Fantasy ? Raavan ? ( Ek Naam Ya Ek Razz )

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Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
?

par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

ab age chalte hai ?


app sab ko kuch bata deta hu ki urja ki wajha se kuch jivo ki rachna hui jinme pramuk the

1- Fairies inke pass vriksho falo fulo aur har ko
control karne ki Powers hoti hai. ye nature priy ( lover) hoti hai inke
prajati me sabhi Ladkiya hi hoti hai ye fairies ki duniya ko fairies land kaha gaya chuki ye bahut hi santi priy thi isliye

To ab fairies ke bare main kuch bate jaan lete hai kyuki inka story main bahut roll hai to iske kuch points hai jisse apko kai razz ke bare mae jankari milegi ?

1 - urja aur parampita ne kai tarha ki prajati ko banaya tha par un sabmae fairies sabse jada sundar ? aur manmohak ( attractive) ? thi jise dekh kisi ko bhi gussa na aye






2 - Jo baat fairies ko kisi bhi dusri prajati se alag karti thi wo ye ki inke vansh mae sirf ladkiyaan hi hoti hai ( to peda kesi hoti hai so "ruko jara sabr karo" ?)

3 - ( sabse important) fairies ki queen naam ****( inti bhi kya jaldi hai ?) jo ki pure glexy mae sabse sundar thi par uska chehra kisi ne nahi dekha tha ?( kyu nahi dekha tha kya pata ?abhi to story suru kiya hu?)

4 fairies world ke charo tarf ek esa shield tha jisko tod pana to kya uske karib jana bhi mout ke seaman tha kyu yadi koi bhi yesi sakti jiske dil ya dimaag mae fairies ya unke world ko nuksaan pauchane ka socha bhi to uski sari powers yaha tak ki unki pran sakti ( life fors) bhi apne andar le leta hai ?( kon shield) aur usse shield ki powers badti jati hai

5 - agar wo shield na bhi ho to fairies world mae koi bhi insaan ( male ?) nahi ja sakta hai agar gaya to wo hamesha ke liye ek fairies ban jayegi ?

6 - fairies land dusri kisi bhi grh se alag tha yaha ki fairies kabhi budi nahi hoti aur na kisi ko koi takat ( kamzori) hoti hai

( To dosto in sab ko dhyan rakna mene sirf apke liye itne raaz kol diya jo main bacha kar rakhna chahata tha par koi baat)

2- jin- inke pass magical power hai aur ye kahi bhi magic ke wajha se aa ja sakte hai
Jin lok 2 bhago mae bata hua hai jiske ek side lord ke control mae tha aur dusra side demon ke isliye in dono ke bich war hote rahte hai


3- Angel ( pari) - inki powers bhi kuch kuch jin ke jese hi thi par ye unse tode jada powerful the ye free tha








4 Vampires - ( wese iske bare mae app sab jante hi hoge par mene kuch change kiya hai)
Vampires ek esi prajaati jinki tadat ( populatio) ek virus ki tarah felti hai agar ek vampire kisi inssan ko kat le par zinda chod de to wo insaan bhi vampire ban jate hai inke andar kamal ki speed hoti hai aur ye kisi inssan ko ek Tarha se hypnotize kar sakte hai pahle jo vampire the wo suraj ki Roshni mae jal jate the par dhire dhire inme bhi vikas hota gaya aur ye suraj ki Roshni ko 70% tak control karne lage par fir bhi ye Nightmare the aur blood par jite hai ( inssan ya janwar) kai bade aur taqatwar vampire black magic bhi use karte ye demon king ko support karte hai





Werewolf - ye ek esi prajaati thi jo ki apni marji se kabhi bhi wolf rup mae aa sakte the inke andar kamal ki sahanskti hoti hai aur ye ki bhi diwal par chal sakte hai( sirf wolf forum mae) inke thej nakhun aur daat hote hai

