Fantasy ? Raavan ? ( Ek Naam Ya Ek Razz )

[Rohit1988]

Update 4

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marco- maharaja app bhul rahe hai ki jub apne aur demon king ne fairies queen ko ye wada kiya tha ( kya wada tha uske liye padte rahe story ?) tab fairies queen ne app dono ko wo magical kamal ka fool diya aur bola ki isse ap dono jub bhi chaho ek fairies bana sakte ho aur usme apni sakti daal sakte ho par wo fairies apki beti hogi aur mujhe ye wiswas hai ki demon king ne us sakti ka istemaal kiya hoga

ab lord ko puri baat samajh main aa gai aur usne bhi us fool ka use karke ek sakti ka nirman kiya aur usko angel of life ka naam dekar earth ki aur bej diya


Ab age Chalate hain

jab bhi demon aur lord king kisi bhi tarah ki nai (new) rachana karte uske bare mae parampita ko pata chal jata Aur in sabhi chijo ko parampita apne Mahal mae beth kar dekh rahe the aur apni soch mae gum the ki in dono sakti ke karan kahi dharti ke logo ko koi nuksaan na ho kyunki ye dono sakti ( death queen, angel of life) dono hi lord aur demon king ki dusri kisi bhi rachana se kahi jada takatwar aur alag the aur kyunki
Unke bagal mae mae bethi rani ne unke chahre ko dekh kar hi jan liya ki wo kuch paresan hai

Rani- kya hua apko mae intne dino se dekh rahi hu app pareshan lag rahe hai kya wajha hai iski ?

Parampita- lord aur demon king dono hi samya ke shath shath saktisali ho chuke hai aur ye dono ab baki ke grh par raj karna chahte hai aur insaano par bhi

Rani- par inssan par kyu wo to sadarn hai ?

Parampita - shadarn hai par unki puja se lord aur demon dono ki sakti badti hai aur in par raj karna bhi aasan hai kyuki dosri grh ke wasi ki tarah inke pass koi sakti nahi hoti hai sayd pita ji ( urja) ne sahi kaha tha ki ane wale samya mae is pure brahmand ke liye khatra honge

Rani parampita ki batao ko sunrahi thi aur unko kuch yad aatha hai

Rani- par app unki kuch batho ko bhul rahe hai

Parampita rani ko yese dekhte hai ki puch rahe ?ho kon si baat

Rani- pitaji ne ye bhi bola tha jub yesa samya aayega wo kudh hamara marg darshan karnge

Tabhi waha par bahut hi urja aa gaya dono pati patni apne jagha se uth kar us urja ke samne juk gae ??
( ye urja unke pita hai jinse unka nirman hua update 1)

Dono ek saath - pranaam pitaji

Urja- uth jaao mere bachon

Dono khade ho gya

Parampita - pitaji apki ane ki wajah kyu kuch hone wala hai

Urja- jab tum dono ka nirman hua us samy mene Tum ko kuch bate kahi thi tumko yaad hai bete

Parampita - ji pita ji mujko un sabhi bato ka dhyan hai

Urja- to ab samy aa gaya hai

Rani- kya samy aa gaya hai pita ji

Urja- beti ab is duniya ko santulit kare ka samy aa gaya hai

Parampita - kis prakar ka santulan pitaji

Urja- bete tumse bhi ye baat nhi chupi hai ki ajj ke samy mae lord aur demon king dono ki sakti bad cuki hai aur dono hi apni sakti ke bal mae any nirdosh jivo ko apne adhin karne mae lage wo kai grh par apna kabja jama kar khun baha rahe hai

Parampita - ji pita ji par wonko roke kese main unko

Urja- nahi bete tum un dono ko kuch nhi bologe bas tumo earth ke charo aur in kavach ka nirman karna hoga joki ajse 21 salo bad khud ba khud khatam ho jaye ga

Parampita - kavach ka nirman to main kar dunga par 22 bad wo kudh nast ho jayega to iska faydha kya hogo pita ji

