Fantasy R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

[Naik]

Shaandaar lajawab update dost

 

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE 11​

Aaj Raja Ram aur Raj 15 sal ke ho gaye the
vahin dusri taraf aaj karo sal bad D1 D2 & D3 Hindi ek dusre se sampark kiya tha

D1-tum donon ko us ansh ke bare mein kuchh pata Chala

D2-ha hamen pata chal chuka hai uska naam RAM hai

D3-mujhe bhi pata chal chuka hai uska naam Raja hai

D2/D3-aur tumhen kuchh pata Chala

D3-abhi tak to Nahin lekin ab vah samay bahut najdeek aa raha hai jiski humne sathiyon se pratiksha Ki Hai

D2/D3-han hamen pata hai aur iske liye to humne uski shiksha bhi shuru kar di aur ab tak khatm bhi ho chuki hai

D1-kya uski shiksha Puri khatm ho chuki hai

D2/D3-han Uski shiksha Puri khatm ho chuki hai
Bus ab uski shiksha Ka 1 adhyay hi Baki Hai

D1-yah to bahut acchi baat hai mujhe bhi intezar hai use ansh ka Jo is Lok mein Hai

D2-Mai to use Pravikasur ka suraksha kavach jalane ke liye bhejne wala hu
D3-main bhi use Pravikasur ka hathiyar laane bhejne wala hu

D1-Nahin abhi use uske liye bhejne ki jarurat Nahin Hai
sabse pahle uski shiksha Puri karo Uske bad UN donon ko bhejna
tab tak mujhe bhi teesra ansh mil jaega

D2/D3-han tum Sahi kah rahe ho hamen sabse pahle use Ki shiksha Puri Karni hogi .

In E2&E3
Raja aur Ram Apne kamre mein baith kar aage Ki planning kar rahe the tabhi vahan per kuchh student aate Hai

E2
S1-Ram tumhe Guruji ne bulaya hai
Ram -tum chalo mein aata hoon

E3
s¹-Raja tumhen Guruji ne bulaya hai
Raja -theek hai main thodi der mein aata hu

E2 &E3
Ram aur Raja D2& D3 ke kamre mein jaate Hain

Ram/Raja-pranam Guruji
D2/D3-sada chiranjivi raho

R-aapane mujhe kyon bulaya

D-main tumhen jo lane ke liye bola tha uski abhi koi jarurat Nahin Hai

R-kyon Guruji abhi hamare shikshak theek se Puri Nahin hui kya

D-tum logon Ne Apni shiksha Puri Kar li Hai

lekin abhi ek aur adhyay Hai Jo tumhen padhana Baki Hai kyunki use sapphire per tumhen iski jarurat hogi

R-aisi kaun si shiksha Hai Guruji
D-duniya ki Sare chakravyuh Ki shiksha
R-lekin hamen shiksha ki kya jarurat
D-maine bola na abhi Nahin Hai lekin bhavishya mein hogi
Aur iis shiksha ke bad tumhari pariksha bhi hogi tumhen chakravyuh dwar ko paar karna hoga
Uske bad hi tum apne Safar par ja sakte ho

R-jaisi aapki ichcha

Iske baad Raja aur Ram Apne kamre mein jakar aage Ki shiksha ki taiyari karne lagte Hain

(Yahan R ka prayog raja aur Ram donon ke liye hua Hai aur D ka prayog D2 & D3 ke liye hua Hai)

Chaliye ab chalte Hain use jagah jahan ham bahut samay se nahin Gaya tridevo ke pass

Brahma-abhi main rakshak ki shaktiyon ko mahsus Kiya.

