Fantasy R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 7(b)​

Chaliye ab ham E¹ E² & E³ ke bare mein jaan Lete Hain

*E¹​

yah hamari original dharti hi jaisa ki hamare dharti per hota hai insan kuch acche se kuch bure kuchh shaitani Shaktiya aur bhi Kai Tarah ke log
Ab ham baat karte hain daivik ke use bha ki Jo E¹ per Aaya hai
Mumbai shahar ka ilaka hamare earth ko dusre dimension se jodne wala gupt dwar yahi per sthit hai jis Karan daivik ka vah bhag yahan per aakar Uske gupt dwar ke pas ek vishwavidyalay ki sthapna ki R.R.Raj Daivikalay university aur yahan per pratiksha karne laga uska jo us energy ball ko apnaega

*E²​

Yah hamari dharti Ka pahala dimension hai yahan per jaadui shaktiyan Ka prayog aam bat hai yahan per lagbhag sabhi logon ke pass koi Na koi jaadui shaktiyan hoti thi kisi ke pass earth power kisi ke pass air power etc
Ab ham chalte Hain daivik ke dusre bhag ki taraf
Yahan per dharti aur dusre dimensions se jodne wala gupt dwar Himalaya ke ek bhag per sthit hai
Daivik ne vahan per ek magical school ki sthapna ki
R.R.Raj Daivikalay magical school aur yahan per pratiksha karne laga uska jo us energy ball ko apnaega

*E³​

Yah hamari dharti ka dusra dimension hai yah bilkul hamari dharti ki Tarah hai lekin yahan per gupt roop se jadui shiksha bhi hoti hai
Ab ham chalte Hain daivik ke tisre bhag ki Taraf yahan per dharti aur dimension se jodne wala gupt dwar Haridwar ke ek bhag mein sthit hai jis karan daivik ne Haridwar me ek Vaidik school ki sthapna ki
R.R.Raj Daivikalay Vaidik vishwavidyalay aur yahan per pratiksha karne laga uska jo us energy ball ko apnaega

Aage ki adhiktar kahani dharti aur uske dimension per chalegi

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Excellent update

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

N

INTRODUCTION​

kalyug me Daivik ke rup rup
E¹ par
Raj Pratap Singh
& D¹(vah bhag Jo energy ball lekar E¹ par Aaya tha)
E² par
Ram Chauhan
& D²(vah bhag Jo energy ball lekar E3 par Aaya tha)
E³ par
Raja Pandey
@ D³(vah bhag Jo energy ball lekar E³ par Aaya tha)

Dharti(E¹) par

Surya Pratap Singh-Raj ke Dada
Dev Pratap Singh-Raj ke pita
Sanjana Pratap Singh-Raj ki ma

Suraj Pratap Singh-Raj ke chacha
Shivani Pratap Singh-Raj ki chachi
Pravik Pratap Singh-Suraj Pratap Singh ka beta

Amrit Chauhan-Dev Pratap Singh ka dost
Asha Chauhan-Amrit ki patni
Divya Chauhan-Suraj ki bari beti
Nisha Chauhan-Divya ki judva bahan usse do minute chhoti

Naye character aane per unki jankari Di jayegi

Nice update bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

UPDATE 8​

In E¹
Mumbai city hospital

Hospital hospital ke kamre ke bahar kuch log bahut hi pareshan lag rahe the vah bar bhagwan se dua kar rahe the tabhi us kamre ke andar Se ek doctor nikal kar bahar aata hai

Doctor - congratulation Singh Sahab aapko beta hua hai
doctor Ki yah baat sunkar use vyakti ke chehre per thodi sukun aati hai fir bhi vah thoda pareshan lag rahe the

tabhi ek dusre kamre se ek dusra doctor bahar aata hai

Doctor-Mubarak ho Singh Sahab aapko bhatija hua hai hai
Donon doctor ki baton ko sunkar use vyakti ke chehre per Khushi ki lahar daur jaati hai
Ab tak to aap ko pata chal gaya hoga Ki vah vyakti aur koi nahi Raj(mai) ke pita Dev Pratap Singh hai
Thodi der mein papa parivar ke sadasyon ke pass jaate Hain jahan ek Buddha vyakti aur ek Jawan vyakti baithe hue the

papa-papa sanjana aur sivani donon ko beta hue hai

Dada-yah to bahut Khushi Ki baat hai tum jakar pure hospital mein mithaai batvao

Dada-Amrit tuhe pareshan hona ki koi jarurat Nahin hai bhagwan per bharosa rakho sab theek ho jaega

Abhi abhi dadaji kahani rahe the ki ek dusre kamre se ek aur doctor nikal kar bahar aata hai

Doctor-Mubarak ho Chauhan Sahab aapko judwa betiyan hue hain
Doctor ki is baat ko sunkar sab log bahut khush hote Hain

