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Update 5
Swarg Lok
Is samay devraj Indra bahut hi pareshan the unhen yah samajh Nahin a Raha ki tridev Ne devtaon Se asatya(jhooth) kyon Kaha
Devraj Indra ne Kisi adrishy Shakti rakshak ke energy ko gayab karte mahsus Kiya lekin unhen use Shakti ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin chal raha hai tha
Devraj Indra is bare mein pata karne ke liye Dev guru vrihaspati ke pass gai
D-Dev guru ko Mera pranam
D.G-ayushmanbhava devraj kahiye kyon aana hua
D-gurudev maine rakshak ki energy ko Kisi adrishya Shakti dwara gayab hote dekhen mujhe use Shakti ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin chal raha hai kya aap mera margdarshan karenge
D.G-Iis baat Se ascharyachakit to main bhi hun devraj mujhe bahut Shakti bahut hi jaani pahchani lagi lekin mujhe aisa lag raha hai mere mastishk us Shakti ki jankari MIT chuki hai
D-lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai Dev guru ham devtaon ki yaden kaun Mita Sakta
D.G-yahi to main pata karna chahta hun lekin filhal main aapko us Shakti ke bare me kuchh Nahin bata Sakta kyunki mujhe khud us pata nahin
Iske bad devgru vahan se chale jaate hai
Vahi Indra ko Apne sinhasan ka bhay lagne Lagta hai
Devraj iis baat ka pata lagane ke liye danav guru shukracharya ke pass jaate Hain

Patal Lok
Is samay shukracharya pareshan dikhai de rahe hain unhen yah samajh Nahin a raha hai ki itne saalo baad use Shakti ka prayog kyon hua
Abhi abhi shukracharya kuchh aur sochte ki tabhi vahan devraj prakat ho Gaya
Devraj-kya baat hai shukracharya aaj aap bahut pareshan dikhai de rahe hain.
Shukracharya -aap meri chinta chhoriye aur yah bataiye ki aaj devraj swayam merely pass kyon Aaye Hain
Devraj-shukracharya aaj main ek bahut hi adbhut Shakti dharti per mahsus kya aap Shakti ke bare me kuch jante Hain
Shukracharya-aap aisa mat kahiye devraj
Aap aisa kahiye Ki aaj ek adrishya Shakti aap devtaon ke hote hue bhi rakshak ki energy kochura le Gaye
devraj-aapko yah sab baat kaise pata hai.
Khair abhi main use Shakti ke bare mein Janne aaya hun aapko us Shakti ke bare mein kuchh pata hai
Shukracharya -kaise bhul sakta hun use Shakti ko main. Aapko bhi sabhi yad hota yadi Karoro varsh purv vah ghatna Nahin ghati hoti
Devraj-aap paheliyan mat banaiye mujhe us Shakti ke bare mein bataiye
Shukracharya-kya bataun main aapko kya Janna chahte Hain aap

*Yahi ki aapko yad Nahin pata Ki Aadi Yug mein devta dharti per Raha karte the
*Ya ye ki satyug se pahle aadi Yug tha
*Ya ye ki pahla ardhdev Daivik tha
*Ya ye ki pahla Kali shaktiyon ka Malik Pravikasur tha
*Ya ye ki kaise mai devta se danav guru ban gaya
*Ya ye ki tridev mein sabhi devtaon ki dharti Ki yaden Mita Di.

Aapko us Shakti ke bare mein Janna hai
Vah daivik ki Shakti hai
Daivik brahmand ki aseem shaktiyon ka malik
Daivik jiske aapko ne hi use chal Se mar Diya
Mai to yah Soch kar pareshan ho raha hun itne salon bad uski shaktiyon ka prayog kyon hua
Is bar use koi Nahin maar Sakta
Tridev bhi Nahin

Jaise Jaise shukracharya apni baten bata rahe the vaise vaise devraj ki chehre ke bhav hi badal rahe the itna bada jhataka unhe aaj Tak Kabhi Nahin laga
Fir bhi ve shukracharya Se puchte hai
Devraj- kya say dhundhne ka koi rasta Nahin hai
Shukracharya-use mai kya tridev bhi nahin dhund sakte.
Thodi der ke bad devraj swarg Lok aa jate hai

