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Update 9

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gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...




ab age

sima aur samrat ki aankhon se anshu bah rahe hai aur dono bolte hain

- gurudev ye app kya bol rahe abhi apne bola ki mera beta hamre parivaar ki har mushkil ko khatm kar dega aur abhi app bol rahe hai ki iski jaan

sima- gurudev ye kya samya hai kya paap kiye the hamne ki phale hamare parivar ko kabhi bhi baacha ( ladka) nahi hoga aur jab mujhe aulad mila to app bol rahe hai ki uski zindagi khatre main hogi kyu gurudev kyu

gurudev - beti main kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta ki is samya tumhare dil mae kitna kitna dard tumko kesa mahsus ho raha hoga ek maa se uski aulad ko dur karne ka vichar bhi nahi aana chahiye par beti yahi samay chahta hai isliye pahle meri baat suno uske baat vichar karna

samrat jiski ankhu main bhi anshu the par unko control karkr rakha hua tha kyuki usko apni patni ko sambhala tha

smrat- sima shant ho jawo dekho baba ki har baat aj tak galat sabit nahi hui hai ek baar gurudev ki puri baat sun lete hain boliye gurudev

gurudev - samrat tum jante ho ki tumhare pita ko ye sharp us mahan tapasvi ne diya ki "aj ke baad tere pure vansh mae koi bhi chirag( Ladka) peda nahi hoga" jiske karna tumhare balak se pura kisi ke yaha ladaka puda nahi hua fir uske baad tumhari maa bhabhi aur tumhari patni tino ne kai sadhu shanto ki seva ki jisme main bhi ek hu aur hum sabhi sadhu ke muh se sirf tumhari patni ke liye shantan ka ahsirwad diya jiske karan ham sabhi sadhu ke ahsirwad us sharap ko khatm to nahi sake par uska prabhwo jarur kam kiya isliye tumko ladkee ki prapti hui ab age suno tumko kya karana hai

is balak ke upar 5 sal se lekar 18 sal tak mrutu ki chya rahegi agar ye apni maa ke pas raha to parntu agar tum is balak ko apne pass iske 5 janamdin tak rakh sakte ho uske baad isko agle 18 janamdin tak apne se dur rakhna hoga uske baad iske upar se mruty ki chaya hat jaegi wese bhi beti ye balak tumse adhik tumhari bahan jesi nanad simar se pyara karega tumhare pass 5 sal honge apni mamta lutane ke liye uske baad apni vansh ke ek matr chirag ki zindagi ke liya usko apne dur rakhna hoga

beti ab tumhare nirna par sab kuch tika hua hai ki tum kya chahti ho

sima( jo kafi had tak samaj chuki thi) - gurudev kon si maa nahi chayegi ki uski santan lamba jiwan jiye tik hai guru dev main apne avi ke jiwan ke liye uske apne se dur kar dungi

gurudev - ab apne ghar ki jawo beti aur ha beti ek baat yaad rakhna is bacche ko jo dud tum pilawogi us bartan ko sabse pahle bhagwon ke pass rahkna ( man mae maf karna beti mene tumse bahut si baatein chupiye hai par ye mere guru ka addesh tha)

ab aur kon si baat jo chupi hui hai isliye apko story phdte rahna hoga

aur fir samrat aur uski patni apne ghar ki aur nhikal padte hai

yaha boss kisi ko coll karta hai

boss - main bol raha hu

samne- ji sir kahiye kya kaam hai

boss- tumhare pass jarur samrat sing ke party ka inviteesn aya hoga

samne- ha ahr mujhe pata hai ki mujhe nahi jana hai app chinta mat karo

boss- chup bsdk pahale meri baat sun tujko us party main jana hoga aur ek baat dhyan se sun mera ek aadmi aa raha hai tere pass wo tujko ek lifafa dega aur us lifafe main jo hai wo samrat tak pauchna hoga tujko par uske ye nahi pata chalna chahiye ki lifafa tune diya aur us aadmi ko kese bhi karke uske ghar ke andar pucha dena samjha ab rak phone


boss- tumhare pass ek tofa behj raha hu samrat ha ha ha

aur is taraf pargy ki tayari ho chuki thi

car main samrat sima se

samrat- sima kya tum sach main avi ko apne se dur rkh pawogi

sima- agar mujhse door rahne par mere bacche ki zindagi sahi salamat ho to main isko apne se door kar dungi

samrat- kya is baat ko samar aur simar ko

sima bich mae hi- nahi nahi abhi kuch dino tak ye baat ham dono ke bich ho rahegi

samrat- par sima kabhi na kabhi to un dono ko ye baat batani hogi na

sima- ha app sahi bol rahe hai par jub sahi saymay aayega tab main unko ye baat bata dungi tab unko kush rahne dijiye

samrat- sayad tum sahi bol rahi ho

unke ghar jane tak party
ki lagbhg sabhi tayari ho chuki thi holl mai simar intjar kar rahi thi shath mae 2 bacche bhi the