(Noto- kyuki vampire demon king ko support karte the isliye werewolf lord ke support mae the matlab inpar kisi ka raj nahi tha)






Inke alawa bhi kai grh the par unka abhi roll nahi hai isliye unsab ka introduction nahi diya hu

Ab Chalate hain hamare earth ke un hisso par jiski khabar insaan ko nahi thi

Darkland - ye earth se hi juda hua tha jiska nirman demon king ne kiya tha yaha par usne apne powers se nirmit evil devils, vampire dark Angel, aur dark knights the jo kufiya tor se earth par demon ki agya ka palan karte the inme wo insaan bhi samil the jinke pass kali takat thi aur kai sahetan the
( darkworld ka raja uske senapati inka introduction time ane par)

Hunters - iska nirman lord ne kiya yaha par kai insaan the par jinke andar angels ka blood tha werewolf, aur knighs the inka kam darkworld ko rokna tha
( is world ke raja ka introduction bad mae)

( kawach ke nirman ki wajah se ye sirf apne man mutabik kaam karne lage)
Ab Chalate hai earth par

ab sab kuch badal chuka tha aur insano hi insano ka dusman ho gaya tha Lalach aur jalan itni jada bad gaya tha ki bhai - bhai ka baap - beta ka jaan ke dushman baan chuke the

sab ko sirf pessa ki bhukh thi na rishto ki koi parvha na apno ke liya saman na pyaar tha sab ka bhagwan sirf pessa aur naam tha jiske pass pessa tha wo garibo ko apni jute par rakna chahte the pessa kamane ke liye insaan insaniyat ko bech chukya tha

ab insab par bate hoti rahengi age badte hai

India ke ek bahot sundar state Maharashtra ke sabse sundar nagar Mumbai ke
******* ek alisan ghar ke









Sandar garden Mae

Ek admi toda pareshan betha tha ?
Admi- (man Mae) apne sir par hath rakar soch raha tha ki yhe
bhgwan aj mere pass duniya ki har khushi hai sab kuch hai bas ek Chirag nhi hai
Ky mere pita ke kiye gaye karm ko mera pura pariwar bugte rahega
Or y sab soch kar uski aankhon mae ansu ? a jata hai
Or ek shadi suda mahila ati hai jo uski patni hai
Mahila- ap itna chinta mat kijiye mujhe pura wishwas hai ki hume hamre khandan ka Chirag jarur milega
Ab chalo apki betiya ane wali hogi
Admi - (Ashu poch kar) ha
Chalo
Or ase hi wakt bita gaya aur ek din achanak

Awesome update...

 

[Iron Man]

Update 5


previous

Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
?

par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

ab age chalte hai ?


app sab ko kuch bata deta hu ki urja ki wajha se kuch jivo ki rachna hui jinme pramuk the

1- Fairies inke pass vriksho falo fulo aur har ko
control karne ki Powers hoti hai. ye nature priy ( lover) hoti hai inke
prajati me sabhi Ladkiya hi hoti hai ye fairies ki duniya ko fairies land kaha gaya chuki ye bahut hi santi priy thi isliye

To ab fairies ke bare main kuch bate jaan lete hai kyuki inka story main bahut roll hai to iske kuch points hai jisse apko kai razz ke bare mae jankari milegi ?

1 - urja aur parampita ne kai tarha ki prajati ko banaya tha par un sabmae fairies sabse jada sundar ? aur manmohak ( attractive) ? thi jise dekh kisi ko bhi gussa na aye






2 - Jo baat fairies ko kisi bhi dusri prajati se alag karti thi wo ye ki inke vansh mae sirf ladkiyaan hi hoti hai ( to peda kesi hoti hai so "ruko jara sabr karo" ?)

3 - ( sabse important) fairies ki queen naam ****( inti bhi kya jaldi hai ?) jo ki pure glexy mae sabse sundar thi par uska chehra kisi ne nahi dekha tha ?( kyu nahi dekha tha kya pata ?abhi to story suru kiya hu?)