Main to aapko batana hi bhul gaya 1 mahine pahle ek accident me mere chacha ki mrutyu ho gai hai aur sath hi papa apne business partner aur friend Amrit Chauhan ke sath ek hi ghar mein rahte hain

Kuchh samay baad sabhi log Surya nivas me jaate Hain.
Surya nivas Dev Singh aur Amrit Chauhan ke naye ghar ka naam
Aaj ghar per sabhi log bahut khush the kyunki aaj is parivar mein char char mein sadasya aaye Hai

Sham ko puja ki vyavastha ki gai aur vahin per sabhi bacchon ka naamkaran hua hai

Raj partap Singh
Pravik Pratap Singh
Divya Chauhan
Nisha Chauhan
Lekin abhi Kisi ko yah pata nahin tha ki unke Ghar per char char maha shaktiyo Ne janm liya hai

Raj aur pravik donon ke bich bachpan Se Hi ram lakshman ke jaisa pyar tha donon bachpan Se Hi hamesha ek sath rehte the ek jagah sote the ek sath khelte the lagbhag sabhi kam vah ek sath hi karte the
Kisi pariksha mein Raj first aata to kisi me pravik

Donon mein bas ek hi antar hai
Raj aastik hai vahi Daivik nastik

Vahi dusri taraf Divya aur Nisha judwa behan ke sath sath ek dusre ki parchhaiyan ban Gaye the vah Kabhi ek dusre ka sath Nahin chhodte

Raj aur Divya bachpan se hi man hi man ek dusre ko pyar karte the lekin ek dusre ko batane se darte the

Vahi dusri taraf
Pravik bhi Nisha se man hi man pyar karta tha lekin Nisha abhi tak Apne Man ki baton ko Jaan Nahin pai thi

Kahate Hain samay Kisi ke liye Nahin rukta

Aaj un Charon ke 12th ka result aane wala tha aur 2 dinon ke bad unka janmdin

Excellent update

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 9​

In E²
hero - Ram Chauhan

Jis waqt hamari dharti per raj ka janm hua tha theek usi waqt pahle dimension me Ram ka

Chauhan Bhawan
E² ka ek bahut hi mashhur jadugaro ka school
Is school ki khasiyat yah thi
Ki prati varsh is school se ek vidyarthi jo sabse Uttam tha Himalaya par sthit sabse bade jadugaro ki school mein jata tha

Iis School ki sthapna Mr Chauhan Ne ki thi jo ki Himalaya par sthit Daivikalay ka sabse prasiddh chhatra tha

Ram ka janm inhi ke ghar mein hua tha Ram ke janm ke samay daivik ka dusra bhag bhi vahi maujud tha
Ram ki Mata miss.Chauhan ki mrutyu Ram ke janm ke samay hi ho chuki thi
Chauki Mr Chauhan apni patni se bahut pyar karte the isiliye unhone Ram Se Sara rishta Tod liya
Daivik 2-yah kya bachpana hai ismein is navjaat ki kya Galti
Mr Chauhan-Nahin sab kuchh isi Ka Kiya ja raha hai iske aate hi meri patni chali gai main aisa Kabhi Nahin apna aaunga
Daivik 2-fir bhi tum iske bare mein kuchh sochana Hoga tum iske pita ho
Mr Chauhan-to samajh lijiye iska peete mar Gaya

Daivik ke dusre bhag ke samjhane per jab Mr Chauhan Nahin mane to daivik ke dusre bhag ne ram ko Apne sath lekar Apne vishwavidyalay ja ke vahin per unhone Ram ka naamkaran Kiya
Jab daivik ne Ram ki kundli dekhi tabhi unse pata chal gaya ki yah usi Ka ek ansh hai
Iske bad daivik ka dusra bhag
Ram ko hamesha Apne sath rakhta

Daivik ke dusre bhag ne ram ko 5 sal ki avastha se hi Uski shiksha shuru kar di
Aur aur varsh ki umra Tak aate aate Ram E2 ka sabse bada jadugar ban chuka tha ek aisa jadugar jiske pass 5 element ki shaktiyan thi
Daivik ke dusre bhag ne ram ko har kala hai mai nipurn kar diya
Lekin abhi Tak Ram ke andar vh energy ball Nahin gai

Jab Ram 15 sal ka hua tab daivik ke dusre bhag ne use vah laane ke liye Kaha
Jo aaj Tak Kabhi koi dekh bhi nahin paya tha
Suraksha kavach ek Abhed suraksha kavach
Yah vah kavach tha Jo Pravikasur ke parajit hone ke bad E2 per a gira tha

jab daivik ne Pravikasur ko parajit kiya tha tab uski Shaktiya usse alag ho gai thi aur E1,E²&E³ per bikhar gai thi usi mein Se ek tha suraksha kavach Jo E² par rah gaya tha