simar- lawo didi mere bete ko mujhko do app dono aram karo

sima- are choti ab tere beta ka naam bhi hai

simar- dekho didi koi acha sa naam hi hona chahiye tik hai

sima( haste hue) ha Accha sa naam hai avinash aur hum sab ke liye avi

simar- hmm bahut accha naam hai mera avi

samrat - samir kaha hai

simar- ji bhaiya unhone sabko paety ke baare main bata diya sirf hamre kuch karibi ko kud hi batane gae hai baki sab tayari ho chuki hai app chinta mat kijiye

sima- choti tu bhi tum dono ke hote hue muhe chinta ki kya jarurat
chalo ab apni pasand ka apne bete ko kapde pahna do

simar- ji didi aur app apni dono rajkumariy ko

aur fir sabhi log kaode badlne chale gae
sham ho jati hai aur party suru ho jati hai kyunki samrat ek bahut bada businessman tha isliye party main high profile log aaye hue the in sab mae wo bhi tha jiske sath boss ka admi aaya hua tha

aadmi( man mai) - ye ishwar ye kis paap ki zaja de raha mujhe agar mene us (boss) ki baat nahi mani to mera pura parivar khatre main aa jaega aur main ajj apne parivaar ke liye sing parivar ko khatre main dal raha hu ye iswar ajj kuch yese ki hum dono ka parivar baach jaye

tab tak raghu boss ko coll karta hai

raghu - ha hallo malik main sing house pauch chuka hu ab age kya krana hai

boss- bahut khub raghu ab meri baat dyan se sun tere pass jo zahar hai uski tujko us bacche ko pilya jane wale dudh main mila dena hai par dhyan se kisi ko khabar nahi honi chahiye

raghu - tik hai makik uska janamdin hi uska maran din hoga ha ha ha....

kuch der baad ak pati patni ghar ke andar ate

reshma kapur aur ramesh kapur

( in sabhi ka full intro baad main dunga)

ramesh- samrat ke gake milta hua congratulations mere bhai akhir iswar ne teri sun li tujko papa aur mujhko chacha bana diya air bhabhi ki tabyat tik hai
aur ek baat bata ye party to tik hai par apni party ka kya hoga

samrat - shhh toda dhire bol agar teri bhabhi ne sun liya to

ramesh - hat bhabhi se apni biwi se darta hai

samrat- accha tu nahi darta ruk abhi bulata hu reshma bhabhi ko bhabhi

ramesh- are chup kar bhai main to majak kar raha tha

samrat- ha bhai ham dono ki hakat ek jesi hi hai bahar sher ghar mae billi par tu chinta mat kar apni party bhi hogi

idhar reshma aur sima apni baat par lage hue the

Reshma (toda haste hue) - sima toda apni sundarta ka raj to bata
Sima- o o o Mae
Reshma - koi Yoga ya fir ( apni ankhe utha kar or ankh mar kar) y fir hamare Bahi sahab ka pyaar hai ha
Or sabhi aurate hasne lagti hai
Sima - chup kar kamini
Reshma - hai meri jaan kese shrma rahi hai hmm





next update jaldi hi

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[Yash420]

Update 9

previous

gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...




ab age

sima aur samrat ki aankhon se anshu bah rahe hai aur dono bolte hain

- gurudev ye app kya bol rahe abhi apne bola ki mera beta hamre parivaar ki har mushkil ko khatm kar dega aur abhi app bol rahe hai ki iski jaan

sima- gurudev ye kya samya hai kya paap kiye the hamne ki phale hamare parivar ko kabhi bhi baacha ( ladka) nahi hoga aur jab mujhe aulad mila to app bol rahe hai ki uski zindagi khatre main hogi kyu gurudev kyu

gurudev - beti main kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta ki is samya tumhare dil mae kitna kitna dard tumko kesa mahsus ho raha hoga ek maa se uski aulad ko dur karne ka vichar bhi nahi aana chahiye par beti yahi samay chahta hai isliye pahle meri baat suno uske baat vichar karna

samrat jiski ankhu main bhi anshu the par unko control karkr rakha hua tha kyuki usko apni patni ko sambhala tha

smrat- sima shant ho jawo dekho baba ki har baat aj tak galat sabit nahi hui hai ek baar gurudev ki puri baat sun lete hain boliye gurudev

gurudev - samrat tum jante ho ki tumhare pita ko ye sharp us mahan tapasvi ne diya ki "aj ke baad tere pure vansh mae koi bhi chirag( Ladka) peda nahi hoga" jiske karna tumhare balak se pura kisi ke yaha ladaka puda nahi hua fir uske baad tumhari maa bhabhi aur tumhari patni tino ne kai sadhu shanto ki seva ki jisme main bhi ek hu aur hum sabhi sadhu ke muh se sirf tumhari patni ke liye shantan ka ahsirwad diya jiske karan ham sabhi sadhu ke ahsirwad us sharap ko khatm to nahi sake par uska prabhwo jarur kam kiya isliye tumko ladkee ki prapti hui ab age suno tumko kya karana hai

