Fantasy R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

ye tha kya isse achha to aap update dete nahi writer ji

Mai aapki. Problem ko samajhta hun mashish bhai aur aapki baat bhi Sahi hai
Lekin mein koi professional writer Nahin hu
And story mein ab adventure scene aane Wale hai

Jaisa Ki iss update me bataya Raja aur Ram do alag alag jagah pahunch gaye ek to registan aur ek samundar
donon jagah ki kahaniyan alag alag
kiredar alag alag

Aur abhi Tak mujhe iska koi idea Nahin hai ki UN donon jagho ke bare me Mai kaya likhu and meri kuch personal problem bhi chal rahi hai jis Karan mein story per dhyan Nahin De pa raha hu

Aur mere hisab se ek do update tak Raja aur Ram ka koi jikr nahin hoga kyunki vah jahan gaye hain uska idea mere pass Nahin Hai

Otherwise
Ab main story per sahi se kam kar raha hai
and ek ya do update ke baad update ka size sahi ho jaega

Sorry for readers problem

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Fantasy - EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA (COMPLETE)

Good morning all members of this site Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha 20-25 day hospital me Raha Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se 14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri burn(jalne Ka) case tha ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya But ab Mai recover...

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[DAIVIK-RAJ]

ye tha kya isse achha to aap update dete nahi writer ji

Agar aapke pass koi idea ho to bataen

 

[mashish]

Agar aapke pass koi idea ho to bataen

kya matlab hai aapka

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Mai aapki. Problem ko samajhta hun mashish bhai aur aapki baat bhi Sahi hai
Lekin mein koi professional writer Nahin hu
And story mein ab adventure scene aane Wale hai

Jaisa Ki iss update me bataya Raja aur Ram do alag alag jagah pahunch gaye ek to registan aur ek samundar
donon jagah ki kahaniyan alag alag
kiredar alag alag

Aur abhi Tak mujhe iska koi idea Nahin hai ki UN donon jagho ke bare me Mai kaya likhu and meri kuch personal problem bhi chal rahi hai jis Karan mein story per dhyan Nahin De pa raha hu

Aur mere hisab se ek do update tak Raja aur Ram ka koi jikr nahin hoga kyunki vah jahan gaye hain uska idea mere pass Nahin Hai

Otherwise
Ab main story per sahi se kam kar raha hai
and ek ya do update ke baad update ka size sahi ho jaega

Sorry for readers problem

My other story

Fantasy - EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA (COMPLETE)

Good morning all members of this site Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha 20-25 day hospital me Raha Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se 14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri burn(jalne Ka) case tha ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya But ab Mai recover...

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Matlb upr Dekh le mashish bhai

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Mai aapki. Problem ko samajhta hun mashish bhai aur aapki baat bhi Sahi hai
Lekin mein koi professional writer Nahin hu
And story mein ab adventure scene aane Wale hai

Jaisa Ki iss update me bataya Raja aur Ram do alag alag jagah pahunch gaye ek to registan aur ek samundar
donon jagah ki kahaniyan alag alag
kiredar alag alag

Aur abhi Tak mujhe iska koi idea Nahin hai ki UN donon jagho ke bare me Mai kaya likhu and meri kuch personal problem bhi chal rahi hai jis Karan mein story per dhyan Nahin De pa raha hu

Aur mere hisab se ek do update tak Raja aur Ram ka koi jikr nahin hoga kyunki vah jahan gaye hain uska idea mere pass Nahin Hai

Otherwise
Ab main story per sahi se kam kar raha hai
and ek ya do update ke baad update ka size sahi ho jaega

Sorry for readers problem

My other story

Fantasy - EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA (COMPLETE)

Good morning all members of this site Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha 20-25 day hospital me Raha Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se 14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri burn(jalne Ka) case tha ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya But ab Mai recover...

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Matlb upr Dekh le mashish bhai

 

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE 12
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IN DIMENSION

D1&D2 main Raja aur Ram to chakravyuh Ki shiksha start kar di thi
Vahan dusri taraf Raj ke ghar birthday ki taiyariyan shuru ho gai thi
Abhi ise yahi chhore ham Raja aur Ram ki taraf chalte Hain

Aaj pure 2 salo ke bad Raja aur Ram ne chakravyuh ko paar karne ka sari shiksha sampurn kar li

Raja/Ram-Guruji humne to apni sari shiksha sampurn kar li ab hamen chakravyuh dwar ki pariksha fal karne hogi

D1&D2-Nahin usmein abhi thoda samay hai tumhen abhi vo Sakti lane jana hai jo maine tumhe do sal pahle Kahi thi

Raja/Ram-ji gurudev main samajh gaya lekin shuruaat kahan se karu yah samajh Nahin aata Hai

Abhi Raja aur Ram ne itna hi Kaha tha ki D1&D2 naya vahan per ek travel dwar khol diya

D1&D2-tum ismein chale jao tum use jagah per pahunch jaaoge jahan se tumhen shuruaat karni hai

Raja &Ram-jaisi aapki ichcha Guruji

Iske bad Raja aur Ram us dwar se chale jaate hai

Jaise hi vah dono dwar ko paar Karke ve donon alag alag alag jagho per pahunch jaate Hain

(Aap logon ko main bata dunga Ki D2 &Ram E2 me hai and D3 &Raja E3 me)

RAM is waqt ek registan me tha vahi Raja ice sea (barf Ka samundar) ke upper.

