Fantasy ? Raavan ? ( Ek Naam Ya Ek Razz )

[Naik]

Update 3

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Ladki - pita ji tik hai par mera koi naam bhi rakh dijiye

Demon king - jarur meri bacchi jarur tumhara naam hoga death queen

Death queen - sukriya pita ji ,

Aur wo chali gai ab demon king muskurakar

Demon king - mene apni chal chal di ab tumhari bari lord king ha ha ha ha


Ab age chalte hain ?

ab hum log chod dete hai demon king ko aur chalte hain grh 2 jaha lord ka rajya tha

to toda lord ke mahal ke bare main jaan lete hai ?

to lord bahut takatwar the to jahir si baat hai uska mahal bhi uski anusar hoga to lord ka mahal jo hai ek sunahri jil ( ) ke bich bana hua tha aur jiske charo aur ek sundar sa jangal tha

jese mene bola ki lord bahut takatwar hai to uski wo jil bhi magical thi matlab wo jil suraj ki roshani mae pani tha aur jab suraj ki roshni nahi hoti wo pura jil golden ho jata ( matlab sone ka pani) ? aur us jil aur lord ke mahal ki surkcha ek golden dragon karta ? tha jisko sirf lord aur uske kuch chuninda log kabu kar sakte the






lord ka mahal bhi raat mae jil ke jese hi golden ho jata tha aur ye mahal jil mae hamesa apni jagha badalta rahta tha ?

lord ka darbar jaha wo betha hua tha aur is darbar ki sabse badi baat ye thi ki is darbar mae rahne wale kisi bhi ko na to bhuk lagti na pyaas, na gussa na kamjori ya takawat








to ye huwa lord ke mahal ke bare mae ab chalte hai story par ?

( ap sabhi soch rahe honge mene sab ko paka diya aur yaha light off hai ? aur muje ? ? gussa aa raha hai fir bhi update likh raha hu ? review nahi mila tho kaat daalunga ? )

To jab apni death queen earth ki aur nikli to jese hi wo dark planet ki sima ( ladki ka naam nahi ?) se bahar nikli ( wo jo story main bolte hai na ki portal khola aur is grh paunch gaya lol yesa nahi hota portal tabhi kaam karta hai jab ek jagh se dusri jagha ki duru jada na ho aur yaha to dusre grh jana hai)

tab lord ko kisi anjan sakti ka ayesas ho gaya aur usne turan usko khojne ki kosis ki jab usko pata chala ki dark grh se koi sakti earth ki aur ja rahi hai to usne socha ki demon hoga par jub usne "death queen" ko dekha to soch ? mae pad gaya

apne darbar main wo kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha aur soch mae gum tha?

lord- hmm pahli baar yesa hua ki demon king ki chal ne mujhe chinta ( tension) main dal diya akhir wo kon thi

ki tabhi uske darbar main marco aya ( draco aur marco dono hi bhai hai par sohotele ( stepbrother) )

marco_ maharaja ki jay wo apne mujhe ki kaam ke liye yaad kiya maharaja

lord - betho marco fir main tumko yaha bulane ki wajah batata hu

marco apne bhai draco ki tarha hi apne apne maharaja ka wafadar tha aur hosyar ( intelligent) usne lord ke chahre ( face) ko dekh kar hi samaj gaya ki baat kuch gambhir hai ( Gotham gambhir nahi ?) fir wo apni jagha beth gaya fir lord ne chupi todte hue bola

lord - marco abhi abhi mujhe pata chala ki demon king ne ek nai (new) rachana ( invention) ki hai jo ki dharti ki aur ja rahi hai

marco- tik hai maharaja par apne bola ki ja rahi hai iska matlab ki

lord bich mae tokte hue ( sala aj kal to sab log bich mae apni naak gusad dete hai ?)

lord - ha tum sahi soch rahe ho is baar koi ladki hai dekho

aur lord apna hath agge karte hai jisse ek roshni marco ki ankho mae jati hai aur usko wo dikhta hai jo lord ne dekha tha

lord - yahi baat mujhe pareshaan kar rahi hai ki ye kon si sakti hai jo demon king ke pass hai kyunki uss sakti se white energy mahesu ho rahi hai

jaha lord ye sab bol rahe the wahi marco soch raha tha aur uske chahre par muskaan ☺ aa gai

marco- maharaja mujhe pata chal gaya demon king ki us power ke bare mein

lord- kya ?itni jaldi par kese wo sab chodo aur ye batao kon si sakti hai wo

marco- maharaj wo sakti apke bhi pass hai

lord- kya mere pass bhi hai par

marco- maharaja apne syaad dhyaan nahi diya ki us ladki ke charo aur hari ( green) roshni thi aur sath hi bahut si titliya thi aur dono chije sirf ek hi prajti ke pass hai








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lord - tumhara matlab hai fairies tik hai maan liya ki wo fairies hai par usme kali sakti kese hai
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marco- maharaja app bhul rahe hai ki jub apne aur demon king ne fairies queen ko ye wada kiya tha ( kya wada tha uske liye padte rahe story ?) tab fairies queen ne app dono ko wo magical kamal ka fool diya aur bola ki isse ap dono jub bhi chaho ek fairies bana sakte ho aur usme apni sakti daal sakte ho par wo fairies apki beti hogi aur mujhe ye wiswas hai ki demon king ne us sakti ka istemaal kiya hoga

ab lord ko puri baat samajh main aa gai aur usne bhi us fool ka use karke ek sakti ka nirman kiya aur usko angel of life ka naam dekar earth ki aur bej diya

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[Naik]