is balak ke upar 5 sal se lekar 18 sal tak mrutu ki chya rahegi agar ye apni maa ke pas raha to parntu agar tum is balak ko apne pass iske 5 janamdin tak rakh sakte ho uske baad isko agle 18 janamdin tak apne se dur rakhna hoga uske baad iske upar se mruty ki chaya hat jaegi wese bhi beti ye balak tumse adhik tumhari bahan jesi nanad simar se pyara karega tumhare pass 5 sal honge apni mamta lutane ke liye uske baad apni vansh ke ek matr chirag ki zindagi ke liya usko apne dur rakhna hoga

beti ab tumhare nirna par sab kuch tika hua hai ki tum kya chahti ho

sima( jo kafi had tak samaj chuki thi) - gurudev kon si maa nahi chayegi ki uski santan lamba jiwan jiye tik hai guru dev main apne avi ke jiwan ke liye uske apne se dur kar dungi

gurudev - ab apne ghar ki jawo beti aur ha beti ek baat yaad rakhna is bacche ko jo dud tum pilawogi us bartan ko sabse pahle bhagwon ke pass rahkna ( man mae maf karna beti mene tumse bahut si baatein chupiye hai par ye mere guru ka addesh tha)

ab aur kon si baat jo chupi hui hai isliye apko story phdte rahna hoga

aur fir samrat aur uski patni apne ghar ki aur nhikal padte hai

yaha boss kisi ko coll karta hai

boss - main bol raha hu

samne- ji sir kahiye kya kaam hai

boss- tumhare pass jarur samrat sing ke party ka inviteesn aya hoga

samne- ha ahr mujhe pata hai ki mujhe nahi jana hai app chinta mat karo

boss- chup bsdk pahale meri baat sun tujko us party main jana hoga aur ek baat dhyan se sun mera ek aadmi aa raha hai tere pass wo tujko ek lifafa dega aur us lifafe main jo hai wo samrat tak pauchna hoga tujko par uske ye nahi pata chalna chahiye ki lifafa tune diya aur us aadmi ko kese bhi karke uske ghar ke andar pucha dena samjha ab rak phone


boss- tumhare pass ek tofa behj raha hu samrat ha ha ha

aur is taraf pargy ki tayari ho chuki thi

car main samrat sima se

samrat- sima kya tum sach main avi ko apne se dur rkh pawogi

sima- agar mujhse door rahne par mere bacche ki zindagi sahi salamat ho to main isko apne se door kar dungi

samrat- kya is baat ko samar aur simar ko

sima bich mae hi- nahi nahi abhi kuch dino tak ye baat ham dono ke bich ho rahegi

samrat- par sima kabhi na kabhi to un dono ko ye baat batani hogi na

sima- ha app sahi bol rahe hai par jub sahi saymay aayega tab main unko ye baat bata dungi tab unko kush rahne dijiye

samrat- sayad tum sahi bol rahi ho

unke ghar jane tak party
ki lagbhg sabhi tayari ho chuki thi holl mai simar intjar kar rahi thi shath mae 2 bacche bhi the

simar- lawo didi mere bete ko mujhko do app dono aram karo

sima- are choti ab tere beta ka naam bhi hai

simar- dekho didi koi acha sa naam hi hona chahiye tik hai

sima( haste hue) ha Accha sa naam hai avinash aur hum sab ke liye avi

simar- hmm bahut accha naam hai mera avi

samrat - samir kaha hai

simar- ji bhaiya unhone sabko paety ke baare main bata diya sirf hamre kuch karibi ko kud hi batane gae hai baki sab tayari ho chuki hai app chinta mat kijiye

sima- choti tu bhi tum dono ke hote hue muhe chinta ki kya jarurat
chalo ab apni pasand ka apne bete ko kapde pahna do

simar- ji didi aur app apni dono rajkumariy ko

aur fir sabhi log kaode badlne chale gae
sham ho jati hai aur party suru ho jati hai kyunki samrat ek bahut bada businessman tha isliye party main high profile log aaye hue the in sab mae wo bhi tha jiske sath boss ka admi aaya hua tha

aadmi( man mai) - ye ishwar ye kis paap ki zaja de raha mujhe agar mene us (boss) ki baat nahi mani to mera pura parivar khatre main aa jaega aur main ajj apne parivaar ke liye sing parivar ko khatre main dal raha hu ye iswar ajj kuch yese ki hum dono ka parivar baach jaye

tab tak raghu boss ko coll karta hai

raghu - ha hallo malik main sing house pauch chuka hu ab age kya krana hai

boss- bahut khub raghu ab meri baat dyan se sun tere pass jo zahar hai uski tujko us bacche ko pilya jane wale dudh main mila dena hai par dhyan se kisi ko khabar nahi honi chahiye

raghu - tik hai makik uska janamdin hi uska maran din hoga ha ha ha....

