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Fantasy R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

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Ab hum chalte Hain dharti se Kai Arab Prakash varsh dur ek aise grah ki taraf jahan jaane ka ek gupt Marg dharti per bhi hai
Aadi log yahi naam hai use grah ka arabo arab sal pahle jab dharti Ka Vikas hua tha Uske kuchh hundred sal bad dharti ke hi ek nivasi ne use grah ki sthapna ki thi. Iis baat usne Puri Tarah Se gupt rakha tha. Daivik yahi naam tha us ardhdev ya yun kahun ki ardhmanav Ka. Daivik ne Aadi log ki sthapna to kar de lekin vah is grah per aane Se pahle Hain Kisi Karan mrutyu ko prapt ho Gaya. Lekin uski atma Kisi Karan se aadi Lok mein pahunch gai aur vahin per intezar karne lagi ek aisi takat ka jiske dwara vah adilok mein jivan ki shuruaat kar sake.
Bhale hi daivik ki mrutyu ho gai lekin uski shaktiyon ka kuchh ans uski aatma ke sath Ali Lok mein aa Gaya.
Arabo arab sal bad jab daivik ko tridev aur God ki energy se ban rahe rakshak ke bare mein pata chali to usne rakshak ke janm Lene se pahle hi rakshak ki energy ko dharti log ke gupt Marg se apni Shaktio dwara aadi log mein le Aaya.

Vahi dusri taraf
Brahmand ka vah bhag jahan per aakar brahmand samapt hone lagti hai vahan ke ek grah jiska naam ant log hi. Ant Lok ek aisa grah hai jahan duniya ki sari buri shaktiyon ko tridev ya God ke dwara kaid karke rakha jata hai.
Arabo arab sal pahle jab ek bahut hi powerful Kali Shakti ka Malik duniya per Raj karna chahta tha uska naam tha Pravikasur. Tridevo ne Pravikasur ko khatm karne ke liye ek bahut hi ghatak hathiyar ka nirman Kiya jiska prayog sirf ek baar hi ho sakta tha lekin yah hathiyar shukracharya ke hath lag Gaya tab daivik ne Pravikasur ko ek bahut hi ghamasan yuddh mein hara kar ant Lok mein kaid Kar Diya.
Lekin Pravikasur ant Lok mein hi apna rajya sthapit kar liya aur vahan se nikalne ki Raha dekhne laga. Usne ant log ke sari buri shaktiyon ke swami ko ko apna gulam Bana liya.
Vahi jab daivik Ne rakshak ke energy ko prapt karne ke liye Apne power ka use Kiya tabhi ant log ki dharti hilne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte kuchh samay bad ant log ki suraksha kavach per ek bahut hi chhota hole ho Gaya
Ab yah hole kyon hua iske bare mein ham next update main janenge
Aap logon ke comment Ka intezar
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Update 2
Ab hum chalte Hain dharti se Kai Arab Prakash varsh dur ek aise grah ki taraf jahan jaane ka ek gupt Marg dharti per bhi hai
Aadi log yahi naam hai use grah ka arabo arab sal pahle jab dharti Ka Vikas hua tha Uske kuchh hundred sal bad dharti ke hi ek nivasi ne use grah ki sthapna ki thi. Iis baat usne Puri Tarah Se gupt rakha tha. Daivik yahi naam tha us ardhdev ya yun kahun ki ardhmanav Ka. Daivik ne Aadi log ki sthapna to kar de lekin vah is grah per aane Se pahle Hain Kisi Karan mrutyu ko prapt ho Gaya. Lekin uski atma Kisi Karan se aadi Lok mein pahunch gai aur vahin per intezar karne lagi ek aisi takat ka jiske dwara vah adilok mein jivan ki shuruaat kar sake.
Bhale hi daivik ki mrutyu ho gai lekin uski shaktiyon ka kuchh ans uski aatma ke sath Ali Lok mein aa Gaya.
Arabo arab sal bad jab daivik ko tridev aur God ki energy se ban rahe rakshak ke bare mein pata chali to usne rakshak ke janm Lene se pahle hi rakshak ki energy ko dharti log ke gupt Marg se apni Shaktio dwara aadi log mein le Aaya.

