Fantasy R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai...... Raja ram dono pouch geye apni manjil pe.....ram sher se ladkar kaha chala geya dekhte hai.... Or raj bhi ek gaon me tha or sardar ji ne raja ko lane ki liye kaha or usko teer se behosh karke leke geya hai....or yaha dekhte hai raja kaise tilism ko kaise todte hai....
Or divya or nisha ko konsi tasvir aarahi hai.....dekhte hai....
Waiting for next update

Abhi Apne second story per update Diya Hu

Fantasy - EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA (COMPLETE)

Good morning all members of this site Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha 20-25 day hospital me Raha Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se 14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri burn(jalne Ka) case tha ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya But ab Mai recover...

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Iis story per update aane me time lagega

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

UPDATE-15​

Ab tak aapane padha ram ek invisible gate ke dusri taraf jakar behosh hota Hai vahi Raja Ko sardar ke log behosh kar karte hai

Ab aage
Raja ki taraf

Raja Ko jab hosh aata hai to vah Apne aap ko Kisi jagah per bandha hua pata hai

Raja-kaun hai samne aao
B1-ham tumhare samne hi hai niche Dekho
Ram jaise hi niche dekhta hai uska man bahut jor se hasne ka karta hai kyunki ki use Jin logon Ne pakda tha unka size Raja ke hath ke barabar bhi nahin the

Raja-mujhe yahan per kyon pakadkar laya gaya hai
B1-pahle tum yah batao ki tum yahan kyon Aaye ho
Raja-main yahan per Apne guru ji ke kahane per ek talwar Lene aaya hun
Raja ne Jaise hi yah baat kahin vahan per Jaise shor hi hone laga
Tabhi vaha per sardar aate hai
Sardar-to tum yahan per talwar Lene Aaya ho
Tumhe pata bhi hai use Pana kitna kathin hai
Raja-to aap Uske bare mein jante Hai aur piche se nahin samne aakar baat kijiye

Jaise hi sardar Raja ke samne aakar usko Ko dekhte hain sardar Raja ke charanon mein gir jaate Hain

Raja-yah aap kya kar rahe hain khud Hi mujhe bandhte Hain aur khud Hi itna aadar dete Hain
Sardar- mujhe nahin pata tha ki vah aap hain Nahin to main apne mukti data ko kaise kasht pahuncha sakta tha
Raja-yah kaisi bate kar rahe hai mujhe kuchh samajh Nahin a raha hai aap saaf saaf kahiye aapko kya kahana hai
Sardar-ham Kai yugo se yahan per fanse hue hai aur aap ki pratiksha kar rahe hain
Raja-aap meri pariksha kyon kar rahe hai
Sardar-aap yaha per talwar ke liye Aaye hai na
Raja-ha kya aapko pata hai main use Tak kaise pahunch sakta hu
Sardar-talwar tak pahunchne ke liye aapko use tilism ko khatam karna padega
Raja-kaisha tilism
Sardar-vahi tilism jise paar karne per aapko vah talwar milega
Raja-yah tilism Kaha hai
Sardar-Uske liye aapko raat Ka intjar karna padega

Vahi dusri taraf
Ram
Ram ko Jaise hi hosh aata hai Uske samne ek White Lion baitha hua tha

Ram-Kaun ho tum aur mujhe yahan kyon laye ho
W.L - Mai hu achchai ka rakshak White Lion
Tum mujhe yah batao ki tum yahan kyon Aaye ho
Ram-mera naam RAM hai aur main yahan Apne guru ji ke kahane per yahan suraksha kavach ke liye Aaya hu
W.L - to tum bhi us suraksha kavach ke liye Aaye ho
Ram-kya mujhse bhi pahle koi aa chuka hai mujhe aisa lagta hai aapko suraksha kavach ke bare mein kuchh pata hai.
W.l-ha mujhe pata hai vah kahan hai
Ram-aap mujhe bataiye Mai suraksha kavach Tak kaise pahuche sakta hun

W.L ne ek mantra Bola aur vaha per thermometer jaisa Kuch as Gaya

W.L-tum iske andar apni energy dalo agar voh 200+ pahunch gaya to Mai tumhe suraksha kavach Tak pahunchne Ka rasta bata dunga