Update 4

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marco- maharaja app bhul rahe hai ki jub apne aur demon king ne fairies queen ko ye wada kiya tha ( kya wada tha uske liye padte rahe story ?) tab fairies queen ne app dono ko wo magical kamal ka fool diya aur bola ki isse ap dono jub bhi chaho ek fairies bana sakte ho aur usme apni sakti daal sakte ho par wo fairies apki beti hogi aur mujhe ye wiswas hai ki demon king ne us sakti ka istemaal kiya hoga

ab lord ko puri baat samajh main aa gai aur usne bhi us fool ka use karke ek sakti ka nirman kiya aur usko angel of life ka naam dekar earth ki aur bej diya


Ab age Chalate hain

jab bhi demon aur lord king kisi bhi tarah ki nai (new) rachana karte uske bare mae parampita ko pata chal jata Aur in sabhi chijo ko parampita apne Mahal mae beth kar dekh rahe the aur apni soch mae gum the ki in dono sakti ke karan kahi dharti ke logo ko koi nuksaan na ho kyunki ye dono sakti ( death queen, angel of life) dono hi lord aur demon king ki dusri kisi bhi rachana se kahi jada takatwar aur alag the aur kyunki
Unke bagal mae mae bethi rani ne unke chahre ko dekh kar hi jan liya ki wo kuch paresan hai

Rani- kya hua apko mae intne dino se dekh rahi hu app pareshan lag rahe hai kya wajha hai iski ?

Parampita- lord aur demon king dono hi samya ke shath shath saktisali ho chuke hai aur ye dono ab baki ke grh par raj karna chahte hai aur insaano par bhi

Rani- par inssan par kyu wo to sadarn hai ?

Parampita - shadarn hai par unki puja se lord aur demon dono ki sakti badti hai aur in par raj karna bhi aasan hai kyuki dosri grh ke wasi ki tarah inke pass koi sakti nahi hoti hai sayd pita ji ( urja) ne sahi kaha tha ki ane wale samya mae is pure brahmand ke liye khatra honge

Rani parampita ki batao ko sunrahi thi aur unko kuch yad aatha hai

Rani- par app unki kuch batho ko bhul rahe hai

Parampita rani ko yese dekhte hai ki puch rahe ?ho kon si baat

Rani- pitaji ne ye bhi bola tha jub yesa samya aayega wo kudh hamara marg darshan karnge

Tabhi waha par bahut hi urja aa gaya dono pati patni apne jagha se uth kar us urja ke samne juk gae ??
( ye urja unke pita hai jinse unka nirman hua update 1)

Dono ek saath - pranaam pitaji

Urja- uth jaao mere bachon

Dono khade ho gya

Parampita - pitaji apki ane ki wajah kyu kuch hone wala hai

Urja- jab tum dono ka nirman hua us samy mene Tum ko kuch bate kahi thi tumko yaad hai bete

Parampita - ji pita ji mujko un sabhi bato ka dhyan hai

Urja- to ab samy aa gaya hai

Rani- kya samy aa gaya hai pita ji

Urja- beti ab is duniya ko santulit kare ka samy aa gaya hai

Parampita - kis prakar ka santulan pitaji

Urja- bete tumse bhi ye baat nhi chupi hai ki ajj ke samy mae lord aur demon king dono ki sakti bad cuki hai aur dono hi apni sakti ke bal mae any nirdosh jivo ko apne adhin karne mae lage wo kai grh par apna kabja jama kar khun baha rahe hai

Parampita - ji pita ji par wonko roke kese main unko

Urja- nahi bete tum un dono ko kuch nhi bologe bas tumo earth ke charo aur in kavach ka nirman karna hoga joki ajse 21 salo bad khud ba khud khatam ho jaye ga

Parampita - kavach ka nirman to main kar dunga par 22 bad wo kudh nast ho jayega to iska faydha kya hogo pita ji

Urja- bete kuch yesi wajah hai ki tum demon aur lord ko kabu nahi kar sakte Kyuki tum tino ek hi pind se bane ho agar tum tino ki saktiya apas mae takra gai to tum tino ke sath ye puri duniya khatm ho jayengi Isliye tum ab shant ho jaao aur bas ab jo hoga usko dehko aur ek baat jis ka tum nirman karoge usme meri bhi urja milegi jiske karan in 22 salo mae earth par jo bhi hoga usko na tum dekh ya mahsus kar pawoge aur na hi demon aur lord aur jinko bhi lord aur demon king ne dharti par bejha hai ab unko kuch bhi yaad nahi rahega ki unko kisne aur kyu banya hai ya beja hai par ye baat demon aur lord ko pata nahi lagni chahiye tik hai

Parampita - par kyu pita ji

Urja- bete kuch kyu ka Jawab samy kudh deta hai isliye bas intjaar karo aur ek baat kuch yese bhi razz hai joki tumhe ( aur ap sabhi reader ko bhi) nahi Maalum hai isliye ab bas intjaar karo

Aur ye bol kar urja gaayab ho jati hai par apne piche chod jate hain kuch sawaal jo parampita aur rani ke Dimag mae ghum rahi thi par parampita ko apne pita ke Aadesh ka palan kiya aur earth ke charo aur kavach ka nirman kiya aur jese hi kavach bana demon aur lord dono ke apne gulam ya duto se sampark tut gaya

Demon king - ye kya hua mujhko Dharti se kuch mahesus kyu nahi ho raha hai ?