4 fairies world ke charo tarf ek esa shield tha jisko tod pana to kya uske karib jana bhi mout ke seaman tha kyu yadi koi bhi yesi sakti jiske dil ya dimaag mae fairies ya unke world ko nuksaan pauchane ka socha bhi to uski sari powers yaha tak ki unki pran sakti ( life fors) bhi apne andar le leta hai ?( kon shield) aur usse shield ki powers badti jati hai

5 - agar wo shield na bhi ho to fairies world mae koi bhi insaan ( male ?) nahi ja sakta hai agar gaya to wo hamesha ke liye ek fairies ban jayegi ?

6 - fairies land dusri kisi bhi grh se alag tha yaha ki fairies kabhi budi nahi hoti aur na kisi ko koi takat ( kamzori) hoti hai

( To dosto in sab ko dhyan rakna mene sirf apke liye itne raaz kol diya jo main bacha kar rakhna chahata tha par koi baat)

2- jin- inke pass magical power hai aur ye kahi bhi magic ke wajha se aa ja sakte hai
Jin lok 2 bhago mae bata hua hai jiske ek side lord ke control mae tha aur dusra side demon ke isliye in dono ke bich war hote rahte hai


3- Angel ( pari) - inki powers bhi kuch kuch jin ke jese hi thi par ye unse tode jada powerful the ye free tha








4 Vampires - ( wese iske bare mae app sab jante hi hoge par mene kuch change kiya hai)
Vampires ek esi prajaati jinki tadat ( populatio) ek virus ki tarah felti hai agar ek vampire kisi inssan ko kat le par zinda chod de to wo insaan bhi vampire ban jate hai inke andar kamal ki speed hoti hai aur ye kisi inssan ko ek Tarha se hypnotize kar sakte hai pahle jo vampire the wo suraj ki Roshni mae jal jate the par dhire dhire inme bhi vikas hota gaya aur ye suraj ki Roshni ko 70% tak control karne lage par fir bhi ye Nightmare the aur blood par jite hai ( inssan ya janwar) kai bade aur taqatwar vampire black magic bhi use karte ye demon king ko support karte hai





Werewolf - ye ek esi prajaati thi jo ki apni marji se kabhi bhi wolf rup mae aa sakte the inke andar kamal ki sahanskti hoti hai aur ye ki bhi diwal par chal sakte hai( sirf wolf forum mae) inke thej nakhun aur daat hote hai

(Noto- kyuki vampire demon king ko support karte the isliye werewolf lord ke support mae the matlab inpar kisi ka raj nahi tha)






Inke alawa bhi kai grh the par unka abhi roll nahi hai isliye unsab ka introduction nahi diya hu

Ab Chalate hain hamare earth ke un hisso par jiski khabar insaan ko nahi thi

Darkland - ye earth se hi juda hua tha jiska nirman demon king ne kiya tha yaha par usne apne powers se nirmit evil devils, vampire dark Angel, aur dark knights the jo kufiya tor se earth par demon ki agya ka palan karte the inme wo insaan bhi samil the jinke pass kali takat thi aur kai sahetan the
( darkworld ka raja uske senapati inka introduction time ane par)

Hunters - iska nirman lord ne kiya yaha par kai insaan the par jinke andar angels ka blood tha werewolf, aur knighs the inka kam darkworld ko rokna tha
( is world ke raja ka introduction bad mae)

( kawach ke nirman ki wajah se ye sirf apne man mutabik kaam karne lage)
Ab Chalate hai earth par

ab sab kuch badal chuka tha aur insano hi insano ka dusman ho gaya tha Lalach aur jalan itni jada bad gaya tha ki bhai - bhai ka baap - beta ka jaan ke dushman baan chuke the

sab ko sirf pessa ki bhukh thi na rishto ki koi parvha na apno ke liya saman na pyaar tha sab ka bhagwan sirf pessa aur naam tha jiske pass pessa tha wo garibo ko apni jute par rakna chahte the pessa kamane ke liye insaan insaniyat ko bech chukya tha

ab insab par bate hoti rahengi age badte hai

India ke ek bahot sundar state Maharashtra ke sabse sundar nagar Mumbai ke
******* ek alisan ghar ke









