Fantasy R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

[sorbobhuk]

Ok brother next update se koshish karunga update Ka size badhane ka

Update jab badha hoga tab update padhne maja aata hai nhi update padhne start kiya or update khatam ho geyi to story me interest nhi rehta bhai....isiliye ager story pe reader chahte hai to update ka size kam se kam 1500 - 2000 word ka dena hoga....or bhi badha hoga to or bhi achha hoga.....saand pe 8000 ka bhi update diya tha anand bhai

 

[Naik]

UPDATE 13
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Ab tak aapne Dekha ki RAM ek registan mein pahunch gaya vahi Raja Ice sea ke upar

Ab aage
Abhi kuchh update Tak story me Raja aur Ram ka hi zikr hoga

Is waqt Ram ek registan mein pahunch gaya tha usne Apne Charon taraf Dekha use rate ke alava aur kuchh najar Nahin aa raha tha use is registan ka kahin ant Nahin dikh raha tha usne apni speed se apni jagah se Charo taraf 200-300 kilometre Tak daur lagai aur ant mein FIR usi jagah per Aaya lekin mujhse 200 se 300 kilometre ke range mein kuchh bhi dikhai nahin diya shivay ret ke ram ko kuchh bhi samajh Nahin a raha tha ki ab vah kya Kare
Ram bahut thak gaya tha jis Karan usne Apne jal tatva Ki sahayata se apne liye Pani ki vyavastha ki aur apne pyas ko bujhaya Uske baad ram ne bahut socha ki use kya karna chahiye. Achanak use ek baat Ka khyal Aaya.
Ram (mind)-main jab Se yahan aaya hun yahan per hawa Nahin bah rahi hai lekin Maine suna tha ki registan me dhul ki tufan bahut chalti Hai.
Is baat Ka khyal aate Hi Ram ne apne vayu tatva ki sahayata se vahan kar ek chhote se bavander ko banaya aur dekhte hi dekhte vahan per tufan aa Gaya. Ram ne apne magic ki sahayata se apne aap ko ek suraksha kavach me rakh liya jis Karan Ram par tufan ka asar Nahin hua
Jab tufan khatam hui tab achanak Ram ka balance pigra aur vah niche girne laga

Dusri taraf Raja ek aise jagah per khara tha Jo barf Ka Bana hua tha use Charo taraf sirf barf hi barf dikhai de raha tha
Raja khud pareshan ho Gaya ki vah kis jagah aa Gaya hai

Thodi der ke baad Raja ne vahan se aage badhkar kuchh dekhne ki suchi lekin Jaise hi vah aage badhane ko Hoga usne mahsus Kiya ki uska pair barf me Puri Tarah jama hua Hai vah ek bhi kadam aage Nahin badha pa raha tha aaram is baat se aur pareshan hua. Thodi der sochne ke bad use ek idea Aaya usne Apne agni tatva ki sahayata se apnr pair ke pass ka barf ko pighlane laga lekin barf pighalne ka naam Nahin le raha tha. Ram ne apni energy ko aur badhai tab jakar vah barf pighla lekin Jaise Uske pair ke niche Ka barf pighla Raja upar ki taraf jaane laga aur thodi der hai ek jagah per gir Gaya

Ab ham wapas chalte Hain Ram ke pass
RAM is waqt ek ghane jungle mein tha chaliye aapko batate Hain Ram yahan kaise pahunche
Yah jungle E2 main sabse gupt sthan tha is jungle ko logon ki najar Se bachane ke liye iske upar ret ka deewar banaya Gaya tha Yani ki logo najar mein registan. Lekin Jaise hi vahan per tufan Aaya ret apni jagah se hat gaya aur Ram vha se niche jameen per gir Gaya Arthat jungle mein gir Gaya