Ram ne us thermometer Jaise yantra mein apni energy dala and
Pahle 100 phir 120 phir 140 aise hi karte karte 207 per aakar uska indicator Ruk Gaya

W.L-bahut achcha ab Mai tuhe us suraksha kavach ke bare me batata Hu
W.L-tum Jaise hi us black lion ko maroge wo suraksha kavach khud b khud tumhare pass as Jayega kayoki wo suraksha kavach Ka rakshak hai
Ram-mai us Tak pahchunga kaise
W.L-tumhe Uske liye ek janwar ban Kar us jangal me Jana parega saal me ek baar jangal me pratiyogita hoti hai Jo ek mahine baad hai tum usi pratiyogita me B.L se lar Kar use maar sakte ho

Iske baad W.L ne Ram ko ek mantra ke dwara tiger me badal Diya aur phir ram per ek jal ko chhirka jisse ram ko jangal ke bare me sab kuchh pata Chal gaya

Aaj ke liye itna hi

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

UPDATE-15​

Ab tak aapane padha ram ek invisible gate ke dusri taraf jakar behosh hota Hai vahi Raja Ko sardar ke log behosh kar karte hai

Ab aage
Raja ki taraf

Raja Ko jab hosh aata hai to vah Apne aap ko Kisi jagah per bandha hua pata hai

Raja-kaun hai samne aao
B1-ham tumhare samne hi hai niche Dekho
Ram jaise hi niche dekhta hai uska man bahut jor se hasne ka karta hai kyunki ki use Jin logon Ne pakda tha unka size Raja ke hath ke barabar bhi nahin the

Raja-mujhe yahan per kyon pakadkar laya gaya hai
B1-pahle tum yah batao ki tum yahan kyon Aaye ho
Raja-main yahan per Apne guru ji ke kahane per ek talwar Lene aaya hun
Raja ne Jaise hi yah baat kahin vahan per Jaise shor hi hone laga
Tabhi vaha per sardar aate hai
Sardar-to tum yahan per talwar Lene Aaya ho
Tumhe pata bhi hai use Pana kitna kathin hai
Raja-to aap Uske bare mein jante Hai aur piche se nahin samne aakar baat kijiye

Jaise hi sardar Raja ke samne aakar usko Ko dekhte hain sardar Raja ke charanon mein gir jaate Hain

Raja-yah aap kya kar rahe hain khud Hi mujhe bandhte Hain aur khud Hi itna aadar dete Hain
Sardar- mujhe nahin pata tha ki vah aap hain Nahin to main apne mukti data ko kaise kasht pahuncha sakta tha
Raja-yah kaisi bate kar rahe hai mujhe kuchh samajh Nahin a raha hai aap saaf saaf kahiye aapko kya kahana hai
Sardar-ham Kai yugo se yahan per fanse hue hai aur aap ki pratiksha kar rahe hain
Raja-aap meri pariksha kyon kar rahe hai
Sardar-aap yaha per talwar ke liye Aaye hai na
Raja-ha kya aapko pata hai main use Tak kaise pahunch sakta hu
Sardar-talwar tak pahunchne ke liye aapko use tilism ko khatam karna padega
Raja-kaisha tilism
Sardar-vahi tilism jise paar karne per aapko vah talwar milega
Raja-yah tilism Kaha hai
Sardar-Uske liye aapko raat Ka intjar karna padega

Vahi dusri taraf
Ram
Ram ko Jaise hi hosh aata hai Uske samne ek White Lion baitha hua tha

Ram-Kaun ho tum aur mujhe yahan kyon laye ho
W.L - Mai hu achchai ka rakshak White Lion
Tum mujhe yah batao ki tum yahan kyon Aaye ho
Ram-mera naam RAM hai aur main yahan Apne guru ji ke kahane per yahan suraksha kavach ke liye Aaya hu
W.L - to tum bhi us suraksha kavach ke liye Aaye ho
Ram-kya mujhse bhi pahle koi aa chuka hai mujhe aisa lagta hai aapko suraksha kavach ke bare mein kuchh pata hai.
W.l-ha mujhe pata hai vah kahan hai
Ram-aap mujhe bataiye Mai suraksha kavach Tak kaise pahuche sakta hun