Manas gufa

Chaliye ab chalte Hain dharti ke manas gufa me
Yah vahi jagah hai jahan guru ma 1&2 me apne aap ko panch tatva me milaya tha. Pradhan aacharya ab tak unka intezar kar rahe the

Abhi pardhan aacharya Yog mein baithe hue the tabhi vahan per ek sadhu aata hai

S-Pradhan aacharya aaj in donon talwar mein kuchh halchal hui Hai

Ji han doston yah vahi samay hai jis din Raj ka janm hua tha

Pradhan aacharya-yah to bahut Khushi Ki baat hai
Aap aap bahut jald ve donon wapas aane Wale Hain
Ab main apne jivan se mukt ho sakta

Ek vo din tha aur ek aaj Ka din
Present time mein to lagbhag vah dwar dikhai padhne laga tha

Abhi ise yahi chhor hai chalte Hain patal Lok Ki Tarah

Vaise to yahan per Kabhi koi utsav Nahin hota Hai lekin aaj pure patal Lok ko sajaya Gaya tha kyunki aaj Pravikasur ke us ansh ki shiksha khatm hone Wali thi vah Apne vastavi ke roop mein aane wala tha

E1
Vahi dusri taraf dharti log per Raj, pravik Divya aut Nisha Apne result Ki Khushi me party kar rahe the.
Lekin in Charon ka man asanth tha
ab inke man me kya chal raha hai yah to Ram hi jaane
Otherwise ham next update me Jaan lenge

Aaj ke liye itna hi

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai....... Raja or ram ko bhej diya pravikasur ka kabajh or talwar lane.....dekhte hai kya hone wale hai samne.......or raj ke sath ky kya hota hai dekhte hai...... Waiting for next update

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai....... Raja or ram ko bhej diya pravikasur ka kabajh or talwar lane.....dekhte hai kya hone wale hai samne.......or raj ke sath ky kya hota hai dekhte hai...... Waiting for next update

Raja Ram and Raj ke bare mein aage jante rahenge
Otherwise next update tomorrow.
Aur mai koshish karunga ki next update ka size medium aur usse jayada ho

Me other story

Fantasy - EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA (COMPLETE)

Good morning all members of this site Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha 20-25 day hospital me Raha Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se 14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri burn(jalne Ka) case tha ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya But ab Mai recover...

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[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Next update very soon

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

UPDATE 13
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Ab tak aapne Dekha ki RAM ek registan mein pahunch gaya vahi Raja Ice sea ke upar

Ab aage
Abhi kuchh update Tak story me Raja aur Ram ka hi zikr hoga

Is waqt Ram ek registan mein pahunch gaya tha usne Apne Charon taraf Dekha use rate ke alava aur kuchh najar Nahin aa raha tha use is registan ka kahin ant Nahin dikh raha tha usne apni speed se apni jagah se Charo taraf 200-300 kilometre Tak daur lagai aur ant mein FIR usi jagah per Aaya lekin mujhse 200 se 300 kilometre ke range mein kuchh bhi dikhai nahin diya shivay ret ke ram ko kuchh bhi samajh Nahin a raha tha ki ab vah kya Kare
Ram bahut thak gaya tha jis Karan usne Apne jal tatva Ki sahayata se apne liye Pani ki vyavastha ki aur apne pyas ko bujhaya Uske baad ram ne bahut socha ki use kya karna chahiye. Achanak use ek baat Ka khyal Aaya.
Ram (mind)-main jab Se yahan aaya hun yahan per hawa Nahin bah rahi hai lekin Maine suna tha ki registan me dhul ki tufan bahut chalti Hai.
Is baat Ka khyal aate Hi Ram ne apne vayu tatva ki sahayata se vahan kar ek chhote se bavander ko banaya aur dekhte hi dekhte vahan per tufan aa Gaya. Ram ne apne magic ki sahayata se apne aap ko ek suraksha kavach me rakh liya jis Karan Ram par tufan ka asar Nahin hua
Jab tufan khatam hui tab achanak Ram ka balance pigra aur vah niche girne laga

Dusri taraf Raja ek aise jagah per khara tha Jo barf Ka Bana hua tha use Charo taraf sirf barf hi barf dikhai de raha tha
Raja khud pareshan ho Gaya ki vah kis jagah aa Gaya hai

Thodi der ke baad Raja ne vahan se aage badhkar kuchh dekhne ki suchi lekin Jaise hi vah aage badhane ko Hoga usne mahsus Kiya ki uska pair barf me Puri Tarah jama hua Hai vah ek bhi kadam aage Nahin badha pa raha tha aaram is baat se aur pareshan hua. Thodi der sochne ke bad use ek idea Aaya usne Apne agni tatva ki sahayata se apnr pair ke pass ka barf ko pighlane laga lekin barf pighalne ka naam Nahin le raha tha. Ram ne apni energy ko aur badhai tab jakar vah barf pighla lekin Jaise Uske pair ke niche Ka barf pighla Raja upar ki taraf jaane laga aur thodi der hai ek jagah per gir Gaya