Dusri taraf
In E3
Hero- Raja Pandey
Bharat ka sabse pavitra sthan mein se ek Haridwar

Ek lab ke andar 2 scientist kam kar rahe the
S1-ab ham apni safalta ke bahut najdeek hain kuchh hi samay bad hamara prayog safal ho jaega
S2-ham Sahi to kar rahe hain na kahin iska koi Bura asar to Nahin hoga
S1-Nahin ham Sahi kar rahe hain aur ab hamare nai pidhi ko iski jarurat hai
Chaliye aap logon ko bata hi dete Hai
yah donon Raja ke Mata pita hai aur ye
ek aise formulae per kam kar rahe the jise Kisi insan mein dalne per vah super human ban jata
Thodi hi der mein yah dawa taiyar ho Gayi
S1-jaldi se a use dabbe ko yahan ise usmein rakhna hai
S2-s2 ne use s1 ko Diya jismein vah dava Rakhi Gayi

In donon ko Bihari duniya ke bare mein abhi kuchh bhi pata nahin tha ki vahan kya chal raha hai kyunki ye donon 3 mahine se iis lab se bahar Nahin nikale hai.

Aaj 3 mahinon ke bad yah donon apne ghar jaane ke liye nikale the aaj 3 mahine bad yah Apne bete se milane wale the raja se milane wale the

Jab yah Ghar pahunche to Ghar Ki halat theek Nahin thi papa s-kya baat hai Ramu sab kahan hain
Aapko bata de ki Ramu inke ghar ka chaukidar hai
ramu-kya bataen bare Malik chhote Babu ka accident ho gaya hai sab logon Ne aap se milane ki bahut koshish ki lekin aap se sampark hi nahin ho pa raha tha
Vahi Ramu Ki baat Jaise hi maa s ne suni vahi behosh ho gai
Papa Jaise taise Karke hospital Gaya
Hospital ka doctor Papa ka bahut accha dost tha
Papa -aap mera beta kaisa hai
Doctor-main apni taraf se bahut koshish ki lekin Lagta Nahin Ki ab vah bach payega
Itna bayanak accident abhi tak yah jinda kaise hai main vahi Soch Raha Hun
Doctor aur papa baat kar hi rahe the ki unki baat ma ne sun li

ma-kuchh Nahin Hoga mere bete ko

Aur papa ke pass jakar
Ma-aap hi vah injection laga dijiye

papa-main aisa nahin kar sakta isse usKi Jaan ko khatra hai abhi tak humne uska prayog bhi nahin kiya hai

ma-Nahin yahi ek antim upay hai
Last me Papa ne Man Ki baat man li aur mujhe hospital se apne lab le gai
Vahan per unhone use formula ko mere andar Dal Diya karib do dinon ke bad mujhe hosh Aaya
In do dinon me Papa ne yah pata kar liya ki Haridwar me ek aisa vidyalay hai jahan per mere hi Tarah ke bacche rahte hain
Lekin main usse alag tha kyunkiab mere pass 5t element ki shaktiyan thi
Jab mujhe hosh aata hai tab main bahut hi pareshan ho jata hu
Aaj aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update mein ham dekhenge
1-Ram ke sath aage kya hota hai
2-Raja kyon itna pareshan hua
3-Raj ka daivik ke pahle bhag Tak pahunchne Ka Safar
4- Pravikasur ke us ansh ka kya hua

Fantastic update

 

[Naik]

Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update dost

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

UPDATE 10
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In E2
Is samay Ram Apne kamre mein baitha kuchh Soch Raha tha use yah bataya gaya tha ki Uske pita ne use isliye Nahin apna hai kyunki Uske janm ke samay hi uski Mata ki mrityu ho gai lekin aaj Tak Kisi Ne use Uske pita ke bare mein kuchh Nahin bataya tha
Thodi der mein ram ko Apne shiksha kya pahla din yad Aaya jab vah 5 sal Ka tha

Flashback​

10 year ago

Aaj Ram Ki shiksha ka pahla din tha aur D2 Ne sabse pahle Ram ki sharirik shiksha shuru ki .
D2 Ne 3 varsh ki aayu Se Hi ram ko dhyan lagana shuru karva diya tha Ram pratidin subah subah 3 baje se 5 baje tak dhyan lagata tha
Is samay D2 aur Ram ek bahut hi bade ground me hai
D2-Ram aaj tum iis ground ke 50 chakkar lagao

Ram- guru ji yah to bahut hi Vishal ground hai main kaise iska 50 chakkar laga paunga

D2-tumhare andar bahut Shakti hai Ram tum agar usse theek se pahchan gaya talk to me ek second mein iis ground ke 50 chakkar laga sakte ho