W.L ne ek mantra Bola aur vaha per thermometer jaisa Kuch as Gaya

W.L-tum iske andar apni energy dalo agar voh 200+ pahunch gaya to Mai tumhe suraksha kavach Tak pahunchne Ka rasta bata dunga

Ram ne us thermometer Jaise yantra mein apni energy dala and
Pahle 100 phir 120 phir 140 aise hi karte karte 207 per aakar uska indicator Ruk Gaya

W.L-bahut achcha ab Mai tuhe us suraksha kavach ke bare me batata Hu
W.L-tum Jaise hi us black lion ko maroge wo suraksha kavach khud b khud tumhare pass as Jayega kayoki wo suraksha kavach Ka rakshak hai
Ram-mai us Tak pahchunga kaise
W.L-tumhe Uske liye ek janwar ban Kar us jangal me Jana parega saal me ek baar jangal me pratiyogita hoti hai Jo ek mahine baad hai tum usi pratiyogita me B.L se lar Kar use maar sakte ho

Iske baad W.L ne Ram ko ek mantra ke dwara tiger me badal Diya aur phir ram per ek jal ko chhirka jisse ram ko jangal ke bare me sab kuchh pata Chal gaya

Aaj ke liye itna hi

Next update posted

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

UPDATE-15​

Ab tak aapane padha ram ek invisible gate ke dusri taraf jakar behosh hota Hai vahi Raja Ko sardar ke log behosh kar karte hai

Ab aage
Raja ki taraf

Raja Ko jab hosh aata hai to vah Apne aap ko Kisi jagah per bandha hua pata hai

Raja-kaun hai samne aao
B1-ham tumhare samne hi hai niche Dekho
Ram jaise hi niche dekhta hai uska man bahut jor se hasne ka karta hai kyunki ki use Jin logon Ne pakda tha unka size Raja ke hath ke barabar bhi nahin the

Raja-mujhe yahan per kyon pakadkar laya gaya hai
B1-pahle tum yah batao ki tum yahan kyon Aaye ho
Raja-main yahan per Apne guru ji ke kahane per ek talwar Lene aaya hun
Raja ne Jaise hi yah baat kahin vahan per Jaise shor hi hone laga
Tabhi vaha per sardar aate hai
Sardar-to tum yahan per talwar Lene Aaya ho
Tumhe pata bhi hai use Pana kitna kathin hai
Raja-to aap Uske bare mein jante Hai aur piche se nahin samne aakar baat kijiye

Jaise hi sardar Raja ke samne aakar usko Ko dekhte hain sardar Raja ke charanon mein gir jaate Hain

Raja-yah aap kya kar rahe hain khud Hi mujhe bandhte Hain aur khud Hi itna aadar dete Hain
Sardar- mujhe nahin pata tha ki vah aap hain Nahin to main apne mukti data ko kaise kasht pahuncha sakta tha
Raja-yah kaisi bate kar rahe hai mujhe kuchh samajh Nahin a raha hai aap saaf saaf kahiye aapko kya kahana hai
Sardar-ham Kai yugo se yahan per fanse hue hai aur aap ki pratiksha kar rahe hain
Raja-aap meri pariksha kyon kar rahe hai
Sardar-aap yaha per talwar ke liye Aaye hai na
Raja-ha kya aapko pata hai main use Tak kaise pahunch sakta hu
Sardar-talwar tak pahunchne ke liye aapko use tilism ko khatam karna padega
Raja-kaisha tilism
Sardar-vahi tilism jise paar karne per aapko vah talwar milega
Raja-yah tilism Kaha hai
Sardar-Uske liye aapko raat Ka intjar karna padega

Vahi dusri taraf
Ram
Ram ko Jaise hi hosh aata hai Uske samne ek White Lion baitha hua tha

Ram-Kaun ho tum aur mujhe yahan kyon laye ho
W.L - Mai hu achchai ka rakshak White Lion
Tum mujhe yah batao ki tum yahan kyon Aaye ho
Ram-mera naam RAM hai aur main yahan Apne guru ji ke kahane per yahan suraksha kavach ke liye Aaya hu
W.L - to tum bhi us suraksha kavach ke liye Aaye ho
Ram-kya mujhse bhi pahle koi aa chuka hai mujhe aisa lagta hai aapko suraksha kavach ke bare mein kuchh pata hai.
W.l-ha mujhe pata hai vah kahan hai
Ram-aap mujhe bataiye Mai suraksha kavach Tak kaise pahuche sakta hun