Dusri taraf Raja ek waqt ek chhote se gaon me tha chaliye yah bhi Jaan lijiye ki Raja yahan kaise pahuncha Raja is waqt jis gaon mein tha uske upar baraf ki deewar thi aur Raja Ka pair barf ke deewar mein fasa hua tha Raja Nahin Hai ek bar upar Nahin Dekha Nahin to use gaon dikhai deta Jaise hi pair ke pass ka barf pighla Raja us gaon mein as gira

Abhi ke liye itna hi
Aaj sham Tak shayad ek aur update aaega

Excellent update brother keep posting
Thanks for lovely update

 

[Naik]

UPDATE 14​

Ab tak aapane Dekha
Ram ek jungle mein pahunch chuka hai aur Raja ek chhote se gaon mein
Ab aage

Raja iis waqt jis gaon me use gaon mein Kisi bhi vyakti ka naam o nishan dikhai nahi de raha tha. Raja ne pure gaon aur uske Aas paas ke sare ilako ko dekh liya lekin usse wahan koi bhi najar Nahin Hai

Dusri taraf
Ram us registan se jungle mein Gira tha
Abhi Ram apne aap ko Puri Tarah sambhal bhi nahin paya tha ki use ek energy ball aa kar lagi jis Karan Ram thodi dur jakar Gira

Ram-mujh per kisne hamla Kiya himmat hai to samne aao

Tabhi vahan per ek Sher nikal kar Aaya

Sher-Maine hamla Kiya Hai black lion ne

Ram-lekin tune mujh per hamla kyon Kiya Maine tumhara kya bigada hai

B.L-to Mera kuchh bigad bhi Nahin sakte
lekin main koi risk Nahin le Sakta

Itna kah kar b.l ne Ram per energy ball se hamla Kar Diya aur Ram bhi uska samna Karne laga Ram ka ek bhi vaar b.l ko nuksan Nahin pahuncha raha tha

tabhi achanak b.l ne Ram per Apne sabse powerful energy se hamla Kiya jisse Ram piche ki or jaane laga tabhi vahan ek invisible gate aaya aur Ram us gate ke dusri taraf Chala Gaya aur vahan pahunchte hi behosh ho gaya

Chaliye ab Raja ki taraf chalte Hain

Abhi rajya jis gaon me tha use gaon ke hi ek Ghar me kuch log baithe the
per yah kya yah to baune log Hain abhi ise yahi chhore hum inki baaton Ki taraf chalte Hain
B1-sardar ab kab tak hame aisi jindagi jini padegi
B2-main to pareshan ho Gaya Hun roj roj is nuksan se
B3-hamen to sham ko bahar nikalne ki ijaajat nahin hai aur koi bahar nikalta hai to dusre din uska kuchh pata nahin chalta

Sardar-hamen iis Sankat nikalne vala bahut jald aaega koi to Hoga us tilism ko khatm kar sake
Abhi yah log baat kar hi rahe the ki vahan per koi aata Hai

B4-sardar gaon mein koi insan ghoom raha hai

Sardar-insan isse to hamen bahut khatra hai jao aur sabhi log usi insan ko pakad lo
Yah vahi samay tha jab Raja gaon me logon ko dhundh raha tha

Abhi Raja pure gaon ko ghoom kar baitha Hi tha ki use ek teer aakar lagi jis Karan Raja behosh ho Gaya

In earth

Kuchh dinon Se Divya aur Nisha ko ajeeb ajeeb Tarah ke sapne aa rahe the. Unhen kuchh dhundli si tasvir dikhai de rahi thi. jis Karan vah donon bahut pareshan thi

Ek din jab nisha me Divya ko Apne sapne ke bare mein bataya tab use pata Chala Ki Divya ko bhi aise hi sapne aate Hain jis Karan vah donon pareshan ho Gaye

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Agle update me dekhenge ki Raja aur ram ko jab hosh aata hai to kya hota Hai
Or Divya aur Nisha ke sapne ke bare mein

Superb very nice update brother

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Excellent update brother keep posting
Thanks for lovely update