Dusri taraf tridev aapas mein baten kar rahe the
Brahma -aaj aakhir usne apni shaktiyon Ka prayog Kar liya ab bahut jald uska punar janam hone wala hai
Shiv -iis bar uski kahani alag tarike Se Hi likhi jayegi iis bar apni kahani vah khud likhega
Vishnu -sabse pahle hame ant lok Jana Hoga vahan ki suraksha kavach hansne Wali hai
Abhi ke liye itna hi
Next update mein ham jaanege
Rakshak ki energy ke sath kya hota hai
Andhakasura kaise ant lok se bahar jata hai
Bahut jald hi kahani me main character R.R.Raj(Daivik), Pravik, Divya aur Nisha ki entry hone wali hai
 

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Update 5
Swarg Lok
Is samay devraj Indra bahut hi pareshan the unhen yah samajh Nahin a Raha ki tridev Ne devtaon Se asatya(jhooth) kyon Kaha
Devraj Indra ne Kisi adrishy Shakti rakshak ke energy ko gayab karte mahsus Kiya lekin unhen use Shakti ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin chal raha hai tha
Devraj Indra is bare mein pata karne ke liye Dev guru vrihaspati ke pass gai
D-Dev guru ko Mera pranam
D.G-ayushmanbhava devraj kahiye kyon aana hua
D-gurudev maine rakshak ki energy ko Kisi adrishya Shakti dwara gayab hote dekhen mujhe use Shakti ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin chal raha hai kya aap mera margdarshan karenge
D.G-Iis baat Se ascharyachakit to main bhi hun devraj mujhe bahut Shakti bahut hi jaani pahchani lagi lekin mujhe aisa lag raha hai mere mastishk us Shakti ki jankari MIT chuki hai
D-lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai Dev guru ham devtaon ki yaden kaun Mita Sakta
D.G-yahi to main pata karna chahta hun lekin filhal main aapko us Shakti ke bare me kuchh Nahin bata Sakta kyunki mujhe khud us pata nahin
Iske bad devgru vahan se chale jaate hai
Vahi Indra ko Apne sinhasan ka bhay lagne Lagta hai
Devraj iis baat ka pata lagane ke liye danav guru shukracharya ke pass jaate Hain

Patal Lok
Is samay shukracharya pareshan dikhai de rahe hain unhen yah samajh Nahin a raha hai ki itne saalo baad use Shakti ka prayog kyon hua
Abhi abhi shukracharya kuchh aur sochte ki tabhi vahan devraj prakat ho Gaya
Devraj-kya baat hai shukracharya aaj aap bahut pareshan dikhai de rahe hain.
Shukracharya -aap meri chinta chhoriye aur yah bataiye ki aaj devraj swayam merely pass kyon Aaye Hain
Devraj-shukracharya aaj main ek bahut hi adbhut Shakti dharti per mahsus kya aap Shakti ke bare me kuch jante Hain
Shukracharya-aap aisa mat kahiye devraj
Aap aisa kahiye Ki aaj ek adrishya Shakti aap devtaon ke hote hue bhi rakshak ki energy kochura le Gaye
devraj-aapko yah sab baat kaise pata hai.
Khair abhi main use Shakti ke bare mein Janne aaya hun aapko us Shakti ke bare mein kuchh pata hai
Shukracharya -kaise bhul sakta hun use Shakti ko main. Aapko bhi sabhi yad hota yadi Karoro varsh purv vah ghatna Nahin ghati hoti
Devraj-aap paheliyan mat banaiye mujhe us Shakti ke bare mein bataiye
Shukracharya-kya bataun main aapko kya Janna chahte Hain aap

*Yahi ki aapko yad Nahin pata Ki Aadi Yug mein devta dharti per Raha karte the
*Ya ye ki satyug se pahle aadi Yug tha
*Ya ye ki pahla ardhdev Daivik tha
*Ya ye ki pahla Kali shaktiyon ka Malik Pravikasur tha
*Ya ye ki kaise mai devta se danav guru ban gaya
*Ya ye ki tridev mein sabhi devtaon ki dharti Ki yaden Mita Di.