Vahi dusri taraf
Brahmand ka vah bhag jahan per aakar brahmand samapt hone lagti hai vahan ke ek grah jiska naam ant log hi. Ant Lok ek aisa grah hai jahan duniya ki sari buri shaktiyon ko tridev ya God ke dwara kaid karke rakha jata hai.
Arabo arab sal pahle jab ek bahut hi powerful Kali Shakti ka Malik duniya per Raj karna chahta tha uska naam tha Pravikasur. Tridevo ne Pravikasur ko khatm karne ke liye ek bahut hi ghatak hathiyar ka nirman Kiya jiska prayog sirf ek baar hi ho sakta tha lekin yah hathiyar shukracharya ke hath lag Gaya tab daivik ne Pravikasur ko ek bahut hi ghamasan yuddh mein hara kar ant Lok mein kaid Kar Diya.
Lekin Pravikasur ant Lok mein hi apna rajya sthapit kar liya aur vahan se nikalne ki Raha dekhne laga. Usne ant log ke sari buri shaktiyon ke swami ko ko apna gulam Bana liya.
Vahi jab daivik Ne rakshak ke energy ko prapt karne ke liye Apne power ka use Kiya tabhi ant log ki dharti hilne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte kuchh samay bad ant log ki suraksha kavach per ek bahut hi chhota hole ho Gaya
Ab yah hole kyon hua iske bare mein ham next update main janenge
Bahut hi sundar posts hai Bhai
 
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ashish_1982_in

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Update 2
Ab hum chalte Hain dharti se Kai Arab Prakash varsh dur ek aise grah ki taraf jahan jaane ka ek gupt Marg dharti per bhi hai
Aadi log yahi naam hai use grah ka arabo arab sal pahle jab dharti Ka Vikas hua tha Uske kuchh hundred sal bad dharti ke hi ek nivasi ne use grah ki sthapna ki thi. Iis baat usne Puri Tarah Se gupt rakha tha. Daivik yahi naam tha us ardhdev ya yun kahun ki ardhmanav Ka. Daivik ne Aadi log ki sthapna to kar de lekin vah is grah per aane Se pahle Hain Kisi Karan mrutyu ko prapt ho Gaya. Lekin uski atma Kisi Karan se aadi Lok mein pahunch gai aur vahin per intezar karne lagi ek aisi takat ka jiske dwara vah adilok mein jivan ki shuruaat kar sake.
Bhale hi daivik ki mrutyu ho gai lekin uski shaktiyon ka kuchh ans uski aatma ke sath Ali Lok mein aa Gaya.
Arabo arab sal bad jab daivik ko tridev aur God ki energy se ban rahe rakshak ke bare mein pata chali to usne rakshak ke janm Lene se pahle hi rakshak ki energy ko dharti log ke gupt Marg se apni Shaktio dwara aadi log mein le Aaya.

Vahi dusri taraf
Brahmand ka vah bhag jahan per aakar brahmand samapt hone lagti hai vahan ke ek grah jiska naam ant log hi. Ant Lok ek aisa grah hai jahan duniya ki sari buri shaktiyon ko tridev ya God ke dwara kaid karke rakha jata hai.
Arabo arab sal pahle jab ek bahut hi powerful Kali Shakti ka Malik duniya per Raj karna chahta tha uska naam tha Pravikasur. Tridevo ne Pravikasur ko khatm karne ke liye ek bahut hi ghatak hathiyar ka nirman Kiya jiska prayog sirf ek baar hi ho sakta tha lekin yah hathiyar shukracharya ke hath lag Gaya tab daivik ne Pravikasur ko ek bahut hi ghamasan yuddh mein hara kar ant Lok mein kaid Kar Diya.
Lekin Pravikasur ant Lok mein hi apna rajya sthapit kar liya aur vahan se nikalne ki Raha dekhne laga. Usne ant log ke sari buri shaktiyon ke swami ko ko apna gulam Bana liya.
Vahi jab daivik Ne rakshak ke energy ko prapt karne ke liye Apne power ka use Kiya tabhi ant log ki dharti hilne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte kuchh samay bad ant log ki suraksha kavach per ek bahut hi chhota hole ho Gaya
Ab yah hole kyon hua iske bare mein ham next update main janenge
Nice update bhai
 

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DAIVIK-RAJ

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Ab ham chalte hai Aadi lok jahan daivik ne rakshak ke urja ko laya tha

Rakshak ka urja achanak yahan per aane Se thoda pareshan ho Gaya use yah samajh mein a gaya tha Ki use yahan per Kisi Sakthi Sali urja ke Malik Ne hi laya hai

Rakshak energy-mujhe yahan par kisne laya samne aao
Abhi rakshak ki urja apni baat ko khatm bhi nahin Kar pai thi ki vahan per ek energy ball a Gaya