Wahi lord king

Lord king- ajj mujko dharti ke andar kuch dikh kyu nahi raha
?
Tabhi dono ke Mahal mae parampita ki Aawaj gunji

Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
?

par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

( kiske yaha aur kyu soch and keep supporting me next update 9 October)

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[Naik]

Update 5


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Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
?

par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

ab age chalte hai ?


app sab ko kuch bata deta hu ki urja ki wajha se kuch jivo ki rachna hui jinme pramuk the

1- Fairies inke pass vriksho falo fulo aur har ko
control karne ki Powers hoti hai. ye nature priy ( lover) hoti hai inke
prajati me sabhi Ladkiya hi hoti hai ye fairies ki duniya ko fairies land kaha gaya chuki ye bahut hi santi priy thi isliye

To ab fairies ke bare main kuch bate jaan lete hai kyuki inka story main bahut roll hai to iske kuch points hai jisse apko kai razz ke bare mae jankari milegi ?

1 - urja aur parampita ne kai tarha ki prajati ko banaya tha par un sabmae fairies sabse jada sundar ? aur manmohak ( attractive) ? thi jise dekh kisi ko bhi gussa na aye






2 - Jo baat fairies ko kisi bhi dusri prajati se alag karti thi wo ye ki inke vansh mae sirf ladkiyaan hi hoti hai ( to peda kesi hoti hai so "ruko jara sabr karo" ?)

3 - ( sabse important) fairies ki queen naam ****( inti bhi kya jaldi hai ?) jo ki pure glexy mae sabse sundar thi par uska chehra kisi ne nahi dekha tha ?( kyu nahi dekha tha kya pata ?abhi to story suru kiya hu?)

4 fairies world ke charo tarf ek esa shield tha jisko tod pana to kya uske karib jana bhi mout ke seaman tha kyu yadi koi bhi yesi sakti jiske dil ya dimaag mae fairies ya unke world ko nuksaan pauchane ka socha bhi to uski sari powers yaha tak ki unki pran sakti ( life fors) bhi apne andar le leta hai ?( kon shield) aur usse shield ki powers badti jati hai

5 - agar wo shield na bhi ho to fairies world mae koi bhi insaan ( male ?) nahi ja sakta hai agar gaya to wo hamesha ke liye ek fairies ban jayegi ?

6 - fairies land dusri kisi bhi grh se alag tha yaha ki fairies kabhi budi nahi hoti aur na kisi ko koi takat ( kamzori) hoti hai

( To dosto in sab ko dhyan rakna mene sirf apke liye itne raaz kol diya jo main bacha kar rakhna chahata tha par koi baat)

2- jin- inke pass magical power hai aur ye kahi bhi magic ke wajha se aa ja sakte hai
Jin lok 2 bhago mae bata hua hai jiske ek side lord ke control mae tha aur dusra side demon ke isliye in dono ke bich war hote rahte hai


3- Angel ( pari) - inki powers bhi kuch kuch jin ke jese hi thi par ye unse tode jada powerful the ye free tha








4 Vampires - ( wese iske bare mae app sab jante hi hoge par mene kuch change kiya hai)
Vampires ek esi prajaati jinki tadat ( populatio) ek virus ki tarah felti hai agar ek vampire kisi inssan ko kat le par zinda chod de to wo insaan bhi vampire ban jate hai inke andar kamal ki speed hoti hai aur ye kisi inssan ko ek Tarha se hypnotize kar sakte hai pahle jo vampire the wo suraj ki Roshni mae jal jate the par dhire dhire inme bhi vikas hota gaya aur ye suraj ki Roshni ko 70% tak control karne lage par fir bhi ye Nightmare the aur blood par jite hai ( inssan ya janwar) kai bade aur taqatwar vampire black magic bhi use karte ye demon king ko support karte hai





Werewolf - ye ek esi prajaati thi jo ki apni marji se kabhi bhi wolf rup mae aa sakte the inke andar kamal ki sahanskti hoti hai aur ye ki bhi diwal par chal sakte hai( sirf wolf forum mae) inke thej nakhun aur daat hote hai

(Noto- kyuki vampire demon king ko support karte the isliye werewolf lord ke support mae the matlab inpar kisi ka raj nahi tha)






Inke alawa bhi kai grh the par unka abhi roll nahi hai isliye unsab ka introduction nahi diya hu

Ab Chalate hain hamare earth ke un hisso par jiski khabar insaan ko nahi thi

Darkland - ye earth se hi juda hua tha jiska nirman demon king ne kiya tha yaha par usne apne powers se nirmit evil devils, vampire dark Angel, aur dark knights the jo kufiya tor se earth par demon ki agya ka palan karte the inme wo insaan bhi samil the jinke pass kali takat thi aur kai sahetan the
( darkworld ka raja uske senapati inka introduction time ane par)

Hunters - iska nirman lord ne kiya yaha par kai insaan the par jinke andar angels ka blood tha werewolf, aur knighs the inka kam darkworld ko rokna tha
( is world ke raja ka introduction bad mae)

( kawach ke nirman ki wajah se ye sirf apne man mutabik kaam karne lage)
Ab Chalate hai earth par

ab sab kuch badal chuka tha aur insano hi insano ka dusman ho gaya tha Lalach aur jalan itni jada bad gaya tha ki bhai - bhai ka baap - beta ka jaan ke dushman baan chuke the

sab ko sirf pessa ki bhukh thi na rishto ki koi parvha na apno ke liya saman na pyaar tha sab ka bhagwan sirf pessa aur naam tha jiske pass pessa tha wo garibo ko apni jute par rakna chahte the pessa kamane ke liye insaan insaniyat ko bech chukya tha

ab insab par bate hoti rahengi age badte hai

India ke ek bahot sundar state Maharashtra ke sabse sundar nagar Mumbai ke
******* ek alisan ghar ke