Aapko us Shakti ke bare mein Janna hai
Vah daivik ki Shakti hai
Daivik brahmand ki aseem shaktiyon ka malik
Daivik jiske aapko ne hi use chal Se mar Diya
Mai to yah Soch kar pareshan ho raha hun itne salon bad uski shaktiyon ka prayog kyon hua
Is bar use koi Nahin maar Sakta
Tridev bhi Nahin

Jaise Jaise shukracharya apni baten bata rahe the vaise vaise devraj ki chehre ke bhav hi badal rahe the itna bada jhataka unhe aaj Tak Kabhi Nahin laga
Fir bhi ve shukracharya Se puchte hai
Devraj- kya say dhundhne ka koi rasta Nahin hai
Shukracharya-use mai kya tridev bhi nahin dhund sakte.
Thodi der ke bad devraj swarg Lok aa jate hai

Dusri taraf tridev aapas mein baten kar rahe the
Brahma -aaj aakhir usne apni shaktiyon Ka prayog Kar liya ab bahut jald uska punar janam hone wala hai
Shiv -iis bar uski kahani alag tarike Se Hi likhi jayegi iis bar apni kahani vah khud likhega
Vishnu -sabse pahle hame ant lok Jana Hoga vahan ki suraksha kavach hansne Wali hai
Abhi ke liye itna hi
Next update mein ham jaanege
Rakshak ki energy ke sath kya hota hai
Andhakasura kaise ant lok se bahar jata hai
Super fantastic update hai bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
 

mashish

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Update 5
Swarg Lok
Is samay devraj Indra bahut hi pareshan the unhen yah samajh Nahin a Raha ki tridev Ne devtaon Se asatya(jhooth) kyon Kaha
Devraj Indra ne Kisi adrishy Shakti rakshak ke energy ko gayab karte mahsus Kiya lekin unhen use Shakti ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin chal raha hai tha
Devraj Indra is bare mein pata karne ke liye Dev guru vrihaspati ke pass gai
D-Dev guru ko Mera pranam
D.G-ayushmanbhava devraj kahiye kyon aana hua
D-gurudev maine rakshak ki energy ko Kisi adrishya Shakti dwara gayab hote dekhen mujhe use Shakti ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin chal raha hai kya aap mera margdarshan karenge
D.G-Iis baat Se ascharyachakit to main bhi hun devraj mujhe bahut Shakti bahut hi jaani pahchani lagi lekin mujhe aisa lag raha hai mere mastishk us Shakti ki jankari MIT chuki hai
D-lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai Dev guru ham devtaon ki yaden kaun Mita Sakta
D.G-yahi to main pata karna chahta hun lekin filhal main aapko us Shakti ke bare me kuchh Nahin bata Sakta kyunki mujhe khud us pata nahin
Iske bad devgru vahan se chale jaate hai
Vahi Indra ko Apne sinhasan ka bhay lagne Lagta hai
Devraj iis baat ka pata lagane ke liye danav guru shukracharya ke pass jaate Hain

Patal Lok
Is samay shukracharya pareshan dikhai de rahe hain unhen yah samajh Nahin a raha hai ki itne saalo baad use Shakti ka prayog kyon hua
Abhi abhi shukracharya kuchh aur sochte ki tabhi vahan devraj prakat ho Gaya
Devraj-kya baat hai shukracharya aaj aap bahut pareshan dikhai de rahe hain.
Shukracharya -aap meri chinta chhoriye aur yah bataiye ki aaj devraj swayam merely pass kyon Aaye Hain
Devraj-shukracharya aaj main ek bahut hi adbhut Shakti dharti per mahsus kya aap Shakti ke bare me kuch jante Hain
Shukracharya-aap aisa mat kahiye devraj
Aap aisa kahiye Ki aaj ek adrishya Shakti aap devtaon ke hote hue bhi rakshak ki energy kochura le Gaye
devraj-aapko yah sab baat kaise pata hai.
Khair abhi main use Shakti ke bare mein Janne aaya hun aapko us Shakti ke bare mein kuchh pata hai
Shukracharya -kaise bhul sakta hun use Shakti ko main. Aapko bhi sabhi yad hota yadi Karoro varsh purv vah ghatna Nahin ghati hoti
Devraj-aap paheliyan mat banaiye mujhe us Shakti ke bare mein bataiye
Shukracharya-kya bataun main aapko kya Janna chahte Hain aap