kuch der baad ak pati patni ghar ke andar ate

reshma kapur aur ramesh kapur

( in sabhi ka full intro baad main dunga)

ramesh- samrat ke gake milta hua congratulations mere bhai akhir iswar ne teri sun li tujko papa aur mujhko chacha bana diya air bhabhi ki tabyat tik hai
aur ek baat bata ye party to tik hai par apni party ka kya hoga

samrat - shhh toda dhire bol agar teri bhabhi ne sun liya to

ramesh - hat bhabhi se apni biwi se darta hai

samrat- accha tu nahi darta ruk abhi bulata hu reshma bhabhi ko bhabhi

ramesh- are chup kar bhai main to majak kar raha tha

samrat- ha bhai ham dono ki hakat ek jesi hi hai bahar sher ghar mae billi par tu chinta mat kar apni party bhi hogi

idhar reshma aur sima apni baat par lage hue the

Reshma (toda haste hue) - sima toda apni sundarta ka raj to bata
Sima- o o o Mae
Reshma - koi Yoga ya fir ( apni ankhe utha kar or ankh mar kar) y fir hamare Bahi sahab ka pyaar hai ha
Or sabhi aurate hasne lagti hai
Sima - chup kar kamini
Reshma - hai meri jaan kese shrma rahi hai hmm





next update jaldi hi

Great Update Bhai

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 9

previous

gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...




ab age

sima aur samrat ki aankhon se anshu bah rahe hai aur dono bolte hain

- gurudev ye app kya bol rahe abhi apne bola ki mera beta hamre parivaar ki har mushkil ko khatm kar dega aur abhi app bol rahe hai ki iski jaan

sima- gurudev ye kya samya hai kya paap kiye the hamne ki phale hamare parivar ko kabhi bhi baacha ( ladka) nahi hoga aur jab mujhe aulad mila to app bol rahe hai ki uski zindagi khatre main hogi kyu gurudev kyu

gurudev - beti main kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta ki is samya tumhare dil mae kitna kitna dard tumko kesa mahsus ho raha hoga ek maa se uski aulad ko dur karne ka vichar bhi nahi aana chahiye par beti yahi samay chahta hai isliye pahle meri baat suno uske baat vichar karna

samrat jiski ankhu main bhi anshu the par unko control karkr rakha hua tha kyuki usko apni patni ko sambhala tha

smrat- sima shant ho jawo dekho baba ki har baat aj tak galat sabit nahi hui hai ek baar gurudev ki puri baat sun lete hain boliye gurudev

gurudev - samrat tum jante ho ki tumhare pita ko ye sharp us mahan tapasvi ne diya ki "aj ke baad tere pure vansh mae koi bhi chirag( Ladka) peda nahi hoga" jiske karna tumhare balak se pura kisi ke yaha ladaka puda nahi hua fir uske baad tumhari maa bhabhi aur tumhari patni tino ne kai sadhu shanto ki seva ki jisme main bhi ek hu aur hum sabhi sadhu ke muh se sirf tumhari patni ke liye shantan ka ahsirwad diya jiske karan ham sabhi sadhu ke ahsirwad us sharap ko khatm to nahi sake par uska prabhwo jarur kam kiya isliye tumko ladkee ki prapti hui ab age suno tumko kya karana hai

is balak ke upar 5 sal se lekar 18 sal tak mrutu ki chya rahegi agar ye apni maa ke pas raha to parntu agar tum is balak ko apne pass iske 5 janamdin tak rakh sakte ho uske baad isko agle 18 janamdin tak apne se dur rakhna hoga uske baad iske upar se mruty ki chaya hat jaegi wese bhi beti ye balak tumse adhik tumhari bahan jesi nanad simar se pyara karega tumhare pass 5 sal honge apni mamta lutane ke liye uske baad apni vansh ke ek matr chirag ki zindagi ke liya usko apne dur rakhna hoga

beti ab tumhare nirna par sab kuch tika hua hai ki tum kya chahti ho

sima( jo kafi had tak samaj chuki thi) - gurudev kon si maa nahi chayegi ki uski santan lamba jiwan jiye tik hai guru dev main apne avi ke jiwan ke liye uske apne se dur kar dungi

gurudev - ab apne ghar ki jawo beti aur ha beti ek baat yaad rakhna is bacche ko jo dud tum pilawogi us bartan ko sabse pahle bhagwon ke pass rahkna ( man mae maf karna beti mene tumse bahut si baatein chupiye hai par ye mere guru ka addesh tha)

ab aur kon si baat jo chupi hui hai isliye apko story phdte rahna hoga

aur fir samrat aur uski patni apne ghar ki aur nhikal padte hai

yaha boss kisi ko coll karta hai

boss - main bol raha hu

samne- ji sir kahiye kya kaam hai

boss- tumhare pass jarur samrat sing ke party ka inviteesn aya hoga

samne- ha ahr mujhe pata hai ki mujhe nahi jana hai app chinta mat karo

boss- chup bsdk pahale meri baat sun tujko us party main jana hoga aur ek baat dhyan se sun mera ek aadmi aa raha hai tere pass wo tujko ek lifafa dega aur us lifafe main jo hai wo samrat tak pauchna hoga tujko par uske ye nahi pata chalna chahiye ki lifafa tune diya aur us aadmi ko kese bhi karke uske ghar ke andar pucha dena samjha ab rak phone