Urja- bete kuch yesi wajah hai ki tum demon aur lord ko kabu nahi kar sakte Kyuki tum tino ek hi pind se bane ho agar tum tino ki saktiya apas mae takra gai to tum tino ke sath ye puri duniya khatm ho jayengi Isliye tum ab shant ho jaao aur bas ab jo hoga usko dehko aur ek baat jis ka tum nirman karoge usme meri bhi urja milegi jiske karan in 22 salo mae earth par jo bhi hoga usko na tum dekh ya mahsus kar pawoge aur na hi demon aur lord aur jinko bhi lord aur demon king ne dharti par bejha hai ab unko kuch bhi yaad nahi rahega ki unko kisne aur kyu banya hai ya beja hai par ye baat demon aur lord ko pata nahi lagni chahiye tik hai

Parampita - par kyu pita ji

Urja- bete kuch kyu ka Jawab samy kudh deta hai isliye bas intjaar karo aur ek baat kuch yese bhi razz hai joki tumhe ( aur ap sabhi reader ko bhi) nahi Maalum hai isliye ab bas intjaar karo

Aur ye bol kar urja gaayab ho jati hai par apne piche chod jate hain kuch sawaal jo parampita aur rani ke Dimag mae ghum rahi thi par parampita ko apne pita ke Aadesh ka palan kiya aur earth ke charo aur kavach ka nirman kiya aur jese hi kavach bana demon aur lord dono ke apne gulam ya duto se sampark tut gaya

Demon king - ye kya hua mujhko Dharti se kuch mahesus kyu nahi ho raha hai ?

Wahi lord king

Lord king- ajj mujko dharti ke andar kuch dikh kyu nahi raha
?
Tabhi dono ke Mahal mae parampita ki Aawaj gunji

Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
?

par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

( kiske yaha aur kyu soch and keep supporting me next update 9 October)

Sundar update hai bhai ji

 

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Sundar update hai bhai ji

Nice mind blowing update brother

Next update Ka besabri se intezar

 

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[king of darkness0411]

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Update 5


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Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
?

par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

ab age chalte hai ?


app sab ko kuch bata deta hu ki urja ki wajha se kuch jivo ki rachna hui jinme pramuk the

1- Fairies inke pass vriksho falo fulo aur har ko
control karne ki Powers hoti hai. ye nature priy ( lover) hoti hai inke
prajati me sabhi Ladkiya hi hoti hai ye fairies ki duniya ko fairies land kaha gaya chuki ye bahut hi santi priy thi isliye

To ab fairies ke bare main kuch bate jaan lete hai kyuki inka story main bahut roll hai to iske kuch points hai jisse apko kai razz ke bare mae jankari milegi ?

1 - urja aur parampita ne kai tarha ki prajati ko banaya tha par un sabmae fairies sabse jada sundar ? aur manmohak ( attractive) ? thi jise dekh kisi ko bhi gussa na aye






2 - Jo baat fairies ko kisi bhi dusri prajati se alag karti thi wo ye ki inke vansh mae sirf ladkiyaan hi hoti hai ( to peda kesi hoti hai so "ruko jara sabr karo" ?)

3 - ( sabse important) fairies ki queen naam ****( inti bhi kya jaldi hai ?) jo ki pure glexy mae sabse sundar thi par uska chehra kisi ne nahi dekha tha ?( kyu nahi dekha tha kya pata ?abhi to story suru kiya hu?)

4 fairies world ke charo tarf ek esa shield tha jisko tod pana to kya uske karib jana bhi mout ke seaman tha kyu yadi koi bhi yesi sakti jiske dil ya dimaag mae fairies ya unke world ko nuksaan pauchane ka socha bhi to uski sari powers yaha tak ki unki pran sakti ( life fors) bhi apne andar le leta hai ?( kon shield) aur usse shield ki powers badti jati hai

5 - agar wo shield na bhi ho to fairies world mae koi bhi insaan ( male ?) nahi ja sakta hai agar gaya to wo hamesha ke liye ek fairies ban jayegi ?

