Fantasy ? Raavan ? ( Ek Naam Ya Ek Razz )

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Update 8

ab age

To apne wade ke mutabik samrat aur uski patni apne bacche sahit gurudev ke asram ki aur subha hi nikal gaye aur idhar samar aur simar dono hi party ki tayari mae lag gae

asaram unke ghar se kuch 2 ghabte ki duri mae tha

aashram ek nadi ke kinare par bana hua tha chuki pani tha isliye charo aur hi hariyali thi chote chote jiw jantu apni awajh se mahol ko aur sundar bana rahe the

aashram ke samne bade se bord par likha hua tha

" shanti kunj" ye us aashram ka naam tha dono pati patni aashram ke andar chal pade

inke gurudev ka naam swami agnivesh tha jise main swami ke naam se likhunga

ye aashram apne ayurved ilaj ke liye bahut prasid tha aur eajha thi yaha ke sadhu jinko lagbhag har bimari ka ilaj pata tha

ab in bato ka yahi rokte hai aur age badte hai

dono aashram ke andar gaye samne ek sadhu pedo ko pani de rage the

samrat - pranam baba ji

baba- aayesman bhaw putr kya kis kaam liya yaha aana hua hai

samrat- ji hume gurudev se milna hai unhone hame bulaya tha

baba- acha to tum dono samrat aur sima sing ho gurudev ne bata diya tha ki ajj tum dono ane wale ho ( ek kutiya ki aur is hara karke)
chaliye mere sheath

samrat aur sima dono hi us kutiya main chale gale

baba- tum dono todi der aaram karo gurudev abhi dhyan main hai

samrat- ji baba

todi der bitne ke baad gurudev aa gai unke ate hi dono pati patni ne unke pwo chu kar ashirwad liya

gurudev - kalyan ho putr, सदा suhagan raho beti yaha beth jaoo

gurudev - sab kuch kushal mangal hai na putr

samrat - ji gurudev app ke ashirwad se sab kuch theek hai

sima- gurudev hamne to aasha hi chod di thi ki hamre vansh mae koi ladka peda hoga par apki wajha se ajj muje wo sukh mila hai uske liye dhyanwad gurudev

gurudev-beti isme mene kuch nahi kiya hai jo kuch hua wo sab samya ke mutabuk hi hua hai

samrat - gurudev ab app mere bete ka namkaran kar dijiye

gurudev - lawo bacche ko muje do

sima ne bacche ko gurudev ke hatho mae diya
baccha unko dekhkar muskura raha tha

gurudev - tum dono yahi par mere aane tak intjar karo

aur gurudev apne kamre main chale gaye

ab inko yahi chod dete hai ab chlte ek haweli mae jaha par 2- log kuch bate kar rahe the

boss- kya khabar hai raghu jo tune muje is wakat jaga diya agar koi bina kaam ke khabar hogi to teri ghand mae garam masala dala dunga

raghu - malik khabar yesi hai jiske liye app ajj tak intjar kaar rahe the jisko sun kar app mujko mhu manga inam denge

boss- accha yesi kyu kabar hai raghu

raghu- malik suna hai ki ajj samrat singh ke ghar ek bahut badi party hai

boss- to bosdk main waha jaa kar nachu

raghu- malik puri baat to suno khabar mili hai ki samrat baap ban gaya hai

boss ek dham se kurs se uth khada hua aur raghu ke khnde par hath rakhkar

boss - raghu kabar paki hai na agar ye galat hua to

raghu - nahi malik ye dekhiye

aur raghu ne indirection card dikhya jisme party aur bacche ke baare mae jankari thi

boss- waa waa raghu waa zindagi mae phali baar tune ek acchi khabar sunie hai sabash ab mera ek kaam kar agar tune kar diya to tujko itni daulat dunga ki teri 7 puste bhi beth kar kha sakegi

raghu - ha malik bolo kya kaam hai

boss- samrat shing ke ghar mai kushi ka mahol hai na usko matam mai badlna hoga

raghu- tik hai malik main uske gjar ko hi udha dunga par waha to bahut jada security hogi