Sandar garden Mae

Ek admi toda pareshan betha tha ?
Admi- (man Mae) apne sir par hath rakar soch raha tha ki yhe
bhgwan aj mere pass duniya ki har khushi hai sab kuch hai bas ek Chirag nhi hai
Ky mere pita ke kiye gaye karm ko mera pura pariwar bugte rahega
Or y sab soch kar uski aankhon mae ansu ? a jata hai
Or ek shadi suda mahila ati hai jo uski patni hai
Mahila- ap itna chinta mat kijiye mujhe pura wishwas hai ki hume hamre khandan ka Chirag jarur milega
Ab chalo apki betiya ane wali hogi
Admi - (Ashu poch kar) ha
Chalo
Or ase hi wakt bita gaya aur ek din achanak

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[Naik]

Update 6


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Admi- (man Mae) apne sir par hath rakar soch raha tha ki yhe
bhgwan aj mere pass duniya ki har khushi hai sab kuch hai bas ek Chirag nhi hai
Ky mere pita ke kiye gaye karm ko mera pura pariwar bugte rahega
Or y sab soch kar uski aankhon mae ansu a jata hai
Or ek shadi suda mahila ati hai jo uski patni hai
Mahila- ap itna chinta mat kijiye mujhe pura wishwas hai ki hume hamre khandan ka Chirag jarur milega
Ab chalo apki betiya ane wali hogi
Admi - (Ashu poch kar) ha
Chalo
Or ase hi wakt bita gaya aur ek din achanak


ab age chalte hain

To dosto ab app sab soch rahe honge ki ye pati patni kon hai to socho main baad mae bataynga kyuki mai pahle Update deta hu fir introduction ye mera style hai

To ye dono pati patni bahut amir hai par jitne amir utne hi dharmik aur parupkari hai jo log inko jante hai wo inke pariwar ki bahut izzat karte hai

To ek din jab inke bacche school gaye uhye the tabhi inki darwaje par ek dastak hui

- koi hai is ghar mae bahut pyasa hu agar jal mil sakta hai kya

andar se dono pati patni aawaj sunkar darwaje ki aur bade kab dono panuche tab unke samne ek bujurg the jo ki pile dhoti aur ek pila ghamcha( skarp) dale khada hua tha hath mae kamndal aur dusre hath mae rudrax ki mala thi wo sadhu bujurg jarur tha par uske mastak par ek tehj tha

dono pati patni ne unke char spars kiya sadhu bahut khush hua aur bola

sadhu- sada khush raho ishwar tumdono ki har manokamna puri kare

aadmi - ap kon hai baba aur hamre ghar kese padare

aurat- are ye app kya kar rahe ho pahle baba ko andar to ane do

sadhu- nahi nahi bitya

aurat - abhi - abhi apne mujhe beti bola hai kya app apni beti ki itni si baat nahi manege baba

aurat ki is baat ka sadhu baba ke pass koi jawab nahi tha aur wo ghar ke andar gae

dono pati patni ne baba ko ek lakdi ke takat par betha kar unke pawoo dhoe fir unko bhojan karya sadhu baba bahut khush hue aur bole

sadhu- bahut hi aache sanskar hai tum dono ko warana jitne bade ghar gaya sab ne apne darwaje se wapis lota diya tumne ek sadhu ki buk shant ki hai beti mere antar atma ko shant isilye ja jo tum dono ke dil mae barson ki tanana hai wo puri hogi

pati patni dono chok gae par aurat ki ankh bhar aai aur boli

aurat- baba app kya bol rahe hai

sadhu- beti ab tumhare rone ke din gae main janta hu tumko kis baat ka gham hai itni sono sokat hote hue bhi tumko apne parivaar ke chirag ki chinta hai

aurat - sach baba kya app bhavishya

sadhu( bich mae) - beti ek baat dhyan se suno koi kisi ka bhavishya nahi pata kar sakta ha anuman laga sakta hai aur tujhe ek bete ki parapti jarur hogo par mujhe ek vachan de

dono pati patni - vachan diya baba

sadhu - jab tujko santan ki prapti hogi tab tuje mere assram anaa hoga apne bacche ko lekar uska naamkarn waha hoga fir tumdono jesa chaho

dono pati patni bahut khush hogae aur baba ko vachan diya tab baba ne unko apne aasram ki jaan kari di tab baba apne aasram ki aur nikal gaya

"Samya kisi ke liye nahi rukta aur jo samya ko rokne ki kosis kare wo barbad ho gaya"

samya apni raftar se badta gaya aur un dono pati patni ko ye khush khabri mili ki wo maa banne wali

uski khushi ka koi alam nhi tha kyuki hai ek aurat ki zindagi ki sabse badi khushi maa banana hota aur ma apni hai santan ke liya bhagwon se bhi uncha hota hai

( dosto app sab ko ek bat bta du ki story mae insect to hoga par maa se nahi aur apna hero eklawta hoga isliye sagi bahan to hogi nahi)

to samya apni chal se age badne laga aur samya aa gaya uske peda hone ka

hospital mae operation room ke bahar 3log tensanmain dikha rahe the aur bar bar operation room ki aur dhekh rahe the jinme 2 aadmi the aur ek aurat aur do choti choti bachiya jo soo rahe the

ab aadmi 1 - jo wahi pati tha

aadmi2_ uska chota bhai aur aurat 2- uski biwi thi

aadmi-2 bhaiya app jada chinata maat kariye dekhna operation acche se hoga aur bahbhi bhi tik hongi

aaddmi1- are kese chinta na karu andar meri biwi hai

aurat - bhaiya ye tik bol rahe hai app chinta maat kriye bas bhagwon se pratna kare sab tik hoga dekhna bhabhi aur bacha bilkul tik honge

aadmi1- tum sahi bolti ho bahu

kuch aur samya bit gaya ab ghadi main bajne wale the 12 charo aur sirf shanti sirf aur sirf shanti kabhi kabhi chamgadd aur kutto ki rone ki awaaj ke shath shath sunke patao ki awajj


hawa bhi aj yese bah rahi thi ki jiski wajah se pedo se ajib si awaj aa rahi thi

ssssssssssaaaaarrrr sssssssaaaarrr

purnima ki raat thi par jese badal aur chand ke bich jung chidi hui thi badal puri tarah se chand ki roshni ko niglne ki kossis kar raha ho aur chand apni roshni falane par wo raat thi