6 - fairies land dusri kisi bhi grh se alag tha yaha ki fairies kabhi budi nahi hoti aur na kisi ko koi takat ( kamzori) hoti hai

( To dosto in sab ko dhyan rakna mene sirf apke liye itne raaz kol diya jo main bacha kar rakhna chahata tha par koi baat)

2- jin- inke pass magical power hai aur ye kahi bhi magic ke wajha se aa ja sakte hai
Jin lok 2 bhago mae bata hua hai jiske ek side lord ke control mae tha aur dusra side demon ke isliye in dono ke bich war hote rahte hai


3- Angel ( pari) - inki powers bhi kuch kuch jin ke jese hi thi par ye unse tode jada powerful the ye free tha








4 Vampires - ( wese iske bare mae app sab jante hi hoge par mene kuch change kiya hai)
Vampires ek esi prajaati jinki tadat ( populatio) ek virus ki tarah felti hai agar ek vampire kisi inssan ko kat le par zinda chod de to wo insaan bhi vampire ban jate hai inke andar kamal ki speed hoti hai aur ye kisi inssan ko ek Tarha se hypnotize kar sakte hai pahle jo vampire the wo suraj ki Roshni mae jal jate the par dhire dhire inme bhi vikas hota gaya aur ye suraj ki Roshni ko 70% tak control karne lage par fir bhi ye Nightmare the aur blood par jite hai ( inssan ya janwar) kai bade aur taqatwar vampire black magic bhi use karte ye demon king ko support karte hai





Werewolf - ye ek esi prajaati thi jo ki apni marji se kabhi bhi wolf rup mae aa sakte the inke andar kamal ki sahanskti hoti hai aur ye ki bhi diwal par chal sakte hai( sirf wolf forum mae) inke thej nakhun aur daat hote hai

(Noto- kyuki vampire demon king ko support karte the isliye werewolf lord ke support mae the matlab inpar kisi ka raj nahi tha)






Inke alawa bhi kai grh the par unka abhi roll nahi hai isliye unsab ka introduction nahi diya hu

Ab Chalate hain hamare earth ke un hisso par jiski khabar insaan ko nahi thi

Darkland - ye earth se hi juda hua tha jiska nirman demon king ne kiya tha yaha par usne apne powers se nirmit evil devils, vampire dark Angel, aur dark knights the jo kufiya tor se earth par demon ki agya ka palan karte the inme wo insaan bhi samil the jinke pass kali takat thi aur kai sahetan the
( darkworld ka raja uske senapati inka introduction time ane par)

Hunters - iska nirman lord ne kiya yaha par kai insaan the par jinke andar angels ka blood tha werewolf, aur knighs the inka kam darkworld ko rokna tha
( is world ke raja ka introduction bad mae)

( kawach ke nirman ki wajah se ye sirf apne man mutabik kaam karne lage)
Ab Chalate hai earth par

ab sab kuch badal chuka tha aur insano hi insano ka dusman ho gaya tha Lalach aur jalan itni jada bad gaya tha ki bhai - bhai ka baap - beta ka jaan ke dushman baan chuke the

sab ko sirf pessa ki bhukh thi na rishto ki koi parvha na apno ke liya saman na pyaar tha sab ka bhagwan sirf pessa aur naam tha jiske pass pessa tha wo garibo ko apni jute par rakna chahte the pessa kamane ke liye insaan insaniyat ko bech chukya tha

ab insab par bate hoti rahengi age badte hai

India ke ek bahot sundar state Maharashtra ke sabse sundar nagar Mumbai ke
******* ek alisan ghar ke









Sandar garden Mae

Ek admi toda pareshan betha tha ?
Admi- (man Mae) apne sir par hath rakar soch raha tha ki yhe
bhgwan aj mere pass duniya ki har khushi hai sab kuch hai bas ek Chirag nhi hai
Ky mere pita ke kiye gaye karm ko mera pura pariwar bugte rahega
Or y sab soch kar uski aankhon mae ansu ? a jata hai
Or ek shadi suda mahila ati hai jo uski patni hai
Mahila- ap itna chinta mat kijiye mujhe pura wishwas hai ki hume hamre khandan ka Chirag jarur milega
Ab chalo apki betiya ane wali hogi
Admi - (Ashu poch kar) ha
Chalo
Or ase hi wakt bita gaya aur ek din achanak

 

[king of darkness0411]

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