Rakshak ki urja ko us energy ball mein sirf positive energy hi dikhi jisse use pata chal gaya Ki use yahan per Kisi buri Shakti Ne Nahin laya hai.
Rakshak energy-aap kaun Hain aur mujhe yahan per laane ka kya Karan hai.
Energy ball - main tumhare sabhi sawalon ka jawab dunga lekin usse pahle main tumhe itihaas ki vah bate batane wala hun jise itihas ke panno se mita diya Gaya

Flashback
Hamare itihaas aur vedo main yah likha hua hai ki dharti per char yug Hain
Satyug
Tretayug
Dwaparyug
Kalyug
Lekin Kisi ko yah Nahin pata hai ki in sabhi yugo ke alava bhi ek aur yug tha sabse pahla yug
Aadiyug

Dharti ke nirman ke kuchh samay baad dharti swarg Se bhi Sundar ban gai thi tab dharti per bhagwan aakar rahane lage aur ve dharti ko hi apna nivas sthan bana liye. Dharti par vah Yug jab yahan bhagwan rahte the aadi yug ke naam se Jana jata tha
Kuch samay bad dharti per manav Ka Vikas shuru hua tab yahan bhagwan aur manav donon miljul kar rahte the bhagwan aur manav ke milane se jis nai prajati ka janm hua use ardhmanav ya ardhdev Kaha jata tha Dharti ka sabse pahla ardhmanav ya ardhdev daivik tha aur dusra pravik
Jab dharti per jansankhya badhane lagi tab daivik ne devtaon ki sahayata se dharti ke 2 dimension ka nirman Kiya jise earth2 aur earth3 kahan jata tha aur hamari dharti ko earth1 ke naam se bulaya jaane laga
Daivik ne e¹ e² aur e³ ke bich Kai dwar ke nirman kiye jisse log ek dimension se dusre dimension aur dharti per a sakte the.

Ek din achanak dharti aur dono dimension ko jodne vala darvaja gayab hone laga. Tab tridev ne sabhi devtaon ko dharti se wapas swarg Lok bula liya aur sabhi devtaon tatha insanon ki aadi yug ke sari yaddasht Mita diye itihas ke panno se aadi Yug ki sari baten hata Di gai. Lekin tridev ko yah Nahin pata tha kuchh aise bhi log Hain jinhen aadi yug ke bare mein abhi bhi kuchh kuchh yad hai aur ve hai
Shukracharya
Daivik aur
Pravik

Daivik ne Aadi lok ke sath 1 dimension se dusri dimension dharti per jaane ke liye ek gupt Marg ka nirman karvaya jiske bare mein Kisi ko Nahin pata tha tridev ko bhi nahin shivay daivik ke (kyunki daivik Ne ise khud banaya tha gupt roop se aur daivik ke marne ke baad is bare mein sirf daivik ke atma ko pata hai)
 
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DAIVIK-RAJ

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Ab ham chalte hai Aadi lok jahan daivik ne rakshak ke urja ko laya tha

Rakshak ka urja achanak yahan per aane Se thoda pareshan ho Gaya use yah samajh mein a gaya tha Ki use yahan per Kisi Sakthi Sali urja ke Malik Ne hi laya hai

Rakshak energy-mujhe yahan par kisne laya samne aao
Abhi rakshak ki urja apni baat ko khatm bhi nahin Kar pai thi ki vahan per ek energy ball a Gaya

Rakshak ki urja ko us energy ball mein sirf positive energy hi dikhi jisse use pata chal gaya Ki use yahan per Kisi buri Shakti Ne Nahin laya hai.
Rakshak energy-aap kaun Hain aur mujhe yahan per laane ka kya Karan hai.
Energy ball - main tumhare sabhi sawalon ka jawab dunga lekin usse pahle main tumhe itihaas ki vah bate batane wala hun jise itihas ke panno se mita diya Gaya

Flashback
Hamare itihaas aur vedo main yah likha hua hai ki dharti per char yug Hain
Satyug
Tretayug
Dwaparyug
Kalyug
Lekin Kisi ko yah Nahin pata hai ki in sabhi yugo ke alava bhi ek aur yug tha sabse pahla yug
Aadiyug

