain kuchh hi samay bad hamara prayog safal ho jaega
S2-ham Sahi to kar rahe hain na kahin iska koi Bura asar to Nahin hoga
S1-Nahin ham Sahi kar rahe hain aur ab hamare nai pidhi ko iski jarurat hai
Chaliye aap logon ko bata hi dete Hai
yah donon Raja ke Mata pita hai aur ye
ek aise formulae per kam kar rahe the jise Kisi insan mein dalne per vah super human ban jata
Thodi hi der mein yah dawa taiyar ho Gayi
S1-jaldi se a use dabbe ko yahan ise usmein rakhna hai
S2-s2 ne use s1 ko Diya jismein vah dava Rakhi Gayi

In donon ko Bihari duniya ke bare mein abhi kuchh bhi pata nahin tha ki vahan kya chal raha hai kyunki ye donon 3 mahine se iis lab se bahar Nahin nikale hai.

Aaj 3 mahinon ke bad yah donon apne ghar jaane ke liye nikale the aaj 3 mahine bad yah Apne bete se milane wale the raja se milane wale the

Jab yah Ghar pahunche to Ghar Ki halat theek Nahin thi papa s-kya baat hai Ramu sab kahan hain
Aapko bata de ki Ramu inke ghar ka chaukidar hai
ramu-kya bataen bare Malik chhote Babu ka accident ho gaya hai sab logon Ne aap se milane ki bahut koshish ki lekin aap se sampark hi nahin ho pa raha tha
Vahi Ramu Ki baat Jaise hi maa s ne suni vahi behosh ho gai
Papa Jaise taise Karke hospital Gaya
Hospital ka doctor Papa ka bahut accha dost tha
Papa -aap mera beta kaisa hai
Doctor-main apni taraf se bahut koshish ki lekin Lagta Nahin Ki ab vah bach payega
Itna bayanak accident abhi tak yah jinda kaise hai main vahi Soch Raha Hun
Doctor aur papa baat kar hi rahe the ki unki baat ma ne sun li

ma-kuchh Nahin Hoga mere bete ko

Aur papa ke pass jakar
Ma-aap hi vah injection laga dijiye

papa-main aisa nahin kar sakta isse usKi Jaan ko khatra hai abhi tak humne uska prayog bhi nahin kiya hai

ma-Nahin yahi ek antim upay hai
Last me Papa ne Man Ki baat man li aur mujhe hospital se apne lab le gai
Vahan per unhone use formula ko mere andar Dal Diya karib do dinon ke bad mujhe hosh Aaya
In do dinon me Papa ne yah pata kar liya ki Haridwar me ek aisa vidyalay hai jahan per mere hi Tarah ke bacche rahte hain
Lekin main usse alag tha kyunkiab mere pass 5t element ki shaktiyan thi
Jab mujhe hosh aata hai tab main bahut hi pareshan ho jata hu
Aaj aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update mein ham dekhenge
1-Ram ke sath aage kya hota hai
2-Raja kyon itna pareshan hua
3-Raj ka daivik ke pahle bhag Tak pahunchne Ka Safar
4- Pravikasur ke us ansh ka kya hua
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Chinturocky

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sorbobhuk

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UPDATE 8

In E¹
Mumbai city hospital

Hospital hospital ke kamre ke bahar kuch log bahut hi pareshan lag rahe the vah bar bhagwan se dua kar rahe the tabhi us kamre ke andar Se ek doctor nikal kar bahar aata hai

Doctor - congratulation Singh Sahab aapko beta hua hai
doctor Ki yah baat sunkar use vyakti ke chehre per thodi sukun aati hai fir bhi vah thoda pareshan lag rahe the

tabhi ek dusre kamre se ek dusra doctor bahar aata hai

Doctor-Mubarak ho Singh Sahab aapko bhatija hua hai hai
Donon doctor ki baton ko sunkar use vyakti ke chehre per Khushi ki lahar daur jaati hai
Ab tak to aap ko pata chal gaya hoga Ki vah vyakti aur koi nahi Raj(mai) ke pita Dev Pratap Singh hai
Thodi der mein papa parivar ke sadasyon ke pass jaate Hain jahan ek Buddha vyakti aur ek Jawan vyakti baithe hue the

papa-papa sanjana aur sivani donon ko beta hue hai

Dada-yah to bahut Khushi Ki baat hai tum jakar pure hospital mein mithaai batvao

Dada-Amrit tuhe pareshan hona ki koi jarurat Nahin hai bhagwan per bharosa rakho sab theek ho jaega