"red blood moon" ki

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mosum apna alag hi rang dikha raha tha bijliya ke shath- shath barish ho rahi thi ghadi mae awaj gunji

taaaannnnn taaaaaaannn taaaaan

aur idhar docter ke hatho mae ek sundar sa bacha jisko dekh kar koi bhi doctor ya nurse apna dhyan nahi hata paa rahi thi ek alag sa akarsan mae sab kedh ho gaye

par jub unhone bacche ki ankho ko dekha to sab daar gai aur tik usi wakt

bahot shaandaar mazedaar or
zaberdast lajawab update bhai
bahot khoob superb

 

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Update 7

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hawa bhi aj yese bah rahi thi ki jiski wajah se pedo se ajib si awaj aa rahi thi

ssssssssssaaaaarrrr sssssssaaaarrr

purnima ki raat thi par jese badal aur chand ke bich jung chidi hui thi badal puri tarah se chand ki roshni ko niglne ki kossis kar raha ho aur chand apni roshni falane par wo raat thi

"red blood moon" ki

image


mosum apna alag hi rang dikha raha tha bijliya ke shath- shath barish ho rahi thi ghadi mae awaj gunji

taaaannnnn taaaaaaannn taaaaan

aur idhar docter ke hatho mae ek sundar sa bacha jisko dekh kar koi bhi doctor ya nurse apna dhyan nahi hata paa rahi thi ek alag sa akarsan mae sab kedh ho gaye

par jub unhone bacche ki ankho ko dekha to sab daar gai aur tik usi wakt

ab age

doctor ke hatho mae wo baccha khel raha tha aur doctor aur nuras kisi pathar ke but ki tarah us bacche ko nihar rahi thi baccha tha hi itna masum ki koi bhi usse apni nazar na hata paye

par jub doctor ne usski ankho ko dekha to ek minat ke liye dar gai kyuki uski ankho ka color dark red tha jese ankho mae khun uthar ayaha ho tabhi acchank jese samya ruk ss gaya har chij ruk gai sirf us bacche ko chod kar room mae ek roshni fell gai aur uss roshni se ek hath uss bacche ke upar gaya aur uski ankho ka color dark blue ho gaya aur roshni bhi gayab ho gaya aur jo samya ruka hua tha fir se chalne laga aur baccha bhi rone laga

tabhi nursh bahar nikai aur

nursh- mr sing mubarak ho app pita ban gaye ladka hua hai

To imtro time ( dosto abhi short intro dunga taki app log confuse na ho jaye uske baat ek full intro dunga with image)

mr smrat sing - hero ke pita

mis sima sing - hero ki ma ( apke liye mom )

mr samar sing - smart ke chotr bhai aur hero ke chacha

miss simar sing - samar ki patni aur hero ki chachi

baccha ka abhi koi intro nahi hoga unko intro sidhe full intro mae bas itns ki samar aur simar ke do bacche hai

back to story

jub nursh ne ye khushkabri sunai to samar samrat ke gake lagta hua

samar - mubarak ho bhiya mubarak ho app papa ban gayi aur main chacha hamre parivar ka varish aa gaya bhiya

samrat( nam ankho ke shath) - ha mere bhai tujhko bhi bahut bahut mubarak akhir mujhse jada khushi tum dono ko hai

tabhi samrat ki nazar simar ( bahu) par padi jiski ankho se anshu bah rahe the

smarat samar se- dekh bahu kyu ro rahi hai ja chup kara usko main tab tak doctor se baat kar leta hu

samar apni biwi ke pass jakar uske kandhe par hath rakhkar

samar- ye kya hai simar aj wo hua jiske liye tumne hamne kitni manat kiya aur year sub mooke par tum ansu baha rahi ho

simar( apne ansu ko pochte hue) - are ye to khushi ke anshu hai app nahi samjh pawoge jante hai jub bi didi ( sima) mere baccho pae aona pyar lutati to unki mamta dekh mere man bhi hota ki kas didi ki bhi koi aulad hoti jispar mae apna payar luta sakti aur aj dekho mera sapna pura ho gaya sab un gurudev ki kripa hai

samar- tum sahi bol rahi ho simar hum sab ne aasa hi chod di thi par un gurudev ki baat sach sabit hui

aur dono kuch bate karte rahe ab samrat ki aur kahani modte hai


samrat doctor se - nurse meri biwi aur bacche kese hai kya main unse mil sakta hu

doctor - mr samrat ma aur baccha dono bilkul tik hai koi chinta ki baat nahi hai aur abhi abhi biwi ko nind ka injection diya gaya taki toda unko aram mile aur bacche ki kuch normal janch ki jaa rahi hai fir app dono se mil sakte hai

samrat itna sunke toda relax ho gaya aur ek nurse ko bola kar
apni jeb se noto ki gadi nikak kar
- pure hospital main mitai batwa do
nurse khushi - khushi chali jaati hain

todi der baad doctor samrat aur unki family ko andar ane ko bolte hai aur samrat ke hatho main uske bacche ko sop deti hai tabhi sima ko bhi hose ane lagta hai to

simar- main didi ki madad karti hu

samrat aur samar dono ko kuch bhan hi nahi raha ki simar ne kya bola kyuki dono to bas us pyare se bacche main kho gaya the aur dono ki ankh nam ho chuki baccha bhi dono ko dekj kar muskura raha tha