*Yahi ki aapko yad Nahin pata Ki Aadi Yug mein devta dharti per Raha karte the
*Ya ye ki satyug se pahle aadi Yug tha
*Ya ye ki pahla ardhdev Daivik tha
*Ya ye ki pahla Kali shaktiyon ka Malik Pravikasur tha
*Ya ye ki kaise mai devta se danav guru ban gaya
*Ya ye ki tridev mein sabhi devtaon ki dharti Ki yaden Mita Di.

Aapko us Shakti ke bare mein Janna hai
Vah daivik ki Shakti hai
Daivik brahmand ki aseem shaktiyon ka malik
Daivik jiske aapko ne hi use chal Se mar Diya
Mai to yah Soch kar pareshan ho raha hun itne salon bad uski shaktiyon ka prayog kyon hua
Is bar use koi Nahin maar Sakta
Tridev bhi Nahin

Jaise Jaise shukracharya apni baten bata rahe the vaise vaise devraj ki chehre ke bhav hi badal rahe the itna bada jhataka unhe aaj Tak Kabhi Nahin laga
Fir bhi ve shukracharya Se puchte hai
Devraj- kya say dhundhne ka koi rasta Nahin hai
Shukracharya-use mai kya tridev bhi nahin dhund sakte.
Thodi der ke bad devraj swarg Lok aa jate hai

Dusri taraf tridev aapas mein baten kar rahe the
Brahma -aaj aakhir usne apni shaktiyon Ka prayog Kar liya ab bahut jald uska punar janam hone wala hai
Shiv -iis bar uski kahani alag tarike Se Hi likhi jayegi iis bar apni kahani vah khud likhega
Vishnu -sabse pahle hame ant lok Jana Hoga vahan ki suraksha kavach hansne Wali hai
Abhi ke liye itna hi
Next update mein ham jaanege
Rakshak ki energy ke sath kya hota hai
Andhakasura kaise ant lok se bahar jata hai
nice update
 

DAIVIK-RAJ

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Super fantastic update hai bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
nice update
Thank you for reading my story
Update 5 me Maine thoda sa change kiya hai
 

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UPDATE 6

Aadi Lok
Abhi Tak use adrishya Shakti ne rakshak ki energy ko Aadi Yug ke bare mein bataya ab aage
Rakshak energy-yah to aapane mujhe a adi yug ke bare mein bataen Apne bare mein to kuchh bhi Nahin
Unknown energy-yahi to sabse badi pareshani ki baat hai ki mujhe apne bare mein kuchh bhi yad Nahin hai
Mujhe yad hai ki mujhe karna kya hai
Mujhe yah Yaad hai ki E¹,E² @ E³ ko jhodne wala gupt marg Kaha hai
Mujhe yah yaad hai ki mere pass Jo shaktiyan Hain vah meri hai.
Mujhe yah Yaad hai ki meri mrutyu ho chuki hai
Lekin mujhe yah Nahin pata ki mujhe yahi sab kyon yaad hai mujhe apna naam kyon yaad Nahin mujhe apni pahchan kyon yaad Nahin

Lekin mujhe yah bhi yaad hai ki mujhe apne bare me sari baten yaad kaise aaegi
Isiliye to main tumhen yahin laya hai
Rakshak energy-aap mere sath kya Karne Wale Hain mujhe dharti ki Raksha ke liye Jana hai. Agar mein kalyug shuru hone Se pahle vahan Nahin pahuncha to sab kuchh khatm ho jaega
Unknown energy-main tumhen yahan apni shaktiyan dene ke liye bulaya hai
Itna kahkar unknown energy ne rakshak ki energy ko char bhagon mein bata Diya tatha khud ki energy ko bhi char bhagon mein baat kar unse Mila Diya iske bad usmein se 3 energy ball main suraksha kavach laga Diya . Ab vahan per kul 4 energy ball ho Gaye
E.B
E.B¹
E.B²
E.B³
Iske bad vahan per energy ke alava unknown energy ki aatma bachi
Us atma ne ek energy ball (E.B) jis per suraksha kavach Nahin laga tha usmein apni aatma ka ¼ bhag Dal Diya dekhte hi dekhte vah energy ball ek manav ka rup Lene lagi