Dharti ke nirman ke kuchh samay baad dharti swarg Se bhi Sundar ban gai thi tab dharti per bhagwan aakar rahane lage aur ve dharti ko hi apna nivas sthan bana liye. Dharti par vah Yug jab yahan bhagwan rahte the aadi yug ke naam se Jana jata tha
Kuch samay bad dharti per manav Ka Vikas shuru hua tab yahan bhagwan aur manav donon miljul kar rahte the bhagwan aur manav ke milane se jis nai prajati ka janm hua use ardhmanav ya ardhdev Kaha jata tha Dharti ka sabse pahla ardhmanav ya ardhdev daivik tha aur dusra pravik
Jab dharti per jansankhya badhane lagi tab daivik ne devtaon ki sahayata se dharti ke 2 dimension ka nirman Kiya jise earth2 aur earth3 kahan jata tha aur hamari dharti ko earth1 ke naam se bulaya jaane laga
Daivik ne e¹ e² aur e³ ke bich Kai dwar ke nirman kiye jisse log ek dimension se dusre dimension aur dharti per a sakte the.

Ek din achanak dharti aur dono dimension ko jodne vala darvaja gayab hone laga. Tab tridev ne sabhi devtaon ko dharti se wapas swarg Lok bula liya aur sabhi devtaon tatha insanon ki aadi yug ke sari yaddasht Mita diye itihas ke panno se aadi Yug ki sari baten hata Di gai. Lekin tridev ko yah Nahin pata tha kuchh aise bhi log Hain jinhen aadi yug ke bare mein abhi bhi kuchh kuchh yad hai aur ve hai
Shukracharya
Daivik aur
Pravik

Daivik ne Aadi lok ke sath 1 dimension se dusri dimension dharti per jaane ke liye ek gupt Marg ka nirman karvaya jiske bare mein Kisi ko Nahin pata tha tridev ko bhi nahin shivay daivik ke (kyunki daivik Ne ise khud banaya tha gupt roop se aur daivik ke marne ke baad is bare mein sirf daivik ke atma ko pata hai)
Next update today evening
 

mashish

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Ab hum chalte Hain dharti se Kai Arab Prakash varsh dur ek aise grah ki taraf jahan jaane ka ek gupt Marg dharti per bhi hai
Aadi log yahi naam hai use grah ka arabo arab sal pahle jab dharti Ka Vikas hua tha Uske kuchh hundred sal bad dharti ke hi ek nivasi ne use grah ki sthapna ki thi. Iis baat usne Puri Tarah Se gupt rakha tha. Daivik yahi naam tha us ardhdev ya yun kahun ki ardhmanav Ka. Daivik ne Aadi log ki sthapna to kar de lekin vah is grah per aane Se pahle Hain Kisi Karan mrutyu ko prapt ho Gaya. Lekin uski atma Kisi Karan se aadi Lok mein pahunch gai aur vahin per intezar karne lagi ek aisi takat ka jiske dwara vah adilok mein jivan ki shuruaat kar sake.
Bhale hi daivik ki mrutyu ho gai lekin uski shaktiyon ka kuchh ans uski aatma ke sath Ali Lok mein aa Gaya.
Arabo arab sal bad jab daivik ko tridev aur God ki energy se ban rahe rakshak ke bare mein pata chali to usne rakshak ke janm Lene se pahle hi rakshak ki energy ko dharti log ke gupt Marg se apni Shaktio dwara aadi log mein le Aaya.

Vahi dusri taraf
Brahmand ka vah bhag jahan per aakar brahmand samapt hone lagti hai vahan ke ek grah jiska naam ant log hi. Ant Lok ek aisa grah hai jahan duniya ki sari buri shaktiyon ko tridev ya God ke dwara kaid karke rakha jata hai.
Arabo arab sal pahle jab ek bahut hi powerful Kali Shakti ka Malik duniya per Raj karna chahta tha uska naam tha Pravikasur. Tridevo ne Pravikasur ko khatm karne ke liye ek bahut hi ghatak hathiyar ka nirman Kiya jiska prayog sirf ek baar hi ho sakta tha lekin yah hathiyar shukracharya ke hath lag Gaya tab daivik ne Pravikasur ko ek bahut hi ghamasan yuddh mein hara kar ant Lok mein kaid Kar Diya.
Lekin Pravikasur ant Lok mein hi apna rajya sthapit kar liya aur vahan se nikalne ki Raha dekhne laga. Usne ant log ke sari buri shaktiyon ke swami ko ko apna gulam Bana liya.
Vahi jab daivik Ne rakshak ke energy ko prapt karne ke liye Apne power ka use Kiya tabhi ant log ki dharti hilne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte kuchh samay bad ant log ki suraksha kavach per ek bahut hi chhota hole ho Gaya
Ab yah hole kyon hua iske bare mein ham next update main janenge
nice update
 
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