tab tak sima puri tarah se hose mae aa chuki thi

sima( tode dard se) - choti mera baccha kaha hai

simar- ab app tik to hai na didi aur hamara beta bilkul tik hai rukiye main lati hu usko

simar jake donoko awaj ddeti hai par dono koi response nahi dete

tab simar samar ki hila kar bolti hai - are sara din kya app dono baccho hi payar karoge are abhi uski maa aur chachi bhi dijiye

dono bhai bacche ko dena nahi chahte the par dena pada tabhi doctor boli

doctor - app dono bahsr jaiye bacche ko dudh pilana hai dono bhai bahar ki aur nikal gae

sima dard mse thi par jab wo aone bacche ko dekhti hai to jese uske sarir ka room khil utha uske andar ek nai urja aa gai ho aur uska sara dard mit gaya

jese ki har ma apni santan ko is duniya mae lane ke liya kitne dard ka samna karti hai aur apne bacche ko dekhkar aona sara dard bhul jati hai
par aj is dhuniya main wahi aulad apne hi ma baap ko ghar se bahar nikal deta hai jisko is duniya mae lane ke liye aur aur palane ke liya ma baap na jane kitni ki muskili ko samna karte hai jab wahi aulad uske budape mai jab usnko sabse jada jarurat hoti hai tabhi wo unko unhi ke ghar se nikal deta hai

******, *,, ***,,,, **×***************

to jab sima aone bacche ko dekhti hai to usko chumne lagti hai aur rone bhi lagti hai

simar- didi chaliye rona band kijiye aur mere bacche ko dudh pils dijiye usko bhuk lagi ho

kher ab isnko yahi chodte hai

sima ko kuch din bad hospital se chuti mil gai aur wo log ghar wapas aa gae

jaha rat ko sabhi log holl mae bethe hue the

samar- bhiya ab hame hamare bete ka namkarn bhi kara dena chahiye

samrat- to tik bol raha hai chote aur shath mae ek mega party bhi

sima- wo sab tik hai ji par sabse pahake isko gurudev ke asram bhi le jana hai

simar- koi baat nahi didi ek kaam karte app aur bhiya dono guruji ke asram nikakl jana main aur ye (samar) party ki sari tayari kar lenge

samar- simar ka idea tik hai bhiya app log kal hi nikak jaiye guru je assram

" zindagi bhi kyu khel khelti hai dost jinko aona samjha usne hi zindagi ka sabse bada dhoka de diya "

bahot shaandaar mazedaar
zaberdast lajawab update bhai
bahot khoob superb

 

[Naik]

Update 8

ab age

To apne wade ke mutabik samrat aur uski patni apne bacche sahit gurudev ke asram ki aur subha hi nikal gaye aur idhar samar aur simar dono hi party ki tayari mae lag gae

asaram unke ghar se kuch 2 ghabte ki duri mae tha

aashram ek nadi ke kinare par bana hua tha chuki pani tha isliye charo aur hi hariyali thi chote chote jiw jantu apni awajh se mahol ko aur sundar bana rahe the

aashram ke samne bade se bord par likha hua tha

" shanti kunj" ye us aashram ka naam tha dono pati patni aashram ke andar chal pade

inke gurudev ka naam swami agnivesh tha jise main swami ke naam se likhunga

ye aashram apne ayurved ilaj ke liye bahut prasid tha aur eajha thi yaha ke sadhu jinko lagbhag har bimari ka ilaj pata tha

ab in bato ka yahi rokte hai aur age badte hai

dono aashram ke andar gaye samne ek sadhu pedo ko pani de rage the

samrat - pranam baba ji

baba- aayesman bhaw putr kya kis kaam liya yaha aana hua hai

samrat- ji hume gurudev se milna hai unhone hame bulaya tha

baba- acha to tum dono samrat aur sima sing ho gurudev ne bata diya tha ki ajj tum dono ane wale ho ( ek kutiya ki aur is hara karke)
chaliye mere sheath

samrat aur sima dono hi us kutiya main chale gale

baba- tum dono todi der aaram karo gurudev abhi dhyan main hai

samrat- ji baba

todi der bitne ke baad gurudev aa gai unke ate hi dono pati patni ne unke pwo chu kar ashirwad liya

gurudev - kalyan ho putr, सदा suhagan raho beti yaha beth jaoo

gurudev - sab kuch kushal mangal hai na putr

samrat - ji gurudev app ke ashirwad se sab kuch theek hai

sima- gurudev hamne to aasha hi chod di thi ki hamre vansh mae koi ladka peda hoga par apki wajha se ajj muje wo sukh mila hai uske liye dhyanwad gurudev

gurudev-beti isme mene kuch nahi kiya hai jo kuch hua wo sab samya ke mutabuk hi hua hai

samrat - gurudev ab app mere bete ka namkaran kar dijiye

gurudev - lawo bacche ko muje do

sima ne bacche ko gurudev ke hatho mae diya
baccha unko dekhkar muskura raha tha

gurudev - tum dono yahi par mere aane tak intjar karo

aur gurudev apne kamre main chale gaye

ab inko yahi chod dete hai ab chlte ek haweli mae jaha par 2- log kuch bate kar rahe the

boss- kya khabar hai raghu jo tune muje is wakat jaga diya agar koi bina kaam ke khabar hogi to teri ghand mae garam masala dala dunga

raghu - malik khabar yesi hai jiske liye app ajj tak intjar kaar rahe the jisko sun kar app mujko mhu manga inam denge