boss- tumhare pass ek tofa behj raha hu samrat ha ha ha

aur is taraf pargy ki tayari ho chuki thi

car main samrat sima se

samrat- sima kya tum sach main avi ko apne se dur rkh pawogi

sima- agar mujhse door rahne par mere bacche ki zindagi sahi salamat ho to main isko apne se door kar dungi

samrat- kya is baat ko samar aur simar ko

sima bich mae hi- nahi nahi abhi kuch dino tak ye baat ham dono ke bich ho rahegi

samrat- par sima kabhi na kabhi to un dono ko ye baat batani hogi na

sima- ha app sahi bol rahe hai par jub sahi saymay aayega tab main unko ye baat bata dungi tab unko kush rahne dijiye

samrat- sayad tum sahi bol rahi ho

unke ghar jane tak party
ki lagbhg sabhi tayari ho chuki thi holl mai simar intjar kar rahi thi shath mae 2 bacche bhi the

simar- lawo didi mere bete ko mujhko do app dono aram karo

sima- are choti ab tere beta ka naam bhi hai

simar- dekho didi koi acha sa naam hi hona chahiye tik hai

sima( haste hue) ha Accha sa naam hai avinash aur hum sab ke liye avi

simar- hmm bahut accha naam hai mera avi

samrat - samir kaha hai

simar- ji bhaiya unhone sabko paety ke baare main bata diya sirf hamre kuch karibi ko kud hi batane gae hai baki sab tayari ho chuki hai app chinta mat kijiye

sima- choti tu bhi tum dono ke hote hue muhe chinta ki kya jarurat
chalo ab apni pasand ka apne bete ko kapde pahna do

simar- ji didi aur app apni dono rajkumariy ko

aur fir sabhi log kaode badlne chale gae
sham ho jati hai aur party suru ho jati hai kyunki samrat ek bahut bada businessman tha isliye party main high profile log aaye hue the in sab mae wo bhi tha jiske sath boss ka admi aaya hua tha

aadmi( man mai) - ye ishwar ye kis paap ki zaja de raha mujhe agar mene us (boss) ki baat nahi mani to mera pura parivar khatre main aa jaega aur main ajj apne parivaar ke liye sing parivar ko khatre main dal raha hu ye iswar ajj kuch yese ki hum dono ka parivar baach jaye

tab tak raghu boss ko coll karta hai

raghu - ha hallo malik main sing house pauch chuka hu ab age kya krana hai

boss- bahut khub raghu ab meri baat dyan se sun tere pass jo zahar hai uski tujko us bacche ko pilya jane wale dudh main mila dena hai par dhyan se kisi ko khabar nahi honi chahiye

raghu - tik hai makik uska janamdin hi uska maran din hoga ha ha ha....

kuch der baad ak pati patni ghar ke andar ate

reshma kapur aur ramesh kapur

( in sabhi ka full intro baad main dunga)

ramesh- samrat ke gake milta hua congratulations mere bhai akhir iswar ne teri sun li tujko papa aur mujhko chacha bana diya air bhabhi ki tabyat tik hai
aur ek baat bata ye party to tik hai par apni party ka kya hoga

samrat - shhh toda dhire bol agar teri bhabhi ne sun liya to

ramesh - hat bhabhi se apni biwi se darta hai

samrat- accha tu nahi darta ruk abhi bulata hu reshma bhabhi ko bhabhi

ramesh- are chup kar bhai main to majak kar raha tha

samrat- ha bhai ham dono ki hakat ek jesi hi hai bahar sher ghar mae billi par tu chinta mat kar apni party bhi hogi

idhar reshma aur sima apni baat par lage hue the

Reshma (toda haste hue) - sima toda apni sundarta ka raj to bata
Sima- o o o Mae
Reshma - koi Yoga ya fir ( apni ankhe utha kar or ankh mar kar) y fir hamare Bahi sahab ka pyaar hai ha
Or sabhi aurate hasne lagti hai
Sima - chup kar kamini
Reshma - hai meri jaan kese shrma rahi hai hmm





next update jaldi hi

Nice update bro

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Update 9

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gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...




ab age

sima aur samrat ki aankhon se anshu bah rahe hai aur dono bolte hain

- gurudev ye app kya bol rahe abhi apne bola ki mera beta hamre parivaar ki har mushkil ko khatm kar dega aur abhi app bol rahe hai ki iski jaan

sima- gurudev ye kya samya hai kya paap kiye the hamne ki phale hamare parivar ko kabhi bhi baacha ( ladka) nahi hoga aur jab mujhe aulad mila to app bol rahe hai ki uski zindagi khatre main hogi kyu gurudev kyu

gurudev - beti main kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta ki is samya tumhare dil mae kitna kitna dard tumko kesa mahsus ho raha hoga ek maa se uski aulad ko dur karne ka vichar bhi nahi aana chahiye par beti yahi samay chahta hai isliye pahle meri baat suno uske baat vichar karna