boss - nahi raghu bilkul nahi tu sirf us bacche ko marega aur kisi ko nahi aur tu security ki chinta mat kar tujko main andar pauncha dunga tu bas apne kaam par dhyan de aur jaa SAMJA

raghu - ji malik par malik appse ek baat puchni thi kya main puch sakta hu

boss - puch ajj tune bahut acchi khabar di hai puch jo puchna chahta hai

raghu- malik agar app ka dusmani samrat se hai to app usko kyu nahi maar dete sirf bacche ko kyu

boss- tu nahi samjha ga raghu nahi samjhe ga fir tu mera khash hai isliye bata deta hu tujko sun ek baat bata agar ek baap jinda ho aur uski aulad maar jae to uss baap ko kesa lagega

raghu - malik fir to baap ki nark main badal jayegi wo jite ji maar jayega

boss- sahi kaha raghu bilkul sahi bas isi dard mae main us samrat ko jalte hue dekhna chahta hu uski aankhon se hi nahi uske dil se bhi khun ke anshu bahe ye chahta hu ab tu ja aur ye le ( ek lifafa aur ek address) is aadmi se mil lena ye tujko uske ghar andar paucha dega ab ja

raghu lifafa hath mai lekar chala gaya aur boss ek photo ki aur mhu karkr jisme haar tanga hua tha

boss- ajj main jis dard se guzar raha hu tujko bhi wahi dard sahna hoga samrat sing jese main apni aulad ke liye pal pal tadap raha hu tujhko bhi tadapna hoga tadapna hoga ha ha ha ha.....

puri haweli uski hansi se gunj uti


aur idhar gurudev bhi apne kamare se bhar aa gae aur bacche ko sima ko soop kar bole

gurudev - beti tumhara ye beta bahut hi utam samy main peda hua hai ye balak har gun se sampan hoga saktisali hoga, buddhiman hoga aur apne aur apno par har aane wale har paresani aur musibat ka vinash kardega isliye isla nahi avinash hoga

samrat aur sima in sabhi ko sun kar bahut khush hue

gurudev - parantu tumhare parivar ka atit ispe prqbawo dalega beti

sima( chintit hote hue) - par gurudev wo sharp to khatm ho gaya na tabhi to

gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...

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Update 8

ab age

To apne wade ke mutabik samrat aur uski patni apne bacche sahit gurudev ke asram ki aur subha hi nikal gaye aur idhar samar aur simar dono hi party ki tayari mae lag gae

asaram unke ghar se kuch 2 ghabte ki duri mae tha

aashram ek nadi ke kinare par bana hua tha chuki pani tha isliye charo aur hi hariyali thi chote chote jiw jantu apni awajh se mahol ko aur sundar bana rahe the

aashram ke samne bade se bord par likha hua tha

" shanti kunj" ye us aashram ka naam tha dono pati patni aashram ke andar chal pade

inke gurudev ka naam swami agnivesh tha jise main swami ke naam se likhunga

ye aashram apne ayurved ilaj ke liye bahut prasid tha aur eajha thi yaha ke sadhu jinko lagbhag har bimari ka ilaj pata tha

ab in bato ka yahi rokte hai aur age badte hai

dono aashram ke andar gaye samne ek sadhu pedo ko pani de rage the

samrat - pranam baba ji

baba- aayesman bhaw putr kya kis kaam liya yaha aana hua hai

samrat- ji hume gurudev se milna hai unhone hame bulaya tha

baba- acha to tum dono samrat aur sima sing ho gurudev ne bata diya tha ki ajj tum dono ane wale ho ( ek kutiya ki aur is hara karke)
chaliye mere sheath

samrat aur sima dono hi us kutiya main chale gale

baba- tum dono todi der aaram karo gurudev abhi dhyan main hai

samrat- ji baba

todi der bitne ke baad gurudev aa gai unke ate hi dono pati patni ne unke pwo chu kar ashirwad liya

gurudev - kalyan ho putr, सदा suhagan raho beti yaha beth jaoo

gurudev - sab kuch kushal mangal hai na putr

samrat - ji gurudev app ke ashirwad se sab kuch theek hai

sima- gurudev hamne to aasha hi chod di thi ki hamre vansh mae koi ladka peda hoga par apki wajha se ajj muje wo sukh mila hai uske liye dhyanwad gurudev