Vahi dusri taraf ant lok
Yahan per ek jagah Pravikasur aur andhkasur baten kar rahe the
P-tumhen pata hai na tumhen kya karna hai kuchh bhi garbar Nahin honi chahie
A-ji Malik mujhe sab pata hai
P-agar tumne mujhe dhokha Dene Ka socha bhi to vahi yah innogy tumhara ant kar dega
Aur khud apni manzil Tak Chala jaega
Abhi yah sab baat hi kar rahe the tabhi Pravikasur ko yah mahsus ho jata hai ki suraksha kavach mein hole ho gaya hai

Yah vahi samay hai jab us unknown atma ne apna ¼ bhag us energy ball mein dala tha

Ant Lok
Pravikasur turant andhakasura ko lekar use jagah per pahunch jata hai aur aur apni shaktiyon dwara vah andhakasura aur us black energy ball ko ant lok ke suraksha kavach ke bahar pahuncha deta hai jahan Se turant andhakasura us black energy ball ko lekar kahi gayab ho jata hai.

Kuchh hi samay mein vahan per tridev pahunch jaate hai unhen Pravikasur ke yojana ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin Chala kyunki ant Lok ki baat koi Nahin Jaan sakta tha jab tak vahan suraksha kavach
hai aur aur unke pahunchne se pahle hi andhakasura vahan se gayab ho gaya jis Karan tridev ko kuchh pata nahin chala
 
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DAIVIK-RAJ

ANKIT-RAJ
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UPDATE 6

Aadi Lok
Abhi Tak use adrishya Shakti ne rakshak ki energy ko Aadi Yug ke bare mein bataya ab aage
Rakshak energy-yah to aapane mujhe a adi yug ke bare mein bataen Apne bare mein to kuchh bhi Nahin
Unknown energy-yahi to sabse badi pareshani ki baat hai ki mujhe apne bare mein kuchh bhi yad Nahin hai
Mujhe yad hai ki mujhe karna kya hai
Mujhe yah Yaad hai ki E¹,E² @ E³ ko jhodne wala gupt marg Kaha hai
Mujhe yah yaad hai ki mere pass Jo shaktiyan Hain vah meri hai.
Mujhe yah Yaad hai ki meri mrutyu ho chuki hai
Lekin mujhe yah Nahin pata ki mujhe yahi sab kyon yaad hai mujhe apna naam kyon yaad Nahin mujhe apni pahchan kyon yaad Nahin

Lekin mujhe yah bhi yaad hai ki mujhe apne bare me sari baten yaad kaise aaegi
Isiliye to main tumhen yahin laya hai
Rakshak energy-aap mere sath kya Karne Wale Hain mujhe dharti ki Raksha ke liye Jana hai. Agar mein kalyug shuru hone Se pahle vahan Nahin pahuncha to sab kuchh khatm ho jaega
Unknown energy-main tumhen yahan apni shaktiyan dene ke liye bulaya hai
Itna kahkar unknown energy ne rakshak ki energy ko char bhagon mein bata Diya tatha khud ki energy ko bhi char bhagon mein baat kar unse Mila Diya iske bad usmein se 3 energy ball main suraksha kavach laga Diya. Ab vahan per kul 4 energy ball ho Gaye
E.B
E.B¹
E.B²
E.B³
Iske bad vahan per energy ke alava unknown energy ki aatma bachi
Us atma ne ek energy ball (E.B) jis per suraksha kavach Nahin laga tha usmein apni aatma ka ¼ bhag Dal Diya dekhte hi dekhte vah energy ball ek manav ka rup Lene laga