samrat jiski ankhu main bhi anshu the par unko control karkr rakha hua tha kyuki usko apni patni ko sambhala tha

smrat- sima shant ho jawo dekho baba ki har baat aj tak galat sabit nahi hui hai ek baar gurudev ki puri baat sun lete hain boliye gurudev

gurudev - samrat tum jante ho ki tumhare pita ko ye sharp us mahan tapasvi ne diya ki "aj ke baad tere pure vansh mae koi bhi chirag( Ladka) peda nahi hoga" jiske karna tumhare balak se pura kisi ke yaha ladaka puda nahi hua fir uske baad tumhari maa bhabhi aur tumhari patni tino ne kai sadhu shanto ki seva ki jisme main bhi ek hu aur hum sabhi sadhu ke muh se sirf tumhari patni ke liye shantan ka ahsirwad diya jiske karan ham sabhi sadhu ke ahsirwad us sharap ko khatm to nahi sake par uska prabhwo jarur kam kiya isliye tumko ladkee ki prapti hui ab age suno tumko kya karana hai

is balak ke upar 5 sal se lekar 18 sal tak mrutu ki chya rahegi agar ye apni maa ke pas raha to parntu agar tum is balak ko apne pass iske 5 janamdin tak rakh sakte ho uske baad isko agle 18 janamdin tak apne se dur rakhna hoga uske baad iske upar se mruty ki chaya hat jaegi wese bhi beti ye balak tumse adhik tumhari bahan jesi nanad simar se pyara karega tumhare pass 5 sal honge apni mamta lutane ke liye uske baad apni vansh ke ek matr chirag ki zindagi ke liya usko apne dur rakhna hoga

beti ab tumhare nirna par sab kuch tika hua hai ki tum kya chahti ho

sima( jo kafi had tak samaj chuki thi) - gurudev kon si maa nahi chayegi ki uski santan lamba jiwan jiye tik hai guru dev main apne avi ke jiwan ke liye uske apne se dur kar dungi

gurudev - ab apne ghar ki jawo beti aur ha beti ek baat yaad rakhna is bacche ko jo dud tum pilawogi us bartan ko sabse pahle bhagwon ke pass rahkna ( man mae maf karna beti mene tumse bahut si baatein chupiye hai par ye mere guru ka addesh tha)

ab aur kon si baat jo chupi hui hai isliye apko story phdte rahna hoga

aur fir samrat aur uski patni apne ghar ki aur nhikal padte hai

yaha boss kisi ko coll karta hai

boss - main bol raha hu

samne- ji sir kahiye kya kaam hai

boss- tumhare pass jarur samrat sing ke party ka inviteesn aya hoga

samne- ha ahr mujhe pata hai ki mujhe nahi jana hai app chinta mat karo

boss- chup bsdk pahale meri baat sun tujko us party main jana hoga aur ek baat dhyan se sun mera ek aadmi aa raha hai tere pass wo tujko ek lifafa dega aur us lifafe main jo hai wo samrat tak pauchna hoga tujko par uske ye nahi pata chalna chahiye ki lifafa tune diya aur us aadmi ko kese bhi karke uske ghar ke andar pucha dena samjha ab rak phone


boss- tumhare pass ek tofa behj raha hu samrat ha ha ha

aur is taraf pargy ki tayari ho chuki thi

car main samrat sima se

samrat- sima kya tum sach main avi ko apne se dur rkh pawogi

sima- agar mujhse door rahne par mere bacche ki zindagi sahi salamat ho to main isko apne se door kar dungi

samrat- kya is baat ko samar aur simar ko

sima bich mae hi- nahi nahi abhi kuch dino tak ye baat ham dono ke bich ho rahegi

samrat- par sima kabhi na kabhi to un dono ko ye baat batani hogi na

sima- ha app sahi bol rahe hai par jub sahi saymay aayega tab main unko ye baat bata dungi tab unko kush rahne dijiye

samrat- sayad tum sahi bol rahi ho

unke ghar jane tak party
ki lagbhg sabhi tayari ho chuki thi holl mai simar intjar kar rahi thi shath mae 2 bacche bhi the

simar- lawo didi mere bete ko mujhko do app dono aram karo

sima- are choti ab tere beta ka naam bhi hai

simar- dekho didi koi acha sa naam hi hona chahiye tik hai

sima( haste hue) ha Accha sa naam hai avinash aur hum sab ke liye avi

simar- hmm bahut accha naam hai mera avi

samrat - samir kaha hai

simar- ji bhaiya unhone sabko paety ke baare main bata diya sirf hamre kuch karibi ko kud hi batane gae hai baki sab tayari ho chuki hai app chinta mat kijiye

sima- choti tu bhi tum dono ke hote hue muhe chinta ki kya jarurat
chalo ab apni pasand ka apne bete ko kapde pahna do