Vishnu-Aisa lag raha hai ki Kisi Ne use Kai bhagon mein baat diya ho

Shankar- Kai bhago main Nahin teen bhagon mein usne baat diya hai use
aur bahut jald Raksha ke Shakti usi ke sath Apne astitva mein aaegi aur jab tak rakshak ki shaktiyan ek Nahin Hoti tab tak ham use Tak Nahin pahunch sakte hain aur
agar vah ek ho gai tab ham uska kuchh Nahin bigaad sakte

Chaliye ise yahi chhore ham chalte Hain Earth per

In E1

Aaj Raj ke 12th ki pariksha ka result aaya tha
Raj ne Puri state me first aaya hai
Wahi vahi pravik second
Sath hi Divya aur Nisha third position par (sorry friend by mistake yahan Tak update ka size 26 ho Gaya)

Chaliye ise yahi chhore chalte Hain ham Raj ke pass

Iis waqt Raj Kisi Soch mein Gum hai
Flashback
7 sal pahle
Aaj Raj10 sal ka hua tha aur subah Se Hi use Apne andar bahut shaktiyan mahsus ho rahi thi Jaise uska sharir majboot ho gaya ho aur bahut sari energy uske andar aa gayi ho

Raj bachpan Se Hi pratidin dhyan mein baitha tha aur aaj usse Apne andar bahut sari shaktiyan mahsus ho rahi thi
Dhire dheere use apni bahut si shaktiyon ke bare mein pata chalne laga lekin vahi is baat ko Kisi ko Nahin batata tha
Raj jab 15 sal ka hua tab usne Apne Sare shaktiyon ko control kar liya usne Apne pure chakra ko bhi jagrit kar liye aur yah sab usne bahut hi Kari mehnat Se Ki aur iska pata usne Kisi ko Nahin chalne Diya
Aur ab tak hua can shaktiyon ko acche se control karna Sikh chuka tha
Flashback end
Aaj ke liye ye itna hi
Next update mein ham dekhte hain ki Raja aur Ram Ki shiksha Puri hoti hai aur chakravyuh dwara me uske sath kya kya hota hai
Saath hi yah bhi janenge ke rakshak chi energy ball kab aapane astitva mein aata Hai

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai....... To daivik ne apne ansh se baat ki hai or faysala hua abhi ke liye pariksha rook diya geya or chakrayudh ka shiksha dene lagi or udhar raj akele hi apni shaktiyo ke baare me jana or us par control karna bhi shijh geya or dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...
Waiting for next update

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Shaandaar lajawab update dost

Thanks brother

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai....... To daivik ne apne ansh se baat ki hai or faysala hua abhi ke liye pariksha rook diya geya or chakrayudh ka shiksha dene lagi or udhar raj akele hi apni shaktiyo ke baare me jana or us par control karna bhi shijh geya or dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...
Waiting for next update

Abhi to sayad ek ya do update Tak chakravyuh ki hi baat hogi
uske baad ek ya do update me Raj ka jikr Hoga Uske baad rakshak ke energy ball ki entry

Otherwise
Thank you so much bhai.update padhne k liye aur mere sath judne k liye.aise hi sath bane rahana

koee quession ya sugession ho story ko le kar k to jarur share karna mujhe bahot achha laega.keep supporting

 

[sorbobhuk]

Abhi to sayad ek ya do update Tak chakravyuh ki hi baat hogi
uske baad ek ya do update me Raj ka jikr Hoga Uske baad rakshak ke energy ball ki entry

Otherwise
Thank you so much bhai.update padhne k liye aur mere sath judne k liye.aise hi sath bane rahana

koee quession ya sugession ho story ko le kar k to jarur share karna mujhe bahot achha laega.keep supporting

Baad me bataunga bhai

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Baad me bataunga bhai

Ok brother

My next story

Fantasy - EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA (COMPLETE)

Good morning all members of this site Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha 20-25 day hospital me Raha Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se 14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri burn(jalne Ka) case tha ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya But ab Mai recover...