Sandar garden Mae

Ek admi toda pareshan betha tha ?
Admi- (man Mae) apne sir par hath rakar soch raha tha ki yhe
bhgwan aj mere pass duniya ki har khushi hai sab kuch hai bas ek Chirag nhi hai
Ky mere pita ke kiye gaye karm ko mera pura pariwar bugte rahega
Or y sab soch kar uski aankhon mae ansu ? a jata hai
Or ek shadi suda mahila ati hai jo uski patni hai
Mahila- ap itna chinta mat kijiye mujhe pura wishwas hai ki hume hamre khandan ka Chirag jarur milega
Ab chalo apki betiya ane wali hogi
Admi - (Ashu poch kar) ha
Chalo
Or ase hi wakt bita gaya aur ek din achanak

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[Yash420]

Bhai Fully Awesome Update
Dhire Dhire sab Kuch clear ho Raha hai
and Thanks Bhai For This Wonderful Story ?

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

 

[Ajay]

Update 5


previous

Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
?

par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

ab age chalte hai ?


app sab ko kuch bata deta hu ki urja ki wajha se kuch jivo ki rachna hui jinme pramuk the

1- Fairies inke pass vriksho falo fulo aur har ko
control karne ki Powers hoti hai. ye nature priy ( lover) hoti hai inke
prajati me sabhi Ladkiya hi hoti hai ye fairies ki duniya ko fairies land kaha gaya chuki ye bahut hi santi priy thi isliye

To ab fairies ke bare main kuch bate jaan lete hai kyuki inka story main bahut roll hai to iske kuch points hai jisse apko kai razz ke bare mae jankari milegi ?

1 - urja aur parampita ne kai tarha ki prajati ko banaya tha par un sabmae fairies sabse jada sundar ? aur manmohak ( attractive) ? thi jise dekh kisi ko bhi gussa na aye






2 - Jo baat fairies ko kisi bhi dusri prajati se alag karti thi wo ye ki inke vansh mae sirf ladkiyaan hi hoti hai ( to peda kesi hoti hai so "ruko jara sabr karo" ?)

3 - ( sabse important) fairies ki queen naam ****( inti bhi kya jaldi hai ?) jo ki pure glexy mae sabse sundar thi par uska chehra kisi ne nahi dekha tha ?( kyu nahi dekha tha kya pata ?abhi to story suru kiya hu?)

4 fairies world ke charo tarf ek esa shield tha jisko tod pana to kya uske karib jana bhi mout ke seaman tha kyu yadi koi bhi yesi sakti jiske dil ya dimaag mae fairies ya unke world ko nuksaan pauchane ka socha bhi to uski sari powers yaha tak ki unki pran sakti ( life fors) bhi apne andar le leta hai ?( kon shield) aur usse shield ki powers badti jati hai

5 - agar wo shield na bhi ho to fairies world mae koi bhi insaan ( male ?) nahi ja sakta hai agar gaya to wo hamesha ke liye ek fairies ban jayegi ?