Superb very nice update brother

Next update tomorrow

 

[sorbobhuk]

Next update tomorrow

Ok waiting for next update

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

UPDATE 16
(509 word)
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Ab tak aapane Dekha Ram Tiger me badal chuka hai vahi Raja Apne manjil ki taraf ek kadam chal chuka hai
Ab aage

W.L-ab tumhen use jungle ke bare me sari information mil chuki hai
Ek baat aur aur vahan koi bhi janwar Kisi dusre janwar Ko Nahin maarta Hai kyunki vahan Kisi Ko bhojan Ki avashyakta Nahin Hoti

Ram-To Bina bhojan kiye ve mar Nahin jaate honge

W.L-yahi to use jungle Ki khasiyat Hai vahan per sabhi ko sun light se energy milati hai

Ram-Mera us B.L se ek bar samna ho chuka hai meri Kisi bhi energy Ka use per kuchh asar Nahin hota to main use haraunga kaise.

W.L-tumhara hai kya use per Kisi Ke bhi energy Ka asar Nahin hoga kyunki ki use suraksha kavach ki kuchh shaktiyan uske andar hai jis Karan is jungle Ke andar koi bhi energy uska kuchh Nahin bigad sakti

Ram-tab main use parajit kaise karunga kaise use marunga.

W.L-iska bhi ek rasta Hai aur vah Hai Vijay khanjar

Ram-yah vijay khanjar kya hai aur mujhe Kahan milega

W.L-Vijay khanjar jiska istemal say(100) sal mein ek bar hota Hai. yah koi mamuli khanjar Nahin Hai. Iske dwara Kiya hua Hai vaar Kabhi bekar Nahin jata

Yah baat kah kar W.L ram ko ek khanjar deta hai aur kahta Hai

W.L-tumhen iis khanjar ke dwara B.L ke sharir ke us bhag per prahar karna jahan per Uske pran hai arthat B.L ke nabhi mein
Tumhen is khanjar ka prayog karne ke liye sirf ek hi avsar milega agar tum us samay nakam ho Gaye Tab tum vah suraksha kavach Kabhi prapt Nahin kar sakte

Ram-lekin vah suraksha kavach Hai Kahan

W.L-B.L ke marne ke bad vah suraksha kavach khud tumhare andar sama Jayega

Chaliye ab ham chalte Hain Raja ki taraf

Raja Jo is waqt ek gaon mein tha jahan per use bandi banaya Gaya phir sardar Uske charanon me gir Gaye aur ab khud use tilism ke pass le ja rahe hain.

Abhi hum yah Jaan Lete hai sardar Raja be Raja Ko pahchana kaise

Small flashback
Baat tab ki hai jab daivik ne Pravikasur ko parajit kiya tha. Pravikasur ke harne ke bad Jab uska talwar E3 par Gira tab talwar ke Charo taraf ek tilism ban gaya aur us tilism ke andar Jo kuchh bhi Aaya vah wahi par fash Gaya jisme yah gaon bhi padta tha ab is gaon me Na koi janm le sakta tha na koi mar sakta tha shuru mein yahan Ke logon ke liye ya vardan sabit hua lekin dekhte hi dekhte unke upar tilism ka kahar parne laga. Vahi jab Daivik ko is baat ka aabhash hua to vah Sardar Ke sapne me Aaya

Daivik-Sardar jab kalyug aayega tab main yahan aaunga aur iis tilism ko khatm kar
Tum sab ko mukt karunga
Sardar-hamen sada aap ki pratiksha rahegi
Flashback end

Iis waqt Raja gaon walo aur sardar ke sath... gaon Ke ek sunsan bhag main pahunch gaya

Aaj ke liye itna hi

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

UPDATE 16
(509 word)
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Ab tak aapane Dekha Ram Tiger me badal chuka hai vahi Raja Apne manjil ki taraf ek kadam chal chuka hai
Ab aage