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[ashish_1982_in]

UPDATE 10
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In E2
Is samay Ram Apne kamre mein baitha kuchh Soch Raha tha use yah bataya gaya tha ki Uske pita ne use isliye Nahin apna hai kyunki Uske janm ke samay hi uski Mata ki mrityu ho gai lekin aaj Tak Kisi Ne use Uske pita ke bare mein kuchh Nahin bataya tha
Thodi der mein ram ko Apne shiksha kya pahla din yad Aaya jab vah 5 sal Ka tha

Flashback​

10 year ago

Aaj Ram Ki shiksha ka pahla din tha aur D2 Ne sabse pahle Ram ki sharirik shiksha shuru ki .
D2 Ne 3 varsh ki aayu Se Hi ram ko dhyan lagana shuru karva diya tha Ram pratidin subah subah 3 baje se 5 baje tak dhyan lagata tha
Is samay D2 aur Ram ek bahut hi bade ground me hai
D2-Ram aaj tum iis ground ke 50 chakkar lagao

Ram- guru ji yah to bahut hi Vishal ground hai main kaise iska 50 chakkar laga paunga

D2-tumhare andar bahut Shakti hai Ram tum agar usse theek se pahchan gaya talk to me ek second mein iis ground ke 50 chakkar laga sakte ho

Ram-jaisi aapki ichcha Guruji
Iske bad Ram ne use ground ki chakkar lagana shuru Kiya
Shuruaat me ram ko thodi pareshani hun lekin 5 chakkar lagane ke baad use Apne andar bahut hi Shakti ka mahsus hua aur dekhte hi dekhte usne ground ke chakkar laga liya
Kuchh din tak ram ko sirf yahi karna para

1 saptah baad D2 ne Ram ko lohe ke kapde pehn vae jiska vajan 80 kg tha aur FIR chakkar lagwana shuru Kiya 1 month Tak yahi chalta Raha dhire dhire Ram ki speed aur tej ho gai

1 month baad D2 ne ram ki martial art aur bahut Tarah Ki training Suru ki aise hi 5 saal beet Gaye

Jab Ram 10 saal ka hua tab D2 ne uski magic ki study shuru ki
Ram bachpan Se Hi dhyan lagata tha jis Karan Uske chakra jagrit hone lage the
Kuchh kuchh dinon ke andar Ram ke Sare chakra jagrit ho Gaye iske bad ram ko Apne andar bahut sari shaktiyon Ka pata Chala Jaise
Gayab hona
Kisi dusre vyakti ko dekh kar uski sari jankari ko copy karna
Clone banana
Usmein aise hi bahut sari jadui shaktiyan thi
Lekin D2 ko pata tha ki yah kuchh bhi Nahin hai
15 sal ki umra tak Ram ne apne bahut sari shaktiyon ko control karna Sikh liya lekin fir bhi use Apne andar aur shaktiyan mahsus ho rahi thi

flashback end
Ram Soch Raha tha ki vah suraksha kavach ko kis Tarah prapt karega vahan kis Tarah Ki sankat hogi kyunki usse D2 ne bataya tha ki jahan vah ja raha hai vahan bal ke sath sath buddhi ka bhi prayog karna padega

Dusri taraf
In E3

Jab Raja ko hosh Aaya to uske samne aaina tha jis Karan Raja bahut pareshan ho Gaya kyunki uska chehra Puri Tarah Se badal chuka tha 10 sal ki hone ke bavjud vah 15 sal Ka dikh raha tha
Raja(mind)-yah mere sath kaise ho gaya tabhi use yad aata hai ki uska accident hua tha
Jab uska dhyan aas pass gaya usne vahan per Apne Mata pita ko dekhna
Papa-tum jindagi aur maut ke bich lar rahe the tab Maine tumhari ma ke kahne per tumhara ilaaj Kiya
Raja-lekin papa Mera chehra kaise change ho gaya
papa-vah kuchh chemical reaction ki vajah Se hua hai

Iske baad Papa Ne Raja ko yah bataya ki uske andar kuchh shaktiyan aa gai hai sahi tarah se chalane ke liye liye ek vidyalay mein jana padega