6 - fairies land dusri kisi bhi grh se alag tha yaha ki fairies kabhi budi nahi hoti aur na kisi ko koi takat ( kamzori) hoti hai

( To dosto in sab ko dhyan rakna mene sirf apke liye itne raaz kol diya jo main bacha kar rakhna chahata tha par koi baat)

2- jin- inke pass magical power hai aur ye kahi bhi magic ke wajha se aa ja sakte hai
Jin lok 2 bhago mae bata hua hai jiske ek side lord ke control mae tha aur dusra side demon ke isliye in dono ke bich war hote rahte hai


3- Angel ( pari) - inki powers bhi kuch kuch jin ke jese hi thi par ye unse tode jada powerful the ye free tha








4 Vampires - ( wese iske bare mae app sab jante hi hoge par mene kuch change kiya hai)
Vampires ek esi prajaati jinki tadat ( populatio) ek virus ki tarah felti hai agar ek vampire kisi inssan ko kat le par zinda chod de to wo insaan bhi vampire ban jate hai inke andar kamal ki speed hoti hai aur ye kisi inssan ko ek Tarha se hypnotize kar sakte hai pahle jo vampire the wo suraj ki Roshni mae jal jate the par dhire dhire inme bhi vikas hota gaya aur ye suraj ki Roshni ko 70% tak control karne lage par fir bhi ye Nightmare the aur blood par jite hai ( inssan ya janwar) kai bade aur taqatwar vampire black magic bhi use karte ye demon king ko support karte hai





Werewolf - ye ek esi prajaati thi jo ki apni marji se kabhi bhi wolf rup mae aa sakte the inke andar kamal ki sahanskti hoti hai aur ye ki bhi diwal par chal sakte hai( sirf wolf forum mae) inke thej nakhun aur daat hote hai

(Noto- kyuki vampire demon king ko support karte the isliye werewolf lord ke support mae the matlab inpar kisi ka raj nahi tha)






Inke alawa bhi kai grh the par unka abhi roll nahi hai isliye unsab ka introduction nahi diya hu

Ab Chalate hain hamare earth ke un hisso par jiski khabar insaan ko nahi thi

Darkland - ye earth se hi juda hua tha jiska nirman demon king ne kiya tha yaha par usne apne powers se nirmit evil devils, vampire dark Angel, aur dark knights the jo kufiya tor se earth par demon ki agya ka palan karte the inme wo insaan bhi samil the jinke pass kali takat thi aur kai sahetan the
( darkworld ka raja uske senapati inka introduction time ane par)

Hunters - iska nirman lord ne kiya yaha par kai insaan the par jinke andar angels ka blood tha werewolf, aur knighs the inka kam darkworld ko rokna tha
( is world ke raja ka introduction bad mae)

( kawach ke nirman ki wajah se ye sirf apne man mutabik kaam karne lage)
Ab Chalate hai earth par

ab sab kuch badal chuka tha aur insano hi insano ka dusman ho gaya tha Lalach aur jalan itni jada bad gaya tha ki bhai - bhai ka baap - beta ka jaan ke dushman baan chuke the

sab ko sirf pessa ki bhukh thi na rishto ki koi parvha na apno ke liya saman na pyaar tha sab ka bhagwan sirf pessa aur naam tha jiske pass pessa tha wo garibo ko apni jute par rakna chahte the pessa kamane ke liye insaan insaniyat ko bech chukya tha

ab insab par bate hoti rahengi age badte hai

India ke ek bahot sundar state Maharashtra ke sabse sundar nagar Mumbai ke
******* ek alisan ghar ke









Sandar garden Mae

Ek admi toda pareshan betha tha ?
Admi- (man Mae) apne sir par hath rakar soch raha tha ki yhe
bhgwan aj mere pass duniya ki har khushi hai sab kuch hai bas ek Chirag nhi hai
Ky mere pita ke kiye gaye karm ko mera pura pariwar bugte rahega
Or y sab soch kar uski aankhon mae ansu ? a jata hai
Or ek shadi suda mahila ati hai jo uski patni hai
Mahila- ap itna chinta mat kijiye mujhe pura wishwas hai ki hume hamre khandan ka Chirag jarur milega
Ab chalo apki betiya ane wali hogi
Admi - (Ashu poch kar) ha
Chalo
Or ase hi wakt bita gaya aur ek din achanak

Nice update bhai

 

[Aryanv]

Awesome update

 

[Iron Man]

Waiting for next update

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

for story

superB update

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

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