Vahi dusri taraf ant lok
Yahan per ek jagah Pravikasur aur andhkasur baten kar rahe the
P-tumhen pata hai na tumhen kya karna hai kuchh bhi garbar Nahin honi chahie
A-ji Malik mujhe sab pata hai
P-agar tumne mujhe dhokha Dene Ka socha bhi to vahi yah innogy tumhara ant kar dega
Aur khud apni manzil Tak Chala jaega
Abhi yah sab baat hi kar rahe the tabhi Pravikasur ko yah mahsus ho jata hai ki suraksha kavach mein hole ho gaya hai

Yah vahi samay hai jab us unknown atma ne apna ¼ bhag us energy ball mein dala tha

Ant Lok
Pravikasur turant andhakasura ko lekar use jagah per pahunch jata hai aur aur apni shaktiyon dwara vah andhakasura aur us black energy ball ko ant lok ke suraksha kavach ke bahar pahuncha deta hai jahan Se turant andhakasura us black energy ball ko lekar kahi gayab ho jata hai.

Kuchh hi samay mein vahan per tridev pahunch jaate hai unhen Pravikasur ke yojana ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin Chala kyunki ant Lok ki baat koi Nahin Jaan sakta tha jab tak vahan suraksha kavach
hai aur aur unke pahunchne se pahle hi andhakasura vahan se gayab ho gaya jis Karan tridev ko kuchh pata nahin chala
Next update in today night or tomorrow morning
 
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mashish

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UPDATE 6

Aadi Lok
Abhi Tak use adrishya Shakti ne rakshak ki energy ko Aadi Yug ke bare mein bataya ab aage
Rakshak energy-yah to aapane mujhe a adi yug ke bare mein bataen Apne bare mein to kuchh bhi Nahin
Unknown energy-yahi to sabse badi pareshani ki baat hai ki mujhe apne bare mein kuchh bhi yad Nahin hai
Mujhe yad hai ki mujhe karna kya hai
Mujhe yah Yaad hai ki E¹,E² @ E³ ko jhodne wala gupt marg Kaha hai
Mujhe yah yaad hai ki mere pass Jo shaktiyan Hain vah meri hai.
Mujhe yah Yaad hai ki meri mrutyu ho chuki hai
Lekin mujhe yah Nahin pata ki mujhe yahi sab kyon yaad hai mujhe apna naam kyon yaad Nahin mujhe apni pahchan kyon yaad Nahin

Lekin mujhe yah bhi yaad hai ki mujhe apne bare me sari baten yaad kaise aaegi
Isiliye to main tumhen yahin laya hai
Rakshak energy-aap mere sath kya Karne Wale Hain mujhe dharti ki Raksha ke liye Jana hai. Agar mein kalyug shuru hone Se pahle vahan Nahin pahuncha to sab kuchh khatm ho jaega
Unknown energy-main tumhen yahan apni shaktiyan dene ke liye bulaya hai
Itna kahkar unknown energy ne rakshak ki energy ko char bhagon mein bata Diya tatha khud ki energy ko bhi char bhagon mein baat kar unse Mila Diya iske bad usmein se 3 energy ball main suraksha kavach laga Diya . Ab vahan per kul 4 energy ball ho Gaye
E.B
E.B¹
E.B²
E.B³
Iske bad vahan per energy ke alava unknown energy ki aatma bachi
Us atma ne ek energy ball (E.B) jis per suraksha kavach Nahin laga tha usmein apni aatma ka ¼ bhag Dal Diya dekhte hi dekhte vah energy ball ek manav ka rup Lene lagi

Vahi dusri taraf ant lok
Yahan per ek jagah Pravikasur aur andhkasur baten kar rahe the
P-tumhen pata hai na tumhen kya karna hai kuchh bhi garbar Nahin honi chahie
A-ji Malik mujhe sab pata hai
P-agar tumne mujhe dhokha Dene Ka socha bhi to vahi yah innogy tumhara ant kar dega
Aur khud apni manzil Tak Chala jaega
Abhi yah sab baat hi kar rahe the tabhi Pravikasur ko yah mahsus ho jata hai ki suraksha kavach mein hole ho gaya hai

Yah vahi samay hai jab us unknown atma ne apna ¼ bhag us energy ball mein dala tha

Ant Lok
Pravikasur turant andhakasura ko lekar use jagah per pahunch jata hai aur aur apni shaktiyon dwara vah andhakasura aur us black energy ball ko ant lok ke suraksha kavach ke bahar pahuncha deta hai jahan Se turant andhakasura us black energy ball ko lekar kahi gayab ho jata hai.