W.L ne ek mantra Bola aur vaha per thermometer jaisa Kuch as Gaya

W.L-tum iske andar apni energy dalo agar voh 200+ pahunch gaya to Mai tumhe suraksha kavach Tak pahunchne Ka rasta bata dunga

Ram ne us thermometer Jaise yantra mein apni energy dala and
Pahle 100 phir 120 phir 140 aise hi karte karte 207 per aakar uska indicator Ruk Gaya

W.L-bahut achcha ab Mai tuhe us suraksha kavach ke bare me batata Hu
W.L-tum Jaise hi us black lion ko maroge wo suraksha kavach khud b khud tumhare pass as Jayega kayoki wo suraksha kavach Ka rakshak hai
Ram-mai us Tak pahchunga kaise
W.L-tumhe Uske liye ek janwar ban Kar us jangal me Jana parega saal me ek baar jangal me pratiyogita hoti hai Jo ek mahine baad hai tum usi pratiyogita me B.L se lar Kar use maar sakte ho

Iske baad W.L ne Ram ko ek mantra ke dwara tiger me badal Diya aur phir ram per ek jal ko chhirka jisse ram ko jangal ke bare me sab kuchh pata Chal gaya

Aaj ke liye itna hi

Update 15

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

kaya baat hai Bhai log meri is story per 167 post me se 137 post Mera hi hai

Agar kishi ko meri writing skill se koi problem hai to mujhe bata de Mai use change Karne ki koshish karunga

2-3 update se response milna ekdam hi Kam ho Gaya story me Kuch problem hai to readers share kar sakte hain

Otherwise
Mai story ko 200 update Tak le Ka Sakta hu 150 update Tak bhi and agar aisa hi hal Raha to 50-60 update me hi story end Kar dunga

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

kaya baat hai Bhai log meri is story per 167 post me se 137 post Mera hi hai

Agar kishi ko meri writing skill se koi problem hai to mujhe bata de Mai use change Karne ki koshish karunga

2-3 update se response milna ekdam hi Kam ho Gaya story me Kuch problem hai to readers share kar sakte hain

Otherwise
Mai story ko 200 update Tak le Ka Sakta hu 150 update Tak bhi and agar aisa hi hal Raha to 50-60 update me hi story end Kar dunga

Ya aap log kahe to iis story ko band bhi Kar Sakta hi

Mai pahle bhi ek reader tha and phir se reader hi ban jaunga

Mujhe koi problem Nahi hogi
ek new account open karunga and bhul jaunga ki Mai koi story start ki thi

Sorry for readers problem

 

[Chinturocky]

Behtareen update,
BHAI story aise hi likhate raho reader bhi aajayenge aur comment bhi,
Abhi to bas sabhi kirdar ka parichay ho raha hai aur unka background banaya jaa raha hai. To bas thoda intzaar Karo.

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Behtareen update,
BHAI story aise hi likhate raho reader bhi aajayenge aur comment bhi,
Abhi to bas sabhi kirdar ka parichay ho raha hai aur unka background banaya jaa raha hai. To bas thoda intzaar Karo.

Next update tomorrow

 

[sorbobhuk]

Ya aap log kahe to iis story ko band bhi Kar Sakta hi

Mai pahle bhi ek reader tha and phir se reader hi ban jaunga

Mujhe koi problem Nahi hogi
ek new account open karunga and bhul jaunga ki Mai koi story start ki thi

Sorry for readers problem

Bhai mera mann thik nhi hai.......or isiliye review nhi diya....... Or mujhe lagta hai update ka size chota hone ka karan reader nhi padhte hai...or jo bhi padhte hai wo bhi nhi review deta hai.....aap update ka size badha dijiye... Mujhe lagta hai aisa karne se thread per review or reader dono badh jayenge....

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Bhai mera mann thik nhi hai.......or isiliye review nhi diya....... Or mujhe lagta hai update ka size chota hone ka karan reader nhi padhte hai...or jo bhi padhte hai wo bhi nhi review deta hai.....aap update ka size badha dijiye... Mujhe lagta hai aisa karne se thread per review or reader dono badh jayenge....

Ok brother next update se koshish karunga update Ka size badhane ka