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Fantasy R.R.Raj --- Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

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AK 24

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Update 2
Ab hum chalte Hain dharti se Kai Arab Prakash varsh dur ek aise grah ki taraf jahan jaane ka ek gupt Marg dharti per bhi hai
Aadi log yahi naam hai use grah ka arabo arab sal pahle jab dharti Ka Vikas hua tha Uske kuchh hundred sal bad dharti ke hi ek nivasi ne use grah ki sthapna ki thi. Iis baat usne Puri Tarah Se gupt rakha tha. Daivik yahi naam tha us ardhdev ya yun kahun ki ardhmanav Ka. Daivik ne Aadi log ki sthapna to kar de lekin vah is grah per aane Se pahle Hain Kisi Karan mrutyu ko prapt ho Gaya. Lekin uski atma Kisi Karan se aadi Lok mein pahunch gai aur vahin per intezar karne lagi ek aisi takat ka jiske dwara vah adilok mein jivan ki shuruaat kar sake.
Bhale hi daivik ki mrutyu ho gai lekin uski shaktiyon ka kuchh ans uski aatma ke sath Ali Lok mein aa Gaya.
Arabo arab sal bad jab daivik ko tridev aur God ki energy se ban rahe rakshak ke bare mein pata chali to usne rakshak ke janm Lene se pahle hi rakshak ki energy ko dharti log ke gupt Marg se apni Shaktio dwara aadi log mein le Aaya.

Vahi dusri taraf
Brahmand ka vah bhag jahan per aakar brahmand samapt hone lagti hai vahan ke ek grah jiska naam ant log hi. Ant Lok ek aisa grah hai jahan duniya ki sari buri shaktiyon ko tridev ya God ke dwara kaid karke rakha jata hai.
Arabo arab sal pahle jab ek bahut hi powerful Kali Shakti ka Malik duniya per Raj karna chahta tha uska naam tha Pravikasur. Tridevo ne Pravikasur ko khatm karne ke liye ek bahut hi ghatak hathiyar ka nirman Kiya jiska prayog sirf ek baar hi ho sakta tha lekin yah hathiyar shukracharya ke hath lag Gaya tab daivik ne Pravikasur ko ek bahut hi ghamasan yuddh mein hara kar ant Lok mein kaid Kar Diya.
Lekin Pravikasur ant Lok mein hi apna rajya sthapit kar liya aur vahan se nikalne ki Raha dekhne laga. Usne ant log ke sari buri shaktiyon ke swami ko ko apna gulam Bana liya.
Vahi jab daivik Ne rakshak ke energy ko prapt karne ke liye Apne power ka use Kiya tabhi ant log ki dharti hilne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte kuchh samay bad ant log ki suraksha kavach per ek bahut hi chhota hole ho Gaya
Ab yah hole kyon hua iske bare mein ham next update main janenge
Normal font aur size use karo bro
Aur acha dijhega aur asani hogi padhne mein
 

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Normal font aur size use karo bro
Aur acha dijhega aur asani hogi padhne mein
Ab normal font hi use kar raha hu brother. Normal size kitna hota hai yah mujhe pata nahin hai isliye ab se yahi size use hoga update padhne mein problem ho to bataiye.
Nyc updates
Alag concept hai maza aayega padhne mein
Keep writing
Btw
Brilliant update with awesome writting skills :applause: :claps:
Thank you so much bhai.update padhne k liye aur mere sath judne k liye.aise hi sath bane rahana
 

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Sal 2001
Mumbai ke hospital me ek sath 4 aise bacchon ka janm hone wala tha Jo duniya ko badalne ki kabiliyat rakhte Hain
Daivik
Pravik
Divya aur
Nisha
Aage ki sari update Isi front and size mein aaegi
 
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DAIVIK-RAJ

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Example
Update - unknown
Sal 2001
Mumbai ke hospital me ek sath 4 aise bacchon ka janm hone wala tha Jo duniya ko badalne ki kabiliyat rakhte Hain
Daivik
Pravik
Divya aur
Nisha
Aage ki sari update Isi front and size mein aaegi
Sorry devil brother agar aapko koi problem hoti hai agar main size change kiya to mujhe update dene mein problem ho jaayegi
Mai story ko mobile se upload karta hun jis Karan size 18 me mujhe update ko correct karne mein problem hoti hai

vaise bhi size 18 ho ya 26 mujhe Nahin Lagta Kisi order readers ko koi fark padega
 
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AK 24

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Sorry devil brother agar aapko koi problem hoti hai agar main size change kiya to mujhe update dene mein problem ho jaayegi
Mai story ko mobile se upload karta hun jis Karan size 18 me mujhe update ko correct karne mein problem hoti hai

vaise bhi size 18 ho ya 26 mujhe Nahin Lagta Kisi order readers ko koi fark padega
Don't be sorry men 18 font ke update bas normal lagte isliye bola aur koi baat nahi.