Kuchh hi samay mein vahan per tridev pahunch jaate hai unhen Pravikasur ke yojana ke bare mein kuchh bhi pata nahin Chala kyunki ant Lok ki baat koi Nahin Jaan sakta tha jab tak vahan suraksha kavach
hai aur aur unke pahunchne se pahle hi andhakasura vahan se gayab ho gaya jis Karan tridev ko kuchh pata nahin chala
awesome update
 

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Ab ham chalte hai Aadi lok jahan daivik ne rakshak ke urja ko laya tha

Rakshak ka urja achanak yahan per aane Se thoda pareshan ho Gaya use yah samajh mein a gaya tha Ki use yahan per Kisi Sakthi Sali urja ke Malik Ne hi laya hai

Rakshak energy-mujhe yahan par kisne laya samne aao
Abhi rakshak ki urja apni baat ko khatm bhi nahin Kar pai thi ki vahan per ek energy ball a Gaya

Rakshak ki urja ko us energy ball mein sirf positive energy hi dikhi jisse use pata chal gaya Ki use yahan per Kisi buri Shakti Ne Nahin laya hai.
Rakshak energy-aap kaun Hain aur mujhe yahan per laane ka kya Karan hai.
Energy ball - main tumhare sabhi sawalon ka jawab dunga lekin usse pahle main tumhe itihaas ki vah bate batane wala hun jise itihas ke panno se mita diya Gaya

Flashback
Hamare itihaas aur vedo main yah likha hua hai ki dharti per char yug Hain
Satyug
Tretayug
Dwaparyug
Kalyug
Lekin Kisi ko yah Nahin pata hai ki in sabhi yugo ke alava bhi ek aur yug tha sabse pahla yug
Aadiyug

Dharti ke nirman ke kuchh samay baad dharti swarg Se bhi Sundar ban gai thi tab dharti per bhagwan aakar rahane lage aur ve dharti ko hi apna nivas sthan bana liye. Dharti par vah Yug jab yahan bhagwan rahte the aadi yug ke naam se Jana jata tha
Kuch samay bad dharti per manav Ka Vikas shuru hua tab yahan bhagwan aur manav donon miljul kar rahte the bhagwan aur manav ke milane se jis nai prajati ka janm hua use ardhmanav ya ardhdev Kaha jata tha Dharti ka sabse pahla ardhmanav ya ardhdev daivik tha aur dusra pravik
Jab dharti per jansankhya badhane lagi tab daivik ne devtaon ki sahayata se dharti ke 2 dimension ka nirman Kiya jise earth2 aur earth3 kahan jata tha aur hamari dharti ko earth1 ke naam se bulaya jaane laga
Daivik ne e¹ e² aur e³ ke bich Kai dwar ke nirman kiye jisse log ek dimension se dusre dimension aur dharti per a sakte the.

Ek din achanak dharti aur dono dimension ko jodne vala darvaja gayab hone laga. Tab tridev ne sabhi devtaon ko dharti se wapas swarg Lok bula liya aur sabhi devtaon tatha insanon ki aadi yug ke sari yaddasht Mita diye itihas ke panno se aadi Yug ki sari baten hata Di gai. Lekin tridev ko yah Nahin pata tha kuchh aise bhi log Hain jinhen aadi yug ke bare mein abhi bhi kuchh kuchh yad hai aur ve hai
Shukracharya
Daivik aur
Pravik

Daivik ne Aadi lok ke sath 1 dimension se dusri dimension dharti per jaane ke liye ek gupt Marg ka nirman karvaya jiske bare mein Kisi ko Nahin pata tha tridev ko bhi nahin shivay daivik ke (kyunki daivik Ne ise khud banaya tha gupt roop se aur daivik ke marne ke baad is bare mein sirf daivik ke atma ko pata hai)
Nice update
 
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