Papa ne apni taraf Se pata kar liya tha ki kahani mulya Se bacchon Ki shiksha hoti hai

1 saptah baad Mai D3 ke samne tha
D3-mujhe pata Chala Ki kis Tarah iske andar shaktiyan aai aap pareshan mat hoiye ISI yahan per uchit shiksha milenge
papa-mujhe aap se yahi prathna hai ki ya buri sangat me Na pad jaaye
D3-aisa kuchh bhi Nahin hoga

Kuchh Dino Baad D3 Ne meri shiksha prarambh kar de sabse pahle unhone mujhe dhyan karna sikhaya Uske bad dheere dheere main apni shaktiyon per control panel laga main 5 element per control pa liya mujhe apni andar aur Shakti mahsus ho rahi hai

Ek din jab D3 Ne Mera bhavishya Dekha tab use pata chal gaya ki mai hi daivik ka vah bhag Hu Jo E3 par hai
Aaj main Sahi tarike se 15 sal Ka ho gaya Hu
Aur aaj meri shiksha Puri ho gai
Lekin aaj gurudev Ne mujhe ek aisa hathiyar laane ke liye Kaha Jo bahut hi mushkil tha
Pravikasur Ka hathiyar uska talwar
aaj ke liye itna hi

nice update bhai maza aa gya

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

nice update bhai maza aa gya

Kya baat hai Ashish Bhai bahut Dino Baad iis story per dikhai de rahe hai aapko dekhkar bahut achchha laga

Otherwise
Next update tomorrow

My new story

Fantasy - EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA (COMPLETE)

Good morning all members of this site Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha 20-25 day hospital me Raha Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se 14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri burn(jalne Ka) case tha ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya But ab Mai recover...

xforum.live

 

[ashish_1982_in]

UPDATE 11​

Aaj Raja Ram aur Raj 15 sal ke ho gaye the
vahin dusri taraf aaj karo sal bad D1 D2 & D3 Hindi ek dusre se sampark kiya tha

D1-tum donon ko us ansh ke bare mein kuchh pata Chala

D2-ha hamen pata chal chuka hai uska naam RAM hai

D3-mujhe bhi pata chal chuka hai uska naam Raja hai

D2/D3-aur tumhen kuchh pata Chala

D3-abhi tak to Nahin lekin ab vah samay bahut najdeek aa raha hai jiski humne sathiyon se pratiksha Ki Hai

D2/D3-han hamen pata hai aur iske liye to humne uski shiksha bhi shuru kar di aur ab tak khatm bhi ho chuki hai

D1-kya uski shiksha Puri khatm ho chuki hai

D2/D3-han Uski shiksha Puri khatm ho chuki hai
Bus ab uski shiksha Ka 1 adhyay hi Baki Hai

D1-yah to bahut acchi baat hai mujhe bhi intezar hai use ansh ka Jo is Lok mein Hai

D2-Mai to use Pravikasur ka suraksha kavach jalane ke liye bhejne wala hu
D3-main bhi use Pravikasur ka hathiyar laane bhejne wala hu

D1-Nahin abhi use uske liye bhejne ki jarurat Nahin Hai
sabse pahle uski shiksha Puri karo Uske bad UN donon ko bhejna
tab tak mujhe bhi teesra ansh mil jaega

D2/D3-han tum Sahi kah rahe ho hamen sabse pahle use Ki shiksha Puri Karni hogi .