:peace:
 

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Update 5
Swarg Lok
Is samay devraj Indra bahut hi pareshan the unhen yah samajh Nahin a Raha ki tridev Ne devtaon Se asatya(jhooth) kyon Kaha
Devraj Indra ne Kisi adrishy Shakti rakshak ke energy ko gayab karte mahsus Kiya lekin unhen use Shakti ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin chal raha hai tha
Devraj Indra is bare mein pata karne ke liye Dev guru vrihaspati ke pass gai
D-Dev guru ko Mera pranam
D.G-ayushmanbhava devraj kahiye kyon aana hua
D-gurudev maine rakshak ki energy ko Kisi adrishya Shakti dwara gayab hote dekhen mujhe use Shakti ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin chal raha hai kya aap mera margdarshan karenge
D.G-Iis baat Se ascharyachakit to main bhi hun devraj mujhe bahut Shakti bahut hi jaani pahchani lagi lekin mujhe aisa lag raha hai mere mastishk us Shakti ki jankari MIT chuki hai
D-lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai Dev guru ham devtaon ki yaden kaun Mita Sakta
D.G-yahi to main pata karna chahta hun lekin filhal main aapko us Shakti ke bare me kuchh Nahin bata Sakta kyunki mujhe khud us pata nahin
Iske bad devgru vahan se chale jaate hai
Vahi Indra ko Apne sinhasan ka bhay lagne Lagta hai
Devraj iis baat ka pata lagane ke liye danav guru shukracharya ke pass jaate Hain

Patal Lok
Is samay shukracharya pareshan dikhai de rahe hain unhen yah samajh Nahin a raha hai ki itne saalo baad use Shakti ka prayog kyon hua
Abhi abhi shukracharya kuchh aur sochte ki tabhi vahan devraj prakat ho Gaya
Devraj-kya baat hai shukracharya aaj aap bahut pareshan dikhai de rahe hain.
Shukracharya -aap meri chinta chhoriye aur yah bataiye ki aaj devraj swayam merely pass kyon Aaye Hain
Devraj-shukracharya aaj main ek bahut hi adbhut Shakti dharti per mahsus kya aap Shakti ke bare me kuch jante Hain
Shukracharya-aap aisa mat kahiye devraj
Aap aisa kahiye Ki aaj ek adrishya Shakti aap devtaon ke hote hue bhi rakshak ki energy kochura le Gaye
devraj-aapko yah sab baat kaise pata hai.
Khair abhi main use Shakti ke bare mein Janne aaya hun aapko us Shakti ke bare mein kuchh pata hai
Shukracharya -kaise bhul sakta hun use Shakti ko main. Aapko bhi sabhi yad hota yadi Karoro varsh purv vah ghatna Nahin ghati hoti
Devraj-aap paheliyan mat banaiye mujhe us Shakti ke bare mein bataiye
Shukracharya-kya bataun main aapko kya Janna chahte Hain aap

*Yahi ki aapko yad Nahin pata Ki Aadi Yug mein devta dharti per Raha karte the
*Ya ye ki satyug se pahle aadi Yug tha
*Ya ye ki pahla ardhdev Daivik tha
*Ya ye ki pahla Kali shaktiyon ka Malik Pravikasur tha
*Ya ye ki kaise mai devta se danav guru ban gaya
*Ya ye ki tridev mein sabhi devtaon ki dharti Ki yaden Mita Di.

Aapko us Shakti ke bare mein Janna hai
Vah daivik ki Shakti hai
*Daivik brahmand ki aseem shaktiyon ka malik
*Daivik -God of universe
Daivik jiske aapko ne hi use chal Se mar Diya
Mai to yah Soch kar pareshan ho raha hun itne salon bad uski shaktiyon ka prayog kyon hua
Is bar use koi Nahin maar Sakta
Tridev bhi Nahin

Jaise Jaise shukracharya apni baten bata rahe the vaise vaise devraj ki chehre ke bhav hi badal rahe the itna bada jhataka unhe aaj Tak Kabhi Nahin laga
Fir bhi ve shukracharya Se puchte hai
Devraj- kya say dhundhne ka koi rasta Nahin hai
Shukracharya-use mai kya tridev bhi nahin dhund sakte.
Thodi der ke bad devraj swarg Lok aa jate hai

Dusri taraf tridev aapas mein baten kar rahe the
Brahma -aaj aakhir usne apni shaktiyon Ka prayog Kar liya ab bahut jald uska punar janam hone wala hai
Shiv -iis bar uski kahani alag tarike Se Hi likhi jayegi iis bar apni kahani vah khud likhega
Vishnu -sabse pahle hame ant lok Jana Hoga vahan ki suraksha kavach hansne Wali hai
Abhi ke liye itna hi
Next update mein ham jaanege
Rakshak ki energy ke sath kya hota hai
Andhakasura kaise ant lok se bahar jata hai
 
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