W.L-ab tumhen use jungle ke bare me sari information mil chuki hai
Ek baat aur aur vahan koi bhi janwar Kisi dusre janwar Ko Nahin maarta Hai kyunki vahan Kisi Ko bhojan Ki avashyakta Nahin Hoti

Ram-To Bina bhojan kiye ve mar Nahin jaate honge

W.L-yahi to use jungle Ki khasiyat Hai vahan per sabhi ko sun light se energy milati hai

Ram-Mera us B.L se ek bar samna ho chuka hai meri Kisi bhi energy Ka use per kuchh asar Nahin hota to main use haraunga kaise.

W.L-tumhara hai kya use per Kisi Ke bhi energy Ka asar Nahin hoga kyunki ki use suraksha kavach ki kuchh shaktiyan uske andar hai jis Karan is jungle Ke andar koi bhi energy uska kuchh Nahin bigad sakti

Ram-tab main use parajit kaise karunga kaise use marunga.

W.L-iska bhi ek rasta Hai aur vah Hai Vijay khanjar

Ram-yah vijay khanjar kya hai aur mujhe Kahan milega

W.L-Vijay khanjar jiska istemal say(100) sal mein ek bar hota Hai. yah koi mamuli khanjar Nahin Hai. Iske dwara Kiya hua Hai vaar Kabhi bekar Nahin jata

Yah baat kah kar W.L ram ko ek khanjar deta hai aur kahta Hai

W.L-tumhen iis khanjar ke dwara B.L ke sharir ke us bhag per prahar karna jahan per Uske pran hai arthat B.L ke nabhi mein
Tumhen is khanjar ka prayog karne ke liye sirf ek hi avsar milega agar tum us samay nakam ho Gaye Tab tum vah suraksha kavach Kabhi prapt Nahin kar sakte

Ram-lekin vah suraksha kavach Hai Kahan

W.L-B.L ke marne ke bad vah suraksha kavach khud tumhare andar sama Jayega

Chaliye ab ham chalte Hain Raja ki taraf

Raja Jo is waqt ek gaon mein tha jahan per use bandi banaya Gaya phir sardar Uske charanon me gir Gaye aur ab khud use tilism ke pass le ja rahe hain.

Abhi hum yah Jaan Lete hai sardar Raja be Raja Ko pahchana kaise

Small flashback
Baat tab ki hai jab daivik ne Pravikasur ko parajit kiya tha. Pravikasur ke harne ke bad Jab uska talwar E3 par Gira tab talwar ke Charo taraf ek tilism ban gaya aur us tilism ke andar Jo kuchh bhi Aaya vah wahi par fash Gaya jisme yah gaon bhi padta tha ab is gaon me Na koi janm le sakta tha na koi mar sakta tha shuru mein yahan Ke logon ke liye ya vardan sabit hua lekin dekhte hi dekhte unke upar tilism ka kahar parne laga. Vahi jab Daivik ko is baat ka aabhash hua to vah Sardar Ke sapne me Aaya

Daivik-Sardar jab kalyug aayega tab main yahan aaunga aur iis tilism ko khatm kar
Tum sab ko mukt karunga
Sardar-hamen sada aap ki pratiksha rahegi
Flashback end

Iis waqt Raja gaon walo aur sardar ke sath... gaon Ke ek sunsan bhag main pahunch gaya

Aaj ke liye itna hi

Brother update Ka size bada Karna Ka time Nahi mila
But kal Sunday hai isliye
Next update Ka size confirm 2000-2100 word Ka Hoga

Otherwise abhi Jo hai so yahi hai

 

[Vk248517]

Brother update Ka size bada Karna Ka time Nahi mila
But kal Sunday hai isliye
Next update Ka size confirm 2000-2100 word Ka Hoga

Otherwise abhi Jo hai so yahi hai

Nice update bro.

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Good by

 

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