gurudev-beti isme mene kuch nahi kiya hai jo kuch hua wo sab samya ke mutabuk hi hua hai

samrat - gurudev ab app mere bete ka namkaran kar dijiye

gurudev - lawo bacche ko muje do

sima ne bacche ko gurudev ke hatho mae diya
baccha unko dekhkar muskura raha tha

gurudev - tum dono yahi par mere aane tak intjar karo

aur gurudev apne kamre main chale gaye

ab inko yahi chod dete hai ab chlte ek haweli mae jaha par 2- log kuch bate kar rahe the

boss- kya khabar hai raghu jo tune muje is wakat jaga diya agar koi bina kaam ke khabar hogi to teri ghand mae garam masala dala dunga

raghu - malik khabar yesi hai jiske liye app ajj tak intjar kaar rahe the jisko sun kar app mujko mhu manga inam denge

boss- accha yesi kyu kabar hai raghu

raghu- malik suna hai ki ajj samrat singh ke ghar ek bahut badi party hai

boss- to bosdk main waha jaa kar nachu

raghu- malik puri baat to suno khabar mili hai ki samrat baap ban gaya hai

boss ek dham se kurs se uth khada hua aur raghu ke khnde par hath rakhkar

boss - raghu kabar paki hai na agar ye galat hua to

raghu - nahi malik ye dekhiye

aur raghu ne indirection card dikhya jisme party aur bacche ke baare mae jankari thi

boss- waa waa raghu waa zindagi mae phali baar tune ek acchi khabar sunie hai sabash ab mera ek kaam kar agar tune kar diya to tujko itni daulat dunga ki teri 7 puste bhi beth kar kha sakegi

raghu - ha malik bolo kya kaam hai

boss- samrat shing ke ghar mai kushi ka mahol hai na usko matam mai badlna hoga

raghu- tik hai malik main uske gjar ko hi udha dunga par waha to bahut jada security hogi

boss - nahi raghu bilkul nahi tu sirf us bacche ko marega aur kisi ko nahi aur tu security ki chinta mat kar tujko main andar pauncha dunga tu bas apne kaam par dhyan de aur jaa SAMJA

raghu - ji malik par malik appse ek baat puchni thi kya main puch sakta hu

boss - puch ajj tune bahut acchi khabar di hai puch jo puchna chahta hai

raghu- malik agar app ka dusmani samrat se hai to app usko kyu nahi maar dete sirf bacche ko kyu

boss- tu nahi samjha ga raghu nahi samjhe ga fir tu mera khash hai isliye bata deta hu tujko sun ek baat bata agar ek baap jinda ho aur uski aulad maar jae to uss baap ko kesa lagega

raghu - malik fir to baap ki nark main badal jayegi wo jite ji maar jayega

boss- sahi kaha raghu bilkul sahi bas isi dard mae main us samrat ko jalte hue dekhna chahta hu uski aankhon se hi nahi uske dil se bhi khun ke anshu bahe ye chahta hu ab tu ja aur ye le ( ek lifafa aur ek address) is aadmi se mil lena ye tujko uske ghar andar paucha dega ab ja

raghu lifafa hath mai lekar chala gaya aur boss ek photo ki aur mhu karkr jisme haar tanga hua tha

boss- ajj main jis dard se guzar raha hu tujko bhi wahi dard sahna hoga samrat sing jese main apni aulad ke liye pal pal tadap raha hu tujhko bhi tadapna hoga tadapna hoga ha ha ha ha.....

puri haweli uski hansi se gunj uti


aur idhar gurudev bhi apne kamare se bhar aa gae aur bacche ko sima ko soop kar bole

gurudev - beti tumhara ye beta bahut hi utam samy main peda hua hai ye balak har gun se sampan hoga saktisali hoga, buddhiman hoga aur apne aur apno par har aane wale har paresani aur musibat ka vinash kardega isliye isla nahi avinash hoga

samrat aur sima in sabhi ko sun kar bahut khush hue

gurudev - parantu tumhare parivar ka atit ispe prqbawo dalega beti

sima( chintit hote hue) - par gurudev wo sharp to khatm ho gaya na tabhi to

gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...