Ab ham wapas chalte Hain Ram ke pass
RAM is waqt ek ghane jungle mein tha chaliye aapko batate Hain Ram yahan kaise pahunche
Yah jungle E2 main sabse gupt sthan tha is jungle ko logon ki najar Se bachane ke liye iske upar ret ka deewar banaya Gaya tha Yani ki logo najar mein registan. Lekin Jaise hi vahan per tufan Aaya ret apni jagah se hat gaya aur Ram vha se niche jameen per gir Gaya Arthat jungle mein gir Gaya

Dusri taraf Raja ek waqt ek chhote se gaon me tha chaliye yah bhi Jaan lijiye ki Raja yahan kaise pahuncha Raja is waqt jis gaon mein tha uske upar baraf ki deewar thi aur Raja Ka pair barf ke deewar mein fasa hua tha Raja Nahin Hai ek bar upar Nahin Dekha Nahin to use gaon dikhai deta Jaise hi pair ke pass ka barf pighla Raja us gaon mein as gira

Abhi ke liye itna hi
Aaj sham Tak shayad ek aur update aaega

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

UPDATE 13
​

Ab tak aapne Dekha ki RAM ek registan mein pahunch gaya vahi Raja Ice sea ke upar

Ab aage
Abhi kuchh update Tak story me Raja aur Ram ka hi zikr hoga

Is waqt Ram ek registan mein pahunch gaya tha usne Apne Charon taraf Dekha use rate ke alava aur kuchh najar Nahin aa raha tha use is registan ka kahin ant Nahin dikh raha tha usne apni speed se apni jagah se Charo taraf 200-300 kilometre Tak daur lagai aur ant mein FIR usi jagah per Aaya lekin mujhse 200 se 300 kilometre ke range mein kuchh bhi dikhai nahin diya shivay ret ke ram ko kuchh bhi samajh Nahin a raha tha ki ab vah kya Kare
Ram bahut thak gaya tha jis Karan usne Apne jal tatva Ki sahayata se apne liye Pani ki vyavastha ki aur apne pyas ko bujhaya Uske baad ram ne bahut socha ki use kya karna chahiye. Achanak use ek baat Ka khyal Aaya.
Ram (mind)-main jab Se yahan aaya hun yahan per hawa Nahin bah rahi hai lekin Maine suna tha ki registan me dhul ki tufan bahut chalti Hai.
Is baat Ka khyal aate Hi Ram ne apne vayu tatva ki sahayata se vahan kar ek chhote se bavander ko banaya aur dekhte hi dekhte vahan per tufan aa Gaya. Ram ne apne magic ki sahayata se apne aap ko ek suraksha kavach me rakh liya jis Karan Ram par tufan ka asar Nahin hua
Jab tufan khatam hui tab achanak Ram ka balance pigra aur vah niche girne laga

Dusri taraf Raja ek aise jagah per khara tha Jo barf Ka Bana hua tha use Charo taraf sirf barf hi barf dikhai de raha tha
Raja khud pareshan ho Gaya ki vah kis jagah aa Gaya hai

Thodi der ke baad Raja ne vahan se aage badhkar kuchh dekhne ki suchi lekin Jaise hi vah aage badhane ko Hoga usne mahsus Kiya ki uska pair barf me Puri Tarah jama hua Hai vah ek bhi kadam aage Nahin badha pa raha tha aaram is baat se aur pareshan hua. Thodi der sochne ke bad use ek idea Aaya usne Apne agni tatva ki sahayata se apnr pair ke pass ka barf ko pighlane laga lekin barf pighalne ka naam Nahin le raha tha. Ram ne apni energy ko aur badhai tab jakar vah barf pighla lekin Jaise Uske pair ke niche Ka barf pighla Raja upar ki taraf jaane laga aur thodi der hai ek jagah per gir Gaya

Ab ham wapas chalte Hain Ram ke pass
RAM is waqt ek ghane jungle mein tha chaliye aapko batate Hain Ram yahan kaise pahunche
Yah jungle E2 main sabse gupt sthan tha is jungle ko logon ki najar Se bachane ke liye iske upar ret ka deewar banaya Gaya tha Yani ki logo najar mein registan. Lekin Jaise hi vahan per tufan Aaya ret apni jagah se hat gaya aur Ram vha se niche jameen per gir Gaya Arthat jungle mein gir Gaya

Dusri taraf Raja ek waqt ek chhote se gaon me tha chaliye yah bhi Jaan lijiye ki Raja yahan kaise pahuncha Raja is waqt jis gaon mein tha uske upar baraf ki deewar thi aur Raja Ka pair barf ke deewar mein fasa hua tha Raja Nahin Hai ek bar upar Nahin Dekha Nahin to use gaon dikhai deta Jaise hi pair ke pass ka barf pighla Raja us gaon mein as gira

Abhi ke liye itna hi
Aaj sham Tak shayad ek aur update aaega

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