boss- accha yesi kyu kabar hai raghu

raghu- malik suna hai ki ajj samrat singh ke ghar ek bahut badi party hai

boss- to bosdk main waha jaa kar nachu

raghu- malik puri baat to suno khabar mili hai ki samrat baap ban gaya hai

boss ek dham se kurs se uth khada hua aur raghu ke khnde par hath rakhkar

boss - raghu kabar paki hai na agar ye galat hua to

raghu - nahi malik ye dekhiye

aur raghu ne indirection card dikhya jisme party aur bacche ke baare mae jankari thi

boss- waa waa raghu waa zindagi mae phali baar tune ek acchi khabar sunie hai sabash ab mera ek kaam kar agar tune kar diya to tujko itni daulat dunga ki teri 7 puste bhi beth kar kha sakegi

raghu - ha malik bolo kya kaam hai

boss- samrat shing ke ghar mai kushi ka mahol hai na usko matam mai badlna hoga

raghu- tik hai malik main uske gjar ko hi udha dunga par waha to bahut jada security hogi

boss - nahi raghu bilkul nahi tu sirf us bacche ko marega aur kisi ko nahi aur tu security ki chinta mat kar tujko main andar pauncha dunga tu bas apne kaam par dhyan de aur jaa SAMJA

raghu - ji malik par malik appse ek baat puchni thi kya main puch sakta hu

boss - puch ajj tune bahut acchi khabar di hai puch jo puchna chahta hai

raghu- malik agar app ka dusmani samrat se hai to app usko kyu nahi maar dete sirf bacche ko kyu

boss- tu nahi samjha ga raghu nahi samjhe ga fir tu mera khash hai isliye bata deta hu tujko sun ek baat bata agar ek baap jinda ho aur uski aulad maar jae to uss baap ko kesa lagega

raghu - malik fir to baap ki nark main badal jayegi wo jite ji maar jayega

boss- sahi kaha raghu bilkul sahi bas isi dard mae main us samrat ko jalte hue dekhna chahta hu uski aankhon se hi nahi uske dil se bhi khun ke anshu bahe ye chahta hu ab tu ja aur ye le ( ek lifafa aur ek address) is aadmi se mil lena ye tujko uske ghar andar paucha dega ab ja

raghu lifafa hath mai lekar chala gaya aur boss ek photo ki aur mhu karkr jisme haar tanga hua tha

boss- ajj main jis dard se guzar raha hu tujko bhi wahi dard sahna hoga samrat sing jese main apni aulad ke liye pal pal tadap raha hu tujhko bhi tadapna hoga tadapna hoga ha ha ha ha.....

puri haweli uski hansi se gunj uti


aur idhar gurudev bhi apne kamare se bhar aa gae aur bacche ko sima ko soop kar bole

gurudev - beti tumhara ye beta bahut hi utam samy main peda hua hai ye balak har gun se sampan hoga saktisali hoga, buddhiman hoga aur apne aur apno par har aane wale har paresani aur musibat ka vinash kardega isliye isla nahi avinash hoga

samrat aur sima in sabhi ko sun kar bahut khush hue

gurudev - parantu tumhare parivar ka atit ispe prqbawo dalega beti

sima( chintit hote hue) - par gurudev wo sharp to khatm ho gaya na tabhi to

gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...

bahot shaandaar mazedaar or...
zaberdast update bhai...
bahot khoob superb...

 

[Naik]

Update 9

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gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...




ab age

sima aur samrat ki aankhon se anshu bah rahe hai aur dono bolte hain

- gurudev ye app kya bol rahe abhi apne bola ki mera beta hamre parivaar ki har mushkil ko khatm kar dega aur abhi app bol rahe hai ki iski jaan

sima- gurudev ye kya samya hai kya paap kiye the hamne ki phale hamare parivar ko kabhi bhi baacha ( ladka) nahi hoga aur jab mujhe aulad mila to app bol rahe hai ki uski zindagi khatre main hogi kyu gurudev kyu

gurudev - beti main kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta ki is samya tumhare dil mae kitna kitna dard tumko kesa mahsus ho raha hoga ek maa se uski aulad ko dur karne ka vichar bhi nahi aana chahiye par beti yahi samay chahta hai isliye pahle meri baat suno uske baat vichar karna

samrat jiski ankhu main bhi anshu the par unko control karkr rakha hua tha kyuki usko apni patni ko sambhala tha

smrat- sima shant ho jawo dekho baba ki har baat aj tak galat sabit nahi hui hai ek baar gurudev ki puri baat sun lete hain boliye gurudev

gurudev - samrat tum jante ho ki tumhare pita ko ye sharp us mahan tapasvi ne diya ki "aj ke baad tere pure vansh mae koi bhi chirag( Ladka) peda nahi hoga" jiske karna tumhare balak se pura kisi ke yaha ladaka puda nahi hua fir uske baad tumhari maa bhabhi aur tumhari patni tino ne kai sadhu shanto ki seva ki jisme main bhi ek hu aur hum sabhi sadhu ke muh se sirf tumhari patni ke liye shantan ka ahsirwad diya jiske karan ham sabhi sadhu ke ahsirwad us sharap ko khatm to nahi sake par uska prabhwo jarur kam kiya isliye tumko ladkee ki prapti hui ab age suno tumko kya karana hai

is balak ke upar 5 sal se lekar 18 sal tak mrutu ki chya rahegi agar ye apni maa ke pas raha to parntu agar tum is balak ko apne pass iske 5 janamdin tak rakh sakte ho uske baad isko agle 18 janamdin tak apne se dur rakhna hoga uske baad iske upar se mruty ki chaya hat jaegi wese bhi beti ye balak tumse adhik tumhari bahan jesi nanad simar se pyara karega tumhare pass 5 sal honge apni mamta lutane ke liye uske baad apni vansh ke ek matr chirag ki zindagi ke liya usko apne dur rakhna hoga