simar- ji didi aur app apni dono rajkumariy ko

aur fir sabhi log kaode badlne chale gae
sham ho jati hai aur party suru ho jati hai kyunki samrat ek bahut bada businessman tha isliye party main high profile log aaye hue the in sab mae wo bhi tha jiske sath boss ka admi aaya hua tha

aadmi( man mai) - ye ishwar ye kis paap ki zaja de raha mujhe agar mene us (boss) ki baat nahi mani to mera pura parivar khatre main aa jaega aur main ajj apne parivaar ke liye sing parivar ko khatre main dal raha hu ye iswar ajj kuch yese ki hum dono ka parivar baach jaye

tab tak raghu boss ko coll karta hai

raghu - ha hallo malik main sing house pauch chuka hu ab age kya krana hai

boss- bahut khub raghu ab meri baat dyan se sun tere pass jo zahar hai uski tujko us bacche ko pilya jane wale dudh main mila dena hai par dhyan se kisi ko khabar nahi honi chahiye

raghu - tik hai makik uska janamdin hi uska maran din hoga ha ha ha....

kuch der baad ak pati patni ghar ke andar ate

reshma kapur aur ramesh kapur

( in sabhi ka full intro baad main dunga)

ramesh- samrat ke gake milta hua congratulations mere bhai akhir iswar ne teri sun li tujko papa aur mujhko chacha bana diya air bhabhi ki tabyat tik hai
aur ek baat bata ye party to tik hai par apni party ka kya hoga

samrat - shhh toda dhire bol agar teri bhabhi ne sun liya to

ramesh - hat bhabhi se apni biwi se darta hai

samrat- accha tu nahi darta ruk abhi bulata hu reshma bhabhi ko bhabhi

ramesh- are chup kar bhai main to majak kar raha tha

samrat- ha bhai ham dono ki hakat ek jesi hi hai bahar sher ghar mae billi par tu chinta mat kar apni party bhi hogi

idhar reshma aur sima apni baat par lage hue the

Reshma (toda haste hue) - sima toda apni sundarta ka raj to bata
Sima- o o o Mae
Reshma - koi Yoga ya fir ( apni ankhe utha kar or ankh mar kar) y fir hamare Bahi sahab ka pyaar hai ha
Or sabhi aurate hasne lagti hai
Sima - chup kar kamini
Reshma - hai meri jaan kese shrma rahi hai hmm





next update jaldi hi

Fabulous update..

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

 

[Nevil singh]

To dosto isse phale ki main is story ke update apko du is story ke baare mae jan lete hai aur ha yaha sirf nam ek saman hoga ( is story mae kisi bhi gods ya devo ke nam ka upayog nahi hoga unki jagha ek kalpanik nam aur character ka upyog hoga)

story concept - ye story ek fantasy, magical, adventure, action, suspense thriller and blood se bhari hogi


( note - is story ka kisi bhi religions ko hart nahi karega isme kisi bhi tarah se ramayan ke kisi bhi character ke nam upyoug nahi hoga)

Raavan jab bhi hum is naam ko sunte hai to hame ramayan ke sabse khunkar rakchas aur asuro ke raja ki yaad ati ek khunkar, gamandi, dust aur papi par uske kuch ache chije bhi jo ki apko pata hogi aur nahi to mae apko bata deta hu
Ek prakand Pandit, ek itna Gyani ki uska gayan hum jese 10 sir( dimag) mae bhi na sama paye, bagwan mahadev ke mahan bhakto mae se ek, jisne apni Bhakti aur tapsya ke bal par itni adhik shakti arjit kr li ko ek ajit raja ban gaya
Par kahte hai na zada sakti ghamnd ka karan banti hai aur ghamnd vinash ka karan banta hai aur yahi gamand Raavan aur uske puri jati ko le duba

( note - to dosto mene jo upar likha hai us par dhyan jarur dena Kyuki is story ka hero ya villian ki adat usi ke jese hogi)


YY mera purani story king of death hi hai bus suruwat ke update alag honge

nayi kahani ki bahut bahut badhai mitr

 

[Nevil singh]

update 1


To chaliye suru karte hai jese ki lagbhag har fantasy story mae hota hai universe ka nirman kese hua to yaha bhi wese hi hoga

To hum rahte hai earth par aur hamre earth ke alawa 8 aur grh hai aur hamara sun ( Suraj)

To aj se na jane kitno Samy pehle ( kya pata hamre universe ka nirman kis time hua hoga) jab kuch nahi bhi nahi tha us wakt sirf ek bahut hi chamkili urja thi ( isme har rang mile hue the)
Aur urja mae ek wisfot ( blast) hua aur wo urja na jane kitne hi bhago mae bat gaya par iske par ek pramuk urja pind ( jo ek ande jesa tha) iske 3 tukdo hye jinme jivan hua matlab jinhone apna rup liya
Magar usme bahut samya tha aur is samya sirf us paramuk urja aur unke hi jese urja ne rup liya jisko hum parampita ke nan se janege wo bilkul hi ek safed aur golden colour ki unki skin thi jo chamak rahi thi aur chamkile ball bhi aur unke saath unhi ke jese ek stri bhi bani jinko rani maa bolenge un dono ki ankhe band thi kuch samya bad unki chetna ka vikas hua aur unhone apni ankhe koli aur sabhi aur dekhne lage aur sochne loge ki - hame kisne banaya hai aur kis liye tabhi us urja se awaj aai