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gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...




ab age

sima aur samrat ki aankhon se anshu bah rahe hai aur dono bolte hain

- gurudev ye app kya bol rahe abhi apne bola ki mera beta hamre parivaar ki har mushkil ko khatm kar dega aur abhi app bol rahe hai ki iski jaan

sima- gurudev ye kya samya hai kya paap kiye the hamne ki phale hamare parivar ko kabhi bhi baacha ( ladka) nahi hoga aur jab mujhe aulad mila to app bol rahe hai ki uski zindagi khatre main hogi kyu gurudev kyu

gurudev - beti main kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta ki is samya tumhare dil mae kitna kitna dard tumko kesa mahsus ho raha hoga ek maa se uski aulad ko dur karne ka vichar bhi nahi aana chahiye par beti yahi samay chahta hai isliye pahle meri baat suno uske baat vichar karna

samrat jiski ankhu main bhi anshu the par unko control karkr rakha hua tha kyuki usko apni patni ko sambhala tha

smrat- sima shant ho jawo dekho baba ki har baat aj tak galat sabit nahi hui hai ek baar gurudev ki puri baat sun lete hain boliye gurudev

gurudev - samrat tum jante ho ki tumhare pita ko ye sharp us mahan tapasvi ne diya ki "aj ke baad tere pure vansh mae koi bhi chirag( Ladka) peda nahi hoga" jiske karna tumhare balak se pura kisi ke yaha ladaka puda nahi hua fir uske baad tumhari maa bhabhi aur tumhari patni tino ne kai sadhu shanto ki seva ki jisme main bhi ek hu aur hum sabhi sadhu ke muh se sirf tumhari patni ke liye shantan ka ahsirwad diya jiske karan ham sabhi sadhu ke ahsirwad us sharap ko khatm to nahi sake par uska prabhwo jarur kam kiya isliye tumko ladkee ki prapti hui ab age suno tumko kya karana hai

is balak ke upar 5 sal se lekar 18 sal tak mrutu ki chya rahegi agar ye apni maa ke pas raha to parntu agar tum is balak ko apne pass iske 5 janamdin tak rakh sakte ho uske baad isko agle 18 janamdin tak apne se dur rakhna hoga uske baad iske upar se mruty ki chaya hat jaegi wese bhi beti ye balak tumse adhik tumhari bahan jesi nanad simar se pyara karega tumhare pass 5 sal honge apni mamta lutane ke liye uske baad apni vansh ke ek matr chirag ki zindagi ke liya usko apne dur rakhna hoga

beti ab tumhare nirna par sab kuch tika hua hai ki tum kya chahti ho

sima( jo kafi had tak samaj chuki thi) - gurudev kon si maa nahi chayegi ki uski santan lamba jiwan jiye tik hai guru dev main apne avi ke jiwan ke liye uske apne se dur kar dungi

gurudev - ab apne ghar ki jawo beti aur ha beti ek baat yaad rakhna is bacche ko jo dud tum pilawogi us bartan ko sabse pahle bhagwon ke pass rahkna ( man mae maf karna beti mene tumse bahut si baatein chupiye hai par ye mere guru ka addesh tha)

ab aur kon si baat jo chupi hui hai isliye apko story phdte rahna hoga

aur fir samrat aur uski patni apne ghar ki aur nhikal padte hai

yaha boss kisi ko coll karta hai

boss - main bol raha hu

samne- ji sir kahiye kya kaam hai

boss- tumhare pass jarur samrat sing ke party ka inviteesn aya hoga

samne- ha ahr mujhe pata hai ki mujhe nahi jana hai app chinta mat karo

boss- chup bsdk pahale meri baat sun tujko us party main jana hoga aur ek baat dhyan se sun mera ek aadmi aa raha hai tere pass wo tujko ek lifafa dega aur us lifafe main jo hai wo samrat tak pauchna hoga tujko par uske ye nahi pata chalna chahiye ki lifafa tune diya aur us aadmi ko kese bhi karke uske ghar ke andar pucha dena samjha ab rak phone