beti ab tumhare nirna par sab kuch tika hua hai ki tum kya chahti ho

sima( jo kafi had tak samaj chuki thi) - gurudev kon si maa nahi chayegi ki uski santan lamba jiwan jiye tik hai guru dev main apne avi ke jiwan ke liye uske apne se dur kar dungi

gurudev - ab apne ghar ki jawo beti aur ha beti ek baat yaad rakhna is bacche ko jo dud tum pilawogi us bartan ko sabse pahle bhagwon ke pass rahkna ( man mae maf karna beti mene tumse bahut si baatein chupiye hai par ye mere guru ka addesh tha)

ab aur kon si baat jo chupi hui hai isliye apko story phdte rahna hoga

aur fir samrat aur uski patni apne ghar ki aur nhikal padte hai

yaha boss kisi ko coll karta hai

boss - main bol raha hu

samne- ji sir kahiye kya kaam hai

boss- tumhare pass jarur samrat sing ke party ka inviteesn aya hoga

samne- ha ahr mujhe pata hai ki mujhe nahi jana hai app chinta mat karo

boss- chup bsdk pahale meri baat sun tujko us party main jana hoga aur ek baat dhyan se sun mera ek aadmi aa raha hai tere pass wo tujko ek lifafa dega aur us lifafe main jo hai wo samrat tak pauchna hoga tujko par uske ye nahi pata chalna chahiye ki lifafa tune diya aur us aadmi ko kese bhi karke uske ghar ke andar pucha dena samjha ab rak phone


boss- tumhare pass ek tofa behj raha hu samrat ha ha ha

aur is taraf pargy ki tayari ho chuki thi

car main samrat sima se

samrat- sima kya tum sach main avi ko apne se dur rkh pawogi

sima- agar mujhse door rahne par mere bacche ki zindagi sahi salamat ho to main isko apne se door kar dungi

samrat- kya is baat ko samar aur simar ko

sima bich mae hi- nahi nahi abhi kuch dino tak ye baat ham dono ke bich ho rahegi

samrat- par sima kabhi na kabhi to un dono ko ye baat batani hogi na

sima- ha app sahi bol rahe hai par jub sahi saymay aayega tab main unko ye baat bata dungi tab unko kush rahne dijiye

samrat- sayad tum sahi bol rahi ho

unke ghar jane tak party
ki lagbhg sabhi tayari ho chuki thi holl mai simar intjar kar rahi thi shath mae 2 bacche bhi the

simar- lawo didi mere bete ko mujhko do app dono aram karo

sima- are choti ab tere beta ka naam bhi hai

simar- dekho didi koi acha sa naam hi hona chahiye tik hai

sima( haste hue) ha Accha sa naam hai avinash aur hum sab ke liye avi

simar- hmm bahut accha naam hai mera avi

samrat - samir kaha hai

simar- ji bhaiya unhone sabko paety ke baare main bata diya sirf hamre kuch karibi ko kud hi batane gae hai baki sab tayari ho chuki hai app chinta mat kijiye

sima- choti tu bhi tum dono ke hote hue muhe chinta ki kya jarurat
chalo ab apni pasand ka apne bete ko kapde pahna do

simar- ji didi aur app apni dono rajkumariy ko

aur fir sabhi log kaode badlne chale gae
sham ho jati hai aur party suru ho jati hai kyunki samrat ek bahut bada businessman tha isliye party main high profile log aaye hue the in sab mae wo bhi tha jiske sath boss ka admi aaya hua tha

aadmi( man mai) - ye ishwar ye kis paap ki zaja de raha mujhe agar mene us (boss) ki baat nahi mani to mera pura parivar khatre main aa jaega aur main ajj apne parivaar ke liye sing parivar ko khatre main dal raha hu ye iswar ajj kuch yese ki hum dono ka parivar baach jaye

tab tak raghu boss ko coll karta hai

raghu - ha hallo malik main sing house pauch chuka hu ab age kya krana hai

boss- bahut khub raghu ab meri baat dyan se sun tere pass jo zahar hai uski tujko us bacche ko pilya jane wale dudh main mila dena hai par dhyan se kisi ko khabar nahi honi chahiye

raghu - tik hai makik uska janamdin hi uska maran din hoga ha ha ha....

kuch der baad ak pati patni ghar ke andar ate

reshma kapur aur ramesh kapur

( in sabhi ka full intro baad main dunga)

ramesh- samrat ke gake milta hua congratulations mere bhai akhir iswar ne teri sun li tujko papa aur mujhko chacha bana diya air bhabhi ki tabyat tik hai
aur ek baat bata ye party to tik hai par apni party ka kya hoga

samrat - shhh toda dhire bol agar teri bhabhi ne sun liya to

ramesh - hat bhabhi se apni biwi se darta hai

samrat- accha tu nahi darta ruk abhi bulata hu reshma bhabhi ko bhabhi

ramesh- are chup kar bhai main to majak kar raha tha

samrat- ha bhai ham dono ki hakat ek jesi hi hai bahar sher ghar mae billi par tu chinta mat kar apni party bhi hogi

idhar reshma aur sima apni baat par lage hue the

Reshma (toda haste hue) - sima toda apni sundarta ka raj to bata
Sima- o o o Mae
Reshma - koi Yoga ya fir ( apni ankhe utha kar or ankh mar kar) y fir hamare Bahi sahab ka pyaar hai ha
Or sabhi aurate hasne lagti hai
Sima - chup kar kamini
Reshma - hai meri jaan kese shrma rahi hai hmm





next update jaldi hi

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[Nevil singh]

intjaar bhai

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Waiting for next update

 

[Naik]

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