Urja- tumko mene janam diya hai baccho ek tarha se tum meri hi santan ho

Dono ne urja ko dekha aur juk gae

Urja- utho baccho aur jo bhi sawal hai tum dono ke man man mae bolo Aur haa tum dono pati patni ho

Parmpita- main jan gaya ki app ne hame banaya hai par kyu aur humko kya karna hoga

Urja- ab is universe ki jimedari tumko utani hogi aur ha ek baat dhyan rahe tum dono ke andar meri saktiya hai

Parmpita- tik hai magar muje uske liye kya karna hoga

Urja- tumko sirf intjar karna hoga in do urja ko dekh rahe ho

Paempita ke samne 2 urja ke gole the ek jo safed tha par puri tarha se nahi usme kuch kali roshni bhi thi jabhi dusre mae kali aur lal roshni jada thi

Urja- in dono se 2 jivan ka nirman hoga ek jisko tumhe lord king nam dena hoga aur dusre ko demon king ye dono hi is Universe mae achi aur buri sakti ke malik honge

Parampita - ji tik par duniya ke liye kya- kya lagega

Tab us urja ke anginat tukde the usnese bahut si galaxy ka nirmn hua aur sath hi unke andar taro, grh aur bhi bahut kuch par us pramuk urja se ek 7 rango ( 7 Rambo) ki roshni nikli aur us roshni ne rup lena suru kiya aur ek bahut hi sundar stri mae badal gai

Parampita- ye kon hai

Urja- ye hai prkriti ( nature) hai ye tumhari madad karegi is duniya ko chalne mae ye is puri duniya mae rahegi kisi na kisi rup mae

Aur fir wo nature kai alag alag urja se har ek grh mae chali gai

Parampita- tik hai par ab jivan ka nirman

Fir us urja ne apne andar se anginat chote chote roshni ( atma) jo ki alag alag jiv bane

Urja - ab jo main bol raha dhyan se suno ab in dono urja se jinka nirman hoga unki mili juli adat se ( achi- buri) se insano ki rachna karna aur mujhe ek vachan ( promise) do ki tum inko kabhi pata lagne nahi doge ki tumhare upar bhi koi hai inke liye sirf tum hi inke janamdata ho jawoo aur devo ka nirman karo jo in 5 tatwo ( element) par apna control kare

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In sab ke bad wo urja gaayab ho gya aur parampita aur unki patni ke liye us urja ne mahal ka nirman kiya

Samya apni raftar se chalta gaya aur earth par anyek ( deferent) prakar ke jivan bane aur khatam hua

Aur is bich demon king aur lord king ne parampita aur apni soch mila kar insano ki rachna ki aur un sabhi mae jivn us pramuk urja ( atma) se aai

Aur sun ko chod sabhi 8 grh mae jivan ki rachna hui

Par samya ne apna khel khela aur demon, lord ke bich dusmani badi ( ye dusmani kese hua isliye apko intjar karna hoga iska razz bahut bad open hoga)

To ab Chalate hain sirf 4 grh ke introduction par

1 Tha lighting grh - iska yesa nam is liye pada Kyuki yaha par Phoenix's ka Raz tha
( phoenix - ek yesa jiv jiska asli rup ek chil ki tarah hota hai aur iske pankho ki jagah agg hoti hai phoenix ek tarah se immortal hote hai Kyuki ye fir se apni rakh se wapas jinda ho jate hai inki kai powers hoti hai joki apko story mae pata chalge)

2 Tha lord grh- yaha par lord unki family aur unki Vishal sena ka razz tha Kyuki lord bhi us urja se baane the unke pass bahut si powers thi inki powers aur inki family ke bare mae dhire dhire apko pata chalega


3- Tha dark grh- ya Razz tha demon king unki family aur sena ka inke bare mae bhi baad mae pata chalega


4- earth - yani hamara ghar jaha par kisi ka raj nahi tha balki yaha sabhi jiv jantu aur insaan apne hisab se ji rahe the

Par samya fir badla aur insaan ke andar buraiyo ko apnane lage aur khun, lut- pat rep, jese crime hone lage demon king ki soch se kuch insaan ne kali takto ki puja karna suru kiya
Wahi lord king ki soch se achi takto ki bhi puja hui ( note yaha gods ki puja ka jikr nahi kiya ja raha hai)

Demon king aur lord dono hi duniya par raj karna chahte the par parampita unko rok diya

Samya badta gaya aur lord demon king ki powers bhi badti gai aur insano ka Lalach bhi aur aa gaya 21 century matlab science ka yug ab sab kuch badal chuka tha insaan ne ek dusre se age hone ki hod mae yese yese vinashak weapon ka nirman kar liya jinke upyog se sab kuch barbad ho sakta tha

rachnatmak update mitr