boss- tumhare pass ek tofa behj raha hu samrat ha ha ha

aur is taraf pargy ki tayari ho chuki thi

car main samrat sima se

samrat- sima kya tum sach main avi ko apne se dur rkh pawogi

sima- agar mujhse door rahne par mere bacche ki zindagi sahi salamat ho to main isko apne se door kar dungi

samrat- kya is baat ko samar aur simar ko

sima bich mae hi- nahi nahi abhi kuch dino tak ye baat ham dono ke bich ho rahegi

samrat- par sima kabhi na kabhi to un dono ko ye baat batani hogi na

sima- ha app sahi bol rahe hai par jub sahi saymay aayega tab main unko ye baat bata dungi tab unko kush rahne dijiye

samrat- sayad tum sahi bol rahi ho

unke ghar jane tak party
ki lagbhg sabhi tayari ho chuki thi holl mai simar intjar kar rahi thi shath mae 2 bacche bhi the

simar- lawo didi mere bete ko mujhko do app dono aram karo

sima- are choti ab tere beta ka naam bhi hai

simar- dekho didi koi acha sa naam hi hona chahiye tik hai

sima( haste hue) ha Accha sa naam hai avinash aur hum sab ke liye avi

simar- hmm bahut accha naam hai mera avi

samrat - samir kaha hai

simar- ji bhaiya unhone sabko paety ke baare main bata diya sirf hamre kuch karibi ko kud hi batane gae hai baki sab tayari ho chuki hai app chinta mat kijiye

sima- choti tu bhi tum dono ke hote hue muhe chinta ki kya jarurat
chalo ab apni pasand ka apne bete ko kapde pahna do

simar- ji didi aur app apni dono rajkumariy ko

aur fir sabhi log kaode badlne chale gae
sham ho jati hai aur party suru ho jati hai kyunki samrat ek bahut bada businessman tha isliye party main high profile log aaye hue the in sab mae wo bhi tha jiske sath boss ka admi aaya hua tha

aadmi( man mai) - ye ishwar ye kis paap ki zaja de raha mujhe agar mene us (boss) ki baat nahi mani to mera pura parivar khatre main aa jaega aur main ajj apne parivaar ke liye sing parivar ko khatre main dal raha hu ye iswar ajj kuch yese ki hum dono ka parivar baach jaye

tab tak raghu boss ko coll karta hai

raghu - ha hallo malik main sing house pauch chuka hu ab age kya krana hai

boss- bahut khub raghu ab meri baat dyan se sun tere pass jo zahar hai uski tujko us bacche ko pilya jane wale dudh main mila dena hai par dhyan se kisi ko khabar nahi honi chahiye

raghu - tik hai makik uska janamdin hi uska maran din hoga ha ha ha....

kuch der baad ak pati patni ghar ke andar ate

reshma kapur aur ramesh kapur

( in sabhi ka full intro baad main dunga)

ramesh- samrat ke gake milta hua congratulations mere bhai akhir iswar ne teri sun li tujko papa aur mujhko chacha bana diya air bhabhi ki tabyat tik hai
aur ek baat bata ye party to tik hai par apni party ka kya hoga

samrat - shhh toda dhire bol agar teri bhabhi ne sun liya to

ramesh - hat bhabhi se apni biwi se darta hai

samrat- accha tu nahi darta ruk abhi bulata hu reshma bhabhi ko bhabhi

ramesh- are chup kar bhai main to majak kar raha tha

samrat- ha bhai ham dono ki hakat ek jesi hi hai bahar sher ghar mae billi par tu chinta mat kar apni party bhi hogi

idhar reshma aur sima apni baat par lage hue the

Reshma (toda haste hue) - sima toda apni sundarta ka raj to bata
Sima- o o o Mae
Reshma - koi Yoga ya fir ( apni ankhe utha kar or ankh mar kar) y fir hamare Bahi sahab ka pyaar hai ha
Or sabhi aurate hasne lagti hai
Sima - chup kar kamini
Reshma - hai meri jaan kese shrma rahi hai hmm





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Nice update bhai

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