Ram-jaisi aapki ichcha Guruji
Iske bad Ram ne use ground ki chakkar lagana shuru Kiya
Shuruaat me ram ko thodi pareshani hun lekin 5 chakkar lagane ke baad use Apne andar bahut hi Shakti ka mahsus hua aur dekhte hi dekhte usne ground ke chakkar laga liya
Kuchh din tak ram ko sirf yahi karna para

1 saptah baad D2 ne Ram ko lohe ke kapde pehn vae jiska vajan 80 kg tha aur FIR chakkar lagwana shuru Kiya 1 month Tak yahi chalta Raha dhire dhire Ram ki speed aur tej ho gai

1 month baad D2 ne ram ki martial art aur bahut Tarah Ki training Suru ki aise hi 5 saal beet Gaye

Jab Ram 10 saal ka hua tab D2 ne uski magic ki study shuru ki
Ram bachpan Se Hi dhyan lagata tha jis Karan Uske chakra jagrit hone lage the
Kuchh kuchh dinon ke andar Ram ke Sare chakra jagrit ho Gaye iske bad ram ko Apne andar bahut sari shaktiyon Ka pata Chala Jaise
Gayab hona
Kisi dusre vyakti ko dekh kar uski sari jankari ko copy karna
Clone banana
Usmein aise hi bahut sari jadui shaktiyan thi
Lekin D2 ko pata tha ki yah kuchh bhi Nahin hai
15 sal ki umra tak Ram ne apne bahut sari shaktiyon ko control karna Sikh liya lekin fir bhi use Apne andar aur shaktiyan mahsus ho rahi thi

flashback end
Ram Soch Raha tha ki vah suraksha kavach ko kis Tarah prapt karega vahan kis Tarah Ki sankat hogi kyunki usse D2 ne bataya tha ki jahan vah ja raha hai vahan bal ke sath sath buddhi ka bhi prayog karna padega

Dusri taraf
In E3

Jab Raja ko hosh Aaya to uske samne aaina tha jis Karan Raja bahut pareshan ho Gaya kyunki uska chehra Puri Tarah Se badal chuka tha 10 sal ki hone ke bavjud vah 15 sal Ka dikh raha tha
Raja(mind)-yah mere sath kaise ho gaya tabhi use yad aata hai ki uska accident hua tha
Jab uska dhyan aas pass gaya usne vahan per Apne Mata pita ko dekhna
Papa-tum jindagi aur maut ke bich lar rahe the tab Maine tumhari ma ke kahne per tumhara ilaaj Kiya
Raja-lekin papa Mera chehra kaise change ho gaya
papa-vah kuchh chemical reaction ki vajah Se hua hai

Iske baad Papa Ne Raja ko yah bataya ki uske andar kuchh shaktiyan aa gai hai sahi tarah se chalane ke liye liye ek vidyalay mein jana padega

Papa ne apni taraf Se pata kar liya tha ki kahani mulya Se bacchon Ki shiksha hoti hai

1 saptah baad Mai D3 ke samne tha
D3-mujhe pata Chala Ki kis Tarah iske andar shaktiyan aai aap pareshan mat hoiye ISI yahan per uchit shiksha milenge
papa-mujhe aap se yahi prathna hai ki ya buri sangat me Na pad jaaye
D3-aisa kuchh bhi Nahin hoga

Kuchh Dino Baad D3 Ne meri shiksha prarambh kar de sabse pahle unhone mujhe dhyan karna sikhaya Uske bad dheere dheere main apni shaktiyon per control panel laga main 5 element per control pa liya mujhe apni andar aur Shakti mahsus ho rahi hai

Ek din jab D3 Ne Mera bhavishya Dekha tab use pata chal gaya ki mai hi daivik ka vah bhag Hu Jo E3 par hai
Aaj main Sahi tarike se 15 sal Ka ho gaya Hu
Aur aaj meri shiksha Puri ho gai
Lekin aaj gurudev Ne mujhe ek aisa hathiyar laane ke liye Kaha Jo bahut hi mushkil tha
Pravikasur Ka hathiyar uska talwar
aaj ke liye itna hi

Fabulous update

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Excellent update

Fabulous update

Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update dost

Thanks brother
Aise hi sath bane rahiye

 

[sorbobhuk]

Brother
Suraksha kavach E2 par hai aur talwar E3 par and E1 E2 &E3 par Jane Ka gupt Marg sirf D1 D2 & D3 ko pata hai and filhal ke liye story me gupt dwar Ka koi charcha Nahi hai isliye Raja and Ram ek dusre se Nahi mil sakte hai

Mujhe laga tha isiliye bola tha

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Mujhe laga tha isiliye bola tha

Ok brother

 

[Tharcius30]

Thino alag alag character rahenge ya ek honge???