Abhi abhi dadaji kahani rahe the ki ek dusre kamre se ek aur doctor nikal kar bahar aata hai

Doctor-Mubarak ho Chauhan Sahab aapko judwa betiyan hue hain
Doctor ki is baat ko sunkar sab log bahut khush hote Hain

Main to aapko batana hi bhul gaya 1 mahine pahle ek accident me mere chacha ki mrutyu ho gai hai aur sath hi papa apne business partner aur friend Amrit Chauhan ke sath ek hi ghar mein rahte hain

Kuchh samay baad sabhi log Surya nivas me jaate Hain.
Surya nivas Dev Singh aur Amrit Chauhan ke naye ghar ka naam
Aaj ghar per sabhi log bahut khush the kyunki aaj is parivar mein char char mein sadasya aaye Hai

Sham ko puja ki vyavastha ki gai aur vahin per sabhi bacchon ka naamkaran hua hai

Raj partap Singh
Daivik Pratap Singh
Divya Chauhan
Nisha Chauhan
Lekin abhi Kisi ko yah pata nahin tha ki unke Ghar per char char maha shaktiyo Ne janm liya hai

Raj aur Daivik donon ke bich bachpan Se Hi ram lakshman ke jaisa pyar tha donon bachpan Se Hi hamesha ek sath rehte the ek jagah sote the ek sath khelte the lagbhag sabhi kam vah ek sath hi karte the
Kisi pariksha mein Raj first aata to kisi me Daivik

Donon mein bas ek hi antar hai
Raj aastik hai vahi Daivik nastik

Vahi dusri taraf Divya aur Nisha judwa behan ke sath sath ek dusre ki parchhaiyan ban Gaye the vah Kabhi ek dusre ka sath Nahin chhodte

Raj aur Divya bachpan se hi man hi man ek dusre ko pyar karte the lekin ek dusre ko batane se darte the

Vahi dusri taraf
Daivik bhi Nisha se man hi man pyar karta tha lekin Nisha abhi tak Apne Man ki baton ko Jaan Nahin pai thi

Kahate Hain samay Kisi ke liye Nahin rukta

Aaj un Charon ke 12th ka result aane wala tha aur 2 dinon ke bad unka janmdin
Bhai is update me raj or daivik naam diya geya hai.....mujhe lagta hai mistake huyi hai yaha...mere kheyal se yaha prabik hona chahiye..... Kyu ki daivik ka sirf ek bhag E1 per aaya hai....or jisko daivik kaha hai wo nastik hai jab ki daivik achha or ardhmanav hai....to mere kheyal se ya pravikhona chahiye jo patal lok pe holl hone se tridev ke aane se pehle uska atma ka ek ansh ko lekar gayeb ho geya.....
Main sahi hu ya galad mujhe jarur batayenge
 

DAIVIK-RAJ

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Bhai is update me raj or daivik naam diya geya hai.....mujhe lagta hai mistake huyi hai yaha...mere kheyal se yaha prabik hona chahiye..... Kyu ki daivik ka sirf ek bhag E1 per aaya hai....or jisko daivik kaha hai wo nastik hai jab ki daivik achha or ardhmanav hai....to mere kheyal se ya pravikhona chahiye jo patal lok pe holl hone se tridev ke aane se pehle uska atma ka ek ansh ko lekar gayeb ho geya.....
Main sahi hu ya galad mujhe jarur batayenge
Sorry friend by mistake daivik likha Gaya aur next update me uski charcha Nahi hui jis karn Nahi sudhar paya
Otherwise
Thanks for informing me
 

DAIVIK-RAJ

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Intizar h bhai update ka
Update abhi ready Nahi hai brother
Otherwise
Maine update post karne ka day bata chuka hu
Tuesday
Thursday
Saturday
Sorry brother 3 day hi hai
Time ke Kami ke Karan Jo hai so yahi hai
But
Koshish karunga aaj update post karne ka
Lekin confirm Nahi hi update post Kar paunga ya Nahi
 

sorbobhuk

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Update abhi ready Nahi hai brother
Otherwise
Maine update post karne ka day bata chuka hu
Tuesday
Thursday
Saturday
Sorry brother 3 day hi hai
Time ke Kami ke Karan Jo hai so yahi hai
But
Koshish karunga aaj update post karne ka
Lekin confirm Nahi hi update post Kar paunga ya Nahi
Koi baat nhi bhai.......
 
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