In E2&E3
Raja aur Ram Apne kamre mein baith kar aage Ki planning kar rahe the tabhi vahan per kuchh student aate Hai

E2
S1-Ram tumhe Guruji ne bulaya hai
Ram -tum chalo mein aata hoon

E3
s¹-Raja tumhen Guruji ne bulaya hai
Raja -theek hai main thodi der mein aata hu

E2 &E3
Ram aur Raja D2& D3 ke kamre mein jaate Hain

Ram/Raja-pranam Guruji
D2/D3-sada chiranjivi raho

R-aapane mujhe kyon bulaya

D-main tumhen jo lane ke liye bola tha uski abhi koi jarurat Nahin Hai

R-kyon Guruji abhi hamare shikshak theek se Puri Nahin hui kya

D-tum logon Ne Apni shiksha Puri Kar li Hai

lekin abhi ek aur adhyay Hai Jo tumhen padhana Baki Hai kyunki use sapphire per tumhen iski jarurat hogi

R-aisi kaun si shiksha Hai Guruji
D-duniya ki Sare chakravyuh Ki shiksha
R-lekin hamen shiksha ki kya jarurat
D-maine bola na abhi Nahin Hai lekin bhavishya mein hogi
Aur iis shiksha ke bad tumhari pariksha bhi hogi tumhen chakravyuh dwar ko paar karna hoga
Uske bad hi tum apne Safar par ja sakte ho

R-jaisi aapki ichcha

Iske baad Raja aur Ram Apne kamre mein jakar aage Ki shiksha ki taiyari karne lagte Hain

(Yahan R ka prayog raja aur Ram donon ke liye hua Hai aur D ka prayog D2 & D3 ke liye hua Hai)

Chaliye ab chalte Hain use jagah jahan ham bahut samay se nahin Gaya tridevo ke pass

Brahma-abhi main rakshak ki shaktiyon ko mahsus Kiya.

Vishnu-Aisa lag raha hai ki Kisi Ne use Kai bhagon mein baat diya ho

Shankar- Kai bhago main Nahin teen bhagon mein usne baat diya hai use
aur bahut jald Raksha ke Shakti usi ke sath Apne astitva mein aaegi aur jab tak rakshak ki shaktiyan ek Nahin Hoti tab tak ham use Tak Nahin pahunch sakte hain aur
agar vah ek ho gai tab ham uska kuchh Nahin bigaad sakte

Chaliye ise yahi chhore ham chalte Hain Earth per

In E1

Aaj Raj ke 12th ki pariksha ka result aaya tha
Raj ne Puri state me first aaya hai
Wahi vahi pravik second
Sath hi Divya aur Nisha third position par (sorry friend by mistake yahan Tak update ka size 26 ho Gaya)

Chaliye ise yahi chhore chalte Hain ham Raj ke pass

Iis waqt Raj Kisi Soch mein Gum hai
Flashback
7 sal pahle
Aaj Raj10 sal ka hua tha aur subah Se Hi use Apne andar bahut shaktiyan mahsus ho rahi thi Jaise uska sharir majboot ho gaya ho aur bahut sari energy uske andar aa gayi ho

Raj bachpan Se Hi pratidin dhyan mein baitha tha aur aaj usse Apne andar bahut sari shaktiyan mahsus ho rahi thi
Dhire dheere use apni bahut si shaktiyon ke bare mein pata chalne laga lekin vahi is baat ko Kisi ko Nahin batata tha
Raj jab 15 sal ka hua tab usne Apne Sare shaktiyon ko control kar liya usne Apne pure chakra ko bhi jagrit kar liye aur yah sab usne bahut hi Kari mehnat Se Ki aur iska pata usne Kisi ko Nahin chalne Diya
Aur ab tak hua can shaktiyon ko acche se control karna Sikh chuka tha
Flashback end
Aaj ke liye ye itna hi
Next update mein ham dekhte hain ki Raja aur Ram Ki shiksha Puri hoti hai aur chakravyuh dwara me uske sath kya kya hota hai
Saath hi yah bhi janenge ke rakshak chi energy ball kab aapane astitva mein aata Hai

Super update bhai maza aa gya

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Readers story typing me Kabhi Kabhi Kuch word mistake ho jata hai
Jo Mai sudhar kar deta hu
lekin Kabhi Kabhi Nahi sudhar pata hu
sorry for readers problem